I have been all kinds of busy (and lazy, and easily distracted...
) and now I owe you comments for the last two chapters. Aaaaah, bad, bad Ropy. Hopefully, that ends here and now. Take a seat, because this is going to be long. Let's begin ranting and fangirling!
Chapter OneSO AI ONLY WROTE ONE LOVE LETTER.
That was the first thing I thought when I started reading, since there wasn't another letter there. So I will asume that I'm right and I'll try to stop obsessing about it
until you give me more information about it, of course. You know I love speculating about that letter To tell the truth, I wasn't expecting that much background for Ai. But WOW. For some reason you are convinced the background is boring and slow. You are soo wrong. Aside from making me want to hug badly that little stressed Ai-chan , it made me understand her
ANGST ;_; a lot more
And actually to know a lot more about her special abilites, how they work and how they affected her personality and stuff. So awesome and detailed and interesting and I love it
And her grandpa, oh my god, I love that old man. I want a grandfather like that ;_; Even if some of his reactions were half influenced by Ai, he's still awesome. Because, come on:
During the weeks that followed, Grandfather Takahashi would personally come out to greet the obstinate doctors who’d return time and again to their house. It wasn’t any old greeting that he offered; her saviour would punctuate his deceptively warm welcome by turning his head aside and hacking out a wad of spit. That was the last time she saw some of the doctors.
Grandfather Takahashi = HERO
And sorry for starting with the quote spam so soon, but here we go:
Her triumphant smile and the spring in her step for the rest of the week were worth it to them, her grandfather told her later, petting her proudly.
This was so cute, to imagine little Ai-chan like that
And then, when grandpa petted her, the cuteness factor rised even more. Really, I went all AWWWWW here
Cute, cute, I like.
The boys in class began paying attention, and so did, she noticed worriedly, other, older males (and the odd female too).
This made me laugh.
'The odd female too' she says
I don't know why but I can't help laughing everytime I read that.
It was why when after giving off negative vibes to a certain somebody who did not respond as she’d anticipated, that Ai thought she had found somebody in life to take a second look at.
And when she took that second look she discovered how beautiful and kind and perfect and everything Risa was. Takagaki love is in the aiiir ~
*chants*Talking about Takagaki love... the one month earlier scene was
but at the same time so
Yes, I use emotis because there is no word to express my mix of joy and uber sadness
I'm liking more and more this Aichan. This poor, angsty child with her deep one-sided love ;_; I just wanna hug her and tell her everything is going to be okay
*conveniently forgetting about the abuse/mind controlling <__<*. I loved the fluffy part of this scene. I couldn't stop squealing (and since I was home alone, I could squeal to my heart content
) and Awww-ing. Risa sighing in Ai's back and Ai being so nervous, incapable of asking Risa a coherent question. Word fumbling Ai is soooooo cute.
It’s Risa, hands clasped at her stomach and looking up at the ceiling. She raises her head from where it’s rested on Ai’s back for a moment, then drops back down, shifting and snuggling, finding a comfortable fit; it’s all so light, flippant, playful. Ai’s heart skips a beat.
Really, how cute is that? I'm repeating myself but I don't care ,so here:
AWWWWWWW I love the fact Risa is always trying to make Ai a more social person, even if she doesn't really wants to
In my most non-social times I fabricated some goings-out too just to stay in my house and read, or just to relax alone a little, so that anecdote amused me too much.
*huggles Antisocial Ai-chan* Risa pinches Ai’s nose lightly, noticing the way the girl flinches, probably unused to the attention. She then settles down, using her arm as a headrest, closes her eyes, succumbing to the gentle warmth of noon and the lull of sleep. Ai’s gaze remains on the bean for a moment longer. Then, with a hint of a smile, she turns away, back to her book.
It's so fluffy I'm gonna dieeee ~
Cuteness ovearload . REALLY. I mean, how come that nothing is really happening but you make it so sweet and fluffy and cute and Takagaki and omg. You, dangerous person, you always made me ship those two even harder, and I thought that wasn't possible
And I better stop with those Takagaki quotes and move on or I'll never finish... because Ai doing as the bean pleases, reading from memory just to entertain her while Risa is all "YAAAAAAAAY AWESOME" is too cute too. And the books talk too, that disney part is so adorable, and Risa is so skdflnssdfskdfjsn
, just wanting to have some common things to talk with Ai. Quoting material everywhere I tell you!
But after so much happiness... the drama comes. I hate you and love you equally for that scene
Nah, the love part will always be bigger and you know it
But it really affected me. And it still does, everytime I reread it
It's your fault for expressing Ai's pain so well. It breaks me little by little when I'm reading it ;_; Gosh, you always know the exact amount of angsty drama to use for leaving me emotionally dead. I love those little details, like the bowl of rice turning cold, it makes the situation even more angsty. The worse (and the best) is that this is only the beggining of the drama. There 's so much angst to come, I know it. And I will suffer and enjoy it
Beside Risa, Ai has always believed herself to be something of a broken person… paling in comparison, incomplete. Risa… she’s the one– has always been. Would…would Risa ever look at her?
This fic is going to kill me, seriously
And I must be a little of a masochist, because I would love to die with this.
But the next part, with Ai imagining she's talking to Risa... that was heartwrenching. Ai should have known better, that situation was clearly going to end badly. But even knowing that myself, I died a little inside too when Risa says Reina's name and poof! All the ilusion is gone, leaving only sadness ;_; The worse part of allowing oneself to daydream like that is when the reality suddenly hits you and force you to return to the real wolrd ;_; It's much more painful that way. SDKFSJNFDL MY POOR AI-CHAN
Oh, by the way, I love the way you play with the timeline. You know, mixing the past with present, with almost-present and all that
I personally love reading things write that way when they are done properly. And yes, you are doing it more than properly, you don't even need to ask .
And this... minor speculation time!
“I knew Reina was the one before I had even met her.”
Does this means she is famous or something? Or that Risa just saw her somewhere without actually meeting her? Love at first sight and all that? And what is Reina working at anyway? I keep wondering about that. We only know she's busy as hell
or just a dirty liar so... what is it? I only know she's no doctor
If I had to guess I would say she is still in entertainment business. For nothing in particular, I guess I have that image of Reina in my mind.
And what will happen when Reina is near Ai? Will super Ai empath powers push her away or what? I want a epic Reina vs Ai somewhere in this fic, I seriously need it in my life. I told you many times now but I'm looking forward to see more of this Reina of yours
Usually I'll just want to keep her out of the
takagaki way, but this time I'm really interested in what is going to happen. I don't even know why, I was pretty indifferent to Tanagaki until now lol. Now my opinion of Tanagaki is in your hands
No worries though, I will always support Takagaki <3
Before I rant about the second chapter I have to point out something. That summary of the prologue and the first chapter...
Please,
please, keep doing that in the future. I laughed so much with that. I know it's supposed to be more informative than funny but...
Bee remarks are the best!
Chapter TwoRisa point of view, I LOVE IT! Do it more! Please?
Like grac said, the contrast beetween their points of view (Risa and Ai) is awesome. It's interesting to see how different they are, they act or think. But how they have some common ground anyway
Backgrounds are getting more and more interesting with each chapter. It's so conflicting to want to know about what happened and what is going to happen at the same time. I'm always looking forward to both of them equally excited.
...and could not understand why her friends didn’t explicitly return the I love yous she gave them without pause
My life
I totally understand little Risa feelings, I had those too when I was little
But I still keep blurting out 'I love you' to my friends anyway. Probably Bee is one of the few person who return my suddens I love you without being annoyed or rolling her eyes. Bee is nice
And of course, grac, we'll always need your approval for that. It's feel better that way (?)
Awwww, but Risa is so cute, and innocent and everything
Sooo adorable! Really. Stealing glances to look at Ai-chan? Non-stop interrogating Nana-chan? Wondering and wondering about Ai? How come she didn't fall for her and end up with Reina later? She's the one who was interested in Ai in first place <__< Maybe not in
that way at first but... it could totally have gone there.
Talking about Ai's sister... She seems like a potential dangerous character. I don't know, I'm sure she can explode anyday and make poor Ai-chan life even more miserable. It sure has to be hard to life with someone who dislike you so much when you can actually feel that even more accurately that anyone because you have yaay-amazing-empath powers. Oh, and I approve Mako and KonKon cameo here! It's nice to see those girls here too <3
Back to Ai vision, Ai missing grandpa is Awwwww too. I said it up there, but I'll say again. I love him ;_; I love the relationship between both of them. He can understand Ai so well, without actually talking too much. I can imagine Ai being all clingy in her own way when he went to visit her. Cuute. And her relation with her grandmother... lol I guess a lot of us have that kind of relationship. No matter how many years pass, grandmothers always act like that
The first real Takagaki interactions was sooooo fangirlable. I actually had to stop reading and fangirl. Inner squealing and all that, you know me
And this, this, so much cuteness from the Risa.
This bean spotted them from across the yard, her face lighting up, plump with a rosiness that could be seen a street or two away.
Aw
Again, your skills to write Ai's feelings during this whole scene left me speechless. It's not exaggerated, not too much, it's the perfect way to explain, to describe it and make the reader feel what Ai was feeling
It's amazing. And I would have love to see Ai's face when she discovered no matter how hard she tried she couldn't push away Risa. Poor nervous and cornered Ai-chan
If there weren’t so many ice cubes slipping down her stomach, she may have been able to mumble some excuse to leave. But she couldn’t, and she didn’t, and as her veins ran with ice water, she slowly lowered herself back down.
I loved this part way too much. Just pointing it out
And then, more takagaki cuteness. The kind of cuteness that made you sigh and wish for a forever happy ending
I still don't know if I want a happy or sad ending though. I'm not sure if I will able to decide on that someday. So many conflicted feelings with this fic...
Ai would never know if Risa had sensed the same – that, even though they got along quite cosily, there was often a startling tension between them, thick and disquieting. And just when she felt that there was something going on that the bean would sooner or later feel obliged to act upon, Risa would shatter the illusion with noisy questions about boy crushes and trendy haircuts. Ai’s smile shrank a little.
Oh my
one-sided takagaki
Was Risa really oblivious to all this? Or just did that on purpose because she wanted to stay oblivious to it? For some reason both things seems possible
Whatever the case, she never noticed anything? Really? In all that time? Not even with the love-letter? Okay, it was anonymous,but at least it made her more conscious about the people around her, right? I mean, if she wanted to find out who sent it. And when she started going out with Reina and stuff? Or fangirling Reina? I'm sure she fangirled Reina before they started going out
Surely Ai couldn't pretend to be happy about all this... or can she? I feel like speculating a lot again.I NEED MORE BACKGROUND STORY
Each stumble upon happened so fast, so surreal, and the older girl was always left shaking her burning head afterwards, having been rendered dumb by Risa’s nearness, Risa’s touch, Risa’s beautiful, brown eyes on her.
I looove this. Those casually halls meetings are so
Poor Ai-chan, always waiting for it, but never really prepared for it when it happened. I can picture Ai perfectly in that situation and awwwww! Aww too for birthday gift scene! I love the way Ai loses her composture when Risa does something she doesn't expect her to do. Cuute. I want to know what it was! Surely Ai still treasures it
That year, Ai made a lot of progress with her sister too.
Oh?
Really? Interesting...
They hadn’t talked in two years.
AND SUDDENLY THIS. WHAT THE HELL IS THIS. YOU ARE EVIL.
I understand Risa was busier, but but... two years! You should stop hanging with grac so much, you know? She's rubbing her not caring evilness into you
I love you and your evilness anyway grac. No, really, this shocked me. Luckily I know they are roomies later, so I can be at ease. But this only makes me question more what exactly happened. Because that love-letter seems to be the trigger of what is going to happen. That damn letter, I can't help but obsses about it
I'm wondering again if that's really the only letter she wrote. ARGH. And... somehow Risa knew it was Ai? I don't know what to think about it. I mean, why then she got closer to Ai again if is not for that letter? But at the same time I don't think she knows. But then again, what happened that make them become closer again. Oh god, I don't know anymore.
WHAT HAPPENED THEREEEEEE
Better move on before I start with the crazy theories
It's interesting that there are so many things happening one month earlier before the day in the prologue. I mean, it could have been two months earlier for example
What I'm trying to say is that alll those things are related and was what made Ai start to think about what she finally did in the prologue. Maybe? But I said no more speculation for now, lol . MOVING ON ~
(The good news is: Gaki-san likes mutants!)
I told you already, but this made me laugh out loud. And my mom looked suspiciously at me!
The line before about mutants made me want to chuckle but with this one I couldn't stop it anymore. The way Ai's mind works is too funny sometimes.
KAORIIINN
You know, I think I was waiting the whole time for her to made a pun, even if I knew she isn't like that here
Blame grac >__> But I'm so happy that she's the one helping Ai-chan along with Kemeko and great Nakazawa Yuko
I approve Yuko fawning over Ai-chan anytime. I want to see it! I want to see the three of them in action! OG love, yaaay!
I adore Kaorin here too
How she treats Ai-chan, how she KNOWS about Risa
That little talk was amusing, even if Ai-chan was stressing herself out. I must be an evil person too, because I enjoy reading Ai so defensive about that subject. The fact you know how to write it perfectly helps too. Aww <3 Overall this conversation let us (and Ai herself) know a lot more about her powers, it's pretty interesting . I remember I began reading this thinking
'Yay I still have a lot to read ' but suddenly it wasn't that much
That means I enjoyed it a lot, so I guess it's not that bad... And empaths! Empaths are so interesting too. I have been researching as welll
I cannot wait to see what will happen. Gosh, I love this fic. This plot. This everything.
*dies in happiness*OH, BUT...
I won't forgive you for ending that chapter there. Evil cliffhanger is evil. Because I was all happiness and inner squeals and then suddenly there was no more to read. No matter how hard I tried to scroll down, no more words appeared. And I was left traumatized and in great sadness.
Well, maybe it was something a little less dramatic. You saw my reaction anyway
It's not like the explanation is all that neccesary, because you can understand from the talk but... but it's still interesting and I wanted more!
Even if I already told you countless times but I'll tell you again because you use to forget it easily (please read it with the proper dramatic pauses):
THIS. IS. AWESOME. At first I thought this fic wasn't going to be very complicated plot-wise. You know, loads of angst, mind controlling, sex, more angsty drama, and yaaay!
Yes, there was drama and there was angst but then there was too that love letter that made me over paranoid, and then there were backgrounds (epic backgrounds with epic family members) for the characters, and it was no longer only mind controlling, because Ai was a super
empath and that is awesome, and everything was fantastically written and I was like
'Oh my god, this is far better from whatever I could have imagined, I want to no know what is going to happen, what happened, what is happening, I WANT TO KNOW EVERYTHING AND I WANT TO KNOW IT NOW SKDFNSLKFDSNLFDN' And now I don't know anymore, I just want to kidnap you and convince you to spoil me everything (and I know you wouuuuld!) because there are so many things I want to know and so many things that could happen. But that would be bad, because this fic is too good to do that. So I'll wait
Just know that little spoilers are allowed and appreciated >_>ANYWAY.
What I was trying to say before I got sidetracked is that I love this fic, and I love the fact that is
YOU who is writing it. Because if it wasn't Bee, I'm sure this story wouldn't be as amazing as actually is. Because aside from being the reader who everyone would like to have, you are an awesome writer too. Your writing skills are awesome Bee, it will never cease to impress me ;_; So please keep being like this forever
And... I guess I'll tell you. I wasn't struggling with the comment. I was struggling with a drawing. Sorry for not telling. It was supposed to be a surprise, but... meh. It's taking me longer than expected. I didn't want to comment without it, but I was starting to feel bad for make you think I was having problems with the actual comment. So yeah, expect a random fanart, if I'm able to do it properly, and expect a bad random fanart if I'm not able to do it properly
I swear to god I'm starting to hate criss-crossed legssadknfasdaskfd
I love you Bee! I will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter~