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~Welcome to Immortal's randomness World of One-two shots~
ONE-SHOTS:
Hana Mendol 1 (Kai/Mizuki) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg915363#msg915363)
Hana Mendol 2 (Persona) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg928450#msg928450)
Hana Mendol 3 (Riku/Yuko) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg928659#msg928659)
Dr. Watanabe (MaYuki) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg915872#msg915872)
Team A (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg925019#msg925019)
A Train of Thought (AtsuYuu) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg930612#msg930612)
Heat of the Night (W Matsui) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg935876#msg935876)
Message for You (KaSae) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg939964#msg939964)
It's not love, it's a habit (Rie/Sasshi/Aki) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg945216#msg945216)
Ace of Hearts (AtsuSae) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg966460#msg966460)
To Be Honest (MariHaru) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg976806#msg976806)
To Be Honest: Part 2 with you (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg977500#msg977500)
Deeper Impact (KumiNon) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg981694#msg981694)
I Wish... / I Should Have... (SaeYuki) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg993290#msg993290)
My Fallen Angel (KojiYuu) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg1002954#msg1002954)
Blinded by Love (AtsuMina) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg1060250#msg1060250)
Blinded by Love: Be My Valentine (AtsuMina) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg1153589#msg1153589)
OS Challege requests:
~All requests are welcome I will try my best in completing them, please leave a comment with a pairing and 4 words of your choice)
apparently: Acchan + Yuko (Train, Bus, Coke and Purse)
Keichan: Acchan + Sae (Cheese, Dishes, Mattress and Poker)
Flean: Acchan + Takamina (Smile, Blind, Ribbon, Kiss)
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^^ you really wrote it! haha Thank you!! for taking in the idea ^^ LOL kai x mizuki!! WOOT lol they're moving along quite fast tho ;) nice haha love how it eventually ends up back as atsukoxminami =) lol now i demand you post your other fic! XD
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One-shot: Hana Mendol (Kai/Mizuki)
“How did I get myself into this mess?” Kai thought as she walked through the gates of her new school, Osaka Gakuen.
*****
“Hey Mizuki, when is your new roommate arriving?” Nakatsu asked while sitting on the empty bed, Sano used to occupy.
“Don’t know, Nanba-sempai only told me I will be getting a new roommate.” Mizuki replied while reading her manga.
“I wonder how Sano is doing, so lucky get to go on special training for high jump while touring around the world for a year.”
“Hey didn’t you say you have a date with Komari from St. Blossom’s?” Mizuki asked.
“Oh NO! I’m going to be late,” Nakatsu jumped off the bed and ran out the door, on his way down the hall he passed by a short blond hair guy carrying a few bags. ‘That must be him’ he thought as he did a double take at the height of their new addition.
*Knock* *Knock*
“Come in, the door is open” Mizuki said not getting up from where she is reading her manga.
“Erm, Hi?” Kai said as she opened the door .
“Hi, I’m Ashiya Mizuki, nice to meet you,” Mizuki’s head appeared from above to greet her new roommate.
“Takahashi Kai, Nice to meet you,” Kai said with a bow, before moving her stuff inside.
Mizuki continue to watch her new roommate unpack behind her manga ‘he looks cute, even if he is a little short’
“Would you like me to show you around before dinner?” Mizuki asked while she put away her manga.
“If it isn’t a bother,” Kai answered with a smile.
They walked around the dorm, to help Kai get familiarize with her surroundings then headed out to the garden.
“Wow, it feels nice out here” Kai lift her arms up to stretch her back to loosen up her muscles from carrying all her bags and made a motion to sit down on one of the white benches.
“Don’t sit on that bench its bro…” Mizuki tried to warn Kai and pull him back but it was too late, he end up tumbling back as the bench flipped over dragging Mizuki down as well since her hand is still holding onto Kai’s arm.
“AHhh,” Kai landed on her back and felt another weight landed on top of her, she looked up to see Mizuki on top of her, they stayed in the position staring at each other, so close they can feel each other's warm breathe. Kai can feel her own heart pounding as her new cute roommate lay on top of her, making no move to get up.
Mizuki finally snap out of it when she notice she is still lying on top of her new roommate. “Sorry, are you hurt?” Mizuki quickly got up and extended her hand to help the other up.
“I’m okay, sorry for dragging you down, didn’t know the bench would flip,” Kai said quickly while turning away as she felt a bit flushed, missing blush from her roommate at the same time.
“.. It’s almost dinner time, let’s go back to the dorm.” Mizuki said as she heading back, making sure Kai is still following her.
Back at the dorm, Mizuki introduced Kai to Yuujiro, “This is Yuujiro, he usually is only friendly around Sano, me and girls,” Mizuki said as she crouch down to pet Yuujiro, but Yuujiro padded past her and jumped on Kai, licking him on the face. “I guess he likes you too,” Mizuki chuckled as she watch Kai play with Yuujiro.
*****
After dinner, Kai decided to go out for a walk for some fresh air, since this afternoon her thoughts have all been about her new roommate, Mizuki. After her experience with Ray, she has already accepted the fact she likes girls, but this sudden attraction to Mizuki is throwing her off. Sure Mizuki does give off some feminine traits but how can there be a girl in an all boy school? Of course Kai’s mind is so occupied she forgot that she is currently also cross-dressing and attending this all boy school. Somehow as her mind wonder, her legs took her back to the garden beside the bench from earlier.
“Yuujiro!” Kai turned around to see the golden retriever running towards her dragging Mizuki along, Kai kneeled down to play with Yuujiro a bit before standing back up to greet her roommate.
“Hi, seems like you and Yuujiro found me,”
“More like Yuujiro found you and dragged me along,” Mizuki said while giving Yuujiro a glare.
“You don’t want to see me?” Kai asked a little disappointed.
“No, no, of course not, I mean I want to see you,”
“Really?” Kai asked, and Mizuki nodded. Yuujiro suddenly started to run in circles around them and his leash caught them in the legs pulling them closer together. Mizuki placed her arms around Kai’s waist to hold them steady, she looked down and is caught in another staring match, she looked down onto those inviting lips, trying to fight the urge to taste them.
“Kai, I know we just met but it seems like I’ve known you forever,” Mizuki said as she lowered herself to capture those lips with her own, gently at first until she felt Kai respond to her. Next thing she know she felt Yuujiro crash into her from behind, pushing them off balance and onto the ground. Once again Mizuki laid on top of Kai with her arms still around Kai. Yuujiro barked a few times to get the two’s attention, that’s when they heard footsteps and voices getting louder coming in their direction. They quickly got up and patted the grass off of their clothes, looking up in time to see Nakatsu return from his date.
“Hey Mizuki what are you doing out here so late? Oh hi you must be the newcomer. I’m Nakatsu Shuichi” He quickly ran up to the two and introduce himself, lucky for the two it is already dark so he can’t see the blush on their face.
“Hi, Takahashi Kai” Kai said as Nakatsu draped his arms around her shoulders.
“So you are Mizuki’s new roommate,” he stated.
“It’s getting late, we should head back” Mizuki suddenly said dragging Kai and Yuujiro with her, just seeing Nakatsu’s around Kai make her feel unease.
The rest of the night the two didn’t really say much to each other, they took turns in the shower, Kai went first and when Mizuki came out Kai was already sleeping. ‘Probably tired from travelling and moving in’ Mizuki thought as she sat beside Kai’s bed to admire his face under the moonlight.
“I wonder if you will accept me if you know I’m a girl” Mizuki whispered to no one in particular.
*gasp*
When Kai heard that she couldn’t stop herself from being surprised, her original thought was to pretend to be asleep so they won’t have to face the awkward atmosphere but this isn’t something she expect. When Mizuki realize Kai is still awake and heard what she said she quickly made a motion to get up and leave but a hand grabbed onto her arm preventing her from leaving. Kai sat up and looked up at the standing Mizuki.
“Mizuki…. I’m not who you think I am….will you still like me if I’m a girl too?” Kai asked while looking at Mizuki’s confused face. She pulled Mizuki forward and place her hands on her own chest. Kai closed her eyes as she heard Mizuki gasp in surprise after removing her hands from her chest. Kai prepared herself for rejection after Mizuki found out she is a girl too but instead she felt a hand lift her head up and a felt familiar lips against her own. Unlike the first time, they were a lot bolder fighting for dominance, somehow Mizuki’s hands end up under Kai’s shirt while Kai had her’s around Mizuki’s neck, eventually they had to break apart to catch their breath. They just stayed like that looking at each other, before breaking into giggles.
“Mizu…” Kai started but was cut off by a peck on the lips from Mizuki.
“Atsuko, please call me Atsuko,” Mizuki said, as she hugged onto the smaller girl.
“Only if you call me Nami, for Minami.” Kai replied with a smile.
Acchan weaved her arms around Nami and rested her head on her shoulder, Nami put an arm around Acchan after pulling the blankets over the both of them, both drifted off to sleep as they gave in to exhaustion.
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Hana Mendol
Part 2 (Persona) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg928450#msg928450)
Part 3 (Riku/Yuko) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg928659#msg928659)
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aw i got tricked there XD
yay kaixmizuki kawaii :grin:
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OMG that's so cute! :luvluv1: :on gay: You did a good job on this fanfic :on GJ: Now I want a sequel if possible, pretty please :hee: :on hypto:
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I like it!!!!!!!!!!!
I want a sequel too!
There is someone who want write an hanakimi fict with the AKB as the boys?
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Got bored while sitting here at work, so end up writing another one-shot, a very appropriate setting for an appropriate time as I happen to be inside a hospital right now :lol:
I know I said I'll update my other fic tonight during my break so.... will get onto that soon :wahaha:
One-Shot: Dr. Watanabe
Mayuyu once again checked herself again the mirror in the room to make sure everything is in place and she is presentable before stepping out into the halls to start her morning rounds. It has been a while since she started to wear this wig and cross dress for work. Even though she herself is a fan of danso, that isn’t the reason why, as a fact it is easier for her this way.
“Good morning Dr. Watanabe,” one of the nurses greeted the young doctor.
“How is Kashiwagi-san doing today?” Mayuyu asked.
“The girl has been doing a lot better since she regained conscious, she should be discharged soon” the nurse replied.
“Hmmm, I say in the next few days,” Mayuyu said as she look through the charts in her hand.
*****
Yuki sat there looking out the window of her room at the same old boring scenery, she has been here in the hospital for a while now, since her accident, she looked down at the cast on her leg, in the next few days that should come off too. She check the clock again, wondering where the young doctor is, usually by this time the doctor will already be here. Everyday Yuki watch the young doctor gently examine the patients in the room with a smile on her face, those glasses on her small face, her black hair and white lab coat. What Yuki don’t understand is why the young doctor dress in male attire when clearly her features are so pretty, that anyone will have a hard time resisting. Just as her brain continue on its tangent on random thoughts about the young doctor, the door slide open and in walked the main character of Yuki’s thoughts.
“Good morning” Mayuyu greeted the occupants in the room, she picked up the chart hanging at the end of the bed of the closes patient and started to go over the details, followed by a quick assessment. After writing down some orders she moved onto the next bed.
Yuki watched quietly, she love how diligently the young doctor worked, her genuine smile, the gentleness she has towards her patients, even when they are rude, her kindness outshines those other doctors that Yuki has met during her time of recovery.
“Good morning, Kashiwagi-san, how are you doing today?”
“Good morning, Dr. Watanabe, just call me Yuki,”
“Yuki-san, it seems like your leg is almost healed, we will get an x-ray next week and if all goes well we can take it off, then you would finally be free,” Mayuyu said as she check the charts, “Do you have any other discomforts?”
“Does being stuck inside, on a hospital bed count?” Yuki joked, she watched the doctor giggled a bit. The doctor walked up to the head of the bed, and took out her pen light.
“Okay, I want you to look at the light, I’m just going to check your eyes,” Mayuyu said as she placed one hand on the side of Yuki’s face, slightly lifting her eyelids while the other flashes her penlight by the eyes to check the reaction. Mayuyu repeated the action for the other side, to confirm both side are functioning with no concerns.
While Mayuyu was doing her assessment, Yuki sat there enjoying the close proximity of the cute doctor, her face started to flush a little that went unnoticed by the doctor as she is concentrated on her assessment.
“Yuki can you lie down for me, I need to check your abdomen as well,” Mayuyu asked, then placed her hands over Yuki’s abdomen and applied pressure to make sure it doesn’t feel distended. ‘wow her waist is so thin, she needs to eat more’ Mayuyu thought, making sure to not let her hands roam, fighting the temptation, Mayuyu moved to examine the leg to make sure there is not extra swelling.
“Every looks good, there isn’t any extra swelling on your foot, once we get the cast off, your, leg might still be a bit weak but shouldn’t be a problem,” Mayuyu said as she finish writing up some orders in the chart. “I’m glad you recovered.” Mayuyu lingered in the room just a bit longer before heading out to check her other patients, somehow she found herself attach to her young charge, since she took over her care.
“Thanks, Dr. Watanabe,” Yuki smiled at the doctor while she left the room.
*****
*A couple weeks later*
Yuki struggles to walk down the sidewalk with a pair of crutches, they had already checked her over again and decided she is good to be discharged, and out of all the days they choose to let her go, it’s the one where her best buddy is too busy hanging out with her mirror tower to pick her up. ‘Sigh’ Yuki continue to try to work the crutches as she slowly made her way down towards the bus stop, at this rate she will probably make it home by sun down.
While moving at her ant speed she notice a car slowly pulled up beside her and stopped, the windows rolled down and Dr. Watanabe’s face came in view.
“You look like you need some help, didn’t you say you have a friend that can pick you up?” Mayuyu asked the struggling girl.
“Something came up and she can’t make it,” Yuki said surprised, the doctor remembers what she said a few days ago.
“Here hop on I’ll give you a ride,” the young doctor said as she got out of the car and help Yuki into the car while throwing the crutches in the backseat. The car drove off after getting the direction to the tall girl’s resident.
“Dr. Watanabe, why do you always dress like a guy?” Yuki finally asked as the question that has been on her mind for a while, looking over the suit the doctor had on with her signature black hair and glasses.
If Mayuyu was surprised by the break of silence and question she didn’t show it at all, she just smiled and quickly glanced at the girl beside her. “It makes work easier, especially when dealing with those older population, they aren’t as accepting to female doctors as the younger population.” Mayuyu explained as she kept her eyes on the road.
“Here we are,” Mayuyu announced, “hmm do you need some help,” she then ask taking note of the few steps in the front that leads to the front door.
“Hehe.. I think I will be able to manage,” Yuki said unsure of herself as she stare at those steps that she need to climb up, help would be nice but she can’t ask that much from the doctor, she already got a ride home.
“Here, let me help you,” Mayuyu got out of the car and help the girl out after grabbing the crutches out from the back. Just as Yuki tried to reach for the crutches, a hand stopped her, before she know she had one arm around the shoulder of the shorter girl while a hand snaked around her waist to help support her.
“Dr. Watanabe!” Yuki said surprised by the sudden closeness, she can feel the soft shoulders throw the thin material of the dress shirt the doctor is wearing.
“Please call me Mayu-chan, we aren’t in a hospital anymore,” The danso girl looked up and smiled at the taller, before helping her up the steps to the front door.
After struggling to get the door to open they stepped inside the dark corridor of the house. Luckily Yuki had her friend come clean it up a bit a few days ago, or they might step into a house full of webs and dust. Yuki tried to reach for the light switch but tripped over a few pairs of misplaced shoes just as she braced herself to face the hardwood floor, she felt hands took a hold of her. With the new traction and support, she twisted a bit and ends up slamming against the wall, but she didn’t feel the hard and cold material of the wall. Yuki placed both hands on the wall to support and steady herself when she notices a soft layer of flesh in between her and the wall.
Looking down with the limited light from the windows she came face to face with her cute doctor, her body seem to lost control of its function, as her heart started to pound, forgetting to breath as she continue to look intently into the eyes of the beautiful face only a few cm away. Mayuyu lean forward, noticing Yuki closed her eyes seemingly expecting certain events to happen, she moved slightly towards the left and whispered into the girls ear with a sly grin
“If you forget to breath, allow me to teach you,”
Yuki turned her head to the side to only to feel warm flesh press into her lips before, they were release back to freedom. The taller girl was shocked from the recent develop of events, she could feel her heart skip a beat and stopped for a second.
“If your heart stop, I am trained to do CPR, I do pristine chest compressions ” Mayuyu whispered again to the stilled girl, as her hands moved up to rest around the slim waist, while she wait for the girl to come back.
“If I'm going to die, will you save me?” Yuki asked.
“With a touch of this finger, I’ll definitely cure your sickness,” Mayuyu said as she lifted her finger and pressed it to Yuki’s lips, then hugged her while resting her head on the taller girls shoulder.
“Mayu-chan… can I see you… you without the wig?” Mayuyu nodded as she allow Yuki to take out the pins from her hair and slowly pull the wig off, letting her long hair flow down, back into place.
“You look better without the wig,” Yuki said before capturing the girl’s lips, it was short and gentle. Mayuyu’s hands have already made their way under the girl’s shirt, massaging the abdomen muscles as they made their way up.
“Stay,” Yuki said then added “Dr. Watanabe please take good care of me.”
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That was hot! (For me it is)
Ahh I miss Danso. Dr. Watanabe is pure smexy!
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@ AAAice: I'm currently wishing a Dr. Watanabe work at my hospital, then I would actually be happy to be at work haha
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That was hot! (For me it is)
Totally agree with that... XD I like your OS!!!! :twothumbs
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Great!!!! The last sentence made me smile
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While reading the CPR sentence >>> OMG !! I just love it >//<
I love Mayuki kekeke
Thx !!
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OMG~ it's Watanabe sensei~!! :inlove:
and~ MAYUKI MAYUKI MAYUKI~!! XD
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So here is a short random scribble that I did when I was sitting around at night waiting for a friend to reappear after giving me a brb....... it was a very long brb :lol:
After the last MaYuki OS with Dr. Watanabe, here is a very random OS for Team A as a result of youtubing late night. Came across a few behind the scene camera for their first Janken elections notice how Aamin was with Shi-chan and Sasshi for most part so here goes.
One-Shot: Team A
It is the weekend and some of the girls on Team A have gathered together for their weekly bonding, surprisingly the normally packed kitchen only stood a lone figure working diligently to prepare food for the night. This week they choose to gather at the Oya resident as they decide against the idea of crashing at the Kojima resident for obvious reasons.
Shi-chan stood at the counter cutting up some vegetables when she felt a hand tap her in the shoulder. After putting down the knife she turned to see a smiling Akicha.
"What is it Akicha? Do you need something, you should be outside with the others, I have everything taken care of here."
"Shi-chan, can you cut up this cabbage for me?" Akicha pulled out a giant cabbage from behind and placed it on the cutting board. Shi-chan looked at the cabbage then back at her adorable team mate, knowing the other girls obsession with the sound of cutting cabbage she can only agree.
Taking out a bigger cutting knife Shi-chan decided she can add some coleslaw salad to their menu since last time they made cabbage soup.
"Are you ready?" Shi-chan asked, watching Akicha pull up beside her leaning closer to the counter with ears out ready to hear one of her favorite sound.
With professional skills Shi-chan started cutting into the cabbage, luckily her father trained her well, each piece cut nicely with the same fine distances apart, leaving perfect strips of cabbage on the cutting board. Shi-chan can hear the happy giggling coming from beside her as she concentrated in processing this giant cabbage, a smile slowly creeping up to her lips, she really like it when her team members are enjoying themselves.
The two at the counter were so absorbed in cutting and listening they failed to notice another body enter the kitchen behind them.
Sashihara or Sasshi, came walking in with an empty cup looking to refills her drink, but stopped when she came across the scene in front of her. A frown made its way to her face, as she watched Akicha lean in closer to their 'no damage' team mate.
"Getting jealous?"
Startled by the sudden question, Sasshi turned around to find their team’s youngest member leaning against the kitchen entrance, with a deliberate smile.
"I...I don't know what you are talking about," Sasshi silently cursed herself for sluttering but an idea came up to mind to get back at the taller girl.
"Oh I know you just want me to go drag Akicha away, so you can be over there," Sasshi grinned as she watch the girl choke on the water she just happen to be sipping at the time.
"*cough* Sashiko... *cough* you must be hallucinating," Aamin said while she recovers from her near water choking incident.
"Hi girls when did you two come in?" The two by the entrance turned to see Shi-chan and Akicha looking over to them with interest.
"Ahh.... I came in here for some water," Sasshi said while quickly making her way over to the refrigerator.
"Errrr... I came to see if you need any help..." Aamin said.
"Or more like see if there is anything to eat!" Sasshi pointed out from behind the open fridge door, "I swear you Maeda's eat a lot."
Aamin just stuck her tongue out at the older girl, which Sasshi took the challange and started to make faces back. The two continue to battle each other until they got distracted by the sound of laughing from Shi-chan and Akicha.
"Is the snacks ready yet?" the kitchen occupants turned to see Acchan sticking her head out from behind the door to check on her preys.
"Speaking of the devil, here comes the other Maeda," Sasshi joked as Acchan made her way towards the counter, their short captain in toll with an apologetic look.
"Sorry, I couldn't keep her out of the kitchen, she was getting hungry and Haruna was occupying the PS3 shooting down monsters." Takamina replied as they watch Acchan pick up some uncut celery and started eating while passing one over to Aamin.
"That's okay, we all know our ace is unstoppable." They joked as everyone started to pitch in and help before their W Maeda finishes the food before it’s cooked.
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Haha so fun to read! I mean, I haven't read any Akicha, Shi-chan, Sasshi, Aamin in some fics. (Well to Sasshi I did read some) but hell yeah this is really entertaining, with all Akichan Cabbage obsession. :]]]] Damn, I love Shi-chan from start when she's still a Kenkyuusei way back the old times. Also to Maeda Ami and the members that appeared in this OS.
The jealous Sasshi and Aamin. xD
Ami and Acchan's stomach!!! Haha, yet I haven't seen Acchan in some ways to eat a lot.
LOL at this. 'Haruna was occupying the PS3 shooting down monsters' Glad Yuko isn't there to disturb Haruna in her serious gaming.
More more OS!
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that so cute!!!
I didn't know Aamin eats alot too :grin:
Can you write more of this please!!!
I want the continuation....It's so interesting!!! I love Team A bonding time XD
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quit denying XD it's all over ur face hehe
Team A's bounding is hard to break :lol:
waiting for more
btw back to reading and commenting only XD
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LOL~ :rofl:
Please update soon~ :twothumbs
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team k is more relevant to me T^T
lol jk~ haha so random, nice to see some of the team a bonding time. sasshi getting jealous keke, i like (;
now where's that atsuyuu one shot LOL
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So as requested from way back, I slowly pieced together a two-shot continuing from where I ended the night for Kai and Mizuki and gave it a name. Somehow my boring night shifts always come in handy when I'm only on standby, it means people are healthy and getting better and of course more
studying writing time :twothumbs
For those that like to listen to music while reading, no3b - 3 seconds is recommend XD
For those who haven't read the beginning its the first OS post here (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg915353#msg915353).
One-Two Shot: Hana Mendol (Persona)
“Mizuki, WAKE UP! You are going to miss breakfast!” Nakatsu shouted running into the room, he looked up and found Mizuki’s bed empty, confused as to where the cross-dressing girl is, he hear a groan from the side.
Turning to look in the direction his eyes almost fell out, in his line of view is Mizuki snuggled up with Kai her head resting on his shoulders, her arms around the her smaller roommate, while his arms lay loosely over top of hers. Shocked is an understatement, Nakatsu felt like he was just hit by a wave, as he spend half of the last school year chasing over the girl but end up losing to Sano who just took off around the world. Then another half a year to get use to their best friend status and suddenly he finds her in the arms of her new roommate that she just met YESTERDAY!
While his mind and body goes through the tremors, Mizuki started to stir, she used one hand to rub her eyes while the other is still around the sleeping Kai, “What is it Nakatsu” she asked still drowsy from being woken up.
“Morning… Late… Breakfast…” Nakatsu tried to form a sentence but failed miserably as he tried to comprehend the scene in front of him. The fact that Mizuki is in bed with her NEW roommate so soon after Sano left, his brain just won’t function.
“Ahh!,” Mizuki tried to get up but found herself held down by a pair of arms, then she remembered last nights event and the fact that Nakatsu is standing right there staring at them, she turned away to hide the forming blush on her cheeks.
“Errmmm, we will be down in a minute,” Mizuki said as she lightly nudge her sleeping bed mate “Nami, wake up she whispered into the girl’s ears making sure Nakatsu can’t hear what she said. From his view, he just saw Mizuki lower her head towards the sleeping boy, leaving enough to imagine as he mind went through all possibilities of what she can be doing from that angle.
“Nakatsu, do you mind leaving, I need to get changed, we will be down in a minute.” Mizuki asked the statue that stood tall in the middle of their room.
“Oookay..” Nakatsu sluttered before leaving the room, and closing the door behind him.
Once Mizuki is sure that Nakatsu is gone, she leaned over and kissed her sleeping beauty, to raise her from her deep sleep. After spending a little time together, they decided it’s time the grace the rest of the student body with their presence down in the dining hall.
*****
When they both stepped into the dining hall, everyone suddenly went quiet as they wonder who the shorty beside their resident cross-dresser is, it doesn’t help the fact that they are walking a little too close for stranger comfort.
“Good morning! This Kai, my new roommate our new dorm mate,” Mizuki introduced casually.
“Takahashi Kai, good morning and nice to meet you.” Kai said with a bow. At this time members from dorm 1 and dorm 3 started to pile in and from the crowd emerge two familiar faces.
“Riku! Kuu! What are you two doing here?” Kai shouted in surprise.
“Eh! KAI!” The two exclaimed in surprise.
“Hey you know each other?” Nanba asked, as the three just nodded.
“President sent us here, something about being friends with the principal and they needed more students,” Riku explained.
“But why are you in dorm 2? Shouldn’t you be in dorm 3 like us for performing arts?” Kuu asked.
“Hi, I’m Kai’s roommate Mizuki,” Mizuki broke in while playfully throwing her arm around Kai. Riku and Kuu quickly turned to look at each other to confirm that they just saw some guy with his arm around Kai and he didn’t seem to mind.
“Kojima Riku, nice to meet you,”
“Minegishi Kuu,”
“How do you know each other?” Mizuki asked again curious as to who these two are as they seem close to Kai.
“We are Persona!” the three said together with a smile, they haven’t done that in a while since they announced that they are disbanding.
“Ehh!” this took the students of Osaka by surprise, never would they though they will get idols in their school.
“Now that you mention, you three do resemble Persona, but he seems so much shorted in person,” third dorm leader Oscar Himejima said pointing at Kai.
“Who are you calling short!” Kai shouted ready to run and tackle the all flashy dorm leader, if only Riku and Kuu aren’t holding her back.
“Kai,” Mizuki said while putting her hand on her aggressive roommate, and to Riku and Kuu’s surprise, Kai immediately stopped struggling and turned to look at her roommate.
“I’m hungry lets eat,” so together they sat down at a table, leaving two shocked past time idols standing in the middle.
“Now that everyone is here, we will make an important announcement,” Nanba said with the other two dorm leaders at his side, cheers can be heard throughout the hall.
“Our annual sport festival is coming up and as usual the three dorm will be competiting against each other,” Himejima said uproars can be heard on either side of the room, signalling the high energy of each dorm
“Last year we put together a cheer with Mizuki to boost moral and energy before the event, this year we will be doing the same,” Tennoji explained to the already excited students.
“This year our principal also ask that Persona, make a special performance for the audience as well,” Nanba finished as he glanced over at the three members.
“HUH!” “EH!” “WHAT!” was all they heard from the members of Persona.
*****
After breakfast, Riku and Kuu dragged Kai away, saying that they need to plan and practice for their performance. Even though Kai was reluctant to leave Mizuki’s side, the other two did make a good point, they haven’t practice together in a while and they don’t want to look rusty in from of an audience.
“So who’s this Mizuki guy?” Kuu asked?
“Just my roommate,” Kai sluttered,
“You are lying!” Riku pointed out, “even when you were with Ray, you still looked uncomfortable when she had her arms around you.”
“Plus you totally calmed down when he placed his hands on your shoulder!” Kuu added, while looking at the silent Kai trying to avoid the question.
“I thought we were here to practice our performance,” Kai tried to dodge the questions.
“Don’t try changing topics on us, it won’t work,” they slowly advance trapping Kai against the wall. Even though Kai was reluctant to leave Mizuki’s side, the other two did make a good point, they haven’t practice together in a while and they don’t want to look rusty in from of an audience.
“So who’s this Mizuki guy?” Kuu asked?
“Just my roommate,” Kai sluttered,
“You are lying!” Riku pointed out, “even when you were with Ray, you still looked uncomfortable when she had her arms around you.”
“Plus you totally calmed down when he placed his hands on your shoulder!” Kuu added, while looking at the silent Kai trying to avoid the question.
“I thought we were here to practice our performance,” Kai tried to dodge the questions.
“Don’t try changing topics on us, it won’t work,” they slowly advance trapping Kai against the wall.
“You like him!” Kuu suddenly said, while Kai just turned away to look towards the side, a blush slowly making its way to her cheeks as images flash by her mind.
“You are blushing! You totally have the hots for him… but I thought you like girls? Well he does look a little feminine,” Riku said with one finger tapping her lips while in thought.
“We should start practicing,” Kai pushed pass her two friends and started to warm up.
*****
“Ahhh, why am I here!”
“Quit whining, and start taking pictures, Hara-san won’t be happy if she knew you are slacking on the job again,” the taller of the two photographers said as they stood at the bleachers of the annual Osaka sport festival.
“But Mariko I don’t want to take pictures of sweaty guys,” the shorter of the photographer whined again.
While the two were having their own conversation, the music started as students in cheerleading outfits came running onto the field for their performance, with Mizuki in the center. The audience roar in excitement as they watch the guys do their routine in perfect sync. The crowd all stood up and applaud for the guys when they finished their performance.
“Thank you for coming to our annual sport festival, this year we have a special treat for all of you out there,” the principal said through the mic in the announcing booth, “let us welcome PERSONA!”
The music started again as three lone figures made their way to the middle of the field, “Thanks for coming, We are Persona! Here we bring you 3 seconds!”
“sanbyou mitsumeru dake de
otoshite miseyou ka
omae no ai nante
ore no omoi doori sa
manazashi no NAIFU ga sono mune wo tsuranuki
me no mae no otoko no toriko ni naru yo
dare mo minna nozonde iru
tooi dokoka tsurete itte hoshii to
sanbyou mitsumeru dake de
mahou ni kakeyou ka
risei wa suitorare
sugu ni ugokenaku naru
sanbyou mitsumeru dake de
otoshite miseyou ka
omae no ai nante
ore no omoi doori sa
………..
sanbyou mitsumeru dake de
mahou ni kakeyou ka
risei wa suitorare
sugu ni ugokenaku naru
sanbyou mitsumeru dake de
otoshite miseyou ka
omae no ai nante
ore no omoi doori sa”
By the time they finished their performance everyone was up on their feet, cheering and whistling for the three. It has been a while since anyone has heard them perform.
“See they weren’t so bad right,” Mariko said but never received a reply, “Yuko?” she turned to look over at the empty space beside her, the smaller photographer missing from her spot.
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WOW persona is there :mon XD:
lol at nakatsu :mon ignore:
I wonder where did Yuko go :lol:
Sorry if this turtle is not updating her fics, many probs need to be resolve in my union :bow:
(now i'm starting to hate being Union Master) :mon headbang:
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So the last part to this Hana Kimi + mendol mix, freshly completed just tonight at work again. I hope its okay, kinda wrote it while I'm already tired from being here at work all week, just a few more hours and I will be 50% into my 120hours... yay 1 week complete just another week left OTL.
This is the only thing keeping me awake right now......
For those that haven't read the first 2 parts they are here:
Part 1 (Kai/Mizuki) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg915353#msg915353)
Part 2 (Persona) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29940.msg928450#msg928450)
One-Two-Three Shot: Hana Mendol (Riku/Yuko)
“Hey Riku, why do you look so paranoid?” Kai asked as they walked to class.
“She is still stalking me,” Riku replied while looking left and right.
“She?”
“Yuko” Riku answered.
“Yuko?”
“The girl that started following her since the festival, she even found our room.” Kuu said while munching on some snacks.
“Majide!” Kai said surprised.
“You mean the one that attached herself to Riku that day and wouldn’t let go?”
“Ahhh” the three members of Persona nearly suffered a heart attack as they turned to see Mizuki beside them.
“When did you appear?” Kuu asked.
“I was here all along, you just didn’t see me because you were so concentrated in eating your snacks”
“RIKU!!!!!!”
Kai, Mizuki and Kuu turned to watch an energetic blur speed across their vision and crashing into the running Riku, resulting in both of them on the ground. A sight that has become quite common, that the three just continue to walk ahead towards the school, ignoring the cries for help while the shorter girl happily snuggles up to the body under her.
“HOW COULD YOU THREE LEAVE ME THERE!” Riku shouted at the three when she finally made it to class, her clothes a mess as she struggles to catch her breath.
“Come on Riku, how could you resist such a beauty,” Nanba said as he tries to recall the features of Riku’s lovely stalker, his hands unconsciously started to twitch as drool started to make it down the corner of his mouth.
*BANG* *Crack*
“Stop imagining,” Riku said after purposely slamming her bag into the back of her sempai’s head causing him to smash into the desk in front of him, cracking the surface from impact.
“Nanba sempai!” Nakao shouted running over to check his fallen sempai.
“Stop pretending, you know you enjoy it,” Nanba sudden reappears in front of Riku only to come face to face with a textbook.
“Is that what they call facebook?” Kuu asked while she pokes at the twitching dorm leader.
Class quickly started when the teacher entered the room, but Riku wasn’t paying attention to the lecture, her mind keep flashing back to the girl that has pushed and shoved her way into Riku’s life. Thinking back to when they first met how Yuko end up nudging both Kai and Kuu to the ground when she jumped onto Riku, she really literally pushed and shoved her way to Riku. Since then that girl has been there by her side everyday, from Sunday to Saturday, not one day goes by without some ‘skinship’ as the girl calls them. Even when Yuko appears tired, the minute Riku appears she seem to suddenly regain her energy, although Riku has caught Yuko a couple times falling asleep while snuggling up to her.
“Riku, RIKU!” Kuu shouted into Riku’s ears snapping her out of her thoughts.
“KUU! Do you want to kill my ears!” Riku yelled back.
“I’ve been calling you for the last min, class is already over, come on hurry before they guys finish all the food!” Kuu said while tugging the spaced out Riku along.
*****
“Kuu, stop taking food off of Riku’s plate,” Kai said as she watched Riku poke at her food, occasionally looking up to scan her surroundings.
“Riku are you okay?” Mizuki asked as she also notice the change.
“Yuko,” Riku said softly as she checks again to see if the girl is hiding in the dining hall.
“Hmm now that you mention it, I haven’t seen Yuko since this morning… doesn’t she usually appear after school and stick around until Mariko-sama comes drag her away” Kuu said before grabbing another piece of chicken off of Riku’s plate.
Riku frown as she looked over to Kuu, while the others might think it is because Kuu is stole another piece of chicken, Kai on the other hand knows better, it’s not the chicken that Riku is troubled about.
*****
Next morning they still haven’t seen any signs of Yuko, Riku is beginning to get worried if something happen to her stalker. She sat in class but wasn’t able to concentrate in lecture at all, her mind filled with images of Yuko, it has just been one day and she already miss the girl.
“Riku you okay? You are so out of it all morning,” Mizuki asked.
“You know Mariko-sama said she was coming today at lunch to take some cover photos,” Kuu said while checking the time on her non-existing watch.
Riku ran out of the classroom to find Mariko, she need to know where Yuko is, her disappearance has been bugging her since.
“Mariko-sama!” Riku shouted ahead to the photographer.
“Hi Riku, were you looking for me?” Mariko asked as she watched Riku run towards her already short of breath.
“Mariko-sama……” Riku paused wondering if she should really ask, “Do you know where Yuko is? I haven’t seen her since yesterday.”
“Yuko she is in the hospital right now, she was caught in an accident yesterday, a car sped out of control and headed straight for Yuko and…” Mariko didn’t get to finish as she watched Riku turn around and ran out of the school.
*****
An hour later Riku finally stood in front of the door to patient Oshima Yuko, after checking almost every nearby hospital, she finally found Yuko. Opening the door she walked in to find a pale Yuko lying on the bed, eyes closed with bandages wrapped around her forehead. She walked over to the side and sat down to look at the peaceful girl examining the girls face, this is the first time she see Yuko without a smile, without her usual dimples. Riku picked up the girls hands to hold them in hers, she stood up and kissed the girls forehead where the white bandage is secured.
“Yuko, please wake up, I miss you,” Riku said trying to hold back her tears, this is not the same energetic squirrel she has gotten to know.
“Funny that it’s only been a day, but I miss you, I can’t get you out of my head, I don’t like it when you aren’t with me, I can’t deny that I can’t be without you anymore, I love you,”
Riku leaned forward ready to kiss sleeping beauty only to find those lips met hers half way, shocked by the sudden pair of lips on hers, Riku failed to react, taking a step back she tripped over the chair and fell. Riku looked up to see a smiling Yuko sitting up on the bed, wearing one of those thin patient gown that fails to hide the beauty underneath.
“How…. Wha…. Huh….Yuko?” Riku gave up after failing to properly form a sentence, all she can do is staring at the girl that she thought was unconscious just 3 sec ago.
“Riku, did you mean what you said?” Yuko asked with a smile that Riku missed.
“I thought you… Mariko told me you got hit by a car?” confused by the situation Riku slowly stood up and walked over to Yuko.
“Eh? The car drove into the pole close to where I was and while I was trying to dodge I twisted my ankle and hit my head ….” Yuko trailed off, staring straight ahead trying to avoid Riku’s eyes but couldn’t help sneak glances over only to see a fuming Riku.
“Sorry I didn’t mean to get you worried… I told Mariko not to tell anyone,” looking down at her hands she started to play with the white sheets, scared to face the angry Riku.
It pained Riku to see Yuko like this, its really not Yuko’s fault Mariko tricked her, purposely making it sound like Yuko was in critical condition and it was more her own fault for not letting Mariko finish her words. It was just during that time, when Riku heard Yuko was hurt her body just moved on its own, the adrenaline that rushed into her body, the autopilot that took over her function, the only thing in her mind was Yuko. Making up her mind Riku walked over and sat down at the edge of the bed.
Feeling the bed shift Yuko lifted her head and turned towards the side to meet the eyes of Riku, she felt long arms wrap around her, the sheets that was just in her hands gone and replaced by warm hands waiting to be held.
“Sorry, I was worried,” Riku said as she tightens her hold on the smaller girl, feeling the familiar warmth and scent that she grown addicted to.
Yuko turned around to make her way onto Riku’s lap, once she settled comfortable she wrapped her arms around Riku’s waist with her head resting on the shoulder.
“Riku, I love you,” Yuko said not daring to look up, for the first time she felt shy to confess her love, the same three words she had repeat many times to Riku.
“Yuko,” Riku looked down at the girl in her arms, only to quickly direct her sight to the wall behind the girl, hospital gowns are really just cheap thin fabric made for easy access. After calming down her heart and breathing, Riku recomposed herself still feeling a bit of the heat when she felt the girl shift on her lap.
“Yuko, I don’t want to lie to you, but you need to know this, if you don’t want to see me after I understand but my name isn’t Riku and even though I go to Osaka Gakuen an all boy school and I wear a male uniform and…” Yuko finally decided she heard enough of Riku’s rambles and silenced the girl with a quick kiss to the lips.
“Riku, do you think I really can’t tell? I’ve known since the first time I hugged you. These hands can tell and these don’t lie” Yuko said as her hands went straight for Riku’s binded chest.
“Yuko!” Riku blushed then slapped the girls offending hands away before wrapping her arms around the girl securing her roaming hands to prevent them from moving.
“Riku,” Yuko snuggled into the taller girl, purposely rubbing her face across the front a couple times, Riku thought about pushing her away but decided against it, only once she will let it slide.
“Yuko, call me Haruna,” she leaned in to kiss the girl on the cheeks then trailed down planting gentle kisses down her jawline, and finally taking her lips.
When they finally broke apart Yuko smiled then pulled Haruna down with her so she can snuggle up to the taller girl. Slowly Yuko drifted off to sleep protected by the warmth of an angel, the smile never left the girls face. “Nyan Nyan”
Haruna smiled as she watch the Yuko drifted off to sleep, before pulling the blanket over them and wrapped her arms around the girl keeping her warm. Haruna couldn’t help but love the feeling of Yuko’s warm body entangled in hers, for once those cheap thin materials used for hospital gowns are appreciated.
Kuu turned over to Mariko and smiled, “See I told you it will work,” referring to the two love birds in the room, “now how will you thank me for saving you from headaches?”
“How would you want me to rewards you,” Mariko said as she pushed Kuu against the wall, with one hand on either side of her head, making sure to put as little space between them as possible.
Kuu looked like a Gachapin caught in headlights, frozen on the spot unable to respond due to the close proximity of the taller girl, she shivered when she felt Mariko blow lightly on her ears. Looking up to Mariko’s challenging stare, Kuu already know this is one battle she have no intend on winning.
“Do as you wish, Mariko-sama.”
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I LOL'd at "Gachapin caught in headlights." LOL! That's so funny. LOL THE MENTAL IMAGE! xDDDDD
This has been very awesome! I hope you update soon! xD
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As expected from Riku or should I say, the oh-so-ever-denial-queen Kojima Haruna. She could not remove Yuko away from her... heart? xD
LOL my eyes widen and I blurt out a quiet 'EH?' when I was eating in a restaurant as I read the part where Mariko said Yuko had an accident. My friends looked at me weirdly the moment I said my fav. person had an accident and it's just a story. -.-
Damn, Persona is back!!! >:]] I miss them.
Uff, MariKuu/MariMii is always smexy when always together.
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Riku/KojiHaru....so tsundere as always
I also said EH!!! out loud too.....but good thing I'm at home, reading it XP...but seriously I really thought she had an accident and suddenly lose her memory kinda thing......but good thing nothing like that happen!!!
I'm happy to that we got to see the Persona again!!!
I want more of them!!!
and of course Kai and Mizuki moments too!!!
update soon
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This makes me wish there was more Mendol kojiyuu or Riku/Yuko lol
Ah I like crossover fanfics~
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why it had to end? :(
mmmm :cry:
but anyways i love your fic! :cow:
please update something soon! XD
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heeeee????? its end already??? :cry: :cry: :cry:
make the mari-kuu first onegaiii.... :cry: :cry:
i like this fict :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin:
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awww, you should just make this an ongoing haha ^^, everyone seems to have their own pairings, and it's nice to see a mendol/hanakimi cross over. poor nakatsu though ):
though i still have to come back and crash your house again because i haven't watched mendol yet OTL. still waiting for atsuyuu! :twothumbs
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arisa03 thanks, I was initially going to leave it as deer caught in headlights but I think Gachapin fits better.
AAAice MariMii/ MariKuu always seem like an interesting pairing to me. LOL reading on your phon :twothumbs
blughise If I made Yuko loose her memory then I will have to write so many more pages of story :lol:
Kid_Alpha this crossover all started with a random idea from WinterAir
cmze thanks for liking my fics. :thumbsup
sorakamiya thanks sora... hmmmm MariKuu............. why does my OS section start to feel like another ongoing story XD
apparently no I'll just leave it as OS so I update whenever.
So here is my AtsuYuu pairing challenge from apparently, the requirement being it must be a AtsuYuu pair and the story must contain the these items/object/words: Train, Bus, Coke and Purse. So from these given requirements I came up with this OS. The girls might seem a bit out of character as if they were their normal self you would be reading an AtsuMina and KojiYuu story.
The story is written in Yuko's POV
One-Shot: A Train of Thought (AtsuYuu)
Everyday early morning I waited at the station for the first train to arrive, I would get there at the beginning of twilight before sunrise waiting for that train. I don’t care that it takes me more then an hour of commute to school, I don’t care if it isn’t the best school I can go to. I just want to be on that first train so I can see you.
I sit a few rows in away facing you, when the doors open the wind flows into the train carrying the smell of your perfume towards me. The fresh graceful scent of lilies overloads my senses as it spread to every corner of this confined space. I love it so much I went looking store to store, but none of them are the same, yours is different its fine touch leaves a stronger impact.
My eyes wonder over to the window, there your perfect reflection allows my eyes to linger on you. I take in the sight of your perfectly straighten hair, your absolute stunning eyes, your beautiful smile, your cute nodding as you fall asleep to the gentle rocking of the moving train.
When the lady pushes her cart around asking if you want anything to drink, you would always ask for a can of coke. I couldn’t help but ask for one myself as I watch you sip your coke with a satisfying smile, I never really like coke before but I love the ones they serve here, the taste is much more pleasing. Sometimes I wonder if you ever notice me sitting here watching you, dreaming and waiting for a miracle.
I wish we will never have to go our separate ways and that this train never comes to a stop. I dream that one day you would cuddle in my arms and put your head on my shoulders. I want to tell you what my heart tells me everyday, I wish that you would stay by me. Stops after stops, station after station I pray that one day you would realize that I am always here waiting for you. I glance at your reflection again from the windows after every station, but no matter how many stops we go through you never seem to take notice of my existence.
Today is no different from any other day, I sit here listen to the humming of the train softly caressing my ears while I watch you order your favourite drink surprisingly you chat with the lady longer then usual before bidding her with a thank you. The lady then made her way over to me with her cart.
“Can I have a coke please?” I asked just like every morning but the reply is not what I expected.
“Sorry we are out of coke today, would you like something else?”
“No that’s okay,” I replied trying not to sound too disappointed, unintentionally my sight ended up on the ground, dissatisfy with the change from our routine.
I didn’t even notice when you made your way over but I love the way you tapped on my shoulder to gain my attention.
“Can I sit down?” you asked with my favourite smile.
“Su..Sure,” I quickly move my bags to clear the seat for you.
“Thanks,” you sat down beside me, I feel like I’m in heaven when you are so close I can feel the heat from your arms on the rest beside mine. I was lost for words, I didn’t know what to say, I just sat there as stiff as a rock not daring to make any movements, afraid that it might scare you away.
You placed your can of coke in front of me, “I notice you always order a coke too, the lady said this was the last one,” you told me.
“If you don’t mind, we can share?” you suggested with a bit of hesitation. Surprised by your sudden request I finally looked up to meet you in the eye, captured by their charm I can only nod, agreeing to whatever you suggest.
“Maeda Atsuko, nice to meet you,” you introduced yourself, your hand out waiting for mine.
“Oshima Yuko, nice to meet you too,” I slowly moved my shaking hands towards yours and finally coming in contact with the soft gentle hands.
“I notice you always take this train too, do you go to Akihabara48 Gakuen too?” you casually asked trying to break the silence as you sipped out of the same can of coke.
My hands shake while I held the can of coke, the thought of placing my lips on that same rim, isn’t it an indirect kiss. At the moment my lips touched the can, my heart felt like it was ready to dive out of a plane.
“Yes, I go to AKB, I’m in class K,” I told you, still staring at the coke in my hands, wondering if this is just a dream.
“I’m in class A,” you replied, but you probably didn’t know I already know all this.
I tried to distract myself by looking out the windows but your presence continues to attack my senses, I can still see you from the reflection of the window, I can see us for the first time. It didn’t take long for you to start drifting off like you normally do, your head started to bob until it neatly landed on my shoulder, shortly after your arms made their way to hug onto my arm, snuggling closer while you used my shoulder as your pillow. This is my paradise, my hand reached into my purse to pull out my phone, quickly taking a photo to remember this moment of heaven.
We missed our stop but I couldn’t get myself to wake you up from your peaceful sleep, you look so comfortable and welcoming I could only close my tired eyes to rest them for just a short while.
Under the spell of darkness, I am sure I heard your voice calling for my attention, those three words clearly rang through my ears. I wasn’t hallucinating, it wasn’t a dream, I am certain I felt your soft lips on mine, your warmth still lingering after you pulled away, I was positive that I wasn’t delusional until you shook me awake by my shoulders. Was it really a dream? I can’t be certain anymore.
“We missed our stop, sorry I fell asleep,”
“Where are we?” I ask while looking around.
“We are at the terminal station, I use to come here a lot,” you said smiling before grabbing my hand and pulling me out of the train.
“Maeda-san, we should get head back we are already late.”
“Call me Atsuko or Acchan, can I call you Yuu-chan? Come let me show you the field,” you said full of excitement, ignoring the fact that we already missed first class.
“Okay,” I said giving in, it’s not like I enjoy class anyways, and school is so boring.
You brought me to a field of lilies, they looked wild yet tended at the same time, and the random arrangements of colors seem intentional yet casual. The sight is beautiful but I can’t decide which was the better picture, the flowers or you. I watch you freely stroll through the field of gold, taking time to smell each flower, smiling to the warmth of the sun and swaying to the gentle breeze of the wind.
We cross the field and there located down the hill is a bus stop, you slowly came to a stop in front of the sign and took a seat on the bench.
“Come have a seat, the bus won’t be here for while,” you said as if you remembered the bus schedule by heart. I quietly sat down next to you, the affectionate afternoon sun slowly sapping the last of my energy and my heavy eyelids once again threaten to drop.
“Here just rest, you look tired. I’ll wake you up when the bus arrives,” you said as you directed me to rest on your lap, my small body perfect size for the bench to hold. Everything feels so right that it seems so fake.
“Yuu-chan?” you tenderly called my name.
“hmmm…” the only response from my sleepy mind.
You kissed me again, I can feel your lips on mine, this time I am sure, I confirmed it, I can taste the flavour of your lip gloss, but before I can fully return the favour you withdraw yourself.
“Acchan…” I started but your finger silenced me.
“Just go to sleep,” you slowly ran your hand through my hair, tracing the contours of my face as I drifted off to sleep….
“Yuko, YUKO!! YUKO!!!” I was shaken awake from my sleep, rubbing the sleep from my eyes I came face to face with…., “Sae?”
“Come on, practice is about to begin, we have a play to perform in a few weeks with class A,” Sae said as she pulled me up from the chair I was sleeping on.
I looked around to see the rest of the class buzzing around getting read, while some stood around holding onto their scripts. I scanned the room for you and finally found you next to your class president, the two of you look good together, you with your arms around her shoulders. So it was all only a dream, only my imagination, I can feel a pierce in my heart as it slowly sink to the bottom, I guess it was too good to be true.
Taking one more glance at the two of you, I made my way to my purse to turn my phone off before practice begins. I opened up my bag and two piece of paper fell out as I went to take out my phone. I don’t remember leaving anything in my purse so I picked them up to see what they are.
They were train tickets…… I quickly looked up to see you staring back at me with that addictive smile, I immediately flip open my phone to scroll through the photos and sure enough, there is one of you and me just like my dreams....but if the photo is here then it wasn’t a dream….
“Yuu-chan hurry we are about to start,” you shouted over to me with a wink.
“Coming!” I smiled as I turned my phone off and ran to join you.
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apparently: I hope I didn't disappoint you with this OS, they are a hard pair to put together since they are normally both the dominant and demanding ones.
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SAVING SPOT SAVING SPOT BRB COMING BACK AFTER I FINISH READING
:OMG: :barf:
OMG MY OTP♥
idk why you say you have horrible english because judging from this piece of FINE LITERATURE RIGHT HERE, you certainly don't D: there were a few grammar things i noticed but that's because i'm nitpicky, it didn't take away from the story at all. SRSLY THIS IS SO GOOD I JUST LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS OK ; _______ ;
i was spazzing and squealing and aww-ing the entire way through :shy2:. you kept me on my toes there, wondering whether it was a dream or not and it looks like it wasn't but maybe the entire thing was just a dream but IT ALL SEEMS VERY REAL TO ME :on gay:. i want to say so much more because I HAVE SO MANY FEERINGS but i can't just express it all in words ok wow.
thanks sososososo much kira for writing this omg i'm still creying my perpetual tears :gyaaah:
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omg Dx you almost gave me a heart attack!
>.> throwing us off like that! keke but in the end ^^ it's atsuyuu~ xD this oneshot is sooo cute! makes you feel a tug in your heart!
lol sigh >.> u made me for the first time feel like that i didn't want sae to be part of a story >.> geez...
great job on the fic! and your mission totally went so well! you used the coke so well in the story :twothumbs
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NICE
You put it up :grin:
definitely one heck of a pair, this two! XD They are really difficult to write but you did....AWESOME!!!
good job on writing this beautiful story :twothumbs
I'll be waiting for your next fics
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WOOOOOO!!!! AtsuYuu!!! Is it me or I've never read an AtsuYuu scene before?!
Can I just stop my lking for Kojiyuu and start loving AtsuYuu instead? :]] Gee, the OS is so beaufitul even though you make me go mentel inside when I saw Sae's name as I was thinking, Oh hell to the No it's just a dream after all! And o the part where Atsuko is with the Class President. God, I cried when Yuko saw the train tickets and when Atsuko shouted over her name. xDD
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apparently: glad you like your OS, your request was so hard and those random words too! Doing OS request is so hard, always afraid its not good enough.
WinterAir: Haha, its okay you survived the heart attack. At least it brought you out of hiding.
blughise: Thank you, keep waiting more will come I hope....
AAAice: Thanks, I don't think I read a AtsuYuu scene before, it was all a requested by apparently. I think the best part is when Sae appears because of everyone's reaction to her name. :thumbsup
So here it is an OS that I promise ShibuyaDokiDoki. I hope it's okay... it doesn't feel up to par when I was writing it, I can't tell if it's because I'm still tired from working too much or my brain is failing me. Please let me know what you think.
One-Shot: Heat of the Night (W Matsui)
Matsui Jurina, sat quietly in her room in front of her desk filled with exercise booklets and textbooks but her concentration is distracted by the light of the summer sun shining brightly into the earth’s atmosphere. The warm breeze from outside carries the fresh scent of blooming flowers into the room, while the delicate chirping of the newborn songbirds, Kinglets, travel sweetly into Jurina’s sensitive ears. All in all, her mother’s demand for her to improve her school grades during the summer becomes nearly an impossible task. With all these distraction, Jurina can only dream to be outside running across the perfect pack of green green grass, riding her long board down the heated cement and jumping off cliffs into the cool ocean water by the local beaches. Instead here she is, grounded and stuck indoors sitting in front of a stack of paper and new textbooks that look like they have never been flipped.
Breaking her trance of looking at the beautiful scenery separated by a thin piece of glass. Jurina poked at the same piece of paper that has been lying there since this morning with doodles edged around the sides. She sat slouched on the chair with one hand on her chin supporting her head up, her normally cheery smile replaced by an absolutely bored expression. Suddenly her phone started to vibrate and quickly followed by a message alert tone.
[Hey Jurina, we miss you! Lets hang out we are meeting at Infinity tonight! See you there!]~Kumi
After checking the message Jurina decided to head downstairs to check and see what her mom has planned for tonight. Knowing it is a saturday night, her mom is bound to be too busy with plans as usual, giving her the best chance to sneak out tonight. She head over to the fridge to grab a cup of vegetable juice and drank it slowly in the kitchen as she eavesdrop on her mom’s phone conversation in the next room.
“How about you come pick me up tonight at 7?” her mom’s voice travelled to the kitchen for Jurina to hear. Quickly Jurina made her way back into her room and pretend to be studying. As predicted a few minutes later her mom came knocking at her door.
“Jurina, I’m going to be out late tonight so don’t wait up for me. There is food in the fridge so just heat it up when you are hungry.” her mom said as she stuck her head into the room before leaving as quickly as she came.
“yes!” Jurina whispered while she leaned back into the chair and threw her hands up in a fist . Knowing her mom, chances are she probably won’t be back tonight so she don’t have to worry about sneaking out.
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Jurina’s POV
Infinity one of the popular pubs in the district that gathers and assorted range of people and backgrounds, complicated can definitely be used to describe this place. When I finally stepped into the pub, it was already late at night, the street lamps already at work beaming down to light the path of us night crawlers.
“Jurina!” Kumi’s shouted over the crowd as she immediately recognize me when I entered.
I leisurely made my way, on one side I can hear a couple guys whistling trying to gain my attention but I ignored them. I’m an what most consider the perfect jailbait, tonight I went with the rockish theme. I wore a leather jacket with a white shirt underneath and these awesomely black short shorts to show off these perfect legs while I had my hair done up on one side to add the finishing touch.
When I finally made it over to Kumi I looked around and greeted the group, crowding around a small table in a circle is Yuka, Kanako, Kumi, Anna, Akane.
“You are late!” Kanako complained.
“Sorry, Sorry I had to wait till my mom is gone before I could get change and head out.” I explained.
“Your mom still making you study?” Akane asked, “why don’t you just tell her Yuka can tutor you?”
“I already tried but it didn’t work, she even found me a tutor that comes around twice a week,” I whined to them.
“Why are you complaining, I thought you said your tutor was the perfect eye candy?” Yuka said.
“But she is so shy and proper and boring and she……” I trailed off as I caught the sight of the next performer on stage… “Rena” I unconsciously whispered your name as I listen to you static voice carry its way into my ears, I was hypnotized.
“Jurina! Jurina!” Kumi shaked me out of my trance, “welcome back.” she joked as everyone else laughed along, it felt creepy when all their eyes were on me.
“What?"
"Someone caught the attention of our little Jurina,” Anna said while pointing over to you.
“I..I don’t know what you are talking about,” I denied but my eyes continue to follow your every move, my eyes roamed along your figure as you walked off the stage. I watch the swaying of your long silk like dark hair as you walked, you had them partially tied up with the ends flowing down your back. Your pale skin looks absolutely flawless giving a sense of softness and your totally stunning slim figure calls out for my attention.
“There is no use denying, you were just checking her out weren’t you?” They accused pointing over to you, little did they know you are that tutor I told them about.
“I’m going to get a drink,” I quickly told them and made my escape from any more prying questions.
“Hi, my name is Sae your bartender for tonight, what would you like?” she asked as I sat myself in front of the bar.
“How about a Bloody Mary? or a Tequila Sunrise? Long Island Iced Tea?” Sae listed a couple drinks for me but I didn’t know what to choose, I’m underage, I can’t drink.
“Hot chocolate,” a familiar voice spoke up in a not so friendly tone.
I looked up to see you standing there behind me, ignoring my presences as you glared at Sae. Sparks can be seen traveling between your intense glaring match.
“Rena, you are asking me the best bartender to serve my customer a normal cup of chocolate. It’s like ruining my title.” I watched Sae whined.
“She’s underage,” you said.
“and we never sneaked into your dad’s bar cabinet for drinks when we were still underage?” Sae retaliated.
“Sae.” the deadly tone in Rena’s voice left no room for arguments, to which Sae can only surrender.
“Hey..” I tried to speak but the heavy atmosphere proved to be an problem. You turned to look at me, the intense glare in your eyes cause my voice to die, I just sat there upset at the turn of event. I didn’t even do anything wrong.
You quickly looked away as if you realized what you just did, an awkward silence engulfed us as we waited for Sae to come back with my drink. I think I caught you glancing over at me from the reflection provided by the glasses on the bar but I can’t be sure.
“Here you go my lady, a cup of hot chocolate, only for you,” Sae said as she placed the cup in front of me with a wink.
I took at sip from the cup as I sat there playing with the paper coaster, not wanting to look up. Unlike most hot chocolate this one taste a bit different, its strong smooth creamy taste urges me to take another sip.
“Do you like it?” Sae asked, while I only nodded starting to feel a little dazed, I start to feel a little warm as I sat here in this crowded bar.
“Let me try,” You said as you held me by the wrist and lifted the cup to your lips, taking a sip from the exact spot I marked with mine. I can feel my heart threaten to jump out when you moved behind me, I can smell your perfume as you lean over my shoulders, I can feel my cheeks begin to flush.
“Ah!” Sae suddenly let out a cry, “Rena..”
“What?” You asked as you turned towards the suspicious bartender.
“Ermmm, I mixed some Bailey’s into the hot chocolate…” Sae suddenly stood there like a kid guilty of a crime.
You became stiff and then let out a silent curse, “I’m leaving.” you quickly said.
“Rena-chan, where are you going?” I asked grabbing hold of your wrist.
You turned towards Sae again before looking back at me, “Don’t worry I’ll take good care of Jurina.” I heard Sae said from behind the counter
“No, Jurina come with me” You said while dragging me out of Infinity as if you are afraid something might happen if you leave me there.
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The ride home in the taxi was quiet neither made any effort to break the silence as they sat there. Jurina quickly texted Kumi, letting the girl know she already left so they won’t be worried. The taxi came to a stopped at Rena’s house and Jurina was dragged inside and left on the couch as Rena went to the kitchen. After searching through the cupboards Rena curse for a second time that night, it seems like they were out of Benadryl.
“There is a room down the hall, bathroom is across the room. There should be some towels and clothes in the drawers that should fit.” Rena said heading straight to her room not sparing any second to glace over towards the couch.
After a min of sitting there trying to figure out what just happened Jurina decided to go and check on Rena, her behaviour since they left Infinity has left Jurina worried.
“Hey! Rena!’ she shouted at the unresponsive body wrapped up under the blankets in bed, with only her face visible. Jurina walked closer and shouted again, "RENA!” Still no response but from her perfect vision she can see Rena’s face red with hints of pain.
“Hey are you okay?” Jurina asked unsure, “are you sick?”
“Can you tone it down?” Rena mumbled with her face still on her pillow, “I’m okay… just an allergic reaction to alcohol that’s all,”
Jurina finally realize why Rena insist on leaving Infinity immediately after hearing Sae said she mixed in Bailey into the hot chocolate.
“Hey are you sure you are okay?” Jurina asked again much softer as she placing her cool hand on Rena’s burning forehead. It must be the inflammatory reaction to the alcohol that is causing her to burn up like this, just as Jurina debates what she can do she notice movements from the older girl under the blankets.
Jurina moved to sit at the edge of the bed and lifted the covers off to discover Rena had one hand scratching her other arm up and down, leaving red marks all over her already redden skin.
“Don’t do that you will leave scars on your arms,” Jurina said immediately grabbing onto Rena’s wrists and separating her arms, she can feel the heat emitting from where their skin made contact.
“Let go!,” Rena shouted trying to break free from Jurina’s grip as the itch on her arm and body starts to grow more unbearable. Rena started twitching and wiggling in bed trying to ease the itch that is crawling all over her body while Jurina tried her best to hold the girl still. When Rena swing her arms out trying to loosen the grip on her wrist she successfully pulled a surprised Jurina onto her.
The extra weight that suddenly dropped on top of her caused Rena to look up only to find a startled Jurina looking down at her, those daring eyes that Rena learn to love. The world stopped moving as their eyes met, their face so close that Jurina can feel the heat coming off of Rena, her breath leaving a tingling sense on Jurina’s cool skin.
Jurina lowered her head to touch their forehead, feeling the temperature of the fragile body under her. Rena let out a soft moan as she felt the soothing cool skin on hers, the relief she felt was better than her earlier scratch attempts. Quickly making up her mind Rena broke her arms free from the distracted girl and placed them around Jurina’s pulling her closer to help control the throbbing she feels from her burning pain.
“Meep” Jurina squealed as she felt arms around her waist, she pulled up a little using her now free hands to support herself.
Jurina brushed the damp hair away from Rena’s face and wiped the cold sweat from her forehead, her skin hot to touch as Jurina ran her cool fingers along the side of Rena’s face. A smile presented itself on Rena’s cherry lips as she felt those cold fingers run along her face, Jurina couldn’t help but turn her glaze towards those lips that calls for her attention. Jurina couldn’t help but feel the urge to kiss those lips just inches away, giving in to her inner desire, Jurina lowered herself and gently laid a kiss on those awaiting lips. It was suppose to be short but when Jurina tried to pull back, Rena held her in place returning the favour. The simple kiss became bolder and bolder as they no longer wish to separate. With a single kiss, Jurina has now awaken Rena’s hidden desire for the younger girl, her previous worries now tossed aside as she hungrily pushed herself against Jurina.
“Hey Rena I heard from Sae……” The door to the room slammed open as Yuki and Mayu came running in. They took one look at the scene in front of them before they froze in place.
Hearing the door slam open and voices of their intruder Jurina quickly pulled away, trying to get up but Rena’s hold on her waist kept her in place.
“Sorry, we will check on you tomorrow,” Mayu said as she pulled the shocked Yuki out of the room, closing the door on their way out. They stayed there with their backs against the door as the image of Jurina straddling Rena’s waist, kissing like they have been starving for days continuously flash in their minds.
*Back into the room*
“I think I should get going,” Jurina said making another effort to get off of Rena only to be pulled back down as Rena flipped their position so Jurina is now sandwiched between her and the bed.
“You aren’t going anywhere tonight,” Rena whispered into her ears, “Jurina… I love you, since the first time I saw you, I knew you are the one, the only one for me,” finally confessing her feelings for the younger girl Rena lean in and took Jurina’s lips in hers continuing where they left off.
Rena’s hands made their way down the side of Jurina’s body, stopping only to slide her hands under Jurina’s shirt she can run her burning hands over Jurina’s soft skin. This time it was Jurina’s turn to moan as she felt those delicate fingers skate across her now exposed stomach, the mixed of cool breeze and hot touch dancing over her skin. She pushed herself up against Rena to feel the blazing heat, she just can’t seem to get enough of this hot and cold mixture that plays with her senses.
“RENA!!! Sae told me….” Sakiko stood there with the door wide open, jaws painfully wide open as she watched her sister devour the poor girl under her. Rena broke the kiss and let out a displeased growl, hinting to the new intruders to leave the room.
“Sorry,” Yuki and Mayu quickly pulled Sakiko out of the room and closed the door.
“Did Rena just growled at me?” asked the shocked Sakiko as they made their way over to the couch.
“I told you to wait but you didn’t listen,” Yuki stated the fact as she took a seat next to Mayu.
“I was worried when Sae told me Rena drank some alcohol,” Sakiko said.
“How is Rena doing?” Yuko asked with Haruna in toll, heading straight towards Rena’s room.
“Should we stop them?” Yuki said but obviously had no intention of getting up for her seat.
A few minute later, Haruna is seen dragging an excited Yuko back to the group.
“Wow, Rena is totally in heat!” Yuko said, as everyone turned to look at her.
“You make Rena sound like an animal,” Haruna said.
“She was definitely marking Jurina and ….. AH!” Yuko was cut off by a slap in the head by a blushing Haruna as the images flows back into her head.
“Well she did growled at me,” Sakiko pointed out, ignoring the antics of the KojiYuu pair.
“I hope they know what they are doing, Jurina is still underage isn’t she?” Yuki brought out.
“Look who is talking,” Yuko joked as she looked between Yuki and Mayu while the two looked away, blushing from the implied statement.
“Don’t worry, Rena knows what she is doing, it’s not like she is drunk or anything.” Haruna said as a few louder moans travelled over to them.
Just as they sat there debating Rena’s current mental status a worried Takamina and Acchan came running in, making a bee line towards Rena’s room.
“Ta…..” Yuko’s hand quickly covered Haruna’s mouth preventing her from saving the pair from embarrassment. They all sat there waiting until Acchan walked towards them pulling a very red and stiff looking Takamina with her.
Acchan glared at Yuko as she watch Takamina almost missing the chair when she tried to sit down, still shocked from the scene they just witnessed.
“So what did you see?” Yuko asked curious as to what stage the two active Matsui’s are at.
“I… They…. We….” seeing how Takamina fails to come up with a proper sentence everyone turned towards their ace.
“I’ll check on them tomorrow,” Acchan said as she got up and headed to her room pulling the broken Takamina behind her, her face red as images of what is going on in that room make their way into her mind.
“Me too,” Yuki said getting off the couch followed by Mayu.
“I’m going to bed too,” Haruna said as she glanced over at Yuko who is crouching by Rena’s bedroom with her ears up against the door. Seeing Haruna leave Yuko quickly got up to follow.
“I guess I’ll go sleep in the guest room,” Sakiko thought as she glanced at the her room next to Rena’s, before making her way to the room at the far end of the hall.
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- I intentionally had Rena have an alcohol allergy instead of making her drunk, due to the fact that I don’t want her to be under the effect of anything that might cloud her judgement. I want to make sure she is aware of what she is doing.
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Good job!!! Kira!!!
Well...I've already pretty much told u want I thought of this fic....hehehe
I'm sure Kathy will definitely love this :D
and I really want a Full RATED M VERSION.... If you can write it :P
I'll be looking forward to your next update :D
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MEEP~!
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kya~!!!! XD
:wub:
:inlove:
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Awww, I thought I was going to get a WMatsui lemon! XD
That was pretty cute and sweet. Thanks for the oneshot!
And I can't believe no one stopped the others when they went into the room. Dang, those Matsuis don't stop for anything, do they?
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Wow, Kira
Within one shot, there's so many pairings and the heat is really "heat"
So happening in a short moment.
love the part where one friend follow the others coming to see if Rena is okie, friendship is important. :twothumbs
- I intentionally had Rena have an alcohol allergy instead of making her drunk, due to the fact that I don't want her to be under the effect of anything that might cloud her judgement. I want to make sure she is aware of what she is doing.
Like the way you put it, aware of what's she's doing and leaving no regrets. :wub:
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well...mmm..it..was...ONE THE BEST ONE SHOTS THAT I EVER READ!!!!! :D
I CAN'T LOVE IT MOREEEE..! :bow:
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jajaja cool fic.. yuko be pervert!! always
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LOL OMFG SO, I READ THIS ON TUMBLR LOL LOL LOL AND I WANTED TO REPLY TO THE POST BUT YOU DIDN'T ENABLE REPLIES I THINK SO ANYWAYS OMFG.
WOW. W O W. WOOOOOOOW.
wmatsui getting so hot and steamy. lol'n forever at the last parts where everyone's just dying of shock from walking into that steamy bed scene LOL. couldn't stop laughing for real, my dad was like looking at me strange HAHHAHAA. your writing is getting better! :D still some errors here and there but they're minor and you said you didn't check back anyways kkkkk :p
now i have to get that saeyuki finished Dx
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Seriously, your fics are awesome!!! I want more hana X mendol!!! And the Wmatsui one made me laugh and a bit fustrated. I was like "why the hell are they interrupted all the time" xD
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omg XD i should've read this earlier!! this is totally epic! with the scenes xD and the intrusions lmfao lmfao!
keke love how rena and jurina is so into the moment that :inlove:... how many times were they interrupted? 4 times? they still errr continuted o_o
lol your crack scenes r definitely a lot more amusing then ur emo scenes xP please write more of this genre!!
great job immortal buddy xD
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wow!!!!!!
TEAM A is so funny!
Akicha X Cabage X Refrigerators!!! I SHIP!!!! :bow:
Cooking Master and the 'No Damage' Shiichan!!!!
Aamin... so cute! :mon cheek:
Hana Mendol is so cool!!!!
Persona is back!
AtsuYuu!!! Wooow!!! :luvluv2:
WMatsui! :mon lovelaff:
*talking to myself while reading* Rena was a sister named Sakiko? ah! Matsui Sakiko! :badluck: i'm so slow!
they interrupted like... 4 times! :on bleed:
Takamina's reaction is sure win! :on GJ:
YOUR CRACK SCENES!!! FTW!!! :mon money:
EDIT:
OS REQUEST!
random pair: Akicha and Amina! (plus cabage, refrigerator, cha cha and a dog)
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That was an awesome oneshot. It was very well-structured and organized. I admire your writing skillz. :twothumbs
:lol: It was hilarious when nobody bothered to stop people from walking in on the Matsui's.
I'll be looking forward to more!
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:inlove: :inlove: :inlove: TOTALLY LOVE THE W MATSUI STORY~!~! Can you make more? I totally love this couple!!! :drool: :drool: Couldn't help but do this. hehehe
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So I’m back with another OS before taking a short break I guess. :kneelbow: A random idea that appeared in my mind while I was thinking so decided to write it out after asking PomPom if I should write it at all. :lol: She help me choose the pairing and Keichan decided the ending. I asked her if it should be 1 or 2 and she picked 2, its her fault! :shifty:
Please forgive any grammer/ writing errors (just pretend you didn't see them ) On a side note after this update, I might not be available to make any further updates in the next couple weeks. There's some issues going on in the family and I don't know if I will have the time or heart to do any writing in the mean time. I will have to see what happens, I might still be able to finish updating this one here. Thanks for reading, don't worry I won't die because I'm immortal! :cool1:
One-Shot: Message for You (KaSae)
Tomomi sat there at a corner table, sipping her cup of hot latte as she continue to watch the rain drops slowly make their way to the ground. The combination of puddles and street lamps made the streets look magical with sparkles of raindrops and glamorous rainbows of light reflecting off the clear fluids. The line of cars flooding the streets crawling and inching forward bit by bit, the honking that clatter into the night long ceased as drivers waited for the congestion to clear the roads. The flash of headlights scattered like rows of stars replacing those missing from above.
It seems as though Tomomi was purposely and intentionally trying to let time pass her by, focusing on the activities of those still wondering the streets, their bright umbrellas creating streaks of colors while each step formed a new ripple that goes unnoticed by their creator. Her concentration breaks every time the door opens and closes producing a crystal clear chime that enters the ears of the patrons in this cozy coffee shop filled with fresh aroma of various coffee beans. Once again Tomomi is reminded of the unoccupied chair of the one that requested tonight’s meeting of high importance.
The people in the coffee shop gradually disappear, one by one they started to leave, only a couple left sparsely spread out in the confined space. Unconsciously Tomomi pulled her scarf closer to her neck, feeling the heat slowly leave the air. In the blink of an eye it becomes a painful wait in silence, for the one she wanted to see. Her eyes start to feel heavy as the dull sound of soft conversation travel through the air harmonizing with the rhythm of the falling rain everything becomes a lullaby.
Tomomi lifted her head towards the door as she heard the chime enter her ears, the door opened letting a stream of cool air enter from outside before it closing allowing the cold to blend. Still no sign of the one her heart is yearning for. Miyazawa Sae, where are you? The question continues to revolve in her mind as her heart persistently reminds her of Sae’s absence wondering when the genki girl will arrive. Each passing minute causes Tomomi’s heart to sink, lower and lower, she wish that somehow she can lift the ache in her heart even if its just for a moment while she recover from Sae’s absence.
As if God heard her wish, Tomomi suddenly felt a flow or warmth surround her, as if saying to her “You are tired, close your eyes and rest”. Once again her eyes become heavy as she sat in her corner of the coffee shop, serenaded by the whispers and smell of fresh brewed coffee, Tomomi drifted off to sleep as she decided to let her eyes close, to rest the just for a minute.
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Sae entered the coffee shop when the door opened, feeling the warmth coming from the heats, the smell of brewing coffee push its way towards her, wrapping her into its embrace as she slowly adapts to the change in light and atmosphere. Her vision slowly focuses onto the one she was looking for. She found Tomomi seated in the corner, staring out the windows, tiredness flowing through her eyes as she tried to stay awake.
Sae lifted her hand, hoping to caress those soft cheeks that she misses but she stopped, her fingers just a hair away as she paused, tears slowly rolling down her eyes.
Her voice carried through the wind, blending into the whistles of the night.
I finally found the courage to call you and ask you to meet with me at this coffee shop. A special place to us, this is where we met by chance. I really wanted to face you and hold your hands while I tell you these words that have been kept inside my heart for a long time. But in this dark rainy night, that wet slippery highway and that hasty careless driver…. made me unable make it to this coffee shop… To say to you “I love you”
Sae crouched down beside Tomomi to take another look of the beauty before her eyes, memorizing every detail afraid that when she steps out of the door everything will begin to fade. Watching her sleep so peacefully, Sae didn’t want to leave but she must. She doesn’t belong here anymore. Sae turned to leave only to glance back at the sleeping girl.
You are tired, just sleep and don’t think about me anymore, I will never come back, you have to get use to being alone in the nights… find someone else… someone else to replace me.
These soft words followed the wind and carried over to the sleeping Tomomi, the sudden departure of warmth replaced by the cold wind woke her from her slumber. Confused by the sudden feeling of emptiness, an unknown pain begins to build around her heart. Tomomi look across the table to find the seat still empty of the said girl that invited her here. She tried calling but the line was dead, she waited and waited but no one picked up.
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~Tomomi’s POV~
Everyday I miss you, thinking of you, of the times I spend at this coffee shop waiting for you. This place reminds me of you everything of you. The way you speak, the way you laugh, your yawns, your pouts, I memorize it all. The energy you use to brighten my life, and shine a path for me when things get dark. Now you sleep alone in the cold, forever in a slumber and will never wake again, despite my calling for you… it wasn’t a lie and never a joke. You left me.. leaving me in misery remembering all those times we spend. Unable to tell you the words from my heart, my love for you will never change “I love you”
I look out the window towards the grey skies that mourn for my lost, do you miss me? I miss you.
“Miss here is your latte, please enjoy”
They finally brought me my latte, taking in that familiar taste I smile as I glance up into the sky, the sun slowly peaking out from behind the dark grey clouds. I feel closer already, I know I will find you and we can forever be together. I place the cup down and slowly let my eyes close feeling the warmth of the sun shine through the windows, a smile graces my lips as I let sleep take over.
The sun slowly expanded its way into the coffee shop, its bright rays reached through the windows and landed on the empty coffee cup, next to it sat a mysterious clear bottle, its lone drop of remaining liquid sparkle to the sunlight unnoticed by the busy patrons that come and go.
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@WinterAir - Thanks for reading and picking out some of the errors and yes I killed your Sae! :twisted:
@Aoi-sora - I remember your request, will write it when I have a good story for them. :twothumbs
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first to comment on Message for You xD
haha for once i'm commenting, and first too! r u proud of me kira? ^^ lol
now onto the fic...
OMG DX you killed my SAE! Dx why you?! :angry:
lol T_T sigh well... it's bound to happen sometime in fiction
at least the story was good >< so sad tho... but bittersweet... definitely bittersweet
good job on the fic ^^ especially how u're using the different moods/atmospheres to represent the story and the characters
=) woot woot~
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OMG KIRA, you killed SAE :shocked
Tomomi :(
so many unexpected things happen in this oneshot
Your writing as always awesome!!!!!
I'll be patiently wating for the next chapter!
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I really enjoyed that :cathappy:
I hope you make more emo fics! kekeke
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sdkfjaldfjdfngm;slkdnf QQQQQQQQ MEEP!
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Sae T_T at least you didn't kill Chiyuu
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omg Sae T_T huhu, update soon! :D
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WinterAir wow mortal you commented and the first one too.. unexpected.... maybe if I kill Sae more you will appear more often? :lol: Thanks buddy
Pommie Thanks for the pairing suggestion, and its cool that you picked up that little detail in the end keke DID I tell you I LOVE YOUR AKICHI AVATAR! SO CUTE!!!
blughise Sorry Blu, I just felt like doing something different and this car accident scene just came to mind....
Mari07 I'll think about it, but a penguin might kill me.
ShibuyaDokiDoki Meep!
kahem well..... you can actually interpret the ending 2 ways, first is where Chiyuu falls asleep thinking and dreaming of Sae and the other is Chiyuu suicides with the mysterious bottle of unknown liquid so she can forever be with Sae. kekeke.
haruhi16 thanks for reading and leaving me a comment :twothumbs I hope to get back to writing soon, just got to deal with some stuff first or all my fics might end up like this one...
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I WANT MOREEEEEEEE!! :panic: :panic:
please update soon! :thumbsup
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I don't want the second! I don't want my Chiyuu to be dead
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I read your atsuyuu fic, through the hand of a friend, and I have to say that it was great. My gateway into AKB fanfiction. Thanks for the great read (:
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haruhi16 I'll make a comeback when I have time LOL Hopefully soon.
kahem But she can be with Sae forever? either way it's a sad story stupid drivers... gotta make sure to be careful driving in any condition.
JeremyJay22 Thanks and welcome to Jphip. Would that friend happen to be the one that requested the AtsuYuu? I mean Grace (apparently) the one that still owes me OS's lol.
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:glasses: KIRA~
:twisted: I DEMAND would like to request a one-shot of...
Sae X Acchan
Four Words are....
1. Cheese
2. Diabolic Dishes
3. Endophenotype Mattress
4. Xenoplasm Poker
How I came up with this...
I flipped a coin for the pairings and flipped through my dictionary for 4 fours randomly! Had to change the words cos you're lazy!
Hope to read this soon!
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Another random idea, and late night OS that I wrote up, to be honest I'm not sure what I was thinking when I wrote it and it feels like a disappointing piece of work... I don't know, everything that I have been writing recently feels lacking. I asked Keichan and she said it's decent and doesn't need to be scrapped so I guess I will post it.
I just wrote it up, hot off the keyboard so I'm sure there are millions of mistakes given that it's 4am as I'm posting this. Sorry if it seems a bit long for a OS, I initially wanted to leave in just Sasshi's POV but then decided to play around and added the other two as well. Sorry for my trend depressing stories. I promise a happy one for my next OS.
One-Shot: It's not love, its a Habit (Rie/Sasshi/Aki)
*Sasshi's POV*
In the rain, I watched the blue hue of the street lamps seeping through the darkness of the streets. I turned to watch you, we stood there staring at each other feeling the world revolving around us. You closed the gap and hugged me tight as I slowly place my arms around you. The same hug, the same gesture, the same people but it's not the same anymore, the silences between us fills the streets as we tried to find the warmth that is missing. Those lovely days in the pass, the times we spend together, those happy times are no longer in sight.
I let the rain drizzle onto my face, hiding those tears that made its path down my face, letting the rain wash away any trace of my pain. My heart is confused, a mess troubled by these feelings that it holds. I want you do feel the change in my attitude hoping that I don't have to hurt you with words that I can never take back once they are out.
We stood here together in the cold rainy night, here I wish you would know, I wish you would understand my heart, it's not the same as it use to be. We are only desperately holding on trying to pretend our love has not changed. I don't want to head home tonight, I just want to continue to walk in this rain, tasting its bitterness. I'm afraid, I know we need to talk, we can't go on like this but I'm scared, I'm afraid, I don't want to hurt you but in the end I'm just hurting us. I'm sorry this is all my fault, if only I could make up my mind sooner before everything becomes a mess, I look up into the dark sky letting the raindrops cover my face as I let out a bitter smile.
"Sashiko, let's go home, we are going to get sick if we stay out any longer." I turned to you and nod, before lifting my hand for you to take.
"Let's go Rie," Your hands are freezing, it must be because of the rain, I saw you shiver as a wave of night wind sweep across us. You moved yourself closer to me and like a habit I placed my arms across your shoulders to keep you warm.
I waited until Rie have entered the shower, made sure the water is running before I took out my phone, quickly dialling a number that I know by heart I lifted the phone to my ears, turning around to check the door to the bathroom.
"Rino~!" the voice cheerfully greeted me over the phone, the way you call my name caused my heart to flutter.
"Aki~ I miss you"
"You say that all the time," your giggles travelled through the phone into my ears, I can't help but smile.
"Are you okay? You left pretty suddenly earlier" you asked with concerned, I can imagine a frown making it to your face.
"I'm okay, Aki can I come over later?" I asked.
"But Rino what about Rie? Have you told her? She has to know, we can't keep on like this..." your worried voice travelled to my ears again.
*Sigh* "Please give me some more time, I'll tell her, " I selfishly asked again.
I know you are worried, my persistence finally won your heart but you are still holding back because of me. I know it is selfish of me but I just can't find the courage to tell Rie. I know you offered to be the bad one and tell her for me but I don't think that is right. I am the one who is wrong, I should be responsible for my action. You didn't know about me and Rie until it was too late, I'm sorry I hid it from you but I'm happy that you understand and is willing to give me time. I pray to the Selene every night wishing that you will never leave me, because I am sure you are the one. Being with you feels so right, it is like you fill in the missing piece in my heart, a feeling that I never got when I am with Rie.
"Aki, I have to go, I'll see you later, Bye" I told you as I heard water stop.
"Bye Rino, I'll see you later,"
"Aki... I love you," I quickly added.
"I love you too," you said before I hang up and put my phone away just in time for Rie to step into the room.
"Sashiko who were you talking to?" I watched Rie dried her hair with a towel as she slowly made her way over to me.
"No one, I was just sitting here waiting for you." I lied.
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Sasshi, Sashihara Rino, waiting until Rie fell asleep that night before untangling herself and sneaked out of their shared apartment. She quickly made her way through the emptied streets, the rain has long stopped, leaving only the humid air and wet cement.
Finally Sasshi came to a stop in front of a door, taking a second to catch her breath she excitedly lift her hand to knocked on the door announcing her arrival. When the door finally open she came face to face with Aki, Takajo Aki. Without missing a beat Sasshi quickly entered the house and hugged onto the taller girl like they haven't seen each other in years. With her free hand Aki closed the door before returning the hug and leading the girl inside.
"Rino?" Aki asked as she sat them down on the couch with Sashihara still in her arms, she can feel the girl shaking as the arms around her waist tighten.
"I'm sorry, I couldn't do it, I don't want to hurt her, I'm scared." Sasshi cried while hugging onto Aki.
"Shhhhh, it's okay, I'm here," it pains Aki to see Sasshi like this, she wish there is something she can do, if only she can take all the blame but Sasshi refused to let her do it. All she can do is sit here and hug her while she suffers.
"Please don't leave me," Sasshi said weakly in between sobs.
*****
*Aki's POV*
I watch as her breathing slowly settle and become shallow as she fell asleep listening to my heartbeat. It's a habit that she has since, she told me once she likes the sound of my heartbeat, it sounds soothing and it keeps the nightmares away.
I gently lifted her up from the couch and placed her in bed, before getting in myself, it didn't take long for her to snuggle into me with her head resting over my chest where my heart beats away in the night.
The first time I saw you like this I was heading home after a long day, I heard sounds of someone crying so I went over to check and that's when I saw you sitting there alone, crying your soul out in the corner. It pains me to see you crying like that, in my eyes you have always been strong, no matter how bad things are, you always comeback, you fight, you talk yourself down when you fail but the smile never left but this time... My grandfather once told me that when I am happy and when I smile, it makes him happy, I never really understood it until now. Seeing you cry, I can't help but feel pain, I want to see your smile, I want you to be happy.
I walked over and sat beside you, I didn't say anything, I didn't ask, I just waited, waited until you are ready to tell me, we have been friends for so long, I know we aren't close but I want to be here for you. I can be stupid, I can be naive sometimes but if I can I am willing to keep you company like this forever, I am willing to wait.
I wish to care for you, not matter how bad situation is, I don't care if there is rain, even a storm won't stop me. I just want to see you smile, like a child safe in my embrace, I will protect you from this brutal world, I wish you to trust me, for you I can do it. I will be there for you when you are in need, I will attend to you and protect you from anything that awaits you. I want to be with you forever and always be by your side, for as long as I remember you have already hold a piece of my heart. I held onto you as you cried, you told me everything, you told me about her, Rie, Kitahara Rie.
*****
*Rie's POV*
Why am I here all alone? I felt you leave, I was awake all this time, I just pretend to be sleeping making it easier for you to go. I heard your conversation on the phone, I know but I just don't want to believe it. I'm tired. Where we use to spend our days together, our hugs and smiles, our laugh and teases are all gone. What is left is the whispers of memories, of you and me... I gripped onto the blankets as I heard the door close as tears wetted my pillow. I know you are heading over to her place and the emptiness I feel from your departure is like a knife silently piercing through my heart. The love that I wished for, why does it have to be so hard to attain. I feel cold as I tried to sleep the darkness away.
I noticed recently you have been quiet, when I asked you if there is anything wrong, if there is anything that is bugging you.. your answer is always "I'm fine" but I can see it in your eyes the pain. I heard that you seem lonely but I was never there by your side.
I know what you want, I cannot give you, and what I can offer is not what you need. We aren't meant for each other but I didn't want to give up, there were a few times when we hugged, I felt like crying. You told me once that this is just the start but I think we both know everything has already come to an end. We should just free ourselves right? Then the pain will go away right? Maybe we will come across a better path.
I think it is time we make a decision, what we have is not love, it is a habit. Something we have gotten use to but the love that we once had has left us long ago. The way we hug, the way you put your arms on my shoulder, the way we kiss, it's nothing but a habit that we've become accustom to. They no longer held the meaning and the purpose it once did.
*****
*Sasshi's POV*
I woke up to the light coming through the windows, I closed my eyes again to keep the intruding light out as I continue to listen to the beating of your heart. I smiled as I took in your scent and feel your chest rise to your shallow breathing. I'm glad I met you, for as long as I remember you were always there for me, you never left my side and never abandon me when I needed help. From that day, that moment when you sat there with me while I cried my heart out, you stayed by me and didn't asked any questions, not wanting anything in return. I know, from that moment on you are the one because with you my world suddenly became significant. Every minute, every second I feel attracted to you, wanting to protect you but I was afraid to make any moves. I'm guilty I already have Rie, but I cannot forget you.
If I fall in love with an angel's, how can I wish to possess that love... unless my angel is willing to fall from heaven. Aki, you hold the eyes of an angel, beautiful like the stars in the sky, shining on me and for me. You have the wings of an angel, that protects me from the world as you wrap your arms around me, taking away all my troubles. You will always be my angel.
"I love you," I whispered before moving up to capture those angel lips of yours. Punish me if you want but you are my angel and forever I will be yours.
I felt your arms snake around my neck as you pulled me closer and deepen our kiss before pulling away.
"Good morning," you said with a smile,
"Good morning my angel," I said as I snuggle closer into your warmth.
"Rino, it tickles," you said while giggling, "come on let's get washed up," you start to untangle yourself to get out of bed.
"Together?" I asked as I watch you blush from the question before disappearing into the bathroom.
*****
*Aki's POV*
I splashed some water on my face to try to calm the heat rushing to my face, images continue to run through my mind as I try to shake them away. That Rino! Even when it's just words, I can't control myself, especially after the method she choose to use to wake me up. I checked myself in the mirror before smiling, still remember the warmth of her lips on mines just moments ago.
I wiped my face dry with a towel before staring back at my own reflection on the mirror, in my eyes I can see our story. When you leaned over and softly whispered into my ears, those words of yours still fresh in my memory.
"My tenderness is only for you to have, my spirit and soul will only guard at the gates of your heart, my pain and tears will disappear as they fall when you are near, I will always love you, the world can change, the earth can continue to rotate but I will not waver. My pulse will only run for you, I will strive for our love, for our future. Aki please don't push me away, I love you."
I cried, I am happy that you return my feelings but you have other commitments, I cannot be so selfish. I had tried to push you away, I tried to reject you but my heart told me otherwise. I'm a sinner but I can't live without you by my side, I already know it's too late, I'm too far into this to turn back. I made a mistake and now we all have to suffer. It's not right, it's not fair to RIe...
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*Rie's POV*
Early morning I made my way through the streets, stopping in from of my destination, making sure I have the correct door I took a deep breath before knocking on the door.
"Who is it?" I heard Sasshi's voice before the door opened and there she stood shocked.
"Rino, who is ..." I saw her come up behind Sasshi before she stopped mid-sentence.
"Good morning Sashiko" I greeted her, "Hi Aki," I said with a smile.
"RIE....Why are you here?" Sasshi asked me surprised by my sudden appearance.
"Sasshi, we have to talk," I told her seriously, I need to get it all out before my determination wavers.
"Come in," Aki said motioning for us to enter before closing the door behind her. This is the first time I've been here, I looked around the cozy little apartment and found everything nicely put in place, tidy with nothing out of place.
I took a seat on the couch and waited until both of you sat down before I broke out the words that I'm sure you wanted to say for a long time.
"Let's break up," I said.
"...." I sat there watching Sasshi imitate a fish out of water, as no words came out while she tried to speak. I let out a soft chuckle.
"Are you that surprised?" I asked as I turned to look at Aki who seem to be fairing a bit better.
"Why?" Aki asked me.
"After Sasshi left last night, I thought about it and looking back we are all suffering. We were too stubborn to realize that our love has long disappear. We just held onto each other as a matter of habit." I tried to explain.
"A habit?" Aki asked again, confused, the way your face tilts and how your face scrunches up just slightly, I can see why Sashiko.. no Sasshi fell for her.
"It's like brushing your teeth, you do it every day, you don't even think about it. It is the same for our hugs, and our greets it become a habit that we go through every day, we don't think much about it anymore. For hugging to hug, the gesture becomes meaningless, I realized ...that I haven't been there for her when she needed me, I couldn't give her what she want. Our love died long before you appeared, your presences finally made us realize that there is no hope for our future." I looked over at the two of you before continuing, "I was selfish and too stubborn admitted that I lost, I thought if I tried to keep Sasshi close and continue to hold on it will change but thinking about it if we continue on like this, I doubt any of us will be happy, so it is probably better if we just end it, for myself and for all of us, if there was meant to be pain then I rather I just end it now."
"Rie...did you just..." Sasshi finally recovered enough to speak, I looked over at her to see her confused face and couldn't help but laugh.
"Yes, Sasshi. I said let's break up," I repeated my words again, after spilling all that is in my chest I feel lighter already, if only the stupid weigh at home can lie to me once in a while.
"RIe...." I look over to see tears rolling down her face.
"Hey, don't you cry on me here! I'm doing us a favour," I said trying to hold back my own tears as I swatted at her.
"Sorry," She said wiping the tears with her sleeves as I watch Aki move to hug her while passing me some tissues for me to dry my threatening tears.
"Thank you," I said quietly.
"No, it should be me, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Sorry I haven't properly introduced myself, Takajo Aki,"
"Kitahara Rie," I moved to take her hand in a firm handshake, with all our misunderstanding now put aside I feel we can get along.
"Okay, time for me to go and leave you two lovebirds alone," I said standing up from the couch making sure to tease the two of them. I can see a hue of pink make its way to Aki's face and I let out a smile.
"Rie, Thank you!" that was all I heard as I was suddenly tacked by an unknown object that now has me in a tight embrace.
I looked to see Sasshi hanging onto me like there is not tomorrow, repeating the words 'Thank you' like a broken record. Unsure if I should return the hug I looked up to see a smiling Aki who nodded toward us, a gesture that indicated she doesn't mind. So I throw my arms around the girl and give her a hug.
"Sasshi, friends?" I asked after untangling myself and lifting my hand out for a handshake.
"Friends," She said with a smile, while shaking my hands up and down.
"Sasshi, make sure you take good care of Aki," I said before I turned to put on my shoes.
"Hey shouldn't it be the other way around?" Sasshi asked, sticking her tongue out at me as I walked out the door laughing hearty, it's been a while since I last had a good laugh.
On my way out of the building I turned and walked straight into someone on the streets.
"Sorry," I quickly apologized for not paying attention where I was going. I crouch down to help her pick up her fallen groceries.
"No, I'm Sorry, I wasn't watching where I was going," she apologize in a soft voice as she tried to pick up her many bags again.
"Here let me help you with some of those," I offered while picking up a bag in each hand.
"No, it's okay I can take them myself," she tried to argue.
"So which way are you heading," I asked pretending to not hear her and slowly took a couple steps forward.
"Thank you," she said.
"Kitahara Rie," I introduced myself with a smile seeing how our hands are currently occupied.
"Yokoyama Yui," She said with a shy smile.
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Yeah! Sasshi~!! XD
I love Sasshi X Akicha~ :wub:
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Honestly, I read this with mixed feelings...
:) because it involves Sasshi and Kitarie, :( because they aren't meant to be with each other. (Because I'm actually shipping KitaRino)
Such a good attempt to shake my feelings.. :D Keep updating!
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I don't know how to take it but it's great, I guess lol poor Kitarie T_T
For Chiyuu, I just don't wabt her to die
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RenaChii: Thanks, I'm just exploring and trying different pairings for my writing XD
aruka: Did I manage to shake anything up? LOL Yea I was debating how it should go since either way works but I couldn't make myself write a sad Akicha and Rie feels like someone who is stronger and able to realize the problem, since she did get first in the last exam thing on shukan too LOL
Kahem: to be honest I don't know how to take it myself, I kinda wrote it after getting pissed off at my psych assignments LOL End up finishing this faster then I can finish my assignment haha.
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Kira. YOU.ARE.AWESOME. XD XD XD
You know I've been thinking about reading this oneshot since you uploaded it, as I don't usually read pairings that I'm not that familiar with. But this, when I read it, I feel like I'm starting to like all the pairing in this fic. Though the starts is a bit emo-ish but in the end they all got their "happy" endings
Just as I expect from you, You never disappoint me! That's why I love all your fics, even though almost every fic you write are a bit emo.... :P
I'll be looking forward to your next update!!!!!!!!!
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:mon runcry:
waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!
Aki and Sasshi!!!! i love them!
at least Rie-chan and MY Yuihan met! :D
My grandfather once told me that when I am happy and when I smile, it makes him happy!
you remind me of AKBingo! episode...... Aki's touching story! :ptam-cry:
i'm loving Akicha more than i do... because of you and HashirePomeranian! :twothumbs
thanks!!!!!
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Kira. YOU.ARE.AWESOME. XD XD XD
You know I've been thinking about reading this oneshot since you uploaded it, as I don't usually read pairings that I'm not that familiar with. But this, when I read it, I feel like I'm starting to like all the pairing in this fic. Though the starts is a bit emo-ish but in the end they all got their "happy" endings
Just as I expect from you, You never disappoint me! That's why I love all your fics, even though almost every fic you write are a bit emo.... :P
I'll be looking forward to your next update!!!!!!!!!
THanks for liking this emo fic...... emo is like a trend for me right now.... such a hazard LOL maybe once I finish my course and finals things will be better. :twothumbs
Aki and Sasshi!!!! i love them!
at least Rie-chan and MY Yuihan met! :D
i'm loving Akicha more than i do... because of you and HashirePomeranian! :twothumbs
thanks!!!!!
I think its all Pommie's fault that I got this Aki X Sasshi idea.... she planted the idea in my brain somehow.... and I guess I'm in the mood of trying different pairings, to a point that if this trend continues, not only will I have a collection of emo fics, I will also have a collection of different pairings HAHA XD
Thanks for reading my emo stories :twothumbs
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A bit sad, but somehow it felt good to read, and Akicha/Sasshi/Kitarie my top3 favorite member. :)
I liked the end Kitarie and Yui meeting.
But I prefer Yui x Sasshi pair. ;)
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sasshi and akicha :heart:
they my fav members..this is the first time i read a fanfic abaout sasshixakicha..and i love it..
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:wub: :inlove: Kyaaa~~~ :inlove: :wub:
:thumbsup I love Dr. Watanabe~~~~~ :heart:
:heart: :heart: :heart:
I :heart: how Mayu looks like when she Danso~~ :luvluv1:
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awww <33 MARRY ME.........please.
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Kiri-el Thanks for your comment, glad to know you enjoy the reading :D
yukofan Thanks, I seem to be on a trend of writing all these rare pairings these days :nervous
skytsuna Thanks, and yes Mayu's danso is pure :inlove: I still remember writing that one during my break at work :twothumbs Glad you like it.
haruhi16 Haru :heart: Thanks for the comment
I'm Alive!!!!!!! after my whole months struggle with trying to finish all my assignments and studying for my final exam, I'm finally done with everything :lol: To make up for my absences I decided to write up one of the requests I got a while back. Part of this was written a month ago so I had some trouble remembering what I was trying to do and half way through trying to figure it out, I decided to just go with the flow and just write it. After being away from writing for a whole month, I almost forgot how to do this so I'm back at the beginning, trying to get the hang of it all. I will try to make more updates so thank you for your patiences.
Keichan here is your challenge request for pairing AtsuSae with your choice of four words cheese, dishes, mattress and poker. Sorry if this doesn't meet expectations.
*Note: I'm referring to Canada's legal drinking age, which is 19yrs old, so Miichan is technically still underage until Nov 15.
Bacardi 151 - a liquor that has an alcohol content of 75.5%, normally NOT used for shots but for cocktail mixes but I thought it sounds cool to have them take 151 shots here.... Don't take more than a few of these shots if you plan to try it... if you can get it down your throat.
Ace of Hearts (AtsuSae)
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"Let's get started!" spoke the excited Yuko.
She quickly distribute the cups around the table, setting the shots ready for the games to begin. Today is the national energy conservation day so the girls decided to reduce energy usage by conforming into few group activities to keep electricity use to the minimal. They went as far as having all their laptops and cell phones turned off to make the night more meaningful.
This particular group decided to pull out a table ready themselves for a night of drinking poker. They had long decided that loser will take a shot instead of playing with poker chips for money, they just want to have fun and when money is involved friendship can end up being put on a stake. Too risky for the girls so whenever they set the table for poker it has always been for shots, which means all underage members are prohibited from joining in as well. They have to be good role models after all.
Around the table sat the aces of their teams Yuko and Acchan as they waited for the game to begin. Of course the older members Mari-sama, Umechan, and Sayaka are already sitting there eyeing the bottles of Bacardi 151 displayed at the side ready for action.
"Hey Sae, don't sit over there come and join us!" Yuko yelled across the room excitedly to get the game going.
"I already said I don't want to play," Sae shouted back then added, "why are you setting up the table in my room anyways?"
"You really don't want to play or because you don't know how to play?" Mariko asked, reading right through Sae's reply.
"We are here because your room is the biggest," Sayaka answered as she took another piece of cheese of the platter.
"It is either that or just because if your roommates catch you playing poker and drinking you will be in big trouble?" Sae said as she pointed over to Mariko, Acchan, Yuko and Sayaka.
"Don't blame them, Miichan is underage and Yuka just turned 20, Takamina is Takamina and Haruna will have Yuko's head if she goes near her with alcohol." Umechan reminded everyone.
"Didn't Acchan just turn 20 too? What about your room?" Sae turned to ask Umechan, "and why are we snacking on cheese?"
"Don't people like alcohol with cheese?" Yuko asked as she placed a couple slice of cheese into her dish so she doesn't have to try reaching for them later.
"I thought it's wine and cheese, not 151 and cheese....." Sae replied with a sweat drop.
"It's all the same" Yuko said as she ignored Sae's comment.
"It's right next to where the kiddies are gathering having their board game night, supervised by Takamina and Yukirin," Umechan answered as she pulled out the deck of cards and shuffling it like a professional dealer.
"Hurry up Sae, come over here we will give you a quick rundown on how to play Texas Hold'em." Mariko said already out of patience from all the stalling.
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Texas Hold'em is a variation of a standard game of poker, it consist of two cards being dealt face down to each player and then five community cards being placed face up in the center by the dealer. It comes in a series of three cards called the "flop" then two single cards each called the "turn" and "river". The players have an option to check, bet, raise or fold after each dealt, in the case of these girls they get the chance of adding 151 into their shots glasses.
The girls each have 3 shot glasses in front of them and each shot glass has been skilfully marked so that they can pour according to the markings at the side of the glasses. If they want to follow they fill it up to the same level as the highest bet, if they want to raise then they will pour more into their glasses and the next card will only be dealt when all players either have the same amount of alcohol or they fold which they will have to down the shot themselves.
In this game winning doesn't necessarily reward the winner with anything, other than watching the losers that dare follow the betting down the remaining alcohol that they poured. At the beginning it might seem boring if the winner just sit and watch the rest down the beautiful bottle of 151 but as the night continue, a few win might just be what saves them a headache the next morning. Although some say losing is also a strategy "losing is winning", by letting your opponent think you are weak.
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"So do you understand how the game is played now?" Sayaka asked the confused Sae beside her after trying to explain the game to the genki girl.
"I think so, let's play..." Sae replied a little hesitantly but does not want to admit she didn't really understand the game fully, thinking after a couple game she will get the hang of it.
"Alright let's get the party start!" Yuko cheered while she twisted off the cap to the bottle of 151 and passed it to Acchan who started off the bet.
After quickly checking her cards, Acchan poured up to the 2nd measure on the shot glass before passing the bottle over. "I call two lines," she announced with a smile that Sae couldn't help but let her eyes linger over those soft cherry lips.
A nudge from the side brought Sae back to the walking plain as the bottle of 151 settle itself in front of her. Looking down at her cards she tried to remember the instructions and explanation she received just a few minutes ago but the more she tried to concentrate the more she found herself distracted.
"Sae, you are stalling," Mariko voiced out, " I know you want to get your hands on the ace but looking at Acchan won't work."
"Emmm, I follow" Sae said and with shaking hands she poured some liquid into her shot glasses, missing the snickers from her teammates.
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"Let's call it a night, I don't think Sae can handle anymore," a slightly buzzed Yuko said as she watched Sae wave around an empty bottle, speaking half gibberish that most would have trouble understanding.
"Yea I think I had enough, I need to go take a shower before heading back to my room, I reek of alcohol," Sayaka said as she made a motion to smell her clothes not that she would be able to tell given the amount of alcohol in the air.
"Me too, I don't think my head will survive any beatings tonight, and tomorrow will be a pain," Yuko said as her hands unconsciously moved to rub a spot on her head.
"I guess that is it, should we help clean up?" Umechan said, before looking over at the giggling Sae hugging the empty bottle of 151.
"Let's clean it tomorrow?" Mariko suggested, her cheeks mildly flushed from the alcohol she consumed from the few rounds she lost.
"WHAT, you already leaving? Let's keep playing!" Sae half slurred out while she attempted to grab onto the closes person, preventing them from leaving.
It took a few tries before she was successful in latching onto another warm body, trapping the girl with her arms.
"I'll stay for a bit longer and help clean up the mess, you girls go shower and sleep, I'm sure your roommates won't appreciate your current odours." Acchan said as she appeared to be helplessly watch Sae snuggle up to her.
"Good night Acchan, Thanks for cleaning up. I will let the midget know you are staying here to keep Sae from getting in trouble," Mariko said as she walked out behind the others with a slight wobble.
Normally the girls are very good with cleaning up after themselves but tonight just isn't their night of luck, everyone has drank a fair share of shots with the exception of their ace. To win a majority of the game isn't surprising but to win every game, the girls at one point thought she was cheating but they soon found out Acchan's poker face is not only flawless but also deceiving so It isn't a surprise she is the only clear one. Leaving the cleaning to her is definitely most appropriate since she won't be sporting any headaches when morning comes by, a fair trade if you think about it.
"Acchan, let's keep playing" Sae said as she pulled their center girl towards the table, "but we only have the two of us now." Sae continue while sitting there with a pout after realizing there is only the two of them left.
"Then let's play something else," Acchan suggested with a devious smile that Sae missed.
"What game?" the excited Sae said, if one didn't know they might believe she is bipolar.
"Here is how it works, we each pick out four cards and see who has the higher card, loser strips."
"Ehhhhh......"
"Oh well, I guess you don't want to play, that's okay I'll just start cleaning up." Acchan said making a move to start clearing the table.
"Let's do this! I'll win for sure!" Sae said as she struck a pose with the empty bottle still in her hand.
"Alright then, ace is the highest with 2 the lowest okay," Acchan said as she watch Sae pick out her cards while obviously trying to cheat and look at the cards to pick out the higher numbers.
"Okay on a count of 3, 2,1" Sae flipped over her Queen of spade with a triumph smile daring Acchan to do better. She watched the girl in front of her casually picked up a random card and flipped it over showing the Ace of diamonds.
"Sorry, Sae it seems like you lost this round," Acchan said.
"Again!" Sae said as she quickly pulled off her t-shirt leaving her in shorts and her bra, exposing her perfect darker tan. In attempts to switch out her card Sae misses the set of eyes that make their way around her taking in every detail of her upper torso.
"HA! Beat that!" Sae half shouted as she flipped over a King of diamonds, expecting to be rewarded this time she watched as Acchan reach into the pile and pulled out another card which revealed to be the ace of clubs.
Sae stood still and stared at the second ace on the table, before starting shuffle a bit unease having just remembered what the stake was.
"I'm waiting," Acchan stated as she kept her eyes on the taller girl watching Sae's hand reach down to pull off her shorts leaving her standing there in only her undergarments.
Sae shifted a bit before trying to use her hands to cover up some skin as she finally came to her senses that she is standing there in the middle of her room wearing only a bra and underwear with someone else watching her. Sure she is use to posing in swimwear for photo shoots but this is different. Goosebumps starts forming on her heated skin as the air seems exceptionally cooler than normal due to the alcohol that worked to warm up her body higher then usual. Before Sae can reach over to pick up her discarded clothes she felt a pair of hands push her back, causing her topple over into her bed with a slight bounce on the mattress. Sae looked up to find Acchan dangerously close leaning over her.
"Sorry Sae it seems like you lose" Acchan said as she held up the ace of spade in her hand with a smirk, "you should know better than to play against the A..."
Acchan didn't get to finish her sentence as a very warm and active pair of lips decided to intervene, making small subtle movements asking for entrance. Once granted Sae allowed her tongue to make advances to regain the control she lost just moments ago. For a second Sae was unable to figure out if it was the alcohol or her unconscious desire that cause her to lip lock with the girl on top of her but at this moment she could care less, working only to enjoy this new sensation as both party seem to be enjoying. Finally remembering the importance of breathing, they both came up for air panting from the fire that is still spreading across their skin, faster than a forest fire.
Before Sae can leak out any words she found herself being pulled up into another kiss, and instantly she returned it, shocked how the reaction came to her on instinct. She felt Acchan nibbling on her bottom lip while running her tongue along the sides tasting her lips. It took all her will to break apart their kiss and ignoring the warmth of the body pressing down on hers.
"Acchan, we shouldn't be doing this," Sae tried to reason, even though her body has already started to betray her.
"Sae you know as well as I do we both want this, I can see it in your eyes. Don't think I haven't caught you watching me. You really need to work on your poker face." Acchan lean in to capture the awaiting pair of lips again as her hands reached over to remove the last layer of clothing that is hindering her advance.
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"Hey Sae! SAE! WAKE UP!" Sae slowly opened her eyes with her hands half trying to block out the intruding sunlight. Sae finally sat up in her bed and came face to face with Takamina.
"Sae, it's time to get up, breakfast is going to be ready soon, hurry and go take a shower, you smell like alcohol," Takamina said in a tone that remind Sae of her mother. She watched Takamina leave before remembering the events of last night, but her mind appears to be failing her as everything seems like a dream and illusion as her headache reminds her of the amount of shots she took the night before.
Sae quickly looked around her room searching for evidence to confirm her quickly failing memories, she looked down to see herself wearing the same t-shirt and shorts as last night, everything under appears to be intact. She scanned her room to find the table cleared and cleaned, with the shot cups neatly stacked up at the side. All in all, everything seems to be in proper place, without any support for her memories of the wild night.
"I guess it was all just my imagination... must be the alcohol, it was too good to be true," Sae half whispered to herself as she got up to grab her clothes and towel before heading into the showers.
Just as she made a move to hang her towels on the hooks something fell out from the layer of cotton, reaching down Sae picked up a single playing card. When she flipped it over she came face to face with the ace of heart, shocked by the sudden appearance of the card Sae pinched herself to make sure she isn't still dreaming.
"You know that could leave a bruise," a voice spoke from behind Sae.
Recognizing the voice Sae quickly looked up into the mirror to confirm the owner and found Acchan casually leaning on the back wall staring back at her with her famous smile.
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Thank You for reading :)
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AtsuSae... it's a refreshing pairing and I enjoyed your fic. It was interesting and flowed very well :thumbsup
"It's right next to where the kiddies are gathering having their board game night, supervised by Takamina and Yukirin," Umechan answered
I laughed at this. Takamina, forever the chaperone. I kind of want to see what was going on on her side while the "adults" were playing poker.
Anyway, great job on this and congrats on completing your school stuff! :D
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woahhh.. those horny people! and that troll author... xD
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Yay! You posted it! :onioncheer: I knew that you're gonna use that as your title :wahaha:
Alcohol and poker is such a naughty combo if you ask me... it makes you give out horny bets and by the time you wake up in the morning, you're not sure if it really happened or just a dream XD As always, I expect Acchan to be the teaser. I love the ending (like I said when we had our last derping convo XD )
Thanks for posting!
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Yo bro... here my request~~~ XD
Pairing : AtsuMina~~ :inlove:
The 4 words :
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Oh Acchan is such a bad girl~
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Interesting! Haha! :twothumbs
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lolol i am back here~ only just to comment on this atsusae you told me about it earlier keke. i'll read your other one shots later... and possibly comment again if i'm not feeling too lazy :3
you're such a troll haha.. didn't think sae would be so resisting to acchan's actions aha but in the end looks like they both got that they wanted. each other. LOL. anyways, i learned a new game today~ never really knew how to play texas hold 'em before lmao. i always feel like i'm learning something new when i read something of yours. they're usually drinks or something LOL. sew goooood, expect more soon!
i started a trend with this give a pairing + 4 words thing didn't i? (x
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wahahahahahahahaha!
Acchan is such a teaser and evil!
:panic: umechan is there!!! :panic:
wishing that Miicha is also there! :sweatdrop:
poor Sae... :rofl:
or... hmmm... lucky Sae! :grin:
and the kids were playing board games with Takamina and Yukirin!
wahahahahahahahaha!
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
thanks!
oh!
OS request change!
Note: still a super random pair!
Lovetan and Ami
4 words
-Sasshi
-Taiyaki
-Gift
-Mayuyu PB
i don't know what kind of gift it is... Lovetan's bday is Dec.8, its to early for a bday gift right???
or maybe... a gift for Sasshi???
it's up to you
GOOD LUCK!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
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I CHALLENGE YOU TO A POKEMON BATTL- /bricked
Pair: UmeMii (Umeda Ayaka and Nonaka Misato.)
4 Random Words:
- Ice cream
- Fat
- Skate
- Gym
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:cathappy: sup buddy~
Anyway thanks for the fanfic! Haha drinking games.... >_> im thirsty for a beer... anyway it would be cooler if you used my original words but what can you do!
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hello~ lol finally dropping by again
LOL i didn't know you write such hot stories like these @___@
atsusae~ lol haha and why is yuki listed as a good kid? lol
interesting turnout xP definitely not a dream~
lol won't promise i can drop by more often >< but i'll try
ganbare~!
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YAY more emo stories from your favorite emmortal_K LOL. The idea came from a song that I was listening to while being pissed off by parents. Part of the dialogue at the beginning is modified to fit the pair from the song.
I gotta thank my bro (Flean) for checking through it for me, since I'm kinda a bit glazed out right now... its been a while since I slept... not a good thing but I will be heading to catch a bit of sleep right after I post this. I thought about using this idea to complete one of those OS requests but I decided it isn't a good idea to make those requests emo fics HAHA. Sorry in advance for any errors in my writing, my English really isn't that great so there will be many grammar issues below. Hope you like the OS, please leave me some comments, if you have time.
Can you figure out what song sparked the idea?
To Be Honest (MariHaru)
Mariko sat alone on the couch holding onto a glass of wine, she can't remember how long she has been there in the dark. Moving her eyes from the carpet to glance up at the clock again, it has only been five minute, just quarter to three in the morning. Mariko tighten her grip around the glass with nails starting to dig into her skin.
The sound of keys ringing by the door carries itself to the awaiting model, it has been hours since she placed herself there just like every other night. Quiet steps can be heard as Mariko's wife finally returns.
As Haruna steps into the living room her only welcome was the clashing of glass on glass as she came face to face with Mariko, arms crossed over her chest staring back at her with those fierce glare.
"Where were you?" Mariko asked.
"I was at work," Haruna replied moving to leave the room, not wanting to bother with the same argument they had many times already.
"You were with her again!" Mariko accused.
"Here we go again, I already told you it's not what you think! There is nothing between me and Yuko" Haruna defended herself. "You claim that I've been having an affair behind your back, hurting you but... YOU ARE JUST JEALOUS!" unable to stay collected after being accuse by Mariko, their familiar argument once again begins.
"Jealous? Really? So what do you do? Check yourself into her room wearing skimpy bathrobes while hugging and kissing that pervert? I'm sure she will appreciate that!" it is like adding fuel to fire as the temperature in the room continue to rise.
"What proof do you have, stop making things up without any foundation or evidence! DON'T start lecturing me!"
At this time both parties are standing face to face, neither ready to back down as this is a battle of pride. Things that were left unnoticed, unsaid are not being exposed as they have came to a point that pretending will no longer be a choice.
"Starting a company and working with her is just a cover, it's a lie, I'm not dumb! What time do you normally get together?"
"Is that it? Will it make you feel better if I just give up? Give up everything and stop striving for success? If you can work than why can't I? You are crossing the line! DON'T YOU TRUST ME!" Haruna shouted back fist clenched.
"TRUST? You talk about trust, I HAVEN'T SEEN YOU IN DAYS!"
"Fine whatever you say, I'm going to sleep" Haruna shouted turning around exiting the living room. The sound of broken glass can be heard as bottles were thrown across the room, books and lamps are sweep off the tables.
"You drank too much," Haruna said as a fact.
"Don't you point fingers at me, I'm not drunk, this is all your fault," Mariko sudden turned around to look straight at Haruna, "If I leave then I don't have to be a burden to you anymore,"
"Leave, GO why don't you leave!" Haruna replied pointing to the direction of the door.
"I don't have to leave, it is you that should get lost, I am confident that I have been wronged," Mariko closed the distance to her wife.
"Get away from me," Haruna quickly pushed Mariko away.
"Let's face it you are guilty, no use crying over the facts"
"I just realize I really don't know you, who is this that I've been sharing my bed with," Haruna spoke to no one in particular as she made her way up the stairs to their room.
"I've spoiled you too much," Mariko quickly followed after Haruna, the two of them continue their quarrel while they made their way along the halls.
"I love you, the nights we spend together weren't fake," Haruna said without turning around, making quick strides to their bedroom.
"You were just curious, god knows which one of us has reason, I think about you day and night but where are you when I need you?"
"I already told you, I have work, you aren't the only one! You are just jealous, all you do is criticize and complain... you just want control" Haruna continue to reason with the raging Mariko, they both knew this was waiting to happen, the topic has been left untouched for too long, now everything is coming out all at once.
"So you are now saying I'm not good enough for you. Is that it?" Mariko asked lifting her hand to grab onto Haruna's arm only to have it fling off in one motion.
Stomping towards the closet Haruna pulled out a suitcase and started to stuff clothes into it, packing as quickly as she can with only one thought in mine and that is to leave. Anger started to rise in Mariko as she watch the girl in front of her pack her belongs. Mariko moved herself over to the closet and pulled out a couple shirts and threw it at Haruna then kicked the door close taking her anger out on it instead.
"FINE LEAVE! SEE IF I CARE!" Mariko stormed out of the room, heading back into the living room where the wine cabinet is kept. Picking up the closes bottle she quickly popped the cork out skilfully from all the practice she has been getting at nights when she stayed up drinking. Taking a swing straight from the bottle she dropped herself back into the couch, the same position she was in just moments ago. It didn't take long for the bottle to empty itself, but to Mariko it seemed too long for her liking. Unsure if it's because of the alcohol or giving the opportunity to cool down her anger has already faded, bring her back to the facts that presented itself tonight.
"Maririn..." Haruna slowly inched herself into the room, her suitcase left outside the room as she moved closer to the couch afraid that any sudden movement might set off another round of shouts.
"Can we talk?" Haruna pleaded knowing they really need to sort things out. After receiving a nod, Haruna pulled up a chair and sat herself down across from her wife.
"To be honest, I care about the way you always act superior, why does every time after an argument or fight you can ignore me," Haruna started slowly, speaking out her true feelings.
"To be honest, you treat me very cold, your tsundere attitude never reveals your feelings, I never know what I should do." Mariko spoke up after hearing Haruna's confession.
"You have a very self-centered personality, it feels that I just revolve around it but never find the center, your inner nature." Haruna readjusted her position feeling somewhat unease as she paused for a second before continuing, "at first I thought I could overcome all your shortcomings, I can love your positive and forgive your negatives but I over estimated my own abilities."
"You never appreciated all the things I did, the things I did for you, for us..." tears slow made its way down Haruna's face, drop by drop forming a pool of sadness on the ground.
"Sorry, I was never able to understand you, to let you feel loved... I thought I was willing to let myself go and love you freely but I was too absorbed in myself..." Mariko finally came in terms with her contributions to the problem. As people say a problem between two people is never just one sided, but she was too blind to see her own troubles.
They both sat there in silence, neither willing to make any eye contact as they kept their eyes on the floor, deep in thought. They both know things have finally come to an end, it is impossible to continue on like nothing ever happened. Funny thing is if they really want to, they will probably be able to casually name a million of reasons why they should split. In the past they have endured, tolerated and put up with these reasons like giving charity. Both were afraid to speak up, afraid that it proves they never loved the other enough but it's now time. It is like finally escaping this prison of love, to forget everything and using their actions to speak for themselves and to the other, to be just friends.
"I only wanted to be loved, to have no secrets between us, no distances. I wanted to be hugged whenever I come home from a rough day at work..." Haruna finally looked up at the one she loved.
"I did, it's just you never felt it, if you look back you will find those times," Mariko slowly lifted her head looking back with sadness in her eyes, "Whenever I call you, it was always forward to your voicemail, is there still love between us?"
"I think it is already very obvious, instead of dragging this on let's just call it," Haruna stood up and walked to where she left her suitcase on her way out the doors.
"Mari...Mariko, I'll have the papers sent to you after I've signed them."
"Does Yuko treat you well?" Mariko asked, taking one last look at the familiar back she faced many times in the past.
"Yes, yes she does.... What about that gachapin girl from work?" Haruna stood there facing the door, not wanting to turn around afraid that her will might wavier if she look at the girl behind her.
"We bicker all the time," Mariko answered her lips slightly curved into a smile as she thought of the shorter animated girl.
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Yeah!!! MariHaru~~ :onioncheer: Even though they end up to broken up~~ :depressed: Now, I'm waiting for the request OS~~ :glasses:
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I like Kojiyuu but break up make my heart break T_T
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I like Kojiyuu but break up make my heart break T_T
Sorry kahem, i just wasn't able to write anything happy last night. I'm still avoiding my parents lol. Sleeping all day and waiting for them to go sleep before i come out of my dungeon haha
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THEY BREAK UP!!!!!! :on speedy:
i'm sorry... i'm just too lazy to write a comment! OTL
Thanks!!! :twothumbs
write more!!!!
my OS Request BTW! LOL
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Okay to make up for breaking up MariHaru, I wrote up a 2nd part to the originally OS now TS (two-shot). Hope this make you feel better. Sorry for any errors, I'm sure there will be many. :bow: My usual work haven't been proofread or edit.
Flean, kahem and aoi_sora: thanks for spending the time to leaving me a comment for this heart breaking fic, I apologize for breaking them up like this but I hoping to make up for it with this 2nd part that I thought up in the middle of the night.
I also like to thank everyone that read and left me a thank you: Flean, kaizoku_gal, oist, Ryo Hiroshi, kahem, Divine Vengeance, aoi_sora. At least it tells me there are people that still read my emo/depressing/dark/crazy/or whatever other category of stuff that I might come up with in the future...... haha
To Be Honest Part 2 with you
Mariko woke up next morning to the sound of her alarm, she turned to her side to find it empty of the warm body she had gotten accustom to waking up beside. Staring at the untouched pillows, blankets and sheets, Mariko can’t help but feel a slight tug in her heart. The cold and empty feeling didn’t last long, and surprisingly it isn’t as bad as what she imagine it to be. For a relationship that lasted so long, part of her want to acknowledge the lie they have been living by, it is time for them to let it go. Quickly gathering her thoughts Mariko extended her arms out for a quick stretch before getting up and heading straight to her walk in closet, glancing through the clothes she picked out her choice of the day before jumping into the shower. She still has a long day of work ahead, can’t stall now because time doesn’t stop to wait for you.
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“Good morning Mariko-sama,” Staff around the studio greeted the model as she walked in heading towards the photographer in the middle diligently checking all the equipments. Occasionally Mariko stopped to nod or wave to acknowledge the greetings she has been receiving since she stepped into the room.
“Hey, Mari-troll good morning!” the photographer greeted with her usual nickname and smile reserved only for Mariko.
“Hey,”
“Are you okay, you look exhausted,” Miichan asked voice filled with concern when her bickering buddy failed to follow through with their normal routine.
“I’m fine, it’s just…” Mariko paused to think about how she should explain to her gachapin what happen in the last 12hours. Deciding to be honest she continued, “we had another argument last night,”
“Ahhh, I’m sure things will work out for you two,” Miichan replied a little unsure of her own words, she motioned for her tall companion to take the chair in front of her before moving over to massage those tense shoulder muscles. Miichan’s hands skilfully work the knots out of her shoulders before moving in closer to the base of her neck, working her magic to release the stress bottled up.
“It’s over,” Mariko said after a couple minutes, eyes remain closed to enjoying the treatment she is receiving. She felt the hands come to a stop on her shoulders.
“Over?”
“We are getting divorced,” Mariko stated as a fact.
“Did you sit down and talk about it? You don’t want to make the wrong calls with your emotions clouding your judgements.”
“We all knew it was coming, Haruna and I, we talked a bit after… now that it is out I actually feel a lot better, I feel free and no longer tied down.” Mariko tried to explain but was finding it hard to put her feelings into words.
Miichan lean forward sliding her arms around Mariko’s neck and gave her a warm hug from behind, “just relax, release the tension from your shoulders and take a deep breath,” Miichan whispered into Mariko’s ears before releasing her hold on the girl. Mariko stayed in the same position reminiscing the warmth she felt just moments ago, eyes closed as the clouds in her mind cleared a path for the light. Her thoughts were disrupted by the sound of soft clicks and closing shutters. Mariko opened her eyes to discover Miichan standing in front of her with her camera out abusing the shutter button as she saved as many photos as she can of this moment. It is not everyday she is given the chance to see the perfect Mariko-sama so relaxed, eyes closed and a slight grin on her face. If anyone ask Miichan to describe this moment of her life, her answer would be, ‘I’ve been bless by an angel’
“Come on Mariko-sama, we have a long day ahead of us, I have yet to capture the best of you,” Miichan said with a grin while she extended her arm out for Mariko to take.
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*knock* *knock*
“Nyan nyan?” Yuko spoke towards the closed door of the guest room thinking back to last night.
In the middle of her sleep, Yuko was woken up by the knocking at her door, she found Haruna at her door step, eyes red from crying as one hand gripped tightly around the handle of her suitcase, her appearance wiped the sleep out of Yuko’s eyes immediately.
“Can’t I stay here tonight?” was all Haruna asked and without missing a beat, Yuko quickly lead the taller girl into the house and straight to the washroom to allow Haruna some time to fix herself and freshen up.
It didn’t take long before Haruna emerged from the washroom, face cleaned from the tear streaks but trouble still sketched over her features. Yuko frowned from the way the girl carried herself, it is not the same carefree, airhead girl she had gotten to know over the years.
“Do you want to talk about it?” Yuko asked as she lead Haruna to the couch, no wanting to beat around knowing it won’t do them any good.
“It’s over… and… and,” Haruna started crying on Yuko’s shoulders, “I… Mariko was right.”
“Shhhhhh…it’s okay, everything will be okay,” Yuko spoke softly while running her hands up and down her back in attempts to stop Haruna’s crying and relieve her grief.
“Yuko?” Haruna finally lifted her head from Yuko’s shoulder and looked her in the eyes. Before Yuko can decipher the complicated emotions running through those deep orbs, Haruna closed the gap between the two of them and met her lips with a gentle kiss. The contact was short, the feelings gone before it can be properly register in their mind, Haruna never broke eye contact as she continue to struggle for an answer to a question that she can’t identify.
Finally Yuko stood up pulling Haruna up in the process, “it’s late, you should get some sleep we still have work tomorrow.” Yuko purposely redirected the focus. Even if she really want to sort things out with the cat-like girl now is not the right time.
*knock* *knock*
“Nyan Nyan?” when no answer came Yuko gently pushed the door open and peeked inside.
She found Haruna sprawl out under the covers, with one arm hugging one of the many pillows close. Yuko slowly walked closer to get a better look at the sleeping beauty, with one hand she lightly brushed a couple strain of long hair to a side so she can examine the serenity washed over those stunning features. After what seems like minutes Yuko broke her staring and decided to wake the peaceful girl.
“Nyan Nyan, wake up, we are going to be late,” with a hand on each shoulder Yuko shook the girl until she showed signs of life.
“Yuuchan?” Haruna mumbled in her sleep, as she slowly open her eyes to adjust to the morning light shining in through the windows. Sitting herself up Haruna lifted one hand to rub her eyes as her other pulled the pillow up to her chest hugging it close, a pout made its way to her lips as her sleep has been interrupted.
“Come on Nyan Nyan, time to get out of bed, breakfast is ready,” Yuko lectured while she tried to pull the bigger girl up with her miniature size body.
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“Good morning!” Yuko shouted after slamming the doors open to the company, a little too cheery for the morning as her enthusiasm was returned with a couple grumpy good morning and nods from her employees.
“Yuuuuko, the samples have been completed and are in your office,” Amina shouted across the room before disappearing to who knows where.
“Come on Nyan Nyan, let's go see the finish product,” Yuko said taking Haruna’s hand and dragged her to their office.
“Yuko!” Haruna scold but allow the energetic girl drag her across the room.
“Look! Look!” Yuko shouted excitely jumping up and down checking the pieces of lingerie fitted on the mannequins, “they are perfect!”
Haruna ignored her jumping business partner and moved closer to closely examine the finishing on the products, seeing no defects on them she stepped back and gave her approval.
“They look great, now we just need to get the promotion and marketing processes going and have them start production.” Haruna said planning to concentrate on her work to take her mind of the events of the night before.
“Nyan nyan, why don’t you just relax and get some rest on the couch, I’ll go talk to them,” Yuko suggested as she pointed to the couch at the corner of their office. Seeing how Haruna is hesitating but cannot hide the exhaust written over her face, Yuko pushed her Nyan Nyan towards the couch and gently with force sat her onto the couch.
Yuko crouched down a little so she is eye levelled with the sitting Haruna, beaming her best smile, Yuko placed one hand tenderly over Haruna’s cheek, “Nyan nyan you don’t have to pretend, it’s okay to be weak. I’ll always be here if you need me okay,” after receiving a slight nod Yuko excused herself to talk to the team.
At the door Yuko glanced over to the sleeping girl before slowly backing out of the door, quietly closing the door when a voice startled her from behind.
“Yuko, did you just confess?” asked a noisy Sasshi from behind.
“HOLY! Sasshi, don’t sneak up on people!” Yuko started shouting but managed to bring her volume back to normal afraid any outburst might wake the tired girl in her office.
“Oshiri-chan! Come one tell us, what’s going on between you to? Isn’t Harunyan already married?” Mayu suddenly appeared to the other side of Yuko, scaring her short little boss. Both her and Sasshi watched Yuko quickly pick herself up from the ground with a hand still over her chest, trying to catch the breath she missed.
“She is getting divorced,” Yuko blurred out before she realize what she just said, both her hands quickly went up to her mouth to prevent herself from saying any more but the damage is already done.
“Chance boss! Go for it!” her two best friends/ employees pointed out the obvious.
“It’s not like that…. I love her but I am willing to wait, wait until she is ready,” Yuko said with determination and letting anything wavier her decision. She won’t force Nyan Nyan into anything against her will or put any pressure on her, if Nyan Nyan decided to be with her then it will be because of love.
From inside the room, Haruna heard the whole conversation outside as the door never closed properly and Yuko’s earlier outburst kept her awake. ‘Sorry Yuko, I just need some more time,’ Haruna thought as she slowly drifted off to sleep.
“You two better get to work, I want the scripts, graphics, animation and whatever else you two can think of for promotion done by the end of the week or I’ll be calling Meetan and have her take over the photo shoot for you two this weekend.” Yuko threatened.
“WHAT YOU CAN’T” Sasshi and Mayu shouted in unison, on their knees praying that Yuko was just kidding.
“Keep it down, and yes I can if you two don’t get to work right away,” Yuko emphasize each word, while keeping her voice to a manageable level.
“Nooooo, my Yuki!!” Mayu frantically ran to her desk to get started on her part of the planning.
“Ehhhhh, my Akicha!!” Sasshi ran so fast it almost seem like she teleported back to her desk if not for the fact that she tripped over a chair on her way there.
Yuko let out an evil smirk as she watched her two best friend diligently work, for sure this projects promotion will be successful given the motivations those two are given at the moment.
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*Takahashi Law Chamber*
Sitting across from barrister Takahashi, Minami is her two long time friend as they approached her for help with their current issues. Minami explained to them the details and legal segments of their divorce papers. To be honest, this was something many of them had thought would happen but wished it didn’t at the same time.
“So do both of you understand, what I just explained?” Takamina asked as she looked at them one by one to make sure she gets a nod from both party.
“By signing these papers you have agreed to and comply with the requirements for a no-fault divorce. All the clause listed will take effect. When I sign under the witness the process will be completed.” the professional barrister paused to let them digest the information, “You won’t be able to turn back.”
Takamina asked once again, just to confirm with her client/best friends that this is their wish and they won’t regret what they are about to do. Mariko picked up her pen and quickly signed her name on the papers before passing them over to Haruna. When both party had signed their life back to single freedom, they finally relax in their chairs.
“So how does it feel to be single again?” the suberi queen joked but seeing the expression on her friends face told her it didn’t work like it was intended to.
“Friends?” Haruna said as she turned to face Mariko with her sudden new found courage.
“Friends,” Mariko replied with a matching smile when their hands connected for a sincere hand shake.
“Come on, I'm going to meet Acchan and Ami for lunch, why don’t you two join us?” Takamina said as she stood up from her chair.
“Say, I have a question that I’ve wanted to ask for a long time, are you sure Ami is yours? She’s so tall…” Mariko asked as she stood towering over her petite little friend.
“… yes, apparently in Acchan’s family she is the shortest and from her mother’s side they have some tall genes floating around…” Takamina replied trying not to remember those family dinners she was force to attend.
“What about those thick brows? I mean although your aura screams ‘male’ your brows are pretty thin.” Haruna followed with her own question that she and Mariko had once argued over.
“…You should’ve seen the brows of my uncle, I think flies drown in them….”
“Oh” Mariko and Haruna uttered together.
“Wait but why is her last name Maeda and not Takahashi?” Mariko continue to bring out all her enquires while they are at it.
“You know how Acchan decided to keep her family name to avoid the hassle of going through all the paper work to change it right?” Takamina started and waited for her two friends to nod, “well when she was giving birth to Ami she was screaming and shouting for a divorce from the pain of the deliver…” she explained to her friends the one day she wanted to forget in her life, well maybe not the whole day just those couple minutes when everything happened.
“And you took that seriously?” Mariko questioned the little one as if she is insane.
“No I didn’t take it seriously…. just because of that Acchan threw a fit, coming to a conclusion that I won’t ever take her words seriously... so out of anger she told the nurse her child will be named Maeda, Ami…” Her shoulders slowly slouched down making Takamina feel even shorter then she already is beside the two towers.
“And the nurses took Acchan seriously?” Haruna asked?
“Acchan was admitted to the hospital under Maeda, Atsuko... so they thought my family name is Maeda… it was just all a misunderstanding but by the time Acchan calmed down it was already official….”
“Come on, it’s not that bad. Ami is a good kid whether she is a Maeda or a Takahashi.” Haruna said, trying to make Takamina feel better.
“Let’s go, Acchan and Ami won’t be happy if we are late, they might burn a hole in my wallet again, it’s difficult to feed Maeda’s you know.” Takamina said pushing her two friends out the door with her.
"I can walk, no need to push," Haruna complained as she tried to walk properly without being pushed around.
"Oh, one more thing Takamina, I just have to tell you that pink ribbon on your head totally clashes with your choice of clothing today." Mariko pointed out the mismatch in the barristers fashion sense.
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I was about to comment on part 1 then I saw part 2 :nervous
I must agree that this is an emo fic... breakups are always sad, but im glad that at the end both parties wanted to stay friends :thumbsup I also like how you were able to insert other characters in part 2... I wasn't expecting Aamin to be Atsumina's daughter :lol: i also lol'd how Mariko commented about Takamina's pink ribbon :nervous
great one shot emmo-k! keep writing! will look forward to your next story :twothumbs
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Hahaha Takamina!!! So epic!!!
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woaaaah atsumina lol, that was great two-shot story kira ^_^.
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Just had to write this to get the scene out of my head, its been floating in my mind for a while and since I can't get rid of it I thought maybe this will help.
I didn't really go back to edit/ check my work because I really can't read my own stuff keke. (A Thanks for Mari07 who did a quick diagnose scan to correct the major errors for me) Sorry for any errors that might have slipped, my mind is running on coffee since I got woken up earlier then usual.
Deeper Impact - KumiNon
So soft, so warm, I can still remember the taste of those lips that I kissed over and over again this morning while cameras crowded around us in that tight stall. Never in my mind would I expect this kind of scene to happen for our PV's sure the theme for this single is a little sensitive but I thought it would just be playing with camera angles. That was until we were sitting there listening to the director describe to us the scenes we are about to do, a kiss with feelings that will make people feel the impact "with deep feelings" he said to Kumi. I was shocked, as thoughts ran through my mind when all I can hear is the giggling coming from Rena and the laughing from the staff. I turned my eyes over to take a look at Kumi when I heard her ask if she really has to kiss me on the lips but I can't read her expression. I wonder if she is okay with this, what if she doesn't want to kiss me and what if... I never had the chance to finish my thoughts as we were hurried over to the little stall where all the cameras are set up.
The first take wasn't okay, we had to kiss many times as they shot from various angles with photographers around pointing their cameras at us. I can feel my cheeks heat up as we continue to act out the scene again and again, as I taste her lips again and again. This is so embarrassing to be kissing in front of so many cameras and my first kiss too. I tried many times to read Kumi, I looked into her eyes but they left no room for betrayal; loyal to their owner’s her eyes withheld any hint of feelings as I once again felt her soft lips pressed up against mine. I lifted my head slightly to welcome her lips as she deepened the kiss with intensity, I really can't tell if she was just getting into the role and I really don't want to know. Right now all I can think about is the gentle set of lips that I'm starting to love. It definitely left an impact on me.
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Akane and Riina walked into the dressing room after a day of filming, their scene took a while to complete as they tried to perfect their bed scene. Surprised by the script and the director the girls can only be as professional as they can but having never experience this kind of situation cause the two girls to be lost. Their first few attempts were awkward when they somehow got tangled up with each other bringing laughter to everyone that is present. It took them a couple tries and a few extra pointers by the staff before they were able to get into their role and finally made progress. When they finally heard the "okay" from the director they quickly untangled themselves and left the room trying to hide their blush. The uncomfortable silence accompany the two as they went to collect their bags before heading home, there they found a spaced out Kanon sitting in front of the mirror deep in thought.
"Non? Kanon? You okay?"
"Huh?" the spaced out girl answered as she turned over to the speaker.
"You look spaced out, are you feeling okay?" Akane asked as she place her hand over the younger girl's forehead.
"I'm okay, just feeling a bit tired from the filming" Kanon replied not wanting to get the captain -- Churi worried.
"Are you sure? Didn't you finish a while ago? We can take you home if you aren't feeling well, you seem a bit flushed." Akane suggested while she started getting worried, their little ones always try to hide it when they aren't feeling well. The last time Jurina almost fainted during their performance so they are all very precautious with watching them.
"I'm okay, really. Say, Churi what happened to your lips, there's a cut on the corner," Kanon asked with a growing smirk as she pointed to the side of her lips in the position where she notice the cut on Akane's lips.
"Ehhhhh?" Akane quickly check her lips in the mirror as she noticed Riina trying to sneak out of the room quietly without being notice after Kanon brought up the cut.
"RIINA!!!!!!!!!" Akane screamed as she chase after the girl that just bolted out of the room.
Kanon just smiled sitting there watching Akane screaming and chasing after the girl through the halls, their voices getting farther and farther away. Once she was surrounded by peace, Kanon fell back into her thoughts about the morning she spent with Kumi in that small little stall. The lyrics of their song playing over and over in her mind 'I'm in love, I'm in love with you from the moment that we met...You've been able to excite my heart more strongly than anyone else in my memory...'
That is the position Kumi found Kanon in when she walked into the dressing room. Slowly walking up to the younger girl her eyes did a quick scan admiring the calmness that surround the girl while she is deep in thought. Even so, the cuteness explodes out of their little team member, unlike Jurina who is like a ball of energy, Kanon always has this kawaii appearance that make her so irresistible that Kumi just want to run over and hug the girl.
"Non?" Kumi spoke up when she stopped behind the girl.
"Ahhh!" Kanon was brought back to reality and was shocked to see the girl in her thoughts look straight at her from the mirror. Trying to quickly turn around Kanon's leg got caught by the foot of the chair causing her to fall to the ground with a soft thump.
"NON!" Kumi moved quickly to the fallen girl.
The shock that they felt when their hands touched caused Kanon to look up and once again they were trapped in a staring match. The atmosphere seems familiar as they are just inches apart face to face with Kumi kneeling beside the fallen Kanon, they were calculating and trying to predict each other's next movement. They stayed in that position while their eyes searched the depths hoping for any hints that will give them the upper hand.
It was uncertain who made the first move but they were grace with an all too familiar taste and sense when their lips met once again. This time it was much more intense as Kumi moved in with one hand holding the edge of the dressing table for support while another made its way around Kanon's waist pulling her closer. Kanon leaned in to return the kiss with one hand supporting herself on the ground and another wrapped around Kumi from under her arms. They continue to explore each other building on the experience from earlier that day; sparks can be seen flying across them as they enjoy the sensation, eyes closed to feel the moment.
*BANG*
"Hey want to grab some dinner together? Hmmm? Why are you two on the ground?" asked the clueless Jurina as she finally notice Kumi and Kanon on the ground a meter apart looking at the ground.
"Errrm I dropped... my contacts and Kanon is helping me find it." Kumi sluttered out as she pretend to be looking for something on the ground, hoping that Jurina will buy her excuse.
"Oh, let me help you!" Jurina announced happily as she start to move closer to her two friends on the ground.
"NO!" Kumi suddenly shouted causing Jurina to stop in her tracks, "I mean... it's okay we can look for it ourselves."
"Jurina, didn't you say you were hungry, come on lets go. If you hurry maybe I will decide to treat you dinner," Rena said from the doorway before glancing over at the sweating Kumi.
"Really!?" Jurina asked after hearing the possibility of free food, seeing the nod she quickly went to grab her bag and ran out the dressing room missing the small exchange of nods from the older occupants and the silent 'Thanks'.
After quickly grabbing her bag, Rena moved to exit the room before she lost sight of their energetic ace. Just when Kumi was about to let out a breath she was holding, Rena's head reappeared at the doorway.
"Oh, next time you should remember to lock the door," Rena said with a smile that caused the two girls in the room to shiver.
The girls were left in an awkward situation with both of them still on the ground looking everywhere in the room but each other. Finally having waited long enough, Kumi decided to get up and walk over to help the poor girl off the cold floor. With a pull on the arm, Kumi was able to get Kanon up and off the ground but the amount of power she place in the tug caused the younger girl to lose her balance falling straight into Kumi's embrace. Staying like that for a little longer, then intended while their brain try to catch up to the events surrounding their masters.
"... I'll walk you home," Kumi finally spoke up to the girl still in her arms as she finally gained control of her functions.
"It's okay I can walk home myself," Kanon spoke softly while she slowly moved away from the warmth to pick up her bag.
"It's getting late. It’s too dangerous for you to walk home alone, plus we should tell your parents about the new single and PV so they don't get surprised when they show the preview at the handshake." Kumi explained as she threw her bag around her shoulder and took Kanon's hand before leading them out of the room.
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"Wow, your parents are very understanding," Kumi said as she dropped herself onto Kanon's bed after explaining to them about their new concept and apologizing to them personally about taking their precious daughter's first kiss.
"So you are staying for dinner right?" Kanon asked as she watched the older girl flip her phone over to fire off a text.
"Yea, it's rude to decline the invite, right?" Kumi said with a smile as she checked her text message before sending it to her mom; letting her know she will be staying at the Kimoto's for dinner.
"You know my parents always let me have what I want."
Confused by the sudden statement, Kumi looked up from her position only to feel arms on her shoulders, pushing her back onto the bed. She stared up at Kanon with a smirk that she had seen once when they were filming for Majisuka; it was Miso's smirk after she stabbed Gekikara. Before Kumi could let out any protesting sound she found herself silenced by a set of lips and a body holding her down to prevent any unnecessary struggling.
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*A* speechless!
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Freakin' LOVE~! As expected from an Immortal fic~ Lol
(btw, I followed your tumblr)
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Chu~ Chu~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/k-inlove.gif)
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OMG!!!! nice~~~ KUMINON virus~~~
i follow you on tumblr hehe
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OMG bro!!!! This is awesome!!! :on GJ: I need more of this!!!! :on lol:
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Kira!! You number 1 nocturnal fans is here!! XD XD
I've give you my short version of my comments on twitter.
Here's the long version.
Great description about Kanon feeling. You described how their kiss looks at the PV very well.
ChuRiina conversation adding some humor into the story.
Jurina, moments breaker. Thankfully, Rena is there to stop Jurina.
And about the last scene... is up to you to make it further or not. You're the author, after all.
After all, like I said on twitter, this is oh-so-effin'-freakin' AWESOME!!!
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I'll leave my first post to tell you that I liked your fanfiction.
Kumi and Kannon are my two favorite SKE. I was so surprised that in the pv joint the two to made a couple and now this fic ...
Thank you very much for writing it and I hope to write more Kuminon!
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Omg that scene...that SCENE... just wow !!
This is awesome Kira-chan! =) <333
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I wondered if someone will write a fic about the SKE PV and you did it yay!!!
It's awesome!!!
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T-This is so COOL! :inlove: Starting to ship this pair . :thumbsup
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atlowjack: Thanks for reading and the comment
crono1036: Ah glad you like it, so you are one of the new followers :twothumbs
RenaChii: Renachiiii, haven't seen you in a while :P thanks for the like
saeseki: Thanks for the follow, yea its Kuminon fever right now. I had their scene clouding my mind so I had to do something about it.
Flean: Hey bro, hmmm more.... not sure about that yet. Don't know where to continue from :P
caghaunt: wow I have a nocturnal fan :) I thought I was always the crazy nocturnal one but I guess there is more of us out there haha
Thanks for liking my randomness, but I thought I should add cameos from the highlights of the pv, the kiss, the bed scene and WMatsui.
Minami-chan: YAY I got Minami's first time!!... post haha. Thanks for liking and leaving a comment. :twothumbs Welcome to Jphip.
Haru <3: =3 I can see you enjoyed reading this one keke :heart: *Chu* (runs off and hides)
kahem: Yup I believe Cristi was going to write one, I was initially going to wait for hers but after just sitting there and failing to get
rid of Kuminon in my head I had to do something and this was the results of it haha.
AKBlover_99: SHIPPING COST = :inlove:
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Like I said, I'm a nocturnal. It's 1.20 AM here, yet I'm wide awake.
Well, I have an opinion that "Random is the best".
I liked every random things. You can't predict what will come from randomness.
Involving every single highlights as much as possible is one of the best thing. Not everyone can do it.
Then stuffed them into a story neatly, THAT WAS AWESOME!!!
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WOW :heart: :heart: :heart:
I'm never much of an SKE fan as I only ship the WMATSUI but with this new development thank to that PV I might say I'm starting to like Kuminon pairing
Don't worry about it Kira, your not the only who can't get that pv specially Kanon and Kumin's scene out of their head :P
I really can't believe it
Kumin, Non and Jurina, I swear to GOD kids this days!!! XD XD XD
when I saw the pv I was like :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked are you serious!?!
that PV is so BLOODY HOT!!!
I wish AKB's maybe PV will be something like that too, the gurlXgurl love theme
anyways, I this is GREAT!!!
Thanks for this buddy!!!
Go and take a rest!!! You've been very busy
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awesome story about SKE's PV! :twothumbs I can really imagine Kumi's dilemma... i mean, who couldn't help but fall in love with Kanon if you kept on kissing her right? :on lol: that sudden fall is really classic :twothumbs together with Rena banging open the door with Jurina too lol
Very awesome work oh immortal one! 8) you definitely wrote the behind the scenes of the PV! keep it up! :on GJ:
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caghaunt: Thanks again for liking my randomness, there will more of that to come in the future. The only reason I can stuff every highlight into the story is because all those bits and pieces were floating in my brain all day since I saw the preview teasers and didn't go away until I wrote the OS.
Bluuuu: Yea I'm still waiting for the full thing, it should be out soooooon I hope. I tried to write a part 2 to the OS but it kinda died half way because in the end I'm not that crazy of a KumiNon shipper to work it out more scenes for them.... we I have some ideas but the lay out was too boring so I just let is die in production HAHA.
Lynx: Yes a very classic fall that is a must for the OS and it had to come with a complementary clueless Jurina keke.
Thanks all for following and liking my scribbles.
~ imo_K
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OOPS FELL ASLEEP IN THE PROCESS OF UPDATING =p, continuing from where I left.....
Sorry for the long wait everyone, I know it's been a long time since I've updated anything. Been having a hard time getting back into writing so instead of going straight for the heavy works that I have floating out there I decided to do a couple practice runs to get myself back into it first.
Here is a couple of random scribbles that sparked from my randomness. I decided to post two short back to back SaeYuki OS.
As usual somehow I always end up doing this late at night after being sleep deprived and is hanging only because I overdose on coffee.
Actually I think I'm starting to hallucinate, only got 6 hours of sleep in the last 36hours... :twisted:...
Special thanks to the brave AFLynx that volunteered to check my writing for errors and did a bit of cleaning up :twothumbs. :bow: :bow: :bow:
*Note that both short OS are NOT related, the only similarity is they are both SaeYuki :lol:
I wish... (SaeYuki)
*Sae's POV*
I don't want it to be just a show. I wish love can be this perfect just like our acting for this stage. No I don't want it to end either. Let love be like a game that I can play on forever.
We all have a past - those days when a kiss goodbye was there is to it but no matter how many times you failed, you always long for that feeling of love and to be loved again. It’s just like a game that we don't want to give up on until we beat the boss.
"Sae, Sae! Are you okay? You missed your cue." Yuki pointed out as she glanced over her script for Infinity.
"Ah, sorry Yukirin, I was trying to remember my lines and I kind of zoned out for a bit." I replied, embarrassed for being distracted when everyone is working hard for their performance.
"It's okay, let's start again," you said with that encouraging smile that almost melted away the strength that is holding me up.
"Maria! That day, in the roaring of thunders you and me were torn away from each other," I started reading out my lines as I moved from behind Yukirin.
"Ruka!" I watch her step forward and shouted out to the sky as planned.
With steady steps I moved until I was directly behind her, so close that I can smell the blossom fragrance from her hair, her height just perfect for my arms to circle around her thin waist.
"NO! NO! NO! Sae you are supposed to wrap your cape around Maria and encircle your arms around the neck not the waist!" one of our instructors belt out as I once again made another mistake when my arms moved on their own. I stepped back for a couple of steps and started again this time acting out the scene correctly.
"Why? You've been searching for me for 250 years?" Yukirin started her lines once again.
"Maria, Because I love you!" It took all my effort and concentration to speak out my next lines as my body is mesmerized by the way her back leans against me, the feeling of heat through the thin fabric of our t-shirts.
"But... we belong to different worlds," she continued while breaking out of my embrace. I swear I saw the same longing emotions in her eyes when we separated.
"After tonight, something will change."
"Okay! Good! Let's take a break here before we continue with the next scene. Sae, please be more familiar with your script."
"Sorry, I will correct my mistakes. Please continue to lead us." I said with a 90 degree bow to show my sincerity.
We all worked hard together to put together this act of Infinity. For what seem like a long time we will always be together practicing our lines, our actions, our emotions. Each touch sparks a new flame in my heart where my love burns bright for you - I wish this wasn't only a performance. I wish for us to break this distance that is keeping us apart, the delicate gestures we share I don't want to believe it all fake. Those hugs we shared feels perfect, I don't know if I could continue knowing I can never feel your warmth, your touches, your lips.
We continue to practice our scenes alone, working to perfect every detail for our first stage together, a memory that we both cherished.
"Why? You've been searching for me?" Yukirin suddenly turned to ask me when we were alone in the theatre working on our lines. I paused for a second waiting for her to finish her line but it never came. I looked into her eyes and finally, I understand.
"Yukirin, it's because I love you," I said while I closed our distance, allowing my arms to subconsciously wrap themselves around her waist.
"Sae, I..." I didn't let her finish, as I closed my lips around hers. I don't need words, your actions has told me enough. I tighten my arms to draw you closer feeling you push yourself against me while we share our love through a kiss in the middle of the stage, a place we called home, a place only for us, a theatre named AKB48.
I don't want this to be just a dream…
This isn't only a show…
This is SaeYuki of Infinity.
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*NOTE - This 2nd OS is not related to the one above, it is a separate story.
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I Should Have... (SaeYuki)
*Yuki's POV*
I know, I should have...
I shouldn't have expected anything from you, my heart should've died but why can't I let go. I shouldn't have stayed only to be broken once again.
I watched you from afar. I saw you with her but you pretended not to notice, ignoring my feelings when I asked you for an answer, exploring the depth with questions. Who was it that you held last night? Of course I never had the strength to ask you directly because I was afraid of what you would say, but I know, I already knew, I should've...
But I continue to hope for a change. Hoping you would change.
You two met at a cafe, the same cafe that we used to spend our Saturday afternoons together. It only took one moment and already I lost you forever. I was running late that rainy afternoon, I ran all the way from the bus stop to the café, hoping that you won't have to wait any longer…
But I was too late, I was already replaced.
That smile that you gave her, all those small gestures and the way you played with her hair... I watched from afar as the sky continues to cry for me.
Every night I laid in the dark, trying to forget this loneliness, hoping the pain would go away. I sat on the balcony looking at sky ignoring the dust that covers your spot beside me.
Those nights I hid behind the doors crying as I listen to the words you exchanged with her, those words of promises that should have been mine.
Why?
"I believe it was faith that brought us together, my princess," Sae spoke softly to the girl lying with her, "I'm willing to bet my life just to be with you."
"Chiyuu~ Do you really mean it?" I heard her ask, as I continue to shed the last of my tears.
"I'm already intoxicated by your beauty, addicted to your smell and captivated by your taste,"
*giggles* "Stop that tickles, Sae! Not n...." The room was once without words with only the sound of shuffling of the sheets. Both occupants ignorant of the silently sobbing owner of the house.
I shouldn't have expected anything from you, I should've left. I shouldn't have stayed to live in this tormenting cage that I left myself trapped in.
I expected for you to change after all these years… I hope you would grow out of your habits but it was all a wait for nothing…
Only a painful wait for a future that never existed.
I should have...
It only took a moment for me to love you, but it took me a lifetime to forget. Will you still remember me after this?
Sae...
Will you?
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"YUKI! YUKIRIN! TOMOMI, CALL THE AMBULANCE! YUKI! NO!"
I finally felt your strong arms around me, I can't remember the last time you held me.
It's been too long.
"Sae, I'm cold," I spoke weakly as I felt my energy slowly drain away.
My life flashed through my mind like a film.
"Yuki, stay awake... open your eyes,"
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What????!!!! OMG Yukirin!!!!!
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NOO!! YUKI!!!!!!! PLEASE DON'T DIE!!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_runcry.GIF)
Can you continue the story? please~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_hanky.gif)
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Immortal!! Now you have to write a sequel to that second OS!!! It can't just end like this!! Lol
I see we has a romantic sae in he first one and a player sae in the second? Lol first one was pretty nice, yay for mutual feelings!! ^^
Lol the second one was depressing... Tho... The sae and chiyuu part was kinda cute and made me think of your other sad chiyuu OS, but sae seriously sounds like an ignorant friend/girlfriend and player. Is Yuki and sae actually living together?
Nice Oneshots xD lol I finally read some... Cuz its saeyuki ^^
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Yuki ;______; NOOO~ Kirachan update soon as you can ;_____;
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Nooooooo...... Don't you dare to kill Yukirin....
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Ahh Yuki, poor Yuki wantinf to end your pain like that, and only then does Sae hold you.....
what happened it was all going so well in the first OS (yes I know there not related but still....)
Man Yuki needs someone to save her not Sae I think..........
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Thanks for the special mention Immortal :shy1:
I've already gave you my live comments so I won't be elaborating it here :P Keep on writing! :thumbup I'll support you all the way :cool1:
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Kiraa!! Those two SaeYuki OS from your randomness are AWESOME!!!
Definitely not related to each other.
I wish:
That's like what will (hopefully) really happened. Like a behind-the-scene kind of story!
I Should Have:
Emo much, Kira? Still, it's AWESOME! For Tomoomi being the third person in their relationship is quite reasonable.
Since she was fangirling over Sae when she did that Bartender Danso.
Yuki pain is totally a win. A very good Angst/Hurt-Comfort/
Let it be cliffhanger~ BD
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How could you do this!?
Yukirin T^T
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OMG, please!!! Don't make Yuki go away like this, OK???
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Yuki!!! Stay alive! Sae needs you!!! :ptam-cry:
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OMG YOU BEST NOT KILL OFF YUKI!! :angry:
I'll be waiting for that update... patiently... -sigh...-
And you better come back with that Valentine's fic!! I'm waiting for that too!
And it seems I also haven't been leaving comments for your stuff too... :sweatdrop:
Oh wells. Back to being lurker Crono!
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Wow I didn't realize I didn't reply the comments here yet and I also didn't realize I've gotten so many :twothumbs :twothumbs Thanks for reading and spending the time to leave me a comment. Definitely motivation to write more :bow:
Kahem Yea blame player Sae! LOL
RenaChii I've only planned it as an OS so I don't really have a 2nd part to it but technically there is a follow up already for KaSae keke
WinterAir LOL mortal I'm going to end the 2nd one just like that :twisted:
haruhi16 updating right now after I finish replying to everyone but.... not for the sad Saeyuki XD
HashirePomeranian Sorry Pommie, I know you didn't ask for Kasai but there is no way I'm putting Rena in there. I can't have both of my oshi in there, bad enough for what I'm doing to Yuki....
virgo_shaka hey gramps, I didn't kill Yukirin... at least she's not dead yet :twisted:
oddball I'm sure there will be someone willing to save Yuki, just not player Sae but then player Sae paid for cheating in another one of my tragedies ROFL
AFLynx no comment, already gave you live replies HAHA
caghaunt HEY! lol, yea randomness ROCKS keke, don't even remember why I wrote the two contrast anymore, but I want is definitely something I hope would be a true behind the scenes. But then I'm also a fan of Mayuki tooooooo. AHHHH can't choose.
pocchan Don't worry the only one I really killed right out in my fic was Sae ROFL, Life won't just end like that for Yuki i hope :)
nana0922 I think that was an appropriate place to stop the OS but don't worry Yuki is special and I won't end her this way =) XD it's going to be a secret until it is revealed :twisted: Thanks for liking my stories and translating them. You did a very good job.
sakura_drop_ I think after this Yuki is going to get someone else that cares about her more XD
anzai48 YAY long comment! I haven't gotten one of these in a while now, thanks for reading my randomness, glad you like them. I'll try to write more when I can.
crono1036 Kenken =) Yuki hasn't died yet *hides from angry Ken* So before I get any further with other OS's and ongoing updates I will reveal my V-day OS. Don't lurk too much the dark isn't good for you keke.
Thanks again to everyone for reading my randomness, and all those thank you's and comments :bow: :bow:
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YAY ANOTHER RANDOMNESS MOMENT FROM ME!
It's a tad bit later then I wanted but I still made it before Valentine's end for everyone LOL. I spend a good few weeks thinking about this one, and end up aborting the first three attempts on this OS. This one that I will be posting will be attempt #4 HAHA. Gotta thank Lynx for letting me know I was rambling on about boring stuff for the previous trial. I was just trying to throw things in randomly, trying to make it work but obviously that one didn't fly. It was Lynx's suggestion that I write it in first person view so YAY for that, I end up staying up all night to finish it last minute. YAY for coffee.
SPECIAL THANKS TO BETA POM! for fixing my bad Engrish and making it better English HAHA.
Now on to the story. Happy Valentines :heart:
A story for my Angel,
My Fallen Angel (KojiYuu)
It has been three days since I've meet her, my angel.
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I was on my way home when I found her sitting next to the garbage bin in the back alley, wearing only a thin sleeveless one piece. It still felt like a dream. She was so beautiful I was left breathless at the sight, my heart skipping a few beats along the way.
Her shining eyes were complemented by a set of very attractive lips. Her slender arms settled comfortably around her long legs, pulled tightly against her chest. I could tell she was cold from the goosebumps on her exposed arms, her injured wings out covering as much of herself as she could.
That night I brought home a fallen angel.
My first Valentine alone, I was blessed.
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I took her in and cleaned her wounds. She told me she fell from the sky when the strong wind came and blew her off course. I never really liked the stormy weather before, but if this is the case I think I might have to reconsider. The first time I held her wings, those soft and fluffy wings...
"What’s your name?" I asked as I lead her to the bathroom so I could properly clean her wounds.
"Haruna." I caught her she wince when I slowly poured water over the cuts.
"I'm Yuko, I work at a nearby animal clinic as a veterinarian." It was painful trying to keep my eyes where they should be... 'Water and white really is a very nice combination'
"Wait here, I'll get you some dry clothes......" I tried to excuse myself, until...
"Yuko, you are bleeding." Haruna pointed out.
"What? Bleeding?" I asked before feeling a trickle of liquid run down my nose.
"You’re funny." She snickered before we both fell into uncontrollable laughter.
I thought I was in heaven as I watched the tall angel check her wings, ignorant to the fact that her clothes were quite transparent at the moment. I didn't even bother to hide the fact that my eyes were roaming all over those perfect assets, my mind running a mile a minute to save those images into my precious memories.
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NyanNyan: a name I gave her that very night. Who would've thought that an angel could be beautiful, cute and sexy all at the same time. It's like an all for one package that you can't even find a single fault in. She is perfect just the way she is. I only left her for a few minutes to make her a cup of hot chocolate, something to warm her up from being out in the cold for so long. I will never regret leaving that room because what I found was more than enough for me to die happy.
"Haruna, I made you some hot chocolate."
She turned to look at me, confused at first, head slowly tilted to one side while a smile slowly took over her lips. That clueless look, so pure and innocent just like a piece of white cloth uncontaminated by the world.
"Nyan~"
Oh my god! The way your hands were up by your side, that smile, the head tilt, the sound, the hot liquid spilled over my foot.
"AHHH! HOT! HOT! HOT!" I shouted as I jumped and kicked and held the burning red foot coated by the sweet flavor of hot chocolate.
Now that I think back, those words could be interpreted two ways, the hot chocolate and my goddess NyanNyan. The way you made me lose control with just something as simple as that. My cute angel NyanNyan, I continued to limp around the house that whole night. You called me silly, then took up my bed. It wasn't until I started pouting in the corner of my own room you took me in. I refused to admit it but I loved it when you called me cute and treated me like a stuffed animal with hugs and kisses.
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I knew you missed home when I caught you staring up into the clear night, a flawless painting covered by millions of little white specks and an exceptionally bright moon. Your hands reached up like you were trying to close your distance to heaven, wishing to be able to once again feel the breeze, free from gravity. I know there isn't much I can do. It pains me to see you like that so I did the only thing I could.
"NyanNyan, come with me," I said as I took your hands and lead you out of the house for the first time.
I took you to a nearby construction site. You stood there, quietly wondering why I took you out but soon you began to understand as I cleared some objects off of the platform that is normally used to hold supplies in the air. The platform was connected to a crane at the top by a single thick chain, balanced almost like a swing.
"NyanNyan, get on." I said with a smile as I watched you sit on the edge, feet dangling in the air as I started to elevate the platform.
"Yuko, it's so beautiful from here. The breeze feels so nice." You smiled as you pointed towards the lights surrounding us.
"Wait." I grabbed a hold of one of the ropes tied at the bottom of the platform and gave it a strong tug, with momentum I continued until it began rocking back and forth like a swing.
"How is it? Does it feel like you’re flying?" I asked.
"Yes! It really feels like I'm flying, this is fun!" I think that was the happiest smile I've seen on your face since we’ve met. After a while I slowly let you down but it seems you like to surprise me a lot. Instead of getting off the platform you grabbed my hand and pulled me up.
"Let's play together, the world is so beautiful from up here." You took the control from me and brought us up again.
"NyanNyan, not so high!" I told you as I scooted closer. I wasn't scared, it’s just that I'm just not used to being at that height.
"Yuko, take a look around us. Isn't it beautiful?" I could only nod as I tried to stop myself from trying to decide if the light of the city is better or the soft moonlight on you is more attractive.
"Hold tight, okay?" Before I could even figure out what you meant, you started to rock the platform.
"Ahhhh, NyanNyan, don't do that!!" I shouted into the sky.
"It's okay, just relax and feel the breeze, this is what it feels like to be flying."
When we finally came to a stop, we sat there together, admiring the night ahead of us. It was so peaceful just between the two of us, accompanied by the stars and moon from above and the sea of lights from below. I shivered a bit from the night breeze but it didn't go unnoticed as I felt your arms around me for the first time other than during my sleep. Unconsciously, I leaned in closer towards the warmth as it felt so welcoming, but you amazed me yet again when you brought out those stunning wings that surrounded us, blocking out the chilling breeze as the night proceeded.
"Yuko, Thanks for everything."
It was the first time you kissed me. Our first kiss, it was gentle, but I could feel the love pouring out as we connected. I wonder if the other angels could see us from above. The sensation was overwhelming as I longed to move myself closer. Just this little kiss wasn't enough to satisfy my desires.
"Let's go home!" You announced after breaking the kiss and before I even got a chance to catch my breath. I felt your arms around me as we flew off the platform straight into the night. I wish that I could be in your arms forever. I wish that every morning when I wake up you would be there with me.
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It has been three days since I've met her, my angel.
I woke up this morning alone, the events of the night forgotten if not for the lone feather and mark you left for me. I'm sure you began laughing when you saw my reaction from above when I looked at myself in the mirror. If I didn't know any better, I might've thought that I was sick with a high fever. You know if you kissed a little lower I could actually hide it under the collar, but now I won't be able to leave the house without a proper scarf.
Your promise, I expect you to keep it. You are my angel after all.
Yuko,
I'm sorry to have to leave you like this, but I won't say goodbye because this isn't. We will meet again. Even though it was only three days, it felt like forever and I’m glad I fell. Because I fell in love with you. I hope you enjoyed our Valentines.
I love you. Will you be mine?
~Haruna
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~1 month later~
*knock* *knock*
"Coming! Who is......"
"I was flying and the wind blew me off course! Would you take me in while I recover?"
"NyanNyan!" I executed a perfect flying hug, landing myself securely in her arms as tears made their way down my cheeks. I'm not crying, I just got some dust in my eyes.
"I missed you." You said as you pushed me back into the house, closing the door behind you.
"I missed you too, NyanNy-" I believe she found my talking to be excessive as I once again found myself connected and nibbling on that very attractive set of lips. I could feel your hands slowly make their way down my back tracing, small circles along the way, and stopping at the waist as they pulled our bodies together. We have lots of catching up to do, I believe it will be a busy night.
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*Haruna's POV*
You look so peaceful in your sleep, the way you pressed yourself against me, sporting that fine-looking smile with those cute little dimples. I brushed aside those stray strands of hair so I could take in every feature that I missed dearly in the last month. Slowly, I moved my fingers to trace your jaw, taking care to not wake you from your slumber. Tonight, you will be my sleeping beauty waiting for your angel to wake you up from your spell.
It was you that brought me into another heaven, more beautiful than I could ever imagine. This heaven, this dream with only you and me, each second is a blessing when we are together in each other’s arms. I want time to be stopped so we can stay like this forever.
Your smile is like a code that only I can read because you’re mine. You are the color of my world, my heaven, my home.
Because I am your angel,
Because I love you.
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Hope you enjoy this little V-day special, and hope everyone will have a good valentine's day. I'll be spending that as a work day LOL
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Wow so beautifull *stars in the eyes*
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when you let me read your random drafts regarding this plot, I was elated because I know that it is very interesting. I'm glad that you were able to finalize this OS and came up with this final Valentine's Day OS :thumbup
Imagining the scenes in this OS made me smile. I can totally imagine Yuko missing her angel and NyanNyan... well, a fallen angel :nervous I was fangirling when I was imagining NyanNyan looking up the night sky and Yuko observing her. It makes me wonder how is it to fall in love with a fallen angel (gah, Valentine's day makes me cheesy :nervous )
Great Valentine's Day OS oh immortal one :bow: lol will be waiting for your other works! Don't spend the entire Valentine's Day at work :nervous
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kahem: Thanks buddy for the love of my randomness =) so happy to see you still around lurking my stories since forever haha :twothumbs
LYNX: LOL iono that draft was just as long as this OS and it was just blabbing on a bunch of boring stuff haha. To fall in love with an angel would be KojiYuu HAHAHAHA Thanks for your comment :bow: :bow: It's too bad I will be spending the entire Valentine day at work give that I work 12 hours by the time I get home it will be 8pm at night and I have work the day after too =.=
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KIRAAA! ok i know you're not waiting for my comment coz you're waiting for ********'s comment HAHAHA.
this OS is Good and Sweet , love love love. lol. hehehe.
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weee me likey this kojiyuu OS
love at 1st sight and haruna's an angel :cathappy:
the scene in the bathroom was hilarious
a construction site is not a good place to hang around but i find it quite romantic/sweet on yuko's side (MPOV)
ok, kame not good with commenting. happy v-day or belated
p.s ..
where's my candy :on lol:
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SUGOI!
My favourite part was on the platform so beautiful!
Haruna as an angel I totally approve! :thumbsup
Thank you for valentine fic with KojiYuu
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
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:shocked that is just brilliant! =O woah... your writing is getting so good! lol really nice v-day fic ^^ very peaceful and sweet ^^ perfect fic for a day like this!
The way you wrote out the whole story flowed so good! And the scene where they sat on the crane in the night sky! that's really cool! =D really gives off a they're "in heaven" feel as long as they're will each other ^^ great job on the kojiyuu v-day fic! lol go get some well deserved rest after work today! lol i'm looking forward to your next fic, so let me know again! cuz i'm actually gonna read them now!
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ahhh i only ever come here nowadays because of you! been really lazy :fainted:
so kojiyuu<3 (: i love this pairing! almost as much as i love atsuyuu (; -winkwinknudgenudge-
yuko you lucky shorty, i wish i could've stumbled upon an angel like haruna D: idk what i would do i ever saw nyannyan irl giving me that innocent-tilted-head look~ :nya:
much like most other people, my favourite part would have to be the construction work site scene when they're just sitting suspended on one of the platforms under the starry sky and looking down on the city lights. so scenic!
It has been three days since I've met her, my angel.
<- just an edit keke. haruna you naughty angel! did you give yuko a hickey LOL.
great oneshot for valentine's day (cough singles awareness day) and I LOVED THE FLUFFINESS!!!!! :on gay:
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Is it like the first time I comment here? :? If so well... sorry :nervous I read your OS/story btw :thumbup Just lurking :theking
Will read this one as soon as I can, but according to the comments, it seems to be really sweet :oops: And it's kojiyuu =D Can't wait ^^ Happy Valentine ^^
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Awwwwww that was so cute :wub: I just love KojiYuu so much and this one made me <3 Angel ^_^ I was sad when she left but she came back :) And the end :D Well more like "Noooo it's done" but also awww :)
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This kojiyuu fic is awesome....
yuko sure is lucky i want to meet a fallen angle too
i love all the moment here it's so sweet
esp...the construction site part. ...
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Sorry for the late comment Kirachan!
Thank you for this! :heart: You just made my day even more brighter! :heart:
I can totally picture out every scenes n my head, it was so sweet~ Aww if only i can fly in real life , i would fly with you through the sky and watch all the beautiful stars~ :)
Awww, i'm so happy they still end up together after not seeing each other for one month..... and the KISS :wub: :wub: I died on that part! Gosh, i'm totally high right now! lol XD I love my OTP! :heart:
Thank you for this gift Kirachan~ I really appreciate it! Best Valentine's Day gift ever! Better than those flowers and chocolates that he gave to me, lol you know what i mean! keke XD
I'm looking forward to your next OS! Happy Valentine's Day! Mwaah! :heart:
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Sorry it took me a while to comment. School and all.
Wooot!! I knew if I waited, I wouldn't be disappointed!
All this adorbs-ness, all the fluffiness... -heartful sigh- :D
This is awesome, I really think that your writing is better than mine. But I think it's because we have different writing styles.
If only I could find a fallen angel. Preferably a Sae one :lol: :wub:
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creamcracker: yes bunny I finally got the comment that I was waiting for :wub: Thanks for leaving me a comment *light pats to head*
anoni2: KAME! Brother Flean has your candies :lol: Yea I don't know why the construction site end up being their late night attraction... but I guess when you are with an angel things are different keke. The bathroom scene just randomly appeared to me when I was writing it :)
Megumi: Seems like the platform is getting all the LOVE lol, but yes what a beautiful Angel :wub: I bet Yuko totally agrees with me.
anzai48: Yea there are a lot of hilarious pervy Yuko for KojiYuu pair but I wanted to do something different instead of a super pervy Yuko chasing after a Tsundere Haruna :lol: Still waiting for you to update your fic, can't wait to see what will happen to Yuki this time :lol:
WinterAir: Ah mortal, I got you here leaving me comments again :twisted:, I guess the crane is getting some love here from you too keke, see you should come read my stuff more often :P My stuff aren't always depressing and sad :)
apparently: At least I can still get you coming here :twothumbs, yes I still have your atsuyuu sitting around in my OS collections XD You can dream of nyannyan doing that innocent-tilted-head look and see how you will react in your dream ROFL YAY for the most odd place to hang out for a couple! Oopssss problem fixed!
bou-j525: Yup seems like Nyan Nyan learned very well from her first experience and decided to wait till it was stormy to go flying again keke. Probably planned to do that all along, hence the "we will meet again" Thanks for your comment Bou-J. I love your V-day OS TOOO!!! :wub:
chuppachup: YAY the construction site is pure win! *dreams of meeting my fallen angel*
POMMIE: you missed something LOL, right I'm getting better just to get bad at this again ROFL Sorry to disappoint you but I'm not a pervy so I can't portray a pervy Yuko that well :P and no I'm not a psycho so I can't see how I will manage to write about a serial killer for a v-day OS. But POM I totally love your avatar and sig! :wub:
haruhi16: I've been waiting for your comment since I posted, it's just not the same if you don't get to read this. *Imagines you with pure white wings* :wub: I'm glad you like the OS, sorry this immortal doesn't come with sweets but yay this beat those flowers and chocolate haha :twothumbs :twothumbs
crono1036: KenKen! Thanks for the comment, I love your OS tooooooooooooo SaeYuki! :twothumbs. Then I hope you find your own Angel Sae :) I already know who I will call my angel. :thumbsup
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lurker out in the open!
love love kojiyuu! awesome stories and awesome writing!
that last kojiyuu fic definitely made me feel fuzzy :P
yuko will forever love her nyan nyan and the fluffiness that comes from these two are just so adorable!
great writing skills too!
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T O B E H O N E S T!!!! :wriggly: :mon angel::wriggly:
:mon whimper:
T O B E H O N E S T ! ! !ahm!.... :sweatdrop:
I can't Express my feeling for now
:tama-heart: :tama-laff: :tama-yeeaah:
◄ I L O V E M A R I H A R U S O M U C H ! ! ! . . . . . :inlove::wub::inlove:
:tama-heart: :tama-laff: :tama-yeeaah:
I'm dying :bleed eyes: only to find a fiction for this pairing!!!!
IF ONLY YOU KNOW
:tama-lotsaluv:
T H A N K Y O U S O M U C H ! ! ! :bow: :k-sad:
:cry: :cry: :tama-excite: :cry: :cry:
:k-thrilled: I'm looking forward to you to wrote more about this pairing!!!! :jphip:
:k-great: :k-inlove: :k-great:
:lol: again thank you so much!! :twothumbs for this FIC
" TO BE HONEST "
FLAMEEYES!!!!
YAY more emo stories from your favorite emmortal_K LOL. The idea came from a song that I was listening to while being pissed off by parents. Part of the dialogue at the beginning is modified to fit the pair from the song.
I gotta thank my bro (Flean) for checking through it for me, since I'm kinda a bit glazed out right now... its been a while since I slept... not a good thing but I will be heading to catch a bit of sleep right after I post this. I thought about using this idea to complete one of those OS requests but I decided it isn't a good idea to make those requests emo fics HAHA. Sorry in advance for any errors in my writing, my English really isn't that great so there will be many grammar issues below. Hope you like the OS, please leave me some comments, if you have time.
Can you figure out what song sparked the idea?
To Be Honest (MariHaru)
Mariko sat alone on the couch holding onto a glass of wine, she can't remember how long she has been there in the dark. Moving her eyes from the carpet to glance up at the clock again, it has only been five minute, just quarter to three in the morning. Mariko tighten her grip around the glass with nails starting to dig into her skin.
The sound of keys ringing by the door carries itself to the awaiting model, it has been hours since she placed herself there just like every other night. Quiet steps can be heard as Mariko's wife finally returns.
As Haruna steps into the living room her only welcome was the clashing of glass on glass as she came face to face with Mariko, arms crossed over her chest staring back at her with those fierce glare.
"Where were you?" Mariko asked.
"I was at work," Haruna replied moving to leave the room, not wanting to bother with the same argument they had many times already.
"You were with her again!" Mariko accused.
"Here we go again, I already told you it's not what you think! There is nothing between me and Yuko" Haruna defended herself. "You claim that I've been having an affair behind your back, hurting you but... YOU ARE JUST JEALOUS!" unable to stay collected after being accuse by Mariko, their familiar argument once again begins.
"Jealous? Really? So what do you do? Check yourself into her room wearing skimpy bathrobes while hugging and kissing that pervert? I'm sure she will appreciate that!" it is like adding fuel to fire as the temperature in the room continue to rise.
"What proof do you have, stop making things up without any foundation or evidence! DON'T start lecturing me!"
At this time both parties are standing face to face, neither ready to back down as this is a battle of pride. Things that were left unnoticed, unsaid are not being exposed as they have came to a point that pretending will no longer be a choice.
"Starting a company and working with her is just a cover, it's a lie, I'm not dumb! What time do you normally get together?"
"Is that it? Will it make you feel better if I just give up? Give up everything and stop striving for success? If you can work than why can't I? You are crossing the line! DON'T YOU TRUST ME!" Haruna shouted back fist clenched.
"TRUST? You talk about trust, I HAVEN'T SEEN YOU IN DAYS!"
"Fine whatever you say, I'm going to sleep" Haruna shouted turning around exiting the living room. The sound of broken glass can be heard as bottles were thrown across the room, books and lamps are sweep off the tables.
"You drank too much," Haruna said as a fact.
"Don't you point fingers at me, I'm not drunk, this is all your fault," Mariko sudden turned around to look straight at Haruna, "If I leave then I don't have to be a burden to you anymore,"
"Leave, GO why don't you leave!" Haruna replied pointing to the direction of the door.
"I don't have to leave, it is you that should get lost, I am confident that I have been wronged," Mariko closed the distance to her wife.
"Get away from me," Haruna quickly pushed Mariko away.
"Let's face it you are guilty, no use crying over the facts"
"I just realize I really don't know you, who is this that I've been sharing my bed with," Haruna spoke to no one in particular as she made her way up the stairs to their room.
"I've spoiled you too much," Mariko quickly followed after Haruna, the two of them continue their quarrel while they made their way along the halls.
"I love you, the nights we spend together weren't fake," Haruna said without turning around, making quick strides to their bedroom.
"You were just curious, god knows which one of us has reason, I think about you day and night but where are you when I need you?"
"I already told you, I have work, you aren't the only one! You are just jealous, all you do is criticize and complain... you just want control" Haruna continue to reason with the raging Mariko, they both knew this was waiting to happen, the topic has been left untouched for too long, now everything is coming out all at once.
"So you are now saying I'm not good enough for you. Is that it?" Mariko asked lifting her hand to grab onto Haruna's arm only to have it fling off in one motion.
Stomping towards the closet Haruna pulled out a suitcase and started to stuff clothes into it, packing as quickly as she can with only one thought in mine and that is to leave. Anger started to rise in Mariko as she watch the girl in front of her pack her belongs. Mariko moved herself over to the closet and pulled out a couple shirts and threw it at Haruna then kicked the door close taking her anger out on it instead.
"FINE LEAVE! SEE IF I CARE!" Mariko stormed out of the room, heading back into the living room where the wine cabinet is kept. Picking up the closes bottle she quickly popped the cork out skilfully from all the practice she has been getting at nights when she stayed up drinking. Taking a swing straight from the bottle she dropped herself back into the couch, the same position she was in just moments ago. It didn't take long for the bottle to empty itself, but to Mariko it seemed too long for her liking. Unsure if it's because of the alcohol or giving the opportunity to cool down her anger has already faded, bring her back to the facts that presented itself tonight.
"Maririn..." Haruna slowly inched herself into the room, her suitcase left outside the room as she moved closer to the couch afraid that any sudden movement might set off another round of shouts.
"Can we talk?" Haruna pleaded knowing they really need to sort things out. After receiving a nod, Haruna pulled up a chair and sat herself down across from her wife.
"To be honest, I care about the way you always act superior, why does every time after an argument or fight you can ignore me," Haruna started slowly, speaking out her true feelings.
"To be honest, you treat me very cold, your tsundere attitude never reveals your feelings, I never know what I should do." Mariko spoke up after hearing Haruna's confession.
"You have a very self-centered personality, it feels that I just revolve around it but never find the center, your inner nature." Haruna readjusted her position feeling somewhat unease as she paused for a second before continuing, "at first I thought I could overcome all your shortcomings, I can love your positive and forgive your negatives but I over estimated my own abilities."
"You never appreciated all the things I did, the things I did for you, for us..." tears slow made its way down Haruna's face, drop by drop forming a pool of sadness on the ground.
"Sorry, I was never able to understand you, to let you feel loved... I thought I was willing to let myself go and love you freely but I was too absorbed in myself..." Mariko finally came in terms with her contributions to the problem. As people say a problem between two people is never just one sided, but she was too blind to see her own troubles.
They both sat there in silence, neither willing to make any eye contact as they kept their eyes on the floor, deep in thought. They both know things have finally come to an end, it is impossible to continue on like nothing ever happened. Funny thing is if they really want to, they will probably be able to casually name a million of reasons why they should split. In the past they have endured, tolerated and put up with these reasons like giving charity. Both were afraid to speak up, afraid that it proves they never loved the other enough but it's now time. It is like finally escaping this prison of love, to forget everything and using their actions to speak for themselves and to the other, to be just friends.
"I only wanted to be loved, to have no secrets between us, no distances. I wanted to be hugged whenever I come home from a rough day at work..." Haruna finally looked up at the one she loved.
"I did, it's just you never felt it, if you look back you will find those times," Mariko slowly lifted her head looking back with sadness in her eyes, "Whenever I call you, it was always forward to your voicemail, is there still love between us?"
"I think it is already very obvious, instead of dragging this on let's just call it," Haruna stood up and walked to where she left her suitcase on her way out the doors.
"Mari...Mariko, I'll have the papers sent to you after I've signed them."
"Does Yuko treat you well?" Mariko asked, taking one last look at the familiar back she faced many times in the past.
"Yes, yes she does.... What about that gachapin girl from work?" Haruna stood there facing the door, not wanting to turn around afraid that her will might wavier if she look at the girl behind her.
"We bicker all the time," Mariko answered her lips slightly curved into a smile as she thought of the shorter animated girl.
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TO BE HONEST!!! :depressed: :err: :fainted: :on polter:
:cry: :cry: :cry: HU!hu!hu!hu!hu!!! :cry: :cry: :cry:
:kneelbow: :gyaaah: :kneelbow:
after reading this in my phone in EBOOK huhuuhu :cry:
I'm so sad :on cloudeye: that they end as a friend!!!!! :bleed eyes: ◄ :tantrum:
BUT STILL!!!! :tntrm:
◄ I L O V E M A R I H A R U ! ! ! ! ! . . . :tama-excite: :tama-lotsaluv: :tama-excite:
thanks for this FIC!!!! :cheers
HOPE!! :hee: you
wrote more about the paring :)
FLAMEEYES!!!
Okay to make up for breaking up MariHaru, I wrote up a 2nd part to the originally OS now TS (two-shot). Hope this make you feel better. Sorry for any errors, I'm sure there will be many. :bow: My usual work haven't been proofread or edit.
Flean, kahem and aoi_sora: thanks for spending the time to leaving me a comment for this heart breaking fic, I apologize for breaking them up like this but I hoping to make up for it with this 2nd part that I thought up in the middle of the night.
I also like to thank everyone that read and left me a thank you: Flean, kaizoku_gal, oist, Ryo Hiroshi, kahem, Divine Vengeance, aoi_sora. At least it tells me there are people that still read my emo/depressing/dark/crazy/or whatever other category of stuff that I might come up with in the future...... haha
To Be Honest Part 2 with you
Mariko woke up next morning to the sound of her alarm, she turned to her side to find it empty of the warm body she had gotten accustom to waking up beside. Staring at the untouched pillows, blankets and sheets, Mariko can’t help but feel a slight tug in her heart. The cold and empty feeling didn’t last long, and surprisingly it isn’t as bad as what she imagine it to be. For a relationship that lasted so long, part of her want to acknowledge the lie they have been living by, it is time for them to let it go. Quickly gathering her thoughts Mariko extended her arms out for a quick stretch before getting up and heading straight to her walk in closet, glancing through the clothes she picked out her choice of the day before jumping into the shower. She still has a long day of work ahead, can’t stall now because time doesn’t stop to wait for you.
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“Good morning Mariko-sama,” Staff around the studio greeted the model as she walked in heading towards the photographer in the middle diligently checking all the equipments. Occasionally Mariko stopped to nod or wave to acknowledge the greetings she has been receiving since she stepped into the room.
“Hey, Mari-troll good morning!” the photographer greeted with her usual nickname and smile reserved only for Mariko.
“Hey,”
“Are you okay, you look exhausted,” Miichan asked voice filled with concern when her bickering buddy failed to follow through with their normal routine.
“I’m fine, it’s just…” Mariko paused to think about how she should explain to her gachapin what happen in the last 12hours. Deciding to be honest she continued, “we had another argument last night,”
“Ahhh, I’m sure things will work out for you two,” Miichan replied a little unsure of her own words, she motioned for her tall companion to take the chair in front of her before moving over to massage those tense shoulder muscles. Miichan’s hands skilfully work the knots out of her shoulders before moving in closer to the base of her neck, working her magic to release the stress bottled up.
“It’s over,” Mariko said after a couple minutes, eyes remain closed to enjoying the treatment she is receiving. She felt the hands come to a stop on her shoulders.
“Over?”
“We are getting divorced,” Mariko stated as a fact.
“Did you sit down and talk about it? You don’t want to make the wrong calls with your emotions clouding your judgements.”
“We all knew it was coming, Haruna and I, we talked a bit after… now that it is out I actually feel a lot better, I feel free and no longer tied down.” Mariko tried to explain but was finding it hard to put her feelings into words.
Miichan lean forward sliding her arms around Mariko’s neck and gave her a warm hug from behind, “just relax, release the tension from your shoulders and take a deep breath,” Miichan whispered into Mariko’s ears before releasing her hold on the girl. Mariko stayed in the same position reminiscing the warmth she felt just moments ago, eyes closed as the clouds in her mind cleared a path for the light. Her thoughts were disrupted by the sound of soft clicks and closing shutters. Mariko opened her eyes to discover Miichan standing in front of her with her camera out abusing the shutter button as she saved as many photos as she can of this moment. It is not everyday she is given the chance to see the perfect Mariko-sama so relaxed, eyes closed and a slight grin on her face. If anyone ask Miichan to describe this moment of her life, her answer would be, ‘I’ve been bless by an angel’
“Come on Mariko-sama, we have a long day ahead of us, I have yet to capture the best of you,” Miichan said with a grin while she extended her arm out for Mariko to take.
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*knock* *knock*
“Nyan nyan?” Yuko spoke towards the closed door of the guest room thinking back to last night.
In the middle of her sleep, Yuko was woken up by the knocking at her door, she found Haruna at her door step, eyes red from crying as one hand gripped tightly around the handle of her suitcase, her appearance wiped the sleep out of Yuko’s eyes immediately.
“Can’t I stay here tonight?” was all Haruna asked and without missing a beat, Yuko quickly lead the taller girl into the house and straight to the washroom to allow Haruna some time to fix herself and freshen up.
It didn’t take long before Haruna emerged from the washroom, face cleaned from the tear streaks but trouble still sketched over her features. Yuko frowned from the way the girl carried herself, it is not the same carefree, airhead girl she had gotten to know over the years.
“Do you want to talk about it?” Yuko asked as she lead Haruna to the couch, no wanting to beat around knowing it won’t do them any good.
“It’s over… and… and,” Haruna started crying on Yuko’s shoulders, “I… Mariko was right.”
“Shhhhhh…it’s okay, everything will be okay,” Yuko spoke softly while running her hands up and down her back in attempts to stop Haruna’s crying and relieve her grief.
“Yuko?” Haruna finally lifted her head from Yuko’s shoulder and looked her in the eyes. Before Yuko can decipher the complicated emotions running through those deep orbs, Haruna closed the gap between the two of them and met her lips with a gentle kiss. The contact was short, the feelings gone before it can be properly register in their mind, Haruna never broke eye contact as she continue to struggle for an answer to a question that she can’t identify.
Finally Yuko stood up pulling Haruna up in the process, “it’s late, you should get some sleep we still have work tomorrow.” Yuko purposely redirected the focus. Even if she really want to sort things out with the cat-like girl now is not the right time.
*knock* *knock*
“Nyan Nyan?” when no answer came Yuko gently pushed the door open and peeked inside.
She found Haruna sprawl out under the covers, with one arm hugging one of the many pillows close. Yuko slowly walked closer to get a better look at the sleeping beauty, with one hand she lightly brushed a couple strain of long hair to a side so she can examine the serenity washed over those stunning features. After what seems like minutes Yuko broke her staring and decided to wake the peaceful girl.
“Nyan Nyan, wake up, we are going to be late,” with a hand on each shoulder Yuko shook the girl until she showed signs of life.
“Yuuchan?” Haruna mumbled in her sleep, as she slowly open her eyes to adjust to the morning light shining in through the windows. Sitting herself up Haruna lifted one hand to rub her eyes as her other pulled the pillow up to her chest hugging it close, a pout made its way to her lips as her sleep has been interrupted.
“Come on Nyan Nyan, time to get out of bed, breakfast is ready,” Yuko lectured while she tried to pull the bigger girl up with her miniature size body.
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“Good morning!” Yuko shouted after slamming the doors open to the company, a little too cheery for the morning as her enthusiasm was returned with a couple grumpy good morning and nods from her employees.
“Yuuuuko, the samples have been completed and are in your office,” Amina shouted across the room before disappearing to who knows where.
“Come on Nyan Nyan, let's go see the finish product,” Yuko said taking Haruna’s hand and dragged her to their office.
“Yuko!” Haruna scold but allow the energetic girl drag her across the room.
“Look! Look!” Yuko shouted excitely jumping up and down checking the pieces of lingerie fitted on the mannequins, “they are perfect!”
Haruna ignored her jumping business partner and moved closer to closely examine the finishing on the products, seeing no defects on them she stepped back and gave her approval.
“They look great, now we just need to get the promotion and marketing processes going and have them start production.” Haruna said planning to concentrate on her work to take her mind of the events of the night before.
“Nyan nyan, why don’t you just relax and get some rest on the couch, I’ll go talk to them,” Yuko suggested as she pointed to the couch at the corner of their office. Seeing how Haruna is hesitating but cannot hide the exhaust written over her face, Yuko pushed her Nyan Nyan towards the couch and gently with force sat her onto the couch.
Yuko crouched down a little so she is eye levelled with the sitting Haruna, beaming her best smile, Yuko placed one hand tenderly over Haruna’s cheek, “Nyan nyan you don’t have to pretend, it’s okay to be weak. I’ll always be here if you need me okay,” after receiving a slight nod Yuko excused herself to talk to the team.
At the door Yuko glanced over to the sleeping girl before slowly backing out of the door, quietly closing the door when a voice startled her from behind.
“Yuko, did you just confess?” asked a noisy Sasshi from behind.
“HOLY! Sasshi, don’t sneak up on people!” Yuko started shouting but managed to bring her volume back to normal afraid any outburst might wake the tired girl in her office.
“Oshiri-chan! Come one tell us, what’s going on between you to? Isn’t Harunyan already married?” Mayu suddenly appeared to the other side of Yuko, scaring her short little boss. Both her and Sasshi watched Yuko quickly pick herself up from the ground with a hand still over her chest, trying to catch the breath she missed.
“She is getting divorced,” Yuko blurred out before she realize what she just said, both her hands quickly went up to her mouth to prevent herself from saying any more but the damage is already done.
“Chance boss! Go for it!” her two best friends/ employees pointed out the obvious.
“It’s not like that…. I love her but I am willing to wait, wait until she is ready,” Yuko said with determination and letting anything wavier her decision. She won’t force Nyan Nyan into anything against her will or put any pressure on her, if Nyan Nyan decided to be with her then it will be because of love.
From inside the room, Haruna heard the whole conversation outside as the door never closed properly and Yuko’s earlier outburst kept her awake. ‘Sorry Yuko, I just need some more time,’ Haruna thought as she slowly drifted off to sleep.
“You two better get to work, I want the scripts, graphics, animation and whatever else you two can think of for promotion done by the end of the week or I’ll be calling Meetan and have her take over the photo shoot for you two this weekend.” Yuko threatened.
“WHAT YOU CAN’T” Sasshi and Mayu shouted in unison, on their knees praying that Yuko was just kidding.
“Keep it down, and yes I can if you two don’t get to work right away,” Yuko emphasize each word, while keeping her voice to a manageable level.
“Nooooo, my Yuki!!” Mayu frantically ran to her desk to get started on her part of the planning.
“Ehhhhh, my Akicha!!” Sasshi ran so fast it almost seem like she teleported back to her desk if not for the fact that she tripped over a chair on her way there.
Yuko let out an evil smirk as she watched her two best friend diligently work, for sure this projects promotion will be successful given the motivations those two are given at the moment.
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*Takahashi Law Chamber*
Sitting across from barrister Takahashi, Minami is her two long time friend as they approached her for help with their current issues. Minami explained to them the details and legal segments of their divorce papers. To be honest, this was something many of them had thought would happen but wished it didn’t at the same time.
“So do both of you understand, what I just explained?” Takamina asked as she looked at them one by one to make sure she gets a nod from both party.
“By signing these papers you have agreed to and comply with the requirements for a no-fault divorce. All the clause listed will take effect. When I sign under the witness the process will be completed.” the professional barrister paused to let them digest the information, “You won’t be able to turn back.”
Takamina asked once again, just to confirm with her client/best friends that this is their wish and they won’t regret what they are about to do. Mariko picked up her pen and quickly signed her name on the papers before passing them over to Haruna. When both party had signed their life back to single freedom, they finally relax in their chairs.
“So how does it feel to be single again?” the suberi queen joked but seeing the expression on her friends face told her it didn’t work like it was intended to.
“Friends?” Haruna said as she turned to face Mariko with her sudden new found courage.
“Friends,” Mariko replied with a matching smile when their hands connected for a sincere hand shake.
“Come on, I'm going to meet Acchan and Ami for lunch, why don’t you two join us?” Takamina said as she stood up from her chair.
“Say, I have a question that I’ve wanted to ask for a long time, are you sure Ami is yours? She’s so tall…” Mariko asked as she stood towering over her petite little friend.
“… yes, apparently in Acchan’s family she is the shortest and from her mother’s side they have some tall genes floating around…” Takamina replied trying not to remember those family dinners she was force to attend.
“What about those thick brows? I mean although your aura screams ‘male’ your brows are pretty thin.” Haruna followed with her own question that she and Mariko had once argued over.
“…You should’ve seen the brows of my uncle, I think flies drown in them….”
“Oh” Mariko and Haruna uttered together.
“Wait but why is her last name Maeda and not Takahashi?” Mariko continue to bring out all her enquires while they are at it.
“You know how Acchan decided to keep her family name to avoid the hassle of going through all the paper work to change it right?” Takamina started and waited for her two friends to nod, “well when she was giving birth to Ami she was screaming and shouting for a divorce from the pain of the deliver…” she explained to her friends the one day she wanted to forget in her life, well maybe not the whole day just those couple minutes when everything happened.
“And you took that seriously?” Mariko questioned the little one as if she is insane.
“No I didn’t take it seriously…. just because of that Acchan threw a fit, coming to a conclusion that I won’t ever take her words seriously... so out of anger she told the nurse her child will be named Maeda, Ami…” Her shoulders slowly slouched down making Takamina feel even shorter then she already is beside the two towers.
“And the nurses took Acchan seriously?” Haruna asked?
“Acchan was admitted to the hospital under Maeda, Atsuko... so they thought my family name is Maeda… it was just all a misunderstanding but by the time Acchan calmed down it was already official….”
“Come on, it’s not that bad. Ami is a good kid whether she is a Maeda or a Takahashi.” Haruna said, trying to make Takamina feel better.
“Let’s go, Acchan and Ami won’t be happy if we are late, they might burn a hole in my wallet again, it’s difficult to feed Maeda’s you know.” Takamina said pushing her two friends out the door with her.
"I can walk, no need to push," Haruna complained as she tried to walk properly without being pushed around.
"Oh, one more thing Takamina, I just have to tell you that pink ribbon on your head totally clashes with your choice of clothing today." Mariko pointed out the mismatch in the barristers fashion sense.
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Pairing : my usual OTP.. :heart:
The 4 words :
So, I randomly bump up this thread for you to update bro.. :cow: (well.. maybe not that random actually since I already told you I want an OS.. :lol:)
Now get motivated and write an OS me!! :onionwhip: go! go! go! bro!! :onioncheer:
I'll be waiting for your update~ :shifty:
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and I'm still waiting updates for Impulse!! :cool1: gimme some scenes with AtsuMina in action.. :depressed:
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I'm so LA~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~TE for commenting on this, but well, the dust now is cleaned off, so...
THANK YOU FOR THIS AWESOME KojiYuu
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I'M ALIVE!!!! Well technically I'm suppose to be Immortal so, I was just hidden somewhere in the shadows :twisted: So I was pretty busy with stuff going on from my last update till maybe the beginning of June, after that I was just.... lazy I guess. Took a while trying to self motivate and have others motivate me to write, but seeing how Pommie was writing and updating I kinda started thinking again..... Thanks to brother Flean and our brilliant idea of motivation keke, here is something from this forgotten one. (We decided that Flean would randomly bump one of my threads and I was to write and update for it haha)
First the replies to the comments I've received since:
Pandah: Sorry for the late reply, I pulled a long MIA from here, and glad you like my stories and the last KojiYuu. I hope with my return you will continue to leave me comments on what you think so I know what is liked and what can be improved.
flameeyes: Hey here is a proper reply to your two comments on my MariHaru OS, they are kind of rare and I can't remember the exact reason why I wrote the pairing but I do remember promising FoF that I would write another. I did kinda come up with an idea before I disappeared and.... I can't remember exactly what I was thinking anymore LOL. Actually I don't remember what I was doing with most of my stuff, so it's almost like starting all over again and re-plotting for everything :P I hope one day I will get to writing another for this pairing too :twothumbs
sakura_drop_: Oh hi! Perfect timing :twothumbs Now I don't have to go hunt for this to update it since it's right there on the first page :twisted: Thanks for the comment they will never be too late. It is always nice to know people are reading them and actually like them instead of trying to convince myself they are decent. :lol:
Sooooo finally brother Flean: Thanks for the initial bump to get everything started again, I know I said I would get it up within a week and now I'm almost 2 weeks in since you bumped this thread LOL but better late then never right HAHA Here is your long waited Atsumina.
OS CHALLENGE from Flean: Pairing - Atsumina, Words - Smile, Blind, Ribbon, Kiss
Special thanks to HashirePomeranian for helping me beta my crappy Engrish to make it readable. All thanks to Pommie and her recent updates for Contamination (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32681.msg1031340#msg1031340) to get me thinking. I highly recommend! and God of Rock too and all those Rena OS's!!!!!!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
Okay the story....
Blinded by Love (AtsuMina)
I only wished for love to be simple.
Just once.
Only once.
Love doesn’t need to be complicated…
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When our lives cross path, things will never be the same again.
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The story of Takahashi Minami and Maeda Atsuko all begin from a simple accident.
It was a bright summer day, blue sky, white clouds. There hasn’t been a day like this in a while but unfortunately for Takamina she isn’t able to enjoy the sunshine like everyone else. The early part of her day was spent inside a room without any windows, just her, her microphone and her music.
“Takamina, you came in too early again and the last note was a tad off.” A semi robotic voice came through the earpiece, reminding the poor girl that she is still at vocal practice with her perfectionist mentor on the other side of the wall.
“Sorry,” Takamina apologized while bowing to the mic out of habit.
“Sigh, let’s call it a day here, you are distracted. Normally you won’t miss these easy cues.” As if heaven heard her prayers, the door of the room opened, letting in a beam of light that lead her out from the darkness.
Before her mentor could have a second thought, Takamina picked up her bag and ran out the doors. Her small body once again filled with energy when she came in contact with the warm breeze and gentle sunlight. Ignoring the looks she received, she continued to hop, twirl, and (try to) skip to the music playing through her newly bought headphones. Skipping to the next song, Minami started moving her arms to the music, fully enjoying her newfound freedom of the day.
“Manatsu no Sounds good!, tsubuyakinagara tsugi no step e susumitai ne koi no curriculum…”
Hidden behind the crowd, the shortie half sang and half hummed the lyrics to herself while she waited for the pedestrian lights. She watched until the walking lights came up before making her way across the busy road, mind still on the lyrics and wishing to be at the beach like the singers in the PV.
“Sorry.” those were the first words Takamina heard when she quickly pulled off her headphones to repeat those exact same words. Quickly she crouch down and started to pickup those books she knocked over. Being the shorter of the two, she was able to gather them together before their owner.
“Sorry I wasn’t watching where I was going.”
*honk* *honk*
Realizing where they are Takamina made a move to finish crossing the street when sudden an arm grabbed onto her bag and dragged her back to where she started. Confused to what is going on Takamina could only follow the strange girl until they came to a stopped.
“Sorry, I didn’t mean to knock over your books, are you hurt? If you need me to replace anything let me know but I don’t have any money on me right now, but I can give you my number, then I can pay you back after, but …” Minami continue to ramble on, apologizing and bowing to the girl thinking something must be wrong. Her actions were stopped when she heard sounds of giggling then laughter.
“Come with me.” Once again Takamina was dragged across the city without knowing the name of the girl in front of her, but for some strange reason she didn’t mind that at all. If only she wasn’t being dragged by the straps of her backpack, it might be a bit more enjoyable stroll across the parks and busy streets.
“Here are your orders. Please enjoy your food.” The waitress said, placing the respective orders in front of them.
An awkward silence filled the air as the two sat across from each other, not knowing what to say. After all, they just met for the first time minutes ago. Takamina looked up at the girl sitting across from her only to find a pair of curious eyes watching her every move. Embarrassed from the attention, Takamina quickly looked back down to her favorite katsudon.
“Maeda Atsuko, Nice to meet you.” The sudden introduction caused Takamina to look up once again, this time taking a bit more time to examine the girl in front of her. The bright smile of hers matches very nicely to today’s beautiful weather, both addictive and attractive.
“Takamina.. I mean Takahashi Minami,” The nervous introduction and mess up only caused the poor girl to shrink into her chair, trying to become even smaller then she already was. Of course, the fact that she’s sitting with a total stranger having lunch didn’t to calm her excessively stimulated heart either.
“So what are you listening to?” Atsuko asked reaching for the headphones around Takamina’s neck.
“Maeda-san!” Takamina protested.
“Acchan,” Atusko replied to her confused companion, “Call me Acchan,”
“Then call me Takamin.,” She said smiling in return.
After that there weren’t any more struggles from Takamina as she willingly gave up her headphones to the girl before her. After a few minute of watching the girl nod to her choice of music, Takamina decided her Katsudon had been neglected long enough and needed desperate attention. Focusing solely on her food, she did not notice Acchan removing the headphones and placing them on the table. Of course she also missed the fact that Acchan had slowly advanced and started to lean closer across the table.
“Minami,” Acchan whispered she she closed in before leaning off to the side.
Surprised and shocked by the closeness, Takamina froze solid with a spoon full of katsudon half in her mouth. Her heart started to pound as she could feel the warm breath slowly tickle her ears.
“You have some rice on your cheeks.”
Acchan giggled from the reaction she is got, before sitting herself back in her chair. Her hands reached over to picked off the lone grain of rice sitting on the side of Takamina’s cheek. Then as if nothing had happen Acchan turned to her devour her own food, ignoring the stunned and paralyzed girl sitting across from her. Food always comes first right?
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[Hey Minami, are you free? Can we meet?]
[I’m at the studio right now.]
[Can I come?]
[Sure.]
It didn’t take long for Takamina to realize that when it comes to Acchan, she just can’t say no. Since the first time they met for some unknown reason, no matter what the other girl comes up with Takamina would agree and comply to her wishes. Just like no matter how many times Takamina had tried to get Acchan to call her Takamina, it just didn’t work. It was always Minami to her. She spent 3 days trying to figure it out and 3 sleepless nights thinking about it to the point she just gave up and let it be. It’s just easier this way.
“Okay, we are done for today.” The sound of her mentor came through the earpiece, breaking her from her thoughts.
“Thanks for your help and guidance. You can go first and I’ll stay to pack up.”
“You sure?”
“Yes, I have a friend coming to meet me here.” Takamina explained as she started to put away her music sheets.
“Alright, but remember to lock the doors when you leave.”
Working diligently, the extra chairs and equipment were placed back into their respective storage in hopes that the studio would be clean before her visitor arrives. Minami took one last look around the room to make sure nothing was out of place. Satisfied with her work, she turned to leave only to find herself blocked by a body. The body of none other Maeda Atsuko.
“When did you get here?” as the surprise Takamina, this seems like a usual for her when Acchan is involved.
“A little while ago,” Acchan replied as she invited herself in and inspected to room, “Hey, Minami. Can you sing for me?”
“Ehhhhhh?”
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Making one last inspection of her freshly baked cookies to make sure they were perfect, she packed them up before getting ready to head out.
“She will love them for sure.” Acchan spoke out to herself while nodding, fully convinced by the words.
This morning when she woke up, something felt different. Convinced that it was a good sign, she decided to bake some cookies and visit her. Lightly skipping her way to her destination, she couldn’t stop smiling as she looked at the bright blue clear skies. The day is as nice as the day she accidentally bumped into Takamina.
Stepping through the front doors, she heard the sounds of beating drums and ripping strings.
‘Maybe she will finally sing for me today’ she thought, but her eyes told her a different story.
In front of her is a kissing couple, but not just any couple. A couple that includes the lead singer of the band and some random girl. The random girl wasn’t that important, important is the fact that the random girl is currently kissing her long time girlfriend. Raged by the display she is seeing, Acchan charged over and pushed them apart before lifting her hand to slap the random girl. But her hand never made contact, it was held back by her girlfriend, Yamamoto Sayaka.
“Saya... why?”
“I’m sorry, but we’re through.” Sayaka said, pushing Acchan away.
“WHAT!? Just for some random girl?” She asked, not able to believe what she just heard.
“She isn’t just a random girl. I love Miyuki,”
“You BITCH!” Acchan tried to attack the girl behind Sayaka but was only shoved back into the bar counter by her ex.
“This is all my fault, you leave her alone!”
Acchan reached out and grabbed a half empty bottle of vodka before storming out of the bar after turning around to glare at the couple one last time. Of course things became complicated when she bumped into Takamina right outside the door.
“Hi, Acchan. How.....” Takamina didn’t get to finished her sentence as Acchan walked off with the half empty bottle, taking a couple swigs of the clear liquid while walking down the street.
“Acchan, are you okay? What happen?” She asked trailing the quickly intoxicated girl.
“Stop following me!” But that didn’t stop Takamina.
“I told you to GO AWAY!” Acchan shouted once again, pushing the shorter girl away.
Takamina continue to silently watch over the crying girl, watching her down the rest of the bottle as they continued to walk down a random path. Today was supposed to be a good day.
Frustrated by the lack of alcohol in the now empty bottle, Acchan dropped it on the ground and watched it shatter into pieces before hopping onto a ledge of the upcoming elevated path. Step by step, the tipsy girl balanced herself on the narrow ledge with her arms out, laughing along the way.
“Acchan, maybe you should come down, it’s dangerous up there.” Takamina said as she walked slightly behind the wobbling girl, arms out ready to catch her if she fell.
As the ledge slowly rose higher and higher Takamina became more and more concerned, worried that the girl would fall. To the intoxicated, Acchan everything just seemed fun at the moment. She shouted out to the sky, and laughed out loud to everything around her. Unable to watch any longer, Takamina stepped forward and grabbed onto Acchan’s waist. Tightening her grip, Minami tried to used all her available strength to drag the resisting girl down from the ledge, but unfortunately it wasn’t enough. Acchan was able to free herself from Takamina’s grip before pushing the girl away, but the backlash from the force caused Acchan to lose her balance.
“Acchan!”
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*Acchan’s POV*
“Acchan, you are awake! How are you feeling?”
Her voice was the first I heard as I start to come out of my sleepiness. My sore body ached all over like I slept for a long time in the same position. I don’t remember how I got here, everything is a fuzz to me. Last thing I remember was the nice clear blue sky. I think her voice was the first I heard when I woke up but I can’t be sure, I think I heard her calling for me before but I can’t remember. I was sleeping... I opened my eyes to check the time but...
“Minami? Where are you? Why is it so dark?” Acchan asked, “Why don’t you turn on the lights?” confused by the lack of visual, I searched with my hands towards the direction of body shuffling.
“Acchan, everything will be okay.” I heard her say with her cracking voice. A pair of warm hands took a hold of mine and held them tightly. For a minute I felt secure, no longer detached and alone. But it only lasted a minute.
“Minami! What’s going on? Why can’t I see anything?” I tried waving my hands in front of me but not even a shadow, I reached over trying to find the light but I only served to knock over the glass that was settled over the side table. I was terrified but what shattered everything was the sound of chirping birds, singing to welcome the day.
“Acchan, listen to me. Listen, everything is only temporary, it will get better,” I felt the bed shift so I tighten my grip, afraid that Minami would leave me, but instead I felt her arms come around me. She held onto me, protecting me from this unfamiliar darkness.
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“GO AWAY!!! LEAVE!!!” I tried to reach for anything that I could get a hold of and threw them in the direction I think the nurses are standing. I don’t need anyone to help me, I don’t need their pity.
“Acchan!!!” I felt familiar arms around my waist trying to help me up from the ground. I resisted by trying to push her away, but the more I pushed, the tighter she held on.
“Are you okay? Does it hurt anywhere?” She asked with the same gentle voice I remember. Never has she ever raised her voice at me, no matter how out of line I was acting. The things I’ve said I wished I could take back.
“Why?” I finally asked.
“What?”
“Why are you doing all this?” I asked again, “Aren’t you are you doing so much for me? I don’t need your pity...”
“Acchan.” I felt her hand weave into mines and her other came around my shoulder for another comforting embrace that I became customed to.
“Why? Tell me why are you doing so much for me?” I repeated my question. I could fell tears forming in my eyes.
“It’s because I love you.”
I couldn’t believe my ears, from all the times I remember I haven’t really done anything for her, only calling her when I needed someone. I never really took the time to listen to her so why. I really can’t understand. The first time we met, I just stormed out into the streets because Saya neglected me and forgot about our anniversary. She decided that heading out for a drink with her buddies was more important, so I just ran and because I wasn’t watching where I was going I bumped into Minami. All those times I’ve called Minami was because Saya wouldn’t pick up my calls but Minami never hesitated to answer even when it was 3 in the morning. When Saya refused to sing for me, Minami was always there to sing me a lullaby, enchant me with her voice and bring me to peace. Thinking back, she really did so much for me, all the time I went to her as a replacement to fill my void she never refused.
“But Minami...”
“There is not reason to it, I love you because I love you, from the day we met, your first smile, your text and everything about you, I just fell and I never want to get back up.” she said.
“But I’m not worth it, you can do so much better...” I said in a whisper, afraid that if she heard the words she would wake up and leave me.
I felt her retract her arm around me. ‘So this is it, the ugly truth.’ I though as tears started to slowly roll down my cheeks, the salty taste felt bitter. I really thought she was going to leave but instead she once again locked her hand in mine and I felt the touch of silk ribbons around my wrist. No, I should say our wrist as she tied it the ribbon snugly around them. It’s the same ribbon that she wears in her hair, the one that I complained about, the one that clashes with everything she wears, the one that is now holding us together.
“You are worth the world to me, I don’t need each day to be colorful, I just want to be with you. I will be your guide, I can be your eyes, I will always be there for you.”
I felt her other hand make its way to my cheek to wipe those tears away, replacing them with a tender kiss under my eyes.
“Minami,”
“Shhhh, don’t speak.” She said, placing a finger to my lips to stop me from finishing my words. Her finger slowly slid down my lips, and rested under my chin, serving it’s purpose to guide me to happiness. I felt her warm breath on me, I felt her warmth slowly invade into my space and finally those soft lips made the last connection, sealing her promise with a kiss. It wasn’t anything passionate, it wasn’t anything wild. Just a simple kiss filled with love.
Since that day she never left my side...
No matter how complicated the situation is, as long as she is there, a problem is no longer a problem.
Because there is love.
I can see everything more clearly.
The sky will always be the same as the time we met,
Her smile will be the same adorable smile I remember.
Her words sealed with a kiss,
A ribbon that ties us together.
Just the her and I.
Simply Blinded
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aww mimani your are a gentleman :D
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BROOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Finally my AtsuMina OS!!! :onioncheer:
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LOL.. I forgot to edit this.. :lol: I read it on my phone yesterday..
Well, when I choose the word blind I was thinking of the situation where AtsuMina are both blind to their true feelings.. being tsundere to each other lol.. :P but you end up making Acchan blind!!! :bleed eyes:
Sayanee and Milky..lol.. I don't see that coming.. Acchan and oppaichan are together and I'm not happy at all the part Acchan got dumped.. :angry: but I guess that's a good thing.. if not she wouldn't realized Taka had always love her.. :wub: :wub:
And the ribbon part.. I don't know why you almost got me in tears!! :cry: and when Taka kiss under Acchan's eyes.. owh! that part just.. :cry: :cry:
but overall.. this is a really nice AtsuMina OS!! :wriggly: (except for Acchan end up being blind! :smhid)
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What have you did to Acchan's eyes???! :mon nwei:
But because of that Atsumina get to be together, so I forgive you :mon determined:
Thanks for the update ~ :mon inluv:
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Hwat? Acchan was dumped! :mon spit: Still can't believe there is girl who dumps Acchan even in a story :rofl:
Nice Kira-san but you make Acchan blinds :mon POd: hehe ater all Minami will be Acchan's eyes, so sweet :mon inluv:
Thanks for your update :monk gboy:
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I love how they met each other. Cliche, but still d'awwww. And then, They start interacting, spending time together. But then we are revealed she has a girlfriend. I'm like 'WHAT?' Actually, I was happy that Sayanee dumped Acchan for Milky, even though how could she dump our dear Acchan, and in such a horrible way :smhid :smhid :smhid
I'm not happy with Acchan's blindness, but I myself tend to make characters suffer so to make the story better, so it's okay I guess.
No she has her Minami, tied to her with a ribbon :wub: :wub:
At last AtsuMina is united :wub: :wub: :wub:
Thank you for this bittersweet story :bow: :bow: :bow:
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Amazing, sweet and full of love. I'm really happy that I read your fic. It made my day. :heart:
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I'm blinded by atsumina's love XD kyaaaaaaaaaa
Thank you for this! muah
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finally you posted it! :luvluv2: sorry for always replying late :sweat:
anyway, I always love stories where characters would bump into each other (literally) :nervous and you're right, your story have that :stoned: effect that makes your stories unique. Great job! :on GJ:
I'll be waiting for your other updates then! :onioncheer: :on gay:
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Thanks everyone for reading Blinded by love and took the time to give me a thank you and a comment. I guess when someone is in love they often becomes blind to everyone around them. Good thing Takamina will always be there for Acchan. :twothumbs
Haruko: Of course =) Takamina will always be a gentleman :lol: Especially when it comes to Acchan :thumbsup
Flean: Hmmmmm wondering about your thoughts on this, still says saving spot for edit :P What do you think bro?
ichikawa: LOL well I guess if being blind gets them together its okay :twisted: but then who knows, maybe the damage is repairable..... :O
moekare: Wel if the girl never dumped Acchan then there won't be any AtsuMina!!! LOL
sakura_drop_: HAHA yea don't you just love how I always randomly add in those WHAT! moments? It really didn't matter who I put as the ex-girlfriend because they were only going to have that couple sec appearance and then will run off with some other girl XD So I just went with Sayaka and Miyuki :twisted: And really it's Flean's fault that the character has to suffer because one of the words that has to be the soul of the fic is "Blind" so it was all preset and determined that one of the will have to bare the "Blindness" :twisted: Thanks god Flean also gave me ribbon to fix the problem HAHAHA
TakaminaBG: Thank you for reading and leaving me a comment. I'm glad you like the story. :bow:
miayaka: Yes blinded by their love because AtsuMina love is so bright the sparkles will blind everyone else in sight! 8)2
AFLynx: Yes it took me a while, I was waiting for Pommie to fix my Engrish and translate it to English LOL, well should I write more bumping stories then? You know you like my "WTF" effects because you don't see them often elsewhere bwahahahahha. I'm waiting for your updates too!!!!
THANK YOU AGAIN!!!! :bow:
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HNNG. I love it! I love the way Takaboy is so gentleman. ohohoho~
Though it's a bit sad Acchan became blind, :OMG: hopefully takamina will not leave her forever.. Hee :luvluv2:
Thank you for your update!
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Keisthename: Thanks for the comment, glad you like it and of course Takamina will never leave Acchan. Here is a glimpse of what their life together would start out like.
*Extra scene*
"Watch your step," Takamina said while leading Acchan into her apartment where they will be living together from now on.
Acchan remain silent through the trip, deep in thought from the new developments. She can't remember the reason why this arrangement came along but for sure she is glad that Takamina kept her promise and is willing to help her through everything. But there are still somethings that Acchan feel quite insecure about. since they left the hospital Acchan has been trying to hold it in, not wanting Takamina to know but its becoming more and more difficult as time ticked away.
"Acchan? Are you okay? You've been quiet since we left the hospital," Takamina asked.
'Oh shoot she noticed...' Acchan thought.
"Acchan, you know you can tell me anything, I will be here to help you,"
"Minami... I need to go." Acchan finally said all serious as she held onto Takamina's hand.
"I'm sorry, I didn't know you feel this way, I guess I rushed things a little bit. It's okay if you don't want to live with me," she tried to say without sounding sad and hurt by the words.
"No Minami, I really need to go," Acchan said again as she continue to held onto Takamina, her straight pose beginning to slouch a little with a noticeable bounce to it.
"Oh..." the shorter of the two finally catch on, and immediately begin to turn red.
"Minami." Acchan spoke again with a bit more urgency behind her word, as it is starting to become a little unbearable. She can care less about the embarrassment at a time like this, plus it isn't like she can see, but part of her kind of want to see Takamina's reaction too.
Feeling a tug in her hand, she followed her 'eyes' who lead her to the bathroom before they came to a stop. Acchan would love to just run in there but certain circumstances made that a little impossible for her and her little companion seem to have forgotten that little bit of detail. Feeling the ribbon loosen from her wrist and the little push forward, Acchan knew Takamina has forgotten some important details.
"Minami..... I need help," Acchan spoke out while keeping a firm grip on Takamina's hand. She can feel a flush of heat to the hand while sweat began to build up between their palms. If she wasn't in that much of a hurry, maybe she could've tease the embarrassed girl some more. But right now there are more important matters, so quickly Acchan tugged Takamina into the bathroom with her, they might as well get use to this.
"Minami."
"Hmmm?"
"I think I need to take a shower."
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dawwww getting called away... I guess I'll fix it up later or maybe not :P
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This scene....... :heart: :heart:
Amazing. Minami. Baka da na... :D
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Bro!!!!!! You're such a teaser!!! :banghead: me want moar!!! XD
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Bro!!!!!! You're such a teaser!!! :banghead: me want moar!!! XD
I second that, oh you teaser you!!!! :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: NEED.A.CONTINUATION.NOW. :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
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Bro!!!!!! You're such a teaser!!! :banghead: me want moar!!! XD
I second that, oh you teaser you!!!! :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: NEED.A.CONTINUATION.NOW. :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
I TRIPLE THAT~ XD XD XD XD
Teaser-san! Want moarrrrrrr~~ :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
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TakaminaBG, Flean, sakura_drop_, ichikawa....
Oops... what have I gotten myself into lol
Who knows maybe there will be more for this pair of AtsuMina, or maybe there will be another story for them HAHA
One think for sure is Takamina will never get tired of hearing Acchan call her "Minami" HAHAHAHA
or.... I can just keep it up with random teases :twisted:
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I demand another story of them!! :jphip: :jphip: a continuation maybe!! :yep: :yep:
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sorry for being dense, but can someone tell me what exactly happened? :bow: Is it what I think it is?? :panic:
They are so comfortable with each other, it makes my heart fuzzy. Maybe the continuation can be a shower scene together? :drool:
Maybe that's a bit inappropriate...lol
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Immortal san can we have a shower scene :twisted:
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I READ IT BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOW YOU HAVE NO CHOICE BUT TO KEEP WRITING MOOOAAAR :twisted: :twisted:
Hmmm.
Blind D: OMG D: I didn't expect that, but it's a great idea. You know, with the vodka, I expected a coma or something really "end of the world"-ish... but blindness ^^;; Wow 8D Especially since you add that little extra scene XD I'm curious now so maybe write the sequel of it XD It's really cute how Takamina helps Acchan ^_^ And damn Acchan's ex is really -___- But at least she's not alone anymore :)
And though darkness seems frightening at first... well Takamina is there :) So cheesy & cute :wub: :lol:
But yeah blindness.... good "sad" idea... I had never thought about that one... too bad XD But no really, you did very well with it :theking And of course as usual, nice writing style ^^ I loved the end :oops:
So yeah. I read it 8D It was awesome 8D Goooood job :thumbsup Hope you will write more in the future BECAUSE IM WAITING ALREADY ^_^
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Flean: Right a continuation... we will see about that bro =p, Just need one of those nights when I'm going crazy and loaded with a lot of coffee then maybe I'll come up with something :twisted:
saeyu: Well what happen is ... whatever you think happened LOL Hmmm a continuation in the shower.... anyone wanna write that out for me? *Calling jpervz group --> I need one of those that ranked in our annual jpervz election to prove their worthy of making that list bwahahahahaha.* :twisted:
Tanchan: Yes there can be a shower scene, but I'm not sure if I can be the one writing that... might need someone to help me =p
bou-j525: OMG Bouj!!! ...... dawwww why do you always leave me with no choice *pouts* and those evil smiles too. Blame brother Flean for the blindness, it was just easier to make one blind then to go into all the inner feelings and all. Why would it be a coma, not enough interaction for them afterwards if one of them only lies there. Plus there won't be little extra scenes if it was really "end of the world"
Hmmmm sequel, I will have to think about that. I kinda had an idea for kojiyuu when I was busing to work earlier but... I forgot after getting busy dealing with things... :banghead:
Immo <-- best for emo, sad, depressing atypical stories with atypical pairings.... bittersweet FTW~!
Thanks for the comments peeps, I'll see what I can do about writing some more stuff. I have ideas here and there just need to actually write that's all.....
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uwaaaa the extra scene is just too adorable wahahaha it's so cute! gahd I want to see more of these kind of things.. how they live together experiencing these and more personal ones (if there any personal than this). wahahaha :hiakhiakhiak:
THANK YOU! Please continue writing about this :kneelbow:
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YOU LEFT US HANGING!!! :depressed:
ME WANT MORE PLEASE! :on shady:
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Ow~ it's so cute~
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More Extra 'Shower' Scene Pleaseee.... :panic:
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the extra is just too... CUTE! XD XD XD
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RAWR! Immo_K reporting in for Single Awareness Day! .... I mean Valentine's Day =)
So I know I've been away for a long time and unfortunately work and school had taken over my life. Actually I'm a little tight on time before my exam in March, still haven't finished all my assignments yet... YAY for online courses and self studying. My fault for leaving stuff last minute but seeing how doing is suppose to be a special day I decided to quickly put together a little something. It really isn't much and BEWARE FOR BAD ENGLISH! lol I just quickly wrote it up while half reading my textbook so the quality my be a bit.... but I promise I'll do better next time. Alright back to studying....
Oh wait gotta reply those comments too =)
Keisthename: Thanks for your comment, I would love to write up a bit more about their life together but I will have to save it more for next time. Maybe some more random extra scenes.
miayaka: Miiiiiiiiiaaaaaa, here a bit more on them, not exactly what you are looking for but it will do for now I think.
kahem: Thanks for the comment :thumbsup
Takamina_Captain: *salutes* will do captain, I will try to add some extra scenes later, got some books I need to destroy... I mean read first.
Trickster: Thanks for the comment :bow:
***For those that are not aware, you have to read the previous OS, Blinded by love, first before proceeding to this one. ***
***Ahh forgot to mention the song in the song is called Valentine by Kina Grannis =)
Blinded by Love: Be my Valentine (AtsuMina)
“You are worth the world to me, I don’t need each day to be colourful, I just want to be with you. I will be your guide, I can be your eyes, I will always be there for you.”
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Love is a special thing,
I forgot when it started, but I have these feelings for you, these feelings of love.
It’s very simple I think I’ve fallen for you.
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It’s been awhile since I moved in, and slowly I’ve become accustom to this house, each corner and furniture I’ve hugged and greeted personally many times. If not for Minami I don’t think I will ever be able to live on.
I don’t know if I can consider this as starting fresh but for the first couple days I really felt like nothing, I can’t do anything, I can’t walk without crashing into things, I can’t eat alone without stabbing myself, I can’t read or write or watch TV. Everything is lost, but she never left. Minami stayed by my side, together we filled in the emptiness with new memories, a new life and a new language. I never thought braille can be so difficult but slowly I started to get the hang of it.
Did you know Minami will write me letters in braille just to help me practice? I don’t remember when was the last time or the first time I’ve had someone write me letters but in a sense I feel warm knowing that she would spend the time to express her thoughts and feelings through writing. It just when I hold onto these pieces of paper I can feel the love and caring, like being able to grasp it with my hands.
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“Yuko, where are you taking me?” I asked as I was suddenly dragged out of the empty house by my good little friend.
“Well, anywhere is better than staying in that boring house,” she said as she continue to lead me along the busy streets.
I guess she is right, I've been doing nothing but sitting there waiting for Minami to come home. In the last week she’s been gone quite often, every time I asked she would say there is some business she has to attend to but never tell me anything like she used to. Maybe she’s gotten tired of me....
“Acchan stop, I know what you are thinking but I'm sure Minami isn't like that, you just need to get out of the house once in awhile and feel the fresh air, come there is a place we need to be at,” Yuko said as she continue to drag me around, making turns here and there.
Maybe Yuko is right, but how can she explain all the times Minami suddenly retracts her hand from me when I tried to hold them. Even though I haven’t been keeping track I know we haven’t visit the neighbouring parks for our leisure walks for a while now. How can I not think anything of this....
“Tada! We are here, just watch your steps we have a couple flight of stairs to hike,” a suddenly highly energetic Yuko spoke as if there are girls waiting for her the stairs.
As I walk up the stairs, I can’t help but feel like I know this place, I think I’ve been here before. I’ve slowly followed Yuko up the stairs and then came to a stop, I can hear shuffling footsteps and hushing sounds around me followed by the sound of a closing door.
“Yuko?” I called out to her but no answer so I tried again, “Yuko?”
“Acchan,” I heard my name being called.
“Minami?” there is no doubt who that voice belong to, one that I will never forget.
I felt her gently lead me over to a chair, “sit here,” she spoke softly. Curious as to what is all this is able, I obediently sat down. A breeze from the vents carried a smell of fresh roses, the lovely fragrant dispersed into the air. I can imagine the room decorated with different color of roses, whites, pinks, yellows and red.
“Acchan, do you still remember the day when you asked me to sing for you?” Minami asked stopping my thoughts and imagination.
“You said you weren’t ready and refused,”
“Atsuko, Happy Valentine’s,” I didn’t know, I really didn’t know today is valentine’s. I thought to myself as I heard a start of a beautiful note. I finally realize why Minami wouldn’t hold my hand, its not because she doesn’t want to... she can’t...
The sound of the resonating strings from the guitar brought the music to my ear as I finally heard the singing that I’ve been waiting for. I could feel tears collect in my eyes as I took in the lyrics.
Love, it's a special day
We should celebrate and appreciate
That you and me found something pretty neat
And I know some say this day is arbitrary
But, it's a good excuse
That I love to use baby
I know what to do baby
I, I will love you
I'll love you
I'll love you
Love, I don't need those things
I don't need no ring
I don't need anything
But you and me, cause in your company
I feel happier, so happy and complete
And it's a good excuse
That I love to use baby
I know what to do baby
I, I will love you
I'll love you
I'll love you
Yeah, it's a good excuse
That I love to use baby
I know what to do baby
I, I will love you
I'll love you
I'll love you
So, won't you be my honeybee?
Giving me kisses all the time
Be mine
Be my valentine
So, won't you be my honeybee?
Giving sweet kisses all the time
Be mine
Be my valentine
Oh oh oh oh oh
Be my Valentine
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“Minami~” I called from the table waiting for dinner to be served. The smell of freshly made katsu filled the house as I listen to her diligently work around the kitchen.
“Yes, Acchan?” I can only imagine the way she should be sticking her head out from the kitchen.
“Your katsu will be overcooked soon,” I said with a smell when I heard her running back to attend to the fires. I laughed a little as I listen to her frantically try to save her favourite dish. “Minami you are suppose to make something special for today,”
“But I like Katsu,” in my mind this is where she should be pouting.
“Just for you then, but next time I expect a nice candlelight steak dinner,” I smiled as I continue to listen to her humming a familiar melody.
Yes I don't need anything but you and me,
Minami, I love you.
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“I will never give up my love for you, Atsuko, if you ever feel tired you can rest your head on my shoulder and listen to my heart beat for you,”
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HNGGGG this is soooo sweet! :heart: :heart: :heart:
I'm so happy that you have not forgotten about that previous story of yours (Blinded by Love)! I mean, after a long time... you've written a continuation for it. I really love that story of yours and I wouldn't get tired if you make continuation for it a thousand times. I know I sounded ridiculous but I'm serious about it. That's how I love your work! XD
Writing a story about a blind and showing their love perfectly, I would really buy that!!! Great job! great job!! aaaah sorry I got over excited on this. :wub: :wub: :wub:
Happy Valentines and Thank you for this. I shall be waiting for more extra/random scenes !! =))
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thank you for this!
blinded by love atsumina!!
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Happy Single Day!!! :P l mean Happy Valentines Day :heart:
It's been quite awhile since I last commented in here :) although I just lurk around, silently stalking everyone in here :P
anyway thanks for that short but cute Blinded by Love Valentine special story
Miss you Kira!!!
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“I will never give up my love for you, Atsuko, if you ever feel tired you can rest your head on my shoulder and listen to my heart beat for you,”
kiraaaaaa
rawr rawr rawrrrrrr
thank you!!!!!!
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hugs*
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this is so sweet :heart:
“You are worth the world to me, I don’t need each day to be colourful, I just want to be with you. I will be your guide, I can be your eyes, I will always be there for you.”
i love the each lines here!
gaaahh so sweet!
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my heart melts.. aww atsumina.. cute atsumina
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Kyaaaaaaaaa :inlove: yeah a continuation for the previous fic and on valentine too. Awesome job as usual and of course since the couple is Atsumina, it can never go wrong. Man I wish some japanese directors would visit this forum and turn one of the oneshots into a movie XD
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Nice one shot for v-day :thumbsup
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Keisthename: Thank you :bow:, I'm glad you like it and I hope to have more random extra scenes here and there for this =) I do have a couple in mind but just never got the time to get to it. Actually I have a lot in mind that I haven't been able to get to. If school, assignment, exams and work never existed I'll have everything updated by the end of the week :banghead: But in the mean time, just settle for these mini updates. I'm actually tempted to just write short little updates for some just to get it going but I kind of need to pass my course since I don't want to pay for it again HAHA
chibiusa: Thank you for reading and liking the short little continuation of my previous OS. I just thought it would be a shame if I don't update something on V-Day
blughise: OMG!! BLUUUUUUUUUUUUUU where have you been, I miss you toooO! Thanks for appearing to comment on my OS, Now I wish it was better in quality for it to be worth your appearance =O XD
miayaka: Miiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaaaa :P if you ever feel tired you can rest your head on my bro's shoulder and listen to her heart beat for you HAHAHA. At least I know where I used all the sugar in my life =p
Haruko: LOL nuuuu don't melt! *puts your heart in the freezer* You need to stay alive to wait for my upcoming updates that I hope to write after my exam.
Tanchan: Yup I finally had time to add a longer extra-scene =) Not quite long enough to my new trend of updates but hopefully there will be more to come.
kurosawa87: Thanks for reading and liking the short v-day shot, I wasn't sure if I should post at first but I thought since it is v-day I can take a break from studying =)
Thank you all that read and commented or left me a thank you =) I'm still alive just kinda lurking and a little inactive kekeke
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Wow I really love your fic :D It's so sweet! Atsumina is awesome :D & Thanks for the valentine special udate :) Really enjoyed reading it!
Looking forward to ur future updates~
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Kya~atsumina so sweet :heart:
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Great atsumina fic there....
so cute and sweet
Can't wait to see more atsumina
Thank you for the fic
:wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
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So sweet!!
I love the atsumina fanfic :heart:
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To kuro_black29's request I have reposted OS-Heat of the Night (WMatsui)
Thanks you for reading my fic's. I didn't think anyone will still read these old stuff. Makes me wonder if I should still continue those other projects that I left unfinished...