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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 18 Updated
« Reply #100 on: December 01, 2009, 09:31:36 PM »
Go Reina Go

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 18 Updated
« Reply #101 on: December 01, 2009, 11:10:22 PM »
It's no surprise she's reluctant to go, after all, to be burned so suddenly and thoroughly like that, she'd be too afraid to do it again. I'm glad she changed her mind in the end, though. Next stop, Korea! :mon beam:

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 18 Updated
« Reply #102 on: December 02, 2009, 12:48:54 AM »
JUNJUN FTW ~~~~~ :heart:

Yeep, Definitly Jun only wants Reina's happiness, I can understand her feelings.
So  Reina don't kill in vain Jun's sacrifice.
GO TO KOREA!!!  :scolding: :scolding: :scolding:

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 18 Updated
« Reply #103 on: December 02, 2009, 09:34:14 AM »
I'm new reader ^^!
I'm not a very crazy fan of TanaKame but I always support this couple. They're awesome together. I like this fic very much  :D
You're such a good writer, keep up your good work  :P

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 18 Updated
« Reply #104 on: December 02, 2009, 04:40:44 PM »
Jun is yay!   :banana:  :rockon:  :banana:

Koreans and Japanese Turtle, stay put and wait for the arrival of the Kitten   :cow:

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 18 Updated
« Reply #105 on: December 02, 2009, 05:26:36 PM »
oHhhhH~ looks like i missed out alot.. i even missed the chance to scream

GO TO KOREA!


hmmmm...korean speaking Eri would be interesting but..... XD


Go get the lucky turtle back already! =]


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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 18 Updated
« Reply #106 on: December 02, 2009, 11:19:54 PM »
 :on woohoo: :on woohoo: :on woohoo:
IKE IKE GO GO!! REINA GO GO!!
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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 18 Updated
« Reply #107 on: December 04, 2009, 08:25:27 PM »
Ok, thanks to everyone for the comments! I have to say that I don't know how many chapters I'll do for this fic, but I'll finish soon...

CHAPTER 19

Think, Reina, think! Jun is right… I should do something!… But what can I do?

I don’t really want to call her… but if I don’t do it, I’m going to regret it… And about the “go to Korea” thing… Jun has to admit that it’s a stupid idea… But I might reconsider it…

God! In what the hell am I thinking?! I can’t go to Korea! Nor call her! Jun is turning me into a total dreamer…

Think Reina! Damn!

And as I punch the wall, someone enters in the kitchen… perfect timing…

“Erm, Reina, dear, you shouldn’t liberate yourself of your rage by hitting the walls…” She says worried, and wide eyed…

“Oh, yes. Sorry mum…” I mutter.

“Umm… Reina…”

“Yes?” Don’t tell me… she wants to know what’s wrong with me.

“Why have you been so weird lately? I said that you can tell me anything…” True… and I’m glad to know it… but still…

“Well, you know, too much stress at work…”

“Don’t lie to me, Reina.” She says sternly. I’d like to say the truth, but I don’t really think I’ll be able to do it.

“I’m fine.” I say avoiding her gaze, and she lets out a sigh.

“Well, ok. I hope soon you’ll be better…”

“…” I hope that too…

“By the way, I’m going to buy some things with your brother… We’ll be outside about two hours…”

“Ok.” I say simply.

“And Reina...” She whispers while heading towards the door. “… Don’t punch the walls anymore, ok?”

“Ok, mum.” I say and wink at her, pretending that I’m the same as always.

But Jun’s right. I’ve changed…

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I’m laid on the bed… Looking up… And I’m bored to death.

I just can’t stop about what JunJun said…

You should fight for her… because she’d do the same for you…

But I can’t fight in this situation. I just can’t.

I’d like to go to Korea… but that would be stupid… And I’d like to call her… and that would be stupid too…

Ahhh! My brain is a total mess… I can’t think clearly…

I change my position and see my mobile, on the little table which is next to me…

Should I do it? Should I, at least, call her?

Where’s that Reina that loves herself so much, and that could do anything for get what she wants?!

It’s true… Where’s that part of myself?! Just a few weeks ago, before Eri left, I could do anything… and now… I can’t.

And what I want now is to talk with her…

Reina! Wake up dammit! Call her already! Jun said it that I should let go my prideful side, and she’s right.

I don’t know where I found the strength enough to do this… But, before I even realize what I’m doing, I’m calling her…

But there’s no response.

I call her again, and there isn’t response again.

And the next time… no response.

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After been calling her for at least half an hour, I give up.

This is weird… Eri always answers her phone… and more when the one who is calling is me…

Maybe she’s busy… or maybe she doesn’t want to talk with me after what happened…

Probably it’s about the second guess… Won’t she talk to me never again?

Bah, I’m making conclusions without knowing what really happened…

But maybe she won’t answer to me… And…

…I have to know why she has left…

That’s it! I give up…

It’s decided…

I’m going to Korea…

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 19 is up
« Reply #108 on: December 04, 2009, 08:29:39 PM »
FINALLLY!!!! SHE'S GOING TO KOREA!!!!!!!!!! :cow: :cow: :cow:
to meet tohoshinki.. :grin:


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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 19 is up
« Reply #109 on: December 04, 2009, 08:30:27 PM »
GO REINA GO :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 19 is up
« Reply #110 on: December 04, 2009, 09:32:11 PM »
 :mon kungfu: :mon firecrack: Go get Eri back!

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 19 is up
« Reply #111 on: December 05, 2009, 05:47:52 AM »
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I’d like to go to Korea… but that would be stupid… And I’d like to call her… and that would be stupid too…

Reina, that ain't stupid


Hurry, buy a ticket now before you change your mind  :grin:

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« Reply #112 on: December 05, 2009, 02:08:29 PM »
Wouldn't it be funny if Reina fly to Korea and goes crazy for a certain member of a certain boyband instead (stop being a moron Badsaints! XD).

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« Reply #113 on: December 05, 2009, 11:10:48 PM »
to meet tohoshinki.. :grin:

Wouldn't it be funny if Reina fly to Korea and goes crazy for a certain member of a certain boyband instead (stop being a moron Badsaints! XD).
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Woah, lol. Oh please, we all know Reina wouldn't do that! XD

CHAPTER 20

I’m going to Korea…

I can’t live with this. I know it’s a stupid resolution, but I have to do it… I’m going to take Eri back even if it’s the last thing that I’ll do in my life!

I jump out of the bed abruptly, and suddenly my mobile rings…

“Reina! Have you thought about it?!” She yells.

“Good morning to you too.” I say annoyed because of her greeting. “And yes, I have been reconsidering this…”

“Reconsidering? And?!”

“And…”

“And? And?!” She shouts impatiently.

“And I decided that I’m going to Korea…” I admit reluctantly… After all, I hate to accept it when I’m wrong about something…

“Yes! That’s my Reina!” She yells one more time.

“Jun! Don’t yell, damn!” I cry.

“Ok, ok, sorry… It’s just I’m so glad that you have finally woken up…” She says happily. “Well, what are you waiting for?”

“Eh?”

“I mean, why aren’t you in a flight to Korea?” So fast Jun…

“Well, first, I have to know where Eri is, I have to make a plan and… erm, well...” I say thinking of what I’m going to do with…

“Erm, well? What do you mean?” She asks confused.

“Erm… What I’m going to say to my mother?” I simply reply.

“…” She keeps in silence… I guess that she’s thinking.

“Jun?”

“Erm… That’s a good point.” She says lost in thought.

“Damn it is.” I agree.

“What if I help you with her?” Well, but how…?

“In what are you thinking, genius?” I ask, and hear someone talking to her. I think it's Lin...

“I’ll think about it later, now I’ve got to go. You know, duty calls…” She says laughing.

“Yes, everyone seems to need you.” I say sarcastically.

“Yeah, well I’ll call you later. Think about something too, ok?”

“Ok, I’ll think!” I say as my cheerful mode comes back.

“Ok, see you!”

Erm, let’ see… In what should I think about?

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My mother hasn’t come back yet. So I’m still thinking about what I’m going to say to her… I’m starting to think that maybe the best for all it’s to say the truth… I mean, to say that I want to go there to take Eri back.

But maybe it isn’t a good idea… I wonder what Jun’d think about to say that... Probably she’ll thi…

Someone knocks the door…

“Tanakacchi?” What is she doing here?

I rush to open the door, and greet her.

“Hi, Gaki.”

“Hi.” She says smiling as she enters in the apartment.

“What brings you here?” I’m confused, I don’t remember if I’ve made plans with her for today…

“Ah, nothing. I was bored. You wanna go out? Cinema or something?” Well, it would be good to get distracted for a while… And I’ll try to tell her what I’m going to do with Eri… I know that she won’t let me go to Korea, but I don’t care.

“Ok, I’ll dress up. Wait a minute.” I say smiling as well, and leading towards my room.

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When I’m ready, I go to the corridor and see Gaki talking on her mobile…

“Who is it?” I ask.

“Oh, I’m going outside to talk a little moment, I’ve got a call. Wait here, I’ll come back in a second.” She says distracted, looking at the floor.

“Ok.” I say confused, and she leads towards the door… I wonder how I’m going to tell her that I want to go to Korea…

When she closes the door behind her, my mobile starts to ring…

“What’s up, Jun?”


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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 20 Updated
« Reply #114 on: December 05, 2009, 11:20:52 PM »
Gaki is hiding something  :(
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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 20 Updated
« Reply #115 on: December 06, 2009, 01:30:19 AM »
Maybe it was Eri, making sure Reina's good through Risa.

Eri: Please check up on her Gaki-han, distract her, make her have some fun while I'm here all alone and dying.   :D
*Gaki-han goes to Reina's apartment*
Eri: Is she still alive?   XD


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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 20 Updated
« Reply #116 on: December 06, 2009, 05:17:54 AM »
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I don't know why Reina thinks it's so funny if she went to Korea after Eri. I mean, it should have been the first thing she did instead of jumping into bed with a certain panda

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Hmmm, don't tell me something happened to Eri that's why she didn't pick up Reina's calls. To test that out, Reina should get Risa to call Eri then snatch the phone over :D

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@Badsaints: Oh Badsaints, you really ruined the moment with that Reina joke XD Plus. I can't keep the goofy grin off my face now :lol:

@kRisZ: NOT YOU TOO?!?!? This is supposed to be serious and sad guys, so stop making me laugh :D

I bet that phone call is from Eri!!! *jumps up and down* Is she gonna tell Risa to help her fulfill her dying wish? Or to get her to send to Korea boxes of Umeboshi and the other snack she has been into lately :P AHHHHHHHH, look what you gals did to me?  :grin:


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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 20 Updated
« Reply #117 on: December 06, 2009, 05:45:26 AM »
Eri: Please check up on her Gaki-han, distract her, make her have some fun while I'm here all alone and dying.   :D
*Gaki-han goes to Reina's apartment*
Eri: Is she still alive?   XD
Gaki: I think so. Hold on a sec *peeks inside again to confirm* Yup she's still alive.
Eri: Good. Take her out for a walk, won't you?
Gaki: Okay (thinking: hmm...how do you take a kitty out for a walk?)
Eri: Oh don't forget to fedex me the umeboshi. I'm dying here without my snacks.
Gaki: ...



Hmm I really have to stop being a moron. Sorry Treykun!

As requested by our dear Hammy, I shall observe the solemnity and give a proper comment :lol: Okay now Reina has to overcome a major obstacle, ie her momma, and try to find out what the brat, er Gaki, is hiding from her :D Update soon Author-san!
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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 20 Updated
« Reply #118 on: December 06, 2009, 07:37:10 AM »
Lol @ baddie and kRisZ.

I wonder who Gaki was talking to?

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 20 Updated
« Reply #119 on: December 06, 2009, 01:11:50 PM »
*reads previous comments*   :on lol:


Sumimasen Author-san  :kneelbow:

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