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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.6
« Reply #80 on: November 07, 2012, 07:22:55 AM »
@maikea:
i also very jealous of you  :P2 because aichan now remember you  :lol:

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.6
« Reply #81 on: November 07, 2012, 07:26:22 AM »
oh my gosh !!  i .. i .. <3 DIES <3 !!! im so lucky !!!

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.6
« Reply #82 on: November 07, 2012, 07:46:57 AM »
That was unnexpected.. well thank yellow who told me to!  :thumbsup

Maybe yellow can appear in otger chapter to help Ai and Risa!! ;)

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.6
« Reply #83 on: November 07, 2012, 07:50:06 AM »
yeah you can add her too !!  and if ever ,kuro-kun too ! hahaha.

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.6
« Reply #84 on: November 07, 2012, 08:05:31 AM »
haha... i am just joking... please don't... if you do... i will pay back to you with a drabble  :peace:
if as a love counsel, i can consider... you know, Dr Yellow ahem :lol:
 
yup, add kuro in...  :jphip: :jphip: :jphip:
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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.6
« Reply #85 on: November 07, 2012, 08:13:01 AM »
What?! i would do it anyway!  :rofl:

But still i don't know if Kuro wants it.. hope he see this amd tell me it deoesn't bother him!

now i'm going to sleep is late and have college!!! :banghead:

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.6
« Reply #86 on: November 07, 2012, 08:15:23 AM »
you are bad... i see how you do it... if it is nice... the continuation of the drabble will feature you  :grin:
good nite... have a good rest and be ready for school tml  :thumbsup

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.6
« Reply #87 on: November 07, 2012, 08:21:02 AM »
hoho at least i met my idols ! thanks to cmze .. i owe her an update !

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.6
« Reply #88 on: November 07, 2012, 08:22:03 AM »
you also own me one too... didnt you receive my pm  :(

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.6
« Reply #89 on: November 07, 2012, 08:28:47 AM »
yes now i understand yellow .. really thank you ! whic fanfic of mine you want an update.

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.6
« Reply #90 on: November 07, 2012, 08:35:26 AM »
i think the devil kiss... i want to see the honeymoon scene but at the same time, love me, my darling enemy... the part on gaki remembering what she have done to ai just before she fell asleep... i cant choose... i am just indecisive :(
so can both anot?

please pamper me, please  :nya:

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.6
« Reply #91 on: November 07, 2012, 08:43:25 AM »
okay i'll do that for you ! and for my readers ! yay!

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.6
« Reply #92 on: November 07, 2012, 08:45:30 AM »
 :on woohoo:
(i will pamper you again when i have the chance to too  :cow:)

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.7
« Reply #93 on: November 09, 2012, 02:33:13 AM »
                                    One sided love?
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Okay... hope u like it! xD 

~At night.. in a bar close to Risa's home~ 

Nigakii Risa ordered more beer "Aichan.." she whispers before drinking 

"Hey..hmm we're already about to close" A girl says smiling 

Risa burps and looks at the girl talking to her "you..your hair long like that remind of someone" she says 

The girl smiled "Aichan.." she whispered

"Ehhh how you knew?" Risa asked 

"i'm a Morning Musume fan and i saw Aichan's hair and copied her!" The girl replies with a smile 

"Ohh *hip* thank you!" Risa replies as she takes her hand which cause Yellow to blush

"Yellow did you tell her?" A guy asked as he is clening the bar 

"Yeah gives us ten minutes!" Yellow shouted 

"ok!" He replied 

"I think it's time for me to go.." Risa says as she walks and bumps with a chair 

"Oucchhh.." She shouted in pain 

Yellow fast helped her to get up and then sitted her on the chair

"Don't you have someone to come and pick you up?" The sober girl asked as she sits in front of Risa

"Aichan hates me!!!" Risa says crying and hugs Yellow

The sober girl blinked a few times then patted the ex morning musume's back "i don't think she hates you,she loves you and i'm a TakaGaki shipper!" 

Risa breaks the hug "Really?" she asked 

Yellow smiled "of course you guys were totally unique and *sighs* beatiful!" she says with her hands on her chest 

Risa cried again "I want her back! *hip* what should i do?" she asked crying and hugs Yellow again 

Yellow sighed "Then call her and tell her so!" she answers frowning 

Risa breaks the hug again and grabs her phone from her pocket "Call her!" she says as gives her phone to Yellow 

"what? why me?" Yellow asked 

"i can't speak *hip* properly!" Risa replied 

Yellow sighed and soon searched for Aichan phone 

"It ringning!" the sober girl say nervous 

"Hi.." A voice says in the other line not so happy

Yellow got nervous and hanged up 

"what was *hip* that?" Risa asked

I GOT NERVOUS!!! Yelllow shouted 

Risa looked at her with a "WTF?" face

" it took me half an hour to focusand tell you that we were closing.. " Yellow replied pouted 

Risa sighed "sorry sorry.. " 

Yellow gave Risa a smile "it's okay!" 

" try again please!!" Risa says 

Yellow dialed again "it's ringing.." she murmured 

Ai looked at her phone then answered "okay..*Yellow hanged up again!" 

Ai pouts "Risaaaaa!" she shouts and calls her phone 

"Why did you do  that?" Risa asked 

"I got nervous again!" Yellow replied 

Risa's phone started ringing 

Yellow looked at the screen "it's her!" she says and throws the phone to Risa,who catched and throwed to Yellow again 

"Answer!!" Risa says 

Yellow gulped and answered 

"Hi!" She says nervous 

"Risa what's wrong?" Ai asked 

"i'm.. not.. Risa.. i'm a big fan!"  Yellow shouts the last part 

"Maikea?" Aichan says 

"i don't know who's Maikea!" Yellow says 

"Is she having an affair with another girl?" Risa shouts crying 

"no! no.. wait a minute who are you?i'm not having an affair with Maikea!" Aichan replies fast 

"She says she's not having an affair with Maike!" Yellow says to Risa who was crying 

"Tell her that i don't wanna talk to her again!" Risa replies

Niigaki says that she doesn't want to talk to you again..*ehh wait Aichan need to pick you up!" Yellow shouts 

"What where?" Aichan asked 

"I don't want her to come!" Risa says pouting 

"okay i'm going over there!" Ai says and hangs up 

<Yellow gave Risa's phone back>
 
"What did she said?" Risa asks 

Yellow got up " i'll go get you coffee!"

After a few minutes Yellow brought coffee to Risa 

"Thank you!" Risa says while puts it on the table 

Yellow sighed "He's doing all the work and i don't think he's doing it free!" she thought as she looks at her partner

Risa bumoed her hand with cup of coffee causing it to fall on Yelllow's pants 

"Ouuuch!" Yellow says 

"Omg!i'm so sorry!" Risa says as she takes the napking and tries to clean Yellow 

"what's going on here? Keep your hands off my Gakisan!" Aichan shouts 

Yellow rised her hands up "I'M A TAKAGAKI SHIPPER I SWEAR!!" she replies shouting and nervous 

"Aichan!" Risa says as she gets up and runs to her ex leader 

"Are you okay?" Aichan asked examinating the girl 

Risa hugs Aichan "you came for me!" she whispers 

Aichan breaks the hug and cups Risa's cheeks "there's nothing i wouldn't do for you!" she says as she wipes Risa's tears 

"I knew you were real.." Yellow says in tears as she watches the scene 

Aichan looked at Yellow 

"Don't worry she took care of me.." Risa says as she walks to Yellow and looks at her 

"you guys are.." Yellow was interrupted when Risa gave her a kiss on her cheek then run back to Aichan 

Yellow was all red 

"should i be jeoulous about that?" Aichan asked 

Risa smirked then the two starting walking away but Ai turned her head "Thank you for calling!" she says with a smile 

"I must be dreaming.." Yellow thought as they walked away 
 
TO BE CONTINUED!! 

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.7
« Reply #94 on: November 09, 2012, 02:38:49 AM »
my.. my.. hahaha! so funny !! yellow and risa are so funny !! throwing that phone ! hahaha! me want more !!

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.7
« Reply #95 on: November 09, 2012, 02:50:38 AM »
cmze... have you make me too dramatic and  nervous as a person... i'm an introvert more than an extrovert  XD so most of the time, my face is at poker mode. but i really like how you have describe me as it makes feel quite different from what i really was.

and thanks for the cool occupation and cool interactions with the bean... i got a peak from the bean...even hug  :inlove:
oh my god, i'm totally in heaven now... oh no... i think i can't update tonight anymore... because my mood now is way too hyper  XD XD XD all thanks to you, cmze  XD XD XD

i'm think i'm totally in my ecstasy now... i am so hyper... gonna kissed and hugged by the bean   :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: and Aichan, please don't hate or get jealous of me XD XD XD or else, I will be guilt-stricken  XD

but what's with the hairstyle thing... i don't copy style :angry: ... i am more my style type of person than any :thumbdown: but anyway, it is really cool... i like how you have depicted me in this chapter  :D

i love you, cmze...  :love:
« Last Edit: November 09, 2012, 03:34:19 AM by yellow »

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.7
« Reply #96 on: November 09, 2012, 02:52:37 AM »
me jealous too .. *pouts* me want a kiss from Aichan!

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.7
« Reply #97 on: November 09, 2012, 03:41:47 AM »
me jealous too .. *pouts* me want a kiss from Aichan!

but aichan remember you... is that more than enough? and you did meet kameshige in persons... i only meet takagaki, i want to meet eririn too you know (but please, save that up as I really don't wish to make another appearance here... i think other readers will feel quite outcasted if we would to keep doing this even that the fact if they want be in the story, they can state their request, right?)

yup, all the close intact interactions with the bean has made up my sense of loss for not meeting the turtle in person XD so i am quite contented now.

Thank you, cmze.

i love you  :love:
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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.7
« Reply #98 on: November 09, 2012, 04:21:29 AM »
i'm glad u like it.. :grin:

Yeah it's just.. i don't it came that way!  :shakeit:

sorry abou the hair style  :)

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.7
« Reply #99 on: November 09, 2012, 04:25:59 AM »
nvm... it's just a fic  :grin:
after reading what you have written about me, it is so well depicted until i also don't know i could write about you in MEH anymore.  :nervous you have made me got stucked in my own plot for you in that story  :huhuh

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