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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #140 on: November 09, 2013, 12:39:34 PM »
Ah cotto! Just now i imagining wmatsui is like mr and mrs smith puhahaha!
Rena is jolie and jurina is brad

AWESOME

And i imagine the battle between wmatsui LOl

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #141 on: November 09, 2013, 01:58:21 PM »
Yuki why are you suddenly seducing Rena? You player! :thumbdown:

Atsumina's lunch date. I guess Atsuko already knows that Takamina is really a police officer. What will happen to their blooming love?

I feel so sorry for Haruna. Got beaten by Sae, Sayaka, and Yuko. :cry:

But because of that incident Yuki realized she doesn't want Mayu to die. She needs more push to really admit that her true love is Mayu.

Sae is the one who almost killed Mayu right? That girl is too possessive! :smhid

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #142 on: November 09, 2013, 03:11:43 PM »
i dont know why, but yuki give me chills!! XD

update soon :on gay:

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #143 on: November 09, 2013, 03:22:27 PM »
Yuki still fliring with Rena

Yuki scare to lost Mayu... It this mean she love Mayu :?

Ahh.... Mayuki  :wub: :inlove:

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #144 on: November 09, 2013, 03:54:48 PM »
@olive29 : Hi. :)
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Ehhhhh....Yuki start to fall in love with Mayu??
Wh-why? You didn't like it?

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the three man who Mayu saw I guess are Sae, Sayaka, and Yuko ganging up on Haruna,right??
You perfectly can read my mind.  XD

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And, what happen to Takamina's lunch with Acchan??
I guess Acchan finally know that Takamina is a police, right??
I'll write in in Chap 7.  :)

@gek geki : Woww... geki-san. I'm happy to read all of your comments.  :inlove:
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She doubt,hope she realized her feeling fast.so she could choose whether she will protect mayu or not.
I felt scared about mayuki.each chapter make me scared.i feel something bad will happen soon
Just dont hurt rena sama and yuki hime
Yup, I agree with you, Yuki have to make her decision faster... I mean..... before it becomes too late.

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I wonder if haruna had a deal with mariko on the past?
Hmm... chap 7 or 8? Sorry... I haven't decide about it yet.  :P

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How about you update this tommorow morning? (what a selfish request)
That is a really selfish request.  :lol:
Usually... I can write 1 chapter in 2 or 3 days.  :P

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Whitehawk san i though the same about kojiharu ha
Because it just no sense she betray without reason
There's a reason. Don't worry...  ;)

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Ah cotto! Just now i imagining wmatsui is like mr and mrs smith puhahaha!
Rena is jolie and jurina is brad
AWESOME
And i imagine the battle between wmatsui LOl
Umm... Geki-san, I already imagined it since I wrote the prologue.
It's like: they'll pointed their gun at each other head.... on the bed... early in the morning. :lol:
The police and the thieves will be hard to be live together... human nature.  XD

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But I got a feeling that Kojima betrayed them to save them?
You have a good eye.  XD
Let's see how it'll turns out.

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Rena already slapped Yuki, maybe later Sae and Mayu will slap Yuki too? XD
I will REALLY think about it. Thanks for your idea.  :lol:

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Hmm, what if Mayu already know if Yuki is a spy but she try to make Yuki fall in love with her so she can make Yuki betray her team? Since she's smart. xD
Mayu didn't know about it, not yet. As I wrote in my spoiler.. 'the truth' in chap. 7

Thanks for your comment.  :wub:

@cisda83 :
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Who is the woman that being beaten up?
Haruna or Mariko?
What a great question.  XD
At first, I was hesitant about it too.. But after the whole 6.2 finished, I decided to choose it: She's Kojima.

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Who are the ones that beat the woman up?
Was it Atsuko's?
Umm... The shorter girl Yuko ; The taller girl: Sayaka ; The 3rd man: Sae.  :)

Your other questions will be answered soon.  :D

@Konoe :
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Yuki why are you suddenly seducing Rena? You player! :thumbdown:
Later, I will make Yuki's image become: She WAS a player.  :lol:

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I feel so sorry for Haruna. Got beaten by Sae, Sayaka, and Yuko. :cry:
But because of that incident Yuki realized she doesn't want Mayu to die. She needs more push to really admit that her true love is Mayu.
Yup, everything that happened to us will be caused a good impact and a bad impact.
bad impact for Haruna, but good impact for MaYuki.

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Sae is the one who almost killed Mayu right? That girl is too possessive! :smhid
Sae is a possessive girl, I agree with you.
But... If I'm a Sae, I'll totally jealous too. I mean.... How can my girlfriend hugged another girl right in front of me?! My girlfriend even cried for her too!
 :P

@Chichay12 :
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i dont know why, but yuki give me chills!! XD
*cough* I guess... I know what's you mean. *cough*
Yuki....  :inlove:

@Kirozoro :
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Yuki still fliring with Rena
Flirting without love..
Jesus, she's a player. She'll flirting with anyone who get her interest.  :lol:

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Yuki scare to lost Mayu... It this mean she love Mayu :?
Yuki still doubt about it.

Thank you all.
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #145 on: November 09, 2013, 05:54:29 PM »
I just discovered awful/good thing I became addicted on yours stories. :O

 :panic: I have so many questions. But I will wait for my answers in your story.
I want to be suprised. :grin:
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #146 on: November 09, 2013, 10:24:54 PM »
eeeeeh????? wait a second...
what happen with this man?? who they are?
and what about the lunch atsuko get angry or something did she know now that minami is cop?? i guess...
hurry up we need the next chapter ^_^  :otomerika: :cow:
awesome!!!!

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #147 on: November 10, 2013, 04:32:26 AM »
And i loved how you answer my question puhahahahahaha

Somehow think about wmatsui make me smile and happy,make me forgot how depressed when i think about my dear mayuki

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #148 on: November 10, 2013, 05:31:39 AM »
Ouh..what happen with atsumina? :( and I hope haruna would be fine, also I want to know what her reason so she should betray the group :? but the most important I hope there a lot of scene for atsumina and wmatsui :byebye:

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #149 on: November 10, 2013, 03:52:59 PM »
okay now i'm really afraid  :cry:
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atsumina

LOL!!  :rofl: i'm pretty sure their lunch become the shocking lunch ever,especially for acchan! LOL, just imagining acchan shock face after seeing takamina with her police uniform~  :doh: , baka...takamina was really baka...bakamina...you let your enemy know your identity  :cathappy: but it's cute~  :cathappy:
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yukirena

player!! yuki was a player!!,but i relieved that rena don't loved her anymore..it's just yuki is still had her seducing aura...but no love here...rena love start to blossom with officer jurina yeah!!  :cow:
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mayuki

Let's pray...putri-san won't hurt this pairing badly...GOD PLEASE! save them from putri LOL just kidding
but seriously...are they fine or...on the way to..*cough*death*cough*

it's always sweet seeing a players start to fall in love
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saeyuki

sae definitely mad at yuki ,she will questioned yuki about why she defend mayu from her when there's a chance too killed her...that was also yuki problem too meh she will answer this but she will realized too her feeling toward mayu's...hope she's not stubborn enough too deny it,because like the author said, 'before it's too late'
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wmatsui

you tease me nee..putri-san  8)
i wait and wait wmatsui sweet moment
their moment always make me laugh LOL jurina is kinda stupid but adorable but not stupid as takamina,she just so puppy alike

aaah souka...you think about mr and mrs smith  :yep:
then it will be mr and mrs matsui LOL  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
battle in a house....pointed gun...kissed...and be wmatsui finally!!!   :yep:
maybe jurina not so georgeous as yuki,but jurina presence could make rena calm...and it was all rena needed,The feeling can not be compared to money... :theking
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am i missing some part??

bleh~  :P too much commenting...just shut this though and waiting for the next update



thank for the update

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #150 on: November 10, 2013, 06:08:49 PM »

 Damn!! Why Sae left her girlfriend with me?! Doesn't she know that her girlfriend is totally dangerous and..... seductive?


I agree with u Rena... Yuki is god damn seductive player...  :on slopkiss:

what happen with Takamina??

Is she did something stupid again???  :smhid

so next chapter will reveal the truth???

can't wait for that...

good job...  :twothumbs


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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #151 on: November 11, 2013, 04:43:57 AM »
after acchan seeing takamina uniform
i think she will ask yuki the name all of takamina team member included jurina
that maybe how they know each other...
rena will be shocking if that really happen,she start liking jurina and it will end soon
but they still had a date in the weekend
yuki start liking mayu too,but isn't it a it weird?
so suddenly and what the different between mayu ,sae and rena that could make yuki fall??
if it about face and brain,rena has it.yuki already experience dating with these kind people
and about caring and lovely act,sae already give it to yuki too~
mayu....what she had?
let's see....
ummm...
cute face~
geogeous aura~
smart brain~
spoiled brat kids~ (this make yuki headache)
kind heart~ (she in good side,and she had family)
sexy~ (oww)
hot~ (ja)
what so special from her?
compared from jurina who could make rena calm,i never knew what mayu bring to yuki's life?
and takamina could make acchan smile and laugh.
did yuki ever enjoyed her time with mayu?
i hope mayu could change yuki life from bad to be good person...
oh gott! Ich bete, dass sie glücklich sind
teil sieben....sieben sieben i can't wait sieben


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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #152 on: November 11, 2013, 05:49:38 AM »

yeah

update part 7


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Runners, until the race is run
Soldiers, you've got to soldier on
Sometimes even right is wrong
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #153 on: November 11, 2013, 06:27:28 AM »
Thank you for answering my questions...

As I thought... the men that beat Haruna up would be Atsuko's team members...

I guess Sae was very angry with Yuki's reaction over Mayu's safety

What's going to happen next?

Thank you ...

Can't wait  to see the next chapter

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #154 on: November 11, 2013, 11:54:35 AM »
Ummm.... guys... I will answer your replies later. Sorry.  :bow:

But somehow..... I wanna 'tease' you about my chapter. :P

A (very) little preview for my WMatsui..... to convince you guys.... that I'm really in the middle of it now... re-read it over and over again.  :lol:
I will post it tomorrow.  :)


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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #155 on: November 11, 2013, 12:01:09 PM »
WHAT THE?! :mon blood:

YOU ARE SO MEAN!!!

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #156 on: November 11, 2013, 12:05:01 PM »
I ALREADY EXPLODED READING THAT!!!!!!
aHHHHHHHHH U ARE SO MEAN  :cry: :cry:
BUT DBHWHDJBEJWDWBDWBDWDEJ  :cathappy:
I THINK IT WILL BE WONDERFUL SO I FORGIVE YOU!  :heart: :heart: :heart:

*can't wait can't wait*!!!!!


PS: "tomorrow! is like in 7 hours more.. isn't it? 8DDDDDDDDDD
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #157 on: November 11, 2013, 12:41:50 PM »
WOW WOW WOW IT WAS GOOD BUT I THINK YOU SHOULD BE CAREFUL,YOU KNOW,THE GOLDEN RULE? JURINA IS STILL UNDERAGE,I STILL DON'T KNOW THE FULL STORY BUT IF MY THOUGH IS RIGHT THEN TRY TO MINIMIZE OR MAKE SOME OTHER NAH YOU KNOW...ASK TEEDEE SAN MY ANIKI PUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #158 on: November 11, 2013, 12:46:01 PM »
TOMORROW, THEN AT 00:00 O'CLOCK YOU MUST UPDATE IT, BUT IT'S ALREADY MORNING IN MY COUNTRY

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 6.2]
« Reply #159 on: November 11, 2013, 12:48:48 PM »
@koneki and @konoe : What? I just want you to know that I'm really working on it.  :whistle:

7 hours? 00:00 o'clock???  :mon huh:
No. I think.... 24 hours more...  :mon evillaff:

@gek geki : Don't worry... I will make it just like chap 4. I won't post their full version here.

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