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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: TakaminaBG on August 11, 2012, 08:33:50 PM
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Hey guys. :) Here is another crappy fic from me. Well I'm not good with long stories.... but.. well here we go! Hope you like it!!
It doesn't matter because I love You
Prologue
I’m sitting on a bench near a playground and watching kids play around. I like being surrounded by kids. They are so small and cute. They know nothing about this world. They don’t know how cruel life can be…..
But no matter how cruel life can be you can still find happiness.
“Mama.” I hear a cute sound calling my name.
I turn around and see a small figure sitting on the bench next to me.
“Ah. Ayumu – chan. What are you doing here? Go play with the kids.” I said softly pinching her cheek.
“No. I want to go home and play with Mama!” said the little angel pouting.
“Okay. Let’s go home.” I said lifting her in my arms.
Our house is near the playground. I feel safer that way. We walk hand in hand with Ayumu. Well I’m walking, she is skipping happily.
While watching her skip I bump into a small figure. I’m bigger than her so it didn’t had much effect on me, but it had on her. She fell on the ground….
“Itai….” She said holding her butt. ‘Cute’ is what I thought. A big person with a small body. She looks the same age as me. Small and slim body.
Short haircut with a ribbon on her head.
“Mama, is this child okay. She looks strange.”
“HEY! I’m NOT a child. I’m an ADULT!!”
“Ayumu! Don’t talk like this.”
“I’m sorry for what my daughter said.” I said bowing my head.
“It’s okay. This happens a lot, because I’m small..” She said pouting just like a child.
“Because you are a child.” Said Ayumu sticking her tongue out.
“Hey! How old are you? HUH!”
“6 years old.” Ayumu said proudly.
“Well I’m 21 years old.” Said the girl sticking her tongue out.
She is acting like a child. I was really surprised that she is actually my age. But that is not what caught my attention. Despite being dressed like a yankee. She is so beautiful. I can’t get my eyes of her.
Then I realize she is looking at me too. Our eyes met. Neither of us wanted to look away and break our gaze.
“Mama. What is wrong. Let’s go home.” I snapped out of my trans when I heard Ayumu calling me.
“Un. Let’s go home.”
I bowed my head down and started walking away when suddenly….
“Ano…”
“Yes” I turn around and face the beautiful angel. I wonder if we will meet each other again….
“Can I ask your name?” she said blushing… Ahhhh, so cute!
“Ah, gomenasai. Maeda Atsuko desu. The little angel next to me is my daughter, Ayumu.”
“Takahashi Minami desu. I’m sorry for bumping into you.” She said smiling awkwardly.
“It’s okay. Bye”
“Bye”
TBC????
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Aw, love it so far :D Please continue!!
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Yes, plz continue!
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Oh yeah please continue! It's so interesting, I want more :luvuluvu:
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Takamina is so cute~
Ayumu seems cute too ^^
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interseting plz continue !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I wanna know more!!!please continue!!! :thumbup :thumbup
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YAAY Ayumu kyuuto :luvluv2:
Continue :hee:
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Hi, guys. Well, here is chapter one. Sorry of it's boring.....
Chapter One
I’m lying in the bed, trying to sleep. But every time I close my eyes her face pops up. I can’t stop thinking about her. She is quite clumsy yet so beautiful.
What is this feeling? Every time I think about her, I feel my body warming up. I get butterflies in my stomach. I want to see her. I want to kiss her. I want to touch her. Wait! Could it be….? I’m falling for her?!?!
I never thought that I could ever experience this feeling. Love. I have never dated anyone.
My name is Maeda Atsuko. I’m 21 years old and I have a daughter. Her name is Ayumu and she is 6 years old. Yeah she is my real daughter. I gave birth to her when I was 15 years old. I know what people think, that I’m a slut. They talk behind my back and because of that I really don’t have any friends except my best friend, Oshima Yuko. Yes that Oshima Yuko. She is the center of AKB48.
~~~~~FlashBack~~~~~
“Stop!!!!” a girl started screaming.
“Don’t move. I’m going to be gentle” said a man in his middle 40’s.7
“No, please…..” the girl started crying. She fought him, but she couldn’t beat him. He is a man.. and she is just 15 years old…
“PLAK” she slapped her face. More tears keep coming from her eyes. She is scared. She know what is going to happen. She wants to scream but no one is going to hear.
“It won’t hurt so much IF YOU STOP MOVING” said the man ripping the girls shirt. He attacked her neck kissing it roughly. She kept screaming, begging him to stop but that only made him more turned on.
He pushed her on the bed. He started squeezing her small breasts with his one hand and with the other hand he unzipped her shorts…… taking them of.
“Please, stop…..” said the girl crying and begging. The man on the other hand was exited and…. Ready.
The girl kept on struggling but the only thing that got her was only bruises.
Finally the girl stopped like life had left her. She stopped moving, struggling, screaming. Only tears were coming out.
~~~~~~~END OF FlashBack~~~~
I keep on remembering that scene. And I keep thinking why did that happened to me? What did I do? That day was a very important day for me. And yet that just had to happen…….
~~~~RING RING~~~~
I was startled as I heard my phone ringing which caused me to fall of the bed……
~~~BAM~~~~
And here I’m on the ground…
“Moshi Moshi.” I said as I got up and slowly walked out of the room to check up on my angel.
“Acchan” said the girl on the other side.
“Ah, Yuko?”
“Uhm. What are you doing now?”
“I was……” I paused for a moment...
“Acchan, why do you keep remembering that?”
“I don’t know, Yuko. I just can’t erase it.” I said tears starting to build up.
“I know. Do you want me to come over?”
“No, it’s okay.”
“Okay.”
‘So why did you called this late?”
“Ah, gomen. Did I wake Ayumu – chan?”
“Let me, see. I’m in front of her room.”
I slowly open the door and see the little angel, sleeping. I walk up to her and kiss her on the forehead as I pull the blanket over her.
“She is still sleeping.” I said quietly as I walked out of the room.
“So…”
“Ah… A new girl was added in AKB48.”
“Eh? Only one?”
“Uhn. It's strange, but she is cute and I saw her dancing. That girl is GOOD.”
“Haha. I see someone is exited. So, why are you telling me this?”
“I want you to meet her.”
“I think you can make a cute couple. Haha”
“Mou… Yuko!!!”
“Gomen, gomen. I want to see you. Me and her decided to go out tomorrow. Are you busy?”
“Well, tomorrow, Ayumu has kinder garden."
“So, you will come!” I hear she is very excited.
“Okay, I guess I’ll come.”
“Yey…. Tomorrow 10:00 o’clock in front of SkyTree.”
“Okay, bye”
“Bye.”
I can’t say I’m excited for tomorrow. I don’t want to see her, I want to see HER.
“Mama.”
I hear the little angel looking for me in the hallway. I go to her and pull her up in my hands.
“Why are you not slepping, Ayumu?”
She yawned and rubbed her eyes slowly. She looked up at me with her beautiful eyes. I don’t regret giving birth to her.
“Who were you talking to, Mama?” she asked.
“Ah, gomen. Did I wake you up?”
“Uhn..” she said half sleeping.
“Let’s put you to sleep.”
I walked in the her room and laid her down.
“Mama, sleep with me.” She said making a puppy expression.
“Okay, but just for tonight, okay. I don’t want to spoil you.” I said as I lied down next to her.
“Uhn.”
I kissed her forehead and watched her face for some minutes. I can’t say that I was happy…. I didn’t want that to happen. And I surely was not picturing me being pregnant at 15. But I don’t regret it, because I have my angel beside me. “I love you”…..
~~~~~~~~The next day~~~~~~~
“Are you ready, Ayumu?”
“Uhn” she said happily.
“Let’s go.”
I walked while she was skipping happily. It reminded me of her again. Will she bump into me like yesterday.. I keep on daydreaming again and I didn’t notice that we were at the kinder garden.
“Mama..” she said worriedly pulling my hand.
“Eh?”
“We are here.”
“Ah…. Gomen. Come here.”
I gave her a hug and kissed her on the fore head.
“I love you, be careful, okay.”
“Uhn.”
I keep watching her get inside. That reminded be about the best and the worst day of my life……
~~~~~~FLASBACK~~~~~
I feel so nervous. My heart is going to explode any minute. I keep walking in circles. My dream is to be an actress. And here I am auditioning for a GROUP AKB48.
What the hell am I doing here? I don’t want to be a singer. I WANT to be an ACTRESS!!! Mom, this is your fault. I know this can help me become an actress, but still…….. AH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
“I’m going to announce the girls who past the audition.”
AH!!!!!!! I feel so nervous right now. What if my name is not there? Atsuko, calm down, calm down! HOW CAN I CALM DOWN. MY WHOLE LIFE IS DEPENDING ON THIS CHANCE! AAAAAHHHHHHH!
“…………and Maeda Atsuko. This is all. Tomorrow at 10 o’clock, you have to be here! Have a nice day!”
WHAT!!!!! I DID IT. I can’t believe it. I’m crying. And that are tears from joy.
The girls started screaming and hugging each other. I on the other hand was numb. I still couldn’t believe it.
“Congratulation” said anonymous girl one. “Congratulation” said anonymous girl two. I smiled back and said the same.
~~~~~~END OF FLASHBACK~~~~~~
I star heading up to meet Yuko and the other girl. In the distance I see Yuko and a small figure. I slowly reach them.
They are talking so they didn’t really see me standing behind them. I examine the girl. Small, thin body. Short hair, ribbon…………
Can it BE?!?!
“Ah, Acchan. You are here.” She said as she hugged me tight.
“Y – Yuko.. I.. I c – can’t b – breathe…”
“Ah… Gomen.” She said as she laughed. The girl chuckled cutely.
“This is Maeda Atsuko.”
“Acchan, this is…….”
I turn look at her and I’m surprised to see her. Is this faith or something. My heart starts beating fast and faster. She looks stunning with that white pink dress and pink ribbon. She looks like….. well a GIRL.
“…..Takahashi Minami.” I said cutting off, Yuko.
“We meet again.” She said smiling brightly. Showing her dimples.
“Yes, we meet again.” I said blushing.
We keep staring each other like there is no tomorrow… I love her eyes ..
TBC???? :on polter:
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This is so sweet... A fateful meeting..again! And where? AKB auditions! And they did it!!! YAY!! :wub: :wub: And Yuko-sama is here too... I love you, TakaminaBG! :deco: :deco:
I did not comment on that scene with ... *can't even think about it* *kills the geezer* :knee: :kickass: :mon zoom: :mon taichi: :mon kungfu: :gmon pissed:
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:k-sad: My poor Acchan ! This old man I want just... argh... kill him !!
But Ayumu-chan is very cute :k-inlove:
And they meet again !!!! Yeah it's definitively the fate !! :k-wink:
Please Taka-chan make more cute atsumina's scene !! Because they are so lovable :luvuluvu:
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Poor acchan... but with takaboy you gonna know the true love :D
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:panic: Waiting for next update!
I'm rooting for AtsuMina the nearer "Tokyo Dome" concert is coming... :ptam-hbk:
Uwwwaaa :ptam-wub:
:kneelbow:
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please update
i hope its atsumina
thank you
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PLEASE UPDATE !!! :D
I LIKE YOUR WORK!!
IT'S INTERESTING!!
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Great start, I can't wait for the next update!
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Bumping! me want an update *sorry too demanding :p*
I just love this!
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YAY!!! It's fate!!!!
That son of a bitch!!!! I'll kill her!!! Argh!!!!!
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Hey guys. I'm going to stop this story for now. It too painful to write AtsuMina fics right now. Tears just keep falling. I wake up every morning and wish that all was just a lie, a joke. But it's not. This is reality. Maeda Atsuko is graduating and it just hurts too much. I promise I'll finish the story, but not now....
I really apologize too all my readers!!
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i know what you feel takaminabg-san!!!
i hope acchan will not graduate!!huhuhu..
when i watch the music station last night i cry!! :cry: :cry:
i will wait to ur update!!! :farofflook:
i hope you comeback soon!!!
ganbare!!! :omamori:
:kneelbow:
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CHAPTER TWO
We just stand there staring at each other, looking straightly in each other’s eyes. I can feel my heart beat speeding up, like a race car. And if that continues it’s going to stop eventually. I have her to blame for that. I really want to get to know this girl. But I don’t think I have that right. I mean I have a child to look after and I don’t want to give her that burden and I don’t really think she would want to have a child after all she is only 21 years old.
“Acchan?” I heard Yuko calling my name and realized that I have to look away and break our staring session. And when I’m about to do that she smiles!God, I feel like I’m in heaven. That cute dimples showing when she smiles.
“ACCHAN!” Screams Yuko totally freaking me out.
“What?” I ask sounding a bit irritated.
I was having a great time staring deep into the eyes of my beloved one. And I’m a total pervert because I totally checked out her whole body. Such a nice figure and such a beautiful face! How can you not fall in love with her. Although I like her yankee style too. It suited her perfectly. And she looked really manly and protective. I really want to get to know her.
“Do you know each other?” ask Yuko curiously.
“Eh?” It’s like I can’t even understand what Yuko is saying.
“Do you know her? You just said her name.”
“Ah.. Yeah kind of.” I say as I look at her and smile awkwardly.
Then she smiles back at me. And me, well I’m back in wonderland. I want to kick Yuko out of the picture. Just beat her up and leave her there. Sounds harsh but I really want to be alone with her. She is just like an angel.
An angel that came all the way from heaven to make me fall in love with her! And I can say this for sure – It is working!
“What do you mean kind of? Do you know her or not?”
“Well yesterday I and Ayumu were in the park. And on the way back we… well I bumped into her.” I said as I chuckled, same as her.
“Okay, so this is not going to be as awkward as I imagined it would be knowing you.” Laughed Yuko.
“EHh? What do you mean by “knowing you”? I sad laughing.
“Well you don’t really get along with people.”
“Yuko! You are mean!” I said a little embarrassed while hitting her arm.
“Ouch! Okay, I’m sorry.”
“Ano, Maeda – san?” I turn around and meet her gaze again. So captivating!
“Acchan.” I say as I smile.
“Eh?”
“Call me, Acchan.”
She just blushed and nodded slightly.
“A – Acchan. Then you call me, Takamina. That’s how my friends call me.”
Oh God she stuttered. So cute!! She called me her friend. I can die now!
“So now we are friends, huh.” I asked smiling like I just fulfilled my biggest dream.
“I would be happy if we could be friends.”
“I would be happy, too, Takamina.” I said her name and she blushed sgain!
“So what is it?”
“How is Ayumu – chan?”
She remembers my daughter’s name. This is really kind of her, asking about my daughter. I feel like If I’m with her, I would be the happiest person on this earth.
“She is okay, actually she is in the kindergarten, right now. Thank you for asking!”
“I’m happy.”
And here we go again. Just standing there and staring into each other’s eyes.
“Okay that’s it! Can you stop flirting with each other now?” ask Yuko almost shouting.
Both of us widened our eyes, blushed and looked away. I can’t see her, but me, I’m blushing furiously! Then I imagine her as my girlfriend/boyfriend and my face becomes even redder. I feel like my whole body is burning and I’m about to pass out.
“Mou.. Yuko!!” I said as I hit her again BUT this time HARDER!
“Yuko – san!” she said as she looked down.
“Itai!! Acchan!! What did I do?” said Yuko rubbing her arm.
“You are being a pervert again!”
“Eh? Be careful, will ya? If Haruna hears you she is going to kill me!” she said nervously while me and Takamina just giggled.
“Oh, and Takamina!! I told you to call me just Yuko!” demanded Yuko. They are so much alike.
“Ah, I’m sorry.. Yuko.”
“That’s better. Let’s not waste any more time and get going!” said Yuko wrapping one of her arm around my neck and the other around Takamina’s.
“Where are we going?” I asked curiously.
“At my house!” said Yuko proudly.
“What about Haruna?”
“She has some photo shooting. She said she will be home late tonight.”
~~~30 Minutes later At Yuko’s House~~~
“Tadaima!” shouted Yuko to the empty house.
“Sorry for the intruding.” I said and walked in slowly.
“Sorry for the intruding.” Said Takamina walking right behind me.
After eating and chatting for hours we are really friends. She is a nice person just like I thought she would be. She is standing in front of me and Yuko is standing next to my left.
As I was drinking my orange juice and then the glass I was holding slipped and it dropped on the ground. As I freaked out and Yuko panicked, Takamina stayed calm.
“AH!!! I’m so sorry Yuko.”
“It’s okay, Acchan!”
“I’ll take the glass pieces and threw them away!” said Takamina as she got up from her chair.
“NO!!”
I suddenly screamed which startled Takamina and she slipped. I tried to catch her but my body couldn’t hold her weight. And we ended up falling, with me on top of her.
Both of us widened our eyes. I felt something soft and warm on my lips……
WE ARE KISSING!!!
TBC??
АAGH!!!! I'm tired and sleepy, but I can't sleep cuz it's too early. Chapter 2 DOUZO!! Hope you like it!
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my god!!
I really hate the "TBC" part!hoho
Update soon!
Thank you for the update!
waiting to nxt chapter! :thumbsup
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i hope u will keep updating your fic ...'
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Wouhou!!! Kiss!!!!!
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I hope Yuko doesn't interrupt my AtsuMina sweet moment :heart:
yeah she needs.. jajaj its gonna be funny :D
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THANKS FOR UPDATING!!! :D
PLEASE UPDATE MORE OFTEN..
I LIKE YOUR STORY..
PLEASE CONTINUE,..
THANK YOU
I AM ATSUMINA FAN!!! :D
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Sweet accident :w00t: :w00t:
Thanx for the update ^^
Will be waiting the next chapter :D
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Interesting development on atsumina...
Looking forward to the next one :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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New fic discovered!!
Great start :)
Please update soon!!!
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Accidentally kiss?? Wow! :mon lol:
They stared at each other? *le me imaging* :mon mischief:
Please update soon! :mon pray2:
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woah...woah.... XD first chapter I'm like holy sh** (sorry for my language :depressed: ) but this is just freakin' awesome!! especially the ending of the chapters! man...u sure know how to keep us hanging...lol (in a good way) :tantrum: lol :farofflook:
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*finally got the time to read*
*squealed all the time while reading*
*sparkle eyes*
they k...k..issed?
*squeals again*
sorry, I am a 'lazy' person so I do these script texts *irony*
anyway, god, update~ I wanna see their reaction~~
*happy* *giggles*
I'll be waiting~
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atsumina is so cute :heart: :heart:
that damn man :angry:
please update soon :bow:
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"Then she smiles back at me. And me, well I’m back in wonderland. I want to kick Yuko out of the picture. Just beat her up and leave her there. Sounds harsh but I really want to be alone with her. She is just like an angel."
So bad!!! lol XD XD XD
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wah.. Acchan you're so violent with Yuko just because you want to be alone with your angel :nervous :nervous
but I like it
waiting for next update
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when i know that acchan had a child i was thought that she's minami child too, but when i know acchan get raped, dammit! I want kill those old man!
I like the incident kissu, looking forward for atsumina reaction :3
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I love this fic :twothumbs :drool:
please update soon :cry: :bow:
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HURRY UP AND UPDATE ONEGAI SHIMASU :kneelbow:
it is sooo good and sooo cute :luvluv1:
the kiss was just :nya:
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Please, it continues the history, do I want him/it to know what it will happen later?