Ramblings of a goosefish (updated 29th july~!)

[Yuuyami]

Holy shit, cousin, you commented! O_____O;

Anywho xDDD

Good to see you back Guuchan~

It's like a mini 3rd gen reunion~ <3333

Lovely to see you continue that Saki/Reina story, haha. The foreplay and the mischief of the story could make me smile for days on end~ <3

Hope to see you write more soon :3

-gives you another hardhat for the hell of it- xD

[Grisours]

Loved it! Stories about the High-King unit are really new and interesting, specially when they are like this 
I'm curious... What was Reina saying to Maimi to make her so flustered? 
Keep it up!

[Regent]

I'm curious too, maybe she was seeing which one would crack first?   

[goosefish]

first in... comment later

woah...

The voice inside of Saki’s head continued screeching at her, bringing an unsettling pounding to her head. Reina seemed to have the small girl tightly on her leash… everything the wonky-eyed girl did or said, Saki instantaneously reacted to.

WOOF!

“You’re old enough to enjoy certain things now… let me help you with that… okay?” The yankii breathed her words out against her junior’s lips, and as soon as Saki nodded her head once, those lips became hers.

my nineteen year old eyes melted...

thanks for the awesomeness... i enjoyed myself there... keep at it!

Hehe, glad you enjoyed it! 

Oh Reina... preying on your kohai like that.  So naughty.

I loves the naughty! 

MOAR CORRUPTING THE YOUNGLINGS!

OKAY! Lols... maybe not for a while  I'll have to think about who else I can go around corrupting 

Gahh~! I love your work so much

Saki and Reina, hmm... I'm okay with that Wicked hawt too 'course, I also went fangirl crazy over any Reinai moment, so that was a bonus!

Keep up the good work :3

Whoah! WHOAAAH! Where have you been all my life?!  Haven't seen you around these parts in like... FOREVER! Thanks for popping in and reading!   

Holy shit, cousin, you commented! O_____O;

Anywho xDDD

Good to see you back Guuchan~

It's like a mini 3rd gen reunion~ <3333

Lovely to see you continue that Saki/Reina story, haha. The foreplay and the mischief of the story could make me smile for days on end~ <3

Hope to see you write more soon :3

-gives you another hardhat for the hell of it- xD

Yay! Yuuchan liked it!  *puts on hardhat* 
Btw... I've totally gota catch up with all your stuff... I'm sure that I'm WAY behind! 

Loved it! Stories about the High-King unit are really new and interesting, specially when they are like this 
I'm curious... What was Reina saying to Maimi to make her so flustered? 
Keep it up!

Only Maimi shall ever know what Reina was saying to her!!! Must've been something... um... inappropriate for minors' ears? 

[goosefish]

Unspoken: The Other Responds



For as long as I can remember, I was alone.
 
Even in a crowded room full of my closest family and friends… I was alone.
 
Is that strange?
 
Is it a little odd that I'm unable to completely open up to another person?
 
There isn't one single person who knows everything about me. There are people who know the beginning, somebody else knows the middle, and yet another person who knows the current.
 
When you start off with low self confidence...

When you're not really sure whether what you're doing is right or not...

When you think that no matter what you do or say, people simply won't understand...

…You fall faster and faster.
 
You clam up, put on a pretense that there's nothing bothering you, act like you've never even given a second thought to who you really are... when in reality it’s all you ever think about.
 
Then I met you and you changed it all. You made me want to change, to grow, to find myself.
 
And because of that… In the beginning I resented you…

I couldn't comprehend how you could always be so bubbly and optimistic.

I couldn't wrap my head around you wanting to be so near me, wanting to share everything with me.

I thought you were too young and naive to know what you were really doing.

To me, you were living in this happy little bubble that would never pop… I was jealous of that...

It was everything I wished I had… you were everything that I wanted to be…
 
Before I realised it, you were constantly glued to my side. To be honest - and I think I can admit this now – to be honest…
 
It scared me.

It scared me that you wanted to be close to me.

It scared me because nobody had ever acted that way towards me.

It scared me... because I didn't know how to deal with your complete trust in me.

I didn't get why you trusted this me... and I still don't...
 
I wish you could hear everything that's constantly on my mind...

I wish you knew it all...

Because then I wouldn't have to tell you...

I wouldn't have to fumble around, waiting for the right moment that never seemed to come, trying to find the words that would make everything alright.
 
I think sometimes you wish that too... you give me that troubled look and then quickly replace it with that winning smile of yours... pretending that it doesn't matter...
 
But it matters a lot… It matters the world to you…

…What we're thinking, what we're feeling...

It's what makes us work...

It's what brings us together...

But at the same time… more than that…

…It's what drives us apart.

[tru_harmony]

that was beautiful... i love it...

makes me wonder who the persona is... and the object of her reflections...

hmm... i got a couple of candidates in mind now...

i got all teary eyed with this

I wish you knew it all...

Because then I wouldn't have to tell you...

I wouldn't have to fumble around, waiting for the right moment that never seemed to come, trying to find the words that would make everything alright.
 
I think sometimes you wish that too... you give me that troubled look and then quickly replace it with that winning smile of yours... pretending that it doesn't matter...
 
But it matters a lot… It matters the world to you…

…What we're thinking, what we're feeling...

It's what makes us work...

It's what brings us together...

But at the same time… more than that…

…It's what drives us apart.

so many possibilities... there is one that i'm ambivalent about, though... hmmm

anyway... thanks for the awesomeness again... you never fail to deliver the goods... go! go! go!

EDIT: okay... i know for sure that i'm a total idiot... i totally don't remember titles... ... i had to check the previous page to check the title of the first part... anyway, it's still awesome...

[Saikami]

Where have I been? Well, that I don't even know much of LOL I'm always mad busy thanks to work, but I've always have been lurking around here, just not commenting But hey, I'm commenting now!

Anyway~

Wow, that was...wow. It's so sad, yet so true. After all, situations like that does happen in real life...which makes it seem more real. And with Ai's personality (because I'm pretty sure this is Ai's pov, if not...I feel like an idiot ) it makes a lot of sense!

...Moar plz!

[Yuuyami]

Yaaaay, Aichan's view~ <3 Thanks, Guuchan xD

xD No worries, you got her down perfect :3 Her self-insecurities, her fears, her revelations, it's our favorite angsty leader all right xDDD

I especially like the last six sentences, particularly the last sentence because of its opposite effect in regards to the prior five. xD I love things like thaaaat <3333

So what, not going to update Sun that much? ;-;

Oh well, as long as you keep writing, we're all happy <33333

[strawb3rrykream]

That was great! So both girls have these feelings that they're keeping inside and it's hurting their relationship. Don't be afraid, Ai-chan. She loves you and you love her so take the plunge and talk to her.

[JFC]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww...Aichan!

[Regent]

A nice little character study, and it was well written. I had to go back and read the first part to compare them. It seems like the ball is in Ai-chan's court and this point, and what's more, she knows it. I hope something happens to give her that little extra push she needs. It never fails to interest me that can seemingly be so confident can be so insecure at the same time.

[lollipopgirl]

YAY Ai-chan does still need Gaki! (not that I actually doubted that... but yeah)
That was so true and real, makes it even more sad and touching
Great writing there of course!
One day Ai, you will break... You have to, we all have to... but if you leave it too long, that one person you hope to be there to catch you as you fall, will be gone... Sometimes people search and search and search for this one thing they believe will make them complete and happy but the whole time, everything they have ever wanted is right in front of them, under appreciated but alot of the time, so innocently unaware. Don't look over the head of those in front of you, look into them and see what is waiting for you!

Noooow, my fave lil' fish with feathers, goosey, we have this problem you see... YOU keep writing this fabulous "one-shots" that are just dying to become more and thus, like your characters, we become incomplete without a continuation... This beautifully send glimpse into the Unspoken is one of those!
Sooo, if you love us as much as we love you (which is a lot btw!) would you please shower us with my of your greatness?!

[x_sleepyhead]

haha i just read all the whole thread~ 

whoaomg its so <3 
you write takagaki really well you know 
i really like your stories ..
they're really good 

hope you update soon *nods*

more angsty takagaki~ >_>;
or happy takagaki 
whichever you like~~
just ... write takagaki 
cause you're so good at it 

[lil_hamz]

I'll like to think of this as an Ai-chan OPV too. Sigh...TakaGaki...
We need new TakaGaki stuff especially with the musical. You are gonna have more fluffly/angsty fics on them right? Right? *looks at goosefish like a lil puppy*