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Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« on: November 17, 2012, 05:45:17 PM »
This is my first time writing in this site so probably will have certain errors until I get used to this.
So.. shall we begin? XD



Introducing Characters


Sae Miyazawa

~School's number one most feared gangster
~Cold to everyone since the day she was born
~ Yukirin is the only one dare to 'annoy' her.

Yuki Kashiwagi (Yukirin)

~A spy to investigate about a secret dark organisation
~Is a cheerful kid in school
~ Sees Sae who is lonely and attempts to make friends.
~Not afraid of fierce Sae



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I'm Sae Miyazawa. My family is doing business. When anyone asked, I'd either ignore them or just say "businessman." But all these years, dad has been selling all kinds of things. From drugs to bombs and also weapons.

Today is just like another day. New year, new class, new classmates. Other than that, nothing else is different. Did I mention I'm the most feared in school?
Technically I'm easily annoyed by small little things. And I beat up people just to release tension.



Walking along the corridoor, I just have a pokerface. Not smiling to anyone including teachers. Even they're fear of me. Well, you can say I am the boss in this school. MUAHAHA!

I enter the class and sat at my usual view. Near the window, far most behind of the class.



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FLASHBACK

"Yukirin, you're assigned to go to Japan and investigate the 'dark activities'. The CEO daughter studies in this school but we haven't found out the name. So you will attend this school until this culprit is arrested. Understood?" He tossed the file to Yukirin.

"Yes sir." Yukirin salutes and took the file.

Yukirin opens the file and read every single details it has about the school.

"So i guess I'll be stuck in Japan for god knows how long..." Yukirin mumbles to herself.


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"Yuki-chan, please introduce yourself to the class." The teacher said.

"Ohayo gozaimasu. Kashiwagi Yuki-desu. Yoroshku onegaishimasu" Yuki said cheerfully and bowed to the class.

"KAWAIIIII!!!~~~~" The class cheered.

Then I noticed one girl specially having short grey hair looking out the window not even bothering the class.

All the sudden that girl slams the table and yelled to the whole class, "JUST SHUT UP ALREADY! SO NOISY!!!" the class silent immediately.

"Erm, Sae-chan.. Would you mind if Yuki-chan sits infront of you?" the teacher asked humbly.

"Whatever. Not like I own the class." Sae replied coldly. Yuki went and sit infront of Sae.









BREAK

Sae is sitting alone at a corner eating as usual while listening to her Ipod.

"Hi." a girl suddenly sat opposite of her. Now Sae feels like her fuse lit up. She angrily took off her earplugs.

"Did I give you permission to sit?" Sae blasted coldly.

Yuki shook her head, "No, but as you can see the cafeteria is full. I had no where else to sit. SO just let me sit here until I am done." She said cheerfully.

Sae sighed and continued to listen her songs and eat her food not bothering Yuki who is sitting opposite her anymore.











The last subject before school ends....

"Okay students. Please do this in a group of 2 to four."

Everyone has their own groups. Well literally some is four and some is 5 and 6 just to avoid being a group with Sae.

But one girl specially, looking around discovered everyone is in a group except for one who is sitting behind her, having arms crossed and looking outside the window.

"Sae-chan, group with me for this task." Yuki turned back holding a pen and a paper.. Sae-chan staring at her.

(Are you kidding me? Did she just ask me to be a group with her? --Sae thought)

"That transferee is so brave. First she sits with her at the cafeteria and now asking to be group with her?"
"Dude, that girl is so dead from Sae. Sae-chan is a deadly kid."

The class whispers among one another.

"SO please!~~ Can you be a group with me?" Yuki asked again smiling warmly.
Sae hesitantly nodded.

Since Sae has been long in school, she knows how to search for answers in the notes and score full marks out of everything.

"Wah. Sae-chan ICHIBAN!" Yuki praised happily when she sees her task result gets full marks.

"Happy? now go back to your seat?" Sae said coldly and Yuki just obeyed.

(I will be close to her someday. --Yuki thought)





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TBC

A/N: So how is it? Good? Bad? Terrible? Comments are welcomed.. ^^

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #1 on: November 17, 2012, 05:54:02 PM »
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HECK! THIS IS SO GOOD! XD I want to see the next chapter ASAP! XD PLEASE CONTINUE!  :sashiko:

fuu_kun would so want to see this. XD
« Last Edit: November 17, 2012, 06:05:54 PM by Amakuchi »

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #2 on: November 17, 2012, 06:12:45 PM »
eh?! too short!!! I want more saeyuki!!!

jeje yukirin is amazing and cute... please continue this for all saeyuki`s shipper

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #3 on: November 17, 2012, 07:37:34 PM »
ahh im happy you made a fic finally lol an as promised im commenting

its really good i like the way sae is really cold to people an a deared gangster an the way yuki is a new student cant wait till your next update

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #4 on: November 17, 2012, 08:43:44 PM »
Good job on your first fic, SleepingHam-san.  :twothumbs  :welcome
I like your storyline and SaeYuki~  :heart:

Can't wait for the next update  :cow:

P.S I love your name  XD

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #5 on: November 18, 2012, 12:48:50 AM »
HUWAAAAAAAA >o<)/saeyukiiiiiiiiiiiiii <3
nice !! excelent!! b(>o<)d pwetty pwease apdet this sooon :bow:

@amakuchi-san yeahhh of course! XD i'm totaly happy right now! since i only can eat saeyuki and lil' kojiyuu fanfic xd

yup totaly agree with @haruko-san ! please continue this for saeyuki shipper x) i beg you :bow:
« Last Edit: November 18, 2012, 01:09:11 AM by fuu_kun »

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #6 on: November 23, 2012, 03:45:56 PM »
am i spamming huh? :?
please update this :bow: need mood boster now :grin:
ganbatte!

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #7 on: December 26, 2012, 04:06:31 PM »
My User name my not look like it but I'm a HUGE SaeYuki FAN~!!

So please Update  :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:  :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #8 on: December 27, 2012, 05:34:36 PM »
Chapter 2


Summer break starts tomorrow. The class planned for a trip outing tomorrow for three days at the newly opened onsen near Mount Fuji.

"Should we count her in or count her out?" One of the classmate asked.
"Ritsu-chan, I think we count her out. She had never join this kind of school activity before."
"Kazuki-chan, I think we should ask her. It's unfair to just count her out." Yuki who overheard speaks up.
"Sorry yuki-chan. But no one dares to talk to her." Ritsu said casually.




Sae POV

I overheard everything that the students said behind my back just by sitting at my own place and looking out the window.
"Like the usual, those cowards counted me out just because they're afraid to ask a simple question. Have they forgotten I am a human and I don't eat human flesh?" I mumbles to myself not even thinking anyone would hear me.
"Sae-chan, will you be attending the school trip tomorrow?" Yuki who suddenly sat on an empty seat infront of me asked with a cheerful expression.
I got startled by the sudden question; "No I'm not joining this crap." I said coldly despite the fact I really want to go. Onsen is my favourite destination. I really wants to shout out ONSEN IS MY FAVOURITE VACATION SPOT!. Ofcourse I didn't.
"Why not. Come on it'll be fun. Just try it okay? O... KAYyY?" Yuki asked again even cheerful than before. That big round eyes. Damn is cute. No wait, whut? AISH!
"O..O-kay." I muttered softly.
"YAhAY!" the other girl cheered and break the 'planning team' the news.
"HEEEH? She really coming? Wow Yuki-chan, you're amazing." the girl named Ritsu praised her. I hear them happily laughing and chatting together.

In fact some of them were even discussing that I may beat up my room-mate if they snores. My first reaction: "What the hell? Those peeps thinks I'm that ridiculous to beat up anyone for no freaking good reason?"



That night, I am packing my stuff when suddenly I got a message notification.
"huh? Yuki?" I opened the text and read it.
Ayo~ Have you packed your stuff yet? You must be wondering how I got your number, right?

I shouted to the screen: " DID NOT! Well, actually I did. >_<" Then I continued to read...

I got my source. Anyway I'll be packing lunch for us so don't bring your lunchbox alright? *peace* :D
-Yuki-chan-



The next day, everyone gathered at the assembly area to get their pass and attendance checked and waits for the bus.

"The bus is taking quite long so why don't you all choose your room-mates first." The teacher said.
Oh well, I'll definitely own a room myself. I was confident I will get a room for just myself until someone linked her arm with mine and cheerfully said "Sae-chan, let's be room-mate. neh? neh?" That look, I'm imagining the chibi neko version of Yuki saying it to me. "Damn, kawaiii~" I thought. The cloud above my head is filled with Yuki-neko. I shook my head vigorously breaking the clouds. "MAn, what have she done to me?" I thought.
"Er.. Anything." I said blankly. The classmates behind me goes "Ooohhhh".


As if loosing my only chance to have a whole room by myself is not enough, that girl is freaking annoying.
"La ala la llallal~~" Yuki-chan is singing while un-packing her stuff.
"Aish! Can you unpack quietly? I need a peaceful sleep~"


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A/N: A short update after a long time. Just to ask... any minors under 13 years old here? Coz I'm thinking of putting some kiss scenes for SaeYuki :D And thanks for the comments, guys. I'm more confident in updating now because of the positive feedbacks despite first time writing Jpop-based fic. :D

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #9 on: December 27, 2012, 05:38:19 PM »
intresting chapter cant wait till you update next

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #10 on: December 27, 2012, 06:02:35 PM »
I am over 13 years old >_> and I am pervert XD
Update soon! :3
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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #11 on: December 27, 2012, 06:20:22 PM »
kyaaaa >o<)/ yuki so kawaii~~
i lovee this fic :heart:
continue pleaseee~ asap! XDb sankyu.. :bow:

just kissing huh? > w > i want moarrr XD nyahahaha

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #12 on: December 28, 2012, 03:22:08 AM »
yey!! anothe chapter.. of course we need kisses :D *perv imagination* yeah.. kisses

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #13 on: December 28, 2012, 03:33:45 AM »
DO IT~!! :bow: :drool: :luvluv1:

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #14 on: December 28, 2012, 02:00:14 PM »
^ tottaly agree! update zoon! XD

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #15 on: May 25, 2013, 05:10:18 PM »
It was freaking awsome! pls post the next chapter  :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: I beging u pls! :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:

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« Reply #16 on: June 16, 2013, 06:05:45 PM »
Please updateee TwT :cry: need moar saeyuki.. Dx

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Re: Love wins over Anything (SaeYuki)
« Reply #17 on: June 16, 2013, 09:56:21 PM »
Please updateee TwT :cry: need moar saeyuki.. Dx

I agree with you, Fuu. :yep: :heart:

Please please please please PLEASE~~~~~ :heart: UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!! :bow: :bow: :bow:
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