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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 3] >>> 27/12/11
« Reply #180 on: December 26, 2011, 07:14:04 PM »
Yayy More this made my day  :love:
Drums my ass , drugs more like! :cathappy:

This is so goood  :thumbup  :thumbup  :thumbup
UpdAte soon  :peace:

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 3] >>> 27/12/11
« Reply #181 on: December 26, 2011, 09:26:32 PM »
Oh ho.  Poor guys got punished well Mayu's chilling. TMTD was good.
Thank you for the Update.
Kai getting the information from Sala so easily. Can't wait for the next ch.

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1]
« Reply #182 on: December 27, 2011, 04:16:58 AM »
Thanks everyone for the comment XD I was in the university and got free time so I made a small part :D But WARNING it is really SHORT but hope you guys won't mind :nervous When I got time I'll post it soon for sure I promise. Well then please enjoy reading and excuse my English :P


Chapter 8


Part 1

“I’ll be right back” Kai says and leave to the bar.

“Hey, Sae 2 more Blue Teppens” says Kai
“Wow… you’re doing really good” says Sae
“Haha.. Thanks BRB” says Kai as he leaves to Kuu and Riku
“Kuu, Riku got a minute?”
“Yea..”

Then they went to the club leisure room.
“What you want to talk about?” asks Riku
“I got new information from Sala” says Kai
“Really??!!” asks Kuu
“Yes.. but we’ll discuss when we get back”
“Okay, got it” says Riku and Kuu as the three of them went back to work.

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Host Club – Leisure Room
“Ha… So tired…” says Kai
“Same here” says Ren, Riku and Sae
“Not really” says Mayu and Kuu
“I don’t understand how come you two don’t get tired when you two flirts the most…” says Kai
Mayu and Kuu just shurg their shoulders and answer “I don’t know”
“Let’s go home now” says Kai

After cleaning the club rooms they all went back home…

Grand Royal Apartment 11th Floor Room 121
“Home~” says Riku as he lie down on the couch
“Kai you get any new info. From Sala?” asks Mayu
“Yes. I was planning to tell you guys now” answers Kai

“I got the news that the trading will be 1 month from now at the old-school building and there will be drugs involved” says Kai seriously
“I thought so… something is really going on in the STC” says Jun
“Anymore information about how many people and who are they going to trade with??” asks Riku
“No… That’s the limit already.. If I ask more she’ll definitely be suspicious” Kai replies
“But I can’t believe how easily you get the information from Sala when we’re dying to get it a few days ago” says Mayu pouting
“You guys didn’t see it but Kai was such a flirt” says Kuu
“From what I see he’s really a pro.. and it looks like he can seduce anyone” Kuu continues.
“Eh?? What did I do? I just use what I think is good” says Kai
“Yea right.. you did but you should see how flustered you made her” says Kuu
“Anyway we should report this to dad first and see what to do next” says Kai
“Got it. I’ll go get the laptop” says Jun

After Jun brought the laptop they contact with Takahashi Hiroshi through secret line so that nobody will be able to get access to their channel and can’t eavedrop on them.

Bzz… Bz.. It’s connecting…
“Hello??” says Hiroshi
“Hi, dad/uncle”
“Oh, any new report?”
“Yes, we learn that there will be a deal going on next month at the old-school building and it involves drugs..” says Kai
“Got it.. but do you know the exact date? That would be better” asks Hiroshi
“Nope.. because if I continue to press on the issue we’ll be suspicious” Kai answers
“Hm… but try to limit the possibity of when the trade will occur since we can’t really send our men on stand-by for a whole month in the building” says Hiroshi
“We’ll try” says Mayu
“Oh, and one more thing. Be careful, don’t get hurt and don’t get caught” says Hiroshi concerned.
“Roger!” they all replied
“K, then have a nice sleep. Good Night~ Beep*” with that the connection is cut.

“Well then… we need new sources of info and plan” says Kai
“But for now let’s call it a day” says Kuu yawning
“Agree” says Mayu, Jun and Riku

Then they left and went to their respective bedroom to have a rest.

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The Next Day – AKB High School Class 2-A
You can hear birds chirping and the sound of chalk being written on the black board… it’s class time right now and students are studying… Everythings’ normal and peaceful until that moment…

“So to solve for x you have to put this equation into this then that and do all the adding and subtracting and you’ll get x’s value” explains the math teacher.

The teacher was writing on the black board and was explaining how to solve for the value x while students are either taking notes, daydreaming, sleeping or playing..

Then SUDDENLY!!! ‘Ahem! Ahem!’ could be heard everywhere in the school throught the school’s speaker.


Principle Announcement
Emergency Event
Winner: 20, 000 AKB points and the club will get 40, 000 AKB points.
Time limit: From now until school ends which is 3.00 p.m.
Winning Slot Available: 1
Rule: No violence
Event Type: Chasing and Running
To Win: You’ve got to handcuff the ‘mouse’ of the day with your wrist and bring him to the principal room to claim your rewards.
Target No. : 1
Target: Takahashi Kai

Note: Handcuff will be handed to each students by their teachers in 30 minutes. Each students should be on stand-by inside their classroom while Mr. Takahashi could use this time to hide himself or anything.

Well then, Good Luck everyone. I’ll be waiting in the principal room.


Students are shouting in excitement since they were bored of the classes and now their principle, Aki-p, has throw an exciting event for them with nice rewards. So who wouldn’t get excited?? Except one person…

“What?!! Why me??” Kai complains
“Kai, if you don’t want to be catch or swallowed by the students I suggest you to go into hiding now.. if not you’re time limit will soon be up” says Kuu while looking at his watch smiling.
“Yea.. I better go now..” says Kai as he ran out of the class.


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Thanks everyone for reading :kneelbow:

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
« Reply #183 on: December 27, 2011, 04:47:01 AM »
Thank you for the update.  :kneelbow:
It's very interesting.  :ding: :mon star:
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Rule: No violence
Event Type: Chasing and Running
To Win: You’ve got to handcuff the ‘mouse’ of the day with your wrist and bring him to the principal room to claim your rewards.
Target No. : 1
Target: Takahashi Kai
I feel sorry for Kai. He must feel :mon ref: :mon wtf:
 The event is very interesting, will there be more targets after Kai's caught? I wonder who'll be the one to catch him.  :mon chilly:
I honestly hope it's Acchan.  :mon lovelaff:
Can't wait for your next update.  :on comhere:

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
« Reply #184 on: December 27, 2011, 04:50:43 AM »
What STC?  :shocked

this is so intersting!  :w00t:

wonder what kai will do and who is going to catch him Acchan or Tomochin?  :wub:

nice chapter!  :inlove:

please update soon!  :bow:

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
« Reply #185 on: December 27, 2011, 04:58:44 AM »
jajaja poor kai :D, but acchan where is... :D so good fic

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
« Reply #186 on: December 27, 2011, 06:56:19 AM »
Mouse (Kai) and cat games... Wonder who manage to caught Kai, could it be Acchan, Tomochin or Sala ? Wondering how Acchan and Tomochin react to the sudden games announcement by principal.

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
« Reply #187 on: December 27, 2011, 12:11:27 PM »
Hahahahaha!!!!!! So funny!!!
The night club scene was just epic!!!
And now the catch-the-mouse-of-the-day game lol!
This school is crazy hahahahh!!!

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
« Reply #188 on: December 27, 2011, 01:05:39 PM »
Ah! Sorry for not commenting Chapter7 Part 3. Huhu~
Chapter 7 Part 3
LOL! Poor Mayu. And Kai use his flirt skills to get the information~ :mon roll:

Chapter 8 Part 1
I like it! Interesting. And I feel really sorry for Kai! Acchan,go find Kai now!
Really can't wait for the next chapter. :mon inluv:
Update soon!  :bow: :bow:

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
« Reply #189 on: December 27, 2011, 05:24:12 PM »
@Sok There could be more target later on XD or other kind of events :grin:
@cmze STC is the Science Technology Club :) Thanks for the comment :D
@Haruko Thanks for reading and the comment ;)
@Sydney W You'll know soon :D
@kahem Haha.. Yea thanks for the comment XD
@AKBlover_99 Thanks for liking it :D Of course that's what Acchan will do :grin:

Thanks everyone for the comment :kneelbow: and the thanks: Sok, cmze, blughise, Sydney W, kahem

I got home today and continues to work on it XD I manage to type something down but the result of the event won't be out yet :P I'll post the next Part really soon~~

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
« Reply #190 on: December 27, 2011, 05:42:10 PM »
Wow!  :mon beam: Can't wait for your update!

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2]
« Reply #191 on: December 27, 2011, 05:48:35 PM »
As I have promised HERE IT IS~ the next Part XD And as I've said the result still hasn't come out yet, that'll have to wait until the next part :P I'll try to update soon again but maybe this weekend if I've got enough time and ideas :D

@Sok Here it is XD Although not the exciting part yet :D BTW, I'm also waiting for your update :thumbsup Thanks for the comment :grin:

Please enjoy reading it and comment on it and Please excuse my English :P


Chapter 8


Part 2

After Kai leaves the room…
“Who do you think will catch Kai?” asks Riku
“Of course it’s me~ I’ll get the points and spend it on cakes!” says Kuu determined
“No-no. I’ll be the one that catch him” says Acchan smirking
“Since this is an event and I hate losing, I’ll go full power after him” says Tomochin
“Eh?? But you never were on full power even when it is an event” says Yuko
“Well.. it’s starting this year..” says Tomochin
“Yuko are you going to participate?” asks Riku
“Nah, I rather spend the free time with you” says Yuko smiling showing her dimple
“Eh??!!” says Riku shock
“That’s two opponents out, Lucky~” says Kuu
“What? Why two? I didn’t say that I’ll be out” says Riku pouting
“sigh* If Yuko is after you do you think you’ll have time to chase Kai??” says Kuu
“…” Riku was speechless
“Haha it’s okay Riku. I’ll win the race but I won’t share you the cakes” says Kuu
“Kuu, you sure you should be laughing at Riku??” asks Acchan
“What??”
“You didn’t go to the infirmary this morning right? And Mari-nee was really pissed off” explains Tomochin
“So??” asks Kuu raising an eyebrow
“She told me that…” Acchan wasn’t able to finish her sentence as there is announcement again…

‘Ahem! Aaa, aa, Microphone testing.. Minegishi Kuu is not allowed to participate in the race this time, due to slacking off this morning.. I don’t have to say, you know what I mean. So, you’ll have to report to the infirmary and work as my assistant the WHOLE day. Well, then I’ll be expecting you in the infirmary within 5 minutes.’

Hearing this Kuu was mad “What?! Hey! That isn’t fair! T-Rex is playing dirty!!”
“It’s because you slack off this morning” says Riku
“Hmph! I don’t care, I won’t go!!” says Kuu while showing his tongue.

‘Ah! Forgot to say… If Minegishi Kuu did not report to the infirmary within 5 minutes or did not show up at all then he will be banned from the cake corner at the cafeteria for A WHOLE MONTH. Thank you…’

Hearing this Kuu says “Well… The event isn’t that important after all… besides there is always more events later on.. I’ll catch up with you guys later since there is only 4 minutes and 5 seconds left before I got banned from the cake corner” and dash out of the class leaving a speechless Riku, Yuko, Acchan and Tomochin.

“I guess that is one more opponent less…” says Acchan
“Yea..” says Tomochin
“Even though me, Riku and Kuu is not joining but you still have to go against Yuki, Sayaka, Lovetan, Rena, Mayu, Sae, Sasshi, Chiyuu and Jun if they are in the race” says Yuko
“Hm… You’re right.. I’m not much of a sport person from the start… So I think the strongest opponent will be Yuko since you run so fast but since you don’t join then I think it should be Sayaka who run as fast as you but then Jun also run really fast…” says Acchan
“I agree with what you say but we don’t have to worry about Lovetan, Rena, Mayu and Sasshi don’t we?? They are as slow as snail LOL” says Tomochin
“Sae is quite fast too but I don’t know about Chiyuu” says Acchan
“I don’t think Chiyuu is interested in handcuffing himself with Kai so I don’t think he’ll join the race” says Riku
“Why??” asks Acchan and Tomochin
“IDK, for some reason he just declared Kai his rival few days ago” explains Riku
“Oh…” they replied
“Anyway, this morning this person gave me this paper and say that it could be useful for the next event so why don’t we take a look at it” suggests Yuko
“Eh? Really? What is it??” they asks
“Well then let’s unfold it” says Yuko showing them a piece of folded paper.

As the paper is unfolded the contents are revealed as below:


Professional Analysis of Popular Players

By: S.M.

Horse Entry:
Horse No. 1: Akimoto Sayaka also known as Gorilla
Speed: ***** (5 Stars)
Stamina: *****
Power: *****
Agility: *****
Power up Item: Banana
Note: Has marvelous ability in sportsmanship, if you’re betting I suggest this horse to you, definitely will make you rich LOL. But easily distracted and forget the objectives.

“… What kind of information is this??” asks Riku
“The player’s ability I think” answers Tomo
Then they continue to read it.

Horse No. 2: Kashiwagi Yuki also known as Marimokkori/Yukirin
Speed: **** (4 Stars)
Stamina: ****
Power: ***
Agility: **
Power up Item: Mayuyu’s kiss/hug
Note: May look weak in sport but is actually above average, when something pisses her off her ‘Black’ side may come out..

Horse No. 3: Matsui Rena a.k.a. Gekikara (for her crazy personality that come out sometimes)
Speed: *
Stamina: *
Power: *
Agility: **
Power up Item: Spicy Food
Note: Not much to say.. Just don’t bet on her when it’s about anything sport-related.. But if she's in Gekikara mode all her ability could double or even triple so make sure don't get her mad :P

Horse No. 4: Ota Aika a.k.a. Lovetan
Speed: **
Stamina: **
Power: **
Agility: **
Power up Item: Sweets
Note: Not much of a sport person too. A little below average but since she’s cute it’s fine LOL.

Horse No. 5: Miyazawa Sae a.k.a. Genking
Speed: ****
Stamina: ****
Power: ****
Agility: ****
Power up Item: Girls
Note: Quite good in all aspects in sports, above average but not the best. Only best point is that he’s always full of energy which sometimes also annoys me..

Horse No. 6: Watanabe Mayu a.k.a. Mayuyu/Nezumi
Speed: ***
Stamina: **
Power: **
Agility: **
Power up Item: Otaku related product
Note: Cute but not sporty.. average speed but below average stamina, power and agility.

Horse No. 7: Matsui Jun a.k.a. Center
Speed: *****
Stamina: ****
Power: ****
Agility: ****
Power up Item: Energetic and genuine smile from little kids or Rena
Note: Really energetic boy too but just below the annoying line so it’s fine. Run really fast and stamina, power, and agility are also above average.

Horse No. 8: Sasshihara Ren a.k.a. Sasshi/Hetare
Speed: **
Stamina: **
Power: **
Agility: *
Power up Item: Cute girls especially Lovetan
Note: Looks above average, very flirty but sport ability below average. Really Hetare..

Horse No. 9: Kasai Chiyuu
Speed: ***
Stamina: ***
Power: **
Agility: *
Power up Item: Cute things
Note: Sport ability average not below nor above, can be scary when pushed to his limit…

Horse No. 10: Maeda Atsuko a.k.a. Acchan
Speed: ***
Stamina: ***
Power: **
Agility: **
Power up Item: Food especially Cucumber
Note: Not too sporty person too, lack of motivation in almost everything. Loves to sleep and eats a lot. Worried about her future…

“Hey! What is with this??!!” asks Atsuko mad
“Let us finish reading first Acchan and the information provided by this person is 100% accurate” says Yuko
Then they continue to read the information..

Horse No. 11: Itano Tomomi a.k.a. Tomochin
Speed: ****
Stamina: ***
Power: ***
Agility: ***
Power up Item: Fashion-related things
Note: Fashionable and delinquent-like girl, also lacks motivation like her best friend.. Really worried about their future.. sigh* But sports ability is definitely above average.

“WTH?? I’m in the same level as Acchan???” asks Tomochin
“What do you mean by that??” asks Acchan coldly as she glares at Tomo
“Haha.. I didn’t say anything.. let’s continue to read” says Tomochin nervously

Horse No. 12: Oshima Yuko a.k.a. Squirrel
Speed: *****
Stamina: *****
Power: ***
Agility: ****
Power up Item: Perverted-things but recently Kojima Riku
Note: Although small and have short legs, she can run really fast and is really agile though really perverted…

Horse No. 13: Kojima Riku a.k.a. Nyan Nyan
Speed: ****
Stamina: ****
Power: *****
Agility: ****
Power up Item: Games
Note: Although he look or maybe is an airhead, his ability truly shocked me… Well.. maybe God made a mistake in there LOL Anyway he got good sport-ability.

“What?!!!” shouted Riku mad
“Nyan Nyan, calm down” says Yuko clinging onto Riku

Horse No. 14: Takahashi Kai
Speed: *****
Stamina: *****
Power: *****
Agility: ****
Power up Item: Katsudon
Note: Really a small midget but like Yuko can run really fast and all abilities are above average.. No comment aside from being a midget and suberu every time he try to joke about something.. Maybe he's actually a Mafia.. who knows from his look hahaha...

Horse No. 15: Minegishi Kuu a.k.a. Gachapin
Speed: *****
Stamina: ****
Power: ****
Agility: *****
Power up Item: Cakes
Note: His ‘charm’ point is his buck tooth that makes him look like a Gachapin. He is really annoying and childish, loves to flirt and think he looks cool which is not true at all… Only cause trouble and didn’t come to the infirmary this morning so I decided to take his qualification from joining the race and torture him LOL

Now who are you going to bet on?? Will Kai get escape and win the game or will one of the popular players catch him??

P.S. Underage people cannot bet which means ALL of you here cannot bet except me LOL


To Be Continued…


“…” everyone was now speechless
“So… the person who made this data is Mariko sensei??” asks Riku
“Yea…” answers Yuko
“In the first place are we even a horse??” asks Tomochin
“You got a point…” agrees Acchan
“Is this even accurate??” asks Riku
“It is really accurate although the comment is a bit biased…” answers Yuko
“Not really a bit… it’s really biased” says Mayu, Jun, Sae, Ren, Yuki and Sayaka.

“Woah! When did you guys get in here??” asks Riku
“Just a moment ago and who the hell is a Gorilla??!!” yelled Sayaka pointing at the paper on the table.
“Put that aside, why are you guys here? Aren’t you suppose to be on stand-by in your classes??” asks Acchan
“Well… the event has started a few minutes ago when you guys are busy debating here.. And we’re here to see if Kai is still here but I guess luck is not on our side” says Mayu
“What it’s already start??” exclaim Acchan, Tomochin, Riku and Yuko
Then they look around the classroom and find nobody aside from their groups..
“Seems like Kai is not here so bye guys” says Sayaka as she dash out of the class.

“Ah… Here are your handcuffs Maeda, Itano, Oshima and Kojima” says the teacher as he handed them their handcuff.
“Let’s start too” says Tomo as she also leaves the class

Then one by one they all leave the class except Riku with Yuko clinging on him. He has already given up in escaping so he decides to stay at the classroom and finish his game.


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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
« Reply #192 on: December 27, 2011, 06:24:45 PM »
Yay! Very interesting!
haha. kuu couldn't participate.
The information on the 'horses' was funny!  :mon lmao:
Thanks for the update.
 
Hope there's a twist as to who catches Kai. Maybe Chiyuu?

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
« Reply #193 on: December 27, 2011, 07:12:35 PM »
Pwahahahahah!!!! Seriously this fic is so funny!!!
The data thing lol!!!! Good job Mariko-sama!

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
« Reply #194 on: December 28, 2011, 03:45:45 AM »
The games started. Everyone is eyeing on Kai. Wonder where on earth Kai will hide. :D
The "horse" notes is hilarious. Waiting for your next update. Thanks

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
« Reply #195 on: December 28, 2011, 06:33:40 AM »
jajaja poor kai, im waiting for the bet :D jajaj

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
« Reply #196 on: December 28, 2011, 07:58:06 AM »
AN UPDATE !! :mon trannie: I really like that 'data' ! LOL ! :mon lmao:
Gachapin, is there just cakes in your mind?!
I like this chapter ! Can't wait for the next update ! Update soon ! :onioncheer:

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
« Reply #197 on: December 28, 2011, 08:20:43 AM »
Mariko-sama will always trolling everyone..

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
« Reply #198 on: December 28, 2011, 07:09:29 PM »
Woow So quick ~ :shock:

I hope Acchan catches Kaii :sweat:
Kuu LOOOL you and your cake  :rofl:

This is getting so good, you should have more free time so you can write more~  :P
Update soon i'll be waiting! :w00t:

P.S you should update more often like this  XD

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
« Reply #199 on: December 30, 2011, 06:47:27 PM »
Waaaa! I've missed a lot of Cap! :OMG:

But for the whole time your fic made me  :on spit:  :wahaha:
I laughed so hard I almost died especially in the last update with Mariko sama trolling on
everyone with her stamina report....

Can't wait for your next update!

Arígatou!  :kneelbow:
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