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The Hello! Project Fanfics => H!P Fanfics => Topic started by: cmze on October 23, 2012, 11:35:31 AM
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One sided love?
This idea came to my head,i couldn't help it.Hope you like it Enjoy!! (it's AiGaki btw)
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I'm Niigaki Risa a former member of the popular idol group "Morning Musume"
I always loved Morning Musume since i was a little girl and i always going to love it. This group made cry of sadness,happiness and also cause one sided love.
Since the first day i met her,i fell for her "her smile,her voice,her dork side,her bad mood" everything about her was so special to me "She was my leader and i was her subleader,always having her back to support her no matter what!"
Through years our friendship became more than that,it was something different!
If i have to say it in other words "She was my first boyfriend!"
Our relationship looked like a friendship "a really deep friendship"
But there was always someone watching us (our fans) so they called us "AiGaki or Takagaki".It was kinda embarrasing but surely felt good that a little part of the world knew that she only mine and i was only hers!
Nothing is perfect,Soon things changed she graduate..
-At first we would graduate together but my boss asked me to stay a little longer!
"she said to me that she would wait for me till i graduate so we can live together and have our own life without caring what people had to say about it!"
Well her words faded away just like her love,she stopped texting then stopped calling and soon we were forgetting 10 years of friendship..but still she still say happy birthday to me on her blog "i should consider myself luck i guess!"
"I graduated not anymore a Morning Musume girl.. do i miss it? I think i miss her more!"
Niigaki Risa was walking the streets of Shibuta,she bought herself a news paper and entered to a cafe near,she ordered a coffee and started reading the newspaper
Risa got to the middle when she saw a picture of a familiar girl. The topic was "Takahashi Ai Ex Morning Musume having a relantionship with a comedian"
Risa fast closed the newspaper and looked other way "She's living her life maybe i should start living mine and forget about her!" she thought
~Later in the night~
My friends came to visit me "not my MM friends btw!"
They were amazed by my dept and about the fact that i was living alone
"Wow this place is really cool!" W says excited while walks around the dept with Y
"i Insist we should go partying is Saturday night!" X says smiling sitting on the couch
Risa pouted,she didn't feel like go out but Ai's new on that newspaper hit her so she decided to have a life and go partying with her friends
~At the club~
Risa and her friends were dancing,drinking and having a good time
"This is a really good night!" X says smiling while dances with her friends
Risa got tired of dancing and went to the bar for more vodka "give me more!" she says while the guy on the bar was filling up her little glass
Risa was annoyed then snatched him the bottle and throwed at him all the money that was on her pocket and got back to dance with her friends
*the bar tender was mad*
A guy in the bar calmed the bar tender and payed him more to keep him quiet
The same guy asked Risa for dance but she rejected him and got back to dance with her friends
Y took Risa's shoulder "Are you insane? he's really handsome! why did you reject him?" she asked
Risa pouted " i want somebody else!" she says shouting cause the music was too loud
The guy approached again then sighed,he looked like he wasn't drunk at all
Y pushed Risa to him,he grabbed her on his arms and asked tenderly "Are you okay?"
Risa felt dizzy and run to the bathroom,the guy followed her,he waited for her till she got out of the bathroom
Risa looked to the guy (he was reallyhandsome,brown hair and tall with a charming smile)
Risa walked out of the club leaving the guy behind,she already had enough of living her life and trying not to think about Aichan
"Hey wait up.. it's dangerous for a pretty girl like you being alone at this hours!" He says while walks behind her
"Why you following me? are you a stalker?" Risa asked annoyed while walks on the streets looking for a taxi
"what? no! i just..you're pretty and gets me worried because you're drunk,here's my id i'm not some crazy man stalking you!" The guy says following Risa
Risa kept walking..
"My name is Koji Akimoto!" He says with a smile
Risa's shoe broke "you got to be kidding me?" she asked
Koji kneals "hop i'll take you! I'm trustable" he says still with his charming smile
Risa let him carry her on his back.Many minutes passed and they talked about many things even exchanged numbers till they found a taxi
Risa got in and looked at him through the window
"I'll call you when you get home!" He says
<At home>
Risa answered her phone "Yeah i'm okay..thanks!" she says with a smile then she throwed herself on bed and forgot about the world
~The next morning~
Ai was walking the streets of Shibuya with her sister when something cought her eye,she tried to take the newspaper but somebody slapped her hand
paying or Not reading? A man says
Aichan pouted and pulled out some coins from her pocket then read the article
*Niigaki Risa Ex Morning Musume has a boyfriend*
There were pictures all over it of him carrying her and helping her to get in the taxi
Ai squeezed the newspaper..
"Are you okay Aichan?" Her sister asked
Ai took a deep breath then looked other way
TO BE CONTINUED!!
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NIIGAKI RISA has a boyfriend???????????? :angry: :cry: hohoho poor Aichan! im still here aichan!! i love you !! hehe btw, nice story here !! keep up the good work cmze!!! hope to reveal the whole story soon! :peace: :thumbsup
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Being caught by paparazzi :thumbdown:
nice start to the fic
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oh no...so much misunderstandings between them have to clear up huh... and it is actually two one-sided love from both sides huh...
i wonder how would they clear that up... and be together :?
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This is pretty cool! Please post more :twothumbs
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One sided love?
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I'm trying to make it realistic but i'm afraid "i kinda suck on it.."
Note: there was a mistake let's change the name of Risa's admirer to.. Ren because i searched and the comedian that Ai is rumored dating name is "Abe Koji!" hahahaha xD
~The same day after Ai found the new~*Phone ringing*
Risa woke up cause the noisy little thing,she grabbed and read the screen "Aika" she murmured and answered the call
"Hi!" Risa says not so happy of being wake up so early
"Wake up already sleepy head or last night got you so tired?come to the cafe around the corner of your dept so we can talk about it!" Aika replied
Risa sighed the last thing she wanted to do is wake up early but agreed anyways because it was her dear friend Aika..
After a few minutes Risa entered to the cafe where Aika waved at her to show her where she was sitting
"Who's that?" Risa thought while walks to Aika's table,she couldn't see who was that person sitting in the same table as Aika because she was facing her back
Risa sitted and she got shocked when saw the person who was sitting also there.They had eye contact but neither of them looked happy
"I thought you guys would be me more happy to see eachother!" Aika murmures looking at the two girls
"Hi Gaki san!" She says with a warm smile
"Aichan.." Risa replies not so happy
Aika's phone started to ring so she excused herself and went to talk outside leaving the two older woman by themselves
Aichan smirked "How you been Gaki san?" she asked while plays with her coffee
Risa looked at the older girl who was trying to keep a fake smile "Fine.."
Aichan turned to look at her "just fine..not fantastic or in love?" she asked
Risa looked other way then scratched the back of her head softly in confusion "yep.."
Aichan laughed "poor guy! i knew you were cold but ignore him like that..it's really like an iceberg thing!"
Risa pouted "ehhh"
Even i thought that i should give you an advice like "take it easy or something like that" but you're really handling on your way! The older woman says still with a smile on her face
Risa looked at the older woman in confusion "why would you give me a an advice?"
Aichan stopped drinking her coffee and looked at the younger girl "because we're friends pretty much like sisters!" she replied
Risa pouted "Do you kiss your sister's with your tongue? do you grope her chest or kiss her and tell her that you love her?" she asked annoyed
Aichan looked other way sad "No.." she murmured
Risa got up "there..i'm not your friend or sister!" she says and then goes to the ladies room mad
Aika after a few minutes enetered to the coffee
"Sorry Aichan tell Gaki san that i had to go,i have an important thing to do!" she says as she grabs her purse and leaves
"don't worry!" Aichan replies with a smile while gets up
Once Mitssy was out of sight,she entered to the bathroom and found and Gaki san looking at herself in the mirror
"Aichan.." Risa murmured looking other way
Ai heard some voices so she took Gaki san's hand and pulled her inside a cubicle with her,when Risa was about to protest Ai covered her mouth
*Nobody entered to the bathroom*
"Now let me speak.." The older woman murmured removing her hand slowly with her body pressing on the younger girl
Risa was blushing so she looked other way
Aichan licked her lips and whispered in her ear "i'm not not your sister or your friend or your girlfriend those are things that we could never be,seriuosly do you think is nornal if two woman grabs their hands like this? she asked grabbing her hand and interwining ther finger
Risa took a deep breath
Aichan sighed "it's dangerous isn't it? but its cool when you're young because they think *they're just kids* and now we're not kids anymore Gaki san" she says as she gets a few inches from Risa's lips
(Risa was speechless)
Ai cupped the younger girl's cheek with her free hand "you don't think i missed you so much through this time..don't you?"
Risa faked a smile "that comedian says the contrary..taking you to work and picking you up later,that's a boyfriend and girlfriend thing!" she says trying to avoid Ai's lips
Ai smiled weakly "he.. well he's nothing compare to you,his lips taste different they are not sweet as yours ,his skin is less softer and the way he looks at me it's only lust i can tell but i can't do anything about it,he helps me to forget this love!" she says as she leans closer to kiss Risa but she rejected the older girl and got out of the cubicle and walked away
Ai followed her from a long distance
Risa was thinking about everything that Ai told her and it was sad to know that everything she said was right "we never be.." she murmured sad looking down trying to avoid her tears
"hey.." Someone says with a smile and brought Risa back to reality
Risa couldn't held her tears anymore and started crying in front of the guy
"I'm sorry,i swear i'm not stalking you.. i just bought books!" He says nervous and showing her the bag with his books inside
Risa smiled but kept crying
Ren got sad and hugged the ex morning musume
Risa was shocked first but then just hugged him back
Ai stood there watching the scene "i always wanted to hug you like that.." she murmures and walks away
"If you keep crying i'm not going to buy you a delicious icream.." He murmures
Risa smiled then broke their their hug "thanks..again!"
she says while wipe her tears
"now that you stopped crying i can invite you that ice cream!" Ren says with a smile
~In the ice cream store~
The two ordered their ice creams and grabbed a table
"Thanks you're always helping me.." Risa says while licks her chocolate ice cream
Ren smiles "it's not free,there's something i want!"
Risa pouted
Rena laughed once he calmed "my sister is a big fan of yours so if it doesn't bother you.." he says as he takes a napkin and pulls out a pen
Risa smiled "you want me to sign it?" she asked
*Ren smiles widely*
Risa signs it and even put a heart on it "hey how your sister knows that you know me?" she asked
Ren sighed "haven't you seen the newspapers?" he asked with a smile
"No.." Risa answered crossing her arms
Ren smile ackwardly "it says that we're dating..they have pictures of me carrying you on my back and they called unknow..psst!" he says acting cute
Risa laughed "that's funny!" then she remembered why was acting like that and her laugh faded
They spent the afternoon talking in the ice cream store and,they looked at the time and relized that was late so Ren took Risa home and both said goodbye
Risa throwed herself on bed,she thought about everything that happend today
"He's nice and charming!" she thought while gets up and goes for a walk
*She ended up on Ai's door*
Ai was watching a movie and also when the movie gets boring she plays with her iphone
*Her doorbell ringed*
Aichan gets up annoyed "who the hell will come at this hours?" she wondered and opened the door
"Gaki san.." She murmured shocked and looking at the younger girl who was embarrased looking down
"come in.." The older girl says and pulls her in
Gaki san was still looking down
Ai went to the kitchen "don't you want something to drink?" she asked while fills a glass with juice
Risa sighed while Ai comes with a glass of juice
"i'm fine Aichan.." The younger girl murmures
"Then don't you wanna shower?" The older girl asked
"ehhh why?" Risa asked and smelled herself then notice Ren's perfume on her
"I think you know already.." Aichan says with a smile while goes to the bathroom and sets the tub
*Risa looked at the older girl*
"It's ready.." Aichan says with a smile while Gaki san enters to the bathroom,she starts stripping in front of Aichan which was completely staring at her
Risa blushed and then Ai noticed what she was doing so she got out of the bathroom
Risa entered to the tub full of bubbles and relaxed
Aichan entered again the bathroom "you look good on my tub!" she says grinning
The younger girl looked at the older girl and extend her hand to reach her
Ai grabbed her hand and sitted next to the tub to watch the younger girl
Risa had a bubble on her cheek which Ai wipped away with her fingers
the two girls looked at eachothers eyes
"Risa just one kiss..i promise i won't touch you unless you don't want me to.." The older girl begged as she leans closer to the younger girl's lips
Risa heart breaks but she kissed the older girl
Their kiss was filled with all the emotions they had for eachother for long time of not kissing or touching
Soon both got to bed and shared their painful love..
~The next morning~
Ai opened her eyes slowly and noticed that Risa wasn't next to her anymore,she sitted on bed and saw that her clothes weren't on her desk
"She's gone.." she murmured sad and and hugging her knees
"i wanted to be with you longer.." Ai murmured looking other way
TO BE CONTINUED!!
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cmze... your update is fast huh...
hey, you are torturing me to read such a painful love story of my top favourite in the morning (in my region)...
but i can say it is kinda of interesting to have such a plot for a story :thumbsup so, please continue.... :grin:
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aww i remember my childhood! nge almost 1 year ago my bestfriend and I was just yeah like girlfriend.. kissing each other,and yeah aww cmze you make me cry !! :'( but now im all alone !!
btw aichan ! do you love risa! nOt as ur bstfrend ? ah ah ! please update soON !
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More AiGaki love in this story but in a weird way, the outside world seems blinded by that picture alone
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:ptam-hbk: :ptam-hbk: :fainted: :fainted:
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One sided love?
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After a few days since Risa and Ai last encounter..
Takahashi Ai tried to watch the movie with her so called boyfriend on the couch
He was trying to get closer but everytime he tried to reach for Ai's hand she would totally move her hand away and acted like nothing happened
"Aichan.." He whispered and looked at the younger girl who was completely pretending that she was watching the movie
He tried again but this time he sitted closer to her.Ai noticed that and rathered ignored him.
He kissed Ai's neck..
"what are you doing? i'm watching the movie" The younger girl says annoyed and moving away
Koji pouts "i wanna kiss you know" he replies and kisses her again but Ai slapped him
"I said no!" She shouts mad then putted her shoes on left the dept
"What? what did i do?" He asked rubbing his cheek
~On the street~
Ai could nothing but run away "This feelings again that only says Risa! Risa! i need you!" she thought while runs non stopping
After a while of running Ai stopped to catch her breath,she looked down trying to avoid her tears "I thought..i really thought once we graduate we would be together..Forever.." She murmured while her tears rolled down her cheeks
Aichan wipped her tears then smirked "i still remember our first kiss.It was the sweetest thing ever,you were blushing hard and were kinda embarrased but it didn't matter, i wanted to kiss you again so i did!"
Aichan looks at the people around then starts walking "Sorry for setting a trap.It was my jealousy working that thing called "GakiKame" really get me mad.You were such a dork not understanding what i was trying to say between lines so i have to set a trap to catch you.."
~Flashback~ A few years ago
All the morning musume girls were laying on the floor in the rehearsal room
"I'm so dead.." Reina says while fans herself
"Finally over!" JunJun says with a smile
Aichan ignored everyone and got up
"what's wrong with her?" Koharu asked looking at Aichan who was drinking water
"She's been acting strange.." Risa murmured
"What are you guys going to do after this?" Eri asked with smile
"I'm going home to sleep!" Reina gets up
LinLin frowned "i wanna get something to eat..i'm hungry!" she says with a smile
Eri also smiled "that's what i'm talking about about,let's go get something to eat!"
Sayumi agreed fast
Risa sighed "i have something else to do" she murmured and stole a glass to Aichan
Soon everyone left
Risa stood there looking for her beloved captain
"There you are!" She says with a smile and clings on Aichan
Aichan pouted "i thought you were going to eat with Eri and be a funny couple like everyone calls u 2!" she says annoyed
What's wrong Aichan? are feeling lonely..you're my best friend" the younger girl says with a smile and hugs her captain
Aichan hugged Risa "yes,i been feeling kinda lonely!" she says hugging Risa tighly
Risa blushed "then let's go watch that movie that we had planned for today!" she says nervous and breaks their hug to walk ahead
Aichan smirked and followed the tensed younger girl
~At Aichan's home~
Aichan walked to the fridge as it was planned nobody was home
(Aichan payed her sister to stay out and sleep at W's home)
"do you want something to eat Gaki san?" Aichan asked with a smile
"i want pizza!" The younger girl replied
"I think we can order one.." Aichan says while pulls out her phone and calls to Domino's
The two girls went to Aichan's room while Risa sitted on bed,Aichan was changing her clothes
Risa turned on the tv and everything so she only had to press play to watch the movie
The pizza arrived and the two girls took it to the room on the bed with them
Was an horror movie and how it was everything calculated Risa and Ai were hugging eachother and covering eachother's eyes
After 1 hour and 20 min
Niigaki Risa turned off the tv,she traumatized cause the movie but not more than the older girl
"Risa i'm scared!" Ai shouts and hugs Risa's chest
Aichan was rubbing her cheek on Risa's chest "This is so soft,i could do this for ever!" she thought
Risa was red first but then reacted slapping the older girl's cheek and pushing her out of bed
Aichan was got up fast and rubbed her red cheek
"Sorry Aichan,i'm sorry!" Risa says apologizing and gets up to examinate the older girl's cheek
Aichan avoided her help "forgive me to forget the GakiKame thing!"
"Nobody has ever.." Risa blushing whispers looking down then reacted to what she heard "ehhhh!"
"Don't pretend you like Kamei!" Aichan says mad
"what?ehhhh! i don't like Eri!" Risa replies pouting
"show me!" Aichan says
"how?" The younger girl asked
So sudden Aichan's lips were on hers,Risa still has her eyes open cause the shock
After a few seconds Risa's brain processed the information and replied the kiss by holding the older girl's waist
Soon the two girls separate for the lack of air but they were still with their forheads connected
Risa was really red and nervous while Aichan was grinning like she had won the lottery
"Gaki san I love you!" the older girl says
Risa was speechless still trembling and feeling how her heartbeat is racing
Aichan kissed her again
"I love you too Aichan.." The younger girl says smiling between kisses
~End of the flashback~
Aichan got back to reality thanks to a drop of water that hit her forhead
"Rain.." The ex morning musume murmured sad then kept walking to wherever her feet would lead her
Her clothes were already all soaked but she kept walking to the place she wanted to be in a cold weather like this
In front of the door thinking "if she should or she shouldn't"
The door opened revealing the person she wanted to see
"Aichan!" The girl says all worried
"I'm cold..Risa" The older girl says sad
The younger one lead her inside her dept
Aichan looked around "it's pretty!" she thought
Risa started taking off the older girl's clothes "you might catch a cold!" she murmures trying to avoid the older girl gaze
Aichan cupped the Risa's cheeks and kissed her deeply
Risa hesitate but Aichan kissed her again and so like dynamite and a match they went to bed
~After that on bed~
Risa was face down looking other way while Aichan was looking the back of her lover
Aichan strokes Risa's hair "do you regret?"
Risa turned to look at her ex leader
Aichan was looking to the ceiling "i always thought after graduating.."
Risa interrupt her "don't.." she says while gets up then picks up her phone and talk outside
Aichan heard her
<Risa talking>
"Sorry i had an emergency..no! no! you don't need to come over i'm fine,dont worry see you tomorrow!"
Aichan looked other way sad "maybe i'm loosing her!" she thought
TO BE CONTINUED!!
sorry Yellow is just this one is easier but don't worry i'll update "Don't judge by the covers tomorrow" we cool? xD
Maikeatoot: Realy sorry wasn't my intention to make u sad! :(
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I find a perverted Ai-chan really funny XD
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as you like... i have no particular preference. in fact i like both of them... :thumbsup
back to the fic:
after reading this, i feel they should not have graduated in your fics... so to be together forever... but who knows... maybe you might surprise me with some good ending, right :lol:
and for the "after that on bed" part, can you add in more details for that "that" in the "you know what i mean" section? XD because i think it will add in more spice and fun to the story.... anyway, just kidding, no offence :P... just write it as the way you like to ;)
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well .. something's happened right????? hehe no no Aichan!! you're not losing gaki ! and like what yellow said, ahem! perv section? :ding: :hehehe: oops!
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well .. something's happened right????? hehe no no Aichan!! you're not losing gaki ! and like what yellow said, ahem! perv section? :ding: :hehehe: oops!
:lol: :lol: :lol: you are so funny :lol: :lol: :lol:
*EDIT*
in fact, i more looking forward for this fun and spicy part in "Don't judge by the covers" on them :hip drool2: those wet dreams of the model :hip drool:
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hahha me too :love: :heart: so cmze ?? kindly give us the next chapter errrrr perv chapter !! :shakeit:
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hahha me too :love: :heart: so cmze ?? kindly give us the next chapter errrrr perv chapter !! :shakeit:
:lol: yups :jphip: :jphip:
wait for your update tomorrow, cmze ;) XD
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Guys i don't think i'm kinda good on those things :catglare:
it takes a lot work because english is not my first language :nervous
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me?
Want?
Pervs section!hoho :cow:
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english is nOt my first language also .. and about the perv things .. hm i asked someone who has a experience :))))) mygosh !
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Guys i don't think i'm kinda good on those things :catglare:
it takes a lot work because english is not my first language :nervous
like that never mind :nervous
just write what you can :)
but from what i have read from your fics so far, i can see you have that potential to ... i am serious
and you seem to have the flow in writing that in "Don't judge by the covers" (and that's why i am requesting you to write that in that fic...)
sometimes, something as long as it is simple, readable and understandable, it will be enjoyable... anyway, just write what you can :)
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One sided love?
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The same day afternoon..
Risa got back to the room and entered to the bathroom to shower
Aichan pouted but still she got up and entered to the shower with Risa
"Aichan.." Risa murmured then looked other way
Aichan just kissed her but Risa bit her causing Her to bleed
Risa looked at Aichan who had her hand on her lip
"This is last time.." The ex subleader murmured sad
Aichan just nodded while Risa touched her lip softly with her finger then without a warning she kissed her roughly
~Half an hour later~
Risa went to the kitchen while Aichan putted Risa's clothes on, they got out of the room and watched her best friend cutting some fruits
Aichan hugged her from behind
"Aichan.." Risa whispered and looked
Aichan inhaled Risa scent "my clothes are still wet once they get dry i'll go home and this will be over but please let me enjoy every second of it!" she says sad while presses Risa aganst her body
Risa closed her eyes while the older girl's hands were climbing up under her shirt touching everything on their way while she kisses her neck
Risa turned and kissed Aichan passionately while she's still with her hands under Risa's shirt
~Doorbell ringing~
The two girls stopped kissing and looked at the door
Aichan sighed while Risa scratched her head and went to open the door
"Niigaki san!" Someone shouts and jumps on Risa making both fall on the floor
"Ouuch Eripon.." Risa says complaing while tries to get up but she couldn't cause the younger girl was hugging her waist "I missed you so much!" she says smiling holding tigher on Gaki's waist
Aichan pouted then left her eyebrow and took a deep breath "ahemm"
Eripon looked at the other girl in the room "Takahashi san!" she says faking a smile
Gaki san took this an opportunity and got up "so good to ses you!" she say as she helps the older girl to get up then closed the door
Aichan sitted on the couch next to Gakipon while Risa went to her fridge to get something to drink for the younger girl
Aichan smiled ackwardly "is still this weird atmosphere between us" she thought
Erina pouted a bit "no way.. i love ex leader but I love Niigaki san more!" she thought
"so how's everything going?" Aichan asked with a smile
"well humm Michishige san is a really good leader,Tanaka san is really cool but her singing live is not the same as before,Mizuki singing is really great but spend more of her time thinking how it would be if Kamei san was our leader?,Yasshi and Daishi have an ackward relantionship and it's even more ackward than ever,they never hug unless it would be in front of a camera,Zukki *Aichan interrupts the younger girl*
i wasn't asking about morning..i was asking about you!" Aichan says
"well i'm going to turn 16 so it's only 2 years and i can.. *She stops talking and looks at Risa then smiles*
Aichan rubbed the back of her neck "She always knew about Erina's feelings towards Gakisan and how strange once she graduate it became bigger *She knew because she read the blogs of the girls*"
"here orange juice!" Risa says with a smile
"so Takahashi san it's kinda weird seeing you here due the fact that you haven't talk to Niigaki san long while ago,i stiil remember Niigaki san waiting for your call" Eripon says then drinks her juice
Risa looked down
Aichan putted her hand on her forhead "i wanted to see her.." she whispered sad
"I will always keep contact with Niigaki san beacuse i love her.." The younger girl says smiling
Aichan got up "she could imagine how painful it was for Gaki san and all the s%# she put her through ..all the times she said she would visit Gaki san or go to a concer of MM to see her and she didn't.All the fake promises of being together forever!"
"Takahashi san.." Erina says
Risa looked at the older girl
Aichan wiped the little tear on the corner of her left eye "I have to go,my clothes are already dry!" she says as she goes to Gaki's room then changed her clothes and saved Gaki's shirt on her purse
Risa sighed while Eripon was emotionless watching as Ai leaves
Aichan walked the streets once she was far from Risa's dept she sighed "i want you to be happy.." she murmured
After walking for a while she got to a restaurant,she sitted and waited till someone take her order
"Aichan!" Someone says happy
"Eri..." Aichan says with a smirk
"what are you going to order?" Eri asked
"Same as always.." Aichan replies with a sigh
"The sigh means Gakisan.." Eri says while sits next to her friend
"How can you do it? it's not hard not to see Sayumi everyday?" Aichan asked
"ouchhh! of course it's hard,i was so tempted to get back to Morning and have our KameShige time!"Eri replies pouting
"Why you didn't return?" Aichan asked
"It's her time to shine.." Eri replied with a smile
"That's nice Eri.." Aichan says as she pats her friend's head softly
"you should get Gakisan back,you guys are soul mates!" The younger girl says with a smile
"we can't.." Aichan replies sad and looking other way
"It's because you don't want it!" Eri says
Aichan gets up "i don't want it.. Are you saying that i don't want it? you don't know anything! what are you going to do when Sayumi graduates and decide to still be a tv personality? could you live thinking that someone might steal her from you?because they don't know she's yours!" she says mad then leaves the restaurant
Eri sighed "even though we can spend our time together like before it doesn't change a thing i love her and i will treasure every little second that she have free and when she graduates i still going to love her so i will stay by her side even if i can't tell the world that i love her.. we're KameShige!" she thought
*phone vibrating*
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Finally the radio show it's over ^^
i'm so tired!! x_X;
But still there wasn't anyone cuter than me so i'm happy! :D
remember that i love you and i miss ok! <3 <3
see you on saturday I REALLY LOVE YOU ERI!! ;D
Eri smiled "it's worth it!" she murmures then replies to the message
To be continued
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aww Aichan :'( !! gaki why ?! hm u knw sometimes i wanna write a story of gaki and eripon :) but i always thought 'oh ! TakaGaki is a legendary couple' ! so better not.. anyway .. my beloved KameShige ! of course .. if you want it, you'll get it .. :)) love and love and love no matter how it hurts Aichan ! its the meaning of love !! oh sh*t ! hehehe :peace:
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hahaha... i like the mentality of eririn... she is quite firm and certain of her situation with shige-san :grin:
i think our aigaki should engage with some counselling sessions with the kameshige individually :pimp:
cmze... i think there is some typo here, can you edit :) :
Aichan sitted on the couch next to Gakipon while Risa went to her fridge to get something to drink for the younger girl
as i read this one, i just wonder how can gakipon be there when gakipon is opening her fridge to get drink :?
aww Aichan :'( !! gaki why ?! hm u knw sometimes i wanna write a story of gaki and eripon :) but i always thought 'oh ! TakaGaki is a legendary couple' ! so better not.. anyway .. my beloved KameShige ! of course .. if you want it, you'll get it .. :)) love and love and love no matter how it hurts Aichan ! its the meaning of love !! oh sh*t ! hehehe :peace:
i think you should write what you have thought... mindless whether it is legendary or not :P... like can add more spices to your fiction :)
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oh yellow ! why you gave me idea to my story ?! :D oh i will gve u gakipon alrigHt ! (the dEvil's kiss)
cmze how about soMe kameshiGe ahem ? wohoo !! maikea just kidding !
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oh yellow ! why you gave me idea to my story ?! :D oh i will gve u gakipon alrigHt ! (the dEvil's kiss)
cmze how about soMe kameshiGe ahem ? wohoo !! maikea just kidding !
are you hinting you are starting another new fiction? :P
as for the devil's kiss,
*sigh* to be frank, i hope you can drag it longer as you know... you are making her to disappear in it... thinking about that, i am already quite emo :cry:
but i also cannot be so selfish, right? so please update sooner... as i believe your other readers is also very forward-looking to that chapter :)
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yes of course !! hehe but first , i hope cmze will gve me at least 1 kameshige ahem !! bwahahaha!
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Yeah i'm silly :lol:
i told you i'll give you some of "that!" but not today :catglare:
xD if u like Gakipon you should do it! :cow:
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ah kowaii :'( !! are u mad ? im sorry :'( :'( !
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:lol: no!
maybe cause you ask me to upadate and you haven't update! xD
so please update the 2 fics that i commented that were yours! :grin:
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hmp ! don't want !! you know .. i cant update because im sick :( !!
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then if u don't update i wont give the KameShige part! :lol:
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eeeh ?!!! blackmail !!! hmp ! okay ! challenge accepted!
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then if u don't update i wont give the KameShige part! :lol:
eeeh ?!!! blackmail !!! hmp ! okay ! challenge accepted!
:lol: :lol: you two are funny...
like that, cmze... please give me more aigaki ruburabu... XD to make up the loss i have on devil's kiss :P
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maikeatoot made me do it! XD
and yellow should start writting fanfics too! :shakeit:
so i could request those parts to u too! :lol:
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cmze i really cAnt update !! please gve me kameshige first :) i thnk after 2 weeks before i update :))) so please be kind with us !
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maikeatoot made me do it! XD
and yellow should start writting fanfics too! :shakeit:
so i could request those parts to u too! :lol:
but i am not a good writer... :lol:
those parts... you don't need request i also will give you if i would to ever write and have to :lol:
maybe you appease me with more aigaki raburabu first XD
anyways, see my mood... as you know i also need that time to draft the plots and setting out XD
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how about let's write a story ? with me,yellow and cmze are the writers ! lol
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how about let's write a story ? with me,yellow and cmze are the writers ! lol
:lol: please count me out, i really not a good writer... because i am quite wishy-washy towards many things... and often, my idea runs...
why not you two :lol:
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wishy-washy ? hahaha you never fail to make me laugh ! :D well that was just an idea.
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:lol: :lol: :lol:
just kidding... maybe some of the days, i have the sparks of inspirations and mood, i will try writing and share with you guys... but seriously speaking, i am totally sucks when come to writing... especially these days... :sweatdrop:
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its okay ! just enjoy being our loyal reader !! hohoho ! oh my eyes hurt !!
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:lol: i will... :D
i think you better rest since you are not well :)
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Eripon love :lol:
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So you're backing out... :smhid
okay you can read but not write..how am i suppose go know that you'll update? :grin:
you two are in a cospirancy against me!
yellow you don't big thing a one shot would be nice!! :) and if it Daishi and Yasshi better!
Maikeatoot i have nothing to say to you because you're sick but once you'll be healthy.. :rofl:
i'm not good acting bossy! :nervous
but anyways you'll give that one shot i'll give you TakaGaki!! :lol:
Maekeatoot you better update after reading my KameShige part! :D
okay this is blackmail but who cares!! XD :shakeit:
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huh... how and when i have get into the fun of you two? :shocked
for oneshot, why the little ones? can other people anot?
why not we negotiate a bit, i give an oneshot of any coupling, you give me a good raburabu on the two?
please be kind to me since i intend to try to write you one... :shy1:
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i promised to update after that kameshige ahem !!! yay ! !! maikea wanna hug you !! hmm ! ok i think a kiss will do :) mwaah !
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how am i going to write a good one? i'm learning you know i'm not really good on it! :nervous
because it's hard writting on them and i wanna see u struggle a little "not love thing or that" just a cute one shot!
to give me ideas from my next chapter on don't judge by the covers!
hey btw your scenes of what fic are? one side love or don't judge by the covers?
tell in which fic you want it?
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dont judge by the covers !! yay ! kameshige !! i'll gve u a huge update after that !
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you want ideas :lol:
i can give you any if you want it any time...
please don't have high hopes my oneshot will ever give any idea on that.... :nervous
btw if i would to update i won't use this account to update... just wait and see... you will know when i update ;D
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for rabu rabu scenes, actually i want both :grin: because you always do it passively here :(
but first, a passive one on them in your don't judge by the covers... since you say writing that content is tiring for you...
if you makes me happy, i write you another oneshot... how about it?
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i want to give cmze a heart attack :cow: hohoho oops !!! hehe i promise to give you guys a very huge update after my vacation okay? for now, please update dont judge by the covers !!! yay ! and that kameshige ahem !!!!!!!!
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i want to give cmze a heart attack :cow: hohoho oops !!! hehe i promise to give you guys a very huge update after my vacation okay? for now, please update dont judge by the covers !!! yay ! and that kameshige ahem !!!!!!!!
:lol: i think you better don't also give me heartattack too... if :imdead: no more takagaki raburabu :nervous
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One sided love?
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It's been two weeks sice the last time Risa saw Ai..
Risa was on her bed not knowing what to do..
She just update her blog already so there wasn't anything else to do with it but soon she was about to close it her hands did the opposite and writte Ai's name on google to get to her blog
Risa read every entry of it but there wasn't anything about her like if Ai wasn't thinking about her at all
"Stupid Aichan!" she murmured while scratches her head irritated
*Phone ringing*
Risa sees her phone "Ren" she murmures then sees a text message:
Meet in the park around the corner! ^^
Risa smiled then looked herself in the mirror and went to the park
~Meanwhile~
Kamei Eri was watching the tv,her parents aren't home so she's kinda chilling
*Doorbell ringing*
Eri pouts then gets up and opens the door
Sayumi hugs her "are your parents home?" she asked
"no.." Eri replies with a smile and closes the door without breaking their hug
"i missed you! i missed you!" Sayumi says still hugging her turtle
"me too.." Eri replies a little sad as she breaks the hugs
"Kamei Eririn what's wrong?" The bunny asked
Eri looker down "It'a just.. *sighs* i don't wanna crush your dreams after you graduate from Morning Musume.."
Sayu pouted "what?" she asked
Eri looks at her girlfriend "what if one day you decide to have kids? we're never going to do that? and we could never hold hands in public or have a normal relantionship outside this four walls.Could you handle all that?" she asked sad i
*Somehow Eri now understood Ai's words and what she was doing all this time.Sacrificing herself because she wanted Risa to have it all.. a husband,kids and a normal relantionship without hiding from anyone*
Sayumi looked at her girlfriend then smirked "Kamei Eri i love you and this relantionship will last as long it has to last. i don't wanna think about the future i'm still young so let's enjoy this.. us" she says and plants a soft kiss on Eri's lips
*Eri was worried but she was right eventually this relantionship will not last because factors would ruin it*
Eri sighed and kissed Sayumi back
~Meanwhile~ At the park
"Stop taking pictures!" Risa says as she tries to avoid Ren's phone from her
Ren smiles "what your my girlfriend and it might be nice to have some pictures of us on it!"
Risa sighed and kept walking hand in hand with Ren till a memory crossed her mind
~Flashback~
"Aichan.." An ackward red Risa called
"what?" Aichan replied grinning taking pictures from her iphone
Risa pouted "why am i have to wear this cat suit? this is not cool!" she says complaining
Aichan smiles widely "because it suits you the best please pose for me!" she says drooling
"Not fair.." Risa thought as she's on bed posing and blushing
"What do you prefer that i have anyother girl on my phone?" Aichan asked grinning teasing the younger girl
Risa took off the ears and throwed them to Ai's face
"ouuch!" The older girl says
Risa got off bed and walked away
"Ehh! where are you going?" Ai asked and grabbed Risa by her waist from behind
"let me go!" A mad Risa says
"Do you really think a would have anyonther girl picture on my phone? Risa chan doesn't know that i'm only gay for her!" Aichan whispers in her ears then kisses it softly
Risa blushed "why you always do this?" she asked feeling embarrased
"what?!" Aichan asked
"nothing.." Risa replied
Aichan made her turn around and kissed her passionately
Risa smile between kisses while Aichan presses her gainst her body
~End of the flashback~
Risa looked at Ren "Even his hand is so different from hers,hers were softer and delicate,they were perfect fit for my hands" she thought and a sighs scaped
"am i making you bore?" Ren asked
"no, it's just i haven't sleep properly.. sorry!" Risa replies and gives him a quick peck
Ren smile and kept walking with Risa hand in hand
~ At Risa's dept~
She couldn't help just to throw herself on bed,her computer was next her "argg if you don't think about me.. o won't think about you either!" shee says mad while pushes the computer away
Soon she fell sleep..
TO BE CONTINUED!!
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oh Love ! why do you have to be so complicated ?! whats wrong with a relationship of both gender ! all is fair in love RISA !! my gosh ! leave ur bf ! before sam1 steal aichan from you..
ITS ME!
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oh Love ! why do you have to be so complicated ?! whats wrong with a relationship of both gender ! all is fair in love RISA !! my gosh ! leave ur bf ! before sam1 steal aichan from you..
ITS ME!
cmze, i think you should let our beloved maikea to be in your story :lol: to further complicate the relationship between aigaki XD since she love to be in the game
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hahaha ! oh i'd love that !! since im hopelessly inlove with Aichan !
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cmze... you know your kameshige part makes me recall an almost ending line from the movie yes or no 2 where the tom character say to her girlfriend with something like that:
"even that our relationship might not end up with on the aisle exchanging our commitment vow and cannot have kids in future like normal couples, but i love you.... I will use the rest of my life to prove my love to you" :nervous
so for aigaki, i think not that ai not think about you, risa girl... sometimes, something need not be spelt out... it is the heart that matters... so, don't hurt mr. nice guy, ren anymore when you don't love him :smhid
and the cat suit thingy... you let me think of a shot in the treasury box... till now i can't forget about the content but i have forgotten the name of the author... sorry for that but i know he is a good writer. :nervous
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hahaha ! oh i'd love that !! since im hopelessly inlove with Aichan !
yup yup whatever :smhid you are really hopelessly in love XD
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hey i will post my new fic tomorrow ! with daishi and riho.
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ok i'm looking forward even though i can't catch it live... due to my daunting revision :catglare:
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Sorry guys it's not complicated its realistic...
To the scene where Yellow describe "that's what i think if i have a relationship like that.. so i put what i thought" no idea what movie! :nervous
Maikeatoot you can destroy my AiGaki more so you can't b in my fic! :grin:
Guys i have a best friend who cut with her 5 years old firlfriend for the same factors!
My friend Andrea ended her relantionship with Kathy "for those factors"
she's not a singer or anything like that but she didn't told her parents her preference so it was kinda like that "were they never could b a normal couple and do couple things in public" :(
so use that to put it on the story..
Kathy now is marry/pregnant and last saturday was her baby shower "i didn't go cause i thought that poor my friend!" :sweatdrop:
And not the fancfic is not gonna end like that!! :oops:
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Sorry guys it's not complicated its realistic...
To the scene where Yellow describe "that's what i think if i have a relationship like that.. so i put what i thought" no idea what movie! :nervous
Maikeatoot you can destroy my AiGaki more so you can't b in my fic! :grin:
Guys i have a best friend who cut with her 5 years old firlfriend for the same factors!
My friend Andrea ended her relantionship with Kathy "for those factors"
she's not a singer or anything like that but she didn't told her parents her preference so it was kinda like that "were they never could b a normal couple and do couple things in public" :(
so use that to put it on the story..
Kathy now is marry/pregnant and last saturday was her baby shower "i didn't go cause i thought that poor my friend!" :sweatdrop:
And not the fancfic is not gonna end like that!! :oops:
nvm... it is a thai movie... it is about girl love... quite PG rated for its content. yup, it's a sweet movie. i am totally in love with the bossy and sassy Pie and her nice-natured lover Kim (i.e. the tom character) and the movie is based on a novel of the same title.
and cmze, really you should have her (maikea) in because she is now totally in love with "ai-chan" :lol: (further detail, please check it out at my oneshot thread in "Crack-to-Go", i mean the recent comments conversations between her and me)
not only you, i also want such romantic lover... if one day a person would to say and do that for me, i will also be with that person... but it can only be a dream :(
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now you make me sad cmze :( you know im inlove with a girl who looks like Aichan .. :'(
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Sorry! Sorry i didn't mean to make u sad.. :cow:
well it doesn't mean that this happens to every relationship! :nervous
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Sorry! Sorry i didn't mean to make u sad.. :cow:
well it doesn't mean that this happens to every relationship! :nervous
so that is the chance for maikea's appearance in your fictions XD going involving Aichan :lol: one of the days :P
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now im depressed :'( you owe an update :)))))
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now im depressed :'( you owe an update :)))))
who own who update :?
did i own any? (i don't remember yup *pretend*)
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if is it for me..
i gotta go to college! :nervous
i'm just making time to go take the bus!! :grin:
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I had to search for the chapter :lol:
so much drama
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I had to search for teh chapter :lol:
so much drama
I'm sorry for that once again.:sweatdrop:
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I had to search for teh chapter :lol:
so much drama
I'm sorry for that once again.:sweatdrop:
don't worry about it, its good to talk about it but it seems better to limit it to a few posts so people can read it
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I had to search for teh chapter :lol:
so much drama
I'm sorry for that once again.:sweatdrop:
don't worry about it, its good to talk about it but it seems better to limit it to a few posts so people can read it
we will take note of that and be careful in future :nervous
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One sided love?
6
I was feeling a little funny today so enjoy!! xD
(This is all fiction!) :D
Takahashi Ai lays on her bed,a sigh scaped from her mouth as remembers certain girl who's been posting things about her boyfriend
Aichan gets up from bed a decides to take a walk "you're not going to mess with me Gaki-san" she thought as she walks to the metro
Once there she a train to nowhere,she sitted and waited for the first stop
A girl sitted next to Ai,the same girl was looking at Aichan with shiny eyes
Aichan turned her head and looked at the young girl
"I knew it was you!" The girl says with a smile
"Eh.." Aichan was shocked eyes open wide
The girl extends her hand "I'm Maikea!" she says with a smile
Aichan frowned but she greeted her anyways "Aichan" she says not so happy
Maikea sighed with a smile plastered on her face
Aichan looked at the girl and then turned to look other way
"I really love Morning Musume because of you!" Maikea says excited
Aichan turned head ackwardly "thanks!" she says with a smile
Maikea was about to hug Aichan but Aichan saw a coin on the floor so she bent down and took it
Maikea pouted but then smiled"And i also ship KameShige and TakaGaki i think Niigaki san is only the only person besides me that can take care of Aichan well!"
Aichan looked at the younger girl and sighed "You know that TakaGaki is not real! Right?" she asked
Maikea smiled "I know but still you guys are soulmates.."
Aichan pouted "stop saying those things.." she says a little annoyed and looked other way trying to not think about the other girl
Maikea tries to take Aichan hand but Aichan moved it to tuck her hair behind her ear
Maikea pouted again but then says "The way you guys understood eachother,the way you looked eachother on stage,the way you described eachother it was so romantic!" She says with her hands on her chest * with her eyes closed*
*The train stops Aichan gets up and fast got out of the train,she looked at Maikea and smiled warmly while the doors closes*
When Maikea opened her eyes Aichan was already "ehhh i why didn't kiss her?" she asked pouting
~Meanwhile~
Aichan thought about what Maikea said to her so she decide to take another train and head to the younger girl dept..
~Meanwhile~
Maikea was walking the streets looking for a good place to eat,she found a small but comfortable restaurant.She entered and soon a familiar face greet her
"You..you.. you're Kamei Eri!" Maikea says nervous cause the good looking girl in front of her
"Hi,nice to meet you!" Eri says with a smile
Maikea takes Eri's hand "i'm a big shipper of KameShige!"
Eri got red "thanks!" she says with a nod while guides Maikea to a seat
Maikea was in seven heaven "first she met Ai and now she's meeting Eri.. What a lucky day!" she thought
Soon Eri left to her table in the corner..
(Note: There was romour of Eri wanting to have restaurant so i gave her the restaurant! xD
she greet the people who comes and then leaves to do her things)
Maikea ordered her food which was soon brought by the waiter
Soon another costumer entered to the restaurant,Maikea turned her head and she couldn't believe who was
"Sayumin!" Maikea shouts smiling which totally got Sayumi's attetion
Maikea felt a little embarrased and sitted back "why did i do that?" she asked
Sayumi walked to her table and said "hi" with a sweet smile
Makea got up of her seat and grabbed Sayu's hands "i'm a big.. *Interrupted by a jealous Eri who separate their hands*
"Thanks!" Sayumi says while she walks away with Eri hand in hand
"KameShige is real YAY!" Maikea shouted the "yay!"
*Everyone in the restaurant looked at Maikea*
"Sorry! Sorry!" She says while seats
Sayu and Eri smiles
"well she's knows where Sayu belongs!!" Eri says still a little jealous
"Eririn!" The bunny says and hugs her turttle
~Meanwhile~
Aichan was standing in Risa's door fighting with her innerselves not knowing "knock or not!"
Aichan sighed and soon she heard some laughs
"Aichan.." A voice called from behind
Aichan turned her head and looked at Risa and her boyfriend
"Hi.." She said not so happy
Ren looked at Aichan "you're her best friend right.. i wanted to meet you!" he says with a smile
Aichan looked at Risa who was speechless
"Yeah i'm her best friend.." She said trying to fake a smile
Risa noticed that but rathered ignore it
"you know i have to go.. have fun!" Ai says as she walks but Risa grabbed her hand
"Aichan.." Risa called but then let go her hand
"Don't worry.." Aichan murmures and walks away
"what happened here?" Ren asked
Risa sighed "nothing.." she answered
Aichan got to her dept and layed on bed again "stupid Maikea.." she whispered and fell sleep
Ha! just a joke.. xD
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cmze, you caught me :rofl:
i was totally laughing all the way when i read this chapter :grin: ever since the moment i saw her name.
i think you should specially announce her appearance in this chapter and i think she is sure happy to read this XD
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back to the chapter,
you better straighten things up for our favourite... :angry: it is really quite torturing for me to see the two kept having more and more misunderstandings.... :catglare:
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In think it will b more surprising when she read it! :shakeit:
it's the surprise element! :rofl:
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yup, it is. :thumbsup
i am now like you waiting for her response... i want to see how she is going to react to it.
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that was an interesting add, she will be surprised when she reads it
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Yeah! :D
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:inlove: :rofl: :oops: :twothumbs :shakeit: :lol: MY GOODNESS CMZE !! :cow: :yossi: You MaKe my Day complete !! :rofl: its my dream ! to be in fanfic with my idols ! :cry: :cry: im so happy i wanna cry !!
even though it was just a fiction , i feel like i finally met them :bow: :heart: :cry: Thank you ! Mahal kita ! i love you :heart: :wub:
okay back to the story ..
why gaki-san you hurt aichan like that ? dont you love her anymore because of that guy ? theres nothing wrong if u love her !
and KameShige ! YaY ! :w00t: i like the way Eririn get jealous of Maikea :)))) :cathappy: :cathappy:
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@maikea:
i also very jealous of you :P2 because aichan now remember you :lol:
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oh my gosh !! i .. i .. <3 DIES <3 !!! im so lucky !!!
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That was unnexpected.. well thank yellow who told me to! :thumbsup
Maybe yellow can appear in otger chapter to help Ai and Risa!! ;)
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yeah you can add her too !! and if ever ,kuro-kun too ! hahaha.
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haha... i am just joking... please don't... if you do... i will pay back to you with a drabble :peace:
if as a love counsel, i can consider... you know, Dr Yellow ahem :lol:
yup, add kuro in... :jphip: :jphip: :jphip:
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What?! i would do it anyway! :rofl:
But still i don't know if Kuro wants it.. hope he see this amd tell me it deoesn't bother him!
now i'm going to sleep is late and have college!!! :banghead:
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you are bad... i see how you do it... if it is nice... the continuation of the drabble will feature you :grin:
good nite... have a good rest and be ready for school tml :thumbsup
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hoho at least i met my idols ! thanks to cmze .. i owe her an update !
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you also own me one too... didnt you receive my pm :(
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yes now i understand yellow .. really thank you ! whic fanfic of mine you want an update.
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i think the devil kiss... i want to see the honeymoon scene but at the same time, love me, my darling enemy... the part on gaki remembering what she have done to ai just before she fell asleep... i cant choose... i am just indecisive :(
so can both anot?
please pamper me, please :nya:
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okay i'll do that for you ! and for my readers ! yay!
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:on woohoo:
(i will pamper you again when i have the chance to too :cow:)
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One sided love?
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Okay... hope u like it! xD
~At night.. in a bar close to Risa's home~
Nigakii Risa ordered more beer "Aichan.." she whispers before drinking
"Hey..hmm we're already about to close" A girl says smiling
Risa burps and looks at the girl talking to her "you..your hair long like that remind of someone" she says
The girl smiled "Aichan.." she whispered
"Ehhh how you knew?" Risa asked
"i'm a Morning Musume fan and i saw Aichan's hair and copied her!" The girl replies with a smile
"Ohh *hip* thank you!" Risa replies as she takes her hand which cause Yellow to blush
"Yellow did you tell her?" A guy asked as he is clening the bar
"Yeah gives us ten minutes!" Yellow shouted
"ok!" He replied
"I think it's time for me to go.." Risa says as she walks and bumps with a chair
"Oucchhh.." She shouted in pain
Yellow fast helped her to get up and then sitted her on the chair
"Don't you have someone to come and pick you up?" The sober girl asked as she sits in front of Risa
"Aichan hates me!!!" Risa says crying and hugs Yellow
The sober girl blinked a few times then patted the ex morning musume's back "i don't think she hates you,she loves you and i'm a TakaGaki shipper!"
Risa breaks the hug "Really?" she asked
Yellow smiled "of course you guys were totally unique and *sighs* beatiful!" she says with her hands on her chest
Risa cried again "I want her back! *hip* what should i do?" she asked crying and hugs Yellow again
Yellow sighed "Then call her and tell her so!" she answers frowning
Risa breaks the hug again and grabs her phone from her pocket "Call her!" she says as gives her phone to Yellow
"what? why me?" Yellow asked
"i can't speak *hip* properly!" Risa replied
Yellow sighed and soon searched for Aichan phone
"It ringning!" the sober girl say nervous
"Hi.." A voice says in the other line not so happy
Yellow got nervous and hanged up
"what was *hip* that?" Risa asked
I GOT NERVOUS!!! Yelllow shouted
Risa looked at her with a "WTF?" face
" it took me half an hour to focusand tell you that we were closing.. " Yellow replied pouted
Risa sighed "sorry sorry.. "
Yellow gave Risa a smile "it's okay!"
" try again please!!" Risa says
Yellow dialed again "it's ringing.." she murmured
Ai looked at her phone then answered "okay..*Yellow hanged up again!"
Ai pouts "Risaaaaa!" she shouts and calls her phone
"Why did you do that?" Risa asked
"I got nervous again!" Yellow replied
Risa's phone started ringing
Yellow looked at the screen "it's her!" she says and throws the phone to Risa,who catched and throwed to Yellow again
"Answer!!" Risa says
Yellow gulped and answered
"Hi!" She says nervous
"Risa what's wrong?" Ai asked
"i'm.. not.. Risa.. i'm a big fan!" Yellow shouts the last part
"Maikea?" Aichan says
"i don't know who's Maikea!" Yellow says
"Is she having an affair with another girl?" Risa shouts crying
"no! no.. wait a minute who are you?i'm not having an affair with Maikea!" Aichan replies fast
"She says she's not having an affair with Maike!" Yellow says to Risa who was crying
"Tell her that i don't wanna talk to her again!" Risa replies
Niigaki says that she doesn't want to talk to you again..*ehh wait Aichan need to pick you up!" Yellow shouts
"What where?" Aichan asked
"I don't want her to come!" Risa says pouting
"okay i'm going over there!" Ai says and hangs up
<Yellow gave Risa's phone back>
"What did she said?" Risa asks
Yellow got up " i'll go get you coffee!"
After a few minutes Yellow brought coffee to Risa
"Thank you!" Risa says while puts it on the table
Yellow sighed "He's doing all the work and i don't think he's doing it free!" she thought as she looks at her partner
Risa bumoed her hand with cup of coffee causing it to fall on Yelllow's pants
"Ouuuch!" Yellow says
"Omg!i'm so sorry!" Risa says as she takes the napking and tries to clean Yellow
"what's going on here? Keep your hands off my Gakisan!" Aichan shouts
Yellow rised her hands up "I'M A TAKAGAKI SHIPPER I SWEAR!!" she replies shouting and nervous
"Aichan!" Risa says as she gets up and runs to her ex leader
"Are you okay?" Aichan asked examinating the girl
Risa hugs Aichan "you came for me!" she whispers
Aichan breaks the hug and cups Risa's cheeks "there's nothing i wouldn't do for you!" she says as she wipes Risa's tears
"I knew you were real.." Yellow says in tears as she watches the scene
Aichan looked at Yellow
"Don't worry she took care of me.." Risa says as she walks to Yellow and looks at her
"you guys are.." Yellow was interrupted when Risa gave her a kiss on her cheek then run back to Aichan
Yellow was all red
"should i be jeoulous about that?" Aichan asked
Risa smirked then the two starting walking away but Ai turned her head "Thank you for calling!" she says with a smile
"I must be dreaming.." Yellow thought as they walked away
TO BE CONTINUED!!
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my.. my.. hahaha! so funny !! yellow and risa are so funny !! throwing that phone ! hahaha! me want more !!
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cmze... have you make me too dramatic and nervous as a person... i'm an introvert more than an extrovert XD so most of the time, my face is at poker mode. but i really like how you have describe me as it makes feel quite different from what i really was.
and thanks for the cool occupation and cool interactions with the bean... i got a peak from the bean...even hug :inlove:
oh my god, i'm totally in heaven now... oh no... i think i can't update tonight anymore... because my mood now is way too hyper XD XD XD all thanks to you, cmze XD XD XD
i'm think i'm totally in my ecstasy now... i am so hyper... gonna kissed and hugged by the bean :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: and Aichan, please don't hate or get jealous of me XD XD XD or else, I will be guilt-stricken XD
but what's with the hairstyle thing... i don't copy style :angry: ... i am more my style type of person than any :thumbdown: but anyway, it is really cool... i like how you have depicted me in this chapter :D
i love you, cmze... :love:
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me jealous too .. *pouts* me want a kiss from Aichan!
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me jealous too .. *pouts* me want a kiss from Aichan!
but aichan remember you... is that more than enough? and you did meet kameshige in persons... i only meet takagaki, i want to meet eririn too you know (but please, save that up as I really don't wish to make another appearance here... i think other readers will feel quite outcasted if we would to keep doing this even that the fact if they want be in the story, they can state their request, right?)
yup, all the close intact interactions with the bean has made up my sense of loss for not meeting the turtle in person XD so i am quite contented now.
Thank you, cmze.
i love you :love:
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i'm glad u like it.. :grin:
Yeah it's just.. i don't it came that way! :shakeit:
sorry abou the hair style :)
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nvm... it's just a fic :grin:
after reading what you have written about me, it is so well depicted until i also don't know i could write about you in MEH anymore. :nervous you have made me got stucked in my own plot for you in that story :huhuh
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it has been interesting adding certain characters into your fic
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One sided love?
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Takahashi Ai openned her eyes,she saw a girl next to her on bed"Finally even though you were drunk but still you called!" she thought as she looks at her ex sub leader sleeping naked
Aichan got up,went to the bathroom then after a few minutes she went to the kitchen to prepare breakfast both of them
The smell of food made Risa to wake up.. The morning musume leader looked around "This is not my dept,this is.."
"Good morning!" Aichan says with a smile interrupting Gaki san thoughts
"Aichan!!" Risa says shocked jumping aside
"What you don't like my body anymore?" Aichan asked pouting cutely
"you shouldn't be naked.." Risa says all red
Aichan laughed and pointed to the poor Risa
"Ehhh!" Risa saw herself naked also
"don't you remember last night?" Aichan asked
<Flashes of last night>
(Risa remebered Yellow and that they called Aichan to pick her up then they had really hot make up sex)
Risa putted her shirt on and looked around for her panties
Aichan grabbed Risa's panties "here!" she says smirking
Risa sighed "Aichan.." she called sad and grabbed her panties then puts them on
One Risa putted her clothes "Aichan.." she says sadly but
Aichan got closer to Risa then putted her fingers on her lips to shut her up "don't say it.. this won't be the last
time! did you know that there are many AiGaki or TakaGaki shippers out there?" she asked with a smile
"hummm" Risa manage to express
"yeah is totally cool,it is! isn't it?" Aichan says smiling like a little kid excited
Risa removes Aichan's fingers from her lips "but.."
Aichan takes Risa's hand and pulls her for a kiss *A rough one*
Risa don't know how to react then suddenly Aichan pushes her on her bed and gets herself on top sitting on Gaki's stomach while she tries to get up
"Aichan!" Risa says trying to remove the older girl but somehow she got havier
"I know i made many mistakes through this years but.. i can make it up to you,i'm not scare anymore Risa i love you!" Aichan says with watery eyes looking at the yourger girl who stopped forcing or trying to get up
Risa was speechless but then just looked other way "I have somebody else and i don't wanna hurt him!" she says sadly
Aichan's tears came out "No! you love me only me,you said it last night!" the older girl shouts
Risa kept looking other way with tears also wanting to show
"Say that you don't love me!" Aichan says sobbing
"Aichan i don't.." *Risa's was interrupted by another kiss*
Aichan was kissed Risa passionately on her lips,she cupped her cheek with one hand while the other was getting under Risa's shirt
"Aichan..stop.." Risa says between kisses while Aichan's is still kissing her
Risa can feel Aichan's tears rolling her cheeks while she kisses her
Aichan then left her mouth and stared kissing her neck while her hand went south rubbing her thigh as it goes up ready to unzip her shorts but Risa manage to grab that hand
Aichan stopped kissing her neck and looked at the younger girl in the eyes
"Please..stop.." Risa says crying
Aichan heart aches and more tears came out,she got off Risa and sitted next to her
Risa wiped her tears then got up to adjust her clothes while Aichan only looks at her
"You're never going to forgive me.." The older girl said sad
Risa turns around and looks at Aichan sitting on the bed "you're wrong,i already did.." she says as she walks away
When Aichan heard the door,she broke even more in tears
Risa also while walks she breaks in tears.. "it's too late Aichan!" she thought
TO BE CONTINUED!!
Me playing around with u!! xD
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oh damn you GaKI !!!!!!!!!!!! how dare you hurt aichan like that!!! what??! then go with your bf 1! just go !! don't come to Aichan again !!! i will take her away from you !!!!!!!!!!
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about the chapter:
at first i am quite happy how things are going as finally me and maikea have told senses into Ai :peace:
but then, why it is too late :? have Risa really committed herself to that Ren guy? if she did, i am really pissed :catglare:
and hope Ai will win her back since she is able to as the bean is still single but not available :theking ...
Ai, fight for your love, since it is you to have landed it so. I backed you up!! :jphip:
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the guilt builds
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:cow:Hey everyone this here's the new chapter!! btw i'll put all that kind of chapters in the same thread..ENJOY!! scroll down!
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.40 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.40)
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commented... it's a good idea to place all your such story there :thumbup
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CHAPTER 10:
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.40 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.40)
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i really like this one XD
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este gracias por mandarlos como pm supongo que era aqui donde debia dejar un post, muy bueno el fic XD :thumbsup
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One sided love~ AiGaki
Honestly, I don't read fics that much these days but the bolded word caught my eye and I need some distraction :D
"She was my first boyfriend!"
XD
W says excited while walks around the dept with Y
Names crack me up :lol:
X says smiling sitting on the couch
And there's X too... Perfect for math XD
Risa got tired of dancing and went to the bar for more vodka
Pretty strong drink
hey had eye contact but neither of them looked happy
AiGaki!
"because we're friends pretty much like sisters!"
Sisters?
"Do you kiss your sister's with your tongue? do you grope her chest or kiss her and tell her that you love her?"
Aww! So they kissed in the past! Yay! :deco:
*Nobody entered to the bathroom*
That's a good thing, they can have the place all for themselves :mon fyeah:
Aichan licked her lips and whispered in her ear
Har har :drool:
i'm not not your sister or your friend or your girlfriend those are things that we could never be,seriuosly do you think is nornal if two woman grabs their hands like this?
Oh
*they're just kids*
lol XD
he.. well he's nothing compare to you,his lips taste different they are not sweet as yours
NOOOOOOOO :frustrated: I dun wanna read the next lines :fainted:
"we never be.."
Of course you two can be TOGETHER, Risa! :mon yell:
Ren got sad and hugged the ex morning musume
Dun touch her! Ai's watching! :scolding:
Risa was shocked first but then just hugged him back
Noooo :pleeease:
i always wanted to hug you like that..
Oh please
"He's nice and charming!"
Ai is more nice and more charming! :mon yell:
*She ended up on Ai's door*
:wriggly:
"Then don't you wanna shower?"
Huh? :mon fyeah: :drool:
"ehhh why?" Risa asked and smelled herself then notice Ren's perfume on her
Ah
sets the tub
:drool:
Gaki san enters to the bathroom,she starts stripping in front of Aichan which was completely staring at her
:luvluv1: :luvluv2: :on_hot: :wriggly: :nya: :on gay: :mon inluv: :mon lovelaff: :mon trannie: :mon crazyinlove: :mon firecrack: :mon money: :gmon flowers: :gmon twirl:
Risa blushed and then Ai noticed what she was doing so she got out of the bathroom
Oh please! :smhid
Aichan entered again the bathroom
:mon money:
the two girls looked at eachothers eyes
:mon crazyinlove:
Risa just one kiss
:mon lovelaff:
Soon both got to bed and shared their painful love..
Aww, bittersweet
Takahashi Ai tried to watch the movie with her so called boyfriend on the couch
Tsk! :smhid
He kissed Ai's neck..
:mon freeze: :mon kungfu: :knee: :kickass:
Sorry for setting a trap.It was my jealousy working that thing called "GakiKame
What!? :mon one:
"I'm so dead.." Reina says while fans herself
"Finally over!" JunJun says with a smile
Aichan ignored everyone and got up
"what's wrong with her?" Koharu asked looking at Aichan who was drinking water
"She's been acting strange.." Risa murmured
"What are you guys going to do after this?" Eri asked with smile
"I'm going home to sleep!" Reina gets up
LinLin frowned "i wanna get something to eat..i'm hungry!" she says with a smile
Eri also smiled "that's what i'm talking about about,let's go get something to eat!"
Sayumi agreed fast
Risa sighed "i have something else to do" she murmured and stole a glass to Aichan
Soon everyone left
Love this scene :D
Aichan payed her sister to stay out and sleep at W's home
XD
Was an horror movie and how it was everything calculated Risa and Ai were hugging eachother and covering eachother's eyes
Look at that, tv's on their side :mon fyeah:
forgive me to forget the GakiKame thing!
Aww, jealous jealous :mon inluv:
"show me!" Aichan says
Yeah, show her Risa! :gmon twirl:
So sudden Aichan's lips were on hers,Risa still has her eyes open cause the shock
XD Good job Aichan!!! :deco:
After a few seconds Risa's brain processed the information and replied the kiss by holding the older girl's waist
:wriggly:
Risa was really red and nervous while Aichan was grinning like she had won the lottery
Nice to imagine :D
~After that on bed~
Second time I see ~words here~ :grin:
maybe i'm loosing her!
What? After that ahem? You still think that way? What are you two, only friends with benefits?
"This is last time.."
:OMG:
~Doorbell ringing~
:temper:
Mizuki singing is really great but spend more of her time thinking how it would be if Kamei san was our leader?
XD
"well i'm going to turn 16 so it's only 2 years and i can.. *She stops talking and looks at Risa then smiles*
XD
so Takahashi san it's kinda weird seeing you here due the fact that you haven't talk to Niigaki san long while ago,i stiil remember Niigaki san waiting for your call
Good job Eripon :twothumbs
I will always keep contact with Niigaki san beacuse i love her..
Now, that is being tactless Eripon! :angry:
"Eri..."
:w00t: :deco:
"The sigh means Gakisan.."
:deco:
"It's because you don't want it!" Eri says
That's right Eri! Remind her! :mon annoy:
Eri sighed "even though we can spend our time together like before it doesn't change a thing i love her and i will treasure every little second that she have free and when she graduates i still going to love her so i will stay by her side even if i can't tell the world that i love her.. we're KameShige!" she thought
That's my Erien :nya:
Finally the radio show it's over ^^
i'm so tired!! x_X;
But still there wasn't anyone cuter than me so i'm happy! :D
remember that i love you and i miss ok! <3 <3
see you on saturday I REALLY LOVE YOU ERI!! ;D
Eri smiled "it's worth it!" she murmures then replies to the message
Good example of Simple-True-Love :)2
Will read the rest next time :)
I had fun reading, thanks :D
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it is so damn fun to read such a dramatic comment from krisZ-san XD
and cmze, remember to give me more (those ahem) if you have again... you know i just got addicted to your every content in your stories :P
maybe i am hyper again, i might surprise you with something this month end... stay tuned :P
(mm... those sweet sweet and cute cute thing on the two? if on other also can. you want normal one or ahem one, i let you choose this time because i just want to write one to pamper you once again so that i can have more goodies from you... pm me your choice and gd nite again :P)
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it is so damn fun to read such a dramatic comment from krisZ-san XD
Good to know :D
Risa read every entry of it but there wasn't anything about her like if Ai wasn't thinking about her at all
Love is so complicated sometimes XD
Risa smiled then looked herself in the mirror and went to the park
Crazy over someone and yet you're meeting another someone?! :mon nyah:
what if one day you decide to have kids? we're never going to do that? and we could never hold hands in public or have a normal relantionship outside this four walls.Could you handle all that?
Hits home
Sacrificing herself because she wanted Risa to have it all.. a husband,kids and a normal relantionship without hiding from anyone
Ren smiles "what your my girlfriend and it might be nice to have some pictures of us on it!"
WHAT!? THEY'RE NOW IN A RELATIONSHIP!? :OMG:
Risa sighed and kept walking hand in hand with Ren till a memory crossed her mind
:gmon pissed:
why am i have to wear this cat suit?
:w00t:
"Not fair.." Risa thought as she's on bed posing and blushing
I want a copy of that :drool:
"no, it's just i haven't sleep properly.. sorry!" Risa replies and gives him a quick peck
Really!? Did she have to kiss him!? :mon fierce:
Aichan frowned but she greeted her anyways "Aichan" she says not so happy
lol, poor Maikea
Maikea was about to hug Aichan
Girl, you're so not allowed to do that :P
And i also ship KameShige and TakaGaki i think Niigaki san is only the only person besides me that can take care of Aichan well!
You're so going to freak her out :lol:
Maikea tries to take Aichan hand but Aichan moved it to tuck her hair behind her ear
Fail for the second time XD
When Maikea opened her eyes Aichan was already "ehhh i why didn't kiss her?" she asked pouting
If you did, you'd be dodging from sharp objects flying towards you :P
Sayumi walked to her table and said "hi" with a sweet smile
Fan service :strawberry:
Makea got up of her seat and grabbed Sayu's hands "i'm a big.. *Interrupted by a jealous Eri who separate their hands*
Yay! :deco: :P
Aichan sighed and soon she heard some laughs
Don't tell me :shocked
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Aichan got to her dept and layed on bed again "stupid Maikea.." she whispered and fell sleep
Yeah, stupid Maikea, messing Ai's mind XD
Nigakii Risa ordered more beer "Aichan.." she whispers before drinking
These two love self-torture :mon impatient:
The girl smiled "Aichan.." she whispered
"Ehhh how you knew?" Risa asked
Let me guess, it's a fan and a JPHiP member :P
"Aichan hates me!!!" Risa says crying and hugs Yellow
:roll:
Risa cried again "I want her back! *hip* what should i do?" she asked crying and hugs Yellow again
Good thing it's Risa who's hugging you or else :ptam-kill:
Yellow sighed "Then call her and tell her so!" she answers frowning
Very simple solution and effective
Risa breaks the hug again and grabs her phone from her pocket "Call her!" she says as gives her phone to Yellow
Damn :rofl:
Yellow got nervous and hanged up
:wahaha:
Yellow looked at the screen "it's her!" she says and throws the phone to Risa,who catched and throwed to Yellow again
OMG :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: very good one :twothumbs XD
"Is she having an affair with another girl?" Risa shouts crying
Jeez :lol: :lol: :lol:
Yellow sighed "He's doing all the work and i don't think he's doing it free!" she thought as she looks at her partner
:lol: But hey, look at the bright side, you get to interact with Teh TakaGaki XD
Risa bumoed her hand with cup of coffee causing it to fall on Yelllow's pants
Collateral damage XD
sleeping naked
"you shouldn't be naked.." Risa says all red
Both are nekid :drool: :drool: :drool:
Risa putted her shirt on and looked around for her panties
Not so nice to imagine but XD
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My heart is in pain :cry:
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how can you hunt me down if Aichan was the one who hug me... as to Aichan's hug, I rather prefer the bean's hugs and kisses... and i have them in the story :peace:
however, i don't mind if she (our Aichan) would to do that to me :wahaha:
so, cmze, can i appear again and have them? :twisted:
or maybe let our little cute maikea appear again and have them also can? :grin:
i just want to make our bean got so jealous and take that monkey down instantly XD
i wonder how krisZ-san going to react to it when he read that :kekeke:
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yeah please let me be with Aichan !! *puppy eyes* hmp ! poor gaki .. i will take aichan away from you stupid bean !
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how can you hunt me down if Aichan was the one who hug me... as to Aichan's hug, I rather prefer the bean's hugs and kisses
How could you miss it? :shocked It was Risa and not Ai :P You can now start flying high on cloud 9 :grin:
i wonder how krisZ-san going to react to it when he read that
Make Author-san write and you'll see :P lol
You can drop the -san :)2 and it's a she :P
You have two interesting readers in here, not that your other readers are not, it's just that these two are something XD
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@krisZ:
sorry i did not know you are a she ... sorry
not that we special. :nervous
actually there is a history behind it, as presented below:
comments for chapter 5 (the thread flood):
oh Love ! why do you have to be so complicated ?! whats wrong with a relationship of both gender ! all is fair in love RISA !! my gosh ! leave ur bf ! before sam1 steal aichan from you..
ITS ME!
cmze, i think you should let our beloved maikea to be in your story :lol: to further complicate the relationship between aigaki XD since she love to be in the game
i like instigate cmze into teasing maikea as i know she was in love when she make such comment
hahaha ! oh i'd love that !! since im hopelessly inlove with Aichan !
yup yup whatever :smhid you are really hopelessly in love XD
Sorry guys it's not complicated its realistic...
To the scene where Yellow describe "that's what i think if i have a relationship like that.. so i put what i thought" no idea what movie! :nervous
Maikeatoot you can destroy my AiGaki more so you can't b in my fic! :grin:
Guys i have a best friend who cut with her 5 years old firlfriend for the same factors!
My friend Andrea ended her relantionship with Kathy "for those factors"
she's not a singer or anything like that but she didn't told her parents her preference so it was kinda like that "were they never could b a normal couple and do couple things in public" :(
so use that to put it on the story..
Kathy now is marry/pregnant and last saturday was her baby shower "i didn't go cause i thought that poor my friend!" :sweatdrop:
And not the fancfic is not gonna end like that!! :oops:
nvm... it is a thai movie... it is about girl love... quite PG rated for its content. yup, it's a sweet movie. i am totally in love with the bossy and sassy Pie and her nice-natured lover Kim (i.e. the tom character) and the movie is based on a novel of the same title.
and cmze, really you should have her (maikea) in because she is now totally in love with "ai-chan" :lol: (further detail, please check it out at my oneshot thread in "Crack-to-Go", i mean the recent comments conversations between her and me)
not only you, i also want such romantic lover... if one day a person would to say and do that for me, i will also be with that person... but it can only be a dream :(
the conversation between Maikea and me in my thread:
oh yes of course ! oh my friend ! im in love ! yay!
good for you. i am really happy to hear that from you. is it with girl who looks like aichan? :lol:
yes!! oh is it ok to share it here.
yup.. nothing wrong to share something worth happy about:D
that's cool. congrats :omamori:
well i was the only one inlove :)
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Lucky Maikeatoot!!! :thumbsup
I'm also looking forward for that fic! :grin:
now i understand what u mean Yellow! :nervous
this is cmze's reply after she has read that conversation between Maikea and me.
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now you make me sad cmze :( you know im inlove with a girl who looks like Aichan .. :'(
Sorry! Sorry i didn't mean to make u sad.. :cow:
well it doesn't mean that this happens to every relationship! :nervous
so that is the chance for maikea's appearance in your fictions XD going involving Aichan :lol: one of the days :P
after this drama, chapter 6 story is derived.
then,
comments for chapter 6 (the thread flood):
@maikea:
i also very jealous of you :P2 because aichan now remember you :lol:
That was unnexpected.. well thank yellow who told me to! :thumbsup
Maybe yellow can appear in otger chapter to help Ai and Risa!! ;)
yeah you can add her too !! and if ever ,kuro-kun too ! hahaha.
haha... i am just joking... please don't... if you do... i will pay back to you with a drabble :peace:
if as a love counsel, i can consider... you know, Dr Yellow ahem :lol:
yup, add kuro in... :jphip: :jphip: :jphip:
What?! i would do it anyway! :rofl:
But still i don't know if Kuro wants it.. hope he see this amd tell me it deoesn't bother him!
now i'm going to sleep is late and have college!!! :banghead:
you are bad... i see how you do it... if it is nice... the continuation of the drabble will feature you :grin:
good nite... have a good rest and be ready for school tml :thumbsup
then chapter 7 is derived
now, it is because of your dramatic comments, that's why i ask cmze for another appearance.
if you are interested, you can join the fun too :thumbsup
really we are not those interesting readers, we are just like any other.
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ThreadOwner-san
Gomen in advance, we're making your thread like a chat thread :nervous
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sorry i did not know you are a she ... sorry
lol, it's okay :D
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reads the presentations
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You convos remind me of a group of people in here too ^-^
Someone's in love with an Aichan look alike, that's Yay! ;D
I love that Thai movie you mentioned... anyone who's in love for the first time / been in love can so relate to that... been there too :)) Yes or No movie can really bring back memories :)2
I'm sure I'll be here, reading the next chapter :wink: and I'll try to be dramatic as I can especially when you're in there :D
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^yup ! im the one who is in love with Aichan's look alike .. and i fell in love with her the first time i saw her <3 !!
anyWay .. haha cmze are you here ? haha me want an update !
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SORRY GUYS SOMEONE STOLE MY IPOD WHILE I WAS COMING HOME FROM WORK SO I CAN'T UPDATE!!!
I'LL TRY TO GET A NEW ONE SOON BUT PLEASE BE PATIENT
AND YES,I HAVE A COMPUTER BUT THAT;S MY SISTER'S AND SHE IS LIKE DON'T TOUCH MY THINGSSS :banghead:
SO SORRY!! :cry:
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Oh, that's bad.
Don't worry... will patiently wait :)2
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Lucky!
Sh*t! New page GetZ ;D
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One sided love
CH.11
After a few weeks..
(After rehersal)
Everyone was already changing to leave
Risa looked herself in the mirror,she started to take off her make up.After a few seconds her phone rings showing on the screen a new text message from Ren.
The ex morning musume leader sighed "he's a good guy but he's not her.." she thought sad
-FLASHBACK-
"Finally a day off just you and i!" Aichan says smiling as she throws herself on Risa's bed face down
Risa smiled and also climbed on bed and hugged the older girl's back "Aichan with this short hair you look really handsome!!!" the bean says with a smile as she plays with her short hair
Aichan turned and looked at the younger girl in the eyes "you think?" she asked with a grin on her face
Risa blushed
the older girl took advantage and climbed on top of the red bean "i take that as a yes..." she says as she leans and kisses the younger girl roughly
"Aichan .." Risa says between kisses
"i can be anything you need.." Aichan says blushing then gives her a peck
Risa looks at the older girl in the eyes "there's no doubt you're really handsome but you need to be anything else because i only want you" she says as gets on top and leans her head on the older girl's chest and rubs on it
"Risa.." Aichan says smiling
"Aichan i love you.."Risa says serious
"i love you too.." Aichan replies
-END OF THE FLASHBACK-
Another text message brought Risa back to earth
"meet us in X place" from Eri
"what do you want?" Risa murmured
(AT ERI'S RESTAURANT)
"who you're texting to?" Aichan asked
Eri smirked "my bunny.." she replied then drinks her juice
Aichan sighed "i'm tired i should go!" she says as she gets up
"what? no way Sayu wants to see you .." Eri replies
Aichan pouts "maybe you dorks can make me feel better" she says not so happy and sits again
"AICHAN!!" someone shouts happy and gets to their table
"why are you so happy to see her? i'm going to get jealous!!" Eri says pouting
"Sayu.." Aichan says with a weak smile
Sayumi ignores Eri and hugs Aichan
"this monkey is going to steal my bunny!" Eri thought then got up and separate the two girls and made Sayu sit next to her
Sayu smirks
"so this is funny to you, playing with me!!" Eri says not so happy
"so is funny to you making me do those kind of things in...(Eri covered the bunny's mouth)"
Aichan laughed cause the stupid couple
"you had fun!" Eris whispered on Sayu's ear which caused the bunny to blush then pouted while Eri has a pervert grin on her face
Aichan didn't understand a thing but i didn't matter
Soon sombody else appeared changing the mood into a serious one
"Gaki san!" Sayu and Eri smiled then got up to hug the bean
"hi!" The bean says
"Aichan what are you waiting to say hi?" Sayu asked
Aichan got up and looked at her ex best friend "hi Gaki san!"
Both girls had eye contact for a moment
The four girls sitted
Aichan was lost on her thought while the three girls were talking about their lives and morning musume
Fast an hour passed and it was time to say goodbye
"Eririn take me home!" Sayu says clinging on Eri's arm
Eri smirked "Aichan you should take Risa home!"
Risa looked at Aichan and this one reacted "what?"
Sayu also smiled " you two live close and you're the older so take her!" she says
Aichan scratched the back of her head "well i.."
Risa just loooked down
Sayumi pushed Risa to Ai " you two haven't talk besides i don't think your boyfriend come to pick you up!"
"he thinks i'm home!" Risa replied
Aichan looked at her
"you lied.. you just came to see your friends ARE YOU PLANNING TO DO SOMETHING BAD?" Eri asked with a grin
Risa got red "you're crazy!" she says then turns around and starts walking
Sayu and Eri pushed Ai behind her
-AFTER A FEW MINUTES WALKING-
Risa was two steps ahead while Ai just looked at her back not saying a word
"you don't have to take me home!" Risa spoke
"i would be worry.. so i rather take you home!" Aichan says
"worry? funny!" Risa says still walking
"funny? i always worry about you!" Aichan says
Risa laughed " don't make me laugh!"
Aichan stopped walking and frowned, Risa sense that and turned to look at the older girl
"that's not funny!" Aichan says serious
"but it's the truth" Risa says with a smile
Aichan pouted
TO BE CONTINUED!!! i'll post the second part lateer
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cmze, you have make our eririn too easily getting jealous of others borrowing Sayu XD
i see there is something going to happen in the second part... please update soon... i want to read. :cathappy:
merry x'mas and happy new year to you... and i miss you :heart:
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One sided love
CH.12
Aichan grabbed Risa by her arm and made her turn around to face her "what the hell got into you?" she asked mad sharing eye contact with the younger girl who also seemed mad.
Risa release her arm "is the truth you're just a selfish bitch who didn't care about me so STOP PRETENDING!!" she shouted the last part
Aichan was speechless then shook her head "why? why are you thinking those kinda things?" she asked while shakes the younger girl
Risa pushed Aichan who end up falling on the floor "stop messing with my head, you left me YOU FORGOT ABOUT ME!" she shouted
The older girl got up then putted her hand behind her hand and showed a smile " sorry!" she says
Risa looked other way then suddenly slapped the older girl "that's for all the tears.." she said
Aichan looked at the mad bean then her hand cupped the younger girl cheek
The bean was shocked "what are you doing?" she asked while still Ai has her hand on her cheek
"i just love your face,you look cute even when your mad!" The monkey says with her charming smile
Risa's tears came out
"my eyes only want to look at you so please don't cry!" Aichan says softly as she wipes her tears with her thumb
Risa bit her lips to try to stop crying "why? why you do this to me?" she asked sobbing
Aichan sighed " i was about to let you again and let you be happy but i'm a selfish bitch who needs you, you have no idea how much i missed you,your kisses, your touch everything" she replies
Risa looked down "i don't know what to do.." she murmured and thought about Ren then looked Aichan swollen cheek
The two shared eye contact for a moment
"come home with me!" Risa says blushing
Ai only smirked then both walked to Risa's home
(AT RISA'S DEPT)
both got out of the elevator and looked at Risa's door
"Eripon!" The two ex morning musume members said in unision
Erina smiled "Nigakii san!" she says excited
Ai smiled ackwardly "when she's going to give up?" the monkey wondered
The three girls entered to the dept
Risa went to get her guests something to drink
Erina was looking to Risa while Aichan now was feeling jealous
"so who are you Eripon?" Aichan asks
Risa went to her room to charge her phone
"You don't have to ask.. you know why i'm here YOU ALWAYS KNEW THAT I LOVE GAKI SAN!" Erina says serious
Aichan was shocked she knew about that but she never thought Erina would declare war to her
Risa got back and brought juices to the girls,she felt a little ackward "what's going on?" she asked not knowing anything
Aichan smiled "nothing i was telling Eripon that no matter how hard it gets i'm not letting go! " she replied
Erina pouted, she knew what Aichn was talking about "i'm not going to let go eatther!" she says with a smile
Risa smiled "good for you two! ohh the ice!" she says and gets up to go get some ice
Eripon and Ai looked eachother
Aichan sighed then Risa got back with the ice,she putted on Ai's cheek without noticing showing that tender side that Ai loves so much
(Both girls had eye contact for a second and that second seemed years were many sensations and feelings struck their hearts)
"Eh Nigakii san you promised me that we will go out this saturday.." Eripon says
Risa turned to look at the younger girl "eh?!"
"shopping!" Erina says with a smile
Risa scratched her head "yeah now i remember!" she says not so happy
Ai smiled then got up "it's late i should go!" she says
Risa reacted "wait what? is late and dangerous, i'll be worry" she says then regretted saying those words and looked down blushing
Aichan putted her hand on her shoulder "don't worry i'll be fine.." she says with a smile
Eripon could sense the vibe and she feels ignored but still she's determinated to not give up
Risa walked Ai to the door then looked at her before closing it "what am i doing? falling again for this monkey.." she thought while Eripon only looked at her
"what kind of relantionship do we have? i love Ren but i also love Ai.. i can't live happily without Ai! can i live without Ren?" The bean wondered worried
Eripon sighed, she knows she's not part of Risa's thoughts
Risa looked at Erina "i guess you want to stay over.." she says as an older sister
"yep!" Erina says with a smile
Risa sighed "my back is going to hurt the couch is not comfortable" she says pouting a little
"you can sleep with me!" Erina says smirking
Risa ignored it and went to get a her things to sleep on the sofa
TO BE CONTINUED!!
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XD people gaki-sann't want to sleep with eripon... how sad.
cmze,
since you want to drama.
you should let eripon join in the fun and let the relationship get messier...
and i think you should let her sleep with eripon...
i want to know what eripon is intending to do with her when they are together on her bed...
i really enjoy these drama... please continue :twisted:
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as much as i love this very dramatic update // ,, :cow: wew ! what the hell is wrong with you gaki-san ?! you couldn't live without her of course ! and surely you could live without that ren whatever ! or do you want me to steal aichan from you? :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: hahaha ! why i am so hopeless !!! wew ! please update dont judge by the covers too ! thank you ! and merry xmas !
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One sided love
CH.13
"I gotta seriously start thinking..Aichan can't do this to me all the time,i mean i know she's cute and adorable but i need to stop those Aichan's butterflies on my stomach *sigh* time to wake up!" Risa thought as she tries to stretch
"What the hell? why i can't move?" Risa thought still with her eyes closed then opened them
"Eripon!" Risa says trying to break free from that mortal embrace
"Niigaki Risa oshi forever!" The younger girl says still sleeping and hugging tigher her ex leader
Risa sighed "I wish Aichan was as deterimate as you..." she whispered and let the younger girl hugs her for a bit longer
~FLASHBACK~ A few years ago..
"Gaki san wait!" Aichan shouts while runs after her outside the building they practice their dancing choreography
Risa kept walking ignoring the older's girl calls and even walked faster
"Wait!!" Aichan shouts
Risa made any bus stop and got in not caring it takes her,she looked through the window
Aichan stood there for a second then just walked the opposite way
"Stupid Monkey!!" Risa murmured
<At home>
Risa throwed herself on bed and looked her phone's screen,she sighed cause she had no new text messages or missing calls
"Stupid Monkey!" she murmured again before falling sleep
(The next day At practice )
Risa as always got there first,she felt bore so she looked to her phone's screen "no call or a message" she murmured sad
"Am i not important to you?" she wondered
Suddenly somebody else entered to the room
"Gaki san!" Aichan says with a smirk
"Hi" The younger girl replies not so happy and pretended to be texting with somebody
Aichan just looked at her "who's texting you so much?" she asked feeling kinda jealousy
Risa ignored the older girl and keep playing with the settings to make her phone vibrate
Aichan pouted then sighed "Is this revenge or something?" shs asked
Risa kept looking at her phone "don't know what are you talking about!" she replies coldly
Aichan got closer and putted her hand on Risa's phone screen to not let her see "It's not my fault besides Sayu is like that..you know it!" she replied kinda serious
"Why would you feel if Eri tries to kiss me during concerts?" Risa asked putting her phone on her pocket
Ai looked downn "i would totally kill her!" She replied now feeling what Risa was feeling
"and after that i didn't call you in all night to apologize and send you a f-ing text message or at least try to explain me!" Risa says irritated
"what? i followed you and you took a bus and left me then i thought you were really mad so that might be sometime on your own so i didn't call or send you a message to not screw it up more!" Aichan replied taking Risa by her shoulders
"Sometimes i think that i love you more than what you love me.." Risa whispered
"not true!" Aichan says looking at her in the eyes the hugs her
"Even though i know it,i can't let you go unless you hurt me real bad to learn" Risa thought then wrapped her arms aroun the older girl
~PRESENT~
"Niigaki san is day dreaming so cute!" Eripon says happy
Risa smiled a bit then got up "i don't know how you got to the couch?" she says as she walks to the bathroom
Eripon smirked then also got up and went to the kitchen to try to prepare something for the older girl
While she's frying some eggs something happened and produced fire
Risa got out of the bathroom and saw the fire, luckyly shd had an extinguished and could turn the fire off
"Niigaki san thank you!" Erina says and jumps on the older girl
Both fell on the floor
Risa rubbed her head then noticed how close Erina was to her face
Both looked eachother eyes
Risa was nervous while Eripon just smirked and took advantage of the situation and kissed the older girl
TO BE CONTINUED
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child abuse huh gaki-san ?? hahaha :lol: XD !!!
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what the ......? (sorry for cursing)
ok, interesting :thumbup
finally Eripon has joined in the fun of complication :thumbsup
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I love eripon and gakisan :P perfect way to make aichan jealous hehe XD
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One sided love
CH.14
Risa pulled away from the kiss fast and got up "What the hell?" she asked confused,nervous and all the emotions you can have after a 16 years old kid kisses you
Eripon just smirked,suddenly the doorbell rang
Risa sighed and went openning the door "Aichan.." she murmures just looking at her friend
"Takahashi san!" Eripon says and hugs Risa from behind
"What are you doing? let me go!" Risa says trying to remove those hands off her
Aichan smiled and entered to the dept while Risa is still dealing with those sticky hands
"Eripon you better behave or we'll not go shopping!" Risa shouts
"you guys are going shopping?" Aichan says with a smile
Eripon pouted "you already knew that!" she says
"If you want you can come with us!" Risa says a little embarrassed
Aichan smiled and agreed
After a few minutes the three girls went shopping
Aichan was holding Risa's right hand while Eripon was holding the left hand while they walk
Risa's phone started to ring so she used her left hand to pick up (weird caused her phone was in her right jacket pocket!!)
"Right..exactly what i needed!" Risa thought as she sees " in coming call from Ren" on her phone screen
Aichan looked other away and Risa let go her hand and went ahead to talk in private with him
"what are you doing here?" Erina asked serious looking at Aichan
Aichan smiled "shopping.." she replied looking at Risa
Erina pouted "It's not fair, you had your chance and you blew it just leave her alone!"
"who are you to decide that?" Aichan got irritated
"i never going to leave her,she knows how deep is my love!" Erina says
Aichan smiled warmly "i admire you Eripon and as your senpai i don't want you to get hurt.. it's almost 12 years of knowing eachother, 12 years of friendship,12 years ahead of you!"
Risa got back to her friends "guys i'm sorry i have to go!" she says not so happy and interrupting the two fierce girls
"why?" Erina asked grabbing her arm
"job.." Risa replied then release her arm and walked away
Erina and Ai looked at each other
~After a few minutes at Risa's dept~
Risa sitted on her couch with a bottle of "drink", she started to drink by herself as she watches the tv
"This shouldn't be this way.." she murmured sad and drank more of the bottle
<Phone vibrating>
She looked at her phone screen:
"Have a good time on work!!" (^o^) from Eripon
Risa sighed "why? why this happening to me?" she asked then drank more
"Stupid Aichan you got me in trouble!" she says and smashed the bottle against the floor
Risa was already feeling dizzy but she she was able of dialing her phone number then hanged up
Aichan who was near to Risa's dept noticed so took advantage and went to her dept to check if everything was alright
~After a few minutes~
Aichan knocked the door which opened fast
"Gaki san!" Aichan says looking at her drunk friend who seemed to be crying
"Is okay if i miss you?" Risa asked
Aichan hugged Risa "i miss you too.."
"i thought i could forget you but.." Risa whispers
Aichan closes the door and direct Risa to her bed
The older girl puts Risa on her bed softly then remove her shoes and sitted next to her to look at her for a bit
"I'm sorry.." Aichan murmured as she holds back Risa's hair from her face
Aichan sighed and she was about to get up but a hand stopped her and pulled her on bed again
"Don't go.. i want you now!" Risa manage to say as she sits and looks at the older girl's eyes and kisses her on her cheek
"I can do this Risa, you're drunk and probably you'll say more words that tomorrow you won't remember!" Aichan says while tries to not to lose as Risa is kissing her neck
Risa hands went under Aichan's feeling her toned stomach
"Risa.." Aichan says still trying to not lose her senses
"I will remember!" Risa says then proceed to kiss the older girl on her lips roughly
And Finally Aichan gave in...
TO BE CONTINUED!!
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no long time did not see your update... such update is so surprising... anyway, thanks... please update the next one soon :cathappy:
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One sided love
CH.15
The next day~
The smell of breakfast woke Risa up, she looked around still feeling dizzy "Are those.. Aichan!" She said before get up with a blanket around her body.
"Gaki san you're up.. Good Morning!" Aichan says with a smile preparing breakfast with one of Gaki' s shirt on.
Risa looked at her but then smiled "I'm going to the bathroom!" She says still with a smile on her face.
After some minutes she got back and the table was already settled by Aichan.
The two Sat and looked at each other for a moment before eating.
Both were flirting with their eyes they didn't need say a word, the silence was enough to clear their doubts.
Suddenly the door bell rang interrupting the two peaceful moment.
"Don't worry I'll get it.." Aichan says with smile before get up.
Once she opened the door she saw Eripon who was looking at her with a sad Look.
Risa came out and saw the two then sighed "She gave me that shirt" she thought looking at So' s back.
Eripon ran away while Ai sighed and looked down.
Risa took her jacket "I'll talk to her, Don't worry it will be fine!" She says before kissing Aichan's cheek and leave.
Thanks to GPS Risa found Eripon in a park close to her home sitting looking down.
Risa Sat next to her "Ikuta.." she said then took a deep breath.
"I always wondered what you see in her.. " Eripon said looking down sad.
Risa hugged Erina the sighed "Aichan is my first love.. I love her" she said with her chin on Ikuta' s shoulder.
"If Takahashi san wasn't your first love, would you look at me?" Eripon asked looking at her senpai.
Risa gulped "You're too young!" She said.
"If Takahashi san wasn't your first love, if I wasn't this young would you look at me? Eripon asked sad looking at the older girl.
Risa blinks a few times.
"I'm the one who loves you the most" Eripon says before get up and walk away leaving a confused Gaki san.
"Did I just hesitated?" She asked to herself.
~Back at home~
Risa entered to her dept and there it was her first love waiting for her sitting on the couch.
Risa Sat next to her then rested her head on her lap.
"What happened?" Aichan asked worried.
"It will be alright" Risa replied closing her eyes.
~Flashback~Before Ai' s graduation~ practice room~
"What do you mean?" Risa asked serious.
Ai sighed "We will be separate most of the time.. " she says looking down sad.
Risa was already crying "We'll find a way to be with each other.." she replied.
"That's not enough!" Aichan says turning around avoiding to see Risa crying.
"Please Aichan don't do this.. I'll graduate after a few months later wait for me trust me!" Risa says hugging Aichan from the back.
Aichan was also already crying but she wiped her tears fast and then removed Risa's arm off her to walk away.
"Aichan" Risa whispered sad as she leaves the room.
After some minutes someone else entered to the room ready to practice.
"Niigaki san what's wrong?" Eripon says worried as she gets closer then wiped her tears with her fingers.
Risa looked down broken hearted.
Eripon couldn't resist and hugged her.
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Risa opened her eyes and saw Aichan smiling at her "You took a little nap.. How was it?" She asked.
Risa only looked at her "Why I dreamt about that?" She thought worried.
TO BE CONTINUED!!
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hi friend :grin:
sometimes i really wonder if aichan wasn't the bean's first love... would she consider eripon? :?
but why the bean is dreaming that? you make feel me feel that she started to be shaken for being with aichan again :catglare:
if you wants her to be a timer, i also don't quite mind as long as the 3rd party is eripon :twisted:
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Hello~
The fic is about to end so a little more drama before the end :grin:
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understood :)
I have updated :grin: