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Title: [Crack fic for Estrea!] CLOSE TO YOU
Post by: Mikan on April 05, 2007, 07:10:43 AM
This is fic is dedicated to Estrea as a birthday present.

CLOSE TO YOU (Erika POV)
Starring Erika and Yui

I remember meeting you for the first time on our first day of work. It rained that day. And as the clouds began to disappear we saw something amazing. One by one the stars began to fall down from the sky.

I dont believe it...

The hot rocks obliterated half the building but by god it was beautiful. Flaming balls with steaming tails trailing through the purple sky, landing with a boom on the new grass. The noise was horrific. Much worse than thunder or the rumble of an earthquake.

Sheltering in the main hall we comforted each other. Huddled close in the corner. We were scared. I remember holding your hand and listening to you cry - `I wish it was over!` but secretly I wished it wouldnt end.

I dont believe in fate, destiny or such fairy tale factors but it seems I really did fall in love with you at first sight.

It`s been two years and I can say now with confidence that I love you.

I love you...

We exchange these simple words as your coat explodes with thousands of pigeons. It makes me smile and I take your hands and hold you close. And through the fluttering of wings I hear you say - `I wish it wouldnt end`
Title: Re: [Crack fic for Estrea!] CLOSE TO YOU
Post by: rndmnwierd on April 05, 2007, 07:15:44 AM
*raises hand* I have a question!
Quote
as your coat explodes with thousands of pigeons.
^What?

Other than that, kewl. I love Erika and Yui.

Edit: Oh, now I get it. Sorta...
Title: Re: [Crack fic for Estrea!] CLOSE TO YOU
Post by: Estrea on April 05, 2007, 07:28:18 AM
Awesome. Thanks Mikan! ^__^ Erika and Yui yay. XD
Title: Re: [Crack fic for Estrea!] CLOSE TO YOU
Post by: Mikan on April 05, 2007, 10:20:57 AM
Im sure most people know the song but for those of you who dont -

CLOSE TO YOU
By the Carpenters


Listen to it and you`ll get it
Title: Re: [Crack fic for Estrea!] CLOSE TO YOU
Post by: orangesocks on April 05, 2007, 04:19:51 PM
GAH I love the Carpenters! I'm a sucker for those feel-good songs...XD

Anyway, this fic's so cool! It practically parallels the song... :lol: Ah, Erika x Yui... :heart:
Title: Re: [Crack fic for Estrea!] CLOSE TO YOU
Post by: jenmoshka on April 05, 2007, 11:31:16 PM
I demand a Yui POV!!  *plops a flag on this post and sits next to it*  ....really I just want to know her reaction to the pigeons...all those pigeons...
Title: Re: [Crack fic for Estrea!] CLOSE TO YOU
Post by: nkca_ on April 06, 2007, 04:44:16 AM
heehe...me likes it ^^
Title: Re: [Crack fic for Estrea!] CLOSE TO YOU
Post by: Owaranai_sLaVe on April 06, 2007, 08:48:45 AM
Po Pooo~

That's all I could think of with the pigeons XD. Is this being continued?

-Owaranai_sLaVe
Title: Re: [Crack fic for Estrea!] CLOSE TO YOU
Post by: JFC on April 07, 2007, 12:07:34 AM
Po Pooo~

That's all I could think of with the pigeons XD.
(http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/avatars/MikiPigeon.jpg) (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/LOL.gif)
Title: Re: [Crack fic for Estrea!] CLOSE TO YOU
Post by: Mikan on April 07, 2007, 03:15:41 AM
(http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/avatars/MikiPigeon.jpg) (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/LOL.gif)

Now I'll think of it as thousands of miniMiki's bursting out from under her coat...Thats just sick
Title: Re: [Crack fic for Estrea!] CLOSE TO YOU
Post by: Owaranai_sLaVe on April 07, 2007, 06:54:46 AM
Thanks JFC for doing the honors of finding the poop throwing Miki :)

Quote from: Mikan
Now I'll think of it as thousands of miniMiki's bursting out from under her coat...Thats just sick
Aww, what are you talking about Mikan (http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a72/sLaVeGiRl00/mikitori6ue.gif) *throws poop* you know you were thinking the same thing *throws more poop*, like "That's just totally WICKED sick" :) *throws grande poop*

I'm just kidding, don't kill me ^-^;

-Owaranai_sLaVe