O.O REINA'S DEAD?!?!? O.O oh snap...and i'm guessing that the girl that cut in was ai-chan??????
You killed Reina? Well, at least I don't have to worry about any RenAi in this fic. Poor Risa, poor Ai, but at the same time.
As well as the two audiences that was watching nearby. The lips were familiar and the scent was recognizable and so she let the intruder kiss her under the piercing music on the dance floor, and let a bead of tears fall from her closed eyes.
Ai? Or Jun?
Osnap something happened to Reina? And she hasn't even make a debut in this story But this explains a lot why Ai was quite cold towards Risa and the reason she was holding back
Risa seems to like Ai a lot to be affected by this My guess is that it's Ai that kissed Risa at the end
LOL~ Indeed Reina is somewhere....but dead!
It was made especially for the RenAi Fans
*runs away*
peace people
Risa is so cute! Like a kid...trying to get attention!
- Or rather not like a kid....but a teenager trying to get the attention of the person they like?
I'm glad, I conveyed it correctly
After a while she removed the lid without blinking whilst tears constantly falling and there she saw a smiling woman meeting her gaze.
- LOL! i know it isn't so.....but I don't know why my mind came out with.... practically a smiling woman head instead of a picture..LOL..a disturbing scene!
I SO HATE YOU
Actually when I read it before I posted it, that same imagination popped out
Noooooooooooo
Well, Reina could be, right??... tell me the Yankii Princess is not dead T___T
Suimasen, but she is
Who would have thought that Gaki was such a womanizer?
I completely love her
Yeah?
u update so fast!!!
The lips were familiar and the scent was recognizable and so she let the intruder kiss her under the piercing music on the dance floor, and let a bead of tears fall from her closed eyes.
aichan?is it aichan?
you better make it aichan..
but she was so hurt perviously..
it might be JJ too..
hmmmmmmmmm
*wait and see*
nice story....
love it....
Just wait and see
and Thank you
but poor reina too..she haven even make her appearance and she is dead..
lol sorry
Okay, I read this in one sitting. *wipes sweat*
First off, Risa as a cop...droolsome to the max! At first I was a little apprehensive about Risa doing all those stuff to get Ai's attention. BUT the bit with the car break down and that kiss? It definitely changed my mind.
TAKAGAKI should get together!!
I want the girl at the end of the last chapter to be Ai but I get the feeling you're gonna pull a surprise and make it Jun.
YAY for the KameShige. If TakaGaki gets together in the end as well everything would be perfect
OMG
Did Reina just die as soon as she entered the story? At least Reina's short-lived appearance explains Ai's emotional distantness. Wouldn't mind delving more into their history and how Reina ended up living only in Ai's memory in this story. Could help Ai 'heal' up to accept Risa And Reina would have made a worthwhile contribution. Somewhat.
(I would still prefer the RenAi that almost happened )
Have you just killed Reina...?
...
WTF?!?!?!?! WHY HER?!?!?!?!
NOOOOOOO!!!
At least you could killed her a little bit later, not so fast damn, she hasn't even made an appearance
Sorry Trey-trey
CHAPTER 7“Arhg” grunted the woman who was laying on bed, head buried under a green pillow.
“Oh shit! I’m late” scrambling to sit up and hastily running into her bathroom to get change, but she froze in the middle when she passed a full view mirror. Wide eyed, she stared at her reflection and looked down to see it by her own eyes, making sure the reflection was not deceiving her.
“WHY AM I NAKED!?!” she looked around her bedroom but saw no one. She shifted her eyes back at the reflection of the mirror to double check if she wasn’t hallucinating. And yes she is definitely nude. Something strange caught her eyes and so she moved closer, it was a purplish mark below her collarbone. Upon seeing that it was a hickey her jaw dropped. She inspected her body scrupulously and yes, there were others. One was found in the middle of her chest, and several of them on her abdomen and on her thighs. Her gaze moved up and down in disbelief and what made her more frightened was the one she saw on her neck “A BITE MARK?!?”
She hysterically leaped to get her phone and dialed a number.
“ERI! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME!?!” she started when the line was connected
The other line mumbled something before mumbling lucid words. “Arhg! Gakisan lower your voice, and good morning to you too. Can we talk later I need to go back to sleep” whine the girl obviously in the middle of being conscious and unconscious.
“SLEEP? WHAT ABOUT WORK?”
“It’s our day off” Eri replied lazily
“Who’s that Honey, Gaki-san?” a sleepy voice from the background butted in.
“Yes”... “Listen, Gaki-san, I’ll call later okay”
“DON’T YOU HANG UP ON ME NOW KAME!”
“Geez, control the voice please, my head is still spinning”
“...Someone raped me...”
“Someone did what?”
“Don’t make me repeat the word, it’s giving me chills.”
Eri giggled at the other line. “It was not what it looked like last night. You were virtually towering with desire over the girl and you’re the one who’s all over her. You can’t even wait to get home so that you’ll have her all by yourself.”
“WHAT? But who? No one’s here but me”
“Oh, I forgot to ask her her name, sorry”
“You didn’t ask her? So you definitely let her rape me.”
“Geez, NO! It looked like you knew her. Wait a couple of minutes I’m coming over.”
She took her robe, covered her unclothed body with it and walked towards the window. No idea what to do next. And there she saw her neighbor’s back a few meters away, doing her morning walk.
“Why can’t you look at me the way I want you to?” and a sigh followed.
In a verge of crying Risa continued “Why do I feel so dirty now?”
The house resounded to the sound of the bell after a couple of minutes and so Risa treaded downstairs. She was then met by two woozy girls when she opened the door. One stepped in and went directly to the kitchen, and one remained still staring at the house owner.
“Are you okay?” Eri said in a soft calm voice.
“I don’t know.” Risa shrugged and looked downwards.
“Hey you two, get in here I’m making coffee.” Sayu called from the kitchen and so we got inside.
“You really didn’t recall anything from last night?” Eri asked
“If I did, what’s the point of asking you?” I snapped
“It was our first meeting with the girl, maybe she’s from another town” Eri glanced at Sayu who was sipping some coffee.
“What’s the big deal? You had sex with strangers before” now it’s Sayu’s turn to butt in.
True. I don’t know either why I’m acting this way.
Monday morning came, and Risa still feel like not going out, if only she can skip work but she can’t, Nakazawa will eat her alive. She sluggishly got up, took a shower, and dressed for work. When she opened the door to head out, she was surprised to see a jar of freshly baked cookies by her door with a note that says ‘Eat on time’ she looked around but no one was around. Glancing at her watch, she took it hastily and brought it to work with her.
When she arrived home from work later that same day, she was surprised for the second time. A red carnation bouquet was on her doorsteps with a note ‘See you in our dreams’
Right there and then, she phoned Eri.
“Eri, I think I have a stalker”
...
“How do you explain the cookies I brought this morning and this bouquet of flowers at my doorsteps?”
...
“That’s it, I’m so installing CCTV”
Not far from Risa, a woman chuckled after hearing Risa’s lines, and she continued on with her walk under the fascinating moonlight with a calm smile plastered on her face.