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Title: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 3 (2017/08/15)
Post by: Haru_Jei on November 23, 2014, 01:32:39 AM
The Immortal Demon

The story and other fanfics are also in Tumblr: Haru_Jei's Fanfics (http://rjayharu.tumblr.com/Haru_Fanfics)

Prologue (Scroll below)
Chapter 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=38451.msg1308056#msg1308056)
Chapter 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=38451.msg1355860#msg1355860)
Chapter 3 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=38451.msg1402568#msg1402568)


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Hey guys XD! It's been quite a while hasn't it? This is my second long fanfic here; I know that I still have the first one to finish, but I was convince by someone to just to just post my other story. This story was has been in my hard-drive for quite a long time and I was eager to share this, but I wanted to finish my first fic before I post this one, but I can't wait anymore :P :lol:.
If anyone is wondering, I'm still working on the forth chapter of How You Stole My Heart. I'm in a little writers block, but don't worry about it, I'll try to get it done somewhere on December. And the requested fics, don't worry about that too, I'm still working on them; I'm just trying to get ideas for some of them.
So here it is:


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Prologue

The night was soon coming to an end for a new day to begin. Two naked girls were sleeping very comfortably in each other’s arms in a suite at the most luxurious hotel in Japan. Later after the crack of dawn, the tallest among the two awoke first; when she was fully awake, she realized that she was held in a warm embrace by her lover. She brought herself closer to the sleeping beauty as she gave a peck to her soft lips.

All of a sudden, the tall girl heard a tiny vibrating sound in the room, coming from her bag and noticed her phone was vibrating inside. She glanced at the sleeping girl for a brief moment before she slowly released herself from the embrace and landed a chaste kiss on the girl’s cheek. The sleeping girl stirred at little which the taller thought was really adorable.

She got off of bed and grabbed her bag from a chair as she rummaged through it. After finding her phone, she sat at the edge of the king-sized bed as she stared at the caller ID displayed on the screen of her phone. She sighed deeply when reading the name; the caller was none other than her employer. Knowing that her boss was not a patient person, she decided to just answer the call, earning a yell of anger which made her pull the phone away from her ear.

“Hello to you too boss.”

“What the hell took you so long to pick up your damn phone?!” The person on the other line yelled in frustration.

“My apologies; I was asleep.” The girl replied nonchalantly, but politely.

“For your information, I don’t pay you good money to mess around! I ordered you to assassinate Demon, but until now, that monster is still alive. That creature is a disturbance to my business! Stop playing and find her, and annihilate her immediately! Don’t make me repeat myself, understand!” The person yelled and hung up loudly without giving a chance for the girl to reply.

The girl hung up and locked her phone as she gritted her teeth in anger, but little did she know the sleeping girl was already widely awake, hearing every word of the conversation between the caller and the girl. The caller was speaking so loudly that it sounded as if the girl’s phone was on speaker.

The girl glanced at the supposedly sleeping girl who laid there motionlessly before she hesitantly grabbed her gun and a silencer from her bag, and connected them together and aimed it at the latter. Suddenly, her hands were beginning to tremble. This was the first time in her whole life that she was hesitant to kill a person. Something like this never had happened before. If her employer ordered her to assassinate a certain person they desired to be killed, she would definitely do it in a heartbeat, but in this case, it was entirely different.

“What are you waiting for?” Hearing the supposedly sleeping speak, the younger girl was utterly shock as the older girl sat up comfortably on the bed, smiling widely while glaring a challenging look. “Shoot me.” She added, whispering.

“How long have you been awake?” The taller girl gulped nervously as she tightened her grip on her gun.

“Since the very beginning of your phone call.” The smaller girl replied nonchalantly as if it wasn’t a big deal that she was being aimed at a gunpoint by an attractive naked assassin which stunned the other. “Didn’t your boss want me dead? You and I both know that he does. Well, now’s your chance. Go on; kill me now.” She taunted.

The taller lass’ hands trembled twice as much as her grip on the gun tightened even more, and the pressure was growing within each and every second that passed by as it became unbearable to bear anymore. Her vision became blurry, realizing her tears were now falling from her eyes as her hands collapsed on each of her sides; her arms limping, breathing heavily as the weapon slid from her hand and fell on the floor with a thud.

The shorter girl sighed disappointingly as she approached the other girl, picking up the gun on the carpeted floor and placed it back in the girl’s hand. With the same hand, she gently brought the latter’s hand over her head and made the gun point straight at her forehead. The latter was left stunned as the other girl smirked, letting go of the girl’s hand.

“It’s funny how I’m teaching an assassin how to kill, but let me show you how it is done. Just aim the muzzle on my forehead, push down the hammer and pull the trigger. If it’s easy for you to kill other people, then it should be easy to kill me.”

Seconds passed and still nothing has happened yet. The taller girl tears were falling like a waterfall; she didn’t want to kill the love of her life. She changed so much thanks to her. She was able to know love and to love thanks to her. This small girl in front of her changed her life completely, and she loved it how she turned out to be now.

“I can’t do it!” The girl exclaimed as her hand fell on her side again. “I can’t kill someone whom I love so much!”

The short girl heaved yet another sigh as she brought her hand on the latter’s, bringing her hand over her forehead once again, but this time she kept her hand there as she placed her thumb on the girl’s index finger which was resting on the trigger.

“Finish me like this…”

BANG!


To be continued
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Prologue
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on November 23, 2014, 01:37:17 AM
OMG :shocked
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Prologue
Post by: lezperv on November 23, 2014, 01:47:05 AM
HARU!!! You son of a bitch, you didn't tell me you were gonna update something!!! I'm mad at you :P

Anyway, OMFG OMFG OMFG!!! Please don't tell me it's Minami? That is Minami isn't it!!! Only Minami would be all nonchalant like that and help Atsuko to kill herself.
Oh man, you really got my adrenaline going. Now, that is a good fanfic to read. Bravo bravo *clap clap*
Also, Minami is immortal huh? Hence the Immortal Demon thing and she's the demon that needed to be kill :D

I have a similar idea that I want to write, but I have way too many stock up in my head -_-

Update soon Haru! Update soon!!!

Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Prologue
Post by: Kairi65 on November 23, 2014, 02:53:56 AM
Anyway, OMFG OMFG OMFG!!! Please don't tell me it's Minami? That is Minami isn't it!!! Only Minami would be all nonchalant like that and help Atsuko to kill herself.
Oh man, you really got my adrenaline going. Now, that is a good fanfic to read. Bravo bravo *clap clap*
Also, Minami is immortal huh? Hence the Immortal Demon thing and she's the demon that needed to be kill :D

agreed!! :twothumbs

please update soon! curiosity is killing me!! :drool: :bleed eyes: :cathappy:
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Prologue
Post by: deguchi on November 23, 2014, 03:10:32 AM
Immortal
love this one, continue please...
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Prologue
Post by: Kirozoro on November 23, 2014, 02:52:04 PM
Please continue
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Prologue
Post by: ryu201 on November 23, 2014, 04:17:48 PM
Another cool atsumina story!
Whoa! Is takamina died?
She not right?  :mon cry:
I mean if takamina died,what will happen to acchan?  :fainted:
Please update soon!!!!

Btw,Haru-san i really waiting your update for 'how you stole my heart'.
Please update it soon too!
Sorry for ask u so many request  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Prologue
Post by: cisda83 on November 24, 2014, 03:50:25 PM
eh... Minami is the so called 'DEMON'; why?

And Minami is asking Atsuko to kill her; why?

Did Atsuko get close to Minami for the sake of her mission?

But somethings might happened with them to make Atsuko unable to kill Minami, what events?

Did Atsuko able to re-aim the fire to other position?

Would Minami be killed?

Ah.... please make the flashback... before the event in the prologue please

Thank you for the new beginning

Can't wait to see the next chapter

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Prologue
Post by: Haru_Jei on December 05, 2014, 11:47:23 PM
Replies:

@Ruka Kikuchi: Okay...Was the prologue too good or too surprising that got you speechless? :lol:. Thanks for reading XD.

@lezperv:  :lol: :lol: I thought I'd make a surprise :lol: :lol:. Well, with the pairing already said and everything, I believe it was quite obvious, but I like to get the readers guessing.  :lol: Looks like I got most of the readers adrenaline going which is a good thing for me :P :twothumbs. Why thank you, I'm glad for the praise XD I don't get those very often. Well, everybody will have to figure that out throughout the story...sorry. I bet you do :lol:. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment XD.

@Kairi65: You agree with lezperv, huh? XD Thank you for reading and commenting XD.

@deguchi: I'll continue for sure. Thank you for reading and commenting XD.

@Kirozoro: Of course I'll continue, unless someone says otherwise :lol:. Thank you for reading and leaving a comment XD.

@ryu201: Ah ah ah...I'm not telling you yet :lol:. Don't worry, I will update 'How You Stole My Heart' once it's complete and proofread; I'm a little in a pitch here, so it might take a little bit more time :nervous. Thanks for reading and commenting XD.

@cisda83: All of your questions will be answered in future chapters :P :lol:. Of course I'm not going to leave it like that XD. Thanks for reading and commenting XD.

(A/N): Thank you readers and silent readers for reading my second long fanfic in this forum. I know I've already have my first still on-going, but don't worry, I'll try my best to update both of them evenly and including to those who have requested OS from; I'm still trying to get those done, so I apologize for the delay. And I also know that I've been busy with life like school and such, but since winter break is starting next week for me, I'll try to write as much as I can before my second semester start. Oh and before I forget, this fanfic is based on two animes and one drama combined. Thank you everybody for the support XD.


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Chapter 1

Dark. It was dark; really dark. The only source of lighting in a certain vast room was two flashlight held by two night guards, walking cautiously towards the middle of the room. At the center of the dark cell was something or rather someone who was wrapped in straps and chains all around her body; a thick iron restrain helmet was worn above their head with only six breathing holes apparent as their body was hung from a large hook suspended from the ceiling.

Curious as they were, the guards’ flashlights were pointing at the restrained newcomer while taking their night shifts at patrolling the forbidden underground level. They were very confident that they wouldn’t get killed by this dangerous criminal since they were all tied up in a bind, so they decided to pay a little visit to the newcomer and see what they looked like. Unfortunately for them, the trapped being swiftly moved their head towards them, and unexpectedly, one of the guards arm was cut as it fell on the cold floor, twitching as blood began to flood around it.

It took a while before the guard reacted, and the guard finally screamed in sheer pain as he held his armless and bleeding shoulder. Once the screaming ceased, only the droplets of blood and the heavy breathing could be heard, echoing around the room. The other guard panicked and grabbed his radio above his shoulder ready to call for backup; however, to his dismay, his radio was completely destroyed into tiny bits before he had the chance to even speak. Both guards turned back to face the trapped being with cold sweat, frozen in place as fear took over their bodies.

The confined figure swiftly moved their head to the guards and all of a sudden, their heads exploded with a bang as blood gushed out of their necks and splattered all over the floor; their bodies falling simultaneously on the bloody floor with a splash and a thud.

Once the bodies fell, unmoved, a bunch of keys and a card key began to float out of the guards belt buckle and into the air as they moved closer towards the prisoner and they unlocked themselves from the chains and straps around their body. Landing on the pool of blood skillfully and stripped from all of restraints, the now free prisoner’s body was entirely exposed and revealing a short but slender body of a young woman. She forcefully tried to remove the iron helmet, but to her dismay, it was stuck and it wouldn’t budge. Giving up so soon, the girl decided to escape as she walked towards the heavy metal door; her feet echoing tapping noise with every step she made as it resounded around her cell, leaving a trail of her bloody footprints. Scanning the floating card key on the reading machine, the heavy door slowly slid as the girl walked out of her cell.

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Meanwhile, two guards of the facility were patrolling the halls and noticed a faint trail of bloody footprints. Following the trail, the guards took notice that the forbidden cell was left open, exposing two headless bodies in the pool of blood. The guards panicked and one of them began to run towards the nearest alarm and slammed his hand on the big red button; the other guard stood before he ran off to follow his fellow guard.

Once the alarm went off, a robotic voice was immediately heard in every hall and in every room of the facility along with the constant loud beeping alarm.

“A state emergency has been declared. The underground block will be sealed in sixty seconds. All staff, please evacuate immediately. I repeat; a state emergency has been declared. The underground block will be sealed in sixty. All staff, please evacuate immediately.”

Every patrolling guard in the building started to rush to the weapon room as they immediately grabbed their weapons and extra ammunition and ran to their respective stations, waiting nervously for orders from their boss.

During that same time, a woman in her late twenties with a white lab coat exited her laboratory with a furious look on her face as she angrily headed towards the control room. Once she barged into the room, the woman approached her men and asked, yelling;

“What the hell is going on?! Why did the alarm go off?!”

“Yamanobe-sama! Apparently, one of the patrolling guards found the forbidden cell wide open and what’s more, the prisoner escapes.” One of the guards answered as he and his partners kept their eyes on the screens, trying to find the missing prisoner.

“What?! How’s that even possible?! The security here is practically perfect! How the hell can she escape so easily?!” The woman demanded, slamming her fists on the table as she breathed to calm down and ordered her men, “Call everybody immediately and tell them to take their strongest weapons with them and gather on the ground floor!”

‘She hasn’t even been here for a whole day yet and she’s already planning an escape. I didn’t even get the chance to experiment on her yet.’

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Meanwhile, the girl was slowly and carelessly walking along the empty hallway and soon later many guards appeared with large guns in their hands a few feet away from her as she continued to advance forward towards them without a care in the world. The large guns didn’t seem to scare the girl one bit as the guards began to threaten her to shoot if she didn’t stop, but the girl didn’t listen and kept moving forward. The guards didn’t have a choice and began to pull the trigger of their guns, showering the unarmed girl with bullets. However, to no avail, the girl kept walking towards them; somehow repelling every bullet that came at her with some kind of force field.

Once the shooting ceased, the guards reloaded their guns as they waited for the smoke to clear away.

“You think we got her?” One of guards asked nervously his comrades as he gulped and breathed heavily.

“What do you think? Of course we did; there’s no way in hell anybody can survive something like this without any protection or being armed.” The other guard smirked as he chuckled; confidence evident.

Unfortunately for them, when the smoke cleared, the girl was still standing; bullets floating around her in the air as they all dropped on the floor. The man’s smirk fell as his comrades were left shocked; fear suddenly appearing on all of their faces. They were about to shoot once again, but luck was not on their side as the girl was already dangerously close to them and their bodies were simultaneously destroyed; their limbs scattered across the hallway along with their organs.

The lass just advanced in the now bloody hallway, heading towards the elevator at the end of the hall as she swiped the card key while waiting for the elevator to get down to the forbidden underground floor. By the time the elevator reached the underground floor, she entered the lift as it slowly lifted her up to the ground floor. Reaching the ground floor, the doors opened as the small girl stepped out and walked along the corridors. She sensed it was suspiciously quiet and empty; she expected more guards to appear and try to eliminate her or capture her and bring her back to the forbidden cell. Somehow, nothing seemed to happen to her during her trip in the empty corridors.

Arriving at the main desk, the lass wasn’t surprise to sense dozens of guards waiting for her, and they all began to fire their weapons at will. In a blink of an eye, all the guards were all annihilated without having the small girl to move an inch and without receiving a single scratch on her naked body as the lobby was cover in a pool of blood.

The only person standing before her was the woman in charge of the facility. The woman in the lab coat stood there frozen in terror, her heart beating rapidly as her breathing was short, shallow and fast. The lass started to move again and approached the woman as the latter flinched and gulped nervously, waiting–most likely–for her death, but fortunately for her, the girl just walked pass by her. The woman exhaled a breath of complete relief which she didn’t know she was holding the whole time as her legs collapsed on the floor.

“What the hell just happened?” The woman asked, mumbling to no one in particular as she got back up to her feet and turned to only stare at the girl’s exposed back. Suddenly, she snapped back to reality as she took out her radio and ordered her men in the control room, “The prisoner is escaping! Close the partition immediately!”

“We already did Yamanobe-sama, but she destroyed it.”

“What?! How can that be?! The partitions are made out of the strongest steel ever and they’re a foot thick; it’s impossible to destroy something like that, not even a canon can break them.” She reasoned, but then cut herself off and just shouted in frustration. “Argh! It doesn’t matter anymore! Just get me M43D4 right now!”

With that, the woman left her spot and got back to the control room. Minutes later, a younger woman in her early twenties entered the room, wearing a cold expression.

“That was really quick. Come on, let’s go; we can’t wait any longer.” The older woman said as they walked out the room, heading towards the rooftop of the facility.

Reaching the rooftop, the young woman opened her briefcase to find many parts of a large gun. Assembling the parts together in a fast record of time, the young woman positioned herself with a 50-caliber antitank rifle in hand as she aimed the rifle at her moving target. The older woman stood right behind her, watching the naked girl walking towards a cliff.

“Finish her with a single bullet at the back of her head. I’m absolutely certain she won’t give you another chance to shoot another bullet.” The older woman ordered the younger one as the latter looked at her disapprovingly.

“Are you doubting my skills? I’m not stupid; I know exactly what I’m doing.” The lass quipped, facing the older woman. “Besides, I don’t remember permitting you to order me around like your dogs. Let me get this straight, I do not work for and I do not get orders from you; I only grant what you request. If you want this done, just shut the hell up back there and let me do my job.” The girl added coldly, glaring at the woman as the older one gulped and nodded in understanding.

The woman retook her position earlier and aimed her rifle at the back of the girl’s head. Calculating the distance and the velocity of the wind, she pulled the trigger. However, to her dismay, at the very last second, the small girl swiftly turned her head to the side, surprising both women on the rooftop.

When receiving the blow directly on the side of the head, pieces of the metal helmet shattered and flew away as the impact knocked the girl off and pushed her off the cliff and fell into the sea.

Meanwhile, the young woman stared at the cliff, hiding the look of shock as she slightly gritted her teeth and tsked, “Crap. She moved her head.”

“Damn it! She’s still alive!” The woman grabbed her radio from her lab coat, rushing out of the rooftop as she ordered the rest of her men to search for the girl’s body.

‘How did she know we were here?’  The young woman thought before leaving as well.


To be continue


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Well, that's it for now XD. Thank you for taking the time to read, and please don't hesitate to leave a comment or citisize my work; like usual, I don't bite.
Until next time, please continue to read :).
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 1 (2014/12/05)
Post by: lezperv on December 06, 2014, 12:21:44 AM
OMG!!! MINAMI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MINAMI!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Holy mothereffin shit, that was really awesome. Minami is such an effin demon! Her powers and sensing ability is to die for, but I can't help feeling something familiar about her powers... like I've seen this kind of power somewhere before... not sure where though...

Anyway, you've really outdone yourself Haru. I must give you another round of applause :D
You really got my heart beating fast with all these mysteriousness and bloodiness. 

Ahhh~ I can't wait for the next update! Hayaku!!!

Fuuuu as rude. Chapter 1 lapped up completely with anime "Elfen Lied" 1 series.

I thought of Elfen Lied when I read this too, but I didn't want to assume lol
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 1 (2014/12/05)
Post by: deguchi on December 06, 2014, 04:53:40 AM
Whooaaaa the hell whit that power??!!?
Sugooooiii takamina!!
I assume that was the first they met
I like the M43D4 name XD
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 1 (2014/12/05)
Post by: Kirozoro on December 06, 2014, 01:53:47 PM
Omg Minami is an OP demon!!!!

Too OP for them to handle

Update soon
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 1 (2014/12/05)
Post by: Drakon on December 06, 2014, 07:43:39 PM
Fuuuu as rude. Chapter 1 lapped up completely with anime "Elfen Lied" 1 series.
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 1 (2014/12/05)
Post by: RJay on December 07, 2014, 01:11:40 AM
Hey lil' bro, sorry I wasn't able to comment on this one yet.

I sort of know where you going with this; keep up the good work.
This is really sick awesome! You definitely have to update the next chapter real' soon.

Fuuuu as rude. Chapter 1 lapped up completely with anime "Elfen Lied" 1 series.

I believe he already knows that, and besides he did say that this story is based on two animes and one drama combine, so I don't know how this is rude somehow. I'm just saying.
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 1 (2014/12/05)
Post by: cisda83 on December 07, 2014, 07:10:03 AM
Interesting... Demon story huh....

Who escape?

Who would save her?

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 1 (2014/12/05)
Post by: Kairi65 on December 07, 2014, 07:43:25 AM
so chapter 1 starts from a different perspective... 8)

i wonder who's the girl? :O

update soon! :thumbsup
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 1 (2014/12/05)
Post by: Drakon on December 07, 2014, 11:19:56 PM
is based
Based not equal fully written off. IMHO.
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 1 (2014/12/05)
Post by: Haru_Jei on December 22, 2014, 12:47:23 AM
Replies:

@lezperv: Is it really that good? Why thank you for the compliment :lol:; I really appreciate that, it just gives me a boost to motivate myself even more XD. It looks like I really got you going didn’t I? :lol: Thanks for reading and commenting XD.

@deguchi: I’m not really good with creating names or code names, but I’m glad you like that. Thank you for taking the time to read and to leave a comment XD.

@Kirozoro: I guess you can say that :?. Thank you for reading and commenting XD.

@Drakon: I really have no idea what you mean by rude, but yes I did take this particular scene from Elfen Lied, but if you read carefully, I didn’t lap or write it completely off the anime. I didn’t specify the prisoner’s powers in this chapter (unlike where Lucy in the anime has invisible arms as her power) and I didn’t put the whole scene in it either. I did say in the beginning that this fanfic will be based on three shows and certainly some scenes will be similar to them :). Thanks for reading and commenting XD.

@RJay: Aniki! Can you really tell? Hopefully not, ‘cause I don’t want you spoiling it for the others :lol:. Thanks for reading and commenting aniki I’ll see you around the house :lol: XD.

@cisda83: I’m not telling you yet :P :lol:. You’ll find out in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and commenting XD.

@Kairi65: Yes it did. Questions will be answered on the next chapter. Thank you for reading and commenting XD.

(A/N): Hey guys! Sorry there won’t be any updates today :(. Apparently, something happen to my computer…again. I tried to fix it and it looks like I have to replace the motherboard; I have to wait for the order before fixing it. I’m currently using my phone, and let me tell you, it’s not easy to reply every comments in this thread like in a computer. I will have to delay my updates a little longer since all of my files are in my computer and it’s not working at the moment. I apologize for this inconvenience and please rest assure that updates will come soon. Thank you for your understanding XD.
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Replies + Announcements(2014/12/21)
Post by: Kairi65 on December 22, 2014, 05:26:12 AM
Sorry to hear about that.

It's okay, can't wait but will still wait for the next update!
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Replies + Announcements(2014/12/21)
Post by: Haru_Jei on November 17, 2015, 10:52:46 PM
(A/N): Hey guys! It's been almost a year since I updated this. Honestly speaking, I completely forgot about this fic :P and I kept my focus on HYSMH. Sorry about that. And I apologize for posting this very very late :bow:. Chapter 6 pt.2 of HYSMH is still not done yet, but I'm working on it. Without further ado, please enjoy chapter 2 of The Immortal Demon


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Chapter 2

As the sun was slowly rising from the horizon, a small female body was struggling to swim towards shore. Once reaching the shore, the small body walked up to the beach and dropped herself on her back in the sand, panting as she stared at slightly dark sky.
 
By the time her breathing regulated itself, she slowly sat up and suddenly felt sharp pain in her head. Removing what was left of the heavy metal helmet, she raised her hand to her head and noticed that she was bleeding on the side of it as she felt something that was half way inside her skull. Pulling hard and swiftly by the end of the little item, she groaned in intense pain as she took a good look at the bloody piece in her hand while the hole in her head was closing, healing it completely like she was never injured. The little piece in her hand was a bullet of a sniper.
 
Frowning at the bullet, she gripped at it and got up, throwing it to the sea as she looked around of her current location, finding out where she was. 
 
"Looks like I'm far from home." 
 
Not wasting any more time, she nodded to herself and began to run towards the houses, hoping that no one would see her. Luckily for her, none of the residents were awake this early yet, therefore she snuck to a nearby house and broke the lock of the back door, and it was a good thing that there was no alarm inside the house, or else she would be in great trouble.
 
Walking inside the family house, she quietly went upstairs to the rooms. The small woman entered a small bedroom, finding out that it was a young teenage boy’s room and rummaged through his clothes, and fortunately for her the boy’s clothes fitted her. After putting the clothes on, she looked around the house to find some stuff for her trip back to Tokyo.
 
Taking a backpack from the boy’s room, she went to the kitchen and filled the bag with whatever she liked in the fridge and in the food cabinets, and took some money in the master bedroom. Also realizing that the family had a car, she started to look for the keys. It was a good thing that the car keys were found on the kitchen counter. Grabbing the keys and the backpack, she exited the house through the back door and gently closed the door. She got inside the car, bringing it to life and drove away.
 
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Later that morning, a tall woman was walking along the empty hallway, making her way to her boss' office. Stopping right in front of the door, she took a deep breath and knocked twice. A couple of seconds later, she heard her boss' deep voice, permitting her to come in. Gripping the door knob, she twisted it and pushed it open.
 
Entering the large office, she saw her boss, a tall middle-aged man who happened to be her father as well, sitting in his desk as he stared back and forth from his computer monitor and the files of solved cases.
 
"What is it Mariko? Are you reporting me about the current case?" The man said in a deep voice.
 
"Well, there are no improvement so far." The tall woman said, sighing; giving the file and her reports to the man.
 
"Then, there is no reason for you to come here when you have nothing to report." The man looked up at his eldest daughter in disappointment.

"That's because there are no evidence that leads to the mastermind. Red Dragon is not leaving any breadcrumbs around; he's practically a ghost in this case." The young woman complained as the man gave her the look of indifference.
 
"Then maybe you should go back to all of the scenes of the crimes and find more of those missing clues." He harshly said as the young woman irritably whispered under her breath,
 
"Maybe you should investigate the case yourself instead of complaining."
 
"What did you say?" The man asked; his brows creasing into a line from anger, hoping he didn’t hear that from his daughter and imagined it instead.
 
"I said: I understood...sir." The woman responded, crossing her arms over her chest. "But let me at least suggest something that can be very helpful solve this case."
 
"And what would that be?"
 
"Let us have The Demon work with us."
 
"That is out of the question." The man said sharply as he glared at his daughter, looking at her like she was out of her mind. 
 
"Why not!" The woman retorted. "She's the only person that can lead us to Red Dragon! And besides, we captured her yesterday; we should take the chance to talk to her."
 
"That is still out of the question!" The middle-aged man slammed his hands on his desk, making the young woman flinched a little as he said in a deep voice. "Remember, we do not associate ourselves with criminals, and The Demon is a criminal."
 
"She's your daughter; my little sister–!"
 
"She is not my daughter! She killed my wife; your mother! She's the daughter of the devil himself, using your mother as a vessel to create this evil creature and bringing it into this world before taking her life away!" He breathed as he calmed himself down and finally said, "The Demon has taken many lives; she's a demon that has taken the form of a human. She's a criminal."
 
"You labeled her as a criminal; you called her The Demon." The young woman said firmly and continued, "At that time, Minami was just a confuse and innocent child. She only did it to protect herself because you and the SAT started firing at her." She grabbed the file back on the man's desk and turned around, heading towards the door only to stop right in front of it. "All she wanted was for you to protect her not to turn against her. For all I know you are the cause of turning her into the criminal that you gave the name The Demon."
 
The man stared at his daughter's back with wide eyes as Mariko walked out of the door and slammed the door loudly, heading towards her desk. Sighing, she slammed the file of her current case on her desk and opened as she analyzed it, making sure she didn't miss anything important. Heaving another deep sigh, she placed both hands on her face, groaning in frustration.
 
Feeling fed up, she grabbed her sticky note and wrote a little something in it, and stuck it inside the folder. Closing the folder, she got up from her chair, heading towards one of her closest colleague's desk. Knowing that her father would pull her out of the Red Dragon case if he ever figured out what she was planning, but right now she didn't care. All she wanted was to solve the illegal drug dealing and the murders that was happening in the street of Tokyo. She would risk anything to stop the man who called himself 'Red Dragon' even it meant that she would lose her job as a detective, even if it meant that she would lose her life.
 
Reaching her friend's desk, she dropped the folder on her desk, scaring her in the process.
 
"What the hell, Mariko?" The small woman yelped as she glared at the taller woman.
 
"I want you to analyze the Red Dragon case for more clues."
 
"Are you serious? This case is pretty much a dead end. And nobody knows who Red Dragon is and how he looks like."
 
"Just open the damn file, will you?" Mariko whispered loudly, not wanting to the catch the attention of the rest of her colleagues. "There must have something that we missed."
 
The younger woman sighed exasperatedly as she opened the file and saw the sticky note; reading it, her eyes went wide. "Are you insane?!" She whispered loudly, looking around; hoping no one heard her. "You want me to find The Demon? Do you want to get us fired and killed?"
 
"Just trust me on this. The Demon is only person who can find Red Dragon." Mariko said, trying to convince her little friend to help her.
 
"And if we find her; how can you be so sure that she's not going to kill us when we meet her." The small woman asked, feeling scared and worried.
 
"Don't worry." The tall woman simply said like it was nothing.
 
"Don't worry?!" The other woman snapped.
 
"Look! I know her more than anybody else; she will only attack when she feels threatened and when she's in danger." Mariko tried to assured her little friend. “Are you in or not, Yuko?”
 
“Fine. But if things go downhill, you take all of the blame and I’m out.”
 
“Deal.” The tall woman agreed as Yuko smiled widely and cracked her knuckles and began typing crazily on her keyboard. “Just find the place where she's being contained and we'll form a plan from there.”
 
“Roger.” The small woman saluted as the taller woman left her desk, heading back to her office.
 
---
 
Relaxing into her seat, Mariko turned on her computer. Once the computer was ready, she opened the internet browser and looked up for the recent news. Seeing nothing new, she closed the browser.
 
All of a sudden, one of her colleagues called her in a panic.
 
"What's wrong?"
 
"Something bad happened and it's all over the news."
 
They both ran to the office area, and everybody were all standing up, looking up at the flat screen television; hanging from above. Mariko found her little partner and stood right behind her.
 
"This is the live morning breaking news. An experimental laboratory in Kamakura has been attack late last night. Many of the guards working in the facility were all found slaughtered and murdered; there are no survivors." The newscaster announced and went more into details. "Kamakura town police force investigated the facility and discovered that the building is also a prison where death-row prisoners were held captive and are subjects to human experiments and are still found in their cells. The police also found an underground floor that is known as the forbidden floor. A single cell is found on that floor and it is found wide open and empty with two dead guards on the floor. The police are figuring out who was in that cell in the database, unfortunately the file is sealed and classified; not a single word and not even a photo is found. The only thing written in that file was The Demon." The woman released deep sighed and looked up at the camera; her eyes filled with fear as her voice trembled. "It has been concluded by the police force that a death-row prisoner in that forbidden cell has caused all this murders last night and is now on the loose."

Everybody in that room gasped and began to panic as they talk amongst themselves, hoping the news wasn’t true and it was just a prank. All of them pretty much thought the same thing; it hasn’t been twenty-four hours yet, and the captive has already escaped within twenty-four hours.

“Inform the superintendent right now and ask for orders." Mariko ordered the police officer.
 
"Of course, Chief Inspector."
 
Mariko grabbed Yuko by her wrist and dragged her into her office.

“Change of plans; go track her down.”

“Wait a second. Didn’t we watch the same news just now?” Yuko pulled her hand from the taller girl’s grip as she shut the door, preventing their colleagues to hear into their conversation. “The Demon has killed all of those guards in one night, and that’s only a small percentage of an army. And you still want to find her?”

“Well yeah.”

“Now I know you’re really insane.” Yuko placed both hands on her partner’s desk as her behind leaned against it. “Fine! Since you’re so determine to do this, I’m with you partner.”

“Great. Now the question is, why was The Demon in an experimental laboratory in Kamakura when she was supposedly be in the strongest prison in the country like Fuchu Prison?” Mariko thought about it a little deeper and her eyes widened as Yuko watched her think silently. “I think the Superintendent has something to do with this. Since we all know that The Demon has escaped from the facility, I know that she has to come back here in Tokyo; find out where.”

“Roger that. Don’t worry; I’m on it.”

As Yuko exited Mariko’s office, Mariko swiftly walked back to the Superintendent office and barged into the room.

“Why was my baby sister in the Kamakura experimental laboratory? You just want to cut her up and use her as a human experiment, aren’t you?”

“It had to be done. And besides, she was definitely perfect for human experiment and to find out where her demonic powers are coming from. However, since she’s escaped and killed all those guards, right now our number one priority is to find her again and lock her up again and experiment on her.” The man replied as he took a seat on his chair, resting his elbows on his desk and locking his fingers together. “She’s a monster, and it’s our job to stop this monster.”

“She’s not a monster.” The young woman said angrily between gritted teeth. “You’re the monster here.” With that, Mariko stormed off and went to her office to cool down.

---

An hour later, Yuko might not have an exact address where The Demon may be living, but she finally found a location where she might be working. With all the information that she needed, she deleted any trace of the research of her friend’s request after writing down the address on a piece of paper.

When she was done, she rushed to Mariko’s office and barged in without knocking on her door.

“Mariko, I found her. I found out where she might be working at.” Yuko announced after closing the door as she passed on the piece of paper to the other woman.

“Might?” The older woman analyzed the address and crumpled it and put it in her pocket.

“I’m sorry, but that was the best I could do; there’s pretty much nothing I could find in the database.” The small woman apologized as she explained herself.

“It’s nearby. Good job Yuko. Better have something than nothing at all.”

With that, both woman walked out of the office and out of the station as they headed towards their target’s workplace.

* ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ *

Meanwhile, the escapee has finally reached Tokyo as she stopped driving and parked the car in the supermarket parking lot, leaving the keys in the ignition and abandoning it there as she walked away, heading towards her destination.

However, on her way to her destination she stopped by a payphone and made a quick phone call to her partner.

“Moshi-moshi~ Takahashi consulting; how can I help you?”

“It’s me.” The girl announced as the receiver let out a small gasp of relief.

“Oh my God! Thank God you’re alright. I heard everything that happened in the news this morning.” The female voice said and added, “I still can’t believe that you killed all those guards in there.”

“I had no choice; they were about to kill me.”

“Even if they tried, it’s not like you’re really going to die.”

“They don’t know that, and besides, I don’t want them to cut me up and experiment on me; not like they can find anything useful inside me.” The small woman argued and explained, “My gifts are unexplainable. Even if they experiment on me, they don’t know what they’re looking for. I believe Red Dragon is behind this.”

“Red Dragon?”

“Yeah; I’ll explain everything later on in the office.”

“Alright. I’ll see you in a bit.”

“Yeah, see you later.”

“Bye~.”

After hanging up the phone, the young woman walked out of the phone booth and all of a sudden she was accidently knocked over as she fell and landed hard on her behind; her hood falling back and her baseball cap coming off of her head.

The girl slowly stood up, rubbing her behind as the person who accidently pushed her and her friend helped her up and picked up the backpack and the baseball cap from the ground. She lifted her head up to thank the two of them and as she did, she could see a tall woman and a shorter woman; one of them she knew very well. On the other end, the two women could now see the girl’s face fully and perfectly.

Yuko noticed that her partner and the other girl were having a staring contest and she was looking at each and one of them back and forth.

“Do you guys know each other?

Both woman didn’t answer as they continued to stare at each other after so many years has passed.

“Minami?”

“Onee-chan.”


To be continued


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I hope you all enjoyed that XD. As usual, please leave a comment or critic; they're all appreaciated and if any of you have any question about The Immortal Demon or How You Stole my Heart, or you have something to ask, please send me a PM and I'll answer as quickly as possible. Until next time XD :).
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 2 (2015/11/17)
Post by: love angel on November 18, 2015, 10:48:03 AM

 Arrrgggg!!!!
 Author sannnn!!!!
 How could youuu trying to kill me...
 Please update soon bcuz,
 Waiting is killing meee!!!!
 Onegaiii~~~
 Btw i really like ur story
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 2 (2015/11/17)
Post by: deguchi on November 18, 2015, 11:56:58 AM
Ooooooh I've been waiting!!
Cool~
yay Mariko-neechan! Go Go Go
papa is the monster, huh
thanks author-san
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 2 (2015/11/17)
Post by: Kairi65 on November 19, 2015, 01:42:32 AM
Finally an update!   :yossi:

Kinda funny mariko and minami are sisters considering the difference of their heights^^"

Lastly, i wonder who is minami's partner? And what happen to the assassin before(which i assume to be atsuko)? And the time gap between the prologue and chapter 1..?

Ps, otsukare!
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 2 (2015/11/17)
Post by: Kirozoro on November 19, 2015, 04:18:21 AM
An Update!!!!!!

So Mariko and Takamina meet?!? O-o

What are they going to do now?

Where did Acchan gone?

Update soon
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 2 (2015/11/17)
Post by: cisda83 on November 21, 2015, 01:34:19 AM
Who is the red dragon???

Minami's father?

What is it that Mariko wants with Minami?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 2 (2015/11/17)
Post by: h_juri25 on November 21, 2015, 12:24:23 PM
This fic reminds me of Elfen Lied somehow. Really awesome.

Please update! I really like it!
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 2 (2015/11/17)
Post by: RJay on November 23, 2015, 04:33:27 PM
Hey lil' bro! :lol: XD

Wow! didn't thing that Minami and Mariko would be related at all :lol:. That really surprised me. But what's the deal with their father though? He seems to really hate his youngest daughter so much to bring her to a laboratory for human experiments. From what I read, Minami and Mariko's mother death seems to be one of the reasons, but there's no proof that Minami's birth is the cause of his wife death; maybe there's another reason somehow for him to despise Minami and call her a demon. Mariko seems to believe that her little sister is innocent.

Is 'The Demon' the name that the father gave Minami when he was chasing her or something?
And also, where did Minami's power or gifts come from?

Please update as soon as you can :) XD. Take your time; no pressure. Keep up the good work! XD :)
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 2 (2015/11/17)
Post by: Haru_Jei on August 16, 2017, 03:45:19 AM
Replies:

@love angel: Hey! Sorry for making you wait so so long. It's been really tough on me these days; I hope you understand. I'm really glad you like my story and I thank you. Thank you for reading and commenting.

@deguchi: Yeah. Papa is a terrible person :lol: I'm glad you like it :) Thank you for reading and commenting.

@Kairi65: It has been awhile hasn't it. Sorry about that; with the lack of motivation and the writer's block, it's hard to continue writing, but I try to keep up with everything. Yeah :lol: Mariko and Minami are siblings; you can say that Mariko took over their father's height while Minami took over their mother's. About Minami's partner you'll find out in this chapter. Who knows, we'll find out who the assassin is soon enough. As for the time gap, let's just say its foreshadowing. Thanks for reading and commenting.

@Kirozoro: Most of your questions will be answered in this next chapter. Hope you'll enjoy it. Thank you for reading and commenting.

@cisda83: You'll find out who Red Dragon is in the future chapters. Thank you for reading and commenting.

@h_juri25: Yeah, some of sceneries will be like Elfen Lied, but it's not going to be exactly the same. I'm glad you like it. Thank you for reading and commenting.

@RJay: Hey aniki! What? :lol: It's good to surprise your readers (well only the good kind of surprises) You'll know soon enough why he's acting like that. I left some clues about it though. Mariko mentioned the naming of 'The Demon' to spite her father, but then again maybe he did gave that name. Minami's gifts will be known in future chapters. Thank for reading and commenting.

(A/N): Hey guys! It's been two years already!! I'm really sorry for not updating anytime soon. Many things has been going on that I had a hard time writing, meaning the lack of motivation and writer's block. It's been really hard. I hope you guys are not upset or think that I gave up on my stories; it's just that it's been difficult to find time and all. Well, anyway, I don't want to keep you waiting any longer. Here is the next chapter! I hope you'll like it and please do enjoy it too. Leave your comments and your question; don't be shy.


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Chapter 3

After a good few more seconds of more staring, the smallest out of the three girls blinked back to reality as she suddenly grabbed her backpack and her baseball cap from the slightly taller girl’s hands and started to sprint on the opposite direction. The two other women looked at the small girl’s back in confusion for a second as they both stared at each other, and as their instincts kicked in they began to chase after her.

“Minami! Wait?!” Mariko called out as she and Yuko zigzagged through the crowd, tailing after her sister.

“No way in hell I am going to get arrested again.” Minami muttered under her breath as she sped up even more to lose her chasers.

“Yuko! We have to catch her no matter what!”

“Wait! What? Why?” Yuko questioned, asking herself why she too was running after her friend’s younger sister.

“I’ll explain everything later once we’re all alone with my sister.” The taller woman reasoned, adding, “But right now, you have to catch her because between the two of us, you are the fastest.”

“Fine!” The small woman exclaimed as she began to speed up, getting closer and closer to her target. Ever so slowly she reached her hand out, grabbing the hood of the smaller girl’s sweater and abruptly pulled her towards her, bringing her to an empty alley as her partner followed behind and helped her.

“AH! Let go! Let go!” Minami exclaimed as she tried to fight back.

“No way!” Yuko grabbed her handcuffs and cuffed the girl as Mariko finally caught up to them and had both her hands on her knees, trying to catch her breath.

“You’re lucky that we’re in broad daylight and in a middle of a crowd, ‘cause I would literally kill you by now.” The small girl threatened as her older sister straightened up to retort.

“No you won’t. I know you way too well. You wouldn’t kill anyone until you know you’re in danger.” She paused as she motioned Yuko to give her the keys and removed the cuffs. “Besides we’re not here to arrest you; we’re here as your clients.”

“Clients? How can I be sure you’re not lying to me?” The girl questioned as she crossed her arms over her chest, frowning as she looked around cautiously. “Who knows, maybe my so called father is watching us right now at a corner, waiting for you to take me to him and lock me up again and trying to kill me. I pretty much lost count on how many times he tried to kill me in the past.”

“I swear to God, otou-san is not here; he doesn’t even know we’re here.” The tall girl grabbed her sister’s hands and squeezed them slightly, reassuring her as she stared seriously into her eyes. “I’m telling you the truth. And I’m not going to let him lock you up again; that’s a promise.”

Minami looked back into Mariko’s eyes, trying to figure out whether she was being genuine or not, but all she saw was sincerity; she found herself stupid for doubting her older sister when she tried her best to help her when she was in trouble. Minami let out a sigh as she pulled her hands from Mariko’s grip and crossed her arms again, leaning her back on the brick wall. “Alright, I’ll trust you on this one. So what is it that you are requesting from me?”

“Can we talk about this in private? This is something really classified; not something that we can talk about in public.”

“It’s that serious, huh?” Both Mariko and Yuko nodded their heads as Minami began to walk out of the alley, motioning them to follow her. “Then, shall we go to my office and discuss this?”

“By the way Minami, this is Yuko; my partner.” As they walked, the tall woman introduced her partner to her little sister as they both shook hands and bowed at each other.

“Nice to meet you.”

“Same here.”

“And Yuko, this is my little sister, Minami, who also happens to be The Demon.” Yuko’s eyes were like saucers after hearing what Mariko stated, gapping at the smaller girl; looking at her from top to bottom like she had taken the form of an alien.

“Are you freaking serious? You’re The Demon?” Yuko whispered loudly as she looked around, making sure that no one heard her and cause a panic while Minami raised an eyebrow and nodded her head as her answer. “I’m sorry, honestly, I’d imagined The Demon to be a psychopathic person with a very crazy look in their eyes. I didn’t expect it to be an innocent looking girl like you.”

“Looks can be deceiving.” Mariko said as she wrapped an arm around her sister, bringing her closer to her.
“I really missed you kiddo.”

“I miss you too onee-chan.” Minami replied, wrapping her own arm around her older sister’s waist. “Ah! Before we head to my office, we have to stop somewhere nearby first.” With that, Minami put on her baseball cap and her hood back up again as they all walked towards their destination.

* ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ *

Somewhere in Tokyo, a man was sitting in his desk with an angry look on his face and all of a sudden he punched his computer monitor as it fell on the floor. Suddenly, he heard a knock on his door and he called them in as two women entered the office, approaching his desk. One of them had her head down in shame as she held her hands together in nervousness.

“You wanted to see me boss?” The woman asked as the other woman pushed her down to sit on one of the chairs and she walked and stood right next to her employer.

“Yes sensei; just explain to me what happen and then, I’ll decide what to do with you.” The man answered, his elbows resting on his desk and his fingers intertwined as he tried to look calm. “The laboratory has been destroyed and the police are taking custody of every subject in there and they realized that my prisoners were human test subjects.” The man rose from his chair, rounding around his desk and stood right in front of the female scientist as he looked down on her. “We’re lucky that that building used to abandoned and we just took it without anybody even knowing it, and that the building was not under my name or under my men’s name. Now tell me…”

“I don’t even know exactly what really happen. All I know was that the alarm went off and a guard came to me, telling me that the forbidden cell where The Demon was held custody was left open and empty.” After a slight pause, the woman lifted her head to look at her boss in the eye and continued, “The rest you all know. All the guards were armed and they all tried to stop that monster, but it was all in vain and she escaped. I was the only one left and I was really afraid to stop her alone.”

“I see.” The man turned to look at his employee and told her, “You may leave. I’ll call you when I need you.”

The young woman bowed to her boss and stared at the female scientist before leaving the office. The man turned to look back at the woman in front of him as he crossed his arms over his chest and pondered for a few minutes.

“As much as I want to fire you and dispose of you I can’t let you go. Because you are the best at what you do and I need you to help me find what I seek through all the experiments we do.” The man stood up from his desk and motioned the scientist to leave his office as he took out his phone from his pocket and dialed the young woman’s number. “I have a new assignment for you; go find The Demon, kill her and bring her dead body to me.”

At the same time, in a red convertible, the young woman responded and drove away from the small building.

* ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ *

The three young women were walking along the streets of Tokyo as the smallest among the three was walking ahead while the two others followed suit.

“Hey, Mariko.” Yuko whispered to her partner, hoping that the smaller girl in front of them wouldn’t hear them. “Is it still a good idea to tell your sister about the Red Dragon case? I mean, this case is really dangerous.”

“The Demon is already dangerous herself.” Mariko whispered back.

“Good point.” Yuko nodded.

Before Yuko could say something else, Minami entered a restobar as the bell at the door rang, announcing her arrival as a customer at the restobar. Without waiting for the other girls, Minami walked towards the bar as the owner came out of the storage room, noticing the three persons inside their place.

“I’m sorry, but we’re close at the moment, but we’ll open by lunch hours.”

Minami didn’t listen as she sat on a barstool, putting her hood down and removing her baseball cap. She gave a big smile to the owner as the owner looked a little surprise for a second and giving the girl a smile of their own.

“Hello, Miichan.”

“Takamina! Look who’s back unscathed; not a scratch in sight.” Miichan said as she grabbed a glass, putting a couple of ice cubes in there and poured roughly two shots of whiskey, and placed the glass in front of Minami. “Now that’s the Demon for you.”

Minami chuckled as she downed the contents of her glass in a swift. Miichan saw the other girls behind her best friend and invited them to sit down. She offered another drink, but Minami kindly declined the offer.

“How about you pretty lady?” She asked Mariko, giving her a charming smile. “Wanna drink?”

“No, thank you.” The tall girl politely turned down the offer as Miichan turned to Yuko, offering a drink as well as Yuko shook her head. “We’re on the job. We’ll have a glass of ice tea instead.”

“Well, that sucks.” The young owner frowned as she put the bottle of whiskey away and grabbed two other glasses, adding ice and poured ice tea she made earlier from the fridge. “Here you go ladies.” Miichan placed the glasses in front of them as they said their thanks.

“The one next to me is my older sister, Shinoda Mariko, and the one next to her is her partner, Oshima Yuko; they’re detectives from my so-called father’s police department.” Minami suddenly introduced the other girls.

“I’m Minegishi Minami, but you can call me Miichan.” The young owner introduced herself as she shook hands with Mariko and Yuko, turning back to Minami. “This is rare to see, especially from you Takamina. You, working with the cops.”

“Mariko is my sister; she’s the only person in the police force I can trust.” Minami said as she glimpsed at Yuko and added, “And if she brings someone she can trust and meet with me, then I can trust her partner as well.” Yuko discreetly sighed in relief as she smiled slightly, thinking that she could also trust this girl like her partner would.

“Anyway, after everything that happened since yesterday, I lost all of my belongings.” The smallest among the women got off the barstool, walking towards the entrance and locked the door. “I’m here to pick up my basic supplies.”

Miichan smiled and nodded, walking towards the back as Minami motioned the other girls to follow. As they all went to the back, they walked into the pantry as Miichan closed the door behind them and locked it. After locking themselves in, the young owner moved some boxes aside and behind those boxes was a hidden door. Miichan entered the code, scanned her handprint and her eyes and the door opened. On the other side of that door was a large room filled with all kinds of weapons, there was tech area as well, and at another corner what looks like a chemistry lab.

“What is this place?” Yuko asked as she and Mariko looked around the room in awe. “Some of these weapons are illegal in Japan.”

“I am Takamina’s loyal supplier.” Miichan announced. “Whatever she wants, I’ll supply them for her; whether they’re weapons, drugs, or any type of access cards and other techs. Just so you know she’s my only customer.”

The young owner walked towards the back of the room and picked up a briefcase at the bottom shelf. Placing the briefcase on the table and opened it to make sure everything was in there as Minami browsed around the weapon area and walked towards Miichan, watching her.

“Here you go! A loaded glock 17, two full magazines, a box of 9mm bullets, 20 throwing blades and a garrote wire.” Miichan listed the contents in the briefcase as Minami just closed it while placing a smartphone on the table and grabbed her bag to take all of the cash she found in the house she robbed.

“You don’t want to double check everything?” The young owner laughed, grabbing the phone and walked to her computer to set it up.

“No need. I trust you.” Minami also laughed, following the other behind and handed in at least a hundred thousand yen. “Sorry Miichan, this is what I was able to steal at the house after my escape.”

“You broke into a house?!” Yuko asked as Minami shrugged and explained that it was no big deal and that she didn’t leave a single trace of her.

“No worries, my friend.” Miichan took the bills, finishing the work on her computer and disconnected the phone from it. “The burner phone is on the house.” She handed the smartphone to the small girl. “You know, you didn’t have to pay for anything; I should be the one paying you. You saved my life after all.”

“What are you talking about? You may be the owner of this restobar, but I still, technically, own the building; you’re paying rent for this place and you’re living here too. The only thing I can do for you is pay for your services.”

“Alright then. If you say so, boss.”

Both girls smiled at each other as they walked out of the room and locked it, and out of the pantry, and out  of the back room. Minami gave her thanks as the three young women walked out of the restobar and head towards their next destination.

---

“Miichan mentioned that you saved her life. What did she mean by that?” Mariko asked as she and Yuko each went by her side.

“Miichan used to take part of the yakuza business.” Minami answered and continued, “Her father couldn’t get a loan from the bank to keep his own business afloat, so he borrowed money from another source; the yakuza. Of course, he wasn’t able to pay his loans back on time, therefore, he asked for an extension. The loan sharks eventually extended his dues and warned him to pay them at a specific date or he would be more than just be physically injured.”

“Let me guess. He couldn’t pay them after his extended time, right? And made Miichan pay for his debts?” Yuko asked as she crossed her arms and shook her head in disapproval. “What a terrible father.”

“Worse. He didn’t asked his daughter to help him pay his debt; he sold his only child to the yakuza as payment.” Minami paused and explained, “Miichan was really good in chemistry, which means chemistry equals to drugs. She produced and dealt drugs for them, and since she was sold to them she would do just that for the rest of her life.”

“With all that, she wouldn’t be able to live a normal life.” Mariko said as she asked, “How are you involve in this?”

“Miichan was my classmate in highschool; I didn’t know her very well at that time.” The small girl said as she explained how she met the restobar owner later on. “One day, I found her out of breath like she was running away from something or someone while I was working. I brought her to my place to hide and I asked her what was going on, and she told me her story and that she was running away from the yakuza she worked for. She explained to me that she wasn’t able to reach her quota and they were after her ass.”

“How were you able to get her out of the business? It’s difficult cut ties from the yakuza; once you join, the only way to get out of the group is either get killed or be killed.” Yuko mentioned the obvious, but still curious how the small girl saved her supplier.

“I formulated a planned to get her out for good. From what Miichan told me before, the head of the business didn’t know anything about her, so it made my job easier for me to do so. I provided her with some cash to pay up her quota, and when she would meet the head of the family as I followed her and blend in, and that’s where I put my plan into play.” Minami said while she texted her partner with her new burner phone to tell her that she would be at the building very soon. “At first, it was only to convince the family boss to release and let go of Miichan if he didn’t want the police to know where his headquarter was, but since he saw I was alone with no backup whatsoever, he decided to bring the whole family to the area to beat the hell out of us. We were outnumbered and obviously I couldn’t take them all alone with my normal strength alone. I convinced Miichan to leave me and run to my place while I took care of them. With her gone and with no witnesses, I annihilate that yakuza family completely alone.”

“You decided to become the Demon that day.” Yuko stated not really asking a question to the smaller girl. “I remember that case really well, but it wasn’t your actual M.O. From what I remember from the Demon’s old cases, your M.O is overkill; dismembered body parts, blood everywhere, unrecognized victims, but it wasn’t case for that yakuza family; the case was listed as a yakuza war.”

“I made the cops believe that it was a war among the yakuzas.” Minami admitted. “I didn’t want my father to know I was there and try to hunt me down like he always does.”

“Makes sense to me.” Mariko said.

“After that, she asked me if she could work for me since she didn’t finishing her education and without a degree, and with her background she couldn’t have a regular job. I agreed to her offer and opened up a business as long as she continued to supply me with items that I needed and paid me rent. That way, she would somewhat live a normal life.”

Minami suddenly stopped in front of a building, and looked up as she smiled, feeling like it has been a long time since she left, but it had only been a day.

“We’re here guys.”

They all walked into the building as they went up the stairs to enter a room and they were greeted by a really beautiful woman about the same height as Mariko that made Yuko’s mouth drop to the floor.

Minami told the woman something before she headed out of the room as the woman walked to her desk to grab some papers and a file and brought Mariko and Yuko to Minami’s office and introduced herself.

“Hello, welcome to Takahashi consulting. I’m Kojima Haruna; Minami’s partner.” Haruna motioned the detectives to sit down and make themselves comfortable while they waited for Minami.

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Meanwhile, Minami entered her apartment which happened to be in the same building as her workplace. She put her bag and her briefcase in her bedroom as she undressed and went in the bathroom to take a quick shower.

Once she was done, she put on a business look with black dress pants, a mauve dress shirt, a black and white striped tie, a nice black vest, and good pair of black dress shoes. She grabbed the briefcase, opened it and took her weapons out. She hid her throwing blades and her garrote wire all over her body. Lastly, she grabbed her gun and her ammunitions as she opened her closet, moved a part of the wall at the back of the closet and entered the code for her safe and put the items in there and lock it as she placed back the wall.

Minami walked out of her apartment and went downstairs to her workplace. She entered her office, watching the girls talking as Haruna gave her papers.

“Alright.” Minami sat on her chair as Haruna stood behind her, both smiling. “Welcome to Takahashi consulting! I’m Takahashi Minami; the owner of this establishment and a private investigator. How may I help you today?”


To be continued


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Well, that's it for now. I hope you enjoyed that, I also hope you guys will be sticking around. I'll try my very best to write the next chapter and update this story ASAP. Again, like always, please don't be shy to leave you comments or your questions. If ever you have some non spoiling serious questions don't hesitate to leave me a PM. Until next time!
Title: Re: [AtsuMina] The Immortal Demon - Chapter 3 (2017/08/15)
Post by: RJay on September 05, 2017, 11:54:40 PM
Hey again lil' bro! It's been a while.

Great update.
Looks like Mariko and Yuko met Miichan; who has quite an interesting background. Pretty scary how they had to deal with the yakuza in order for her to get out of the business.
I wonder what the Red Dragon wants with the scientist's experiments, and what does he want with Minami. What exactly is he looking for anyway?

Please update soon. Don't make us wait longer. Waited for at least two years for this update.