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Hell Girl (Chapter 2 22/11/14)
« on: November 21, 2014, 07:02:54 PM »


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“Hey, have you heard of ‘Hell Correspondence’?’”

“Eh? What is that?”

“You haven’t heard of it?!”

“It’s this cursed website that only opens at midnight, exact.”

“People go on there and enter the names of people they want to die, and it actually happens!”

“Seriously?”

“Yeah, someone at my school actually tried it!”

“Really?!”

“It was to get rid of her boyfriend after she found out he was cheating on her!”

“What happened to him?”

“They found him in his apartment. There weren’t any wounds, so it was probably a heart attack.”

“Holy crap...”

“Yeah, but, that’s not all...”

“Eh?”

“A few days later, she went insane and committed suicide.”

“No way.”

“She said the Devil had her soul and was coming for her. Seriously creepy...”

“What if it’s real? Hell Correspondence….”
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Re: Hell Girl (Prolouge 21/11/14)
« Reply #1 on: November 21, 2014, 07:04:34 PM »
Hoo..supernater, myths

Interesting

Update soon

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Re: Hell Girl (Prolouge 21/11/14)
« Reply #2 on: November 21, 2014, 07:36:44 PM »
OMG.. Jigoku Shoujo~!!!!!  :shocked :shocked :shocked

Waiting for your next update...  :) :) :)
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Re: Hell Girl (Prolouge 21/11/14)
« Reply #3 on: November 21, 2014, 10:32:58 PM »
wow.. for me :w00t:

Arigato...  :heart:

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Re: Hell Girl (Prolouge 21/11/14)
« Reply #4 on: November 21, 2014, 10:43:10 PM »
wow.. for me :w00t:

Arigato...  :heart:

This was Ruka's surprise, I just hopped in for the ride~

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Re: Hell Girl (Prolouge 21/11/14)
« Reply #5 on: November 21, 2014, 10:47:13 PM »
wow.. for me :w00t:

Arigato...  :heart:

This was Ruka's surprise, I just hopped in for the ride~

Just wait. There is more to come~ :twisted:
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Re: Hell Girl (Prolouge 21/11/14)
« Reply #6 on: November 21, 2014, 11:18:35 PM »
“I see...” The young man chuckled as he looked through the files. “So this has been going on for a while now, huh?”

“This is a serious matter, Sae,” the woman beside him said.

“I am taking this seriously.”

“It started out as an urban legend, but then...”

“Then it spiraled out of control,” a voice rose, causing them to look back.

“Sayaka...”

“Rena, you can go home. I’ll take care of this.”

“Alright. Thanks.” Rena bowed in front of the taller girl and dismissed herself.

Sayaka sat down beside her partner and looked at the files.

“Hell Girl… huh?”

“Apparently, she’s the mastermind of all this madness. She made the cursed website all by herself.”

“Probably a NEET.”

“You always get straight to the point of things, don’t you? So honest~”

“I just want to get this over with. This is just another murder case.”

“Eh~? So, does that mean I can leave, too?”

Sayaka glared at the boy. “Yuki again?”

“Un! Don’t wanna keep my girl waitin’. Bye bye~”

Sae grabbed his bags and started walking back to his apartment. His smile had disappeared, the light in his eyes was dim. There was a heaviness in his heart…

“She’ll probably make me do it with her… again.”

He groaned silently. He couldn’t say no. If he did, his situation would only get worse.

He just had to endure it…

As he walked in, suddenly the mood was more tense than before. He walked around trying to spot her in and amongst the shadows.

“Sae-kun~”

“Yo, Yukirin,” he said with a fake smile.

“I missed you,” she said before giving him a soft peck on the lips. Sae’s eyes lingered on her sexy lingerie. “You know I don’t like waiting...”

“I know. I would never want to keep you waiting.”

Yukirin giggled and walked over to the bed.

“Help me undress?”

Her voice was innocent, but Sae shuddered in fear. He knew what was coming. Once they started, there was no going back.

“How many rounds?” he asked.

“Hmm… four.”

He gulped as he slowly walked over and untied the ribbon on the back of her sexy dress.

“Sae-kun… have you been playing with other women?” she said in a dark tone. “I smell perfume on you. It’s that Rena girl, again, isn’t it?”

“She and I aren’t like that.”

“Of course. Besides...” she suddenly turned around and pushed Sae to the bed, facing him with pitch black eyes. “you always think of me when you have sex, right?”

“Of course, babe.” A lie. He doesn’t want to think of her.

“That’s what I like to hear...”

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“Matsui!”

Rena faced her boss as he looked at her angrily.

“How many times do I have to tell you to get it right?!”

“I’m sorry, sir...”

“One more time and I’m sure to fire you, understood?”

“Y-yes, sir...”

Rena went back to her desk and found her hands were still shaking. She tried to calm her breathing and realized she was out of coffee.

Feeling particularly parched this morning, she went over to the break room to refill her mug.

Then, she overheard two of her co-workers talking…

“Wait, for real?”

“Yeah. The Gateway to Hell: Hell Correspondence.”

“Eh? Hell Correspondence… didn’t Sae say he was investigating that case?”

“They’ll take your requests and kill whoever you ask them.”

“They’re assassins?”

“No one knows who they are or how they kill them. They’re very good.”

“Eh~? That’s scary!”

“Plus, it says the people who send requests are also fated to die.”

“Maji ka...”

Rena gulped and went back to her office. She reluctantly had the thought of using Hell Correspondence, to get rid of the people who treated her the worst.

But she was terrified. The thought of being afflicted with a curse and going insane enough that you die. She didn’t want that; she didn’t want to go to Hell.

Then, her phone rang, making her jump…

“Hello?”

“Rena-chan~~~”

“Sae? Are you drunk again?”

“No~~~ *hic* Listen, honey, I need ya to *hic* come over during your lunch break, okay? *hic* I think I may have figured out somethin’...”

“Sae, you need to go home? You overdid it. Did Yuki force you to have sex again?”

“Oh, SHUT UP! Forget about Yuki! We need to move, now! *hic*”

“I’m hanging up.”

She closed her phone and sighed as she went back to work. Sae was always like that. She knew he hated Yuki, that he was just her sex toy, and she knew, that he would always go and drink until he passed out just to forget everything.

“Rena, are you okay?” She looked up and greeted her senior, Yuu.

“Yuu-kun...”

“That old man getting to you again?”

“No… It’s something different.”

“Eh~? What?”

“I-it’s fine, really...”

“You sure?”

“Y-Yeah...”

He gave Rena his signature smile and revealed his squirrel teeth and dimples.

“Don’t worry. I’m sure you’ll be okay, Rena-chan.”

“Thanks, Yuu-kun...”

“Oshima, Matsui!” Then, the boss’ voice roared again. “Are you two flirting back here?”

“N-no! We are not!”

“Sir, we’re not in that kind of relationship.” Yuu said, trying to reason with him.

“More importantly, Matsui… I need to see you tonight.”

“T-Tonight…?”

“Yes.”

“But, Sae and I have--”

“When will you be through?”

“Um… midnight. I promise. It’s for this investigation----”

“I’ll be expecting you, Matsui.”

“H-hai...”

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Re: Hell Girl (Prolouge 21/11/14)
« Reply #7 on: November 22, 2014, 12:26:18 AM »
yuki sae sayaka yuko Rena who else would be appear afterwards ^^" the hell girl? Mayu...? ah.... it looks like complicated love lines haha

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Re: Hell Girl (Prolouge 21/11/14)
« Reply #8 on: November 22, 2014, 06:55:13 AM »
Hohoho.... I like this :twothumbs

Rena not brave enough to use Hell Correspondence~
hmm.. let see if her hatred is strong enough
to make her use Hell Correspondence :twisted:


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She knew he hated Yuki, that he was just her sex toy,
Nani..!!? SAE!!!!? :angry:
(open google and type Jigoku shoujo
page not found
ahh... its afternoon right now)
:banghead:

lol~ just kidding~ :cathappy:

and is Sae character is like Shibata Hajime?
the one that investigate jigoku shoujo

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Re: Hell Girl (Chapter 1 21/11/14)
« Reply #9 on: November 22, 2014, 01:55:28 PM »
Yuki?!? What is happen to her how did she end up like that?!?

Sae is a detective

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Re: Hell Girl (Chapter 1 21/11/14)
« Reply #10 on: November 22, 2014, 02:43:21 PM »
Yuki?!? What is happen to her how did she end up like that?!?

Sae is a detective

Idk, Ruka told me her character in this was a prostitute! Nothing to do with me! I swear!
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That night, Rena went to Sae’s apartment again and immediately saw how aback the young man was taken from the hangover. She knew he was able to recover fast, though, as he was already on his laptop.

“So, what did you find?”

“Rena… is there someone you wanna kill?”

“Eh?”

He pointed at the screen and she saw it was nearing midnight. He refreshed the screen and it immediately turned black.

A flame appeared and then an entry box appeared, with words above it…

“Your bitterness, I shall dispel.”

“Sae, why are you--”

“I want you to enter the name of someone you wanna kill. It’s an experiment.”

“Why me?! Why not you?!”

“I--”

“Are you insane?! What if I die?!”

“Rena, you don’t actually believe those rumors, do you? It’s just another urban legend. Besides, once you do it, we can find the person who runs this joint and arrest them.”

“But...”

“C’mon, trust me.”

Rena gulped and went to the screen, her legs shivering. Her trembling hands went to the keyboard and typed out a name…

“Kurozaki Tezuka.”

She went to the Enter key, but her hands stopped, shaking hard. There were tears at the rims of her eyes, horrifying images filled her head…

“I can’t… I can’t do it, Sae..!”

“Rena, you have to!”

“NO! I… I-I..!”

Sae growled angrily and pushed the girl away, grabbing his laptop. He set it on the counter and unconsciously typed another name into the box.

“Stop!” Rena got up and tried to stop him, but when she looked, she already saw a spinning hourglass, indicating he sent the request.

Rena’s eyes were wide in fear, Sae holding his head…

“Who did you type down?” Rena grabbed Sae by his collar. “Who’s name did you type down?!”

“I… I don’t know.”

“What?!”

“I wasn’t thinking… My hands just moved on their own… I wasn’t paying attention to what it said...”

Rena fell to her knees, hyperventilating. Sae held his head.

“What the hell did I do?”

Then, both of their phones rang.

They opened it, and…..

“Request accepted. -Hell Girl”

“No… This can’t be happening..."

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Sae got home to his apartment and saw a figure lying on his bed. He turned the lamp on and saw Yuki was asleep, her shirt unbuttoned to reveal her bra and cleavage.

“Yuki...”

He could hear her faint murmurs and groans, signifying that she could tell he was here. He came closer, moving away some of the hair from her face.

“Sae...”

Sae wondered how long the girl has been here, waiting for him. He looked down and saw her hand was in between her thighs.

“Was she masturbating?”

He came closer to try and hear the girl’s sleep-talking, but ended up getting a surprise kiss. And a forceful one at that. Before he knew it, she pulled him towards her.
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Rena got home late and went to where her boss asked her to meet.

“But why here of all places..?”

She entered the dark room and called for her boss several times before seeing a faint light in the corner of the room.

She looked through the crack of the door and saw her boss there. The look in his eyes gave her chills.

She wanted to go home. She wanted to believe all of this about the Hell Correspondence was a nightmare, that if her boss was going to die, she wouldn’t be blame. Or, heck, she didn’t want to enter his name on that website.

Her shaking hands cracked open the door and he turned to look at her with a sly grin.

He grabbed her by the neck and took out a pocketknife, ripping open her jacket and shirt. He then cut open her bra, quickly making her cover her chest.

He grabbed her forcefully and pinned her to the bed, she could smell the awful stench of cigarette smoke and alcohol in his breath.

“No… Please, no..!”

He licked his lips hungrily. “Dinner time~”

“NOOOOOOOOO!!!”

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Sae laid in the bathtub alone, staring up at the ceiling. Yuki had already passed out after their number something-th round of sex.

Why didn’t he leave? Or even, why did he come in the first place? He knew what was coming, and if he avoided it, he’d have to pay for it later.

“Why did I fall for her?” he said lowly.

This wasn’t love. This was torture. Because he fell for her trick, her facade, her trap.

Now, he can’t escape. He’s prisoner, a slave, nothing but an object of Yuki’s mere pleasure.

“Why..? Why was I such a fool?”

Just then, he felt a hand cover his mouth tightly. Another clapsed his throat and pulled him down. He tried to break out, to escape, but before he knew it, millions of hands and grabbed his body and were pulling him under.

Unable to breath, he shut his eyes, seeing the face of an unfamiliar girl before losing consciousness…

“No...”

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Rena was alone, sitting in an alley away. After being played with mercilessly by her boss, she felt humiliated and embarrassed. She was tormented, dirty. She cried for hours, her eyes sore and red. Her clothes torn up and stained with mudwater and sweat.

She looked up at the sky, praying to God why this was happening to her. She wanted it all to stop. She wanted the pain, the suffering, all of it to disappear…

“I wanna die...”

She walked to the nearest, tallest building she could find, climbed all the way to the roof, and looked down at the city lights below her.

She threw her shoes down, surely no one would be able to ignore her. They would find her dead, and could only wonder why a poor, innocent girl would kill herself. Only she could understand.

“Goodbye… I’m sorry… I love you...”

Her tears fell as she buckled her knees and dropped.

“Sae...”

She started falling, dropping into endless darkness. Then, she swore she saw fire. Surrounding everything around her.

She looked at the reflection of herself in the building window, then saw a pair of red eyes penetrating her, holding her as they both fell.

“KYAAAAAAAAA!!!!”

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Re: Hell Girl (Chapter 2 22/11/14)
« Reply #11 on: November 22, 2014, 03:17:59 PM »
Hohoho~ :mon star:
she appear~ the Hell Girl

poor Rena

the name that Sae type its Yuki right?

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Re: Hell Girl (Chapter 2 22/11/14)
« Reply #12 on: November 22, 2014, 03:21:36 PM »
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Idk, Ruka told me her character in this was a prostitute! Nothing to do with me! I swear!
Ruka!!!!!!

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Re: Hell Girl (Chapter 2 22/11/14)
« Reply #13 on: November 22, 2014, 05:41:06 PM »
=_= what the heck the story going I cannot understand!!!!  Saerena? huh~ did sae type rena's name =_= oh no I can't believe the story will develop like this!!!

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Re: Hell Girl (Chapter 2 22/11/14)
« Reply #14 on: November 22, 2014, 09:36:15 PM »
Just one thing what I want to say: I'm already love this fic! :-)  How many chapter you want to write?

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Re: Hell Girl (Chapter 2 22/11/14)
« Reply #15 on: November 22, 2014, 09:38:38 PM »
Just one thing what I want to say: I'm already love this fic! :-)  How many chapter you want to write?

Idk about that~

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Re: Hell Girl (Chapter 2 22/11/14)
« Reply #16 on: November 22, 2014, 11:18:39 PM »
Wah I really wanna see more of this!!! I love it and can't wait to see the next update!! Also, MaYukiIsLife I'm trying to send you a PM but it says you blocked me!! T^T

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Re: Hell Girl (Chapter 2 22/11/14)
« Reply #17 on: November 22, 2014, 11:25:37 PM »
Wah I really wanna see more of this!!! I love it and can't wait to see the next update!! Also, MaYukiIsLife I'm trying to send you a PM but it says you blocked me!! T^T

Gomen, I might've set it to friends only~ I'll friend you Miyumi-san@~

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Re: Hell Girl (Chapter 2 22/11/14)
« Reply #18 on: November 23, 2014, 03:21:39 PM »
=_= what the heck the story going I cannot understand!!!!  Saerena? huh~ did sae type rena's name =_= oh no I can't believe the story will develop like this!!!

That will be revealed next chapter~

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