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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #60 on: April 22, 2013, 05:12:26 PM »
BWAHAHAHAHAHAH xDDDD omg xDDD

This is soo awesome :DDD

And Mayu doesn't want Papa Baka-Sae to make Mama Black-Rin moan xD

Yuko and her pervy mind xD

And Rena xDDD who's the boss in the house? xDDD

Mayu want a lil sis xD I want another kid for SaeYuki xD

Update soon :3 *hugs author-san* ^~^

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #61 on: April 22, 2013, 05:37:20 PM »
NICE UPDATE AS USUAL ADENTOH-SANNNNNN!!!!!! :twothumbs
having a sister or a daughter like Rena is so scary!!! :bow:
but i guess that's what makes it as Baka family

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #62 on: April 22, 2013, 11:20:56 PM »
poor papa baka  :lol:
but this family is so cute
and rena is like a big boss in house..... :shocked:

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #63 on: April 23, 2013, 12:29:17 AM »
awww sae so sweet saying mayu's a little angel :heart: :yep:
rin and sae are sweet but also funny as ever :P
i also wonder why, why do the kids need threats just to wake them up lol :lol: :rofl:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #64 on: April 23, 2013, 06:17:54 PM »
@magicoflove: thanks for reading my story again :cow:

@K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS: the boss in the house are mama Black  :P and Rena get Black character like mama Yuki

@Rena-chan Daisuki: thank you Rena chan (why you appear in comments?)  :O XD next time, you should be careful with Rena chan :panic:

@ptrd3009:  :welcome to BAKA Family story and thanks for your contribution for reading it  :cow:

@mayuki_daisuki: because the kids aren't afraid to their papa  XD

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #65 on: April 23, 2013, 06:28:43 PM »
Me want moar! > w < can you added a lil' kuumin as jurina friend~? I miss her :cry:

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.7 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #66 on: April 23, 2013, 06:56:18 PM »
@fuu_kun: let we see in next chapter  :yep:

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #67 on: April 24, 2013, 03:08:50 PM »
Chapter 8.1
Weekend Time


-at living room-

BAKA Family was watching TV right now. Since tomorrow are weekend, Sae had a plan to take his family to vacation.
“Nee, everyone. Where do you want to go tomorrow?”, ask Sae.
Jurina raise her hand, “Me.. Me..”
“Yes, Jurina?”
“I want to go to Disneyland, papa”, Jurina answer.
“Again? We had going to Disneyland last week, Jurina. Did you not get tired to look everything on Disneyland?”
“She’s never get tired playing all the time in Disneyland”, continued Rena (this time she’s watching TV).
“Aah, you’re right, Rena”, Sae sigh.
“Do you want to go somewhere for weekend, Mayu chan?”
“Hmm, not really. I just want to play with Alpaca-man”, Mayu answer (she’s watching TV but Alpaca-man never get off from her)
“Alpaca-man!”, Sae facepalm – Rin rubbed Sae shoulders and try to calm her husband. “What about you, Yuko?”, ask Sae.
“I want to spend my weekend with Haruna, papa baka”, Yuko answer (she’s busy with mobile phone – texting Haruna).
“And you Rena? There’s a place that you wanted to go?”
“Beach.. I want to go to beach”

“Beach? Sounds interesting. How do you think, honey?”, Sae ask his wife.
“I think it's fine if we going to beach, right kids?”, ask Rin to kids.
“I love beach!!”, Jurina jump. “Yeah, it's fine, mama”, Mayu replies.
“But how about my date with Haruna?”, Yuko sad.
“You can asked her to going to beach too, Yuko”, Sae explain.
“Aah, that’s right!! If I asked her to going to beach too, that’s mean I can see Haruna with sexy bikini”, Yuko starting delusion.
Sae starring Yuko, ‘Then I can see my beautiful wife with sexy bikini too’, Sae thought - Silence.
“Honey..”, Rin shake Sae arms. “Are you okay?”
“Aa.. I’m okay, honey”, Sae smile.
“He started to thinking about sexy bikini too, mom”, Rena talking.
“What do you mean, Rena chan?”, ask Sae.
“You want me to explain what you’re thinking right now, papa?”
“Aah, don’t! Please, don’t!”,
Sae winked to Rena.
“What are you thinking, honey?”, ask Rin with serious look.
“N-Nothing, honey. I’m just thinking about you”
“Really?”,
Rin move her face close to Sae face.
“Yeahh..”, Sae smile.

-on the morning- (next day)

“We will go to beach.. We will go to beach..”, Jurina shouted and jump.
“Jurina, morning. Are you done with packing?”, ask Rin.
“Morning, mama Yuki. I’m done, mama”, jump to Rin and hugged her. “Mmm.. Mama Yuki smell was so nice, its a different with papa Sae smell”, Jurina praise her mom.
“Haha.. Jurina..”, Rin laugh.
Mayu out from room with holding Alpaca-man and a backpack.
“Morning, honey”, greeting Rin.
“Morning, mama Yuki”, Mayu replies
Yuko out from room with messy hair.
“Morning, mama”
“Morning, Yuko. Trim your hair first. You are messy”
“Okay, mom”

“Morning, mama”
“Morning, Rena”
“Mama, where’s papa?”
“He’s outside, Jurina. Was checking a car”
“I’m out”,
Jurina shouted.
“Wait Jurina!! Can you tell to your papa to get a breakfast first? And you too”
“Okay, mom..”


Sae was checking a car engine....
“Morning, papa baka”, Jurina greetings.
“Ah, morning, Jurina”, Sae replies
“Papa, mama told me you have to breakfast first before we’re going”, Jurina was looking a car engine too.
“Alright, told to your mama, I’ll be there for 5 minutes”
“Okay..”,
Jurina come inside.

Meanwhile in the kitchen....
Rin: “Here, your bread, Mayu chan. Here, for Yuko. And here, for Rena”
Kids: “Thank you, mom”
Jurina: (came from outside) “Mama, papa said he’ll be here for 5 minutes”
Rin: “Okay, thank you, Jurina. Here, your bread and your milk”
Kids: (eat their breakfast)
Sae: (came in to the kitchen)
Rin: “Are you done checking, honey?”
Sae: “Yeah, I’m done. And now I’m so hungry” (laugh)
Rin: “Here, your bread and your coffee”
Sae: “Thank you”
Everyone: (silence)
Sae: “So, Yuko. Did you invite Haruna to the beach?”
Yuko: “Of course, papa”
Sae: “What’s she said?”
Yuko: “She said, she loves too. And she will going out with Takamina. But can we take her and Takamina back home?”
Sae: “Of course we can, Yuko” (smile)
Yuko: “Hooray!! Thank you, papa baka” (jump from seat – go to Sae seat – hugged her papa)
Sae: “Woahh, that’s first time she hugged me, honey” (laugh – talk to Rin)
Rin: “Thank goodness, your kids didn’t hates you” (laugh)
Sae: “Yeah” (laugh)
After breakfast, they’re go to beach....

-on the street-

BAKA Family was listening Ponytail to Shushu, all of family was singing along.

PONIITEERU (yurashinagara) kaze no naka
Kimi ga hashiru (boku ga hashiru) suna no ue
PONIITEERU (yurashinagara) furimuita
Kimi no egao (boku no) natsu ga hajimaru


“Mama Yuki voice its so soft”, Jurina praise her mom.
“Thank you, Jurina”, thanked Rin.
“Jurina, mama Yuki voice its not only soft but also .....”, talk Sae.
“Sexy, right?”, Mayu continued – Sae looked at Mayu from mirror – then turn left to his wife.
“Yeah, you’re right, Mayu chan”, Sae replied nervous – Rin was blushing.
“Aaa... Look at that!! A beach!!”, Jurina shouted.
“Calm down, Jurina. You too excited, do you?”
“Yes, I am, papa. I wanna play in the beach.. I wanna play in the beach..”,
Jurina jumped in car seat.
“Alright, we’re almost there”
Sae looked at Yuko from mirror..
“She was sleeping 5 minutes ago”, Rena talk.
“Aah.. That’s why she didn’t talk to much”, Sae replied.

-at the parked area-

“A beach!!!”, Jurina shouted and jumped from a car and ran – Mayu and Yuko ran also – Rena just taking walk.
“Jurina, don’t ran!! You too Mayu, Yuko!!”, Sae shouted. “That kid!!”
“It’s okay, honey. I will accompany them”, Rin talk.
“Thank you, honey. I will come later when I’m done with this thing”
“Okay, see you.. Muachh..”,
Rin kissed Sae lips – Sae smile when saw his family was happy.

-on the beach-

Jurina: “Mayu chan, Yuko chan, over here!!” (shouted)
Mayu, Yuko: (ran towards Jurina)
Jurina: “Hurry up!!” (shouted)
Rin: “Jurina, Mayu chan, Yuko chan, wait!!” (run)
Rena: (walking with relaxed)
Rin: “Don’t throw away your clothes carelessly!!” (talk to Jurina, Mayu chan and Yuko)
Jurina, Mayu, Yuko: (play together on the beach – swimming – and splash)
Sae: (come over – sit beside Rin) “That kids!!” (laugh)
Rin: "They're so happy" (smile)
Jurina: “Papa, throw that ball, please” (shouted)
Sae: “Alright, here we go!!” (throw the ball)
Rin: “You’re not going to, Rena?”
Rena: “Later, mom”
Sae: “Are you okay, Rena?”
Rena: “I’m fine, papa”

Meanwhile..
Haruna, Takamina: “Good morning, uncle, auntie, Rena chan” (greetings)
Rin: “Ah, good morning Haruna chan, Minami chan” (smile)
Rena: “Morning too Haruna, Takamina”
Sae: “Good morning. How long you’ve been here?”
Takamina: “We just arrived a few minutes ago, uncle”
Sae: “Oh, I see..”
Haruna: “I’m sorry, auntie. Where’s Yuko?”
Rin: “She’s over there with Mayu and Jurina” (pointing Yuko) “You can go there, Haruna chan”
Haruna: “Yeah, thank you auntie” (ran towards Yuko) “Yuuchan...” (shouted)
Yuko: “Aaaaa... Nyan-nyan!!!” (ran towards Haruna – and hugged) “I miss you so much, Nyan-nyan. Let’s play together!”
Haruna: “Yes!”
Jurina: “Aah, Haruna nee-chan. Come here!!” (pulled Haruna hands)
Haruna: “Morning, Mayu chan”
Mayu: “Morning, Haruna nee-chan”
Yuko: "You look so sexy today, Nyan-nyan" (hugged Haruna from back - squeezing Haruna boobs)
Haruna: "Yuuchan, don't! They'll see us"
Yuko: "It's okay, Nyan-nyan"

-on coast side-

Rena: Takamina, you want to walk for a while?
Takamina: “S-Sure..” (blushing)
Sae: “Be careful, Rena chan”
Rena: “Yeah..”
Walking for 3 meters..
Takamina: (silence)
Rena: “Do you have breakfast today?”
Takamina: “I-I don’t, Rena chan”
Rena: “So.. Do you want get some breakfast over there?” (pointing small cafe near at the beach)
Takamina: “S-Sure. But my allowance it’s not enough, I think” (check her wallett – sad)
Rena: “It’s okay! I covered you”
Takamina: “Really?” (happy)
Rena: “Yeah” (holding Takamina hand)

-on another coast side-

Sae: (cough – close to Rin – hugged his wife waist)
Rin: “What’s wrong, honey?”
Sae: “Just the two of us now”
Rin: “Then?” (smile)
Sae: “Then, can I kiss you, honey?”
Rin: “But, the kids?”
Sae: “Don’t worry about them. Look! They’re was happy” (Sae touch Rin thigh – kiss Rin lips gently)
Rin: “Hmm.. Hmm.. Muacchh.. (stop it the kiss) Honey.. We’re in public”
Sae: “It’s okay, honey. We just kissing. Muacchh..” (Sae hand move to the top – squeezing Rin bust)
Rin: “Honey.. Hmm.. Hmm.. Honey.. It’s too much”

Suddenly....
Akimoto: “Yo, Sae-man!!”
Sae, Rin: (shocked – stop kissing) “Akimoto??”
Akimoto: “Yes, I am” (laugh)
Sae: “What are you doing here?”
Akimoto: “What do you mean, huh? I’m here because I want to spend my weekend with my girlfriend”
Sae: “Your girlfriend? Umeda-san?”
Akimoto: “That’s right, Sae-man!” (laugh) “Aah, Yukirin. Morning! Sorry for interrupt”
Rin: “Morning, Akimoto-san” (smile – blushing)
Umeda: “Morning, Miyazawa san” (smile – holding Akimoto hand)
Sae: “Morning, Umeda-san. Honey, she’s Umeda Ayaka, a secretary from Hakama’s construction ...”
Akimoto: “.... and Akimoto girlfriend” (laugh)
Rin: “Nice to meet you, Umeda-san” (smile – greeting)
Umeda: “Nice to meet you too ...” (confused – don’t know how to call Yukirin)
Rin: “Yuki, Miyazawa Yuki” (smile)
Akimoto: “Then, what are you doing here? Making love in public? Hahaha..”
Umeda: “Dear..”
Akimoto: (laugh)
Jurina: (shouted from far) “Uncle gorilla!!”
Akimoto: “What??” (turn around) “Aah, that kids!! (shouted to Jurina – wave his hand) “Yeah, Jurina!”
Sae: “Finally, she can meet you, Akimoto” (laugh)
Akimoto: “Yeah..”
Jurina: “Uncle gorilla, I miss you!” (hugged Akimoto)
Akimoto: “Me too, bad girl. What are you doing, huh?”
Jurina: “I’m playing with Mayu and Yuko nee-chan, uncle gori. C’mon!!” (pulled Akimoto hand)
Akimoto: “W-Wait, Jurina!” (look at Umeda)
Umeda: “It’s okay, dear. Go ahead!!” (smile)
Jurina: “Mayu chan, Yuko nee-chan, see who came with me!!” (shouted)
Yuko: “Uncle gorilla!!” (shouted – hugged Akimoto)
Akimoto: “Oh God, Yuko! You’re heavy. Morning, Mayu chan” (give me five to Mayu)
Mayu: (replied Akimoto HI-touch)
Yuko: “Uncle Gori, she’s my girlfriend, Haruna” (introducing Haruna to Akimoto)
Haruna: “Morning, uncle...”
Jurina: “Gorilla, Haruna nee-chan” (laugh)
Akimoto: “Yeah, you can call me uncle gorilla, Haruna chan” (smile)
Jurina: “Let’s play, uncle gori”
Akimoto: “Yeah..”

“He looks so happy with that kids, right Umeda-san?”, asked Sae.
“Yes, Miyazawa-san”, Umeda replied.
“C'mon, just call me Sae. Don’t be too formal if we’re in out of office”, assertived Sae. “So, what do you think about Akimoto, Umeda-san?"
“Huh? Akimoto-san? He’s good, responsible, funny, and he can treat a women as they should be”, Umeda replied – blushing.
“That’s why you loved him, right?”, asked Rin.
“Y-Yes..”
“Then, when?”,
asked Sae – laugh.
“Honey..”, Rin shake her husband arms.
“I’m sorry? What do you mean?”, confused.
“I asked, when you will married with Akimoto?”
“I-I don’t know, Sae-san. Akimoto-san never talk about married or something to me”, Umeda blushing.
“But did he ever introduce you to his parents?”, asked Rin.
“Yeah, once. Akimoto-san invite me to his parents house, and next we had dinner together at night”, Umeda explain.
“So, what his parents reaction?”, asked Rin again.
“His mother so friendly, and I had come to help his mother to prepare dinner too”
“That’s a great!! We just waiting the time, right Umeda-san?”
“Y-Yes..”

“If he love you and serious with you, he will propose you, Umeda-san.”
“Y-Yes..”,
Umeda blushing.
“I know who is that Gorilla”, Sae chuckle.

                                               


Note:
Miyazawa Sae and Akimoto Sayaka: be transgender here
Miyazawa Yuki: Miyazawa's wife.
Umeda Ayaka: Akimoto's girlfriend.
Miyazawa Rena, Miyazawa Yuko, Miyazawa Mayu and Miyazawa Jurina: Daughter of Miyazawa.
Kojima Haruna, Takahashi Minami: Rena and Yuko's friends.

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #68 on: April 24, 2013, 04:19:05 PM »
uncle Gori.... :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
i really love your fanfic.... :heart: :heart: :heart:
rena x takamina....hhhmmm interesting....

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #69 on: April 24, 2013, 04:28:18 PM »
@sopiyah:  :welcome to BAKA Family story and thank you for reading  :bow: :cow:

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #70 on: April 24, 2013, 04:33:51 PM »
Unusual pair: Rena and Takamina...  :lol:
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« Reply #71 on: April 24, 2013, 04:38:29 PM »
@DC2805: that's a req from @sakura_drop_  :cow: she want me to pairing Rena x Takamina XD

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« Reply #72 on: April 24, 2013, 04:44:26 PM »
THANK YOU!!!  :bow: :bow: :deco: :deco: :inlove: :inlove:

I'm waiting for their further development!!!  :wub: :wub:

This family is  :doh: and at the same time  :rofl: and also  :nervous

Ah, UmeYaka  :deco:

I'll be waitin for moar~
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« Reply #73 on: April 24, 2013, 05:05:37 PM »
This family is  :doh: and at the same time  :rofl: and also  :nervous
Be tough, please   :grin:

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« Reply #74 on: April 24, 2013, 10:10:36 PM »
yay the beach!! :cathappy:
awww of course sae your kids love you hontonii baka XD
mayu-chan so cute!! :heart: :yep:
sae and rin hot as usual :P
takamna and rena interesting match :deco:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.1 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #75 on: April 25, 2013, 05:15:11 AM »
ohhh rena x takamina :O

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« Reply #76 on: April 25, 2013, 06:37:39 AM »
Sayaka and Umechan.... its the first time I heard the pair....

anyway, great chapter  :thumbsup :thumbsup
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« Reply #77 on: April 26, 2013, 11:04:06 AM »
Chapter 8.2

11.15 am, Rena and Takamina end to cafe....
“Here..”, Rena pulled the chair for Takamina seat.
“Thank you”, Takamina talk.
“Let’s see the menu. What you want to eat, Takamina?”, asked Rena.
“Aa.. I want this bread, Rena chan”, Takamina answer.
“Alright, and your drink?”
“Hm.. Just cold water”

‘She’s very kind to me’, Takamina thought – looked at Rena and smile.

Rena call the waitress...
“Can I take your order, miss?”, waitress asked.
“Yes, I want two honey toast cream and two cold water”, Rena ordered.
“Two honey toast cream and two cold water, okay. I will bring your order in few minutes, miss”, waitress gone.
(Silence for a minute)

Quote
Koko de! AI RABU YUU!
OOBAA AKUSHON de AI SHITE RU!
Terenaide!
Dore kurai honki ka
Misetsukero!
Koko de! AI RABU YUU!
Aun no kokyuu de AI SHITE RU!
Shinjitsu wa
Matomari kiranai
AISHITERABURU!

‘Oh, crap! This song was really hit me’, thought Rena. ‘Ai rabu yuu! Ai shite ru! Aah, I can’t!!’
“Rena chan! Rena chan!”, Takamina wave her hand to Rena.
“Aa.. What’s wrong, Takamina?”
“Are you okay?”,
Takamina worried.
“What do you mean? Of course, I’m okay”, Rena smile (it’s a weird for looking Rena smile)
“You sure? You just quite for a minute. And you didn’t react when I waving to you”, Takamina explain.
“Oh, am I?”, Rena asked.
“Yeah..”

Waitress is coming..
“I’m sorry for waiting! Here’s your order, miss”, give the order.
“Thank you”, Rena replied – and pay the food to waitress. “Go ahead, Takamina”
“Y-Yes..”, “Mm.. It’s so sweet and delicious, right Rena chan?”
“Yeah, it’s so sweet”


Takamina and Rena eat their food, and no one talking about love. After finished with breakfast, they go back to Rena parents.
“Thank for the food, Rena chan”
“Yeah, you’re welcome” – silence. “Takamina, do you want to accompany me today?”
“Accompany you?”, asked Takamina.
“Yeah, play together with me? Or maybe just walking like this?”, Rena answer.
Takamina was blushing – silence – and happy.
“Takamina?”
“Huh? Yeah, I love too, Rena chan” – laugh.
“So, let’s go!”, Rena hold Takamina hands again.
“Humm..” – smile – nervous.

Note:
Rena are cool one from Baka Family. She looks like indifferent to the surrounding but in reality she’s very concerned with the people that she loved, included Takamina. Rena fall in love with Takamina when Yuko take Haruna and Takamina to her house (don’t asked me how – ’cuz I don’t know). Unexpected, Takamina has same feeling with Rena. But unfortunetly, they’re both keep silent until now (’cuz Rena or Takamina never told it).

Yuko: “Oi, Takamina, come here!” (shouted)
Takamina: “Yes!!” (run towards Yuko – then fall b’cuz slip)
Rena: “Takamina!!” (hold Takamina hand – but she’s fall too) “Are you okay?”
Takamina: “Y-Yes, I’m okay” (blushing) “But your clothes are wet because of me, Rena chan”
Rena: “Don’t worry! It’s nothing!!” (smile)
Yuko: (come close to Rena) “What are you doing, huh?” (whisper)
Rena: “What? I’m not doing anything, Yuko chan”
Yuko: “Are you sure?” (tease Rena)
Rena: “Yeah!!”
Yuko: “But you holds Takamina hand for long time, Rena chan” (laugh)
Rena, Takamina: (let go of their hands – blushing)
Yuko: “Hahaha.. And finally, the rock become weak” (leaving Rena) “Do it now, or you will runs out of time, Rena. I know who are you, my sister. Hahaha..”
Rena: “Forget about her! She’s just lose her mind when together with Haruna”
Takamina: (nodded)
Rena: “Takamina..”
Takamina: “Yes?”
Rena: “Can we sit over there?”
Takamina: “Sure”

They reach the coast…
‘I should going say to her now, or I will lose my time’, Rena thought.
Rena: “Takamina, I’m sorry! I know, I know it’s wrong, a totally wrong! But, I won’t lie anymore”
Takamina: “Hmm??”
Rena: “It’s happen when Yuko take you and Haruna to our home, and she introduce me to you”
Takamina: “Yes??”
Rena: (nervous) “I-I feel comfort just right beside you. When you want to give me your bento at that time, I love too. But, your bento was eaten by Haruna and Yuko, right?” (weird laugh)
Takamina: “Yeah, you’re right. And then?”
Rena: “Then.. I would be happier if you want to be my lady, Takamina” (holding Takamina hand)
Takamina: (speechless  – can’t breathe)
Rena: “Takamina, are you okay?”
Takamina: “Y-Yes, I’m okay”
Rena: “I’m so sorry, Takamina” (face down). “I know it’s wrong. I just want to tell you how I feel”
Takamina: “No, you don’t need to apologize, Rena chan. I-I just a shocked”
Rena: “You don’t need to answer soon”
Takamina: “It’s okay, Rena. I love your personality, your expression, your family, and of course I love you too” (smile)
Rena: “So…?”
Takamina: “So, I don’t mind to be your lady”
Rena: “Really?”
Takamina: “Yeah..” (nodded)
Rena: “Okay, let’s join with Yuko and others” (happy smile)
Finally, the rock become weak. Rena and Takamina are dating now (sorry for monotone).

12.03 pm, Akimoto, the kids, and the parents.
“Alright, kids. It’s lunch time. You should get off from water”, Sae shouted.
“Did you hear that? Your dad call us. So, hurry up!”, Akimoto hugged Jurina at back.
Akimoto and the kids reach the coast. Mayu was confused when she look someone that she didn’t know together with her parents.
“Who are you, auntie?”, asked Mayu – stare Umeda.
“She’s your auntie, Mayu chan”, Rin replied.
“My auntie?”, Mayu confused.
“Yep, she’s your auntie, little cyborg”, Akimoto continued.
“But, I never meet her before, uncle gori”
“She will be your auntie from today, Mayu chan”, Akimoto chuckled.
“Aah, uncle gori girlfriend, right?”, ask Yuko – laugh.
“Yeah, I was your uncle girlfriend”, Umeda answer kindly – laugh.
“What’s your name, auntie?”, Jurina asked.
“My name is Umeda Ayaka, but all of you can called me with auntie Ume. Nice to meet you, Jurina”, greetings Umeda.
“Nice to meet you too, auntie Ume”
“And she is my girlfriend, auntie Ume”, Yuko pulled Haruna hand.
“Nice to meet you, Haruna chan”
“Nice to meet you too, auntie Ume”,
Haruna smile.
“Alright, it’s enough. And now we’re going to lunch. You can go out with us, Akimoto”, invited Sae.
“Sure, why not. Hahaha..”, Akimoto replied.
“But, first. Where is Rena chan and Takamina?”
“They were there, papa”,
Yuko pointing. “Oi, Rena, Takamina!! Hurry up! We were going to lunch”, Yuko shouted.
“Alright!!”, Rena shouted – holding Takamina hand.
“Since my car can’t hold a lot of people, I think some kids will be going with uncle gori. Do you mind, Akimoto?”, asked Sae.
“Oh, sure not. Who wants to come with me?”
“Me.. Me.. (Jurina raise her hand), and we’re too (Yuko raise her hand too)”

“Alright, Jurina, Yuko and Haruna will going with uncle gori. Mayu, Rena and Takamina will going with us”
“So, let’s go!! What are you waiting for, kids?”,
Akimoto talk with passion.

12.45 pm, they’re arrive to Mac Donald.
“I’m so hungry!!”, yelling Jurina and Yuko.
“I and Akimoto will take your order. And just sit here, Okay?”
“I want a burger! (Jurina order), I want two chicken rice and soda (Yuko/Haruna order), I want a burger with chicken fillet and orange juice (Mayu order), I want two chicken rice and orange juice (Rena/Takamina order)”
“And what do you want, honey?”, Sae and Akimoto asked.
“Just same as your order”, Rin and Umeda replied.

While Sae and Akimoto take all orders to cashier, Jurina meet her baka friend.
Kanon: “Kuumin, do you recognize that voice?” (talk while eat her burger – going to around with Kuumin’s family)
Kuumin: “Which one, non?” (eat a burger)
Kanon: “That one!! With Yelling voice”
Kuumin: (turn back) “That was… Jurina?”, “Oi, Jurina!” (yelling)
Jurina: “Woo, someone called my name. Who is that?” (move aside)
Kanon: “Oi, Jurina!! Over here!” (yelling)
Kuumin’s Parents: “Don’t yelling in here, Kuumin, Kanon”
Kuumin: “I’m sorry, mom” (face down)
Jurina: “Kuumin and Kanon!!” (shouted – face with wide smile)
Mayu: “Don’t yelling, Jurina! We are in public restaurant not in the house”
Jurina: “Mama Yuki, can I go there?”
Rin: “Sure! But don’t take a long, okay?”
Jurina: “Okay” (move to Kuumin and Kanon), “Kuumin, Kanon, what are you doing here? Aa.. Good afternoon, auntie, uncle” (greeting to Kuumin’s parents)
Kuumin’s Parents: “Good afternoon, Jurina”
Kuumin: “Mom, can I go there with Jurina and Kanon?”
Kuumin’s Parents: “What will you're doing?”
Kuumin: “We have a meeting, mom”
Kuumin's Parents: “A meeting? You? Alright, but don’t take so long!”

Kuumin, Kanon and Jurina move to slide arena (it’s really was exist in Mac Donald as for kids land).
“What are you doing here, Jurina?”, asked Kanon.
“I was from the beach with my family and uncle gori”, Jurina answer.
“Uncle gori? Who is that?”, Kuumin asked.
“That he is! (pointing Akimoto) That ossan name are Akimoto”, Jurina whisper.
“The one with your dad, Jurina?”
“Yeah, Kanon”
“He’s really big, Jurina. He’s creepy!”,
Kanon scare.
“Don’t worry!! He’s not creepy at all, Kanon. He’s a gorilla who like to laugh. He always make me laugh. He’s funny!”, Jurina explain.
“Are you sure?”, Kuumin asked.
“Of course, Kuumin! Today, he came with his girlfriend, auntie Ume. Over there!” (pointing Umeda).
“Wow, she’s so beautiful, Jurina”, Kuumin loves a beautiful girl.
“Yeah, I know. But my mom more beautiful than auntie Ume”, Jurina praise her mom.
“Yeah, I can see it. Can I touch your mom’s hand?”, Kuumin in her dreamland.
“You can’t, baka!”, Jurina smack Kuumin’s head.
“It’s hurt!! Why I can’t touch your mom’s hand?”, Kuumin complain.
“B’cuz she is with my dad right now. You want to see my dad become a monster, huh?”
“Your dad can transform to be a monster, Jurina?”,
asked Kanon confused.
“Of course, Kanon! Even he looks like an idiot, but he can transform to be Hulk”, Jurina whisper.
“Hulk?”
“Who did you say idiot, huh?”,
Sae pinched Jurina’s cheeks.
“Aaa.. It’s hurt, papa!”, Jurina moaning in the pain.
“I’m sorry kids, but the meeting was over. We want to eat our lunch and you can back to your table”, Sae smile to Kanon and Kuumin.
“I will see you tomorrow in the school”, Jurina yelling.
“Yeah..”, Kuumin replied.
“Her cheeks was really stretch”, Kanon realize.

Jurina: “It’s hurt, papa!” (touch her cheecks)
Sae: “That’s your punishment, Jurina”
Rin: “What’s wrong, honey? Why you pinched Jurina check?” (confused)
Sae: “Your kids!! She call me an idiot!”
Yuko: “Hahaha… She’s right, papa baka” (laugh)
Rin: “Yuko..”
Sae: (stare Yuko) “Here’s your meal. And don’t call me an idiot anymore, Jurina”
Jurina: “Yes!!” (eat her meal)
Umeda: (confused)
Akimoto: “It’s okay, honey. They’re getting used like that, everytime” (laugh)
Umeda: “Everytime?”
Mayu: “So so, auntie Ume” (eat her meal), “That’s why our family being called as Baka family”
Sae: “You’re noisy, Mayu chan. Just eat your meal” (sulked)
Rin: “Honey..”
Sae: “Oh yeah, Akimoto. Can you take Mayu and Jurina go home?”
Akimoto: “Huh?”
Sae: “I should return Haruna and Takamina first. And my car won’t fit with 9 people”
Akimoto: “Oh, okay!!”

3.20 pm, Baka family back home, on the street..
Sae looking Rena from head mirror, “You looks so happy, Rena. Anything happen?”
“Huh?”, Rena replied.
“Haha.. The rock become weak, papa”, Yuko continue.
“The rock become weak? What do you mean, Yuko”, asked Sae.
“Yuko chan!”, Rena talk.
“Okay, okay. Chill out, Rena sama”, Yuko chuckled.
“Oi, Yuko. What do you mean with that words?”, Sae asked again.
“Honey..”, Rin holds Sae arms – shake her head (it’s mean, don’t).

Sae arrive to Haruna’s house. And Takamina’s house isn’t far from Haruna’s house.
“Thank you for today”, Haruna and Takamina out of the car.
“I will texting you when I arrive, okay?”, Yuko told Haruna. “Aah, Rena chan too, Takamina”
“Yuko!!”, Rena talk – Takamina blushing.
“Bye-bye..”

On the street, way to home..
“So, that makes you happier today, Rena?”, asked Sae.
“Huh? What are you talking about?”
“Takamina! Is she make you happier today, right?”
“Hh.. That’s.. That’s not true!”,
Rena deny.
“You sure? You even smile when Yuko said that you will texting Takamina when we arrive”, Sae laugh.
“So so, papa. That’s why I told you ‘The rock become weak’ before”, Yuko laugh.
“And what happen, Rena?”, asked Rin.
“Aaa…”, Rena anxious.
“Rena chan and Takamina has dating today, mom”, Yuko frankly.
“Shut up!!”, Rena smack Yuko head.
“Hahaha.. That’s my kids!!”, Sae laugh.
“What are you laughing, huh?”, Rena sulked.
“Then, thank goodness that Takamina have our Rena”, Rin laugh.
“Mou!! You too, mom”

4.10 pm, Sae has arrive to house, and Akimoto was waiting..
Sae: “Sorry for waiting, Akimoto”
Akimoto: “It’s okay!”
Sae: “Where’s the kids?”
Akimoto: “They were sleep and still in the car”
Sae: (move to Akimoto’s car – see his kids) “They’re so lovely, right?”
Akimoto: “Yeah, even in sleep”
Sae: “So, when?”
Akimoto: (shocked) “Huh?”
Sae: “When you will gave me a nephew?” (laugh)
Akimoto: “That’s.. I don’t know, Sae-man”
Sae: “Listen to me, Akimoto! If you’re really serious with Umeda san, you should propose her. She told me that you have invite her to your parents house. And you know what is that means, right?”
Akimoto: (listening) “Yeah..”
Sae: “So, can you help me to bring Jurina come inside? I would bring Mayu”
Akimoto: “Okay!”

On living room,
Umeda: “Thanks for today, Yuki san”
Rin: “You don’t need to thank to me, Umeda san. We’re a family” (smile)
Umeda: (saw Akimoto hugged Jurina)
Rin: “He will be a good father”
Umeda: “Huh?”
Rin: “Akimoto san will be a good father for your children, Umeda san”
Umeda: “Ah, Yuki san. You make me shy” (blushing)
Rin: “I hope he will propose you soon. And we’re become a big family” (laugh)
Umeda: “Yeah..”
Yuko: “Aah, I’m so tired! I wanna sleep now” (pass by)
Rin: “You can go to sleep, Yuko. But take a shower before, okay?”
Yuko: “Okay!!”

In the bedroom, Rena lying in her bed..
Quote
To: Takamina
Sub: –
What are you doing now? I’ve been arrived. Thanks for today, Takamina. It’s enjoyable!

From: Takamina
Sub: Re –
Thank goodness, you’re arrive in safe. I had just finished showering. Thanks to you too, ‘cuz I found someone special today, hehe.. XD! You should take a shower soon, Rena. And don’t forget to dinner”

“Today is a wonderful day, right Kami sama?”, Rena smile – go to bathroom.

                                           
If you don’t like the pairing (Rena x Takamina), just quite!! Don’t leave a comment!  XD
« Last Edit: April 26, 2013, 01:19:38 PM by adentoh »

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #78 on: April 26, 2013, 11:16:27 AM »
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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
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