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Title: Past present Future Chap 5 4/8/12 UPADTE Atsumina spell checked an replys
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 15, 2012, 09:41:19 PM
Run girl Run

Pain anger hatred and blood everything a monster feeds on everthing the devil feeds on aka I feed on it congratulations you have just entered my world where people have to prove how much they love eachother or appreciate life.

Will they die or will they survive i decide!

I got the idea off a horro movie and yer my break didnt last long lol oh well so should i continue this ???

oh and of course the people i will be testing are akb members an i will have help off two snsd an one suju members lol
Title: Re: RUN GIRL RUN TEASER 15/16/12
Post by: farquhar97 on June 15, 2012, 09:52:08 PM
Lol Yes u  should and its a good I idea. Plz write it
Title: Re: RUN GIRL RUN TEASER 15/16/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 17, 2012, 01:01:39 PM
The past the present the future

I think back to the past and i see the my most precious memories of me and you walking in the park holding hands watching the sunset set as we sat on the beach.

Right now im watching sleep as you cuddel yourself more in to my body if that was possiable i leanded down and kissed your forehead and all you do is crinkle your nose in response.

Now im thinking of the future.I see us getting married and having children running around in our huge garden and your parents looking after them when we want some time alone.

But right now here in the present we cant why because where in Akb48 the largest girl group in the world and the number one girl group in Japan.

Your the captain and Im the ace and our love is forbidden.

to be continued...

basically im going to put up different prolouges up and which ever you like i will continue did you like it should i continue how can i improve thanks for reading.
Title: Re: The past the present and the future atsumina teaser 17/16/12
Post by: farquhar97 on June 17, 2012, 09:22:26 PM
Awwwww how romantic  :wub:  :heart: but there in akb so no kissie kissie in public  :( lol I think u should do them all
Title: Re: The past the present and the future atsumina teaser 17/16/12
Post by: Haruko on June 17, 2012, 10:38:04 PM
aww atsumina couple :D the second one..
Title: Re: The past the present and the future atsumina teaser 17/16/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 18, 2012, 09:43:03 PM
The colour of her soul

baised on death note

What if the reason you killed was for the one you loved ??

What if the reason people feared you was because of a note book ??

What if your the reason that they fell inlove with someone else ??

Everything you did to protect her everything you said turned corrupt and your soul darkened ??

This is the story on how watanabe mayu lost the one thing she loved and became the most feared person in japan ...


to be continued

honestly i got bored and i watched death note then this appared lol im gonna do two more teasers after this one later on in the week then you guys get to tell me which one i should do.

please comment thanks for reading
Title: Re: The colour of her soul teaser 18/16/12
Post by: farquhar97 on June 18, 2012, 09:50:10 PM
Aww she shouldn't of killed for love thts not the right thing to do good one btw but I Still like second one more
Title: Re: The colour of her soul teaser 18/16/12
Post by: kurogumi on June 19, 2012, 05:10:16 AM
Hope this  MAyuki couple LOL

Mayu is going to be Kira for her love?
wow please continue....!


thank
Title: Re: The colour of her soul teaser 18/16/12
Post by: yuukimoko on June 19, 2012, 12:30:06 PM
hope is Mayuki~ its really interesting~
Title: Re: The colour of her soul teaser 18/16/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 19, 2012, 06:04:04 PM
Based on the film Dear friends

Rainy days

You where the only person that visted me every day when i was in hospital you protected me and comforted me when i cried.
You hurt yourself beacuse of me and made me feel like i wasnt alone.

I was the girl that went clubbing every night and came home drunk the one that people where jealous of and hated me for my looks.
You where the quiet one that still loved me from when we where five.

Im gratefull for everything you did I love you Oshima Yuko.

Im Kojima Haruna and this is the story of the worst days of my life my .... Rainy days.


To be continued...

one more untill you all pick ahahaha
Title: Re: Rainy days TEASER 19/6/12
Post by: farquhar97 on June 19, 2012, 06:20:56 PM
Lol yay Dear friend and I so didn't cry of tht but u did ;) I think this one at the moe
Title: Re: Rainy days TEASER 19/6/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 19, 2012, 07:43:16 PM
okay so no3b dansoed and then i watched big bang live on youtube and got a really weird idea.
 
Akb = Big bang WTF

Takamina = Top when dansoed

Miichan = Seungri when dansoed

Yuko = Daesung when dansoed (i sort of think they look alike lol)

Rena = Gdragon when dansoed

Mayu = Taeyang when dansoed


I know thats weird lol i think that got into my mind when i was thinking who Daesung looked like.

So this is my fic idea

AKb48 members are in Big bang wtf !!!

i know it sounds stupid lol but oh well poll will be up 2morra for which fic u want me to write
Title: Re: Rainy days and Akb = Big bang wtf TEASER 19/6/12
Post by: farquhar97 on June 19, 2012, 07:47:19 PM
Yay i know wht fic I'll do
Title: Re: Rainy days and Akb = Big bang wtf TEASER 19/6/12
Post by: sakura_drop_ on June 19, 2012, 07:49:12 PM
I know the winner of this, hehe. And I already know for which story I'll put the vote  :cow:
Title: Re: WHAT FIC SHOULD I WRITE POLL UP 19/6/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 20, 2012, 08:56:09 PM
The poll is closed i will write all except run girl run i have decied that lol but the one with the most votes will be the one i pay attention on the most so that will have more updates then the others the winner of the vote The past prestent and future second place rainy days third place Akb48 = Big bang wtf and tied in third with that is colour of her soul so that will be the update order of the week then the winner will be updated more quickly then others ive started working on the chapters thank you all for voting and reading the teasers  :)
Title: Re: POLL CLOSED WINNER 20/6/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 24, 2012, 03:58:56 PM
the past present and the future

chap 1 - Sweetness

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U0_8tkPOOI4&feature=player_detailpage#t=2s (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U0_8tkPOOI4&feature=player_detailpage#t=2s)

"Im singing my blues~~~~" I sang in the back of the bus holding on to my Takamina while she just smiled and played with my hair looking at me with eyes filled with love and care.She never failed to make me smile i think thats her secret mission in life just to make me smile since she never makes me cry and if i do cry she makes me laugh the perfect girlfriend is just for me and im only for her so everyone back away from her she is mine and only mine got that.

Other members on bus where flirting with eachother sneaking kisses with eachother or teasing other couples which i have to say looks really cute from where the two of us are sitting.I took Minami's hand in mine and started to play with her fingers which made her laugh oh how i love her laugh its like the most perfect sound that ive ever had in my tiny ears.

"Takamina how much longer till we get there?!" Miichan shouted from the front of the bus while getting hit by her Marichan."About an hour i think!" Minami shouted back still stroking my hair i love it when she does this.The sweetest girl in the world has to be my Takahashi Minami.

I kissed her cheek causing it to go red in embarrassment aww how cute i love her so much.

I placed my head in to her neck which fit perfectly and nuzzeled my head futher in.Once again making her laugh it didnt take long until i fell asleep.

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We lay on a field on top of a white fluffy blanket that was soft against are skin you tickled my arm and no words were exchanged between the two of us we just lay in silence just happy that we had eachother.

I took the hand you where tickling me with and laced it with my own and snuggled into you and you took the hand that wasnt holding mine and traced my face with your finger sending tingles and electric shocks through my entire body.Only you can do this to me.

"Mommy Mum!" We both pushed are bodys up to see to little children with smiles the size of certain perveted squirrels when she gets to see her Nyan Nyan.We seen they had there hands behind there backs and the two of us gave them a confused look until they took out water guns from behind them and ran away laughing.

"Riku Yuko where gonna get you!" We shouted at the twins and sprinted in the direction they where heading.

I caught Rena and you caught Ren taking the water gun from him and spraying him with water and the four of us started laughing and Rena started attacking the two of us again as i made the mistake not to take the gun from her.
After a while we agreed to stop even though yourself and Ren declined for the first couple of times your both as stubborn as eachother you finally accepted to stop after the gun ran out of water.We dryed off then went off to meet the Kojiyuu couple and there children.

The park was almost empty because it was to hot to go outside which was best why because we could go on everything without waiting for other people to get off.We spotted the Kojiyuu couple on the swings laughing with the two kids Takahashi and Madea.Yes we agreed if we had children we would name them after eachother but instead of calling after Haruna she chose a different name which suited him perfect.

"Takamidget!" Yuko screamed running over and giving her best friend and warm hug saying she missed her."Squirrel!" You whispered and patted her head earning a smile from the latter you could never get mad at her for calling you small besides the two of you still call eachother the Wmidgets.Haruna walked over to all of us while holding there childrens hands.
"Auntie Haruna anuntie Yuko Takahashi Madea!" Are children shouted hugging the four of them and then trapped Madea and Takahashi in a group hug.

"Looks like the four are made for eachother." Yuko said making all of us nod."Mabye they will get married in the future." You added Yuko smiled as did myself and Haruna when you said that all of us where already looking forward to when they where older right now there only 5.

Before we knew the four of them where playing on the slides laughing and Riku kept kissing Madea's cheeks and Takahashi kept kissing Yuko's causing the two girls to go redder then a rose."Little flirts." Haruna commented the truth."They probaly learnt to be like that from Yuko." I replied making the two of them laugh uncontrollably while you back hugged me your skin so warm against mine.

"God help us if they turn out to be like Yuko." You said "God help us if they turn out as small as you and Yuko." I said chuckling abit as i did you pouted which i found really cute so i kissed your lips and you smiled again."Takamidget lets go get some ice cream!" Yuko  demanded dragging you away from me and Haruan to an ice-cream van.

"They never change do they?" Haruna asked i just shook my head in responce you and Yuko have always stayed the same through the bad times and the good and the two of you have never complined when Haruna and myself where being selfish and the pair of you always tell the truth and are straight foward with us which made us love you more.

"The kids really love them." I  said and Haruna just smiled at what i said then added "Everyone loves them there Takahashi Minami and Oshima Yuko the two most loveable midgets on earth."I coudnt agree more in what she said sometimes i always found my mind wondering what if you and i where never together and what if Yuko and Haruna werent together.Would it have been you and Yuko and Haruna and i as the couples.How odd would that have been.

I was waked from my day dream when arms wrapped around my body and a ice-cream was placed in my hand.I knew it was without looking at your face so i licked the ice-cream the put some on my finger then wiped it on your face.Haruna mirrored my action without even looking at me its scary how close the four of us are.You laughed lightly and watched the kids eat there ice-cream leaving chocolate and mint choc chip moustaches on there faces and then they carried on playing.You kissed my cheek and said "I love you." In my ear which i replied the same "I love you too."

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"Atsuko its time to wake up where here." You said im disappointed that i had to wake up from the life i dream of everyday when im awake and every night when im asleep.But still im happy as long as your near me in any shape or form.
I love you Takahashi Minami your my everything the person that my world resolves around you.

To be continued ......

A/N : Did you all enjoy it i hope you did i tried my best comment and tell me where i can improve and what you liked
thanks for reading my fic
Title: Re: PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE CHAP 1 UPDATE 24/6/12
Post by: farquhar97 on June 24, 2012, 04:17:00 PM
Awwwww that's so cute and I love the way it was a dream so cute and lol I laughed at the water pistol bit lol gud I like it can't wait till next update :)
Title: Re: PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE CHAP 1 UPDATE 24/6/12
Post by: Haruko on June 24, 2012, 10:21:09 PM
that kids.. gonna  be a danger because always gonna filrt with girls..
Title: Re: PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE CHAP 1 UPDATE 24/6/12
Post by: Tanchan on June 25, 2012, 01:42:40 AM
Oh so it was all a dream of Atsuko theN?
Title: Re: PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE CHAP 1 UPDATE 24/6/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 25, 2012, 04:48:43 PM
Rainy days


chap 1 - Queen of the club

Party hard or go home is what i say and if you cant take the alchol then your best off drinking pepsi the entire night okay??
Good im glad you understand now to introduce myself im Kojima Haruna im 18 years old and the club queen oh and i dont believe in friends.

Now back to reality.

There was a knock on my door but i chose to ignore it but it came once again until finally a figure burst through it causing me to fall from my bed with a loud thud.I got to my knees and looked up to see that it was my mother but instead of calling her that i call her by her name.

I coudnt really think back to last night because i didnt even know how i got home obviously i had some fun then i noticed her face i was confused at first but i seen a boy wrapped up in my sheets now that explains alot espically on how i got home last night.
"Get out my room Atsuko!" I shouted causing the older women to jump slightly in shock but she didnt object as she ran out of my room saying "Breakfast is ready." In the process wow i have her around my finger i wish my other mum would be like that but know she is a stubborn little midget.I sighed then smacked the boy hard across the head making him shoot up to look at me before he could say anything i glared at him so he quickly shut his mouth gathered his clothes and ran out my room down the stairs until i heard a bang telling me he left the house.Now that didnt really suprise me im use to waking up with either a girl or boy next to my side when i wake up i always wake them up the same way and they always leave the same and never say anything if we meet again.Now i admit i have had some that have said they love me but i always reject them i dont need anyone but myself alchol brains clothes and money after all thats what makes the world go round.

I looked around my messy room to get my clothes that where scattered around the floor and placed them in a wash basket then i put on my uniform then looked in the mirror to see if everything was perfect lets see : short sleeved whit blouse with a red bow with blue stripes under the collar with the top button unbuttoned a dark green skirt with white thin lined going down and across black socks that stop before the knee.Perfect then i started on my hair like usual i brushed it straightened my hair fixed my fringe then started packing my school things like make up brush lipstick eg i dont really take books to school or read them for that matter.

I made my way down stairs to hear my parentes being all lovey dovey with eachother what crap there is no such thing as love those idiots.Without saying goodbye or good morning i left the house slamming the door behind me to make the aware i was gone.
I managed to get the bus to school and as i sat down a blind girl got on the bus behind me and a rude women demanded me to give the blind girl my seat."Hey you give the girl your seat!" She screamed causing people on the bus to look at me i love attention but not this early in the morning i cant cope just yet."No why should i ??" I questioned "Because she is blind thats why!"The blind girl was trying to get the women to shut her gaint mouth but nothing she said helped calm the women down."So just because she is blind doesnt mean she gets special treatment!"I shouted back at her making people around me shocked with my answer."How dare you you have know idea what she is going throught." She answered idotic women of course i cant "Well duh incase you didnt i can see perfectly fine with my two eyes so i obviously dont know what she is going through here is my stop happy now!" That was all i had left to say with that i took my bag in my hand and stepped off the bus with the women behind me.

"You should be ashamed of yourself!"

"I have nothing to be ashamed of have you seen my body?"

Then before she could reply to me the buses doors closed and it sped away  towards the mall.

As i got to school all eyes fell on me didnt i mention i was practically the queen here the queen of all these small minded good for nothing people.I then heard someone exclaimed my name so i looked around to find which ever direction it came from to finally see Hara of class 3D running speedily to me then when she finally reached me ....... SLAP......."HOW COULD YOU I THOUGHT WE WHERE FRIENDS!"She cried as tears began staining her baby face and my face had a small red hand print across it stinging from the impact it just had to indure."What did i do?" I asked confused in which she shook her head in disbelife."You slept with her you slept with Nicole you knew she was my girlfriend you know that i love her so why?"When those words left her dry lips memories came back into my head of the past week hmm Nicole ohh now i remember her."I was lonely besides think of it as a favor she clearly doesnt love you if she slept with me oh and where not friends your meaning of the word is completely different to mine."I said then walked away.

"Wait what do you mean about your meaning of friends and she was drunk and you took advantage!" She screamed have you seen Nicole who woudnt take advantage of her when she is drunk i mean come on she is like really hot."I mean your meaning of friends is someone you can trust share secrets with have sleepovers and be with forever my meaning is someone you use everything a friends do are use eachother for there own selfish benfits the only thing we share in are meanings are the sleepovers only mine are more fun." I could tell i left her speechless so i turned on my heels and walked away leaving the girl behind me dumbstruck and still crying.

Never ever question KOJIMA HARUNA stupid girl.

Just when i put one foot in the school building the speaker turned on and a voice echoed through the school.

"Kojima Haruna please come and see me in the staff room now!"

I sighed my sensei wasnt going to give me a break huh she has been on my back for a week now about my grades and attendance in school the old bat.

I made my way to the staff room while other students watched me walk and moved to the sides so i could get past and if they didnt then i barged past not caring if they where older or younger pupils or even sensei's.I knocked on the door and without waiting for an answer i walked inside to my sensei giving out a cold aura around me and a cold glare to my sensei.
"What Mariko?" I asked rolling my eyes as im already bored of the conversation even if we are just one sentence into it."Dont use my real name young lady give some respect to your elders!" She replied but all i did was roll my eyes once more in a huge humf from her in responce."Your grades are slipping even lower and your attitude is horrible there is no way Minami and Atsuko brought up such an insolent child!"Great now she is bringing in my parents which happen to be her best friends into this really can she not think of anything else.

"I dont care about my grades i dont care about you and i really dont care about my parents soon enough they will pack up and leave just like the other familys did when i was 5,8,13 and 16 i have never loved anything or cared about anything in my life other than money alchol clothes and myself got that i dont need you or anybody just leave me alone!" I bellowed at her but she didnt care and just she began talking i stormed quickly away from her and out of the staff room.

As i was walking away from the staff room and searched through my bag for my phone the pulled it out dialled a number from it then placed it to my ear.Then i swung my bag around making it hit something that was ontop of a cart to girls where pushing i could hear the two girls talk as they picked up the stuff that fell.

"I hate her she thinks she is all that argh how ignorant wait till she looses everything she will regret being the way she is right Yuko?" The girl said under her breath making me smirk how cute she is scared incase i hear her."Whatever."The girl who i believe to be called Yuko replied.

Ahh finally the person i have been calling answered her phone.

"Moshi moshi."

"How long do you want to take to answer your phone Yuki."

"Sorry Koji i coudnt find it when i did it was in the fridge and well talking to you is freezing my ear what do you want to talk about?"

"Where going out again tonight meet at the usual club at the bar at 8pm okay?"

"Okay bye."

Then i hung up before you get the wrong idea where not friends i just use her so i have someone to talk to when im bored and she uses me for well status im the queen of the club where in everyone loves me why because i can dance,sing and im sexy which gets me everyone attention.Hmm i might aswell skip school for today so instead of heading to class i went to the mall to pick out a new outfit for tonight i wanted something simple to wear just for tonight i didnt really feel like showing my curves after that argument with the old sensei way to put me on a downer.

After i got to the mall i picked out and bought my outfit for the night and left seeing that many hours had passed and i only had 3 to get ready in.

I rushed home and changed into : Tight dark skinny jeans,black heels,white top,a black blazer with sleeves rolled up to me elbows,bracelts that dangled off my slim wrist,a long golden necklace and and golden hoops hung from my ears my hair just had slight curls at the bottom of it i posed and took a picture with my phone then i took my black gold studded clutch bag in my hand which held inside makeup purse and phone.I looked at the clock to see it was half seven so i decied i would leave to get to the club and just as i got to the door i was blocked by my midget of a mother.

"Your going out again?"

"Wow someone just got smart huh captain obvious."

"Dont talk to your mother like that!"

Oh great now im getting tag teamed by Takamidget and spineless.

"Well im going now bye."

"Tonight is the family meal." The spineless one managed to pipe up where did the confidence from before go how pathetic.
"I dont have a family." Those where my last words as i pushed past the pair and exited the apartment not regreting anything that i just said.

As i walked the streets of Tokyo i could feel the eyes of boys and girls following my every move whenever one tried to speak to me i walked right past them or gave them a witty comeback in reply to there perverted manner of speaking or acting so they just gave up on me and left to see if there was a girl stupid enough to fall for there poor excuse of human selves.

The club was booming with life the dance floor was flooded with people swaying there body to the beat of the music who will be my target of the night i wondered as i made my way to the bar where i saw Yuki standing flirting with some random man.I shook my head then tapped her on the shoulder "Koji!" She shouted so i could hear her above the music as she turned and caught me in a tight embrace.I just smiled to her then turned to fully face the bar where my favourite bar tender was."Want the usual Koji oh and this new dj is awsome right?" He asked "Yer Kai and i suppose wait till i get to the dance floor he wont know whats hit him." I said making Kai smirk then he passed me my drink i took a sip then pushed my way to the middle of the dance floor.

Time to show amatures how its done.

I moved my body instinctivly to the sound of the music and men and women pushed there bodies up against mine i slid away then started to dance sexily and people circled me as i danced and cheered my name in to the air.

IM THE QUEEN OF THE CLUB.

Noticing that the dj's eyes where on me i made my way towards the booth and dragged him away so someone else had to take over for him.

We soon found ourselves kissing like there is no tommorow his body on top of mine and kissing my neck sweetly leaving red marks where tanned skin use to be.

This didnt feel right i felt sick and my head started pounding whats happening not liking the feeling i was having i pushed the boy away.

"What is wrong baby?"

"You suck your the worst kisser ever never in my life has some one made me feel sick by the way they touch hold or kiss me." I quickly made an excuse up in my head.

"Your kidding right any girl would kill to be in the postion your in right now with me."

"Im not just any girl Kuu." I tapped his cheek collected my things and left him sitting on his own in the vip booth and started dancing again and like before all circuled around me until i suddenly felt faint and the world blacked out.

To be continued ....

A/N : So did you like it comment and tell me where to improve any questions feel free to ask comment and tell me what you liked about this too.

Like the teaser said this is based on dear friends so most is going to be like the film but there or going to be some things different.
Thank you for reading my fic i hope you enjoyed it
Title: Re: Rainy days CHAP 1 UPDATE 25/6/12 (kojiyuu)
Post by: farquhar97 on June 25, 2012, 05:16:48 PM
Hehe I love tht.film its amazing and she's a proper b**ch to everyone and how could u. Sleep wiv one of ur mates girlfriend grrr :angry:
Title: Re: Rainy days CHAP 1 UPDATE 25/6/12 (kojiyuu)
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 26, 2012, 10:30:30 PM
colour of her soul

chap - 1 - The notebook

I walked far far away from her i needed time to think why wont she let me help her ??

Why do they hurt her call her names ??

Rain started to drop from the sky masking my tears as they fell to my cheek all i want to do is protect her i need to protect her i love her.

The night was getting colder and puddles covered the ground cars sped past me leaving smoke behind making me cough in discomfort that it had to enter my body.I put the hood of my blue jacket up to cover my head as the rain fell harder.If i cant help with her knowing then i have to help without her knowing i am.

But how ??

I found myself outside a bar that had screams coming from the inside that would scare a normal person but i found myself drawn to go in.

Eyes where glued on me as entered the bar this didnt make me feel self concious i was use to people watching my every move so i dont see why people with muscles the size of bricks would do that to me.

"Arnt you a cutie?"

"Get away from or you will regret it."

He pinched my cheek and tried to drag to me to the side but instead he found self on the floor craddling his arm in pain."You little bitch!" He screamed in pain but i ignored it i just walked away from him then out the bar.
Still raining oh how mother nature hates me isnt being shouted at by the person i love enough punishment for one day.
I kicked the ground annoyed with myself and her but as i did something fell infront of me.
I stepped slowly towards it and picked it up to discover it was a black note book stamped with DEATH NOTE on the front of it.I opened it up and flicked through the pages to find the book had rules about how to kill with it.Curious i took a pen from my pocket and writ one of the names of one of the girls that bullied Yuki in it and i thought i would wait till tomorrow to find out if it worked.
I stuffed the note book into my bag and walked home.

As i got home i put my shoes away then was greeted by my little sister when i walked in.
"Mayu!" She jumped on me hugging me till there was no air in my body i struggled to get her off me but thankfully i did before my body could collapse from lack of oxygen."Miichan go get changed from you unifrom you know mother will be made if you stain it." I told her she nodded her head then skipped up the stairs so she could change and if you listened carefully you could hear the door close and her singing NO3B's girl talk.

I took the remote control in my hand and sat on the couch then switched on the tv.

"17 year old Risa Haruna (A/N : made up person ) Died today at 5:30 of a heart attack which is unusual of a girl of such young age to have the doctors and autopsy have said there was nothing wrong with her mentally or phyiscally she was a normal healthy young girl the family of Risa are not able to comment on her death as shortly after they killed themselves leaving a note saying there unable to live without there precious daughter.Friends are beyond themsleves in grief a funeral will be held 5 days from now in honour of the family."

Did i just hear the news reporter right are my ears fooling me and telling me what i want to hear.Quickly i took the notebook from my bag and read the rules over and over again as i went upstairs leaving the newsreporter on the tv to talk to an empty room.
I got to my room and locked the door behind me and switched my tiny tv on then jumped into the medium sized bed this notebook is interesting mabye one more test to see if it actually works.

(A/N : What Mayu writes in the note book will be in this type of writing)

Anna cotton
Parents find her five minutes later

I closed the notebook after i finished writing and jumped off my bed put my phone on charge and turned on my laptop from its slumber.I went on my face book profile to be welcomed with ten more friend requests and 50 notifactions what did i do to be popular all i do is ignore them all.

I just left the requests and notifications for later and looked to see who was online.

(list of who is online)

Lovetan

Takamina <3 Acchan

Acchan <3 Takamina

Meetan

Pervy squirrel

Nyan Nyan

Miichan <3 cake

Marichan

Yuki

Ahh the person i want to talk has logged on i opened a chat with her and sent her a message.

" Hey Yuki =) "

" Hey ........ "

" Whats wrong are you still angry at me ?? " I typed still worried she was angry at me.

" No im fine dont worry ive got to go Mayu my mother is calling me for dinner."

Yuki has logged off.

I didnt even get a chance to say goodbye yup she is still mad i swear this girl is the only one that can get me out of CG mode and she doesnt even act proud.

"Breaking news another girl died this evening at the age of 17 the autopsy has announced the same as before she died of a heart attack the police are wondering weather the two deaths are connented but so far have found no clue."

My eyes widened no way she died 5 minutes after i writ her name this note book is the deadlist thing on earth and its in my possession oh lucky me Yuki i think i just found away to protect you.

"Hey there." I heard a voice my rooms locked so how i turned around on my chair to be frightened by a angels face.

"How did you get in here?"

"Im a death god i can go anywhere anytime i want and that right there is my death note." She said pointing to the notebook on the bed.

"So you are real?"

"What do you mean?"

"Death gods are real my first to kills where just experiments to see if the notebook really worked my suspicions where correct whats your name death god ?"

"Matsui Rena at your service."

"So tell me more about this death note Rena."

To be continued .....

A/N : Did you like it i hope so please comment and tell me where i need to improve and tell me what you liked
this fic is based on death note but things are going to be different but some the same im trying to stick to the film as much as i can.

Thank you for reading my fic
Title: Re: Colour of her soul based on death note CHAP 1 UPDATE 26/6/12 (mayuki)
Post by: farquhar97 on June 26, 2012, 10:58:00 PM
Ahhh I think she's going to go too far wiv it someone needs to tell her and lol I love the bit were it says and well done keep them coming please :)
Title: Re: Colour of her soul based on death note CHAP 1 UPDATE 26/6/12 (mayuki)
Post by: yukofan on June 27, 2012, 12:20:38 AM
rena as shinigami? wow..
i'm a big fan of Death Note,especially Kira/Light.if kira really exist on earth,i must be become one of his followers.


will mayu kill more people?
please continue~
Title: Re: Colour of her soul based on death note CHAP 1 UPDATE 26/6/12 (mayuki)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on June 27, 2012, 01:54:49 PM
OMG, I LOVE ALL THE 1st chaps so far.  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Rena-sama...  :wub:
Title: Re: Colour of her soul based on death note CHAP 1 UPDATE 26/6/12 (mayuki)
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 27, 2012, 05:32:51 PM
AKB48 = Big Bang !!

chap - 1 the start of Big bang

"Can you bring Takamina,Yuko,Rena,Miichan and Mayu to my office now please?" Akimoto-p asked his assistant who quickly nodded her head and walked out of his office.

Minutes later the 5 girls where inside his office awaiting the big news that the assistant had told them about even though she was sworn to secerecy.Akimoto-p took a big breath then motioned for them to sit down before he spoke.

"Girls the reason your her is beacuse I want you all to be in a new sub group called Big Bang who will be debuting in Korea under YG entertainment also you will all be dressed as boys everyone will know that you are actually girls you all know 2NE1 right ?" He asked before he continued and the five just nodded with the jaws hanging open in shock "Well they will be teaching you all Korean and be helping you with your dancing." He took a short breath then spoke again."Rena your stage name will be Gdragon you will be the leader of the group Cl will be taking extra care of you as she is teaching you how to rap Yuko you stage name will be Daesung lead vocal along with Mayu who's stage name is Taeyang Bom and Sandara will be your vocal coaches Takamina your stage name will be Top main rapper Miichan yours will be Seungri you will be vocal Minzy will look after the two of you okay?" Once again all they could do was nod.

"Your training will start in two days the 5 of you will go to the stylist in 5 minutes to sort out all of your new looks also do not tell any of your fellow members this will be a suprise to them and all of the country when you all reveal yourselves at your debut." None of them could believe it the 5 of them in a sub group together how much greater could life get the 5 of them where espeically close to eachother and go out to eat on a daily bases and now they get to start a new group and get to go where no AKB48 member has been before Korea the home to great bands like : 2NE1,Kara,Snsd,Beast,Mblaq and more and they might get to meet them.This was one of the greatest moments of there lives the 5 coudnt wait for there debut.

Akimoto-p could see the excitement in there faces as the news finally sank into them he smiled at the girls then realised the time and sent them away to get them fitted for there new stage clothes.

Yuko's pov

I coudnt be more happy at this moment right now we where getting measured for our male clothing before we got to pick the style we wanted to have for our alter ego.

The stylist's had already picked what are hair styles where like for that part we had no say but everything else we did.I looked around and decied that i would go for the smart bad boy type  look so i told my stylist and she started taking lots of clothes of the railings and labelled them with my name on.

Then flung them at me shouting for me to try them on I tried each of the outfits on pleased with how they complimented my figure and I and when my stylist put the wig on me my smile coudnt have got wider I looked perfect like a real boy I wore black skinnys hightops a sleevless jacket an brown top an brown medium wig.My part was done for the day but I was told to stay in the male clothing as Akimoto-P wanted to look at us before he left to see the other AKb members. Then I seen my fellow midgets shoes being filled with insoles and I dont mean one or two I five to ten I coudnt miss the chance to tease and by the looks of things neither could Miichan we high fived and began our 'Attack' on the small girl.

"Takamidget!" We shouted together earning a glare from the latter who didnt argue back as she was more interested in trying on her outfits when she was fully changed my jaw droped open an like on the cartoons i swear my toung fell out along with it on to the floor in shock.

She had a short silver haired wig and was tall and masculine and wore a gold and black tiger striped jacket,black jeans and hightops she looked very manly to all of us i coudnt believe this was Takamina.

Out of the 5 of us myself and Takamina where the only ones changed into are male clothing and we looked good even if i say so myself ahaha.

Next to change into male clothes was Mayu who looked amazing she had a black mohawk wig and was slightly taller then usual and looked as if she had big muscles she wore blue jeans black hightops and black jacket with the hood up.

Then Rena who had an all out bad boy vibe around her that is the completely different to her usual calm vibe she wore a graphic top tight blue jeans a checkred red top with black hightops and a hat hanging off the side of her head and a short spiked wig next was Miichan with a short black haired wig and clothes that looked very expensive she wore black jeans and hightops with a brown uneven length jacket which suited her well underneath a plain white top with necklaces drooping down on to her chest.

All us walked infront of a huge mirror that was in the room we coudnt believe that we where looking at oursleves we looked so different.Before we could gasp in our awsomeness (A/N : Lol)Akimoto-p came in with a camera and papers in his hands.We gave him a confused look until he signalled for us to huddle together as we did he motioned for us to pose.

He snapped a shot then said he was uploading it on the Akb48 website the picture was posted up and then underneath it said the new sub group of Akb48 Big Bang can you gusse who the members are ? "Here." He the passed us each 6 sheets of paper each "These are your debut songs Haru Haru and lies okay oh i forgot to tell you 2NE1 will aslo be helping you with your english as alot of it will be in your songs now i need you all to get changed back to normal your going to meet with the other Akb members." We all done as he said and then left with him to meet the others.

Koji pov

I dont think i have been more bored in my life im the only one here for once ive arrived early instead of late i dont want to be scolded by the miny captain for the nth time this month.

I sighed then took my phone from my pocket and checked the Akb48 website to see that Akimoto-p had uploaded something new on to it. A new sub group? Ahh there dressed as boys wow they look good hmm i wonder who is in it that sort of likes Yuko mabye she would tell me if i asked her.

I looked at the clock to see that i had ten more minutes left till everyone arrived then *BEEP* *BEEP* my phone went of telling me that i had a text.

When i read who sent it a smile spread across my face in a second i opened it up and read it.

To : Nyan Nyan
Argh im so tired i cant wait till i see you
I miss you oh did you see that picture Akimoto-p put up
i wonder who they are im 5 mins away cant wait to see you xxxxx
Love from
From : My squirrel

I sent a reply right away and was practically jumping from my seat causing people to stare at me.I sort of forgot they dont know that Yuko is my girlfriend so them seeing me jump out my seat in happiness off one text is probably going to cause some rumors or they will just think im even more odd then i already am.There most likely thinking the second one but hey im smart when i want to be.

Just like she said in her texts 5 minutes later herself,Takamina,Miichan,Mayu and Rena came to the arranged meeting place with Akimoto-p behind them i honestly didnt think Akimoto-p would be here early he mostly comes about 10 minutes after he said he would mabye what he wants is important.

Whilst in my day dream i didnt notice my squirral dashing towards me because before i knew it i was knocked to the ground trapped in a bear hug.Knowing that i woudnt be able to get out of this hug for along time i hit her lightly on the head earing a pout from the latter which in return earned a kiss on the check for her so that she would behave.She coudnt stop grining from that moment on and before we could say anything to eachother she dragged me away to somewhere away from the others.

Mayu's pov

It seems Koji is the only one here besides us ahh i wish people would arrive on time how annoying. I cant believe i have 5 days till i get to meet 2NE1 and learn from then and i have to learn how to do more dances harder dances. Why do i feel once i have learnt the dances for big bang's song the akb ones are going to be so much easier.Ahhh so much stress oh finally people have began arriving here its about time.

"Mayu!" I heard someone shout i turned my body to see Yuki running towards me with a huge smile ingraved into her face.And right behind her Sae great just great.

"Oh hey Yuki hey Sae." I said coldy making Sae give me a glare like she always does why because in her words im a threat in her and Yuki's relastionship which might cause them to break up in the future.Like always Yuki didnt notice and took my hand in hers and started telling me about her amazing day with her boyfriend sorry i mean girlfriend im sure anyone would make that mistake i mean come on Sae looks really boyish.And me being her best friend pretened to care like i always do luckily Miichan noticed my displeasure and came to where the three of us where.

"Mayu come help me prank Rena and Jurina!" Miichan said taking my hand and pulling me to the left."Miichan cant your prank wait i havnt seen her in one week you see her all the time with Takamina Rena and Yuko since your close!" Yuki moaned not seeing Sae's mood change from sort of happy to annoyed."Sorry Yuki its an important prank tell you what to make it up to you i wont prank you for 10 days." Miichan shouted dragging me away from the couple thank god i have a friend like her."Thanks Minami you always seem to save me at the right time."I say thankfully though not changing my CG expression."You know your the only one that doesnt call me by my nickname Mayu its cute ehehehe anyway about the prank." She then goes on explanining the prank to me bit by bit step by step.

Her prank was one of the funniest ones ive heard in long time the two of us walked to where Wmatsui couple and asked to have a sip of there drink of water.We took it from there hands and began drinking the water and both of us where very sneaky and put a tablet that would turn there teeth red then passed it back we both then tapped there backs saying thankyou whilst sticking fake bugs onto there backs and putting a fake spider in both of there pockets and then walked away.Neither of the two noticed which made the two of us start laughing uncontrollably this was one of the rare moments where i would come out of my CG attitude well its rare to others but not Miichan.Suddenly we heard screams making are eyes open in suprise then we heard "Jurina what is that on your back!" Then Jurina repeated the same words except asking what was on Rena's back causing us to chuckle.

"Your teeth!" They both screamed pointing to eachother ahahaha then we seen them put there hands in there pocket to try and get mabye tissues but all the pulled out was a spider causing them to scream again while the others where either laughing or trying to calm the pair down."MAYU MIICHAN YOUR DEAD!" Both of us gulped then ran as fast as we could towards Takamina who was talking to Akimoto-p."Help!" We shouted but it was to late the Wmatsui had caught us by the ear and pulled us to the right there faces where red causing us to have to hold in our laughs.

In the end we got a 10 minute lecture and said sorry to them by the looks of things Acchan hast arrived yet so we cant have the meeting or whatever it is how frustrating i hate waiting.

Miichan's pov

After the lecture from the two pale skinned beauties Mayu was once again dragged away by Yuki she turned her head to me looking at me with pleeding eyes to once again take her away from Yuki but i coudnt do that again because Yuki would take her away again.

And by the looks of things she understood as she just turned her head to face Yuki with a bored look which Yuki didnt really care about as she carried on talking with Sae next to her with a half happy and angry look.I just rolled my eyes Yuki really must not understand peoples feeling she is like Mayu and Takamina put into one im surprised she could confess to Sae.

All of a sudden i felt a sharp pain in my ear and i knew instantly who it was."Marichan do you have to pull my ear?" I could hear her laugh and i could tell she had a smirk on her face oh how i wish i could wipe it off."Aww look who got smart you know who i am without looking at me aww how cute gacchapin." Oh hell no she did not just call me gacchapin "Shut up old women go play some bingo okay!" I replied without looking at her i could tell that her face was going red in anger my mission accomplished A* for me yay.Then bang she smacked me across the head not playfully not nicely but hard i only called her old wtf!

With that i got up and walked away from her i will show her i cant wait till Big bang debut she will not believe that i can do that and she will stop treating me as a child.

Author's pov

Finally the last member had arrived at the meeting so everyone gathered around Akimoto-p to hear his announcement.
"Now i think all of you have seen the picture on the website well that is the new sub group of AKB48 called big bang the members will reveal there faces at there debut stage in Korea as they will be a Korean group under YG they will debut over here later on there debut song is called Haru Haru as you gussed yes there dressed as boys an there not aloud to tell you who they are so all of you have to keep gusseing."Akimoto-p said to everyone as they looked at him listening very carefully to every word he said."Any questions?" He asked causing hands to shoot up in the air.

"Miichan go ahead."

"Why dont we get to know who the members are?" She asked acting like she didnt know who was in the band and that she was in it.

"Thats because if the fans have to wait so do you its only fair okay Marichan you go next."

"Obviously the people in the group are here so will they be acting as if they dont know?"

"Yes that way none of you will be able to gusse or find out easy okay Mayu whats your question?"

"How long will the band members be away for in Korea?" She asked wondering how long she will have to be in Korea for?"

"Im not sure but they will be flying back every week so they can be at our concerts and appear on AKbingo an other variety shows Takamina what do you want to ask?"

"Wont it be obvious who is in the group if there going to go to Korea later on untill they debut?"

"No because at the week before everyone will doing variety shows early then you will all be off for a week and the members will be doing training over here aswell okay last two now Rena your next."

"Wont other members be curious if someone has more dance practice and rehearsel then them?"

"No none of you can tell members your schedules and most of your schedules will be seprate from others okay last one Yuko."

"Will the new sub group be appering on variety shows over here and Korea?"

"Yes they will we are determined to make them one of the best groups in the world okay no more questions you can all go home."

To be continued....

A/N: Thanks for reading please comment and tell me where i need to improve also i know Haru Haru or lies wasnt Big bang's debut song but i wasnt sure what was plus its like one of my favs the next chap will be skipped ahead to 5 days later so they will be meeting 2NE1.

This is the pic Akimoto-p put up on the web http://www.google.co.uk/imgres?q=big+bang+kpop&hl=en&gbv=2&biw=1024&bih=476&tbm=isch&tbnid=6V23FkFd9MHq1M:&imgrefurl=http://iloveohkpop.wordpress.com/2010/05/28/yg-entertainment-confirms-bigbangs-korean-comeback/&docid=yHH8RJOBfUnb_M&imgurl=http://iloveohkpop.files.wordpress.com/2010/05/d3.jpg%253Fw%253D560&w=457&h=351&ei=_xniT53ALqSd0QW6kOCRAw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=103&vpy=2&dur=561&hovh=197&hovw=256&tx=110&ty=66&sig=103771189715920109181&page=3&tbnh=136&tbnw=185&start=25&ndsp=14&ved=1t:429,r:0,s:25,i:167 (http://www.google.co.uk/imgres?q=big+bang+kpop&hl=en&gbv=2&biw=1024&bih=476&tbm=isch&tbnid=6V23FkFd9MHq1M:&imgrefurl=http://iloveohkpop.wordpress.com/2010/05/28/yg-entertainment-confirms-bigbangs-korean-comeback/&docid=yHH8RJOBfUnb_M&imgurl=http://iloveohkpop.files.wordpress.com/2010/05/d3.jpg%253Fw%253D560&w=457&h=351&ei=_xniT53ALqSd0QW6kOCRAw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=103&vpy=2&dur=561&hovh=197&hovw=256&tx=110&ty=66&sig=103771189715920109181&page=3&tbnh=136&tbnw=185&start=25&ndsp=14&ved=1t:429,r:0,s:25,i:167)

Title: Re: Akb48 = Big bang CHAP 1 UPDATE 27/6/12 (mayuki)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on June 27, 2012, 05:42:54 PM
*leaves the spot for the comment*

OMG!!!

I LOVE YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH, ROBYN-SAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This update is AWESOME!!!

I mean, I LOVE 2NE1, I LOVE BIGBANG, I love Yuko-sama, Rena-sama and the others, so THANK YOU!!!
Title: Re: Akb48 = Big bang CHAP 1 UPDATE 27/6/12
Post by: farquhar97 on June 27, 2012, 06:05:45 PM
Lol let me guess tht was ur favorite to write and lol I love the prank how did u think of red teeth lol good chap update soon plz
Title: Re: Akb48 = Big bang CHAP 1 UPDATE 27/6/12
Post by: TakaminaBG on June 27, 2012, 06:34:40 PM
I really REALLY, ABSOLUTELY love this story. BTW I think that Takamina has the potential to rap. She could do it with training. :D. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great Story! :thumbup BTW I love Big Bang. :D
Title: Re: Akb48 = Big bang CHAP 1 UPDATE 27/6/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 28, 2012, 05:06:19 PM
@Adam : Im basing this alot off songs lol so it should be cute

@Haruko : Yup he is gonna be player lol when he grows up

@Tanchan : Yer its all a dream like most of it is going to be ahahahaha

Replys for colour of her soul :

@Adam : your on the right line lol

@Yukofan : can u gusse why i chose Rena to be a death god oh and my fav person in Death note is L i have watched the film loads to !!

@Sakura_drop_ : Im glad that you like them all

Replys for Akb48 = Big bang :

@Sakura_drop_ : lol thanks just call me Robyn no need for the san since your older than me i think im glad you like the update and the idea came cause something in my mind said that Yuko looked like Daesung and i love 2NE1 to there my all time fav band

@Adam : Yup you where right oh an in your fic you made them pull a prank on me with spiders im so gonna get you back in one of mine with your worst fear.

@TakaminaBG : Glad you like it i love Big bang 2 ahaha and i think Takamina could rap to it would be awsome !!!

To everyone : Thank you all for reading and supporting my fics

Chap 2 - If i had a girlfriend

Past present Future

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=gOgV4OMP2V8#t=39s (http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=gOgV4OMP2V8#t=39s)

We got off the bus and i interwined our hands together.We waited for everyone else to get off then headed to the filming of Akbingo.You knew i was upset because this was going to be my last filming of Akbingo as an Akb48 member and ace.You always comfort me in your arms when tears stain my face when i think of things like that."Atsuko dont be worried or upset okay just go with the flow like you always do." You said smiling while squeezing my hand lightly.

As we made are way to the building slowly and i remembered when I confessed to you.
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I sent you a text as soon as i woke telling you to meet me in the park at midnight no questions asked in which you replied okay.
I quickly phoned my mother.

"Moshi moshi."

"Moshi moshi mother can you make me some picnic food please oh and can i lend a blanket?"

"Yer sure what is it for darling?"

"Secret."

"Whatever stop by at my work place an i will give you them okay."

"Thanks bye mother."

Before she could reply i hung up my phone and placed it on my bed then took a shower.

After taking a shower for an hour an a half i was felt clean so i dryed my self and put on sweats then took my keys from the bowl by my door and left to get the things from my mothers work place.

When i got there i was surrounded by fans asking for my autograph and to take pictures i obviously had to say yes which caused me to get a bit irritated since i was losing my patience.More then 15 minutes later i could get inside my mothers work place without any problems from fans.

"Mother have you got them?"

"Yes there in my office just go in a get them."

"Thankyou."

I ran into her office and dragged everything off her desk then ran out of the building then to my car and drove as fast as i could home.The first thing i did was pick out my clothes i chose a simple white dress with white pumps and a brown hat that had a black bow around the top.With my outfit picked out i chose to wear light makeup by the time i was finished i only had 4 hours till i went to meet you.

Ring Ring

"Moshi Moshi."

"Acchan we have got the lights and flowers for you where do want us to drop them off?"

"Just drop them off at my apartment im here anyway."

"Okay see you there."

I hung up the phone and got changed into my clothes after i changed there was a knock at the door so i opened it to be greeted with the smiling face of Miichan."This is everything you wanted right?" She asked i nodded my head and she left.
For the second time that day i took my keys from the bowl by the door and drove my car to the park.I chose a secluded area away from everyone we didnt want anyone to take are picture right?Trees blocked off the sight of the area to others so i texted you the directions so that you could find me later.Then i started to set up everything.

I decorated the trees with bright lights that calmed the atmosphere i put bowes around the tree trunks then engraved or names in one.I set out the cloth on the floor and setup rose petals around it i knew you would love it.I looked at my watch to find i had 3 minutes until you arrived.A feeling i coudnt describe was whirling around my stomach making my hands clamy.

"Atsuko did you do all this?" That voice i knew it right away i turned my body to face you to see your face redder than a Robins breast i chuckled and took your hand in mine and led you to where the blanket was.I sat down and patted next time and you fell down next to me.I took my hand away from your safe comforting one reluctantly and took a basket a food from my side and placed it infront of us.

"A picnic under the stars." You muttered i knew you would love it.Before i opened the basket i gathered my courage and confessed to you."Takamina i love you i have since i met you your the reason i cant sleep at night since your always on my mind i feel lonely when your not by my side and sad when your sad i know that you dont want to burden people by letting your emotions show and your always there for everyone so let me be there for you and show how much i love you." I finished in one long breath your face was shocked but then fell into a smile."I love you too Atsuko always have always will."Then you kissed me our first kiss so sweet and full of love.

When we tore apart we were both red so i suggeseted we eat the food after that i shown you what i engraved into the tree.You smiled like a crazy person when you seen it and kissed my cheek.
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From that day on we have never been a part a smile found my face and you kissed my hand it was time to film my last episode of Akbingo while i was Akb48 ace and i know i will always be the number one ace in your heart.

to be continued........

A/N : That was her thinking about the past btw until.
Thanks for reading comment and tell me where to improve.
Title: Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
Post by: sakura_drop_ on June 28, 2012, 05:32:15 PM
UWA~~, 2NE1 is my all time favorite band too *squeels and huggles Robyn*

And thank you for this update, AtsuMina never hurts  ;)
Title: Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
Post by: miayaka on June 28, 2012, 05:59:11 PM
baby baby baby baby boo
i love the video as well as the chapter.. i really feel the scene hahaha  *butterflies on my chest*
arigatou  XD
Title: Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
Post by: chichay12 on June 28, 2012, 06:12:55 PM
i never get tired reading ur fic!!good job robyn,..
I just have a exam,and i think all my answer is wrong!!
But aftr i read ur updte,i forget my exam in my advnce engr clss!
Tnx robyn!hehe
Pls update more!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
Post by: Flean on June 28, 2012, 06:38:38 PM
Wah!!!  :cow: I really like the Past present future chapter.. :inlove: :inlove: even though I kinda confused with their kids names at first..  :lol: but I love it..  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
Post by: farquhar97 on June 28, 2012, 07:20:35 PM
Awww thats soo sweet and romantic what Atsuko did Awwwww  :wub: :wub: :heart: :heart: and ur such a meanie to me lol putting my fear in  :cry: but I forgive you
Title: Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
Post by: TakaminaBG on June 28, 2012, 10:55:46 PM
Really sweet. I'm looking forward to the next part. ATSUMINA FOREVER!!  :thumbup :heart:
Title: Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
Post by: Haruko on June 29, 2012, 06:26:08 AM
Aww atsumina :D
Title: Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 29, 2012, 04:00:43 PM
Replys :

@Sakura_drop_ : Ahh *hugs back* Bommie and cl are my favs in 2NE1 lol and yup atsumina never hurts though i find them the hardest to write

@Miayaka : I want a boy to do that for me in the future so it came into my head and i love the song to Yoseob is so cute

@Chichay12 : Hey Kat im glad i could take your mind off things im sure you did awsome in the test and im on chap 2 of 50 shades of grey im a slow reader lol its quite cool so far

@Flean : Sorry about confusing you *Hits self on head* im glad you like it though

@Adam : My payback will be 2morra ahahahahah

@TakaminaBG : Glad you like it lol thanks for reading

@Haruko : I know so sweet

Rainy Days

chap 2 - i cant believe it

"Where am i?"

"The hospital."

"HOSPITAL!"

"Yes you-"

"Get me out of here now!"

The nurse rushed out of the dull white room and left me alone why am i here what happaned did i have to much to drink or something last night?

Then an man with a long white coat came into my room with a terrified nuse behind him.I rolled my eyes and pushed myself up so i could look at the doctor face to face."You will be staying here for two days then you can go home we just need to run some tests on you okay?" He told me "Tests what type of tests?" I questioned "I cant tell you just yet not until we are sure please co-operate as best you can till you leave." He answered i just waved my hand signalling him to leave which he complied as he left the room with the nurse leaving me lonely once more.

"I need a time machine~~~~~" A voice sang i looked around the room searching for the voice to find that it was coming behind a curtain.I pulled the curtain aside and there was a little girl singing by herself drawing in a book."Hello." Is all i could say she turned around and smiled at me "Hello im Kasai Tomomi and you are ?" Wow she sounds sort of mature for a little girl "Im Kojima Haruna." She smiled brightly at me when i said my name she then lifted her book to the air and shown me the drawing inside."Whats that i ask?" I ask because all i see are scribbles on the paper."Its a flower silly isnt obvious?" She asked "Not really..." I whispered thankfully not loud enough for her to hear.

I stood up and moved away to my bed that was behind the curtain next to hers i jumped down on my bed then snuggled down into it.What time is it i thought looking up to the clock on the other side of the room.10 at night i put my head against the pillow and let sleep take over my body to wake up 3 hours later.

Where is the toilet argh i jumped from my bed and left the room only to hear tiny foot steps behind me.Then a tug on my shirt pulled my downwards ever so slightly.

"Are you going the toilet?" The girl who i believe to be called Tomomi asked i just nodded and tried to push her away but she kept coming back eventually she took her hand in mine and leaded me to the toilets."What are you doing up so late?" I questioned she just pointed to the toilet ahhh she need the toilet to.She must have been to scared to come on her own cute.

She finished and washed her hands then i did she then took my hand again and walked back from the toilets to the room.I tucked her in comfortably then kissed her forehead wishing bad dreams away and went to my bed to sleep till morning.

I woke up with light blinding me and chuckling next to me.I turned my head to see Tomomi smiling and laughing at me i was sort of annoyed by that but i wasnt going to show that to a little kid."Koji look at this." She shown me a picture of a huge house with trees all around it "Is that where you live?" I asked but she shook her head "No this is where we will live in the future from now on your my big sister." She announced i smiled in responce to her then a nurse came and took her out the room.

About ten minutes later a man came in with a clipboard in his hands "Kojima Haruna where going to a cat scan okay come on." I pushed myself off my hard bed and followed the doctor before i knew i was in side this weird confusing machine.A couple of seconds later her let me go and then discharged me early.

Just as i was walking from the hospital a nurse took my wrist and forced me to face her."Please come visit Tomomi she talks about you all the time im sure that you coming would be a huge moral boost for her." The nurse said my heart sank for Tomomi but i wasnt going to visit instead i lied to the nurse saying i would then left.

The first thing i did when i got home was go inside my messy wait scratch that its clean now how and why?

"Im sorry i just had to clean it when you where in hospital i thought it would be easier for you." A voice suprised me instead of saying something i just lay on my bed not caring for the existence for the other person in the room.I could hear her foot steps fade away as she walked away and down the steps.

I wonder what that test was for i thought the slammed my face into the pillow sighing why is my life so annoying and why do i have such annoying people in my life.

Wait she knew i was in the hospital and didnt come and visit am i really that mean of person that she woudnt come and see.No thats not it most likely the idoitic midget said stay away and let her grow up or something.

I checked my while i put it on charge since it died in the hospital not one person had texted me saying to get better or anything like that and im called selfish.I changed my clothes and made my way down stairs and switched on the tv despite the protests from my spineless mother.

Everything on the telly was boring like really boring how should i explain it ahh like thats it like history class when your learning about the same thing you have learnt a million times before.The door shut telling me the midget was home okay now it was my time to talk to her.

"Hey midget why didnt you come see me in hospital?"

"Why did you end up in hospital?"

"Answer me dont give me such a ignorant answer smurf!"

"I had work besides its not like you would have came to visit us if we where there!"

The spineless one just stood still watching the argument from the kitchen.

"And you Atsuko why didnt you visit me?!"

She was shocked hearing her name but answered seconds later.

"I didnt because i coudnt i was looking after your cousin Negima!"

Wait are those tears coming from the small womens eyes?

"Why are you crying?"

"Stop fighting and the pair of you sit down i just got your hospital results back."

I sat down confused.

"You have cancer you have to go back tommorow for treatment."

My world crashed and slown down cancer there was no way i could have that why me what did i do?! Am i that bad of a person ? Did i do something wrong in my past life ? I stood up and tried to walk but instead fell down on my knees and let tears stroll down my face and my whines fill the air.I could her the quiet sobs of the two people behind me i coudnt speak when i tried my throat was dry and sore.

I have cancer my life was over.

To be continued ......

A/N : I hope you all liked it please comment tell me what you like and where to improve thanks for supporting my fics im ill at the moment but im still writing 3 out of 4 fics chapter 2's have been writen yay im proud of myself.

Oh an if anyone has seen the drama of pretty guardian sailor moon did you know the little girl that plays Rei is the girl that plays Rina in dear friends lol so grown up and such a great actoress.

Sorry but Keiko Kitagawa is one of my all time my actoress.
Title: Re: Rainy days CHAP 2 UPDATE 29/6/12 kojiyuu
Post by: sakura_drop_ on June 29, 2012, 04:09:24 PM
KOJIPPA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

OMG... So sad...

Anyway, I'll be waiting for your next update  :deco:


I actually, though my favs are Yuko-sama and Rena-sama, find it easiest to write about AtsuMina  :grin: I wonder why  :grin:
Title: Re: Rainy days CHAP 2 UPDATE 29/6/12 kojiyuu
Post by: farquhar97 on June 29, 2012, 04:46:00 PM
Nooo cancer I feel sorry for her even tho she's really vain Ahh  :cry: and ahhh so mean Ahh btw hope u get better  :)
Title: Re: Rainy days CHAP 2 UPDATE 29/6/12 kojiyuu
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 30, 2012, 10:26:08 AM
@Sakura_Drop_ : Its because your a better and much more cooler writer

@Adam : Im fine now all better lol but you wont ur fear is in this chap

Colour of her soul

chap 2 - experiments

How to use the death note one :

1.The human whose name is written in this note shall die.

2.This note will not take effect unless the writer has the person’s face in their mind when writing his/her name. Therefore, people sharing the same name will not be affected.

3.If the cause of death is written within the next 40 seconds of writing the person’s name, it will happen.

4.If the cause of death is not specified, the person will simply die of a heart attack.

5.After writing the cause of death, details of the death should be written in the next 6 minutes and 40 seconds.

Interesting Mayu thought while reading the note books rules over again Rena watched the girl carefully this wasnt the type of person she expected to pick up the death note.She always thought the death note would be found by someone stupid but no this was the complete oppisate this girl was taking the time to read the rules and even ask questions and the best thing she is actually using it.

How to use 2 :

1.The notebook shall become the property of the human world, once it touches the ground of (arrives in) the human world.

2.The owner of the note can recognize the image and voice of the original owner, i.e. a God of death/Shinigami.

3.The human who uses the notebook can neither go to Heaven nor Hell.

The more Mayu reads the more intrigued she got this really was the perfect way to protect someone without getting caught she could get away with anything she wanted anything at all.

How to use 3 :

1.If the time of death is written within 40 seconds after writing the cause of death as a heart attack, the time of death can be manipulated, and the time can go into effect within 40 seconds after writing the name.

2.The human who touches the death note can recognize the image and voice of its original owner, a Shinigami, even if the human is not the owner of the note.

Hold up manipulated this could be fun.Mayu skipped to the front black pages of the note book and writ three peoples names init.

Adam Farquhar
10:35pm
Gets caught and took to prison
his cell has rats
rat bites him he writes i can no longer live on the wall
Rats then eat his lifeless body

Lee Choi
10:35pm
Runs away
gets hit by an on coming truck

Kai Matsui
10:35
burt to death

Three names three different ways to die now all she had to was see if they work she turned on the news like always and awaited to see if the note book was telling the truth.

She then opened it a reads some more rules.

How to use 4 :

1.The person in possession of the Death Note is possessed by a god of death, its original owner, until they die.

2.If a human uses the note, a god of death usually appears in front of him/her within 39 days after he/she uses the note.

3.Shinigami, the original owners of the Death Note, do not do, in principle, anything which will help or prevent the deaths in the note.

4.A Shinigami has no obligation to completely explain how to use the note or rules which will apply to the human who owns it unless asked.

Mayu looked at Rena who just shrugged in responce Mayu stuck her tounge at her then went down stairs for a snack.Rena followed her down the stairs floating in the air behind then she seen a circule brown shaped thing on top of the table with squares in the top.

"What is that?" She asked pointing to it only to be blanked by Mayu who then grabbed a packet of crisps then the thing Rena pointed to then went back upstairs.Rena quickly flew after her and through the door behind Mayu.

Mayu locked the door behind "This is Melon pan eat it love it enjoy it dont bother me with it." She finally answered throwing the melon pan at Rena who caught it then shooved it into her mouth.Her face lit up this was the most amazing thing she had ever tasted in her life (death gods dont need to eat) The news women then began to speak.

"Today three young boys at the age of 17 died at 10:35pm the police are wondering wheather the deaths are connected and have decied to get a special officer that goes by the name A on the case the familys would like to keep the boys names a secret but will reveal how they died." And the women continued to speak and said what Mayu writ in the note book.

Intersting very intersting...

To be continued .....

A/N : thank you for reading i know it was a crap update but i got adam back lol thanks for reading please comment and tell me where to improve.

Title: Re: colour of her soul CHAP 2 UPDATE 30/6/12 mayuki
Post by: sakura_drop_ on June 30, 2012, 10:52:14 AM
No, I think it's because they are the smexy, funny, and easy-communicating couple. For example, I find it hardest to write about SKE couples, it takes a lot of time... But oh well  :nervous And thanks for praising me  :bow: :bow:

I really love your plots. This death note story cracked me up, poor farquhar  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :nervous

Rena-sama as melon pan loving shinigami is  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

And Mayu is sure one clever death note user  :glasses: :ding: :hiakhiakhiak:

Thank you for this update  :bow: :bow: :bow:

You're a good writer too, considering your age, so don't worry. With time and practice you might get a hold of writing about AtsuMina  :on GJ: :bingo:
Title: Re: colour of her soul CHAP 2 UPDATE 30/6/12 mayuki
Post by: kurogumi on June 30, 2012, 01:21:27 PM
 Yukiii stop your mayuyu from doing that! Kyaa

Title: Re: colour of her soul CHAP 2 UPDATE 30/6/12 mayuki
Post by: farquhar97 on June 30, 2012, 01:35:20 PM
Ahhh robyn ur horrible to me lol anyway good chapter part from me gettin killed by rats meanie btw it might be 1-1 lol but I'll do somethin elese to u at one point lol
Title: Re: colour of her soul CHAP 2 UPDATE 30/6/12 mayuki
Post by: yukofan on June 30, 2012, 05:11:04 PM
i love it..
the shinigami eat melon pan XD

continue pliz~
Title: Re: colour of her soul CHAP 2 UPDATE 30/6/12 mayuki
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on July 01, 2012, 02:35:49 PM
@Sakura_drop_ : Thankyou im glad that im good for my age also yer hopefully i can write atsumina better and i wannna be like you at writing =) and yer poor adam

@Kurogumi : Nope i think Yuki will make it worse

@Adam : Yer im horriable but hey thats me

@Yukofan : Thank you

chap 2 - meeting and training with 2NE1

5 days later

Takamina and Rena where practising rapping in english everytime they got one word wrong they rewinded the song and practiced that one word or verse furiously none stop until they got it perfect.

"Starships where ment to fly hands up and touch the sky............cant stop coz where so highhhh lets do this one more time x2 !"
The two sang trying the absolute best to pronounce all of the words correct.The song ended and the pair put on lip gloss by Lil Mama.They clapped there hands in tune with the beat and started to try and do the steps of the dance slowly obvioulsy with difficulty as they have only seen the dance once.

Miichan stood there watching the pair before walking out of the dance rehearsel room and headed to the vocal room."What song there practing rapping in english so i should start and try and sing korean i suppose where not aloud to practice lies and Haru Haru unless there is two of us or all of us so lets see."She spoke to herself scrolling down her phones song list and looking at the songs she recently downloaded last night to help with her Korean.She clicked on Beasts song bad girl and music filled the silent room.

She started dancing and jumping around the room mindlessly as she sang the lyrics in perfect pitch and tune like this wasnt her first time singing in Korean at all.

"jakkuman ni saenggage michyeo michyeo bad girl

tteonaji mallago nege sorichyeodo

dwidora bojido annneun bad girl

down down we gotta get down
down down we gotta get down
down down we gotta get down

(I wanna come to me girl)

down down we gotta get down
down down we gotta get down
down down we gotta get down

(I wanna come to me girl)

na honjaman tto seulpeohae naege dorawajwo"

She herself was suprised at her skill but also proud that she could pull it off so skillfully in such a amount of time.She gave her self a smug little smile then started practing again.

Meanwhile Yuko was missing her Nyan Nyan in the past 2 days they werent able to see eachother do to her busy shedule and Yuko's pre preparation to meet and practice with 2NE1.But she quickly snapped out of her sad mind set she was going to be one of the main vocals instead of mopping she had to practice if she wanted to get better and win Korea over.

She got a video up 5Dolls like this like that on her phone and watched the dance version over and over again listening to the lyrics and watching the dance with a keen ear.She whispered the lyrics to herself and put the video back to the bits where she wasnt sure of.

She watched Chan Mi's moves more than the others why because she was amazed by the girls voice (A/N : Honestly i am i love her range that she can go to oh and she is my fav in 5Dolls and Co-ed school)"One two three." She labelled the dance moves as she moved to the beat.

As for Mayu she was in seprate room practacing dancing she put a chair in the middle of the room and started the music player.
"I did did it for love!" Boa's voice sang occasionally Mayu missed a step and the beat but she soon got back into the rhytme after all she had been practing and studying this dance for a while now.

When the song finished she heard clapping from behind.

"I know you where watching me for a while now im not stupid."

"Should you talk to you seniors like that?"

"Not really but i havnt seen your face so how do i assume your my senior or someone younger than me."

"Turn around then."

"Or you could head out of the room and wait till we meet again honestly i like my idea better."

"Fine see you later."

"You sound confident."

"Its because i know i will."

With that the mysterious voice said its last sentence and dissappeared from the room.Mayu shook her head not the least bit concerned or puzzeled about what the voice said why beacuse she didnt care.She took her towel in her hand and wiped the sweat off her head then went to Takamina and Rena as it was time for all of them to meet 2NE1.

When she got there everyone looked amazingly tired but there faces soon stopped that look because right behind Mayu was the 4 figures they have been waiting for.

Mayu was confused at first until there was a tap on her shoulder so she turned and faced a short haired beauty of a girl in Mayu's eyes an angel."Told you we would meet again." Her eyes widened no way no way no way the person in that room with her all that time was 2NE1's Minzy she mentally cursed herself to actually turn around and see who it is next time.

A hand then was waving infront of her face scaring her slightly but she just shook it off ignoring the comment from before and sat next to her friends who just looked at her with a wtf face.Which she replied "Dont ask." They just nodded in return.

"Im 2NE1's Maknae Gong Minzy nice to meet you all." She introduced herself smiling "Looks old if you ask me she is younger than you." Mayu remarked causing all eyes to fall on her and Minzy to laugh."Ive found my match im going to like you." She retorted making Mayu just give her a glare making Minzy laugh more."Im 2NE1's kiss ass sexy vocalist Park Bom nice to meet you." She bowed her introduction making all of them giggle."Im the 4d fake maknae Sandara Park but just call me Dara."She said poseing cutely."Im the leader of 2NE1 Lee Chaerin just call me Cl please take care of us all."

After the four introduced themselves they asked the Big bang girls to tell them about them selves."Im Akb48's leader Takahashi Minami im 145.5 cm one of the smallest in the group if not the smallest member just call me Takamina."

"Im Oshima Yuko the jokester of Akb48 also one of the smallest at 152 cm."

"Im Matsui Rena the pale skinned beauty of Ske48 nice to meet you."

"Im the cake lover of Akb48 Minegishi Minami just call me Miichan."

"Im Watanabe Mayu."

Knowing that was the most they where going to get from Mayu they left the introductions there and started the song.
"This is the beat to Haru Haru good right?" 2NE1 asked getting little yers and such from the 5 girls."Okay now for the dance." The 2NE1 girls shown them the basic steps quickly and the 5 girl mirrored there moves without much difficulty except that is for Takamina.Since Minzy was ment to look after Takamina she took it upon herself to help her until she got after a couple of minutes she had it but her moves werent as slick as what the others looked like.

After a little bit more time the 2NE1 girls had decided to teach them all the entire dance so after hours they had learnt the dance and then started to learn lies after a couple of more hours they had both dances done perfectly but tweeks could still be made.
"Lets take a break from dancing we will teach you Korean and the lyrics to the songs now." Cl ordered in which everyone just replied with a "YAY!".Learning the language wasnt as hard as they thought and of course they got some words wrong they where beginners 2NE1 had given them all permission to call them Unnies that is of course except Mayu because where as Cl Bom and Dara had said she could Minzy said no.When asked why she said no she simply answered "She needs to earn my respect first."This annoyed Mayu but there was nothing she could do its not like she could force Minzy to let her call her Unnie and why would see want to anyway.

By the time they finished learning everything it was 3am in the morning never in there life had they practiced so hard or freely to this time when they had started at 8am the morning of the day before.Even 2NE1 had left at 10pm telling them all to get rest and come back the same time the next day but they all ignored them and continued determined to make this the best debut Korea had seen.They where more use to the steps of the dances and more famililar with the lyrics somehow they had a connection to each song in there own special way which made them want to do better all the more.

"Lets rest for 5 minutes." Rena said dropping to the floor panting and sweat sliding down her face and with in seconds the other where sat down or lying on the floor with her.

"We have to do are best no matter what." They all said in unison.

the next day

2NE1 walked into the practice rooms to find the 5 girls asleep on the cold floor drenched with sweat they chuckeled to themselves and left to go to a certain shop for them.

The 5 girls woke up to see it was 8am all of them shot to there feet looking for there 2NE1 unnies but found them no where to be seen figuring the where late they switched the music on again and started singing/rapping the lyrics while dancing there hearts out.

About 10-15 minutes later 2NE1 arrived with bags of clothes and food.

"Here." Minzy shly looked away as she handed Mayu the bag.Mayu opened it cautiously  to find it had black sweat pants with red stars on the side of the left leg a gray top white pumps and a black jacket simular to the pants.Along with that her favourite food and drink and chewing gum at the bottom of the bag.She looked up at Minzy her face a slight tint of red on her cheeks "Thankyou." Mayu quietly mumbled."Sorry didnt hear you." Minzy spoke placing a hand to her ear wanting Mayu to say that again but instead she got a flick to the nose.

Everyone got clothes and there favourite drink and food so qucikly they all changed eat and drank eat some chewing gum brused there hair with a brush that Cl had given them then went back to training."Before you all start dancing your going to record today so follow us."

They left the room one by one following there unnies except for Mayu who stayed for a second as she was thinking but the quickly regained her composer and ran after them all.

They got to the recording studio and was told they were going to record separately then all together they agreed and the first to record was Rena.Everyone heard the muisc dance around the room then Rena's voice followed.She rapped with no mistake and vocals perfect the song finished then the next started finally the second song felt like it finished to quick but that was just beacause of the fun they where having and Rena left the booth high fiving the other members now it was Takamina's turn she took a deep breath then entered the recording booth.Once again the room was filled with  music and they all danced in there seats mouthing the lyrics.All of them where suprised to hear Takamina's skills at rapping they could defenitly tell who was going to be a fan favourite.

Once she finished recording the two Miichan skipped into the booth and started singing with the beat and jumping in the booth causing the others to laugh hard at her she just pulled her tounge at them and continued pratting about.After her was Yuko whos voice sounded like an angel her concentration was impecable to the others which impressed 2NE1 alot.Finally Mayu had her turn to record like the others it was perfect she even suprised them all with her vocal power which doesnt get shown that often but she didnt mind this was her time to shine.

When she finished 2NE1 practically thrown the rest into the room with her so they could recored the song together.
Finally after a long amount of recording they where free to practice there dancing so the rushed back to the dance studio and danced till there bodys broke down.

Akimoto-p then came marching into the dance studio with a smile on his face whilst clapping his hands."I just heard the recording you all sound amazing thank you for helping them 2NE1." He said joy filled in his voice "Now practice makes perfect." With that he exited the room silently whistleing the songs to himself.

To be continued ....

A/N : i really like this ahahaha next chap will be the week before the debut comment and tell me what you all liked and what i need to improve thank you for reading.

Oh and adam sumit bad just happaned come on fb as soon as u read this please i need someone to talk to
Title: Re: Akb48 = Big bang CHAP 2 UPDATE 1/7/12
Post by: sakura_drop_ on July 01, 2012, 03:00:53 PM
Oh, this was interesting! Oc, Yuko-sama is like an angel, and oh i so imagine Taka rocking da house with her rapping  :wub: :wub: :wub:

Thanks for this update  :bow:
Title: Re: Akb48 = Big bang CHAP 2 UPDATE 1/7/12
Post by: farquhar97 on July 01, 2012, 04:29:36 PM
Omg how could they be up till 3 o clock lol and Lov the bit were bommie has a bow lol update soon and I am
Title: Re: Akb48 = Big bang CHAP 2 UPDATE 1/7/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on July 02, 2012, 11:49:04 PM
The school life of AKB48

Yuko : Ahhhhhhhh (trips and rolls down stairs)

Haruna : Yuko are you okay?"

Yuko : I dont think i will survive unless (Pretends to be dieing)

Haruna : Unless what Yuko ? (Worried)

Yuko : You let me touch your boobs! (Pervyness shows)

Haruna : PERVERT !! (Smacks Yuko's head)

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*In the libary*

Takamina : Acchan stop it (Pushes Acchan away)

Acchan : Stop being so cold and let me kiss you! (Trys to kiss Takamina again)

Takamina : Acchan i said stop! (Pushes her away again)

Acchan : Just one kiss and i will stop i promise

Takamina : Fine

*Takamina kisses Acchan only to be pulled into a deep kiss and pulled futher away into the libary*

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*Hallway*

Jurina : 8

Mayu : No way 10

Jurina : Your only saying that because she is your girlfriend

Mayu : Oh like you woudnt rate Rena ten if we where rating there butt!

Jurina : Okay okay i understand you no need to be angry okay what about Tomochin?

Jurina and Mayu : 9

*Jurina and Mayu high fived eachother*

Yuki and Rena : What you guys talking about ?

Mayu and Jurina : Nothing (Quickly change the subject)

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*Classroom*

Tomomi : Tomo~~~chin who are you texting ?

Tomochin : Suprise

Tomomi : Tell me please (Sits on Tomochins lap and wraps arms around her neck)

Tomochin : You will know in a second i promise (leans and kisses Tomomi's nose)

*Knock on class room door a man with roses comes in*

Man : Delivery for a miss Kasai Tomomi

Tomomi : Tomochin did you text a flower shop to deliver roses to me ?

Tomochin : Y..y..yer (shyly nods head)

*Tomomi gets up and takes flowers off man walks back sits on Tomochin's lap and kisses her*

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*Canteen*

Miichan : FOOD (starts drooling)

Mariko : Stop drooling (Smacks Miichan)

Miichan : Old women!

Mariko : Who are you calling old Gachapin!

Miichan : Please your so old your memory is in black and white!

Mariko : Idiot!

Miichan : Your so old you have Adam and Eve's autographs!

Mariko : Thats it! (Drags Miichan away from canteen and asks dinner women to not let her back in)

Miichan : Your so cruel (Starts crying in a corner)

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*Gym*

Sae : YES I WIN !

Sayaka : No way rematch !

Sae : No im tired besides Yuki isnt here for me to impress so there is no point

Sayaka : She is with Mayu

Sae : She will be mine (Dreams of a life where herself and Yuki are together)

Sayaka : Well as long as she can dream (Sayaka walks away shaking her head)

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To be continued ..........

should this be continued ?? did you like it ??? Please comment and tell me where to improve and what you liked thanks for reading
Title: Re: The school life of Akb48 UPDATE 2/7/12
Post by: farquhar97 on July 03, 2012, 12:06:44 AM
Yes Robyn I like it because it breaks down the chapter and makes it easier to read but I really think that you carry on with the old way as well because in this way its not Got as much as a story as a long one and I like reading the long chapters lol and Yukos being a bit pervy lol update soon
Title: Re: The school life of Akb48 UPDATE 2/7/12
Post by: axel0048 on July 03, 2012, 12:29:28 AM
should this be continued ??  IT MUST BE!!! :yep:
did you like it ??? I LOVED IT!!! :heart: :heart: specially the atsumina moments!!!! :thumbsup
Title: Re: The school life of Akb48 UPDATE 2/7/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on July 03, 2012, 06:20:25 PM
part 2

*Break time in classroom*

(People talking about a new student)

Yuki : Rena have you heard there is a new girl in school ?
Rena : Yer i wonder what she looks like do you think she is pretty ?
Yuki : Oh here is Mayu why dont we ask her.
Rena : Mayu!

(No ansewer from Mayu)

Rena : Is she ignoring you did you do something wrong on your date last night?
Yuki : What no are date was amazing last night. (waving hands in the air saying no)
Rena : Well you must have if she is ignoring you oh wait she is coming over.
Mayu : Excuse me have you seen Mayu?
Yuki : You are Mayu stop joking its not like you.

(Rena is shocked and cant speak when she sees another Mayu coming in class room)

Girl : Nezumi where you looking for me ?
Nezumi : Yup
Yuki and Rena : Wait what
Nezumi : Oh now i get it im Mayu's twin Nezumi i just came from  Korea the girl next to me is Mayu.
Mayu : You thought she was me come on there is such a big difference
Rena and Yuki : im speechless

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*Other side of class room*

Yuko : Please !! (On knees pleading)
Acchan : Nope
Takamina : I dont wanna die!
Yuko : But she will rape me!!
Takmina : Not my problem
Yuko  : Im your best friend so it is your problem
Acchan : Im her girlfriend and i say no!
Takamina : Ask Haruna (Says half heartly)
Yuko : No way im not letting that old women touch her
Takamina : Thats why im not going you know her obsession with me
Acchan : Go to nurse Megumi yourself
Yuko : Fine but if im not back in 5 minutes tell Haruna i love her (Walks away dramatically)

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*Class next door*

Erena : That is not how you do it
Miho : Yer it is !!
Erena : No way this is the right way (Demonstrates again)
Miho : Lies (Scoffs)
Erena : Fine lets ask Lovetan
Miho : Fine
(Asks Lovetan she demonstartes differently)
Erena and Miho : Wrong !
Lovetan : Right!
*Teacher comes in class*
Miho Erena and Lovetan : Sensei this is how you do the Penguin waddle dance right?!
(Do the dance from Beast's fiction)
Sensei : No it's like this (Shows perfectly)
Erena Miho and Lovetan : Sensei Yoesob is the best (Stars gleaming in there eyes)

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*On roof*

Tomochin : BORED !!

(Lays on the roof on her own phone rings)

Tomochin : Moshi Moshi mother.
Tomochin's Mother : Your skipping class again.
Tomochin : Im not who told you that.(Declines)
Tomochin's Mother : No one told me anything i can see you
Tomochin : See me ??
Tomochin's mother : Look above you

(Tomochin drops her phone her eyes wide then picks phone back up)

Tomochin : You took the helicopter for a spin i see
Tomochin's Mother : Yer now get to class

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*Back in Tomomi's class room*

Tomomi : I want that that and that
(Orders clothes and shoes)
Tomomi : OOOOOOOOOO Tomochin would look good in that (Orders dress)
Sensei : Can you get off my laptop (Trys to pull Tomomi away)
Tomomi : Later pushes sensei away and continues shopping

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*Gym class*

Sae : 1,2....3,4.......5
Sayaka : 10,11,12
(Yuki walks in the gym)
Sae : 6,1000
Sayaka : WTF (Troll face)
(Yuki sees Mayu and runs past ignoring Sae who is doing weights)
(Sae tears in eyes)
Sae : You will be mine
Sayaka : Better luck next time dude

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*Gym class*

Miichan : Give it back !
Mariko : Climb the rope first or your going to fail gym
Miichan : I dont care give it back (Jumps to reach it)
Mariko : Do it
Miichan : Fine
(Climbs rope drops down)
Miichan : Happy ?
Mariko : Yes here you go (Passes back cup cake)
Miichan : I want another prize (Points to lips)
Mariko : If you want that do 50 laps of the gym
(Miichan zooms round gym 50 times)
Mariko : Why coudnt have i said that before it would have been easier than stealing the cupcake (Facepalm)
Miichan : Mariko !! (Jumps up and down whining pointing to lips)
Mariko : Fine here (Kisses Miichan)
Miichan : YYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY

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To be continued ........
Did you like its part 2 of yesterdays i will update past present future tommorow because i havent spell checked it yet comment and tell me what you liked and what i need to improve thanks for reading
Title: Re: The school life of Akb48 part 2 UPDATE 3/7/12
Post by: yuukimoko on July 03, 2012, 07:17:12 PM
w-wahhh~ 2Mayu?  moreeeeeeee love for Yukirin!!!!!!!!!    its MayuxYukixNezumi pleasssseee? pretty please?  XD :wub:
Title: Re: The school life of Akb48 part 2 UPDATE 3/7/12
Post by: farquhar97 on July 03, 2012, 07:37:45 PM
Yay Thx for the update its great can't wait till next one lol and. It's dead funny lol
Title: Re: The school life of Akb48 part 2 UPDATE 3/7/12
Post by: Megumi on July 04, 2012, 01:29:00 PM
ROFL* I love how Yuki totally ignores Sae  :rofl:

Hahaha Nezumi! Twins! LOLOLOL

Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: The school life of Akb48 part 2 UPDATE 3/7/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on July 04, 2012, 09:52:39 PM

Past present future

chap 3 - im in love

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xQ-qyIxtW7Q&feature=player_detailpage#t=3s (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xQ-qyIxtW7Q&feature=player_detailpage#t=3s)

The filming of Akbingo had finished my last episode done im hoping that i will get invited back in the future i dont think i can stay away from everyone for long.I looked around but you where no where to be found when i asked if someone had seen you they just shook there head.I sighed but then the Tomotomo couple came running towards me and with the hands that werent filled with fashion magazines then they dragged me to change.

They thrown a dress at me confusing me but they changed into dresses themselves so i just mirrored there action.There was no one else in the changing rooms with i found odd because usuasly there are still people getting changed at this time i shook the thought from my head an followed Tomotomo where they where taking me.

I followed them to a room that was pitch black why would they take me to a place like this ??

Then all of a sudden lights switched on and people shouted "Suprise!" I really was suprised i never thought they would do something like this for me i could feel tears roll down my cheeks and my head was taking mental pictures for memories.This really would be a story to tell on an interview or to our kids i hope in the future.

Members and staff came foward to congratulate me of graduating and they sad that that was my last episode and just like i wanted they invited me back later on in the year.People where even giving me presents that i never thought would happen.In all this fun joy and laughter i still coudnt catch a glimsp of your tiny body."Acchan if your looking for Takamina she coudnt make it she got called to a photoshoot and a cf but she wanted us to give you this." Tomotomo said with smiles on there faces and handed me a small box and a note.

I opened the box to see the earings i have been wanting for weeks now how did you know i wanted them i only told Yuki and the two of you dont really talk.The earings went perfectly with the dress i was wearing so i put them on right away and then read your note.

To Atsuko,
Sorry that i coudnt make it if Tomotomo didnt tell you i got called to a photoshoot and a cf i really wanted to be there for you.I hope you like the earings i was stressing about what to get you until Yuki told me i really owe her for that.I finish my schedule at 8pm so meet me at the place you confessed i promise i will be there.Ive got to leave for the photoshoot now see you at 8pm.
From Takamina xx

I smiled at the note you left me you really are sweet you know i looked at the time it was 7pm one more hour till i see you again."Like the note?" Miichan asked i just nodded my head over and over making her laugh at me.

about 40 minutes later Yuko came sprinting over to me with Haruna right behind her."Come on where leaving to your secret spot now." Yuko and Haruna say pushing me out the door without giving me a chance to say goodbye to anyone."How do you know where it is?" I asked "Takamina my bestest friend in the world told me where it was how to get there and what time to take you." She boasted what a loyal friend of a squirrel you have there Takamina.

Looks like leaving 20 minutes early payed off because we just got there in time.I ran out of the car they drove me in and thanked them i got to the spot but i coudnt see you.Mabye your schedule over ran i thought looking down to the ground frowning then music started to play.

I coudnt make out what it was propely until i heard it go "Im inlove." It was Narshas im in love one of your favourite songs you always said that song got you thinking of me.Then you came from behind the tree that had our names engraved on it.You waved at me and i charged towards you jumping on you hugging you until atleast half the oxygen left your body.You of course hugged me back and then pulled away seconds later.I was a bit upset but there was nothing i could do since you then took my hand and led me to a blanket that was on the floor.

"Since your going to leave Akb48 soon i wanted to renact the day you confessed to me and do it Takamina style the only difference is that its not midnight but 8pm because you need your sleep you dont have a week off like last time." You say with a slight blush on your face the two of us then sat down on the blanket and cuddeled under the stars.I noticed a projecter infront of us but i didnt say anything until you pointed on a wall behind us and it started playing our live preformances our funniest moments on Akbingo and other shows and pictures appared every now and then.When it finished i had tears in my eyes but before i cried the projecter then shined bright on one spot inpracticular.

You had made one big picture (A/N : Like on demi lovatos give your heart a break music video at the end) of us out of little ones in the shape of a heart.I tackled you down with hugs and kisses the sweetest and most lovely person is mine and that makes me the most happy person in the world.

We ate the food you brought and talked for hours we laughed and flirted with eachother today had to be the best day of my life so far.

I know now i have caring friends and most importantly a very caring and gentle girlfriend called Takamina.

To be continued ....

A/N : Did you all like it i hope so comment and tell me what you thought and what i need to improve oh hope the song went well with the chap.
Title: Re: past present future chap 3 UPDATE 4/7/12 atsumina
Post by: farquhar97 on July 04, 2012, 10:59:24 PM
Awww  :wub: lol at first tho I didn't think she was showing up at their tree but she did yayay and lol tht song does fit in with the fic nice update :)
Title: Re: past present future chap 3 UPDATE 4/7/12 atsumina
Post by: axel0048 on July 05, 2012, 10:13:05 PM
ahhhh takamina is so sweet!!! :luvluv2:
atsumina FTW!!! :hiakhiakhiak:
Title: Re: past present future chap 3 UPDATE 4/7/12 atsumina
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on July 06, 2012, 09:14:12 PM
part 3

*Nezumi's and Mayu's house*

Mayu : Im not talking to you go away
Nezumi : What why what did i do ?? (confused)
Mayu : You know what you did (Annoyed)
Nezumi : I honestly dont know (Re tracks her steps the entire day)
Mayu : I hate you !! (Shouts and there parents run in)
Dad : What is the matter ??
Mum : What did you do ??
Mayu : She left bread crums in the butter
Everyone except Mayu : Huh thats all
Mayu : What do you mean thats all (Storms off)

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*Haruna's house*

Haruna : How could you !???
Dad : What ???
Haruna : You dont know what you did ??
Dad : Nope
Haruna : You ate my mars bar !!
Dad : (Sighs) Haruna honey the wrapper is in your hand and chocolate around your mouth
Haruna : Oh yer i ate it

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*Tomochin's house*

Tomochin : No
Mum : YES
Tomochin : No way
Mum : YES WAY
Tomochin : I hate you
Mum : I love you
Tomochin : If you did why would you bring that into this house (Points to girl in corner)
Mum : She is family
Tomochin : She doesnt look or act like that
Mum : Treat your cousin Nachu with respect
Tomochin : I hate my life (Facepalms)

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*Yuko's house*

Yuko : These are so much better than them
Brother : What know way dad!!
(Dad comes rushing in bedroom)
Brother : Which are better these or these (Points at magaziene)
Dad : Those (Points to the one Yuko was holding)
Yuko : Ha See told you !!! (Laughs victouresly)
Brother : How are we related
Yuko and Dad : Blood  (Points and starts talking about the pictures)
(Mum walks in)
Mum : Why are you looking at female breasts in those magazienes when these are so much better (Throws them all different magazienes)

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*Tomomi's house*

Tomomi : O__o
Mum : O___o
Tomomi : O__________o
Mum : O__________________o
Tomomi : (blinked)
Mum : I win the heels are mine !!

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*Takamina's house*

Takamina : When you feel like there is no way out love is the only way (Sings)
Kai : What you singing sis ??
Takamina : 2NE1's new song i love you
Kai : I love you too but what is the song name
Takamina : I love you
Kai : I know what is the song name
Takamina : I love you
(Kai gets annoyed and walks away)
Takamina : Wtf (Troll face)

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*Sae's house*

Sae : Yuki what you doing (A/N : Sae offered Yuki help with maths)
Yuki : Taking a break this is hard
Sae : Not really
Yuki : Okay look at the question (Gives Sae paper)
Sae : (Sweat drops)
Yuki : See you dont even know (Takes a picture of it and sends it to someone)
Sae : Wht did you do ?
Yuki : Took a picture (Phone beeps)
Sae : Who is it ??
Yuki : Mayu she sent me the answer i love her!!
(Sae walks away and bangs head on wall in dissapointment)

To be continued ....

Sorry i havnt updated other ones all i could do was write these quick ones i have been busy lately will update colour of her soul 2morra hope u enjoyed
Title: Re: The school life of Akb48 part 3 UPDATE 6/7/12
Post by: farquhar97 on July 06, 2012, 09:31:48 PM
It's aright I like them anyway and lol did u get the bread in the butter from drama
Title: Re: The school life of Akb48 part 3 UPDATE 6/7/12
Post by: Megumi on July 08, 2012, 09:42:28 PM
 :hiakhiakhiak: HHAHAAAHAH! Hilarious!

Mayu's house! : Pfft I totally get the bread crums joke  :mon misch:

Haruna's house: Spacing out again  :mon lmao:

Tomochin's house: Aww poor Nachu hahahha  XD

Yuko's house: Oh my the whole family are professional hentai  :rofl:

Tomomi's house:  :lol: Staring contest with her mom over a pair of heels  :rofl:

Takamina's house: Hahaha!

Sae's house: Sae the forever ignored guy  XD
Title: Re: The school life of Akb48 part 3 UPDATE 6/7/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on July 08, 2012, 10:19:32 PM
chap 3 - A vs Mayu

The girl paced around back and forth into the room ever since she had took on the case more killings were made every week in the same pattern as before 2 heart attacks and 3 random deaths each highschool students.Why where people so young dieing and why was there no avediance and most importantly who was doing it.

She had searched through thousands of school data bases to see if anyone extra ordinary popped up but no none what so ever.This person she was up against was really smart she only figured out they where in highschool because of the time table they had stopped killing in.The thing she hated most was that people began worshiping the murder calling it Kira apparently all of the people that have been killed bullied kids there age so this made it clear that the killer had to be a victum of bullying or a close friend to those who have experianced it first hand.

"A the killings have changed look."A turned around to face the person who was helping her with the case "What?" A asked and the man pointed to the screen.The deaths had changed 8 people had died in the last 6 hours and jouring the school time "This means that the killer cant be a highschooler." The man said "Wrong Riku the killer is telling us that they can manuplate death also they have someone close in the case check everyones background find out about all there family members and there history dont let any surface be left untouched also we will be now refearing to the killer as Kira okay?"She answered correcting Riku's mistake and flicking her long brown hair over her shoulder."Yes A." Then he left her leaving her with the computers and files to read and check over as she waited for the other members of her team.

Meanwhile at Mayu's house...

"Say Rena this A person really isnt that smart by now you would think that they would have found out i live in Japan."

"I dont get you Humans anyway has anything intresting happaned and where is my melon pan?"

"On my bed and yes it seems i have been given a nickname from the people Rena your now looking at Kira the saviour of bully victums and most importantly Yuki mabye i should move on to bigger better things."

"Kira sounds cool."

"Mayu Yuki is here i will send her up!" Mayu's mother shouted Mayu looked at Rena and immtated zipping her mouth which Rena understood Mayu then unlocked her door then walked back to her laptop."Hey Mayu." Yuki said cheerfully hugging Mayu from behind then kissing her cheek."You seem happy." Mayu says spinning her chair around and dragging Yuki down on to her lap."Ahaha i am very happy thanks to Kira the bullying has stopped everyone is to scared to bully anyone incase they will be next Kira saved me i have a lot to be thankfull for."Yuki says then showered Mayu with kisses all around her face then Mayu nuzzeled her face into the crook of Yuki's neck causing the latter to giggle."So you support Kira?" Mayu asked "I suppose.." Yuki replied "What do you mean suppose?" Mayu questioned pushing for an answere while tickling her arm softly."Well i mean im all for stopping bullying but why kill i mean why woudnt Kira target crimanals?"

Mayu looked past Yuki and put her chin on Yuki's shoulder to see Rena flying around the room laughing at Mayu and eating melon pan.Wait woudnt that be seen just as floating melon pan to her."Psst Rena put it down!" She whispered loud enough for Rena to hear then drop the melon pan on to the bed and Yuki lifted Mayu's head off her and shot a confused look."I said mabye Kira is getting rid of minor problems first besides if the one Kira gets rid of is hurting you im glad Kira is getting rid of it."Mayu told Yuki then kissed her cheek making Yuki blush.

"Ahh look its news on Kira!" Yuki screamed scaring poor Mayu but she then highered up the tv.

"Hello to people all around the world this is A speaking having fun Kira i hope so as i right now am your bigest threat to being caught so i dare you to kill me ........................... what you cant oh i see you need an image of me and my name okay here i am." Mayu coudnt believe anything she was hearing this person coudnt possiably be giving away there life so easy but she coudnt take the risk.Yuki was now laying down on Mayu's bed eating the melon pan as Rena looked down on her with eyes that would kill.Mayu spun her chair to face the desk then writ down the name from the tv and had a clear image of him in her head.

Then the person on the tv fell down onto the desk holding his chest and foam came from his mouth from the heart attack."Aww so i was right oh Kira congrats you just gave away your postion this was only broadcasted in Tokyo Japan no were else im going to tell you the information we have on you okay we know you have someone close to you inside the FBI second your in highschool you can manuplate death and even change peoples way to die if you wish your avarage age is 15-18 you leave no avidance that you where involed in any crime but we know you are close to a person that has been bullied or you yourself have exprinced it first hand and the last is that you live in Tokyo Japan oh and the person you just killed is a crimanal on death row also im not a boy Kira thats all the hints i will give goodbye."

With that the picture of an A on the screen flashed off and the news resumed like nothing had happaned Yuki looked shocked Mayu looked pissed and Rena was rolling on the floor laughing shouting "Looks like Kira has compertion!" While pointing at Mayu.Mayu wanted to say something but she coudnt since Yuki was there A really was putting up a hell of a fight.

And telling Mayu that she was a girl really didnt narrow anything down what was she playing at ?

"Wow A is awsome can you believe it Mayu!"

"Mabye but Kira is smarter."

"Oh i have to go my mum wants me home before it gets late bye bye Mayu."

Yuki kissed Mayu on the cheek and left the room telling Mayu not to bother to show her out.

"So what will you do Mayu ? "

"Simple kill A."

To be continued ...

A/N : thanks for reading i hope you enjoyed it comment and tell me what i can improve on and what you liked. Oh an spelling mistakes will be spelt correctly 2morra i didnt have the time to today
Title: Re: The colour of her sould chap 3 UPDATE 8/7/12
Post by: yuukimoko on July 08, 2012, 10:29:45 PM
hehe~ this new chapter was so sweet with Yuki in it~! thanks for updating~!
Title: Re: The colour of her sould chap 3 UPDATE 8/7/12
Post by: farquhar97 on July 08, 2012, 10:53:24 PM
Ahhh them killings are getting out of hand now sooner or later she will be caught
Title: Re: The colour of her sould chap 3 UPDATE 8/7/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on July 12, 2012, 10:58:06 PM
(A/N : This hole chapter is based on what actually happaned to me an my family )

part 4

*Miichans family outing*

(They where in a park)

Miichan : (Throws frisbee) Catch sis
Sister : (Catches and throws to dad)
Dad : ( Jumps up to catch the frisbee it hits his forehead he falls down cluthcing it )
Everyone but dad : LOL AHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH

(A/N : Basically i thrown the frisbee to my sister she thrown it to my dad he thought he would be cool and jump for it but back fired)

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*Tomochins house*

Nachu : Tomochin~~~~~~~ i love you
Tomochin  : Well i hate you (Glares)
Nachu : No u dont ~~~~~~
Tomochin : okay fine i dont Nachu do u wanna hear a story ??
Nachu : Yer sure
Tomochin : You where born under a cabage patch leaf
Nachu : (Tears in eyes runs over to Tomochins mum) Was i born under a cabbage patch ??
Tomochin and her mother : HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH LOL (A/N : my sister done this to my cousin)

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*Haruna's family bike ride*

(Haruna and her family where racing eacother)
Mum : Hurry up im winning ! (Shouts)
Haruna : No way!
Dad : I wont lose wait whats that ?? (Notices something different about Harunas bike)
Haruna : Ahhhhhhhhhhhh
Mum : Im winning wait is that Haruna's front wheel (Eyes widen)
Haruna : HELP !!
Dad : (Speeds up grabs Haruna's bike and slows it down until she stops)
Mum : (Stops grabs wheel goes back to Haruna and re attaches wheel)

(A/N : happaned to my sister i wasnt even born)

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*Tomomi's house*

(Tomomi's baby sister crying)
Mum : Whats wrong (craddels baby in her arms)
Baby : WHAAAAAAA
Mum : Here have a dummy (Places it in babys mouth puts baby back in cot baby stops crying and she walks away)
Tomomi : (Walks in sisters room) Ahh you have a dummy !? (Takes dummy from sisters mouth puts in hers an runs away)
Baby : Wahhhhhhhhhhh

(A/N : My brother done this to my sister except with about 5 dummys)

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*Mariko's family bbq*
Dad : Lets play a game !!
Uncle : Okay lets play drink to you think !
Auntie : Ahh okay but dont get to drunk
Older cousin : What about the younger ones ??
Uncle : They can see who can put there hands futher into the fire!
Mariko : Immature !! (Facepalms)

(A/N : I dont wanna get into what happaned in drink to you think lets just say a couple thrown up some fell over others and some coudnt stop laughing oh an my grandad was sick in his can and had to keep on drinking omg memories)

To be continued ........

A/N : I will do more family based things later on lol my family is really weird but the family bbq's are the best thing ever we start a 1 in the afternoon and finish 3-4 in the morning lol erm i hope you enjoyed full story will be up 2morra thanks for reading erm oh comment and tell me what you liked and didnt oh an what do you think of my family lol

Title: Re: The school life of akb part 4 UPDATE 12/7/12
Post by: farquhar97 on July 12, 2012, 11:10:51 PM
Lol now i see why your weired (only joking lol) and your dad catching the frisbee lol reminds me of my dad in Germany being cocky speaking German and at the end of the order he said grassieass lol
Title: Re: The school life of akb part 4 UPDATE 12/7/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on July 13, 2012, 10:06:26 PM
chap 3 - Debut

"Im so tired!" Complained Miichan.Everyone just muttered in agreement as there mouths coudnt form words."Stop moaning and get changed you filming your music videos so hurry!" Shouted Cl as she pulled Rena up to her feet off the cold wooden dance room floor.The other four barely managed to get to there feet because they fell over and over again when they tired until the 2NE1 members helped them.They thanked there unnies than ran as fast as they could to where the music videos where being filmed.(A/N : They are already in Korea) "Wait you idiots you dont know your way round here yet!" Bom shouts as herself and the others run after them.

2NE1 finally caught up with them and hit them across the heads saying "NEVER DO THAT AGAIN UNLESS YOU KNOW WHERE YOUR GOING!" The five girls just nodded to scared to open there mouths that was until one bravely did so."Erm-" But she was cut off "WHAT!" Once again frightened by there loud voices she backed down for a second then opened her mouth again "Are you going to take us to where we are filming then?" She questioned "Yes Yuko now come on before we leave you." They warned walking away and the others followed.

When they got to where there videos will be shot there mouths dropped when they seen prison bars and a orange overall for one of them.The director walked over to them with a smile shining on his face "You must be Akb's new sub group Big Bang yes?" He asked offering his hand for them each to shake."Yes nice to meet you." All of them said together "Okay well your outfits are over there for when you need to change they will be labelled with what music video and what scene they are for also they will have your stage names on them when your dressed as boys i will be refering to you as your stage names and will be calling you a he (A/N : As will i) i assume you have all read the script for each video so you know where you all be and what to do also we might tweek some things 2NE1 will be here to watch your progress and to help you oh and im Kim Ryuko please just call me Ryuko oppa." Ryuko explained with detail then let them get changed.

(A/N : Since there changed i will be calling them a he and be calling there stage name like i said before)

"Okay GD you know all you have to do is run down here right?"

"Yer!"

"Okay well lets start the first scene for Lies okay and action!"

The music started to play and GD ran at full speed and the camera zoomed along with him he looked back as he ran and faced the people that where after him he took a breath then turned a corner where a pay phone hung on the wall "Okay now dial a number and put the phone to your ear!" Ryuko shouted GD took the phone in his slotted money in quickly and dialed a random number that popped into his head.He placed the phone to his ear and seconds later his arm was pushed behind his back by the men that where chasing him."Okay and cut perfect take the others just finished filming the female part before you all came so the first part is finished." Ryuko shouted and everyone cheered "Okay next we will be fiming the part where the women comes from her apartment and you all follow and sing okay everyone get set up GD go change!" Ryuko exclamined and everyone done as he said in an instant.

Gd was changed and headed outside to the street."Okay everyone postions and action!"

The women walked speedily and GD popped out from no where and began miming the words to the song and doing hand signals that fit well with what he was doing.The two walk past TOP who was leaning on a rail with a blue jacket and Taeyang who was sitting down with a black hoodie covering his face from view they mouth the lyrics to the song without no problem and arrive to a red car with Seungri sitting on the end of the car.He sings a little then Ryuko shouts "Cut!"

"Okay Seungri get off the car and get to your next postion!"

"Okay boss!"

The music starts and he walks backwards singing the lyrics and the women acts like he isnt there."Okay and cut perfect go back inside and get into the elevator GD!"

With that said everyone made there way inside GD jumped inside the elevator and the women introduced herself."I forgot to introduce myself im Michelle Zhang." She said politely.GD smiled and then "ACTION!" Music played and took over his body and the scene was done.

"Cut go down to the carpark everyone is evreyone in big bang there apart from GD?" Inquired Ryuko "Yes!" The staff answered Ryuko smiled and pushed everyone down to the carpark.

"No mistakes so far there good."

"Of course they are Bommie unnie they are in Akb afterall."

"I know but its still impressive Chaerin."

"Hehe i know come lets go before they leave us behind where is Minzy and Dara by the way?"

"Schedule."

"OOOOOOOOOO"

GD got down to the car park and was thrown a pair of roller skates that he had to put on he quickly put them to his feet but struggled to get up so Daesung skated over and helped with a charming smile.

"Come on lets make this the best video ever." Daesung said pulling GD up "Everyone get ready!" Ryuko screamed the five boys rolled into postion and everyone was messing around until the music played.As they skated along Daesung slipped and tripped TOP up causing the two to fall the ground and have to re do the the scene.The second time Michelle tripped up on her jeans making them take a third take but that one went perfect.

Every other scene went without a hitch and all of them had fun and coudnt stop smiling the second video went amazingly and the two videos where ready to put on the music channels for members of the public to see and sing along to.
The next day video teaser where put out and everyone was going crazy to know who where the Akb members behind Big Bang.Curiousty and there fan base grew with in seconds.

2 days later both videos hit the tv and the music channels becoming number one in all and both songs becoming 1 and 2 on certain channels.Everyone loved Big Bang and people started having there songs as there phone ring tone and text tone.There music was catching everyones attention and 2NE1 where advertising the songs as much as they could.
Finally the day of there debut they where at M!Countdown early in the morning and changed into there stage clothes with no problem and 2NE1 wished them goodluck and with what seemed like seconds it was time for them to hit the stage and sing Lies!
The crowd was screaming all there names in a rhyme and there nerves rose but when there feet hit the stage they turned calm and felt at home each saying the same thing in there minds.

Lets give them the best performance ever.

The music started and they melted into the dance and song with style.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pgDY3umyoCY&feature=player_detailpage#t=7s (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pgDY3umyoCY&feature=player_detailpage#t=7s)

The song finished and the fans where ecstatic they 5 boys coudnt wait to performe Haru Haru later on.

After some more performances they rushed onto stage and sang rapped and danced there hearts out.The fans sang with them and cheered with them and there hearts with in those small minutes had became one with everyone.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQY2DFf0h1o&feature=player_detailpage#t=3s (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQY2DFf0h1o&feature=player_detailpage#t=3s)

As the song ended it was finally time for them to show everyone who they where the two guest MC's Super juniors Shindong and Snsd's Sooyoung came to the stage."Are you guys ready to find out which Akb members are Big Bang!?" They shouted and the fans screamed then started shouting "BIG BANG WE LOVE YOU SEUNGRI GD TOP DAESUNG TAEYANG!" Over and over again."Now please intorduce yourselfs." Sooyoung begged on her knees making people laugh and Shindong to drag her up.shindong handed GD his mic and GD took his wig off reaviling his actual female self."Hello everyone im Big Bangs leader stage name GD and real name Matsui Rena."She bowed and everyone clapped and started chanting her name.

Rena then passed on the mic to Seungri "Hello im Big Bangs Seungri and my real name is Minegishi Minami." She said taking the wig from her head showing her long black hair and the fans started chanting her name with Rena's.Next was TOP "Im Big Bangs TOP and Akb's leader Takahashi Minami." She waved taking her wig off and like before everyone chanted her name with the other two.Next was Daesung "Im Big Bang's Daesung and Akb's energy pill Oshima Yuko!" She jumped up and down taking her wig off and the fans did the same as they did to the others.Then Taeyang "Im Big Bangs Taeyang and Akb's CG Watanabe Mayu." Mayu took away her wig and everyone cheered chanting her name with the others.

"Welcome to the Kpop world guys please feel free to call me Sooyoung unnie."

"And me Shindong oppa the two of us will look after you."

"Ahh thank you oppa and unnie will we be seeing much of you?" The five asked.

"Where not sure but we want to be close and look after you." The pair answered.

"We would be honoured lets be close and have fun together." The five replied.

"Yup say goodbye to everyone with us." Shindong and Sooyoung said.

"Yer."

"Okay say this." Shindong said passing them a piece of paper.

"Okay ready?" Sooyoung asked.

"YUP."

"1..2..3." Shindong counted.

"Bye bye everyone thanks for watching we hoped you enjoyed everything and loved Big Bang's debut tune in next time to see your favourite idols bye bye!" They all bid goodbye waving and the last thing that was heard on the program was the crowd screaming "BIG BANG WE LOVE YOU!"

The 5 girls ran off the stage screaming and cheering they coudnt believe they just had there debut in Korea and it went so well the feeling they had made think think they could fly.

"Guys you where awsome!" 2NE1 boasted as they ran towards the girls and trapped them into a bear hug "Where so proud to have people like you as our yeodongsaengs"(A/N : For the people who dont know what it means it means younger sister.)"Thanks unnies." They all said in unison with a excited tone of voice suddenly all of there phones beeped.

"The AKB members!"

Takamina's phone :

To : Takamina
From : Acchan
OMG YOU CAN RAP!
YOUR SO HANDSOME
WHY DIDNT YOU TELL ME
I LOVE YOU
CALL ME
XXXXXXXXXXXXX

Mayu's phone :

To : Mayu
From : Yuki
OMG YOU LOOK AWSOME MAYU
YOU LOOK SO GOOD AS A BOY
YOUR VOICE WAS OUT OF THIS WORLD
CALL ME !!!!!!!!
X

Yuko's phone :

To : Yuko
From : Haruna
I KNEW AND WHEN I ASKED YOU SAID
NO
OMG YUKO YOU WHERE AMAZING
I CANT WAIT TILL I SEE
LOVE YOU
CALL ME
XXXXXXXXXXXX

Rena's phone :

To : Rena
From : Jurina
THAT WAS THE MOST AMAZING THING I HAVE EVER SEEN
YOU WHERE OMG I CANT TYPE ANYWORDS TO DESCRIBE IT
CALL ME
XXXXXXX

Miichan's phone :

To : Miichan
From : Mariko
You where good as a boy but please stay in Korea =p
oh and sorry about last week
xx

to be continued ......

A/N : Hope all of you enjoyed it thanks for reading i know i said that it was going to be the week before but i  had to write there debut lol

please comment and tell me what you like and disliked thanks.

Title: Re: AKB = Big Bang WTF Chap 3 UPDATE 13/7/12
Post by: farquhar97 on July 13, 2012, 10:34:07 PM
Wow. Lol I love this chapter and lol and the big bang taking off there wigs was dead funny :)
Title: Re: AKB = Big Bang WTF Chap 3 UPDATE 13/7/12
Post by: kahem on July 14, 2012, 02:06:58 PM
Wow I like your fics!
Some are sad, funny, interesting, wtf...ect I like all of them!
Title: Re: AKB = Big Bang WTF Chap 3 UPDATE 13/7/12
Post by: Wmatsui22 on July 15, 2012, 10:32:16 AM
HELLO...

AHM...

I'M A LITTLE BIT CONFUSED ABOUT YOUR FANFIC...

I DONT SEE THE THE CHAPTER 3 OF PAST AND FUTURE  :(

I REALLY LIKE IT..IT'S ALL ABOUT ATSUMINA...

PLEASE CONPILED IT...

THANK YOU..

I HOPE YOU REPLY...
Title: Re: AKB = Big Bang WTF Chap 3 UPDATE 13/7/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on July 15, 2012, 02:40:23 PM
Replys :

@WMATSUI22 : It should be up i just checked it is so incase you where confused beacuse there wasnt any title i put the title on it erm if you still cant find it i will pm u with the chap

@Kahem : Thank you im glad you enjoy them
 
@Adam : I am not sure how them taking there wigs off is funny but i will roll with it and i wont get payback since you where nice and put Daesung in your fic but i will if you dare make me do anything dirty

@Megumi : Lol you got the bread crums and butter joke lol awsome i got the idea fromn one of my friends drama acts wht did you think of the ones i just put up ??
Title: Re: Replys to everyone so far 15/7/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on July 18, 2012, 04:55:57 PM
part 5

*At school Jurina's class*

Jurina : I feel sick (holding stomach and looks green in the face)
Rena : Thats what you get for eating all the food (Mocks)
Jurina : Its you fault (Points at her)
Rena : Lies
Jurina : What you dont remeber it was you that fed me the the food (Questions)
Rena : Nope
Jurina : Well first you got melon pan put it in your mouth and kissed me feeding it to me making me chew it then you did it over and over again
Rena : Ahh right i forgot as my punishment wanna do it to me (Smirks)
Jurina : Hell yer (Suddenly brightens up and grabs melon pan)

---------

*Aachan's class*

(Bang)
Aachan : OW! (Screams)
(Bang)
Miichan : OW! (Shouts)
(Bang Click)
Aachan : AHH HOLY MOTHER !!
(Bang crack)
Miichan : HOW HARD AHHH !!!!
(Bang)
Aachan : ow (Sniff)
(Bang pop)
Miichan : OW OKAY YOU WIN !!!!
Mariko : Children !!
Aachan : Thats right the queen of knuckles right here !!! (Boasts)

(A/N : I played this the other day and apparently my finger  popped out of place lol so my friend Jason popped it back in hurt like hell CHILDREN NEVER PLAY KNUCKLES ITS DANGEOUROUS AND STUPID I LEARNT THAT THE HARD WAY)

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*Princables office*

Takamina : What do you want sir ??
Akimoto-p : This is our knew student Nachu please take her to her class room
Nachu : YO~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ WHAT UP~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Takamina : No bye sir
(Exits room)
Akimoto-p : Looks like i will take you myself come on.

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*Tomochin's class room*

Tomomi : I love you chiyuu ~~~~~
Tomochin : I love you to (Leans in and kisses Tomomi)
(Akimoto-p walks in)
Akimoto-p : Hello everyone erm Tomotomo stop kissing while i make this announcment please
(Tomotomo pull away from eachother frowning)
Tomochin : This best be good!
Akimoto-p : It is i would like to introduce your new class mate Nachu !
Nachu : (Runs in) HEY EVERYONE IM NACHU~~~~~~~~~ IM TOMOCHINS COUSIN AND BEST FRIEND !!!
Tomomi : Yer right Tomochin would have told me if she had a cousin like you (Mocks)
Tomochin : No she is my cousin but i just hmmm dont believe it
Tomomi : Really !? (Shocked)
Tomochin : I know right (Sighs and rolls eyes)

---------

*Gym class*

Yuki : Sae what do you want to see me for ??
Sae : Yuki i have something to tell you so please be quiet until im finished okay ?
(Yuki nods)
Sae : Okay well ive loved you since i first placed my eyes on you which means i have all my life i coudnt believe someone could make me feel so amazing until i met you (Yuki looks up day dreaming Sae doesnt notice) Your laugh makes my heart flutter and your touch makes me go insane i beg you just give me one chance to prove how much i love you and that you should be with me instead of Mayu.
Yuki : (Snaps out of day dream) What did you say *Beep* (Looks at phone) Oh its my Mayu got to go Sae bye!
(Runs off Sayaka comes up to Sae)
Sayaka : Tough luck dude (Pats back)

(Sae silently crys)

To be continued ........

A/N : Will  update propaly 2morra have six weeks off then im in year 10 thanks for reading comment tell me what you liked and where to improve thankyou !! Hope you liked it.
Title: Re: The school life of AKB update 18/7/12
Post by: farquhar97 on July 18, 2012, 05:13:01 PM
Lol well Robyn you only play knuckles if your good at it like me then you won't get hurt and about your replys would I ever do that to you?
Title: Re: The school life of AKB update 18/7/12
Post by: xxx220 on July 18, 2012, 05:43:43 PM
Awww WMatsui are so Sweet

Tomotomo is sweet too

What are Acchan and Miichan are playing ?
Even Takamina can't take care of Nachu
Title: Re: The school life of AKB update 18/7/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on July 19, 2012, 09:42:00 PM
@Adam : Your not a master at all lol and yes you would

@xxx220 : Knuckles is a very stupid and dangerous game where you hit eachothers knuckles with your own its very painfull can damage your hand but since im stupid i played it and popped my finger out of place dont play it

chapter 4 - Day by day

I had just got into my apartment from the most amazing night of my life with you.I clasped onto my bed my head hit my pellow and i instantly fell asleep with a smile present on my face.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yd0Knwur3Ss&feature=player_detailpage#t=0s (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yd0Knwur3Ss&feature=player_detailpage#t=0s)

"Im sorry but its over......."

"What your joking right?"

"No im sorry."

"Dont leave me please Minami i beg you."

"I dont love you anymore goodbye."

"Goodbye Atsuko."

I dropped to my knees tears slid down my pale cheek and dropped to the solid ground.The rain fell and masked my tears from those who stared.How i wished this day woudnt come the day where you left me.

One thing was for sure though and that was the fact my heart was torn into two.

I suppose saying that you loved me was all lies you never ment them and never will no matter how hard ive tried or will try in the future.

I was still sat at the place you left me my body to weak to stand and my phone rings every minute but my body acts lifeless and doesnt move an inch to take the annoying piece of technology from my pocket.

I never thought you would break my heart.

After hours i managed to drag myself to my apartment and lay on the couch days and days.

I love you.

I need you.

Hold me.

Touch me.

Kiss me.


I replay the words you said in my head why dont you love me what did i do?

As each day and night passes by my mind is always stuck on you the word i never want to hear you all me a friend because just being friends will hurt me even more.I havnt seen you since we broke up and i havnt been to my schedules making everyone worried.

I wonder if they know you left me that im dieing inside?

I rolled off the couch onto the floor and crawled to the window and watched the clear sun filled sky shine with all its might.I smiled for the first time in days seeing it but it was weak.

I wonder what your doing if your thinking about me.

My apartment is silent all that is heard is the tik toking of the clock and before i know it its night time and im watching the moon look down on everyone.I wonder what happanes to the stars and moon at day time do they run away hide mabye.I have got to get over you i crept to my bathroom cleaned myself then changed i had to get out.

I left the apartment quickly and let my legs take me to any where they could find.

Just my luck that they would take me to your doorstep the place i least want to be with the person i really want to see inside.I was about to knock on the door but my mind told me otherwise.But all of a sudden the door opened and your still face greeted me.

"Atsuko.."

"Im sorry my feet they just-"

"You cant skip your schedule just because where over you have response abillites just because im not your girlfriend doesnt mean i dont worry for you im still your friend."

My heart stopped and your words hit me like bullets and tears spilled from my eyes acting like blood that has been shed after the bullets hit my tired body.

"I love you Minami."

"Atsuko wait here."

You said marching away inside your house and up the stairs to come back minutes later handing my favourite hoodie that i gave to her.My cold hands reached up and took the hoodie relecutenly away from you."Im sorry but ive really got to go back inside goodnight Atsuko."Then the door closed infront of me with your frowing face behind it.

I lifted the hoodie to my nose your scent was still attached to it.

Just kiss me one more time please my baby.

Before my tears dry up.

Kiss me day by day.

------------

My eyes opened quickly and my body burned with sweat dripping off it had to be a dream it just had to be.I looked at the clock and it said it was 3 in the morning i knew you would be sleeping but i didnt care i had to check if you where still mine and i was still yours.

I snatched my phone off my dresser and quickly texted you.

To : Minami
From : Atsuko
I love you xxxx
---------------------> SENT

*BEEP*BEEP*

To : Atsuko
From : Minami
I love you too always will xxxx

Your reply coudnt have came quicker or made me happier im glad it was just dream because i coudnt live with out you.

To be continued ...

A/N : If your wondering about Rainy days i have to leave that fic for a bit coz i the website i watched Dear friends on took the movie off it so im looking for a website to watch it on lol thanks for reading hope you enjoyed please comment tell me where to improve and what you liked And yes everything was a dream.I know this isnt a very good update forgive me !!!  :bow:
Title: Re: Past present future UPDATE 19/7/12
Post by: farquhar97 on July 19, 2012, 09:52:46 PM
Lol I thought that was real I needed to read it twice at first felt really sorry for Atsuko ahhh but happy that it was just a dream and it was a awesome update
Title: Re: Past present future UPDATE 19/7/12
Post by: sakura_drop_ on July 20, 2012, 10:43:26 AM
Finally caught up with your updates. I especially loved those with Yuko-sama and Rena-sama. :heart:

Poor Sae, Yuki is so dense and cruel, though she's not aware of it. And LOL at Nachu
Title: Re: Past present future UPDATE 19/7/12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on July 25, 2012, 08:29:11 PM
A/N at the bottom

chap - 4 - You belong with me

"Takamina what are you doing?"

"Well since I learned how to rap I wanna write a song for Acchan a graduation song that shows my feelings for her an only you and her get to hear it okay Miichan?"

"Yes can I help then?"

"Yup just dont tell anyone okay since this is our only day off since or debut as Big Bang ahaha."

"Yay lets get working on it then Takamina."

They high fived and shouted "Takamii for ever!" Miichan locked the door to music booth and the pair started working hard on the song wanting to give Acchan the best song in the world.

After a couple of hours they had managed to get the name of the song and the beat of the song all was left was the lyrics and record it.

"Hey girls!" CL screamed as she intruded on them "I thought you locked the door Miichan!" Takamina moaned "She did I just picked the lock not her fault ahaha so what are you two doing anyway?"CL questioned "Writing a song for Takamina's girlfriend." Miichan pointed out while Takamina looked at the ground blushing "Awww can I help?" CL asked "Yer sure." Miichan said and Takamina started up the song and CL bopped her head to the song and started rapping little bits and writing them onto the paper."What about this for part of the chorus." CL said showing them the paper she writ it on.

Oh your the passion in my life
your the secret i cant hide
There will come a day when i say
you belong to me girl
And if i let you know tonight
it'll be alright i bet
You dont know it yet but baby you belong to me

"Wow thats awsome CL Unnie"

"I know hands in the middle CLTAKAMII on three 1..2..3 CLTAKAMII!"

*In Japan filming Akbingo*

"Ahh i miss them!"

"And yet your always complaining about them when they are together."

"Shut up Acchan."

"Sorry Mariko."

They had just took a break from filming Akbingo which was having a special segement on there now Korean/Japanese idols in other words Big Bang.On the segement every one reveals who they thought who was going to be in Big Bang and what they thought on there debut and skills and other things like that some people even cried because they miss them so much as none of them have seen them since they debuted in Korea and it didnt help that the group had became super popular over there which ment the 5 had to stay over there and do more and more promotions.And the 5 where currently number one still for a record breaking amount of weeks winning M!Countdown over and over.

And since there debut Acchan has missed Takamina like crazy.Takamina hasnt called her and when Acchan texts her she only gets short answers in reply this is honestly making her feel left out and abandoned and even making her think that she was being cheated on.But of course she never shown this to anyone not even his best friends everyone in Akb was preparing for her graduation and her telling them how she feels will just cause more problems than needed and that is one thing she didnt want.
Just then her phone lit up showing she had a message she flipped it open to see she had a voice message from none other than Takamina but before she could see what it was she was called to finish the recording for Akbingo.

*Back in Korea with Mayu*

"Go away Minzy!!"

"Did i say you could use my name without formalities?"

"Did i say you could follow me?"

"No but i want to."

"ARHG!"

*Rehearsal Room"

"1 2 3!"

Yuko started dancing to Akb48's Heavy rotation since she hasnt been able to in a long amount of time.Dancing was the only thing that could make Yuko calm and be able to think clearly since she debuted in Korea she hasnt seen or heard from her NyanNyan in along time so lately she has been feeling down but she knew she was going back to Japan in 1 week to finally do some things with Akb so she coudnt wait to see everyone and perform with them again.

Rena walked in to the rehearsal room to see Yuko dancing her heart out to the song she was centered in and instanly ran into postion and started dancing with her and her mind flashing back to great memories.

*After filming Akbingo*

Acchan ran over to her phone and popped her pink headphones into the side and read the message before she played the voice part.

To : Acchan
From : Takamina
Sorry i havnt been able to contact you or answer/return your calls
i hope this makes up for it
i love you xxxx

Acchan smiled and played the voice message.

(A/N : Just imagen Takamina rapped and sang it in english)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OHPAiOt8l9Q&feature=player_detailpage#t=2s (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OHPAiOt8l9Q&feature=player_detailpage#t=2s)

Tears streamed down her face crashing down onto the phone screen and then another message appeared.

To : Acchan
From : Takamina
Did you like it
Oh CL unnie and Miichan helped me with this ahaha
Enjoy oh this is just your song okay =)
i love you xxx

To be continued ...

A/N : Did you like it  ?? Comment say what you liked and didnt thanks for reading Colour of her soul will be up 2morra =)

@Adam : Lol cant believe you thought i would break them up

@Sakura_Drop_ : Glad you caught up ahahaha thanks for reading and anything you want in any fics like certain moments and people ???

@Wmatsui22 : Did you manage to find the 3 chapter ??
Title: Re: AKB48 = BIG BANG WTF 25/7/12 UPADTE
Post by: sakura_drop_ on July 25, 2012, 08:41:18 PM
YukoNyan moments plz  :wub: And I loved this update, thanks for posting it  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: AKB48 = BIG BANG WTF 25/7/12 UPADTE
Post by: farquhar97 on July 25, 2012, 08:44:05 PM
Lol that song goes dead well love it was a little  hard  imagine her in it that's only because I have a bad imagination :(
Title: Re: AKB48 = BIG BANG WTF 25/7/12 UPADTE
Post by: Pwety on July 26, 2012, 04:20:48 PM
i love this fic! Very interesting  :heart: :thumbup

Just have a question: in this fic What are the pairs, unless it's too much to ask? XD
Title: Re: AKB48 = BIG BANG WTF 25/7/12 UPADTE
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on July 29, 2012, 11:35:10 PM
Replys :

@Pwety :Thanks am glad you like it as for the pairs they are Wmatsui Atsumina Kojiyuu however Miichan and Mayu's im not sure I will let you choose since you asked =)

@Adam : Yes you do lol and why the hell did I clean a stable with Daesung lol in ur fic

@Sakura_drop_ : Consider the YukoNyan moments done lol and have you seen 2NE1's live preformances of I love you on youtube ??

Hey guys I will update as soon as I can ive been watching the olympics alot lately and China is doing amazing ahh also I wanna work on a fic with someone on the Jphip H!P part anyone up for it to all the silent readers thank you for reading my fics and I hope you are enjoying it as much as i live writing them oh and does anyone here watch AKB0048 I was so annonyed that it finished at ep 13 and said to the next stage in 2013 at the end lol leaving us on a cliffhanger also what would you guys think if i done a chieri and nagisa one shot ???

Oh and who knows when Acchans graduation is ??
Title: Re: AKB48 = BIG BANG WTF 29/7/12 UPADTE REPLYS
Post by: farquhar97 on July 29, 2012, 11:57:03 PM
Haha I did it because you said if I do anything dirty I swear so I did something dirty lol Btw Team Gb are doing well in football and China always wins everything anyway
Title: Re: AKB48 = BIG BANG WTF 29/7/12 UPADTE REPLYS
Post by: Pwety on July 30, 2012, 12:23:17 AM
Wait please... We talk about AKB=Bigbang right? If I am right I want to say that:

No, no, no, If you will let me a choice I choice MariMii and Mayuki (i just love this pair XD)... Wait( I really like to say "wait."  XD) you lie, you don't let me a choice because:
Quote
Miichan's phone :

To : Miichan
From : Mariko
You where good as a boy but please stay in Korea =p
oh and sorry about last week
xx
and
Quote
Mayu's phone :

To : Mayu
From : Yuki
OMG YOU LOOK AWSOME MAYU
YOU LOOK SO GOOD AS A BOY
YOUR VOICE WAS OUT OF THIS WORLD
CALL ME !!!!!!!!
X
proves that you have already chosen :sweatdrop:

I'm sorry to be so mean and say that you are lying.  Just forget what I said  :D

I'm very happy because you talk with me (well almost) XD I'm really weird XD :rofl:

hehe Update soon please
Title: Re: AKB48 = BIG BANG WTF 29/7/12 UPADTE REPLYS
Post by: sakura_drop_ on July 30, 2012, 12:37:59 AM
@Sakura_drop_ : Consider the YukoNyan moments done lol and have you seen 2NE1's live preformances of I love you on youtube ??

Yatta!! YukoNyan oncoming!!!  :wub: :wub: :wub: :bow: :bow: :bow: And yes, I watched every performance I was able to find. They are my MOST FAVORITE NUMBER ONE KOREAN GROUP, AFTER ALL. 2NE1 HWAITING!!! Aren't they awesome? Especially CL, she just brings the best on stage, she's my number one korean idol/singer/rapper!!! (enough with my rambling  :sweatdrop:)

oh and does anyone here watch AKB0048 I was so annonyed that it finished at ep 13 and said to the next stage in 2013 at the end lol leaving us on a cliffhanger

Acctually, i was not annoyed, as I was expecting something like this. We;;, I really hope Takamina be still in Takamina's position, Acchan to show up (why then she was brought up anyways, if she was not going to appear). Also, Chieri becoming sweet from time to time, I expected her to give a chance to Nagisa. And cliffhanger is a good thing, as it provides us with Stage 2. Yay for conyinuation  :sweatdrop: XD

also what would you guys think if i done a chieri and nagisa one shot ???

please write one. I'll be looking forward to it  ;) ;)

Oh and who knows when Acchans graduation is ??

If I remember clearly, on 27th of August


P.S. My 999th comment seems quite informative yet short XD oh well, I hope the 1000th will be better (I have some plans about it already XD)
Title: Re: AKB48 = BIG BANG WTF 29/7/12 UPADTE REPLYS
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on August 03, 2012, 04:47:32 PM
Past present future

chap 5 - Graduation


Today is my graduation from AKB48 this is the one day ive been dreading I havnt even been counting the days because I didnt want to be reminded of it.I mean this means I have less time with you less time to talk cuddle hug kiss why because im away from you.Just thinking about it makes my heart shatter into millions of pieces like glass im really going to miss you.

So here I am with a piece of paper and a pen writing down everything you mean to me and everything I will miss of course this isnt the end of the two of us there never will be an end to us im sure of that.

Dear Minami,
                          I think back to the past and i see the my most precious memories of me and you walking in the park holding hands watching the sunset set as we sat on the beach.

Right now im watching sleep as you cuddel yourself more in to my body if that was possiable i leanded down and kissed your forehead and all you do is crinkle your nose in response.

Now im thinking of the future.I see us getting married and having children running around in our huge garden and your parents looking after them when we want some time alone.

But right now here in the present we cant why because where in Akb48 the largest girl group in the world and the number one girl group in Japan.

Your the captain and Im the ace and our love is forbidden.

But that is going to change very soon If your wondering how im writing this im trying my best to write this on the desk next to the bed so I dont disturbe you but im going to have to very soon so we can go to our schedules.I hate the fact that are lives are going to be seprarate from eachothers there is something I want to ask you but im to scared to actually ask it since im scared of you rejecting it.

Your starting to stri a little your so cute.I took your hand in mine a looked down at your nails that where decorated with the colours of red and wite with a fake nail with the Japanese flag on representing you are supporting us for the Olympic's. (A/N : Like mine except mine are blue red and white with a fake nail with the british flag on tho im all for China!)

When we talked about it you where so hyper and happy about the Olympic's saying how amazing would it be if in 4 years the next Olympic's is in Tokyo Japan and Akb48 would get to perform and show everyone that we are top Idols.Your dreams never cease to make me smile.

This letter is going to end soon so I just want to tell you what you mean to me so here it goes.

Your my sun in my clear blue sky your the moon and stars in the night.Your the flowers that bloom in the spring your the oxygen I need to breath your a teddy bear I need to cuddle I love you always will and always have.I want us to be together in the future holding hands laughing smiling kissing and watching the sunset with eachother.


Graduation is going to change me you or our relastionship I love you.

Love your loving girlfriend

Madea Atsuko aka Acchan (your baby)

To be continued ...

A/N : Thanks for readingI love you all.Once again China for the olympics and I suppose my team im ment to support team Gb lol comment and say wht you like and what i could improve once again thanks for reading

@Adam : Lol havnt we been knocked out on the mens football ??

@Pwety : ahahaha dont worry about being weird thats fine since I am too also im working on the next chap now so the couples you asked for there will be hints of them =)

@Sakura_Drop_ : Hello 2NE1 sister I seriously agree with what you say about CL lol In the next chap Of akb = big bang yukonyan will be the main in it =) Ahh also I have read your 1000 post about Yuko-sama you touched my heart I swear I almost cried and Acchan graduation seems so little away I cant say she was my fav cause that would be a lie but Akb wont be the same without her
Title: Re: Past present Future Chap 5 3/8/12 UPADTE Atsumina
Post by: miayaka on August 03, 2012, 04:58:06 PM
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Madea Atsuko your baby
You got me here  XD XD XD
Title: Re: Past present Future Chap 5 3/8/12 UPADTE Atsumina
Post by: farquhar97 on August 03, 2012, 05:41:05 PM
Awww omg there so cute awww can't wait till the graduating gonna be good and I've Got my pink nails on come on Gb 4th now
Title: Re: Past present Future Chap 5 4/8/12 UPADTE Atsumina spell checked an replys
Post by: farquhar97 on August 04, 2012, 10:42:09 PM
And to your replies no its the women who's out and the men are going to pens with Korea :S