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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Loveforever on November 30, 2011, 09:17:31 PM

Title: "Change of heart" Chapter 7 Updated 7/26/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: Loveforever on November 30, 2011, 09:17:31 PM
"Change of heart"

Chapter 1

"Goodbye America! Hello Japan!"

Two closeted bestfriends are japanese descents who grew up together living in America because of their parents migration.
They are going to visit Japan to furthur their studies. Well that makes one of them. Also giving them a chance to learn more
about their heritage. During this journey they will experience life on their own..Do they really know what to expect of it?
Well we're about to find out.

"Are you excited to go study abroad in Japan? Cause I am!! I can't wait!"

"Eh!? Did you hit your head on something? Since when do you care about school?"

"I'm just going there for the chicks!There will be tons of new girls to mess with...finally!
I'm tired of seeing the same old faces. Since you will be gone for a whole year with me,
you should consider getting rid of that girlfriend of yours."


"Are you kidding me? Mari-chan means alot to me! Unlike you I stick to one girl..in the mean
time you need to chill out with all these random girls showing up at your house,one day your
mom is going to find out that you're gay!"


"Haha,don't worry so much..she won't know. And I can't help it if the ladies likes me..maybe
if you stop being such a nerd..they will like you too! Come on lets have some fun!


"No way..I'm only going there for my studies and nothing more,I'm looking forward to graduate.
You're one of the few lucky ones who was fortunate to be born in a rich family..I'm not..so I really need this."


"Aww come on! Stop being such a party pooper! I'll help you with money if you need it..how
much ever I want, my mom will give it. I can lend it to ya. Don't worry about it, we're bestfriends
and bestfriends look out for eachother."


"No thanks! One day I'll make it on my own..and that way Mari-chan  and i can get married
 where it's legal. And live happily ever after."


"Ha,don't be stupid! Happily ever after only exists in fairy tales..Speaking of her.. Did she gave it up yet?"

" What do you mean gave it up? Wait..you mean..what! No..of course not. She's waiting until she's ready
and I'm okay with that! I actually like someone who can respect themselves."


"Oh god.. You're so whipped. 2 years and she didn't give it up yet? Jeez If it was me. I would say "on to the next one!"

"Hey! Shut up and go pack up. Meet me at the airport.I'm gonna go see her before we leave."

TBC...
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How is it? I wanted to try something different from being in AKB.. :banghead:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" 11/30/11
Post by: kahem on November 30, 2011, 11:05:08 PM
Sounds fun ^^ I'm curious who are them?
Title: Re: "Change of heart" 11/30/11
Post by: Megumi on November 30, 2011, 11:20:56 PM
Hrrm ...interesting...

Title: Re: "Change of heart" 11/30/11
Post by: Sok on November 30, 2011, 11:25:30 PM
really interesting.
I wonder who they are?
Can't wait for your next update.
Title: Re: "Change of heart" 11/30/11
Post by: RJay on December 01, 2011, 01:31:57 AM
I'm guessing one of them is Miichan/Kuu
Since they were talking about Mari-chan :dunno:

please update soon
Title: Re: "Change of heart" 11/30/11
Post by: AKBlover_99 on December 01, 2011, 02:50:19 AM
Waaa......Update soon  :bow: :bow: :bow: Can't wait to read next chapter  :thumbsup
Title: Re: "Change of heart" 11/30/11
Post by: haruhi16 on December 01, 2011, 05:51:45 AM
I sense Miichan/Kuu in this.. and that happy-go-lukcy guy/girl.. uhmmm, Yuu/Yuko? or Kai/Takamina? I'm so curious!!! I need an update!
Title: Re: "Change of heart" 11/30/11
Post by: smarty0821 on December 01, 2011, 07:29:56 AM
Wow sounds interesting hope it's a Kojiyuu/Atsumina/MariMii fic :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Updated 12/1/11
Post by: Loveforever on December 01, 2011, 09:28:52 PM
Character introduction:

Minami Takahashi; The really good looking play girl…People call her handsome but she hates it. Wants to be known as the pretty girl instead. She is the only child of the Takahashi household. Being born into one of the wealthiest Japanese family in Hollywood, California. Her parents split up when she was only about 3 years old. During that time her mom was never around to take care of her due to heavy work schedule. Most of her child hood, a maid look after her. That’s why this character of hers develop…she became selfish and very spoiled, not caring about others feelings. She parties too much because she has money. No goal in life. Only friend she has is a middle class girl name Haruna Kojima.

Haruna Kojima; unlike her best friend, her character is very different and opposite from Minami. She truly cares for people and has really good nature. Also good looking but doesn’t have the potential to try and be. Wears glasses to look smarter. She can sometimes be an airhead but actually very smart. Born into a middle class family,only child but well taken care of…Goal in life is to become rich and successful.

Mariko Shinoda; Kojima’s first girlfriend. They both we’re friends since middle school but realized they have feelings for each other. Although girl and girl relationship is forbidden, they broke the rules anyway. Second child in her family. Later plans in life is to get married to Haruna in California since gay marriage is now being legalized.

More characters will show up later on.

Contiuation of  Chapter 1…

Shinoda’s Residence.

*KNOCK KNOCK*

“Ah..Kojima-san, come in! Are you here to see Mariko off before you leave the country?”

“Hai..Is she home Obasan?” Haruna smiles pleasantly.

“Yea, she’s in the kitchen. She stayed up all morning preparing a meal for you. ”

“Really??? In that case I’ll stay a little longer… I guess my flight can wait.”
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“Harunyan! You’re here! I’ve missed you.. Anyway, I have something really important to tell you.” she dragged the cat like girl by the hand and ran up the stairs.

“Hahha,Nani nani? What is it? Slow down a bit Maririn!”

“I told you not to call me that” Mariko pouted. “Sit!” she pointed to her bed.

“Okay boss!” Haruna playfully winked at her girlfriend.

Mariko locked the door behind her. Before going to sit down, she made sure again the door was locked.

“Aren’t we going to eat? I don’t have much time here. Takamina is waiting for me at the airport.”

“But don’t you miss me?” Mariko asks with a puppy face.

“Aw…don’t do that face! You know I do but I have to hurry.”

“I can’t believe you’re leaving me for a whole year, what kind of girlfriend are you!?”

“The kind that wants to be able to take care of her wife in the future.”  Haruna pinches Mariko cheek.

“Waifu?” Mariko blushes. “Well..don’t you want to know the important news?”

“Hai,hai..what is it hun?”

“I…uh,I think I’m ready…”

“Ready? Ready for what?”  Haruna asks looking lost.

“Harunyan! We talked about this last week.. did you forget already?” Mariko whined, lightly punching her lover on the arm.

“Oh…You mean, right n-now th-this mo-moment? Are you sure this is what you want??” She stutters.

“Hai..i’m positive.” Mariko slightly blushed looking the opposite way.

Haruna puts her warm soft hands on Mariko’s face making her face towards her.

“You know I can wait right? We don’t have to do this if you don’t want to…”

“No! I’m ready.” Mariko suddenly looks into Haruna’s eyes full of lust.

Slowly she begins to undress herself; she removed her shirt/ bra straps from her shoulders revealing nothing but her bare pale white skin. Haruna couldn’t wait any longer, as she seen what she’s been longing for. She gently leans in for a kiss starting from Mariko’s luscious lips working her way down. Leaving her bite marks everywhere, Mariko let out a slight moan as their body harmonized into one. “I love you” they whispered into each other’s ear. Time seem to gradually slow down, making it the longest 15 minutes of their lives. (Not good at writing this scene lol)

“Mari-chan, I love you..as much I would love to stay, I have to get going ” she starts putting her clothes back on.

“I understand, so go on! Hurry before the plane leaves you.” She rushed Haruna.

“What about the meal? you spent all morning on it.”

“You just ate!” Mariko chuckled.

“Huh?” Haruna asked without getting the joke.

“Oh Nothing!” Mariko giggled.  “I’ll pack it up for you so you can be on your way! I love you Harunyan!”

Departing from the U.S Airway

“Minami, be a good girl and make mommy proud! This is the only thing you got going for you… remember that!”her mom said hugging her without letting go.

“Don’t worry Mom! I’ll try my best but could you let go of me now?”

“I’m sorry, it’s just that my little girl is growing up. Remember, don’t party so much!!!! And study harder like Kojima-san”

“Blehhhh..yeah yeah whatever..are you gonna ship my car there for me mom?”

“Only If you do good in school. Which car are we talking about anyway?

“Mom!!!! I atleast need something to get around..How about the Yellow Lamborgini.

“Fine..fine..but if I hear bad news about you, I’m  taking your car away and you will have no MONEY to spend either..Oh and I will  be deporting you back home right away. So be GOOD!”

“UGH! FINE… but I know you’ll never do that to your own daughter” she tries to suck up.

“Try me!”

“I’m just kidding mom! I love you..I have to get going now, bye.” They hugged again.

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“Gomen ne I’m late!” Haruna rushed in with a huge grin and her luggages.

“Yeah, you better be sorry you’re late! And what’s with that ugly smile of yours? HAHA”

Haruna didn’t respond but just gave a smirk.

“NO F*cking way!! Wait..Did you!? Finally??! HAHAHAHAHA GOOD SH*T.”

“Shut up, it’s not like that!!! It’s meaningful unlike your encounters.”

“Oh GOD..you have to tell me about it on our way there.”

“NO!!”

“Aww come on!!! Pretty please..”

“Please take good care of Minami for me Kojima-san!!!” Takamina’s mom shouted from far away.

TBC…

Ps. Sorry guys there will be no kai/kuu/or riku..I'd like to keep them as the girl versions of themselves. It'll just take the yuriness away from the story If i do that and I don't want that at all. But thanks for reading..I'm gonna try to update my other fict before continuing this one though!  :shakeit:





Title: Re: "Change of heart" 11/30/11
Post by: Flean on December 01, 2011, 10:46:55 PM
Woh!! I'm liking this.. Taka is a playgirl n MariHaru???  :on lol: This gonna be awesome....  :on GJ:

need to know wht happen next...  :on comhere:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Updated 12/1/11
Post by: Haruko on December 02, 2011, 06:17:18 AM
Nooo!!  >_>.. my kojiyuu.. aww... now you broke my heart in pieces Z_Z
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Updated 12/1/11
Post by: kahem on December 02, 2011, 08:20:29 AM
Playgirl Takamina, hum interesting
Ohhhh Mariharu hehehe
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Updated 12/1/11
Post by: haruhi16 on December 02, 2011, 08:49:00 AM
whaaat? MariHaru? ohh this is new~ but i want KojiYuu~ hehe but it's fine, I like Mariko too <33
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Updated 12/1/11
Post by: AKBlover_99 on December 02, 2011, 12:37:46 PM
Woah!!!!! MariHaru? Hmm... Okay then. Update soon!  :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Updated 12/1/11
Post by: smarty0821 on December 02, 2011, 12:52:52 PM
waaahh  :shock:  MariHaru??  nooooo..... :on speedy: Kojiyuu.??... anyway I hope Yuko will be the third party here :kekeke:

and Takamina Playgirl  :glasses: nice nice...

thanks for the update :bow: :bow: Please UPDATE soon!! :thumbsup
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Updated 12/1/11
Post by: Megumi on December 02, 2011, 06:44:21 PM
Takamina is a player? Eh? Eh? EEEEEEEH?! I already love this story kekeke
I wonder how Acchan personality is *smirk
MariHaru cute* ehh but how about Yuko then?

I'm so exited for the next update!
Arigatou!   :kneelbow:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Updated 12/1/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 02, 2011, 07:31:08 PM
I love Takamina player :wub: :inlove:
I can't wait to see Acchan and Takamina's encounter XD

Thanks for the Update :thumbsup
Please Update soon :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Updated 12/2/11
Post by: Loveforever on December 02, 2011, 11:57:27 PM
Chapter 2

“Fun before school”
   
*FLASH BACK*

Haruna has been waiting for over 6 months for her scholarship acceptance letter to study in Japan.

“Haruna, there’s a letter in the mail for you” her father yelled out.

“I’ll be downstairs in a minute Otosan.” She opens the letter up, reading only the first 6 words;

“We are honor to have you.”  She was so excited she began to jump up and down like a child,

running and screaming throughout the whole house. “Yes! I made it in!!”

“Otosan! I’m going to Japan to study. Are you proud of me?”

“Of course my daughter! I knew all your hard work will pay off. I couldn’t be any happier.”

“Don’t worry papa, when I become successful; I will take care of you and mama so you guys don’t have to work a day in your life anymore.”

“I’ll hold your words up to that” her father smiled.

“I wish mom was here to hear the good news.” Haruna pouted.

“Now, now... You know she has to work. Maybe on her break you can call her.”

“Hai” she replied in anticipation.

“By the way, I will notify my really good friend Mr. Oshima to look after you while you’re there. He has a daughter your age, maybe you guys can become good friends.”

“Hai Otosan.”

“They will also help you find a part time job. Here’s their number, make sure you call them when you arrive.”

“Hontoni?? That would be great! Arigatou Otosan!”

“I’m going to miss you when you’re gone…well at least your friend Mariko will still visit us right? She’s a really nice girl, not like your other friend.”

“Who? Minami?” Haruna chuckled.

*END OF FLASHBACK*

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Arriving in Japan.

“Oh man! I’m so jet lagged.” Takamina sighed.

“I know, blah I’m so tired...”

“Let’s go unpack our stuff at our dorm. Make sure you get some rest because later on tonight we’re going to party!”

“Really Takamina.. Do we have to the day before our first day of school?”

“Of course! You’re my sidekick...you have to come. Plus we have to at least experience the night life here if we’re going to stay here for another 11 months.”

“I could never say no to you, can I?”

“Best friends stick together! Nah I mean?...Can’t wait to see what the girls here are like!” Takamina said in excitement.

Both girls are finally settled in and got their rest.
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Later on that night @ Japan’s most famous Night Club

Takamina bought the whole VIP area for the night. “Girls, whatever you want! I’ll buy it” she shouted out while intoxicated.

“Exciting isn’t it Kojiharu?”

“Not really…” Haruna replied.

“You’re too tense…loosen up a little and have fun will ya?” Takamina suggested while having a shot of Hennessy in her hand.

“I don’t understand why you stick to one girl when there are so many other beautiful ones out there!”

“Whatever…Don’t get too drunk, you have a meeting to go to in the morning. If you don’t make it, your mom will kill you.”

“Stop worrying..I’ll make it there tomorrow.”

Takamina targeted two sexy girls that were dancing on each other on the dance floor. One of the girls was giving Takamina the look of “I want ro f*ck you right now”. She smirked when she noticed it from afar and made her way towards them.

“Haruna, watch and learn.”

Haruna shook her head and laugh. “I think if I wanted to…I would but I have the perfect girl at home waiting for my return.” She thought to herself.
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“Please take my friend home safely” Haruna said to the cab driver.

Takamina entered the cab with one girl in each side of her arms.

“Bye Haruna” The two girls waved as the cab driver drove away.
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Next morning

*Ring ring ring*  Takamina’s phone went off.She ignored it and sent it to voicemail, in her bed the two girls we’re still sound asleep beside
her naked.

“Please leave a message after the tone” *Beeeeeeeeeep*

Her mother had left a message which echoed throughout the  room.

“WAKE THE HELL UP NOW!!! MINAMI!!!!!”

Takamina was startled by her mom’s voice on the voice message recorder and woke up.She kicked the two girls out before calling her mom back.

“Mom? What is it?”

“WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU THINKING MISSING THAT MEETING LIKE THAT!?!”

“Sorry mom! I over slept.”

“Oh shut up..I know you we’re out partying again! You don’t know how much trouble I went through just to put you in this school. Your grades are like crap, did you know that?

“But mom…sometimes crap can turn into gold” Takamina chuckled.

“I wanted you to take over the company business when I die…but how is this going to work if you keep messing up. You better get that degree or else I’m not giving you anymore money!”

“Fine..mom even if you want 20 degrees, I’ll give it to you. Just stop screaming.” Takamina giggled.

“Oh..you think this is funny huh!? You better get yourself together!” her mom screamed and hung up the phone.

TBC…

Ps. I can't wait until Kojiharu meets Yuko.. and Takamina meet Acchan either lol  :shifty:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 2 Updated 12/2/11
Post by: haruhi16 on December 03, 2011, 12:44:41 AM
OMG!!! Kojiharu will meet Yuko?!?!? WAAAAH!!  :panic: :panic: :panic: So it's gonna be Kojiyuu then? :heart: :heart: LOL forever OTP!  :P   :lol:

Yeah i can't wait Takamina meet Acchan! Acchan will teach that play girl a lesson!  :P

Update soon please!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 2 Updated 12/2/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 03, 2011, 02:44:43 AM
Yea! Thanks for the Update :thumbsup
I can't wait for Acchan to meet Takamina XD

Please update soon :mon cute:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 2 Updated 12/2/11
Post by: Sok on December 03, 2011, 03:18:41 AM
Yay! Update. Thank you.

I wonder if her mom will really leave her without money? It'd be interesting to see how she does on her own without her mom's help.

Haruna always being the responsible friend.
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 2 Updated 12/2/11
Post by: Loveforever on December 06, 2011, 09:30:01 AM
Chapter 3

“Getting into trouble”

   Haruna first day of school was exciting. It was way different than America. The people here are friendlier and truly passionate about their studies. After school she decided to give Mr.Oshima a call to see if there are any job openings.

“Moshi Moshi, Is this Mr. Oshima?”

“Hai, this is me…Is this Kojima-san?”

“Yes…how’d you know?” She asked in surprise.

“Well actually I’ve been expecting your phone call since yesterday. I have a proposition for you. I’ll let you know all of the details once you get here. Does that sound good?”

“Sound good to me. Thank you sir. I can’t thank you enough.” She exclaimed.

Haruna took the local bus and got lost for an hour or so. Finally she arrived at her destination. She knocked on the door twice before knocking again, no one answered. She scratches the back of her head thinking that she has gotten the wrong house. She looked at the text again, it was the right address.

“I guess I’ll come another day” she thought. Before she walked off the porch, someone had opened the door. The girl had shoulder length hair; she was really small and petite with cute cavernous dimples. Haruna couldn’t help but notice the girl at the door really resembles her best friend Takamina.

“I’m sorry, we’re not buying any cookies.” The girl said closing the door half way before looking at Haruna’s face.

“Wait..” Haruna pulls the door back. “I’m not here to sell cookies…I’m here to see Mr.Oshima.”

“Oh..Why didn’t you say so?” she glanced twice at Haruna’s face.

“Well because you assumed that I was before I can say anything.”

“Wow this girl is so pretty…she’s got a body and a face of a goddess. I have to have her” the girl thought. “Can I call you Nyan Nyan?” the girl smirked.

“Uh…why? Do you always give a stranger a nickname before getting to know them?” Haruna asked giving off an attitude.

“No, but you look like a cat…and pussy cats are my favorite.” She grinned as she tries to grope Haruna’s assets.

“Ew. Don’t touch me perv!” Haruna yelled trying to push her hands away.

The girl wouldn’t let go of Haruna but pulled her closer. Haruna gave in as their eyes met. “My heart, why is it beating so much faster? Her eyes, it’s so big and dreamy… and those lips, why do I have an urge to kiss it…No, this isn’t right. What am I doing? I already have a girlfriend.” Haruna thought.

The girl finally let go of Haruna as she seen her father heading there way.

“Oh it seems you met my daughter already. Sorry I wasn’t here to answer the door. After hours have passed I thought you weren’t going to show up. Anyway this is my daughter Yuko and Yuko, this Is Haruna. Come in and sit down.”

“Wow. Nice big house you have here Mr. Oshima.”

“It is, isn’t it? Well it’s good thing you like it because the job that I’m offering requires you to be here.”

“Eh?? Why? What is it??”

“Well…My daughter needs a tutor in English. She’s aiming to become an actress, and it is mandatory for her to learn the language. She’s really horrible and it’s embarrassing. Please tell me you can help her.” He pleaded.

Haruna was speechless. She didn’t know whether to accept it. If she does take the job, there would be countless sexual harassment. She didn’t want to be stuck with the devil, but she thought about the money she needed.

“Okay...when do I start?” she accepted.

“Tomorrow, if that’s good for you?”

“That’s fine. Thank you again Mr.Oshima.” Haruna said before leaving. Yuko gave an evil glare into the living room as Haruna opens the door to leave.

“Bye Nyan Nyan!” Yuko shouted chuckling.

Meanwhile, at a different side of town. Takamina walked around her dorm trying to find something to do. As she was walking she accidently bumps into a girl who had long brown hair down to her breasts. The girl also had a vampire like smile and a beautiful face.

“Gomen ne, I didn’t see you there since you’re so small.” The girl laughed.

“Small? I am not small, I’m fun size.” Takamina winked.

“Haha, that’s clever” The girl replied.

“By the way, I’m Takahashi, Minami…you can call me Takamina for short. What’s your name?” she smiles.

“Itano, Tomomi…but you can call me Tomochin.” She replies back.

“You stole something of mine.” Takamina stated.

“What?? No I didn’t…”

“Yes you did, you stole my heart with your smile.” Takamina flirted.

Tomochin giggled at the fact that the pickup line was so cheesy. But it worked because of Takamina’s charms.

“Want to go back to my dorm room?” Takamina asked straight forwardly.

Tomochin loves the feeling of adrenaline so she agrees to. “Sure, why not?” She answered with a lustful smile.

After the two girls intertwined. Tomochin insisted on taking after sex pictures. They both kissed in the photo. Tomochin slowly falls for her without knowing it.

“Do you want to go to dinner?” Takamina asked.

“Okay” Tomochin answers excitedly.

The two girls had dinner at the most finest restaurant in Japan. Somehow Takamina always manages to get herself drunk. “I’ll take you home now Tomochin.” Two female cops we’re standing at the door of the restaurant watching over the place. They noticed how intoxicated Takamina was and followed her to her car. As she started to reverse her yellow Lamborghini out, the two cops shouted. “Freeze, get out the car! You’re under arrest for DUI.” “What the f*ck is this??” Takamina yelled out. “Get out of the car now!” they again screamed angrily. “Okay..okay..” she replies giving in. They cuffed her right away and took her to the police station. Waiting patiently in the interrogation room, the detective that was put on her case walked in. “What do you want us to do to with this one Officer Maeda?” A gachapin looking officer asked pointing at Takamina. “Don’t worry Miichan, I got this..you go ahead and get back to work.” “Okay, see you in a bit.” From Takamina’s point of view, as officer Maeda walks in... She was mesmerized by her beauty. She stared so hard, in her whole entire life she have never seen someone so beautiful. In her imagination, the wind blew against the girls shoulder length hair while she walked in slow motion displaying her figure. It was like love at first sight for her. Takamina experience something she has never felt before.

TBC…

Character introduction will be posted in next chapter, thanks for taking your time to read this crappy fic. heh! :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 3 Updated 12/6/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 06, 2011, 12:08:44 PM
Yea!! Update :w00t:

Tomochin and Takamina??!! :wub:
OMG!! :twothumbs XD

And Takamina love at first sight to Acchan!!! :thumbsup
Taka x Tomo x Acchan??? XD
I wonder if Acchan will also fall in love with Takamina at first sight :inlove:

Thanks so much for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
This is definitely getting so interesting now and I so really want to read what happen next XD
So please update soon :mon cute:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 3 Updated 12/6/11
Post by: smarty0821 on December 06, 2011, 01:03:18 PM
 :on woohoo: Update yey... finally Kojipa met Yuko  :luvluv2:

 :twothumbs TomochinXTakaminaXAcchan   :twothumbs I love the story so far hope my fav. OTP will end up with each other!!

Plz Update soon :bow:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 3 Updated 12/6/11
Post by: kahem on December 06, 2011, 06:57:06 PM
OMG!!! Triangles!
Takamina such a playgirl, I like it hehe
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 3 Updated 12/6/11
Post by: Haruko on December 07, 2011, 06:01:36 AM
many things happen in a few of lines... kojiyuu!! atsumina for ever!!
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 4 Updated 12/29/11
Post by: Loveforever on December 29, 2011, 11:31:49 PM
Character Introduction:

Maeda Atsuko: Eldest out of two daughters, have struggle in her past relationship with guys. Very strong minded and kind, Tsundere to be exact. Both her parents passed away when she was only 16 due to a shootout. That’s why she went into law enforcement. She took care of her younger sister (Ami Maeda) since a baby until now. She is now living with her Grandma and younger sibling only. She is also Takahashi’s love interest.

Tomomi Itano: The antagonist of the story. One of the richest girls in Japan. Her family owns half of the city basically. Her life is equivalent to Minami’s. She is the youngest child of the Itano family. She is also an adrenaline junkie, who does whatever she wants when she wants. A very determine person.

Minegishi Minami: Atsuko’s bestfriend since childhood went into law enforcement together.Very overprotective over her best friend.  Secretly have a crush on Atsuko for a long time but know Atsuko only see her as a friend/sister.

Yuki Kashiwagi: Atsuko’s other bestfriend, she also joined the force. She joined because she felt left out, out of the 3. She’s more of a girly girl. Always depending on others and causing trouble outside of work.

Oshima Yuko: Her family are really good friends with the Kojima’s. Aiming to become an actress. Loves goofing around and playing with peoples head.  Has a girlfriend already but changes her love interest to Kojima Haruna later on in the story.


Chapter 4

“Love at first sight.”

“Is this heaven?? I wouldn’t mind getting arrested everyday by you.”  Takamina flirted.

“Shut up, this is a place of courteousness. Show some respect!” Officer Maeda smacks the paper onto the desk startling the play girl.

“What did I do wrong?” Takamina smirked.

Atsuko rolled her eyes. “First of all you drove without a Japanese driver license and second you just did a DUI!” She yelled.

“Are you always this mean? I bet you there’s a sweet side to you somewhere in there.” Takamina said trying to change the subject.

“Ugh… Anyway, is that your girlfriend out there?”

“No. Actually I just met her. It’s nothing serious, why? Are you interested in me?” Takamina chuckled.

“Don’t be so full of yourself. I’m just doing my job.”

 “How about you not tell anyone about this, especially my mom. Since you say this is a place of courteousness I will give you courtesy money, lots of it.

“Oh, so you’re just another rich and spoiled brat from America. You think you can just buy your way out of the law. Well think again!” 

“Come on. Just let me go, so that way you and I can go on our first date.”

“Ha! Date? People like me wouldn’t dare date your kind!”

“Why not? I’m rich, powerful, and good looking. What’s there not to like?”

“You just don’t get it do you? You have never worked a day in your life. Other people work hard just to have money in their pockets and you...you just get everything handed down to you. No one will ever respect a person like you. Miichan! Please escort this little f*ck into the cell.”

“What!? where are you taking me!?” Takamina screamed showing her terrified face while being dragged away.

Takamina was in the jail for a day and half. Her mother was notify by the authority and bought out a bond for her daughter.

Next day

Atsuko was out on her day off. Suddenly she had a phone call while she was at the arcade. “Moshi Moshi” she answered the phone.

“Ah Atsuko, can you come in today to take care of the DUI case? I have something important to do. Can you please cover for me?”

“Yuki, I can’t I have my sister with me. Its sister day today and you know how that goes.”

“Please just this once, I promise I’ll make it up to you. Please, please please..” Yuki begged.

“Oh, alright!” She gave in and sighs.

In the office, Atsuko was waiting for Takamina to come in. Having no one to baby sit for her, she had to bring her little sister into work with her. The girl is about 6 years old and resembles Atsuko a lot. Basically she’s a mini version of her. 1 minute of waiting, Takamina finally entered the room.
 
Right away Takamina notices the little girl. “Ah! Kawaiiiii ne.” Takamina shouted. The little girl was shy so she just giggled covering her blushing face.

“Is that your daughter?” Takamina asked Atsuko.

“None of your business! We’re here to talk about the regulations and consequences.”

“Wow, you look just like your mother, Say…what is your name cutie?” Takamina asked the girl while pinching her small cheeks.

“Auntie, she’s not my mom, she’s my Oneesan.” She chuckled. And my name is A—“Before the little girl can finish answering the question, she was cut off by Atsuko.

“What did I tell you about not talking to strangers? Hmm?”

“But Oneesan, you’re talking to her, why can’t I?”

“Ahh kawaiiiii and smart!” Takamina stated again, while being playful with the little girl.

Takamina earned a smile from Atsuko, seeing that Takamina actually is sort of a good person.

“Ami..go play over there while we talk okay? After this we’ll go get some icecream.”

“Haii!!” Ami immediately answered.

“Anyways… If you want to stay in Japan you’ll have to pay a fine and take traffic lessons for a year.”

“What!? Are you serious…I know how all of it works already! I don’t need it.”

“Rules are rules. You’re lucky enough that I didn’t deport you back.”

“Ah, so that means I get to see your face more often.” Takamina smiled

*RING RING RING* a phone called interrupted the two.

“Hello? Okay hold on one second. You have a phone call Takahashi; I’ll step out so you can talk.”

“He-he-hello.” Takamina stuttered.

“Minami! How dare you!?! I can’t believe it’s only your second day there and you’re already causing trouble!”

“But mom…”

“No buts! I’m cutting off your all your funds. I bought you a plane ticket back to the U.S so pack up your things!!! You’re coming home!”

“NO! I like it here… I want to stay here.”

“I don’t care what you say! You’re coming back home!!!” Her mom screamed and hung up the phone.

“No more money?” Takamina said falling back onto her chair sighing.

Atsuko walks back into the office. “Well you can be on your way now, since I informed you of everything already.”

“Eh..Before I go, Can I have your number?” Takamina pulled out a notepad from the folder of documents Atsuko handed to her earlier. “Here” She handed the notepad.

“For what?” Atsuko asked annoyed.

“So I can take you out on a date sometime.”

“Dream on. I don’t date girls and it will never happen between us, now get out!” She screamed.

Takamina again put the paper in front of Atsuko before leaving. Atsuko smacked her little hands out of the way.

“Alright, alright I’m going.” Takamina walked away glancing back not wanting to leave. Atsuko in return gave an irritated face in response.

TBC…

 :banghead: thnks for reading  :cry:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 4 Updated 12/29/11
Post by: Sok on December 29, 2011, 11:50:06 PM
Thanks for the update. This chapter is funny.
Poor Takamina has to go back.
Can't wait for your next update.
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 4 Updated 12/29/11
Post by: Sydney W on December 30, 2011, 04:32:35 AM
Wow. Takamina being flirty. Acchan being cool. Sense tension btw them.
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 4 Updated 12/29/11
Post by: Haruko on December 30, 2011, 06:54:02 AM
jajaj takaboy in this fic is a player like a lot :D a different face of takamina..

aww cutie acchan´s sister :D

and acchna so tsundere.. butwe know that she like it!

I smell seual tension..could be?
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 4 Updated 12/29/11
Post by: kahem on December 31, 2011, 11:40:08 AM
Takamina has to learn the life hehehe
So, Tomochin is the bad here... Interesting
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 5 Updated 1/28/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: Loveforever on January 28, 2012, 07:31:56 PM
Chapter 5

“Misunderstanding”

“Nyan Nyan, you look so good.” Yuko stated, licking her lips and pushing Haruna towards the bed with full force.

“No!! Please stop!” Haruna pleaded.

“I can’t help it, I need you right here! Right now!” Yuko said pinning down both of Haruna’s arm. Despite the size difference between the two girls, Yuko has her advantage in strength. Haruna tried to resist as much as she can. Suddenly Yuko decided to let go but only to strip off her own clothes quickly. Down to her bra and underwear she jumped back on top of Haruna trying to force a kiss on her lips.

“Noooo!” She cried again pushing away Yuko’s face.

Before Yuko can finally land a kiss on her, Haruna woke up from her sleep.

“Sighs, thank god it’s only a dream” She said in relief and smiled to herself.

Calming down from her dream her eyes began to wander slowly. She looked down and seen a pair of arm around her waist. Shocked and surprised by it, she screamed and pushes the person beside her off the bed causing a loud thud on the ground.

“Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!! Get away from me you pervert!!” Haruna yelled.

“Ittai…What the hell!!!!” The person rubbed the back of her neck as she got up. “That hurted!!!!”

Not knowing who it was, Haruna reflex cause her to kick the person in the stomach once more making that person fall to the ground again.

“Haruna!!! What’s your freaking problem?” Starting to notice the familiar voice, Haruna apologized.

“Takamina?? My bad! I thought you were trying to rape me” she chuckled .

“Who would want to rape you?! It’s not even funny; I think I broke a bone!” Takamina pouted.

“What are you doing on my bed anyways? don't you have your own!”
 
“My bed has too much stuff on it, can’t you see!?”

Haruna just stood there laughing at her hurt best friend. “So where were you all last night and this afternoon?”

“You don’t even want to know. I’ll tell you all about in the morning; let’s just get some rest for now.”

Next morning

Before Haruna started her new job as Oshima Yuko’s tutor, she started job searching for another part time job to fall back on. The same day she was hired as a waitress at a nearby restaurant in the campus.

“Kojima-san, you can start tomorrow, please be prompt.”

“Okay boss!

After the interview Haruna was on her way to Yuko’s house. Finally arriving, she knocked on the door. To her surprise her father answered it instead of that midget pervert.

“Oh Kojima-san, you’re here early, I knew I can count on you.”

“Hai.” She replied with a look of fear.

“Just go on upstairs and Yuko room will be at the end of the hall to your right.”

“Hai.” She slowly walks up the stairs with 4 large books in her hand. Hesitantly, she knocked on Yuko’s bedroom door.

“Hey! Come on in Nyan Nyan.” Yuko reached out her hand.

Before her hand reached Haruna, she flinched and yelled “Don’t touch me!” in a startled tone.

“Huh? I was only trying to help you carry the books.” Yuko said scratching the back of her head. “Don’t be so scared, I was only trying to get into role playing the other day.”

“So..it was just all an act?” Haruna questioned unconvinced.

“Yeah, I’m so sorry if I scared you away. But I did make it believable, didn’t I?” She chuckles.

“Oh, you’re good at acting then..”

“Yep.. It’s my dream to become an actress.”

“Okay, let’s study then. Shall we?” Haruna smiles feeling a bit relieved.

Getting started on her English, Yuko was cooperating at first but then every time Haruna would teach her something, she changes the subject and asks her non related questions.

“How did you get your hair to look so soft and silky?”

“Yuuchan! Please pay attention.” She was beginning to get annoyed.

“Okay, okay… you are like an old woman Nyan Nyan.”

“What!? How so???”

“You’re always so serious.”

“Whatever, stop changing the subject!”

Once again she tries to go on teaching English but then Yuko’s cell phone rang. Without giving any heads up, she rudely picks up her phone.

“Ah! Mayu, I missed you so much!” she pouted.

“She can’t see you through the phone, you know!” Haruna shouted angrily in the background.

“I miss you too honey! Can I come see you today?” Mayu asks.

“No..not right now, I’m studying for the audition tomorrow..will you be there?”

“You know I’m a busy girl, but maybe I will just for good luck.”

“Hai, I love you.” Yuko starts to blush.

“I love you too, bye. Be a good girl for me okay?”

“Hai.”  She smiles and finally hangs up the phone.

“I’m done wasting my time here. I’ll be going now.” Haruna starts to pack up her stuff.

“Wait, why!?”

“Because you’re not even listening to me and you are by far the worst student I’ve ever had!!!!!”

“That’s not true! I did learn something.”

“Okay then, prove it. How do you say “Arigato gozaimasu” in English?”

“Um… Hi??” Yuko chuckled nervously.

“Wrong! I proved my point.” Haruna charges out the door.

“See you tomorrow then?  before the audition?” Yuko yelled out, who was left there talking to herself.

TBC…



Introduction:

Mayu Watanabe: Childhood friend of Oshima Yuko, they grew up together doing everything with one another..known as the Ohsiri sisters but became more than just that as they got older. Watanabe may look innocent on the outside but really no one knows the real her except for one person which is Yuki Kashiwagi. Mayu is also a spoiled rich child just like Takahashi Minami and Itano Tomomi. She always claim that she's too busy for her girlfriend but in fact she's actually out having fun.


A bit boring but the story will develop soon!  :banghead:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 5 Updated 1/28/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: kahem on January 29, 2012, 02:50:42 AM
Hahaha Kojiharu's dream is so hilarious!!!
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 5 Updated 1/28/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on January 29, 2012, 06:01:54 AM
Aww my yuuchan you need to provE than you deserve a verter person than Maui
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 5 Updated 1/28/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: haruhi16 on January 29, 2012, 06:50:04 AM
LOl HAruna's dream was surely wild ! Wait, is Haruna jealous hearing Yuko saying i love you to other person? keke i wanna know more! please update soon!
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 5 Updated 1/28/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: msst28 on January 29, 2012, 07:39:01 AM
Just finish reading this for first time.. nice story.. :twothumbs

kojiharu dream..  :lol:

hope you can update soon :thumbsup
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 5 Updated 1/28/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on June 25, 2012, 03:19:22 PM
pls comeback and update this!!!
I really enjoy reading this..
I hope u will continue to updte this
 :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 5 Updated 1/28/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: Keisthename on June 26, 2012, 04:44:57 AM
OMG! I wanted to know how TakaMina gets Acchan! waaa.. please update!! PRETTY PLEAAAASEEE!! :luvluv2:
This story really is interesting, i hope you'll update sooner!!!  :pleeease: :kneelbow:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 6 Updated 6/27/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: Loveforever on June 28, 2012, 05:08:23 AM
Thank you all for reading, since you all asked me to update this.. well here it goes... :oops:


Chapter 6


“Caught up”


It’s been a week since Haruna tutored Yuko in English… And finally today is the day of the audition.

“Yuuchan! Good luck. I hope you get the part.” Haruna smiled.

“Thank you Nyan Nyan! I will try my best!!! But wait, Mayu said she will be here soon.”

“You’re still waiting for her?? Go in before you miss your chance!”

“I know but…” Yuko pouted without finishing her sentence.

“No buts! We worked hard for this, you know!”

“Okay..” Yuko gives in and walk into the audition room.

20 minutes later…

“I got the part!! I got it!!!!” Yuko ran out screaming and waving a piece of paper excitedly.

“Oh my god! Congrats!” Haruna cheered her on…

They both embraced each other jumping up and down screaming in joy.

They stopped as soon as their eyes met. Haruna looks at the small girl and leaned in closer without realizing it.. She was caught in the moment, in those big beautiful sparkling eyes.

*ring ring* Yuko’s cellphones goes off.. Haruna pulls back as she was sent back to earth. “Ah..Gomen ne” she bows slightly with a blush. Yuko smiles and pick up her phone.

“Mayu??”

“Hai , I’m so sorry I couldn’t make it. Please forgive me love.”

“It’s okay…” Yuko says in a disappointed voice. “What about my dinner celebration tonight? please say you can make it.”

“Yuuchan, I’m sorry I can’t make it to that either but I promise I will make it up to you. Congrats by the way!”

“Okay…”

“Well gotta go, bye love you.”

Yuko didn’t say anything back but hung up with a sad look on her face.

“What’s wrong Yuuchan??”

“Nothing..” Yuko lied with a fake smile.

“Okay, Let’s go celebrate then, ja?.”

@ A restaurant

“Honey, I’m so proud of you!” Yuko father hugs her at the table.

“Thanks to you Kojima-san! She couldn’t have done it without you.”

“Heh, it’s not a big deal Mr.Oshima” Haruna waves her hand shyly.

“Yes it is! You help me become an actress..now I’m one step closer to my dream.” Yuko smiles at the cat like girl.

Suddenly  a waiter asks. “Excuse me..Are you Yuko Oshima?”

“Yes…”

“ I have a delivery for you.” The waiter snaps his fingers and another waiter walks in with a hand full of flowers in a bouquet.

“Sugggoiiii neee! It’s so pretty!!! I wonder who is it from..”

“Yuuchan you have a secret admirer?” her father teases her.

Yuko opens up the little card tucked in it and it says.. “Yuki, I can’t wait to see you tonight at the hotel, I love you :) .”- Mayu

“Yuki?” Yuko smiles and thinks that Mayu had misspelled her name.

Haruna just looks at her and roll her eyes..

After dinner had ended, Yuko was on her way home to get ready for the hotel.. the information of the place was on the little card.  And Haruna was on her way to her night shift at the campus restaurant.


Somewhere across town


“What the..why did Mayu write Yuko? This baka needs to go back to school.” Yuki smiles to herself.

“My god Yuki! You asked me to cover for you so you can go on a date??”

“Yeah about that… I’m so sorry Atsuko!! I just really like this person a lot. I don’t want to lose my chance of being with her..”

“You’re always skipping work just to play hooky! But I’ll let it go this time…Next time don’t do it again!”

“I promise.” Yuki smiles at her good friend.

“I’m keeping those flowers though” Atsuko teases Yuki.

“No, no way! Get your own!”

Atsuko just chuckled at how cute and in love her friend was acting.

“Maybe you’ll get some from that delinquent” Yuki teased back.

"You mean that spoiled midget of a retard!? EW NEVER!! I will smash those flowers to pieces if that ever happened.”

“HAHAHA relax Atsuko, it’s just a joke."


Back at the hotel

Mayu calls Yuki… “Hey, are you on your way yet?”

“On my way where?”

“I left a message on the bouquet of flowers..You didn’t get it?”

“No…”

Mayu then gives Yuki the address of the hotel. She waits for half an hour or so…Yuki finally arrived.

“Ohayo!” she smiles and hugs the twin tail girl.

“Ready to go up?”

“Yeah sure..” Yuki blushes.

“Wait..you have to give me a kiss first..” Mayu smirks..

As soon as Yuki kisses her on the lips..Yuko walks in.

TBC…

NO ATSUMINA ACTION YET! BUT DEF NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE xD
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 6 Updated 6/27/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on June 28, 2012, 05:32:27 AM
OMG!! yuuchan dont do to that hotel please -_______-...

Yeah!! Atsumina!!
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 6 Updated 6/27/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: haruhi16 on June 28, 2012, 05:56:12 AM
OMG!! I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! YUKOOOOOOOOOO D:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 6 Updated 6/27/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: Keisthename on June 28, 2012, 07:13:40 AM
aw that's sad,, no atsumina for the moment *sniff*
But I did laugh on the part were Acchan says those words about the flowers IF she'll get one from Takamina. wahahaha!!

PLEASE UPDATE SSOOOOON!! THANK YOUUU!  :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 6 Updated 6/27/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: saeyukilover on June 28, 2012, 01:57:18 PM
hah!!! Mayu your going to be busted !!!!  :smhid

Pls update soon :)

 :shakeit:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 6 Updated 6/27/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: Takamina_Captain on July 13, 2012, 10:47:47 PM
atsumina Pleaseeee... :twothumbs
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 6 Updated 6/27/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: kurogumi on July 14, 2012, 02:25:09 AM
OMG mayu...you're DEAd end!!! :shocked: :shocked:

OMG ! i can't watch the scene!....its too scary... :bleed eyes:

but...but...waaaa doki doki...

Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 6 Updated 6/27/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: Keisthename on July 14, 2012, 04:17:53 AM
I hope this fic will updated soon, in all honesty this is one of the fics that I'm dying to see for updates.. this story is really interesting.. gahd!!! PLEASE update soon! hihi Thank you very much!  :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: "Change of heart" Chapter 7 Updated 7/26/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: Loveforever on July 26, 2012, 06:11:59 AM
Hey thanks for reading everyone! sorry i took so long to update! just busy with work and all but i hope you enjoy this chapter as much as i did!
 :love: :love: :love:

Chapter 7

“First kiss”

Meanwhile..Takamina woke up in their dorm room..  She had woken up with a huge smile upon her face. Apparently she couldn’t stop thinking about Atsuko.  Although it’s been a week since running into her by chance, she couldn’t help but wonder if they’ll ever meet again. Minami was so cheerful she decided to get dress and go to class for the first time today which is unusual for a party girl like her...

“Are you in this class?” Professor Akimoto asks, since she does not seem familiar to him.

“Yes sir.” Takamina smiles with her deep dish dimples showing. All the girls in the class starts to squeal.

“Kawaiii!” “Ikemen” “Ahh Sugggoiiiiiiiiiii”

“Please quiet down class! And your name is?”

“Takahashi…Takahashi Minami Desu!”

“Well it seems here, you haven’t showed up since school started.. and what’s your excuse?”  he copped an attitude with her.

Right when she was about to answer, Tomochin cuts in. 

“Can’t we just start class now? I have other important things to do, if we’re not learning anything today.”

Takamina recognizes the voice right away.. “Thank god..she saved my *SS!”  she thought.

“Alright Takahashi...go sit beside Itano” he sat them together coincidentally.

“And from now on you better show up to class or else you’ll be kicked off this roster.”  He warned her.

“Hai!” Takamina walked over and sat beside Tomochin and the professor begins to start the lecture..

“Psss…Tomomi..I’m sorry about the other day..Let’s just forget whatever happened between us..” Takamina whispered with a wink.

Tomochin was not pleased at all hearing that..She actually really liked Takamina..

“Just the other day she was so into me..I wonder what changed her mind..” Tomochin thought with a sappy face.

After school, Takamina walked outside to the lot and noticed her yellow Lamborghini was not present. She begins to panick.. and started asking random people if they had seen her car.

“Takahashi-san, your car was towed away this morning..it’s being shipped back to America. One of the staff told her.

“What!?” She screamed out loud in the parking lot.

Takamina was really irritated; she thought her mom was joking about taking her car away and other necessities. Before she return to the dorm she walked by to the nearest corner store.. She tried to buy some things.. like alcohol beverages and etc.. But the clerk said that her credit card was declined.

“Are you f*cking  kidding me!?” she shouted in more frustration.

When she was about to walk back out empty handed, she sensed some kind of danger is about to happen. The guy she had seen walking in has his hand in his pocket like he was about to pull something out.

“Stay still! This is a robbery!”  He pushed Takamina back in the door and locked it. He had two guns..one pointing to her head and one to the clerks face.

“Put all the money in this bag!” he yelled to the clerk. The clerk had an emergency button under the desk; she pushed the button without the robber knowing while he puts the money in the bag.

“Please don’t hurt us.. just take the money and leave..” the clerk begged.

 “I’ll hurt anyone I want!” He roared back hitting Takamina in the head with the end of his gun and ran out the door. The robber was already gone by the time the cops got there.. they sent two detectives to investigate, to get a description of everything.

“Atsuko, are you sure you wanna do this case? Yuki owes you one..she should be the one here working.. Not you.”

“Miichan, it’s fine..don’t worry, I’ll have another time off.”

Atsuko and Miichan walked in and seen Takamina on the ground unconscious, while the clerk trying to take care of her. Atsuko was shocked to see who it was..

“Not her again...” She said face palming herself.

“What happened to her?” Miichan asks the clerk.

The clerk told her the story detail by detail. While Miichan was investigating further. Atsuko picked up the small girl and lye her down in the back of their cop SUV with the trunk open.  She couldn’t help but stare at the small girls face… this is the first time she notice how angelic Takamina’s sleeping face could be.

“Kawaii..” she said out loudly without realizing it, her face begins to move closer and closer to Takamina..Something about her had Atsuko mesmerized.  Atsuko eyes were closed..Just as she was a centimeter away from her lips..Takamina slowly open her eyes…

“Am I dreaming?” she thought. Ever since she met Atsuko she couldn’t stop seeing her or thinking about her.. and so she thought she was dreaming again.

Takamina then consciously closed the gap between the two. Then “PRAKKKKKKKKKKK” Takamina earned a slap to the face.

“Hentai!!!!” Atsuko shouted with pink blush in her cheeks.

“Gomen ne! gomen ne! I didn’t mean too..” Takamina waved  both hands back and forth denying the crime she had committed.

“Hey! What’s going on here!?” Miichan interrupted . “Is she trying to hit on you Acchan!?”  she puts her arms around Takamina’s neck and taunted her with a club.

“No..she didn’t do anything. Let her go.” Atsuko lied to the jealous and outraged Miichan.

“Yeah, what she said…” Takamina said in a terrified voice.

Miichan lets her go.. “Alright Acchan, we have another case to get to.” They both took their leave. Atsuko felt her cheeks still heated up from that kiss from earlier but in her mind..she try to convince herself that she didn’t like it all..especially from someone like Takamina. Takamina just kept cheesing after that.. “better stop smiling or I’ll slap that smile off your face for you.” Atsuko added before she left.

TBC…


 :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 7 Updated 7/26/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on July 26, 2012, 06:37:52 AM
so tsunder acchan first you kiss her and now you regret it..
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 7 Updated 7/26/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: Keisthename on July 26, 2012, 07:40:57 AM
wahahaha that's so scarryyyy~~ acchan!  :lol:
thanks for your update, please update mooorrree (lolz sorry for being demanding. ahahaha)
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 7 Updated 7/26/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: chibi-nyao-chan on July 26, 2012, 11:13:13 AM
Waah Acchan you'r hard ! It's Ok if you like Takamina, everybody likes her  :k-wink:
And yeah kiiiiiss  :k-inlove: Takamina must be so happy !!

I want more Atsumina's kiss and tsundere scene please !
Update soon  :luvuluvu:
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 7 Updated 7/26/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: Trickster on July 27, 2012, 11:13:45 AM
this fic is so interesting :wub:
I'm glad by the time I read this fic, Atsumina has showed up XD XD

please update more, thank you ^^ :thumbup
Title: Re: "Change of heart" Chapter 7 Updated 7/26/12 (Atsumina and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on August 09, 2012, 03:13:54 PM
I really like Takamina the playgirl! And Acchan always a tsundere.
Please update this SOON!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup