Comments and Feedback for That Dream
It is a very interesting way of putting the two pieces together as their views reflect their thoughts as a battle
because you see i am not a very good writer so i kinda approach the fiction in 2 perspectives of the characters to give the story :nervous
anyway, hope you like it. :)
because you see i am not a very good writer so i kinda approach the fiction in 2 perspectives of the characters to give the story :nervous
anyway, hope you like it. :)
I do like it that way, it is not the best in writing but understanding it is not hard :)
well that was .. WOW !! !! you are such a very good writer !! whoah !! write more ! this is so interesting !
because you see i am not a very good writer so i kinda approach the fiction in 2 perspectives of the characters to give the story :nervous
anyway, hope you like it. :)
I do like it that way, it is not the best in writing but understanding it is not hard :)
thanks... that's quite an encouraging comment for me.
as what i fear most... is what i have written is beyond comprehension :nervous
i really have a bad shadow when comes to writing... :cry:
thanks for your comments :)
well that was .. WOW !! !! you are such a very good writer !! whoah !! write more ! this is so interesting !
really :lol:
i'm glad to hear that :P
i'll write when i have the idea again.... please look forward :lol:
and thanks once again for not breaking my heart in your newest update in the devil's kiss... i love you maikeatoot :ptam-kiss:
yay !! mahal din kita <3 ! hehe that's a filipino word means i love you too ! yay ! update ! update ! go yellow ! how about daishi and riho.
yay !! mahal din kita <3 ! hehe that's a filipino word means i love you too ! yay ! update ! update ! go yellow ! how about daishi and riho.
to be frank, i really can't bring myself to have evil thoughts on these kids... please forgive me for that for now :nervous
but i will try if i ever find a good setting to write about them... please look forward...
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Comments and Feedback for Messy Relationships
the three way perspective was interesting
Kame's pov :rofl:
"That self proclaimed Ichiban Kawaii naccissitic bunny love me" :rofl:
I love the three pov but i like more Kame's that line.. it's just priceless!! :thumbsup
thanks for giving this fun pov! :grin:
@kuro:
isn't it funny... i intended to make it funny... i think i have failed :huhuh
@cmze:
really... i'm glad you like it :cathappy: i will insert more kuso in future if i have it again :thumbsup
"That self proclaimed Ichiban Kawaii naccissitic bunny love me" <--- isn't this the obvious fact XD
one more thing i want to tell you is.... your commenting or reviewing skill is getting better nowadays :thumbsup i really appreciate and like reading them :peace: please give me more in future :deco: you know yellow love comments :heart:
Okay i'll try better next time!! :peace:
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