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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
« Reply #220 on: January 30, 2010, 08:22:28 AM »
LOL you guys are so silly. XD

Oh, and I like the fic. :D

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
« Reply #221 on: January 30, 2010, 08:35:46 AM »
@Haruka
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I love your fics x)

Hope you can made another chap =)
:farofflook: Even S!hu! never mentioned she likes this story even in the slightest bit and this was originally written for her   :farofflook:

I will try to finish my short update and probably post it later  :) and this time it will be written for you  :)  and not for the perv*** S!hu!

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Ay dios mío...  :rofl:
rnd-sama, someone wants some butt slap loving *points at Trey-trey*  :P

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:lol: Don't worry, I won't let you die alone... I'll wait to the bishop to kill you, and then I'll run away :grin:
OMG  :OMG:  :fainted:

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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: So, the sequoia was a better idea XD
Carry it yourself, I won’t give you a hand  :P

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NO FREAKIN' WAY!!! I won't let the lurkers of this thread see me puffing my cheeks!!  XD But I can pm to those who want to see~~~ XD
:w00t:  PM!  :on woohoo:  PM!  :mon fyeah:  PM!  :on comhere:  

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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: They really look like the antagonists  XD
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  Yay! I'm not alone!  :on gay:

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:rofl: I see... XD But you're aware that you'll be included in the story, right?? We'll get our revenge... :twisted:
:huhuh  :O  :shocked   :OMG:  :fainted:



@rnd-sama
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*dives into thread and butt slaps KZ and C* Whoa, you guys are too fast for me! I can't keep up with your demands, must clone self.
Ouch.?.  XD  make it a lot  :grin: it's cool rnd-sama we'll just wait for your replies patiently  XD

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Wow, that worked out quite well. XD
Starring:
Teh BIshop NI *waits for her approval*
rnd-sama  CHECKED
C CHECKED
S!hu!
I'll make this one CHECKED  :twisted:

Also Starring
The cousin Trey-trey CHECKED
The Granny baddie *waits too for her approval*
And everyone
ummm CHECKED?  :D

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*sidles up to C and put an arm around her shoulders* While Baby Sticky's away, the mice will play, huh honey? *flirty eyebrows*
:grin:  :grin:  :grin: Damn  XD



@C
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Ohoho you're so right  :twisted:
:err:  :imdead:

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K, what do you say to this statement?
I say PM!  :pepper:   PM!  :pepper:  PM!  :pepper:

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:D Bishop changed hers too, I think.
One of these days I might just change my avatar into a kite C  :lol:
Hers too?  :w00t: Must change mine  :w00t:

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Ouch! You and I got butt slapped by rndmnwierd
It's reddened now  :cry:

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~insert sad song here~

 XD

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Did I just bring a drama to this thread?  XD
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:


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LOL you guys are so silly. XD

Oh, and I like the fic. :D
:kneelbow:  :kneelbow:  :kneelbow:

Please join in the fun  :grin:



I'LL BE BACK LATER  :heart:


« Last Edit: January 30, 2010, 08:39:08 AM by kRisZ »

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
« Reply #222 on: January 30, 2010, 09:19:28 AM »
My god, that's about 4 pages of wackiness :rofl:


I guess i look innocently cute as well! <- I always force my friends to agree to this.. LOL! but dreadfully mischievous.... XD
WTF?? How many mischievous people are there here?!?!?! XD
Let's count: 1 tall guy hiding behind the tree, 1 on top of the baby tree, 2 playing with the kites...hmm how about all? :lol:


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:rofl: Last time that I said something similar she didn't even notice it so~~~ XD
Her name baddie wasn't in it, probably that's why  XD
Ehhhhh? I saw this earlier but I thought you're talking about someone mischievious like...everyone? :? I'm the innocent one here! :angry:


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@Trey-trey: I'm just a tiny 160 XD
Hmm I told you this before but you really do look tiny XD


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:rofl: SOOOOOOO... Baddie will kill me, and C and rndm will kill you!! XD :twisted:
Nah I'll just skewer you with a walking baby stick and grill you slowly under the baby tree while playing with a kite :twisted:


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NO FREAKIN' WAY!!! I won't let the lurkers of this thread see me puffing my cheeks!!  XD But I can pm to those who want to see~~~ XD
:w00t:  PM!  :on woohoo:  PM!  :mon fyeah:  PM!  :on comhere:
PM! PM! PM!

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
« Reply #223 on: January 30, 2010, 01:02:25 PM »
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*slipped out of rndmnwierd's arm* No, I refuse to be a replacement! *turns into kite C and flies to lonely blue sky*
*pouts* What replacement? I can't have two at the same time to flirt with? *turns into baby tree and, uh, oops, doesn't go anywhere* :sweatdrop:

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It's reddened now
Oh? Guess I'll have to slap the other cheek to make it even. :twisted:

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
« Reply #224 on: January 30, 2010, 01:41:50 PM »
@ K
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  Yay! I'm not alone!  :on gay:
*sulk behind the clouds*

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C CHECKED
Noooo!!! I don't agree on being an antagonist! LOL

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It's reddened now  :cry:
*rubs butt* Yeah that woman don't slap lightly

You're gonna turn me into an emo with that song XD


@ badsaints
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My god, that's about 4 pages of wackiness
That's not counting Bishop's thread  :lol:


@ T-Kun
What others say, PM!


@ rndmnwierd
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What replacement? I can't have two at the same time to flirt with?
Bishop's replacement. I'm one-woman kind of person (I'm so slapping myself XD) but If others are willing to be flirted with you at the same time, feel free.

*starts singing Richard Marx - Slipping away*

If time will show me grace
And you to a better place
Then I can live knowing it wasn't in vain
It hurts so much to know when love means letting go
And no one can tell me that they've felt my pain



See? I'm turning emo  :lol:


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
« Reply #225 on: January 30, 2010, 02:33:02 PM »

@C:

@ T-Kun (Can I call you that? I'm lazy XD)

Then we're two lazy people XD Sure, call me that :grin:

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Well you said you're really cute when puffing your cheek, I couldn't resist  :grin:

Hey!! I'm ALWAYS cute!! XD :grin:

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Ohoho you're so right :twisted:

Hell yeah XD

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K, what do you say to this statement?

:shocked Shit... XD

@kRisZ:

rnd-sama, someone wants some butt slap loving *points at Trey-trey*  :P

Oh come on!! The bishop has already touched my butt!! Let me alone!! :cry: :cry:

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:OMG:  :OMG:  :fainted:

Sorry, but I can't die now... I'm too young :P XD

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Carry it yourself, I won’t give you a hand  :P

WHY?!?!?!?! :cry: I won't be able to carry it in my own :mon whimper:

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:w00t:  PM!  :on woohoo:  PM!  :mon fyeah:  PM!  :on comhere: 

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: Seriously, why the hell are you soooo curious about it?? :P

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:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  Yay! I'm not alone!  :on gay:

Nope, not at all XD BTW, how will this drama end?? XD

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K, what do you say to this statement?
I say PM!  :pepper:   PM!  :pepper:  PM!  :pepper:

*Puffs cheeks one more time*  NOW I DON'T WANT TO PUFF THEM!!! I WON'T PUFF MY CHEEKS FOR YOU, EVIL PEOPLE!! XD :grin:

@Baddie:


WTF?? How many mischievous people are there here?!?!?! XD
Let's count: 1 tall guy hiding behind the tree, 1 on top of the baby tree, 2 playing with the kites...hmm how about all? :lol:

:rofl: All the people?!?! XD

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Ehhhhh? I saw this earlier but I thought you're talking about someone mischievious like...everyone?  I'm the innocent one here!

XD THAT'S NOT TRUE!!!! The only one innocent here is me!!! :grin:

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Nah I'll just skewer you with a walking baby stick and grill you slowly under the baby tree while playing with a kite :twisted:

:shocked That's even worst! XD

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PM! PM! PM!

I had to expect this from you and your evil purposes :cry:


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 19~1/26)
« Reply #226 on: January 30, 2010, 05:00:07 PM »
Trey-trey   :rockon:



COMMENTS REPLY --> TOMORROW me is tired and so sleepy  :D

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UPDATE 20 (Part 1 of 2)



Risa was driving aimlessly. She’s just plain stressed out with everything that’s happening, the unsolved brutal murder case and her now complicated love life. She needed the drive to cool herself down. She’d turn to every corner she came across, driving without any specific direction, until something caught her eyes. She pulled over, locked her car and entered into the flashy building.


“Irasshaimase”


 Risa slightly bowed and only gave a hand signal to the attentive attendant.


“Any particular style in mind?” the attendant said gleefully as he ushered Risa to her seat.


“Any will do. All I needed is to feel light and loosen up a bit.”


“Okay. I know one that will make you.”


She paid no attention to her current state. Her mind wandered outside the premises. And there was only one person that occupied her restless mind, one Takahashi Ai. She smiled upon remembering their first encounter. Her smile grew wider as she took a walk down memory lane.


It was a Saturday night. She was at her usual place at her usual time but alone, her best friend did not go out with her. She was all alone sitting by the counter, sipping some beer, eyeing for prospects. She was there for an hour already, but the place was slow. The crowd was mostly men and there were only a few women but none was of her liking. That’s when she decided to call it a night and head home.


The exit area was slightly dimmed, that and a few ounces of alcohol in her veins, made her tripped over something on the way, making her let out a few curses. She composed herself and was about to exit when she saw a silhouette entered. All she could make out was her strikingly alluring body and her hair swayed with the air when the door opened and closed. When the girl passed by her she smelled sweet flowery scent, which made her stare and follow where the girl headed, to the counter. That’s when she decided to take her seat back and stayed longer.


Upon reclaiming her seat by the counter, that’s when she partially saw the beauty the lady possessed.


A shy but charming smile was given to the bartender as the girl took her drink and walked towards a corner. Her stolen quick glances were not left unnoticed by the man behind the counter.


“She’s a catch” he said while winking at Risa. She only smirked at the statement and ordered another bottle of beer.


Time flew fast, she already drank her third bottle of beer but she could not make her first move. She was somewhat intimidated by the girl, all she did was stare from afar while gulping down some beer. She was about to give up and head home when a few drunkards moved towards the girl, swirling. The girl looked unaware of the advancing men. That’s when she stood up and moved towards her, stopping for a moment where the deranged looking men who restlessly stood in the middle of the tables and gave them a look that made them cringe and walk away.


When she turned and continued walking towards her, the girl was already staring at her.


“Hey... I was wondering if...” Risa’s statement was cut off when the woman in front of her passed out. She froze upon witnessing the girl’s head plopped out onto the table. Regaining her senses back, she dashed forward and checked the girl.


“Hey, are you okay?” she lightly shook the girl but no response was received. She scanned the surrounding and found a young man who jolted back in his seat when their eyes met. Suspicious. She then scanned the girl’s table, examined her glass but it was already empty. When she took a look at the young man again, he was already gone.


“Niigaki-san, is everything okay?” Risa looked up and saw the bartender checking them up.

 
“Yeah, she just passed out. Can you help me carry her so that I can send her home?”


“Sure”


The bartender carried the girl out. Risa looked inside the girl’s bag, hoping she could find an address but she only found keys and a few bucks. She took the keys out and pressed the remote and there they found her car, parked at the corner. She opened it and the bartender gently laid the girl on the passenger’s seat before closing the door.


“Can you manage from here?”


“Yes, thank you Kameru-kun” she then went to the other side and hopped inside the car. Risa tried to look for the address but none was found. Tapping her fingers on the steering wheel she sighed and gave her undivided attention to the girl silently sleeping on the seat.


“Okay, let me take you to a more comfortable bed but first buckle up”


TBC 


There edited :D





Me is tired but I promised to update so yeah  :heart:


« Last Edit: February 01, 2010, 04:56:14 AM by kRisZ »

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #227 on: January 30, 2010, 05:16:49 PM »
:O

Risa brought a girl with her. Seems like trouble in the future.

Thanks for updating even though you're tired  :heart:


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #228 on: January 30, 2010, 05:29:09 PM »
Risa's actually a good girl. :D Get some rest Kz, we'll be here. *pats head*

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I'm one-woman kind of person (I'm so slapping myself ) but If others are willing to be flirted with you at the same time, feel free.
Aww. *pouts*

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #229 on: January 30, 2010, 05:36:48 PM »
GAKISAN!!! :smhid :smhid
still flirting? :smhid

i'm tired..cant comment..
and i'm still sad :cry: :cry:

but then i will remember to say this to you
Good Night kR, have a good sleep..see you in my dream land.. :wub:
(as if if u appear i know it's you.. :nervous)

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #230 on: January 30, 2010, 05:47:30 PM »
Aww. *pouts*

I'm sorry, I'm afraid it will stays that way.
But don't pout, please? --> is actually weak of it.

I swear there should be a rule to ban girls from pouting (and I'm a girl XD)


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and i'm still sad  :cry: :cry:
Aww, cheer up.


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #231 on: January 30, 2010, 06:25:24 PM »
Unless I'm wrong this is a flashback to when Gaki first met Ai. Gaki would never cheat on Ai.  :smhid
For a player, Gaki was really shy around Ai.

I hope Gaki was sober enough when she decided to drive that night.
I don't condone people driving while intoxicated, especially since she is a cop.

Is it bad that I'm more interested in the drama behind the scenes than the story itself?  :nervous



Sweet dreams, author-san.

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #232 on: January 31, 2010, 12:47:55 AM »
@baddie
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My god, that's about 4 pages of wackiness :rofl:
4 pages.?.  :shocked

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Let's count: 1 tall guy hiding behind the tree, 1 on top of the baby tree, 2 playing with the kites...hmm how about all? :lol:
*imagine a granny playing with a kite with her grandchild*  :wub:  :lol:  peace baddie  :grin:

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Ehhhhh? I saw this earlier but I thought you're talking about someone mischievious like...everyone? :? I'm the innocent one here! :angry:
Sorry baddie, no one's gonna believe that  :grin:


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Hmm I told you this before but you really do look tiny XD
That means you are taller? visual  :muffin:  visual  :muffin:  visual  :muffin:

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Nah I'll just skewer you with a walking baby stick and grill you slowly under the baby tree while playing with a kite :twisted:
You meant, walking granny stick  :twisted:

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PM! PM! PM!
Yeah, and include the long legs  :D



@rnd-sama
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*pouts* What replacement? I can't have two at the same time to flirt with? *turns into baby tree and, uh, oops, doesn't go anywhere* :sweatdrop:
:lol:

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Oh? Guess I'll have to slap the other cheek to make it even. :twisted:
:O oh no it's cool. But Trey-trey needs one  :D


@C
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*sulk behind the clouds*
Watch out! There's a tornado behind that  :shocked  XD

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Noooo!!! I don't agree on being an antagonist! LOL
XD It's a challenging role  :P

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*rubs butt* Yeah that woman don't slap lightly
:yep:  did she squeeze yours? *wink wink*  XD  not that she squeezed mine  :P

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You're gonna turn me into an emo with that song XD
:grin: sorry

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That's not counting Bishop's thread  :lol:
:yep:  :lol:

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What others say, PM!
Already got mine. Reminds me *stare at Trey-trey* hey there handsome  *wink wink*  XD

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Bishop's replacement. I'm one-woman kind of person (I'm so slapping myself XD) but If others are willing to be flirted with you at the same time, feel free.
Ummm... really?  :lol:



Trey-trey
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Hey!! I'm ALWAYS cute!! XD :grin:
:roll:

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Ohoho you're so right :twisted:

Hell yeah XD
Arg.

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Oh come on!! The bishop has already touched my butt!! Let me alone!! :cry: :cry:
How was the touch?  :w00t:  :twisted:  XD

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Sorry, but I can't die now... I'm too young :P XD
:smhid

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WHY?!?!?!?! :cry: I won't be able to carry it in my own :mon whimper:
You'll leave me to die at Bishop NI's hands remember? So, no  :smhid that whimper won't work

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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: Seriously, why the hell are you soooo curious about it?? :P
I enjoyed imagining your faces but nothing beats visual aid :twisted:

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Nope, not at all XD BTW, how will this drama end?? XD
That I'm not so sure  XD but I was watching this and I was like OMG!  :w00t:  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:  :lol: I'm so disturbed  XD

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*Puffs cheeks one more time*  NOW I DON'T WANT TO PUFF THEM!!! I WON'T PUFF MY CHEEKS FOR YOU, EVIL PEOPLE!! XD :grin:
Hey, you were the one teasing us  :P

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XD THAT'S NOT TRUE!!!! The only one innocent here is me!!! :grin:
:roll: Why's everyone claiming they're innocent when clearly they're NOT  :P

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I had to expect this from you and your evil purposes :cry:
:lol:  :twothumbs



@C
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Risa brought a girl with her. Seems like trouble in the future.
Ummm  :(  XD

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Thanks for updating even though you're tired  :heart:
It's cool  :)



@rnd-sama
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Risa's actually a good girl. :D Get some rest Kz, we'll be here. *pats head*
:yep:
Thank you  :heart:   :wub:  :lol:

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I'm one-woman kind of person (I'm so slapping myself ) but If others are willing to be flirted with you at the same time, feel free.
Aww. *pouts*
Can you bear looking at that C?



@AA Battery  lol I love teasing you  XD  sorry dear but you know that I love you like Snoopy right?  :D
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GAKISAN!!! :smhid :smhid
still flirting? :smhid
Ummm *goes to read my update*  :D

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i'm tired..cant comment..
I know  :)  You don't have to review the other, it's too time consuming. But you have bunch of readers there so  :twisted:

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and i'm still sad :cry: :cry:
Don't be, your Darling will be here in no time, make her explain  :D

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but then i will remember to say this to you
Good Night kR, have a good sleep..see you in my dream land.. :wub:
(as if if u appear i know it's you.. :nervous)
lol I'll PM mine if you'll PM yours *wink wink*  :grin:



@C
You're name appeared thrice  XD

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I'm sorry, I'm afraid it will stays that way.
But don't pout, please? --> is actually weak of it.
I knew it. rnd-sama pout more  XD

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I swear there should be a rule to ban girls from pouting (and I'm a girl XD)
No, we won't be able to see you  :wigglypanda:   :wub:  and  :ptam-shy:



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Unless I'm wrong this is a flashback to when Gaki first met Ai. Gaki would never cheat on Ai.  :smhid
Yay!  :mon money:

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For a player, Gaki was really shy around Ai.
I'd be, though I'm not a player  XD

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I hope Gaki was sober enough when she decided to drive that night.
I don't condone people driving while intoxicated, especially since she is a cop.
Let's just say she has high tolerance on alcohol  :D

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Is it bad that I'm more interested in the drama behind the scenes than the story itself?  :nervous
:huhuh  :O  :shocked   :fainted: I knw someone would say that   :gyaaah:  :pleeease: :on speedy: but then again me too feels the same   :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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Sweet dreams, author-san.
I actually had a nightmare  :on freeze: but thank you  :heart:

 




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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #233 on: January 31, 2010, 05:26:48 AM »
@ K

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Watch out! There's a tornado behind that  :shocked XD
*flies into another cloud, this time a safe one*

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XD It's a challenging role  :P
:frustrated:

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:yep:  did she squeeze yours? *wink wink*  XD  not that she squeezed mine  :P
:stunned:
Did you just turn really evil in a night?  :lol: Anyway, I'm not answering that  :roll:

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Already got mine. Reminds me *stare at Trey-trey* hey there handsome  *wink wink*  XD
:shocked are you flirting with him?  XD
Got mine too.

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Bishop's replacement. I'm one-woman kind of person (I'm so slapping myself XD) but If others are willing to be flirted with you at the same time, feel free.
Ummm... really?  :lol:
Unfortunately for me yeah :sweatdrop:

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Nope, not at all XD BTW, how will this drama end?? XD
That I'm not so sure  XD but I was watching this
*watches the video* that doesn't look good at all...

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Can you bear looking at that C?
*starts fidgeting* uh....um....

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You're name appeared thrice  XD
:cow:

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I knew it. rnd-sama pout more  XD
NO, DON'T!

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No, we won't be able to see you  :wigglypanda:   :wub:  and  :ptam-shy:
I think you should be the antagonist.

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I actually had a nightmare  :on freeze: but thank you  :heart:
You okay??


@ T-kun
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Then we're two lazy people  XD Sure, call me that  :grin:
:grin:

Nice PM btw.
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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #234 on: January 31, 2010, 06:46:59 AM »
I actually had a nightmare  :on freeze: but thank you  :heart:
Aww... *pats kr-san's back* Is there anyway I can make you feel better?

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #235 on: January 31, 2010, 07:47:13 AM »
@C
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*flies into another cloud, this time a safe one*
:lol:

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:frustrated:
It is  XD

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:stunned:
Did you just turn really evil in a night?  :lol: Anyway, I'm not answering that  :roll:
Just like Bishop NI's word --> it's harmless  :D

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:shocked are you flirting with him?  XD
Did I?  :mon freeze:  :panic:  lol just this once and only for Trey-trey he's just too cool and too harmless

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Unfortunately for me yeah :sweatdrop:
Alright, I'll believe you this time because of that bead of sweat... but that's just me, I won't speak for others  :P

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*watches the video* that doesn't look good at all...
Imagine Bishop NI on a bike and kicking some ass   :rockon:  while her rnd-sama was too  :luvluv1:  into her and then that  :twisted:  XD

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*starts fidgeting* uh....um....
:lol:

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I knew it. rnd-sama pout more  XD
NO, DON'T!
Don't listen to her rnd-sama, pout more  XD

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I think you should be the antagonist.
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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You okay??

Yeah, I'm cool  :)  work was stressful yesterday but I'm good. Thank you  :heart:



@HartAKL85
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Aww... *pats kr-san's back* Is there anyway I can make you feel better?
I'm better, thank you though  :)

 




UPDATE 20 (Part 2 of 2)



Two different moans echoed in the small rented hotel room. Their blanket rustled as they relentlessly move from side to side. One body laid close to the other, delicately touching each other once in a while. Risa’s clothes were drenched with sweat and her companion as well was bathing in sweet scented perspiration. The night was warm and dry. The room’s air conditioner broke down a couple of minutes ago making the temperature rise even more.


Groaning, Risa sat up. Too lazy to open her eyes she removed her clothes in quick motion and tossed them over her shoulders producing a soft thud as they landed on the tiled floor. After completing her task, she then laid down again and snuggled closer to the other girl. The girl next to her was still uneasy, making Risa got up again and went to open the windows before undressing her companion. Just like her clothes’ fate, the girl’s landed on the floor and sprawled everywhere. She returned to her laying position and cuddled the girl again but this time both were calm and at rest. Soft breathing then followed and together they peacefully journeyed to their own dreamland.


When Risa recollected the morning scene after that fateful night, how Ai reacted to waking up without any clothes on, she giggled, attracting the attention of the attendant. She swiftly composed herself and eyed her own reflection on the mirror. That’s when the recent morning incident came into her mind and her previous jolly mood was replaced with a gloomy one.


“Short. I need it short”


“Okay” the attendant responded.


After a few more minutes, everything was finished. She paid the bill and left the building. On her way to her car, she took her phone out, dialed a number and placed it back in after a quick conversation and then she took off.


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The beer was cold when it entered Nakazawa’s mouth and was still cold when it reached her stomach. She’s done eating her lunch at her home when Risa phoned her. While waiting for Risa’s arrival she took another can and waited at her porch.


“That beer had better be as cold as you promised it is” Risa uttered after bowing to her senpai.


“I lied. It’s colder.” She said while handing one to her house guest.


“Thank you” Risa opened it and took one big gulp. Indeed the beer was cool and crisp in her throat.


“What happened to the hair?” Risa only shrugged.


“Have you eaten yet?” Risa did not respond, but her stomach did answer for her, it growled. Shaking her head, Nakazawa stood up and motioned Risa to come inside the house.


“Take a seat, I’ll get your food” Risa obeyed and proceeded to the dining table.


“Here. It’s not healthy intaking alcohol without any food down there”


“Thank you. Have you seen our report?”


“Yeah, this morning”


“Any progress with the search team?”


“They are still on it” Nakazawa replied while giving out a loud sigh. Exasperated that the crime remained unsolved and the criminal still at large. The room went silent. Risa continued eating her brunch while Nakazawa gulped down her second can when the phone rang.


“Moshi-moshi”


“What?! Where?!” Risa placed down her chopsticks and focused her attention to her senpai’s.


“Someone’s found dead.”




*blink*  :D
« Last Edit: February 01, 2010, 05:06:45 AM by kRisZ »

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #236 on: January 31, 2010, 08:30:42 AM »
*reads through what Ive missed**cough*

o--k... I will just go straight to commenting about the fic. Though I have to say I didn't know AlwaysYou and Ame knew each other. Oh and Im still confused about the kite bit @@

Those men must be pissed they couldn't get their hands on Ai. Risa to the rescue!! I always knew the bean would make a good prince charming ^^

Yep it's a clean sock but a used one is fine too XD

Edit : Ahh you updated again juz after I posted a comment. Awww why didn't you make the scene where TakaGaki was in bed longer? :P
« Last Edit: January 31, 2010, 08:35:07 AM by lil_hamz »

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #237 on: January 31, 2010, 09:40:43 AM »
Woah the bar girl is the one who died right? And Risa is gonna get implicated since she's one of the last to see that girl :O That guy who disappeared at the bar is so suspicious. My guess is that he has something to do with this :sweatdrop: Wahhhhhh don't you dare do anything to Risa :angry:


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Hmm I told you this before but you really do look tiny XD
That means you are taller? visual  :muffin:  visual  :muffin:  visual  :muffin:
Nuh-uh No way :smhid Lol I'm actually the same height as Baby Sticky AND I don't walk like a penguin with a walking stick XD


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I had to expect this from you and your evil purposes :cry:
:lol:  :twothumbs
Grrrrrrr :angry:


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I actually had a nightmare  :on freeze: but thank you  :heart:
That you were stuck in a tornado? :lol:
 

@ Trey-Trey: YOU DA' MAN! :wub: Can I join your fanclub? XD

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #238 on: January 31, 2010, 09:54:56 AM »
@lil_hamz
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Though I have to say I didn't know AlwaysYou and Ame knew each other.
Umm... I'm not sure if they knew each other personally. So... ummm... guess we have to wait for their say to this

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Oh and Im still confused about the kite bit @@
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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I always knew the bean would make a good prince charming ^^
Just like Christopher ... ... ... that's all I can remember from her overly long name XD

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Yep it's a clean sock but a used one is fine too XD
:shocked  XD

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Awww why didn't you make the scene where TakaGaki was in bed longer? :P
I'm still learning  :D



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Woah the bar girl is the one who died right?

I think I need to re-write that update  :fainted:  :fainted:  :fainted: you're the third reader that said that   :depressed:   Damn I'm really struggling XD


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That guy who disappeared at the bar is so suspicious.

Umm..    :D

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Wahhhhhh don't you dare do anything to Risa :angry:
She's a grown up and a cop, don't worry much  :D

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Nuh-uh No way :smhid Lol I'm actually the same height as Baby Sticky
Okay  :pimp:

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AND I don't walk like a penguin with a walking stick XD
:lol:  :lol:  :lol: The power of imaginations   :twisted:


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I had to expect this from you and your evil purposes :cry:
:lol:  :twothumbs
Grrrrrrr :angry:
You're the ebil around here so  XD

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That you were stuck in a tornado? :lol:
You're mean  :mon waterworks:
 

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@ Trey-Trey: YOU DA' MAN! :wub: Can I join your fanclub? XD
Trey-trey, where are you?  :mon look:
« Last Edit: January 31, 2010, 10:15:28 AM by kRisZ »

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #239 on: January 31, 2010, 10:32:02 AM »
Waaaahh so long since last time i read or comment ur updated T^T
studying and exams are really take all my times <_<

but now I'm back.......But untill when  :smhid
 I like this story so much <3 <3

@.@ I'm a bit lost about everyone flirt and all,
so i Will only comment about the chapter and catch up later ^^"""
but damn you are crazy and hilarious  XD

I want TakaGaki together :angry:
the flashback about how they met is nice......
But why nothing happened in the hotel room :twisted:
OMG HOPE it's not Ai the new Victims >___<
Go Risa you have to résolve that crime and be with Ai-chan
« Last Edit: January 31, 2010, 10:55:53 AM by YumePouk »
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