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Title: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9.1 - LIKE FATHER, LIKE DAUGHTER
Post by: adentoh on March 22, 2013, 01:46:58 AM
Good day, everyone!! :)
This is my first story about BAKA Family. Why I called BAKA Family? Because they are really BAKA. :lol:
Alright, forget about that. And I hope you enjoyed! :peace:
                                                     

“Knock.. Knock..”, Sae try to wake his daughter with knocking the door.
“Knock.. Knock..”, try again and still no responded.
“Knock.. Knock.. Wake up, kids! It’s morning! Are you not going to school today?”
Because still no responded from his daughter, so Sae entering room.
“Oh, my dear. Why they are still sleeping? It’s 5.30am now”, Sae shake his head.

“Rena chan, wake up! You will be late for school”, Sae try to wake his older daughter, Miyazawa Rena. “You said you had exam today, right? So, hurry up!”
“Hai….”, Rena answer.
Then Sae go to another bed, and try to wake his 2nd older daughter, Miyazawa Yuko.
“Yuko chan, are you done wake up?”, asked Sae. But Yuko didn’t answer.
“I bet, Haruna don’t want to talk to you if you getting late for school”, Sae know very well how to troll his daughter, Yuko.
“I’m done!! I’m wake up now!!”, Yuko stand up directly when she heard Haruna’s name.
“Hahaha.. That’s a way how to wake you every morning”, Sae laughed.

Then, he go to another bed in corner. There’s two kids still in dream land. Miyazawa Mayu and Miyazawa Jurina. Miyazawa Mayu are his 3rd daughter who always sleep with her Alpaca doll. While in top, there’s Miyazawa Jurina, his 4th daughter who always sleep with “hen” way (ps: weird position).
“Mayu chan, Jurina, wake up! You want mama Black getting mad of you two if you not wake up? If mama Black getting mad, I’m not helping you two”, he said. “And I will not buying you another Alpaca and toy, Mayu chan, Jurina”
In second, Mayu chan and Jurina wake up after they heard “mama Black” name.
“No, I don’t want mama Black getting mad with me. She scared me, papa Sae”, Jurina said with puppy eyes.
“Me too. I don’t want mama Black getting mad with me too. And I don’t want papa Sae not buying me Alpaca anymore. Alpaca it’s my first love”, Mayu said while hug her Alpaca.
Sae facepalm, “How can you tell that Alpaca it’s you first love, Mayu chan? He’s a doll not human, you know. And you’re still kid.”
“I know, papa Sae. But I love him so much. I’ve been spend my lifetime with him. And he doesn’t complaint it all”, Mayu said with looking her Alpaca not her papa.
‘Of course he doesn’t complaint, because he a doll’, Sae muttered itself. ‘Why I have a such kids like you guys’
“Alright, kids! Let’s have shower then go down hurry up. Mama Yuki has cooking a breakfast for us”, he said and walk down to kitchen. (ps: I doubt that Yukirin can cooking for a breakfast) :huhuh

“Ne, Rin chan. Why we have a such kids like them?”, Sae asked to her wife, Rin chan. “I must hard work in the morning to wake them all”.
“Because you made it, so it’s your job!”, his wife answer while cooking.
‘Such a Black aura’, Sae nodded and muttered itself.
“What do you say, honey?”, Rin chan turn back and asked her husband with smile with hold a knife in right hand.
“No, I’m not say anything, honey”, Sae smile back and worries.

“Papa Sae.. Mama Yuki.. Ohayo!!”, their kids greetings.
“Ohayo Rena chan, Yuko chan, Jurina. Wait, where’s Mayu chan, Jurina?, Yuki asked.
“Mayu chan still in the room, mama. She still dressing her Alpaca”, Jurina answer and sitting in table.
“Oh my God! That kid!”, Sae has facepalm. :smhid
“Mayu chan, hurry up!! You will be late if you not eat your breakfast”, Sae yelling from kitchen.
“Haaaaaaiii.. I’m coming, papa”, Mayu chan down the stairs. “Ohayo mama Yuki”
“Ohayo Mayu chan. Why you dressing your Alpaca today?”, Yuki staring at her kid.
“Because he will go to school with me. Studying and playing together  with me”, Mayu chan replied with smile.
“And I’m sure, he's not be allowed to studying in the class with you, Mayu chan”, Sae said.
“Eeh, why papa Sae? He was my first love. And we must together forever”, Mayu chan complaint. :cry:
“You see, honey?”, Sae starring to his wife.
“Yeah, I see it very clearly. She said that Alpaca is her first love”, Yuki shake her head up down.

“Alright, kids. Finished your breakfast first and then we move”, Sae said while blow up his coffee.
“Mama Yuki.. Mama Yuki.. There’s an ant in my milk”, Yuko show up her milk to Yuki.
“Aahh, that’s my fault Yuko chan. Let me get some new milk for you, okay?”
“What about me?”, Sae asked to Rin chan.
“About what?, Rin chan replied.
“Where is  my milk?”, Sae flirting his wife.
“You will get your milk as soon as tonight, honey”, Rin chan give a wink to her husband and Sae’s smile become wider. (ps: I know what your thinking Sae). :lol:
“Rena chan, did you studying for exam today?”, asked Sae.
“I did, papa Sae. But Jurina and Yuko chan always disturbs me, mou!!” :angry:
“Hehehehe…”, Yuko and Jurina laugh in same time.
“Yuko chan, Jurina, you will not disturb Rena chan when she’s studying, alright? Or mama Black will give you death sentences”, Sae whisper to Yuko and Jurina.
Yuki come closer and, “Itaaaaaii….”, Sae yell in pain because Yuki pinch his tummy.
“I will not doing again, honey”, Sae apologizing to Yuki while their kids are laugh.

After breakfast, they are move to a car.
“I’m in front of with you, papa Sae”, Jurina said with passion.
“Alright!”
“Rena chan, you go first then Yuko and last Mayu chan”, Sae tell to the kids. (ps: Mayu & Jurina has same school and be first to put down. Yuko and Rena be the last).
“Everyone safety?”, Sae asked
“Safety!!”, all kids yelling.
“Alright, say bye bye to your mama”
“Bye bye mama Yuki. I love you.”
“Bye bye, I love you too”

“Ittekimasu!!!”, Sae yelling.
“Oohh…”, all kids yelling too.
‘Like daughter like dad’, Yuki muttered itself in smile.

To be continued.....
                                                               

Note:
Miyazawa Sae as Papa (and be transgender)
Miyazawa Yuki (because she has been married with Miyazawa) as Mama (also known as Mama Black)
Miyazawa Rena as 1st daughter (older daughter)
Miyazawa Yuko as 2nd daughter
Miyazawa Mayu as 3rd daughter
Miyazawa Jurina as 4th daughter (younger daughter)

                                                               

How is it? Do you interesting with BAKA Family another story?
If yes, I will continued in another time.
Here a fan art from BAKA Family. And I totally love their kids.
(http://i.imgur.com/s3oA4my.jpg?1)
Credits pic : @Ko-san (http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=1717975 (http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=1717975))
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: kahem on March 22, 2013, 02:16:03 AM
ahahaha!!! continue it's funny ^^
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: wsama on March 22, 2013, 02:58:20 AM
I'll be waiting for another chapter   :heart:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: Haruko on March 22, 2013, 04:21:02 AM
sound good for me :B but where is my atsumina?
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on March 22, 2013, 04:42:10 AM
@kahem : I will, thank you  :)

@wsama : Sure

@Rukaeru : Basically, it's mama Yuki. But Sae always troll his daughter when they're not listening him with "mama Black"

@Haruko : I'm sorry, Haruko-san. Since it's about BAKA Family as main character (original ideas came from http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=1717975 (http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=1717975)), maybe I will put Atsumina as supporting roles.  :yep:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: Wmatsui22 on March 22, 2013, 08:17:59 AM
Hi :)

It's very interesting chapter!

But who will be the pairing?  :?

Please update!

Thanks
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on March 22, 2013, 08:35:49 AM
@Wmatsui22: There's not pairing here  :grin: since all about family.
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 22, 2013, 10:21:36 AM
this fic is so funny XD
black mama rin :lol:
mayu and her stuffed alpaca are so cute  :heart: :yep: alpaca s her first love lol :P
more please  :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: fuu_kun on March 22, 2013, 11:01:35 AM
Thats so hilarious!! LOL!! Me laugh so hard xD people might thinking that I crazy xD please do continue! Pleasee pleeaseeee :bow;
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: magicoflove on March 22, 2013, 11:26:26 AM
LOL I like it :))) I like read fic about family
I laugh so hard when I read it. I can image their moring :)))
Mayu is so cute and mama Black =)))
Continue pleaseee!!!
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on March 22, 2013, 11:46:16 AM
@mayuki_daisuki: there are a reason why Mayu chan says that Alpaca was her first love XD stay tune for next chapter :yep:

@fuu_kun, magicoflove: I love it when I can make someone laugh :grin:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on March 22, 2013, 11:49:41 AM
oh this is EPIC!!! please continue~!!!

I love Yuko-sama and Rena-sama in this!!! And the fan art is  :wub:

I'll be waiting for your update!!!
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: ashiya on March 22, 2013, 12:24:44 PM
lol that was hilarious ~

They are all baka...hmm Saeyuki's so sweet here

The kids are asdfghjklble; anyway there's only Saeyuki, where's other pairings?

Rena seems like a smart one here, she would look like her mother so much (black aura  :lol:)
Yuko~ hentai as always... gonna have Kojiyuu? Yay!
Mayu...err...her love story was interesting too  :)
So Jurina are the youngest one with some weird conditions lol baka pimp    :w00t:

Please update


Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: fuu_kun on March 22, 2013, 03:34:32 PM
Wohohohoho xD me cant wait for the continuation! LOL! me laugh again and again  while read it xD
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: CheesyBits on March 22, 2013, 05:50:06 PM
Wahahaha! XD
This is hella funny XD

Can't wait for the next update.. Keep it up! :deco:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on March 22, 2013, 06:11:19 PM
Alright, minna. Like I promise before, here a second chapter about BAKA family.
Kinda hurry, right? But I think I should post them as fast as tonight before my ideas was gone. :huhuh
In this chapter, I will give first appearance for Akimoto Sayaka, and then make a special day for Mayu and Jurina in the school. (ps:  for Yuko and Rena, it will be added in chapter 3)


Note :
Akimoto Sayaka as Sae’s friend, known as Uncle Gori (transgender).
Ota Aika and Sashihara Rino as Mayu’s friend, and their known as Kawaii Trio.
Yagami Kumi and Kimoto Kanon as Jurina’s friend, and their known as BAKA Group.
Maeda Ami, as teacher.
(Mayu and Jurina has same class)



-at the street-

“Nee, papa Sae..”, Jurina called.
“What’s wrong Jurina?”, Sae replied
“Tomorrow, our class has cosplay time”
“Cosplay time? What cosplay do you do?”, asked confussed.
“I want to be Nobunaga!!”, replied with yelling tone.
“W-what?”, Sae look his genking daughter. :shocked
“She had watching Majisuka Gakuen 3 on DVD last night, papa”, Rena talking while reading a book for her exam.
“Yeah, she’s keep talking that she wants to be Nobunaga all night long”, Mayu talking next.

(http://i.imgur.com/NsNBuSD.jpg?1)

“Eehhh.. She’s kakkoi! You see the jacket? I’m pretty sure that I was cool with a dragon jacket like her”, Jurina expalained to all sister.
While Jurina explained, in the middle sit at back, Yuko was sleeping again.
“Wait!! Yuko chan!! Are you sleeping again?”, asked Sae from looking in the mirror.
“Haruna! My boobies! Where’d you go? Don’t leave me, baby”, Yuko muttered itself in a dream.
Sae stopped his driving and looking his daughter.
‘What she’s dreaming about? Boobies?’, he muttered itself. ‘But tonight I’ll get my boobies again since I busy with work a week ago’, Sae smile while dreaming.
“Papa Sae!!”, Rena slap Sae’s head with book.
“Oouch, it’s hurt, Rena chan. What’s wrong?”
“We will be late to school if you dreaming like Yuko chan too, papa”, Rena talking with negative tone.
“Haaii.. Ojousama!”, Sae turn on his car again and move.

While Yuko has sleep, Rena has reading a book, Mayu has busy with her Alpaca, and Jurina looking out windows, Sae get a phone call from Akimoto.
‘CHOKOREETO kuchi utsushi shite.. itsumo no KISU ja tsumannai yo.. gouin ni nejikonde..’, Sae’s phone ringtone.

-talking on phone-

Sae : “Moshi moshi..”
Akimoto : “Moshi moshi, Sae.”
Sae : “Yes.”
Akimoto : “Can you buying me a coffee while off to office?”
Sae : “What? You just call me to buying a coffee? Why not you buy itself, Akigori?”
Akimoto : “Hehe.. I was stuck in train now. And I forget to buying a coffee in station. Onegai..”
Sae : “Alright! I’ll buy it later after driving kids to school.”
Jurina : “Uncle Gorilla!!” (she’s talking with yelling, so Akimoto can hear that)
Akimoto : “Aah, that kid!”
Jurina : “When you came to our home again? I want playing with you, Uncle Gori.”
Sae : “Haha, that kid want to a play with you again Akigori. So, when you came by?”
Akimoto : “I don’t know! If my works isn’t much, maybe I will came by after work.”
Sae : “Jurina, Uncle Gori said that he was busy, so he can’t playing around with you. But, when he’s work done, he will come to our home.”
Jurina : “Yoshha!! I'll be waiting, Uncle Gori.”
Sae : “You hear that?”
Akimoto : “Yes, I hear that! Jaa, I should go off now.”
Sae : “Alright! Bye!”
Akimoto : “Bye!”

Right after phone session was over, Sae reached a school. Jurina and Mayu was out of the car.
“Jaa, papa Sae, Rena chan and Yuko chan!!”, Jurina and Mayu talking in same time.
“Bye, kids. I will pick up you later, right”, Sae talking
That two kids walking into school, but suddenly….

(http://i.imgur.com/UfUFomw.jpg)

Sae facepalm and talk to self, “What was that?”
(ps: they’re both try imitating Watanabe Mayu and Matsui Jurina in AKB48 So Long! Live ver.)

-at the class-

Ami (teacher): “Ohayo, minna..”
Kids: “Ohayo, Ami sensei..”
Ami: “Wah, everyone was genking today.”
Chairman: “Rise.. Bow..”
Ami: “Alright, minna. Like we talked of yesterday, tomorrow we will hold cosplay time. So, everyone has decided what will you wear?”
Kids: “Yes, we has decided, sensei”
Ami: “Good! How about you, Jurina? Has you do decided?”
Jurina: “I do, Ami sensei. I will be Nobunaga from Majisuka Gakuen 3.”
Ami: “What? Nobunaga? That’s dangerous character, Jurina. How can you tell that you will be Nobunaga?”
Jurina: “She’s kakkoi, Ami sensei. She has a dragon jacket, and I want to wear that too.”
Ami: ‘Oh my God! This kids so mischievous.’ (Ami sensei muttered itself)

While Ami sensei talked to Jurina, Kawaii trio was……..

(http://i.imgur.com/9EV8bqF.jpg)

Ami sensei was facepalm when she’s looking at “Kawaii trio”
Ami: “Mayu chan, Sashi chan, and Ota chan. What are you reading? We have in the class right now.”
Mayu, Sashi, Ota: “We’re reading magazine, Ami sensei.”
Ami: ‘I know you’re reading magazine’, (Ami sensei muttered itself). “Mayu chan, has you decided what will you wear at cosplay time tomorrow?”
Mayu: “I have, Ami sensei. I will wear army look with Jurina tomorrow.”
Jurina: “Eehh, no way! I want to wear Nobunaga jacket, Mayu chan!” (Jurina has whine) :(
Mayu: “If you still wants to wear Nobunaga jacket, I’m sure mama Black will angry with you.”
Jurina: “Eeeehhhhh…… I want Nobunaga jacket! I want Nobunaga jacket!”
Mayu: “No, we wear army look tomorrow!” (still reading magazine)
Ami: ‘Holy crap!! What happen in this class? Why I have a such student like them? One wants to be Nobunaga, and others read  a magazine in my class’ (Ami sensei had a very strong headache).

-at lunch time-

“Mayu chan, what bento you have got today?”, Sashi asked.
“Here! Mama Yuki makes some omelette rice”, Mayu answer
“Wah, looks delicious, Mayu chan. Can I have a mouthful?”, asked Ota.
“Yup, you can”
And “Kawaii Trio” eat their lunch together..

“Nee.. Nee.. Mayu chan, why you bring your Alpaca today?”, Sashi asked Mayu with mouth full.
“Because he’s my first love, Sashi. And we must together forever”, Mayu answer while hungging her Alpaca.
“Your first love? Can Alpaca have a love, Mayu chan?”, Ota confussed. :?
“Of course, he has, Ota! He was give me a kiss last night”, Mayu had daydream.
“A kiss?”, Ota and Sashi asked in same time. “You have a dream, Mayu chan. Alpaca was a doll, how can be he give you a kiss?!”
“Nee.. I will tell you something. It’s about my dream last night”, Mayu whisper to Ota and Sashi.
“Okay”, together.
“Last night, I was a dream. In my dream, I was sleep for long time. There’s a God who tell to my parents that I only can wake up if there’s someone kissing me”, Mayu talks with serious tone.
“And then?”, her friends asked with serious tone too.
“And then, there’s a Alpaca came closer to me. And he kiss me!!”, Ota and Sashi still confussed. :?
“After he kiss me, he turns into a handsome prince.. Kyyaaaa..!!”, Mayu screamed.
Ami sensei was starring at that trio, “What happen to this world? A kids from 3rd years, talk about love and kiss. While I never have a love and never doing a kiss”(ps: I'm sorry Ami sensei) :(

Next to “Kawaii Trio”…..
“That Alpaca turns into a handsome prince? What he looks like?”, Sashi asked.
“Hmm.. He looks like ikemen from anime”, Mayu clap her hands.
“Ikemen from anime? Who his name?”
“I don’t know!!”
“He looks like Jiraiya!! Hahaha..”, Jurina interrupted their conversation and runaway. :lol:
“Mou.. Jurina!!”
“Is it true he looks like Uncle Jiraiya, Mayu chan?”, Ota asked.
“Of course not, Ota!!”, Mayu argue.

“Ting… Tong… Ting… Tong…”, a school bell has rang. Lunch time has finished and time to kids back to their own class.
Next class was a geography class. Jurina, Kanon and Kumi, argue about something.

“Nee, Non chan.”, Jurina called
“What’s up, Jurina?”, Kanon answer.
“You knows where is The Colosseum? I can’t find it!”
“Did you check America’s Map?”
“No, I haven’t”

“Jurina, Non chan, The Colosseum was in Paris not in America, you know!”, Kumi talk with confidence.
“But, I have check in Paris’s Map, but The Colosseum wasn’t there, Kumi”
“Check it again!!”, Kumi slap Jurina’s head with ruler.
“It’s hurt, Kuumin!!”, Jurina moans.
“Kumi chan, The Colosseum wasn’t in Paris but it was in Rome”, Ami sensei explained to Kumi.
“But Ami sensei, my brother said that he saw The Colosseum in Paris”
‘Alright, do what you think is right, Kumi. Moreover you will not be able to find The Colosseum on map’,
Ami sensei mutteres itself (facepalm)

To be continued........


Credits pic : @Ko-san (http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=1717975 (http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=1717975))

How? I'm sorry if kind hurry to post them. :mon pray2:
But that's how I work. :mon sweat:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on March 22, 2013, 07:04:48 PM
OMG  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: this family is hilarious~

actually... it brings me back to my past, not so far actually..

I and the crazy family, we had fun...

We were - and still are - somewhat similar to this family, believe me :D

Thank you for this update and I will be waiting for Yuko-sama and Rena-sama's chapter~
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: CheesyBits on March 22, 2013, 07:21:29 PM
Wow! Fast update! :D
Loving this.

Can't wait for the next update! :D
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on March 22, 2013, 07:37:04 PM
@Rukaeru: Just waiting for Saeyuki moment  :D (and I hope their kids will not bother them).

@sakura_drop_: I love crazy family too  XD but maybe I will update next chapter within a week. There's a lot work I have to do.

@CheesyBits: That's how I work  XD before all ideas gone, I will put them all into story.

Thank you for reading my story  :on cny1:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 22, 2013, 11:49:14 PM
haha uncle gori so funny  :lol:
naughty sae and yuko dreaming about oppai  :P
oh jurina, wanting to dress up as nobunaga :bigdeal:
mayu's dream is so cute!!  :tama-excite: oh mayu, no matter what she does its always going to be cute  :yep:
kumi chan daisuki :heart:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:

Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: Kazan on March 23, 2013, 01:07:06 AM
 XD it's truly baka
It's funny hahaha
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.3 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on March 23, 2013, 02:59:13 PM
Here for chapter 3 :grin:
Take a look when Sae drove his daughter to school (beginning of chapter 2) and done to put down Mayu and Jurina into their school. And now, Sae driving to other school.

                                               

Note:
Kuwabara Sensei (KuBa) as Grumphy teacher.
Kojima and Takamina as Rena/Yuko's friends.
Atchan as Takamina sister.


                                               

-at the street-

“Nee, Rena chan. Can you help me for waking up Yuko chan?”, Sae asked
“Yuko chan.. Wake up..”, Rena try to shake Yuko’s body for waking her up but Yuko still in dreamland.
“Wake up, Yuko chan!!”, Rena slapped Yuko’s head with her textbook and talk with high tone.
“Hooaaahhhh…. (she’s stretching). It’s hurt, Rena! Can you slap me with others except your book? It’s so thick.”, Yuko complain. :angry:
‘Aah, she’s just like you, Rin chan. Just like you when you have bad mood’, Sae talking self on his mind and smile. :roll:
“It’s because you overslept, so I think I should do that to waking you up. And how can you slept when we’re going to school?”, Rena answer.
“Hey, Yuko chan. What are you dreaming about, huh? You’re keeping talk about Haruna’s…”
“… boobies, right?”, Rena talk while reading her textbook.
“Right!! You’re keeping talk about Haruna’s boobies all over time. Don’t tell me that you thinking…”
“… something about pervert to Haruna, right?”, Rena continue and still reading a textbook.
‘Oh my gosh! This kid really knew what I want to say. Where did she get that talent?’, Sae thinking and watching Rena from mirror. :shocked
“Hehehe…”, Yuko laugh. :P
“Hey, Yuko chan. Have you study for an exam today?”, Sae asked.
“Don’t worry, papa Sae. I don’t need to study for an exam today.  I have Takamina and Nyan-nyan for helping me. Hehehe..”, Yuko answer. XD
“You can’t do that, Yuko. You can’t asked any help from your friend. If you caught up with your teacher, you will be out of class and your exam score was bad. And you know what is that means?”
“Mama Yuki become Black-san”, Yuko scared. :whip:
“So, if mama Yuki become Black-san?”, Sae asked again.
“You will get punishment, you can’t go out for a week”, Rena continue.
“Oh nooo….!! I can’t go out for a week? It’s means, I can’t date with Nyan-nyan”, Yuko crying. :cry:
“Yup!!”, cold hearted.
“Papa Sae, help me!! I don’t want to get punishment from mama Yuki. You should filrt her, okay!”, Yuko asked Sae for helping her.
“I can’t, Yuko. You know, if your mama become Black-san, I can’t against her”, Sae explain.
“Baka chicken!”, Yuko said. :sleepy:
“What do you say?”, Sae look at Yuko from mirror. :twisted:
“Nothing, papa”, Yuko smile. :D

Finally, they’ve arrive to “Sakura Junior High School”…….
“Alright kids, we arrive. So, hurry up get your school. Don’t forget a pray before exam, okay”
“Haaiii….”, Rena and Yuko said in same time.
“I’ll pick up you later, okay”
“Okay, Baka chicken!”, Yuko answer and laugh.
‘That kid..’, Sae smile. And he drive away to office.

Meanwhile in “Sakura High School”….

Yuko: “Oi, Takamina. Ohayo!” (yelling)
Takamina: “Yuko, ohayo! Rena chan, ohayo!”
Rena: “Ohayo, Takamina” (still reading her textbook, but I don’t know what book she read)
Kojima: (came from behind) “Ohayo, Yuuchan, Rena chan, Takamina”
Yuko: “Ohayo, Nyan-nyan” (hugging)
Kojima: “Yuuchan, what are you doing? Another student may see us”
Yuko: “Don’t worry, Nyan-nyan. They’re just envious with us, hahaha”
Rena: “They aren’t envious with you both, just curious”
Kojima: “You see?” (talked to Yuko)
Rena: “By the way, Nyan-nyan. She’s overslept again this morning in the car. And she’s keeping talk about your boobies” (still reading a textbook)
Kojima: (hit Yuko’s head with her bag) “Hentaaaiii…. You over promise that you’d never overslept again, Yuuchan”
Yuko: “I’m sorry, Nyan-nyan” (kiss Nyan-nyan’s hand for apologizing)
Takamina: “But that’s our Yuko, right Rena?”
Rena: “Yeah, she is”

Ding… Dong… Ding… Dong…
A school bell has ringing, and they’re begin with exam. Today is the English exam.

KuBa (teacher): “Alright, kids. Please save your books and put your pencil on the table only”
Kids: “Haaaiii…”
KuBa: (give a paper question to all of kids) “Remember, no cheating! If you’d cheating, you will out of from class, you get it?” >:(
Kids: “Haaaiii…”
Yuko: “Nee, Rena chan…” (asking Rena who sit over her)
Rena: “No cheating! No asking!” :smhid
Yuko: “Heartless” :cry: (and she’s asked over to Nyan-nyan). “Nee, Nyan-nyan, you will help me, right?”
Kojima: “Not today, Yuuchan. You piss me off this morning, so I won’t help you” :bangchair:
Yuko: “Nyan-nyan, don’t be like that, baby. I’m sorry if I overslept. It’s because…” :(
Kojima: “… because you’re playing a video game late at night, right?” :twisted:
Yuko: “Eeeh, how do you know Nyan-nyan?” :O
Kojima: “Rena chan texting me last night. She’s said that you playing a video game late at night”
Yuko: “Tsk… (look at Rena with sharp eyes)  >:(
Rena: (smile to Yuko) :D
It’s too bad that Takamina chair was far away from Yuko, Rena and Kojima. So, Yuko can’t asking help from Takamina (and I think, Takamina will be greatful).

“What is this? She has or she had gone?”, Yuko asked herself while scratch her head.
“Miyazawa Yuko-san! Please, quite!”, Kuwabara sensei talking.
“I’m sorry, Kuwabara sensei”
“Nee, Rena chan.. She has or she had gone?”, Yuko whisper to Rena.
“………..”, Rena keep silent.
“Nee, Rena chan....”, Yuko whine.
“She had gone, Baka!”, Rena replied
“Aahaa.. Thank you, Rena chan (whisper again to Rena chan). “First question was done. Next are….”
“Question #2 the answer is A, Yuuchan”, Kojima said.
“Thank you, Nyan-nyan”, Yuko said with louder voice. XD
“Miyazawa Yuko-san!”, second reminder from Kuwabara sensei.
“I’m sorry, Kuwabara sensei” :(
“If you can’t keep silent, I will take your paper”, Kuwabara sensei explain. >:(
“Okay.”
Although Yuko haven’t study for an exam today, she had helped by Rena and Kojima. And she can answer all the question.

-at lunch time-

“Yuuchan, you should study for next exam, okay?”, Kojima asked.
“I will, Nyan-nyan”, while eat her bento.
“And don’t ever play a video game late at night again”, Kojima point. :angry:
“Yeah, don’t ever, Yuko”, Takamina continue.
“Wah.. Wah.. Looks who say that! You aren’t study for exam today too, right Takamina?”
“Eehh?”, Takamina shocked :huhuh
“Don’t lie to me, Takamina. Atchan texting me at night, she said that you won’t study at all and choose to read ‘One Piece’ manga, right?”, Yuko laugh. XD
“You both are same”, Kojima continue.
“Yeah, at least, you're both more interesting with your hobby than your study”, Rena eat her food.
“Hehehe..” Yuko and Takamina laugh together.
“Nyan-nyan, do you have a free time tomorrow Sunday?”, Yuko asked
“She’s start out”, Takamina talks.

It’s Yuko time…

“I think I’m free, Yuuchan. What’s wrong?” :huhuh
“I want to asked you to going out with me?” :oops:
“Where?” :?
“Hmm.. How about watched a movie?” :w00t:
“A movie? I think you asking me to dinner in restaurant, Yuuchan” :huhuh
“We will, after watching a movie of course”
“Alright” :thumbsup


Rena and Takamina time (also Kojima and Yuko time)…

Takamina: “Rena chan, what are you reading? It’s lunch time, y’know”
Rena: “I know. I’m reading while eat my bento, right? So, don’t worry about me”
Takamina: “I’m not worry about that, I’m just wanna tell you that your bento has been eaten by Yuko”
Rena: “What???” (look at her bento)  :shocked
Yuko: “Hehehe…” (laugh) :D
Rena: “Don’t laugh to me, BAKA! Why you eat my bento too? You had a bento yourself”  :angry:
Yuko: “Because my bento was eaten by Nyan-nyan, Rena chan” (pointing Nyan-nyan)
Rena: “Nyan-nyan..”
Takamina: “Here..” (she give her bento to Rena). “You can have it if you want, Rena chan” :)
Rena: “Thank y-you, Takamina. But your bento was …..” (pointing Takamina’s bento) “… runs out”
Takamina: “Wooaahhh, Nyan-nyan.. Why you eat all of them?” :O
Kojima: “Because your bento was good, Takamina. Nee, Yuuchan?”
Yuko: “Nee…” (smile)

At last, Rena and Takamina bento runs out because Yuko and Kojima eat all of them.
                                               

To be continued......


I'm sorry if kinda boring in KojiYuu part. :on cloudeye:
But since they're still in the school, I won't give any pervert thing.
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.3 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: ShipEveryone on March 23, 2013, 03:30:05 PM
This is interesting . Im loving it :D ~  :cathappy: :cathappy:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.3 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: wsama on March 23, 2013, 03:35:58 PM
“He looks like Jiraiya!" JAJAJAJAJAJA XD Jurina is so funny  and
Yuko & Nyan nyan eating the bento of Rena and Takamina, i liked.
 I loved the chapters!!   :D
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.3 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 23, 2013, 03:38:42 PM
haha poor yuko :lol:, no one would want to get a punishment form black mama rin  :nervous
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.3 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on March 23, 2013, 04:59:50 PM
ah I don't know how to comment on this one....  :panic: :? :panic:

It's just too awesome~!!

It has so many epic moments!!!!

Yuko-sama dreaming about NyanNyan's boobies, calling Sae-papa a baka chicken, not studying for exams and getting answers from NyaNyan and Rena-sama in the end, and just being her usual self  :wub: :wub: :wub:

Rena-sama knowing so well about Yuko-sama, being able to end Sae-papa's sentences, always reading a book, telling on Yuko-sama's little deals and just being her usual self  :deco:

Sae-papa is so funny XD dreaming about Yuki-Black-rin-mama's boobies and also about what they're gonna do at night  :rofl: being more baka than his kids  :smhid :lol:

Takamina and Acchan sisters?!!!!  :shocked well, maybe some TakaRena can happen (I know I know no pairings but one can dream  :D wait there is oredi KojiYuu, so why not having some TakaRena? XD)

NyanNyan eating all the food together with Yuko-sama, NyanNyan hitting Yuko-sama, NyanNyan just being her self  :thumbsup

that teacher, that KuBa-sensei is a strict one nee? but she still gave a few chances for Yuko-sama to cheat XD


Ah, I'm waiting for the next chapter, reeeeeally eagerly waiting and truthfully anticipating it~

Thank you for this nice update~ :bow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.3 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on March 23, 2013, 06:23:51 PM
@ShipEveryone: thank you  :hee:

@wsama: because KojiYuu can't be seperated, right?  :glasses:

@mayuki_daisuki: I'm promise, no one (except their papa)  :kekeke:

@sakura_drop_: thank you so much for your attention about this story :cow:  TakaRena? :dunno: I think I can made it later  XD

Next chapter will be Sae and Akigori turn (at office) XD and I hope I can put some Mariko's scene as their Boss.  :w00t:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.4 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on March 24, 2013, 01:26:25 PM
Chapter 4

After driving all the kids into school, Sae move on to office. Right, Sae was an employee at reputable companies in Japan.


-on the way to office-

“Aahh.. The same morning. I had to drive the kids to school, and always like that”, he talking itself. “But I love them! I love how they are cheerful every morning, no except Yuko. She’s overslept again and again”, he turn on the radio.
“Wait, this song… Aah, it’s very long time ago”, he smile.

Quote
I don't know how to live without your love
I was born to make you happy
'Cause you're the only one within my heart
I was born to make you happy
Always and forever you and me
That's the way our life should be
I don't know how to live without your love
I was born to make you happy

-flashback when Sae and Yuki in love-

“Rin chan, what are you listening? It’s seem like you enjoying that than me?”, Sae sulked.
“Here..”, Yukirin put her another earphone to Sae’s ear.
“This song…”, Sae nodded. :huhuh
“Yup, when I hear this song, you always on my mind”, Yuki explain. “That’s way I love it! And this song too became our song, Saechan”, she leaned her head to Saechan shoulders and hug his arms. :love:
“I see.. But, Rin chan.. Do you know English?”, Sae asked. :?
“Mou, Saechan!”, Yukirin slap Sae’s arms. :bangchair:
“Hahaha.. Sorry, Rin chan”, Sae apologize.
“You shouldn’t put a joke here. I want to listen this song when we're together”, Yukirin release her hand from Sae’s arms and sad.
“I’m sorry, my baby. I won’t do that again”, Sae try to huggeg Yukirin again.
“Promise?”, Yukirin asked. :(
“Yeah, I’m promise”, Sae answer.
“But, if you break the promise…”
“…. If I break the promise?” :huhuh
“I will give you death sentence. Got it?”, Yukirin spoke assertive.
“Okay, I got it, Black-san” :bow:
“You do it that again, Saechan! Mou..”, Yuki slap his arms again.
“Hahaha.. I’m sorry, Rin chan”, Sae hugged Yuki again and give a smooch in her forehead.

-end of a flashback-

Teeettt….. Teeeetttttt….. A car horn woke Sae from his dream.
“Hurry up, Bakaero!!”, a shouting voice came from back. :angry:
“Oh my God! I had a daydream. I should gotta go”, worried Sae.

-in the office-

“Morning, Saeman”, Akigori greeting. :hand:
“Morning, Sayaka. Here, your coffee”, he give a cup of coffee to Sayaka. (ps: he buy a coffee when he near at office area)
“Thank you! (take a coffee and drink it). By the way, you are late, Sae”
“Yeah..”
“Something happen?”, Sayaka asked. :huhuh
“Nothing happen, Sayaka”, he began to open his laptop.
“You sure?” :?
“Yup, just there’s one thing make me late for work”
“Eh, what is that?

“Just a memories. Memories between me and Yukirin”, Sae explain to Sayaka.
“Are you getting fight?”, asked Sayaka curious. :O
“Hell no, Sayaka. How can you thinking that I was fight with Yukirin?”
“But, you said there’s memories between you and Yukirin, right?”
:?
“Yeah, there is. But it’s not means I was fight with her. I just had a daydream on the way to office”, blushing Sae.
“W-What?? You had a daydream?”
“Yeah, I had a daydream on traffic light. And I had yelling by someone because of that”
“Hahahaha… You are funny, Saeman. Why you had a daydream in the morning, huh? Like daughter, like dad. You’re just like Yuko, y’know. Hahahaha..”

“…………”, Sae keep silent.
“Oh, I know now”, Sayaka realize. :O
“What?”, Sae asked.
“Yuko had a daydream over time about Haruna it’s because you give them, right?”, Sayaka chuckle. XD
“Shut up!!”
“Hahahaha… Saeman, Saeman.. How you can marry this guy, Yukirin?”
“Shut up, Gorilla!!”

-after 4 hours-

Marko: “Oi, Miyazawa!”
Sae: “Yes, sir!”
Marko: “Are you done with your report about Hakama’s construction?”
Sae: “On my way, Sir!”
Marko: “Good.. And you Akimoto? What are you doing?”
Akimoto: “I-I’m not doing anything, Sir”
Marko: “Since you’re not doing anything, could you please buy me some coffee?”
Akimoto: “Eeh? a coffee, Sir?”
Marko: “Yeah, a coffee. Do you know coffee, right?”
Akimoto: “O-Okay, Sir!”

While Akimoto buy a coffee to his boss, Marko asked something to Sae (in serious state).
Marko: “Oi, Sae-kun. When you first time had sleep together with your wife, how is it?”
Sae: “Eeh?? What do you mean, Sir?” :O
Marko: “I mean, how you feel when you sleep together with your wife for first time? You know, I’ve just get married for 2 days. And my wife started to asking me :oops: ….. yeah, you know that”
Sae: “You mean, started to asking you for doing ‘that’?” :huhuh
Marko: “Yeah..”
Sae: “Well, when she asking me for doing ‘that’ for first time, of course I’m nervous, I don’t know what I have to do. And I end up with sleep”
Marko: “And she’s not asking you again?”
Sae: “In that time, she’s not. But, I feel guilty to her, to rejected what she want. Then, I try to looking information about what ‘style’ should I used to? If she’ll be okay if I used this ‘style’? And of course, you’ll need a brave, Sir” :thumbsup
Marko: “A brave?” :?
Sae: “Right, a brave and love. If you don’t have a brave to do ‘that’ even you have a lot of love, mission failed. But if you have a brave and doing ‘that’ without love, it’s useless. Because you can’t feel the passion of love, Sir”
Marko: “You’re right, Sae-kun. I need a brave and love for doing ‘that’” (Marko nodded)
Sae: “But, Sir. Why you asked me?”
Marko: “Because you had been married, Sae-kun. And I think, you have a lot of experience about it. If I asked about it to Akimoto, he will make a laugh to me”
Sae: “No, I don’t have a lot of experience about that, Sir. I just doing ‘that’ to my wife only, not like Akimoto”

Akimoto back with 3 glass of coffee…
Akimoto: “I’m sorry for waiting, Sir. Here’s your coffee” (give a coffee to marko)
Marko: “It’s okay Akimoto. Thanks”
Akimoto: “And this for you, Saeman”
Sae: “Thanks..”
Akimoto: “So, what happen? I saw you both have serious talk”
Marko: “Just talking about works, Akimoto. How about your report? Are done?”
Akimoto: “I’m sorry, Sir. Not ready yet”
Marko: “So, you should hurry up, Akimoto. Or our client will cancel their cooperation”
Akimoto: “I got it, Sir”

Shinoda Marko has leaving the room….
“So, what happen when I’m in outside?, Sayaka asked.
“He just asked me some advice”, Sae replied.
“That’s all?”, Sayaka curious. :?
“Yup..”

‘CHOKOREETO kuchi utsushi shite.. itsumo no KISU ja tsumannai yo.. gouin ni nejikonde..’, Sae’s phone was ringing.

Sae: “Moshi.. Moshi..”
Rin: “Moshi.. Moshi.. Honey?”
Sae: “Yes, Rin chan. What’s wrong?”
Rin: “Are you gonna pick up Mayu and Jurina today?”
Sae: “What time is it now?” (he looks his watch) “I’m sorry, Rin chan. It seems like I couldn’t pick up them right now. My report still on the way. Could you help me to pick up them, please?”
Rin: “Sure. But, don’t force yourself, okay?”
Sae: “Okay, my dear”
Akimoto: “…………” (he drank his coffee slowly to not heard on the phone) XD
Rin: “Wait, does Akimoto-san was there? It’s a quite”
Sae: “He was here. He was afraid to heard by you, haha..”
Rin: “Why?” (asked Rin curious) :huhuh
Sae: “Because he was afraid that Black-san will give a ‘death sentences’ to gorilla if he disturb” (Sae laugh) XD
Rin: “Ooh, you’ve started again Sae-kun?” :smhid
Sae: “Hohoho.. I’m just kidding, Rin chan”
Akimoto: “…………” (still drank his coffee) XD
Sae: “Jaa, I should finished this report first, then I will  pick up Rena and Yuko”
Rin: “Yes”
Sae: “Just be careful when you pick up them, okay?”
Rin: “Hmm..”
Sae: “You know how they are, right?”
Rin: “Because they are your daughter, Baka!” (Rin laugh)
Sae: “Yours too.. Alright, love you”
Rin: “Love you too, honey”

We move to Rin chan who’ll gonna pick up Mayu and Jurina from school. Since Mayu and Jurina school isn’t far from home, so Rin chan would pick up them with bicycle (ps: because Sae ride their car).

-at school park-

Rin sitting on the rock waiting for her daughter out of from class.
“Mama Yukiiiiii……”, shouted Mayu.
“Mama Blackkkk……”, shouted Jurina. :w00t:
Rin saw her daughter and wave, “Yuki and Black, right. That’s your teachings Sae-kun”, she thought.
“What?? Is it papa Sae who will pick up us today?, asked Jurina to Rin.
“I’m sorry, Jurina. Papa Sae still has a lot of work to do in the office. So, he can’t pick up you both”, Rin explain.
“So…”, Mayu talk.
“Is it okay for me for pick up you both?”, asked Rin.
“It’s okay, mama Black”, Jurina smile. :w00t:
“Then, who’ll gonna sit in front of?”
“Me… Me…”, Jurina answer with raise her hand. :w00t:
“Then Mayu, you will sit in the back, okay?”
“Ma..”, Mayu answer.
“But first, put your Alpaca in your bag, okay”
“Haaiii…”


Here we go.. They’re moving..
Jurina: (singing) “Laa.. Laa.. Laalaa.. Laalaa..” (ps: I don’t know what song she had sung) XD
Mayu: (hugged Rin tightly from back)
Rin: (ride the bicycle slowly)
Jurina: “Nee, mama Yuki. I want some ice cream” (looking Rin)
Rin: “Alright, we will buy after near at the home, okay? You want some ice cream too, Mayu chan?”
Mayu: “I want strawberry ice cream” (she sounds sleepy) :yawn:
Jurina: “Then me, chocolate vanilla ice cream” (raise her hand) :w00t:
Rin: “Okay”
Mayu: (finally sleep in Rin’s back)
                                                 

Note:
Shinoda Marko as Sae/Akimoto Boss (who asking some advice to Sae about “First night after married” and sorry no troll here).
                                                 

I’m sorry if this chapter was boring.  :mon hanky:
I want to make a chapter when Sae think about their memories of back (with Rin before married) and equals it to another chapter where SaeYuki will be spend their night together. :mon whimper:
                                                 

SaeYuki memorable song
http://youtu.be/Yy5cKX4jBkQ (http://youtu.be/Yy5cKX4jBkQ)
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.4 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on March 24, 2013, 02:06:22 PM
Oh this is amazing!!! Mariko asking for advice...  :D probably his waifu is Miichan, nee? XDDD

Anyways, Sae was daydreaming and then made fun of by Akigori, haha :D

Akigori is a player then, if Sae's words are true  :nervous a reverse from how it is in reality, Sae being the player XD

I love Yukirin in this story  :inlove:

Jurina calling mom Black  :rofl:

Owh, Mayu must look so cute while sleeping and hugging Yuki from behind  :wub: (MaYuki radar ON, even though this story is SaeYuki)

Thank you for this update  :bow:

P.S. Yesh, please make TakaRena  :wub:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.4 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 24, 2013, 02:08:19 PM
awww the memories are funny but sweet :yep:
jurina still calling yukirin mama black :lol:
mayu is so cute!! awwww shes too adorable!!! :wriggly: :luvluv1:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.4 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: ShipEveryone on March 24, 2013, 02:39:38 PM
I'm dead from the cuteness . :mon blood: Thanks for the update and .. please update soon. x:  :mon sweat:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.4 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on March 24, 2013, 02:54:09 PM
@sakura_drop_: it's all about everyone, :luvluv2: not only Saeyuki but also about Mayuki, Wmatsui, and Kojiyuu (I'm still confused about Akigori girlfriend (or wife) and try to put TakaRena later)   :bigdeal:

@mayuki_daisuki: being funny, that's my works  :grin:

@ShipEveryone: no, don't die yet  :mon waterworks: still has many chapter you'll gonna miss  :mon cweepy:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.4 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: fuu_kun on March 24, 2013, 03:35:41 PM
Nyahahaha xD me love sae hentai !! xD LOL! SAYAKA HAD MORE EXPERIENCE??? I cant imagine sayaka being pimp xD
Thanks for the update :bow: me waiting another saeyuki time! Wohoho
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.4 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on March 24, 2013, 07:37:14 PM
Lol this is awesome! update soon xD

Sayapimp? xD
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.4 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: Haruko on March 24, 2013, 08:51:08 PM
ehhh atsumina are sisters?!?!...
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.4 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on March 24, 2013, 10:43:49 PM
@Haruko: Yup :yep: since I can't put another pairing except Saeyuki as parents and Kojiyuu. B'cuz (one more time) it's about their family. About Kojiyuu, they have a short role here. I'm sorry  :bow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.5 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on March 27, 2013, 12:40:06 AM
Chapter 5

04.25PM, time to pick up his daughter from school. But, before that……. – (still in the office), he must submit his report first.
Sae: “Knock… Knock…”
Marko: “Yes..”
Sae: “Excuse me, Sir”
Marko: “Come in”
Sae: “Here’s a report about Hakama’s construction, Sir”
Marko: “Alright.. – (silence) Oh yeah, Miyazawa-san.. Do you have free time after work? Let’s get some drink. I’ll treat you as thanks for your advice”
Sae: “Thank you, Sir. But not today, I should pick up my daughter in school” :)
Marko: “I see.. You are such good daddy, right?” – (laugh)
Sae: (laugh) “Then, excuse me, Sir”

After submitted a report – (still in his room office)…
Akimoto: “You’ll gonna pick up Yuko and Rena?”
Sae: “Yeah! You want to me take you to the train station?”
Akimoto: “No, thanks. But today, I had a date”
Sae: “A  date again? Who’s that girl this time?”
Akimoto: “Umeda-san” – (smoothed his suitcase)
Sae: “Umeda-san, from Hakama’s construction?”
Akimoto: “Right..!” – (laugh)
Sae: “How can?”
Akimoto: “Well, we meet at Gokon Party last week. Then, we had chat and I think she’s interesting”
Sae: “But this time, make sure you’ll not doing anything weird, okay?”
Akimoto: “Why?”
Sae: “She’s a good woman, Akimoto. Aren’t you tired doing adventure to all women that you ever dated? C’mon.. Be serious! I want to see my daughter become friends with your children. Maybe someday, we can be a family”  ;)
Akimoto: “Am I not in your family list now?” :?
Sae: “In my family list, NO! But in my friend list, YES! So, think it about that, okay?”
Akimoto: ………. – (nodded) :huhuh
Sae: “I should gotta go now. Or my daughter will kill me if I late”
Akimoto: “Send my love to your daughter and Yuki…”
Sae: “I will..”

Okay, now let’s we skip about Akimoto’s date and Sae has reach her daughter school.. – (waiting in the car while watching TV)
“Knock.. Knock..”, the windows has been knockin’ and Sae opened.
“ Have a long time?”, Rena asked.
“Not really, I just arrived a few minutes ago. Where’s Yuko chan, Rena?”, Sae asked.
“She’ll be late because she has a schedule for cleaning the classroom now”, Rena answer – (opened her bag-read manga again).
“Alright, we’ll wait” – (watching TV again)

Silence……. – (except TV’s sound), then Sae got phone call from Rin.
Sae: “Moshi.. Moshi..”
Rin: “Moshi.. Moshi.. Sae-kun?”
Sae: “Yes, Rin chan. What’s wrong?”
Rin: “Where are you now?”
Sae: “I’m in the school right now. Waiting Yuko from her cleaning schedule. What’s wrong?”
Rin: “Can you stop by to convenience store later, honey?”
Sae: “I guess.. Why?”
Rin: “Then, could you buy some soy sauce and some vegetables? We’re runs out”
Sae: “Alright.. But what should I buy?”
Rin: “I will texting you the list, okay?”
Sae: “Okay.. Oh yeah, where’s Mayu and Jurina? It’s a quite”
Rin: “Mayu was sleeping and Jurina is watching TV right now. Is it Rena with you?”
Sae: “Yes, she’s with me now. And still reading a manga”
Rin: “Jaa, I will waiting you home, honey”
Sae: “Love you..”
Rin: “Love you too..”

Quote
From: Wife
Sub:   List
Time: 05.05PM
“You should buy some soy sauce, teriyaki sauce, cabbage, carrots, potatoes and spring onions. If you find some chicken pack, can you buy 1, please?”

To: Wife
Sub: Re: List
Time: 05.06PM
“Roger that, black-san!! <(*0*)/”

“Klock..”, the door opened.
“I’m sorry for waiting”, Yuko said.
“It’s okay. Are you done with you schedule, Yuko?”, Sae asked.
“I’m done, papa. And now let’s go home!!” :w00t:
“But we should go to convenience store first. Mama Yuki asked me to buy some seasoning b’cuz we’re runs out”
“Okay..”, Yuko answer.

No conversation more, everyone has tired. And I’d skip for convenience store scene.

Sae and his daughter get home..
“Tadaima…”, Sae, Yuko, and Rena talking in same time.
“Okaerinasai goshujinsama..”, Rin replied. She wondered why her husband and her daughter limp. “Are you okay, honey?”, Rin asked. :?
“I’m okay, honey. Just a little tired”, answer Sae. “Here’s your groceries, Rin chan”, Sae give the groceries that she bought earlier.
“Here, I will take your suitcase”, Rin take Sae’s suitcase and the groceries. “You have a break first, then go to shower, okay?"
“Haaiii…”, Sae hugged Rin from back. :yawn:
“Sae-kun.. I’m sorry but I should cooking for dinner, honey”, apologize Rin.

-after dinner-

“Gochisousamadeshita…..” :w00t:
“It’s delicious, mama Yuki. Thanks for the food”, Yuko talk.
“Are you full now, Yuko?”, asked Sae.
“I am.. – (laugh), Yuko answer. :w00t:
“Did you guys have some homeworks today?”, asked Sae.
“Nope…”, everyone talk in same time.
“Then, how about we will see it your cosplay costume for tomorrow Jurina, Mayu chan?”, offered Rin.
“Ah, right. Since you both said that tomorrow you had a cosplay time, and you both have a lot of cosplay costume, why we didn’t choose it for you?”, Sae continued.
“Yosshhhaa!! Ikouzo..”, Jurina said with passion. :w00t:
“Alright, we will waiting here – (a living room-while watching TV). But Rena, Yuko, help your sister, okay?”, Sae talk.

5 minutes later……

(http://i.imgur.com/oicWRyX.jpg)

Jurina: “Taadaaaa…” :w00t:
Sae: (starring Jurina) “What was that? I told you, you had been not allowed to wear ‘Nobunaga’ costume, Jurina” :smhid
Jurina: “Eeh, papa. It’s cool, y’know”
Sae: “I know it’s cool, but not for you, Jurina. Anyway, why you put your sister into your costume? And how you get that?” :doh:
Jurina: “B’cuz Rena chan looks like ‘Gekikara’, papa Sae. And Mayu chan looks like ‘Nezumi chan’. Then I will be ‘Nobunaga’. Rena chan and Yuko chan help me to sew these costume” :w00t:
Sae: (facepalm)
Rin: “But it’s looks scary one if you wear it, Jurina”
Jurina: “Eehhh???” – (upset) :(
Rin: “Change it, okay?”
Jurina: “Haaaiii…” :(

“Oh my gosh!”, Sae lying his head on Rin’s shoulders and hugged Rin’s waist.
“They are your kids, honey”, Rin talk with laugh.  :grin:
“Yeah I know, but why must Jurina make me lose a faith that they will be fine”, asked Sae. :yawn:

5 minutes later……

(http://i.imgur.com/PzRgbZc.jpg)

Mayu, Jurina: “Taadaaa…” :w00t:
Sae, Yuki: “Yasai?” – (asking in same time-then starring each other) :?
Sae: “You will wear that Mayu, Jurina?”
Mayu, Jurina: “Haaaiii… Kawaii desho?”
Rin: “Kawaii... But…”
Sae: “How you can walk if you put yourself in flowerpot like that?” – (facepalm) :huhuh
Rin: (laugh)  :grin:
Sae: “Change it..” – asking Rin, “Where’s Yuko?”

(http://i.imgur.com/Fbd3vu2.jpg)

Yuko, Mayu: “I’m here, papa. Taaadaaa….” :w00t:
Sae: “Yuko?!! Why you wear ‘drank oldman’ mask, huh? You too, Mayu chan. Why you wear ‘power ranger’ mask?” – (facepalm) :banghead:
Rin: “Honey, be patient, okay?” :love:
Sae: “I can’t..” – (crying), “Why my daughter being BAKA tonight?” :cry:
Yuko: “B’cuz you are BAKA chicken, papa” – (laugh) :P
Sae: “I’m not..” :angry:
Yuko: “Yes, you are..” – (laugh and run away to room) :w00t:
Sae: “Help me, my wife” – (hugged Rin) :cry:
 
(http://i.imgur.com/tbY9Q7R.jpg)

Sae: “Alright, after Yuko and now Rena” :banghead:
Rin: (laugh)  :grin:
Sae: “Why you eat melonpan, Rena?”
Rena: “…………..” – (silence)
Rin: “She loves melonpan, honey. You must forget, right?” – (starring Sae)
Sae: “Oh, you right. I forget. I’m sorry, Rena chan”
Rin: “Then, why you wear fish costume, Jurina?”
Jurina: “I want to imitation Matsui Rena-san from SKE48, mama. She’s a golden fish”
Sae: “But that’s not golden fish, Jurina. That’s a catfish! Change it!” :banghead:

(http://i.imgur.com/7D2HJYI.jpg)

Mayu: “Taaadaaaaa…” XD
Sae: “Your kids, honey” – (pretend to sleep) :yawn:
Rin: “Mayu chan, we’re not in Halloween day, my dear”
Sae: “That Alpaca so exist, Mayu chan” :yawn:
Mayu: “It’s has to be” – (fly away to room)
Sae: “Did she flying to room?” – (shocked) :shocked

5 minutes later…..

(http://i.imgur.com/aMawHHL.jpg)

Sae: “No.. No.. Change it!” :smhid
Rin: (hugged her husband arms)

(http://i.imgur.com/ClvobjB.jpg)

Mayu: “How about this, papa?”
Sae: (shocked) :shocked “Hell no, Jurina, Mayu chan!! Your face are so kawaii, but not with that weapons”
Jurina: “So, shall we, papa?” – (asking with calm face, but her papa are so frightened)
Sae: “Shall we what?” – (hiding in Rin’s back), “You want to kill your papa, huh?” :O
Jurina: “Ha.. Ha.. Ha..”
Sae: Change it quickly!
Rin: (laugh) “They’re just pretend, honey” :grin:

(http://i.imgur.com/yFI6aBU.jpg)

Mayu, Jurina: “This?”
Sae: “Hmm.. – (thinking) :?, accepted but not with that gun, Jurina” :smhid
Mayu: (sleepy) :yawn:
Rin: “I agree, that’s costume looks better than before” :thumbsup
Sae: “Alright, discussion was over. And now time for you sleep. Mayu chan have been sleepy”
Jurina: “Roger, captain!!” :w00t:
Rin: “Wait, Jurina. Where your sister?”
Jurina: “They’re already asleep, mama”
Sae: “I knew it..”

Finally, Jurina and Mayu wearing army costumes for their cosplay time tomorrow. And now all of kids was asleep. Sae and Yuki was checking their room.

(their room like a ship wreck)
“We’re not in Titanic, right?”, :nervous asked Sae – (starring their kids).
“I think we’re not”, :grin: answered Rin – (turn off the bedroom light).

To be continued.........
                                                     

Credit pic(s): @Ko-san (http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=1717975 (http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=1717975))
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.5 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on March 27, 2013, 02:28:40 AM
Aw To bad they didn't approve the MG cosplay XD But seeing mayuyu fly off in the room with a broom EPIC :rofl:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.5 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: Haruko on March 27, 2013, 04:38:27 AM
aww sae papa is so cite :B
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.5 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: ShipEveryone on March 27, 2013, 10:17:27 AM
 I die once again. :mon angel:

Thanks for the update !  :mon dance:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.5 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 27, 2013, 11:34:00 PM
i love all the mini art pictures there so cute!! :cathappy:
omg sae papa is so funny, how many times she has to tell them to change ha lol :lol:
rena looked so cute, melon pan!! :inlove:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 17, 2013, 07:51:26 PM
Chapter.6

Quote
“We’re not in Titanic, right?”, asked Sae – (starring their kids).
“I think we’re not”, answered Rin – (turn off the bedroom light).

After check up their kids, Sae and Rin move to their room.
“We had tough night”, Sae move to bed.
“I think tonight was enjoyable, right honey?”, Rin change her dress into pajama.
Yeah, very enjoyable because our kids was insane”, he turn on the TV.
Rin move to bed and hug Sae’s arms, “But you almost crying when Jurina wear  costums with axe in her hand”, Rin chuckled
“Dear..”, Sae sulk.
“Sorry, honey”, Rin apologize.
“You don’t need to apologize, my princess”, Sae kissed Rin’s forehead while hold her waist. “And now, shall we?”, asked Sae.
“Huh? Shall we, what?”, asked Rin confused.
“Shall we spend time together tonight?”, asked Sae flirting.

Sae started to kiss Rin’s lips gently, and Rin put her tongue to Sae mouth. They kissed for 3 minutes without stopping.
“Muachh.. Muachh..”, Rin moved to Sae top.
“You excited, right honey?”, asked Sae. “Muachh.. Muachh..”
“Muachh.. Muachh..”, “Don’t say such thing like that, baka”
Rin still on Sae top and they continued the kissing. Sae reach Rin’s pajama and put his hand into it.
“You’re not using them tonight, huh?”
“You don't like it if I don’t wear it tonight?”, Rin blushing.
"Of course, I like it!", Sae smile.
Sae started to undress Rin’s top, and Rin undress Sae’s top too; they’re still kissing. Sae moved his lips to Rin’s neck, kiss her neck gently and play with his tongue; Rin moaned easement. Sae touch Rin’s breast and started to squeeze it gently; Sae’s lips still kissed Rin’s neck.
“Hmm.. Honey..”, Rin moaned; she hugged Sae’s head and pull his hair.
Then, Sae moved his lips to Rin’s breast and sucked them; he sucked Rin’s right breast and squeezed the other one.
“Hmm.. Sae-kun.. I love you..”, Rin moaned; and still hugged Sae’s head.
“I love you too, Rin-chan”, Sae answered; but he still sucked them.
They’re change a position. And now, Sae on Rin’s top. Sae moved his lips to Rin’s lips; and they’re kissing.

But, suddenly…..
Mayu: (holding Alpaca) “Clockk..”, The door was opened.
Sae, Rin: (shocked) “Mayu chan???!!!”
Mayu: (starring her parents)
Sae: “Why do you here, Mayu chan?”
Mayu: “What are you doing, Papa?” (still starring her parents)
Sae: We-We’re not doing anything, Mayu-chan” (smile)
Mayu: “Then, why you naked?”
Sae: (starring his body) “I-I feel so-so hot. That’s why I take off my pajamas”
Mayu: “You hot too, mama? (starring Yuki)
Yuki: “Y-Yes.. Mayu chan” (smile)
Mayu: “But you’re using AC in your room” (pointed AC)
Sae: “Aah…” (starring that AC - smile)
Mayu: “Wear your pajamas back”
Sae, Rin: “Y-Yes!!”
Sae and Rin wear their pajamas back and unfortunately they can’t finished what they have done.

‘Mayu chan step into her parents blanket’
“Why do you here, Mayu chan?”, asked Sae.
“I can’t sleep”, holding Alpaca. “Jurina still in gameland, and her bother my sleep”
“Aah, it’s so so”, Sae and Rin keep silent; three of them watched TV right now.
‘Gomenasai..’, Sae whisper to Rin; and Rin nodded and smile.

“Are you and mama was making a little sister for me, papa?”, Mayu asked but she still watching TV.
Sae and Rin speechless for second. “Wh-what are you talking about, Mayu chan?”, asked Sae.
“I asked, are you and mama was making a little sister for me?”, still holding Alpaca.
“How could you ask such a thing?”, Sae chuckle.
“Because I heard mama Yuki voice from outside, like ‘Aaahhh… Sae-kun..’ that”
Sae and Rin felt had lightning strike at the time and saw each other. They didn’t expect that Mayu will hear that ‘moan’ voice.
“You too loud, mama. It be more dangerous if Yuko chan heard you both”
“Hmm..”, Rin nodded. “I’m sorry, Mayu chan”
“You don’t need to apologize, mama. Just being careful next time if you want to making a little sister for me”, Mayu explain.
“And you, papa Baka. Don’t hurt my mama when doing that, okay?”, Mayu starring Sae.
“Hurting her? You’ve got wrong, Mayu chan. What we’re did  are not hurt at all, but very enjoyable”, Sae explain with laugh.
“Shut up, baka!”, Rin talked and pinched Sae’s waist.
“Hahaha… I was right, right?”, Sae laugh.
“Alright, time to sleep, Mayu chan”, Rin sulked.

They’re sleep for 5 minutes, but….
Mayu: (touched Rin’s breast-innocent) “You don’t wear bra, right mama?”
Sae: (laugh)
Rin: “Mayu chan…” (blushing)
Mayu: “Your breast so huge, mama. So, that’s why papa baka love you so much, huh?”
Sae: “So.. So.. That’s why I love your mama so much, Mayu chan” (laugh)
Rin: “You pervert, Mayu chan. Are you papa teach you?”
Sae: “W-wait a minute!! Why me?”
Rin: “Because you are pervert, Sae-kun”
Sae: “Hey, I’m not a pervert”
Rin: “Yes, you are!!”
Mayu: “You both pervert!!”
Sae, Rin: (silence)
Rin: “Mayu chan, what are you doing?”
Mayu: “Squeezing your breasts, mama”
Rin: “Mayu chan, don’t.. W-wait..”
Sae: “You can’t do that, Mayu chan. That’s my job!” (laugh)
Mayu: “But I want to try it, papa. And I want to heard mama moan voice too”
Sae: “Oh, crap!!”
Mayu: (still squeezing them)
Rin: “Mayu chan, don’t.. Hmm.. Sae-kun, help me!!” (reach Sae’s hand)
Sae: “Mayu chan, okay. It’s enough!! You should sleep now, or you’ll gonna overslept at the school”
Mayu: “Okay..” (holding her Alpaca and sleep between Sae and Rin)
Sae: “You’re okay, dear?” (asked with lower voice)
Rin: “Of course, not!! You see what your daughter doing to me” (mad with lower voice)
Sae: “I see it, but that’s not my fault” (laugh with lower voice)
Rin: “Tsk..” (sulked)
Sae: “Hey, my dear. Don’t be mad, okay? If you mad, you’re 10 times more beautiful” (Sae flirting)
Rin: “A seducer..”
Sae: “Hehe… Let’s sleep!” (kissed Rin’s forehead) “Good night, my dear”
Rin: “Good night, honey”
Sae, Rin: (kissed Mayu head) “Good night, Mayu chan”
And they sleep together…

                                                     

Note: (once again) Sae be transgender here.  ;)
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 17, 2013, 08:33:23 PM
@Rukaeru: because I can't write any pervert thing as good as you  XD so I'm sorry. and thanks for your first comment after long time  :w00t:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on April 17, 2013, 09:58:19 PM
Sae and rin are cute :cathappy:
OMG mayu what are you doing to?!  :shocked
this chapter was hilarious :rofl:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on April 18, 2013, 12:22:33 AM
LOLOL so hilarious

 :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Mayu...so bold...

And SaeYuki was HOT!  :wub:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: Rena-chan Daisuki on April 18, 2013, 02:03:21 AM
Finally an update!
i really am dying to see this hilarious family
this story is one of the best :twothumbs
it always make me laugh
update soon
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 18, 2013, 05:54:02 AM
@mayuki_daisuki: you're welcome  :cow:

@sakura_drop_: but not really hot if compared with @Rukaeru pervert collection  :grin: and since Mayuyu was so hentai to Yukirin in real life, so I want to put that situation into story  :grin: and Mayu didn't feel guilty at all.

@Rena-chan Daisuki: glad to know you laugh when read it  :grin:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: Archie28 on April 18, 2013, 03:24:02 PM
HAHAHAHAHAHA  :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

I can't stop laughing  :lol:

that was an epic chapter... Mayu-chan was inherited Sae's pervyness...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: Sydney W on April 18, 2013, 03:45:28 PM
Mayu just so awesome & right timing to interrupt their parents sweet moment. ^_^
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: DC2805 on April 18, 2013, 04:40:18 PM
lil mayu knows these stuffs lol...
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: fuu_kun on April 19, 2013, 10:45:50 AM
THIS!! I cant stop laughing while read this ! X"D i love this family so much!! Mayuuu you perv like your dad! Nyahahaha xD saeyuki hot scene was O _ O me want more baka family! Yeaaay ( >w<)/ thankyou so much for the update :bow: me waiting for the next
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: magicoflove on April 19, 2013, 12:09:22 PM
LOL I can't stop laughing while reading this =)))) I love this family and Mayu-chan =))))) you're really pervert =)) who teach you like that =))))
Luckily, Yuko is not there =))))
Thank you for the update
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 20, 2013, 04:42:50 PM
@Archie28, @Sydney W, @DC2805, @fuu_kun, @magicoflove: thank you so much  :cow: lil mayu knew about this from her parents and her sister (Yuko chan)  XD
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on April 21, 2013, 05:01:10 AM
 :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:I just kept laughing  :lol: :lol: 2 THUMBS UP  :twothumbs
that was awesome!
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 21, 2013, 09:26:53 AM
@mayuyuXlyukirinlover13: glad to know that you're laughing  :cow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.6 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 22, 2013, 02:45:06 PM
Quote
Chapter 7
I'm serious!!

5 A.M, Rin chan woke up early to prepare everything and not forget to wake her husband, Sae.
“Honey, wake up”, Rin wiggle her husband hands.
“Hoaammm…. Morning my dear”, Sae wake up anda Rin give a morning kiss to her husband. “What time is it now?”, asked Sae.
“It’s 5.10 AM. You should be awaken the kids, honey. And don’t forget to take a bath, okay? I want to prepare a breakfast”
“Alright, my dear”


Finished bathing, Sae try to awaken Mayu who slept with him last night....
“My beautiful angel, wake up honey”, sae kissed Mayu chan forehead.
“Hhh…”, she still holding her Alpaca.
“Wake up, Mayu chan. You have to school today”, Sae look at Mayu and smile. “You just beautiful like your mom, Mayu chan”, Sae talking itself.
Mayu try to open her eyes.....
“Morning, Mayu chan”, greetings Sae.
“Morning, papa baka”, greetings Mayu back.
“C’mon, hurry up! You have to school today. It’s cosplay day, right?”, asked Sae.
“Alright..”, Mayu woke and and immediately take a shower.

After awaken Mayu, Sae go to another room to awaken his another daughter......
“Clockk..”, Sae opened the door and smile when see his daughter rooms was messy.
Sae clap his hand, “Haap.. Haap.. Alright kids, time’s to get up. Rena chan, Yuko chan, get up! You have to school today”, nothing happen; the kids still in dreamland.
“Yuko chan, wake up, hurry! Or I will texting Haruna chan and said to her if you wake up late”, threaten Sae.
“Alright, alright!! Don’t texting her, papa. I will get up now!!”, Yuko answer.
“Good!!”, Sae laugh. “Rena chan, wake up! Or I will not give you money for buying manga anymore”, and Rena immediately wake up when hear her dad threat..
“Why you all guys should be awaken with my threat?”, asked Sae and sigh.
Sae move to another bed, right! Jurina bed.
“Jurina, you better wake up now, or you will be late for cosplay day”, no respond from Jurina. “Aah, I think I know how to wake up you”, Sae laugh.
Suddenly, Sae  attack Jurina waist with a tickle and Jurina laugh of loud.
“Alright, get up now, Jurina!”
“Yes, papa..”


After awaken all his daughter, Sae move down to kitchen.......
Sae: (hugged Rin from back – kiss Rin shoulder)
Rin: “Honey.. You already awaken all the kids?”
Sae: “I’m already, my baby” (still kis Rin shoulder – then moved to Rin neck)
Rin: “Honey… Not now, okay?”
Sae: “But I miss you. You looks so beautiful today, my dear” (Sae spoiled – still hugged from back and kiss Rin shoulder)
Rin: “You spoiled today, honey?”
Sae: “Yes, I am, madam”
Rin: (touch Sae face without turn around)
Kids: (watching from back – no one speaking – Yuko take a video about her parents with her phone)
Sae: “Give me that tonight, okay?”
Rin: “How about the kids?”
Sae: “We wait until they’re sleep”
Rin: “I think it’s kinda hard, honey. You know, your kids sleep at late night”
Sae: “What if we give them sleeping pills?”
Rena: “Are you lose your mind, papa baka?”
Sae, Rin: (glup – shocked – turn around)
Sae: “How long you’ve been there, huh?”
Yuko: “Since you're spoiled with mama Yuki” (laugh – show the video)
Sae: “What??!! Give me that, Yuko!” (ran – catching Yuko)
Yuko: (ran away from Sae)
Rin: (laugh) “Let’s eat breakfast.. (talk to Rena, Mayu and Jurina) Honey, stop it! Don’t ran in the house, you too Yuko”
Sae, Yuko: “Yes!!” (sit – eat breakfast)
Rena: “What do you mean with give them sleeping pills, huh?”
Sae: “Sorry, Rena chan. I don’t mean it” (face down – terrible sorry)
Mayu: “Papa baka want to make little sister for us, Rena one-chan”
Yuko: “And he don’t want us to interrupt him and mama Yuki, right papa baka?” (laugh)
Rena: “And that’s why you want to give us sleeping pills, huh?”
Sae: “Y-Yes!!” (still with face down – eat his bread toast)
Jurina: “What’s a big deal with sleeping pills, Rena one-chan?”
Rena: “If you drink a sleeping pills at night, you won’t get up until afternoon, Juju”
Jurina: “Woaahh… papa Sae!! You’re mean, baka!!” (point her dad with fork)
Sae: “I’m sorry.. I’m just kidding before”
Rena: “Just kidding? With your kids? Just b’cus you want to make a love with mama Yuki?” (serious tone)
Sae: “Y-Yes!!” (face down)
Rin: “Alright, kids. Don’t blame your papa, okay? He don’t want to give you sleeping pills. He just give a sample. But really, he doesn’t mean it”
Sae: “Yes, I’m really not mean it, Rena chan” (terrible sorry)
Rena: “Alright! I apologize. But next time, don’t ever do that!!”
Sae: “Yes, young majestic!!”
Rin: “Alright, quickly finish your breakfast or you will be late”
Jurina: “Mama Yuki.. Mama Yuki..”
Rin: “What’s wrong, Jurina?”
Jurina: “Can you take me to school with bicycle?”
Rin: “Take you with bicycle? What’s wrong? You don’t want ride with papa?”
Jurina: “No, it’s not like that. I just want to be with you like when you pick up me and Mayu chan yesterday”
Sae: “She hate me now – my daughter hate me”
Rin: “Do you mind, Mayu chan?”
Mayu: (shake her head) “No, I love too”
Rin: “Alright, I will take you both to school with bike” (smile) - “Jurina doesn’t hate you, honey. She just love to free” (calming Sae)
Yuko: “That’s your fault, baka!” (laugh)
Sae: (starring Yuko) “Remove that video, Yuko!”
Yuko: “I won’t! I want to show it to Haruna” (laugh)
Rena: “I’m done! So, let’s go, papa baka!”
Sae: “Yes, young majestic!!”

                                 
It's a short chapter.
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: fuu_kun on April 22, 2013, 03:15:30 PM
Nyahaha xD thanks! Thankyou so much! You totally made my day! Seriously xD LoL ! Poor papa baka xD come on kiids, let your parents have some time for another sister~ xD
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on April 22, 2013, 04:31:47 PM
Rena-sama is so mature, nee? The most mature of the whole family, huh?  XD

Yuko-sama a perv like always  :w00t:

Juju and Mayu choose MamaRin  :rofl: poor PapaSae  XD

I NEED MOAR~!!  :bow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 22, 2013, 04:54:34 PM
@fuu_kun: (Mayu chan speaking here) I won't let papa baka get mama Yuki moan :yawn: b'cus I also want to hear mama Yuki moan  :mon determined:

@sakura_drop_: exactly, Rena chan not really mature, but too serious (like chapter title) :mon thumb: and I can't seperate perv thing with Yuko :mon determined:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: magicoflove on April 22, 2013, 05:07:09 PM
=))) *repeat* I can't stop laughing while reading it =))) poor papa
Rena-sama LIKE A BOSSSSSS :3 :3 :3
Kiddo, let's your parents have free time if you want another sister :)))))
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on April 22, 2013, 05:12:26 PM
BWAHAHAHAHAHAH xDDDD omg xDDD

This is soo awesome :DDD

And Mayu doesn't want Papa Baka-Sae to make Mama Black-Rin moan xD

Yuko and her pervy mind xD

And Rena xDDD who's the boss in the house? xDDD

Mayu want a lil sis xD I want another kid for SaeYuki xD

Update soon :3 *hugs author-san* ^~^
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: Rena-chan Daisuki on April 22, 2013, 05:37:20 PM
NICE UPDATE AS USUAL ADENTOH-SANNNNNN!!!!!! :twothumbs
having a sister or a daughter like Rena is so scary!!! :bow:
but i guess that's what makes it as Baka family
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: ptrd3009 on April 22, 2013, 11:20:56 PM
poor papa baka  :lol:
but this family is so cute
and rena is like a big boss in house..... :shocked:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on April 23, 2013, 12:29:17 AM
awww sae so sweet saying mayu's a little angel :heart: :yep:
rin and sae are sweet but also funny as ever :P
i also wonder why, why do the kids need threats just to wake them up lol :lol: :rofl:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 23, 2013, 06:17:54 PM
@magicoflove: thanks for reading my story again :cow:

@K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS: the boss in the house are mama Black  :P and Rena get Black character like mama Yuki

@Rena-chan Daisuki: thank you Rena chan (why you appear in comments?)  :O XD next time, you should be careful with Rena chan :panic:

@ptrd3009:  :welcome to BAKA Family story and thanks for your contribution for reading it  :cow:

@mayuki_daisuki: because the kids aren't afraid to their papa  XD
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: fuu_kun on April 23, 2013, 06:28:43 PM
Me want moar! > w < can you added a lil' kuumin as jurina friend~? I miss her :cry:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 23, 2013, 06:56:18 PM
@fuu_kun: let we see in next chapter  :yep:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 24, 2013, 03:08:50 PM
Chapter 8.1
Weekend Time


-at living room-

BAKA Family was watching TV right now. Since tomorrow are weekend, Sae had a plan to take his family to vacation.
“Nee, everyone. Where do you want to go tomorrow?”, ask Sae.
Jurina raise her hand, “Me.. Me..”
“Yes, Jurina?”
“I want to go to Disneyland, papa”, Jurina answer.
“Again? We had going to Disneyland last week, Jurina. Did you not get tired to look everything on Disneyland?”
“She’s never get tired playing all the time in Disneyland”, continued Rena (this time she’s watching TV).
“Aah, you’re right, Rena”, Sae sigh.
“Do you want to go somewhere for weekend, Mayu chan?”
“Hmm, not really. I just want to play with Alpaca-man”, Mayu answer (she’s watching TV but Alpaca-man never get off from her)
“Alpaca-man!”, Sae facepalm – Rin rubbed Sae shoulders and try to calm her husband. “What about you, Yuko?”, ask Sae.
“I want to spend my weekend with Haruna, papa baka”, Yuko answer (she’s busy with mobile phone – texting Haruna).
“And you Rena? There’s a place that you wanted to go?”
“Beach.. I want to go to beach”

“Beach? Sounds interesting. How do you think, honey?”, Sae ask his wife.
“I think it's fine if we going to beach, right kids?”, ask Rin to kids.
“I love beach!!”, Jurina jump. “Yeah, it's fine, mama”, Mayu replies.
“But how about my date with Haruna?”, Yuko sad.
“You can asked her to going to beach too, Yuko”, Sae explain.
“Aah, that’s right!! If I asked her to going to beach too, that’s mean I can see Haruna with sexy bikini”, Yuko starting delusion.
Sae starring Yuko, ‘Then I can see my beautiful wife with sexy bikini too’, Sae thought - Silence.
“Honey..”, Rin shake Sae arms. “Are you okay?”
“Aa.. I’m okay, honey”, Sae smile.
“He started to thinking about sexy bikini too, mom”, Rena talking.
“What do you mean, Rena chan?”, ask Sae.
“You want me to explain what you’re thinking right now, papa?”
“Aah, don’t! Please, don’t!”,
Sae winked to Rena.
“What are you thinking, honey?”, ask Rin with serious look.
“N-Nothing, honey. I’m just thinking about you”
“Really?”,
Rin move her face close to Sae face.
“Yeahh..”, Sae smile.

-on the morning- (next day)

“We will go to beach.. We will go to beach..”, Jurina shouted and jump.
“Jurina, morning. Are you done with packing?”, ask Rin.
“Morning, mama Yuki. I’m done, mama”, jump to Rin and hugged her. “Mmm.. Mama Yuki smell was so nice, its a different with papa Sae smell”, Jurina praise her mom.
“Haha.. Jurina..”, Rin laugh.
Mayu out from room with holding Alpaca-man and a backpack.
“Morning, honey”, greeting Rin.
“Morning, mama Yuki”, Mayu replies
Yuko out from room with messy hair.
“Morning, mama”
“Morning, Yuko. Trim your hair first. You are messy”
“Okay, mom”

“Morning, mama”
“Morning, Rena”
“Mama, where’s papa?”
“He’s outside, Jurina. Was checking a car”
“I’m out”,
Jurina shouted.
“Wait Jurina!! Can you tell to your papa to get a breakfast first? And you too”
“Okay, mom..”


Sae was checking a car engine....
“Morning, papa baka”, Jurina greetings.
“Ah, morning, Jurina”, Sae replies
“Papa, mama told me you have to breakfast first before we’re going”, Jurina was looking a car engine too.
“Alright, told to your mama, I’ll be there for 5 minutes”
“Okay..”,
Jurina come inside.

Meanwhile in the kitchen....
Rin: “Here, your bread, Mayu chan. Here, for Yuko. And here, for Rena”
Kids: “Thank you, mom”
Jurina: (came from outside) “Mama, papa said he’ll be here for 5 minutes”
Rin: “Okay, thank you, Jurina. Here, your bread and your milk”
Kids: (eat their breakfast)
Sae: (came in to the kitchen)
Rin: “Are you done checking, honey?”
Sae: “Yeah, I’m done. And now I’m so hungry” (laugh)
Rin: “Here, your bread and your coffee”
Sae: “Thank you”
Everyone: (silence)
Sae: “So, Yuko. Did you invite Haruna to the beach?”
Yuko: “Of course, papa”
Sae: “What’s she said?”
Yuko: “She said, she loves too. And she will going out with Takamina. But can we take her and Takamina back home?”
Sae: “Of course we can, Yuko” (smile)
Yuko: “Hooray!! Thank you, papa baka” (jump from seat – go to Sae seat – hugged her papa)
Sae: “Woahh, that’s first time she hugged me, honey” (laugh – talk to Rin)
Rin: “Thank goodness, your kids didn’t hates you” (laugh)
Sae: “Yeah” (laugh)
After breakfast, they’re go to beach....

-on the street-

BAKA Family was listening Ponytail to Shushu, all of family was singing along.

PONIITEERU (yurashinagara) kaze no naka
Kimi ga hashiru (boku ga hashiru) suna no ue
PONIITEERU (yurashinagara) furimuita
Kimi no egao (boku no) natsu ga hajimaru


“Mama Yuki voice its so soft”, Jurina praise her mom.
“Thank you, Jurina”, thanked Rin.
“Jurina, mama Yuki voice its not only soft but also .....”, talk Sae.
“Sexy, right?”, Mayu continued – Sae looked at Mayu from mirror – then turn left to his wife.
“Yeah, you’re right, Mayu chan”, Sae replied nervous – Rin was blushing.
“Aaa... Look at that!! A beach!!”, Jurina shouted.
“Calm down, Jurina. You too excited, do you?”
“Yes, I am, papa. I wanna play in the beach.. I wanna play in the beach..”,
Jurina jumped in car seat.
“Alright, we’re almost there”
Sae looked at Yuko from mirror..
“She was sleeping 5 minutes ago”, Rena talk.
“Aah.. That’s why she didn’t talk to much”, Sae replied.

-at the parked area-

“A beach!!!”, Jurina shouted and jumped from a car and ran – Mayu and Yuko ran also – Rena just taking walk.
“Jurina, don’t ran!! You too Mayu, Yuko!!”, Sae shouted. “That kid!!”
“It’s okay, honey. I will accompany them”, Rin talk.
“Thank you, honey. I will come later when I’m done with this thing”
“Okay, see you.. Muachh..”,
Rin kissed Sae lips – Sae smile when saw his family was happy.

-on the beach-

Jurina: “Mayu chan, Yuko chan, over here!!” (shouted)
Mayu, Yuko: (ran towards Jurina)
Jurina: “Hurry up!!” (shouted)
Rin: “Jurina, Mayu chan, Yuko chan, wait!!” (run)
Rena: (walking with relaxed)
Rin: “Don’t throw away your clothes carelessly!!” (talk to Jurina, Mayu chan and Yuko)
Jurina, Mayu, Yuko: (play together on the beach – swimming – and splash)
Sae: (come over – sit beside Rin) “That kids!!” (laugh)
Rin: "They're so happy" (smile)
Jurina: “Papa, throw that ball, please” (shouted)
Sae: “Alright, here we go!!” (throw the ball)
Rin: “You’re not going to, Rena?”
Rena: “Later, mom”
Sae: “Are you okay, Rena?”
Rena: “I’m fine, papa”

Meanwhile..
Haruna, Takamina: “Good morning, uncle, auntie, Rena chan” (greetings)
Rin: “Ah, good morning Haruna chan, Minami chan” (smile)
Rena: “Morning too Haruna, Takamina”
Sae: “Good morning. How long you’ve been here?”
Takamina: “We just arrived a few minutes ago, uncle”
Sae: “Oh, I see..”
Haruna: “I’m sorry, auntie. Where’s Yuko?”
Rin: “She’s over there with Mayu and Jurina” (pointing Yuko) “You can go there, Haruna chan”
Haruna: “Yeah, thank you auntie” (ran towards Yuko) “Yuuchan...” (shouted)
Yuko: “Aaaaa... Nyan-nyan!!!” (ran towards Haruna – and hugged) “I miss you so much, Nyan-nyan. Let’s play together!”
Haruna: “Yes!”
Jurina: “Aah, Haruna nee-chan. Come here!!” (pulled Haruna hands)
Haruna: “Morning, Mayu chan”
Mayu: “Morning, Haruna nee-chan”
Yuko: "You look so sexy today, Nyan-nyan" (hugged Haruna from back - squeezing Haruna boobs)
Haruna: "Yuuchan, don't! They'll see us"
Yuko: "It's okay, Nyan-nyan"

-on coast side-

Rena: Takamina, you want to walk for a while?
Takamina: “S-Sure..” (blushing)
Sae: “Be careful, Rena chan”
Rena: “Yeah..”
Walking for 3 meters..
Takamina: (silence)
Rena: “Do you have breakfast today?”
Takamina: “I-I don’t, Rena chan”
Rena: “So.. Do you want get some breakfast over there?” (pointing small cafe near at the beach)
Takamina: “S-Sure. But my allowance it’s not enough, I think” (check her wallett – sad)
Rena: “It’s okay! I covered you”
Takamina: “Really?” (happy)
Rena: “Yeah” (holding Takamina hand)

-on another coast side-

Sae: (cough – close to Rin – hugged his wife waist)
Rin: “What’s wrong, honey?”
Sae: “Just the two of us now”
Rin: “Then?” (smile)
Sae: “Then, can I kiss you, honey?”
Rin: “But, the kids?”
Sae: “Don’t worry about them. Look! They’re was happy” (Sae touch Rin thigh – kiss Rin lips gently)
Rin: “Hmm.. Hmm.. Muacchh.. (stop it the kiss) Honey.. We’re in public”
Sae: “It’s okay, honey. We just kissing. Muacchh..” (Sae hand move to the top – squeezing Rin bust)
Rin: “Honey.. Hmm.. Hmm.. Honey.. It’s too much”

Suddenly....
Akimoto: “Yo, Sae-man!!”
Sae, Rin: (shocked – stop kissing) “Akimoto??”
Akimoto: “Yes, I am” (laugh)
Sae: “What are you doing here?”
Akimoto: “What do you mean, huh? I’m here because I want to spend my weekend with my girlfriend”
Sae: “Your girlfriend? Umeda-san?”
Akimoto: “That’s right, Sae-man!” (laugh) “Aah, Yukirin. Morning! Sorry for interrupt”
Rin: “Morning, Akimoto-san” (smile – blushing)
Umeda: “Morning, Miyazawa san” (smile – holding Akimoto hand)
Sae: “Morning, Umeda-san. Honey, she’s Umeda Ayaka, a secretary from Hakama’s construction ...”
Akimoto: “.... and Akimoto girlfriend” (laugh)
Rin: “Nice to meet you, Umeda-san” (smile – greeting)
Umeda: “Nice to meet you too ...” (confused – don’t know how to call Yukirin)
Rin: “Yuki, Miyazawa Yuki” (smile)
Akimoto: “Then, what are you doing here? Making love in public? Hahaha..”
Umeda: “Dear..”
Akimoto: (laugh)
Jurina: (shouted from far) “Uncle gorilla!!”
Akimoto: “What??” (turn around) “Aah, that kids!! (shouted to Jurina – wave his hand) “Yeah, Jurina!”
Sae: “Finally, she can meet you, Akimoto” (laugh)
Akimoto: “Yeah..”
Jurina: “Uncle gorilla, I miss you!” (hugged Akimoto)
Akimoto: “Me too, bad girl. What are you doing, huh?”
Jurina: “I’m playing with Mayu and Yuko nee-chan, uncle gori. C’mon!!” (pulled Akimoto hand)
Akimoto: “W-Wait, Jurina!” (look at Umeda)
Umeda: “It’s okay, dear. Go ahead!!” (smile)
Jurina: “Mayu chan, Yuko nee-chan, see who came with me!!” (shouted)
Yuko: “Uncle gorilla!!” (shouted – hugged Akimoto)
Akimoto: “Oh God, Yuko! You’re heavy. Morning, Mayu chan” (give me five to Mayu)
Mayu: (replied Akimoto HI-touch)
Yuko: “Uncle Gori, she’s my girlfriend, Haruna” (introducing Haruna to Akimoto)
Haruna: “Morning, uncle...”
Jurina: “Gorilla, Haruna nee-chan” (laugh)
Akimoto: “Yeah, you can call me uncle gorilla, Haruna chan” (smile)
Jurina: “Let’s play, uncle gori”
Akimoto: “Yeah..”

“He looks so happy with that kids, right Umeda-san?”, asked Sae.
“Yes, Miyazawa-san”, Umeda replied.
“C'mon, just call me Sae. Don’t be too formal if we’re in out of office”, assertived Sae. “So, what do you think about Akimoto, Umeda-san?"
“Huh? Akimoto-san? He’s good, responsible, funny, and he can treat a women as they should be”, Umeda replied – blushing.
“That’s why you loved him, right?”, asked Rin.
“Y-Yes..”
“Then, when?”,
asked Sae – laugh.
“Honey..”, Rin shake her husband arms.
“I’m sorry? What do you mean?”, confused.
“I asked, when you will married with Akimoto?”
“I-I don’t know, Sae-san. Akimoto-san never talk about married or something to me”, Umeda blushing.
“But did he ever introduce you to his parents?”, asked Rin.
“Yeah, once. Akimoto-san invite me to his parents house, and next we had dinner together at night”, Umeda explain.
“So, what his parents reaction?”, asked Rin again.
“His mother so friendly, and I had come to help his mother to prepare dinner too”
“That’s a great!! We just waiting the time, right Umeda-san?”
“Y-Yes..”

“If he love you and serious with you, he will propose you, Umeda-san.”
“Y-Yes..”,
Umeda blushing.
“I know who is that Gorilla”, Sae chuckle.

                                               


Note:
Miyazawa Sae and Akimoto Sayaka: be transgender here
Miyazawa Yuki: Miyazawa's wife.
Umeda Ayaka: Akimoto's girlfriend.
Miyazawa Rena, Miyazawa Yuko, Miyazawa Mayu and Miyazawa Jurina: Daughter of Miyazawa.
Kojima Haruna, Takahashi Minami: Rena and Yuko's friends.
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: sopiyah on April 24, 2013, 04:19:05 PM
uncle Gori.... :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
i really love your fanfic.... :heart: :heart: :heart:
rena x takamina....hhhmmm interesting....
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 24, 2013, 04:28:18 PM
@sopiyah:  :welcome to BAKA Family story and thank you for reading  :bow: :cow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: DC2805 on April 24, 2013, 04:33:51 PM
Unusual pair: Rena and Takamina...  :lol:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 24, 2013, 04:38:29 PM
@DC2805: that's a req from @sakura_drop_  :cow: she want me to pairing Rena x Takamina XD
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on April 24, 2013, 04:44:26 PM
THANK YOU!!!  :bow: :bow: :deco: :deco: :inlove: :inlove:

I'm waiting for their further development!!!  :wub: :wub:

This family is  :doh: and at the same time  :rofl: and also  :nervous

Ah, UmeYaka  :deco:

I'll be waitin for moar~
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 24, 2013, 05:05:37 PM
This family is  :doh: and at the same time  :rofl: and also  :nervous
Be tough, please   :grin:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on April 24, 2013, 10:10:36 PM
yay the beach!! :cathappy:
awww of course sae your kids love you hontonii baka XD
mayu-chan so cute!! :heart: :yep:
sae and rin hot as usual :P
takamna and rena interesting match :deco:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: Haruko on April 25, 2013, 05:15:11 AM
ohhh rena x takamina :O
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: Archie28 on April 25, 2013, 06:37:39 AM
Sayaka and Umechan.... its the first time I heard the pair....

anyway, great chapter  :thumbsup :thumbsup
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 26, 2013, 11:04:06 AM
Chapter 8.2

11.15 am, Rena and Takamina end to cafe....
“Here..”, Rena pulled the chair for Takamina seat.
“Thank you”, Takamina talk.
“Let’s see the menu. What you want to eat, Takamina?”, asked Rena.
“Aa.. I want this bread, Rena chan”, Takamina answer.
“Alright, and your drink?”
“Hm.. Just cold water”

‘She’s very kind to me’, Takamina thought – looked at Rena and smile.

Rena call the waitress...
“Can I take your order, miss?”, waitress asked.
“Yes, I want two honey toast cream and two cold water”, Rena ordered.
“Two honey toast cream and two cold water, okay. I will bring your order in few minutes, miss”, waitress gone.
(Silence for a minute)

Quote
Koko de! AI RABU YUU!
OOBAA AKUSHON de AI SHITE RU!
Terenaide!
Dore kurai honki ka
Misetsukero!
Koko de! AI RABU YUU!
Aun no kokyuu de AI SHITE RU!
Shinjitsu wa
Matomari kiranai
AISHITERABURU!

‘Oh, crap! This song was really hit me’, thought Rena. ‘Ai rabu yuu! Ai shite ru! Aah, I can’t!!’
“Rena chan! Rena chan!”, Takamina wave her hand to Rena.
“Aa.. What’s wrong, Takamina?”
“Are you okay?”,
Takamina worried.
“What do you mean? Of course, I’m okay”, Rena smile (it’s a weird for looking Rena smile)
“You sure? You just quite for a minute. And you didn’t react when I waving to you”, Takamina explain.
“Oh, am I?”, Rena asked.
“Yeah..”

Waitress is coming..
“I’m sorry for waiting! Here’s your order, miss”, give the order.
“Thank you”, Rena replied – and pay the food to waitress. “Go ahead, Takamina”
“Y-Yes..”, “Mm.. It’s so sweet and delicious, right Rena chan?”
“Yeah, it’s so sweet”


Takamina and Rena eat their food, and no one talking about love. After finished with breakfast, they go back to Rena parents.
“Thank for the food, Rena chan”
“Yeah, you’re welcome” – silence. “Takamina, do you want to accompany me today?”
“Accompany you?”, asked Takamina.
“Yeah, play together with me? Or maybe just walking like this?”, Rena answer.
Takamina was blushing – silence – and happy.
“Takamina?”
“Huh? Yeah, I love too, Rena chan” – laugh.
“So, let’s go!”, Rena hold Takamina hands again.
“Humm..” – smile – nervous.

Note:
Rena are cool one from Baka Family. She looks like indifferent to the surrounding but in reality she’s very concerned with the people that she loved, included Takamina. Rena fall in love with Takamina when Yuko take Haruna and Takamina to her house (don’t asked me how – ’cuz I don’t know). Unexpected, Takamina has same feeling with Rena. But unfortunetly, they’re both keep silent until now (’cuz Rena or Takamina never told it).

Yuko: “Oi, Takamina, come here!” (shouted)
Takamina: “Yes!!” (run towards Yuko – then fall b’cuz slip)
Rena: “Takamina!!” (hold Takamina hand – but she’s fall too) “Are you okay?”
Takamina: “Y-Yes, I’m okay” (blushing) “But your clothes are wet because of me, Rena chan”
Rena: “Don’t worry! It’s nothing!!” (smile)
Yuko: (come close to Rena) “What are you doing, huh?” (whisper)
Rena: “What? I’m not doing anything, Yuko chan”
Yuko: “Are you sure?” (tease Rena)
Rena: “Yeah!!”
Yuko: “But you holds Takamina hand for long time, Rena chan” (laugh)
Rena, Takamina: (let go of their hands – blushing)
Yuko: “Hahaha.. And finally, the rock become weak” (leaving Rena) “Do it now, or you will runs out of time, Rena. I know who are you, my sister. Hahaha..”
Rena: “Forget about her! She’s just lose her mind when together with Haruna”
Takamina: (nodded)
Rena: “Takamina..”
Takamina: “Yes?”
Rena: “Can we sit over there?”
Takamina: “Sure”

They reach the coast…
‘I should going say to her now, or I will lose my time’, Rena thought.
Rena: “Takamina, I’m sorry! I know, I know it’s wrong, a totally wrong! But, I won’t lie anymore”
Takamina: “Hmm??”
Rena: “It’s happen when Yuko take you and Haruna to our home, and she introduce me to you”
Takamina: “Yes??”
Rena: (nervous) “I-I feel comfort just right beside you. When you want to give me your bento at that time, I love too. But, your bento was eaten by Haruna and Yuko, right?” (weird laugh)
Takamina: “Yeah, you’re right. And then?”
Rena: “Then.. I would be happier if you want to be my lady, Takamina” (holding Takamina hand)
Takamina: (speechless  – can’t breathe)
Rena: “Takamina, are you okay?”
Takamina: “Y-Yes, I’m okay”
Rena: “I’m so sorry, Takamina” (face down). “I know it’s wrong. I just want to tell you how I feel”
Takamina: “No, you don’t need to apologize, Rena chan. I-I just a shocked”
Rena: “You don’t need to answer soon”
Takamina: “It’s okay, Rena. I love your personality, your expression, your family, and of course I love you too” (smile)
Rena: “So…?”
Takamina: “So, I don’t mind to be your lady”
Rena: “Really?”
Takamina: “Yeah..” (nodded)
Rena: “Okay, let’s join with Yuko and others” (happy smile)
Finally, the rock become weak. Rena and Takamina are dating now (sorry for monotone).

12.03 pm, Akimoto, the kids, and the parents.
“Alright, kids. It’s lunch time. You should get off from water”, Sae shouted.
“Did you hear that? Your dad call us. So, hurry up!”, Akimoto hugged Jurina at back.
Akimoto and the kids reach the coast. Mayu was confused when she look someone that she didn’t know together with her parents.
“Who are you, auntie?”, asked Mayu – stare Umeda.
“She’s your auntie, Mayu chan”, Rin replied.
“My auntie?”, Mayu confused.
“Yep, she’s your auntie, little cyborg”, Akimoto continued.
“But, I never meet her before, uncle gori”
“She will be your auntie from today, Mayu chan”, Akimoto chuckled.
“Aah, uncle gori girlfriend, right?”, ask Yuko – laugh.
“Yeah, I was your uncle girlfriend”, Umeda answer kindly – laugh.
“What’s your name, auntie?”, Jurina asked.
“My name is Umeda Ayaka, but all of you can called me with auntie Ume. Nice to meet you, Jurina”, greetings Umeda.
“Nice to meet you too, auntie Ume”
“And she is my girlfriend, auntie Ume”, Yuko pulled Haruna hand.
“Nice to meet you, Haruna chan”
“Nice to meet you too, auntie Ume”,
Haruna smile.
“Alright, it’s enough. And now we’re going to lunch. You can go out with us, Akimoto”, invited Sae.
“Sure, why not. Hahaha..”, Akimoto replied.
“But, first. Where is Rena chan and Takamina?”
“They were there, papa”,
Yuko pointing. “Oi, Rena, Takamina!! Hurry up! We were going to lunch”, Yuko shouted.
“Alright!!”, Rena shouted – holding Takamina hand.
“Since my car can’t hold a lot of people, I think some kids will be going with uncle gori. Do you mind, Akimoto?”, asked Sae.
“Oh, sure not. Who wants to come with me?”
“Me.. Me.. (Jurina raise her hand), and we’re too (Yuko raise her hand too)”

“Alright, Jurina, Yuko and Haruna will going with uncle gori. Mayu, Rena and Takamina will going with us”
“So, let’s go!! What are you waiting for, kids?”,
Akimoto talk with passion.

12.45 pm, they’re arrive to Mac Donald.
“I’m so hungry!!”, yelling Jurina and Yuko.
“I and Akimoto will take your order. And just sit here, Okay?”
“I want a burger! (Jurina order), I want two chicken rice and soda (Yuko/Haruna order), I want a burger with chicken fillet and orange juice (Mayu order), I want two chicken rice and orange juice (Rena/Takamina order)”
“And what do you want, honey?”, Sae and Akimoto asked.
“Just same as your order”, Rin and Umeda replied.

While Sae and Akimoto take all orders to cashier, Jurina meet her baka friend.
Kanon: “Kuumin, do you recognize that voice?” (talk while eat her burger – going to around with Kuumin’s family)
Kuumin: “Which one, non?” (eat a burger)
Kanon: “That one!! With Yelling voice”
Kuumin: (turn back) “That was… Jurina?”, “Oi, Jurina!” (yelling)
Jurina: “Woo, someone called my name. Who is that?” (move aside)
Kanon: “Oi, Jurina!! Over here!” (yelling)
Kuumin’s Parents: “Don’t yelling in here, Kuumin, Kanon”
Kuumin: “I’m sorry, mom” (face down)
Jurina: “Kuumin and Kanon!!” (shouted – face with wide smile)
Mayu: “Don’t yelling, Jurina! We are in public restaurant not in the house”
Jurina: “Mama Yuki, can I go there?”
Rin: “Sure! But don’t take a long, okay?”
Jurina: “Okay” (move to Kuumin and Kanon), “Kuumin, Kanon, what are you doing here? Aa.. Good afternoon, auntie, uncle” (greeting to Kuumin’s parents)
Kuumin’s Parents: “Good afternoon, Jurina”
Kuumin: “Mom, can I go there with Jurina and Kanon?”
Kuumin’s Parents: “What will you're doing?”
Kuumin: “We have a meeting, mom”
Kuumin's Parents: “A meeting? You? Alright, but don’t take so long!”

Kuumin, Kanon and Jurina move to slide arena (it’s really was exist in Mac Donald as for kids land).
“What are you doing here, Jurina?”, asked Kanon.
“I was from the beach with my family and uncle gori”, Jurina answer.
“Uncle gori? Who is that?”, Kuumin asked.
“That he is! (pointing Akimoto) That ossan name are Akimoto”, Jurina whisper.
“The one with your dad, Jurina?”
“Yeah, Kanon”
“He’s really big, Jurina. He’s creepy!”,
Kanon scare.
“Don’t worry!! He’s not creepy at all, Kanon. He’s a gorilla who like to laugh. He always make me laugh. He’s funny!”, Jurina explain.
“Are you sure?”, Kuumin asked.
“Of course, Kuumin! Today, he came with his girlfriend, auntie Ume. Over there!” (pointing Umeda).
“Wow, she’s so beautiful, Jurina”, Kuumin loves a beautiful girl.
“Yeah, I know. But my mom more beautiful than auntie Ume”, Jurina praise her mom.
“Yeah, I can see it. Can I touch your mom’s hand?”, Kuumin in her dreamland.
“You can’t, baka!”, Jurina smack Kuumin’s head.
“It’s hurt!! Why I can’t touch your mom’s hand?”, Kuumin complain.
“B’cuz she is with my dad right now. You want to see my dad become a monster, huh?”
“Your dad can transform to be a monster, Jurina?”,
asked Kanon confused.
“Of course, Kanon! Even he looks like an idiot, but he can transform to be Hulk”, Jurina whisper.
“Hulk?”
“Who did you say idiot, huh?”,
Sae pinched Jurina’s cheeks.
“Aaa.. It’s hurt, papa!”, Jurina moaning in the pain.
“I’m sorry kids, but the meeting was over. We want to eat our lunch and you can back to your table”, Sae smile to Kanon and Kuumin.
“I will see you tomorrow in the school”, Jurina yelling.
“Yeah..”, Kuumin replied.
“Her cheeks was really stretch”, Kanon realize.

Jurina: “It’s hurt, papa!” (touch her cheecks)
Sae: “That’s your punishment, Jurina”
Rin: “What’s wrong, honey? Why you pinched Jurina check?” (confused)
Sae: “Your kids!! She call me an idiot!”
Yuko: “Hahaha… She’s right, papa baka” (laugh)
Rin: “Yuko..”
Sae: (stare Yuko) “Here’s your meal. And don’t call me an idiot anymore, Jurina”
Jurina: “Yes!!” (eat her meal)
Umeda: (confused)
Akimoto: “It’s okay, honey. They’re getting used like that, everytime” (laugh)
Umeda: “Everytime?”
Mayu: “So so, auntie Ume” (eat her meal), “That’s why our family being called as Baka family”
Sae: “You’re noisy, Mayu chan. Just eat your meal” (sulked)
Rin: “Honey..”
Sae: “Oh yeah, Akimoto. Can you take Mayu and Jurina go home?”
Akimoto: “Huh?”
Sae: “I should return Haruna and Takamina first. And my car won’t fit with 9 people”
Akimoto: “Oh, okay!!”

3.20 pm, Baka family back home, on the street..
Sae looking Rena from head mirror, “You looks so happy, Rena. Anything happen?”
“Huh?”, Rena replied.
“Haha.. The rock become weak, papa”, Yuko continue.
“The rock become weak? What do you mean, Yuko”, asked Sae.
“Yuko chan!”, Rena talk.
“Okay, okay. Chill out, Rena sama”, Yuko chuckled.
“Oi, Yuko. What do you mean with that words?”, Sae asked again.
“Honey..”, Rin holds Sae arms – shake her head (it’s mean, don’t).

Sae arrive to Haruna’s house. And Takamina’s house isn’t far from Haruna’s house.
“Thank you for today”, Haruna and Takamina out of the car.
“I will texting you when I arrive, okay?”, Yuko told Haruna. “Aah, Rena chan too, Takamina”
“Yuko!!”, Rena talk – Takamina blushing.
“Bye-bye..”

On the street, way to home..
“So, that makes you happier today, Rena?”, asked Sae.
“Huh? What are you talking about?”
“Takamina! Is she make you happier today, right?”
“Hh.. That’s.. That’s not true!”,
Rena deny.
“You sure? You even smile when Yuko said that you will texting Takamina when we arrive”, Sae laugh.
“So so, papa. That’s why I told you ‘The rock become weak’ before”, Yuko laugh.
“And what happen, Rena?”, asked Rin.
“Aaa…”, Rena anxious.
“Rena chan and Takamina has dating today, mom”, Yuko frankly.
“Shut up!!”, Rena smack Yuko head.
“Hahaha.. That’s my kids!!”, Sae laugh.
“What are you laughing, huh?”, Rena sulked.
“Then, thank goodness that Takamina have our Rena”, Rin laugh.
“Mou!! You too, mom”

4.10 pm, Sae has arrive to house, and Akimoto was waiting..
Sae: “Sorry for waiting, Akimoto”
Akimoto: “It’s okay!”
Sae: “Where’s the kids?”
Akimoto: “They were sleep and still in the car”
Sae: (move to Akimoto’s car – see his kids) “They’re so lovely, right?”
Akimoto: “Yeah, even in sleep”
Sae: “So, when?”
Akimoto: (shocked) “Huh?”
Sae: “When you will gave me a nephew?” (laugh)
Akimoto: “That’s.. I don’t know, Sae-man”
Sae: “Listen to me, Akimoto! If you’re really serious with Umeda san, you should propose her. She told me that you have invite her to your parents house. And you know what is that means, right?”
Akimoto: (listening) “Yeah..”
Sae: “So, can you help me to bring Jurina come inside? I would bring Mayu”
Akimoto: “Okay!”

On living room,
Umeda: “Thanks for today, Yuki san”
Rin: “You don’t need to thank to me, Umeda san. We’re a family” (smile)
Umeda: (saw Akimoto hugged Jurina)
Rin: “He will be a good father”
Umeda: “Huh?”
Rin: “Akimoto san will be a good father for your children, Umeda san”
Umeda: “Ah, Yuki san. You make me shy” (blushing)
Rin: “I hope he will propose you soon. And we’re become a big family” (laugh)
Umeda: “Yeah..”
Yuko: “Aah, I’m so tired! I wanna sleep now” (pass by)
Rin: “You can go to sleep, Yuko. But take a shower before, okay?”
Yuko: “Okay!!”

In the bedroom, Rena lying in her bed..
Quote
To: Takamina
Sub: –
What are you doing now? I’ve been arrived. Thanks for today, Takamina. It’s enjoyable!

From: Takamina
Sub: Re –
Thank goodness, you’re arrive in safe. I had just finished showering. Thanks to you too, ‘cuz I found someone special today, hehe.. XD! You should take a shower soon, Rena. And don’t forget to dinner”

“Today is a wonderful day, right Kami sama?”, Rena smile – go to bathroom.

                                           
If you don’t like the pairing (Rena x Takamina), just quite!! Don’t leave a comment!  XD
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on April 26, 2013, 11:16:27 AM
*jumps around* *cries from happiness* *throws confetti*

Kya~~~ that was the best adentoh-sama!!!

MOAR MOAR!!!
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 26, 2013, 11:22:00 AM
@sakura_drop_: it's a quick reply  :grin:  thank you for the praise  :cow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: ptrd3009 on April 26, 2013, 12:44:51 PM
so inlove with this fam :jerk:
finally rena and takamina is a couple
wow kuminon XD
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on April 26, 2013, 01:02:04 PM
@sakura_drop_: it's a quick reply  :grin:  thank you for the praise  :cow:


 :mon look: :mon psst:I'm your secret stalker :mon cam:

So oc I'm gonna read and reply soon  :mon yeah: :mon roll:

Sometimes I'm away or busy  :mon gamer: :mon study: :mon scooter:

or just lazy and tired  :mon scratch: :mon wakey: :mon tweaker:

but overall I am a huge fan of amazing writers  :mon lovelaff: :mon love: (the love is only as a reader to writer  :mon geek:)

*off to write an update* :mon determined:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 26, 2013, 01:27:01 PM
@ptrd3009:  :welcome  to BAKA Family story. please, enjoy yourself with baka story  :grin:  and thank you for reading  :cow:

@sakura_drop_: I have a secret stalker  :w00t:  it would be nice. thanks for your time for reading all baka things from me  :bow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on April 26, 2013, 02:46:01 PM
*hugs and cries*  :mon cry: :gmon tears: :pig cry:

This was so awesome  :mon thumb:

TakaRena~  :nya: :wriggly:

*dances* KumiNon~ my dear OTP~  :mon dance: :mon trudge: :shy2: :nya: :wriggly:

I love you!  :mon loveflower:

Nice update as always  :mon thumb:

Update soon I can't wait  :luvuluvu:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: Kazan on April 26, 2013, 02:53:38 PM
 XD i like pairing rena & takamina :thumbsup
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
Post by: adentoh on April 27, 2013, 07:03:59 PM
@K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS: don't cry  :pleeease:

@Kazan(bai): thank you  :cow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
Post by: adentoh on April 30, 2013, 07:36:43 PM
Okay, this is a story about Saeyuki before they getting married.  :grin:
                                         


July, 1994, 7 am.
“Oi Sae, hurry up!! I should be in the office on time”, said midlife man.
“Alright! Alright!”, a teenager out of from house to garage. And then, the car are moving to school and office.
“How could you oversleep, huh? Today I should leaving earlier than usual because I have a meeting, and you know that!”, The midlife man protest.
“I’m sorry, dad! It’s my bad”, Sae replied with bread in his mouth.
“So, what are you doing last night, huh?”, the midlife asked.
“Nothing!!”
“Don’t lie to me, kid!! I know your habit very well, Sae”

“Sorry, last night I was watching a DVD that I borrowed from Akimoto. It’s a horror movie, and I ended up with no sleep until 3 am”, Sae regret.
“You know you're the coward with horror stuff, but why you can still watch that movie, huh?”
“I don’t know that was a horror movie, dad. Akimoto just give it to me without explain it’s a horror movie or not”
“And congratulations, you has become the target of his joke. Hahaha…”
“Dad!!”,
Sae sulked.
Sae and his dad has reached the school…
“Alright, dad! Thanks for the ride and good luck with your meeting”, Sae dropped out of the car and say goodbye.
“Oi, Sae.. You want me to pick up later?”, the midlife shouted.
“Thanks, dad. I will go home with Akimoto. So, you don’t need to pick up me”, Sae waving his hand.
His dad move to the office…

Came from back, “Morning, my man!”, Akimoto greeting – hit Sae’s shoulders.
“Bakaero! Don't surprise me like that! It's your fault, gorilla. Because movie that you gave it to me, I can’t sleep until 3 am”, Sae pinch Akimoto’s shoulders.
“Ha.. Ha.. Ha.. Ha.. Because you’re coward with horror stuff, it’s so fun to do that”, Akimoto laugh.
When walking on corridor, Sae accidentally hit a girl. That girl fall down and her books are messy. Then, Sae try to help her.
Sae: “I-I’m sorry. Are you okay? Did you hurt?” (collecting books)
Yuki: (shake her had) “I’m okay. I should apologize because I can’t see you in front of”
Sae: “It’s okay. Can you stand up?” (help Yuki to stand up)
Yuki: “Thanks” (smile)
Sae: “Since your books are heavy, let me take it”
Yuki: “Don’t! I can myself”
Sae: “It’s okay! I don’t mind” (smile) – “So, what’s your name?”
Yuki: “Yuki, Kashiwagi Yuki”
Sae: “Sae, Miyazawa Sae. Nice to meet you, Yuki”
Akimoto, Sae, Yuki: (walking to class – silence)
Akimoto: “Seems we have a Romeo and Juliette here” (laugh)
Sae: “Akimoto!” (stare Akimoto) – “I’m sorry, he always like that.
Yuki: (smile – blushing)
Akimoto: (lend his hand) “Akimoto, Akimoto Reyden. Nice to meet you, Yuki chan” (smile)
Yuki: “Nice to meet you too, Akimoto san”
Sae: “So, where’s your class, Yuki?”
Yuki: “Right here!”
Akimoto: “Aah, class 2-2, right?”
Yuki: “Yeah…”
Sae: “Okay, here is your books” (give the books)
Yuki: “Thank you, Sae san, Akimoto san” (bow)

Sae and Akimoto continued walked to their class, 2-3 (2nd Years, class 3).
“She’s beautiful, right?”, Akimoto asked.
Sae pensive and replied, “Huh?”
“Kashiwagi Yuki, a girl that you hit earlier. She’s beautiful, right?”, Akimoto chuckled.
“Yeah..”
“C’mon, my man. You’re more quiet after the incident earlier. Don’t tell me that you’re….”
“Me what?”
“You’re in love with her?”,

“Bakaero! That’s impossible! We just meet today. How can you tell that I’m falling in love with her, huh?”
“Don’t you ever hear about falling in love in first sight?”
“Falling in love in first sight? Baka! I don’t believe that!”
“Be careful, Sae. Your word is your prayer, man”

A teacher came and the lessons has started…

12 pm, The bells was ringing, and they have a break time for lunch. Sae and Akimoto went to the cafeteria.
“Aaahh.. Thanks goodness the bells was ringing. Takahashi sensei lessons was boring like usual”, said Akimoto.
“But you sleep well in the class, gorilla”, answer Sae.
“That was… Forget it! Haha.. I want eat some ramen now. What do you want, Sae?”
“Go ahead, Akimoto. I should gotta go now!”
“Where you’re going?”,
Akimoto shouted.
“A toilet!!”, Sae replied.
“Sae man, Sae man”, Akimoto shake his head.

Out of from a toilet, Sae meet Yuki for second time (it’s okay, Sae was clean)..  :grin:
“Aah, Yuki..”, greeting Sae.
“Sae san..”, she smile.
“Drop the San, please”, he laugh. “Just call me Sae, okay?”
“Okay..”
“Are you going to lunch? You can go out with me to cafeteria”
“Alright!”

While walking to cafeteria, there’s someone took Yuki away from Sae..
“Nabe san?”, Yuki shocked.
“Hey, what are you doing, man?”, Sae let go off Nabe’s hand from Yuki.
“It’s not your business, so stay away!”, Nabe threaten.
“Let me go, Nabe san!”, Yuki try to let her hand off from Nabe.
“No, you should go out with me, Yuki! You still have to explain why you broke me up”, Nabe pull Yuki’s hand forceful.
“Everything was clear. I don’t want to be with you anymore. I am not like your stash girl, Nabe san”
Nabe stopped, “My stash girl? What do you mean, huh?”
“Sashihara told me everything. She told me that you are being together with other girls in the hotel  last night. But you know, that day we should going out to cinema, and you had promise with me”, Yuki is crying. “This is the second time you did it to me, you have destroyed my faith on you, Nabe san”, Yuki leaving Nabe and go out with Sae.
Nabe stare Sae deeper, “Who the hell are you, bastard?!”

Yuki bring Sae away to rooftop, a place where Yuki could feel calm and also stay away from Nabe. (in other words, a rooftop is a secret place of Yuki)
Sae: “Ano, Yuki, are you alright?”
Yuki: (wipe her tears) “I’m okay, Sae”
Sae: “Here..” (give handkerchief to Yuki)
Yuki: “Thanks”
Sae: “He’s your boyfriend?”
Yuki: “EX-, he’s my ex-boyfriend”
Sae: “Right!!”
Sae sent a message to Akimoto,

Quote
To: Akimoto
Sub: Help me!!
Hey, Gorilla. Please buy me 2 mineral water and 2 bread. I was on the rooftop now.

Yuki: “I don’t understand why boys always cheating when he already had a girlfriend”
Sae: “Hey, I’m not like that”
Yuki: (stare Sae)
Sae: “Sorry!”
Silence…
Yuki: “What do you mean with you’re not like them?”
Akimoto: “Because he never have a girlfriend, Yuki chan” (suddenly appear)
Yuki: “Akimoto san? How do you know here?” (confused)
Akimoto: “That boy was telling me” (pointing Sae)
Sae: “I’m sorry, Yuki. But don’t worry, he can keep a secret! Right, Akimoto?”
Akimoto: “Yup! You can counting me, Yuki chan” (give a mineral water and bread to Yuki) “Here!”
Yuki: “Thanks, Akimoto san”
Akimoto: “And here is for you” (throw a mineral water and bread to Sae)
Sae: “Hey, gorilla!”
Akimoto: “What’s wrong?”
Sae: “Can you give it slowly to me without throw it?” (protest)
Yuki: (laugh)
Akimoto: “Sorry, my hands slip. Ha.. Ha.. Ha..” :grin:
Sae, Yuki: (eat their bread)
Akimoto: “So, what happened to you both?”
Yuki: “Just a little problem” (smile)
Akimoto: “Problem? Because of he?” (pointing Sae)
Sae: “Oi.. Oi.. What do you mean because of me?”
Akimoto: “Yuki chan told that she has a little problem, and you’re with her now, right?”
Sae: “Yeah, but it’s nothing to do with me, gorilla”
Finally, Yuki was cheered because they both. And they back to the class…

3 pm, school activites was over. Time for Sae and Akimoto go home. They took a train. When they walking, there was a man who obstruct them. Right, Watanabe, Yuki ex-boyfriend.
“Hey, you!”, Nabe called Sae.
“Who is he?”, Akimoto asked.
“Kashiwagi ex-boyfriend. Stay here, okay?!”, Sae explain.
“Alright!”, Akimoto confused. ‘Kashiwagi ex-boyfriend? Hm, aah, Yuki chan ex-boyfriend, huh?’, he thought.
Sae came closer, “What’s wrong?”
“Here!”, Nabe pinch Sae’s face and Sae was fall.
“Sae!!”, Akimoto shouted.
“Stay away, Akimoto! (Sae shouted) I’m okay!”, Sae stand up. “What’s your problem, huh?”
“That’s for steal my girlfriend”,
replied Nabe with angry face.
“Your girlfriend? You mean Kashiwagi?”
“Yeah..”
“But she told me that you’re her ex-boyfriend, so she isn’t your girlfriend anymore, Nabe kun”
“She’s still my girlfriend!”
“Not for a man who cheating her twice”

Nabe looks so angry, but Sae told, “I don’t have a business with you, Nabe kun. Moreover, I’m not steal your girlfriend. We just meet today. If you want to looking for foe, find it somewhere else”, Sae leaving Nabe.
“Let’s go, Akimoto!”
“Alright! But are you okay? What’s that man problem?”
“He said that I steal Kashiwagi from him”
“Steal? Are you robber, Sae man?”
“Don’t give a joke, Akimoto”


They reached Akihabara station and suddenly meet Yuki there.
Yuki came closer to Sae and Akimoto, “Konichiwa”, she bow.
“Ah, Yuki chan. Konichiwa”, Akimoto replied. “Konichiwa..”, Sae replied too.
“You took a train too, Yuki chan?”, Akimoto asked.
“Yes, Akimoto san. I took a train to Hibiya”, Yuki answer. “Saechan? What happen to your face?”, Yuki asked and touch Sae’s face.
“Ah, nothing! I just hit a door when out from class”, he laugh.
“Mou, Saechan. You need be careful later, okay?”
“Okay!”
, he smile.

Quote
A local train headed for Hibiya is approaching on line three.
Please stand behind the yellow line.

“Ah, that’s my train. Then, Akimoto san, Saechan, good day”, Yuki say goodbye.
“Bye bye, Yuki chan”, Akimoto greeting back.
“Let’s go, Akimoto! Our train has come”, Sae talk.

On the train..
Akimoto: “Oi, Sae..”
Sae: “Huh?”
Akimoto: “Why you didn’t tell her about that man?”
Sae: “For what?”
Akimoto: “For.. Remind her, maybe”
Sae: “Baka!”
Akimoto: “By the way, why she call you Saechan?”
Sae: “I don’t know”
Akimoto: “Don’t tell me if she…”
Sae: “Not again, gorilla”
Akimoto: “Ha.. Ha.. Ha..”  :grin:

At the house, when Sae just come home..
Dad: “Oi.. Oi.. Hold on!”
Sae: “What’s wrong, dad?”
Dad: “What happened to your face, huh? Are you fighting?”
Sae: “It’s nothing, dad! I wanna take a shower” (move inside)
Dad: “If you fighting for a girl that you loved, keep her!” (shouted)
Sae: “Yes sir”

8 pm, time for doing homework..
‘Aah, it’s really hurt (he touch his cheek). That man!! What’s his problem? I just meet her girlfriend today, and he accusing me stealing his girlfriend’, thought Sae.
“But Akimoto was right, Kashiwagi are beautiful. I never seen her before”, talking alone – smile while imagine Yuki. There was an incoming message from unknown number to Sae’s phone.

Quote
From: Unknown
Sub: Good Night
Good night, Saechan. Are you busy right now?

“Saechan? I don’t have any nickname with Saechan”, he talking alone.

Quote
To: Unknown
Sub: Re-Good Night
Good night, too. I’m not busy right now. But, who are you?

“Wait a minute! The one who called me Saechan was…”
Yuki: “I’m sorry if disturb you, Saechan. It’s me, Kashiwagi”
Sae: “Kashiwagi?” (shouted – not replied the SMS) “Oh my God! I just thinking of her few minute, and now she’s sent me a message” (jump on the bed – happy) “Wait, how do you know my number, Yuki?” (he asked now)
Yuki: “Akimoto san give your number to me”
Sae: “Akimoto?”
Yuki: “Yeah, I was on phone with Kana chan, she said she know Akimoto. And then, she give me Akimoto’s number and I asking your number to Akimoto. Sorry, Saechan.
Sae: “No, no, it’s okay, Yuki. You don’t need to apologize to me. So, what are you doing now?”
Yuki: “Nothing! Just relax while watching TV. And you?”
Sae: “I just finished doing homework, he.. he.. he..”
Yuki: “Nee, Saechan..”
Sae: “What’s wrong, Yuki?”
Yuki: “That bruise on your cheeks was from Nabe san, right?”
Sae: “No, it’s not”
Yuki: “Don’t lie to me, Saechan”
Sae: “I’m sorry!”
Yuki: “What he does to you?”
Sae: “He just pinch my face, that’s all”
Yuki: “He didn’t say anything?”
Sae: “He told me that I stole you from him”
Yuki: “He said that?”
Sae: “Yeah..”
Yuki: “I’m sorry, Saechan. I didn’t mean to get you in my problem”
Sae: “It’s okay, Yuki. You don’t need to worry about me”
Yuki: “How could I not be worried about you. You’re were hit because of me”
Sae: “I said, it’s okay, Yuki. This hurt isn’t seriously”
Yuki: “Really?”
Sae: “Yeah.. It’s over 10 now. You should sleep now, Yuki”
Yuki: “Alright, you should sleep soon too, Saechan”
Sae: “Oyasumi, Yuki”
Yuki: “Oyasumi, Saechan”  ♥♥

“What’s wrong with the heart sign in the end?”, he smile. “Don’t tell me that she was….”, he laugh.
“But wait.. Where's she know that Nabe kun hit me? Ah, gorilla. It was you, right!”
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
Post by: sakura_drop_ on April 30, 2013, 08:00:44 PM
UWA~~ sorry for nt commenting much, but god this was sweet~ Need moar~ How bout their first date, kiss, confession?  :deco: :wub:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
Post by: adentoh on April 30, 2013, 08:03:34 PM
UWA~~ sorry for nt commenting much, but god this was sweet~ Need moar~ How bout their first date, kiss, confession?  :deco: :wub:
just waiting, please  :grin: :cow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
Post by: Kazan on April 30, 2013, 09:39:12 PM
 :twothumbs Oh so sweet
I can't wait for the next
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on May 01, 2013, 02:04:55 AM
I think my heart just skipped a beat ♥ i love this extra~!
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
Post by: Haruko on May 01, 2013, 03:14:43 AM
Ohh saeyuki!!
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
Post by: wsama on May 01, 2013, 04:13:08 AM
 :heart: Saeyuki!!!!
Thank you!!!! >w<
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
Post by: fuu_kun on May 01, 2013, 05:44:17 AM
Gomen for lurking too loong~ actually I read TheM aLL, but im lazy for comment coz I was in buz.. :bow: and when I read this, THIS! I must comment this! Pwease go on saeyuki pwease, pwease.. Thanks adentoh san..
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
Post by: DC2805 on May 01, 2013, 04:09:19 PM
So i guess the love at 1st sight  :deco: was mutual for Saeyuki...

Rena + Takamina = a rare pairing!
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
Post by: POPCAT on May 02, 2013, 03:37:00 PM
More TakaRena please  :cow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
Post by: POPCAT on May 02, 2013, 04:37:44 PM
Oh I forgot to ask. How old are all the character? You don't have to answer, but I was just curious hehe  :sweatdrop:


Ps. Thanks for making this awesome fic, me gusta it really much  :twothumbs
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
Post by: adentoh on May 02, 2013, 05:31:07 PM
@POPCAT: for Baka Family story, we have Rena chan (15 y/o), Yuko chan (14 y/o), Mayu chan (8 y/o), Jurina (7 y/o), Haruna (15 y/o), and Takamina (14 y/o) :grin: and for the adult, I can't describe it  :grin: for Saeyuki SP story, between 17-19 y/o :huhuh
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 2) Saeyuki Special
Post by: adentoh on May 03, 2013, 08:52:54 AM
a few days later

It’s lunch time, Sae asked Akimoto about that night. (night when Sae and Yuki talk via messaging)
“Oi, gorilla. Are you talking to Yuki that Nabe san the one who punch my face?”, asked Sae.
“Huh? No way, Sae man”, Akimoto replied. “Besides, I don’t know that man’s name”
“But Yuki said, you gave her my number, right?”
“Ah, that’s correct! Yuki chan sent me a message and she told me that she know my number from Kana chan. And then, she asked me about your number. Is it something wrong, my man?”
“No, Akimoto. Nothing”
“Then, let's go to cafeteria?”,
asked Akimoto.
“Alright!!”, Sae replied.
When they were heading to the cafeteria, Yuki was come out of class and meet their both.
“Ah, Saechan! Akimoto san!”, greeting Yuki.
“Yuki chan! Are you heading to cafetaria too?”, asked Akimoto.
“Yeah..”
“I and Saechan also heading to the cafeteria, do you want to join?”,
invite Akimoto.
“Oi.. Why you call me Saechan?”, Sae protest.
“Because Saechan is sounds cute, ha.. ha.. ha..”, Akimoto laugh out loud.
“Plaakk…”,
Sae hit Akimoto’s head.
“Hey!!”
“Problem, gorilla?”,
he laugh.

At the cafeteria..
“What do you want, Yuki chan?”, Akimoto asked.
“I want some watermelon juice and melonpan, Akimoto san”, Yuki replied.
“And you, Saechan?”
“Just a mineral water and yakisoba”
“Alright!”,
Akimoto gave the order to the cashier.
“Did your cheeks still hurt, Saechan?”, Yuki asked and touch Sae’s cheeks – Nabe is watching them from a far.
“It’s fine. It didn’t hurt anymore”, Sae smile – accidentally touched Yuki’s hand on his cheeks.
A silence occurred during a minute between them, and Akimoto break the silence at last.
“Yo! There’s an angel fly away in your eyes, my man”, Akimoto hit Sae’s shoulders.
“Huh?”
“Ha… Ha… Ha… Here’s your order”
“Thank you, Akimoto san”
, Yuki drink her juice.
“So, Yuki chan. Is that your boyfriend over there?”, Akimoto pointing Nabe with his eyes.
“Huh?”, Yuki turn around. “No, he’s my ex-boyfriend!”
Sae eat his bread, and Nabe try to come closer.
“We have to talk, Yuki”, Nabe started.
“There is nothing to be discussed anymore, Nabe san”, Yuki eat her melonpan – Nabe stare Sae.
“I’m sorry, man. Kashiwagi san have a lunch with us. So, can you leave her alone?”, Akimoto talk.
“Who are you, huh?”, Nabe replied. “I don’t want to break up with you, Yuki”
“I’m sorry, Nabe san. I had a new boyfriend”
“What? A new boyfriend? Who?”

Yuki holds Sae’s arms, “He is, Sae kun!”
Sae and Akimoto shocked, “What?”, Akimoto asked.
“I-I..”, Sae shake his head.
“It was you, huh?!”, Nabe punch Sae’s face again. “You said to me you never stolen Yuki, but what I heard today, you bastard!!”, Nabe punch and punch Sae’s face again.
“Nabe san! Enough!”, Yuki push away Nabe from Sae. “That’s one of my reason to break up with you! You’re rude!”, Yuki angry. “If you keep bothering us, I will tell you to a teacher!”, Yuki, Sae and Akimoto leaving Nabe and take Sae to infirmary..
Sensei: “What happened to you, Miyazawa san?”
Akimoto: “He was…” (Sae cut the conversation)
Sae: “I was slip in the bathroom and I hit the door, Sensei”
Sensei: “Next time, you should be careful, okay?” (put on bandage on Sae’s cheeks)
Sae: “Yes, Sensei”

While walking to the class…
“Ano, Saechan. I’m-I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to hurt you like this”, Yuki apologize with face down.
“Listen girl! This pain came with you”, Akimoto mad.
“Akimoto, don’t!”, Sae try to calm Akimoto.
“You came to our life, and you give this pain to my best friend because your crazy ex-boyfriend, whatever!”
“Akimoto!”
“Don’t asked me to chill out, Sae. This girl was bad for you. And you, Kashiwagi san. Don’t ever came to our life, again”,
he pulled Sae’s hand – leaving Yuki alone in corridor – and she’s crying.
“You shouldn’t do that, Akimoto”, Sae started the conversation.
“What? You even protect that girl than heard what I'm saying as your best friend, huh?”, Akimoto protest. “Look at yourself, Sae! You never been like this, right before you meet her”
“I know, but you’re rude, Akimoto”
“I can rude to other because you! Because I want to protect you from that crazy Nabe kun or something”, his voice getting louder.
“Alright, chill out! We’re in the school right now. I don’t want the others pay attention to us”

3 pm, on the way home, there was an incoming message to Sae’s phone.
Quote
From: Yuki
Sub: -
Can we talk two of us? I’ll be waiting you at the park near station.

‘Yuki?’, Sae thought. “Hey, gorilla. You can go home without me. I have to go to somewhere else”, he lying.
“Where will you go?”, asked Akimoto.
“A convenience store”, Sae shouted.
Akimoto took a train alone, and Sae find Yuki sit under the tree.
Sae touch Yuki shoulders, “Hey, had a long time?”, he sit beside Yuki.
“No..”, Yuki shake her head. “Saechan, I’m really sorry about what happened to you”
“It’s okay, you don’t have to sorry, Yuki”
“But, Akimoto san was really mad with me”,
Yuki sobbed.
“Don’t hear that gorilla saying. I’m pretty sure, he just wanted to protect me”
“Yeah, protect you from a girl like me, who can only make you hurt”
“Hey, it’s not true. You’re not hurting me at all. And this (pointing a bandage on his cheeks), it’s nothing”,
he smile.
“What do you mean by nothing, Saechan?”, asked Yuki.
“I’ll be fine even Nabe kun want to punch me again”
“What do you mean?”
“I just want to protect you, same as Akimoto doing to me. I don’t want you getting hurt by Nabe anymore. I-I don’t know what happened to me. Lately, since we meet at corridor, I always thinking about you”,
he hold Yuki’s hand. “It’s like, I will doing anything for you, for make you happy”
“Saechan..”
“Yeah, I know-I know it’s a little bit early but I like you, Yuki”, he stare Yuki.
“Saechan..”
“You don’t have to tell me soon, I know you’re just broke up with Nabe kun”
“Hey..”,
Yuki hold Sae’s arms. “Nabe san just my memories. And now, I have a man who wants to protect me even he willing getting hurt to protect me. Really you’re just like a prince of my dream”, she smile. “But, I’m afraid that Akimoto san will be hate me more because I stolen his best friend”, she laugh.
“Don’t worry! I know how to calm the gorilla”, Sae laugh.
“Hey, don’t call him a gorilla, Saechan”, she hit Sae’s arms.
“But he is..”, Sae laugh. “Hey, Yuki. Do you want an ice cream? There’s an ice cream stand over there”
“Sure, I want a strawberry ice cream”, Yuki smile.
“So, let’s go!”

Sae and yuki spent the afternoon together…

At night, in Akimoto’s backyard…
Sae: “Oi, Akimoto…”
Akimoto: “What?”
Sae: “I want to apologize”
Akimoto: “For what?”
Sae: “For Yuki”
Akimoto: “Yuki? You still remember that girl?” (he getting mad but not angry yet)
Sae: “Everything is wasn’t her fault”
Akimoto: “Why you still protect her, huh?”
Sae: “Really, Akimoto. I’m ready if Nabe kun punch me more just to protect her”
Akimoto: “Are you lose your mind, Sae? She made you like this”
Sae: “You still remember what are you talking about when we meet her at first time?”
Akimoto: “Which one? I have told you a lot” :huhuh
Sae: (stare Akimoto) “I take this seriously but you give me a joke, gorilla”
Akimoto: “That’s not a joke, Sae man. I just forgot the words” (laugh)
Sae: “Because you’re old man”
Akimoto: “No!”
Sae: “Yes, you are! You remember when you said, it might be love at first sight, right?”
Akimoto: “Ah, I remember that. So? Don’t tell me that you are …”
Sae: “Right, Akimoto! Maybe that’s a love at first sight. Today, when I told you to go home alone, I meet Yuki at the park near station”
Akimoto: “Bakaero!!” (hit Sae’s legs) “I had a suspect that you will see her at that time”
Sae: (laugh) “Sorry, my friend”
Akimoto: “So, what are you doing?”
Sae: “Nothing. She just apologize about what happen to me. And she said, she was afraid that you will getting mad if she would be stolen your best friend” (laugh)
Akimoto: “Then?”
Sae: “Then, I tell her that I like her”
Akimoto: “Hohoho… My man. You’re really something, right?” (laugh)
Sae: “What do you mean?” (confused)
Akimoto: “You ever told me that you not going to like her”
Sae: “Am I?”
Akimoto: “So, so.. But at last, you’re going too, right?” (laugh)
Sae: “Then, you would get mad if I was going out with her, Akimoto?”
Akimoto: “Mad? With you? Ba-ka! Of course, not. I’m not a gay, Sae”
Sae: “Thanks goodness!! Thank you, my best friend”

At Sae’s bedroom…
Quote
To: Yuki
Sub: Night
Hi, are you sleep yet, Yuki?

Quote
From: Yuki
Sub: Re-Night
Hi, Saechan. Not yet, I’m still doing my homework. How about you?

Sae: “I just had finished a shower right now. I just came back from Akimoto’s house”
Yuki: “You must be more handsome after shower, right?” (emoticon laugh) “And what are you doing to Akimoto’s house, Saechan?”
Sae: “Thank you for praise me” (laugh) “Just talking about something with him. Like, what I’m doing with you today. And also asked him about today in the school”
Yuki: “So? What does he said?”
Sae: “He said, he doesn’t mad with you. That mad reaction just suddenly”
Yuki: “Thank goodness”
Sae: “Ano, Yuki.. Do you have a free time tomorrow night?”
Yuki: “Yes, I have. What’s wrong?”
Sae: “Do you want to go amusement park with me?” (nervous)
Yuki: “Sure!! I wil go out with you, Saechan” (smile)
Sae: ‘Ah, she wants!! Thanks God!’ (Sae thought) “Alright, we meet at the park near station, okay?” (because Sae didn’t know Yuki’s home, so he can not pick up Yuki)
Yuki: “Alright”
Sae: “Then, good luck to your homework, Yuki”
Yuki: “Thank you, Saechan” (emoticon kiss)
“She kiss me? She give me an emoticon kissing!!”, Sae shouted happy.
“Oi, Sae. Urusai!!”, his dad shouted.
“Sorry, dad…”
                                                 

Note:
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Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 2) Saeyuki Special
Post by: adentoh on May 03, 2013, 09:50:22 AM
@Rukaeru: thank you :cow: you're right, Sae is gentleman and soft :grin:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 2) Saeyuki Special
Post by: AgentBlueBear on May 03, 2013, 09:56:36 AM
Aww... SaeYuki on the action!  :heart: Sae be gentle ne?  :thumbsup

Nice update adentoh-san!  :)  :yep:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 2) Saeyuki Special
Post by: adentoh on May 03, 2013, 10:50:33 AM
@AgentBlueBear: thank you :cow: and :welcome to Baka Family :grin:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 2) Saeyuki Special
Post by: sakura_drop_ on May 03, 2013, 11:15:48 AM
Uwa~ Sae so caring and sweet. That gorilla is so funny  :rofl:

sorry for the short reply but my mind is a mess and I read this to sort things out.. So many fics to update, so many ideas...so little time...

I'll be waiting for your next update! :bow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 2) Saeyuki Special
Post by: fuu_kun on May 09, 2013, 06:15:21 PM
Me waiting~ waiting~ :bow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 2) Saeyuki Special
Post by: bunny_rabbit on May 13, 2013, 11:53:39 PM
one word for your work here... AWESOME :on GJ:

like it so much...and thank you for making such a fun-to-read fic...keep up the good work :on GJ:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 3) Saeyuki Special [END]
Post by: adentoh on May 15, 2013, 10:12:05 PM
this is the END of BAKA Family ch.0 Saeyuki Special (I'm sorry I can't continue SY SP chapter until they get married :kneelbow: please, don't be mad :on freeze:)


05.00 pm (next day, at Sae Residence before dating)
‘What should I wear tonight? I should looking good in front of Yuki’, Sae though when he watch TV.
Akimoto overcome to Sae’s house and planning to going out tonight with him to Karaoke Station. “Yo! What’s up, my man?”, he surprising Sae from back.
“Oi, gorilla! Look what you’ve done!!”, his coffee split out.
“Sorry, Saechan. I didn’t notice it”, Akimoto laugh while Sae cleaning up the coffee.
“What kind of wind bring you here, huh?”
“A tornado, maybe. Ha... Ha... Ha...!! Okay, I’m come here want to bring you out to Karaoke Station. I’m just boring!”
“What? Tonight? What-what is so suddenly?”,
he asked.
“Huh? I think it’s fine. We always like that. What make you worried?”
“Aah, nothing”
“Wait a minute!! Don’t tell me if you had a date tonight?”,
Akimoto asked and Sae just smile. “Am I right, my man?”
“Yeah, you-you’re right. I have a date tonight”
“With Yuki chan?”
“Yeah..”
“Ha… Ha… Ha... Finally, my best friend had a girlfriend”,
he shouted.
“What are you laughing at?”, Sae blushing.
“So, do you have any shirt tonight?”, asked Akimoto.
“I have, but I don't know which shirt should I wear tonight?”
“Give it to me, Sae man. I will make you more handsome than usual for your first date”,
Akimoto wink. Sae just stare Akimoto with no hope.
“Let’s see!! Put this shirt to you, Sae”
“Yeah..”, “How?”
“Mm, not good. The color was terrible, change it”
“This?”
“Aa.. Aa..”,
Akimoto shake his head from left to the right.
“How about this? I think it’s fine”
“Yeah, it’s fine. But you look old with that shirt, Sae”
“Hee…???”
“Change it!!”
“It's one last hope, Akimoto. How? I think it suits with my face, a baby face”,
he laugh.
“You’re not a baby face, Sae. But old man face, ha.. ha.. ha..”
“Oi..”
“I think the plaid shirt is the best for the last hope”,
Akimoto nod.
“Yeah, now I should go to train station faster. See you tomorrow, Gorilla”
“Wait an hour, Sae!!”, Akimoto shouted.
“What? Wait an hour?”
“Yeah, because wait a minute was too mainstream. Ha... Ha... Ha...”
“You should not laugh, Akimoto. What’s wrong?”
“You didn’t pick up Yuki chan?”
“She didn’t give me her address, so we made an appointment to meet at the train station”
“And you don’t bring something to her?”
“Something?”
“Like a flowers, or chocolate or candy maybe?”
“No..”

Akimoto hit Sae’s head, “Bakaero!! You're as useless, Sae. You should bring at least one item for you partner date”
“Aah, you’re right, Akimoto. I will buy something when arrive in train station. Then, I gotta go now, Akimoto”, Sae in rush – leaving Akimoto alone. “That’s my friend, Sae”, he lying on Sae’s bed (I think Akimoto want to stay overnight).


05.00 pm, (at Yuki Residence before dating)
Yuki looks so confused to choose what a dress she should wear tonight. Her mom pass by and looking her daughter.
“Yuki, what’s wrong, my dear?”, her mom came closer.
“Mom, I'm just wondering what dress I should wear tonight”
“A dress? Where are you going? Ah, you have a date with Nabe san, right?”
“No, Mom. I was just break up with Nabe san today”
“Break up? You have a problem with Nabe san, my dear?”
“I think we are no longer appropriate. Anyway he is typical of people who easily emotional and rough”
“If you don’t go with Nabe san, then who?”
“His name is Miyazawa Sae. He always protects me from Nabe san. He's even willing to hurt to protect me from the Nabe san. He is kindly and funny”
“Mm.. I see my daughter was fall in love with him, right?”,
Yuki’s mom laugh.
“Maybe..”, Yuki blushing.
“Make sure you are going to invite him to drop by, okay?”
“Mom..”, she smile.
“Now, let’s get the best dress for you tonight”
After 10 minutes…
“I think this is the best dress for you, Yuki”
“Hu-um, I think is the best one. Thank you, Mom”
“You’re welcome, my dear. Ah, you have to go to the station before it is too late. You don't want him to wait so long, right?”
“Yes, Mom. I’m off..”,
Yuki say goodbye to her mom.
“Be careful, my dear”, Yuki’s mom shouted.

06.15 pm, at train station..
“I should buy something to her”, Sae looking around to find something interesting. “Ah, I get it! Maybe I should buy it now”
When Sae was buying ice cream, Yuki had arrived at the train station, and sat under the trees near the station. “I think he’s on the way now. Just waiting him, Yuki”, Yuki muttering.
“Good evening. Two strawberry ice cream, please?”, Sae talking to the seller.
“Alright! Please wait a minute, sir”
“Okay..”,
while waiting for orders to come, Sae saw Yuki from the distance. “Ah, she's already arrived. I hope she didn't wait so long”
“Thank you for waiting. And this is your order, sir”
“Alright! How much is it?”
“All priced is 210 yen, sir”
“Okay, here”
“Thank you for coming”


Sae: (approached Yuki - surprise her with an ice cream) “One strawberry ice cream”
Yuki: (surprised - looking back) “Saechan?”
Sae: (smile) “I’m sorry for waiting so long. Here’s for you”
Yuki: (take an ice cream from Sae) “Thank you, Saechan” (smile)
Sae: “You look so pretty in that dress, Yuki”
Yuki: “Thank you, Saechan. You too, you look so handsome in that shirt” (smile)
Sae: “So, thanks to Gorilla then” (he laugh)
Yuki: “Gorilla? Akimoto san?”
Sae: “Yeah, he helped me to choose a nice shirt for tonight, hehe..”
Yuki: “Akimoto san has good taste”
Sae: “So, Yuki. Would you have dinner with me?”
Yuki: “Sure! But where we like to eat? There's no restaurant here, Saechan”
Sae: “How about a little walk ahead? I think there’s a restaurant one block from the station. Or what do you want to eat tonight, Yuki?”
Yuki: “Hu-uh..” (shake her head from left to the right) “I’m fine with you, Saechan”
Sae: “Really? Then, let’s go?”
Yuki: “Huum..” (smile)

They walked together to the next block to find a restaurant. Sae hold Yuki’s hand tightly and feel so happy tonight. After walking one block, they find a ramen shop.
Sae: “Aa.. It’s ramen shop, not a restaurant”
Yuki: “What’s wrong, Saechan?”
Sae: “I think they have a restaurant right here, but I was wrong. It’s a ramen shop, Yuki. I feel so sorry”
Yuki: “Don’t worry, Saechan. I love ramen so much. So, it doesn’t matter if we eat here, right? Or maybe you don’t like ramen??”
Sae: “No, that’s not what I mean. I love ramen too. I'm just afraid this dinner to be very unpleasant if I have to take you to eat ramen”
Yuki: “C’mon, Saechan. You don’t have to be sad like that. Whatever I do with you even just dinner at ramen shop, I love it” (smile)
Sae: “Yuki…”
Yuki: “So, let’s go? I’m so hungry” (she pout)
Sae: “Alright! Let’s go!”


07.10 pm, Dinner time..
“Are you sure?”, Sae asked one more time.
“Yeah…”
“Two special ramens, please”,
Sae talking to the seller.
“Alright, two special ramens will come soon”, the seller answer.
“I’m sorry about our first date should be like this, Yuki”
“Hu-um, I told you it was okay. Incidentally I'm so hungry right now, Saechan”,
Yuki hold Sae’s hand and smile.
An incoming message from Akimoto.

Quote
From: Akimoto
Sub: 1st date
What about your first date, Saechan? XD
You don’t make mistakes, right?

“Ah…”
“What’s wrong, Saechan? A message?”
“Ah, yeah…”
“From who?”
“Gorilla man”
“He, what he said?”
“Here…”,
Sae give his phone to Yuki.
“Mm, can I reply this?”
“Sure…”


Quote
To: Akimoto
Sub: Re-1st date
Our first date was successful and he didn’t make a mistake, Akimoto san. We had dinner at ramen shop right now. Do you want some ramen?

Akimoto: “Ah, Yuki chan. I’m glad he didn’t make a mistake with your first date, ha.. ha.. ha.. Wait! Ramen?”
Yuki: “Yeah, ramen. Do you want some ramen, Akimoto san?”
Akimoto: “Mm, sure. If he has a lot of money, ha... ha... ha...”
Yuki: “Don’t worry! He has.. XD”, “Oh yeah, Akimoto san. Thanks for making Saechan become handsome tonight (she give emoticon blushing)”
Akimoto: “Ha… Ha… Ha… You don’t need to thanks to me, Yuki chan. Sae has always been a handsome man, he's just a lack of fashion”
The Seller is coming, “Thank you for waiting! Here’s your order, sir”
“Thank you”, Sae answer. “Yuki, you can texting him later. Your ramen is in here”
“Okay, Saechan”
Yuki: “Akimoto san, we had to stop our conversation temporary because my order is coming”
Akimoto: “Alright, Yuki chan. Have fun yeah”

Sae: (while eat his ramen) “What happened?”
Yuki: “Ah, it’s nothing. I just had small conversation with Akimoto san”
Sae: “Really?”
Yuki: “Of course! You don’t have to worried”
Sae: “Okay” (continue eating)
Yuki: “Are you jealous of him, Saechan?” (laugh)
Sae: “No, of course not. Why I should be jealous of him” (restless)
Yuki: (smile) “You can’t lying, Saechan. That was clearly illustrated on your face” (poke)
Sae: “Be quite, Yuki. Everyone’s watching us”
Yuki: “Oops…”

07.38 pm, after dinner…
“Ah, I’m full. That ramen was really good, right Saechan?”, she touched her stomach.
“Yeah, very good. Where we should go next?”, Sae asked.
“Aah… I forget!!”
“Eh? What’s that?”,
Sae surprised.
“Ramen for Akimoto san!!”
“Eh? He’s order a ramen?”
“Yeah, when we had a chat few minutes ago. What should I do, Saechan?”,
Yuki holds Sae’s arms.
“Don’t worry. I would buy ramen later when I get home. He stay overnight in my house”
“Really?”,
Yuki asked.
“Yeah…”, he smile and hugged Yuki’s waist.
‘doki-doki’, Yuki’s heartbeat.

They went to the park near the train station, spend night time together. As they were walking, Yuki find cotton candy across the street.
“Ah, that’s cotton candy”
“Do you want it?”,
asked Sae.
“Hu-um, it’s been a long time since I didn’t eat them”, Yuki explain.
“Alright, I'd bought it for you. Just stay here, okay?”
“Okay…”
“Here’s you cotton candy, my lady”,
give cotton candy that he bought.
“Thank you, Saechan”, she hugged Sae.

Sitting under a shady tree, accompanied by a cold night and filled with stars, Sae also revealed his feelings to Yuki.
Sae: “Yuki…”
Yuki: “Hu-um??”
Sae: “Thank you for tonight, you have been willing to have dinner with me though only with ramen and cotton candy. But I'm very happy”
Yuki: (laugh) “You don’t have to reveal it about ramen and cotton candy, Saechan”
Sae: “Ah, I’m sorry”
Yuki: (laugh)
Sae: (stare Yuki with serious eyes – hold Yuki’s hand) “Kashiwagi san, would you mind being my girlfriend?” (take a necklace from his pocket)
Yuki: (speechless)
Sae: “Yuki, are you alright?”
Yuki: “Yeah, I’m just too shocked” (smile)
Sae: “So…??”
Yuki: “How about Nabe san?”
Sae: “Ah, you still love him, right? If so, it's okay if you mind” (face down)
Yuki: “I’m not, Saechan. I'm just afraid if Nabe san will hurt you again if he knows we're dating”
Sae: “You don’t need to worried, Yuki. I'll do anything as long as he doesn’t hurt you anymore, though I have been hurt”
Yuki: “Saechan…”
Sae: “I’m promised!!”
Yuki: (she's getting rid of her hair)
Sae: “What’s wrong, Yuki?” (confused)
Yuki: “You don’t want to pair that necklace for me?”
Sae: “Huh? Oh, sure” (he pairing the necklace)
Yuki: “We are officially dating now, Saechan”
Sae: (smile – jumped – shouted) “Thank you, Kami-sama. Thank you for your wonderful angel”
Yuki: “Saechan, stop it!! We’re in public”
Sae: “Ah, I’m sorry, Yuki. I’m just to happy” (smile)
Yuki: “Me too…” (smile)

08.25 pm, time for Sae accompany Yuki back home. When they reached the front of the house, Yuki gave a kiss on the Sae’s cheek.
“Thanks for tonight, honey”
“Sure…”
“You have to be careful when you go home”
“Alright…”,
he smile. A few seconds of silence before Sae pulled Yuki’s hand back and he kissed Yuki's lips. “I love you so much, Yuki”, touched Yuki’s cheek closely.
“I love you too, Saechan”
“I will not leave you alone. I will always be there for you. You have my word!!”
“I know!!”

Silence for a minute…
“Saechan…”
“Yeah, what’s wrong?”
“You're not going to go home and let me stand here forever?”,
joked Yuki.
“Ah, I’m sorry”, he laugh.
“You're too excited, Saechan”, she laugh.
“But you love it, right?”
“Yeah, I love it”,
Yuki blushing.
“Alright, I have to go now or I can't get a train”
“Okay, you should be careful when you go home, Saechan”
“I will, my lady”

Yuki going into the house, while Saechan go to the train station.
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 3) Saeyuki Special [END]
Post by: fuu_kun on May 15, 2013, 11:12:10 PM
Gaaaah.. So lovely..! So romantic! So.. So.. Kyaaaaaaa sae so kakkoi! Gentle >///< me love it so much! I know saeyuki shipper must be very grateful to read this.. Thankyou very much! :bow: :cow: please do another update! :on gay:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 3) Saeyuki Special [END]
Post by: POPCAT on May 16, 2013, 04:30:12 PM
Me gusta de romantic  :on lol:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 3) Saeyuki Special [END]
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on May 16, 2013, 06:28:18 PM
Sae:And that's how I met your mother kids!

 :on lol: :on lol: It's like Sae was the one telling the story to the kids~! XD Sae is so Sweet and gentleman like  :luvluv2: I'm happy to have read this because... the SaeYuki lovey doveyness here is over flowing~!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 3) Saeyuki Special [END]
Post by: sakura_drop_ on May 16, 2013, 07:36:02 PM
 :ptam-shy: :ptam-shy: :ptam-shy:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 3) Saeyuki Special [END]
Post by: adentoh on May 17, 2013, 07:44:19 AM
Sae:And that's how I met your mother kids!

 :on lol: :on lol: It's like Sae was the one telling the story to the kids~! XD Sae is so Sweet and gentleman like  :luvluv2: I'm happy to have read this because... the SaeYuki lovey doveyness here is over flowing~!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
Ah, that was a great ending :w00t: I should write that :doh: but my brain stuck with something :panic:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 3) Saeyuki Special [END]
Post by: POPCAT on May 17, 2013, 07:45:21 PM
On the next update can u plz upload another Drawing/artwork thingy, I don't know but for me it make it easier to understand the story and it is more fun and cute lols   :mon sweat:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 3) Saeyuki Special [END]
Post by: adentoh on May 18, 2013, 07:59:45 AM
On the next update can u plz upload another Drawing/artwork thingy, I don't know but for me it make it easier to understand the story and it is more fun and cute lols   :mon sweat:
I'm sorry  :kneelbow: I can't drawing at all.
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 3) Saeyuki Special [END]
Post by: mgxx on February 13, 2014, 04:57:16 PM
hey you author san  8)
youre the one who make me become aeyuki shipper .. beacuse of this fict
please continue  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9 - I WAS BLACKMAILED BY MY DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: adentoh on September 10, 2014, 08:47:01 PM
It's been a year since my disappearance, is there anyone miss me?  :lol: Now, I will made short update for BAKA Family, and hope you like it.

I think it's not a OS because we have STALKING TIME in next chapter  8)2
                                                                                                                             


ONE DOES NOT SIMPLY, I WAS BLACKMAILED BY MY DAUGHTER


Time show at 5 am, usually happening in BAKA Family….

          Alarm clock which is right next to her desk was ringing, time is show at 5 am. She started to wake her husband who fell asleep. “Honey, wake up..”, she’s try to shake her husband body. “Ugh.. five minutes more honey”, Sae replied while hugging bolsters. Seeing her husband were spoiled, Yuki finally got up from her bed to wake up her kids. She immediately opened the room door which was in the corner and, “Alright, kids.. Time to get up. It’s 5 am now. You'll be late breakfast if lazing”. The youngest number 2, yap she is Mayuyu, she was immediately woke up when heard her mommy voice, while the others was still asleep. “Good morning, mama Yuki”, said Mayuyu who woke while hugging alpaca-kun. As you know audience, Alpaca-kun is Mayuyu Soulmate. “Ah, good morning, honey. Go take a shower, ok!”, “Yes, mom..”

          After seeing her beloved child go take a shower, Yuki was trying to reawaken her three children. Yes, there are Rena, Yuko and the youngest number 1, Jurina. “Kids, time to wake up!”, she talked with high tone and still the kids didn’t wake up. “If you don’t wake up now, you three will not get breakfast!”, Yuki snapped. But one more time, the kids still didn’t wake up. “Alright, if that what you want, you three will not get any allowance for a week!”, threatened Yuki with BLACK Kashiwagi aura. “Bruukk..”, immediately, they all wake up. “Yes, mom!”, “Good..”. They are more afraid of not getting an allowance than not get breakfast.

          At 6 o’clock, Sae approached yuki who was making breakfast. “Morning, dear..”, Sae hug Yuki from behind. “Morning too you, Sae-kun. Hmm, your smell is so good, but your tie slightly shifted”, her said while fixing her husband tie. “Thank you my wife”, Sae praise. Suddenly, Yuki looks sad and tried to distance herself from Sae. Sae was confused, “What happened dear? Why you looks so sad?”. “I was just thinking about the things that we talked about last night. That you will be going to China after tomorrow for business trip”. Sae grabbed Yuki’s hand and hug her from behind. “Don’t worry dear, I'm not going to do naughty things over there, it is just business trip. Trust me, my heart is just for you and the kids, Rin-chan”, Sae flirt while kissing Yuki’s shoulder. After 2 minutes, Sae feels something is watching them. Yup! It’s Mayuyu who is watching them lovey dovey behind them. “It’s still morning, papa Baka. Don’t love dovey with mama Yuki right now. I’m so hungry, Alpaca-kun too”, fussy Mayuyu. “Yes, maam!!”, Sae replied.

At dining table, time for breakfast…… Jurina step down to dining table.

Yuki: “Today, we’re eat nasi goreng seafood, ok. I’ll take you a plate first, honey.” http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nasi_goreng (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nasi_goreng) (click it)
Sae: “Thank you”
Mayuyu, Jurina: “Me tooooo” (Giving their plate)
Yuki: “Hold on second, Mayu-chan, Jurina. It’s your papa turns and then is yours”
Sae: (Evil smile – Smirk)
Mayuyu: “It’s a cheating!! I'm your favorite child, so I should go first, not papa baka” (Sulk)
Yuki: “Mayu-chan, it isn’t a cheating. It was first service for husband since your papa baka it’s my husband. A wife should serve her husband first then their children. Mayu-chan should be like mama later, ok?!” (Serve Mayuyu – Jurina plate)
Mayuyu: “Yes..!!”

Tap… Tap… Tap… is a voice of Rena footsteps walking into the dining room..

Rena: “Morning, dad, mom… It’s nasi goreng seafood, right?”
Yuki: “Yes, it is. Your favorite food, right?”
Rena: (Nod)
Jurina: “Me too, love it!!” (Raise hand with holding a spoon)
Sae:Ah, right. I have a notification for you all”
Jurina: (Chomp-chomp)
Mayuyu: “What is it?”
Sae: “After tomorrow, I will be going to China for business trip. So, I want you, all of you to take care your mommy while I’m out, can you?”
Rena: “You’ve got a promotion for working in China?”
Sae: “Not, it is not. It’s just business trip. The board of directors asked me to examine our existing branch company in china.”
Jurina: “China?” (Look confuse)
Mayuyu: “Not as far as I think” (Chomp-chomp)
Yuki: “Mayu-chan…”
Rena: “How long?”
Sae: “Just for 1 week if there are no obstacles”
Yuko: “So, mama Yuki will be alone, right?” (Step down to dining room and grabbed the milk on the table)
Sae: “Yes, she is. So I asked for help from all of you to keep your mama well. Do not troublesome as long as I don’t exist if you don’t want this house filled with BLACK Kashiwagi aura.” (Giggle)
Yuki: “What had you say, Sae-kun?” (Scary face)
Sae: “Ah, sorry. I’m so sorry, it was my fault” (Bowed head)
Rena: “Okay, we will help you but….”
Sae: “But?”
Rena: “As a wage to keep mama Yuki safe, we want our allowance for a week up to 50 percent”
Sae: (Drinking coffee – Hiccups) “What? Your allowance for a week up to 50 percent? All of you? Are you blackmailed me, Rena?” (Look Rena with suspicious eyes)
Rena: “That was terms if you want mama to keep safe and not in danger”
Sae: “You're the one who makes it dangerous, Rena! You like being demanded ransom for your mama lives”
Yuki: (Giggle) “Just follow their wishes if you want me to safely. You know how their behavior?!”
Sae: “But, 50 percent for a week its so much, honey. Help me…”
Yuki: “You can uses our savings, right?” (Try to calming Sae)
Sae: “But…..”
Yuki: (Holding Sae’s hand) “It’s okay!!” (Smile)
Rena: (Smirk)
Yuko: “C’mon, papa. Just said DEAL, and all the case are closed” (Laugh)
Mayuyu: “50 percent for a week would not be expensive when compared to your wife lives, Miyazawa Sae”
Sae: “What the hell are you doing?!! I WAS BLACKMAILED BY MY OWN DAUGHTER”
Jurina: “Papa baka, buy me a gift when you will return”
Mayuyu: “Me too..”
Rena, Yuko: “Of course, us too”
Yuki: “Me too, honey”
Sae: “OH NO…!!!”
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9 - I WAS BLACKMAILED BY MY DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: Kazan on September 11, 2014, 02:47:20 AM
Nasi goreng  XD wkwk.. It's seem delicious  :drool:
Siip  :thumbsup
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9 - I WAS BLACKMAILED BY MY DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: fuu_kun on September 11, 2014, 04:12:53 AM
Im glad its nasi goreng, and not bakso  :grin: :grin:

thankyou for your update :bow:

Im waiting for more~! if you can  :grin:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9 - I WAS BLACKMAILED BY MY DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: adentoh on September 11, 2014, 05:14:49 AM
Nasi goreng  XD wkwk.. It's seem delicious  :drool:
Siip  :thumbsup
Yes, its very delicious for breakfast  :drool:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9 - I WAS BLACKMAILED BY MY DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: adentoh on September 11, 2014, 05:16:16 AM
Im glad its nasi goreng, and not bakso  :grin: :grin:

thankyou for your update :bow:

Im waiting for more~! if you can  :grin:

No, no, no... Bakso its a dinner  :lol: not breakfast menu.
I'll try to update in few week  :yep:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9 - I WAS BLACKMAILED BY MY DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: mgxx on September 11, 2014, 10:01:05 AM
Ahhh maybe yukirin should make nasi uduk next time .. Wkwk..
Im really happy finally you continue this fiction。。。。。
You said before that you will never write this fiction anymore~
Kyaaaa really happy !!!
Thankyou for update adentoh-san ^^
Looking forward for the next chapter :hip smile:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9 - I WAS BLACKMAILED BY MY DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: moreguan on September 12, 2014, 06:26:44 AM
woah finally...
nasi goreng? i like nasi goreng too XD
i love saeyuki and their kids are very cute :twothumbs

waiting for your next update author-san  :)

Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9 - I WAS BLACKMAILED BY MY DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: Kirozoro on September 13, 2014, 03:32:55 PM
Poor Sae got blackmail by his daughters

I just read ur stories today and i manage to finish it XD

Update soon
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9 - I WAS BLACKMAILED BY MY DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: crosteks on September 15, 2014, 10:07:35 AM
hahah! naughty noisy girl's  :wahaha: :wahaha:
Baka family is so Fun and interesting  :k-thrilled: :k-thrilled: :k-thrilled: :k-thrilled:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9 - I WAS BLACKMAILED BY MY DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: adentoh on September 16, 2014, 11:31:11 AM
Poor Sae got blackmail by his daughters

I just read ur stories today and i manage to finish it XD

Update soon

Congratulation for you  :yossi: :lol:
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9 - I WAS BLACKMAILED BY MY DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: adentoh on September 16, 2014, 11:35:03 AM
hahah! naughty noisy girl's  :wahaha: :wahaha:
Baka family is so Fun and interesting  :k-thrilled: :k-thrilled: :k-thrilled: :k-thrilled:
Who is naughty noisy girls?  :huhuh I think they are just in high spirit  :lol:
Yes, baka family is fun and interesting story  :lol: even though is short for a chapter  :)
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9.1 - LIKE FATHER, LIKE DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: adentoh on September 16, 2014, 12:25:38 PM
At Sae's office – 9 AM.

            By carrying a coffee that purchased in the front office, Sae went into his room. Yes, Sae is not alone in the room. Akimoto, that's his call, a friend from the same high school with Sae. "It's your coffee", Sae put it on Akimoto’s table. "Thank you, friend", he replied. "What is it? Your face has kind of tangled tape", continued Akimoto. "I do not know.. This morning they were all acting though tomorrow I have to go to China", said Sae. "Oh, it's the problem then? Why? Yuki-kun angry because you left alone?", Akimoto asked curious. "No, is not about Rin-chan but the kids. They were not angry if I go", Sae sighed. "Hahaha ... Do not tell me they were more than happy if you go to China, Sae-kun?!", asked Akimoto. With smugly Sae replied his friend's question, "Yes, that's it. They are much more fun when I’m gone". "Hahaha, I am very sorry, Sae-kun", joked Akimoto. "Apparently they want you to leave and never return again", Akimoto added with a laugh. "Not only that, they also had dare to blackmailing me!", said Sae while checking the files. "Blackmailing you?", Asked Akimoto. "How come?", He continued. "They are blackmailing me by asking additional allowance of 50 percent for 1 week". "There, there, if the kids are already asking for money, definitely they will ask to their parents although it must be blackmailing his father, hahaha ...", Akimoto is trying to calm Sae. "Then, how the responses of Yuki-kun?", Asked Akimoto. "Ah, Rin-chan, huh. She agreed. But because these kids, I was so worried at her". "But it is more secure than Yuki-kun guarded by another man, right?", added Akimoto. "Another man, huh? During we relate to married now, Rin-chan always introduce me to her male friends. In fact we would often go on holiday together. So, I'm not so worried about it". "Ah, so.."
Since in the office there’s no important conversation except work, so I skip it.


Meanwhile, at Rena/Yuko’s school, during breaks…
Yuko: “Nyan-nyan…”, Yuko try hug Haruna from behind.
Haruna: “Yuu-chan! Stop it!”, she said with annoyance.
Yuko: “Tell me, Nyan-nyan.. You had plans after school today?”
Haruna: “After school, huh?” (she’s thinking) – “I think no one”
Yuko: “Great! There’s a movie that I'd like to watch today, come with me, okay?”
Haruna: “Movie, huh? But…”
Yuko: “C’mon! You can stay overnight at my home if we are returning home when is night. And we can DO IT all night long, Nyan-nyan. Ha.. Ha.. Ha..”
Haruna: “Moo, Yuu-chan no Baka!!” (she hit Yuko’s hand – and blushing)
Yuko: “Oi, Takamina! Come here!”
Rena: (she glanced at Takamina)
Takamina: “What’s up Yuko?”
Rena: “Are you done with Mariko sensei?”
Takamina: “Y-Yes” (she blushing)
Yuko: “Oi, oi Rena-chan. Just hold on your passions” (she mocking Rena)
Rena: (staring at Yuko)
Yuko: “Nee, Takamina. You had plans after school today?”
Takamina: “Why?
Yuko: “Accompany Rena-chan watching movies”
Rena: “Oi..”
Takamina: “If Rena-chan go, so do I” (blushing)
Rena: (blushing) – (cough) “Eheem..”
Yuko: “You can stay overnight too like Nyan-nyan did, Takamina”
Haruna: “When did I say that?” (pouting)
Yuko: “You don’t! Even if you don’t answer, I already know the answer. You definitely wanted to join if there is me, right?” (she laugh) – “Ah, right Takamina. We can going to double date” (continued laugh)
Rena/Takamina: “Double date?!!” (both of them are shock – then blushed)
Yuko: “Oi, oi, lower your voice”
Rena: “Ah, sorry!”
Yuko: “So, what’s your answer, Takamina?”
Takamina: “Alright, I will join with you and Rena-chan” (keep blushing)
Rena: (stand up – walk away)
Yuko: “Where you want to go, Rena?”
Rena: “A toilet. Wanna join me?”
Yuko: “No, thanks! Just asking that to Takamina, not me”
Takamina: (blushing) "Yuko-chan!"
Haruna: “Yuu-chan!”
Yuko: “What’s wrong my wife? You want to go to a toilet with me?”
Haruna: “Heentai..” (slap Yuko’s face)


At Akihabara Elementary School – 1 PM..

            A man with white shirt and wearing glasses was standing right on the side of the school fence. Yes, he is Sae. After finished with his work at the office, Sae still has one work to do, pick up the kids from school. This time, he was given the task to pick Mayuyu and Jurina. “Ding.. Dong..”, bell sign of ending the lesson is rang. Seen a bunch of elementary school children trooped out of the class. A child aware of the arrival of his father, "Papa baka!", Jurina shouted. "Come on, Mayu-chan!", Jurina pulled Mayuyu hands. Jurina ran to her father and jump. "Hahaha .. It was very dangerous, Jurina," said Sae and Jurina just smile. While holding Jurina, the other Sae’s hand was holding Mayuyu hand. "How was school today, Mayu-chan?", asked Sae. "Nothing special today. As usual I played with Ota and Haruka", Mayu replied. "Ah, so that. And you Jurina? ", he asked again. "A sensei was praise my picture, pa!", Jurina replied. "Wow, it’s a great! What are you drawing, Jurina? "," I was drawing Papa, Mama, Rena nee-chan, Yuko nee-chan, Mayu-chan and I were playing on the beach", he replied innocently. "Well then, as a reward, I will bought you both an ice cream?", asked Sae. "I want it .. I want it ..", Jurina replied with spirit. "Me too," added Mayu while clutching his father's hand tightly. "Alright, everyone get an ice cream”, Sae smiled.

            Arriving in a parking lot, they were entered into the car and Sae drove his vehicle into the ice cream shop. A cellular phone located on the dashboard was ringing, with ringtone from French Kiss - Rainy Day, Jurina was lifted. "Hello..", greetings Jurina. "Is that you Jurina?", asked Yuki. "Yes, it’s me", he replied. "Where is Papa?", asked Yuki again. "Papa was driving. So he can not pick up the phone now", he replied. "Oh, okay. I just make sure your dad are already carrying out his duties to pick up you both from school. See you at home", Yuki ended the conversation.
 
At home – 2 PM..

Sae: “We’re home!”
Yuki: “Welcome home”
Jurina: “Here is your ice cream, mom”
Yuki: “Thank you, Jurina”
Sae: “Yuko and Rena is not home yet?”
Yuki: “No, dear. Maybe they had additional lessons” – “Can you accompany me to department store today? I need some towel and supplies for you”
Sae: “Ok! How about them? Come with us?”
Yuki: “I think they don’t need to come. They had just returned from school, right? It definitely tired. I will talk to them later”
Sae: (he kissed Yuki cheek)
Yuki: “Sae-kun!”
Sae: “Yes, maam!”
Yuki: “You smell of sweat! Take a shower first. And let’s increasingly your handsome, (teasing her husband)
Sae: (he nuzzled his shirt) “Alright, I gotta go” – (walk towards his room – and teasing his wife) “You wanna join with me, Rin-chan?”
Yuki: “No, thank you!”
Sae: “Cihh..” (sulked)

While waiting for her husband finished showering, Yuki went to the kids room to talk … Knock… Knock…
Mayu: “Yes..”
Yuki: “Can I come in?”, she asked.
Mayu: “Sure, mom”, replied Mayu.
Yuki: “Ah, you're changing clothes”
Mayu: “Yes, we are”, she replied. Then her eyes turn towards Jurina who was taking off uniform.
Jurina: “Aah, Mayu-chan no Ecchi”, she tried to cover her body with a pillow.
Yuki: (laugh)
Mayu: “Take it easy, Jurina. Your body doesn’t look like my ideal man", she said while taking off her uniform itself.
Yuki: “Eh?”, her face filled with confusion. “Mayu-chan, where did you learn those words?”, she asked.
Mayu: “From drama that I watched last night with Yuko nee-chan”, she replied.
Yuki: “Ah, so..” – (asked herself, "What kind of drama you watch?”)
Jurina: “Mama, please get me my clothes were there”
Yuki: “Here, Jurina”. “Listen, Mayu-chan, Jurina. Me and Papa want to go briefly into a department store for shopping papa needs while in China. You both want to come or stay at home?, she asked.
Mayu: “Me pass. I want to watch anime that I recorded last night”
Jurina: “Me, I'll go!”
Mayu: “Jurina! You got a homework for tomorrow, right?”
Jurina: “Eh?”, she replied with a confused.
Yuki: “So Jurina have some homework, huh. Well, after your homework is done, I will give a reward”
Jurina: “Eh, Yes..”
Yuki: “Alright, I should go now. Rena and Yuko-chan will come home soon. Just wait for them, okay?!”, she said while walking out of the room.
Jurina: “Nee, Mayu-chan. I don’t have homework for tomorrow. Why did you lie?”
Mayu: “Jurina, you didn’t know nothing. Tonight, papa will going to China and today gonna be the last day for mama together with papa”, she said.
Jurina: “What do you mean?”
Mayu: “Before papa went to China for a week, let they both spend time together. If you join, it means you're bothering them”, she explained to Jurina. “This is an adult problem, Jurina. You were still a child and didn’t know anything”
Jurina: “But you're also still a child, Mayu-chan”
Mayu: “Although my body is small, but I've understood what love is. And this (shows Alpaca-kun), my first love”  :heart:
Jurina: “Alpaca-kun? That was a doll, Mayu-chan”
Mayu: “I know he is just a doll, but I believe one day he will turn into a prince like in my dreams”
Yuki: (listening to their conversation from outside the room – smiling – and then walked into the living room) “They're just like you, Sae-kun”
Sae: “What happened dear? You are smiling.”
Yuki: “No, just surprised by your daughter's behavior”
Sae: “Mayu and Jurina?”
Yuki: “Yes, they are. Mayu-chan accidentally lied to Jurina so we could dating before you leave”
Sae: “Haha.. That was an adult thoughts. So we are gone now?”
Yuki: “With dressed like that?”
Sae: “Why not?! Changing dressups like teenagers for dating with my wife within a day, doesn’t look bad, right?”, he teased.
Yuki: “Alright, Mr. Playboy”, she scoffed.
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9.1 - LIKE FATHER, LIKE DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: mgxx on September 17, 2014, 05:22:27 AM
Aaaa thankyou for update author san ^^

And thanks to mayu~~
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9.1 - LIKE FATHER, LIKE DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: Haruko on September 20, 2014, 11:04:11 PM
yeah i wanna know about saeyuki date...
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9.1 - LIKE FATHER, LIKE DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: sastio13 on September 27, 2014, 05:58:20 PM
Baka family! it's so funny, entertaining!
i'm smiling & laughing while reading your this story :lol:
even i'm not saeyuki shipper, but for this one i love it!
papa baka, mama black, the kids, uncle gori were so..... :lol:
please keep update more author-san! :bow:
thankyou :)
Title: Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.9.1 - LIKE FATHER, LIKE DAUGHTER (NEW)
Post by: crosteks on October 19, 2014, 07:03:31 AM
The BAKA Family is really interesting,,,
Happy Family I wish my Family was like that in the Future..
hehehe!! WAiting For Update soonn..