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The Hello! Project Fanfics => H!P Fanfics => Topic started by: ShikyoxYaiba on February 20, 2009, 07:11:00 AM
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So I come...with a chapter fic??? WHAT MADNESS IS THIS!? Well, It's the madness of a girl who's about to take her SAT soon. I'll be on a semi hiatus (writing-wise) so I thought I'd post this now. I didn't want to do it until chapter 1 was done, but...eh. In other words, updates on this might be slow; the chapters will be longer than those I'm accustomed to writing.
This fic is based off of a game I once played... It'll stick relatively close, but I'll try to throw in a few twists here and there. If you haven't played the game yet, that's even better. :sweatdrop: Do tell me if you think you know the game, though. ;) I'm toying with the timeline, too. Some people will be older/younger as needed/described. Have fun finding out who the main character is. Don't worry, you'll find out at the end of the prologue. There might be a bit of the breaking of the fourth wall, too. Sorry if you guys don't like that. So...here you go!!
Table of Contents:
[Prologue]
[Chapter One] - In progress
Entangled Memories: A Night Through Hell
Prologue
[STORY HERE]
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I'm sold. :D Detective-y fic plus Miki sama as the main character= :inlove: I'm guessing the maid girl is Ai-chan? :P
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YEAH!! this looks like gunsters xD and Killers and everything :cool1:
Miki-sama :onionwhip:
Waiting Chap I :kekeke:
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Mystery fic? Nice. :)
Miki's in it? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOICE. :twothumbs
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Yay! Miki!!! :heart:
You know, I was curious to know what game you were basing this off of, but I had no clue. However, when I went to the game store today to look for my friend's b-day gift, I saw one game they had that kinda reminded me of this fic. Took a look at the back to read what it was about and there was a picture of two people on the pier with one holding a gun at the other. I was like ehhhh?! No way!! XD So, here's my guess:
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Hotel Dusk (Wish Room)[/bgcolor]
Never played the game though.
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The HELL?
The only thing I know about games is Mario Bross xD and TopGear xD and ammm Sunset Rider's xD
I love the last one xD
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OWWWWW. My poor head. How many characters are there in here!?!? I lost count. And the worse thing is, I have no idea who the people are. I haven't the faintest idea. I need you to come back and post more Shiichan!
Hmmm shall I hold off GS 10 until you update this? *evil laugh* :P
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Ooo new fic~ and a detective one at that =D I really like the setting so far. I've always like the feel of the barren Nevada desert. (I know you didn't say Nevada but I really did get that feel from your story...and not because I remember some of the game...the remembering part came way later)
I like how you picked Fujimoto to be the main character, seems very fitting =D Can't wait to see what happens next =D
I'll be waiting with some tasty cookies and warm milk when you're done. Hmmmm I wonder if Sukoshi-chan can find some space in her bush to fit us too
hehe I'll pass on the milk but I'll let you in the bush for the price of half a cookie ^_^