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Offline Mari07

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[AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48 -- Chapter 1/ Dec 30
« on: December 29, 2011, 09:24:02 PM »
Heaven, Earth, and AKB48

Prologue -- From what I know of this world…. It is strange. It is a world where these weak beings called Humans are greedy and selfish. Their yearning desires always cause chaos. This world full of havoc is a wonder to us Gods. Even though we created it, we still have no clue why these creatures are so different from all the others we’ve created.

My name is Takamina, Goddess of Wisdom. Though I am the most knowledgeable of all the gods, I am the one who is also the most curious. I have yet to know the wonders of the world; what lies beyond the path of fate? Humans seem to have a way with changing their destiny.

As I continue to study this specie, I’ve decided to disguise myself as one of them in order to learn more of them. And maybe by closely observing them I may find out what Humans are capable of.
« Last Edit: December 31, 2011, 02:03:20 AM by Mari07 »
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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48
« Reply #1 on: December 29, 2011, 09:42:15 PM »
Very interesting.  :mon XD:
I can't wait for the first chapter to come out.

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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48
« Reply #2 on: December 29, 2011, 09:48:59 PM »
it looks interesting! i'll definitely wait for the next chapter!!!!!    :yep: :yep: (i mean 1st chapter) :sweatdrop:
i love akb48!!!!

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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48
« Reply #3 on: December 29, 2011, 10:01:08 PM »
wow..... :cool2:

CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER TO BE OUT!  :on lol:


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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48
« Reply #4 on: December 30, 2011, 04:22:27 AM »
Nice prologue. Waiting the 1st chapter.

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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48
« Reply #5 on: December 30, 2011, 04:25:38 AM »
Wow! The Prologue sounds so interesting XD
Please update Chapter 1 soon :mon cute:
I can't wait to read more of this :D

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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48
« Reply #6 on: December 30, 2011, 06:25:19 PM »
OMG Please continue! Can't wait to read chapter 1 ! :on GJ:
Update SOON . :onioncheer: :byebye:

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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48
« Reply #7 on: December 30, 2011, 10:53:07 PM »
 :ding: Coooool!

PLease update ASAP!  :on shady:

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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48 -- Chapter 1/ Dec 30
« Reply #8 on: December 31, 2011, 01:59:13 AM »
Thank you everyone! It's been so long since I've written something. So I hope this work doesn't come to you all as a disappointment!



Observation Day 1  – I’ve set foot on Earth and the first thing I see is a mob of them rushing at, what would be, 8am in Tokyo’s time. It must be time for these people to work . In my recent studies, humans work in this made up thing called “economy” so they’re able to support each other and survive. But what makes their lives more difficult is society : the means in which everyone lives together. It is difficult because not everyone accepts each other and not everyone is willing. That is what I find interesting. Why is it so hard for them to accept each other? The Gods of Heaven have tried very hard to create these ungrateful creatures, and look here they are; all gone and threw weapons and explosives at one another.

In any case, a society which contains people of the same ethnic background is easiest to study. That is why I’ve chosen Tokyo, Japan, a very modern and high economy with the citizens being mainly of Japanese descent.

I walked down the crowded streets to see the busy adults on their phone and marching their ways to work, the cheerful  children skipping along the path to school and the teenagers rushing to class due to their early morning errands. 

As I just sat here on the bench, I noticed a girl sitting at the opposite end of the bench. I did not flinch, but she said to me, “ You must have a lot of free time.”
What did she mean by that?

“You’ve been sitting here for about 3 hours now.”

She’s right. But how would she know that? Have she been watching me? Hm. That’s quite ironic; I’ve come to observe the humans, yet here is one observing me.

“Yes, I have all the time in the world.” I replied, still not facing her directly.

She got up from her seat and walked towards me, “ Here, have some. They’re good.” She offered me.

“What is it?” I asked.

“Takoyaki.”

Still not knowing what the heck that is, I took one and put it in my mouth. The aroma is rather elegant, and the taste was satisfying. It’s delicious! The texture of the chewed Takoyaki and the aftertaste is absolutely wonderful!

“This isn’t bad…”
She giggled, “Isn’t it?” The girl sat beside me and I engaged in a social conversation with her. She is an interesting person.  And when I came to my realization, we’ve been sitting here for the whole entire day; it was nightfall.

“Ah! It’s already this late!?” she bowed as a farewell and hurried on her way.

I have successfully learned something new about humans today, and that is: Humans talk a lot.

« Last Edit: December 31, 2011, 06:01:45 AM by Mari07 »
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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48 -- Chapter 1/ Dec 30
« Reply #9 on: December 31, 2011, 04:18:23 AM »
Thank you for the update. I wonder who the girl she was talking to was?
Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48 -- Chapter 1/ Dec 30
« Reply #10 on: December 31, 2011, 04:30:58 AM »
owghh, could that 'interesting girl.' be acchan?

Disappointment?  Psh, heck no it wont be!

update soon~ cause you're killing me!!

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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48 -- Chapter 1/ Dec 30
« Reply #11 on: December 31, 2011, 05:57:56 AM »
Woah! This is so interesting :w00t:
I wonder who that girl is?? :?

Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please update soon :mon cute:

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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48 -- Chapter 1/ Dec 30
« Reply #12 on: December 31, 2011, 12:21:35 PM »
AN update ! Wohooo~ :gmon peakaboo:
Wait....I wonder who's that girl. :gmon blonde:

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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48 -- Chapter 1/ Dec 30
« Reply #13 on: December 31, 2011, 12:59:54 PM »
Hum really interesting
Go Takamina learn more about human and fall in love ^^

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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48 -- Chapter 1/ Dec 30
« Reply #14 on: January 01, 2012, 05:29:08 AM »
 :lol: you've sparked my interest Marichiiiiiin, good writing, please continue :)
"The consistent anarchist should be a socialist, but a socialist of a particular sort. He will not only oppose alienated and specialized labor and look forward to the appropriation of capital by the whole body of workers, but he will also insist that this appropriation be direct, not exercised by some elite force acting in the name of the proletariat. Some sort of council communism is the natural form of revolutionary socialism in an industrial society. It reflects the intuitive understanding that democracy is largely a sham when the industrial system is controlled by any form of autocratic elite, whether of owners, managers, and technocrats, a vanguard party, or a State bureaucracy."
- Noam Chomsky

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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48 -- Chapter 1/ Dec 30
« Reply #15 on: February 17, 2012, 11:37:27 AM »
please update soon T.T
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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48 -- Chapter 1/ Dec 30
« Reply #16 on: February 17, 2012, 02:28:46 PM »
Hahahaa cutest goddess i've ever seen ! Takamina's char very interesting ..and about the learning "humans talk a lot "!? Omg it's funny,can't control my nerve for calm cause laugh !  Thanks 4 up <3

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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48 -- Chapter 1/ Dec 30
« Reply #17 on: February 17, 2012, 02:36:53 PM »
“What is it?” I asked.

“Takoyaki.”

Still not knowing what the heck that is, I took one and put it in my mouth. The aroma is rather elegant, and the taste was satisfying. It’s delicious! The texture of the chewed Takoyaki and the aftertaste is absolutely wonderful!

“This isn’t bad…”
She giggled, “Isn’t it?” The girl sat beside me and I engaged in a social conversation with her. She is an interesting person.  And when I came to my realization, we’ve been sitting here for the whole entire day; it was nightfall.

“Ah! It’s already this late!?” she bowed as a farewell and hurried on her way.

I have successfully learned something new about humans today, and that is: Humans talk a lot.

Ahh! My AtsuMina! Always Loveable! I wonder who's the girl is... I hope it's Acchan! Btw, Update Soon!
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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48 -- Chapter 1/ Dec 30
« Reply #18 on: February 18, 2012, 04:39:54 AM »
Oooh, very interesting start. I'm really curious as to who the girl is. Hoping it's Acchan~

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Re: [AtsuMina] Heaven, Earth, and AKB48 -- Chapter 1/ Dec 30
« Reply #19 on: February 19, 2012, 05:40:09 AM »
so cool!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON  :peace:


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