“That’s right! Jelly beans!” The excited voice chirped right next to Yuki’s left ear, startling her till she jumped up from her chair only to bang her knees against the bottom of the table. “Ow, ow, ow, ow, ow!” she cried out and hopped around the room as if there were ants in her skirt. With the grace of an elephant, she backed into another chair and crashed nosily to the floor. Grunting as her bottom throbbed with pain, she attempted to untangle her long limbs from the legs of the foldable chair. Loud snickers reached her ears and she stopped to stare at the cause of her pain.I'm sorry Yuki, but imagining you like this makes me :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:. However, please bear the pain, oh poor Yuki.
However, I still addicted to the second -> the Dr. Watanabe X Nurse Yuki fic.Agree. I'm also kinda hoping for a sequel to this one. Dr. Watanabe sugoku kakkoii!! 8)
Ahhhh seigus where are you? :dunno:
Where did you go! :OMG:
Please update soon! :farofflook:
I miss you! :pleeease:
Ahhhh seigus where are you? :dunno:
Where did you go! :OMG:
Please update soon! :farofflook:
I miss you! :pleeease:
I'm still in Hong Kong! But don't worry, I will be flying home tomorrow and the second part of Dr. Watanabe and Nurse Kashiwagi is almost done! Just need to type it out :D
And I've been stalking your Second Chance everyday! Loving all the developments. Great job! :thumbsup :inlove:
But then I think about it more, and I realize I often forgot Dr. Watanabe was still young that his tendencies of losing his cool are quite easy to light up with the jealousy and selfishness.I'm glad that you see the reason behind Dr. Watanabe's actions in this update. My image of him is a cool professional at work but an awkward little dork when it comes to affairs of the heart. The women who are capable of breaking that cool facade are the in-your-face Yuko and his girlfriend Yuki (I get tingles when I say "his girlfriend" :wub:). Then there's the godly Maritroll who triumphs over pretty much everyone :lol:
So childish but so cute that I think it is enough for me to say "Dr. Watanabe sugoku kawaii~!" :wub:
I Hope you can make atsumina please..Hi there! I'm sorry but I'm not an avid fan of AtsuMina. It's not that I dislike them. It's just that I am too overwhelmed with love for MaYuki :nervous I don't understand AtsuMina's personalities and behaviours to the point that I'll be able to write a decent story on them. They will probably make an appearance in my future works but they won't be the pairing in focus. Hope you understand!
I AGREE to this one!!!
But I want a Part 3 because I want to know what the other think about this relation
And just a question Why minna cold Mariko ,Maritroll? sorry to ask here XD :(
This is the first time I post a "to be continued" update :nervous I shall work hard to complete Part 3.2 soon!
The voice which he loved so much was screaming something at him and he badly wanted to tell her that everything was alright, that he would see her when he woke up, just like every morning.
Don’t cry, Yuki. I’m just a little tired… I will be back… after this… nap…
but w-wait what?! Mayu is no longer in team B and Yuki is not the captain?!!!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?
Cna you give ma a link please? I wanna see/read this myself!!! my world of Mayuki almost turned to ruins......nonojonono!!! Mayu MUST be with Yukirin!!!
I will lose it! if in the next month Mayu and Yuki dont post something new about them then I wont ship Mayuki anymore. the pain is too much and I am a very sensible person, I cry very fast. I will leave all my storyes and or move to another OTP or leave JPHIP......Im sorry but Mayuki got me here and if they leave each other then I leave too......I understand how you feel. I was close to tears when I first read the news too.
“Hop on.”
Mayu’s previously confused face lit up and she happily jumped onto Yuki’s back. The taller girl carefully stood up and piggybacked her favourite cyborg down the corridors.
“Where are we going?” Mayu asked, her blissful face right next to Yuki’s ear.
“I don’t know.”
“Eh?”
“I just want to spoil you.”
Megumi: Yup, no one can separate them except maybe a handsome otokoyaku from Takarazuka :P
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:lol: Oh right Mayu is weak for those kind of stuff AND "France" from Hetalia XD
Upon stepping into the house, he saw Yuki standing a few feet away with her hands before her lap, making it a sight to behold for she resembled a devoted traditional Japanese wife.I'm so in love with this scene. :wub: I was imagining Yuki in a kimono doing this scene while reading this part (thanks to the last three words there). :lol:
also if you wanna make juri a girl also can since really rare see someone make juri is girl pariring with renActually my 'selfishness' prefers this idea more. Juri-onna in a relationship is indeed rare and her recent 'blossoming appeal' in magz shoots makes me wondering of a more realistically-approached explicit adult-to-adult relationship between her and a male (Ren-kun in this case). :twisted: Once again, it's my 'selfishness' talking. :lol:
Im suspecting something when mayu hand touch jun hand...is that maybe the pulse? The pulse of woman? LOL if like that then jun. Playing danso..(Maybe )
Thank you seigus-san :bow: .. you're the best! :thumbsup
To be continued…
I love your story!!!! They r sooooooooo cute!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Can I get the authorization to translate it into Chinese and share to Chinese forum?
It's okay! I will keep on supporting you! Still thanks you give us such a good story like that ~~~ :thumbup
Hi everyone! It's been a while. I hope everybody is doing fine. I've been busy falling sick (what else is new? :sweatdrop:) and more importantly, as some of you may already know from following the recent posts in The General AKB48 Fanfic Discussion Thread (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29068.msg1140061#msg1140061), I'm currently working with Hitobo and nori on a proposal to the forum mods for an AKB48 Fanfic Community Advice Thread to help writers who want to improve their writing. In our proposal, readers and writers alike will get to play their part in offering advice. We've already come up with the first draft and are in the process of making some adjustments. More details will be posted in the Discussion Thread once we have finalised the draft so please keep a lookout for it if you are interested! :deco:Not commenting doesn't always mean not following the story, seigus-san. :D
aruka: aruka-san! I had thought that you had stopped following this story long ago too! It's really great to see you back again! :deco: I hope you will like the future updates :D
Hi everyone! It's been a while. I hope everybody is doing fine. I've been busy falling sick (what else is new? :sweatdrop:) and more importantly, as some of you may already know from following the recent posts in The General AKB48 Fanfic Discussion Thread (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29068.msg1140061#msg1140061), I'm currently working with Hitobo and nori on a proposal to the forum mods for an AKB48 Fanfic Community Advice Thread to help writers who want to improve their writing. In our proposal, readers and writers alike will get to play their part in offering advice. We've already come up with the first draft and are in the process of making some adjustments. More details will be posted in the Discussion Thread once we have finalised the draft so please keep a lookout for it if you are interested! :deco:Not commenting doesn't always mean not following the story, seigus-san. :D
aruka: aruka-san! I had thought that you had stopped following this story long ago too! It's really great to see you back again! :deco: I hope you will like the future updates :D
Maybe my comment wouldn't even be necessary, as people before me have sucked empty all my intended words and left me nothing to say. :lol: #kidding
Currently I'm enjoying myself as a mostly silent reader in the Fanfic thread, and yet just reading only could still render my brain tired sometimes, especially during that 'heated war of words' in the discussion thread a while ago. :lol: However, let me say thanks to you, Hitobo, and nori for the proposal work. I didn't comment or anything for that idea (my bad), but it's a yes from the silent me.
Regarding the story, I'll be frank... my excitement for this series did lower down at the beginning of their vacation. That time I wasn't quite moving on from the 'intensity' of the previous city-rescue chapter. In later chapters, including this latest, the excitement rose though, but still far from the exact high level I've been on.
Perhaps upcoming chapters would help rise it more, that's why I would wait. But don't worry... just keep writing the usual way, seigus-san. :D
And Jun is a she! :w00t: Lovely! :love: Thank you for meeting my expectation of Jurina's gender. :D
aruka: To be honest, I was painfully aware of the fact that some readers were losing interest in the story ever since the vacation arc started. It was moving in a very different direction and away from the intense medical drama but there was only so much I could do with the medical side of things as this series is not about handling different emergency cases in every update. I have plans to explore the other characters like Ren, Yuko and Mario and to mainly give neglected Ren a closure; hence the vacation arc. However, my plans require lots of setup before we see the payoff. It was discouraging when some readers seemed to have stopped following the story but I was determined to see through what I had set out to accomplish even if I am the only reader left at the end. And it appears that my perseverance has paid off (or at least it seems that way to me :nervous) and people are getting interested in the series again. Anyway, I really thank you for your honest feedback and for not giving up on this series. It's always nice to hear what readers really think about my stories/writing. I hope I don't disappoint you with my future updates :)Ah, yes. You remind me again of this series' nature when I forgot.
Doc watanabe is super cheesy and sweet. The proposal was perfect!!!!!! :otomerika: :yossi: :cow: :deco: :deco:me too..looking forward *cough* honeymoon *cough*..
Looking forward for thehoneymoonwedding. XD Mario and Yuko is epic as ever. :lol: :rofl: I wonder how things will turn out after that file transfer thingy. XD
Thanks for the update seigus-san :bow: :bow: :bow: :cow:
“Isn’t that… Oh my God! The diamond ring! That means Dr. Watanabe finally proposed to her!” she screamed in delight.He WHAT ??!! :shock: :shock:
“WHAT?” Yuko, Ren and Sae dropped whatever they were doing and scrambled towards Akicha. Yuko snatched the phone.
“Maybe you are secretly a woman.”These 2 lines probably made me laugh the hardest. Your lighthearted humour is probably the main reason I am so fascinated by your work. The witty exchanges between the characters really crack me up.
“Shut up.”
“He still needs to pay for taking advantage of you.”
Aw man! Though it was an update duh.
IF I COULD HAVE A WISH, I'LL GRANT YOU UNLIMITED SPARE TIME FOR YOU COULD WRITE ONCE AGAIN AND PLEASE EACH AND EVERY ONE OF US IN HERE.....
Questions: Who did you think Takamina and co. were looking for at the beginning? When and how did you realize their target was Yuki?
When did you realise Yuki wanted to commit suicide?Q2.2: I dunno if it's just me, you know everybody thinks differently... but the 'idea' of just going to that place is an obvious spoiler itself, but on the other hand, you gave the hint of this 'drama Yuki looking for Mayu' which obviously would create this idea that 'oh it's Mayu' who's going to suicide.
DON'T READ THIS COMMENT IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE FIC ITSELF. :deco:First of all, I'm glad imteedee was the very first to comment on this fic, thanks for this! I really appreciate the thought! :) and on top of that imteedee shares the same thoughts as me gek geki and kurogumi.
DON'T READ THIS COMMENT IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE FIC ITSELF. :deco:thank you too teedee
BTW, I'm glad to know you took the next step, killing MaYuki is hard.....really hard.... :catglare:and just when I was about to feel sad, I read this I'm really expecting someone would react violently on this fic and sure imteedee :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: I had a good laugh at this one :hiakhiakhiak:
BTW, I'm glad to know you took the next step, killing MaYuki is hard.....really hard.... :catglare:and just when I was about to feel sad, I read this I'm really expecting someone would react violently on this fic and sure imteedee :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: I had a good laugh at this one :hiakhiakhiak:
DON'T READ THIS COMMENT IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE FIC ITSELF. :deco:
BTW, I'm glad to know you took the next step, killing MaYuki is hard.....really hard.... :catglare:
and so imteedee packed her bag and drove towards the mountains.... "I shall reflect on this...I'll kill MaYuki the next time I'll write...and have my revenge on you" :twisted:
And erm… just to clarify, I’m not so evil to dedicate a tragic story to someone; rather I’m presenting my maiden attempt at such a writing style to my friend.
Questions: Who did you think Takamina and co. were looking for at the beginning? When and how did you realise Yuki wanted to commit suicide?
"Those who commit suicide die but once. Those left behind die a thousand times, wondering why."
- Unknown
But I did find it quite horrifying how Yuki could just leave Yuko there alone whilst she buggered off single-mindedly. But I guess for someone in that state of mind, they wouldn't hang around there, so that could have been a hint.
I feel sad with Yukirin suicide...its such a tragic story :D BUT I LOVE IT!!!!! :cathappy: I thought the whole story is Yuki going to find Mayu at the forest, and maybe found her dead...but NO! Mayu died already and Yuki went there to commit suicide. OwO wah wah wah~ the feels~ Now I'm so inspired to write a tragic Mayuki OS now OwO :deco: :cathappy: :deco: :cathappy: Such a twist in the end~ I LOVE IT!
The next update for the Dr. Watanabe x Nurse Kashiwagi series may take a while as this is a very busy period for me at work. I miss them just as much as you so don’t fret! The next update will definitely come… it’s just a matter of when :nervous
Who did you think Takamina and co. were looking for at the beginning?
Where are you, Mayuyu?I thought Takamina and the rest of her team wanna help Yuki to search Mayu.
Sae sighed, turning her attention back to the picture of her with Mayu and Yuki. It was a photo taken just before the last operation that Mayu participated in… before that incident happened.Based on Sae's expression... I knew that something terrible happened to Mayu, but I didn't know what is it.
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Sae’s head shot up to catch Takamina’s guilty expression in the rear-view mirror.
“I should have listened to you back then and come up with a less risky plan,” the Captain spoke, remorse evident in her low voice.
Sae bit back a sob at the painful memory and squeezed her eyes shut, willing herself not to cry again.
“Did they find out where she went?”But then........ I read Oshima case.
Calloused fingers tightened their grip on the phone; their owner’s lips pressed firmly into a thin line.
“Aokigahara.”
“Hello, Hayano-san. It’s Kashiwagi here. I’ve found a lady who has just attempted suicide in Aokigahara.........."My heart melted.
When and how did you realise Yuki wanted to commit suicide?
How long have I been driving?I had feeling that Yuki planned to do something, but at this rate... I wasn't realized that she committed to suicide yet.... I thought she only planned to looking for Mayu.
Your life is a precious gift from your parents. Think about your parents, your siblings and your children. Don’t keep it to yourself. Talk about your troubles. Contact the Suicide Prevention Association.Oh... finally I had feeling that Mayu died because of suicide. :cry:
Mayuyu, did you think about me?
“I love you, Yukirin.”Yukirin's memory makes my heart bleeding.
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“I love you too, Mayuyu.”
Yuki held the well-worn plush to her chest as tears leaked past her closed eyes, leaving hot trails on her icy skin.
The only thing bad about this fic is the super long wait for the next update.
But that is also why it's so captivating.
The only thing bad about this fic is the super long wait for the next update.
But that is also why it's so captivating.
Then let's wait six months for the next update :P
The only thing bad about this fic is the super long wait for the next update.
But that is also why it's so captivating.
Then let's wait six months for the next update :P
“Someone’s got to be sober to lug your drunk ass home,” she countered, the teasing twinkle in her eyes not missed by Ren. “And I’m underage.”
“Pfft. Right.”
“I almost poisoned Mayu last year…”
“H-Hey, it wasn’t your fault. That stupid boy just has a weak stomach,” Yuko quickly said, desperate to do some damage control before Yuki’s dark vibes killed the jolliness of Christmas.
“I almost destroyed Mayu’s house…”
“He was a cheapskate to buy such a lousy oven that spoilt easily,” blabbed Yuko. Mayu’s brow twitched.
“I can’t be a good wife…”