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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #240 on: January 31, 2010, 10:54:55 AM »
@Haruka
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I love your fics x)

Hope you can made another chap =)
:farofflook: Even S!hu! never mentioned she likes this story even in the slightest bit and this was originally written for her   :farofflook:

I will try to finish my short update and probably post it later  :) and this time it will be written for you  :)  and not for the perv*** S!hu!
ok..i just saw this..LOL!!!..
MUST i say i like this fic?you should know how i feel about it right  :wub: :wub:
things doesnt need to be say out ne~
and damn, seem like i am a perv image in ur mind already.. :lol: :lol:


i and Ame..
hmm..does we know each other? :lol: :lol:


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Groaning, Risa sat up. Too lazy to open her eyes she removed her clothes in quick motion and tossed them over her shoulders producing a soft thud as they landed on the tiled floor.
i bet gakisan just LOVE naked bodies..XD

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“Someone’s found dead.”
again?!
the bar girl..pity that her appearance is SO short..XD XD

and now i really thinks that
kR, you are evil!!!
you been killing so many people in your fic..XD
so you better have a good hot and sexy ending.. :D


edit:did i get a new page?XD XD
« Last Edit: January 31, 2010, 10:57:06 AM by alwaysYou »

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #241 on: January 31, 2010, 01:07:31 PM »
@ K

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Just like Bishop NI's word --> it's harmless  :D
Ooohkay.

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Did I?  :mon freeze:  :panic:  lol just this once and only for Trey-trey he's just too cool and too harmless
:lol:

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Alright, I'll believe you this time because of that bead of sweat... but that's just me, I won't speak for others  :P
Well, that's how it is for me so far but since here isn't rl and now that I think about about Bishop's word “harmless”, maybe I should reconsider... :twisted:

No, No, C, you shouldn't join the ebil side *talks to self*

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Imagine Bishop NI on a bike and kicking some ass   :rockon:  while her rnd-sama was too  :luvluv1:  into her and then that  :twisted:  XD
*sigh* you just stomped upon this crushed heart of mine.... *sigh*

XD

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Don't listen to her rnd-sama, pout more  XD
EBIL

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Yeah, I'm cool  :)  work was stressful yesterday but I'm good. Thank you  :heart:
Good to know :)


Ah so it's a flashback? I was actually wondering about whether it's a flashback or not. This part is what makes me think it's a flashback:
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Her smile grew wider as she took a walk down memory lane.

And this part what made me confused:
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It was a Saturday night. She was at her usual place at her usual time but alone, her best friend did not go out with her.
I thought you simply continue and didn't elaborate Risa's memory  :nervous

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“Someone’s found dead.”
Wow, another one.

You changed your custom title, but Kameru-sama?  :mon huh:


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You're getting popular LOL you go boy!


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #242 on: January 31, 2010, 01:38:25 PM »
First, on the chapter.  :wub: :wub: Risa's short hair makes an appearance! :wub: :wub: I knew that's what was going to happen. Really, no really, I knew.

Oh noes, someone else is dead! *pleasenotAipleasenotAi* Or Miki...

Wants moar....

Now, onto other stuff.
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But don't pout, please? --> is actually weak of it.
*still pouts, eyes water* I'm adorable, you know you can't resist me. Maybe if you kiss it better, I'll stop. :cry: :cry:

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did she squeeze yours? *wink wink* XD   not that she squeezed mine
*squeezes Kz's butt* Hey, you asked for it. Seku Hara! Seku Hara!

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oh no it's cool. But Trey-trey needs one
Hey Trey-Trey! I'm dragging you into this one! *Slaps Trey-Trey's butt hard* XD Boy cooties... :lol:

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #243 on: January 31, 2010, 01:53:14 PM »
*still pouts, eyes water* I'm adorable, you know you can't resist me. Maybe if you kiss it better, I'll stop. :cry: :cry:

*facepalm* oh dear Camel-sama, I'm weak with girls pout but a girl crying is my ultimate weakness  :mon surr:

Kiss? *blush* Uh.... *speechless* --> is lame like that

(Damn you K! LOL)

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*squeezes Kz's butt* Hey, you asked for it.
:on lol:
« Last Edit: January 31, 2010, 01:55:41 PM by pretend_2besome1 »


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #244 on: January 31, 2010, 02:13:45 PM »
^I'm still waiting for my kiss. :P

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #245 on: January 31, 2010, 02:18:45 PM »
^ But...but it's a kiss! A KISS *starts panicking*

(Somebody help me!!  :imdead:)


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #246 on: January 31, 2010, 02:20:24 PM »
^No one's around. Why fight it?  :hee: :on comhere:

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #247 on: January 31, 2010, 02:29:22 PM »
You guys, I can see you ol dammit!!

^ Coz I don't kiss anyone freely even if it's the person I like?  :nervous  (I know I'm so lame but it's true)


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #248 on: January 31, 2010, 02:33:18 PM »
*breaks out into Resonant Blue* Asobi ja kissu shinai!

Actually I agree, if you had assented to a kiss, I probably would have run away in fright. :lol: :lol: *pats C on the head* Yay, I like you. XD

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #249 on: January 31, 2010, 02:38:14 PM »
@YumePouk
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Waaaahh so long since last time i read or comment ur updated T^T
studying and exams are really take all my times <_<
School is much more important  :)  Ganbatte  :onioncheer:

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I like this story so much <3 <3

 :mon fyeah:  :kneelbow:

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@.@ I'm a bit lost about everyone flirt and all,
so i Will only comment about the chapter and catch up later ^^"""
but damn you are crazy and hilarious  XD
:lol:  :lol:  :lol: Take your time There are others here who are crazier than me  :D

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But why nothing happened in the hotel room :twisted:
Ohh, another S!hu!  XD

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OMG HOPE it's not Ai the new Victims >___<
:pimp:


@S!hu!
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ok..i just saw this..LOL!!!..
:(

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MUST i say i like this fic?you should know how i feel about it right  :wub: :wub:
things doesnt need to be say out ne~
:w00t:  XD

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and damn, seem like i am a perv image in ur mind already.. :lol: :lol:
:twisted: well you know I really don't -- > me is good today  :)  

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i bet gakisan just LOVE naked bodies..XD
Don't you love naked bodies?  :twisted:

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again?!
:lol:

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and now i really thinks that
kR, you are evil!!!
:mon wtf:

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so you better have a good hot and sexy ending.. :D
Arg. See? You don't really love this fic  :err:  since you're now talking about the ending  :fainted:

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edit:did i get a new page?XD XD
:cow:


C
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Ooohkay.
:yep:  :halo:

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Well, that's how it is for me so far but since here isn't rl and now that I think about about Bishop's word “harmless”, maybe I should reconsider... :twisted:
:whip:  let that ebil in you surface  :twisted:

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No, No, C, you shouldn't join the ebil side *talks to self*
:whip:  :whip:  :whip:

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*sigh* you just stomped upon this crushed heart of mine.... *sigh*
Oh  :O  well there's you and S!hu! in the story... somewhere along the tip of Bishop NI's rainbow  XD

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EBIL
:lol: wait... am I?  :O

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Good to know :)
:heart:

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This part is what makes me think it's a flashback:
And this part what made me confused:
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I thought you simply continue and didn't elaborate Risa's memory  :nervous
XD I will edit it a bit or not   :lol:

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You changed your custom title, but Kameru-sama?  :mon huh:
Camel-sama  :D

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@ T-kun
You're getting popular LOL you go boy!
:guitar:


@rnd-sama
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First, on the chapter.  :wub: :wub: Risa's short hair makes an appearance! :wub: :wub:
:pepper: :pepper: :pepper:

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I knew that's what was going to happen. Really, no really, I knew.
:shocked You peeked nee? No peeking please  >:(   :P

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Oh noes, someone else is dead! *pleasenotAipleasenotAi* Or Miki...
Lemme think about it  :twisted:

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*still pouts, eyes water* I'm adorable, you know you can't resist me. Maybe if you kiss it better, I'll stop. :cry: :cry:
:w00t:  :w00t:  :w00t:

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*squeezes Kz's butt* Hey, you asked for it. Seku Hara! Seku Hara!
:shocked  :shocked  :shocked MORE  :twisted:  :lol:

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Hey Trey-Trey! I'm dragging you into this one! *Slaps Trey-Trey's butt hard* XD Boy cooties... :lol:
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:



@C
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*facepalm* oh dear Camel-sama, I'm weak with girls pout but a girl crying is my ultimate weakness  :mon surr:
Kiss her already  :drool:

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(Damn you K! LOL)
:mon rush:


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I'm still waiting for my kiss. :P
Give in already  :twisted:

*reads the convo*
 :w00t:  :w00t:  :w00t:
Aww... no kiss?  :roll:

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #250 on: January 31, 2010, 02:45:04 PM »
Quote from: Kz
:shocked :shocked :shocked MORE   :twisted: :lol:

*gives Miki style wedgie* XD

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #251 on: January 31, 2010, 02:48:11 PM »
^
 :lol:


Ouch! That hurts be gentle please  :love:
 XD

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #252 on: January 31, 2010, 02:51:36 PM »
@ rndmnwierd

Phew....

So we're good, right?

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*pats C on the head* Yay, I like you.
:on woohoo:


Anyway sorry for before guys, I'm on the verge of freaking out  :sweatdrop:
« Last Edit: January 31, 2010, 02:58:48 PM by pretend_2besome1 »


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #253 on: January 31, 2010, 02:51:58 PM »
if ai is the victims, that mean your fic end in the next chp.. :lol: :lol: :lol:

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well you know I really don't -- > me is good today
well, just today..XD

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Don't you love naked bodies?  :twisted:
shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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so you better have a good hot and sexy ending.. :D
Arg. See? You don't really love this fic  :err:  since you're now talking about the ending  :fainted:
if i dont love it, i wont be talking about the ending already..XD XD


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #254 on: January 31, 2010, 02:56:48 PM »
@rnd-sama
please say no to this
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So we're good, right?
  :twisted:


@AA Battery  :P
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if ai is the victims, that mean your fic end in the next chp.. :lol: :lol: :lol:
Arg.

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well, just today..XD
no, just that minute  :twisted:

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shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Oh. Okay, it's just between the two of us  XD

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if i dont love it, i wont be talking about the ending already..XD XD
Why do I feel otherwise  :fainted:


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #255 on: January 31, 2010, 03:03:19 PM »
AA Battery..LOL..
whenever i see this i feel like  :kickass: :knee:
XD XD

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no, just that minute  :twisted:
EVIL

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Oh. Okay, it's just between the two of us 
i think it's not just between 2 of us already.. :lol: :lol:

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Why do I feel otherwise
that y i say u are evil.. :angry:






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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #256 on: January 31, 2010, 03:06:40 PM »

Wow... this is going to be hella long... XD

Trey-trey   :rockon:

:rofl:

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*READS CHAP*

Nice one XD So that's how they met! Risa was going hunting... XD :grin:

@kRisZ:

Sorry baddie, no one's gonna believe that  :grin:

:rofl:

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Yeah, and include the long legs :D

NO WAY!! You don't want to help me carrying the sequoia, so I won't take more photos XD

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oh no it's cool. But Trey-trey needs one

*Swallows hard*  :P

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Already got mine. Reminds me *stare at Trey-trey* hey there handsome  *wink wink* XD

:imdead: Now I'm going to be too a victim of the flirts?? XD XD XD

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Hey!! I'm always cute!!
:roll:

:grin: It's true! XD

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How was the touch?

I'm not going to answer that! XD S!hu! deserves some respect XD

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You'll leave me to die at Bishop NI's hands remember? So, no :smhid that whimper won't work

:mon sweat: Please...?? :cry:

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I enjoyed imagining your faces but nothing beats visual aid  :twisted:

See, that's why I don't want to show it XD You'll have to leave with the wonder... :twisted:

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*WATCHES VIDEO*

OMG! XD XD XD That explains everything :grin:

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Hey, you were the one teasing us :P

I wasn't!! I was just saying the truth... XD XD XD

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Why's everyone claiming they're innocent when clearly they're NOT :P

XD Dunno... But why is it so obvious?? :grin:

@C:

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Already got mine. Reminds me *stare at Trey-trey* hey there handsome  *wink wink*  XD
:shocked are you flirting with him?  XD
Got mine too.

SHE IS!!!! XD She seemed to be less perv than the others, and look at her now!! :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

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*watches the video* that doesn't look good at all...

:rofl: Yeah...  :P

@kRisZ *again XD*:

Did I?  :mon freeze:  :panic:  lol just this once and only for Trey-trey he's just too cool and too harmless

:rofl: See, I'm the less evil here :mon innocent: XD

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*READS*

:mon suspect:

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“Someone’s found dead.”

:mon wtf: Oh shit...

@baddie:

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@ Trey-Trey: YOU DA' MAN! :wub: Can I join your fanclub? XD

:shocked YOU TOO?!?!?!  XD Sure, join it... But I didn't even know that I had one :grin:

@kRisZ *one more time*:

Trey-trey, where are you?

At that hour... sleeping XD And when you posted the other chapter... babysitting my niece XD

@C *again*:

You're getting popular LOL you go boy!

Seems so... XD I can't say I blame them... :twisted: :P

@rndm:

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Hey Trey-Trey! I'm dragging you into this one! *Slaps Trey-Trey's butt hard*

AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! XD XD XD


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #257 on: January 31, 2010, 03:07:45 PM »
@AA Battery
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AA Battery..LOL..
whenever i see this i feel like  :kickass: :knee:
XD XD
:shocked You're brutal  :lol:  :lol:

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EVIL
:cry:

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i think it's not just between 2 of us already.. :lol: :lol:
XD

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that y i say u are evil.. :angry:
:gyaaah:


« Last Edit: January 31, 2010, 03:15:05 PM by kRisZ »

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #258 on: January 31, 2010, 03:11:56 PM »
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:whip:  let that ebil in you surface  :twisted:
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No, No, C, you shouldn't join the ebil side *talks to self*
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:whip:  :whip:  :whip:
:smhid

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*sigh* you just stomped upon this crushed heart of mine.... *sigh*
Oh  :O  well there's you and S!hu! in the story... somewhere along the tip of Bishop NI's rainbow  XD
Don't remind me  :on cloudeye:

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Camel-sama  :D
:O  :rockon:

@rnd-sama
please say no to this
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So we're good, right?
  :twisted:
See? EVIL!

@ T-kun
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SHE IS!!!! XD She seemed to be less perv than the others, and look at her now!! :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
She's the evil mastermind XD


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 20~1/30)
« Reply #259 on: January 31, 2010, 03:31:05 PM »
@Trey-trey
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NO WAY!! You don't want to help me carrying the sequoia, so I won't take more photos XD
aww. Where's the fun  :twisted:

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*Swallows hard*  :P
:lol:

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:imdead: Now I'm going to be too a victim of the flirts?? XD XD XD
And we are just Jrs.  :lol: We'll wait for The Big Flirt Bishop NI  XD

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:grin: It's true! XD
Okay  :)  :lol:

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I'm not going to answer that! XD S!hu! deserves some respect XD
No comment  :twisted: I love you Snoopy S!hu!  :D

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:mon sweat: Please...?? :cry:
I still won't. I have new plan, how about we infiltrate NASA and stalk Bishop NI from there  XD

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See, that's why I don't want to show it XD You'll have to leave with the wonder... :twisted:
But you already did  :P

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OMG! XD XD XD That explains everything :grin:
XD

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I wasn't!! I was just saying the truth... XD XD XD
:roll:

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XD Dunno... But why is it so obvious?? :grin:
:yep:  XD

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SHE IS!!!! XD She seemed to be less perv than the others, and look at her now!! :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Really?  less perv?  :love:   XD Well I am actually  :yep:  :lol:

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:rofl: See, I'm the less evil here :mon innocent: XD
Oh so that means everyone is much more ebil than you?  :lol:

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At that hour... sleeping XD And when you posted the other chapter... babysitting my niece XD
Ain't that cute  :wub:

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Seems so... XD I can't say I blame them... :twisted: :P
:roll:


@C
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Don't remind me  :on cloudeye:
:grin:

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:O  :rockon:
:rockon:

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See? EVIL!
OMG that was typewritten in BOLD  :shocked  :fainted:

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She's the evil mastermind XD
Ummm... should I be happy?   :mon huh:


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Anyway sorry for before guys, I'm on the verge of freaking out 
Lol. Honey, it's just a kiss :)  Come here, we'll practice so that you won't freak out next time  :twisted:
« Last Edit: January 31, 2010, 03:40:41 PM by kRisZ »

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