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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
« Reply #360 on: February 15, 2010, 02:19:54 AM »
kyaaaa krisz :cow:

really hot XD and sweet

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
« Reply #361 on: February 15, 2010, 03:03:59 AM »
KYA!  :mon blood:
my favorite update so far  :mon inluv:

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"They’re on fire."
I'm wondering if we'll get to see how this fire started  :mon misch:
It couldn't just be from wandering hands  :mon evillaff:

EDIT: Just thought about it and maybe it can O_O enough friction could....:mon blood: :imdead:
« Last Edit: February 19, 2010, 02:02:17 AM by Swtme03 »

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
« Reply #362 on: February 15, 2010, 07:26:26 AM »
@ Treykun: How could you possibly say I am ebil??? Just because I have a natural grin that makes me ebil doesn't mean I am ebil  :gyaaah: 

BTW, I saw the photo and makes me want to  :monk gboy: and you're right I may not understand K's logic but I think I know why I would have mixed conclusions about your legs (I agree with K and yourself)  :mon lol:  Kawaii!!!!!

@ K: So you like being called ebil eh?  :mon misch: you're so cute. (Thanks to C's heads up about that) *Finds C*  :mon look: *high-five*

About the fic, should I expect details on the last scene  :on bleed:??? DO IT!!!!! YOU KNOW YOU WANT IT!!!!!!!  :on_hot:

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
« Reply #363 on: February 15, 2010, 02:46:03 PM »
:OMG:  SLANDER SLANDER!

Dear K:

It has come to my attention that you have made an unauthorized use of my copyrighted username "amEthystx" in the preparation of a work. I have reserved all rights in my username, first published in 05 Feb 2009 in JPH!P. Your work entitled "Whispering Words Unsaid", the character, "Ame" is essentially hinting my username.

As you neither asked for nor received permission to use the username, I believe you have willfully infringed my rights under 17 U.S.C. Section 101 et seq. and could be liable for statutory damages as high as 100 sessions of Trey-trey whole body hair super glue removal treatment, C's Baseball bat smacking as well as Baby Sticky Tree's butt spanking as set forth in Section 504(c)(2) therein.

Very truly yours,

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“You haven’t started your explanation yet, why would I give you back your importance?”
- XD scary~~~~

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'Why can’t Ame keep her sluttishness to herself when I needed it the most?
- *Points at the above letter and pouts.....* But at least... i got to kiss Risa and Eri... Didn;t I? XD

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First remembered but second time in Ai’s mind, made her calm and content.
- LOL~ Did Risa still think that Ai-chan raped her? i don't remember Ai-chan talking about it... or did she?! Getting old here.... *sighs*


@Trey-trey~  :monk gboy: :
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-I'm sorry Trey-trey... your hairy leg made an appearance.. *Hummmmm* OH DEAR LORD...such disturbing sight... LOL~
:depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed:

What have I done to deserve this...?????????  :cry: :cry:
  :monk gboy: :monk gboy: So cute!

@Granny:
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'Why can’t Ame keep her sluttishness to herself when I needed it the most?
*stares @ Sticky* So you're the culprit!
- :) <- ebil smile

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
« Reply #364 on: February 15, 2010, 04:49:38 PM »
@ FaqU
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Just because I have a natural grin that makes me ebil doesn't mean I am ebil
XD XD

What I meant is that she liked that smiley, though this just between you and me  :mon psst: but I think she does likes being ebil 
:P

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*Finds C*   :mon look:  *high-five*
LOL what's with you and K looking for me. *high 5 back*

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you're so cute.
:yep:  K's cute. When she's not in ebil mode that is...


@ Bishop
The letter  :rofl:


« Last Edit: February 15, 2010, 06:24:15 PM by pretend_2besome1 »


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
« Reply #365 on: February 15, 2010, 05:07:19 PM »
 :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

Will comment tomorrow, my eyelids are dropping  :D


Goodnight  :heart:

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
« Reply #366 on: February 22, 2010, 04:34:38 PM »
NO COMMENTS' REPLY my connection's acting up atm




UPDATE 24



The wind was calm. The water was crystal clear. The surrounding was peaceful and tranquil. Wearing huge sunglasses and a white dotted maya blue bikini, Ai was on a folding beach chair enjoying the full comfort and rest it provides while lovingly watching her Risa who’s in the water. The short haired girl was a few meters away from the shoreline, competing in freestyle swimming with her buddy Eri.


“Here” Sayumi handed Ai her Piña colada before taking her seat next to Ai’s. The two set of couples were at a secluded resort, relaxing at a beach of soft sparkling white sand elegantly fringed by palm trees. The two cops were given a three-day vacation leave to replenish their energy after the man who attacked Ai was found dead inside an abandoned warehouse.


“Those two are like kids when they’re together” shaking her head whilst smiling, Sayumi started the conversation. “They’ve been like that since the day I met them, playing like they are little kids whenever possible.” the Bunny in white bikini continued.


Ai only smiled as she listened intently while still watching the two, who were splashing some water at each other.


“So, what do you do for a living?” Sayu inquired the silent Ai.


“I’m a novelist”


“Really? How nice!”


“Hey! You two! You coming or what!?” shouted Risa while trying to dodge Eri’s water attacks but failed miserably.


When the two women didn’t move, Risa gave Eri a signal and they marched toward the two grinning ladies wearing their blank faces. The two cops carried their partners, bridal style, walked back into the sea and threw the two simultaneously into the water. Before the two thrown ladies could even stand properly on their two feet, they received non-stop water attacks from the two laughing cops.


But the flying water brought to an end when their targets remained motionless despite the water attacks they had received. The two aggressors stopped and prepared themselves for any retaliation from the two glaring ladies. Risa and Eri exchanged worried looks when the two stayed still and spoke nothing. Without opening their mouth for their next move, the two cops ran away in opposite directions and left their partners rooted in the water.


Moments later they were being chased by their respective partners. Sayu being slow was left far behind by the fast running Eri. While Risa, on the other hand, was not that far from her pursuer. Risa let out high pitched squeaks when she looked back and saw the smiling Ai so close behind. When Ai grabbed a hold of her Risa, she tripped and toppled over the cop, making them roll on the soft white sand.


Giggling, the two continued to roll over the sand with their bodies clung together in an affectionate embrace.  But their giggles subsided when the short haired girl decided to end their play when she was already on top of Ai. Staring sweetly while gingerly running her hand on Ai’s face, she smiled. Ai stayed quiet but her hands clung on Risa’s slender waist, waiting for Risa’s next move.


Risa watched Ai’s enticing feature inch by inch. Clearly, she was captivated by the natural beauty under her. Her long silky hair, her peeking ears, her perfect tone skin, her just right nose and her deep brown eyes which definitely bewitched her every time. “You’re so beautiful” Risa whispered with a trace of affection in her eyes.


With her darkened eyes, the younger gently nuzzled her nose to and fro against the older, lightly brushing their lips as well in the process. After a while and satisfied with her action, Risa retreated a little and stared deeply into the dark brown orbs in front of her. She then pressed a long and adoring kiss on Ai’s forehead before settling down comfortably on Ai’s neck. They stayed in that position for a little while, enjoying the warmth each of them gave off to one another.


Above the two was a brilliant red sunset fading into a bruised purple, adding a little romance to the already romantic atmosphere the two shared.



 :D




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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
« Reply #367 on: February 22, 2010, 04:45:04 PM »
XD FIRST!

Fluff!  :wub: :wub:

Makes me think or the resort i went too XD

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Wearing huge sunglasses and a white dotted maya blue bikini,
- Hmmm...  :yep: huge sunglasses is of good use at a beach... XD

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Sayu being slow was left far behind by the fast running Eri.
XD What happened to them after that? :P

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Risa let out high pitched squeaks when she looked back and saw the smiling Ai so close behind.
:rofl:

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Above the two was a brilliant red sunset fading into a bruised purple, adding a little romance to the already romantic atmosphere the two shared.
  :wub: :wub:

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
« Reply #368 on: February 22, 2010, 04:54:12 PM »
^
Yeah, like gawking at those people in bikini unnoticed  :twisted:   :lol:


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
« Reply #369 on: February 22, 2010, 06:07:25 PM »
YAAY!! UPDATES!!

My heart is all doki doki for this chapter!  :heart:
I couldn't stop saying "awwwWWWWW!!" in my head  :lol:

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The two cops were given a three-day vacation leave to replenish their energy after the man who attacked Ai was found dead inside an abandoned warehouse.
:mon wtf:
Wasn't expecting THAT!


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
« Reply #370 on: February 22, 2010, 06:57:56 PM »
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The two cops were given a three-day vacation leave to replenish their energy after the man who attacked Ai was found dead inside an abandoned warehouse.

Wait a minute.....wasn't that Tsunku?  :?
'Cuz if it was, I had a feeling that he would be the one to end up dead.
Of course that doesn't mean that the killings will end....

If I know K's ebil mind, which I hope I don't for all our sakes, she's giving us a false sense of peace (i.e. all this TakaGaki fluff) until droping a huge atomic bomb that will make most of us, except me, go 'WTF?'

As much as I :heart: bikini-clad TakaGaki making out on the sand, I would imagine that would be uncomfortable IRL.
All that sand getting everywhere.........in certain areas........
Uh, what was I saying again? :huhuh

*re-reads chapter carefully*
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“I’m a novelist”
This feels oddly familiar.....
Like a movie I once saw long ago.....
What are you thinking, K?

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
« Reply #371 on: February 22, 2010, 08:24:27 PM »
last sentence was just the clincher,  :wub: :wub:
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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
« Reply #372 on: February 23, 2010, 07:34:11 AM »
last sentence was just the clincher,  :wub: :wub:


ohh yeah jajaja i agree , very sweet  :heart:

Thanks for this  :bow:

So...and Eri-sayu? lol They got lost...in the beach... :wub: my mind is working XD


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
« Reply #373 on: February 23, 2010, 10:23:45 AM »
I just finished reading through your entire story and I must say that I love it, Gaki-cop = utter hottness  :drool: and Ai = :heart: XD  I want moreeee!   :wub:  Good job! And I will be watching for your next update!!  :grin:
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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
« Reply #374 on: February 23, 2010, 12:57:02 PM »
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while lovingly watching her Risa who’s in the water.
:twothumbs

They were given vacation days? Where do I sign up for Yuko’s troop?  XD

Well, it’s fun to play like little kids  :D

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“I’m a novelist”
Oh, didn’t see that one coming.

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The two cops carried their partners, bridal style, walked back into the sea and threw the two simultaneously into the water.
:rockon:

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Without opening their mouth for their next move, the two cops ran away in opposite directions
:lol:


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
« Reply #375 on: February 23, 2010, 01:08:09 PM »
just a short comment, i'm sick and feeling tired now..sorry

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The two cops carried their partners, bridal style, walked back into the sea and threw the two simultaneously into the water.
doesnt gakisan know that aichan is scared of water..
opps, that is reality.. :lol: (alo hello 3)

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Sayu being slow was left far behind by the fast running Eri.
the only turtle that run faster then a rabbit

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“You’re so beautiful” Risa whispered with a trace of affection in her eyes.
:wub:
control gakisan!!!
you in the public!!!

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With her darkened eyes, the younger gently nuzzled her nose to and fro against the older, lightly brushing their lips as well in the process.
favorite line..so sweet and lovely


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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 23~2/14)
« Reply #376 on: February 23, 2010, 02:07:20 PM »
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The two cops were given a three-day vacation leave to replenish their energy after the man who attacked Ai was found dead inside an abandoned warehouse.
Ehh a dead man in the warehouse (even if he's allegedly a criminal) and they get 3 days off? What happened to investigating the murder?

Aww TakaGaki is so cute :wub: :wub: :wub:


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Wearing huge sunglasses and a white dotted maya blue bikini,
- Hmmm...  :yep: huge sunglasses is of good use at a beach... XD
Shhhh....don't give the secret away :lol:

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
« Reply #377 on: February 23, 2010, 05:19:40 PM »
Replies only  :P

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A special Valentine's Day gift K - :monk gboy: (and a box of :JD::P)
lol   :JD:.   Thank you  :kneelbow:



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*stares @ Sticky* So you're the culprit! :angry:
:yep:  XD

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Happy Chinese New Year! & Happy Valentine/Friendship Day!!! :yossi:
This is very late but  :kneelbow:


Trey-trey
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:depressed: My predictions never fail... :cry:
:twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:

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Ok, I'll kill you if you insist... :twisted: :twisted: XD I just have to smash you with the sequoia :kekeke:
O!M!G!  :scared:  :err:  :gyaaah:

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My cuteness it's not the problem... :cry: It's your ebilness... :cry: :cry:
XD  XD  XD

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XD At last... :farofflook: But I have the feeling that something huge is gonna happen... And I'm psychic... XD XD XD
:pimp:

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Well, happy V-day even if I think that this is just a day of commercialism... :bigdeal: XD
lolz  :heart:



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It's okay  ;)  it's quite funny actually and I'm like that irl  :sweatdrop:
Yeah.?.  :w00t:  How cute  :inlove:

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Oh I like that  XD
You do?
I'm not sure anymore  :D

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Awww :monk gboy:  (since you said you like it) you shoulda stop being ebil K
:mon whimper:

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Somehow reading that just makes me wanna sigh... XD
You love Korean drama too.?.  :D

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Well, it's kinda hard to pry your eyes from a Korean drama movie.
One reason - to read the subtitles  :P

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Touche.

Yay!

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Wait, Ame --> Ame? (that's confusing lol)
I'm sure by now you know who Ame is already :D



S!hu!
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i also want to know.. :lol:
:lol:

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nehz, i just beginner.. 8)
a Pro beginner  :yep:  XD

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:on slopkiss:
(it look disgusting :nervous :lol:)
Damn...  :lol:  S!hu!  XD

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cause you are pervert..so you wont think properly..XD
Arg.  :fainted:

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that my aichan.. :wub:
focus focus and still focus
True  :D

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no no, you can come to me anytime.. 8)
lol

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nice one!!! :lol:
Yeah.?.  :D

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i definitely wont move in bit by bit if aichan is infront of me!
Oh Dear  :lol:  pervert  :P

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:wub:  :oops:
just a simple action, make me go  :drool: :oops:
LOL
i bet  :twisted:   XD

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aichan still have the mindset that gakisan "rape" her the last time..XD XD
Well Risa did not say anything about it so yeah  XD

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somehow, i wanna ask for a full detail perv..LOL!!..
nehz..no, i dont want...
i'm not pervert.. :lol: :lol:
:shocked

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HAPPY V V  DAY TO YOU!
Double V  :D



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Yay!  :twothumbs TakaGaki Update :heart:
:D  :kneelbow:

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Happi Valentine's Day~  :wub:
♥(人´∀`*)
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really hot XD and sweet
Yeah.?.  :D  :kneelbow:

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Happy Valentine's Day!! :heart:
:heart:

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And thank you for this :shakeit:
No sweat  :shakeit:



Swtme03
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KYA!  :mon blood:
my favorite update so far  :mon inluv:
Yay!  :kneelbow:

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I'm wondering if we'll get to see how this fire started  :mon misch:
It couldn't just be from wandering hands  :mon evillaff:
XD  XD  XD

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EDIT: Just thought about it and maybe it can O_O enough friction could....:mon blood: :imdead:
:shocked  :mon blood:



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@ Treykun: How could you possibly say I am ebil??? Just because I have a natural grin that makes me ebil doesn't mean I am ebil  :gyaaah: 
Yay! Me wanna see that ebil grin  :on woohoo:

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@ K: So you like being called ebil eh?  :mon misch: you're so cute. (Thanks to C's heads up about that)
:dizzy:

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About the fic, should I expect details on the last scene  :on bleed:??? DO IT!!!!! YOU KNOW YOU WANT IT!!!!!!!  :on_hot:
:shocked



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:OMG:  SLANDER SLANDER!
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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Dear K:

It has come to my attention that you have made an unauthorized use of my copyrighted username "amEthystx" in the preparation of a work. I have reserved all rights in my username, first published in 05 Feb 2009 in JPH!P. Your work entitled "Whispering Words Unsaid", the character, "Ame" is essentially hinting my username.

As you neither asked for nor received permission to use the username, I believe you have willfully infringed my rights under 17 U.S.C. Section 101 et seq. and could be liable for statutory damages as high as 100 sessions of Trey-trey whole body hair super glue removal treatment, C's Baseball bat smacking as well as Baby Sticky Tree's butt spanking as set forth in Section 504(c)(2) therein.

Very truly yours,

amEthystx
:on lol:  :on lol:  :on lol:  I so  :heart: you BB NI  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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- *Points at the above letter and pouts.....* But at least... i got to kiss Risa and Eri... Didn;t I? XD
I remember you asked for it  :P

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First remembered but second time in Ai’s mind, made her calm and content.
- LOL~ Did Risa still think that Ai-chan raped her? i don't remember Ai-chan talking about it... or did she?! Getting old here.... *sighs*
Quick summary: Nothing happened during their first naked meeting (at the hotel), the AC broke down and so they were nekid  :drool:  XD  but Risa did not bother explaining it to Ai, so in Ai's mind it's their second  :drool:  XD yeah  :P



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What I meant is that she liked that smiley, though this just between you and me  :mon psst: but I think she does likes being ebil 
:P
:fainted:

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LOL what's with you and K looking for me. *high 5 back*
You're popular, that's why  :D

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:yep:  K's cute. When she's not in ebil mode that is...
:shocked

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@ Bishop
The letter  :rofl:
Indeed  :rofl:
Oh  :bingo: BB NI can now be translated as Brilliant Bishop NI  :w00t:



Bishop NI
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Makes me think or the resort i went too XD
:D

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XD What happened to them after that? :P
Yeah, I forgot about them  XD damn  :lol:

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Above the two was a brilliant red sunset fading into a bruised purple, adding a little romance to the already romantic atmosphere the two shared.
  :wub: :wub:
:love:



Swtme03
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My heart is all doki doki for this chapter!  :heart:
I couldn't stop saying "awwwWWWWW!!" in my head  :lol:
Cool  :D

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:mon wtf:
Wasn't expecting THAT!
Good  :lol:



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Wait a minute.....wasn't that Tsunku?  :?
:yep:

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Of course that doesn't mean that the killings will end....
:glasses:

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If I know K's ebil mind, which I hope I don't for all our sakes, she's giving us a false sense of peace (i.e. all this TakaGaki fluff) until droping a huge atomic bomb that will make most of us, except me, go 'WTF?'
:pimp:  :D

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As much as I :heart: bikini-clad TakaGaki making out on the sand, I would imagine that would be uncomfortable IRL.
All that sand getting everywhere.........in certain areas........
Uh, what was I saying again? :huhuh
They did nothing but lay there  :P

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“I’m a novelist”
This feels oddly familiar.....
Yeah.?.

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Like a movie I once saw long ago.....
What are you thinking, K?
Ummm... what movie was that.?.



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ast sentence was just the clincher,  :wub: :wub:
:heart:  :heart:



gab98
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last sentence was just the clincher,  :wub: :wub:


ohh yeah jajaja i agree , very sweet  :heart:
:heart:  :heart:

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Thanks for this  :bow:
Thank you for reading  :love:

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So...and Eri-sayu? lol They got lost...in the beach... :wub: my mind is working XD
:lol:  :lol:  :lol: Yeah  XD just imagine it that way  XD



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I just finished reading through your entire story and I must say that I love it, Gaki-cop = utter hottness  :drool: and Ai = :heart: XD  I want moreeee!   :wub:  Good job! And I will be watching for your next update!!  :grin:
Yay! New reader   :mon heh:  :mon hi:  :kneelbow:



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while lovingly watching her Risa who’s in the water.
:twothumbs
Possession  :D

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They were given vacation days? Where do I sign up for Yuko’s troop?  XD
I don't know  :P

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Well, it’s fun to play like little kids  :D
Yeah  XD oh it reminds me of something from our convo a few days ago... ummm I'll just PM it  :P

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“I’m a novelist”
Oh, didn’t see that one coming.
Me too.?.  :D  Just kidding, that was part of the original plan but it gave me a hard time inserting that one  XD

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:rockon:
:rockon:

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:lol:
glad that made you  :lol:



AABatt
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just a short comment, i'm sick and feeling tired now..sorry
Yeah, I know and I still can see you online as I type this comment  :roll: go rest already S!hu!

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doesnt gakisan know that aichan is scared of water..
opps, that is reality.. :lol: (alo hello 3)
Yeah  XD Made her even cuter  :love:

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the only turtle that run faster then a rabbit
True  :lol:

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:wub:
control gakisan!!!
you in the public!!!
XD Relax  :P

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favorite line..so sweet and lovely
Yeah.?.  :love:



baddie
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Ehh a dead man in the warehouse (even if he's allegedly a criminal) and they get 3 days off? What happened to investigating the murder?
Ummm... No comment  XD

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Aww TakaGaki is so cute :wub: :wub: :wub:
:yep:  :love: 

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Shhhh....don't give the secret away :lol:
Oh, was it a top secret.?.  XD




SORRY PEOPLE... I find perv stories very educational but I can't make one Gomen  :kneelbow:  Maybe some other time  :D




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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
« Reply #378 on: February 23, 2010, 06:08:32 PM »
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They did nothing but lay there
True. But before that lovely make-out session they were rolling around in the sand. That sand will get stuck in certain areas. :yep:
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.....When Ai grabbed a hold of her Risa, she tripped and toppled over the cop, making them roll on the soft white sand.


Giggling, the two continued to roll over the sand with their bodies clung together in an affectionate embrace.  But their giggles subsided when the short haired girl decided to end their play when she was already on top of Ai. Staring sweetly while gingerly running her hand on Ai’s face, she smiled. Ai stayed quiet but her hands clung on Risa’s slender waist, waiting for Risa’s next move.
I rest my case. :mon geek:

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Ummm... what movie was that?
*mumbles*Basic Instinct (Don't ask me what it's about. I want to forget that I ever watched it. *shudders*)

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Re: WHISPERING WORDS UNSAID ~TakaGaki Fic~ ^.^ (Mini Update 24~2/22)
« Reply #379 on: February 23, 2010, 06:40:40 PM »
I dont care xD

I will wait for the perv one xD


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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