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Title: Entangled Memories: A Night Through Hell (Prologue)
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on February 20, 2009, 07:11:00 AM
So I come...with a chapter fic??? WHAT MADNESS IS THIS!?  Well, It's the madness of a girl who's about to take her SAT soon.  I'll be on a semi hiatus (writing-wise) so I thought I'd post this now. I didn't want to do it until chapter 1 was done, but...eh.  In other words, updates on this might be slow; the chapters will be longer than those I'm accustomed to writing.

This fic is based off of a game I once played... It'll stick relatively close, but I'll try to throw in a few twists here and there. If you haven't played the game yet, that's even better. :sweatdrop:  Do tell me if you think you know the game, though. ;) I'm toying with the timeline, too. Some people will be older/younger as needed/described. Have fun finding out who the main character is. Don't worry, you'll find out at the end of the prologue. There might be a bit of the breaking of the fourth wall, too. Sorry if you guys don't like that.  So...here you go!!

Table of Contents:

[Prologue]
[Chapter One] - In progress




Entangled Memories:  A Night Through Hell
Prologue

[STORY HERE]
Title: Re: Entangled Memories: A Night Through Hell (Prologue)
Post by: strawb3rrykream on February 20, 2009, 03:27:36 PM
I'm sold. :D Detective-y fic plus Miki sama as the main character= :inlove: I'm guessing the maid girl is Ai-chan? :P
Title: Re: Entangled Memories: A Night Through Hell (Prologue)
Post by: Haruka on February 20, 2009, 05:24:39 PM
YEAH!! this looks like gunsters xD and Killers and everything  :cool1:

Miki-sama  :onionwhip:

Waiting Chap I  :kekeke:
Title: Re: Entangled Memories: A Night Through Hell (Prologue)
Post by: JFC on February 20, 2009, 07:15:57 PM
Mystery fic? Nice.  :)


Miki's in it? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOICE. :twothumbs
Title: Re: Entangled Memories: A Night Through Hell (Prologue)
Post by: Fenrir on February 22, 2009, 05:19:37 AM
Yay! Miki!!! :heart:

You know, I was curious to know what game you were basing this off of, but I had no clue. However, when I went to the game store today to look for my friend's b-day gift, I saw one game they had that kinda reminded me of this fic. Took a look at the back to read what it was about and there was a picture of two people on the pier with one holding a gun at the other. I was like ehhhh?! No way!! XD So, here's my guess:
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Hotel Dusk (Wish Room)[/bgcolor]

Never played the game though.
Title: Re: Entangled Memories: A Night Through Hell (Prologue)
Post by: Haruka on February 22, 2009, 05:42:27 AM
The HELL?

The only thing I know about games is Mario Bross xD and TopGear xD and ammm Sunset Rider's xD

I love the last one xD
Title: Re: Entangled Memories: A Night Through Hell (Prologue)
Post by: lil_hamz on February 24, 2009, 05:58:27 PM
OWWWWW. My poor head. How many characters are there in here!?!? I lost count. And the worse thing is, I have no idea who the people are. I haven't the faintest idea. I need you to come back and post more Shiichan!

Hmmm shall I hold off GS 10 until you update this? *evil laugh* :P
Title: Re: Entangled Memories: A Night Through Hell (Prologue)
Post by: Sukoshi on February 25, 2009, 01:19:59 AM
Ooo new fic~  and a detective one at that =D  I really like the setting so far.  I've always like the feel of the barren Nevada desert.  (I know you didn't say Nevada but I really did get that feel from your story...and not because I remember some of the game...the remembering part came way later)

I like how you picked Fujimoto to be the main character, seems very fitting =D  Can't wait to see what happens next =D

Quote from: lil_hamz
I'll be waiting with some tasty cookies and warm milk when you're done. Hmmmm I wonder if Sukoshi-chan can find some space in her bush to fit us too

hehe I'll pass on the milk but I'll let you in the bush for the price of half a cookie ^_^