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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 13/03
« Reply #140 on: March 14, 2012, 10:49:51 AM »
Yay Atsumina~
The Sasshi/Rabutan moment is so cute

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 13/03
« Reply #141 on: March 16, 2012, 03:33:03 AM »
Haha here comes the atsumina :)

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 13/03
« Reply #142 on: March 16, 2012, 04:01:20 AM »
Yay! AtsuMina~ I've been waiting for this! :yep: Hope AtsuMina's Relationship will Develope Soon! :thumbsup
Btw, Update Soon! :bow:
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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 13/03
« Reply #143 on: March 16, 2012, 06:16:30 AM »
Waaa!   

 :heart: :heart:ATSUMINAA :heart: :heart: will see each other soon!
Can't wait!
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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 13/03
« Reply #144 on: March 16, 2012, 11:36:05 AM »
Oh~ Finally reading it now :oops:
Atsumina has now finally entered!!!!!!! XD
No! Acchan! You can't fall in love with Yuki!!!!
Yuki, Acchan's not your mask girl!! It's Mayu!!!
LOL.. what a great first meeting Acchan and Takamina.. and nice nicknames.. :lol: Pervert and Psycho...
Hope they get along well~

Thanks for the Update! :thumbsup
Please Update Soon! :mon cute:
Love this fic ever more than before~ :D

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 13/03
« Reply #145 on: March 17, 2012, 09:31:39 AM »
yuki with acchan is just so...not right...i cant even imagine them  :grin:

yes you better with midget afterall!!!  :twothumbs

and i want the mayuki back  :cry:

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 13/03
« Reply #146 on: March 17, 2012, 10:22:54 AM »
Yayayay! Atsumina moment with nice "fist meet" ! Pervert Takamina !? Lol xD

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 28/03
« Reply #147 on: March 28, 2012, 01:34:49 PM »
                                  REMEBER ME 
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Wow it seems like new people like my Fic...That's nice! :D

Hello there.. it seems like someone didn't have a good time last night! Yuko says laughing 
"my butt hurts" Takamina says while wakes up 
why are you sleeping on my sofa? Nyan Nyan asks while drinks hee coffee 
because some bitch called Acchan doesn't want to give me my room back! Takamina says while gets up 
some bitch huh? well you loose the bet so that not my fault! Acchan says while comes downstairs
that wasn't fair! Takamina says pointing Acchan 
life is not fair honey! Acchan says smiling 
help me out! Takamina says 
okay ..i'm not going to get in this problem so i should better go to work! Nyan Nyan says while gets up and grabs her purse then gives a goodbye kiss to Yuko and left 
i love that girl! Yuko says smiling 
help me over here! Takamina says while points to Acchan who is eating her breakfast like a princess 
oh no that's all yours!  "Have fun!" Yuko says while gets up 
Takamina lookee at Acchan and then sighed 
~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<>>>>>~~~~~<<<<<<>>>>~~~~
I can't believe you're actually working! Sae says looking at Yuki who was focused on her papers 
well i someday i had to! Yuki replies 
how's everything with Acchan? Sae asks 
"normal.." A not excited Yuki replies 
"normal.. not hot, not great,or anything better than normal?!" Sae asks 
well is just..i wanted her to be someone else! Yuki says while puts down her papers and sighs 
like? Sae asks
i don't know!Yuki replies through her window 
don't tell me that this crisis has to do with some underage girl that used to work here? Sae says 
no,of course not,look i know that everything between us is over! Yuki says 
okay i get it! Sae says 
you know what i need i walk! Yuki says then gets up 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~
Finally over! Mayu says happy and stretching 
let's go Mayu chan! Lovetan says happy 
hey you have to tell me everything about Paris..how was it? Mayu asks while walks with Lovetan 
was great! Lovetan says happy 
really i want to go there someday! Mayu says 
it wasn't because of the city..it was because..
----Flashback----
I told you Sasshi i only love you and not french guy can't change that..
what? Stop acting like a baby Sasshihara Rino.. 
What do you want to fight? okay miss so don't call me till you grow up! Lovetan shouts mad and throws her phone to bed 
knock! knock!
What?! Lovetan shouts mad 
Room service! 
i didn't ask for one! Lovetan says 
"You need to open the door here's a deliver to Oota Aika and i can't keep it!"
i don't care! Lovetan shouts 
i could get fire for that! The other person says 
gosh okay! Lovetan says and opens the door
*HELLO* the person says happy with a Big teddy bear and chocolates 
"Sasshi!" Lovetan says impress
i missed you so much! Sasshi says and kisses Lovetan all over her face 
are you crazy? Lovetan asks 
why? Sasshi asks 
you make me sad,mad and then happy with your smile "i hate you!" Lovetan says hugging Sasshi 
that's love! Sasshi says smiling 
*A pinch on Sasshi's butt* 
ouuucchhh..what was that for? Sasshi asks 
for making me sad and not telling me that ypu were coming i look so bad in pjs! Lovetan says 
you look perfect! Sasshi says and kisses Lovetan passionately 
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wow that was so cute she went to France to get you..that's so romantic! Mayu says happy 
yes,my pervert can be so cute! Lovetan says smiling
Mayu stops walking and looks around 
uhh i'm sorry Mayu chan,i shouldn't be telling you about that! Lovetan says 
it's okay..don't worry it's just that i like this park! Mayu says smiling 
awww this is the place! Lovetan says 
hey watch out,I can't stop! Someone shouts on her bike..
ouuucchhh! Mayu says 
what a way to stop! Lovetan says looking at the ackward situation..
A girl was on top of Mayu..*Both were blushing* 
i'm so sorry! the girl says and helps Mayu to get up 
people around were looking but then kept doing what they were doing 
i'm sorry! The girl says 
it's fine! Mayu answers 
not is not..Mayu's knee is bleeding! Lovetan says 
Mayu..i'm Jurina,Nice to neet you! The girl says smiling and offering her hand 
nice to meet you! Mayu says 
Mayu chan are you okay? Someone else asks while walks closer 
"Yuki chan!" Mayu says and let go Jurina's hand 
exactly what we need!" Lovetan says Looking at Yuki 
do you want me to take you to an hospital? Yuki asks
i'm fine don't worry! Mayu answers 
Yuki looked at the three girls "you know i should go i got to much work to do! 
i never said that i wanted you to go! Mayu thought 
~~~~~~~~~~~At Mayu's Home!~~~~~~~~~~~~
(phone ringing) (M) Mayu,(J) Jurina
hello...(M) 
it's me Jurina 
hi how are you? (M)
fine..is just that i want to ask you something..(J) 
yes,what is it? (M) 
i was wondering if you wanted to come with me to a boring event that i have tonight..is just that i'm new here so i don't have many numbers on my phone! (J) 
mmm i don't know..i'm kinda busy here..(M)
ohhh okay don't worry it's fine..(J) 
hey wait up..maybe it's not a bad a idea pick me up at 8:00 (M) 
thank you Mayu chan without you i was going to die of boringness! (J) 
don't worry! (M) 
~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Takamina don't bother me! Acchan says 
where are you going? Takamina asks 
to a party Yuki invited me! Acchan says while looks for a perfect dress
who's Yuki? Takamina asks 
someone smarter,cuter,better than you for sure! Acchan says 
you can marry her if you want and give me back my room! Takamina says 
you're such baby pervert! Acchan says while puts make up on her face..
(door bell ringing) 
that must be Yuki! Acchan says
you're not even ready! Takamina says smiling 
go and distract her! Acchan says and pushes Takamina out of the room and downstairs 
ouuuuchhhh..Yes,Acchan i'm okay even though you tried to kill me! Takamina shouts 
(doorbell rings again)
i'm coming! A mad Takamina shouts and opens the door..
hey! Yuki says 
so you must be the so perfect Yuki!" Takamina says 
perfect Yuki? what are you talking about? Yuki asked 
nothing things for short people! Takamina said 
weird! Yuki murmured 
so where you guys are going? Takamjna asked 
my best friend's birthday! Yuki answers 
convinient! Takamina murmued 
hello! Acchan says while walks downstairs 
Takamina looked back and murmured "gosh the bitch is hot!" 
hope this midget didn't bother you,she's kinda annoying! Acchan says smirking 
let's go! Yuki says 
(At the party)
Jurina look at you,you're so big! Sae says while pinches Jurina's cheek 
it doesn't change the fact that if i see you flirting with someone i will tell my cousing Sayaka! Jurina replies while brushes her cheek 
hey..i'm totally loyal to the couse! Sae replies 
Jurina smiles..
so where's your date? Sae asks 
she went to the bathroom! Jurina replies 
she? Sae repeats
it's not what you think..she's just a friend! Jurina says 
everyone starts saying friend! Sae says
seriously! Jurina says 
okay now if yoh excuse me i gotta welcome my best friend who comes with her date! Sae says..
Yuki chan and Acchan! Sae says 
hey Happy birthday! Yuki and Acchan says 
so finally meet you Sae chan! Acchan says smirking 
my pleasure! Sae says and kisses Acchan's hand 
okay stop Romeo! Yuki says 
now i can't have fun! Sae says 
why? Yuki asks 
Sayaka's cousin is here watching me! Sae says 
really wow she's smart! Yuki says 
you have fun for me would you! Sae says 
i got that cover! Acchan says and winks to Yuki 
see you i gotta drink! Sae says and goes to the bar 
poor her! Yuki says 
-After 30 min everyone starts dancing Yuki and Mayu haven't notice that they are in the same party..-
let's go dancing Yuki! Acchan says and pulls Yuki with her..
c'mon Mayu chan! Jurina says and pulls Mayu with her..
The dj stop the song.."I want you to dance with a stranger..yes take the one who's behind and dance with him or her..i want to see you turn around!" 
everyone do what they been told..for Yuki's bad luck Mayu was dancing behind her all this time..
"Mayu!" Yuki says 
"Yuki!" Mayu says 
DANCE! DANCE! DANCE! the dj shouts and everyone starts dancing and pushing them closer without notice..The song was " 2pm-Tik Tok remix!" 
Yuki extended her hand "do you wanna dance?"she asked and just like spell,just by looking those eyes Mayu answered "yes!" 
they danced so close that Yuki was singing parts of the song on Mayu's ear...
We greet each other awkwardly in front of people
But when we turn away, I'm the one who knows you best

I can hear more loudly in my ear
what you say with your gaze, that's right
Your desire for me, your thirst
We go crazy for each other like this

*That I love you secretly
That you're really my girl
Drive me so crazy every day
I just want you, you this way

Come here tik tok tik tok tik tok
When I see you tik tok tik tok tik tok
All day tik tok tik tok tik tok
My heart tik tok tik tok tik tok*

Sae,Acchan and Jurina looked at Mayu and Yuki who were so close like if they were going to kiss ..Acchan stopped dancing and run away..(Yuki didn't notice) 
Yuki and Mayu were about to kiss but Mayu back out at the last second and run away 
Yuki went after her while Jurina stood there frozen..
~~~~~~~~~~~<At Takamina's home~~~~~~~~~~~~
<after 30 min>
who needs a beatiful pshyco! Takamina thought 
am i just thought beatiful? Takamina said loud 
Let go! someone shouts from outside 
Takamina looked through her windown and saw Acchan forcing with a man 
Takamina went down as fast as she could.she opened the door.."hey you asshole let her go!
Takamina!"Acchan says 
don't you get in this pay my money bitch! The man said and pushed Acchan 
hey!" Takamina pushed the man but the man got up and punched Takamina on her face..
Takamina!" Acchan shouted and then pull out all the money that was on her purse and took off a necklace that Yuki gave her "Here this must be enough go away!" Acchan said 
this is not much..i'll be back and remember Atsuko i'm everything you have,i'm the only one who care about you! The man said and then left 
Acchan took Takamina inside the house and putted her on the sofa "You midget why you got in this?" she murmured and putted her hand on Takamina's cheek..
"Because i care.." a hurt Takamina whispered Looking Acchan in the eyes 
"I'm sorry Minami!" Acchan said in tears...

sorry for taking too long..i didn't know which fic i should update..so got confuse! would you help me out this time? please tell me which fic do you want to update next

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 28/03
« Reply #148 on: March 28, 2012, 03:15:21 PM »
Who's that man? So rude ,how dare he do that to Takamina, aghh... Acchan should do something to help her poor midget (maybe give her a kiss !? XD)

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 28/03
« Reply #149 on: March 29, 2012, 06:40:28 AM »
Oh~ Jurina has now come in also~ Seems like she likes Mayu but Mayu like Yuki.. I'm sure someone else will appear for you! :thumbup
Acchan.. you might be sad now but it's better for you to see the things earlier that there is 'someone' else in Yuki's heart already and no one can replace it.
But don't worry! You have someone who care for you also! And I don't mean that man who said he's the only one that cared for you which I don't think so...
The one that I said is Takamina!!! :)
But who's that guy that dares to hit Taka?! :angry:
Seems like Acchan owes him money?? :?
But I'm sure Taka will do something about it!!
And somehow I feel like Acchan will start to get attracted to Takamina~~ :D (Hope it's true)

Thanks for the hard work! :kneelbow:
Please Update Soon~~ :mon cute:

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 28/03
« Reply #150 on: March 29, 2012, 01:08:05 PM »

Sae,Acchan and Jurina looked at Mayu and Yuki who were so close like if they were going to kiss ..Acchan stopped dancing and run away..(Yuki didn't notice)
Yuki and Mayu were about to kiss but Mayu back out at the last second and run away


Everyone is running away~

RUN YUKI!! RUN!!

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 28/03
« Reply #151 on: May 24, 2012, 01:36:26 AM »
                                  REMEBER ME 
                              29.What the Feelings? :S

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Aachan felt tickles on her forhead and slowly opened her eyes.She couldn't believe what she was seeing "She was sleeping on Takamina!" 
when did this happen? she thought while sits not moving very much to not wake Takamina up
Omg! then she noticed Takamina's black eye 
"that was my fault.." Acchan murmured and then slowly removed a string of hair that was on Takamina's face
"In the end you not look so bad!" Acchan murmured while looks at Takamina who seems to be sleeping like a baby 
<Acchan was hypnotized looking at Takamina> ^^that she didn't heard the door opening...
i can't believe it,how could they call you! Yuko shouts mad while enters to the dept with Nyan Nyan 
ahhh! Acchan shouts in surprise and jumps out of the sofa but she didn't relised that she pulled Takamina with her...( so when Yuko and Nyan Nyan entered they found Takamina on Acchan ON THE FLOOR FACE 2 FACE) 
i knew you guys were going to get along soon! Yuko shouts happy 
Takamina was blushing like crazy and so was Acchan
Nyan Nyan was with her mouth open 
get off me pervert! Acchan shouts and pushes Takamina away 
what? I'm not a pervert! Takamina shouts while gets up
Kiss! kiss! kiss! Yuko shouts happy with a camera
Aaaaaaahhh! she shouts after a second Nyan Nyan was pinching her on her cheek "Stop being a perv Yuko!" Nyan Nyan said with a sigh 
sorry let me go! Yuko says complaining and trying to remove Nyan Nyan's hand off her cheek 
"Stupid Yuko.." Acchan murmures then gets up and goes to her room 
Takamina saw her walking away .."how did we end up like this?"  she wondered
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
working with hangover it's not fun! Sae says while sits on the couch on Yuki's office 
don't tell me! Yuki says while signs some papers on her desk 
hey mmm i shouldn't ask this but what you did last night wasn't fun..have you talked to Acchan? Sae asks while reads a magazine that she pulled out from her pocket 
"no.." Yuki replied softly
why?! You were the one who made her mad! Sae says 
she doesn't pick up! Yuki answers looking other way
why you don't leave this and go apologized with her for being such a jerk! Sae says while walks to Yuki's deksk and take all the papers and put them on Akicha's desk 
she's going to kill you! Yuki says with her hand on her forhead
hello? someone says while enters to Yuki's office 
hi! what are you doing here? you shouldn't fallow me all the time i'm not doing anything! Sae says nervous
ahh i swear i didn't know you were here? Jurina answers
am i missing something? Yuki asks looking at the 2
stay away from Mayu! Jurina says serious 
whaaaat? Sae shouts 
Yuki got up from her desk in shock "How dare you?" she shouts and walks closer to Jurina 
hey,she's just a kid! Sae says nervous in the middle of them
Yuki walked away..
what's wrong with you? Sae asks 
Mayu is hurt for that girl actions! Jurina says while looks Yuki walking away
how can she? stupid kid! Yuki says while walks to her car
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Hey wait up! Yuki shouts and jumps to Mayu to catch her 
both end up on the floor
Yuki was on top and grabbing Mayu's hand to not let her 
"look at me!" Yuki says while Mayu was with her eyes closed 
hey talk to me! Yuki says
what is it what you want? Mayu shouts mad 
wha-what? Yuki asks
first you tell me that maybe someday we can be and now this Who can deal with you? Mayu shouts mad and moving side to side 
Yuki sighed "sorry!" she said softly and let Mayu go..
(End of the flashback)
what am i doing? Yuki wondered while drives
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(Yuko and Nyan went on a date)
Takamina was making food while Acchan was watching tv but looking at her when Takamina didn't notice..
Acchan was feeling ackward she wanted to talk Takamina but she was afraid of being rejected by her 
Acchan!" Takamina shouted 
what? Acchan reacted and got up fast 
would.. you..please.. help.. me..out? Takamina asked nervous 
"yes!" Acchan answered nervous then walked to the kitchen
so what are we doing? Acchan asked looking other way
cooking! Takamina says laughing 
Acchan smirked still looking other way 
would you try this? Takamina asks with the spoon on her hand and smiling 
Acchan openned her mouth
"be careful is hot!" Takamina said 
Acchan and Takakina blow it and then Acchan try it..
it's delicious! Acchan said with a smile 
thanks! Takamina says blushing 
Takamina!" Acchan says serious looking at her 
what?? Takamina asks worried 
i'm sorry..this is my fault! Acchan says sad and puts her hand on Takamina's cheek 
Takamina's heart was beating fast even Acchan herad her heart beating 
wow that's fast! Acchan thought then smirked while Takamina was all nervous standing there
<door bell ringing> 
i'll go get that! Acchan said and fast went to open the door
"ok!" Takamina replied nervous and turned around she putted her hand on her cheek "what was that!" she wondered
<Acchan opens the door>
"hi!" Yuki says looking other way 
Acchan sighed and simply said "hi!" 
can we talk? Yuki asked trying to get in 
is there a problem? Takamina asked appearing behind Acchan
who are you? Yuki asks rising an eyebrow
nobody..Takamina go away! Acchan says 
Takamina looked other way and went upstairs 
(Acchan let Yuki in)
i'm sorry..i really am! Yuki says sad 
(Takamina was looking from upstairs) 
Acchan looked other way 
please let me make it up to you! Yuki says and hold Acchan's hand 
"i'll make things right...!" Yuki whispers and then hugs Acchan
Takamina looked other way then got up and went to her room 
Takamina lays on her bed (or Acchan's bed) she smells Acchan's pillow 
what do you see in her? why do i care? why am i thinking about her?  Takamina wondered then closed her eyes
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Acchan is your turn as the masked girl! a friend says
okay i'll go! Acchan says and puts the mask on 
Acchan dances and everyone was staring her they want to touch her but she didn't let them to 
why Yuko would send me here? Takamina thought while watches the girl dancing..
one guy grab her hand and start pulling her(he was drunk..)
hey let her go! Takamina shouts and punch him on his face he let go the masked girl but still wanted to punch Takamina but he end up hitting another guy..so everyone starts punching everyone..
"Takamina!" the masked girl whispers and takes Takamina and pull her up and take her to a save place!
are you okay? where's my..? Takamina asks trying to catch her breath and looking through her pocket 
you're asthmatic! The masked girl says while watch out and sees Takamina's inhaler on the floor..
don't!" Takamina replies still trying to breathe 
the masked girl puts her thumb on Takamina's lips "don't worry,i'll be fine!" she said and crawls to get the inhaler 
Takamina takes her foot and don't let her go..
i need to get it,you have done so many things for me already! The masked girl replies and a tear come out 
"stay!" Takamina says looking at her 
i'm sorry Takamina! The masked girl says and turned around and takes off her mask 
"Acchan!" Takamina says breathing faster 
easy! easy! Acchan replies and then sees how one the guys that were fighting step on the inhaler 
nooo! Acchan says 
(Takmina smirked)
it's not a moment to laugh Takamina! Acchan replies mad
Acchan sees Takamina trying to breathe
easy easy i'm here! Acchan says and hugged Takamina..

TO BE CONTINUED! 

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 23/05
« Reply #152 on: May 24, 2012, 06:13:29 AM »
maybe  a mouth yto mouth can help to takamina breath :D,,, yeah!! you updated thanx

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 23/05
« Reply #153 on: May 24, 2012, 06:29:16 AM »
Haruko: i thought that too but it was too soon! don't you think? :P

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 23/05
« Reply #154 on: May 24, 2012, 09:52:48 AM »
Acchan and Takamina they already fall for one another I think,
just that they haven't realize it yet~!! :grin:
I'm a bit worried about Taka since the thing is stepped which means it can't be used..
But I seems to see a nice suggestion up there~ XD

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 23/05
« Reply #155 on: May 24, 2012, 10:22:46 AM »
Atsumina moments are so cute~
Somehow Yukirin pisses me off lol

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 23/05
« Reply #156 on: May 24, 2012, 06:05:43 PM »
 im waiting for this!! :w00t: :w00t:
Atsumina is the best!!  :wub: :wub: :wub:

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 30/05 <END>
« Reply #157 on: May 31, 2012, 02:01:36 AM »
                                  REMEBER ME 
                            30.Falling for you..NEVER! 
                                         

Why i wanted to..she looked so..i need to stop thinking about it is never going to happen,She's not my type! Acchan thoughy laying on he bed 
"Acchan!" Yuko says smiling like a man who has done sometjing perfect
"what?" Acchan asked irritated 
Takamina's ex grilfriend id coming! Yuko says grinning 
mm what?,,why?! Acchan asksed looked other way 
well she's been really worried about her! Yuko replies
when she's coming? Acchan asked like she was not interested at all 
today..for dinner! Yuko replies happy while opens the dpor and leaving an angry Acchan 
"After what happened last night i thought.." Acchan whispered and throwed herself on bed 
(FLASHBACK)
Let's get out of here! Takamina says while gets up 
are you sure you're ok? Acchan asks 
yeah let's go besides the fight already stopped! Takamina says laughing rubbing her head 
Acchan takes Takamina's hand 
huh? Takamina blushed
well if you feel like you can walk anymore squeeze my hand and we'll stop! Acchan says looking other way and pulling Takamina with her 
"Acchan.." Takamina says 
"hmmm.." Acchan replies 
why you work there? i mean..is just that you're way better than that! Takamima said looking other way 
i don't know..i'm just trying to walk away! Acchan replied sad
<They kept walking in an ackward silence>
Wow What a beutiful night! Takamina said stopping and looking to the stars in the sky..
Acchan stopped walking and also looked up "you're right!" she said and then looked at Takamina with a sweet look because she looked like a 10 years old kid staring at the stars 
Acchan smirked and sitted on the ground.."you can sit if you want!" 
yes! Takamina said with a smile and sitted next to Acchan
i'm cold! Acchan whispered while warms herself
Takamina hugged Acchan but she kept looking to the sky 
Acchan closed her eyes and layed her head next to Takamina's
(END OF THE FLASHBACK)
Mocchi what are you doing here? Takamina asks 
i came to see you! Mocchi says while kisses Takamina's cheeks
ohh right! Takamina says while keeps her distance
<doorbell ringing>
don't bother is for me! Acchan says while opens the door 
 Takamina crossed her arms "not her again!" 
Hi! Yuki says to everyone 
Yuki san! Yuko says happy while sees her watch
you little..that's my..just forget it! Yuki says with a sigh
Dinner is ready! Kijipa says happy 
Takamina was looking to Yuki who seem to be the perfect girl "good looking,charming...TALL" 
do i have a chance? Takamina murmured then looked othe way sad 
Acchan was carefully looking Takamina without she notices
Mocchi smiled to Takamina and Takamina smiled ackwardly
what am i doing? am i jealous? Acchan thought 
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So is here..maybe i should take it,i mean that masked girl is good to Yuki! Mayu thought while sees an envelope 
<Flashback. (at Yuko's bar)
who's that? Mayu asked 
your replacement! Yuko answered 
what? Mayu asked 
well everyone likes the masked girl so you told me that you don't mind! Yuko says grinning
"but.." Mayu murmured 
Yuki also is getting used to her! Yuko said 
does she like her? Mayu asked 
mmm i don't know..Maybe but not as muches as the original i think! Yuko says
<End of the flashback> 
she's getting use to her..i guess it's cool, we been through so much that might be better to cool off..Mayu thought while looks through her window
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Takamina turn off the music! Acchan shouts knocking the door like crazy
(Yiko and Nyan Nyan weren't at home)
no!" Takamina replies and turns it up more 
i'm going to kill you! Acchaj shouts 
what are you waiting for? Takamina shouts 
Acchan tried to open the door but it was useless she was only hurting herself
Takamina opened the door and shouted "WHY YOU DON'T GO TO LIVE WITH YOUR GOOD LOOKING AND TALL YUKI?" 
that's of your businness! Acchan shouted back 
yeah she's so perfect and so charming! Takamina says imitating Yuki 
ohh you stupid midget! Acchan says and jumps on Takamina
get off me! Takamina shouted 
take that back! Acchan shouted 
no!" Takmina shouted 
take it back! Acchan shouted 
you only like perfect things! Takamina shouted looking other way sad 
"YOU STUPID MIDGET IF I ONLY LIKE PERFECT THING I WOULDN'T LOVE YOU!" Acchan shouted but when she relized what she said she blushed "i didn't..i just....(Takamina kisses Acchan on her lips)
Acchan didn't resist And kissed Takamina deeply 
they stopped the kiss for the lack of air..
i knew it! Takamina says happy and hugs Acchan who sighed "i guess you just catched me!" 
so you don't like Yuki! Takamina says still hugging Acchan
no,i don't! Acchan replied then kissed Takamina on her forhead
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Lovetan stop we're on a public place! Sasshi says while tries to avoid Lovetan to hug her 
what's the matter?,you're my girlfriend! Lovetan says pouting   and pulling Sasshi's arm 
well i don't want to go to jail! Sasshi says 
whatever! Lovetan says while looks for something 
what are you looking for? Sasshi asks
a present! Lovetan says with a smile 
for who? Sasshi asks with her jealousdar Activated 
easy is for Mayu chan! Lovetan replies 
it's not her birthday! Sasshi says 
well she's humm how am i say this..well she moving! Lovetan says trying to not cry 
aahh what? where? Sasshi asks 
to America! Lovetan says sad 
when she's leaving? Sasshi asks 
today in the afternoon so let's find the perfect present for these 4 years of friendship! don't you think? Lovetan says between sad and happy 
yes,let's find it! Sasshi says
                       *After 2 hours At Yuki's office* 
Hello! Sae says while sits 
hi! Yuki says focusing on her computer 
you seem fine! Sae says while looks at Yuki 
what do you mean? Yuki asks
don't you know the big news? Sae asks 
Sasshi went to jail? Yuki asks 
hahhaha it's not somthing that simple! Sae says smirking 
then what's it? Yuki asks
Mayu is moving! Sae says 
good for her! Yuki says typing on her computer 
to America! Sae says 
Yuki gets up of her seat "what?"
what you heard! Sae says smirking 
Yuki took her jacket and run away 
hope you go after her! Sae whispered 
Yuki got on her car and drove fast to Mayu's house..
Nobody was in the house she got on the car and drove to the airport she was desparate the thought of losing Mayu like that was killing her..
How she can do this to me? leaving me like this without a word not even asking me! Yuki shouted and parked her car..
Yuki got off the car and run fast.. the more closer she gets her hurts more..
Yuki looked side to side to find the person that she loves the most in the world.."Mayu!" she said and touched a girl on her shoulder..
do i know you? the girl asked 
the more desperate she gets more tears wants to show..
sorry..my bad! Yuki said and run away 
Yuki couldn't control it anymore.."the pain,the tears"
"Mayu!" Yuki shouted crying..then she looked up and notice why she can't find her love..
"FLY TO AMERICA TOOK OFF" 
(Yuki knelt and cried like never before) 
Yuki.."  A voice from behind said 
Yuki looked back with her red eyes for so much crying 
what are you doing here? Yuki asked sad
seeing you! The girl says
Yuki smirked and said "i deserve this anyways.." while gets up
what do you mean? the girl asked 
it's not you..i don't want you.." Yuki muttered to herself 
what? The girl asked 
is only one person.."The umbrella girl.." Yuki said 
The girl blinked a few times 
now i lose her..She's not coming back..Go away masked girl i'm not for you! Yuki muttered and more tears showed up 
you love the umbrella girl! The masked girl said and took off her mask 
Yuki's eyes widened.."Mayu.." she murmured 
what's this?didn't you go to America? Yuki reacted 
Acchan was someone that Yuko hired to replace me..or this! Mayu said looking the mask 
do you work there? Yuki asked 
no,it was an accident..i just wanted you to like me but once we were together i never wore it agian! Mayu answers 
so Acchan wasn't you! Yuki murmured
i couldn't leave..my heart hurts just by the thought of not see you again but i had to be sure that you love me as i love you since the first time we met at that park 5 years ago..i just wanted you to remember me..! Mayu says 
I remember you..two tails girl! Yuki says pouting to not cry
Yuki! Mayu says and jumps on Yuki 
i love you! Yuki says between kisses 
i love you too! Mayu replies smiling betweem kisses 
let's get out of here! Yuki says 
where? Mayu asks 
Anywhere! Yuki says 
Brazil? Mayu smiled 
Brazil then it is! Yuki shouts smiling...

<END> 
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Offline Maria-chan

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 30/05 <END>
« Reply #158 on: May 31, 2012, 03:41:48 AM »
YAY Happy ending  :luvluv2:
haha they are going to Brazil
Thank you for the great story
Hope there will be more in the future  :kneelbow: :thumbsup

Offline Yagami.Rai

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Re: REMEMBER ME..! <Mayuki><Atsumina> 30/05 <END>
« Reply #159 on: May 31, 2012, 09:48:19 AM »
Congratz for finishing the fic~ ^^
Glad too see that Mayu didn't really went to America, leaving Yuki alone..
Hope they won't leave each other again and stay happy~
Also am happy for the Atsumina couple~~ :D

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