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Title: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore 3/19
Post by: kRisZ on December 29, 2009, 05:10:08 PM
This is an attempt to have a normal short fanfic  :)  English is not my native language, so expect the unexpected  :D  I’d like to say Please be Gentle but hmmm, Bring it on  XD  I wrote this only this afternoon while munching my lunch so yeah... it’s not that good but yeah. Yoroshiku Onegaishimasu.  :kneelbow:



Dedicated to the Crack Club of YTTC, A.K.A. Teh Ca-mel Le’Mac Club  :lol:  Damn  XD  In case you’re wondering, they are The Awesome Writers, The Avid Readers, The Awesome Commenting Audiences, and The Lurkers. Bow.



Written for LuvAngelz A.K.A alwaysYou, it wasn’t easy finding your SN but it wasn’t hard either  :P






WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID



“Where am I?” Ai murmured after her eyes adjusted to the bright morning light that seeps through a window. Massaging her aching head a little due to a bad hangover, “This isn’t my room” she continued while her eyes wandered around the room until they met a brown eyed woman with beaming smile.

“Who the hell are you!?” she yelped.

“Morning to you too” the woman in question replied with a smirk.

Surprised, Ai got up only to sink back onto the bed, took the sheets and wrapped it around her exposed body.

“This is so not happening”

“It already did sweetie” came the giggly reply of the woman who is comfortably laying sideways on bed, one hand supporting hear head, facing the alarmed Ai

With a humph, Ai stormed out of the room in a huff and into the bathroom she goes, after picking her sprawled clothes across the floor up. After putting her clothes on in a record breaking time, she got out of the bathroom, headed to the door, opened it and slammed it close without even giving a look at the naked girl on bed.

She shouldn’t have done it but vivid memories came flashing when she was inside the bathroom. From the moment she entered into the bar, (she was there to relax and to take a break after her tiring and long day, unpacking things, she just moved in this town yesterday) to ordering her drinks, to settling alone in a far corner table, away from everyone, to her approaching me... though that part was kind of a vague memory, blame it on the alcohol that ran my veins at that moment. And in the morning there she was naked with that naked stranger on one bed, smirking like nothing had happened. WTF

She spotted her car at the car park, pressed the remote key, got in and drove away. When she turned a corner to exit the car park, while driving above the permissible speed, she abruptly stepped on the brake pedal and skidded a little when the woman with her annoying smile stood up at the center of the road.

“WTF, DO YOU HAVE A DEATH WISH!?!” shouted Ai, obviously exasperated.

“No, I don’t. Can you at least give me a ride back to the bar? We left my car there last night.” Risa smiled as innocent as possible

“WE?!?” Ai incredulously said “STEP ASIDE!” she continued in a loud voice while stepping onto the clutch and gas pedal at the same time, producing a disturbing noise that early in the morning.

“Alright, alright, relax.” The car speed up and lost in her line of vision with just a matter of seconds after taking a couple of side steps. “Okay, that didn’t work. Start walking Risa or you’ll be late and end up dead.”


~~~

Ai was still fuming when she reached and parked her car inside her garage. But she couldn’t help but blush at the same time when she came to think and wonder what they had done together with that stupid girl. She quickly brushed aside the thoughts and headed to the shower.

~~~


 “NIIGAKI! You’re late!”

“I’m so sorry Nakazawa Senpai, my car broke down again” came Risa’s alibi

“Don’t you find it strange that your car breaks down every Monday morning?”

“I’m really sorry Ma’am, this won’t happen again” she said while frantically bowing her head

“You better be or I’ll be reassigning you or I’ll be firing you next time, take your pick”

“Hai, gomen nasai” she replied while still bowing low.

“Suimasen. Nakazawa Senpai, the Director’s on the phone” said Risa’s partner. Their boss nodded but didn’t leave without giving Risa a deadly glare.

When their boss was within earshot free range, Risa’s partner bombarded her with questions. “Where have you been anyway? Got lucky again? Who’s the lucky girl this time?” Risa answered with just a smirk and headed toward her table.

“Oh come on, spill it out already” whine her partner while closely following her.

“You could say that” Risa started when she reached her table and butt on her chair. “But she left me on foot, I didn’t even get her name.” she continued, pouting.

“Served you right for being such a player” came her partner’s goofy reply.


They are cops and Eri’s her partner and childhood friend at the same time. They’ve been working there for two years now. And since the town is calm and quite and has a very low crime rate, they are care free most of the time except when there are occasional domestic disturbance that needs tending, other than that the town is mostly calm and peaceful.

After their duty, patrolling and with side goofing around each other here and there, they changed to their casual clothes and went to their usual place and had dinner together and head home afterward, separately. That’s their weekday schedule.


The moment Risa arrived at her place she can’t help but notice the single light that illuminates the house across from hers. “I didn’t know that house is now occupied.” She shrugged it off and entered into her two story house. It’s a bit big for her who lives alone since her parents live at the next town tending their family business. Her parents bought it for her when she graduated as a present though her parents greatly opposed her decision on becoming a cop but gave her a present nonetheless and made sure she feels cozy and comfortable.

The interior of the house is simple yet elegant, no signs that a cop's living there. After passing the Genkan area and entering into a sliding door, a small but comfy couch welcomes anyone who enters the haven. You can see a small kitchen on the right side with a four-seater dining table adjacent to it. While on the left side is the audio-video room. All three bedrooms are located above.

She climbed up the stairs, entered into her bedroom. After putting all her things into a drawer, she opened another drawer and looked for something. “Ha! There you are!” she said smiling when she grabbed a hold of a telescope. She attached it to the tripod and tried to find a perfect place. After finding the perfect angle, she took a peek but that’s when the light of her neighbor turned off. “Oh well, tomorrow then”.



 :)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^
Post by: alwaysYou on December 29, 2009, 05:19:22 PM
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Written for LuvAngelz A.K.A alwaysYou, it wasn’t easy finding your SN but it wasn’t hard either
ahhhhhhh.. :lol:


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And in the morning there she was naked with that naked stranger on one bed, smirking like nothing had happened. WTF
come on aichan..it's ok since the stranger is gakisan.. :D
and gakisan.. :twothumbs

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“Don’t you find it strange that your car breaks down every Monday morning?”
i laugh at this..LOL..
so gakisan is "busy" every sun night.. :lol:


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“Ha! There you are!” she said smiling when she grabbed a hold of a telescope. She attached it to the tripod and tried to find a perfect place. After finding the perfect angle, she took a peek but that’s when the light of her neighbor turned off.
AICHAN?!
if it so, good luck gakisan.!
 
takagaki is just  :wub: :heart: :wub: :heart: :wub: :heart:
update more!!!XD

*goes back and be a lurker*
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^
Post by: kuro808 on December 29, 2009, 08:32:13 PM
somehow someway this is too bizarre  :rofl:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^
Post by: kawaii beam on December 29, 2009, 09:16:11 PM
ah~ so risa's the player now? XD great~! and i gots a feeling that the new neighbor is lovely aswell X3 keep it up ne~?
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^
Post by: Treykun on December 29, 2009, 09:55:15 PM
Risa the player?!?!
Great, that's new lol~~~~

Hey! Now you're on The Awesome Writers team too! :grin:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^
Post by: amEthystx on December 30, 2009, 03:13:39 AM
Ohhhh~ little kRisZ (i guess i'm younger than you...but.... LOL~ it sounds more cute then Big kRisZ<- random babbling)  got a story up!

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“It already did sweetie”

-*SCREAM!* Ai-chan! i already told you Gaki-san is not safe! LOL~ but you did it anyway~ nice way to start the story~ XD but poor Gaki-san have to walk~

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“Don’t you find it strange that your car breaks down every Monday morning?”
- Oh my...........~ scandalous!  :shy1:

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She attached it to the tripod and tried to find a perfect place. After finding the perfect angle, she took a peek
- She should know it's illegal to actually do that if she is a cop... but then again~~~~ nothing is illegal until you get caught.. XD

Oh dear...I wonder what Ai-chan reaction will be when she sees Gaki-san again~ LOL~


Anyway..just to highlight some stuffs~

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to ordering her drinks, to settling alone
- Usually after "to", the next word does not have any tenses to it... so it will be something like "to order her drinks, to settle alone" instead~ :)

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Nakazawa Sensei
- I guess she is a senior or a department head to Risa and Eri? Sensei is translated to mean Teacher or Doctor.. If senior it will be Senpai.. Department head will be Buchou XD


Is there going to be Reina somewhere for Eri? :P

 :mon bat:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 30, 2009, 03:56:05 AM
Oh, man, this is gearing up to be a good one! I'm glad you started this. O0
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^
Post by: kRisZ on December 30, 2009, 01:22:20 PM
@ alwaysYou
Glad to see your comment  :)  and glad to see you’re first  :D

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*goes back and be a lurker*

 :roll:



@kurosawa87
How bizarre, how bizarre? <--- Have you heard of that song?  :D



@kawaii beam
Was my story that predictable?  XD



@Treykun
Yay! I’m promoted  :w00t:  But let’s wait until this fic is over, I don’t want the Avid Readers Category looked so blank  XD



@amEthystx
My second time to hear that ‘little kRisZ’  XD  And yes I’m older than you, but I won't entertain a question regarding my age because I will never give you the privilege of telling me 'you don’t act your age' sooner or later  :P
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Using particles and tenses are one of the things I don’t like that much. If I’ll use to order her drinks, will it not convey a different meaning? Hmmm... *thinks... thinks some more... thinks some more more*  :mon blood:
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Sensei-Senpai ~ Modified  :D thanks. That’s what happens when you enroll for a Japanese language crash course and attends barely half of the entire sessions  XD
~~
There’s Reina somewhere for sure   :)2



@rndmnwierd
Yay!  :gmon sing:



CHAPTER 2 ( kinda short  XD )


For the first time in her two years of stay in this town, she broke her weekday morning jog routine. She’s not at the usual park... jogging and greeting every person that she came across, for business and leisure reasons. That is eyeing suspicious events and eyeing future prospects in one go. But of course her reason leans more toward the latter, it’s her personal time after all... Instead you could find her inside her kitchen preparing some pancakes for breakfast, humming sounds that one who hears it could note that the lady producing it was having a nice morning.

“There, impressive enough” she said in joy, content with her masterpiece.

She took and wore her robe and grabbed her masterpiece. After a minute she’s now at her neighbor’s front door, pressing the doorbell button. Doing the way a good neighbor should do.

The moment the door creaked open  “Hi, my name is Risa” she started with a noticeable excitement in her voice and continued “I live across the street from you, and I brought panc...” her introduction was cut off when she saw the person standing by the door, eyes wide.

The same goes to the person by the door, surprised like the visitor. And the door banged afterward, leaving the jaw-on-the-floor Risa. “What the hell?” She uttered after the loud thud.

“So you live across my house, interesting” and then Risa smirked.

~~~

Risa was up early the next morning, skipping her morning jog for the second time. She headed to the kitchen, made her usual pancakes and just like yesterday, it was for two. She ate her share in a blink and headed to her neighbor’s house with the other half of the food on her hands. She pressed the button and waited a couple of minutes. But the door closed as quickly as it opened.

“Just here to be a friendly neighbor” Risa said a little louder, making sure that the person inside could hear it loud and clear. No one responded. And she left somewhat defeated.

~~~

The whole day had simply flown. Eri prepared to leave and waited for Risa, who was still sitting by her desk.

“Are you coming or what?” Eri asked a little puzzled by her partner’s behavior. “Risa” she said while playfully poking her friend’s shoulders.

“Huh?” after watching her partner’s questioning look, she snapped out from her trance. ”Oh, I think I’ll pass for tonight, I need to get back home early”

“Are you okay?” the turtle asked in a worried voice

“Yeah, just a little tired and I need to do something important at home” she smiled and the turtle looked relieved.

“Are you positive?” asking one last time to make sure.

“Yes, now go on, don’t make the Bunny wait that long” she shooed the Turtle away.

~~~

By the moment she’d reached her room, she swiftly took her telescope out and placed it by the window. Only to make her pulse race and her body throb. The target of her sight was there, gracefully dancing. Turning and swaying seductively. And she was in so much awe when her vision was caught by Ai’s butt swaying, did I mention it looked so inviting? Her revealing outfit showed the sweats that evidently came from her labor and exposing her toned muscles her tiny body have. When her eyes met the dancer’s lips half opened, grasping for air, she couldn’t help but gulp, like a predator eyeing her prey, right there and then, she felt the burning and uncontrollable need to touch her, to hold her tight and to kiss her once more.

Risa suddenly ducked and hid herself when Ai finally stopped and looked her way. After a couple of minutes, she slowly lifted her head and peeked, unfortunately the apple of her eye had long been gone. She sank back onto the floor and sighed “Tomorrow is another day. Risa fight~o”





Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^
Post by: Treykun on December 30, 2009, 02:30:01 PM
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The same goes to the person by the door, surprised like the visitor. And the door banged afterward, leaving the jaw-on-the-floor Risa. “What the hell?” She uttered after the loud thud.
XD Neighbors ~~~

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No one responded. And she left somewhat defeated.
Ai's a jerk in a lot of fics lately... XD

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she felt the burning and uncontrollable need to touch her, to hold her tight and to kiss her once more.
:mon blood:

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There’s Reina somewhere for sure   
:mon determined: Great!! :grin:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 30, 2009, 02:52:02 PM
Sounds to me like Risa's quite smitten with her reluctant conquest. I wonder if Ai will call the cops on her stalker? :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^
Post by: alwaysYou on December 30, 2009, 02:58:36 PM
^it will be funny if the cop who turn up at aichan place is gakisan again..
aichan might kill herself.. XD :lol:

appear and comment..
just for you..XD

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“Hi, my name is Risa” she started with a noticeable excitement in her voice and continued “I live across the street from you,
i never met a neighbour who is SO friendly.. :wub:
gonna move to her area..XD

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“What the hell?” She uttered after the loud thud.
:frustrated:

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“So you live across my house, interesting” and then Risa smirked.
:hehehe:

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“Just here to be a friendly neighbor” Risa said a little louder, making sure that the person inside could hear it loud and clear. No one responded. And she left somewhat defeated.
aichan, you just have to open the door.. :on lol:

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she felt the burning and uncontrollable need to touch her, to hold her tight and to kiss her once more.
go go risa!!i'm supporting you!!! :mon determined:
BUT isnt she a cop!!!it's wrong!!!but since it's gakisan..it's ok.. :wub:

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There’s Reina somewhere for sure
AiReina?XD
give some more challenge to gakisan although now it seem to be quite challenging too.. :lol: :lol:

seem there might be gakikame too right..
and ya, the bunny!

gorokkies, odd number  :smhid XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^
Post by: badsaints on December 30, 2009, 06:23:12 PM
Dedicated to the Crack Club of YTTC, A.K.A. Teh Camel Le’Mac Club  :lol:  Damn  XD  In case you’re wondering, they are The Awesome Writers, The Avid Readers, The Awesome Commenting Audiences, and The Lurkers. Bow.
Yay for you joining the writers' club,
Yay for the new cute story from you joining the writers' club, and
YAY FOR THE NEW CUTE TAKAGAKI story from you joining the writers' club
(we need more cute stories from this cute pairing, people :P)


LOL I like this story already. Can't wait to see the awkward situations the two girls will get themselves involved with XD And do I see KameShige here? :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ Ch.3
Post by: kRisZ on December 31, 2009, 12:03:21 AM
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There’s Reina somewhere for sure   
:mon determined: Great!! :grin:
Yes, great  :twisted:



Sounds to me like Risa's quite smitten with her reluctant conquest. I wonder if Ai will call the cops on her stalker? :lol: :lol:
I wonder too  XD



^it will be funny if the cop who turn up at aichan place is gakisan again..
aichan might kill herself.. XD :lol:
Ne~  XD


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appear and comment..
just for you..
:mon trannie: :mon roll: :mon fyeah:


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AiReina?
give some more challenge to gakisan although now it seem to be quite challenging too..

seem there might be gakikame too right..
and ya, the bunny!

gorokkies, odd number 
Hmmm



Yay for you joining the writers' club,
Yay for the new cute story from you joining the writers' club, and
YAY FOR THE NEW CUTE TAKAGAKI story from you joining the writers' club
(we need more cute stories from this cute pairing, people :P)


LOL I like this story already. Can't wait to see the awkward situations the two girls will get themselves involved with XD And do I see KameShige here? :lol:
Yay Yay Yay   XD

We'll see  :D







CHAPTER 3   ( My last update for the Year, I think :D )



“Rise and shine Risa” with renewed vigor she got up, opened her window, felt and smelled the sweet morning breeze. “Yosh, another new day has come. Time to collect yourself Risa”

She emerged from her bathroom in her tracksuit, grabbed her keys, and put her sneakers on. When outside, she paused in front of her house and did a few minutes stretching while of course taking quick glances towards the silent house in front of her.

With her overly great eyesight, something caught her attention that was glued on the doorbell button. Curious, she moved a little closer, enough to read the note.

I don’t need a friendly neighbor who takes advantage of people when they find fit, so please stop bothering me every morning for goodness sake!

She chuckled after reading the note and headed to the door not to press the button this time but to get her note.

“Sweet!” she smiled a beaming smile and started to jog.


~~~


“Hey Risa-chan where have you been these past few days” a thrilled and excited the girl jogged toward Risa

Risa smiled causing the other girl giggle. “Morning Jun” came her short reply.

“Would you like to join me for coffee after this?” Jun asked

“I’d love to but I already had an appointment, maybe next time” her overly used alibi. “This is my finish line for the day, so see around.” She smiled and patted the girl on her shoulder and turned around.

When she spotted a bench around the corner, she decided to take a break and sank into the backless seat, elbows on her thighs, head hanging low.

“I don’t need a friendly neighb...”

“ ERI!”

“What?”

“Stop sneaking around like that, you’re giving me heart attack!”

“Well I was curious... you’re too engrossed reading something while giggling... couldn’t help but wonder”

“Who the hell doesn’t need a friendly neighbor? Where did that post-it note came from? Someone’s littering again?”

Risa only managed to open her mouth, well who could reply a person who asks several question in one breath.


“Look who showed up!” Saved by a panting girl

“Just taking a few seconds break” Risa replied, smiling to the girl in front of them


Before a conversation could start, Risa looked at her wrist watch “Shall we, Eri?” Risa gave a sideway glance to her partner and stood up “We need to go” she continued, smiling to the newly comer. And the newly comer only nods.

Before heading home they went to a cafeteria and ordered their usual, Caffe Latte.

“See you at the office”

“Yeah, see you”

And they finally headed to their respective homes.


~~~


Ai was on her way home from her morning walk when she spotted her ‘friendly’ neighbor exited from her front yard and went inside her house after. She could only stare from a few meters away, dumbfounded, while shaking her head in disbelief.  When she reached her home, she noticed something by her door, a freshly picked hibiscus. “That girl is such a headache!”


~~~


 “So, how are you? You looked lost yesterday” inquired the turtle when they’re at their lockers changing to their casual clothes.

 “I’m cool”

“What exactly happened yesterday?” she pressed on, trying to squeeze some information about her friend’s peculiar behavior.

“I’ve already sorted things out so there’s nothing to worry about”

“I’m not worried, I’m curious” retorted the turtle.

“I told you I was tired” mumbled Risa

“Alright, tell me when the right time comes... You’re not coming again this time, are you?”

Risa only smiled sheepishly.

“Argh, Fine”


~~~


The sun was setting when a chime echoed inside Ai’s house. She headed to her door, opened it and was about to close it back when her ‘friendly’ neighbor, with pizza box on hand, stick one foot in. Holding hard against the door she heard the lady outside say “I figured you didn’t like pancakes so I brought pizza.” Ai didn’t respond “I was just trying to be friends with you, we’re neighbors after all.”

“Didn’t it occur to you that I don’t want to see your face again?” Ai said in gritted teeth

“Oh come on. And besides the post-it note said I shouldn’t be bothering you every morning, and this is evidently not morning”

“Don’t make me call the police” Ai grunted while pushing Risa’s foot out and locked her door.

“You could’ve been a little gentler, I need both of my feet, gee”

The door swiftly opened and a flying hibiscus landed on her face.

Rubbing her face with one hand and holding the box with another, she headed home totally defeated.


 :D


HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE.

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.3)
Post by: kawaii beam on December 31, 2009, 12:22:24 AM
LOL poor risa XD ai-chan's so stuborn..but so is she XDDD hope u have a great new year~ X3
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.3)
Post by: badsaints on December 31, 2009, 12:34:27 AM
lol Risa should irritate Ai enough to make her call the police :lol: For once, Ai will actually call Risa, even if it's for the wrong reason  XD

Edit: Happy New Year to you too! :D
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.3)
Post by: kuro808 on December 31, 2009, 01:34:26 AM
Happy New Year!

Poor Risa trying to be helpful  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.3)
Post by: amEthystx on December 31, 2009, 03:51:34 AM
LOL~ omg~ you update so fast!

Anyway~ as i read back again~ i realize there is actually nothing wrong with the sentences~ My bad~~~~! XD


LOL~ now we have a suicidal Risa chasing after Ai-chan!  :mon olympic: <- Go Gaki-san go!

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When she reached her home, she noticed something by her door, a freshly picked hibiscus. “That girl is such a headache!”
-Sweet~~~  :wub:

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“I figured you didn’t like pancakes so I brought pizza.”
- LOL.. a bigger version of pancakes?

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The door swiftly opened and a flying hibiscus landed on her face.
- At least Ai-chan didn't let the flower rot outside~  XD

I got a feeling when she calls the cops... definitely it will be Gaki-san that is going to turn up at her doorstep again .. LOL~ I can imaging Ai-chan banging the wall...  :lol:

 :mon bat:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.3)
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 31, 2009, 09:01:30 AM
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“I figured you didn’t like pancakes so I brought pizza.”
:lol: :lol:

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The door swiftly opened and a flying hibiscus landed on her face.

Rubbing her face with one hand and holding the box with another, she headed home totally defeated.
Geez, Ai. You just need to give in already! How can anyone resist that cute face?
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.4~12/31)
Post by: kRisZ on December 31, 2009, 12:19:33 PM
I guess I'm back  :grin:

No comment replies for now... I'm in a hurry  :D




CHAPTER 4


The week went well without a hitch. In short, her ‘friendly’ neighbor obviously backed down and embraced her defeat. Finally she can be in peace and start over again in this quite town. But why does she find herself taking hidden glances whenever her ‘friendly’ neighbor come and go? She shook the idea off, thinking that this set up is for everyone’s sake.


~~~


Please don’t die on me now, Ai looked desperate and her grip was firm, but it didn’t help at all, the breathing was irregular, it was succumbing, until it sighed one last time and died right there and then.

“How am I going to fix this?” Ai loudly exploded

“Need any help?” A car with We serve and Protect wordings on the door stopped.

“Oh, I’ll be very grateful.” Said Ai somewhat relieved.

When the driver got out from the car, Ai could not help but yell. “YOU!?!”

“Yes me, why? Is there a problem?”

“I’d rather wait for another car!”

“Oh, you want to wait until another car passes in this area? Which is approximately in another hour or two, when the sun is setting and the wild animals start partying?”

Ai flinched and that was the cue Risa needed. She tied her hair up, took off her jacket, and rolled up her sleeves. She then proceeded to take Ai’s car keys inside and headed to the rear.

“What do you think you’re doing?”

“Getting your car fix?” when she caught on what Ai was meaning she added “I was about to get your tools and warning device inside the trunk.” When Ai didn’t make a sound she continued her tracks.

“I can see the warning device here but where are the tools?”

“I don’t have any.” came her weak reply. Risa shook her head in disbelief and headed to her car to get the needed tools.

“Where have you been anyway?” questioned the officer while she was eyeing for the tools

“I went to see my doc...”

“OMG, Are you sick?” she anxiously cut off Ai’s sentence and ran towards the girl to check her temperature, which was a very bad move. Because the moment they touched skin to skin, electrifying emotions surged. Both blushed and stiffened at the sudden contact.

Ai being the more composed one in that moment, briskly removed Risa’s hand which was glued at her forehead.

“No, I’m not. Can’t I have a doctor as a friend? Ai said, annoyed.

A bit shaky because of the previous skin contact, Risa retreated and turned her attention to the open hood. After examining the car engine briefly, she randomly poked things here and poked things there.

Can she really fix that through poking?’ Ai said to herself. She was at the side watching the scene, unaware that she became hypnotized by the minute because of the gorgeous woman in front of her, working sincerely at the task on hand.

The sun was still giving its heat, causing Risa to sweat. The sweat from her brows started to roll down on her chubby cheeks, stopping a little at her mole located on her nose, and finally letting go and producing a splat when it collided with the surface. Ai’s resistance from walking over to wipe away the falling sweats took her almost all her willpower.

And to add on to that her resistance with the urge to tuck Risa’s stray hair back was way difficult to handle at that instant. What makes her blood boil more was the brunette’s half opened luscious mouth that looked so charming and so tempting, as if waiting for her touch.

She was snapped back from her reverie when Risa prodded her to start the engine. She instantly obliged and got in the car and sat at the driver’s seat in a hurry, trying to hide her blushing face from the brunette.

When the car didn’t start, Risa moved toward the driver’s seat and stuck her head in. She opened the fuse box and started examining them and Ai was there holding her breath unconsciously.

And then Risa looked her way. That’s when Ai’s heart was in her throat, and she breathed hard. Finally losing her senses, she cupped Risa’s face and brought it closer and kissed her hungrily. Risa was slightly taken aback at first but she kissed Ai back afterward with the same passion Ai was giving her or could be more. They fought battle over dominance but none of them was willing to be at the losing end. Until their lungs were screaming for air, that’s when they parted and looked to each other’s eyes with so must yearn and passion. Risa was about to close their distance again when a car honked, and Ai instantaneously pushed her away.

“Oh, Officer Niigaki-chan, what happened?” came the concerned voice from the other car.

“The car broke down, but nothing we can’t handle Iida-san” Risa waived and smiled to the driver.

“Ah, okay, I’ll go ahead then” then she honked again, signaling her departure.

“Hai, thank you for stopping and checking us up” Risa slightly bowed. And the car left.

When she turned to Ai, Ai was already blushing red. She smiled and Ai looked away. Then she left and she headed to her car. She treaded back after a moment, and Ai could see her goofy smile as she came closer and Ai smiled too.

When Ai’s eyes landed on the thing that she brought back, her eyes immediately opened wide and her eyes went to the fuel gauge in front of her. Risa refilled some fuel into the tank without a word, and Ai stayed still, wordless.

When Risa was done, she went to Ai’s direction and Ai asked in a deceptively calm voice “You did know about it from the start, didn’t you?” caught off guard Risa replied with incoherent words, that’s when the door slammed, the engine brought to life, and Ai drove away, leaving the head scratching Risa behind, glued to the road.



 :D



Okay I'm now really signing off  HAPPY NEW YEAR AGAIN!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.4~12/31)
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 31, 2009, 12:57:15 PM
Takagaki cannot be denied! But it looks as though Ai is still being stubborn. Come on, Ai-chan, you know you can't resist. I think that kiss proved it. Hopefully, now, Risa will go back to dropping by.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.4~12/31)
Post by: Treykun on December 31, 2009, 02:38:16 PM
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Ai drove away, leaving the head scratching Risa behind, glued to the road.
:depressed: They were so close...

TAKAGAKI ALREADY!! :grin:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.4~12/31)
Post by: kuro808 on December 31, 2009, 05:23:42 PM
^ agree

Come back for the readers :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.4~12/31)
Post by: kawaii beam on December 31, 2009, 05:34:15 PM
aw~ man~! so close yet so far! XD c'mon takagaki~! work! XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.4~12/31)
Post by: amEthystx on December 31, 2009, 09:57:40 PM
Happy new year!  :)

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When the driver got out from the car, Ai could not help but yell. “YOU!?!”
- As expected~ who would have thought... the city protector is the one pestering you! LOL... but.... again.. ain't she pretty lucky? To have met her on the highway~ Soooo..... Gaki-san is in something like a NYPD uniform? XD

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leaving the head scratching Risa behind, glued to the road.
- Sad~ for the second time she got leave behind! XD

Anyway... i have been wondering... have Eri been "busy" too? She is asking Risa to go somewhere for a few nights... omg~

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.4~12/31)
Post by: kRisZ on January 01, 2010, 11:30:42 AM
LOL poor risa XD ai-chan's so stuborn..but so is she XDDD

A clash between two stubborn women  XD


lol Risa should irritate Ai enough to make her call the police :lol: For once, Ai will actually call Risa, even if it's for the wrong reason  XD

I actually love the idea but I already had a different plan *points to Ch. 4*  :)


Poor Risa trying to be helpful  XD

With a few hidden agenda  :twisted:


LOL~ omg~ you update so fast!

I'm on my holidays  :muffin:

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LOL~ now we have a suicidal Risa chasing after Ai-chan!  :mon olympic: <- Go Gaki-san go!

 :mon olympics:  :D

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I got a feeling when she calls the cops... definitely it will be Gaki-san that is going to turn up at her doorstep again .. LOL~ I can imaging Ai-chan banging the wall...  :lol:

*Imagines...*  :lol:


Geez, Ai. You just need to give in already! How can anyone resist that cute face?

Nee  :D


Hopefully, now, Risa will go back to dropping by.

Hmmm

:depressed: They were so close...

TAKAGAKI ALREADY!! :grin:

Yet so far  :D


^ agree

Come back for the readers :lol:

 :D


aw~ man~! so close yet so far! XD c'mon takagaki~! work! XD

Double time  :D


- As expected~ who would have thought... the city protector is the one pestering you! LOL... but.... again.. ain't she pretty lucky? To have met her on the highway~ Soooo..... Gaki-san is in something like a NYPD uniform? XD

I haven't thought about that -lol- damn  XD

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- Sad~ for the second time she got leave behind! XD

Where's that brow-moving-up-and-down emoticon  :mon look:


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Anyway... i have been wondering... have Eri been "busy" too? She is asking Risa to go somewhere for a few nights... omg~

Honestly, I find it hard to write and put other characters into the picture  :ph43r:

Your existence, and those out there, as a writer was created to be envied and adored  :D

~~
 :mon look: *looks for the Ai shipper*  :mon look:  :grin:
~~





CHAPTER 5


A few hours later, Risa found herself inside her bedroom, sulking and recalling her previous encounter.

‘Did she have to leave that way? She didn’t even say thank you.’ She said to herself and pouted.

Partly it was her fault. She noticed the fuel gauge was empty when she stuck her head inside the car the first time to get the keys. But at that moment some idea came up. It was a rare opportunity, it was like her one in a million chance to be that up close and personal with the unapproachable woman. And thought that maybe it was her long awaited chance to make friends with her. That was why she stalled her, started a conversation, and pretended to fix the engine. Though the kissing part was not part of her plan, not that she minded it, she loved it.

When she thought of the kissing part, Risa touched her lips by her fingers and a smirk crept.


~~~


The next morning, Risa was not at the street... jogging, nor inside her kitchen... making pancakes, but she’s at her own doorsteps, comfortably sitting while holding a cup of coffee, in her pajamas.

And when her neighbor’s door opened with that squeaking noise, Risa immediately grabbed the newspaper that was laying beside her left bare foot, to pretend that she was there to read and minding her own business, but spilling some hot coffee in the process.

“Itai” her high pitched voice followed.

That’s when and how her neighbor, Ai, saw her, scrambling with some papers while looking at her reddened wrist and a hint of pain plastered on her face.

When Risa lifted her face, she froze and then did her trademarked smile “Morning”

She saw Ai stunned for a moment, but walked off after a minute, as if seeing nothing and seeing no one, without a single word.

With her glum face, she picked everything up, turned around and headed to her house, crushed.



The following morning, Risa was in her tracksuit, hiding at the electricity post that was standing tall a few meters away from her house. When the object of her attention came out for her morning walk, she then prepared herself. But before Risa could start her jog, her prey paused for a couple of seconds staring at the house across the street, as if looking for something.

‘Was that a disappointed face I just saw?’ Risa asked herself with uncertainty

Totally warmed up by the scene, she started her jog when Ai started her walk. “Morning” Risa greeted the surprised girl when she was almost side by side with Ai, who let a manly scream out, and stared back at her, furious.

Seeing her prey’s reaction, she continued her jog a little faster than usual, for one good reason, she didn’t want to be physically beaten this early in the morning.

After reaching a good distance and her prey was out of sight, she sat on a bench, trying to catch her breath and of course to wait for her prey’s arrival at the same time. After a several minutes of restlessly waiting, her prey didn’t show up and so she gave up. Stood up and headed to the nearest Coffee Shop and ordered a to-go coffee and head out.


“Risa-chan! Hi! Are you all by yourself?” a screech with delight voice startled Risa.

Risa only managed to nod.

“Great! I bought donuts, perfect combination for your coffee, nee? Why don’t we sit over there?” she pointed at the unoccupied bench using her two closed lips while dragging Risa along.

“How have you been? I missed you” the girl started when they finally settled on the bench.

“I was busy Jun”


Jun then took a donut and brought it closer to Risa’s mouth. “Say Ahh” caught off guard Risa opened her mouth reluctantly and bit the donut and then swiftly turned her head around when she heard someone clear her throat. And there she saw her prey’s retreating back.

Risa was left there frozen with a mouthful donut staring at the vanishing Ai.




 :D
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.5~1/1)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 01, 2010, 11:50:33 AM
Is Jun one of Risa's past conquests? Or just really, really affectionate? Still, grr, getting in the way of Takagaki. Maybe it might turn out to be a good thing, later on, but right now. Grrr.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.5~1/1)
Post by: kuro808 on January 01, 2010, 12:14:04 PM
Risa/Jun coupling is very interesting can't wait for the next one
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.5~1/1)
Post by: amEthystx on January 01, 2010, 04:14:41 PM
EDIT!: I realized i forgot to comment on the story! LOL

Risa is so cute! Like a kid...trying to get attention!

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‘Was that a disappointed face I just saw?’ Risa asked herself with uncertainty
- And it seems that Ai-chan is getting use to it! She got jealous in the end as well!


 :gmon getout: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ :mon olympic:

Ai-chan                                                                                        Risa

Go Gaki-san! You are getting slightly closer!



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I'm on my holidays
- Oh~! On holiday at where?

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Gaki-san is in something like a NYPD uniform?
- If so... I'lll be calling NYPD everyday!

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Honestly, I find it hard to write and put other characters into the picture
- Don't worry~ i know how that feels... I have almost everyone in my story... but.... The story will be much more confusing and i'm lazy.. MY BAD! I'M a BAD WRITER for saying something like that! LOL

Ai-shipper here!  :mon squee:

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.5~1/1)
Post by: badsaints on January 01, 2010, 05:15:49 PM
Chapter 4
Ai's car break down and Risa just happened to pass by. What perfect timing. Admit it Ai, this is fate's work :wahaha:


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Finally losing her senses, she cupped Risa’s face and brought it closer and kissed her hungrily.
Score! :luvluv1:


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Risa was about to close their distance again when a car honked, and Ai instantaneously pushed her away.
....Or maybe not. Damn you Johnson!


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“You did know about it from the start, didn’t you?”
Shucks. She got caught :wahaha:


Chapter 5

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She saw Ai stunned for a moment, but walked off after a minute, as if seeing nothing and seeing no one, without a single word.
Wow that's cold :on freeza:


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“Say Ahh” caught off guard Risa opened her mouth reluctantly and bit the donut and then swiftly turned her head around when she heard someone clear her throat. And there she saw her prey’s retreating back.
:on yellcard:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.5~1/1)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 01, 2010, 10:49:02 PM
Ha! See, told ya you're one of the The Awesome Writers too! :grin: Congrats on starting the fic! :thumbsup

Anyway this is just telling you that when I finally catch up with your fic (don't wait though  :nervous), I'll be back with real comment.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.5~1/1)
Post by: Yankii Heart on January 02, 2010, 12:22:23 AM
Well I have to say that lately the TakaGaki fics have become awesome XD
Thank's dude,... your fic is AWESOME... it helps with my Ishiyoshi withdrawal  :nervous

KEEP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
Yankii will be waiting for your update... that's for sure <3
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.5~1/1)
Post by: kRisZ on January 02, 2010, 03:15:23 AM
Is Jun one of Risa's past conquests? Or just really, really affectionate? Still, grr, getting in the way of Takagaki. Maybe it might turn out to be a good thing, later on, but right now. Grrr.

Ummm... Himitsu  :P


Risa/Jun coupling is very interesting can't wait for the next one

 :glasses:


Risa is so cute! Like a kid...trying to get attention!

Yeah.?.  :D


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- And it seems that Ai-chan is getting use to it! She got jealous in the end as well!


 :gmon getout: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ :mon olympic:

Ai-chan                                                                                        Risa

Go Gaki-san! You are getting slightly closer!

 :lol:


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- Oh~! On holiday at where?

Nowhere


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- If so... I'lll be calling NYPD everyday!

Me too  XD

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- Don't worry~ i know how that feels... I have almost everyone in my story... but.... The story will be much more confusing and i'm lazy.. MY BAD! I'M a BAD WRITER for saying something like that! LOL

lol


Ai's car break down and Risa just happened to pass by. What perfect timing. Admit it Ai, this is fate's work :wahaha:

Fates magnificent artwork  :heart:

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....Or maybe not. Damn you Johnson!

 :lol:


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Shucks. She got caught :wahaha:

Red-handed  XD

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Wow that's cold :on freeza:

Can we blame her?


Ha! See, told ya you're one of the The Awesome Writers too! :grin: Congrats on starting the fic! :thumbsup

Anyway this is just telling you that when I finally catch up with your fic (don't wait though  :nervous), I'll be back with real comment.

Yay!  :gmon sing:  You finally read this story, almost  :D


Well I have to say that lately the TakaGaki fics have become awesome XD
Thank's dude,... your fic is AWESOME... it helps with my Ishiyoshi withdrawal  :nervous

KEEP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
Yankii will be waiting for your update... that's for sure <3

Thank you  :heart:





CHAPTER 6



Ai walked away feeling a constriction in her heart. The feeling was so familiar and yet so uncontrollable. The feeling she desperately tried not to feel again. Because it hurts, it hurts so badly. The same feeling that she tried to bury in hopes that it will never appear again. The same feeling that brought her here, to try to move on and start anew. She left everything behind and everyone behind, including the memories, especially this feeling that’s torturing her now, the feeling that’s starting to surface again.


She entered into her room not caring to close the door. She walked towards her closet, grabbed the handle and slowly opened its door. She kneeled down and stared at a red box that was placed at the bottom, untouched for a long while, unsure of what to do next. A part of her was screaming not to open it and a part of her wants to see its contents once again. She carefully took it and held it close to her heart that’s when streaks of tears came falling. She hugged it tight like her life depended on it. After a while she removed the lid without blinking whilst tears constantly falling and there she saw a smiling woman meeting her gaze. That’s when she started to bawl in agonizing pain. She gingerly took it, held it close to her face and plated kisses on it. She lovingly stared at the picture on her hands and then she placed it close to her heart and started to rock, back and forth.

“You do know how much I miss you, right?” she said in between sobs

“And I’m so sorry for not keeping my promises.” she continued


“I’m so sorry that I promised to meet the morning sun everyday with you but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to grow old with you but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to be there for you always but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to protect you but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to take good care of you but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to smile only for you but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to be loyal to you but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised you to be my last kiss but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to yearn only but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to love you and only but I failed. I’m so sorry Reina. I tried to keep my promises but I miserably failed.”


Her wail continued, for how long, she never cared.


After an agonizing while she curled up at a corner weeping in silence still holding the picture close to her heart. This is the moment she feared most, to feel it again. A part of her died before and a part of her died again now.


~~~


Risa was standing at Ai’s doorsteps for a good while, weighing if she should press the button or not and eventually decided not to.

“What am I doing here? She’s not even my girlfriend.” And she left.


~~~


When morning came, no one was out for their morning jog and morning walk. Risa stayed inside her bedroom on her bed wide awake, did nothing but stare at her ceiling. Ai, on the other hand, was sound asleep, as exhaustion from her previous weeping wore her out.


“Moshi-moshi” Eri’s voiced echoed in the receiver.

“Eri, I was wondering if you’re up for a couple of shots tonight, after work that is”

“Depends on where, I’m too lazy to go to the next town”

“Here is fine”



While at work Eri noticed something odd about her friend but decided to keep her mouth shut. She waited until they reached at the nearby bar after the awkward work hours.


“Hey, what’s up?” Eri initiated a conversation after their long silence.

“Nothing is up. I just felt like drinking tonight”

Eri only managed to give her friend a concerned smile and shut her mouth again.



They spotted an empty table at the corner and so they headed there. Risa ordered a bottle of vodka when the waiter came, which shocked Eri a bit. She had never seen her friend ordered that much before, but let things slide on its accord. Clearly her friend has a problem but asking her right now is not the right option, she’s definitely not on the mood for talk right now. And so she let Risa do and decide the things and she’ll just watch for her tonight, just like Risa will do to her every time she’s feeling the same way.
 

A moment later, after gulping some vodka down like it was only plain water, Risa headed to the dance floor and of course Eri followed suit. Mixing with the crowd, Risa danced wildly not caring if her partner was Eri or not, which was hard on Eri’s part to do her job well. Eri would practically pull and spin Risa just so the woman will be far from those vultures’ eyed on the dance floor, until Sayumi came and entered into the dance floor. With Sayu now she can protect Risa more from those predators.


“Hey! What’s with her?” Sayu shouted to be heard and outdo the blaring music. Eri only shrugged and squeezed her girlfriend’s hand and showing her relieved emotion for being there in no time when she called a few minutes ago.


When Risa noticed Sayu, she hugged her and motioned her to dance too. After a few minutes, Risa excused herself to go to the washroom. And when she re-appeared from the washroom, she came back with a girl clinging to her. Risa was smiling wide and re-entered into the dance floor with the girl dirty dancing with her. Risa’s hands travelled from the girl’s shoulders, to the girl’s waist, who was facing her back while grinding onto Risa’s front. All Eri and Sayu could do was to watch as the affair commences. When the girl moved her head to face Risa, and Risa was about to dive in for the kiss, someone from behind her pulled her back, twirled her around and kissed her, making Risa’s dance partner agape. As well as the two audiences that was watching nearby. The lips were familiar and the scent was recognizable and so she let the intruder kiss her under the piercing music on the dance floor, and let a bead of tears fall from her closed eyes.


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.6~1/2)
Post by: kawaii beam on January 02, 2010, 03:38:59 AM
O.O REINA'S DEAD?!?!? O.O oh snap...and i'm guessing that the girl that cut in was ai-chan??????
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.6~1/2)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 02, 2010, 03:47:49 AM
You killed Reina? Well, at least I don't have to worry about any RenAi in this fic. Poor Risa, poor Ai, but at the same time.
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As well as the two audiences that was watching nearby. The lips were familiar and the scent was recognizable and so she let the intruder kiss her under the piercing music on the dance floor, and let a bead of tears fall from her closed eyes.
Ai? Or Jun?
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.6~1/2)
Post by: badsaints on January 02, 2010, 04:49:13 AM
Osnap something happened to Reina? :shocked And she hasn't even make a debut in this story :lol: But this explains a lot why Ai was quite cold towards Risa and the reason she was holding back :P

Risa seems to like Ai a lot to be affected by this :heart: My guess is that it's Ai that kissed Risa at the end :w00t:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.6~1/2)
Post by: amEthystx on January 02, 2010, 05:56:56 AM
LOL~ Indeed Reina is somewhere....but dead!  :OMG:

But~ I'm not complaining (Not so much..... XD)~ YAY! for TakaGaki~It was Ai-chan right?! Wooooo! Getting jealous! meow!

 :gmon getout: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ :mon olympic:

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Risa is so cute! Like a kid...trying to get attention!
- Or rather not like a kid....but a teenager trying to get the attention of the person they like? XD

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After a while she removed the lid without blinking whilst tears constantly falling and there she saw a smiling woman meeting her gaze.
- LOL! i know it isn't so.....but I don't know why my mind came out with.... practically a smiling woman head instead of a picture..LOL..a disturbing scene!

 :mon bat:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.6~1/2)
Post by: Yankii Heart on January 02, 2010, 06:27:01 AM
Noooooooooooo
Well, Reina could be, right??... tell me the Yankii Princess is not dead T___T

Who would have thought that Gaki was such a womanizer? XD
I completely love her XD


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.6~1/2)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 02, 2010, 08:59:01 AM
u update so fast!!!
XD

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Finally losing her senses, she cupped Risa’s face and brought it closer and kissed her hungrily. Risa was slightly taken aback at first but she kissed Ai back afterward with the same passion Ai was giving her or could be more. They fought battle over dominance but none of them was willing to be at the losing end. Until their lungs were screaming for air, that’s when they parted and looked to each other’s eyes with so must yearn and passion.
:nya: TAKAGAKI :heart: :heart: u know u love her aichan..XD

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“You did know about it from the start, didn’t you?”
:on gay:  :lol:

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Risa was left there frozen with a mouthful donut staring at the vanishing Ai.

:mon exhaust: chase after her gakisan.. :(

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She left everything behind and everyone behind, including the memories, especially this feeling that’s torturing her now, the feeling that’s starting to surface again.
what happen  :mon whine:

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“I’m so sorry that I promised to meet the morning sun everyday with you but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to grow old with you but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to be there for you always but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to protect you but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to take good care of you but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to smile only for you but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to be loyal to you but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised you to be my last kiss but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to yearn only but I failed. I’m so sorry that I promised to love you and only but I failed. I’m so sorry Reina. I tried to keep my promises but I miserably failed.”
damn! poor aichan
but poor reina too..she haven even make her appearance and she is dead..XD XD

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A part of her died before and a part of her died again now.
:pig cry: :mon waterworks:
just when her heart finally open for the others..
it dead again.. :cry: :cry:

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“What am I doing here? She’s not even my girlfriend.” And she left.
because you love her, stupid.. :lol:

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The lips were familiar and the scent was recognizable and so she let the intruder kiss her under the piercing music on the dance floor, and let a bead of tears fall from her closed eyes.
aichan?is it aichan?
you better make it aichan..XD
but she was so hurt perviously..
it might be JJ too..
hmmmmmmmmm
*wait and see*

nice story..XD..
love it..XD.. :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.6~1/2)
Post by: lil_hamz on January 02, 2010, 11:53:56 AM
Okay, I read this in one sitting. *wipes sweat*

First off, Risa as a cop...droolsome to the max! XD At first I was a little apprehensive about Risa doing all those stuff to get Ai's attention. BUT the bit with the car break down and that kiss? It definitely changed my mind.

TAKAGAKI should get together!! :twothumbs

I want the girl at the end of the last chapter to be Ai but I get the feeling you're gonna pull a surprise and make it Jun.

YAY for the KameShige. If TakaGaki gets together in the end as well everything would be perfect :)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.6~1/2)
Post by: aussie on January 02, 2010, 12:02:56 PM
Did Reina just die as soon as she entered the story?  XD At least Reina's short-lived appearance explains Ai's emotional distantness. Wouldn't mind delving more into their history and how Reina ended up living only in Ai's memory in this story. Could help Ai 'heal' up to accept Risa  :D And Reina would have made a worthwhile contribution. Somewhat.

(I would still prefer the RenAi that almost happened  :ph43r:)






Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.6~1/2)
Post by: Treykun on January 02, 2010, 02:08:55 PM
Have you just killed Reina...? :mon uggh:

...

:fainted: :fainted: :fainted: WTF?!?!?!?! WHY HER?!?!?!?!
NOOOOOOO!!!  :on cloudeye:
At least you could killed her a little bit later, not so fast damn, she hasn't even made an appearance  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.6~1/2)
Post by: kRisZ on January 02, 2010, 03:44:56 PM
O.O REINA'S DEAD?!?!? O.O oh snap...and i'm guessing that the girl that cut in was ai-chan??????

You killed Reina? Well, at least I don't have to worry about any RenAi in this fic. Poor Risa, poor Ai, but at the same time.
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As well as the two audiences that was watching nearby. The lips were familiar and the scent was recognizable and so she let the intruder kiss her under the piercing music on the dance floor, and let a bead of tears fall from her closed eyes.
Ai? Or Jun?

Osnap something happened to Reina? :shocked And she hasn't even make a debut in this story :lol: But this explains a lot why Ai was quite cold towards Risa and the reason she was holding back :P

Risa seems to like Ai a lot to be affected by this :heart: My guess is that it's Ai that kissed Risa at the end :w00t:

LOL~ Indeed Reina is somewhere....but dead!  :OMG:

It was made especially for the RenAi Fans  :twisted:
*runs away*  :mon rush:    :k-thrilled:   peace people  :grin:



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Risa is so cute! Like a kid...trying to get attention!
- Or rather not like a kid....but a teenager trying to get the attention of the person they like? XD

I'm glad, I conveyed it correctly  :heart:


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After a while she removed the lid without blinking whilst tears constantly falling and there she saw a smiling woman meeting her gaze.
- LOL! i know it isn't so.....but I don't know why my mind came out with.... practically a smiling woman head instead of a picture..LOL..a disturbing scene!

 :rofl:  I SO HATE YOU  XD  Actually when I read it before I posted it, that same imagination popped out  :lol:


Noooooooooooo
Well, Reina could be, right??... tell me the Yankii Princess is not dead T___T

Suimasen, but she is  :D

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Who would have thought that Gaki was such a womanizer? XD
I completely love her XD

Yeah?  :mon fyeah:


u update so fast!!!
XD

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The lips were familiar and the scent was recognizable and so she let the intruder kiss her under the piercing music on the dance floor, and let a bead of tears fall from her closed eyes.
aichan?is it aichan?
you better make it aichan..XD
but she was so hurt perviously..
it might be JJ too..
hmmmmmmmmm
*wait and see*

nice story..XD..
love it..XD.. :heart: :heart:

Just wait and see  :D and  Thank you  :heart:


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but poor reina too..she haven even make her appearance and she is dead..  XD XD

lol sorry  :D


Okay, I read this in one sitting. *wipes sweat*

First off, Risa as a cop...droolsome to the max! XD At first I was a little apprehensive about Risa doing all those stuff to get Ai's attention. BUT the bit with the car break down and that kiss? It definitely changed my mind.

TAKAGAKI should get together!! :twothumbs

I want the girl at the end of the last chapter to be Ai but I get the feeling you're gonna pull a surprise and make it Jun.

YAY for the KameShige. If TakaGaki gets together in the end as well everything would be perfect :)

OMG  :mon hi:


Did Reina just die as soon as she entered the story?  XD At least Reina's short-lived appearance explains Ai's emotional distantness. Wouldn't mind delving more into their history and how Reina ended up living only in Ai's memory in this story. Could help Ai 'heal' up to accept Risa  :D And Reina would have made a worthwhile contribution. Somewhat.

(I would still prefer the RenAi that almost happened  :ph43r:)

 :glasses:   :D


Have you just killed Reina...? :mon uggh:

...

:fainted: :fainted: :fainted: WTF?!?!?!?! WHY HER?!?!?!?!
NOOOOOOO!!!  :on cloudeye:
At least you could killed her a little bit later, not so fast damn, she hasn't even made an appearance  XD

Sorry Trey-trey   :D  :kneelbow:   :D





CHAPTER 7




“Arhg” grunted the woman who was laying on bed, head buried under a green pillow.


“Oh shit! I’m late” scrambling to sit up and hastily running into her bathroom to get change, but she froze in the middle when she passed a full view mirror. Wide eyed, she stared at her reflection and looked down to see it by her own eyes, making sure the reflection was not deceiving her.


“WHY AM I NAKED!?!” she looked around her bedroom but saw no one. She shifted her eyes back at the reflection of the mirror to double check if she wasn’t hallucinating. And yes she is definitely nude. Something strange caught her eyes and so she moved closer, it was a purplish mark below her collarbone. Upon seeing that it was a hickey her jaw dropped. She inspected her body scrupulously and yes, there were others. One was found in the middle of her chest, and several of them on her abdomen and on her thighs. Her gaze moved up and down in disbelief and what made her more frightened was the one she saw on her neck “A BITE MARK?!?”


She hysterically leaped to get her phone and dialed a number.


“ERI! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME!?!” she started when the line was connected

The other line mumbled something before mumbling lucid words. “Arhg! Gakisan lower your voice, and good morning to you too. Can we talk later I need to go back to sleep” whine the girl obviously in the middle of being conscious and unconscious.

“SLEEP? WHAT ABOUT WORK?”

“It’s our day off” Eri replied lazily

“Who’s that Honey, Gaki-san?” a sleepy voice from the background butted in.

“Yes”... “Listen, Gaki-san, I’ll call later okay”

“DON’T YOU HANG UP ON ME NOW KAME!”

“Geez, control the voice please, my head is still spinning”

“...Someone raped me...”

“Someone did what?”

“Don’t make me repeat the word, it’s giving me chills.”

Eri giggled at the other line. “It was not what it looked like last night. You were virtually towering with desire over the girl and you’re the one who’s all over her. You can’t even wait to get home so that you’ll have her all by yourself.”

“WHAT? But who? No one’s here but me”

“Oh, I forgot to ask her her name, sorry”

“You didn’t ask her? So you definitely let her rape me.”

“Geez, NO! It looked like you knew her. Wait a couple of minutes I’m coming over.”



She took her robe, covered her unclothed body with it and walked towards the window. No idea what to do next. And there she saw her neighbor’s back a few meters away, doing her morning walk.


“Why can’t you look at me the way I want you to?” and a sigh followed.

In a verge of crying Risa continued “Why do I feel so dirty now?”



The house resounded to the sound of the bell after a couple of minutes and so Risa treaded downstairs. She was then met by two woozy girls when she opened the door. One stepped in and went directly to the kitchen, and one remained still staring at the house owner.


“Are you okay?” Eri said in a soft calm voice.

“I don’t know.” Risa shrugged and looked downwards.

“Hey you two, get in here I’m making coffee.” Sayu called from the kitchen and so we got inside.



“You really didn’t recall anything from last night?” Eri asked

“If I did, what’s the point of asking you?” I snapped

“It was our first meeting with the girl, maybe she’s from another town” Eri glanced at Sayu who was sipping some coffee.

“What’s the big deal? You had sex with strangers before” now it’s Sayu’s turn to butt in.


True. I don’t know either why I’m acting this way.



Monday morning came, and Risa still feel like not going out, if only she can skip work but she can’t, Nakazawa will eat her alive. She sluggishly got up, took a shower, and dressed for work. When she opened the door to head out, she was surprised to see a jar of freshly baked cookies by her door with a note that says ‘Eat on time’ she looked around but no one was around. Glancing at her watch, she took it hastily and brought it to work with her.



When she arrived home from work later that same day, she was surprised for the second time. A red carnation bouquet was on her doorsteps with a note ‘See you in our dreams’


Right there and then, she phoned Eri.


“Eri, I think I have a stalker”

...

“How do you explain the cookies I brought this morning and this bouquet of flowers at my doorsteps?”

...

“That’s it, I’m so installing CCTV”



Not far from Risa, a woman chuckled after hearing Risa’s lines, and she continued on with her walk under the fascinating moonlight with a calm smile plastered on her face.



Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.7~1/2)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 02, 2010, 04:10:51 PM
is it aichan!!!
i so hope it's aichan!!!!

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“WHY AM I NAKED!?!”
if it's aichan..it seem like she letting gakisan tasting what she have done b4 to aichan in the past..XD

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“Eri, I think I have a stalker”

...

“How do you explain the cookies I brought this morning and this bouquet of flowers at my doorsteps?”

...

“That’s it, I’m so installing CCTV”
similar strategy..XD XD

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Not far from Risa, a woman chuckled after hearing Risa’s lines, and she continued on with her walk under the fascinating moonlight with a calm smile plastered on her face.
tell me it's aichan! :lol:

but it will be so weird if aichan change so suddenly after the heartbreak scene..
a totally change person after she cried for reina stuff and now become "gakisan"..XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.7~1/2)
Post by: amEthystx on January 02, 2010, 04:21:31 PM
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  :rofl: I SO HATE YOU    XD Actually when I read it before I posted it, that same imagination popped out  :lol: 
- *KYaaaaaaaaaaaaa* The "I SO HATE YOU" Is just tooooo cute!  :lol: You mean before you post the chapter or post the reply to my comment?  XD

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True. I don’t know either why I’m acting this way.
- Because the carefree player have finally found the one that can weigh her down

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“Eri, I think I have a stalker”
- *Prays* Let it be Ai-chan... ~ But i think it's probably her...

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a woman chuckled after hearing Risa’s lines, and she continued on with her walk
- Only Ai-chan walks into their neighborhood... She usually sees Jun in the park~ XD *prays*

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.7~1/2)
Post by: kuro808 on January 02, 2010, 05:05:10 PM
 :lol: i never thought about Reina right there

Well Ai seems to be having some trouble holding the emotions in  XD  well i wonder who the intruder was? Ai?
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.7~1/2)
Post by: badsaints on January 02, 2010, 05:22:50 PM
The stalker is Ai, isn't she? :w00t: And she's making Risa go through the same thing Risa did to her XD

But I agree with alwaysYou. It is a bit weird for Ai to change overnight. But who's complaining? :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.7~1/2)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 02, 2010, 09:01:27 PM
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“Why can’t you look at me the way I want you to?” and a sigh followed.

In a verge of crying Risa continued “Why do I feel so dirty now?”
CAUSE YOU LOVES AI!!

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It was our first meeting with the girl, maybe she’s from another town”
Haha, could be~! It's definitely not Jun!

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she was surprised to see a jar of freshly baked cookies by her door with a note that says ‘Eat on time’ she looked around but no one was around. Glancing at her watch, she took it hastily and brought it to work with her.



When she arrived home from work later that same day, she was surprised for the second time. A red carnation bouquet was on her doorsteps with a note ‘See you in our dreams’
Well, she certainly rocked somebody's world. :lol:

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Not far from Risa, a woman chuckled after hearing Risa’s lines, and she continued on with her walk under the fascinating moonlight with a calm smile plastered on her face.
You know, just because everyone's saying, "It's Ai! XD "Makes me want to say, "It's Reina!" but then I remembered that you KILLED her! :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Ch.7~1/2)
Post by: kRisZ on January 03, 2010, 02:01:48 PM
if it's aichan..it seem like she letting gakisan tasting what she have done b4 to aichan in the past.. XD
:D

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tell me it's aichan! :lol:

but it will be so weird if aichan change so suddenly after the heartbreak scene..
a totally change person after she cried for reina stuff and now become "gakisan"..XD
Point noted  :D


- *KYaaaaaaaaaaaaa* The "I SO HATE YOU" Is just tooooo cute!  :lol: You mean before you post the chapter or post the reply to my comment?  XD
That was before  the chapter was being posted  :lol:

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- *Prays* Let it be Ai-chan... ~ But i think it's probably her...
Yeah.?.

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- Only Ai-chan walks into their neighborhood... She usually sees Jun in the park~ XD *prays*
We do now have the walking Ai and the Jun park resident.  XD


Well Ai seems to be having some trouble holding the emotions in  XD  well i wonder who the intruder was? Ai?
Let me think  :P


The stalker is Ai, isn't she? :w00t: And she's making Risa go through the same thing Risa did to her XD

But I agree with alwaysYou. It is a bit weird for Ai to change overnight. But who's complaining? :lol:
I for one ain't complaining  :D


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“Why can’t you look at me the way I want you to?” and a sigh followed.

In a verge of crying Risa continued “Why do I feel so dirty now?”
CAUSE YOU LOVES AI!!
:pimp:

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Haha, could be~! It's definitely not Jun!
:pimp:

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Well, she certainly rocked somebody's world. :lol:
Nee  :D

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You know, just because everyone's saying, "It's Ai! XD "Makes me want to say, "It's Reina!" but then I remembered that you KILLED her! :lol:
:lol:






Mini Chapter 8  XD   (I'm very tired atm)


Nakazawa was driving past the outskirts toward a highway. This is what she usually does when she can’t sleep and not feel like drinking, night patrolling until wee hours if she feels like it, just to make sure the town stays safe and peaceful, and she's alone. The Fearless Chief Nakazawa, that’s what almost everyone call her.

She suddenly stepped on the brake pedal when she saw something strange along the shoulder of the rugged road. She moved a little closer to get a better view with all the car lights turned on. And there she saw a body slumped on the shoulders of the rugged road. She stepped out from her car and walked towards the body, with her flashlight on hand, the lights from her car and a little help from the moon light, she discovered that it was a woman.

Clearly from the body’s posture, the girl was dead but she still moved forward to check for the pulse but it was not beating. That’s when she decided to walk back to her car to call the office for help.

“This is going to be a long night”

After a short while, sirens were heard blaring and a medical team with some police officers arrived to conduct an initial investigation. After a couple of hours, Nakazawa was standing near the ambulance as the body was lifted and pushed into the car.

Back at the office, Nakazawa arrived with some police officers waiting inside their conference room.

“I have found a dead girl’s body in the outskirts some hours ago, a murder victim. This is the first under my period in office. Cause of death a little like strangulation.” She stated as she entered into the room.

Everyone was so surprised by the cause of death, and looked at each other. Nakazawa then distributed some pictures.
The police officers then took a picture to look into it. A woman wearing pink lay on her tummy, arced, with a blue rope tied at her left ankle and on her neck at the other end.

“Jun?!” Eri’s voice resonated inside the small office and everyone stared at her including her surprised partner. Risa then stood up and moved to get the picture on Eri’s hand and indeed it was Jun.
 


 :mon rush:  :D



The story was supposed to move east but then it's moving south  XD  Oh my goodness, comments can really make the story change its direction. And I’m now confused.  :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.8~1/3)
Post by: badsaints on January 03, 2010, 02:18:20 PM
Since Eri knows Jun, we can safely deduced the girl who "raped" Risa is not Jun. Hence, reinforcing our guess that it was Ai? :P

At the risk of having rotten eggs thrown at me, I'm not sorry that Jun was killed here. XD Hey it's for the sake of the story, right? :twisted: But I have a twisted, disturbing theory on Jun's death that involves Jun, Risa and Ai :twisted: I'll keep it to myself for the moment and see if my guess is right :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.8~1/3)
Post by: Treykun on January 03, 2010, 02:48:49 PM
OMG,OMG, OMG!!!!!!!! *suffers an attack of anxiety*

:fainted: :fainted: :fainted:

FIRST REINA AND NOW THIS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! NOOOOOOOO!!!!

I'm not sorry that Jun was killed here.
See, as I said, pure evilness!! YOU'RE ALL PURE EVILNESS!!

*Runs away and cries in a corner...*  :mon runcry::on cloudeye:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.8~1/3)
Post by: amEthystx on January 03, 2010, 03:04:29 PM
 :OMG: Jun is dead!? she was all so sweet and stuff with Risa...............

But killing Jun seems to be a tough job since she is so tall..LOL~


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I'm not sorry that Jun was killed here.
- So scary!  :mon runcry: *run along with trey-trey*  :on cloudeye:

But i kinda thought... it's Risa that killed Jun since she might have rape her...but then again... Eri know who Jun was... SO~ We are left with Ai-chan!  :wub:

I'll I were to point out a killer in MM.... It will be............................WAIT! Don't tell me Reina is not actually dead and is back for some sort of sick revenge... *SCREAM*  :OMG: Rei-chan! <- I'm thinking too much... lol~


Rest well Little kRisZ~!

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.8~1/3)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 03, 2010, 03:38:25 PM
^if JJ the one who chasing after aichan, i will think it's reina too..LOL..but then........

and you better dont make aichan the killer! :twisted:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.8~1/3)
Post by: badsaints on January 03, 2010, 04:20:23 PM
I'm not sorry that Jun was killed here.
See, as I said, pure evilness!! YOU'RE ALL PURE EVILNESS!!

*Runs away and cries in a corner...*  :mon runcry::on cloudeye:

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I'm not sorry that Jun was killed here.
- So scary!  :mon runcry: *run along with trey-trey*  :on cloudeye:

Hmm it seems like my comment has traumatised Baby Sticky & Little Trey-Trey :on lol: So yeah, for the sake of the kids (so that they don't lose their way when running away), I'll just say... poor Jun :on GJ: But that doesn't make me any less evil :twisted:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.8~1/3)
Post by: kRisZ on January 03, 2010, 05:38:03 PM
lol
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.8~1/3)
Post by: Yankii Heart on January 03, 2010, 06:58:28 PM
Jun is dead TT___TT
Not my fav panda...

BUt if it is for agood cause then so be it... There IS a GOOD cause right?? :mon uggh:

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The story was supposed to move east but then it's moving south    Oh my goodness, comments can really make the story change its direction. And I’m now confused. 
XDDDDDD
So true

Keep the good work.. I'll be waiting  :on asmo: :on drink:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.8~1/3)
Post by: kuro808 on January 03, 2010, 07:09:37 PM
whoa that was interesting turn to this story, I wonder who did
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.8~1/3)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 04, 2010, 02:05:04 AM
Okay, here's what I think. Ai has split personalities and she killed Reina and Jun, but both sides are in love with Risa.  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.8~1/3)
Post by: Amarghetta on January 04, 2010, 02:14:16 AM
Okay, here's what I think. Ai has split personalities and she killed Reina and Jun, but both sides are in love with Risa.  XD
Couldn't have said it better myself! :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.8~1/3)
Post by: Swtme03 on January 04, 2010, 09:26:22 AM
Okay, here's what I think. Ai has split personalities and she killed Reina and Jun, but both sides are in love with Risa.  XD
Couldn't have said it better myself! :lol:

Woah~ I like that idea  :jerk:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.8~1/3)
Post by: kRisZ on January 04, 2010, 06:41:37 PM
badsaints
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At the risk of having rotten eggs thrown at me, I'm not sorry that Jun was killed here.  Hey it's for the sake of the story, right?
Of course, I don't want any rotten eggs coming my way  :P


Trey-Trey
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OMG,OMG, OMG!!!!!!!! *suffers an attack of anxiety*
:grin:


Bishop NI
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But i kinda thought... it's Risa that killed Jun since she might have rape her...but then again... Eri know who Jun was... SO~ We are left with Ai-chan!   :wub:
What's with --> :wub: <--  :P

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Rest well Little kRisZ~!
Thank you  :) It was gone after reading YTTC NG scene  XD


alwaysYou
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and you better dont make aichan the killer!
or what  :twisted:   peace  :grin:


Yankii Heart
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BUt if it is for agood cause then so be it... There IS a GOOD cause right??
We'll see  :D


kurosawa87
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whoa that was interesting turn to this story, I wonder who did
XD


rnd-sama
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Okay, here's what I think. Ai has split personalities and she killed Reina and Jun, but both sides are in love with Risa.
Yay! TakaGaki FTW   :rockon:  


Amarghetta
 :mon hi:


Swtme03
 :mon hi:





Mini CHAPTER 9



After the temporary ruckus, everyone settled back on their respective seats and listened to their chief, Nakazawa, for further information and instructions.


“The victim was immobilized using a stun gun before she was tied, as the picture shows, and left to an agonizing and slow death. The one who tied her down was not killing the victim directly by her/his own hands, but it was the victim’s fading strength due to exhaustion. When the victim was exhausted from trying to keep the rope loose, she had no choice but to lower her upper body down which eventually making the rope tight and strangled her in the process.” Nakazawa explained


Risa couldn’t believe what she’d heard and seen. She’d just seen the girl a few days ago, being happy and sweet. Who could have done such a thing to a sweet girl like her? She might be a flirt at times but other than that the girl was purely harmless and cheerful. Risa could not help but shed a tear to the girl’s fate. How can she not get affected, the girl was once part of her adult life. She had dated the girl a couple of times and they ended up on bed together twice. And the girl stayed sweet and thoughtful even after Risa acted distant toward the girl.


After the lone tear had fallen, Risa promised that she’ll do her best so that justice will be served as soon as possible. And that the criminal will be brought behind bars with the highest punishment possible.


Eri placed a hand over Risa’s when she noticed her partner’s silence. Expressing that she’s there and things will be okay. And Risa gave out a weak smile.


When Risa went home, she directly went to her neighbor’s house and slid a note under the door and went home afterward to get her things and prepare for their night watch.  Just like the other day, a bouquet of carnation awaited her at her doorsteps, but she just shrugged it off because there is more important thing to deal with at the moment.


The next few days Risa and Eri were barely home because they’re busy night patrolling and conducting further investigation about Jun’s case. But so far no witnesses were found nor were evidences collected. The crime was meticulously executed that no traces of the criminal were found. That’s why every police officer in town was busy checking the town and making sure it won’t happen again. Everyone worked overtime. The incident was also published to every newspaper everyday so that every person will be warned about the case and be watchful.


Until one day, while inside their car... “That’s the person who raped you!” Eri exclaimed making Risa jumped on her seat. Risa followed where Eri’s vision was with her heartbeat racing and there she saw a man running with a metal stick on hand.


“That’s a man! I was raped by a man?!?”


 :P



I’ll be gone for two-three days, my most love woman is coming over from Japan, so no updates after this  :)

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.9~1/4)
Post by: cogi_yoshi on January 04, 2010, 07:34:29 PM
WEEE~!!! Finally!!! You decided to become a writer too!!! andd a good way to start is by TAKAGAKI!!!!yey!!! :mon XD: :mon XD:

ok... someone killed Junjun...hmm... it can be Ai because she has the motive... but then again...I agree with rndm's theory of having a split personality..ahahahah.... :yep:

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“That’s the person who raped you!” Eri exclaimed making Risa jumped on her seat. Risa followed where Eri’s vision was with her heartbeat racing and there she saw a man running with a metal stick on hand.


“That’s a man! I was raped by a man?!?”

A MAN?!?! Well... maybe she didn't follow exactly the turtle's line of vision..it might be the person behind the running man...ahahaha..and I hope it's Ai. :mon misch:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.9~1/4)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 04, 2010, 07:45:27 PM
God, woman! You update so fast!

With my turtle speed reading I figured I should comment little by little or I'll never catch up  :smhid

I love Ai's reactions in chap 1, she's all WTF :lol: (not surprising in her situation).

There's Yuko!  :mon fyeah:

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she took a peek but that’s when the light of her neighbor turned off

Peeping Gaki.

Poor Ai (or lucky), Gaki lives across the street.

Risa is very determined and so positive about Chasing her neighbor, it's funny in a way.

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‘Can she really fix that through poking?’

My thought exactly.

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“You did know about it from the start, didn’t you?"
:rofl:

I got mixed feelings with your Gaki (a player and yet she has her own charms). Oh, so wrong... XD

I have to say though, Gaki persistence to befriend her neighbor by 'bothering' Ai whenever she can is quite an effective method, Ai is bound to miss her one way or another if she abruptly stop showing up.

Until I can catch up with the rest, that's it for now.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.8~1/3)
Post by: Swtme03 on January 05, 2010, 01:02:01 AM
“That’s a man! I was raped by a man?!?”

 :mon wtf:

I'll kill him for touching Gaki without her approval!  :mon fierce:  :mon woo:

I’ll be gone for two-three days, my most love woman is coming over from Japan, so no updates after this  :)

 :mon scare:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.9~1/4)
Post by: badsaints on January 05, 2010, 01:36:37 AM
Wait a minute! A man?! :shocked
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.9~1/4)
Post by: kuro808 on January 05, 2010, 04:19:17 AM
 :shocked :shocked

A MAN?????????????
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.9~1/4)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 05, 2010, 11:01:27 AM
A man??!! Well, maybe it's just a really manly woman. Or Ai-chan's right behind him?
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.9~1/4)
Post by: Treykun on January 05, 2010, 02:41:36 PM

WTF?!?!?!?! A MAN?!?!?!?!

Well, maybe it's just a really manly woman. Or Ai-chan's right behind him?
:rofl: Or maybe it's just Ai-chan and her manly screams from YTTC XD
Title: M()
Post by: amEthystx on January 05, 2010, 04:08:11 PM
MAN!?!!?  :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG:

*grumble@M*()YN&*(N!*()^*NHSUIOQH@*!(^N#T^N!@&(n90c4723n07cqgramble*

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A man??!! Well, maybe it's just a really manly woman. Or Ai-chan's right behind him?
-I hope that's the case!~ lol

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I’ll be gone for two-three days, my most love woman is coming over from Japan, so no updates after this  :)
-Ohhhhhhh~ who is it who is it who is it????  :mon lol:  :P

 :mon bat:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.9~1/4)
Post by: lil_hamz on January 06, 2010, 09:54:01 AM
HMmm, maybe the man was Ai in disguise? I'm completely off aren't I? Gosh, did you have to pick the worst moment to end this chapter and disappear for days? *sigh* How am I gonna survive not knowing? :(
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.9~1/4)
Post by: kRisZ on January 08, 2010, 04:25:00 PM
@cogi
  :w00t:  :mon hi:
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A MAN?!?! Well... maybe she didn't follow exactly the turtle's line of vision..it might be the person behind the running man...ahahaha..and I hope it's Ai.
Spot on  :yep:


@C
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There's Yuko!
There's a mini chapter with Yuko in there, it was written with you in mind  :yep:


@Swtme03
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I'll kill him for touching Gaki without her approval!
That's bad  :shocked   but I'll help you if you need any  :P


@baddie
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Wait a minute! A man?!
:pimp:


@kurokun
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:shocked :shocked
:pimp:


@rnd-sama
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A man??!! Well, maybe it's just a really manly woman. Or Ai-chan's right behind him?
:lol:


@Trey-Trey
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WTF?!?!?!?! A MAN?!?!?!?!
:pimp:


@Bishop NI
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*grumble@M*()YN&*(N!*()^*NHSUIOQH@*!(^N#T^N!@&(n90c4723n07cqgramble*
%^$*HJL)0  :P

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-Ohhhhhhh~ who is it who is it who is it???? 
Watashi no oneesan desu  :P


@lil_hamz
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HMmm, maybe the man was Ai in disguise? I'm completely off aren't I? Gosh, did you have to pick the worst moment to end this chapter and disappear for days? *sigh* How am I gonna survive not knowing?
It's really cool to see someone from my long and greatly admired fanfic writers comment in here   :heart:  :D 





CHAPTER 10


It was almost midnight and the atmosphere was eerie. The wind was cold, crickets were loud, and the moon started to hide behind the gloomy clouds.


Being deprived of sleep for a couple of days, Risa began to doze off while her partner was still on the look out, munching some chips to keep her self wide awake. Risa was almost on the dreamland when her partner, Eri, broke the silence and said things which stunned her. She was half conscious that made her take a while to process the things her partner had said. After Risa’s mind caught on what Eri had just expressed, she jumped from where she was sitting and let out a murmur, unable to believe the thing her friend had uttered.
 

“That’s a man! I was raped by a man?!?” Risa articulated

“ERI!” she exclaimed after not getting a response from the turtle

“What?” her partner answered without blinking from her stare towards the subject.

“YOU LET A MAN RAPED ME!?! Risa cried out loudly.


Eri just took a split second glance at Risa and averted her attention back to the person who just past the car they’re in, running, a couple of meters away. The man was at his late forties. Medium built. And he was carrying a metal stick.


‘How can my partner and my best friend for life let a man be in bed with me?’ Risa asked herself in disbelief. She stared back at her partner with her brows knitted, eyes seething, teeth gritting but before she could bombard her with sharp remarks, there she saw Eri’s face looked so puzzled and transformed into fright and at that instant she opened her door in a hurry.


“He’s trouble!” Eri expressed. Risa was left speechless and stunned for a moment before the cop in her kicked in. Risa followed her grabbing the portable light from the dashboard. Eri was running so fast that she could barely follow her into the narrow lane.

“POLICE, HOLD IT RIGHT THERE!” Eri shouted, pointing her flashlight on the man who was holding a metal stick upwards as if about to strike it to something. That’s when he looked back and after realizing that he was being followed by cops, he stared back down to the object in front of him before running and he faded into a dark alley.


Eri then followed suit after the man but stopped for a moment to check the object the man was previously staring at and stood up after a couple of seconds of assessment, looked back at Risa and ran towards the direction where the man disappeared.


Risa was still lost when she was almost two meters away from the object that was sprawled on the ground. She couldn’t clearly see what it was since the lamp post was far and thus not giving the brightness the girl needed. She pointed her flashlight towards it, that’s when her heart skipped a beat and found out how painful it is to forget how to breathe. It took her a long while before she could react properly. The object was a woman, a frightened woman, who looked like she was about to pass out because of fear. That very instant Risa’s heart was broken into pieces.


“Help me...” the girl on the ground uttered in a low and weak voice while raising her hand towards Risa’s direction. That’s when Risa snapped back and took steps forward in a hurry. Risa kneeled down as her heart was beating so fast that she could hear it loud and clear. When the girl on the ground was within her reach, Risa embraced her with all her might as if about to explode from her mix emotions that bottled up in just a short time this night. The girl stiffened for a moment and held Risa tight after. After a minute of hugging the girl let loose and softened, when Risa looked at her that’s when she realized the girl fell unconscious. That instant Risa carried her in her arms and headed back to their car to call for help and back up.


A moment later, Eri reappeared panting. “I lost the man, he was so damn fast and it was dark in there” she said between shallow breaths. “Is she okay?” she continued. That’s when their help arrived.


“Men, search the perimeter” Nakazawa ordered after a short moment of obtaining the information needed. “You’ve got an ID?” she then asked the two cops who were watching the medics gave the girl emergency medical treatment.


“I saw a credit card in her wallet. Takahashi Ai”





 :)



Me is still busy but I did promise to be here after 2-3 days so yeah,  :)  I’m still kinda busy so no daily updates for now. Gomen  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.10~1/8)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 08, 2010, 05:12:30 PM
i'm waiting for an update
so YEAH!!! :P :D

i still dont believe gakisan is being rape by a guy!no way..XD
i still thinks it's aichan, but maybe she just left mark there and not "raping" her..XD

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. The object was a woman, a frightened woman, who looked like she was about to pass out because of fear. That very instant Risa’s heart was broken into pieces.
aichan!only she is able to make gakisan feel so..XD..


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“I saw a credit card in her wallet. Takahashi Ai”
!!
why do you have to stop here.. :angry:
and the guy trying to kill aichan?!WHY?!
who will kill such a lovely..XD
protect her gakisan!!!

and since aichan was there, i think the person kamei pointed out who rape gakisan is aichan..XD


update fast!XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.10~1/8)
Post by: kRisZ on January 08, 2010, 05:24:49 PM
^
Will do when I have extra time  :D
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.10~1/8)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 08, 2010, 06:01:18 PM
Poor Ai! There's no way that man could have been Gaki's 'rapist', no way! :smhid It had to have been Ai that Eri was pointing at, right? Right?! *lays down in the corner* Will wait for moar.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.10~1/8)
Post by: Swtme03 on January 09, 2010, 02:59:51 AM
 :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked

Thank god! I hope Eri was referring to Aichan when she said that's who raped her.
Otherwise, DOWN WITH THE RAPIST!!  :angry:
Either way tho, DOWN WITH THE RAPIST/TRYING TO KILL AICHAN MAN!!!  :scolding:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.10~1/8)
Post by: amEthystx on January 09, 2010, 04:10:46 AM
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Watashi no oneesan desu
ii na~ Onee-san nihon ni sunde imasu ka? <- lol...my rusty japanese

 :depressed: :depressed: :depressed:

My god...........Lucky it was the girl beside the man!! Can the rapist be Tsukun? LOL!

*grumble@*(#^)*%fwlb*fhajbfe!!!AI-CHAN!!!fwa@()&#*(%@()U&^!@*(^grumble* but lucky Risa was there to save Ai-chan!! XD

So i guess.....

 :gmon shy: :mon olympic:

 :P

 :mon bat:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.10~1/8)
Post by: badsaints on January 09, 2010, 07:48:54 AM
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“That’s a man! I was raped by a man?!?”
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“YOU LET A MAN RAPED ME!?!
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‘How can my partner and my best friend for life let a man be in bed with me?’
Why do I get the feeling Risa was more bothered by the fact that she was in bed with a man than the fact that she was actually raped? :lol:


Ah poor Ai. Maybe this is a good opportunity for Risa to take care of Ai and a chance for them to get closer :w00t:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.10~1/8)
Post by: cogi_yoshi on January 09, 2010, 04:36:50 PM
EHHH?!?!? WHO'S THAT MAN WHO HURT AI?!?! KILL HIM RISA!!!! :mon zoom: :

aherm...anyways... hmmm, wait...hmmm, is Reina dead here? if yes...maybe that man's the one who killed Reina... maybe it's a Wota of Ai!!!! :mon scare:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.10~1/8)
Post by: lil_hamz on January 09, 2010, 06:30:27 PM
Aww u made me blush with ya comment. As for me being here, of course I had to. This fic is really good :) I lol-ed when Risa was fine with being raped by a girl just not a man xD yay Gaki-san to the rescue. I hope hers is the first face Ai sees when she wakes up.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.10~1/8)
Post by: kRisZ on January 10, 2010, 11:47:46 AM
@alwaysYou ( can I call you S!Hu!  :) )
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i still dont believe gakisan is being rape by a guy!no way..XD
:D

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why do you have to stop here.. :angry:
:grin:

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and since aichan was there, i think the person kamei pointed out who rape gakisan is aichan..XD
:pimp:


@rnd-sama
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Poor Ai! There's no way that man could have been Gaki's 'rapist', no way! :smhid
Lemme think  :twisted:


@Swtme03
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Otherwise, DOWN WITH THE RAPIST!!  :angry:
Either way tho, DOWN WITH THE RAPIST/TRYING TO KILL AICHAN MAN!!!  :scolding:
XD


@Bishop NI
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ii na~ Onee-san nihon ni sunde imasu ka? <- lol...my rusty japanese

 :depressed: :depressed: :depressed:
XD Hai, so desu. How about we end our Japanese convo here, my keyboard's starting to color red *nosebleeds*  XD

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My god...........Lucky it was the girl beside the man!! Can the rapist be Tsuku? LOL!
:lol:

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:gmon shy: :mon olympic:

 :P
:mon olympics:  :D


@Baddie
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Why do I get the feeling Risa was more bothered by the fact that she was in bed with a man than the fact that she was actually raped? :lol:
:lol:  Well, she likes girls  :roll:

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Ah poor Ai. Maybe this is a good opportunity for Risa to take care of Ai and a chance for them to get closer :w00t:
Yay!  :leek:

@Cogi
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EHHH?!?!? WHO'S THAT MAN WHO HURT AI?!?! KILL HIM RISA!!!! :mon zoom: :
lol  XD

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aherm...anyways... hmmm, wait...hmmm, is Reina dead here? if yes...maybe that man's the one who killed Reina... maybe it's a Wota of Ai!!!! :mon scare:
OMG I love your imagination  :lol:


@lil_hamz
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I lol-ed when Risa was fine with being raped by a girl just not a man xD yay Gaki-san to the rescue.
:grin: Yay!

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I hope hers is the first face Ai sees when she wakes up.
:pimp:




CHAPTER 11



‘Takahashi Ai’ Risa mumbled while looking at the beauty peacefully laying on white linen bed of the hospital. The patient was still unconscious after the rescue. The only good thing about the incident was that she suffered no serious injuries other than the bruises on her knees which could be attributed to her tripping while running away from that lunatic. Emotional damage has yet to be known when she wakes up. And that’s what Risa’s been doing the past two hours, waiting, for the girl’s awakening.


Risa jumped up when she felt her phone vibrated inside her jeans pocket. She was too engrossed observing the girl in front of her. This was the first time she had laid her eyes on her neighbor this long and close, allowing her to examine the unconscious girl’s beauty and got mesmerized on the process. She stood up and headed out to answer her phone, the last thing she’ll ever do tonight is to disturb the sleeping beauty.

“Niigaki here”

...

“What!?”

...


Eri emerged from the corner and returned holding two cups of coffee with both hands. Puzzled as the girl in front of her was seriously talking on the phone, visibly Risa’s face showed gloomy expression as she continued listening on her phone. The first and last thing she heard was the loud and somewhat shocked ‘What’ from Risa.


“I’ll be there right away.” Risa shut close her phone and averted her attention at her serious but bewildered partner.


“We have another victim, same case with Jun’s. I need you to be here and watch her for me.” Risa said while glancing toward the girl on bed.

“I can go with you and help” Eri protested

“You’re too exhausted already and besides we need somebody to be here. We don’t know when that bastard will show up again. You can recognize him if ever he’ll be here.”


Eri nodded, that’s what all Risa needed in order to leave with ease. She cannot put in danger two lives. Eri needed rest and Ai needed eyes. Before Risa turned to walk toward the elevator’s location, she shifted to face the glass door of Ai’s room, after a couple of seconds she finally moved and walked off after nodding at her partner.

~~~

Risa skidded to a stop behind the other parked police cars. The silent neighborhood was filled with blaring sirens and cars arrived after another. Neighbors gathered outside the house which was barricaded with yellow tape with ‘Police Line Do Not Cross’ written on it. Spectators were there some only wearing their robes and some in their pajamas. Unmistakably they came out from their bed and checked what the disturbance was all about. Newsmen were also visible outside the marked line, with their cameras flashing and cameras rolling, more than eager to know what happened inside.


Risa bent a little to get pass the yellow barricade and headed toward a police officer who was standing by the door. Nakazawa was behind Risa, they arrived at the crime scene at almost the same time. When the police officer saw their Chief, he handed her Polaroid shots and he did the same to others who arrived including Risa.


Just like Jun’s case, the girl was tied down with blue rope but this time the victim wore only her underwear and a piece of cloth was put inside her mouth.


“The medical examiners are inside now” he started

“Anybody from the family?” Nakazawa asked

“She lived alone”

“No one saw or hear the incident?”

“Nobody we can find at the moment”

“Let’s just hope the perpetrator left a trace this time” Nakazawa articulated. The previous crime’s still unsolved due to lack of traces and evidences. Clearly the person behind the crime was professional enough to leave the investigators stir their minds.


“Anybody recognize the girl?” Nakazawa asked her men and women but everyone including Risa shook their heads.


“All right, let’s move people. Go to every neighbor and see what people know. Suspicious person who roamed around, screams, anything that the neighbors might have noticed.”



Everyone, including Risa, moved and started their work. When she moved out from the barricaded line, she took her phone out and dialed a number.

“Is she okay?”


 





Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.11~1/10)
Post by: kuro808 on January 10, 2010, 12:10:02 PM
WHO IS IT????????????????????

Sorry I needed to say that but this is a lot of suspense for the chapter
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.11~1/10)
Post by: badsaints on January 10, 2010, 12:31:28 PM
Another murder huh? Is this killer targetting any specific victims, such as girls living alone? :?

Argh!!!! Stop leaving us with cliffhangers already :angry:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.11~1/10)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 10, 2010, 12:53:53 PM
I have figured out the plot!

Okay, here it goes: Reina died and became Ai's guardian angel, watching over her from the other side. She loves Ai very much and just wants her to be happy and seeing as Risa makes her happy, though Ai doesn't know it yet, Reina is trying to make sure they get together.

By killing anyone who could potentially ruin their relationship! This includes girls that Risa knows personally, girls that go to the same club as Risa and girls who live in the same city as Risa. So, Reina decides that Eri's next, but becomes quite attched to the quirky turtle. Unfortunately, she's still dead, so she can only watch from afar as Eri dates Sayu. In the end, Reina, overcome by her jealously of the living, kills Sayu. And Takagaki lives happily ever after, kicking ass and taking names in their badass Takgaki way.

So, was I close? :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.11~1/10)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 10, 2010, 01:46:22 PM
^oh man!!!! :lol:
your imagination is  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
XD

@kRisZ: go ahead.. :D

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“She lived alone”
it really seem like he targetting girls who live alone..
kill and rape?  :angry:

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“Is she okay?”
how come i have a feeling, the reply she get will be "AHHHHHHHHH *vase breaking sound*" XD Xd
since i dont think the guy will let aichan go so easily as she saw his face
and definitely he wanna silent aichan..

and yeah!!
Stop leaving us with cliffhangers! :angry: :angry:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.11~1/10)
Post by: amEthystx on January 10, 2010, 06:07:11 PM
^^ LOL~ Baby Tree! Great storyline you have there!

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Hai, so desu. How about we end our Japanese convo here, my keyboard's starting to color red *nosebleeds*
- why are you having nose bleed?? LOL

I KNOW!

The guy is interested in Risa.. So when he saw Jun close to Risa in the park, he killed her... then he stalked her to the club...So he saw Risa with the girl and Ai-chan.. He went for Ai-chan..but she got saved by Risa... then he went onwards to the girl that danced with Risa..  Another why he had chose to kill was because so that he can have Risa coming after him from the case!

YES! I GOT IT RIGHT!? LOL~ :P

 :mon bat:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.11~1/10)
Post by: LovelyGaki on January 10, 2010, 09:45:55 PM
Nice TakaGaki story  :wub: :heart:

Keep it up  :twothumbs
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.11~1/10)
Post by: Haruka on January 10, 2010, 11:28:01 PM
Damn!! I Love it >o<

Me mantiene en suspenso =D

I Like Police Fics xD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.11~1/10)
Post by: Swtme03 on January 11, 2010, 02:26:38 AM
At least now we know that Ai isn't the murderer....
Or is there not enough evidence to prove that?.... :hehehe:
What was she doing out so late that night that ended up getting her caught up in a sticky situation like that anyway?...
.....She could still possibly be the murderer  :glasses:
BUT I DON'T WANT HER TO BE!!!  :gyaaah:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.11~1/10)
Post by: kRisZ on January 11, 2010, 02:52:14 PM
@kurokun
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WHO IS IT????????????????????

Sorry I needed to say that but this is a lot of suspense for the chapter
You'll find out sooner or later  :P


@baddie
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Another murder huh? Is this killer targetting any specific victims, such as girls living alone? :?

Argh!!!! Stop leaving us with cliffhangers already :angry:
Himitsu   :P2


@rnd-sama
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I have figured out the plot!
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So, was I close? :lol: :lol:
:shocked  :lol: I hate you  :lol:


@S!Hu!
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how come i have a feeling, the reply she get will be "AHHHHHHHHH *vase breaking sound*" XD Xd
You're just like the above quoted commenter  :roll:  :P

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and yeah!!
Stop leaving us with cliffhangers! :angry: :angry:
Was it really that cliffhanger? If yes Yay!  :mon fyeah:


@Bishop NI
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- why are you having nose bleed?? LOL
Well, I was thinking overly in advance that you'll say some Japanese phrases and I'll be left thinking deep hard how to decipher it and then there the imaginary nosebleed  XD  Damn, do I look like a fool now  :ph43r:

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I KNOW!
.R
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YES! I GOT IT RIGHT!? LOL~ :P
:fainted:


@LovelyGaki
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Nice TakaGaki story  :wub: :heart:

Keep it up  :twothumbs
:mon hi:  and Yay! Thank you  :heart:


@Haruka
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Damn!! I Love it >o<

Me mantiene en suspenso =D

I Like Police Fics xD
:mon hi:  Thank you  :love:


@Swtme03
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What was she doing out so late that night that ended up getting her caught up in a sticky situation like that anyway?...
.....She could still possibly be the murderer  :glasses:
Arg... you too   :fainted:



@everyone
When I head east someone’s there, when I head west someone’s there too. Arg. You all are making me turn to a dead end.  :imdead:  But still keep them coming, I’ll try to dodge them while I’m still alive and kicking.  :mon kungfu:   :grin:






UPDATE 12




“She woke up just a few minutes after you left”

...

“She seems fine to me” she continued while taking her vision toward the closed glass door. The doctor was inside along with a nurse doing medical checkup.

...

“I’ll talk to her after the doctor’s over.”

...

“Don’t worry Gaki-san, I got this covered.”

...

“Un, take care. Bye.”


Just after Eri hang her phone up the doctor stepped out from the room and so Eri walked toward him.
 

When the doctor noticed her, he paused and spoke “You’re the one with her right?” he asked Eri and Eri said yes. “The patient is physically okay. Although there’s no signs of psychological trauma at this moment but I highly suggest she sees a counselor. She can check out in the morning.” Eri nodded, thanked the doctor and bowed as the doctor left. She then stepped inside the room making Ai looked at her.



“Hello” She greeted the patient with a smile. Ai looked like she was in deep thought, as if looking for something that she had no idea what, while she was staring at Eri.


“We've met at the club a few days back” when Ai was still somewhat confused at her last statement she continued “I was with Risa at that moment” Eri then gave out a sweet smile making Ai smile back.


“You remember now?” Eri asked in a cheery voice.


“Yes, I now remember” Ai said while blushing a little. How can she forget that evening? That day was a big part of her life as she took her first step on her new real journey. She made her biggest decision in her mature life after Reina’s absence on that same day... to forget, let go and start anew... and this time for real. She made a promise to Reina that what happened between them will never happen with her and Risa again. A promise she intends to keep this time.


“My name is Ai Takahashi” she slightly bowed her head as she introduced herself.

“How are you feeling?”

“I feel okay, thank you”

“That’s good.” knowing that and sensing that the patient feels comfortable she started to do her job, clock is ticking and the perpetrator’s still on the loose, time is not on their side at this moment.


“Would you mind if I ask you a couple of questions about the incident?” the cop asked which made Ai stiffen for a moment but she gave Eri the go signal a few seconds after.


“What were you doing in that place on that hour?” she asked in a calm and friendly voice.


Ai paused for a moment, looked at her hands which were on top of a pillow nestled above her lap the hospital provided. “I went out to buy some medicine. I had a headache last night and when I checked and found out that I ran out of med, I went to the drugstore. When I already had what I needed, I walked back to my car which was parked some distance away from the store, that’s when I saw the man” Ai’s lips was quivering when she told Eri what had happened.


“Do you know him?”


“I can’t really recognize him. He was there standing a few meters away from me with a stick in his hand. At first I pretended I didn’t see him, but he lunged forward, that’s when I panicked and ran, I looked for help but no one was there and he followed me until I tripped and fell. I thought that was my end and so I closed my eyes waiting for my dreadful fate, and then I heard someone shouted that’s when I found you in that alley” Ai was now trembling and crying as she relived the incident. She was now hugging her pillow and rocking her upper body back and forth.


Eri could do nothing except to move closer and put both of her arms around the patient’s body to comfort her. “Shhss, it’s okay. We will make sure that that man will never get near you again.” The cop uttered as she hugged the still shaking girl.


“Where is she?”




 
 :)   Freshly written  :D

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 12~1/11)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 11, 2010, 02:57:41 PM
Ah, poor Ai. Seems like the trauma is finally setting in.
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She made a promise to Reina that what happened between them will never happen with her and Risa again. A promise she intends to keep this time.
So she did kill Reina?! :shocked

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  :lol: I hate you :lol:
Haha, as long as I got a laugh. I'll stop giving you a hard time, for now.  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 12~1/11)
Post by: amEthystx on January 11, 2010, 02:58:46 PM
HA! I'll edit later!

EDIT: ^SOB~ Baby Tree was faster!

Oh well..... i wonder why i keep having this idea too that Ai-chan had killed Reina! lol..even as i doubt so~

Let Risa go to Ai-chan! Faster faster! XD *Give Risa a camel!*

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Ch.11~1/10)
Post by: badsaints on January 11, 2010, 03:28:06 PM
@baddie
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Another murder huh? Is this killer targetting any specific victims, such as girls living alone? :?

Argh!!!! Stop leaving us with cliffhangers already :angry:
Himitsu   :P2
Aww Come on~ You can whisper it to me. Promise I won't tell anyone :P


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“She woke up just a few minutes after you left”
:onioncheer:


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“We've met at the club a few days back”
*pump fists into the air* It was Ai who "raped" Risa! (though I shouldn't be happy about Risa getting raped :P)


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She made her biggest decision in her mature life after Reina’s absence on that same day... to forget, let go and start anew... and this time for real. She made a promise to Reina that what happened between them will never happen with her and Risa again. A promise she intends to keep this time.
Reina's absence? Wait a minute...you mean Reina didn't die? She left Ai? Or Ai left her? :dunno:


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Ai was now trembling and crying as she relived the incident. She was now hugging her pillow and rocking her upper body back and forth.
Aww poor girl :mon hanky: Get Risa there! Now! :mon cheek:


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“Where is she?”
Missing the bean already?  :mon misch:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 12~1/11)
Post by: kuro808 on January 11, 2010, 05:52:33 PM
Ai has gone through some traumatic stage, hmm, that seems rough for her now, well keep up the good work
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 12~1/11)
Post by: Haruka on January 11, 2010, 06:36:20 PM
You surprise me xD

Thanks for this updates =)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 12~1/11)
Post by: Treykun on January 11, 2010, 07:02:25 PM
Dios... :shocked

I'm starting to think that Ai-chan killed Reina too... :shocked
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 12~1/11)
Post by: kRisZ on January 12, 2010, 03:44:05 PM
@rnd-sama
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So she did kill Reina?! :shocked
Says who?  :shocked

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Haha, as long as I got a laugh. I'll stop giving you a hard time, for now.  XD
Umm... thanks.?.  :P


@Bishop NI
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Let Risa go to Ai-chan! Faster faster! XD *Give Risa a camel!*
<Insert C's pink camel here>  XD


@Baddie
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Aww Come on~ You can whisper it to me. Promise I won't tell anyone :P
Sorry I don’t trust people with Baddie in their name.  :roll:

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*pump fists into the air* It was Ai who "raped" Risa!
:cow:

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Reina's absence? Wait a minute...you mean Reina didn't die? She left Ai? Or Ai left her? :dunno:
:pimp:


@kurokun
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Ai has gone through some traumatic stage, hmm, that seems rough for her now, well keep up the good work
:)2


@Haruka
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You surprise me xD

Thanks for this updates =)
Thank you for reading  :D


@Trey-trey
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Dios... :shocked

I'm starting to think that Ai-chan killed Reina too... :shocked
:shocked   :D





UPDATE 13




Risa’s face showed exhaustion, her eyes had somewhat black circles around it. Her skin texture showed the stress she’s carrying. Her body was slouching giving out a worn-out aura. Who could not get tired after a series of less-sleep nights? She was fishing for her house keys with closed eyes, battling against sleep and could only hope that she won’t pass out outside her house, when she got a hold of it her phone rang. Being tired and sleepy, she took her phone out from her jacket and flipped it open without looking on the screen.


“Niigaki here” she said before letting out a yawn which was fairly loud, not minding if it was rude or not.

“So tired?” stunned Risa unexpectedly dropped her house keys onto the floor from her hand and her eyes turned wide awake upon hearing the caller’s voice, but remained speechless.

“Someone cut your tongue?” teased by the caller. Risa turned around and there she saw her smiling neighbor who waved her other hand at her when they met eye to eye.

“Good... morning?” she faltered a greeting and hesitantly waved back.

“Are you hungry? I made bread and pancakes” Ai said still having her sweet smile plastered on her face.

“...”

“Why don’t you come over for a sec and have your tummy be filled before you go to bed?”


Risa could only manage to nod while she took a slow step towards her neighbor’s house after flipping close her phone. But before she could reach to her waist level gate, she stumbled when she miscalculated her steps, making Ai chuckle at the scene she had just witnessed. Risa hurriedly got up and gave out an embarrassing smile while shouting “I’m okay, I’m okay” which made Ai chuckle more. After the entertaining occurrence and the laughter died down, Ai signaled Risa to come and get in.

~~~

“Who wrecked your kitchen?”

“I seldom make bread” she said while she gestured for her visitor to sit down.

“Oh... I thought you hated pancakes”

“Nah, actually I love them” Said Ai while she placed her visitor’s plate on the table along with a cup of coffee, making Risa cheered up after smelling the aroma. Ai took her plate and cup from the counter and put them across her visitor’s and sat down.

“Itadakimasu” they said in unison


Risa could not help but throw some glances towards Ai who was concentrating on her food. The girl looks even cuter when she eats.


“Stop staring. It makes me uncomfortable” the owner of the house said without even looking at Risa. Taken by surprise she slightly leaped from her seat, which earned another chuckle from Ai.

“How did you get my number?’ Asked Risa when the laughter subsided.

“From your friend Eri, a couple of hours ago”

“Oh” she replied after sipping her coffee. “Oh, I almost forgot. How are you?!” Risa asked worried

“As you can see, I’m okay”

“Are you sure? What did the doctor tell you? No internal injuries? No serious injuries? She asked successively whilst standing up and hurriedly walking towards Ai, checking if there was any.


“Hey, I’m okay. Relax” She said while raising her arm and absentmindedly putting it against Risa’s upper torso. The girl froze and looked into Ai’s eyes. Risa’s eyes were filled with caring feelings at first but eventually it was being replaced with burning desire. The moment stood still but Risa’s emotion multiplied as the second went by and Ai was feeling the same as they stared eye to eye. Risa moved her right hand toward the sitting Ai who was still nestling her arm on Risa’s pounding chest. She then wiped away some flour that was on Ai’s chin. Slowly she moved in closer, struggling with her boiling sensation within her, but decided to only hug Ai at the end.


“I’m very glad that you’re safe and okay” Risa quivered and kneeled before Ai as she continued her hug. Ai embraced back the girl and they stayed in that position for quite a while. After a few minutes, Ai tried to break the hug but Risa didn’t budge, and so Ai let the position stay for another couple of minutes. Feeling numb for being in that position for a longer period, Ai slightly nudged the girl who was still clinging onto her, when she didn’t move a bit, that’s when she realized the girl fell asleep.


“Silly” Ai softly uttered. She then carried the girl and laid her down on the couch. Left her there for a sec and returned with a pillow and a blanket. She then tucked the blanket snugly around Risa. Leaned in and kissed the exhausted cop on the forehead and whispered “Sweet dreams my dear.”



 :)

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 13~1/12)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 12, 2010, 04:13:07 PM
*hop in*
skip the previous chp comment..XD..
*hop out*

*hop in to comment again*
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“Are you hungry? I made bread and pancakes” Ai said still having her sweet smile plastered on her face.
aichan make the move!!
go go

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“Who wrecked your kitchen?”
the owner

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Risa could not help but throw some glances towards Ai who was concentrating on her food. The girl looks even cuter when she eats.
aichan definitely look more cuter whenever she eat..XD
too concentrate

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She then wiped away some flour that was on Ai’s chin. Slowly she moved in closer, struggling with her boiling sensation within her, but decided to only hug Ai at the end.
KR!!!!!!! :angry:
WHY!!!!
geee..i expect a kiss!!!   :angry: :angry:
 XD :lol:

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Ai embraced back the girl and they stayed in that position for quite a while.
just go to the bedroom and hug longer.. :D

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Leaned in and kissed the exhausted cop on the forehead and whispered “Sweet dreams my dear.”
awwwww :wub: :wub: :wub:

expect another update soon!!!

*hop out again*
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 12~1/11)
Post by: badsaints on January 12, 2010, 04:14:40 PM
@Baddie
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Aww Come on~ You can whisper it to me. Promise I won't tell anyone :P
Sorry I don’t trust people with Baddie in their name.  :roll:
Awwww *pouts* I don't eat kids. Serious! At least not anymore :lol:

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Reina's absence? Wait a minute...you mean Reina didn't die? She left Ai? Or Ai left her? :dunno:
:pimp:
I'm gonna stick with my theory for now. Ai's been burned when Reina breached their relationship and moved town to start anew. Then the rest of the story as per chapter 1 onward. Am i right?



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“Who wrecked your kitchen?”
:lol:


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“I seldom make bread”
I feel sorry for Risa. Is that bread safe for consumption? :lol:


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Ai slightly nudged the girl who was still clinging onto her, when she didn’t move a bit, that’s when she realized the girl fell asleep.
What a way to blow the opportunity, Risa :P But at least it gives Risa a chance for...
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She then carried the girl and laid her down on the couch. Left her there for a sec and returned with a pillow and a blanket. She then tucked the blanket snugly around Risa. Leaned in and kissed the exhausted cop on the forehead and whispered “Sweet dreams my dear.”
What better way to infiltrate your target's fortress :w00t:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 13~1/12)
Post by: kRisZ on January 12, 2010, 04:27:56 PM
Says who there’s another chapter. Ai already whispered the words unsaid  :P
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 13~1/12)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 12, 2010, 04:40:07 PM
^if u gonna stop here, i gonna kill you   8)
XD XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 13~1/12)
Post by: kRisZ on January 12, 2010, 04:43:50 PM
 :shocked

 :mon rush:

 XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 13~1/12)
Post by: amEthystx on January 12, 2010, 05:21:07 PM
^ *Rides C's pink camel and rammed over kRisZ* Get back here!

I have unknowingly been nicknamed bishop i realized... but y "Bishop NI" instead of just bishop? XD

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“Are you hungry? I made bread and pancakes”
- lol~ pancakes! Risa must be like "PANCAKES!?"

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“I seldom make bread”
- o.O POOR RISA! but then again...does bread need to be made??? isn't it like spread the jam and done?? lol how bad is she anyway!?

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What better way to infiltrate your target's fortress  :w00t:
- I second that~  :D

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 13~1/12)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 12, 2010, 05:53:51 PM
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Risa hurriedly got up and gave out an embarrassing smile while shouting “I’m okay, I’m okay” which made Ai chuckle more.
Made me chuckle too.

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“Who wrecked your kitchen?”

“I seldom make bread” she said while she gestured for her visitor to sit down.

“Oh... I thought you hated pancakes”

“Nah, actually I love them”
The whole exchange just tickled me momoiro.

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Ai slightly nudged the girl who was still clinging onto her, when she didn’t move a bit, that’s when she realized the girl fell asleep.
:wub: :wub:

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“Sweet dreams my dear.”
:wub: :wub: :wub: :heart: :heart: My heart esploded a little.


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Says who there’s another chapter.
:shocked

 :mon rush:

 XD
*blocks exit* :twisted:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 13~1/12)
Post by: lil_hamz on January 12, 2010, 08:41:45 PM
Oh yay! Update^^ ah drats I expected a kiss to but it's ok, something better might happen after Risa wakes up :P
So we have confirmed Gaki lost "it" to Ai which is good but I wanted what occured between her and Reina. I hope it's nothing too terrible*worried*
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 13~1/12)
Post by: kRisZ on January 14, 2010, 12:15:49 PM
I’m not supposed to be her today because of work, I’m so tired at the moment, but I forgot to post this last night because of a certain distraction, a good laugh distraction. The strongest pillar of YTTC stormed the house last night  :yep: Our favorite Nutty Intruder struck again with full force. But it turned out to be a good thing though because I was able to make some revisions, yes this was revised but stayed crappy still   :lol:  I’ll be back probably on Saturday if not I’m here by Monday  :)


@s!hu!
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*hop in*
skip the previous chp comment..XD..
*hop out*
:roll:

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KR!!!!!!! :angry:
WHY!!!!
geee..i expect a kiss!!!   :angry: :angry:
 XD :lol:
:smhid   :P

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just go to the bedroom and hug longer.. :D
good idea  :twisted:


@baddie
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Awwww *pouts* I don't eat kids. Serious! At least not anymore :lol:
Kid? Where?  :lick: (  :mon look: Where's that spoon and fork holding emoticon  :D )

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I'm gonna stick with my theory for now. Ai's been burned when Reina breached their relationship and moved town to start anew. Then the rest of the story as per chapter 1 onward. Am i right?
I dunno  :P

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I feel sorry for Risa. Is that bread safe for consumption? :lol:
XD

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What better way to infiltrate your target's fortress :w00t:
:strawberry:


@Bishop NI
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I have unknowingly been nicknamed bishop i realized... but y "Bishop NI" instead of just bishop? XD
*Points above*  :P  :k-thrilled:

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- o.O POOR RISA! but then again...does bread need to be made??? isn't it like spread the jam and done?? lol how bad is she anyway!?
Old people... *looks around* like baddie  :mon rush:   :k-thrilled:  uses personal touch to impress a girl?  :D


@rnd-sama
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Made me chuckle too.
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The whole exchange just tickled me momoiro.
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My heart esploded a little.
:cow:  :muffin:  :strawberry:

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*blocks exit* :twisted:
:scared:  :D


@lil_hamz
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Oh yay! Update^^ ah drats I expected a kiss to but it's ok, something better might happen after Risa wakes up :P
So we have confirmed Gaki lost "it" to Ai which is good but I wanted what occured between her and Reina. I hope it's nothing too terrible*worried*
We'll see  :D





UPDATE 14



 “Who are you and what are you doing here?” a shrill voice resounded the quiet house. Ai turned around startled. Her feather duster flew a meter away, surprised by the sudden intrusion.

“Oh, I didn’t know Risa had a hot house assistant” said the intruder while eyeing the frozen girl from head to toe and giving her a wink when the intruder met Ai’s eye.

“Don’t mind her, she’s not that pervert always” Eri emerged from the open door smiling and gave Sayu a spank on the head.

“Eri that hurts” Sayu pouted while rubbing her injured head.

“I know” she retorted before sticking her tongue out to the pouting bunny. “Where’s Risa?

“She’s sleeping” Ai replied amused by the act. When Eri was about to head upstairs Ai continued “Oh no she’s not upstairs, I was here to pick her key up when she dropped and forgot to take it an hour ago. And then I remembered she’s been barely here the whole week so I volunteered cleaning her house.

“Lucky” commented the bunny “Wait, you two knew each other? How come I didn’t now?” she continued, giving the two an inquisitive look.

“You’ve already met her, at the club, a few weeks ago” Eri rolled her eyes about to talk again when Sayu cut in

“Oh yeah I remember! You’re the rapist!”

“Ehh!?” yelped Ai upon hearing the last word the bunny uttered.

“Itai! Eri that’s the second one in just a short period and it really hurts” whined Sayu “Risa did call her rapist”

Eri ignored her girlfriend and faced the bewildered Ai. “Risa woke up after that night and hysterically called and informed us that she was raped and that she had no idea who she was with. We didn’t catch your name so we were not able to give her any name, so up till now she had no idea it was you.”

“I see”

“If she’s not upstairs, where is she?”

“Oh, she’s sleeping in my house at the moment”

“Ohhh, she sleeps in your bed now?” teased the bunny

“Sayu!” Eri exclaimed

“What? I was just asking” grinning, Sayu faced her girlfriend

“No, she’s on my couch. You need me to call her?”

“No, it’s okay, she needed the sleep. We’re in the area so we decided to drop by and give her these fruits” Eri said while handing a basket to Ai.

“Thank you. I’ll tell her you paid a visit”

“Ohhh, acting like a girlfriend now?”

*Toink* “Itai”


~~~


The sun was almost setting. The owner of the house was in her black robe patiently waiting on her chair by the window holding a glass of wine while watching the sun slowly descending and the darkness starting to reign.

“Mmmn” someone mumbled from the bed and so Ai shifted her gaze toward the person who bit by bit opened her eyes and studied the unfamiliar surrounding, until she met Ai’s eyes. She tried to sit up but failed.

“Why am I handcuffed?” she questioned the smiling Ai who gulped down the glass’s content.

“I just found out that I was charged guilty without even tried.” Not breaking the eye contact, Ai slowly crossed her legs, and paid her full attention to the somewhat lost Risa.

“What are you talking about?”

“How could I rape someone who passes out every after 5 seconds of trying to wake her up through sucking her flesh here and there?” arcing her brow as she stood up. “It’s payback time.” smirking, she took her robe off revealing her sexy lingerie, a vinyl string bra and a low rise cheeky shorts both with grommet detail. Risa was left speechless at the scene, still processing the now turned seductive woman in front of her.

“It took me a long while finding this” she seductively said while pointing at her attire, running her left hand over her almost exposed chest creating an almost drooling Risa  “and this” swaying a single feather before running it on Risa’s uncovered belly, making the captive yelped at the sudden contact. Satisfied with the initial reaction, she turned around and uttered “Wait here” after a couple of seconds Ai returned with a platter of fruits and placed it on the bedside table.

“Here, I’m sure you’re starving, you’ve been hibernating the whole day” she shoved a grape into Risa’s mouth, before licking her own finger tips.

Not taking away her vision from the seductress, she chewed the fruit unconsciously until she realized it was sour and eventually showed it through her distorted face.

“What? Not that sweet? Let me do something about that.” She picked another piece and this time she put it in between her teeth instead and moved in closer to her ogling captive.

Risa was literally gulping her own saliva down when Ai was closing in. There was a sudden surge of electricity exploding inside her body, electrifying her every nerve. She raised her head to meet Ai’s mouth but was pushed back. Slowly, Ai moved closer, making Risa loss her patience more and more. Ai stopped when she was an inch away, where she could breathe the tied woman’s unsteady breath and waited there for Risa’s move. Risa bit it and pushed as far as she could to savor her captor’s lips but Ai pulled back smirking after a good five seconds.

“Not so fast, we have all the time in the world my dear” Risa remained speechless, her body slightly trembling, eyes dilating.

“We’ll get there sooner or later dear, but my way and my time” she winked and continued. “Was it good?”

“Huh?”

“Wrong answer.” Ai picked something from a bucket down the floor and placed it on Risa’s belly causing Risa to shiver. Still unable to speak, she peeked down to see what it was.

“You’re burning hot you need ice to cool down” Ai said still gazing at her prey’s eyes while her hand was playing with the cubes, touching Risa’s flesh from time to time, and making the ice melt in a flash. She leaned in and sipped the liquefying cube from Risa’s belly button, eliciting a moan from the captive but the offensive mouth retreated after hearing the sound, agonizing the woman more.

Ai picked the feather up and ran it on Risa’s tummy making Risa shiver again but this time from the tickling sensation. Ai watched as her captive’s eyes darkened with each stoke, she listened as her captive let out a whimpering moan making her heat up at the same time and making her resistance reach its boundary. Not being able to control her inner heat, Ai made her move, she slowly climbed on the bed and straddled Risa on the hips, her hands traveled until they met Risa’s tied hands and she intertwined her fingers with the captive’s while staring intensely at her. Risa was not the only one starving with the other’s kiss but her as well. She gingerly kissed Risa on the forehead down to her nose, to her cheeks, to her chin and then she paused for a moment and gazed into the waiting parted lips and into Risa’s eyes before finally moving in for the long awaited kiss. It was gentle at first but progressively it turned rough. Exchanging throaty moans, both heat up even more. After a while, the girl underneath noticed some moist that landed on her cheeks, for this reason she broke the kiss and found out the girl on top of her was shedding tears. She stared at Ai with questioning and worried look, “I thought I will never taste your lips again” Ai whispered, resting her forehead on her captive’s. “And I thought this day would never come” replied Risa as she wiggled lightly her head managing a nose to nose contact as her own tears started to fall as well.


“Untie me..?”





Enjoy  :D


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 13~1/12)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 14, 2010, 12:34:01 PM
 :w00t: :wub: :oops: :drool: :twisted: :on bleed: :imdead: :smoke:

Hgasddrfrrght. Assgradfthhg. Wagthnfmoar. Must have moar.

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*SayuEri interaction*
Also liked but Takagaki overshadowed them a little bit.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 14, 2010, 01:50:34 PM
sayueri interaction is just so  :wub: :wub:
love how eri is the one who "bully" sayu here..XD

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“Oh yeah I remember! You’re the rapist!”
how unfriendly :lol:
but  :twothumbs :twothumbs

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she took her robe off revealing her sexy lingerie, a vinyl string bra and a low rise cheeky shorts both with grommet detail. Risa was left speechless at the scene, still processing the now turned seductive woman in front of her.
:drool: :drool:
*off to imagine this scene*

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for this reason she broke the kiss and found out the girl on top of her was shedding tears. She stared at Ai with questioning and worried look, “I thought I will never taste your lips again” Ai whispered, resting her forehead on her captive’s. “And I thought this day would never come” replied Risa as she wiggled lightly her head managing a nose to nose contact as her own tears started to fall as well.
at first, i thought it was cause aichan felt bad kissing risa cause of reina..
but seem like no worries huh..XD..

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“Untie me..?”
aichan: NO.. :lol:
if yes, gakisan will take over the "top" role ritz..XD

takigaki interaction
seem like aichan and gakisan change their role..LOL..
i still hoping gakisan is the one who takes the initiative..XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
Post by: amEthystx on January 14, 2010, 04:14:28 PM
*Gasped!*

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Our favorite Nutty Intruder struck again with full force.
-What did she do!?  :D Soooo...that was where NI is from.. i thought it was Japanese for brother that "Ni".. so i was like  :?

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Old people... *looks around* like baddie
- She is soooooo gonna shove her walking stick up your ass... LOL! =X

Back to story!


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“Oh yeah I remember! You’re the rapist!”
- Indeed....something that Sayu might say... XD
- Sayu/Eri  :wub:
- Ai-chan must be like...  :shocked *I'm so gonna get her........lol*


Which all know she did! LOL~  :wub:

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“It’s payback time.”
- wooooooo~~~~ *grabs popcorn*

Must have been pretty hard on Ai-chan that day.... finally when she decided to let go and go after Risa... only to find her drunk till the point of blacking out... So she just have to settle on marking her on almost everywhere instead of taking advantage of her due to her current state~ XD How cute~  :wub:

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“Untie me..?”
- YahoooOOOOOOOOooooooo <- singsong version of yahoo~ came out of nowhere from me...which...is pretty common of me.. LOL~


 :mon bat:


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“Oh, I didn’t know Ai had a hot house assistant”
<- Anyway...Was that suppose to be Risa?? :?




Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
Post by: kuro808 on January 14, 2010, 09:30:46 PM
 :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed: :imdead:

wow that was hot /me faints

 :thumbup
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
Post by: Swtme03 on January 14, 2010, 10:16:14 PM
KYAHHH!!!!!!!  :imdead:
That was so sweet, hawt, and sexy all in one!!
I think I'll read it again!  :D
I really want more of this bedtime scene! :yep:  :P
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
Post by: Haruka on January 16, 2010, 12:47:27 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! ._____________.

I AM SPEECHLESS xD

I want more.... where's the next chapy?!?!?!??! xD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
Post by: Treykun on January 16, 2010, 03:33:00 PM
OH MY GOD!!!!

:imdead:

Seriously, I think that I've lost the whole blood that I had :grin:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
Post by: kRisZ on January 16, 2010, 03:56:48 PM
@rnd-sama
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Hgasddrfrrght. Assgradfthhg. Wagthnfmoar. Must have moar.
Kkfdorfsafg. Rokjada. Sdfsadkj.  :yep:  XD



@S!Hu!
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how unfriendly :lol:
but  :twothumbs :twothumbs
Bow.  :D

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:drool: :drool:
*off to imagine this scene*

 :shocked *coughperv#$&cough*  :P  :mon rush:



@Bishop NI
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-What did she do!? :D
For more details please visit YTTC  :P

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Soooo...that was where NI is from.. i thought it was Japanese for brother that "Ni".. so i was like  :?
lol, that would be weird  :lol:

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Old people... *looks around* like baddie
- She is soooooo gonna shove her walking stick up your ass... LOL! =X
Oh i didn't know she had rheumatism   :huhuh  XD   *covers ass with both hands and runs*  :mon rush:
Baddie dear Please make a sound, you're making me worried  :nervous  Please don't make me, it's my birthday in a couple of hours already  :D  :kneelbow: gomen :kneelbow:

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- YahoooOOOOOOOOooooooo <- singsong version of yahoo~ came out of nowhere from me...which...is pretty common of me.. LOL~
You're so full of random ideas, which is  :twothumbs

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“Oh, I didn’t know Ai had a hot house assistant”
<- Anyway...Was that suppose to be Risa?? :?

OMG right   :O   Thank you for pointing that out   :nervous



@kurosawa87
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wow that was hot /me faints

 :thumbup
Thank you  :D



@Swtme03
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That was so sweet, hawt, and sexy all in one!!
I think I'll read it again!  :D
I really want more of this bedtime scene! :yep:  :P
Thank you  :love:  lol



@Haruka
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! ._____________.

I AM SPEECHLESS xD

I want more.... where's the next chapy?!?!?!??! xD
In a minute  :D but it's kinda short  :P



@trey-trey
  :w00t: :mon hi:  Where have you been? I thought the monster under your bed ate you alive.  :grin:







UPDATE 15



Without answering, Ai hungrily kissed the pleading girl. Forgetting her plea, Risa kissed back with same vigor and she pushed her tongue inside Ai’s trembling mouth. Risa was sure this time that the cause of it is her captor’s flaming desire. Ai allowed the trespasser to explore inside, when she got a hold of it she sucked it making Risa moan loudly and quiver more. Ai broke the kiss and trekked east, relishing every second of her trail, savoring the whimpering girl’s scent making the trekker raise some of her hair. Ai then moved up a little to give Risa the access to taste her scent as well which made the woman in control to stiffen and grasp her captive’s hands with a little more force. She continued moving north until she was able to make Risa feel her two perfect molds. Risa traced them lightly with her nose at first, making her captor shiver which in turn made Risa all the more energized, she trailed again the area but this time using her lips, after awhile she stopped and stayed still.


Ai gazed at her captive, unclasped their hands and sat up a little using both of her hands as braces. Not breaking their eye contact, a smirk slowly surfaced. “Found the treasure already?” leaning again toward her captive’s face and targeting her lips, she dived and bit the metal that was in between Risa’s teeth, took it from her mouth and proceeded to the cuffs above.


“You’re so in trouble” declared Risa as she flipped and pinned Ai down on the bed after being freed. Ai giggled and Risa gawked at her. The giggles died down and no one talked for a moment. They only stared at each other’s twinkling eyes. “You’re so beautiful” she said almost inaudibly, just enough for Ai to hear, as she traced Ai’s cheeks with her right hand. Ai’s eyes started to darken again, pleading for her touch. Witnessing the sight, she didn’t wait any longer and lunged downward while still cupping Ai’s face with her hand. Ai’s hands moved and locked on top of Risa’s neck as they continued to share a kiss passionately.


Moan echoed inside the room, the curtains swayed lightly to the tender blow of the wind, the stars danced above and the moon was proud as if rejoicing with them. And then the phone resonated, making Ai flinched for a moment, but ignored the disturbance and continued. The sound was gone for a few seconds but resounded again. “Don’t answer that” mumbled Risa as she gave Ai’s skin light kisses and bit it from time to time. “It’s not mine” this time it’s Risa’s turn to flinch and let out a groan and said “Must be important.” as she buried her head on Ai’s neck. She listened and scanned the room and spotted the flickering light from her phone’s screen. She halfheartedly stood up, picked her phone and flipped it open. “Yeah!” with a tone of annoyance she answered the phone only to be answered back with a hiss from the other line. She removed the phone from her ear and looked at the screen ‘Nakazawa Senpai’ it showed.


“Sumimasen, I was on my bed when you called”

“Get your ass down her at the office right away. I have questions for you!” and then she heard nothing. Nakazawa hang up.

“Shit”




 :D

Please poke me if it’s too much. My only defense and guideline’s that they’re not doing the main course  :nervous  If anyone finds the post inappropriate to be posted here, please drop a bomb  :)


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: Treykun on January 16, 2010, 04:20:43 PM
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:w00t: :mon hi:  Where have you been? I thought the monster under your bed ate you alive.  :grin:
XD He didn't eat me, since you told me that he was down there, I haven't hide myself there anymore :P Nah, I've been here all the time, but I've broken my right wrist At least I'm left-handed xD and I prefer to not to type XD  :kneelbow:

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*READS THE WHOLE SCENE*

:mon blood:

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And then the phone resonated

NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! :on blackhole:

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“Get your ass down her at the office right away. I have questions for you!” and then she heard nothing. Nakazawa hang up.

“Shit”

Indeed :smoke:

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If anyone finds the post inappropriate to be posted here, please drop a bomb  

I don't think that it's inappropiate... Since they're not doing the "main course" :rofl:


Ohhh, I almost forgot to say:

Happy B-day!!!

Little kRisZ is getting old!!!! XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 16, 2010, 04:48:26 PM
YOU!!! :angry: :angry: :angry:

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“Found the treasure already?”
aichan aichan
is definitely a teaser too :lol:

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“You’re so in trouble”
GO GAKISAN!!!
she the rapist!!!!rape her back  :P

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And then the phone resonated
YOU!!!! :angry: :angry: :angry:

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Please poke me if it’s too much. My only defense and guideline’s that they’re not doing the main course
i wan the real main course!  :lol: :lol:

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:drool: :drool:
*off to imagine this scene*

 :shocked *coughperv#$&cough*  :P  :mon rush:
i admit..so, like what i say above
i want the main course..XD XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 14~1/14)
Post by: badsaints on January 16, 2010, 06:10:58 PM
@rnd-sama
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Hgasddrfrrght. Assgradfthhg. Wagthnfmoar. Must have moar.
Kkfdorfsafg. Rokjada. Sdfsadkj.  :yep:  XD
Erien language? :gmon blonde:


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Old people... *looks around* like baddie
- She is soooooo gonna shove her walking stick up your ass... LOL! =X
Oh i didn't know she had rheumatism   :huhuh  XD   *covers ass with both hands and runs*  :mon rush:
Someone's ass is sooo gonna get skewered and bbq :on chew:


Baddie dear Please make a sound, you're making me worried  :nervous  Please don't make me, it's my birthday in a couple of hours already  :D  :kneelbow: gomen :kneelbow:
Sorry me was busy with assignments. Plus those thick books can kill your appetite to read anything else. And I don't want to do great injustice to great writers like you by reading the stories half-assedly :mon innocent: Is it your b'day today? Woot! :luvuluvu:



Happy birthday!!! Here's a flower for you :mon loveflower:



*Caught up with the story*
So Ai has taken over the active role huh *Baddie nods with approval* Volunteering with the housekeeping (and perhaps that's where she found Risa's handcuffs), and using the cuffs to tie her there, using fruits and ice to seduce Risa...Oooooh Kinky~ :twisted:


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“Ohhh, acting like a girlfriend now?”
I love Sayu :twisted:


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Moan echoed inside the room, the curtains swayed lightly to the tender blow of the wind, the stars danced above and the moon was proud as if rejoicing with them.
:mon blood:


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She removed the phone from her ear and looked at the screen ‘Nakazawa Senpai’ it showed.
Damn you, Nakazawa! :on voodoo:


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Please poke me if it’s too much. My only defense and guideline’s that they’re not doing the main course  :nervous  If anyone finds the post inappropriate to be posted here, please drop a bomb  :)
My only complaint is that it's not enough XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: amEthystx on January 16, 2010, 06:46:35 PM
Ohhhhhhhhhh! Little kRisZ!


Happy Birthday!

May you have a great camel year~ XD

*pouts*

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For more details please visit YTTC :P
- I tried to kill myself there~ :(

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Someone's ass is sooo gonna get skewered and bbq :on chew:
- *points to Little kRisZ* It's her~ it's her! (wait....you are also a her right?  :?)

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“Found the treasure already?”
- Risa: Mooooooooooooooooooooo! <- LOL! pure random

LOL~ Risa is so dorky too here~ XD

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“It’s not mine”
- Must have been very embarrassing after saying the "don't pick up" LOL~

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Please poke me if it’s too much
- I think it's more likely you will get poke by a spear or maybe walking stick for making the call interrupt them... :P

 :mon bat:

EDIT: OMG.. Trey-trey~ are are ok?? LOL

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 16, 2010, 09:58:18 PM
Gomen! This isn't a real comment (will edit later)

But I wanna say Happy B'day kRisZ!!  :)

*:on speedy: to real life*

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There's a mini chapter with Yuko in there, it was written with you in mind
:w00t: Arigatou! Was that chapter 8?

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Risa was left there frozen with a mouthful donut staring at the vanishing Ai.
:O bad timing.

RenAi? There's something about it. Why do I got the feeling Reina's not dead, just hasn't showed up yet? :mon huh:

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And so she let Risa do and decide the things and she’ll just watch for her tonight, just like Risa will do to her every time she’s feeling the same way.
That's a good friend :yep:

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And when she re-appeared from the washroom, she came back with a girl clinging to her
I found it funny, it's like 'looking for a girl tonight? Washroom is the place' XD

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“Why do I feel so dirty now?”
You're falling for her. Wooo go Ai! she's taming teh playa slowly but sure  :cow:

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night patrolling until wee hours if she feels like it, just to make sure the town stays safe and peaceful
A great chief, isn't she?  :wub:

Dead body appears! This is getting more interesting :D

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“I saw a credit card in her wallet. Takahashi Ai”
:shocked

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:O Are you running for your dear life?  :O *follows C and makes a thorny barricade behind. There, you’re safe now*
More like running before real life catches me lol but thanks for the barricade :)

Until next time!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 16, 2010, 10:55:14 PM
 :on_hot: Whew, little bit warm in here. Me likey.

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“Shit”
Lol, no kidding.

Waiting for the next chapter.

Happy birfday!! :otomerika: :yossi: :shakeit: :cow:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: Haruka on January 16, 2010, 10:56:13 PM
HAPPY B-DAY!!!!!!!!

And THANKS for this great greeeeat FIC =)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: kawaii beam on January 17, 2010, 12:38:54 AM
happy b-day~! X3
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: kRisZ on January 17, 2010, 02:11:25 AM
@Treykun
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Nah, I've been here all the time, but I've broken my right wrist At least I'm left-handed xD and I prefer to not to type XD  :kneelbow:
EDIT: OMG.. Trey-trey~ are are ok?? LOL
Like what she said but without the LOL  :D
*Sends TakaGaki to send SayuEri to send Reina to Trey-trey*

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Ohhh, I almost forgot to say:

Happy B-day!!!

Little kRisZ is getting old!!!! XD
I know  :D  Thank you  :heart:



@S!Hu!
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GO GAKISAN!!!
she the rapist!!!!rape her back  :P
lol

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i wan the real main course!  :lol: :lol:
:shocked

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i admit..so, like what i say above
i want the main course..XD XD
:shocked  :shocked

 :P



@Baddie
 :bounce:

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Erien language? :gmon blonde:
:grin:

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Someone's ass is sooo gonna get skewered and bbq :on chew:
*reads Bishop NI's comment*  :shocked It's her, it's her   :mon psst: :same Bishop NI

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Sorry me was busy with assignments. Plus those thick books can kill your appetite to read anything else.
:onioncheer:   Ganbatte   :onioncheer:

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Is it your b'day today? Woot! :luvuluvu:
Yeah, I'm aging  :D

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Happy birthday!!! Here's a flower for you :mon loveflower:
:heart:

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My only complaint is that it's not enough XD
I think that was my last bed scene in mind  :halo:



@Bishop NI
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Happy Birthday!

May you have a great camel year~ XD
:heart:   :prayers:  XD

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- I tried to kill myself there~ :(
:lol: Well you had put on the mask, so you're safe... for now  :twisted:

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- *points to Little kRisZ* It's her~ it's her! (wait....you are also a her right?  :?)
:angry:
 :yep:  :D

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- I think it's more likely you will get poke by a spear or maybe walking stick for making the call interrupt them... :P
:scared:



@C

Thank you  :heart:

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*:on speedy: to real life*
:O Are you running for your dear life?  :O *follows C and makes a thorny barricade behind. There, you’re safe now*  :D
Life's busy  :onioncheer:



@rnd-sama
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Waiting for the next chapter.
I'll try to write a short one and post it tomorrow  :nervous

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Happy birfday!! :otomerika: :yossi: :shakeit: :cow:
:heart:



@Haruka
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HAPPY B-DAY!!!!!!!!

And THANKS for this great greeeeat FIC =)
:heart:  :love:



@kawaii beam
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happy b-day~! X3
:heart:




Everyone ( except S!Hu!  :P )
 :heart:


I'll try to update tomorrow   :love:  Have a wonderful Sunday  :love:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 17, 2010, 04:48:29 AM
huh huh huh..
ur birthday?!!!!! :shocked :shocked
how come i dont know.. :angry: :angry:
nvm, i will kick myself   :mon woo:



i wanted to wish you BUT when i saw this
HUMPT!!! :mon annoy:
Everyone ( except S!Hu!  :P )
 :heart:
*off i go*


*back again*
how can i leave w/o wishing
i'm such a *coughgoodcough* person
 treat you :mon noodle: XD
i haven miss it ritz...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY :mon firecrack: :mon kissy: :gmon flowers: :gmon twirl:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: Hart on January 18, 2010, 04:03:14 AM
First of all, happy belated birthday. *gives cyber cake in the shape of :hipheart:*

Second, read all 15 chapters within an hour. Could've read them in about a quarter of that time, but by the time I was up to Chap. 14 I was passing out every few minutes. Same with the last chapter.  :oops:

Finally, I have my own theories as to who this mysterious man that killed Jun is and the mystery surrounding why RenAi had to end. It's probably all connected and unfortunately TanaGaki is stuck right in the middle of it all.



Tsunku's involved..................................................................... And so is Reina. mwahahaha. *runs away*

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: FaqU on January 18, 2010, 05:46:44 AM
First and foremost, Happy belated birthday!!!!! Hope all went well and you had a blast with friends and family  :on BDay:

I've haven't commented and I know that it's bad of me  :kneelbow: so as a peace offering please accept this gift  :JD: and my apologies.

I don't know if it may be me but I could be overthinking lots of things when reading all the way up to this point.  I have plenty of questions but that could also be because I am too dumb to see it.

One main question that I had was about the whole RenAi thing, like it was too quick for Ai to move on, especially since she was crying about Reina one minute then that night decided to rape Risa  :dizzy: 

Of course chapter 14 and 15  :on bleed: :imdead: with my eyes rolled back to my head that is.  The only problem is, you didn't finish it, there wasn't enough of the scene and I'd be determined to read more of it even if I die from blood lossage.  :farofflook:

As to the murder and attack, I want to believe they are related to Ai-chan or Risa but that didn't make sense because Risa didn't recognize one of the victims so if the theory is that they were woman that Risa had slept with, wouldn't that mean that Risa would have recognized them or Eri??? If Ai-chan was involved that didn't make sense because she's only been in town for how long?? it isn't enough for her to have developed strong relationships with others and especially not Jun because of Risa.  If anything the killer had did Ai a favour but then if that is the case why did he hurt Ai???  So unless there is a missing link...maybe the man was related to the death of Reina, and it has now come back to haunt Ai? but then why kill Jun...unless Jun had a history with Reina too perhaps.....
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: kRisZ on January 19, 2010, 02:04:52 PM
@S!Hu!
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i wanted to wish you BUT when i saw this
HUMPT!!! :mon annoy:
Everyone ( except S!Hu!  :P )
 :heart:
*off i go*
:D

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i'm such a *coughgoodcough* person
*coughAreYouSure?cough*  XD


 :heart:



@HartAKL85
 :mon fyeah:  :mon hi:

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First of all, happy belated birthday. *gives cyber cake in the shape of :hipheart:*
:heart:

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Second, read all 15 chapters within an hour. Could've read them in about a quarter of that time, but by the time I was up to Chap. 14 I was passing out every few minutes. Same with the last chapter.  :oops:
:w00t:  :kneelbow:

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Tsunku's involved..................................................................... And so is Reina. mwahahaha. *runs away*
We'll see  :P



@FaqU
 :w00t:  :gmon hi:

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First and foremost, Happy belated birthday!!!!! Hope all went well and you had a blast with friends and family  :on BDay:
:heart:

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I've haven't commented and I know that it's bad of me  :kneelbow: so as a peace offering please accept this gift  :JD: and my apologies.

lol it's all cool  :D  :cheers

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I don't know if it may be me but I could be overthinking lots of things when reading all the way up to this point.  I have plenty of questions but that could also be because I am too dumb to see it.
When I decided to write this one ( blame alwaysYou  :D ), I only scribbled Risa as a cop, Ai as the love interest, Reina as the ex, Eri as Risa’s best buddy and partner, and Sayu as Eri’s. There was a plot of course but it was kind of unclear.  And mostly I write whatever pops inside my head and when I see comments that lead there and so I’ll go here instead. It changes from time to time, that’s why my characters are out of character most of the time  :D  I hope it’s not that confusing  :nervous

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One main question that I had was about the whole RenAi thing, like it was too quick for Ai to move on, especially since she was crying about Reina one minute then that night decided to rape Risa  :dizzy:  
:D

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Of course chapter 14 and 15  :on bleed: :imdead: with my eyes rolled back to my head that is.  The only problem is, you didn't finish it, there wasn't enough of the scene and I'd be determined to read more of it even if I die from blood lossage.  :farofflook:
I deleted some actually  :D

Your other questions will be answered as we go on this journey together, hopefully  XD just don't hold your hopes that high  :D





UPDATE 16




“Eri, what’s wrong, what’s happening?” wet haired and no make up on, as if she just got out from the shower, Risa questioned her partner, who was absorbedly looking at some pictures on the table. Startled, Eri looked up, wide eyed for a moment, and then she made a hand gesture to make Risa come closer and then pointed a finger on a particular picture that was on the table.


“What about her?” puzzled she waited for Eri’s reply while staring at the last victim’s picture. It was horrible when she first saw it at the crime scene and it still is horrible now staring at it.


“That was the girl who was clinging at you when you emerged from the washroom and the girl you danced with from our last clubbing. The night I first met Ai”


“Her name’s Mitsui Aika” interjected Nakazawa who just entered the conference room carrying a folder. “Looks like all two victims were somehow related to you. First Jun and then her, how’d you explain that?” without breaking her vision from the surprised Risa, she took a seat and motioned Risa to take a seat as well. “You’re not in any way involve in this mess, are you Niigaki?” Nakazawa only broke her eye contact from the questioned girl when Risa was shaking her head rapidly, speechless. She then opened her folder and tossed it toward Risa’s direction.


“And that’s Tsunku, the man who tried to harm Takahashi Ai last night, the same man you put behind bars for a night two years ago”


“But got out in the morning because the victim didn’t press charges” Risa continued


“And lost his wife when he came home.” Eri butted in


“Who could continue to stay with an unemployed man who seeks sexual pleasures outside their house?”


“I was informed that this Takahashi Ai is connected to you as well” Risa’s eyes grew wide when a realization struck her. She abruptly stood up and was dashing toward the door when she was called back by their chief, noticeably annoyed by her rude action.


“Did I say we’re through!?” she glared at the caught-in-the-middle-situation Risa. Reluctant to stay and really wanted to step out of the room but Nakazawa’s death glare was really scary. Even Eri cringed at her seat.


“SIT!” unwilling but she obeyed.


“I already sent two cops to her place when I called you, there’s no need to fuss”


“Oh gosh” she sighed, felt somewhat relieved, she went back to her seat before mumbling a soft “Thank you” and waited for her chief to continue.


“Has this man, in any way, tried to contact you after his release?”


“No”


“I think he did, Risa-chan, when we met him during our night patrol. He even aimed his hand as if it was a gun at you and fired”


“That was different. We only came across”


He was walking about 50 meters away from us. I didn’t notice him at first but Eri did. I looked at him when Eri informed me, that’s when our eyes met and that’s when he pointed his makeshift gun toward my direction, when I stepped out from the car, he then resumed his walk.


“But that was, what, a week after his arrest? And since then I never saw him again. The last time I checked he was ousted from his apartment for not being able to pay the rents.”


“Maybe he was observing from afar?”


“But maybe he’s not the one?”


“Who then!? Do you have any other suspects with the motive as weighty as his?” the two cops were wordless. No other suspect was established because of one reason, the criminal was thorough. “We can never rule him out. The pictures were already disseminated to other police officers before you came. Here’s what I want you, Niigaki, to do, list all the women you got involved with and see if there was any attack similar to the three girls that wasn’t reported”


“What about Ai?”


“Didn’t I already tell you that there are two cops posted to watch her?”


“What about protective custody? We can’t just leave her there and wait for another attack.”


“Then move your asses and find that bastard before he can get near Ai!”



~~~



“How is she coping?” Eri looked to her driver and waited for her reply. They’re now driving and heading to the first person written on Risa’s list.
 

“She’s displaying a strong façade but I could tell she’s not okay. She cried a while back at home and I know she’s still frightened deep within."



 :D


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 19, 2010, 02:56:52 PM
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“Her name’s Mitsui Aika”
:OMG: Nooooo!! Not Micchi!!
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list all the women you got involved with
:lol: :lol: I have a feeling this might take a while.
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“What about Ai?”
:wub: :wub:
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“She’s displaying a strong façade but I could tell she’s not okay. She cried a while back at home and I know she’s still frightened deep within."
:( Gaki needs to give the monkey some hot bean action to make her feel better.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: badsaints on January 19, 2010, 03:01:53 PM
So Tsunku is the weird psychotic sex-maniac serial killer? :shocked Awesome! :twothumbs

His way of exacting revenge on Risa is to kill all girls that were involved with her? Like, seriously? There might be a long line of girls for him to kill XD

Poor Aika. She didn't even get to the first base with Risa and now she's dead :P
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 19, 2010, 03:07:04 PM
@ kR:
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i'm such a *coughgoodcough* person
*coughAreYouSure?cough*  
i'm very sure..XD XD

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“Looks like all two victims were somehow related to you.
really, it's gakisan fault

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“And that’s Tsunku, the man who tried to harm Takahashi Ai last night, the same man you put behind bars for a night two years ago”
LOL, i laugh when i see tsunku..
the only male that can be use..next one can try makoto.. :lol:

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“I was informed that this Takahashi Ai is connected to you as well”
yea yea, very very connected..and soon to be more connected..

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She abruptly stood up and was dashing toward the door when she was called back by their chief
*point middle finger at the chief*

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“I already sent two cops to her place when I called you, there’s no need to fuss”
*say sry to the chief who i point middle finger to*

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“Then move your asses and find that bastard before he can get near Ai!”
yea..move ur asses FAST


man..somehow, now i think tsunku definitely wont let aichan go..
since i think he know about their relationship..
and thus, AICHAN!!!..
will she be kidnap?
will she be torture by tsunku just to teach gakisan a lesson?
will she die?
will she and gakisan be happily together?
and please dont end up cause tsunku love gakisan and wanna kill all girls who is close to gakisan.. :lol: :lol:

come on kR, faster update.. :lol: XD :D :P
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: amEthystx on January 19, 2010, 04:36:54 PM
LOL! indeed! It was Tsunku!

And yes! The victims are linked to Risa like i say they are!

But just that Tsunku does not love Risa XD

Is everyone going to turn out dead other than the four of them?! LOL~

*Hauled pink camel at Yuko!*  :P

 :mon bat:

ps: you didn't update your post name XD but i'm glad i click in to check and found the new chapter :D
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 15~1/16)
Post by: Hart on January 19, 2010, 04:42:12 PM
Aika. Aika!!!  :cry: WHY COULDN'T IT HAVE BEEN LINLIN? :mon whine:
No wait, that would be just as bad. Don't tell me she's another victim?  :scolding:

So Tsunku finally appears. And I was right into thinking he was the one who attacked Ai. Too bad I don't think he's the killer.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 16~1/19)
Post by: Swtme03 on January 20, 2010, 07:14:49 AM
Hmm... I wonder who all these girls are that Niigaki has been involved with  :jerk:

PROTECT AI AT ALL COSTS!!  :panic: <~That's all that Gaki is gonna be thinking about throughout this whole investigation, isn't it?  :yep:
At least that's what I'll be thinking  :grin:

TSUNKU!! I KNEW YOU WERE A DIRTY OLD MAN!! :scolding: (lol kidding :P)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 16~1/19)
Post by: Treykun on January 21, 2010, 06:44:11 PM
EDIT: OMG.. Trey-trey~ are are ok?? LOL
Like what she said but without the LOL  :D
*Sends TakaGaki to send SayuEri to send Reina to Trey-trey*

Ohhhhh thanks! XD Yeah, I'm fine. God, I'm still young, Unlike others... xD. I can live without a hand for a few weeks XD


So Tsunku is the weird psychotic sex-maniac serial killer? :shocked

:lol: That was a perfect definition~~

And now... Aika... :cry: Why...?! Are you going to let someone alive??? XD

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“What about Ai?”

Wonder that too... At least I can tell you won't kill her... :P
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 16~1/19)
Post by: lil_hamz on January 22, 2010, 07:30:37 AM
C14

LOL! Poor Eri. She kept getting bonked on the head.

C15

Oh.My.God….
OMGOMGOMGOGMOMGOMGOMGOGMOGMOMGOMGOMG :shocked *splutters then explodes*

Gah, why did Yuko have to call at that time? Don’t you hate cellphones at these moments? XD

C16

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wet haired and no make up on, as if she just got out from the shower, Risa questioned her partner, who was absorbedly looking at some pictures on the table.

Did you HAVE to give me this image?  :heart: :oops: :wub:

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“You’re not in any way involve in this mess, are you Niigaki?”

Logical to think this way but so not possible. Risa’s the star here :P

PS: This is late, like REALLY. But still, happy belated bday :)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 16~1/19)
Post by: kRisZ on January 22, 2010, 01:43:27 PM
@rnd-sama
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:OMG: Nooooo!! Not Micchi!!
XD I feel so ebil sometimes  :twisted:  but not as ebil as baddie  :D

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:lol: :lol: I have a feeling this might take a while.
I'd like to grant that idea but my brain is so empty  XD gomen  :D

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:( Gaki needs to give the monkey some hot bean action to make her feel better.
:pimp:



@baddie-dear
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So Tsunku is the weird psychotic sex-maniac serial killer? :shocked Awesome! :twothumbs

His way of exacting revenge on Risa is to kill all girls that were involved with her? Like, seriously? There might be a long line of girls for him to kill XD

Poor Aika. She didn't even get to the first base with Risa and now she's dead :P
:kneelbow:
 XD
 :lol:



@S!Hu!
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LOL, i laugh when i see tsunku..
the only male that can be use..next one can try makoto.. :lol:
Shhh, I have plans for him too  :D

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*point middle finger at the chief*
:shocked You know, from your previous posts, your sweet image in me was slowly crawling towards the trash bin, but now it's inside the trash bin  :shocked
 XD  :P just kidding, first impression last is true I guess  :roll:

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will she be kidnap?
will she be torture by tsunku just to teach gakisan a lesson?
will she die?
will she and gakisan be happily together?
a lot of will she in there  :D

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come on kR, faster update.. :lol: XD :D :P
I'm trying  :angry:  :P



@Bishop NI
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LOL! indeed! It was Tsunku!
Actually I was tempted to change the person :D

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Is everyone going to turn out dead other than the four of them?! LOL~
:lol: We'll see  :D

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*Hauled pink camel at Yuko!*  :P
She needed that I guess  :grin:

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ps: you didn't update your post name XD but i'm glad i click in to check and found the new chapter :D
I didn't notice it until I saw your comment  :D  thank you  :)



@HartAKL85
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Aika. Aika!!!  :cry: WHY COULDN'T IT HAVE BEEN LINLIN? :mon whine:
:lol:

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No wait, that would be just as bad. Don't tell me she's another victim?  :scolding:

So Tsunku finally appears. And I was right into thinking he was the one who attacked Ai. Too bad I don't think he's the killer.
:pimp:



@Swtme03
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Hmm... I wonder who all these girls are that Niigaki has been involved with  :jerk:
I can only give you one, sorry  :D

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PROTECT AI AT ALL COSTS!!  :panic: <~That's all that Gaki is gonna be thinking about throughout this whole investigation, isn't it?  :yep:
At least that's what I'll be thinking  :grin:
I want to protect her too, especially from Bishop NI  :grin:

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TSUNKU!! I KNEW YOU WERE A DIRTY OLD MAN!! :scolding: (lol kidding :P)
:lol:



@Trey-trey
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Ohhhhh thanks! XD Yeah, I'm fine. God, I'm still young, Unlike others... xD. I can live without a hand for a few weeks XD
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl: you are so dead when she sees that  XD

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So Tsunku is the weird psychotic sex-maniac serial killer? :shocked

:lol: That was a perfect definition~~
XD

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And now... Aika... :cry: Why...?! Are you going to let someone alive??? XD
:lol:

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Wonder that too... At least I can tell you won't kill her... :P
:pimp:



@lil_hamz

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Oh.My.God….
OMGOMGOMGOGMOMGOMGOMGOGMOGMOMGOMGOMG :shocked *splutters then explodes*
  :grin: :kneelbow:

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Gah, why did Yuko have to call at that time? Don’t you hate cellphones at these moments? XD
I can only nod  :yep:

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Did you HAVE to give me this image?  :heart: :oops: :wub:
It's  :drool:  :D

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PS: This is late, like REALLY. But still, happy belated bday :)
:heart:








UPDATE 17




There’s no proud moon or stars that twinkled above. Their only company was the wind’s chilly breeze and the cricket’s loud cries. They’ve done several visits within the last four hours. Some happy, some surprised, some flirted, some so-so upon seeing Risa Niigaki. But the last person on the list that they’ve gone to was different. The door only opened for a few seconds, a palm landed on the cop’s face and then it slammed close. After giving Risa a teasing smile, Eri ushered her to their car, took over and talked to the girl to carry out their task at hand.


After a few minutes, done with the previous house, the two cops stood up in front of someone’s door for a good while, the first written name but last to be visited house. One was staring at the doorbell, while the other was staring at her partner who’s been staring at the button. Eri broke the silence and spoke “You want me to handle this one?” she asked with a hint of concern in her voice.


“It’s okay, I can do this”

“Okay” somewhat relieved, Eri replied and waited.


Another minute had passed. Risa was still staring at the button as if it was an interesting object to stare at, while her partner was still standing beside her, fidgeting. Risa was still unsure if she’s ready to face her first and last serious relationship. Until her phone vibrated inside her pocket, she fished it out and read the message ‘I’m making pancakes tomorrow morning, drop by when you’re done with work. Take care’. Risa’s appearance was lightened up and a smile crept on her face.


“Alright, let’s get this over with” Risa finally stated as she inserted back her phone into her jacket’s pocket, took a step forward and rang the doorbell.


“I’m just right here behind you” Eri took sidesteps, literally acting her last sentence.


The door was opened by a petite woman wearing a kaleidoscope print off-shoulder-blouse, flaunting her smooth shoulder, and short shorts showing off a pair of seductive legs. She was out of words for a few seconds after seeing Risa but regained her composure swiftly.


“Hello there, what a surprise” greeted the house owner as she leaned in the door frame. “It’s been, what, almost two years since the last time you’re here? I hope you’re not here for another slap visit because it really stung back then.” She continued, giggling.


Eri coughed from behind to announce her presence when Risa remained speechless. The girl darted her gaze to the source of the sound and smiled when she noticed the hiding Eri.


“Eri! Hi! You’re here too” she stepped forward and offered a hug to the hiding turtle with a grin on her face.


“It’s okay, I’m cool. No need to hug” shaking her head while clutching her hands on Risa’s jacket, she replied.


“That’s not how you greet an old friend. I don’t bite” Eri then took a few steps backwards to keep a safe distance from the attacking girl, while covering her butt with both of her hands.


“Don’t come near.” Acting unhappy, but her eyes showed otherwise, the attacking woman lowered her hands and pouted.


“Aren’t you going to invite us in for coffee?” two heads whipped sideways toward the speaker, Risa was now the one leaning in the door, slowly showing a smile towards the two stunned squabbling woman.


“Good idea” Eri pushed playfully the house’s owner towards the house and into the kitchen. Once inside, she then removed her hands from the girl’s waist, picked the coffee pot and handed it to her. “I missed your coffee, make it fast” and smiled. She then scampered toward the dining table, took a seat and waited for Risa who was following close by, but the girl opted to stand by the counter.


“How’ve you been, Miki?” with a calm tone Risa started the conversation, making the mood more relaxing and the tension forgotten.


“I’ve been good” she took a quick glance at Risa. It’s been a long while since they had a friendly talk. She’d never seen her after that fateful night. Risa came over to surprise her but it turned out she was the one that got surprised when she saw Miki on the couch kissing someone. “You?” she continued.


“I’m good... no, actually I’m great” she added when Ai’s face flashed inside her mind.


“Someone’s making you happy, I see”


“About time” added Eri who’s been eyeing the two the whole time, munching some home-made cookies.


“Who’s the lucky girl?”


“She’s new in town”


“Oh, someone who’s no idea about your previous lifestyle” meeting Risa’s inquiring look she continued before giving out a chuckle “I have my sources. I didn’t know my being a player was rubbed off on you.”


“People change Miki. Have you?”


Smirking, she laid a cup of coffee on the counter and left the kitchen with two cups on hand.


The conversation was light and trouble-free. The three shared laughter as they used to before Miki and Risa’s messy break up. Both showed the signs that they have moved on and ready to be friends again. Coffee was refilled once the cups became empty, forgetting that they’re still on duty for a moment, until they decided to call it a night and bade goodnight.


“I’m glad you dropped by” Miki uttered as her sweet smile remained


“Me too” and the two shared a long hug.


“Say hi to Sayu for me okay?” she said while giving the nodding turtle her hug. Caught off guard, she received some loving from the smirking woman, the so-called trademarked wedgies.


“MIKI!”





I'm really trying to type correctly, I'm tipsy atm  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 17~1/22)
Post by: Hart on January 22, 2010, 02:30:32 PM
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“That’s not how you greet an old friend. I don’t bite” Eri then took a few steps backwards to keep a safe distance from the attacking girl, while covering her butt with both of her hands.
NO WAY!!!  :shocked There is only one person that can scare the Turtle like this....

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“How’ve you been, Miki?”
The Groping Demon appears. :rockon:

I did not expect her to be on Gaki's list, more or lest be her first relationship and the reason the Bean is such a player.

It's probably my overactive imagination at work cuz I have a bad feeling something terrible is gonna happen in the near future and it involves Miki-sama.





Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 17~1/22)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 22, 2010, 04:47:09 PM
OMG the comment reply is longer than the chapter! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

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The door only opened for a few seconds, a palm landed on the cop’s face and then it slammed close.
:lol: I'm sure she deserved it.

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Risa was still unsure if she’s ready to face her first and last serious relationship.
Uh-oh.

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‘I’m making pancakes tomorrow morning, drop by when you’re done with work. Take care’. Risa’s appearance was lightened up and a smile crept on her face.
Nooow she's ready.

F-F-FujiGaki?  :shocked :w00t: :drool: :oops: *fans self* Def one of my fav non-canon pairings. Always brings to mind hot secks in the dance lesson room though.

I wonder how Ai'll feel when she finds out about all this philandering about Risa has done in the past? Will something happen to come in between them?

Well, for now, who cares, time for pancakes!

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I'm really trying to type correctly, I'm tipsy atm 
Sounds like you're having more fun than I am. XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 17~1/22)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 22, 2010, 05:17:23 PM
I like how Ai changed her attitude towards Gaki.

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She then carried the girl and laid her down on the couch
Sweet!

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“I know” she retorted before sticking her tongue out to the pouting bunny
“Oh yeah I remember! You’re the rapist!”
:lol: KameShige is funny.

:O chap 14 Ai was dangerous...

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“Shit”
The power of Yuuko-sama XD

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list all the women you got involved

Long list? :P

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The door only opened for a few seconds, a palm landed on the cop’s face and then it slammed close

:rofl:

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“How’ve you been, Miki?”
:w00t: Miki!

*wipes imaginary sweat* finally caught up with all the chapters :on woohoo: sorry it took me long enough.
(in case you miss it, I’ve edited my previous comment).
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 17~1/22)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 22, 2010, 05:31:19 PM
:shocked You know, from your previous posts, your sweet image in me was slowly crawling towards the trash bin, but now it's inside the trash bin  :shocked
:lol: XD
after this post it might be into the sea already...cant be find anymore..XD



cause ahh ahh..
no hot aigaki moment in this chp.. :angry:
even aichan didnt make a appearance  :angry: :angry: :angry:
*chop kR up*  :twisted:

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‘I’m making pancakes tomorrow morning, drop by when you’re done with work. Take care’. Risa’s appearance was lightened up and a smile crept on her face.
sweet :wub: :wub:
i wan the pancakes too.. :P
sent me some kR, hmm no is Aichan..XD

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“That’s not how you greet an old friend. I don’t bite” Eri then took a few steps backwards to keep a safe distance from the attacking girl, while covering her butt with both of her hands.
miki rox!! XD

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“I’m good... no, actually I’m great” she added when Ai’s face flashed inside her mind.
:wub:
Ai's face or Ai's body.. :lol:

miki appear now too..
hmmm hmmm..
things will get more complicated right..
let gakisan have some challenges.. :lol:


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 17~1/22)
Post by: Treykun on January 23, 2010, 02:29:34 PM
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:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl: you are so dead when she sees that  XD

XD Yeah, I know... But I like the risk :grin:


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Eri then took a few steps backwards to keep a safe distance from the attacking girl, while covering her butt with both of her hands.

:rofl: Who could that be??? XD

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Caught off guard, she received some loving from the smirking woman, the so-called trademarked wedgies.


“MIKI!”

:lol: Classic Fujimoto XD

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I'm really trying to type correctly, I'm tipsy atm 
Sounds like you're having more fun than I am. XD

And more than me too :P


Sooooooooooo Miki and Gaki, huh?? She's the next, isn't she?? :shocked
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 17~1/22)
Post by: kRisZ on January 23, 2010, 03:59:10 PM
NO UPDATE  :P



HartAKL85
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The Groping Demon appears. :rockon:
:rockon:

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I did not expect her to be on Gaki's list, more or lest be her first relationship and the reason the Bean is such a player.

It's probably my overactive imagination at work cuz I have a bad feeling something terrible is gonna happen in the near future and it involves Miki-sama.
:pimp:



rnd-sama
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OMG the comment reply is longer than the chapter! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
OMG I so hate you  :lol:  :lol:  :lol: I’ve been praying to Camel-sama hoping that no one would notice that  XD  It’s almost always like that  XD  XD  XD  And here you are commenting about it  :fainted:  :D

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I'm sure she deserved it.
Let’s just think it’s like that since I can’t elaborate it any further  XD  sorry  :D

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F-F-FujiGaki?  :shocked :w00t: :drool: :oops: *fans self* Def one of my fav non-canon pairings. Always brings to mind hot secks in the dance lesson room though.
Sounds familiar... where was that?

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Sounds like you're having more fun than I am. XD
I seldom drink nowadays, that's why even a bottle of beer or half a bottle of wine affects me greatly. What did you do?



@C
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I like how Ai changed her attitude towards Gaki.
:mon fyeah:

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The power of Yuuko-sama XD
:rockon: always and forever  :rockon:

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*wipes imaginary sweat* finally caught up with all the chapters :on woohoo: sorry it took me long enough.
Yay! Were you riding Camel-sama?   XD   It's all cool  :D

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(in case you miss it, I’ve edited my previous comment).
*reads*

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Was that chapter 8?
:yep:

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I found it funny, it's like 'looking for a girl tonight? Washroom is the place' XD
:lol:

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A great chief, isn't she?  :wub:
:yep:

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More like running before real life catches me lol but thanks for the barricade :)
Anytime   :grin:



@S!Hu!
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after this post it might be into the sea already...cant be find anymore..XD
:shocked  :prayers: must preserve the sweet image  :prayers: should close one eye if the comment goes ebil  :prayers:
 XD

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even aichan didnt make a appearance  :angry: :angry: :angry:
She did  :roll:

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*chop kR up*  :twisted:
:shocked  :prayers:

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sent me some kR
Where's your address?  :D No, don't answer that  XD

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miki rox!! XD
:rockon:

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Ai's face or Ai's body.. :lol:
How about both  :twisted:   Oh no  :prayers:

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things will get more complicated right..
let gakisan have some challenges.. :lol:
Comments like this makes me  :fainted:  XD



@Trey-trey
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XD Yeah, I know... But I like the risk :grin:
:lol:

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:lol: Classic Fujimoto XD
:yep:

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Sooooooooooo Miki and Gaki, huh?? She's the next, isn't she?? :shocked
I dunno  :P
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 17~1/22)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 24, 2010, 02:13:52 AM
rnd-sama
Hmm, I could get used to being called that. XD
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OMG the comment reply is longer than the chapter! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
OMG I so hate you  :lol:  :lol:  :lol: I’ve been praying to Camel-sama hoping that no one would notice that  XD  It’s almost always like that  XD  XD  XD  And here you are commenting about it  :fainted:  :D
Sorry :lol: but I had noticed they were almost equal for a while now and then to have the comment reply longer? I Lol'd hard and had to share my joy.


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F-F-FujiGaki?  :shocked :w00t: :drool: :oops: *fans self* Def one of my fav non-canon pairings. Always brings to mind hot secks in the dance lesson room though.
Sounds familiar... where was that?
I do believe a certain Kreamy's notebook has a fic in there about it(in the Crack To Go), somewhere. And it's probably somewhere else too.

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Sounds like you're having more fun than I am. XD
I seldom drink nowadays, that's why even a bottle of beer or half a bottle of wine affects me greatly. What did you do?
I was at work. XD



Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 16~1/19)
Post by: Swtme03 on January 24, 2010, 04:05:56 AM
‘I’m making pancakes tomorrow morning, drop by when you’re done with work. Take care’. Risa’s appearance was lightened up and a smile crept on her face.

 :luvluv1: SOOO CUTE~!!!  :heart:

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I'm really trying to type correctly, I'm tipsy atm  XD

I was drunk when I read this  :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 17~1/22)
Post by: kuro808 on January 24, 2010, 10:16:49 AM
Gomen for not keeping up on your updates

FujiGaki  :thumbup

Well I guess the wedgie was evident  :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 17~1/22)
Post by: amEthystx on January 24, 2010, 03:37:25 PM
Oh god.........How long was Gaki-san list? Was there an amethystx inside? Did you forget to put it in? :P

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‘I’m making pancakes tomorrow morning, drop by when you’re done with work. Take care’.
- How sweet XD she is gonna mess up her kitchen again! but..oh well... Gaki-san can help her clear up XD

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh~ Mikitty! XD

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Caught off guard, she received some loving from the smirking woman, the so-called trademarked wedgies.

- ohh~ me remembered the video whereby Miki gave Eri wedgies during a concert right on the stage when they were singing... LOL~

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 17~1/22)
Post by: kRisZ on January 25, 2010, 01:06:24 PM
@rnd-sama
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Hmm, I could get used to being called that. XD
You deserve to be called that, you're one of my fav writers FYI   :love:   :yep:

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Sorry :lol: but I had noticed they were almost equal for a while now and then to have the comment reply longer? I Lol'd hard and had to share my joy.
XD  XD  XD

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I do believe a certain Kreamy's notebook has a fic in there about it(in the Crack To Go), somewhere. And it's probably somewhere else too.
Okay, thanks.

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I was at work. XD
LUCKeyyy



@Swtme03
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I was drunk when I read this  :lol:
Cool  XD  :cheers



@kurosawa87
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Gomen for not keeping up on your updates
It's all cool dude :yep:

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FujiGaki  :thumbup
:kneelbow:



@Bishop NI
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Oh god.........How long was Gaki-san list? Was there an amethystx inside? Did you forget to put it in? :P
:roll:

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- How sweet XD she is gonna mess up her kitchen again! but..oh well... Gaki-san can help her clear up XD
and they can also clean up the bedroom afterward  :twisted:

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- ohh~ me remembered the video whereby Miki gave Eri wedgies during a concert right on the stage when they were singing... LOL~
Was that the one with Sayu and Reina? I think Sayu was given the love as well  XD






UPDATE 18



Two sleepy heads were in the transition period from wake to sleep. It’s almost daybreak. Though the sun was still below the horizon, the presence of weak sunlight was growing making the fog gradually evaporate and fade away. The two were not on their bed as they should have been, clinging onto their pillows and sheets, but they were still inside their car uncomfortably sitting. Half part of their brain was still awake and the other half was trying to sleep, when they were jerked awake by a sudden loud tap on the car’s roof.


“You two are sleeping while on duty!” cried out loudly by a girl standing at the side of their car. The spoiler of the surrounding’s stillness slowly bended her knees down to meet the surprised sleepy heads eyes, and signaled one of the two to roll down the car window.


“I’ll take it from here” the intruder said, smiling, while handing the two a cup of coffee each.


“Morning Niigaki-san” greeted the two before letting a yawn out and the other was trying to stretch her somewhat numb body a little.


“Morning! Momo-chan, Chisa-chan. No suspicious events while I was away?” Risa asked the two who were assigned to stake out Ai’s house. Both shook their heads in unison while trying to sip some hot coffee. “Alright, thank you. And drive safely okay” she then tapped the door lightly and shooed the two.


Risa stared at the quiet house while standing up straight, before making some body flexing to ease some stiffed muscles. She walked within a good radius and observed her surroundings for any strange movements but none was found. The neighborhood was pretty normal and quiet as always at this hour. After a while of eyeing her neighbor’s house and the surroundings she finally decided to go home to hit the shower, she needed a hot one after the long busy chilly night.


Tired and sleepy, she slowly walked toward her house while she continued massaging her shoulders and moving her head in circles. But her track was cut off by someone’s call. Before turning her head to meet the caller, a smile surfaced on Risa’s face, feeling revitalized after hearing the voice, she then turned and looked toward her neighbor’s house. Ai was there standing in her pajamas, with her bedhead, looking fresh and beautiful as always, wearing her ever sweet smile.


“Morning. You’re up early” Risa greeted the smiling Ai who blushed when she motioned for Risa to come over.


Grinning, Risa raised both of her arms and sniffed herself. “I need to shower first”


“How about a morning hug first before you go inside for that shower” still blushing, Ai managed to utter her request.


Ai had no idea how happy Risa was upon hearing those words and would love to dash forward but she really needs a shower first.


When Ai felt that her plea was about to be trashed she pouted making Risa flinched. Who couldn’t give in to that? The pout gradually vanished and was replaced with a sweet and shy grin when Risa marched toward her.


“I miss you” whispered Ai as she buried her face on Risa’s neck while both of her arms were clutching snugly around Risa’s waist.


“Me too” replied the blushing Risa as she returned the tight hug. Relishing the sweet fragrance Ai emitted. Both stayed in that position for a while, enjoying the shared embrace. When was the last time they had embraced someone this adoringly? It’s been a good while.


Risa felt her partner’s hug loosened up and both hands dropped to the sides. Risa reluctantly removed hers and looked into the woman in front of her.


“Am I only one of them?” questioned Ai, with a hint of sadness in her tone. She looked downwards, averting her gaze from Risa’s.


“Huh?” asked the confused cop, still looking at the now sad Ai. The scene was heartbreaking to look at. When Ai remained still, she raised her hands and cupped Ai’s face and made her look at her. Risa’s eyes carried a searching for enlightenment gaze while Ai’s was starting to redden.


“Am I only one of your girls?” almost choking, Ai repeated her question, fighting hard to hold her tears in. Risa’s thumping heart was now accompanied by a constriction, making her breath tight and heavy. Risa tried to process Ai’s query properly but she couldn’t fish out an answer to the question that popped out from nowhere. Retaining her confused look, Risa never turned her gaze away from the now teary eyed Ai.


“Your scent and this” she pointed something on Risa’s collar, making Risa follow the direction, eyes almost popped out from their socket when she saw a lipstick stain on it, and clearly it’s not hers.


Ai waited. But maybe because of sleep deprivation Risa was unable to process the things appropriately, that and being so stunned, Risa was lost for words, she was tongue-tied.


“I should have known better” Ai said almost incoherently. A lone tear moved downwards quietly and smoothly before she turned her heels and went inside her house, leaving the still stunned Risa, mouth agape.


When the things did finally sink in, she dashed towards the close door and knocked. “Ai, please hear me first” she begged.


 :grin:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 16~1/19)
Post by: badsaints on January 25, 2010, 02:04:25 PM
Gahh! I missed commenting on Little k's earlier chapter. Err, Sorry? :cry: But I have been reading. Honest!


@rnd-sama
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:OMG: Nooooo!! Not Micchi!!
XD I feel so ebil sometimes  :twisted:  but not as ebil as baddie  :D
Hey I saw that! :angry:


@Swtme03
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PROTECT AI AT ALL COSTS!!  :panic: <~That's all that Gaki is gonna be thinking about throughout this whole investigation, isn't it?  :yep:
At least that's what I'll be thinking  :grin:
I want to protect her too, especially from Bishop NI  :grin:
Agreed XD



UPDATE 17

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But the last person on the list that they’ve gone to was different. The door only opened for a few seconds, a palm landed on the cop’s face and then it slammed close.
Err, ouch? XD

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“I’m just right here behind you” Eri took sidesteps, literally acting her last sentence.
Hmm that's very supportive of Eri :P

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“How’ve you been, Miki?”
Miki! :cow:

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Caught off guard, she received some loving from the smirking woman, the so-called trademarked wedgies.
Booyah! :w00t:



UPDATE 18

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Ai was there standing in her pajamas, with her bedhead, looking fresh and beautiful as always, wearing her ever sweet smile.
Sigh... *badsaints imagining Ai with bedhead :inlove:*

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“How about a morning hug first before you go inside for that shower” still blushing, Ai managed to utter her request.
Oooh that shower? I wonder what that means :twisted:

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“Am I only one of them?”
Doesn't sound good :smhid

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“Am I only one of your girls?” almost choking, Ai repeated her question, fighting hard to hold her tears in.
Really doesn't sound good :smhid :smhid

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“Your scent and this” she pointed something on Risa’s collar, making Risa follow the direction, eyes almost popped out from their socket when she saw a lipstick stain on it, and clearly it’s not hers.
Oh shit! :shocked

My inner TakaGaki alarm has gone off! Don't leave us hanging already, Evil one!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 18~1/25)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 25, 2010, 02:05:32 PM
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“I miss you” whispered Ai as she buried her face on Risa’s neck while both of her arms were clutching snugly around Risa’s waist.
:)

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“Am I only one of them?” questioned Ai, with a hint of sadness in her tone.
:? :O

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“Am I only one of your girls?” almost choking, Ai repeated her question, fighting hard to hold her tears in.
this line, maybe it just mi, but i feel damn sad and heart tighting.. :cry:

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“I should have known better” Ai said almost incoherently. A lone tear moved downwards quietly and smoothly before she turned her heels and went inside her house, leaving the still stunned Risa, mouth agape.
:cry: :cry:

damn, i feel sad when i read till the last part.. :cry: :cry:
it's just so  :( :cry: to me..

i love this chp alot even it's is not those happy moment..

 :cry: :(
u make me sad..
*off to a corner and continue to be emo*
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 18~1/25)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 25, 2010, 04:18:01 PM
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Yay! Were you riding Camel-sama?  XD  It's all cool  :D
Of course, it’s the power of Camel-sama  :rockon:

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Morning! Momo-chan, Chisa-chan.
Kids! :cow:

Ai-Risa embraced :wub:

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“Am I only one of them?”
And she dropped da bomb LOL

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“Ai, please hear me first”
Yeah and then you can slap her after! Rrr I mean make up and kiss XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 18~1/25)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 25, 2010, 05:04:51 PM
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When the things did finally sink in, she dashed towards the close door and knocked. “Ai, please hear me first” she begged.

I friggin' hate you! :lol: How can you leave it on such a cliffie like this?!

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You deserve to be called that, you're one of my fav writers FYI
:mon annoy: :mon huh: :smoke: :mon ignore:  Alright, you're forgiven. :whistle: Just post the next chapter quickly! XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 18~1/25)
Post by: amEthystx on January 25, 2010, 05:12:25 PM
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Sigh... *badsaints imagining Ai with bedhead * :inlove:
- LOL! Look at my profile pic! XD

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Was that the one with Sayu and Reina? I think Sayu was given the love as well  XD
- I'm not very sure.. but i remember Eri was doing a really cute face as she tried to remove Miki's hand when she does it~ LOL~

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“I miss you” whispered Ai as she buried her face on Risa’s neck while both of her arms were clutching snugly around Risa’s waist.
- Up until here i was still.... awwww.... So sweet~ Then.............

ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Can you see the effort i took in highlighting this? LOL~

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“Am I only one of them?” questioned Ai, with a hint of sadness in her tone. She looked downwards, averting her gaze from Risa’s.
- the killer question for a player~ XD *Go Gaki-san go!*

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When the things did finally sink in, she dashed towards the close door and knocked. “Ai, please hear me first” she begged.
- *knock knock* Please open up! :(

 :mon bat:


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 18~1/25)
Post by: kuro808 on January 25, 2010, 07:30:44 PM
Really speechless :lol:

 :O :O :O nothing else to say about it
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 18~1/25)
Post by: Treykun on January 25, 2010, 09:24:12 PM
:mon annoy:

Now that the things had stabilized... you had to do this??  :smoke:

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“Am I only one of your girls?”

Ugh, that hurts...

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“Your scent and this” she pointed something on Risa’s collar, making Risa follow the direction, eyes almost popped out from their socket when she saw a lipstick stain on it, and clearly it’s not hers.

:depressed:

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When the things did finally sink in, she dashed towards the close door and knocked. “Ai, please hear me first” she begged.

God damnit... I'm starting to think that, secretly, you hate TakaGaki  :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 18~1/25)
Post by: Swtme03 on January 26, 2010, 04:04:42 AM
*GASP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*  :OMG:
AI! PLEASE LISTEN TO RISA!! IT'S NOT WHAT YOU THINK!!  :pleeease:

MIKI!! YOU DID THAT ON PURPOSE!!!  :on thumbb:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 18~1/25)
Post by: ayase909 on January 26, 2010, 08:22:59 AM
whoa! the appearance of MIKI-SAMA  :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer: lol
FujiGaki has a thing in the past....yay!  :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :luvluv2:

oh well, the evil Mikitty strikes again! she's the one who left that lipstick mark in gaki's collar,right? :ding: :ding: :ding:

well, i love the TaGaki so go Risa, get Aichan back!  :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

domo author-san!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 18~1/25)
Post by: kRisZ on January 26, 2010, 02:53:25 PM
@baddie
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Gahh! I missed commenting on Little k's earlier chapter. Err, Sorry? :cry: But I have been reading. Honest!
:roll: okay  :roll:  :P

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Hey I saw that! :angry:
XD

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Agreed XD
High-five?  :D

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Hmm that's very supportive of Eri :P
I know  :D

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Booyah! :w00t:
:yossi:

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Sigh... *badsaints imagining Ai with bedhead :inlove:*
:onionshower:

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My inner TakaGaki alarm has gone off! Don't leave us hanging already, Evil one!
XD



@S!hu!
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:)
:)
 :up
 :lol:

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this line, maybe it just mi, but i feel damn sad and heart tighting.. :cry:
:twisted:

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damn, i feel sad when i read till the last part.. :cry: :cry:
it's just so  :( :cry: to me..

i love this chp alot even it's is not those happy moment..

 :cry: :(
u make me sad..
I'm glad there was no ebil comment from your post  :grin:

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*off to a corner and continue to be emo*
*hugs alwaysYou*  :)  there there, it's okay, things will be alright  :D



@C
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And she dropped da bomb LOL
Bomb? Where?  :mon look:  XD

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Yeah and then you can slap her after! Rrr I mean make up and kiss XD
Owh... another baddie?  XD  baddie that'd be the last promise  :nervous


@rnd-sama
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I friggin' hate you! :lol: How can you leave it on such a cliffie like this?!
:shocked

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Alright, you're forgiven. :whistle: Just post the next chapter quickly! XD
Why am I forgiven?  :huhuh  Adoring you a sin now?   :P



@Bishop Ni
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- LOL! Look at my profile pic! XD
OMG That's Ai?!?  :mon freeze:  all along I thought that's Risa :dizzy:

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ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Can you see the effort i took in highlighting this? LOL~
XD Yep  :kneelbow:

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- the killer question for a player~ XD *Go Gaki-san go!*
:onioncheer:

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- *knock knock* Please open up! :(
Who's there  :P



@kurosawa87
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Really speechless :lol:

 :O :O :O nothing else to say about it
:D



@Trey-trey
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:mon annoy:

Now that the things had stabilized... you had to do this??  :smoke:
:smoke:  :D

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God damnit... I'm starting to think that, secretly, you hate TakaGaki  :lol:
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:



@Swtme03
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AI! PLEASE LISTEN TO RISA!! IT'S NOT WHAT YOU THINK!!  :pleeease:
It's not?  :shocked  XD

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MIKI!! YOU DID THAT ON PURPOSE!!!  :on thumbb:
:glasses:



@ayase909
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FujiGaki has a thing in the past....yay!  :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :luvluv2:
:yep:   :cow:

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oh well, the evil Mikitty strikes again! she's the one who left that lipstick mark in gaki's collar,right? :ding: :ding: :ding:
:glasses:

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well, i love the TaGaki so go Risa, get Aichan back!  :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
Me too  :on woohoo:

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domo author-san!  :kneelbow:
:D Domo for taking the time to read  :kneelbow:







SPECIAL UPDATE 19  :grin:



The cop was restless. How can she be at ease when the owner of the house won’t let her in? She’s been knocking on the door for half an hour now, but there was no sign of any movement inside. Her knuckles were sore and redden. Feeling defeated, she turned around, leaned in the door and let her body slide and sat on the floor. She held her head with both of her hands while her elbows rested on her bended knees, looking like a lost kid.


Suddenly her tummy growled. She intentionally did not take a bite when her partner invited her for donuts because she was looking forward to the pancakes she was promised. “Crap! What kind of day was it going to be, if I’m already in trouble this early?” she thought out loud, gently massaging her head. She stayed there and sat without a sound.


The sky was blue. Her eyes squinting in the bright light of day, until she spotted something on a tree. A strange object was over it that was not there before. She gave it a focus look in order to see the object clearly and yes, her first hunch was correct, it was a kite with C printed on it. Risa looked around only to find a young kid wearing khaki cargo shorts matched with an orange top and some bling-bling hanging on her neck. The kid was trying really hard to detach her string that connects to the object that landed on top of the baby tree.


Smiling, Risa stood up in order to help the kid get her kite back but stopped midway when another young kid holding a plastic chair moved toward the helpless kid. The two displayed a striking contrast in personalities. The new girl wore a plaid skirt and yellow top. Her shiny black hair was neatly tied back in a tight bun while the first kid’s hair was short and sprawled everywhere. Shyly smiling, she offered her chair so that the short haired kid can move up a little to have an easy access on the string that tangled on one of the branches. When the short haired was about to climb on the chair an old woman with a cane called her attention.


“Hurry up! We don’t want your father to wait for you that long, do we?” said the woman with an authoritative voice.


“But my kite is trapped” voiced out the helpless kid who was still trying to free her stuck kite.


“Then leave it” shouted the old woman, making the long haired kid jumped a little.


“You’re meanie” she retorted as she continued to untangle her kite’s string.


Upon hearing the unpleasant word, the old woman walked like a penguin toward her in haste, raising her walking stick along the way.


“Obaasan! Let me handle this for you and just wait inside the car. I’ll bring cousin in a minute” said a slightly tall young man.


“Alright! But be quick okay?” and she retreated.


“Baddie” whispered the short haired girl.


“Stop that, a little respect please, she’s already old and turning bald. Here, you forgot this inside the house.” He handed a plushie toward his cousin and started to untangle the string after. “There, let’s go?” the short haired girl nodded and started to walk where her granny was heading but abruptly stopped. She then turned around, dash toward the modest girl who was silently watching in the background and handed a pink camel plushie to her. “Take care of her… ummm”


“My name is $!hu!”


“Bishop! Hurry up!”


“I’m coming Trey-trey” and then she ran fast. Leaving S!hu! blushing behind.


Risa could only grin at the scene that took place in front of her. Shaking her head she turned around to return to her previous action but was frightened when she fell on a cliff instead.


“Uhwaaaaaaaaa” she cried out loudly, kicking here and there until she felt a stinking pain on her shin.


“Damn, that hurt!” clutching her right shin she howled. “What a weird dream”


When the pain subsided, she stood up and knock once more “Ai?” still no one responded inside, that’s when she decided to leave, fished her car keys out and drove off.










 :wahaha:


Sumimasen if not everyone was in there  :kneelbow:  having those few in there was already  :sweatdrop:  :nervous
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 26, 2010, 03:09:33 PM
 :on lol: :wahaha: :mon lmao: :mon XD: :mon fyeah: :pig laugh:
OMG OMG OMG..
I HAVE A GREAT LAUGH..LOL..
especially after i saw my name..LOL
i never thought you could still add us into this fic..LOL :lol: :lol: :lol:

oh man, how u expect me to comment on this when i cant stop smiling and laughing.. XD

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When the pain subsided, she stood up and knock once more “Ai?” still no one responded inside, that’s when she decided to leave, fished her car keys out and drove off.
just open the door aichan.. :angry:
and gakisan just leave like this  :angry: :angry:
maybe aichan is being kidnap..XD

done with my comment, cause i shouldnt stop laughing whenever i read through the dream part..XD

You are just so cute..XD
*pinch ur cheek*
 :mon cheek:<- wanna add in this, cause i find it too cute..XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 26, 2010, 04:39:44 PM
Oh my god! :lol: :lol: :rofl: :rofl:

That's the most awesome cameo ever! Does that make me an evil kite thief now? I was like, wait, what? Is that? It is! OMG, yes!  :heart: :heart: :heart:

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When the pain subsided, she stood up and knock once more “Ai?” still no one responded inside, that’s when she decided to leave, fished her car keys out and drove off.
Wait, where is she going? There's still someone after Ai, probably.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: amEthystx on January 26, 2010, 05:03:31 PM
 ;) Puts a smile on my face.. apparently it's not my best day today~ but thanks! :)

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OMG That's Ai?!?  :mon freeze: monkey  all along I thought that's Risa  :dizzy:
- Nooooo! That lovely girl there is Ai-chan!! :)

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Who's there   :P
amethystx! Please open up :( I need a shoulder to cry on~

LOL~ I was already grinning when i saw the "C" kite + a girl flying it.. LOL~ should have been flying 2 kites actually..the other with the letter "K"~  and they are both heading to a tornado! Remember? lol

I have pretty hair! *grumble grumble* LOL~ anyway... how short was i that i could not even reach the kite that is on baby tree? :(

AND.... OMG! baddie is my grandma!?  :mon runcry:

She is soooooo gonna shove that walking stick up somewhere in you.. !


LAST but not LEAST!

 :mon look: :mon look: :mon look:

where's the girl i flirted with? LOL!  :up :up :up :up :up

To S!hu!:

It's not the amount of breath that we take in life that matters but the amount of breath-taking moments there are..... will you be my inspiration?


 :mon bat:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 26, 2010, 05:12:04 PM
where's the girl i flirted with? LOL!  :up :up :up :up :up

To S!hu!:

It's not the amount of breath that we take in life that matters but the amount of breath-taking moments there are..... will you be my inspiration?

OMG  :wahaha:


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@S!hu!
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You are just so cute..XD
*pinch ur cheek*
 :mon cheek:<- wanna add in this, cause i find it too cute..XD
I hope that was done purely with love  :grin:



@rnd-sama
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That's the most awesome cameo ever! Does that make me an evil kite thief now? I was like, wait, what? Is that? It is! OMG, yes!  :heart: :heart: :heart:
No idea how you got that nick but yeah that's you  XD



@Bishop NI
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;) Puts a smile on my face.. apparently it's not my best day today~ but thanks! :)
:)

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amethystx! Please open up :( I need a shoulder to cry on~
You okay? Is it the infection?
Ai's sleeping so *hugs Baby Bishop NI*

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LOL~ should have been flying 2 kites actually..the other with the letter "K"~  and they are both heading to a tornado! Remember? lol
Yes, I remember that I'll be experiencing death twice  XD

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anyway... how short was i that i could not even reach the kite that is on baby tree? :(

AND.... OMG! baddie is my grandma!?  :mon runcry:

She is soooooo gonna shove that walking stick up somewhere in you.. !
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:



I WON'T BE HERE TOMORROW, SO TAKE CARE EVERYONE  :)2
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: badsaints on January 26, 2010, 05:32:29 PM
What in the muffin's name.....Wait a minute! How come I'm the grumpy balding senior citizen here :mon annoy:
I have hair! *points at wig* ---> O0
You, my little girl, are so dead (now where is that walking stick? :mon butt3:)


OMG Sticky's my grandchild :mon wtf:


Does that make me an evil kite thief now?
Means you've just kitenapped C *heehee lame joke ftw*



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where's the girl i flirted with? LOL!  :up :up :up :up :up
To S!hu!:

It's not the amount of breath that we take in life that matters but the amount of breath-taking moments there are..... will you be my inspiration?
:cool2:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: amEthystx on January 26, 2010, 05:43:14 PM
 :)

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You okay? Is it the infection?
Ai's sleeping so *hugs Baby Bishop NI*
- It's not the infection~ In fact! I'm recovering already! :)  it's ok~ :) thanks for the hug....but... i wan Ai's too! :P *greedy me*



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where's the girl i flirted with? LOL!  :up :up :up :up :up
To S!hu!:

It's not the amount of breath that we take in life that matters but the amount of breath-taking moments there are..... will you be my inspiration?
:cool2:

- LOL! What is this suppose to mean!?

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 26, 2010, 05:51:15 PM
Owh... another baddie?  XD  baddie that'd be the last promise  :nervous
That depends  XD

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it was a kite with C printed on it
OMG! I’m a kite??  :rofl:

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and handed a pink camel plushie to her
:cow:

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she stood up and knock once more “Ai?” still no one responded inside, that’s when she decided to leave, fished her car keys out and drove off.
You shoulda kick the door cop-style!

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LOL~ should have been flying 2 kites actually..the other with the letter "K"~  and they are both heading to a tornado! Remember? lol
Yes, I remember that I'll be experiencing death twice  XD
:yep: so where’s the kite with ‘K’ printed on it?

Does that make me an evil kite thief now?
Means you've just kitenapped C *heehee lame joke ftw*
:twothumbs

LAST but not LEAST!

 :mon look: :mon look: :mon look:

where's the girl i flirted with? LOL!  :up :up :up :up :up

To S!hu!:

It's not the amount of breath that we take in life that matters but the amount of breath-taking moments there are..... will you be my inspiration?


 :mon bat:
Ah...the mastermind behind the big flirt Gaki, the big flirt itself: Bishop NI! :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: Treykun on January 26, 2010, 07:26:42 PM
OMFG!!!!

 :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

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Upon hearing the unpleasant word, the old woman walked like a penguin toward her in haste, raising her walking stick along the way.

 :on lol: Lol~~~ I laughed so hard imagining that scene XD

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Obaasan! Let me handle this for you and just wait inside the car. I’ll bring cousin in a minute” said a slightly tall young man.

OMG! The evil person who loves to traumatize kids is my grandma and the bishop is my cousin?!?!?!  :mon wtf: :mon runcry: XD
 
Ohhhhhhhh~~~ I'm slightly tall??? Great!! I always wanted to be a little shorter~~~!! XD *Sinks lower on the chair to hide the enormous stature* :P


To S!hu!:

It's not the amount of breath that we take in life that matters but the amount of breath-taking moments there are..... will you be my inspiration?

OH MY GOD!! bishop's flirting style's the best   :rofl: Now we'll have to wait to S!hu!'s response *takes the popcorn bowl* :grin:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 27, 2010, 12:42:59 AM
To S!hu!:

It's not the amount of breath that we take in life that matters but the amount of breath-taking moments there are..... will you be my inspiration?

 awww :wub:
i never thought you would say this to me in front of other :oops:
you know, to  you, i will only say yes right :wub:
although you are a flirt XD


and why am i drag into this?! :lol:
KR!!!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: Swtme03 on January 27, 2010, 02:34:38 AM
Haha!  :lol:
I was so confused about the whole kite sceen!! Until i read the comments.
I was like "where did you get these people from??"  :rofl:
Cute little story tho!!  :thumbsup

I still want Ai to let Risa explain things...  :mon pissed:

Although if they don't make up, then that gives me a chance jump in and comfort her  :mon misch:
lol kidding. I want them to make up!!  :mon pray2:

All this time knocking at the door and not a sound....I'm a little worried about what Ai is doing in there :mon unsure:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: Hart on January 27, 2010, 05:16:15 AM
 :cool2:

Uhh...I'm gonna pretend that I know what was going on in that lastest update.

Let's just say that I should've read this after I'm fully rested instead of being tired after coming home from class.

Oh, and about the previous update, Miki-sama is awesome.  :twothumbs

So who cares if Ai is a little disappointed. TakaGaki will 'make up' eventually.  :twisted:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 27, 2010, 08:22:11 AM
I have pretty hair! *grumble grumble* LOL~
I have hair! *points at wig* ---> O0
I've only seen S!hu!'s pic, so there. But I get to imagine how you look  :twisted:



@baddie
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What in the muffin's name.....Wait a minute! How come I'm the grumpy balding senior citizen here :mon annoy:
:fap

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You, my little girl, are so dead (now where is that walking stick? :mon butt3:)
You need a pair of eyeglasses?  :twisted:

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Means you've just kitenapped C *heehee lame joke ftw*
:rockon:



@Bishop NI
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but... i wan Ai's too! :P *greedy me*
Four words... You are not alone  :grin:



@C
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and handed a pink camel plushie to her
:cow:
That was your pink camel  :P

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:yep: so where’s the kite with ‘K’ printed on it?
Somewhere over Bishop NI's rainbow  :P



@Trey-trey
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:on lol: Lol~~~ I laughed so hard imagining that scene XD
Yay!  :pepper:

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OMG! The evil person who loves to traumatize kids is my grandma and the bishop is my cousin?!?!?!  :mon wtf: :mon runcry: XD
I love your reaction  :lol:

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Ohhhhhhhh~~~ I'm slightly tall??? Great!! I always wanted to be a little shorter~~~!! XD *Sinks lower on the chair to hide the enormous stature* :P
You're all kids in there, so I'm sure you're only a bit tall  :P

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OH MY GOD!! bishop's flirting style's the best   :rofl:
Maybe we should camp outside her house so that we can learn some tricks XD



@S!hu!
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and why am i drag into this?! :lol:
KR!!!

MY REASONS

Bishop NI cracks jokes
You easily laugh
CONCLUSION
Perfect combination  :heart:

You love pervy things
Bishop NI cringes whenever she hears one
CONCLUSION
 Negative + Positive = Electricity   :whip:

CONCLUSION TO THE ABOVE CONCLUSIONS
Bishop NI is wholesome
You are pervert  :lol:

You are shy but won’t easily back down
Bishop NI is straight forward but shy
CONCLUSION
Will make each other feel safe and secure  :yep:

You live in Xx
Bishop NI lives in Xx
CONCLUSION
Love nest will be very handy  XD


You are love by kR like Snoopy  :love:
Bishop NI is love by Little kRisZ like durian fruity  :love:
CONCLUSION
You both won’t kill me, especially after reading the last line below  :D

There’s only one missing link, LOVE  What are you waiting for :twisted:  go get a room and make LOVE already  :mon rush:   :k-thrilled:
:kneelbow:  PLEASE DON'T KILL ME  :kneelbow:


*runs back*  :on gay:
There was also another pair in there, one was on top of the other  :mon lol:  :mon rush: Jeeez I'm so ebil  XD Gomen  :nervous   :kneelbow:  :kneelbow:  :kneelbow:
 


Swtme03
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Haha!  :lol:
I was so confused about the whole kite sceen!! Until i read the comments.
I was like "where did you get these people from??"  :rofl:
Cute little story tho!!  :thumbsup
:D  :kneelbow:

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I still want Ai to let Risa explain things...  :mon pissed:

Although if they don't make up, then that gives me a chance jump in and comfort her  :mon misch:
:shocked

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All this time knocking at the door and not a sound....I'm a little worried about what Ai is doing in there :mon unsure:
maybe she's playing cards, Solitaire  :P



HartAKL85

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Uhh...I'm gonna pretend that I know what was going on in that lastest update.
:rofl:  :rofl:

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Oh, and about the previous update, Miki-sama is awesome.  :twothumbs
:mon fyeah:

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So who cares if Ai is a little disappointed. TakaGaki will 'make up' eventually.  :twisted:
lol



FOR THOSE CONFUSED READER  :D

C and I are Bishop NI's kites (Esmeralda)
rnd-sama's other nick is baby tree
Badsaints's image is ebil, hence her new nick baddie
Trey-trey's cool
S!hu!'s shy but *coughperv^$&cough*  :P
There. Bow.  :grin:


I'm really screwed  :panic: I have deadlines crap to do  :panic:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 27, 2010, 10:53:17 AM
Did you just create pairings between readers?  :rofl:

What's the other pairing?  :dunno:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: lil_hamz on January 27, 2010, 01:33:22 PM
C17

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The door was opened by a petite woman wearing a kaleidoscope print off-shoulder-blouse, flaunting her smooth shoulder, and short shorts showing off a pair of seductive legs. She was out of words for a few seconds after seeing Risa but regained her composure swiftly.

 :w00t: *whistles*

C18

“I miss you” whispered Ai as she buried her face on Risa’s neck while both of her arms were clutching snugly around Risa’s waist.

Awwww :heart:

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Ai waited. But maybe because of sleep deprivation Risa was unable to process the things appropriately, that and being so stunned, Risa was lost for words, she was tongue-tied.

OMG Risa quick, explain! *slaps the bean with a sock to un-stun her* XD

C19

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“My name is $!hu!”


“Bishop! Hurry up!”


“I’m coming Trey-trey” and then she ran fast. Leaving S!hu! blushing behind.

I don't know how you did it but it was  :twothumbs   :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 27, 2010, 02:13:04 PM
THANKS KR!!
I have a good laugh..LOL

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Bishop NI cracks jokes
You easily laugh
CONCLUSION
:yep: :yep:

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You love pervy things
Bishop NI cringes whenever she hears one

Bishop NI is wholesome
You are pervert
:depressed: :badluck: :err:

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You live in Xx
Bishop NI lives in Xx
:lol: :D

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You are love by kR like Snoopy
:oops: :oops:

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There’s only one missing link, LOVE  What are you waiting for :twisted:  go get a room and make LOVE already  :mon rush:   :k-thrilled:
:kneelbow:  PLEASE DON'T KILL ME  :kneelbow:
LOL!!!
Bishop NI, should we?  :lol: :lol:

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S!hu!'s shy but *coughperv^$&cough*
I'm not!!!
i'm so innocent :oops:
 :bigdeal: :whistle:

------------------

i am thinking, what if i give this alternate answer to Bishop NI's qns
where's the girl i flirted with? LOL!  :up :up :up :up :up

To S!hu!:

It's not the amount of breath that we take in life that matters but the amount of breath-taking moments there are..... will you be my inspiration?
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I hope that was done purely with love
quoting kR post too..what if i give this answer
NO!!
I DONT WANT
I ONLY WANT kRisZ :wub: :wub:
XD XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: amEthystx on January 27, 2010, 06:17:03 PM
Sorry Little kRisZ.. I know it's your thread..... but~ ladies first... not that i'm saying you're not a lady..and apparently i'm a lady too but... *babbles babbles babbles* OK!

@S!hu!: 

(please imagine a couple flying kite happily)

*Passes S!hu! my kite string* 

B: "Tighten more string... :)"

S: "LOOK! OMG!"

Kite K: @*()#&)!%YOU(@&#!&BISHOP.NI()@!&*#_&CONCLUSION*@)^#W^LOVE_!(#&*

*Hugs S!hu! awkwardly*

B: "Don't bully her K!"

*Takes over kite string and releases more string to the cyclonic storms(With a dozen of camels inside)*


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I hope that was done purely with love
I love you more with every breath Truly Madly Deeply do..~


 :up *Find me under the table cloth later please.. thank you!*


@ Kite K:
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I've only seen S!hu!'s pic, so there. But I get to imagine how you look
- ohhhh~ how did you get it  :mon misch:

LOL~ OMG~

I got Match-make~ ~~~~!!!!  :frustrated:

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You are shy but won’t easily back down
Bishop NI is straight forward but shy
CONCLUSION
Will make each other feel safe and secure
- *Don't bend don't break, baby don't back down!* <- random~ Know the song? I'll be really shy if i decided to do a mushy thing :P
 

@C:
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Ah...the mastermind behind the big flirt Gaki, the big flirt itself: Bishop NI!  :lol:
*gasped* Have i exposed myself?! I'm a selective flirt~ XD

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so where’s the kite with ‘K’ printed on it?
- Got chewed up by the camel in the tornado~ XD

@Trey-trey:
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the bishop is my cousin?!?!?!
- Does me being your cousin sooo bad! *ROAR*

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*Sinks lower on the chair to hide the enormous stature*
- LOL~ how tall are you?!

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OH MY GOD!! bishop's flirting style's the best
XD

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: Treykun on January 27, 2010, 09:49:28 PM

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OH MY GOD!! bishop's flirting style's the best   :rofl:
Maybe we should camp outside her house so that we can learn some tricks XD

Yeah, we really should, no kidding XD We have a lot to learn from her :P

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Trey-trey's cool

I can't agree more with you :hehehe:  XD Kidding, kidding :twisted:

NO!!
I DONT WANT
I ONLY WANT kRisZ :wub: :wub:

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Sorry Little kRisZ.. I know it's your thread..... but~ ladies first... not that i'm saying you're not a lady..and apparently i'm a lady too but... *babbles babbles babbles* OK!

XD

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- Does me being your cousin sooo bad! *ROAR*

:rofl: RELAX, PLEASE!! I'm sure you're a nice cousin XD At least, I prefer you as a cousin than baddie as a grandma :grin: XD

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- LOL~ how tall are you?!

Way too tall~~~ 186 cm... and I'm still growing up... XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 28, 2010, 04:10:01 PM
@rnd-sticky-sama
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Did you just create pairings between readers?  :rofl:
XD

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What's the other pairing?  :dunno:
Can I skip this question?  :D



@lil_hamz
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OMG Risa quick, explain! *slaps the bean with a sock to un-stun her* XD
:O It's a clean sock right?   :D

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I don't know how you did it but it was  :twothumbs   :lol:
:D  :kneelbow:



@S!hu!
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THANKS KR!!
I have a good laugh..LOL
:)  made me  :grin: too  :D

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:depressed: :badluck: :err:
:grin:

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NO!!
I DONT WANT
Taking back of answer is not allowed  :P

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I ONLY WANT kRisZ :wub: :wub:
XD XD
 :mon huh2:   :imdead:



@BB NI
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Sorry Little kRisZ.. I know it's your thread..... but~ ladies first... not that i'm saying you're not a lady..and apparently i'm a lady too but... *babbles babbles babbles* OK!
:lol: everyone is more than welcome to wreck this thread  XD

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(please imagine a couple flying kite happily)
*imagines*   :wriggly:

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*Hugs S!hu! awkwardly*
:on bleed:

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*Takes over kite string and releases more string to the cyclonic storms(With a dozen of camels inside)*
:shocked  :panic:  :lol:

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I love you more with every breath Truly Madly Deeply do..~
:mon blood:

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- ohhhh~ how did you get it  :mon misch:
Just between the two of us  :mon psst:  I'm one of her stalkers sshhhh

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I got Match-make~ ~~~~!!!!  :frustrated:
XD

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- Got chewed up by the camel in the tornado~ XD
:fainted:



@Trey-trey
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Yeah, we really should, no kidding XD We have a lot to learn from her :P
We should bring with us huge plants or even a tree so that we can move without being detected  :yep:  XD

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I can't agree more with you :hehehe:  XD Kidding, kidding :twisted:
:lol:

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:rofl: RELAX, PLEASE!! I'm sure you're a nice cousin XD At least, I prefer you as a cousin than baddie as a grandma :grin: XD
:wahaha:

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Way too tall~~~ 186 cm... and I'm still growing up... XD
You're that tall? and you're still young!




My connection is acting up  :smhid
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 28, 2010, 04:51:28 PM
Bishop NI is really mushy!!! :wub: :wub:

and camels again.. :lol: :lol: :lol:

@Bishop
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I hope that was done purely with love
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I love you more with every breath Truly Madly Deeply do..~
i just melt :wub: :wub:

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Up *Find me under the table cloth later please.. thank you!*
i will..wait for me.. :lol:

@ Kite K:
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I've only seen S!hu!'s pic, so there. But I get to imagine how you look
- ohhhh~ how did you get it  :mon misch:
:huhuh  :O
!!!!!!!
i look much cuter in real..LOL :lol: :lol:
(omg, i nv tot i will post this line.. :lol:)
and STALKER!!!!
Bishop, you have to protect me :cry:




Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 28, 2010, 05:24:10 PM
^
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and camels again.. :lol: :lol: :lol:
The power of Camel-sama will continue to live on   :yep:

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i will..wait for me.. :lol:
:shocked  :smhid P*****t  :P

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i look much cuter in real..LOL :lol: :lol:
How about a bigger and clearer pic *wink wink*  :D

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Bishop, you have to protect me :cry:
:mon kungfu:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: amEthystx on January 28, 2010, 05:27:10 PM
Hey Girl, camels is a must when we have K around :)


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Quote
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I hope that was done purely with love

I love you more with every breath Truly Madly Deeply do..~
i just melt  :wub: :wub:

From this moment I have been blessed
I live only for your happiness
And for your love I'd give my last breath
From this moment on


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Up *Find me under the table cloth later please.. thank you!*
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i will..wait for me.. :lol:
-*pouts* If you come.. then where can i hide? I'll be blushing you know.. :(

 
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:huhuh :O
!!!!!!!
i look much cuter in real..LOL  :lol: :lol:
(omg, i nv tot i will post this line..  :lol: )
and STALKER!!!!
- Can i see?  :mon innocent: I guess i look innocently cute as well! <- I always force my friends to agree to this.. LOL! but dreadfully mischievous.... XD

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Bishop, you have to protect me :cry:
we can stalk her back XD


@K:
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I'm one of her stalkers sshhhh
- she even listens to you :( she posted on my thread when you asked  :cry:

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We should bring with us huge plants or even a tree so that we can move without being detected
- probably Trey-trey need a big tree coz he is 186! lol

@ Trey-trey:
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Yeah, we really should, no kidding  XD We have a lot to learn from her :P
- why is a guy learning this from a girl instead? LOL~

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At least, I prefer you as a cousin than baddie as a grandma
- she is soooo gonna kill you too XD

I probably need to look up to see you in the face XD

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 28, 2010, 05:53:43 PM
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Hey Girl, camels is a must when we have K around
To eat me  :(

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I guess i look innocently cute as well! <- I always force my friends to agree to this.. LOL! but dreadfully mischievous.... XD
My curiosity level’s moved up. Me wanna see  :on woohoo:  XD  you can refuse though  :D same goes to S!hu!

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- she even listens to you :( she posted on my thread when you asked  :cry:
Ummm   ;D

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: amEthystx on January 28, 2010, 06:10:24 PM
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To eat me   :(
  :yep:

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My curiosity level’s moved up. Me wanna see :on woohoo:
- How am i going to do this? Fair exchange! you have to show me yours first! pm pm~ XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: Treykun on January 28, 2010, 06:11:09 PM

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We should bring with us huge plants or even a tree so that we can move without being detected

XD But what will she do if she sees us?! We need a better plan~ :P

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Hey Girl, camels is a must when we have K around
To eat me  :(

Do camels eat humans???? :lol: Or aren't you a human??? :grin:

I guess i look innocently cute as well! <- I always force my friends to agree to this.. LOL! but dreadfully mischievous.... XD

WTF?? How many mischievous people are there here?!?!?! XD

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- probably Trey-trey need a big tree coz he is 186! lol

:lol: My height won't stop me, you know~~~ *takes a sequoia* XD

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- why is a guy learning this from a girl instead? LOL~

Good question... XD I dunno. My experiences say that I won't learn anything good from a guy :on lol:

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- she is soooo gonna kill you too XD

:rofl: Last time that I said something similar she didn't even notice it so~~~ XD

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I probably need to look up to see you in the face XD

Lol XD Now the question is how tall are you :P

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 28, 2010, 06:21:14 PM
@BB NI
Alright. But you must pm yours too or I'll  :bangchair:


@Trey-trey
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XD But what will she do if she sees us?! We need a better plan~ :P
I'm all ears  XD

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Do camels eat humans???? :lol: Or aren't you a human??? :grin:
Good point   :lol:

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:rofl: Last time that I said something similar she didn't even notice it so~~~ XD
Her name baddie wasn't in it, probably that's why  XD

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*takes a sequoia* XD
lol that would make you more stand out  :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 28, 2010, 06:22:30 PM
Quote from: KZ
Can I skip this question?
Uh, how about, nope, not on your life. I'm curious now. :twisted:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 28, 2010, 06:26:04 PM
^
I'm not sure how C would react  :nervous there  :twisted:    :k-thrilled:

:mon rush:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 28, 2010, 06:28:26 PM
^ go ahead kRisZ
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: amEthystx on January 28, 2010, 06:30:25 PM
@K: I'm waiting~ XD

@Trey-trey: I'm just a tiny 160 XD

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*takes a sequoia*  XD
- XD

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WTF?? How many mischievous people are there here?!?!?!
- apparently i brought out a few XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 28, 2010, 06:55:38 PM
@ Bishop
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*gasped* Have i exposed myself?! I'm a selective flirt~
Says you.

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Hey Girl, camels is a must when we have K around
XD

@ K
Did your last post just disappear??

I'll ask anyway, does that has to do with this:
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the object that landed on top of the baby tree.
?
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: Treykun on January 28, 2010, 06:57:17 PM

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Seems like we're all very talkative  :grin:


I'm all ears  XD

:mon dunno: What about follow her movements from the distance?? *takes the binoculars along with the rest of the spy kit* XD

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:rofl: Last time that I said something similar she didn't even notice it so~~~ XD
Her name baddie wasn't in it, probably that's why  XD

Damn you and your lack of discretion!! :rofl: Now I'm truly dead XD

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*takes a sequoia* XD
lol that would make you more stand out  :lol:

*Puffs cheeks* Then, you have a better idea to hide me?? :lol:

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Can I skip this question?
Uh, how about, nope, not on your life. I'm curious now. :twisted:

*Insert suspense tune here* XD

I'm not sure how C would react  :nervous there  :twisted:    :k-thrilled:

XD

:rofl: SOOOOOOO... Baddie will kill me, and C and rndm will kill you!! XD :twisted:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 28, 2010, 06:58:36 PM
 :halo:

I was afraid I'd make you and rnd-sama  :angry: so I deleted it  :nervous


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:mon dunno: What about follow her movements from the distance?? *takes the binoculars along with the rest of the spy kit* XD
Hmmm... nice plan. what if she has binoculars too and will spot us spotting?

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Damn you and your lack of discretion!! :rofl: Now I'm truly dead XD
Oopps, did I type baddie?  :lol:

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*Puffs cheeks* Then, you have a better idea to hide me?? :lol:
Borrow Harry's cloak?  XD

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:rofl: SOOOOOOO... Baddie will kill me, and C and rndm will kill you!! XD :twisted:
Exactly  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 28, 2010, 07:20:39 PM
I'm not angry. Though I dunno about rndmnwierd.

So....since I landed on baby tree, that means I'm on top, right? :?

To rndmnwierd:
*looks below me* why, hi there. Now this is what I call a nice view  :)

.........

*slapself* what the...did I just say that??  XD
Bishop really is contagious  :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 28, 2010, 07:22:16 PM
 :on lol:  :on lol:  :on lol:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: amEthystx on January 28, 2010, 07:30:59 PM
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I'm not angry. Though I dunno about rndmnwierd.

So....since I landed on baby tree, that means I'm on top, right?  :?

- Light bulb lighting up! OMG!

So this is what was going on!

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*slapself* what the...did I just say that??  XD
Bishop really is contagious   :lol:
- Gives a very very very very very very INNOCENT look.....

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*Puffs cheeks* Then, you have a better idea to hide me??
Borrow Harry's cloak? 
- lol I want to see Trey-trey puff his cheeks!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 28, 2010, 07:39:21 PM
@BB NI
You are closer to rnd-sama, can I hide behind your back, just in case  :mon cute:


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- lol I want to see Trey-trey puff his cheeks!
Me too! VISUAL! VISUAL! VISUAL!  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: Treykun on January 28, 2010, 07:54:57 PM

To rndmnwierd:
*looks below me* why, hi there. Now this is what I call a nice view  :)

:on lol: C learns fast!!!! XD

Hmmm... nice plan. what if she has binoculars too and will spot us spotting?

Well, if she spots us when we're spotting her... then we're dead XD But we're in the distance... and I run fast! :P

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Oopps, did I type baddie?  :lol:

Yeah, you did... XD And moreover, you put her name in black letters to make it even more spoteable XD Does that word even exist??? xD

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Borrow Harry's cloak?  XD

Harry's cloak won't work, because it was already short for Harry (who is short XD)


- lol I want to see Trey-trey puff his cheeks!

Me too! VISUAL! VISUAL! VISUAL!  XD

Hey!! What do you mean?!?! I'm really cute when I puff my cheeks!! *puffs cheeks again*  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 28, 2010, 08:04:07 PM
@ Bishop
- Light bulb lighting up! OMG!

So this is what was going on!
I thought you already knew

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- Gives a very very very very very very INNOCENT look.....
LOL

@ K
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You are closer to rnd-sama, can I hide behind your back, just in case
Maybe I should too? Just in case I'll get a slap for what I said.

@ Treykun
:on lol: C learns fast!!!! XD
It's the Bishop teaching  :lol:

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Hey!! What do you mean?!?! I'm really cute when I puff my cheeks!! *puffs cheeks again*
Now I too want a visual  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 28, 2010, 08:38:21 PM
I didn't read the original post, but I saw enough to guess and hold, just a sec, I'm laughing to hard to type.

Whew, okay.

I'm not mad, just quite curious as to your explanation on how a kite and a tree can have a love affair. :lol: :lol: Then again, I just answered myself.

I'm not angry. Though I dunno about rndmnwierd.

So....since I landed on baby tree, that means I'm on top, right? :?

To rndmnwierd:
*looks below me* why, hi there. Now this is what I call a nice view  :)

.........

*slapself* what the...did I just say that??  XD
Bishop really is contagious  :lol:

:lol: :lol: :rofl: :rofl: *rofflecopter tour*

Are we going to have to come up with a schedule or something?

(I love you guys :heart: :heart: )
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 29, 2010, 03:20:51 PM
Hey Girl, camels is a must when we have K around :)


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I hope that was done purely with love

I love you more with every breath Truly Madly Deeply do..~
i just melt  :wub: :wub:

From this moment I have been blessed
I live only for your happiness
And for your love I'd give my last breath
From this moment on
do you know that your post can send me up to heaven straight..XD
it just so  :wub: :wub: :wub:

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Up *Find me under the table cloth later please.. thank you!*
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i will..wait for me.. :lol:
-*pouts* If you come.. then where can i hide? I'll be blushing you know.. :(
i dont want you to hide from me, that why i come..<3

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I guess i look innocently cute as well! <- I always force my friends to agree to this.. LOL! but dreadfully mischievous.... XD
is sayu your sis?!  :lol:

 
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I'm one of her stalkers sshhhh
- she even listens to you :( she posted on my thread when you asked  :cry:

 :( :cry:
if i say no, will you believe..
i appear not cause of kR.. :(
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 03:28:02 PM
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I'm one of her stalkers sshhhh
- she even listens to you :( she posted on my thread when you asked  :cry:

 :( :cry:
if i say no, will you believe..
i appear not cause of kR.. :(

 :lol: alright! I'll tell your Darling I never got the chance to ask you, just don't make that sad face, it's breaking my heart  :'(

And she's on her holidays atm at the beach somewhere over her rainbow  XD  stalk her   :grin:



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@C
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To rndmnwierd:
*looks below me* why, hi there. Now this is what I call a nice view  :)
What did you see? Share! Share  :twisted:

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Maybe I should too? Just in case I'll get a slap for what I said.
Butt slap?  XD



@Trey-trey
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Well, if she spots us when we're spotting her... then we're dead XD But we're in the distance... and I run fast! :P
I bet you run fast, you're tall  :lol: *looks at my two poor legs  :(  am I going to die alone  :depressed: *

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Yeah, you did... XD And moreover, you put her name in black letters to make it even more spoteable XD Does that word even exist??? xD
Oopsss  :lol:

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Harry's cloak won't work, because it was already short for Harry (who is short XD)
If you'll use that cloak, there will be a pair of long legs walking  :rofl:

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Hey!! What do you mean?!?! I'm really cute when I puff my cheeks!! *puffs cheeks again*  XD
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Now I too want a visual  XD
Capture and post  :twisted:  XD



Quote from rnd-sama
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Are we going to have to come up with a schedule or something?
Answer that C quick XD

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(I love you guys :heart: :heart: )
:heart:




Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 29, 2010, 05:03:10 PM
@ the person under me:
I'm not mad, just quite curious as to your explanation on how a kite and a tree can have a love affair
Love knows no boundaries

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Are we going to have to come up with a schedule or something?
I actually don't know how to answer this  :nervous  but what do you want?

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(I love you guys :heart: :heart: )
Right back at you  ;)

@ K
You know this is really getting complicated, rndmnwierd flirted in Bishop's thread and here I am doing what? LOL

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What did you see? Share! Share
Simply the most fascinating thing I've ever seen in my life  XD --> I feel like slapping myself again

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Butt slap?
Ask that to rndmnwierd
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 05:14:34 PM
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I actually don't know how to answer this  :nervous  but what do you want?
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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You know this is really getting complicated, rndmnwierd flirted in Bishop's thread and here I am doing what? LOL
It's love square  :lol:

C  --> <-- rnd-sama --> <-- Our Big Flirt Bishop NI --> <-- S!hu!

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Simply the most fascinating thing I've ever seen in my life  XD --> I feel like slapping myself again
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:


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Butt slap?
Ask that to rndmnwierd
*waits for rnd-sama's*  :love:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 29, 2010, 05:47:29 PM
C  --> <-- rnd-sama --> <-- Our Big Flirt Bishop NI --> <-- S!hu!
It seemed that S!hu! (can I call her that?) and my sides aren't looking too good if you put it that way  :sweatdrop:

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*waits for rnd-sama's*  :love:
*waits with you*
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 05:53:42 PM
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You looked like the antagonists of the drama  :P  :rofl:  sorry  XD

Title?  :same    "Over the  BIG FLIRT's Rainbow"  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 29, 2010, 06:04:01 PM
:mon scare: antagonist??

.........

:on cloudeye:

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Title?  :same    "Over the  BIG FLIRT's Rainbow"  XD
:mon lmao:  :twothumbs

Edit: New page GETS! Sorry for messing your thread XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 29, 2010, 06:09:26 PM
It seemed that S!hu! (can I call her that?) and my sides aren't looking too good if you put it that way  :sweatdrop:
yes..lol..i answer myself..:P
actually can just type sihui, will it be easier?LOL..or just AA also can..much more easier..

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C  --> <-- rnd-sama --> <-- Our Big Flirt Bishop NI --> <-- S!hu!
:cry:
i was feeling  :wub: yesterday, yet today,i'm..........................................

*off to a corner again*
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 06:17:59 PM
@C
lol it's cool  :grin:

OMG!  :w00t:  We can use that for another story at YTTC  :w00t:

Title:
Over The BIG FLIRT's Rainbow

Starring:
Teh BIshop NI
rnd-sama
C
S!hu!

Also Starring
The cousin Trey-trey
The Granny baddie
And everyone

 :mon money:



and look who's back *jumps on s!hu!* let's go stalk BB NI  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 29, 2010, 06:20:57 PM
^ i dont want  :(
*pull kR down and walk off to a corner*
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 29, 2010, 06:23:35 PM
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actually can just type sihui, will it be easier?LOL..or just AA also can..much more easier..
I'll go with AA then since I'm lazy XD

@ K
Antagonist doesn't get a happy ending you know? *joins AA at the corner*

OMG!  :w00t:  We can use that for another story at YTTC  :w00t:

Title:
Over The BIG FLIRT's Rainbow

Starring:
Teh BIshop NI
rnd-sama
C
S!hu!

Also Starring
The cousin Trey-trey
The Granny baddie
And everyone

 :mon money:

That will be Your Turn To Crack instead of Your Turn To Continue  :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 06:24:52 PM
S!hu!
lol come here let me give you a hug on behalf of BB NI    :halo:


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That will be Your Turn To Crack instead of Your Turn To Continue  :lol:
XD  XD  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 29, 2010, 06:33:23 PM
What about this antagonist?  :err:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 06:43:20 PM
 XD

Well, in dramas there are antagonists, it just so happen that you're one of them?   :twisted:  :k-thrilled:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 29, 2010, 06:49:24 PM
Well, in dramas there are antagonists, it just so happen that you're one of them?   :twisted:  :k-thrilled:

:mon duh:

Do I look like one?   
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 06:51:44 PM
Ummm... no, you looked like a kid who needs to take a long soapy bath  :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 29, 2010, 06:54:47 PM
*sniff self* Hey! I already shower today  XD

Are we the only one left ol?
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 07:00:49 PM
Yeah, looks like it  XD How about we continue this tomorrow while we think of a good plot for our new story  :twisted:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 29, 2010, 07:07:06 PM
What do you mean our story?? I don't get to chose! LOL

But yeah let's continue tomorrow while we wait for others to comment.

Night, K. Have a nice sleep :) (it's night there n you're gonna sleep, right?)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 07:14:54 PM
No, it's dawn  XD and yes I'm gonna sleep  :D

I had a great time   :heart:

Have a nice day for you?   :heart:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 29, 2010, 07:17:44 PM
It's past midnight for me but thank you

I too had a great time  :D
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 07:20:52 PM
OMG! I just noticed your personal text  :inlove:  :twothumbs

Goodnight C



Peace out  :heart:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: Haruka on January 29, 2010, 10:20:39 PM
I love your fics x)

Hope you can made another chap =)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: Treykun on January 29, 2010, 10:46:23 PM

Now I too want a visual  XD

C!!!!!!!!!! Not you too!!!!!!!! XD

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Maybe I should too? Just in case I'll get a slap for what I said.
Butt slap?  XD

Ay dios mío...  :rofl:

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I bet you run fast, you're tall  :lol: *looks at my two poor legs  :(  am I going to die alone  :depressed: *

:lol: Don't worry, I won't let you die alone... I'll wait to the bishop to kill you, and then I'll run away :grin:

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If you'll use that cloak, there will be a pair of long legs walking  :rofl:

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: So, the sequoia was a better idea XD

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Now I too want a visual  XD
Capture and post  :twisted:  XD

NO FREAKIN' WAY!!! I won't let the lurkers of this thread see me puffing my cheeks!!  XD But I can pm to those who want to see~~~ XD

C  --> <-- rnd-sama --> <-- Our Big Flirt Bishop NI --> <-- S!hu!

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: They really look like the antagonists  XD


Title:
Over The BIG FLIRT's Rainbow

Starring:
Teh BIshop NI
rnd-sama
C
S!hu!

Also Starring
The cousin Trey-trey
The Granny baddie
And everyone

:rofl: I see... XD But you're aware that you'll be included in the story, right?? We'll get our revenge... :twisted:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 30, 2010, 02:59:23 AM
*dives into thread and butt slaps KZ and C* Whoa, you guys are too fast for me! I can't keep up with your demands, must clone self.

Title:
Over The BIG FLIRT's Rainbow

Starring:
Teh BIshop NI
rnd-sama
C
S!hu!

Also Starring
The cousin Trey-trey
The Granny baddie
And everyone
:lol: :lol:

C  --> <-- rnd-sama --> <-- Our Big Flirt Bishop NI --> <-- S!hu!

Wow, that worked out quite well. XD

*sidles up to C and put an arm around her shoulders* While Baby Sticky's away, the mice will play, huh honey? *flirty eyebrows*
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 30, 2010, 06:30:47 AM
@ T-Kun (Can I call you that? I'm lazy XD)
C!!!!!!!!!! Not you too!!!!!!!! XD
Well you said you're really cute when puffing your cheek, I couldn't resist  :grin:

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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: They really look like the antagonists  XD
Okay, what's that supposed to mean? LOL

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:rofl: I see... XD But you're aware that you'll be included in the story, right?? We'll get our revenge... :twisted:
Ohoho you're so right  :twisted:


@ K
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NO FREAKIN' WAY!!! I won't let the lurkers of this thread see me puffing my cheeks!!  XD But I can pm to those who want to see~~~ XD
K, what do you say to this statement?

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OMG! I just noticed your personal text  :inlove: :twothumbs
:D Bishop changed hers too, I think.
One of these days I might just change my avatar into a kite C  :lol:

Ouch! You and I got butt slapped by rndmnwierd


@ rndmnwierd
*sidles up to C and put an arm around her shoulders* While Baby Sticky's away, the mice will play, huh honey? *flirty eyebrows*
*slipped out of rndmnwierd's arm* No, I refuse to be a replacement! *turns into kite C and flies to lonely blue sky*

~insert sad song here~

Did I just bring a drama to this thread?  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: Hotaru on January 30, 2010, 08:22:28 AM
LOL you guys are so silly. XD

Oh, and I like the fic. :D
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 30, 2010, 08:35:46 AM
@Haruka
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I love your fics x)

Hope you can made another chap =)
:farofflook: Even S!hu! never mentioned she likes this story even in the slightest bit and this was originally written for her   :farofflook:

I will try to finish my short update and probably post it later  :) and this time it will be written for you  :)  and not for the perv*** S!hu!

 :kneelbow:



@Trey-trey
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Ay dios mío...  :rofl:
rnd-sama, someone wants some butt slap loving *points at Trey-trey*  :P

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:lol: Don't worry, I won't let you die alone... I'll wait to the bishop to kill you, and then I'll run away :grin:
OMG  :OMG:  :fainted:

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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: So, the sequoia was a better idea XD
Carry it yourself, I won’t give you a hand  :P

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NO FREAKIN' WAY!!! I won't let the lurkers of this thread see me puffing my cheeks!!  XD But I can pm to those who want to see~~~ XD
:w00t:  PM!  :on woohoo:  PM!  :mon fyeah:  PM!  :on comhere:  

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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: They really look like the antagonists  XD
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  Yay! I'm not alone!  :on gay:

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:rofl: I see... XD But you're aware that you'll be included in the story, right?? We'll get our revenge... :twisted:
:huhuh  :O  :shocked   :OMG:  :fainted:



@rnd-sama
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*dives into thread and butt slaps KZ and C* Whoa, you guys are too fast for me! I can't keep up with your demands, must clone self.
Ouch.?.  XD  make it a lot  :grin: it's cool rnd-sama we'll just wait for your replies patiently  XD

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Wow, that worked out quite well. XD
Starring:
Teh BIshop NI *waits for her approval*
rnd-sama  CHECKED
C CHECKED
S!hu! I'll make this one CHECKED  :twisted:

Also Starring
The cousin Trey-trey CHECKED
The Granny baddie *waits too for her approval*
And everyone ummm CHECKED?  :D

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*sidles up to C and put an arm around her shoulders* While Baby Sticky's away, the mice will play, huh honey? *flirty eyebrows*
:grin:  :grin:  :grin: Damn  XD



@C
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Ohoho you're so right  :twisted:
:err:  :imdead:

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K, what do you say to this statement?
I say PM!  :pepper:   PM!  :pepper:  PM!  :pepper:

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:D Bishop changed hers too, I think.
One of these days I might just change my avatar into a kite C  :lol:
Hers too?  :w00t: Must change mine  :w00t:

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Ouch! You and I got butt slapped by rndmnwierd
It's reddened now  :cry:

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~insert sad song here~
그대만 있다면 - Loveholic (러브홀릭) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AY8bGXmP8Rw#)
 XD

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Did I just bring a drama to this thread?  XD
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:


EDIT

@Hotaru
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LOL you guys are so silly. XD

Oh, and I like the fic. :D
:kneelbow:  :kneelbow:  :kneelbow:

Please join in the fun  :grin:



I'LL BE BACK LATER  :heart:


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: badsaints on January 30, 2010, 09:19:28 AM
My god, that's about 4 pages of wackiness :rofl:


I guess i look innocently cute as well! <- I always force my friends to agree to this.. LOL! but dreadfully mischievous.... XD
WTF?? How many mischievous people are there here?!?!?! XD
Let's count: 1 tall guy hiding behind the tree, 1 on top of the baby tree, 2 playing with the kites...hmm how about all? :lol:


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:rofl: Last time that I said something similar she didn't even notice it so~~~ XD
Her name baddie wasn't in it, probably that's why  XD
Ehhhhh? I saw this earlier but I thought you're talking about someone mischievious like...everyone? :? I'm the innocent one here! :angry:


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@Trey-trey: I'm just a tiny 160 XD
Hmm I told you this before but you really do look tiny XD


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:rofl: SOOOOOOO... Baddie will kill me, and C and rndm will kill you!! XD :twisted:
Nah I'll just skewer you with a walking baby stick and grill you slowly under the baby tree while playing with a kite :twisted:


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NO FREAKIN' WAY!!! I won't let the lurkers of this thread see me puffing my cheeks!!  XD But I can pm to those who want to see~~~ XD
:w00t:  PM!  :on woohoo:  PM!  :mon fyeah:  PM!  :on comhere:
PM! PM! PM!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 30, 2010, 01:02:25 PM
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*slipped out of rndmnwierd's arm* No, I refuse to be a replacement! *turns into kite C and flies to lonely blue sky*
*pouts* What replacement? I can't have two at the same time to flirt with? *turns into baby tree and, uh, oops, doesn't go anywhere* :sweatdrop:

Quote from: KZ
It's reddened now
Oh? Guess I'll have to slap the other cheek to make it even. :twisted:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 30, 2010, 01:41:50 PM
@ K
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  Yay! I'm not alone!  :on gay:
*sulk behind the clouds*

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C CHECKED
Noooo!!! I don't agree on being an antagonist! LOL

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It's reddened now  :cry:
*rubs butt* Yeah that woman don't slap lightly

You're gonna turn me into an emo with that song XD


@ badsaints
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My god, that's about 4 pages of wackiness
That's not counting Bishop's thread  :lol:


@ T-Kun
What others say, PM!


@ rndmnwierd
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What replacement? I can't have two at the same time to flirt with?
Bishop's replacement. I'm one-woman kind of person (I'm so slapping myself XD) but If others are willing to be flirted with you at the same time, feel free.

*starts singing Richard Marx - Slipping away*

If time will show me grace
And you to a better place
Then I can live knowing it wasn't in vain
It hurts so much to know when love means letting go
And no one can tell me that they've felt my pain



See? I'm turning emo  :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: Treykun on January 30, 2010, 02:33:02 PM

@C:

@ T-Kun (Can I call you that? I'm lazy XD)

Then we're two lazy people XD Sure, call me that :grin:

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Well you said you're really cute when puffing your cheek, I couldn't resist  :grin:

Hey!! I'm ALWAYS cute!! XD :grin:

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Ohoho you're so right :twisted:

Hell yeah XD

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K, what do you say to this statement?

:shocked Shit... XD

@kRisZ:

rnd-sama, someone wants some butt slap loving *points at Trey-trey*  :P

Oh come on!! The bishop has already touched my butt!! Let me alone!! :cry: :cry:

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:OMG:  :OMG:  :fainted:

Sorry, but I can't die now... I'm too young :P XD

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Carry it yourself, I won’t give you a hand  :P

WHY?!?!?!?! :cry: I won't be able to carry it in my own :mon whimper:

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:w00t:  PM!  :on woohoo:  PM!  :mon fyeah:  PM!  :on comhere: 

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: Seriously, why the hell are you soooo curious about it?? :P

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:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  Yay! I'm not alone!  :on gay:

Nope, not at all XD BTW, how will this drama end?? XD

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K, what do you say to this statement?
I say PM!  :pepper:   PM!  :pepper:  PM!  :pepper:

*Puffs cheeks one more time*  NOW I DON'T WANT TO PUFF THEM!!! I WON'T PUFF MY CHEEKS FOR YOU, EVIL PEOPLE!! XD :grin:

@Baddie:


WTF?? How many mischievous people are there here?!?!?! XD
Let's count: 1 tall guy hiding behind the tree, 1 on top of the baby tree, 2 playing with the kites...hmm how about all? :lol:

:rofl: All the people?!?! XD

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Ehhhhh? I saw this earlier but I thought you're talking about someone mischievious like...everyone?  I'm the innocent one here!

XD THAT'S NOT TRUE!!!! The only one innocent here is me!!! :grin:

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Nah I'll just skewer you with a walking baby stick and grill you slowly under the baby tree while playing with a kite :twisted:

:shocked That's even worst! XD

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PM! PM! PM!

I had to expect this from you and your evil purposes :cry:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
Post by: kRisZ on January 30, 2010, 05:00:07 PM
Trey-trey   :rockon:



COMMENTS REPLY --> TOMORROW me is tired and so sleepy  :D

 :kneelbow:





UPDATE 20 (Part 1 of 2)



Risa was driving aimlessly. She’s just plain stressed out with everything that’s happening, the unsolved brutal murder case and her now complicated love life. She needed the drive to cool herself down. She’d turn to every corner she came across, driving without any specific direction, until something caught her eyes. She pulled over, locked her car and entered into the flashy building.


“Irasshaimase”


 Risa slightly bowed and only gave a hand signal to the attentive attendant.


“Any particular style in mind?” the attendant said gleefully as he ushered Risa to her seat.


“Any will do. All I needed is to feel light and loosen up a bit.”


“Okay. I know one that will make you.”


She paid no attention to her current state. Her mind wandered outside the premises. And there was only one person that occupied her restless mind, one Takahashi Ai. She smiled upon remembering their first encounter. Her smile grew wider as she took a walk down memory lane.


It was a Saturday night. She was at her usual place at her usual time but alone, her best friend did not go out with her. She was all alone sitting by the counter, sipping some beer, eyeing for prospects. She was there for an hour already, but the place was slow. The crowd was mostly men and there were only a few women but none was of her liking. That’s when she decided to call it a night and head home.


The exit area was slightly dimmed, that and a few ounces of alcohol in her veins, made her tripped over something on the way, making her let out a few curses. She composed herself and was about to exit when she saw a silhouette entered. All she could make out was her strikingly alluring body and her hair swayed with the air when the door opened and closed. When the girl passed by her she smelled sweet flowery scent, which made her stare and follow where the girl headed, to the counter. That’s when she decided to take her seat back and stayed longer.


Upon reclaiming her seat by the counter, that’s when she partially saw the beauty the lady possessed.


A shy but charming smile was given to the bartender as the girl took her drink and walked towards a corner. Her stolen quick glances were not left unnoticed by the man behind the counter.


“She’s a catch” he said while winking at Risa. She only smirked at the statement and ordered another bottle of beer.


Time flew fast, she already drank her third bottle of beer but she could not make her first move. She was somewhat intimidated by the girl, all she did was stare from afar while gulping down some beer. She was about to give up and head home when a few drunkards moved towards the girl, swirling. The girl looked unaware of the advancing men. That’s when she stood up and moved towards her, stopping for a moment where the deranged looking men who restlessly stood in the middle of the tables and gave them a look that made them cringe and walk away.


When she turned and continued walking towards her, the girl was already staring at her.


“Hey... I was wondering if...” Risa’s statement was cut off when the woman in front of her passed out. She froze upon witnessing the girl’s head plopped out onto the table. Regaining her senses back, she dashed forward and checked the girl.


“Hey, are you okay?” she lightly shook the girl but no response was received. She scanned the surrounding and found a young man who jolted back in his seat when their eyes met. Suspicious. She then scanned the girl’s table, examined her glass but it was already empty. When she took a look at the young man again, he was already gone.


“Niigaki-san, is everything okay?” Risa looked up and saw the bartender checking them up.

 
“Yeah, she just passed out. Can you help me carry her so that I can send her home?”


“Sure”


The bartender carried the girl out. Risa looked inside the girl’s bag, hoping she could find an address but she only found keys and a few bucks. She took the keys out and pressed the remote and there they found her car, parked at the corner. She opened it and the bartender gently laid the girl on the passenger’s seat before closing the door.


“Can you manage from here?”


“Yes, thank you Kameru-kun” she then went to the other side and hopped inside the car. Risa tried to look for the address but none was found. Tapping her fingers on the steering wheel she sighed and gave her undivided attention to the girl silently sleeping on the seat.


“Okay, let me take you to a more comfortable bed but first buckle up”


TBC 


There edited :D





Me is tired but I promised to update so yeah  :heart:


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 30, 2010, 05:16:49 PM
:O

Risa brought a girl with her. Seems like trouble in the future.

Thanks for updating even though you're tired  :heart:


@ T-Kun

:twothumbs
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 30, 2010, 05:29:09 PM
Risa's actually a good girl. :D Get some rest Kz, we'll be here. *pats head*

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I'm one-woman kind of person (I'm so slapping myself ) but If others are willing to be flirted with you at the same time, feel free.
Aww. *pouts*
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 30, 2010, 05:36:48 PM
GAKISAN!!! :smhid :smhid
still flirting? :smhid

i'm tired..cant comment..
and i'm still sad :cry: :cry:

but then i will remember to say this to you
Good Night kR, have a good sleep..see you in my dream land.. :wub:
(as if if u appear i know it's you.. :nervous)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 30, 2010, 05:47:30 PM
Aww. *pouts*

I'm sorry, I'm afraid it will stays that way.
But don't pout, please? --> is actually weak of it.

I swear there should be a rule to ban girls from pouting (and I'm a girl XD)


@ AA
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and i'm still sad  :cry: :cry:
Aww, cheer up.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: Hart on January 30, 2010, 06:25:24 PM
Unless I'm wrong this is a flashback to when Gaki first met Ai. Gaki would never cheat on Ai.  :smhid
For a player, Gaki was really shy around Ai.

I hope Gaki was sober enough when she decided to drive that night.
I don't condone people driving while intoxicated, especially since she is a cop.

Is it bad that I'm more interested in the drama behind the scenes than the story itself?  :nervous



Sweet dreams, author-san.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on January 31, 2010, 12:47:55 AM
@baddie
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My god, that's about 4 pages of wackiness :rofl:
4 pages.?.  :shocked

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Let's count: 1 tall guy hiding behind the tree, 1 on top of the baby tree, 2 playing with the kites...hmm how about all? :lol:
*imagine a granny playing with a kite with her grandchild*  :wub:  :lol:  peace baddie  :grin:

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Ehhhhh? I saw this earlier but I thought you're talking about someone mischievious like...everyone? :? I'm the innocent one here! :angry:
Sorry baddie, no one's gonna believe that  :grin:


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Hmm I told you this before but you really do look tiny XD
That means you are taller? visual  :muffin:  visual  :muffin:  visual  :muffin:

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Nah I'll just skewer you with a walking baby stick and grill you slowly under the baby tree while playing with a kite :twisted:
You meant, walking granny stick  :twisted:

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PM! PM! PM!
Yeah, and include the long legs  :D



@rnd-sama
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*pouts* What replacement? I can't have two at the same time to flirt with? *turns into baby tree and, uh, oops, doesn't go anywhere* :sweatdrop:
:lol:

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Oh? Guess I'll have to slap the other cheek to make it even. :twisted:
:O oh no it's cool. But Trey-trey needs one  :D


@C
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*sulk behind the clouds*
Watch out! There's a tornado behind that  :shocked  XD

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Noooo!!! I don't agree on being an antagonist! LOL
XD It's a challenging role  :P

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*rubs butt* Yeah that woman don't slap lightly
:yep:  did she squeeze yours? *wink wink*  XD  not that she squeezed mine  :P

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You're gonna turn me into an emo with that song XD
:grin: sorry

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That's not counting Bishop's thread  :lol:
:yep:  :lol:

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What others say, PM!
Already got mine. Reminds me *stare at Trey-trey* hey there handsome  *wink wink*  XD

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Bishop's replacement. I'm one-woman kind of person (I'm so slapping myself XD) but If others are willing to be flirted with you at the same time, feel free.
Ummm... really?  :lol:



Trey-trey
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Hey!! I'm ALWAYS cute!! XD :grin:
:roll:

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Ohoho you're so right :twisted:

Hell yeah XD
Arg.

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Oh come on!! The bishop has already touched my butt!! Let me alone!! :cry: :cry:
How was the touch?  :w00t:  :twisted:  XD

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Sorry, but I can't die now... I'm too young :P XD
:smhid

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WHY?!?!?!?! :cry: I won't be able to carry it in my own :mon whimper:
You'll leave me to die at Bishop NI's hands remember? So, no  :smhid that whimper won't work

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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: Seriously, why the hell are you soooo curious about it?? :P
I enjoyed imagining your faces but nothing beats visual aid :twisted:

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Nope, not at all XD BTW, how will this drama end?? XD
That I'm not so sure  XD but I was watching this Loveholic - Sky English Sub (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M3XfbbQyCxg#) and I was like OMG!  :w00t:  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:  :lol: I'm so disturbed  XD

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*Puffs cheeks one more time*  NOW I DON'T WANT TO PUFF THEM!!! I WON'T PUFF MY CHEEKS FOR YOU, EVIL PEOPLE!! XD :grin:
Hey, you were the one teasing us  :P

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XD THAT'S NOT TRUE!!!! The only one innocent here is me!!! :grin:
:roll: Why's everyone claiming they're innocent when clearly they're NOT  :P

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I had to expect this from you and your evil purposes :cry:
:lol:  :twothumbs



@C
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Risa brought a girl with her. Seems like trouble in the future.
Ummm  :(  XD

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Thanks for updating even though you're tired  :heart:
It's cool  :)



@rnd-sama
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Risa's actually a good girl. :D Get some rest Kz, we'll be here. *pats head*
:yep:
Thank you  :heart:   :wub:  :lol:

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I'm one-woman kind of person (I'm so slapping myself ) but If others are willing to be flirted with you at the same time, feel free.
Aww. *pouts*
Can you bear looking at that C?



@AA Battery  lol I love teasing you  XD  sorry dear but you know that I love you like Snoopy right?  :D
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GAKISAN!!! :smhid :smhid
still flirting? :smhid
Ummm *goes to read my update*  :D

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i'm tired..cant comment..
I know  :)  You don't have to review the other, it's too time consuming. But you have bunch of readers there so  :twisted:

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and i'm still sad :cry: :cry:
Don't be, your Darling will be here in no time, make her explain  :D

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but then i will remember to say this to you
Good Night kR, have a good sleep..see you in my dream land.. :wub:
(as if if u appear i know it's you.. :nervous)
lol I'll PM mine if you'll PM yours *wink wink*  :grin:



@C
You're name appeared thrice  XD

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I'm sorry, I'm afraid it will stays that way.
But don't pout, please? --> is actually weak of it.
I knew it. rnd-sama pout more  XD

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I swear there should be a rule to ban girls from pouting (and I'm a girl XD)
No, we won't be able to see you  :wigglypanda:   :wub:  and  :ptam-shy:



HartAKL85
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Unless I'm wrong this is a flashback to when Gaki first met Ai. Gaki would never cheat on Ai.  :smhid
Yay!  :mon money:

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For a player, Gaki was really shy around Ai.
I'd be, though I'm not a player  XD

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I hope Gaki was sober enough when she decided to drive that night.
I don't condone people driving while intoxicated, especially since she is a cop.
Let's just say she has high tolerance on alcohol  :D

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Is it bad that I'm more interested in the drama behind the scenes than the story itself?  :nervous
:huhuh  :O  :shocked   :fainted: I knw someone would say that   :gyaaah:  :pleeease: :on speedy: but then again me too feels the same   :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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Sweet dreams, author-san.
I actually had a nightmare  :on freeze: but thank you  :heart:

 



Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 31, 2010, 05:26:48 AM
@ K

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Watch out! There's a tornado behind that  :shocked XD
*flies into another cloud, this time a safe one*

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XD It's a challenging role  :P
:frustrated:

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:yep:  did she squeeze yours? *wink wink*  XD  not that she squeezed mine  :P
:stunned:
Did you just turn really evil in a night?  :lol: Anyway, I'm not answering that  :roll:

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Already got mine. Reminds me *stare at Trey-trey* hey there handsome  *wink wink*  XD
:shocked are you flirting with him?  XD
Got mine too.

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Bishop's replacement. I'm one-woman kind of person (I'm so slapping myself XD) but If others are willing to be flirted with you at the same time, feel free.
Ummm... really?  :lol:
Unfortunately for me yeah :sweatdrop:

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Nope, not at all XD BTW, how will this drama end?? XD
That I'm not so sure  XD but I was watching this
*watches the video* that doesn't look good at all...

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Can you bear looking at that C?
*starts fidgeting* uh....um....

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You're name appeared thrice  XD
:cow:

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I knew it. rnd-sama pout more  XD
NO, DON'T!

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No, we won't be able to see you  :wigglypanda:   :wub:  and  :ptam-shy:
I think you should be the antagonist.

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I actually had a nightmare  :on freeze: but thank you  :heart:
You okay??


@ T-kun
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Then we're two lazy people  XD Sure, call me that  :grin:
:grin:

Nice PM btw.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: Hart on January 31, 2010, 06:46:59 AM
I actually had a nightmare  :on freeze: but thank you  :heart:
Aww... *pats kr-san's back* Is there anyway I can make you feel better?
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on January 31, 2010, 07:47:13 AM
@C
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*flies into another cloud, this time a safe one*
:lol:

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:frustrated:
It is  XD

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:stunned:
Did you just turn really evil in a night?  :lol: Anyway, I'm not answering that  :roll:
Just like Bishop NI's word --> it's harmless  :D

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:shocked are you flirting with him?  XD
Did I?  :mon freeze:  :panic:  lol just this once and only for Trey-trey he's just too cool and too harmless

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Unfortunately for me yeah :sweatdrop:
Alright, I'll believe you this time because of that bead of sweat... but that's just me, I won't speak for others  :P

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*watches the video* that doesn't look good at all...
Imagine Bishop NI on a bike and kicking some ass   :rockon:  while her rnd-sama was too  :luvluv1:  into her and then that  :twisted:  XD

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*starts fidgeting* uh....um....
:lol:

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I knew it. rnd-sama pout more  XD
NO, DON'T!
Don't listen to her rnd-sama, pout more  XD

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I think you should be the antagonist.
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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You okay??

Yeah, I'm cool  :)  work was stressful yesterday but I'm good. Thank you  :heart:



@HartAKL85
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Aww... *pats kr-san's back* Is there anyway I can make you feel better?
I'm better, thank you though  :)

 




UPDATE 20 (Part 2 of 2)



Two different moans echoed in the small rented hotel room. Their blanket rustled as they relentlessly move from side to side. One body laid close to the other, delicately touching each other once in a while. Risa’s clothes were drenched with sweat and her companion as well was bathing in sweet scented perspiration. The night was warm and dry. The room’s air conditioner broke down a couple of minutes ago making the temperature rise even more.


Groaning, Risa sat up. Too lazy to open her eyes she removed her clothes in quick motion and tossed them over her shoulders producing a soft thud as they landed on the tiled floor. After completing her task, she then laid down again and snuggled closer to the other girl. The girl next to her was still uneasy, making Risa got up again and went to open the windows before undressing her companion. Just like her clothes’ fate, the girl’s landed on the floor and sprawled everywhere. She returned to her laying position and cuddled the girl again but this time both were calm and at rest. Soft breathing then followed and together they peacefully journeyed to their own dreamland.


When Risa recollected the morning scene after that fateful night, how Ai reacted to waking up without any clothes on, she giggled, attracting the attention of the attendant. She swiftly composed herself and eyed her own reflection on the mirror. That’s when the recent morning incident came into her mind and her previous jolly mood was replaced with a gloomy one.


“Short. I need it short”


“Okay” the attendant responded.


After a few more minutes, everything was finished. She paid the bill and left the building. On her way to her car, she took her phone out, dialed a number and placed it back in after a quick conversation and then she took off.


~~~


The beer was cold when it entered Nakazawa’s mouth and was still cold when it reached her stomach. She’s done eating her lunch at her home when Risa phoned her. While waiting for Risa’s arrival she took another can and waited at her porch.


“That beer had better be as cold as you promised it is” Risa uttered after bowing to her senpai.


“I lied. It’s colder.” She said while handing one to her house guest.


“Thank you” Risa opened it and took one big gulp. Indeed the beer was cool and crisp in her throat.


“What happened to the hair?” Risa only shrugged.


“Have you eaten yet?” Risa did not respond, but her stomach did answer for her, it growled. Shaking her head, Nakazawa stood up and motioned Risa to come inside the house.


“Take a seat, I’ll get your food” Risa obeyed and proceeded to the dining table.


“Here. It’s not healthy intaking alcohol without any food down there”


“Thank you. Have you seen our report?”


“Yeah, this morning”


“Any progress with the search team?”


“They are still on it” Nakazawa replied while giving out a loud sigh. Exasperated that the crime remained unsolved and the criminal still at large. The room went silent. Risa continued eating her brunch while Nakazawa gulped down her second can when the phone rang.


“Moshi-moshi”


“What?! Where?!” Risa placed down her chopsticks and focused her attention to her senpai’s.


“Someone’s found dead.”




*blink*  :D
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: lil_hamz on January 31, 2010, 08:30:42 AM
*reads through what Ive missed**cough*

o--k... I will just go straight to commenting about the fic. Though I have to say I didn't know AlwaysYou and Ame knew each other. Oh and Im still confused about the kite bit @@

Those men must be pissed they couldn't get their hands on Ai. Risa to the rescue!! I always knew the bean would make a good prince charming ^^

Yep it's a clean sock but a used one is fine too XD

Edit : Ahh you updated again juz after I posted a comment. Awww why didn't you make the scene where TakaGaki was in bed longer? :P
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: badsaints on January 31, 2010, 09:40:43 AM
Woah the bar girl is the one who died right? And Risa is gonna get implicated since she's one of the last to see that girl :O That guy who disappeared at the bar is so suspicious. My guess is that he has something to do with this :sweatdrop: Wahhhhhh don't you dare do anything to Risa :angry:


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Hmm I told you this before but you really do look tiny XD
That means you are taller? visual  :muffin:  visual  :muffin:  visual  :muffin:
Nuh-uh No way :smhid Lol I'm actually the same height as Baby Sticky AND I don't walk like a penguin with a walking stick XD


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I had to expect this from you and your evil purposes :cry:
:lol:  :twothumbs
Grrrrrrr :angry:


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I actually had a nightmare  :on freeze: but thank you  :heart:
That you were stuck in a tornado? :lol:
 

@ Trey-Trey: YOU DA' MAN! :wub: Can I join your fanclub? XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on January 31, 2010, 09:54:56 AM
@lil_hamz
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Though I have to say I didn't know AlwaysYou and Ame knew each other.
Umm... I'm not sure if they knew each other personally. So... ummm... guess we have to wait for their say to this

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Oh and Im still confused about the kite bit @@
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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I always knew the bean would make a good prince charming ^^
Just like Christopher ... ... ... that's all I can remember from her overly long name XD

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Yep it's a clean sock but a used one is fine too XD
:shocked  XD

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Awww why didn't you make the scene where TakaGaki was in bed longer? :P
I'm still learning  :D



@badsaints
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Woah the bar girl is the one who died right?

I think I need to re-write that update  :fainted:  :fainted:  :fainted: you're the third reader that said that   :depressed:   Damn I'm really struggling XD


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That guy who disappeared at the bar is so suspicious.

Umm..    :D

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Wahhhhhh don't you dare do anything to Risa :angry:
She's a grown up and a cop, don't worry much  :D

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Nuh-uh No way :smhid Lol I'm actually the same height as Baby Sticky
Okay  :pimp:

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AND I don't walk like a penguin with a walking stick XD
:lol:  :lol:  :lol: The power of imaginations   :twisted:


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I had to expect this from you and your evil purposes :cry:
:lol:  :twothumbs
Grrrrrrr :angry:
You're the ebil around here so  XD

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That you were stuck in a tornado? :lol:
You're mean  :mon waterworks:
 

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@ Trey-Trey: YOU DA' MAN! :wub: Can I join your fanclub? XD
Trey-trey, where are you?  :mon look:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: YumePouk on January 31, 2010, 10:32:02 AM
Waaaahh so long since last time i read or comment ur updated T^T
studying and exams are really take all my times <_<

but now I'm back.......But untill when  :smhid
 I like this story so much <3 <3

@.@ I'm a bit lost about everyone flirt and all,
so i Will only comment about the chapter and catch up later ^^"""
but damn you are crazy and hilarious  XD

I want TakaGaki together :angry:
the flashback about how they met is nice......
But why nothing happened in the hotel room :twisted:
OMG HOPE it's not Ai the new Victims >___<
Go Risa you have to résolve that crime and be with Ai-chan
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 31, 2010, 10:54:55 AM
@Haruka
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I love your fics x)

Hope you can made another chap =)
:farofflook: Even S!hu! never mentioned she likes this story even in the slightest bit and this was originally written for her   :farofflook:

I will try to finish my short update and probably post it later  :) and this time it will be written for you  :)  and not for the perv*** S!hu!
ok..i just saw this..LOL!!!..
MUST i say i like this fic?you should know how i feel about it right  :wub: :wub:
things doesnt need to be say out ne~
and damn, seem like i am a perv image in ur mind already.. :lol: :lol:


i and Ame..
hmm..does we know each other? :lol: :lol:


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Groaning, Risa sat up. Too lazy to open her eyes she removed her clothes in quick motion and tossed them over her shoulders producing a soft thud as they landed on the tiled floor.
i bet gakisan just LOVE naked bodies..XD

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“Someone’s found dead.”
again?!
the bar girl..pity that her appearance is SO short..XD XD

and now i really thinks that
kR, you are evil!!!
you been killing so many people in your fic..XD
so you better have a good hot and sexy ending.. :D


edit:did i get a new page?XD XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 31, 2010, 01:07:31 PM
@ K

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Just like Bishop NI's word --> it's harmless  :D
Ooohkay.

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Did I?  :mon freeze:  :panic:  lol just this once and only for Trey-trey he's just too cool and too harmless
:lol:

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Alright, I'll believe you this time because of that bead of sweat... but that's just me, I won't speak for others  :P
Well, that's how it is for me so far but since here isn't rl and now that I think about about Bishop's word “harmless”, maybe I should reconsider... :twisted:

No, No, C, you shouldn't join the ebil side *talks to self*

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Imagine Bishop NI on a bike and kicking some ass   :rockon:  while her rnd-sama was too  :luvluv1:  into her and then that  :twisted:  XD
*sigh* you just stomped upon this crushed heart of mine.... *sigh*

XD

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Don't listen to her rnd-sama, pout more  XD
EBIL

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Yeah, I'm cool  :)  work was stressful yesterday but I'm good. Thank you  :heart:
Good to know :)


Ah so it's a flashback? I was actually wondering about whether it's a flashback or not. This part is what makes me think it's a flashback:
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Her smile grew wider as she took a walk down memory lane.

And this part what made me confused:
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It was a Saturday night. She was at her usual place at her usual time but alone, her best friend did not go out with her.
I thought you simply continue and didn't elaborate Risa's memory  :nervous

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“Someone’s found dead.”
Wow, another one.

You changed your custom title, but Kameru-sama?  :mon huh:


@ T-kun
You're getting popular LOL you go boy!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 31, 2010, 01:38:25 PM
First, on the chapter.  :wub: :wub: Risa's short hair makes an appearance! :wub: :wub: I knew that's what was going to happen. Really, no really, I knew.

Oh noes, someone else is dead! *pleasenotAipleasenotAi* Or Miki...

Wants moar....

Now, onto other stuff.
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But don't pout, please? --> is actually weak of it.
*still pouts, eyes water* I'm adorable, you know you can't resist me. Maybe if you kiss it better, I'll stop. :cry: :cry:

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did she squeeze yours? *wink wink* XD   not that she squeezed mine
*squeezes Kz's butt* Hey, you asked for it. Seku Hara! Seku Hara!

Quote from: Kz
oh no it's cool. But Trey-trey needs one
Hey Trey-Trey! I'm dragging you into this one! *Slaps Trey-Trey's butt hard* XD Boy cooties... :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 31, 2010, 01:53:14 PM
*still pouts, eyes water* I'm adorable, you know you can't resist me. Maybe if you kiss it better, I'll stop. :cry: :cry:

*facepalm* oh dear Camel-sama, I'm weak with girls pout but a girl crying is my ultimate weakness  :mon surr:

Kiss? *blush* Uh.... *speechless* --> is lame like that

(Damn you K! LOL)

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*squeezes Kz's butt* Hey, you asked for it.
:on lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 31, 2010, 02:13:45 PM
^I'm still waiting for my kiss. :P
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 31, 2010, 02:18:45 PM
^ But...but it's a kiss! A KISS *starts panicking*

(Somebody help me!!  :imdead:)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 31, 2010, 02:20:24 PM
^No one's around. Why fight it?  :hee: :on comhere:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 31, 2010, 02:29:22 PM
You guys, I can see you ol dammit!!

^ Coz I don't kiss anyone freely even if it's the person I like?  :nervous  (I know I'm so lame but it's true)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 31, 2010, 02:33:18 PM
*breaks out into Resonant Blue* Asobi ja kissu shinai!

Actually I agree, if you had assented to a kiss, I probably would have run away in fright. :lol: :lol: *pats C on the head* Yay, I like you. XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on January 31, 2010, 02:38:14 PM
@YumePouk
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Waaaahh so long since last time i read or comment ur updated T^T
studying and exams are really take all my times <_<
School is much more important  :)  Ganbatte  :onioncheer:

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I like this story so much <3 <3

 :mon fyeah:  :kneelbow:

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@.@ I'm a bit lost about everyone flirt and all,
so i Will only comment about the chapter and catch up later ^^"""
but damn you are crazy and hilarious  XD
:lol:  :lol:  :lol: Take your time There are others here who are crazier than me  :D

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But why nothing happened in the hotel room :twisted:
Ohh, another S!hu!  XD

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OMG HOPE it's not Ai the new Victims >___<
:pimp:


@S!hu!
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ok..i just saw this..LOL!!!..
:(

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MUST i say i like this fic?you should know how i feel about it right  :wub: :wub:
things doesnt need to be say out ne~
:w00t:  XD

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and damn, seem like i am a perv image in ur mind already.. :lol: :lol:
:twisted: well you know I really don't -- > me is good today  :)  

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i bet gakisan just LOVE naked bodies..XD
Don't you love naked bodies?  :twisted:

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again?!
:lol:

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and now i really thinks that
kR, you are evil!!!
:mon wtf:

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so you better have a good hot and sexy ending.. :D
Arg. See? You don't really love this fic  :err:  since you're now talking about the ending  :fainted:

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edit:did i get a new page?XD XD
:cow:


C
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Ooohkay.
:yep:  :halo:

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Well, that's how it is for me so far but since here isn't rl and now that I think about about Bishop's word “harmless”, maybe I should reconsider... :twisted:
:whip:  let that ebil in you surface  :twisted:

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No, No, C, you shouldn't join the ebil side *talks to self*
:whip:  :whip:  :whip:

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*sigh* you just stomped upon this crushed heart of mine.... *sigh*
Oh  :O  well there's you and S!hu! in the story... somewhere along the tip of Bishop NI's rainbow  XD

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EBIL
:lol: wait... am I?  :O

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Good to know :)
:heart:

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This part is what makes me think it's a flashback:
And this part what made me confused:
.
I thought you simply continue and didn't elaborate Risa's memory  :nervous
XD I will edit it a bit or not   :lol:

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You changed your custom title, but Kameru-sama?  :mon huh:
Camel-sama  :D

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@ T-kun
You're getting popular LOL you go boy!
:guitar:


@rnd-sama
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First, on the chapter.  :wub: :wub: Risa's short hair makes an appearance! :wub: :wub:
:pepper: :pepper: :pepper:

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I knew that's what was going to happen. Really, no really, I knew.
:shocked You peeked nee? No peeking please  >:(   :P

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Oh noes, someone else is dead! *pleasenotAipleasenotAi* Or Miki...
Lemme think about it  :twisted:

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*still pouts, eyes water* I'm adorable, you know you can't resist me. Maybe if you kiss it better, I'll stop. :cry: :cry:
:w00t:  :w00t:  :w00t:

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*squeezes Kz's butt* Hey, you asked for it. Seku Hara! Seku Hara!
:shocked  :shocked  :shocked MORE  :twisted:  :lol:

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Hey Trey-Trey! I'm dragging you into this one! *Slaps Trey-Trey's butt hard* XD Boy cooties... :lol:
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:



@C
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*facepalm* oh dear Camel-sama, I'm weak with girls pout but a girl crying is my ultimate weakness  :mon surr:
Kiss her already  :drool:

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(Damn you K! LOL)
:mon rush:


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I'm still waiting for my kiss. :P
Give in already  :twisted:

*reads the convo*
 :w00t:  :w00t:  :w00t:
Aww... no kiss?  :roll:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 31, 2010, 02:45:04 PM
Quote from: Kz
:shocked :shocked :shocked MORE   :twisted: :lol:

*gives Miki style wedgie* XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on January 31, 2010, 02:48:11 PM
^
 :lol:


Ouch! That hurts be gentle please  :love:
 XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 31, 2010, 02:51:36 PM
@ rndmnwierd

Phew....

So we're good, right?

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*pats C on the head* Yay, I like you.
:on woohoo:


Anyway sorry for before guys, I'm on the verge of freaking out  :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 31, 2010, 02:51:58 PM
if ai is the victims, that mean your fic end in the next chp.. :lol: :lol: :lol:

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well you know I really don't -- > me is good today
well, just today..XD

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Don't you love naked bodies?  :twisted:
shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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so you better have a good hot and sexy ending.. :D
Arg. See? You don't really love this fic  :err:  since you're now talking about the ending  :fainted:
if i dont love it, i wont be talking about the ending already..XD XD

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on January 31, 2010, 02:56:48 PM
@rnd-sama
please say no to this
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So we're good, right?
  :twisted:


@AA Battery  :P
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if ai is the victims, that mean your fic end in the next chp.. :lol: :lol: :lol:
Arg.

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well, just today..XD
no, just that minute  :twisted:

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shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Oh. Okay, it's just between the two of us  XD

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if i dont love it, i wont be talking about the ending already..XD XD
Why do I feel otherwise  :fainted:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: alwaysYou on January 31, 2010, 03:03:19 PM
AA Battery..LOL..
whenever i see this i feel like  :kickass: :knee:
XD XD

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no, just that minute  :twisted:
EVIL

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Oh. Okay, it's just between the two of us 
i think it's not just between 2 of us already.. :lol: :lol:

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Why do I feel otherwise
that y i say u are evil.. :angry:





Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: Treykun on January 31, 2010, 03:06:40 PM

Wow... this is going to be hella long... XD

Trey-trey   :rockon:

:rofl:

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*READS CHAP*

Nice one XD So that's how they met! Risa was going hunting... XD :grin:

@kRisZ:

Sorry baddie, no one's gonna believe that  :grin:

:rofl:

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Yeah, and include the long legs :D

NO WAY!! You don't want to help me carrying the sequoia, so I won't take more photos XD

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oh no it's cool. But Trey-trey needs one

*Swallows hard*  :P

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Already got mine. Reminds me *stare at Trey-trey* hey there handsome  *wink wink* XD

:imdead: Now I'm going to be too a victim of the flirts?? XD XD XD

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Hey!! I'm always cute!!
:roll:

:grin: It's true! XD

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How was the touch?

I'm not going to answer that! XD S!hu! deserves some respect XD

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You'll leave me to die at Bishop NI's hands remember? So, no :smhid that whimper won't work

:mon sweat: Please...?? :cry:

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I enjoyed imagining your faces but nothing beats visual aid  :twisted:

See, that's why I don't want to show it XD You'll have to leave with the wonder... :twisted:

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*WATCHES VIDEO*

OMG! XD XD XD That explains everything :grin:

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Hey, you were the one teasing us :P

I wasn't!! I was just saying the truth... XD XD XD

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Why's everyone claiming they're innocent when clearly they're NOT :P

XD Dunno... But why is it so obvious?? :grin:

@C:

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Already got mine. Reminds me *stare at Trey-trey* hey there handsome  *wink wink*  XD
:shocked are you flirting with him?  XD
Got mine too.

SHE IS!!!! XD She seemed to be less perv than the others, and look at her now!! :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

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*watches the video* that doesn't look good at all...

:rofl: Yeah...  :P

@kRisZ *again XD*:

Did I?  :mon freeze:  :panic:  lol just this once and only for Trey-trey he's just too cool and too harmless

:rofl: See, I'm the less evil here :mon innocent: XD

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*READS*

:mon suspect:

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“Someone’s found dead.”

:mon wtf: Oh shit...

@baddie:

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@ Trey-Trey: YOU DA' MAN! :wub: Can I join your fanclub? XD

:shocked YOU TOO?!?!?!  XD Sure, join it... But I didn't even know that I had one :grin:

@kRisZ *one more time*:

Trey-trey, where are you?

At that hour... sleeping XD And when you posted the other chapter... babysitting my niece XD

@C *again*:

You're getting popular LOL you go boy!

Seems so... XD I can't say I blame them... :twisted: :P

@rndm:

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Hey Trey-Trey! I'm dragging you into this one! *Slaps Trey-Trey's butt hard*

AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! XD XD XD

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on January 31, 2010, 03:07:45 PM
@AA Battery
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AA Battery..LOL..
whenever i see this i feel like  :kickass: :knee:
XD XD
:shocked You're brutal  :lol:  :lol:

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EVIL
:cry:

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i think it's not just between 2 of us already.. :lol: :lol:
XD

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that y i say u are evil.. :angry:
:gyaaah:


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 31, 2010, 03:11:56 PM
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:whip:  let that ebil in you surface  :twisted:
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No, No, C, you shouldn't join the ebil side *talks to self*
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:whip:  :whip:  :whip:
:smhid

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*sigh* you just stomped upon this crushed heart of mine.... *sigh*
Oh  :O  well there's you and S!hu! in the story... somewhere along the tip of Bishop NI's rainbow  XD
Don't remind me  :on cloudeye:

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Camel-sama  :D
:O  :rockon:

@rnd-sama
please say no to this
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So we're good, right?
  :twisted:
See? EVIL!

@ T-kun
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SHE IS!!!! XD She seemed to be less perv than the others, and look at her now!! :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
She's the evil mastermind XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on January 31, 2010, 03:31:05 PM
@Trey-trey
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NO WAY!! You don't want to help me carrying the sequoia, so I won't take more photos XD
aww. Where's the fun  :twisted:

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*Swallows hard*  :P
:lol:

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:imdead: Now I'm going to be too a victim of the flirts?? XD XD XD
And we are just Jrs.  :lol: We'll wait for The Big Flirt Bishop NI  XD

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:grin: It's true! XD
Okay  :)  :lol:

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I'm not going to answer that! XD S!hu! deserves some respect XD
No comment  :twisted: I love you Snoopy S!hu!  :D

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:mon sweat: Please...?? :cry:
I still won't. I have new plan, how about we infiltrate NASA and stalk Bishop NI from there  XD

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See, that's why I don't want to show it XD You'll have to leave with the wonder... :twisted:
But you already did  :P

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OMG! XD XD XD That explains everything :grin:
XD

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I wasn't!! I was just saying the truth... XD XD XD
:roll:

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XD Dunno... But why is it so obvious?? :grin:
:yep:  XD

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SHE IS!!!! XD She seemed to be less perv than the others, and look at her now!! :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Really?  less perv?  :love:   XD Well I am actually  :yep:  :lol:

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:rofl: See, I'm the less evil here :mon innocent: XD
Oh so that means everyone is much more ebil than you?  :lol:

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At that hour... sleeping XD And when you posted the other chapter... babysitting my niece XD
Ain't that cute  :wub:

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Seems so... XD I can't say I blame them... :twisted: :P
:roll:


@C
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Don't remind me  :on cloudeye:
:grin:

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:O  :rockon:
:rockon:

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See? EVIL!
OMG that was typewritten in BOLD  :shocked  :fainted:

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She's the evil mastermind XD
Ummm... should I be happy?   :mon huh:


EDIT

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Anyway sorry for before guys, I'm on the verge of freaking out 
Lol. Honey, it's just a kiss :)  Come here, we'll practice so that you won't freak out next time  :twisted:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 31, 2010, 03:54:57 PM
@ K

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Don't remind me  :on cloudeye:
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:grin:
*looking up at the starry night sky* maybe it's time for me to learn how to let go and start loving them unconditionally....

~insert dramatic sound effect~

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Ummm... should I be happy?   :mon huh:
If you want  :lol:

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Anyway sorry for before guys, I'm on the verge of freaking out 
Lol. Honey, it's just a kiss :)  Come here, we'll practice so that you won't freak out next time  :twisted:
:shocked next time?? HELL NO!  :mon runcry:


HA! New page! (again, sorry :nervous)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 31, 2010, 04:00:28 PM
@C- We're good. Let's team up on Kz! :twisted:

@Kz-
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Lol. Honey, it's just a kiss :)  Come here, we'll practice so that you won't freak out next time
Oh hell no. If I don't get one, neither do you. :P XD

@Kz and Trey-Trey - *double wedgie!* Muahaha! :twisted: :twisted:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: Treykun on January 31, 2010, 04:05:02 PM

@kRisZ:

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aww. Where's the fun  :twisted:

XD XD XD You've already seen my face!! Why do you want to see my long legs??? :P XD

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And we are just Jrs. :lol: We'll wait for The Big Flirt Bishop NI XD

I won't show her that photo, who knows what could she say to me... :cry: :cry:

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No comment :twisted: I love you Snoopy S!hu! :D

:lol:

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I still won't. I have new plan, how about we infiltrate NASA and stalk Bishop NI from there  XD

:mon dunno: It's a good idea... but the NASA it's a little bit far from my house, I have a phobia to the planes, and I don't think I can reach it with my bike, cause I can't pass the atlantic ocean with it... :cry: :cry:

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But you already did  :P

Whatever, I won't puff them!! XD XD

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Really?  less perv? Well I am actually

:rofl: All of you are pervs... And I'm so sweet and innocent... :mon hanky: XD XD XD

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Oh so that means everyone is much more ebil than you? :lol:

YES!  XD Well, I admit I'm evil too... but they're much more than me... :cry:

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Ain't that cute :wub:

See, I'm ALWAYS cute :on gay: :P

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Seems so... XD I can't say I blame them... :twisted: :P
:roll:

What does that mean?!?!?!?! XD XD XD

@C:

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:shocked next time?? HELL NO

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

@rndm:

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@Kz and Trey-Trey - *double wedgie!* Muahaha! :twisted: :twisted:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! XD XD XD

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on January 31, 2010, 04:05:21 PM
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*looking up at the starry night sky* maybe it's time for me to learn how to let go and start loving them unconditionally
That's interesting  :yep:

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If you want  :lol:
Can you give me a minute? I need to think about it first *blinks*

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:shocked next time?? HELL NO!  :mon runcry:
:lol: Do I have to tie you down?  :twisted:

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HA! New page! (again, sorry :nervous)
You always GETS it  :lol:



@rnd-sama
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@C- We're good. Let's team up on Kz! :twisted:
:shocked *looks around*  :tantrum:

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Oh hell no. If I don't get one, neither do you. :P XD
Not fair, don't you think?  :roll:

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@Kz and Trey-Trey - *double wedgie!* Muahaha! :twisted: :twisted:
 :mon emo:




@Trey-trey
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XD XD XD You've already seen my face!! Why do you want to see my long legs??? :P XD
*thinks about it -- long hairy legs*  ewwww?  :P

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I won't show her that photo, who knows what could she say to me... :cry: :cry:
:lol: *coughcowardcough*

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:lol:
She left already  :(

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:mon dunno: It's a good idea... but the NASA it's a little bit far from my house, I have a phobia to the planes, and I don't think I can reach it with my bike, cause I can't pass the atlantic ocean with it... :cry: :cry:
:lol: well i have this makeshift boat, will it work?  :lol:

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Whatever, I won't puff them!! XD XD
You are so cute, you know that?  :wub:

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:rofl: All of you are pervs... And I'm so sweet and innocent... :mon hanky: XD XD XD
:roll:

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Oh so that means everyone is much more ebil than you? :lol:

YES!  XD Well, I admit I'm evil too... but they're much more than me... :cry:
They-- so I'm not included? Yay!  :mon money:


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See, I'm ALWAYS cute :on gay: :P
Okay I take back what I said


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What does that mean?!?!?!?! XD XD XD
Anything you want  XD


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:shocked next time?? HELL NO

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
:(


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NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! XD XD XD
:lol:


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 31, 2010, 04:07:32 PM
@ rndmnwierd (what should I call you?)
Yesh please! :kekeke:


@ K
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Oh hell no. If I don't get one, neither do you.
What she said  :grin:

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That's interesting
What's that supposed to mean? *looks suspiciously at you*

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Not fair, don't you think?   :roll:
Fair!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 31, 2010, 04:12:28 PM
^Just rndm is fine. Let's go! *pulls out wooden initiation paddle* :twisted: Here, Kz.

@Kz -

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Not fair, don't you think?
What's not fair? That you don't get a kiss or that I don't get one? XD

@Trey-Trey -

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
XD XD

*butt slaps for all!*

(You know, the sad thing is that I'm like this IRL when I'm hyper....)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on January 31, 2010, 04:23:06 PM
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Yesh please! :kekeke:
:mon nwei:

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What she said  :grin:
:whip:

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What's that supposed to mean? *looks suspiciously at you*
I don't know  :lol:

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Fair!
:smhid



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Let's go! *pulls out wooden initiation paddle* :twisted: Here, Kz.
That would hurt big time  :mon runcry:

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What's not fair? That you don't get a kiss or that I don't get one? XD
How about we corner C  you=left  me=right :twisted:

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(You know, the sad thing is that I'm like this IRL when I'm hyper....)
:scared:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: Treykun on January 31, 2010, 04:28:39 PM
@kRisZ:

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*thinks about it -- long hairy legs*  ewwww? :P

Nope, I don't have hair in my legs nor in my arms... Too blond for that... XD XD XD

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:lol: *coughcowardcough*

I'M NOT A COWARD!!! :angry: Come on! I'm sure you fear the bishop a little too :twisted:

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well i have this makeshift boat, will it work?

Dunno... Show me a photo :twisted: :twisted:

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You are so cute, you know that? :wub:

YES!! XD XD

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They-- so I'm not included? Yay!

Nope, you're less evil too XD

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Okay I take back what I said

Oh yeah???? Then I take it back too, you evil person XD XD

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Anything you want XD

And then, what does that mean?? XD

@rndm:

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(You know, the sad thing is that I'm like this IRL when I'm hyper....)

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on January 31, 2010, 04:35:45 PM
@Trey-trey
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Nope, I don't have hair in my legs nor in my arms... Too blond for that...[size] XD XD XD
How am I going to believe that when I have no visual  :roll:

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I'M NOT A COWARD!!! :angry: Come on! I'm sure you fear the bishop a little too :twisted:
Okay, maybe a little  :D

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Dunno... Show me a photo :twisted: :twisted:
Just imagine I had a piece of paper and whala a makeshift boat  XD

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YES!! XD XD
:roll:

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Nope, you're less evil too XD
:mon roll:

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Oh yeah???? Then I take it back too, you evil person XD XD
:O  :(

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And then, what does that mean?? XD
Simple, you're cute  :D



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And the number becomes 3, they left already   :roll:

rnd-sama, I'm gonna go and hit the sack   :)  I need to wake up early tomorrow  :D

 :kneelbow:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: YumePouk on January 31, 2010, 04:43:12 PM
@kRisZ
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School is much more important  :)  Ganbatte  :onioncheer: 
yeah I know coz what I'm studying now it's my choice^^
and I really love to study other language^^

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There are others here who are crazier than me
lol yeah it's what I can see or read XD XD

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But why nothing happened in the hotel room
Ohh, another S!hu! XD
:ptam-glow: perhaps or not  :shy2: ...... I'm INNOCENT  :ptam-aww:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 31, 2010, 04:55:18 PM
Nighty night! *hides paddle behind back* :twisted:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 31, 2010, 05:41:45 PM
I'm sorry my internet went down   :depressed:

@ rndm
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Just rndm is fine. Let's go! *pulls out wooden initiation paddle* :twisted: Here, Kz.
*pulls out a baseball bat*   :mon unsure:

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*butt slaps for all!*
Why me too??

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(You know, the sad thing is that I'm like this IRL when I'm hyper....)
:lol:


@ K

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What she said  :grin:
:whip:
You're saying?

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What's not fair? That you don't get a kiss or that I don't get one? XD
How about we corner C  you=left  me=right :twisted:
:mon scare: How could you??!!  Don't agree with her rndm!

Oyasumi K! *hides the bat back into the closet*
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: Hart on January 31, 2010, 09:55:12 PM
 :rofl:

Sorry, that's all I gotta say on that hotel scene in the flashback.
To think the reason they were naked together in bed was because of a broken AC.  :lol:

It ain't Yuko if she doesn't have her beer beside her, even if its lunchtime.  :lol:

Another dead body shows up, huh? Is it [bgcolor=#000000]Kameru-san[/bgcolor]?

*Looking at the drama BTS*  :smhid
It makes me wanna search each and every one of you, kidnap you, lock you up in a room together and see what happens next. All the while I watch what goes on in front of a huge plasma screen TV, drinking some beer and eating popcorn.  :twisted:
KR can join and watch with me if you like.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: amEthystx on February 01, 2010, 06:04:18 PM
*Lifts Table cloth*

Hey Girl, I'm back  :mon cute:

Don't believe in what they say...flirting (I only do conversational, nothing physical...) is a just a great and harmless social skill.. All you need to know is that, the apparent player... is actually monogamy.. and will be back at your side like a little kid, tired of the mask she had to put on for the rest of the world by the end of the day...

*Hides under table cloth again!*



Hey People... I'm Back! I was reading through some of them but i got lazy.. =X

Looks like you guys are getting by good with the flirting without me!

But i still manage to get some of those that i still know of before i left... apparently K and Trey-trey is still trying of ways to stalk me... ~ XD


Story: OMG......... Did Risa went to look for a girl for a quick release or something??!  :banghead:

 :mon bat:





Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on February 02, 2010, 01:36:35 PM
@YumePouk
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yeah I know coz what I'm studying now it's my choice^^
and I really love to study other language^^
Cool! What language?  :w00t:

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lol yeah it's what I can see or read XD XD
:D You can drop some craziness too if you feel like it  :D

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:ptam-glow: perhaps or not  :shy2: ...... I'm INNOCENT  :ptam-aww:
Now I'm certain... you're a combination of S!hu! and Trey-trey:shocked  from now on you'll be named S!Trey  XD  peace  :k-thrilled:  XD



@rnd-sama
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Nighty night! *hides paddle behind back* :twisted:
:shocked  *looks for katana*  :mon look:



@C
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I'm sorry my internet went down   :depressed:
Should we believe that?   :P   lol

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*pulls out a baseball bat*   :mon unsure:
:shocked   //////////////////// <-- beware, those are my army ... ants with sticks  :lol:

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Why me too??
Hey, why ask... you're her number 2  XD

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You're saying?
Don't ask... action speaks louder than words  :P

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:mon scare: How could you??!!  Don't agree with her rndm!
:mon cweepy:

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Oyasumi K! *hides the bat back into the closet*
Please, don't make me have some nightmares again  >:(


@Hart
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Sorry, that's all I gotta say on that hotel scene in the flashback.
To think the reason they were naked together in bed was because of a broken AC.  :lol:
:mon fyeah:

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It ain't Yuko if she doesn't have her beer beside her, even if its lunchtime.  :lol:
XD yeah

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Another dead body shows up, huh? Is it [bgcolor=#000000]Kameru-san[/bgcolor]?
:mon scare: NOoooooooooo... he's to Holy to be killed in here  :P

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It makes me wanna search each and every one of you, kidnap you, lock you up in a room together and see what happens next. All the while I watch what goes on in front of a huge plasma screen TV, drinking some beer and eating popcorn.  :twisted:
KR can join and watch with me if you like.
:mon freeze:  That would be RIOT :lol:  but I'd like to witness it up close and personal so me wants to be with them in that room but I'd like to bring some beer inside too XD



Bishop NI
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Hey People... I'm Back! I was reading through some of them but i got lazy.. =X
:lol: too many to read

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Looks like you guys are getting by good with the flirting without me!
We've learned it from the expert but still nothing beats the expert  XD

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But i still manage to get some of those that i still know of before i left... apparently K and Trey-trey is still trying of ways to stalk me... ~ XD
We wanna learn, that's why  :D

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Story: OMG......... Did Risa went to look for a girl for a quick release or something??!  :banghead:
I really need to re-write that update  :fainted:

Just in case you missed this out  :grin:
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Starring:
Teh BIshop NI *waits for her approval*
rnd-sama  CHECKED
C CHECKED
S!hu! I'll make this one CHECKED  :twisted:

Also Starring
The cousin Trey-trey CHECKED
The Granny baddie *waits too for her approval*
And everyone ummm CHECKED?  :D

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Nope, not at all XD BTW, how will this drama end?? XD
That I'm not so sure  XD but I was watching this Loveholic - Sky English Sub (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M3XfbbQyCxg#) and I was like OMG!  :w00t:  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:  :lol: I'm so disturbed  XD
Loveholic - Sky English Sub (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M3XfbbQyCxg#)

 :twisted:




Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 02, 2010, 02:13:53 PM
@ Ebil K

Should we believe that?   :P   lol
It's true! Even now my internet still go off often  :(
(So sorry in advance if I disappeared suddenly).

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:shocked   //////////////////// <-- beware, those are my army ... ants with sticks  :lol:
:lol:

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Hey, why ask... you're her number 2  XD
Why am I sensing that you wrote that on purpose?

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Don't ask... action speaks louder than words  :P
:smhid

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Please, don't make me have some nightmares again  >:(
Lol gomen.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: amEthystx on February 02, 2010, 02:24:51 PM
@ Yumepouk:
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:ptam-glow: perhaps or not  :shy2:...... I'm INNOCENT :ptam-aww:
- OMG.. are you turning into one of us too?! lol~  :welcome

@C: *waves* :)

@ K:
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//////////////////// <-- beware, those are my army ... ants with sticks
- This is so creative! lol

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I really need to re-write that update :fainted:
Did we all got the wrong impression?! LOL~

@ Video:  You guys gonna make me into the main character right? Why am i like such a bad boy? *pouts* lol.. I'm a good girl :P And how can i bear to let Girl be soooo sad :( and most probably.....If so... i will do something like the below video for a loved one..

J Entercom - Kiss [Because I'm A Girl] (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hhm4USUe3ng&feature=related#)

The sad lyrics for this song...

[I just can't understand the ways
Of all the men and their mistakes
You give them all your heart
And then they rip it all away

You told me how much you loved me
And how our love was meant to be
And I believed in you
I thought that you would set me free

(REFRAIN):
You should've just told me the truth
That I wasn't the girl for you
Still, I didn't have a clue
So my heart depended on you, whoa

(CHORUS):
Although I'll say I hate you now
Though I'll shout and curse you out
I'll always have love for you
Because I am a girl

Been told a man will leave you cold
Get sick of you and bored
I know that it's no lie
I gave my all, still I just cry

Never again will I be fooled
To give my all when nothing's true
I won't be played again
But I will fall in love again

(REFRAIN)
You should've just told me the truth
That I wasn't the girl for you
Still, I didn't have a clue
So my heart depended on you, whoa

(CHORUS)
Although I'll say I hate you now
Though I'll shout and curse you out
I'll always have love for you
Because I am a girl

I Want You So
NoW you leave me in the cold
How could this be?
I thought that you Really Loved Me

Into the Night
I will pray that you're alright
YOu hurt me so
I just can't let you go

You took advantage of my willingness
To do anything for love
Now I'm the only one in pain
Will you please take it all away?

Never thought Born being A girl
I can love you and be burned
Now I will build a wall
To never get torn again

(CHORUS)
Although I'll say I hate you now
Though I'll shout and curse you out
I'll always have love for you
Because I am a girl

Well See You Soon... ]

XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 02, 2010, 03:19:31 PM
@ Bishop
*waves back*  XD

@ K
So explain how the drama works again?
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on February 02, 2010, 03:51:36 PM
@C
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@ Ebil K
:OMG:

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It's true! Even now my internet still go off often  :(
(So sorry in advance if I disappeared suddenly).
lol My connection's acting up too sometimes  :yep:

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Why am I sensing that you wrote that on purpose?
I did  :twisted: so what do you want  :twisted:

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Lol gomen.
:lol:



@Bishop NI
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Did we all got the wrong impression?! LOL~
XD Not all but a lot, like majority  :lol:

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@ Video:  You guys gonna make me into the main character right? Why am i like such a bad boy? *pouts* lol.. I'm a good girl :P And how can i bear to let Girl be soooo sad :( and most probably.....If so... i will do something like the below video for a loved one..
:yep: As you can see from the title Over Teh BIG FLIRT's Rainbow
Flirts have always this bad boy image attached to them so yeah  XD

Okay I need to watch the vid again and again, it won't sink in  XD



@C
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So explain how the drama works again?
:lol:

Bishop NI's a badass who rides a bike while rnd-sama's so girly inlove with our Big Flirt who happens to flirt with S!hu! and so rnd-sama takes revenge by flirting with C

While Trey-trey is the innocent cousin who falls in love with the granny baddie

 :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

EDIT and everyone will be in there too somewhere  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 02, 2010, 04:11:23 PM
@ Super ebil K  XD

I did  :twisted: so what do you want  :twisted:
*walks back to the closet to search for the bat*

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so rnd-sama takes revenge by flirting with C
so why the hell am I the antagonist??  :angry1:

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While Trey-trey is the innocent cousin who falls in love with the granny baddie
OMG! Did you see that T-Kun?!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on February 02, 2010, 04:22:22 PM
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Super ebil K  XD
:mon runcry:

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*walks back to the closet to search for the bat*
:on speedy:

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so why the hell am I the antagonist??  :angry1:
Well, you'll fall for rnd-sama and you become possessive and over jealous and become twisted
Nice eh?  :twisted:

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While Trey-trey is the innocent cousin who falls in love with the granny baddie
OMG! Did you see that T-Kun?!
:grin:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: Swtme03 on February 02, 2010, 04:52:36 PM


“Short. I need it short”


“Okay” the attendant responded.


I'm sure once Aichan see's how smexy Gaki's new hair is she'll listen  :mon misch:


“Someone’s found dead.”

DARE!??  :mon wtf:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 02, 2010, 04:55:14 PM
@ K

:mon runcry:
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:on speedy:
XD

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Well, you'll fall for rnd-sama and you become possessive and over jealous and become twisted
Nice eh?  :twisted:
:grr:
How about I become twisted and chase you instead? :shifty:


Anyway K, my connection is killing me  :sweatdrop:  so I'll take my leave now before this  :temper: happen
See ya!  :)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on February 02, 2010, 04:55:26 PM
@Swtme03
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I'm sure once Aichan see's how smexy Gaki's new hair is she'll listen  :mon misch:
Nee  :love:

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DARE!??  :mon wtf:
:lol:



@C
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:grr:
How about I become twisted and chase you instead? :shifty:
:lol:   :mon rush:

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Anyway K, my connection is killing me  :sweatdrop:  so I'll take my leave now before this  :temper: happen
See ya!  :)
See you around C   :heart:



@S!hu!
I'm logging out  :)  Goodnight  :heart:  And go sleep, it's very late already   :D

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: rndmnwierd on February 02, 2010, 06:11:12 PM
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so girly inlove
I protest this! I am NOT girly!  :P XD Other than that, okay.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: FaqU on February 02, 2010, 06:56:06 PM
 :on crazygran: Just popped in to say...you guys are one crazy, hilarious group  :on crazygran: back out

Just so that you know, I look like a crazy idiot now at work because of the comments that go back and forth and the person sitting in the next cubicle wants to  :on kimbo: me but I couldn't help laughing...it just happened that it was out loud that's all.

The scenarios that just happened to come and go are great...I can actually see a visual!!!!!

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: Treykun on February 02, 2010, 06:59:19 PM
@kRisZ:

How am I going to believe that when I have no visual  :roll:

*Death glare* Oh no no no no... That's not going to make me take more photos... And from my legs no less <--- Ok, that sounds kinda weird... XD XD XD

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Okay, maybe a little  :D

Really?? Ohhhhhhhh~!! That's good to know... :kekeke:

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Just imagine I had a piece of paper and whala a makeshift boat  XD

:mon huh: Well, ok, I give up... We'll stalk her from the NASA... After all, I always said that I wanted to go out from Europe... XD :P

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:mon roll:

:lol: That's the prove that shows that you're as ebil as the others!! :lol:

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:O  :(

Ajo y agua... <---- Do you know what's the meaning of that?? :P

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Simple, you're cute  :D

:farofflook: At last~!! *cries*


@bishop:

:mon hi:

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apparently K and Trey-trey is still trying of ways to stalk me... ~

Seems like we've already decided how to stalk you... XD But I still think that the sequoia was a better idea... :mon wind:


@kRisZ:

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@YumePouk
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:ptam-glow: perhaps or not  :shy2: ...... I'm INNOCENT  :ptam-aww:
Now I'm certain... you're a combination of S!hu! and Trey-trey:shocked  from now on you'll be named S!Trey  XD  peace  :k-thrilled:  XD

S!TREY?!?!?!?! Don't you think that would be cruel~???????  :rofl:

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//////////////////// <-- beware, those are my army ... ants with sticks  

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:


@C:

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While Trey-trey is the innocent cousin who falls in love with the granny baddie
OMG! Did you see that T-Kun?!

OH YEAH I SAW THAT!!!!!

:mon uggh:

What the fuck was that you little... kRisZ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! It's not the fact that she's a granny, it's the fact that she's MY granny!!!!!

But if she isn't my gran in the story... I'll reconsider it~~~  ... *winks at baddie* :glasses: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm turning into a flirt??????? XD XD XD

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: YumePouk on February 02, 2010, 11:02:51 PM

@kRisZ
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Cool! What language?  :w00t:
The Korean  :D


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:D You can drop some craziness too if you feel like it  :D
:hehehe: maybe I will join your craziness soon 


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Now I'm certain... you're a combination of S!hu! and Trey-trey:shocked  from now on you'll be named S!Trey  XD  peace  :k-thrilled:  XD
:shock: ............ EEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
How come?...... but I'm not really sure if I'm really a combination of them  :mon unsure:



@amEthystx
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- OMG.. are you turning into one of us too?! lol~  :welcome
I think yes but little by little and step by step
XD XD XD


@Treykun
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@kRisZ:

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@YumePouk
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:ptam-glow: perhaps or not  :shy2: ...... I'm INNOCENT  :ptam-aww:
Now I'm certain... you're a combination of S!hu! and Trey-trey:shocked  from now on you'll be named S!Trey  XD  peace  :k-thrilled:  XD

S!TREY?!?!?!?! Don't you think that would be cruel~???????  :rofl:
Can you explain WHY THAT WOULD BE CRUEL????? :gmon blonde: :gmon blonde:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: amEthystx on February 03, 2010, 05:03:14 PM
I got somewhere lost between all the comment when i was away :(

@ Curly K:
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  :yep: As you can see from the title Over Teh BIG FLIRT's Rainbow
Flirts have always this bad boy image attached to them so yeah
:( I'm the best example for being a flirt and a good girl at the same time :P Sooo..where will the story be? who is starting it?

Request!: If so.. then please.. I wanna be riding a DUCATI! Thanks! OH! and.... Can i not be bald?! I'm NOT!!!

@Baby Sticky Tree:
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so girly inlove
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I protest this! I am NOT girly!
- LOL~ I'm not a manly Girl as well... Neither am I a girly Girl OMG!?! What am I?!

@Trey-trey~:
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And from my legs no less
- I wanna see your hairy legs! LOL!!!!!

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I wanted to go out from Europe...
- And i always wanted to go backpack in Europe :(

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But I still think that the sequoia was a better idea...  :mon wind:
- I think so TOO! I think it wil be soooooooooooo cute! XD

@C:
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While Trey-trey is the innocent cousin who falls in love with the granny baddie
OMG! Did you see that T-Kun?!
- LOL!!! THIS is just toooo funny!

 I support this Idea! WHO IS WITH ME?!

@Yumepouk:
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I think yes but little by little and step by step  XD XD XD
Probably i need to rename the camel club soon! lol
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on February 04, 2010, 03:10:15 AM
@rnd-sama
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I protest this! I am NOT girly!  :P XD Other than that, okay.
:lol: but your character in there will be girly and Bishop Ni's the badass  XD



@FaqU
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:on crazygran: Just popped in to say...you guys are one crazy, hilarious group  :on crazygran: back out
You know, the table with lots of empty chairs is very wide and big. You can lie down, on your tummy while we do the initiation  :twisted: with rnd-sama's paddle and C's baseball bat  :twisted:  lol everyone's welcome to join  :D

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Just so that you know, I look like a crazy idiot now at work because of the comments that go back and forth and the person sitting in the next cubicle wants to  :on kimbo: me but I couldn't help laughing...it just happened that it was out loud that's all.
Please don't blame us if you get fired  XD

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The scenarios that just happened to come and go are great...I can actually see a visual!!!!!
:mon money:



@Trey-trey
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*Death glare* Oh no no no no... That's not going to make me take more photos... And from my legs no less <--- Ok, that sounds kinda weird... XD XD XD
:lol:

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Really?? Ohhhhhhhh~!! That's good to know... :kekeke:
Please keep that as a secret  :mon pray2:  XD

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:mon huh: Well, ok, I give up... We'll stalk her from the NASA... After all, I always said that I wanted to go out from Europe... XD :P
:w00t:

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:lol: That's the prove that shows that you're as ebil as the others!! :lol:
No comment  :roll:

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Ajo y agua... <---- Do you know what's the meaning of that?? :P
Ingredients for cooking?  :D

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:farofflook: At last~!! *cries*
:roll:

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Seems like we've already decided how to stalk you... XD But I still think that the sequoia was a better idea... :mon wind:
Okay, you win, I also don't want to deal with the men in black. Dealing with the environmentalists is better, I guess  XD

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S!TREY?!?!?!?! Don't you think that would be cruel~???????  :rofl:
Ummm... NO  :P

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OMG! Did you see that T-Kun?!

OH YEAH I SAW THAT!!!!!

:mon uggh:

What the fuck was that you little... kRisZ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! It's not the fact that she's a granny, it's the fact that she's MY granny!!!!!
:k-thrilled:  :k-thrilled:  :k-thrilled:

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But if she isn't my gran in the story... I'll reconsider it~~~  ... *winks at baddie* :glasses: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm turning into a flirt??????? XD XD XD
OMG  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:



@YumePouk  A.K.A.  S!Trey  :D
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The Korean  :D
Yay! Anyong  :wave:

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:hehehe: maybe I will join your craziness soon 
:mon fyeah:

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:shock: ............ EEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
How come?...... but I'm not really sure if I'm really a combination of them  :mon unsure:
How am I going to explain this... S!hu! = perv and Trey-trey = claims he's innocent   XD

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I think yes but little by little and step by step
XD XD XD
There's no step 2 if there's no step 1  :yep:

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S!TREY?!?!?!?! Don't you think that would be cruel~???????  :rofl:
Can you explain WHY THAT WOULD BE CRUEL????? :gmon blonde: :gmon blonde:
*waits for Trey-trey's explanation with popcorn~~~ munch munch*  :D



@Bishop NI
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I got somewhere lost between all the comment when i was away :(
:lol:  It's cool  :D

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:( I'm the best example for being a flirt and a good girl at the same time :P Sooo..where will the story be? who is starting it?
lol At YTTC make baddie say yes first and from then feel free to start  :P

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Request!: If so.. then please.. I wanna be riding a DUCATI! Thanks! OH! and.... Can i not be bald?! I'm NOT!!!
:lol:

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- LOL~ I'm not a manly Girl as well... Neither am I a girly Girl OMG!?! What am I?!
in between?  XD

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- I wanna see your hairy legs! LOL!!!!!
:on woohoo:

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But I still think that the sequoia was a better idea...  :mon wind:
- I think so TOO! I think it wil be soooooooooooo cute! XD
:roll:

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- LOL!!! THIS is just toooo funny!
baddie ain't producing some smoke from her ears and nose, right?  :nervous

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I support this Idea! WHO IS WITH ME?!
:on woohoo:  :lol:

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Probably i need to rename the camel club soon! lol
What's the new name?  :w00t:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: Hart on February 04, 2010, 04:27:24 AM
You know, the table with lots of empty chairs is very wide and big. You can lie down, on your tummy while we do the initiation  :twisted: with rnd-sama's paddle and C's baseball bat  :twisted:  lol everyone's welcome to join  :D

The whole lot of you are out of your freakin' minds!!  :panic:
I really should hunt down each and every one of you. :shifty:
It's no wonder that I  :heart: you all.

And you call THAT an initiation?  :smhid
When I was initiated into......wait......sorry. I was sworn never to talk about that.
Forget I said anything.  :on hypto:


And I'm still not part of your club.  :mon blblbl:
*throws a smoke bomb and runs away*
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: amEthystx on February 04, 2010, 09:22:21 AM
@FaqU:
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You know, the table with lots of empty chairs is very wide and big. You can lie down, on your tummy while we do the initiation   :twisted: with rnd-sama's paddle and C's baseball bat    lol everyone's welcome to join  :D
- Plus.. there are K's Curling horns~~ *lalalalala*

@Trey- trey:
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But if she isn't my gran in the story... I'll reconsider it~~~  :glasses: ... *winks at baddie* glasses OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm turning into a flirt??????? -
Yes..you're...

Follows K... OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!
<- Once again.. see the effort i put in for highlighting? LOL~

@K:
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in between?  XD
-  :yep: :yep:

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What's the new name?  :w00t:
- Teh Vamps  :mon bat: XD

@HartAKL85:
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And I'm still not part of your club.  :mon blblbl:
*throws a smoke bomb and runs away*
- K along with Baby Sticky Tree(rndy) and C is so gonna give you a full body "treatment" soon.. XD

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: badsaints on February 04, 2010, 01:10:59 PM
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What the fuck was that you little... kRisZ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! It's not the fact that she's a granny, it's the fact that she's MY granny!!!!!
Yeah k :angry: Not only did you made me balding grumpy old lady, you've just turned me into a paedo? :angry:


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But if she isn't my gran in the story... I'll reconsider it~~~  ... *winks at baddie* :glasses: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm turning into a flirt??????? XD XD XD
:mon blood:


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:( I'm the best example for being a flirt and a good girl at the same time :P Sooo..where will the story be? who is starting it?
lol At YTTC make baddie say yes first and from then feel free to start  :P
Do I have a choice? :mon innocent: But I don't want to be a balding grumpy old paedo~ :mon whine:


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- LOL!!! THIS is just toooo funny!
baddie ain't producing some smoke from her ears and nose, right?  :nervous
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr :mon mad:


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Probably i need to rename the camel club soon! lol
What's the new name?  :w00t:
The Flirt Club? :lol:


p.s. Btw, I want an update!!! Kill someone already! As long as it's not Ai :twisted:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 04, 2010, 02:07:57 PM
@ FaqU
The craziness made you came out, eh?  XD
I also got funny looks from my mom and cousin because of this whole madness.


@ Bishop
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- LOL~ I'm not a manly Girl as well... Neither am I a girly Girl OMG!?! What am I?!
A tomboy? --> is one

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- Plus.. there are K's Curling horns~~ *lalalalala*
:yep:


@ T-kun
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But if she isn't my gran in the story... I'll reconsider it~~~  ... *winks at baddie* :glasses: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm turning into a flirt??????? XD XD XD
:shocked
 :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:


@ K
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lol At YTTC make baddie say yes first and from then feel free to start:P
Is it allowed to be posted there?


@ Hart
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The whole lot of you are out of your freakin' minds!!  :panic:
Somehow that makes me  :lol:
Thanks  XD


@ badsaints
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The Flirt Club? :lol:
:yep: my thought exactly
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on February 04, 2010, 04:33:19 PM
@Hart
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The whole lot of you are out of your freakin' minds!!  :panic:
Damn  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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I really should hunt down each and every one of you. :shifty:
It's no wonder that I  :heart: you all.
Domo  :kneelbow:

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And you call THAT an initiation?  :smhid
When I was initiated into......wait......sorry. I was sworn never to talk about that.
Forget I said anything.  :on hypto:
we're not THAT ebil  :P

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And I'm still not part of your club.  :mon blblbl:
*throws a smoke bomb and runs away*
lol... hmmm... anyone wants a tongue barbecue?   :twisted:



@Bishop NI
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@FaqU:
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You know, the table with lots of empty chairs is very wide and big. You can lie down, on your tummy while we do the initiation   :twisted: with rnd-sama's paddle and C's baseball bat    lol everyone's welcome to join  :D
- Plus.. there are K's Curling horns~~ *lalalalala*
Plus Bishop NI's Sennen Goroshi!  :yep:  XD

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- Teh Vamps  :mon bat: XD
OMG  :lol:  no comment  XD

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@HartAKL85:
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And I'm still not part of your club.  :mon blblbl:
*throws a smoke bomb and runs away*
- K along with Baby Sticky Tree(rndy) and C is so gonna give you a full body "treatment" soon.. XD
Yeah, like full body massage using some razor blade or something  :twisted:  okay that's ewww  XD



@baddie
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Yeah k :angry: Not only did you made me balding grumpy old lady, you've just turned me into a paedo? :angry:
:grin:  :grin:  :grin: gomen  :D

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But if she isn't my gran in the story... I'll reconsider it~~~  ... *winks at baddie* :glasses: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm turning into a flirt??????? XD XD XD
:mon blood:
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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Do I have a choice? :mon innocent: But I don't want to be a balding grumpy old paedo~ :mon whine:
XD Domo  :kneelbow: we'll see when we get there, no promises  :P  XD

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Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr :mon mad:
:O  :mon rush:  XD

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The Flirt Club? :lol:
Milder than Bishop NI's  :yep:  :D

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p.s. Btw, I want an update!!! Kill someone already! As long as it's not Ai :twisted:
OMG  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:
When I'm done with my work deadline, by Sat most probably  :D



@C 
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I also got funny looks from my mom and cousin because of this whole madness.
How about saliva'd screen  XD

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- Plus.. there are K's Curling horns~~ *lalalalala*
:yep:
Arg.

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Is it allowed to be posted there?
I was thinking about this when I was on the road while smiling like a lunatic, damn  XD , how about we make another thread say YTTC ~ HP Fanatics-Lunatics Edition or YTTC ~ JPHIP's Lunatic memba or something like those  :D

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: FaqU on February 04, 2010, 07:12:03 PM

@Bishop NI
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@FaqU:
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You know, the table with lots of empty chairs is very wide and big. You can lie down, on your tummy while we do the initiation   :twisted: with rnd-sama's paddle and C's baseball bat    lol everyone's welcome to join  :D
- Plus.. there are K's Curling horns~~ *lalalalala*
Plus Bishop NI's Sennen Goroshi!  :yep:  XD

 :OMG: With what is written, you expect me join after getting the shit scared out of me????   :mon nyah:

I can do without the bats and paddles and curling horns (don't really know what a sennen goroshi is though  :sweat:...but I'm good with arms and knives  :shifty:

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And you call THAT an initiation?  :smhid
When I was initiated into......wait......sorry. I was sworn never to talk about that.
Forget I said anything.  :on hypto:
we're not THAT ebil  :P

You mean we can be ebil?? Hmmmmm....  :mon misch:  :kekeke: What are the boundaries and terms and conditions?  :hehehe:

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@HartAKL85:
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And I'm still not part of your club.  :mon blblbl:
*throws a smoke bomb and runs away*
- K along with Baby Sticky Tree(rndy) and C is so gonna give you a full body "treatment" soon.. XD
Yeah, like full body massage using some razor blade or something  :twisted:  okay that's ewww  XD

Ohhhh that sounds like fun  :onioncheer:

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Just so that you know, I look like a crazy idiot now at work because of the comments that go back and forth and the person sitting in the next cubicle wants to  :on kimbo: me but I couldn't help laughing...it just happened that it was out loud that's all.
Please don't blame us if you get fired  XD .

Me blame you guys??? Now why would I do that?  :ding: I will not even start blaming, I'll just go ahead and start making y'all like  :on beatup that's all

@ FaqU
The craziness made you came out, eh?  XD
I also got funny looks from my mom and cousin because of this whole madness.

The question is where did I originally come out of  :mon cweepy: and are you guys sure you know what you are getting yourselves into???  :mon geek: :mon evil:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: Treykun on February 04, 2010, 07:33:21 PM

@YumePouk or S!Trey XD:

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S!TREY?!?!?!?! Don't you think that would be cruel~???????  :rofl:
Can you explain WHY THAT WOULD BE CRUEL????? :gmon blonde: :gmon blonde:
*waits for Trey-trey's explanation with popcorn~~~ munch munch*  :D

:rofl: Simple, if you're a mix of S!hu! and me, you're evil, perv, flirt... Well, in that case, you're cute too :grin:

Now that I'm seeing the list maybe it isn't that bad~~~ XD XD XD


@bishop:

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- I wanna see your hairy legs! LOL!!!!!

I'M NOT HAIRY DAMNIT!!!!!  :mon annoy:

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- And i always wanted to go backpack in Europe :(

:lol: Then, we can change roles... XD

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- I think so TOO! I think it wil be soooooooooooo cute! XD

I don't know how it will be... cause, after all, I've never seen a sequoia in person :cry: But I don't think it will be possible to do it, because Evil K doesn't want to help me carrying it... :cry: :cry:

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- LOL!!! THIS is just toooo funny!

I support this Idea! WHO IS WITH ME?!

:rofl: Lol, this evil people will be with you even if it costs their lifes XD XD


@kRisZ:

:lol:

Don't laugh!! It indeed sounds weird... XD

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Please keep that as a secret  :mon pray2:  XD

No way!!! It will be my revenge, because of you calling me hairy! :rofl:

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:w00t:

I still don't want to use that boat... :cry:

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No comment  :roll:

XD

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Ingredients for cooking?  :D

Well, the garlic yes, XD but the water is vital XD :P However, it's a pidgin expression to express.................. well, let's put that aside... XD

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Okay, you win, I also don't want to deal with the men in black. Dealing with the environmentalists is better, I guess  XD

:rofl: Believe me, the men in black are better to deal with XD But the environmentalists think that I'm on their side... so we can use that as a pretext to steal that tree XD XD

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Ummm... NO  :P

Ok, ok... XD

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OMG  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

Did you think that I'd say no??????? *winks at baddie again*  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

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- I wanna see your hairy legs! LOL!!!!!
:on woohoo:

You're not going to see them!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD

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I support this Idea! WHO IS WITH ME?!
:on woohoo:  :lol:

Just as I predicted... XD


@bishop:

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But if she isn't my gran in the story... I'll reconsider it~~~  :glasses: ... *winks at baddie* glasses OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm turning into a flirt??????? -
Yes..you're...

Follows K... OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!
<- Once again.. see the effort i put in for highlighting? LOL~

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:


@baddie:

Yeah k :angry: Not only did you made me balding grumpy old lady, you've just turned me into a paedo? :angry:

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

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But if she isn't my gran in the story... I'll reconsider it~~~  ... *winks at baddie* :glasses: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm turning into a flirt??????? XD XD XD
:mon blood:

You ok?????? :mon innocent: I'll take that as a good signal *third wink* XD


@C:

:shocked
 :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Everything it's contagious, I guess... :grin:
 
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: Hart on February 04, 2010, 09:12:52 PM
@FaqU

Zennen Goroshi = A thousand years of pain. How the technique is done, well....
One Thousand Years Of Pain (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fv8cxVzU4IA#)

Bishop Ni won't get a chance to do that to me. Why?
1. I'm very well hidden, unlike a certain pesky ninja.
2. Watch your back. I might be right behind you.  :mon cweepy:
Damn, this is making me sound ebil. I'm a gentleman. I've got principles to uphold. I protect girls, not harm them.

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@HartAKL85:
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And I'm still not part of your club.  :mon blblbl:
*throws a smoke bomb and runs away*
- K along with Baby Sticky Tree(rndy) and C is so gonna give you a full body "treatment" soon.. XD
Yeah, like full body massage using some razor blade or something  :twisted:  okay that's ewww  XD
You had me at 'full body massage'.....now you've just lost me. I'm still not joining.  :mon butt:
The tree & 2 kites - you have to catch me first before I undergo that 'treatment'.  :mon hobo:

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lol... hmmm... anyone wants a tongue barbecue? :twisted:
Sure. Can I get mine medium rare to go?  :lol:

Now excuse me while I have to go catch a bus then the subway to get to my evening Japanese class.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 05, 2010, 04:15:54 PM
@ K

How about saliva'd screen  XD
Fortunately for my screen, I covered my mouth with my hand to prevent that from happening  XD

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I was thinking about this when I was on the road while smiling like a lunatic, damn  XD , how about we make another thread say YTTC ~ HP Fanatics-Lunatics Edition or YTTC ~ JPHIP's Lunatic memba or something like those  :D
Okay so what do you guys think?


@ FaqU
Me blame you guys??? Now why would I do that?  :ding: I will not even start blaming, I'll just go ahead and start making y'all like  :on beatup that's all
The question is where did I originally come out of  :mon cweepy: and are you guys sure you know what you are getting yourselves into???  :mon geek: :mon evil:
OMG K, it seemed like you got an evil partner here  :lol:


@ T-kun
Three winks!! :on lol:
Very contagious.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: YumePouk on February 05, 2010, 04:19:46 PM
@kRisZ
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How am I going to explain this... S!hu! = perv and Trey-trey = claims he's innocent   XD
:depressed:

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There's no step 2 if there's no step 1  :yep:
well I think there is a step 1 which is to join to continue the story in YTTC
and the step 2 is to join you all in this craziness  :wahaha:

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*waits for Trey-trey's explanation with popcorn~~~ munch munch*  :D
  :mon fyeah: I'll join you *take some popcorn and wait*



@Treykun
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  :rofl: Simple, if you're a mix of S!hu! and me, you're evil, perv, flirt... Well, in that case, you're cute too :grin:

Now that I'm seeing the list maybe it isn't that bad~~~ XD XD XD

 :on drink: .......  :mon dunno:........(http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m177.gif) I see now :glasses: Ok I'm with the evil and perv.... but the flirt I'm not sure :mon unsure:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: alwaysYou on February 05, 2010, 04:31:29 PM
@K:
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How am I going to explain this... S!hu! = perv and Trey-trey = claims he's innocent   
OH MAN!!!, why do i have this image in ur mind.. :(
i'm so innocent.. :oops:

@ Trey:
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Simple, if you're a mix of S!hu! and me, you're evil, perv, flirt... Well, in that case, you're cute too
is it? isnt that only you?  :lol: :lol:
i dont fall into any of the category u mention..XD
evil, i'm not as evil as K
perv, not me not me
flirt, i nt as flirt as my darling.. :D

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on February 06, 2010, 03:58:59 PM
No update and no reply on comments   :nervous

I need to go  :)   I'll try to write tomorrow at the beach if there's a time  :)


Take care people  :shakeit:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
Post by: kRisZ on February 07, 2010, 03:51:12 PM
@FaqU
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:OMG: With what is written, you expect me join after getting the shit scared out of me????   :mon nyah:
XD

And I forgot to add Trey-trey's long hairy legs and S!hu!'s silent killing style  :twisted:

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I can do without the bats and paddles and curling horns (don't really know what a sennen goroshi is though  :sweat:...but I'm good with arms and knives  :shifty:
Hmmm

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You mean we can be ebil?? Hmmmmm....  :mon misch:  :kekeke: What are the boundaries and terms and conditions?  :hehehe:
*takes one step back*

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Ohhhh that sounds like fun  :onioncheer:
:stunned:

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Me blame you guys??? Now why would I do that?  :ding: I will not even start blaming, I'll just go ahead and start making y'all like  :on beatup that's all
:scared:

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The question is where did I originally come out of  :mon cweepy: and are you guys sure you know what you are getting yourselves into???  :mon geek: :mon evil:
:mon rush:



@Trey-trey
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:rofl: Simple, if you're a mix of S!hu! and me, you're evil, perv, flirt... Well, in that case, you're cute too :grin:
:twothumbs I forgot some  XD

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Now that I'm seeing the list maybe it isn't that bad~~~ XD XD XD
lol

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I'M NOT HAIRY DAMNIT!!!!!  :mon annoy:
:lol:

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I don't know how it will be... cause, after all, I've never seen a sequoia in person :cry: But I don't think it will be possible to do it, because Evil K doesn't want to help me carrying it... :cry: :cry:
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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:rofl: Lol, this evil people will be with you even if it costs their lifes XD XD
Agreed  :yep:  XD

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No way!!! It will be my revenge, because of you calling me hairy! :rofl:
:shocked

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I still don't want to use that boat... :cry:
:lol:

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Well, the garlic yes, XD but the water is vital XD :P However, it's a pidgin expression to express.................. well, let's put that aside... XD
Explain further  :huhuh

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:rofl: Believe me, the men in black are better to deal with XD But the environmentalists think that I'm on their side... so we can use that as a pretext to steal that tree XD XD
You are so ebil but I like it  :lol:

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Did you think that I'd say no??????? *winks at baddie again*  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Kinda  XD

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You're not going to see them!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD
Aww, why not?   :D

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Just as I predicted... XD
It was a good idea  :P

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You ok?????? :mon innocent: I'll take that as a good signal *third wink* XD
:on lol:  :on lol:  :on lol:



@Hart
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Bishop Ni won't get a chance to do that to me. Why?
Oh yeah?

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Damn, this is making me sound ebil. I'm a gentleman. I've got principles to uphold. I protect girls, not harm them.
XD

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You had me at 'full body massage'.....now you've just lost me. I'm still not joining.  :mon butt:
:lol:

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The tree & 2 kites - you have to catch me first before I undergo that 'treatment'.  :mon hobo:
lol

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Sure. Can I get mine medium rare to go?  :lol:
How will you eat when it's your tongue that got barbecued?  :twisted:

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Now excuse me while I have to go catch a bus then the subway to get to my evening Japanese class.
Yay! Ganbatte  :onioncheer:



@C
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Fortunately for my screen, I covered my mouth with my hand to prevent that from happening  XD
:lol: Okay that's cool  XD

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Okay so what do you guys think?
How about I say, what do you think about the current title?  :D

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OMG K, it seemed like you got an evil partner here  :lol:
She's way ahead of the ebilness  :mon curtain:



@S!Trey  :P
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:depressed:
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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well I think there is a step 1 which is to join to continue the story in YTTC
Yay!  :twothumbs  :k-inlove:

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and the step 2 is to join you all in this craziness  :wahaha:
:yep:  :lol:

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:on drink: .......  :mon dunno:........(http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m177.gif) I see now :glasses: Ok I'm with the evil and perv.... but the flirt I'm not sure :mon unsure:
The flirt thing will show up eventually  :yep:  :twisted:  XD



@Snoopy S!Hu!
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OH MAN!!!, why do i have this image in ur mind.. :(
:D

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i'm so innocent.. :oops:
No comment  :P

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is it? isnt that only you?  :lol: :lol:
lol

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i dont fall into any of the category u mention..XD
:smhid

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evil, i'm not as evil as K
:O

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perv, not me not me
:roll:

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flirt, i nt as flirt as my darling.. :D
I think you are now flirtier than Bishop NI  :yep:  XD






UPDATE 21



The remaining food erupted from Risa’s mouth. She felt a pang of fear creep in deep down to the pit of her stomach. Her eyes grew wide and her hands clenched tight. Her stressed heart was horrified and was unable to beat at its normal rate when she heard the word ‘dead’. And somehow it was a bitter pill to swallow.


She stood up, making the floor screeched as the chair grated onto the floor when it moved backwards abruptly. Never minding her senpai’s presence, she dashed toward the door without saying goodbye and left without even closing the door.


Just like her blaring siren, her mind was restlessly thinking about Ai. And just like her driving speed, her heartbeat was outrunning each other, making her arrived at her destination half of its normal time.


After frantically knocking on the door and no one answered, she kicked it hard making the door looked helpless and it opened involuntarily. After not finding her at the living room and the kitchen, she ran upstairs, taking two stair steps in one single step.


Time halted as Risa stared at Ai’s bedroom door. She was obviously deeply perturbed. She put her hand on the door knob, slightly trembling she twisted and turned it and pushed slowly the door open. When she laid her eyes inside the room her fear was confirmed when no one was inside. Her body shivered more, her tears slowly but continuously flowed and her heart felt tight.


Silently weeping, she let herself fall onto the floor. Kneeling down with her head hanging low, she clenched her hands into tight fists before punching the wooden floor.


“It’s my fault” was her repeated mantra as she continued on punching the wood tiled floor. Blaming her own self was all she could think of at the current predicament she’s in. The murderer’s still at large she should have never left Ai defenseless. What was she thinking when she left this morning. Her action was clearly a selfish act.


Kneeling by the door, she continued to shed tears silently. Until she felt a sharp pang of pain from the back of her head and then all she could see was pure whiteness before it turned black and she eventually passed out.


 :P
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: alwaysYou on February 07, 2010, 04:10:14 PM
finally, it's an update XD

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“It’s my fault”
yes, it's your..
or maybe not, it's K faults.. :lol:

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The murderer’s still at large she should have never left Ai defenseless
definitely wont when you 2 almost make out.. :P

what have u done to my AiGaki :angry: :angry:
no rabu rabu, and all sort of things for me to worry!!! :angry: :angry:



so now
aichan was being kidnapped?!!!!
And now gakisan too?!!!!!
K, you are ebil :twisted:



and you know, i wanted to read back the previous chp..
YET, there are too many pages of flirting going on :nervous
and i'm getting so lazy to click one by one..
it's your fault!!! :lol: :lol:
everything also blame you :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: amEthystx on February 07, 2010, 04:13:05 PM
ME! FIRST! who ever is posting now! <- Edit 1: LOL~ So it was Girl  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: alwaysYou on February 07, 2010, 04:13:54 PM
^i'm sorry darling.. :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: amEthystx on February 07, 2010, 04:14:50 PM
>.< you owe me a kiss!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: kRisZ on February 07, 2010, 04:18:58 PM
ME! FIRST! who ever is posting now! <- Edit 1: LOL~ So it was Girl  XD
:lol:

^i'm sorry darling.. :lol: :lol:
XD

>.< you owe me a kiss!

Give it to her S!Hu!  :w00t:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: badsaints on February 07, 2010, 04:33:25 PM
I'm gonna echo Rndm here. Your comment replies is way longer than the chapter :lol: And you leave us hanging by the cliff again! :angry:


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Until she felt a sharp pang of pain from the back of her head and then all she could see was pure whiteness before it turned black and she eventually passed out.
Gasp! Don't make anything happen to Risa. She's suffered enough in other fics XD And that dead girl better not be Ai! :shocked Or I'll get the killer to go after you. Just kidding...maybe just point him the way to you :P


Update soon. Or I'll die of overwinking from Trey-Trey :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: amEthystx on February 07, 2010, 04:34:12 PM
Hey Girl,
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Ok I'm with the evil and perv.... but the flirt I'm not sure  :mon unsure:
- flirt........................hmmm... XD

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it's your fault!!!  :lol: :lol:
everything also blame you  :lol: :lol:
*Point finger at K.* yup yup... her her...

XD Anyway........From your sentence structure... i think i know where you are from...

Are you thinking what i'm thinking B1...

Yes i think so B2!


It ends with.......................E!........................... XD  :mon innocent:

@FaqU:
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The question is where did I originally come out of   :mon cweepy: and are you guys sure you know what you are getting yourselves into???  
woooo! u're as ebil as K!

@Trey-trey:
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I'M NOT HAIRY DAMNIT!!!!!  :mon annoy:
- HOW ADORABLE! LOL!  :monk gboy:

@K:
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@Hart

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Bishop Ni won't get a chance to do that to me. Why?

Oh yeah?
- I saw ME! >.< What happened?

Anyway... on the story.....

ARHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^ Effort!

Poor Door! XD

EDIT:  :down I got a scroll bar XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: alwaysYou on February 07, 2010, 04:56:00 PM
@darling
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>.< you owe me a kiss!
*lean closer to you, give a quick peck on your cheeks*
*run away shyly*


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Anyway........From your sentence structure... i think i know where you are from...
LOL, directly translate from chinese..=x
my english never pass since sec school  :cry: :(

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It ends with.......................E!...........................
and start with a S?LOL
i'm the rare one, cause i really envy those people from my same country who can write and speak perfect english.. :cry: :cry:


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: amEthystx on February 07, 2010, 05:14:00 PM
^ LOL!
*runs after Girl*
*Play the coconut tree hide and seek game!*

XD

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and start with a S?LOL
i'm the rare one, cause i really envy those people from my same country who can write and speak perfect english. :cry: :cry:
- Don't worry.. my english is very chui too LOL!

@K:
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You live in Xx
Bishop NI lives in Xx
CONCLUSION
Love nest will be very handy
- It's seems that we are nearer than where we thought we were! LOL..
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: alwaysYou on February 07, 2010, 05:17:25 PM
^your eng chui?!!!
then mine can burn already.. :lol: :lol: :lol:

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- It's seems that we are nearer than where we thought we were! LOL..
yes~~
actually i knew it long ago.. :D


and darling, dont neglect ur fic..XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: kRisZ on February 07, 2010, 05:21:02 PM
@AABatt
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finally, it's an update XD
:yep:  XD

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es, it's your..
or maybe not, it's K faults.. :lol:
:roll:

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what have u done to my AiGaki :angry: :angry:
I'm not sure  XD

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no rabu rabu, and all sort of things for me to worry!!! :angry: :angry:
:lol:

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so now
aichan was being kidnapped?!!!!
And now gakisan too?!!!!!
:pimp:

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K, you are ebil :twisted:
Just like you  :twisted:

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and you know, i wanted to read back the previous chp..
YET, there are too many pages of flirting going on :nervous
and i'm getting so lazy to click one by one..
it's your fault!!! :lol: :lol:
everything also blame you :lol: :lol:
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:



badsaints
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I'm gonna echo Rndm here. Your comment replies is way longer than the chapter :lol:
:lol:  :lol:  :lol: I'm struggling that's why  :nervous

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And you leave us hanging by the cliff again! :angry:
:D

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Gasp! Don't make anything happen to Risa. She's suffered enough in other fics XD And that dead girl better not be Ai! :shocked Or I'll get the killer to go after you. Just kidding...maybe just point him the way to you :P
:shocked

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Update soon. Or I'll die of overwinking from Trey-Trey :lol:
OMG THIS IS SO PRICELESS  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:



@Bishop NI
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*Point finger at K.* yup yup... her her...
Arg. Not you too  :imdead:

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Are you thinking what i'm thinking B1...

Yes i think so B2!

Bananas in pyjamas  :lol:

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woooo! u're as ebil as K!
She's ebilier  :fainted:

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- I saw ME! >.< What happened?
Your Sennen Goroshi!  :D

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^ Effort!
:D  :heart:

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EDIT:  :down I got a scroll bar XD
Yeah  XD



@S!Hu!
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*lean closer to you, give a quick peck on your cheeks*
Cheeks only?  :roll:

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It ends with.......................E!...........................
and start with a S?LOL
Oh, Bishop NI didn't know you're from there too?  :D

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i'm the rare one, cause i really envy those people from my same country who can write and speak perfect english.. :cry: :cry:
Honestly, I find your English cute  :yep: Not that mine is great or something  :nervous


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*runs after Girl*
*Play the coconut tree hide and seek game!*
*watches from afar while sipping some water*  :D

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- It's seems that we are nearer than where we thought we were! LOL..
How many miles?  :twisted:



S!hu!
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actually i knew it long ago.. :D
OMG You're Bishop NI's stalker  :shocked  :w00t:

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and darling, dont neglect ur fic..XD
Can I say  :yep:  :D

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: amEthystx on February 07, 2010, 05:24:21 PM
^ OMG! Am i that bad in hiding that?! WHY am i the only one being kept in the dark!  :OMG: How did you know~   :err:

I actually made a "our version of english" for the fic XD But i'm afraid that later someone will kill me for posting it.. but when i read it.. it's really funny LOL~

:( I started writing today and fell asleep XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: amEthystx on February 07, 2010, 05:32:39 PM
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It ends with.......................E!...........................
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and start with a S?LOL
Oh, Bishop NI didn't know you're from there too?
  :OMG: *mumbleskeptinthedarkkeptinthedarkkeptinthedarkmumbles*

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Are you thinking what i'm thinking B1...

Yes i think so B2!
[/i]
Bananas in pyjamas  :lol:
- XD i use to watch it when i was young! LOL~

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- It's seems that we are nearer than where we thought we were! LOL..
How many miles?  :twisted:
- wE go by kilometer.. the furthest it can be will be 48km = around 30 miles? LOL!

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actually i knew it long ago.. :D
OMG You're Bishop NI's stalker  :shocked :w00t:
- No wonder i felt someone looking at me from behind today!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: kRisZ on February 07, 2010, 05:44:09 PM
@Bishop NI
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:OMG: *mumbleskeptinthedarkkeptinthedarkkeptinthedarkmumbles*
:lol:

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- XD i use to watch it when i was young! LOL~
Me too  XD

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- wE go by kilometer.. the furthest it can be will be 48km = around 30 miles? LOL!
Oh, not that far  :D anything can happen  :twisted:  XD

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- No wonder i felt someone looking at me from behind today!
:lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: lil_hamz on February 07, 2010, 06:02:36 PM
Bananas in pajamas are running down e stairs~~
bananas in pajamas are chasing Teddy bears~

Hee looks like I'm not e only one who watched that show. Ame u didn't know u were country women with Alwaysyou? Hmmm was I e only one who knew? So I make a good private eye ^^ that was why I asked if u and her spoke beforehand. Now I know e flirting started at first sight. Wow u are good*wink*

onto e story. It's been too long since an update! And why is it so short?!?*shakes fist* I wanna know who caught TakaGaki and what's gonna happen now? Kame to e rescue?

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: Treykun on February 07, 2010, 06:51:22 PM

@S!Trey:

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:on drink: .......  :mon dunno:........(http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m177.gif) I see now :glasses: Ok I'm with the evil and perv.... but the flirt I'm not sure :mon unsure:
The flirt thing will show up eventually  :yep:  :twisted:  XD

She's right... It's very contagious so... XD :P


@S!hu!:

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is it? isnt that only you?  :lol: :lol:
i dont fall into any of the category u mention..XD
evil, i'm not as evil as K
perv, not me not me
flirt, i nt as flirt as my darling.. :D

Ohhhhhh, of course not... XD XD

Ok, let's do a fair list of the categories:

- Evil: Ok, this one is for me... but I'm still less evil than the others :P
- Perv: Obviously, YOU... XD
- Flirt: YOU :yep:
- Cute: Me! That's the most obvious XD XD :P


@kRisZ:

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And I forgot to add Trey-trey's long hairy legs and S!hu!'s silent killing style 

:depressed: How many times do I have to repeat that my legs aren't hairy????? :cry:

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:lol: :lol: :lol:

Does that mean... that you will help me??? :mon innocent:

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Explain further :huhuh

I'd do it... But I can't explain the meaning of "ajo y agua" in english... :mon sweat:

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You are so ebil but I like it  :lol:

XD Well, I can put my ecologist principles aside for once... XD :P

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Kinda XD

:lol:

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Aww, why not?

No means no!!!! XD

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*READS*

....................................................

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Until she felt a sharp pang of pain from the back of her head and then all she could see was pure whiteness before it turned black and she eventually passed out.

:on blackhole: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I won't be here for a few days... so I expect that when I'm back everything will be fine, and nothing has happened to Risa... :mon suspect: XD


@baddie:

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Update soon. Or I'll die of overwinking from Trey-Trey :lol:
OMG THIS IS SO PRICELESS  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: INDEED IT IS!!! XD XD


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 07, 2010, 07:02:16 PM
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she kicked it hard making the door looked helpless and it opened involuntarily.
Finally! She shoulda kick it from the start XD

:O
The killer got Risa?


@ K
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:lol: Okay that's cool XD
It’s not. Imagine me have to do that all the while I read the whole comments XD

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How about I say, what do you think about the current title?  :D
Okay with me :yep:

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She's way ahead of the ebilness  :mon curtain:
You’re getting there K! :P


@ Bishop
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woooo! u're as ebil as K!
:mon determined:


@ AA
You and Bishop are cute XD


@ T-kun
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- Cute: Me! That's the most obvious XD XD :P
:lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: Swtme03 on February 08, 2010, 01:40:51 AM
OH :O MY :shocked GAWD!!!! :bleed eyes:

AICHAN LIVE!!!!!! PLEASE LIVE!!!!!   :bow:

GAKI! NOOOOOO!!!!!  :panic:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: FaqU on February 08, 2010, 02:05:06 AM
@ amEthystx: I am not as ebil as K, I am no where close, I may be a little violent but that doesn't mean I am ebil  :lol: Oh yeah, the Sennen Goroshi doesn't look that bad, I think I will survive

@ K: I am not ebilier!!!!!!!!  :mon annoy: I'm innocent!!!!!

What is S!hu's silent killing style??? Trey-Trey's hairy legs? Give me a visual and I'll determine if they are hairy because moderately hairy can be sexy  :hehehe:

Awwww does it mean I can't be initiated   :wahaha: :bigdeal: Oh well you can't say I didn't give an effort, but I guess this crew is too good for me  :depressed:

@ Chloe: I am not ebilier than K!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: Hart on February 08, 2010, 02:33:16 AM
 :smhid :smhid :smhid :smhid :smhid :smhid :smhid :smhid :smhid :smhid
All of you are overreacting on what happened to TakaGaki. I think Hammy's fics have made me so used to seeing either one of them getting hurt....or killed.
If the killer got to both of them, then that would mean the story is close to ending. Unless.....there's a plot twist coming up soon.  :shocked:

Here's what I think happpened in this short update, but I could be totally wrong and K would laugh at me for even thinking this:

Right after Gaki kicked the front door Ai got scared, thinking that the killer will be coming after her, went to hide. And then once Gaki reached the bedroom, Ai thinking that the killer entered the room, grabbed something and whacked Gaki in the back of the head.

And right after that....I'll leave it up to your perverted imaginations. :P


Phew! Now that I got that out of the way, onto the action that's going on outside this story:

Bananas in Pajamas -  :lol: I haven't seen that show in over a decade and two-thirds.

@Trey
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:depressed: How many times do I have to repeat that my legs aren't hairy????? :cry:
If it makes you feel better, I probably have hairier legs than you.

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I'd do it... But I can't explain the meaning of "ajo y agua" in english...
I know that translated it is "Garlic and Water", but I think ajo y aqua means that whatever happens, deal with it, even if you don't like it.
Example: All of you are crazy and I just have to deal with it. Even though I'm probably crazier than all of you combined.

@Bishop
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- I saw ME! >.< What happened?
You've just been selected to be my first target.  :shifty:
I hope that you would run a little bit. I do love a good chase.  :twisted:

@S!Hu
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OMG You're Bishop NI's stalker  :shocked  :w00t:
If you're stalking Bishop NI, then who's stalking you?  :mon cweepy:
BTW....How's your silent killing style compared to mine?

@K
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How will you eat when it's your tongue that got barbecued?
Poor author-san.  :smhid I was talking about your tongue for dinner.  :twisted:
Or maybe I should go after another delicacy. Is camel white meat or dark meat? :wahaha:

For everyone that I have not mentioned:
1) Watch your backs....and learn to sleep with one eye both eyes open.  :mon evil:
2) You're gonna wish that I had never joined in all this craziness.

AND....

3) Who's ebil and the flirt now? :glasses:
*walks back into the shadows*

Can't wait to see how K is gonna torture us and TakaGaki next time.

(IRL I'm just a nice guy. Slightly crazy, but nice. And friendly too.)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: kuro808 on February 08, 2010, 04:56:39 AM
Interesting chapter, Ai better live, other than that it is way too dramatic for me to take
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: alwaysYou on February 08, 2010, 02:55:08 PM
@kR:
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Just like you  :twisted:
nehz, you are more ebil  :lol:

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Cheeks only?
if mouth, i scare the pervert character in me will appear.. XD :lol:

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Oh, Bishop NI didn't know you're from there too?
seem so  :(


@darling:
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How did you know~
if u are meaning how do i know where u r from
remember from your thread, you mention watching firework at marina bay..
yea, since then i knew where you are from
see, i told you i did read your fic even i dont comment..
and !!!, i'm surprise i remember you mention it!!! :shocked

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"our version of english"
that will be real funny..XD

@lil_hamz:
all of us is from same country..XD
and only if you know who am i..=x


@Trey:
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- Perv: Obviously, YOU...
:shocked STUPID kR!!! see!!!you brain wash everyone..
i'm not  :cry:

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- Cute: Me! That's the most obvious
LOL..another sayumi.. :lol:

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How many times do I have to repeat that my legs aren't hairy????? :cry:
WAHAHAHA :lol:
and how do you know it, kR?
*ahem* suspious  XD


@C:
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@ AA
You and Bishop are cute
thanks  :oops:  :lol:


@Hart:
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If you're stalking Bishop NI, then who's stalking you?
ebil kR

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BTW....How's your silent killing style compared to mine?
i kill by my fierce gaze.. :twisted:

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3) Who's ebil and the flirt now?
definitely is kR  :lol:


edit: just to edit someone name..XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: Hart on February 08, 2010, 03:50:09 PM
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@Hart:
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If you're stalking Bishop NI, then who's stalking you?
ebil K
Hmm...thanks for that lil' bit of info. I assumed it was K but I wasn't exactly 100% sure at the time. Makes my job easier to track down all 3 of you at the same time.  :twisted:

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i kill by my fierce gaze.. :twisted:
Uh huh...So which style have you studied under, the Nakazawa technique or the Fujimoto technique?  :lol:

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3) Who's ebil and the flirt now?
definitely is K  :lol:
....We shall see about that.....

Now excuse me while I go beat up a certain animal friend of K's before I go to a concert tonight.  :bangchair: :knee: :kickass:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: alwaysYou on February 08, 2010, 03:55:43 PM
Fujimoto  :lol:
i remember once my frenz told me that..
he say when i dont smile and look somehow moodless, i do look like a fujimoto when she has no expression on her face.. :lol: XD
scary :lol:

the best is when during secondary school, when i always get bully by this 3 guys, i get so angry for the first time that i stare at one guy, he went "i hate your glaze"  and turn away :nervous
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: Hart on February 08, 2010, 04:14:50 PM
Ahhh...so it's Miki-sama's style then.  :lol:
Between you and me, I always found her glare to be sexy. :inlove: And so is her laugh. :lol:
I guess if we ever meet, and you give me that kind of glare, I may never want to turn away. :oops:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: amEthystx on February 08, 2010, 04:18:43 PM
^ sorry.. It's reserve for me only.. ;)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: Hart on February 08, 2010, 04:27:13 PM
^ Well then, do you mind if we share?  :roll:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 08, 2010, 04:39:25 PM
@ FaqU

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@ Chloe: I am not ebilier than K!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh, really?

Then again K might have just been ebiler than you...
XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: amEthystx on February 08, 2010, 05:54:27 PM
^^ Sorry....I hate to say it.. but... I'm selfish...  ;)

Hey Girl,

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Cheeks only?
if mouth, i scare the pervert character in me will appear.. XD :lol:
- Oh God..... i told you girls + 2 guys that i'm innocent... >.<

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Oh, Bishop NI didn't know you're from there too?
seem so  :(
- y  :(? don't :(.... :(

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if u are meaning how do i know where u r from
remember from your thread, you mention watching firework at marina bay..
yea, since then i knew where you are from
see, i told you i did read your fic even i dont comment..
and !!!, i'm surprise i remember you mention it!!!
- *Face palmed* Oh right! I did mention it...  But nothing to hide too anyway.. XD hmmm.. surprised? why?

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@lil_hamz:
all of us is from same country..
and only if you know who am i..=x
- Haha... actually.. the nickname that K used to call you.. i know what it is..  ;)

@Granny:
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Update soon. Or I'll die of overwinking from Trey-Trey :lol:
OMG THIS IS SO PRICELESS     :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:     
- Looks like granny is getting the effects too! XD

@ Hammy: Bananas in Pajamas (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CJkPWMaNaIM#)

XD They actually have it in YouTube! How i miss it!

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Ame u didn't know u were country women with Alwaysyou?
- Nope i didn't know.. and you can call me BabySticky or something.. Somebody from Jphip told me that there was a porn star called Ame! LOL!

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that was why I asked if u and her spoke beforehand. Now I know e flirting started at first sight. Wow u are good*wink*
- Now nobody is gonna believe that i'm innocent *pouts*

@Trey-trey~:
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Cute: Me! That's the most obvious
Yes... trey-trey is the cutest  :monk gboy:

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How many times do I have to repeat that my legs aren't hairy?????
- Are they furry?!  :scared:

@C:
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@ AA
You and Bishop are cute XD
- XD

@FaqU:
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I am not as ebil as K, I am no where close, I may be a little violent but that doesn't mean I am ebil  :lol:  Oh yeah, the Sennen Goroshi doesn't look that bad, I think I will survive
- hmmmm~ Yup~ K is the ultimate ebilness... Everyone can survive Sennen Goroshi...but just the humiliation.... XD

@Hart:
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If it makes you feel better, I probably have hairier legs than you.
-  Now we know that Trey-trey is not the one and only guy here now... Is there any more guys? Please Raise your leg hairs! Thanks!

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You've just been selected to be my first target.   :shifty:
I hope that you would run a little bit. I do love a good chase  :twisted:
- Run? I'm Right Here... Bring it On.

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If you're stalking Bishop NI, then who's stalking you? :mon cweepy:
- You watch your back too....... :)

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3) Who's ebil and the flirt now?  :glasses:
*walks back into the shadows*
- Oh ya? Go get yourself a girl.. :)



Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: FaqU on February 08, 2010, 06:48:37 PM
@FaqU:
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I am not as ebil as K, I am no where close, I may be a little violent but that doesn't mean I am ebil  :lol:  Oh yeah, the Sennen Goroshi doesn't look that bad, I think I will survive
- hmmmm~ Yup~ K is the ultimate ebilness... Everyone can survive Sennen Goroshi...but just the humiliation.... XD

Would it be bad if I tell you, if visualized properly, it could be...kinky? (being the one to perform it of course  :hehehe: )

YATTA!!!!! That's all I need to be happy, agreement that K is still ebilier than me  :onioncheer:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: Treykun on February 08, 2010, 09:11:12 PM

Ok, this will be short because right now I should be studying...  :cry: :cry:


@FaqU:

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Trey-Trey's hairy legs? Give me a visual and I'll determine if they are hairy because moderately hairy can be sexy

:depressed: I'm not hairy!!!!!!!! Not even moderately!!!!!!!!! :cry: :cry: :cry: This is all your fault K!!!!!!!!!!! xD


@Hart:

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If it makes you feel better, I probably have hairier legs than you.

Thanks... :cry: But that doesn't make me feel better because... I'M NOT HAIRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :cry: :cry:

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I know that translated it is "Garlic and Water", but I think ajo y aqua means that whatever happens, deal with it, even if you don't like it.

:hehehe: Yeah, something like that... XD


@S!hu!:

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i'm not :cry:

You aren't?????? :cry: poor you... :cry: :P

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LOL..another sayumi.. :lol:

I won't deny it... if I do it... something like the whole hairy thing will happen... :cry:

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and how do you know it, kR?

*ahem* suspious XD

THAT'S THE PROBLEM!!!!!!!!!! SHE DOESN'T KNOW IT!!!!!!!!!! XD She's just seen my face... and she imagines how my legs are...  :cry: :cry:


@bishop:

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*WATCHES VIDEO*

:mon huh: What the f**k is that...?? What kind of programs did you see in your childhood...?????? XD XD :P

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Yes... trey-trey is the cutest 

OF COURSE!!!!! XD XD

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- Are they furry?!

 :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed:

........................................

 :fainted:

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-  Now we know that Trey-trey is not the one and only guy here now... Is there any more guys? Please Raise your leg hairs! Thanks!

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: ........................................................ but I'm still depressed......... :depressed:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: YumePouk on February 09, 2010, 12:08:38 AM
Yay and update  :wub: :wub:
:OMG:  What are you doing to ur TakaGaki 
I hope for you Ai-chan is fine and nothing bad happened to her :angry: :angry:
No way RIIIIISSSSAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa  :scared:
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Until she felt a sharp pang of pain from the back of her head and then all she could see was pure whiteness before it turned black and she eventually passed out.
Risa T-T you are suppose to rescue your Ai and not passed out.....
damn you the "kidnaper/Murder"  :angry: :angry:



@K

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The flirt thing will show up eventually  :yep:  :twisted: XD
Lol maybe but who know...... perhaps I cancontrol myself to not flirt   8)  :P



@Trey-Trey

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She's right... It's very contagious so... XD :p
:rofl: :rofl: .... then I will do with and try to not get myself in the flirt things  :D  XD


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Ok, let's do a fair list of the categories:
- Evil: Ok, this one is for me... but I'm still less evil than the others :p
- Perv: Obviously, YOU... XD
- Flirt: YOU :yep:
- Cute: Me! That's the most obvious XD XD :p
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: Hart on February 09, 2010, 10:15:40 AM
@Bishop
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^^ Sorry....I hate to say it.. but... I'm selfish...   ;)
Ok. Fair enough. I was just having a little bit of fun.
I'll leave you two lovebirds alone, until I'm bored.  :twisted:

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- Run? I'm Right Here... Bring it On.
*sigh* If you say so.
*picks up chainsaw from K's other fic*
So...are you gonna run or not?

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- You watch your back too.......
Oh my! Are you flirting with me?  :oops:
What would S!hu! think if you were having an affair behind her back?

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- Oh ya? Go get yourself a girl..
But what if I'm looking at her right now?  ;)

@Trey
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I'M NOT HAIRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :cry: :cry:
Of course you're not. If you say so, then I believe you.
Unless...you're lying and you're shaving your legs.  :smhid
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: kRisZ on February 10, 2010, 05:59:43 PM
lil_hamz
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Hmmm was I e only one who knew?
*raises both hands*  :D

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And why is it so short?!?*shakes fist*
XD

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I wanna know who caught TakaGaki and what's gonna happen now? Kame to e rescue?
The answers are below  :D



Trey-trey
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:depressed: How many times do I have to repeat that my legs aren't hairy????? :cry:
:lol: Sorry dude   :D

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Does that mean... that you will help me??? :mon innocent:
Your cuteness is too strong that I can't say no for long  :yep:

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I'd do it... But I can't explain the meaning of "ajo y agua" in english... :mon sweat:
try me  :)   there's babel fish  XD

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XD Well, I can put my ecologist principles aside for once... XD :P
:D

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No means no!!!! XD
Arg. That's harsh

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:on blackhole: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSsssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   :P  :lol:



C
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Finally! She shoulda kick it from the start XD
I got the idea from your comment  :D

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It’s not. Imagine me have to do that all the while I read the whole comments XD
XD Don't cover it then  :P You really remind me of someone I met over the internet, she's important to me too. I haven't talk to her in a while.

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You’re getting there K! :P
Like I've said, I'm trimming them weekly  :D

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You and Bishop are cute XD
:yep: They are.



Swtme03
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OH :O MY :shocked GAWD!!!! :bleed eyes:

AICHAN LIVE!!!!!! PLEASE LIVE!!!!!   :bow:

GAKI! NOOOOOO!!!!!  :panic:
XD  XD  XD



FaqU
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I am not ebilier!!!!!!!!  :mon annoy: I'm innocent!!!!!
My tail's hiding whenever I see you  :grin:

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Give me a visual and I'll determine if they are hairy because moderately hairy can be sexy  :hehehe:
No comment  XD

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Awwww does it mean I can't be initiated   :wahaha: :bigdeal: Oh well you can't say I didn't give an effort, but I guess this crew is too good for me  :depressed:
lol



Hart
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:smhid :smhid :smhid :smhid :smhid :smhid :smhid :smhid :smhid :smhid
:yep:  :yep:  :yep:  :yep:  :yep:  :yep:  :yep:  :yep:  :yep:  :yep: 

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I think Hammy's fics have made me so used to seeing either one of them getting hurt....or killed.
OMG  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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Right after Gaki kicked the front door Ai got scared, thinking that the killer will be coming after her, went to hide. And then once Gaki reached the bedroom, Ai thinking that the killer entered the room, grabbed something and whacked Gaki in the back of the head.
:pimp:

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And right after that....I'll leave it up to your perverted imaginations. :P
XD

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I know that translated it is "Garlic and Water", but I think ajo y aqua means that whatever happens, deal with it, even if you don't like it.
Oh. So that was the meaning of it  :kneelbow:

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Example: All of you are crazy and I just have to deal with it.
:grr:

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Poor author-san.  :smhid I was talking about your tongue for dinner.  :twisted:
:fainted:

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Or maybe I should go after another delicacy. Is camel white meat or dark meat? :wahaha:
:mon kungfu: How about is your meat white or dark?  :ptam-kill:

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1) Watch your backs....and learn to sleep with one eye both eyes open.  :mon evil:
2) You're gonna wish that I had never joined in all this craziness.
You can always try  :mon kungfu:

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(IRL I'm just a nice guy. Slightly crazy, but nice. And friendly too.)
After your above comments, do you really think we will believe you?  :smhid  :P



kurosawa87
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Interesting chapter, Ai better live, other than that it is way too dramatic for me to take
:D  :kneelbow:



S!hu!
The update's written and posted especially for you  :)

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if mouth, i scare the pervert character in me will appear.. XD :lol:
:shocked  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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:shocked STUPID kR!!! see!!!you brain wash everyone..
i'm not  :cry:
:lol: DISCLAIMER: The author won't hold any responsibility to the Readers comments and ideas. Bow.  :yep:  :D

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- Cute: Me! That's the most obvious
LOL..another sayumi.. :lol:
Obviously  :yep:  XD

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WAHAHAHA :lol:
and how do you know it, kR?
*ahem* suspious  XD
Pure instinct  :D

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@ AA
You and Bishop are cute
thanks  :oops:  :lol:
:roll:

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If you're stalking Bishop NI, then who's stalking you?
ebil kR
:O Since when?  :P

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i kill by my fierce gaze.. :twisted:
I wanna see  :on woohoo:

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3) Who's ebil and the flirt now?
definitely is kR  :lol:
I'm not flirt  :yep:

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edit: just to edit someone name..XD
XD



Hart
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Now excuse me while I go beat up a certain animal friend of K's before I go to a concert tonight.  :bangchair: :knee: :kickass:
Beware that's Bishop NI's and C's and Trey-trey's and someone's  friend too  :on thumbb:


 
AABatt
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i remember once my frenz told me that..
he say when i dont smile and look somehow moodless, i do look like a fujimoto when she has no expression on her face.. :lol: XD
scary :lol:
Again, I wanna see  :on woohoo:

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the best is when during secondary school, when i always get bully by this 3 guys, i get so angry for the first time that i stare at one guy, he went "i hate your glaze"  and turn away :nervous
Give me their addresses and we'll give them what they're looking for  :twisted:



Hart
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I guess if we ever meet, and you give me that kind of glare, I may never want to turn away. :oops:
:whip:  :whip:  :whip:



^ sorry.. It's reserve for me only.. ;)
You heard her Hart



^ Well then, do you mind if we share?  :roll:
She's exclusive  :whip: :whip: :whip:



pretend_2besome1
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Then again K might have just been ebiler than you...
XD
Give the credit where it's due, this time it's FaqU's  :yep:



Bishop NI
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- Oh God..... i told you girls + 2 guys that i'm innocent... >.<
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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- Haha... actually.. the nickname that K used to call you.. i know what it is..  ;)
Which one?  XD

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- Looks like granny is getting the effects too! XD
:yep:  :lol:

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- Nope i didn't know.. and you can call me BabySticky or something.. Somebody from Jphip told me that there was a porn star called Ame! LOL!
:lol:  Hey there Ame *wink wink*  :lol:

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- Now nobody is gonna believe that i'm innocent *pouts*
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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- Are they furry?!  :scared:
Damn  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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- hmmmm~ Yup~ K is the ultimate ebilness...
Again, I'm trimming them every Wednesday  :yep:

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-  Now we know that Trey-trey is not the one and only guy here now... Is there any more guys? Please Raise your leg hairs! Thanks!
Oh dear  :rofl:   :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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- Run? I'm Right Here... Bring it On.
:rockon:  :pepper:   :twothumbs   :pepper:  :rockon:

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- You watch your back too....... :)
The smiley's doing the work more  :yep:

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- Oh ya? Go get yourself a girl.. :)
*points at the above reply*  :yep:
 


FaqU
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YATTA!!!!! That's all I need to be happy, agreement that K is still ebilier than me  :onioncheer:
:fainted:



Trey-trey
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Ok, this will be short because right now I should be studying...  :cry: :cry:
Ganbatte  :onioncheer:

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:depressed: I'm not hairy!!!!!!!! Not even moderately!!!!!!!!! :cry: :cry: :cry: This is all your fault K!!!!!!!!!!! xD
XD

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Thanks... :cry: But that doesn't make me feel better because... I'M NOT HAIRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :cry: :cry:
XD

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THAT'S THE PROBLEM!!!!!!!!!! SHE DOESN'T KNOW IT!!!!!!!!!! XD She's just seen my face... and she imagines how my legs are...  :cry: :cry:
Sorry Trey-trey dear  XD  :kneelbow:

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:mon huh: What the f**k is that...?? What kind of programs did you see in your childhood...?????? XD XD :P
It was fun to watch two bananas in pajamas  :yep:

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- Are they furry?!

 :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed:
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: ........................................................ but I'm still depressed......... :depressed:
lol



S!Trey
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:OMG:  What are you doing to ur TakaGaki 
XD

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I hope for you Ai-chan is fine and nothing bad happened to her :angry: :angry:
No way RIIIIISSSSAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa  :scared:
Relax, that ain't good for the heart  XD

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Risa T-T you are suppose to rescue your Ai and not passed out.....
damn you the "kidnaper/Murder"  :angry: :angry:
Yeah, damn you  :angry:  XD

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Lol maybe but who know...... perhaps I cancontrol myself to not flirt   8)  :P
we shall see  :yep:



Hart
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But what if I'm looking at her right now?  ;)
:scared:   XD

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Of course you're not. If you say so, then I believe you.
Unless...you're lying and you're shaving your legs.  :smhid
Ummm.. ebil?  XD





UPDATE 22



Almost inaudibly, Risa heard her name like a mantra. Her head was aching really bad, making it harder for her to open her eyes easily and her brain to function properly.


Groaning, she was about to feel her head with her hand but was stopped midway when a warm hand grabbed hers.


“Risa, are you okay?” the voice was eliciting concern and was more audible this time. She recognized the voice immediately even with her eyes closed.


The hand gripped hers a little too tightly when she didn’t respond and some warm liquid ran down on her hand. She slowly opened her eyes but the light was like a hot dagger that probed behind her eyes. Blinking a few times to adjust from the brightness and finally adjusting, that’s when she saw a crying Ai holding her hand under her shaking chin, tears falling one after the other, staring at her.


“Am I dreaming?”


Shaking her head in response, Ai continued to cry, louder this time. Sobbing like a little kid.


“What happened?” Why are you crying?”


“I thought you were someone else. I didn’t recognize you from your back, it’s your hair” after hearing Ai’s words, a glimmer appeared in Risa’s eyes but it immediately vanished as fast as it appeared.


“So you’re the reason why I’m having a headache now” acting like she was mad, she retreaded her hand from Ai’s grasp and looked the other way, hiding a smirk from the crying lady.


“I’m so sorry, I didn’t know it was you” Ai panicked. “Please forgive me” softly touching Risa’s arms, trying to make her look her way but she failed.


Risa was trying really hard not to give in. God knows how happy she is right now, knowing that Ai is perfectly fine. It feels like there’s a thorn that was taken from her heart and it’s now breathing well. A little act wouldn’t hurt was Risa’s thoughts.


“Risa, I’ll do anything just please forgive me” and her sob became even louder.


Swiftly turning her head toward the sobbing girl she asked, “Anything?” and Ai nodded.


“I was not able to finish my food… cook something delicious for me”


Wiping her tears away with the back of her own hands, Ai nodded “Okay, what do you want me to cook?”


“Anything delicious” after hearing Risa’s response, Ai stood up from her sitting position and headed to the door.


“You forgot something” Risa said making Ai froze from her track and looked back at Risa. The girl on the bed pointed her forefinger on her cheek still wearing a blank face.


“Why? What happened to your cheek? Does it hurt?” inquired the oblivious Ai while taking quick steps toward the bed.


Rolling her eyes, Risa replied “Yes. And it needed something to ease the pain”


“You want me to get an ice pack?” she asked while examining Risa’s face with worry.


Groaning, Risa rolled her eyes once more “Your kiss will do”


Ai was stoned for a moment. After putting Risa’s words together she blushed and a shy smile appeared.


“I’m waiting” with that said, Ai leaned down and kissed Risa’s cheek, a little longer than necessary. Her breath became shallow and heavy when her skin touched Risa’s. Risa on the other hand love the proximity and was about to hold the girl closer but Ai retreaded after hearing Risa’s growling stomach.


“I’ll be back in a flash” said the blushing Ai. She headed to her closet and took something. Facing the staring Risa, she tossed a shirt and headed to the door after saying flatly “Take that off, it’s reminding me of something”


“Shit” looking down, the lipstick stain was still present. Obeying the house owner’s command she sat up, undressed and then put on the tossed top. After dressing up, she looked around for her missing jacket. Finding it on the couch, she stood up and walked towards it. She needed to know who the found dead body was.


“Eri”

...

“Did they call you about the new found victim?”

...


“Have I met the victim?”

...


“Who is it this time?”

...


“Eh!!!”



~~~



Ai was focusing on her task at hand. Her hair was tied up in a bun and she wore a green apron. She was frying some ebi when two warm hands snaked around her slender waist, followed by a warm breath on the nape of her neck. She jumped a little in surprise but collected herself after a second. Patting her guest’s head with her left hand she said “It will be ready in a minute” Risa didn’t budge and so Ai continued stirring the pan with Risa hugging her from behind.


“Smells good” whispered Risa as she nestled her face on Ai’s neck.


“Which one?” asked the cook, one brow arcing.


“Both” she lightly rubbed her face on Ai’s exposed skin making the girl stiffen. Risa’s hands started to move and crawl on Ai’s body when the girl became silent. Exploring, trying to tickle and to make her captive’s hair raise and stand on its ends.


“I’m still mad at you” Risa’s advances stopped and her body slouched on Ai’s.


“I didn’t do anything bad last night. I was working” reasoned Risa as the girl inside her embrace wiggled and was trying to escape from their current physical intimacy.


“Save it. I will only listen after you have eaten”
 

“How about, when I get back from work?” Ai turned around to face her captor.


“Is it not your free time until six hour from now?”


“Yes. But something important came up” Ai stared down and started to pout. After a while a pair of lips landed on her nose.


“I’ll be here by dinner and probably I can skip work after that. How’s that sound?”




 :D






S!Hu! Take care Dear  :)   and everyone too  :heart:




Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 22~2/11)
Post by: amEthystx on February 10, 2010, 06:13:57 PM
FIRST! But I'M SO TIRED!!!!!!!!!!

*pouts*

But Just two thing first... the rest i'll comment tomorrow! LOL  :rofl:

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“I thought you were someone else. I didn’t recognize you from your back, it’s your hair”
- I'm sorry Trey-trey... your hairy leg made an appearance.. *Hummmmm* OH DEAR LORD...such disturbing sight... LOL~

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She was frying some ebi when two warm hands snaked around her slender waist, followed by a warm breath on the nape of her neck.
- LOL! EBI!

*yawns....*

NIGHT!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 22~2/11)
Post by: kRisZ on February 10, 2010, 06:24:35 PM
 XD

Nighty nighty  :)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 22~2/11)
Post by: Swtme03 on February 10, 2010, 06:47:16 PM
 :heart: :heart: :heart:
WOOO~ UPDATE!!!
 :heart: :heart: :heart:

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“I’ll be here by dinner and probably I can skip work after that. How’s that sound?”

Sounds like a good time  :inlove:

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“Who is it this time?”

dare? dare? dare???? :panic:

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“Smells good” whispered Risa as she nestled her face on Ai’s neck.


“Which one?” asked the cook, one brow arcing.


“Both”

Ahh~ what I would give to get a wiff of both  :love:
Ebi sounds delicious and just the thought of how Ai smells makes me weak  :wub:


UPDATE AGAIN SOON PLEASE!!! :bow:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 22~2/11)
Post by: kuro808 on February 10, 2010, 07:12:03 PM
The TakaGaki saga continues, I love the friction it is a comedy in itself :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 22~2/11)
Post by: Hart on February 10, 2010, 08:15:01 PM
HAH!! I was right! Ai couldn't recognize Gaki because of her short hair.

So.....which unfortunate person did you decided to kill off this time?

For all those comments that I've written, I wouldn't be surprised if you added me to the list of people that will die in this story.
I know a lot of you out there would love to see that happen.......and I'm okay with it. I probably definitely deserve it. :yep:


@Kameru-sama
Gomenasai.  :kneelbow:
If it makes your friends feel better I'm probably gonna freeze to death because of that snow storm this morning.
I should probably change my name to frozen_Hart, Hart-sicle, or Hart_of_Ice. Ugh...that was lame.

Me by the end of the day  :same :same  :mon freeze:

@K
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After your above comments, do you really think we will believe you?
Hell, I don't believe in what I say half all the time. XD

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Ummm.. ebil?
I'll take that as a compliment. :D
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 22~2/11)
Post by: kawaii beam on February 10, 2010, 11:47:38 PM
*comes out of hiding XD*
WOW XD i cant believe ai jumped the gun so quickly XD beating up her gf like that XDD

ubber cute takagaki love though~ X3keep it up!!!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 21~2/07)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 11, 2010, 03:23:01 PM
TakaGaki back together! :cow: :cow:

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“Your kiss will do”
Wooo!  :D

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“I’m waiting”
This reminds me of when I'm about to freak out a few pages back  XD

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She was frying some ebi
:lol:  the ebi shows up!

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“I’m still mad at you”
They're just like an old married couple having a quarrel  :luvluv2:


@ Teh Ebil K
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I got the idea from your comment  :D
XD

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XD Don't cover it then  :P
My screen gonna hate me for that  :lol:

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You really remind me of someone I met over the internet, she's important to me too. I haven't talk to her in a while.
I am? I hope that's a good thing  :)

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Like I've said, I'm trimming them weekly  :D
K, K, K, even if you trim your horn it doesn't matter. The ebilness lies within you, not the horn  XD

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Give the credit where it's due, this time it's FaqU's  :yep:
No, it's you K.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 22~2/11)
Post by: alwaysYou on February 11, 2010, 03:42:01 PM
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Shaking her head in response, Ai continued to cry, louder this time. Sobbing like a little kid.
awww..*hug aichan*

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“I thought you were someone else. I didn’t recognize you from your back, it’s your hair”
serve you right for cutting ur stupid hair..

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God knows how happy she is right now,
god know she is happy
i know she is pervy

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“Risa, I’ll do anything just please forgive me” and her sob became even louder.
Swiftly turning her head toward the sobbing girl she asked, “Anything?” and Ai nodded.
“I was not able to finish my food… cook something delicious for me”
AABatt: STUPID!!
Risa: WHAT
AABATT: Aichan already said anything yet you just ask her to cook?!
RISA: yea, why
AABATT: if it's me, i will ............  :twisted:

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“Your kiss will do”
can i do so too?XD

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“Eh!!!”
WHO?!

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“Smells good” whispered Risa as she nestled her face on Ai’s neck.
:wub: :wub: :wub:

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“Which one?” asked the cook, one brow arcing.
“Both” she lightly rubbed her face on Ai’s exposed skin making the girl stiffen.
if you dont wanna eat a burn food, stop touching aichan now.. :lol:

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"I’ll be here by dinner and probably I can skip work after that. How’s that sound?”
GOOD  :twothumbs

hw come, really, is @ the previous chp, aichan is not one of the victim, i really feel that aichan MIGHT be the killer..LOL..
and also, i think it MIGHT be reina too.. :lol: she hate gakisan cause aichan fall in love with her..and wanna revenge on gakisan so she start to attack ppl who is close to gakisan..and yet the mr tsunku is someone reina paid to fighten gakisan..
ok..i think too much.. :lol:


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S!Hu! Take care Dear
you too.. :)

*hop off*
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 22~2/11)
Post by: kRisZ on February 11, 2010, 03:56:59 PM
Bishop NI
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- I'm sorry Trey-trey... your hairy leg made an appearance.. *Hummmmm* OH DEAR LORD...such disturbing sight... LOL~
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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- LOL! EBI!
Yeah, your Ebi  XD



Swtme03
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:heart: :heart: :heart:
WOOO~ UPDATE!!!
 :heart: :heart: :heart:
:D

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Sounds like a good time  :inlove:
:yep: sounds like  XD

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dare? dare? dare???? :panic:
Secret  :twisted:  :P

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Ahh~ what I would give to get a wiff of both  :love:
Ebi sounds delicious and just the thought of how Ai smells makes me weak  :wub:
:yep:  :yep:  :yep:

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UPDATE AGAIN SOON PLEASE!!! :bow:
I'll try to write tomorrow  :D  but no promises  :P



kurosawa87
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The TakaGaki saga continues, I love the friction it is a comedy in itself :lol:
:kneelbow:



Hart
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HAH!! I was right! Ai couldn't recognize Gaki because of her short hair.
I hate to admit it, but yes, you are right  :P

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So.....which unfortunate person did you decided to kill off this time?
Secret  :P

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For all those comments that I've written, I wouldn't be surprised if you added me to the list of people that will die in this story.
I know a lot of you out there would love to see that happen.......and I'm okay with it. I probably definitely deserve it. :yep:
lol

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If it makes your friends feel better I'm probably gonna freeze to death because of that snow storm this morning.
I should probably change my name to frozen_Hart, Hart-sicle, or Hart_of_Ice. Ugh...that was lame.
You're nuts  :lol:

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Hell, I don't believe in what I say half all the time. XD
XD

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I'll take that as a compliment. :D
Sure  :D



kawaii beam
 :w00t:  :mon hi:
I always wonder when will the person who gave me a birthday present come and read my random story  :yep:

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ubber cute takagaki love though~ X3keep it up!!!
:kneelbow:



C
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TakaGaki back together! :cow: :cow:
:yep:  :cow:

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This reminds me of when I'm about to freak out a few pages back  XD
:lol: I remember that, did you really?  :D

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:lol:  the ebi shows up!
:yep:  XD

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They're just like an old married couple having a quarrel  :luvluv2:
lol

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My screen gonna hate me for that  :lol:
XD

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I am? I hope that's a good thing  :)
It is  :yep:  She became my adopted sister and vice versa  :)  She's very nice  :yep:

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K, K, K, even if you trim your horn it doesn't matter. The ebilness lies within you, not the horn  XD
:depressed:

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No, it's you K.
:fainted:



S!hu!
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serve you right for cutting ur stupid hair..
Hey! She looks cute and kakkoii  :heart:

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god know she is happy
i know she is pervy
OMG  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl: What is wrong with you  :P

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AABatt: STUPID!!
Risa: WHAT
AABATT: Aichan already said anything yet you just ask her to cook?!
RISA: yea, why
AABATT: if it's me, i will ............  :twisted:
:lol:  :lol:  :lol: you are so perverted  XD

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can i do so too?XD
Sure... she's your desktop pic right, kiss her now  XD

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WHO?!
I have no idea  :P

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:wub: :wub: :wub:
:yep:

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if you dont wanna eat a burn food, stop touching aichan now.. :lol:
Why didn't I think about that  :mon dunno:  XD

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GOOD  :twothumbs
I knew you'd say that  XD

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hw come, really, is @ the previous chp, aichan is not one of the victim, i really feel that aichan MIGHT be the killer..LOL..
and also, i think it MIGHT be reina too.. :lol: she hate gakisan cause aichan fall in love with her..and wanna revenge on gakisan so she start to attack ppl who is close to gakisan..and yet the mr tsunku is someone reina paid to fighten gakisan..
ok..i think too much.. :lol:
:pimp:

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you too.. :)
:)


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 22~2/11)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 11, 2010, 04:20:55 PM
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:lol: I remember that, did you really?  :D
I know it's weird but yeah, I was fidgeting like crazy :nervous

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It is  :yep:  She became my adopted sister and vice versa  :)  She's very nice  :yep:
Then it's a good thing  :mon squee:

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:depressed:
 :fainted:

 :monk gboy:

LOL
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 22~2/11)
Post by: badsaints on February 11, 2010, 04:37:09 PM
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“I thought you were someone else. I didn’t recognize you from your back, it’s your hair”
Hmm between the time she finish work and had a quarrel with Ai, then go to Yuko's for a drink and later back to Ai's place...when did she cut her hair? :huhuh Unless she did it during the wacky dream about a kite getting stuck in a baby tree... :lol:


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“So you’re the reason why I’m having a headache now” acting like she was mad, she retreaded her hand from Ai’s grasp and looked the other way, hiding a smirk from the crying lady.
Nobody says you can't take advantage of the situation XD


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“Anything?” and Ai nodded.
:twisted:


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“I was not able to finish my food… cook something delicious for me”
:doh:


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“Why? What happened to your cheek? Does it hurt?” inquired the oblivious Ai while taking quick steps toward the bed.
I know Ai is slow...but to be this slow :sweatdrop:


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“Smells good” whispered Risa as she nestled her face on Ai’s neck.
“Which one?” asked the cook, one brow arcing.
“Both”
Good to see that the bump on the head didn't mar Gaki's ability to sweet talk


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“I’m still mad at you” Risa’s advances stopped and her body slouched on Ai’s.
Bummer...


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“I’ll be here by dinner and probably I can skip work after that. How’s that sound?”
For after-meal "dessert"? :twisted: Sounds good :drool:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 22~2/11)
Post by: kRisZ on February 11, 2010, 04:44:49 PM
C
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I know it's weird but yeah, I was fidgeting like crazy :nervous
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl: sorry  :grin:

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Then it's a good thing  :mon squee:
:heart:  :yep:  :heart:

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:monk gboy:

LOL
Oh I like that  XD



baddie 
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Hmm between the time she finish work and had a quarrel with Ai, then go to Yuko's for a drink and later back to Ai's place...when did she cut her hair? :huhuh Unless she did it during the wacky dream about a kite getting stuck in a baby tree... :lol:
:lol: It's in between the quarrel and to Yuko's. The update where almost everyone's comments were  :fainted:   :lol:

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Nobody says you can't take advantage of the situation XD
:yep:

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:twisted:
:roll:

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:doh:
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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I know Ai is slow...but to be this slow :sweatdrop:
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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Good to see that the bump on the head didn't mar Gaki's ability to sweet talk
:D

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Bummer...
:yep:

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For after-meal "dessert"? :twisted: Sounds good :drool:
:mon whimper:  :fainted:   :D


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 22~2/11)
Post by: Treykun on February 11, 2010, 06:49:13 PM

@Hart:

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Of course you're not. If you say so, then I believe you.
Unless...you're lying and you're shaving your legs.

I won't say anything about that... :mon cweepy: XD :P


@kRisZ:

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Your cuteness is too strong that I can't say no for long :yep:

XD XD XD

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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSsssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

:err: ......................... :P

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Sorry Trey-trey dear 

NOW YOU SAY YOU SORRY?!?!?! Bah! You'll be calling me hairy again in no time... :cry: :cry:

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It was fun to watch two bananas in pajamas 

:mon huh: .............................................................  XD XD

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*READS*

:mon inluv: YESSSSSSS!!! This is better!! I'll even reconsider my plans to kill you as my revenge K... XD But I won't promise anything... :twisted: :twisted:

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“I thought you were someone else. I didn’t recognize you from your back, it’s your hair”

..................................

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:


@bishop:

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-I'm sorry Trey-trey... your hairy leg made an appearance.. *Hummmmm* OH DEAR LORD...such disturbing sight... LOL~

:depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed:

What have I done to deserve this...????????? :cry: :cry:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 22~2/11)
Post by: FaqU on February 11, 2010, 08:11:09 PM
That's right C, you tell her who's more ebilier *prances around K, mockingly*  :fap

@ Treykun You might as well show everyone a picture of your legs to prove them wrong, although I wonder what picture you showed K in order for her to come to that conclusion   :hehehe:  Then again, I wonder if that is a picture that should be floating around, just in case, it can be disturbing for others.... or you can just show me  :kekeke:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 22~2/11)
Post by: kRisZ on February 14, 2010, 08:04:05 AM
Trey-trey
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NOW YOU SAY YOU SORRY?!?!?! Bah! You'll be calling me hairy again in no time... :cry: :cry:
OMG You're psychic  :w00t:  :w00t:  :w00t:  :P  :lol:

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:mon huh: .............................................................  XD XD
:smhid

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:mon inluv: YESSSSSSS!!! This is better!! I'll even reconsider my plans to kill you as my revenge K... XD But I won't promise anything... :twisted: :twisted:
Oh  :mon determined:   Bring it on  :on comhere:   I'll even cheer for you   :onioncheer:     :P

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:depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed:

What have I done to deserve this...????????? :cry: :cry:
:lol:  :lol:  :lol: Why not blame it on your cuteness *wink*   :twisted:  :P  XD



FaqU
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That's right C, you tell her who's more ebilier *prances around K, mockingly*  :fap
:O  *Looks for C*  :mon look:  *Found C*  :(  *points at C the above comment*  :cry:

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@ Treykun You might as well show everyone a picture of your legs to prove them wrong, although I wonder what picture you showed K in order for her to come to that conclusion   :hehehe:  Then again, I wonder if that is a picture that should be floating around, just in case, it can be disturbing for others.... or you can just show me  :kekeke:
:O She's so ebil  XD





UPDATE 23



Sitting on the carpeted floor with her back leaning in the couch in front of the widescreen plasma TV with a Korean drama movie playing, a bowl of popcorn on the table, and a bottle of red wine that she bought before excitedly coming home by her side, Risa wasn’t entirely paying attention to the movie. Her eyes most of the time would stare and gawk at Ai who was curling up on the couch, hugging a pillow, and seemed very focused on the drama.


The room was silent except for the actors’ voices that the TV speakers gave off. Within the 30 minute run, Risa never caught Ai looking at her. It’s either Ai’s too focused or she was deliberately disregarding her presence. After downing her glass’s content, Risa poured and filled her glass again, held it with her hand and gulped mouthfuls until it became empty again.


 Not breaking her eyes from the screen, a slender hand ran on Ai’s foot but she ignored it. Until said hand ran in circles and tickled her, that’s when Ai break her concentration from the widescreened TV. She looked at her foot and then traced the hand and ended on Risa’s eyes. For a moment she saw raw hunger in Risa’s expression but her attention was drawn onto the girl’s flushed cheeks, ‘Is she drunk?’


“Is the movie more important than me?” Risa asked when Ai finally turned and looked into her eyes, her voice low and definitely hinting dejection.


“You haven’t started your explanation yet, why would I give you back your importance?” sitting up straight, Ai grabbed the remote control but she did not switch the TV off instead she only lowered the volume, enough to make the other hear the other. Reverting back to her previous act, Ai’s stare never left the screen.


Risa crawled up and sat beside Ai but not close enough. “Where do you want me to start?” not getting a reply she continued “From the top it is”. Irked at the still running TV, she started narrating her story, skipping those not so important and irrelevant things.


“And the lipstick?” Ai asked with her eyes now on Risa’s. 'Why can’t Ame keep her sluttishness to herself when I needed it the most? was Risa’s thoughts when she was asked.


“I got it when I bade goodbye to one of the girls, Eri had one too. You can call and ask her.” pointing a finger to nowhere, while trying to convince the girl who sported a blank expression. “I even got slapped, it was hard and awful” when she saw Ai’s first slight reaction when she mentioned she was slapped, her energy leveled up. Touching her cheek as if it still hurt. She played and acted, exaggerating a little. “And my muscles are badly aching from lack of decent sleep”


Moments passed no one talked after that and finally, patting the space that divided them, Ai motioned for Risa to come closer. Without delay, Risa obeyed and eliminated the gap between them.


“Give me your back” Risa shifted her body a little and felt Ai’s hand on her back and shoulders, kneading. The touch was relaxing but electrifying at the same time. It triggered the flame that’s been building within her since this afternoon to flare up. Her wants to touch Ai doubled. But she can’t take the risk by jumping right then and there, when Ai’s displeasure just subsided, it won’t be a wise move. And so she let fate do its work for the time being.


Unknowingly, Ai’s hand delicately caressed Risa’s soft neck, suggesting an obvious delight of malice in her action, making the flaring-with-lust Risa to look back. And there she saw, Ai’s sensual expression that matched hers. Without breaking their eye contact, Risa took Ai’s hand. She then slowly shifted her body and faced the older girl. Risa raised her hand that held Ai’s visibly shaking hand and brought it near her face, rubbing softly the back of Ai’s hand on her cheek and delicately kissed it after. Bit by bit she leaned forward until they’re just a few inches away.


The younger kissed the older on her forehead. Barely leaving the skin to skin contact she trailed down and kissed Ai on her cheekbones, followed by a soft brushing of her quivering lips against Ai’s before plunging completely onto the rosy half opened mouth. And finally they kissed passionately, deepening every second.


Moans and pants at the height of passion blended with the sound from the unattended drama that was still playing on the player. Hands wandered on smooth silky skins, electrifying both at the intimate contact. They’re on fire. Their breath grew ragged to every touch they make. And the fire kept blazing, getting hotter and hotter. Their rhythm was synchronized, until both bodies arched and in unison both cried out. Reaching the edge, both heated desires exploded and blasted into a fireball.


When the TV stopped emitting sound, the two already crashed into deep slumber, lovingly and gently holding each other whilst both displayed sweet smiles plastered on their calm and happy faces. The surroundings celebrated with them. The leaves danced as the wind blew softly. And the stars twinkled as the moon gave out a bright smile. It’s their first time and definitely made Risa happy and proud. First remembered but second time in Ai’s mind, made her calm and content.




Kinda rushed for V-Day  :D



 :heart:  Happy Valentine's Day EVERYONE  :heart:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: kuro808 on February 14, 2010, 08:07:53 AM
Nice update, Happy V-day back to you ! :heart:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: kRisZ on February 14, 2010, 08:13:44 AM
Thank you  :love:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: Hart on February 14, 2010, 08:51:06 AM
:mon blood:
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:imdead:

Happy Valentine's Day Everyone!!!
Happy Singles' Awareness Day for me....Don't mind me. You girls and guys go out and celebrate. I got some japanese hw, kanji writing, and piano practicing to do.

*gives out boxes of e-chocolates to all the girls*

A special Valentine's Day gift K - :monk gboy: (and a box of :JD:.  :P)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: badsaints on February 14, 2010, 03:22:43 PM
Yay TakaGaki made up & kiss (and more too XD)

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'Why can’t Ame keep her sluttishness to herself when I needed it the most?
*stares @ Sticky* So you're the culprit! :angry:


Happy Chinese New Year! & Happy Valentine/Friendship Day!!! :yossi:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: Treykun on February 14, 2010, 03:29:29 PM

@FaqU:

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You might as well show everyone a picture of your legs to prove them wrong, although I wonder what picture you showed K in order for her to come to that conclusion   :hehehe:  Then again, I wonder if that is a picture that should be floating around, just in case, it can be disturbing for others.... or you can just show me  :kekeke:

:mon curtain: Pure ebilness... *swallows hard* ................. XD XD XD Ok, ok, I'll pm that stupid pic to you... But you won't understand K's conclusion... It's just a picture of me saying that I don't want to puff my cheeks... XD XD


@kRisZ:

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OMG You're psychic  :w00t:  :w00t:  :w00t:  :P  :lol:

:depressed: My predictions never fail... :cry:

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:smhid

XD XD

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Oh  :mon determined:   Bring it on  :on comhere:   I'll even cheer for you   :onioncheer:     :P

Ok, I'll kill you if you insist... :twisted: :twisted: XD I just have to smash you with the sequoia :kekeke:

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:lol:  :lol:  :lol: Why not blame it on your cuteness *wink*   :twisted:  :P  XD

My cuteness it's not the problem... :cry: It's your ebilness... :cry: :cry:

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:O She's so ebil  XD

Indeed... XD XD This is like a pandemic... XD

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*READS AND FOLLOWS HART*

:mon blood:
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:imdead:

XD At last... :farofflook: But I have the feeling that something huge is gonna happen... And I'm psychic... XD XD XD

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It’s either Ai’s too focused or she was deliberately disregarding her presence.

Ai... :smhid  But oh well, since it's Ai... XD :P

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'Why can’t Ame keep her sluttishness to herself when I needed it the most?

Oh, god... :rofl:


Well, happy V-day even if I think that this is just a day of commercialism... :bigdeal: XD

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 14, 2010, 05:18:00 PM
@ K
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:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl: sorry  :grin:
It's okay  ;)  it's quite funny actually and I'm like that irl  :sweatdrop:

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Oh I like that  XD
You do?

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:O  *Looks for C*  :mon look:  *Found C*  :(  *points at C the above comment*  :cry:
Awww :monk gboy:  (since you said you like it) you shoulda stop being ebil K

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with a Korean drama movie playing
Somehow reading that just makes me wanna sigh... XD

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“Is the movie more important than me?”
Well, it's kinda hard to pry your eyes from a Korean drama movie.

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“You haven’t started your explanation yet, why would I give you back your importance?” 
Touche.

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Why can’t Ame keep her sluttishness to herself when I needed it the most?
Wait, Ame --> Ame? (that's confusing lol)

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:heart:  Happy Valentine's Day EVERYONE  :heart:
Right back at ya! And to anyone who celebrates it.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: alwaysYou on February 14, 2010, 05:27:59 PM
@kR:
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OMG :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:What is wrong with you :P
i also want to know.. :lol:

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:lol: :lol: :lol:you are so perverted XD
nehz, i just beginner.. 8)

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Sure... she's your desktop pic right, kiss her now XD
:on slopkiss:
(it look disgusting :nervous :lol:)

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Why didn't I think about that
cause you are pervert..so you wont think properly..XD

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I knew you'd say that
opps  :lol:



Update 23

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Her eyes most of the time would stare and gawk at Ai who was curling up on the couch, hugging a pillow, and seemed very focused on the drama.
that my aichan.. :wub:
focus focus and still focus

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“Is the movie more important than me?”
no no, you can come to me anytime.. 8)

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“You haven’t started your explanation yet, why would I give you back your importance?”
nice one!!! :lol:

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Bit by bit she leaned forward until they’re just a few inches away.
i definitely wont move in bit by bit if aichan is infront of me!

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The younger kissed the older on her forehead. Barely leaving the skin to skin contact she trailed down and kissed Ai on her cheekbones, followed by a soft brushing of her quivering lips against Ai’s before plunging completely onto the rosy half opened mouth. And finally they kissed passionately, deepening every second.
:wub:  :oops:
just a simple action, make me go  :drool: :oops:
LOL

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First remembered but second time in Ai’s mind, made her calm and content.
aichan still have the mindset that gakisan "rape" her the last time..XD XD

somehow, i wanna ask for a full detail perv..LOL!!..
nehz..no, i dont want...
i'm not pervert.. :lol: :lol:



HAPPY V V  DAY TO YOU!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: LovelyGaki on February 15, 2010, 12:41:59 AM
Yay!  :twothumbs TakaGaki Update :heart:

Happi Valentine's Day~  :wub:
♥(人´∀`*)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: gab98 on February 15, 2010, 02:19:54 AM
kyaaaa krisz :cow:

really hot XD and sweet

Happy Valentine's Day!! :heart:

And thank you for this :shakeit:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: Swtme03 on February 15, 2010, 03:03:59 AM
KYA!  :mon blood:
my favorite update so far  :mon inluv:

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"They’re on fire."
I'm wondering if we'll get to see how this fire started  :mon misch:
It couldn't just be from wandering hands  :mon evillaff:

EDIT: Just thought about it and maybe it can O_O enough friction could....:mon blood: :imdead:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: FaqU on February 15, 2010, 07:26:26 AM
@ Treykun: How could you possibly say I am ebil??? Just because I have a natural grin that makes me ebil doesn't mean I am ebil  :gyaaah: 

BTW, I saw the photo and makes me want to  :monk gboy: and you're right I may not understand K's logic but I think I know why I would have mixed conclusions about your legs (I agree with K and yourself)  :mon lol:  Kawaii!!!!!

@ K: So you like being called ebil eh?  :mon misch: you're so cute. (Thanks to C's heads up about that) *Finds C*  :mon look: *high-five*

About the fic, should I expect details on the last scene  :on bleed:??? DO IT!!!!! YOU KNOW YOU WANT IT!!!!!!!  :on_hot:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: amEthystx on February 15, 2010, 02:46:03 PM
:OMG:  SLANDER SLANDER!

Dear K:

It has come to my attention that you have made an unauthorized use of my copyrighted username "amEthystx" in the preparation of a work. I have reserved all rights in my username, first published in 05 Feb 2009 in JPH!P. Your work entitled "Whispering Words Unsaid", the character, "Ame" is essentially hinting my username.

As you neither asked for nor received permission to use the username, I believe you have willfully infringed my rights under 17 U.S.C. Section 101 et seq. and could be liable for statutory damages as high as 100 sessions of Trey-trey whole body hair super glue removal treatment, C's Baseball bat smacking as well as Baby Sticky Tree's butt spanking as set forth in Section 504(c)(2) therein.

Very truly yours,

amEthystx


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“You haven’t started your explanation yet, why would I give you back your importance?”
- XD scary~~~~

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'Why can’t Ame keep her sluttishness to herself when I needed it the most?
- *Points at the above letter and pouts.....* But at least... i got to kiss Risa and Eri... Didn;t I? XD

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First remembered but second time in Ai’s mind, made her calm and content.
- LOL~ Did Risa still think that Ai-chan raped her? i don't remember Ai-chan talking about it... or did she?! Getting old here.... *sighs*


@Trey-trey~  :monk gboy: :
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-I'm sorry Trey-trey... your hairy leg made an appearance.. *Hummmmm* OH DEAR LORD...such disturbing sight... LOL~
:depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed:

What have I done to deserve this...?????????  :cry: :cry:
  :monk gboy: :monk gboy: So cute!

@Granny:
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'Why can’t Ame keep her sluttishness to herself when I needed it the most?
*stares @ Sticky* So you're the culprit!
- :) <- ebil smile
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 15, 2010, 04:49:38 PM
@ FaqU
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Just because I have a natural grin that makes me ebil doesn't mean I am ebil
XD XD

What I meant is that she liked that smiley, though this just between you and me  :mon psst: but I think she does likes being ebil 
:P

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*Finds C*   :mon look:  *high-five*
LOL what's with you and K looking for me. *high 5 back*

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you're so cute.
:yep:  K's cute. When she's not in ebil mode that is...


@ Bishop
The letter  :rofl:


Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: kRisZ on February 15, 2010, 05:07:19 PM
 :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

Will comment tomorrow, my eyelids are dropping  :D


Goodnight  :heart:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: kRisZ on February 22, 2010, 04:34:38 PM
NO COMMENTS' REPLY my connection's acting up atm




UPDATE 24



The wind was calm. The water was crystal clear. The surrounding was peaceful and tranquil. Wearing huge sunglasses and a white dotted maya blue bikini, Ai was on a folding beach chair enjoying the full comfort and rest it provides while lovingly watching her Risa who’s in the water. The short haired girl was a few meters away from the shoreline, competing in freestyle swimming with her buddy Eri.


“Here” Sayumi handed Ai her Piña colada before taking her seat next to Ai’s. The two set of couples were at a secluded resort, relaxing at a beach of soft sparkling white sand elegantly fringed by palm trees. The two cops were given a three-day vacation leave to replenish their energy after the man who attacked Ai was found dead inside an abandoned warehouse.


“Those two are like kids when they’re together” shaking her head whilst smiling, Sayumi started the conversation. “They’ve been like that since the day I met them, playing like they are little kids whenever possible.” the Bunny in white bikini continued.


Ai only smiled as she listened intently while still watching the two, who were splashing some water at each other.


“So, what do you do for a living?” Sayu inquired the silent Ai.


“I’m a novelist”


“Really? How nice!”


“Hey! You two! You coming or what!?” shouted Risa while trying to dodge Eri’s water attacks but failed miserably.


When the two women didn’t move, Risa gave Eri a signal and they marched toward the two grinning ladies wearing their blank faces. The two cops carried their partners, bridal style, walked back into the sea and threw the two simultaneously into the water. Before the two thrown ladies could even stand properly on their two feet, they received non-stop water attacks from the two laughing cops.


But the flying water brought to an end when their targets remained motionless despite the water attacks they had received. The two aggressors stopped and prepared themselves for any retaliation from the two glaring ladies. Risa and Eri exchanged worried looks when the two stayed still and spoke nothing. Without opening their mouth for their next move, the two cops ran away in opposite directions and left their partners rooted in the water.


Moments later they were being chased by their respective partners. Sayu being slow was left far behind by the fast running Eri. While Risa, on the other hand, was not that far from her pursuer. Risa let out high pitched squeaks when she looked back and saw the smiling Ai so close behind. When Ai grabbed a hold of her Risa, she tripped and toppled over the cop, making them roll on the soft white sand.


Giggling, the two continued to roll over the sand with their bodies clung together in an affectionate embrace.  But their giggles subsided when the short haired girl decided to end their play when she was already on top of Ai. Staring sweetly while gingerly running her hand on Ai’s face, she smiled. Ai stayed quiet but her hands clung on Risa’s slender waist, waiting for Risa’s next move.


Risa watched Ai’s enticing feature inch by inch. Clearly, she was captivated by the natural beauty under her. Her long silky hair, her peeking ears, her perfect tone skin, her just right nose and her deep brown eyes which definitely bewitched her every time. “You’re so beautiful” Risa whispered with a trace of affection in her eyes.


With her darkened eyes, the younger gently nuzzled her nose to and fro against the older, lightly brushing their lips as well in the process. After a while and satisfied with her action, Risa retreated a little and stared deeply into the dark brown orbs in front of her. She then pressed a long and adoring kiss on Ai’s forehead before settling down comfortably on Ai’s neck. They stayed in that position for a little while, enjoying the warmth each of them gave off to one another.


Above the two was a brilliant red sunset fading into a bruised purple, adding a little romance to the already romantic atmosphere the two shared.



 :D




:onioncheer:  Rock on   :onioncheer:    JPHiP   :rockon:   :hipheart:   :rockon:   :hipheart:   :rockon:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: amEthystx on February 22, 2010, 04:45:04 PM
XD FIRST!

Fluff!  :wub: :wub:

Makes me think or the resort i went too XD

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Wearing huge sunglasses and a white dotted maya blue bikini,
- Hmmm...  :yep: huge sunglasses is of good use at a beach... XD

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Sayu being slow was left far behind by the fast running Eri.
XD What happened to them after that? :P

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Risa let out high pitched squeaks when she looked back and saw the smiling Ai so close behind.
-  :rofl:

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Above the two was a brilliant red sunset fading into a bruised purple, adding a little romance to the already romantic atmosphere the two shared.
  :wub: :wub:

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
Post by: kRisZ on February 22, 2010, 04:54:12 PM
^
Yeah, like gawking at those people in bikini unnoticed  :twisted:   :lol:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
Post by: Swtme03 on February 22, 2010, 06:07:25 PM
YAAY!! UPDATES!!

My heart is all doki doki for this chapter!  :heart:
I couldn't stop saying "awwwWWWWW!!" in my head  :lol:

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The two cops were given a three-day vacation leave to replenish their energy after the man who attacked Ai was found dead inside an abandoned warehouse.
:mon wtf:
Wasn't expecting THAT!

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
Post by: Hart on February 22, 2010, 06:57:56 PM
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The two cops were given a three-day vacation leave to replenish their energy after the man who attacked Ai was found dead inside an abandoned warehouse.

Wait a minute.....wasn't that Tsunku?  :?
'Cuz if it was, I had a feeling that he would be the one to end up dead.
Of course that doesn't mean that the killings will end....

If I know K's ebil mind, which I hope I don't for all our sakes, she's giving us a false sense of peace (i.e. all this TakaGaki fluff) until droping a huge atomic bomb that will make most of us, except me, go 'WTF?'

As much as I :heart: bikini-clad TakaGaki making out on the sand, I would imagine that would be uncomfortable IRL.
All that sand getting everywhere.........in certain areas........
Uh, what was I saying again? :huhuh

*re-reads chapter carefully*
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“I’m a novelist”
This feels oddly familiar.....
Like a movie I once saw long ago.....
What are you thinking, K?
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
Post by: kuro808 on February 22, 2010, 08:24:27 PM
last sentence was just the clincher,  :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
Post by: gab98 on February 23, 2010, 07:34:11 AM
last sentence was just the clincher,  :wub: :wub:


ohh yeah jajaja i agree , very sweet  :heart:

Thanks for this  :bow:

So...and Eri-sayu? lol They got lost...in the beach... :wub: my mind is working XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
Post by: jenmoshka on February 23, 2010, 10:23:45 AM
I just finished reading through your entire story and I must say that I love it, Gaki-cop = utter hottness  :drool: and Ai = :heart: XD  I want moreeee!   :wub:  Good job! And I will be watching for your next update!!  :grin:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 23, 2010, 12:57:02 PM
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while lovingly watching her Risa who’s in the water.
:twothumbs

They were given vacation days? Where do I sign up for Yuko’s troop?  XD

Well, it’s fun to play like little kids  :D

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“I’m a novelist”
Oh, didn’t see that one coming.

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The two cops carried their partners, bridal style, walked back into the sea and threw the two simultaneously into the water.
:rockon:

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Without opening their mouth for their next move, the two cops ran away in opposite directions
:lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
Post by: alwaysYou on February 23, 2010, 01:08:09 PM
just a short comment, i'm sick and feeling tired now..sorry

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The two cops carried their partners, bridal style, walked back into the sea and threw the two simultaneously into the water.
doesnt gakisan know that aichan is scared of water..
opps, that is reality.. :lol: (alo hello 3)

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Sayu being slow was left far behind by the fast running Eri.
the only turtle that run faster then a rabbit

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“You’re so beautiful” Risa whispered with a trace of affection in her eyes.
:wub:
control gakisan!!!
you in the public!!!

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With her darkened eyes, the younger gently nuzzled her nose to and fro against the older, lightly brushing their lips as well in the process.
favorite line..so sweet and lovely

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
Post by: badsaints on February 23, 2010, 02:07:20 PM
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The two cops were given a three-day vacation leave to replenish their energy after the man who attacked Ai was found dead inside an abandoned warehouse.
Ehh a dead man in the warehouse (even if he's allegedly a criminal) and they get 3 days off? What happened to investigating the murder?

Aww TakaGaki is so cute :wub: :wub: :wub:


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Wearing huge sunglasses and a white dotted maya blue bikini,
- Hmmm...  :yep: huge sunglasses is of good use at a beach... XD
Shhhh....don't give the secret away :lol:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
Post by: kRisZ on February 23, 2010, 05:19:40 PM
Replies only  :P

Hart
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A special Valentine's Day gift K - :monk gboy: (and a box of :JD:.  :P)
lol   :JD:.   Thank you  :kneelbow:



baddie
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*stares @ Sticky* So you're the culprit! :angry:
:yep:  XD

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Happy Chinese New Year! & Happy Valentine/Friendship Day!!! :yossi:
This is very late but  :kneelbow:


Trey-trey
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:depressed: My predictions never fail... :cry:
:twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:

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Ok, I'll kill you if you insist... :twisted: :twisted: XD I just have to smash you with the sequoia :kekeke:
O!M!G!  :scared:  :err:  :gyaaah:

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My cuteness it's not the problem... :cry: It's your ebilness... :cry: :cry:
XD  XD  XD

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XD At last... :farofflook: But I have the feeling that something huge is gonna happen... And I'm psychic... XD XD XD
:pimp:

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Well, happy V-day even if I think that this is just a day of commercialism... :bigdeal: XD
lolz  :heart:



C
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It's okay  ;)  it's quite funny actually and I'm like that irl  :sweatdrop:
Yeah.?.  :w00t:  How cute  :inlove:

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Oh I like that  XD
You do?
I'm not sure anymore  :D

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Awww :monk gboy:  (since you said you like it) you shoulda stop being ebil K
:mon whimper:

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Somehow reading that just makes me wanna sigh... XD
You love Korean drama too.?.  :D

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Well, it's kinda hard to pry your eyes from a Korean drama movie.
One reason - to read the subtitles  :P

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Touche.

Yay!

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Wait, Ame --> Ame? (that's confusing lol)
I'm sure by now you know who Ame is already :D



S!hu!
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i also want to know.. :lol:
:lol:

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nehz, i just beginner.. 8)
a Pro beginner  :yep:  XD

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:on slopkiss:
(it look disgusting :nervous :lol:)
Damn...  :lol:  S!hu!  XD

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cause you are pervert..so you wont think properly..XD
Arg.  :fainted:

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that my aichan.. :wub:
focus focus and still focus
True  :D

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no no, you can come to me anytime.. 8)
lol

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nice one!!! :lol:
Yeah.?.  :D

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i definitely wont move in bit by bit if aichan is infront of me!
Oh Dear  :lol:  pervert  :P

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:wub:  :oops:
just a simple action, make me go  :drool: :oops:
LOL
i bet  :twisted:   XD

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aichan still have the mindset that gakisan "rape" her the last time..XD XD
Well Risa did not say anything about it so yeah  XD

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somehow, i wanna ask for a full detail perv..LOL!!..
nehz..no, i dont want...
i'm not pervert.. :lol: :lol:
:shocked

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HAPPY V V  DAY TO YOU!
Double V  :D



LovelyGaki
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Yay!  :twothumbs TakaGaki Update :heart:
:D  :kneelbow:

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Happi Valentine's Day~  :wub:
♥(人´∀`*)
:heart:



gab98
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really hot XD and sweet
Yeah.?.  :D  :kneelbow:

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Happy Valentine's Day!! :heart:
:heart:

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And thank you for this :shakeit:
No sweat  :shakeit:



Swtme03
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KYA!  :mon blood:
my favorite update so far  :mon inluv:
Yay!  :kneelbow:

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I'm wondering if we'll get to see how this fire started  :mon misch:
It couldn't just be from wandering hands  :mon evillaff:
XD  XD  XD

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EDIT: Just thought about it and maybe it can O_O enough friction could....:mon blood: :imdead:
:shocked  :mon blood:



FaqU
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@ Treykun: How could you possibly say I am ebil??? Just because I have a natural grin that makes me ebil doesn't mean I am ebil  :gyaaah: 
Yay! Me wanna see that ebil grin  :on woohoo:

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@ K: So you like being called ebil eh?  :mon misch: you're so cute. (Thanks to C's heads up about that)
:dizzy:

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About the fic, should I expect details on the last scene  :on bleed:??? DO IT!!!!! YOU KNOW YOU WANT IT!!!!!!!  :on_hot:
:shocked



Bishop NI
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:OMG:  SLANDER SLANDER!
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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Dear K:

It has come to my attention that you have made an unauthorized use of my copyrighted username "amEthystx" in the preparation of a work. I have reserved all rights in my username, first published in 05 Feb 2009 in JPH!P. Your work entitled "Whispering Words Unsaid", the character, "Ame" is essentially hinting my username.

As you neither asked for nor received permission to use the username, I believe you have willfully infringed my rights under 17 U.S.C. Section 101 et seq. and could be liable for statutory damages as high as 100 sessions of Trey-trey whole body hair super glue removal treatment, C's Baseball bat smacking as well as Baby Sticky Tree's butt spanking as set forth in Section 504(c)(2) therein.

Very truly yours,

amEthystx
:on lol:  :on lol:  :on lol:  I so  :heart: you BB NI  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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- *Points at the above letter and pouts.....* But at least... i got to kiss Risa and Eri... Didn;t I? XD
I remember you asked for it  :P

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First remembered but second time in Ai’s mind, made her calm and content.
- LOL~ Did Risa still think that Ai-chan raped her? i don't remember Ai-chan talking about it... or did she?! Getting old here.... *sighs*
Quick summary: Nothing happened during their first naked meeting (at the hotel), the AC broke down and so they were nekid  :drool:  XD  but Risa did not bother explaining it to Ai, so in Ai's mind it's their second  :drool:  XD yeah  :P



C
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What I meant is that she liked that smiley, though this just between you and me  :mon psst: but I think she does likes being ebil 
:P
:fainted:

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LOL what's with you and K looking for me. *high 5 back*
You're popular, that's why  :D

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:yep:  K's cute. When she's not in ebil mode that is...
:shocked

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@ Bishop
The letter  :rofl:
Indeed  :rofl:
Oh  :bingo: BB NI can now be translated as Brilliant Bishop NI  :w00t:



Bishop NI
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Makes me think or the resort i went too XD
:D

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XD What happened to them after that? :P
Yeah, I forgot about them  XD damn  :lol:

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Above the two was a brilliant red sunset fading into a bruised purple, adding a little romance to the already romantic atmosphere the two shared.
  :wub: :wub:
:love:



Swtme03
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My heart is all doki doki for this chapter!  :heart:
I couldn't stop saying "awwwWWWWW!!" in my head  :lol:
Cool  :D

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:mon wtf:
Wasn't expecting THAT!
Good  :lol:



Hart
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Wait a minute.....wasn't that Tsunku?  :?
:yep:

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Of course that doesn't mean that the killings will end....
:glasses:

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If I know K's ebil mind, which I hope I don't for all our sakes, she's giving us a false sense of peace (i.e. all this TakaGaki fluff) until droping a huge atomic bomb that will make most of us, except me, go 'WTF?'
:pimp:  :D

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As much as I :heart: bikini-clad TakaGaki making out on the sand, I would imagine that would be uncomfortable IRL.
All that sand getting everywhere.........in certain areas........
Uh, what was I saying again? :huhuh
They did nothing but lay there  :P

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“I’m a novelist”
This feels oddly familiar.....
Yeah.?.

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Like a movie I once saw long ago.....
What are you thinking, K?
Ummm... what movie was that.?.



kurosawa87
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ast sentence was just the clincher,  :wub: :wub:
:heart:  :heart:



gab98
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last sentence was just the clincher,  :wub: :wub:


ohh yeah jajaja i agree , very sweet  :heart:
:heart:  :heart:

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Thanks for this  :bow:
Thank you for reading  :love:

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So...and Eri-sayu? lol They got lost...in the beach... :wub: my mind is working XD
:lol:  :lol:  :lol: Yeah  XD just imagine it that way  XD



jenmoshka
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I just finished reading through your entire story and I must say that I love it, Gaki-cop = utter hottness  :drool: and Ai = :heart: XD  I want moreeee!   :wub:  Good job! And I will be watching for your next update!!  :grin:
Yay! New reader   :mon heh:  :mon hi:  :kneelbow:



C
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while lovingly watching her Risa who’s in the water.
:twothumbs
Possession  :D

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They were given vacation days? Where do I sign up for Yuko’s troop?  XD
I don't know  :P

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Well, it’s fun to play like little kids  :D
Yeah  XD oh it reminds me of something from our convo a few days ago... ummm I'll just PM it  :P

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“I’m a novelist”
Oh, didn’t see that one coming.
Me too.?.  :D  Just kidding, that was part of the original plan but it gave me a hard time inserting that one  XD

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:rockon:
:rockon:

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:lol:
glad that made you  :lol:



AABatt
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just a short comment, i'm sick and feeling tired now..sorry
Yeah, I know and I still can see you online as I type this comment  :roll: go rest already S!hu!

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doesnt gakisan know that aichan is scared of water..
opps, that is reality.. :lol: (alo hello 3)
Yeah  XD Made her even cuter  :love:

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the only turtle that run faster then a rabbit
True  :lol:

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:wub:
control gakisan!!!
you in the public!!!
XD Relax  :P

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favorite line..so sweet and lovely
Yeah.?.  :love:



baddie
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Ehh a dead man in the warehouse (even if he's allegedly a criminal) and they get 3 days off? What happened to investigating the murder?
Ummm... No comment  XD

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Aww TakaGaki is so cute :wub: :wub: :wub:
:yep:  :love: 

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Shhhh....don't give the secret away :lol:
Oh, was it a top secret.?.  XD




SORRY PEOPLE... I find perv stories very educational but I can't make one Gomen  :kneelbow:  Maybe some other time  :D



Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
Post by: Hart on February 23, 2010, 06:08:32 PM
K
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They did nothing but lay there
True. But before that lovely make-out session they were rolling around in the sand. That sand will get stuck in certain areas. :yep:
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.....When Ai grabbed a hold of her Risa, she tripped and toppled over the cop, making them roll on the soft white sand.


Giggling, the two continued to roll over the sand with their bodies clung together in an affectionate embrace.  But their giggles subsided when the short haired girl decided to end their play when she was already on top of Ai. Staring sweetly while gingerly running her hand on Ai’s face, she smiled. Ai stayed quiet but her hands clung on Risa’s slender waist, waiting for Risa’s next move.
I rest my case. :mon geek:

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Ummm... what movie was that?
*mumbles*Basic Instinct (Don't ask me what it's about. I want to forget that I ever watched it. *shudders*)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
Post by: Haruka on February 23, 2010, 06:40:40 PM
I dont care xD

I will wait for the perv one xD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 23, 2010, 06:45:28 PM
@ K
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Yeah.?.  :w00t:  How cute  :inlove:
Not lame?  :nervous

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Oh I like that  XD
You do?
I'm not sure anymore  :D
Eh, why?

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:mon whimper:
No, no, no, don't give that kind of look you ebil! LOL

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You love Korean drama too.?.  :D
Well, I watch Asian dramas on tv (occasionally on dvd too) so yeah but I don't really watch tv that much anymore.

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One reason - to read the subtitles  :P
XD  true

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I'm sure by now you know who Ame is already :D
:yep:  :lol:

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What I meant is that she liked that smiley, though this just between you and me  :mon psst: but I think she does likes being ebil  
:P
:fainted:
Lol admit it K, you're ebil powered  XD  :P

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You're popular, that's why  :D
I hope not lol

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:yep:  K's cute. When she's not in ebil mode that is...
:shocked
Was that good or bad reaction?

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Oh  :bingo: BB NI can now be translated as Brilliant Bishop NI  :w00t:
:thumbsup

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They were given vacation days? Where do I sign up for Yuko’s troop?  XD
I don't know  :P
Darn, it'd be awesome working under Chief Nakazawa  :lol:

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Yeah  XD oh it reminds me of something from our convo a few days ago... ummm I'll just PM it  :P
Alrighty ;)

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I find perv stories very educational
That's one interesting word  XD

Edit:  :kneelbow:  (I think you know why)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
Post by: kRisZ on February 27, 2010, 03:52:47 PM
Hart
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I rest my case. :mon geek:
lol Okay  :P

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*mumbles*Basic Instinct (Don't ask me what it's about. I want to forget that I ever watched it. *shudders*)
:lol:  :lol:  :lol: Was it not that good?  XD I haven't watch that one yet  :P



Haruka
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I dont care xD

I will wait for the perv one xD
lol okay  :D



C
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Not lame?  :nervous
Nope  :yep:  I can't recall  a thing that you became lame  :love:

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Eh, why?
Lemme think  :D

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No, no, no, don't give that kind of look you ebil! LOL
Arg.  :depressed:

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Well, I watch Asian dramas on tv (occasionally on dvd too) so yeah but I don't really watch tv that much anymore.
Why do I get a feeling that we are neighbors.?. Hmmmm... *gets binocular*  :mon look:

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Lol admit it K, you're ebil powered  XD  :P
:mon huh2:

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Was that good or bad reaction?
in between  XD

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Darn, it'd be awesome working under Chief Nakazawa  :lol:
I'm sure  :D

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I find perv stories very educational
That's one interesting word  XD
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  but yeah, they are very educational especially to people like me  :mon sweat:

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Edit:  :kneelbow:  (I think you know why)
lol  :kneelbow:





UPDATE 25



The atmosphere was lovely. A band was at a corner, serenading every guest with their mellow songs, trying to charm everyone with the music they’re playing. In the middle was an open campfire, making the ambiance even more exquisite and romantic. The food was served fresh and mouth watering, for certain would satisfy the craving of each diner.


From one of the tables sat the four, dining in comfort except Sayumi who looked restless. She was fidgeting the whole time. Her food was barely touched. Eri who was sitting beside her noticed the discomfort, and so she kept asking what’s wrong but kept receiving an ‘it’s nothing’ answer. Sayumi would only stare at either Risa or Ai who were sitting across them. And the stare didn’t stay unnoticed by Risa as well. Just like from Eri, she received countless questions from Risa of what’s bugging her and she would only reply with a force smile.


Ai, on the other hand, did not pay any attention. She looked totally engrossed in what she was doing, eating. She was the only person who did not ask anything, until the two cops decided to leave the two and headed to the bar.


“Spill it out” looking into Sayu's eyes, Ai said flatly when Risa and Eri were already out of hearing range.


“The man earlier said you murdered her daughter.” Sayu responded without blinking an eye, suppressing her fear inside and silently hoping that it won’t get noticed.


“And you believed in his fabricated story?”


“Should I?”


“It’s your call.”


“Okay, look, I need to hear it from you that those were lies.”


“The man lost his one and only daughter which happens to be my girlfriend...” the last word somewhat choked Ai and it made her voice quiver a bit, but she continued “... what do you expect?” Sayu did not say anything but her gaze was still at Ai’s, waiting for a more thorough explanation.


With a quivering voice Ai continued “Her father found out that her daughter was having an affair with a girl, who happens to be me, and so he strictly forbade her daughter to meet me and ordered me to never see her daughter ever again. But her daughter was stubborn. One day she ran away from home and decided to live in with me. And in order to stay out from his father’s radar, we moved into a new place and started our new life in there, together.” Inhaling a mouthful of air she paused but still continued her untold story, even to Risa, after a while.


“We had our share of ups and downs just like any other couples do. We fought but we made up easily. Whenever we fight one of us, most of the time it was her, will leave the house to cool down and when she comes back everything’s back to normal. That was how we were. Until one day, after our fight she left but did not return home. I was waiting for two days but she never showed up that’s when I reported her missing and that’s when her father found out and cursed me to death. And the cursing continued for another twelve months, we both hated each other but we both needed each other for information and news.” Gulping down the lump that was building inside her throat was hard but holding back her tears was even harder, and so Ai took her untouched wine from the table and emptied it in one go.


“He said you murdered her...”


“If I did, why am I not inside a prison cell?”


“You fled..?” unsure of what to say, Sayumi uttered


“Right and I’ll become wanted for good” was Ai’s sarcastic reply.


“Her disappearance was a big shock to us but it ain’t her to go missing in action for months. And so I left that place after a year, when the investigation turned vague, to properly grieve. His loss was my loss too. I loved her more than her father could imagine. Was that hard to ask? She was my life... Reina was my life” after mentioning her name, Ai finally broke down and sobbed.


Teary eyed, Sayumi slowly moved closer to the crying Ai. Not quite sure of what to do, she lightly patted the girl’s back who hid her crying face using both of her hands whilst giving out a muffled cry. Ai remained in her position, her shoulders continued to tremble and her cry became even louder with each passing second and so Sayu embraced the sobbing Ai who in turn hugged her back and her cry became more audible. Caressing Ai’s back to comfort her, Sayu lent her shoulders for Ai to cry on.


“Shhhh, it’s okay” was all Sayu could say.




Freshly written with alcohol running me viens  :grin:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 25~2/27)
Post by: alwaysYou on February 27, 2010, 04:22:13 PM
reina is still alive?!!
i hope so!!! :cow:
yet, if reina is still alive..
mean..TakaGaki might be hmmmmmmmmmmm(<-i just couldnt find a word.. :lol:)

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The man earlier said you murdered her daughter.”
this line scared me!!!
i thought aichan is really a killer.. :nervous

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She was my life... Reina was my life
:cry: :(
i wanna AiReina back..
But, arrr..my takagaki..
arrr..stupid kR.. :lol:

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Caressing Ai’s back to comfort her, Sayu lent her shoulders for Ai to cry on.
faster come in!!!
gakikame!!!
XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 25~2/27)
Post by: Hart on February 27, 2010, 06:10:49 PM
So Reina might still be alive....just as what I assumed long ago...but why did she disappear, that is if Ai is telling the truth?
Why doesn't the fact that Reina could be alive make me happy a little bit? :?
For a moment I thought Tsunku was Reina's father, but I ruled that out after skimming through past updates...unless I missed something.
*need to review my notes to see if I overlooked any clues*

Looks like the countdown to disaster has already started.
I'm looking forward to seeing all those shocked and pissed-off comments in the near future. :twisted:

K
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:lol:  :lol:  :lol: Was it not that good?  XD I haven't watch that one yet  :P
It was decent, despite a whole lot of racy scenes. IMO it was obvious who the killer was from the beginning.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 25~2/27)
Post by: badsaints on February 28, 2010, 03:02:48 PM
Oh crap! Reina's dad was there? How did he knew Ai's group was relaxing there? Weird stalker! Wait a minute...don't tell me he's the wanted murderer?!

I still think Reina is not dead and she's out there somewhere (over the rainbow? :lol: Look at how the fanfics have been influencing me) Why do I get the feeling you are going to drop the bomb on us soon :twisted:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 25~2/27)
Post by: amEthystx on February 28, 2010, 03:56:51 PM
 :mon cweepy: Hello there! I have been lurking for sometime already... XD and i got myself another new nickname! lol

REINAaaaaaaaaaaaa~ WHere have you been to?!

*Hits Reina's Dad with durian shell* Go away!

Now that Tsunku is dead.... (I almost forgot he is the murderer..LOL) So.... REINA is coming back so that the story can continue? IF not...then it will be a big

THE END



isn't it? :(


*goes back to hiding*



Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 25~2/27)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 28, 2010, 07:15:24 PM
@ K

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Nope  :yep:  I can't recall  a thing that you became lame  :love:
:)  You're one funny person (read: ebil pink bunny) and I mean it in a good way  :yep:

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Lemme think  :D
The alcohol makes you slow?

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Arg.  :depressed:
:mon sweat:  I'm making you go 'arg' a lot, aren't I?

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Why do I get a feeling that we are neighbors.?. Hmmmm... *gets binocular*  :mon look:
*Taps K's shoulder* I'm behind you  :mon cweepy:

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:mon huh2:
Admit.

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in between  XD
XD  Good answer.

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Darn, it'd be awesome working under Chief Nakazawa  :lol:
I'm sure  :D
Though I'd become useless if I work for her, I'd probably just wasting time admiring her from my desk like this -->  :whistle: and singing "My boss is hot, life is great. What more could I want? Oh...just her heart."
(I'm totally kidding about the singing part and please excuse the lame song, my sanity is out of reach at the moment).

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:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  but yeah, they are very educational especially to people like me  :mon sweat:
Well...I guess it's kinda educational for me too.


Campfire!  :on woohoo:

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“You fled..?” unsure of what to say, Sayumi uttered
:lol:  the bunny is funny just like you  :P

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She was my life... Reina was my life
Now it's Risa?   XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 25~2/27)
Post by: Swtme03 on March 01, 2010, 05:35:09 AM
OMG!!  :panic:
This chapter totally caught me off guard!
It went from happy time at the beach to Aichan crying  :shocked
lol I don't really know what to say about it....except...

REINA IS MISSING!!! CALL THE FBI!!  :panic:
but please keep TakaGaki together when they find her  :roll:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 25~2/27)
Post by: kRisZ on March 01, 2010, 05:12:03 PM
S!hu!
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reina is still alive?!!
i hope so!!! :cow:
yet, if reina is still alive..
mean..TakaGaki might be hmmmmmmmmmmm(<-i just couldnt find a word.. :lol:)
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm  :P

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this line scared me!!!
O0

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She was my life... Reina was my life
:cry: :(
:cry:  *cries with AABatt*  :cry:

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i wanna AiReina back..
But, arrr..my takagaki..
:roll:

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arrr..stupid kR..
:scared:  :err:  :depressed:  :gyaaah:  :on speedy:

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faster come in!!!
gakikame!!!
XD
XD



Hart
I hope my posted update will answer some of your questions  :D

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Looks like the countdown to disaster has already started.
I'm looking forward to seeing all those shocked and pissed-off comments in the near future. :twisted:
XD  XD  XD
 
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It was decent, despite a whole lot of racy scenes. IMO it was obvious who the killer was from the beginning.
Ah, okay  :D



baddie
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Oh crap! Reina's dad was there? How did he knew Ai's group was relaxing there? Weird stalker! Wait a minute...don't tell me he's the wanted murderer?!
Okay, I won't tell  :P  XD

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I still think Reina is not dead and she's out there somewhere (over the rainbow? :lol: Look at how the fanfics have been influencing me) Why do I get the feeling you are going to drop the bomb on us soon :twisted:
*whistles innocently*



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:mon cweepy: Hello there! I have been lurking for sometime already... XD
:roll:  :P

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and i got myself another new nickname! lol
:yep:

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REINAaaaaaaaaaaaa~ WHere have you been to?!
Somewhere over the rainbow  XD

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*Hits Reina's Dad with durian shell* Go away!
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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Now that Tsunku is dead.... (I almost forgot he is the murderer..LOL) So.... REINA is coming back so that the story can continue? IF not...then it will be a big

THE END
:mon freeze:

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isn't it? :(
:pimp:

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*goes back to hiding*
lol



C
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:)  You're one funny person (read: ebil pink bunny) and I mean it in a good way  :yep:
:mon corn:

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The alcohol makes you slow?
I noticed  XD

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:mon sweat:  I'm making you go 'arg' a lot, aren't I?
Umm... Arg.  :grin:

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*Taps K's shoulder* I'm behind you  :mon cweepy:
*looks behind... I swear someone did tap me... are you a ghost.?!.  :mon scare:

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Admit.
:mon corn:

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XD  Good answer.
:D

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Though I'd become useless if I work for her, I'd probably just wasting time admiring her from my desk like this -->  :whistle: and singing "My boss is hot, life is great. What more could I want? Oh...just her heart."
(I'm totally kidding about the singing part and please excuse the lame song, my sanity is out of reach at the moment).
and her on my bed... naked  :twisted:

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Well...I guess it's kinda educational for me too.
Yeah.?.  :D

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:lol:  the bunny is funny just like you  :P
:mon money:

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Now it's Risa?   XD
:pimp:



Swtme03
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OMG!!  :panic:
:lol:

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lol I don't really know what to say about it....except...

REINA IS MISSING!!! CALL THE FBI!!  :panic:
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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but please keep TakaGaki together when they find her  :roll:
:)





UPDATE



Footprints in the white silky sand ended right beside the hundred meters long wooded planks that bridged the twenty-five square meter cemented platform from the shoreline. Two hands intertwined gently but tightly at the same time as they walked hand in hand towards the cemented area. No one spoke. Holding hands was all they needed to feel the comfort they wanted.


On the concrete platform was a long and large wooden bench that faced the vast sea. Enjoying the calm sea breeze, the glistening waves as the moon reflected on each tide, and the silence the night was giving off, they stopped and sat on the bench peacefully. It was past midnight, the surrounding was quiet except for the sound of the waves.


“Make love to me” was the first line that broke the silence. The plea was sad and lusty at the same time. Ai’s free hand travelled smoothly on Risa’s face as she uttered her request. The younger knew something’s bothering her Ai but she just waited for Ai to open up to her.


No words were said after that. Risa raised their intertwined hands and trailed kisses on Ai’s soft hand. Her kisses moved upward, slowly trailing on her lover’s slender arms, until her lips met Ai’s sweet scented shoulders. Lightly brushing her lips on the bare shoulders, her other hand travelled toward the dress’s strap, tugged it until it fell, exposing her partner’s half upper torso. Right then and there, Risa cupped the almost exposed mold, extracting softened moans from the older. Her lips moved upward whilst her left hand continued to knead. Tracing soft kisses on Ai’s jaw line, the older raised her free hand and cupped Risa’s face. She guided it to meet her eagerly awaiting lips. Slowly, Risa inched forward, breathing the other’s breath and staring longingly at the girl’s eyes which stared back at her. A hint of sadness was in there, making Risa all the more eager to make Ai forget what’s making her feel that way. Half closing her eyes, she moved and bit Ai’s lower lip gently. After a few seconds she retreated a little and stared again at her lover’s face. Ai’s eyes slowly opened when she sensed Risa’s eyes on her. The older then moved and kissed Risa’s forehead and trailed her kisses down on Risa’s nose and finally on her lips. They took it slow, kissing gently whilst their hands continued to intertwine.


Guiding the older to lay on the wooden bench, Risa did not break their kiss. Tongue started to move and clash as the kiss deepened. Throaty moans started to sound as the kiss intensified and it became even louder when Risa slipped her left hand under Ai’s undergarment that wrapped her bust. Unclasping the hindrance, she left Ai’s lips and headed downward and trailed moist kisses on the skin that was exposed. Ai continued to give off muffled moans, unclasping their intertwined hands, she buried her fingers in Risa’s hair. Their delicate touching and kissing continued until they both met their peak and their moans became unrestricted when both reached the heavens at the same time.


Risa dropped her body on Ai’s and nuzzled her face on her lover’s neck. Neither of them spoke, both tried to catch their own breath until the younger felt some moisture from the woman’s face.


“Why are you crying?”


“I’m just happy”


“From now onwards, I’ll try my very best to make you happy without these tears” wiping Ai’s tears away, Risa voiced her first promise to Ai. “Sound good?”


~~~


At one of the covered room was an unexpected meeting. Nakazawa arrived with a few police officers from their office and a few from the other town. Upon Eri’s request, Sayu sat at a corner, watching the meeting as it progressed.


“My name is Linlin” after exchanging the usual polite pleasantries, she continued and presided the meeting. “Mr. Makoto here’s the father of Takahashi Ai’s missing girlfriend” started the investigator from the neighboring town while pointing at the mushroom styled hair man.


“Prior to her disappearance was a couple of psycho-killings which eventually landed on the cold case section due to lack of evidence and no traces were found. Coincidence or not, the manner of killing was the same with the case you have in your jurisdiction. The news reached to me only yesterday since I was out of the country, dealing with another case. After hearing the information, I went right away to your chief Nakazawa and coordinated with her. And coincidence or not, your case started shortly after Takahashi Ai moved in your area. After acquiring a search warrant from the judge, Ai’s home was searched yesterday afternoon and we found two major evidences, the blue rope that matched the victims’ and a stun gun in her possession. Coincidence or not, Mr. Makoto here phoned me a few hours ago, checking for any progress of his daughter’s case, and told me he saw Takahashi Ai in this resort. That’s why we are here”


“Here’s what we want you to do Kamei” Nakazawa faced her kouhai. “The suspect is dangerous and should not be dealt lightly. So, what we are going to do is you will get Niigaki without getting any suspicions and we’ll move from there. Our men reported that the suspect was with Niigaki at the moment.”


~~~


It was already civil dawn. Waiting for the sunrise, the two was comfortably sitting on the wooden chair that witnessed their previous love act. The two love birds were snuggling happily into one another. Risa wrapped her arms around the older while Ai was comfortably leaning in the younger’s body and placing her arms above Risa’s, giving off warmth to each other as the wind became colder and stronger. The younger nestled her head on Ai’s neck while trying to sing a song for Ai.

...
♪ Oh girl ♪
♪ You stand by me ♪
♪ I’m forever yours ♪
♪ Faithfully ♪


“Gaki-han, can I talk to you for a sec?” Eri shouted from a few meters distance, startling the two.


“Bad timing Kame!”


“I know, but it can’t wait”


“...”


“Gaki-han” called Eri when the girl did not respond


“For a minute! Geezz!” Risa was about to let go of Ai when the older asked her a question out of the blue.


“Do you believe that every person deserves a second chance?”


“Huh? Why?”


“Just answer me”


“Gaki-han!”


“Wait!” turning her head around to meet her buddy’s face, she shouted back, clearly annoyed.


“I do. Why? What’s this all about?”


“That’s all I wanna hear. You can go now” smiling, she kissed Risa on the cheek and stood up to make way for Risa.


“Risa!”


“I’m coming!”


The short haired cop was on her feet when Ai moved closer and whispered something into her ear, but before she could give her reply, Eri was calling her name again.


“I’ll wait for you Risa, don’t worry, even in our next life” with that said, Risa smiled and walked towards her fidgeting friend.


“You deserve a second chance.” Ai murmured as she looked towards the vast sea. Closing her eyes and without saying a word she jumped into the water just when a massive wave came and splashed onto the concrete.


“AICHAN!” was Eri’s cry when she saw the girl jumped.


Risa looked back and saw no Ai. Her heart raced as she ran back trying to find Ai. She was about to jump into the sea to find her Ai but Eri grabbed and stopped her.


“LET ME GO! I NEED TO FIND HER!”


“It’s not safe!”


Risa managed to free herself from her friend’s grasp and attempted to dive again when Sayu’s voice echoed.


“OMG! Risa, there she is!” pointing at Ai’s protruding hand, Sayu cried and panicked.


Extending her hand to reach Ai’s without waiting for anyone’s help, she’d definitely fell if not for Eri’s strong grasp.


“Ai please” in the verge of breaking down, she mustered all her strength to pull Ai up. And with Sayu’s and their chief’s help, they succeeded on bringing Ai back on the platform.


“Ai...” shaking the limp body while her own tears started to shed, Risa wiped away some blood on Ai’s face that was gushing down from her forehead. She felt helpless when she saw Ai choking from her own blood. She could only stare and wipe it away hoping it will stop.


“Ai, please don’t leave me” was the cop’s plea as the older was grasping for air. Trembling, Risa moved closer and tried to say the words she failed to utter a while ago. With her shaking voice, Risa whispered the words “I love you too Ai... very much” and Ai breathed her last.


Not far from them was a girl slowly walking away from her previous post, leaving her binocular behind, she wiped away some tears that freely flowed.



THE END.




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Thank you everyone for reading my very unorganized story  :kneelbow:  :kneelbow:  :kneelbow: 
Honestly the ending was different from the original plan   XD   but yeah  :D
Writing this story was kind of stressful and fun at the same.  :yep:
Thank you from the bottom of my  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :kneelbow:  :kneelbow:


And YAY! I can now go back to being an Avid Reader  :mon money:  Lots to read  :yep: And I love to read  :heart:  It's one of my stress quenching technique  XD






Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*_*^)p
Post by: kawaii beam on March 01, 2010, 05:28:23 PM
*pops out of rock XD* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

WHY~! WHY~?! POOR AI-CHAN~!!!! POOR RISA~!!!!!! :gyaaah:

great job though X3 and u should write more~! X3
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on March 01, 2010, 05:46:00 PM
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:mon corn:
LOL what kind of reaction is that?

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Umm... Arg.  :grin:
:lol:

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*looks behind... I swear someone did tap me... are you a ghost.?!.  :mon scare:
just your imagination   :on polter:

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:mon corn:
Again, what kind of reaction is that?

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and her on my bed... naked  :twisted:
:roll:  you perv.

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Yeah.?.  :D
Well, not really. I try to avoid it if I could, but when I couldn't, that's when it become educational  XD


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“You deserve a second chance.” Ai murmured as she looked towards the vast sea.
Was Ai thinking about killing Gaki-san at first??

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Not far from them was a girl slowly walking away from her previous post, leaving her binocular behind, she wiped away some tears that freely flowed.
Reina?  :?

I wonder what's Ai's motive for killing those people...

Wait, wait, just to make it clear, Ai was the killer, right? Or am I reading it wrong?

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And YAY! I can now go back to being an Avid Reader
There's still Over Teh BIG FLIRT's Rainbow   XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: Swtme03 on March 02, 2010, 02:35:43 AM
OH...MY...J:AOIHFOEIH:LKJFH:SOIEHF:OEIHF:LDJH:FOIS:IEH:OFIHSJHFOEI:SOIHS:OIFHAIH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :shocked
AICHAN!!! So you DID kill those people!  :bleed eyes: or am I still wrong?  :huhuh

The tears were building up! THE TEARS WERE BUILDING UP!!!  :panic:
And then she throws herself to the sea!!  :fainted:  :imdead:
Poor Risa!!  :gyaaah:

This was such a great story!! I loved ever chapter!!  :yep:
I'm so sad that it ended  :cry:
I hope you write another one!!  :twothumbs

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Not far from them was a girl slowly walking away from her previous post, leaving her binocular behind, she wiped away some tears that freely flowed.

REINA!!!!!!   :panic: :mon slapself:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: YumePouk on March 02, 2010, 02:45:08 AM
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“Make love to me” was the first line that broke the silence. The plea was sad and lusty at the same time. Ai’s free hand travelled smoothly on Risa’s face as she uttered her request. The younger knew something’s bothering her Ai but she just waited for Ai to open up to her.
:wub: :inlove: :inlove:  :on GJ: for TakaGaki

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Risa dropped her body on Ai’s and nuzzled her face on her lover’s neck. Neither of them spoke, both tried to catch their own breath until the younger felt some moisture from the woman’s face.

“Why are you crying?”

“I’m just happy”

“From now onwards, I’ll try my very best to make you happy without these tears” wiping Ai’s tears away, Risa voiced her first promise to Ai. “Sound good?”
Yay yay  :inlove: :inlove:  Don't break that promise.


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“Prior to her disappearance was a couple of psycho-killings which eventually landed on the cold case section due to lack of evidence and no traces were found. Coincidence or not, the manner of killing was the same with the case you have in your jurisdiction. The news reached to me only yesterday since I was out of the country, dealing with another case. After hearing the information, I went right away to your chief Nakazawa and coordinated with her. And coincidence or not, your case started shortly after Takahashi Ai moved in your area. After acquiring a search warrant from the judge, Ai’s home was searched yesterday afternoon and we found two major evidences, the blue rope that matched the victims’ and a stun gun in her possession. Coincidence or not, Mr. Makoto here phoned me a few hours ago, checking for any progress of his daughter’s case, and told me he saw Takahashi Ai in this resort. That’s why we are here”
:on yellcard: No way..............  :on blackhole: Ai-chan.... my... our Ai-chan was the murder :frustrated:  :on voodoo:


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“Ai, please don’t leave me” was the cop’s plea as the older was grasping for air. Trembling, Risa moved closer and tried to say the words she failed to utter a while ago. With her shaking voice, Risa whispered the words “I love you too Ai... very much” and Ai breathed her last.

:mon scare: :mon scare: NNNNNNOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
That couldn't end like that  :fainted: :gyaaah:
Ai-chan~~~~ :mon ref: :tantrum: ........................ Poor Risa........ why that have to happen now?????  :pleeease:


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Not far from them was a girl slowly walking away from her previous post, leaving her binocular behind, she wiped away some tears that freely flowed.
OMG OMG OMG Reina is alive??????
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG that girl is REINA, Right? Right? Right?

Thank you, Thank you so much for this story  :kneelbow:
I really love how you write this story and I really appreciated to follow this story with you and everyone  :farofflook:
I hope I could read other stodry write by you
Keep up your goal ^^
and can't wait to read ur continuation  :hee:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: Hart on March 02, 2010, 04:28:24 AM
*reads all these comments* mwahahaha... :wahaha: *feeds on the despair of these readers* Hmmm...tastes like strawberry pocky. :P

So it was Ai. I expected it was either her or Reina, or maybe some other character (like Makoto had he not been Reina's dad). Looking back it was most likely Ai since the murders were people that she had already met, and it was too much of a coincidence that the murders occured at the same time Ai moved into the town.

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“Make love to me” was the first line that broke the silence. The plea was sad and lusty at the same time. Ai’s free hand travelled smoothly on Risa’s face as she uttered her request. The younger knew something’s bothering her Ai but she just waited for Ai to open up to her.

As hot as that scene was, I knew something bad was gonna happen.

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“Why are you crying?”
Guilty conscience, Ai?

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*meeting w/ Chief Nakazawa, LinLin, Makoto, and Eri*
Yay! LinLin appears. And so is Makoto. I was waiting for him to show up, but I never suspected him to be Reina's dad.

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the two was comfortably sitting on the wooden chair that witnessed their previous love act.
Lucky chair. :lol:

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...Risa was about to let go of Ai when the older asked her a question out of the blue.

“Do you believe that every person deserves a second chance?”
Uh-oh. That doesn't sound good. :huhuh

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“I’ll wait for you Risa, don’t worry, even in our next life”
Here it comes.....

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“You deserve a second chance.” Ai murmured as she looked towards the vast sea. Closing her eyes and without saying a word she jumped into the water just when a massive wave came and splashed onto the concrete.
...and the bomb has exploded. Or did it? (technically Ai was Gaki's second chance, the first being the Gropetastic Miki-sama :rockon:)

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Not far from them was a girl slowly walking away from her previous post, leaving her binocular behind, she wiped away some tears that freely flowed.
Hello Reina. :welcome How nice of you to finally drop by. Hey, whats that in your hands?
*bomb explodes*
*row upon row of TakaGaki worshippers get caught up in the blast*
*me drinking a glass of whiskey at a nearby bar watching the aftermath*
*picks up a broken and scorched kite with the letter C written on it*
*stares at Trey's now hairless legs* (Gomen :kneelbow:)

This was a very interesting story. Thanks K. I enjoyed as much as I enjoyed reading the comments from everyone else. :lol:
Here. Have a bottle of warm sake as a gift for finishing this fic. *gives K warm sake* (Don't worry. There's no poison in it.)
Now that this is over sit back. Relax. Enjoy the view as all these readers wail and cry their eyes out while a few of them try to plot their revenge against you for killing Ai and making her the murderer. Don't worry. I've hired some guards and placed them all over your fortress. I've also added a couple of snipers outside, mounted some lasers, cannons, gatling guns, and missles in case of aerial attacks, fortified the base with layers upon layers of steel and concrete, reinforced the outer walls, installed a panic room, and added nerve gas dispensers in the air ducts. And just to be on the safe side I've secretly hidden a couple of landmines and traps around your fortress in a 1000 meter radius.
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: gab98 on March 02, 2010, 05:01:40 AM
 :shocked  No way!!!!!! ¿Really??? Hontouni????

why you Killed my Ai-chan!!! Why!!!??  :bleed eyes:

Poor Gaki-san!! she love her and awww so sad   :cry:

But the end was really really Unexpected and good!, congratulations   :bow:

then Ai killed Reina? but Reina is a live??? i don't understand this   :?


PD: thanks for the last takagaki scene  :wub:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: rndmnwierd on March 02, 2010, 10:31:11 AM
 :shocked :O
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: amEthystx on March 02, 2010, 03:18:59 PM
 :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG:

WHAT?! So AI-chan is the killer? Then how come Reina is still alive...??

AND AI-chan is DEAD?!!?!? ROAR!!!!

WHY!!!!!????

:(

I'm having tons of questions!.

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And YAY! I can now go back to being an Avid Reader
- LOL.. should i do the same too? hmmmmm~  :mon dunno:

XD

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: Treykun on March 02, 2010, 08:03:14 PM
:mon spit: :mon spit: :mon spit: :mon spit: :mon spit: :mon spit:

WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!

SHE'S THE KILLER?!?!?!?! AND YOU'VE KILLED HER?!?!?!?!?! :stoned:

Well, if Reina's still alive I don't care about the other characters... Take that! XD

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I'm having tons of questions!.

Same here! So come and explain yourself before I start to regret that I didn't kill you! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

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And YAY! I can now go back to being an Avid Reader
There's still Over Teh BIG FLIRT's Rainbow XD 

:rofl: That's the style C!  XD *Insert Nelson Muntz's laugh here* :P
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: kRisZ on March 03, 2010, 04:24:24 AM
I love reading everyone's reactions  :grin:  :grin:  :grin:

I'll try to be here tonight for replies :D   and to answer some of your questions  :twisted:



OMG I just noticed new emoticons... *deleted*  :P  at first I thought they're MM  -_-  lol   but they're cool... I wish there will be MM's too  :D

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: Hart on March 03, 2010, 04:57:32 AM
^ Are you talking about the SNSD(a.k.a. So Nyuh Shi Dae, a.k.a. Girls' Generation) emoticons? I  :heart: them.

I also  :heart: the laughing Miki-sama emoticon.  :lol:

In fact, I gonna use it right now:

This is what Fujimoto thinks of everyone who is shocked at the ending of this fic -
:mikilaugh:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: kRisZ on March 05, 2010, 09:34:00 AM
kawaii beam
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*pops out of rock XD*
lol

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~  :P

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WHY~! WHY~?! POOR AI-CHAN~!!!! POOR RISA~!!!!!! :gyaaah:
I know  :(  Poor TakaGaki  :cry:

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great job though X3 and u should write more~! X3
:kneelbow: Maybe some other time, when work needs less time  :D

Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:


C
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LOL what kind of reaction is that?
:mon corn:

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just your imagination   :on polter:
:on freeze:

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Again, what kind of reaction is that?
Again   :mon corn:  :P

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and her on my bed... naked  :twisted:
:roll:  you perv.
Haven't you ever wished that she's you know  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:

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Well, not really. I try to avoid it if I could, but when I couldn't, that's when it become educational  XD
XD  XD  XD Ditto  :D

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Was Ai thinking about killing Gaki-san at first??
Maybe.?. or Maybe not  :grin:

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Reina?  :?
Again, Maybe or maybe not  :grin:

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I wonder what's Ai's motive for killing those people...
I wonder too  XD  :twisted:

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Wait, wait, just to make it clear, Ai was the killer, right? Or am I reading it wrong?
Who did you think was the killer or who did you want it to be?  :)

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There's still Over Teh BIG FLIRT's Rainbow   XD
Reaction 1 :  :shocked
Reaction 2 :  That's peanuts  :P

Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:



Swtme03
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OH...MY...J:AOIHFOEIH:LKJFH:SOIEHF:OEIHF:LDJH:FOIS:IEH:OFIHSJHFOEI:SOIHS:OIFHAIH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :shocked
:on lol:  :on lol:  :on lol:

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AICHAN!!! So you DID kill those people!  :bleed eyes: or am I still wrong?  :huhuh
I don't know  :P  XD

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The tears were building up! THE TEARS WERE BUILDING UP!!!  :panic:
XD  XD  XD

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And then she throws herself to the sea!!  :fainted:  :imdead:
:fainted: with Swtme03  :grin:

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Poor Risa!!  :gyaaah:
:cry:

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This was such a great story!! I loved ever chapter!!  :yep:
I'm so sad that it ended  :cry:
:kneelbow:  :heart:  :kneelbow:

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I hope you write another one!!

When I do have the time, I'll try  :)

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REINA!!!!!!   :panic: :mon slapself:
Guess  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:  :P

Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:



YumePouk AKA S!Trey
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:wub: :inlove: :inlove:  :on GJ: for TakaGaki
:kneelbow:

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Yay yay  :inlove: :inlove:  Don't break that promise.
Ai won't cry anymore since she's now dead in the story  :grin:

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:on yellcard: No way..............  :on blackhole: Ai-chan.... my... our Ai-chan was the murder :frustrated:  :on voodoo:
:pimp:

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:mon scare: :mon scare: NNNNNNOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
That couldn't end like that  :fainted: :gyaaah:
Ai-chan~~~~ :mon ref: :tantrum: ........................ Poor Risa........ why that have to happen now?????  :pleeease:
:fap  XD  :P

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OMG OMG OMG Reina is alive??????
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG that girl is REINA, Right? Right? Right?
:onionshower:

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Thank you, Thank you so much for this story  :kneelbow:
I really love how you write this story and I really appreciated to follow this story with you and everyone  :farofflook:
Thank you too S!Trey  :heart:  for taking the time to read :kneelbow:

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I hope I could read other stodry write by you
Time will tell  :D

Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:



Hart
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*reads all these comments* mwahahaha... :wahaha: *feeds on the despair of these readers* Hmmm...tastes like strawberry pocky. :P
:on lol:  :on lol:  :on lol: you're Ebil  :grin: but I felt the same way when I read the comments  :twisted:  :lol:  :twisted:

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So it was Ai. I expected it was either her or Reina, or maybe some other character (like Makoto had he not been Reina's dad). Looking back it was most likely Ai since the murders were people that she had already met, and it was too much of a coincidence that the murders occured at the same time Ai moved into the town.
I'll write a comment about this at the bottom  :P

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As hot as that scene was, I knew something bad was gonna happen.
:D

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Guilty conscience, Ai?
Maybe or maybe not  :P

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Yay! LinLin appears. And so is Makoto. I was waiting for him to show up, but I never suspected him to be Reina's dad.
:yep: to complete the MM  :D

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Lucky chair. :lol:
Yeah  XD

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Uh-oh. That doesn't sound good. :huhuh
:D

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Here it comes.....
XD

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...and the bomb has exploded. Or did it? (technically Ai was Gaki's second chance, the first being the Gropetastic Miki-sama :rockon:)
Hmmm, yeah if we'll talk about the relationship thing  :yep:

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*bomb explodes*
*row upon row of TakaGaki worshippers get caught up in the blast*
*me drinking a glass of whiskey at a nearby bar watching the aftermath*
*picks up a broken and scorched kite with the letter C written on it*
*stares at Trey's now hairless legs* (Gomen :kneelbow:)
:wahaha:  :wahaha:  :wahaha:

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This was a very interesting story. Thanks K. I enjoyed as much as I enjoyed reading the comments from everyone else. :lol:
Thank you  :kneelbow:  :kneelbow:  :kneelbow:

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Here. Have a bottle of warm sake as a gift for finishing this fic. *gives K warm sake* (Don't worry. There's no poison in it.)
lol, thank you.?.  :P

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Now that this is over sit back. Relax. Enjoy the view as all these readers wail and cry their eyes out while a few of them try to plot their revenge against you for killing Ai and making her the murderer. Don't worry. I've hired some guards and placed them all over your fortress. I've also added a couple of snipers outside, mounted some lasers, cannons, gatling guns, and missles in case of aerial attacks, fortified the base with layers upon layers of steel and concrete, reinforced the outer walls, installed a panic room, and added nerve gas dispensers in the air ducts. And just to be on the safe side I've secretly hidden a couple of landmines and traps around your fortress in a 1000 meter radius.
:shocked  :w00t:  :shocked Can I still go out alive with all that thing around.?.  :shocked

Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:



gab98
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:shocked  No way!!!!!! ¿Really??? Hontouni????
:yep:  :twisted:  XD

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why you Killed my Ai-chan!!! Why!!!??  :bleed eyes:
I don't know  :D

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Poor Gaki-san!! she love her and awww so sad   :cry:
Risa  :cry:

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But the end was really really Unexpected and good!, congratulations   :bow:
:kneelbow:  :heart:  :kneelbow:

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then Ai killed Reina? but Reina is a live??? i don't understand this   :?
:grin:  :grin:  :grin:

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PD: thanks for the last takagaki scene  :wub:
:)

Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:


rnd-sama
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:shocked :O
XD  XD  XD

Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:



Bishop NI
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:OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG:
:on lol:  :on lol:  :on lol:

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WHAT?! So AI-chan is the killer? Then how come Reina is still alive...??
Nee  :D

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AND AI-chan is DEAD?!!?!? ROAR!!!!

WHY!!!!!????

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:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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I'm having tons of questions!.
XD  XD  XD

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- LOL.. should i do the same too? hmmmmm~  :mon dunno:
NO!  :P  That one is too cool to abandon  :yep:  or to end soon  :yep: that's my most fav fic atm  :yep:  :love:  :yep:

Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:



Trey-trey
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:mon spit: :mon spit: :mon spit: :mon spit: :mon spit: :mon spit:
:grin:  :grin:  :grin:

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WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!

SHE'S THE KILLER?!?!?!?! AND YOU'VE KILLED HER?!?!?!?!?! :stoned:
:twisted:  :twisted:   :twisted:

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Well, if Reina's still alive I don't care about the other characters... Take that! XD
OMG you're Ebil  XD

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I'm having tons of questions!.

Same here! So come and explain yourself before I start to regret that I didn't kill you! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
:grin:  :grin:  :grin:

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:rofl: That's the style C!  XD *Insert Nelson Muntz's laugh here* :P
Who's Nelson Muntz  :D

Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:



Hart
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^ Are you talking about the SNSD(a.k.a. So Nyuh Shi Dae, a.k.a. Girls' Generation) emoticons? I  :heart: them.
:yep: greatly made  :yep:

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This is what Fujimoto thinks of everyone who is shocked at the ending of this fic -
:mikilaugh:
:mikilaugh:



I lost the note where I scribbled the characters and the story should be.

Basically it was like this
Risa = cop
Ai = turns psychotic when overly jealous
Eri = cop and Risa’s buddy
Sayu = Eri’s girlfriend and will become one of Ai’s victims, dead or not, after flirting with Risa
Reina = the dead girlfriend

But I got lost along the way  XD

My take on the story  :D

It could be Ai as the killer or someone else, say that girl at the end part.
The evidences could be Ai’s or were just planted.
She could be saying that “You deserve a second chance” to Risa or to that girl, say Reina  XD
You decide.  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:


Everyone, thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:

 :mon rush:



S!hu! dear and everyone --> any more questions  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: alwaysYou on March 05, 2010, 04:03:17 PM
I'M BACK!!  :lol:

u should know how i feel about the last chp right :angry: :angry:
yet after reading your comment, it still didnt answer my question :nervous

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“I’ll wait for you Risa, don’t worry, even in our next life
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Not far from them was a girl slowly walking away from her previous post, leaving her binocular behind, she wiped away some tears that freely flowed.
am i the only one who feel that reina is the real killer?
i dont know why but i have a feeling is reina..
she is not dead and living in aichan house..
the one who is crazily in love with aichan?wanna make aichan happy and start to kill ppl around gakisan..
yet, in the end, aichan really love gakisan and not her anymore, in order to save gakisan..aichan kill herself..

arrrr..after i type this, i feel, aichan is still the killer again..LOL!!!..and she fail to kill reina that time..
BUT reina is equally evil too, since if aichan tries to kill her b4, she should do something to save the other girls..

ahhhhh
and YOU!!!every qns is ans, it's just maybe or maybe not..OMG, i feel like slapping you..LOL!!!
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on March 05, 2010, 04:47:54 PM
@ AA I kinda think that Reina's the killer too so that's why Ai killed herself in exchange for Gaki's second chance, though I'll never know  :sweatdrop:


@ K
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:mon corn:
XD

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:on freeze:
:grin:

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Again, what kind of reaction is that?
Again   :mon corn:  :P
You funny ebil bunny, you.  :monk gboy:

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Haven't you ever wished that she's you know  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:
Um...actually no. I'm weird like that  :mon sweat:

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XD  XD  XD Ditto  :D
LOL you sure?  :P

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Who did you think was the killer or who did you want it to be?  :)
I'm not sure, there are other possibilities like I wrote in my comments to AA up.

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Reaction 1 :  :shocked
Reaction 2 :  That's peanuts  :P
If you say so  :lol:

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Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:
Thanks for writing it!  :heart:


@ T-kun
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:rofl: That's the style C!  XD *Insert Nelson Muntz's laugh here* :P
XD
*joins ebil K* who's Nelson Muntz?


@ Hart
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*picks up a broken and scorched kite with the letter C written on it*
I got....blasted?

:imdead:

:mon angel:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: Hart on March 05, 2010, 07:50:27 PM
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Who's Nelson Muntz
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*joins ebil K* who's Nelson Muntz?

This either shows that I watched too much tv as a kid, or I really am old. I hope it's not the latter.  :nervous

The Simpsons - I Said Ha Ha (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ClynhFKMs3c#)

C
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I got....blasted?

:oops:  Gomen.  :kneelbow: Look on the bright side. You get to comfort Ai up there.  :twisted:  :lol:

AA & C
That's what I thought as well. I even thought that Makoto was the killer, now that we know he is Reina's father.

Here's how I see it:

He killed all thoses girls in both towns, including Tsunku, to frame Ai, causing ReinAi to distrust each other and assume the other one of them is the killer. He really wanted to break them up and make Ai suffer. But he didn't expect Reina would disappear after leaving Ai.

Still angry at Ai, and wanting to make her suffer so much more, he followed her when she moved and started killing again in order of frame Ai. He even payed Tsunku to pretend to attack Ai that night and killed him later on.

Ai eventually knew it was him. She knew he planted the evidence in Ai's home. She also knew that he would go to the police to arrest her. Even if she goes to jail, he would still killed Gaki and her friends, just to torment her. And so, it order to protect Gaki and her friends, Ai sacrifices her life.

Unfortunately, Reina also realized that her father was the killer, since she knows he's very possessive of her, and would do anything to keep her and Ai apart. That is why she left Ai and went into hiding. While she disappeared, she was trying to collect evidence to prove that the killer is her father.

That proved to be a waste of time since Ai moved on and fell in love with Gaki, and Makoto is still murdering those girls in order to frame Ai. Racing to reach Ai and tell what has been going on, she finds that she's too late as Ai ends her life. When Reina was walking away in the end, she was not crying because Ai has moved on when she left. She was crying because she couldn't protect her from her father.

*Phew* Yeah. This is what goes inside my head as I read this fics.  :depressed:

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:shocked  :w00t:  :shocked Can I still go out alive with all that thing around.?.  :shocked

*sigh* fine, K. I'll hire some ninjas and your very own secret service too if you want to go outside. Guess I'll have to cancel the plans in building you a mall, amusement park, hot spring, race track, even a lake and some beaches inside your fortress. I was even gonna throw in your own private jet and any vehicle of your choosing. lol

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Here. Have a bottle of warm sake as a gift for finishing this fic. *gives K warm sake* (Don't worry. There's no poison in it.)
lol, thank you.?.  :P
Why would I want to kill you? If I did that, I wouldn't be able to read the fics you would plan to write if you decided to write again.  :(




Now go. Enjoy your break from writing. Your unfinished fics will still be here when you get back.



 :yossi: :otomerika:  Woo-hoo!! 300th post!  :otomerika: :yossi:
:snsdseo: :snsdyuri: :snsdhyo: :snsdsoo: :snsdyoo: :snsdsica: :snsdfany: :snsdtae: :snsdsun:
(No. I will not make that reference.  :smhid)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: badsaints on March 06, 2010, 02:03:42 PM
Horrors! It's over?! Please tell me you're joking :shocked That means 1 less fic that I can look forward to :cry: Nooooo...Can I ask for encore? Epilogue? Or whatever it's called. So many questions and I can see your readers have their own conspiracy theories :lol:

Besides, HOW DARE YOU KILL AICHAN!!! :angry:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: kRisZ on March 06, 2010, 02:44:02 PM
AABatt
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u should know how i feel about the last chp right :angry: :angry:
:yep:  :twisted:  :lol:  :lol:

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yet after reading your comment, it still didnt answer my question :nervous
What was your question?  :grin:

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arrrr..after i type this, i feel, aichan is still the killer again..LOL!!!..and she fail to kill reina that time..
BUT reina is equally evil too, since if aichan tries to kill her b4, she should do something to save the other girls..
XD  XD  XD

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ahhhhh
and YOU!!!every qns is ans, it's just maybe or maybe not..OMG, i feel like slapping you..LOL!!!
I noticed... you're so brutal when it comes to me  :(      like slapping   :cry:   kicking    :gyaaah:   whacking   :ptam-hbk:



C
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@ AA I kinda think that Reina's the killer too so that's why Ai killed herself in exchange for Gaki's second chance, though I'll never know  :sweatdrop:
:grin:  :grin:  :grin:

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You funny ebil bunny, you.  :monk gboy:
:mon fu:

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Um...actually no. I'm weird like that  :mon sweat:
C What's your zodiac sign.?.  :D  and you're not weird I'm actually like you, I may seem ebil but I'm not that perverted   :halo:

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LOL you sure?  :P
:yep:  :P

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I'm not sure, there are other possibilities like I wrote in my comments to AA up.
:D

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If you say so  :lol:
I tried to write yesterday when I was out... waiting for something... guess who's next  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:  but it was like four sentences so  XD

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Thanks for writing it!  :heart:
:heart: endless  :heart:  :heart:  :heart:  XD

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@ Hart
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*picks up a broken and scorched kite with the letter C written on it*
I got....blasted?

:imdead:

:mon angel:
Nice  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:


C can we resched.?.   :nervous  I need to go to bed early, I'm having a long road trip tomorrow  :D Gomen  :kneelbow:  :kneelbow:  :kneelbow:



Hart
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This either shows that I watched too much tv as a kid, or I really am old. I hope it's not the latter.  :nervous
:lol:

Thank you for answering that for Trey-trey  :kneelbow:  :heart:
@Trey-trey that's weirder than Bananas in Pajamas  :P   I'm just kidding people  :D

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:oops:  Gomen.  :kneelbow: Look on the bright side. You get to comfort Ai up there.  :twisted:  :lol:
OMG  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  But yeah C, Hart has a point  XD

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That's what I thought as well. I even thought that Makoto was the killer, now that we know he is Reina's father.

Here's how I see it:
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*Phew* Yeah. This is what goes inside my head as I read this fics.  :depressed:
I love how you analyze things  :D You and your mind makes a writer go and read and analyze things thoroughly before posting  XD just to make sure  XD which I definitely failed   :lol:

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*sigh* fine, K. I'll hire some ninjas and your very own secret service too if you want to go outside. Guess I'll have to cancel the plans in building you a mall, amusement park, hot spring, race track, even a lake and some beaches inside your fortress. I was even gonna throw in your own private jet and any vehicle of your choosing. lol
:D  :D  :D You know, you should write  :yep:

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Why would I want to kill you? If I did that, I wouldn't be able to read the fics you would plan to write if you decided to write again.  :(
:D

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Now go. Enjoy your break from writing. Your unfinished fics will still be here when you get back.
:kneelbow:

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:yossi: :otomerika:  Woo-hoo!! 300th post!  :otomerika: :yossi:
Yay!!! Congratulations!!!  :gmon flowers:  :gmon flowers:  :gmon flowers:

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:snsdseo: :snsdyuri: :snsdhyo: :snsdsoo: :snsdyoo: :snsdsica: :snsdfany: :snsdtae: :snsdsun:
They're moving  :D

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(No. I will not make that reference.  :smhid)
What?  :D



baddie!!!
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Horrors! It's over?! Please tell me you're joking :shocked
:yep:  XD

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That means 1 less fic that I can look forward to :cry:
:D  :kneelbow:

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Nooooo...Can I ask for encore? Epilogue? Or whatever it's called. So many questions and I can see your readers have their own conspiracy theories :lol:
Yeah  XD  XD  XD  I'll try but no promises  :P

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Besides, HOW DARE YOU KILL AICHAN!!! :angry:
:twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:

Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:





Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on March 06, 2010, 04:18:11 PM
@ Hart
If I do that, I think Gaki-san will follow her and kill me there, not to mention Ai fans  :lol:

Congrats on your 300th post! :cow:


@ K
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:mon fu:
:lol:

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C What's your zodiac sign.?.  :D  and you're not weird I'm actually like you, I may seem ebil but I'm not that perverted   :halo:
My zodiac sign is Aries. Why?

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I tried to write yesterday when I was out... waiting for something... guess who's next  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:  but it was like four sentences so  XD
I think I'd rather not guess  XD  I'll just see (read) when it comes out.

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:heart: endless  :heart:  :heart:  :heart:  XD
:grin:  :heart:

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C can we resched.?.   :nervous  I need to go to bed early, I'm having a long road trip tomorrow  :D Gomen  :kneelbow:  :kneelbow:  :kneelbow:
I'm the one who's sorry, my lil cousin hijacked my laptop+internet. If I'm online earlier I probably could catch up with you...  :kneelbow:
You're going on a road trip? Have a nice and safe trip!  :)

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OMG  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  But yeah C, Hart has a point  XD
I don't think it's gonna be fun at all  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: Hart on March 08, 2010, 05:30:54 AM
K-chan
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Thank you for answering that for Trey-trey  :kneelbow: :heart:
@Trey-trey that's weirder than Bananas in Pajamas  :P   I'm just kidding people  :D
:shock: Blasphemy!!  :x  You were Not a kid of the '90s if you haven't watched The Simpsons. And it's still going on, for 21 years!!

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I love how you analyze things  :D You and your mind makes a writer go and read and analyze things thoroughly before posting  XD just to make sure  XD which I definitely failed   :lol:
Aw, shucks.  :oops:
I only try to bring constructive criticism. And don't push yourself down. You did your best. Call it a 'learning experience'. Hope you understand what you should and shouldn't do the next time you write. Or...get a beta reader to help you out.
Wait, why am I giving advice when I don't even write? Now I even sound like some of my english teachers back in high school.

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You know, you should write  :yep:
Nah! I'd prefer to be a reader/commentator. I could try being a beta if anyone is interested.
I thought about it long ago. I have WAY to many (crazy and absurd) ideas floating around in my head. But once I pick up a pen and try to write something down, or type something on any word processor, I forget what I was thinking. Worse is that it's hard for me to convey my thoughts into words. It's bad enough that I'm even my own worst critic.  :sweatdrop:

Even commenting right now is hard for me. Before I click on that Post button, I re-read whatever I had typed mulitple times, probably for at least an hour  :nervous , making sure that it's understandable and readable to everyone else, grammatically correct (to my knowledge), and I fully expressed what I wanted to say without going off tangent.

And anyway, my commentaries are just as long as any chapter to a story in here.  :wahaha:

C
Well, well, well. It's nice to see a fellow Aries here.

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If I do that, I think Gaki-san will follow her and kill me there, not to mention Ai fans
Not if I comfort Gaki first (as a friend of course; I don't like rebounds), explain to her why Ai decided to kill herself, and tell to live on for Ai's sake.
As for the Aibutt worshippers - throw some gifs, avatars, banners, photobooks, pervy (and non-pervy) fanfics, posters, photocards, and vids of Ai in front of their faces and they'll easilly get distracted.  :lol:
*sees enraged Aibutt followers coming after me*
Hehehe. Fools don't know how to value their lives.
*looks through archive of various tools of destruction*
hmmm...what should I use?
Buster Sword? No.
C4 Plastique? A bit messy afterwards.
Gatling Gun? Nah.
Pikachu? Uh...no.
Alchemy? Drains too much out of me.
Gundam? Too easy.
Autobot Matrix of Leadership? I don't want to use that again.
EVA Unit 03? Oh, HELL NO!!
SDF-01 Macross? Takes too long to transform.
*sigh* Nothing looks good enough to use.
*sees something glowing at the back*
...hmm what's this?
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Oh!  :drool:
*maniacal laugh*
Perfect. A bit overkill, but it'll still get the job done.
*WARNING - Operational use of this weapon may or may not destroy and remake the universe. May induce seizures if observed within a 10,000 lightyear radius. Use it only as a last resort.*
Well, here goes nothing...INITIATING SUPER TENGEN TOPPA GURREN LAGANN FINAL ATTACK SEQUENCE!!!

SUPER TENGEN TOPPA GIGA DRILL BREAKER (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZwUuhXOIwfA#)

 :smoke:  Ah! That felt good.  :lol:
Now, go C!!! Comfort Ai until it's time for Gaki to be with her!!!  :mon blowhorn:

Time taken to type this post: between 4 to 5 hours.  :depressed:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: kawaii beam on March 10, 2010, 03:42:03 AM
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my god XD i only watched like the 1st ep of that show XD but that is an epic move XDDD plus lol at tjose other anime moves XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: Haruka on March 10, 2010, 04:07:26 AM
kajhndkabskdbasd

You Kill Ai.Chan... I was missing u_u u know ... work >o<!

I just read it T____T
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: Hart on March 10, 2010, 06:22:37 AM
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my god XD i only watched like the 1st ep of that show XD

WHAT?! In the name of Lord Kamina and all that is good in the universe, you must watch all 27 episodes, the director's cut version of episode 6, the music videos (Parallel Works), and both movies.   :on hypto:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: lil_hamz on March 10, 2010, 11:51:13 AM
EHHHHHHHHHH!?!?!? It's over??? :shocked

I really thought TakaGaki was gonna to end up being together in the end. But you killed Ai!!!!! :bleed eyes:

*bawls*  How could you!?!?!? :cry: :cry: :cry:

I think I'm gonna be traumatized over this for a long, long time *crawls back to cry in hole*
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on March 10, 2010, 06:15:46 PM
@ Hart

K-chan?  :lol:
(Gomen K, it's just that it sounds so cute and you're ebil so  XD)

You're Aries too? *high five*

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Before I click on that Post button, I re-read whatever I had typed mulitple times, probably for at least an hour
Funny, I did that too. Although not as long as you do  :nervous
I wonder....is this an Aries thing?

 :shocked  dangerous weapon...
And EVA unit-03?  :lol:

Thanks, Hart  :kneelbow:  I'll keep Ai company until Gaki-san come, but as a friend only  ;)
(Ai worshipers, no need to raise your weapons guys)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: kuro808 on March 12, 2010, 10:53:59 AM
Damn I caught up and all I have to say is  :shocked :shocked

damn that was sudden :(
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: kRisZ on March 13, 2010, 04:27:59 PM
C
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My zodiac sign is Aries. Why?
Was just making sure you're not her  :D When?!  :w00t: this month next month?  :w00t:

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I think I'd rather not guess  XD  I'll just see (read) when it comes out.
The four sentences were still four sentences  :nervous

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I'm the one who's sorry, my lil cousin hijacked my laptop+internet. If I'm online earlier I probably could catch up with you...  :kneelbow:
Tonight I'll try to wait  :) Hurry!!!   :P   My eyelids are dropping  :D

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You're going on a road trip? Have a nice and safe trip!  :)
:kneelbow:

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I don't think it's gonna be fun at all  XD
It's fun! It's Ai!  :inlove:



Hart
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:shock: Blasphemy!!  :x  You were Not a kid of the '90s if you haven't watched The Simpsons. And it's still going on, for 21 years!!
I do watch it... sometimes... when my little nephew's holding the tv's rc  :P

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Aw, shucks.  :oops:
I only try to bring constructive criticism. And don't push yourself down. You did your best. Call it a 'learning experience'. Hope you understand what you should and shouldn't do the next time you write. Or...get a beta reader to help you out.
:)

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Wait, why am I giving advice when I don't even write? Now I even sound like some of my english teachers back in high school.
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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Nah! I'd prefer to be a reader/commentator. I could try being a beta if anyone is interested.
I'd get intimidated if you're my beta reader  XD

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I thought about it long ago. I have WAY to many (crazy and absurd) ideas floating around in my head. But once I pick up a pen and try to write something down, or type something on any word processor, I forget what I was thinking. Worse is that it's hard for me to convey my thoughts into words. It's bad enough that I'm even my own worst critic.  :sweatdrop:
You're very thorough and has wide range of ideas  :yep: and I have no idea what to say next  XD   sorry  :nervous   my brain's not functioning well tonight  :D gomen  :kneelbow:

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Even commenting right now is hard for me. Before I click on that Post button, I re-read whatever I had typed mulitple times, probably for at least an hour  :nervous , making sure that it's understandable and readable to everyone else, grammatically correct (to my knowledge), and I fully expressed what I wanted to say without going off tangent.
Wow

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And anyway, my commentaries are just as long as any chapter to a story in here.  :wahaha:
Damn YOU!!!  XD  XD  XD

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Well, well, well. It's nice to see a fellow Aries here.
When's yours too.?.  :w00t:

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Not if I comfort Gaki first (as a friend of course; I don't like rebounds), explain to her why Ai decided to kill herself, and tell to live on for Ai's sake.
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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As for the Aibutt worshippers - throw some gifs, avatars, banners, photobooks, pervy (and non-pervy) fanfics, posters, photocards, and vids of Ai in front of their faces and they'll easilly get distracted.  :lol:
:grin:  :grin:  :grin: Damn  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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Buster Sword? No.
C4 Plastique? A bit messy afterwards.
Gatling Gun? Nah.
Pikachu? Uh...no.
Alchemy? Drains too much out of me.
Gundam? Too easy.
Autobot Matrix of Leadership? I don't want to use that again.
EVA Unit 03? Oh, HELL NO!!
SDF-01 Macross? Takes too long to transform.
I'm familiar with Pikachu only  :D I heard a few from the list but I only watch Pikachu  XD

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Well, here goes nothing...INITIATING SUPER TENGEN TOPPA GURREN LAGANN FINAL ATTACK SEQUENCE!!!
sounds like a fraternity/sorority name  :grin:

The vid's bloody... ewww.?.  :P

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Time taken to type this post: between 4 to 5 hours.  :depressed:
OMG  :shocked and  :bow:  :P



Haruka
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kajhndkabskdbasd
XD  XD  XD

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You Kill Ai.Chan... I was missing u_u u know ... work >o<!

I just read it T____T
:yep:  :twisted:  XD


Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:



Hart
Sorry to butt in but it was quite a while since the last time I saw this
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:on hypto:



lil_hamz
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EHHHHHHHHHH!?!?!? It's over??? :shocked
:yep:  :D

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I really thought TakaGaki was gonna to end up being together in the end. But you killed Ai!!!!! :bleed eyes:

*bawls*  How could you!?!?!? :cry: :cry: :cry:

I think I'm gonna be traumatized over this for a long, long time *crawls back to cry in hole*
lol  :kneelbow: You're one of the inspirations when I wrote that  :D


Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:



C
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K-chan?  :lol:
(Gomen K, it's just that it sounds so cute and you're ebil so  XD)
Arg.  :fainted:

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Funny, I did that too. Although not as long as you do  :nervous
I wonder....is this an Aries thing?
We need one more Aries person to seal the thing... any other Aries in here.?.  :mon look:

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(Ai worshipers, no need to raise your weapons guys)
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:



kurosawa87
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Damn I caught up and all I have to say is  :shocked :shocked

damn that was sudden :(
:D gomen  :D


Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on March 13, 2010, 05:03:58 PM
@ K

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Was just making sure you're not her  :D When?!  :w00t: this month next month?  :w00t:
Wow, do I really remind you of her that much? Um...next month  :nervous

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The four sentences were still four sentences  :nervous
Is that so? LOL

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Tonight I'll try to wait  :) Hurry!!!   :P   My eyelids are dropping  :D
I'm here! I'm here! Though it's alright if you wanna sleep, don't push yourself to stay up  ;)

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It's fun! It's Ai!  :inlove:
If you say so  :lol:

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Arg.  :fainted:
XD :kneelbow:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: kRisZ on March 13, 2010, 05:10:38 PM
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Wow, do I really remind you of her that much? Um...next month  :nervous
Yay!

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Is that so? LOL
Yeah  :nervous

I
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'm here! I'm here! Though it's alright if you wanna sleep, don't push yourself to stay up  ;)
I still can hold it  :D

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If you say so  :lol:
Just make her sing  :inlove:  and dance   :drool:  Oh dear XD

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XD :kneelbow:
:D


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Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: Hart on March 13, 2010, 10:35:13 PM
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When's yours too.?.  :w00t:

Hmm....here's a hint: I'm six days older than  :yossi: .  :D
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: cogi_yoshi on March 14, 2010, 12:02:27 AM
great job!!!ahahahaha...you finished a fic!!!! although it's a little..uhh..heart breaking?? WHY AI!!!! WHY!!!!!!!!!! and who's that person who left?...Reina??? anyways... even if you return to your 'reading' mode... please write again someday...ahahaha. So I'll have something to read too.. XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: kRisZ on March 14, 2010, 12:17:13 AM
Hart
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Hmm....here's a hint: I'm six days older than  :yossi: .  :D
Yay!   :yossi:   Yay!   :yossi:  Yay!


cogi
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great job!!!ahahahaha...you finished a fic!!!!
:yep:  :D

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although it's a little..uhh..heart breaking?? WHY AI!!!! WHY!!!!!!!!!! and who's that person who left?...Reina???
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I lost the note where I scribbled the characters and the story should be.

Basically it was like this
Risa = cop
Ai = turns psychotic when overly jealous
Eri = cop and Risa’s buddy
Sayu = Eri’s girlfriend and will become one of Ai’s victims, dead or not, after flirting with Risa
Reina = the dead girlfriend

But I got lost along the way  XD

My take on the story  :D

It could be Ai as the killer or someone else, say that girl at the end part.
The evidences could be Ai’s or were just planted.
She could be saying that “You deserve a second chance” to Risa or to that girl, say Reina  XD
You decide.  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:

Here's how I see it:

He killed all thoses girls in both towns, including Tsunku, to frame Ai, causing ReinAi to distrust each other and assume the other one of them is the killer. He really wanted to break them up and make Ai suffer. But he didn't expect Reina would disappear after leaving Ai.

Still angry at Ai, and wanting to make her suffer so much more, he followed her when she moved and started killing again in order of frame Ai. He even payed Tsunku to pretend to attack Ai that night and killed him later on.

Ai eventually knew it was him. She knew he planted the evidence in Ai's home. She also knew that he would go to the police to arrest her. Even if she goes to jail, he would still killed Gaki and her friends, just to torment her. And so, it order to protect Gaki and her friends, Ai sacrifices her life.

Unfortunately, Reina also realized that her father was the killer, since she knows he's very possessive of her, and would do anything to keep her and Ai apart. That is why she left Ai and went into hiding. While she disappeared, she was trying to collect evidence to prove that the killer is her father.

That proved to be a waste of time since Ai moved on and fell in love with Gaki, and Makoto is still murdering those girls in order to frame Ai. Racing to reach Ai and tell what has been going on, she finds that she's too late as Ai ends her life. When Reina was walking away in the end, she was not crying because Ai has moved on when she left. She was crying because she couldn't protect her from her father.
Quoted quotes  XD  XD  XD

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anyways... even if you return to your 'reading' mode... please write again someday...ahahaha. So I'll have something to read too.. XD
I'll try  :)

Thank you for reading  :heart:  :kneelbow:  :heart:



C
 :kneelbow:  I  :kneelbow:  fell  :kneelbow:  asleep  :kneelbow:  so  :kneelbow:  rude  :kneelbow:  of  :kneelbow:   me  :kneelbow:  I'm  :kneelbow:  so  :kneelbow:   sorry  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: cogi_yoshi on March 14, 2010, 12:23:14 AM
oohhhh...so you got 'lost along the way'...but it's still cool!!!!!ahahahaha...
my mind's not really processing for a month now...so I can't read in between the lines...ahahaha...good interpretation there Hart! :twothumbs
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on March 14, 2010, 05:10:48 PM
@ K

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Just make her sing  :inlove:  and dance   :drool:  Oh dear XD
XD
Better wait for the others to join her on that.

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:kneelbow:  I  :kneelbow:  fell  :kneelbow:  asleep  :kneelbow:  so  :kneelbow:  rude  :kneelbow:  of  :kneelbow:   me  :kneelbow:  I'm  :kneelbow:  so  :kneelbow:   sorry  :kneelbow:
:lol:  very creative.
Think nothing of it. You should've told me if you're already sleepy, I felt bad for dragging you that long when you could rest, gomen  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) d(^*__*^)b
Post by: kRisZ on March 19, 2010, 01:41:44 PM
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I gave my word to the H!P Fanfics' Pervert that I’ll try to write a fic, but the week was so hectic and stressful. I tried to write a one shot during my spare time but nothing came out, so here’s my "awesome"... ummm... encore ( ← baddie’s word, I literally  :lol:   when I read that  XD ) AABATT, enjoy  (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m027.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)





ENCORE (lol, again baddie's word  XD )



The crying girl walked away and into nowhere she goes. Without any specific direction, she walked and walked. The previous scene she witnessed was so heartbreaking. She couldn’t take it in at the moment. It made her hard to breathe. It made her hard to think things through. Just like a gushing waterfall, her tears were freely flowing. Not minding her surroundings nor the stares that people gave to her when they past by her, she continued to walk whilst crying in silence.


A loud and long honk echoed and awoke her slumbering soul. Turning around, she saw an eighteen wheeler heavy truck carrying logs a few meters away from her.


“Watch where you’re going!” shouted the irritated driver while giving out a piercing stare at the surprised troubled girl.


After regaining her senses back, not entirely but enough not to act as a walking soulless creature, she flagged down a cab, gave the address and sat at the back seat in silence, thinking nothing, doing nothing, just sitting there but not quite being there.


“We are here.”


She snapped back to reality after hearing the hoarse voice of the cab driver. She paid the fare and went inside her home after.


“Finally” she whispered followed by a deep sigh. She took off her shoes and neatly placed them back into the rack, took off her coat and hung it on the hook.


“Tadaima” she uttered but no one answered. She then proceeded to her room. It looked so empty and lonely. Her tears were threatening to fall again but she held it in. Not knowing what to do, she sulked in one of the corner of her quiet room. The last heart wrecking scene played again inside her head as vivid as watching a movie on a high definition TV. The tears were no longer controlled and they flowed down her cheek in a quick smooth glide.


Wiping her tears away using the back of her hands, she stood up and proceeded to the table by the corner. She turned her computer on and waited a few seconds as the device booted up. Clicking a few icons until a desired window opened, she started to type.


kR..you spoil my mood early in the morning..=(
so unexpected..and u kill my favorite member..=(
i hate u..*run away to cry*




 :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:

 :P  :P  :P

 XD  XD  XD



There, peace out!  (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m183.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore 3/19
Post by: alwaysYou on March 19, 2010, 04:05:14 PM
hmm hmm hmmm..what a poor girl..*pat*..emo girl.. :(

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kR..you spoil my mood early in the morning..=(
so unexpected..and u kill my favorite member..=(
i hate u..*run away to cry*
so familiar ...hmmmmmmmmmmm



Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore 3/19
Post by: kuro808 on March 19, 2010, 06:57:25 PM
wow so depressing.....

Really I feel sorry for the girl
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore 3/19
Post by: Hart on March 19, 2010, 07:50:02 PM
K, you caught me off-guard this time. I was wondering why you were calling this an encore instead of an epilogue, until I read that part.
Sorry if this sound too ebil of me, I was  :lol: -ing because of that. I agree with C S!hu!, that does sound familiar.....

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A loud and long honk echoed and awoke her slumbering soul. Turning around, she saw an eighteen wheeler heavy truck carrying logs a few meters away from her.
Logs...chopped wood...trees falling down....drunk grizzly man with an axe.....why does this sound familiar as well?  :mon dunno:
 
Sorry if you were stressed out this week. If it makes you feel better, I too had an awful week. Let's just say it has something to do with 4-5 days of no electricity and heating.

EDIT: What did u say, K? I'm having a lil' bit of trouble reading what u wrote. And where is that ringing coming from?!
....uh...what was it I was talking about before?  :?
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore 3/19
Post by: kRisZ on March 20, 2010, 12:06:49 AM
Cogi
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oohhhh...so you got 'lost along the way'...but it's still cool!!!!!ahahahaha...
:yep:  XD  :kneelbow:

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good interpretation there Hart! :twothumbs
Nee  :twothumbs



C
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:lol:  very creative.
Yeah.?.  :grin:

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Think nothing of it. You should've told me if you're already sleepy, I felt bad for dragging you that long when you could rest, gomen  :kneelbow:
lol it was cool  :D  :kneelbow:




S!hu!
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hmm hmm hmmm..what a poor girl..*pat*..emo girl.. :(
:grin:  :grin:  :grin:

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so familiar ...hmmmmmmmmmmm
Have you expected the end part.?.  :grin:  :twisted:  :grin:  :twisted:  :grin:
 :kneelbow:



kurosawa87
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wow so depressing.....

Really I feel sorry for the girl
:D she knows I'm ebil so....  :D



Hart
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K, you caught me off-guard this time. I was wondering why you were calling this an encore instead of an epilogue, until I read that part.
Sorry if this sound too ebil of me, I was  :lol: -ing because of that.
Yeah.?.  :w00t:  :mon money:  :mon money:  :mon money:

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I agree with C, that does sound familiar.....
Ummm... Hart-dear... don't show sign of aging  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:  that was S!hu! and not C  XD  XD  XD 
:mon rush:

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Logs...chopped wood...trees falling down....drunk grizzly man with an axe.....why does this sound familiar as well?  :mon dunno:
XD  XD  XD

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Sorry if you were stressed out this week. If it makes you feel better, I too had an awful week. Let's just say it has something to do with 4-5 days of no electricity and heating.
Awww... must be freezing...  here, have some  :mon noodle: to keep you warm  :love:

I'm cool  :)   thank you  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on March 26, 2010, 07:48:51 PM
I dunno what should I comment about the encore  :nervous


@ K

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Yeah.?.  :grin:
:yep:

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I agree with C, that does sound familiar.....
Ummm... Hart-dear... don't show sign of aging  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:  that was S!hu! and not C  XD  XD  XD 
:mon rush:
I was confused too at first coz I didn't say anything  :lol:

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:D she knows I'm ebil so....  :D
You're admitting it, K?  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore 3/19
Post by: amEthystx on March 27, 2010, 05:02:12 PM
HELLO~ I have been M.I.A for a while, haven't I?

XD

*Poof!*

 :mon bat: <- long time since this made an appearance.. lol
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore 3/19
Post by: kRisZ on March 27, 2010, 08:27:53 PM
C
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I dunno what should I comment about the encore  :nervous
XD

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I was confused too at first coz I didn't say anything  :lol:
:lol:  Sorry Hart  :P

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You're admitting it, K?  XD
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Bishop NI
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HELLO~ I have been M.I.A for a while, haven't I?
:)  :yep:  :)

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:mon bat: <- long time since this made an appearance.. lol
It's hibernating.?.  XD
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on March 28, 2010, 01:49:12 PM
@ K
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You're admitting it, K?  XD
(http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m155.gif) (http://www.laymark.com) Sometimes it feels good just to admit it  XD
  XD  sometimes you can be adorable too  :monk gboy:


@ Bishop
Yup, where have you been?  :D
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore
Post by: kRisZ on March 29, 2010, 01:51:21 AM
C, *points PM* Take care will you?   :love:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on March 29, 2010, 09:56:40 AM
*looks at PM* I'll try my best K
Sorry if I make you worry  :kneelbow:

And thanks K!  :heart:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore 3/19
Post by: amEthystx on March 29, 2010, 10:14:18 AM
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  sometimes you can be adorable too  :monk gboy:
Hmmmmmm........ I'm not quite sure about that..she threaten me with cockroaches... HOW IS THAT SUPPOSE TO BE ADORABLE!? LOL~


*pulls C kite down from sky*

*continues to roll K kite to the tornado with camels within*

:cry: What happened to you C?
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on March 29, 2010, 02:37:06 PM
^ she's being ebil to you, huh? LOL
Cockroaches? Eww... I guess that part isn't adorable.

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*continues to roll K kite to the tornado with camels within*
Payback?  XD

I'm okay, no worries. K's just looking out for me and being kind (yet she's ebil  :lol:)
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore 3/19
Post by: Treykun on March 29, 2010, 09:35:48 PM
:mon huh:

I didn't reply anything about the encore?!?!?!?!

How weird... XD XD

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kR..you spoil my mood early in the morning..=(
so unexpected..and u kill my favorite member..=(
i hate u..*run away to cry*

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: I can't say anything else... XD


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Hmmmmmm........ I'm not quite sure about that..she threaten me with cockroaches... HOW IS THAT SUPPOSE TO BE ADORABLE!? LOL~

:mon curtain:

I have to say something about this:

DON'T. PRONOUNCE. THAT. WORD. OR. I. WILL. DIE. BECAUSE. OF. MY. WORST. PHOBIA.

*Shudders*

Please, don't even mention those... erm... things??? :cry:

:mon runcry:

Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore 3/19
Post by: kRisZ on March 30, 2010, 05:28:08 AM
C
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*looks at PM* I'll try my best K
Don't try... do it  :heart:

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Sorry if I make you worry  :kneelbow:
:)



Bishop NI
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  sometimes you can be adorable too  :monk gboy:
Hmmmmmm........ I'm not quite sure about that..she threaten me with cockroaches... HOW IS THAT SUPPOSE TO BE ADORABLE!? LOL~
:twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:

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*continues to roll K kite to the tornado with camels within*
:shocked   :fainted:



C
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I'm okay, no worries. K's just looking out for me and being kind (yet she's ebil  :lol:)
:roll:



Trey-trey
Trey-trey!!!! *Pounces on Trey-trey and hugs his hairy legs* where have you been?!

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I didn't reply anything about the encore?!?!?!?!

How weird... XD XD
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: I can't say anything else... XD
It's okay... that person didn't say much about that either  XD

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:mon curtain:

I have to say something about this:

DON'T. PRONOUNCE. THAT. WORD. OR. I. WILL. DIE. BECAUSE. OF. MY. WORST. PHOBIA.

*Shudders*

Please, don't even mention those... erm... things??? :cry:

:mon runcry:
:dunno: COCKROACHES.?.
 :mon huh:  CRAWLING COCKROACHES.?.
 :gmon blonde:  FLYING COCKROACHES.?.

 :twisted:  :P  :twisted:  :P  :twisted:
Title: Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (COMPLETE~3/1) Senseless Encore 3/19
Post by: Treykun on March 31, 2010, 03:06:28 PM

^ Damn, don't say that word...

 :on cloudeye:

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Trey-trey!!!! *Pounces on Trey-trey  and hugs his hairy legs* where have you been?!

*Looks around* Huh...? I think I haven't moved from here... :mon heh: Maybe it was just that I was on lurker mode on... :mon cweepy:

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:dunno: COCKROACHES.?.
 :mon huh:  CRAWLING COCKROACHES.?.
 :gmon blonde:  FLYING COCKROACHES.?.

 :twisted:  :P  :twisted:  :P  :twisted:


Please, please, pleeeeeease, DON'T SAY IT!!! I've seriously got a trauma with those creepy things... Do you know how many sleepless nights I've passed because of them in my childhood?!?! :cry: :cry: :cry: