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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #520 on: September 04, 2008, 11:09:17 PM »
I'm just really confused on the order I should be reading it in? do I just read from first to the latest page? or should I be reading the prelude from somewhere else beforehand?

EDIT: wow... this is starting to feel like an actual novel as I read on oO ... its so intense...

Hey winter! Yeah, I think the prelude got deleted when jphip did the forum move, so some of the posts got messed up. But basically the prelude takes place on the 11th, with Hitomi chasing Eri and accusing her of killing Risa....
Right now the story is on the 10th, so the 'prelude' is about to happen soon!

I'll post the prelude again when I update later on this month...

And yeah, the story is huge! I'm gonna print it out when I'm done, lol.

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #521 on: September 05, 2008, 12:32:30 AM »
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 :w00t: I can't wait to read the prelude either!
I want a copy of the book! I'll buy it :wub:


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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #522 on: September 05, 2008, 01:14:07 AM »
 :OMG: :mon cry: You know...now that I remember the prelude, it had Risa dead in it. You even confirmed it waaaaay back when. (I read this story only a few months ago though. xD I don't know how, but I seem to remember reading the prelude. :mon huh2: Or maybe I'm just hallucinating...) Nuuuu...Risa... T^T I'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter. :) *cough* More GakiKame please *cough*

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #523 on: September 05, 2008, 01:15:07 AM »
And yeah, the story is huge! I'm gonna print it out when I'm done, lol.
Anyone wanna be taking bets on how many packs of paper the printout will take? :P

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #524 on: September 05, 2008, 01:17:57 AM »
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You know...now that I remember the prelude, it had Risa dead in it. You even confirmed it waaaaay back when.

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #525 on: September 20, 2008, 10:09:06 PM »
Miki Fujimoto
South Shore Cliff, Rockfort Island
October 10, 10:45 PM



THINGS FELL TO SHIT PRETTY FAST WHEN SHE
finally reached the island.

Miki stood at the top of the cliff in the early night, drenched, cold-
catching her breath and soundly cursing herself. Everything
had been in that bag—weapons and ammo she'd found floating around her, rappelling
equipment so she could get back down to the
boat, flashlight, a basic first-aid kit, everything.

Not everything.You've still got three grenades on your
belt,
her mind told her brightly.

Terrific. Halfway up the
cliff she loses her grip and drops the bag into the deep
blue sea, but it appeared she still had her sense of humor.

Yeah, that'll go a long way toward saving everyone's
life. I was right. Maybe I should have been better off unconscious.


Miki couldn't remember much- she attained a shoulder injury
on the plane, but nothing viable- it was when she fell asleep, and had
that bizarre vision that rendered her unconscious. Or at least, that's
all she remembered.
It didn't seem like a dream though, Miki thought. It seemed real.
Like god wanted me to see it....


Well. She could stand around all goddamn day wishing
things were different, or she could get moving; she
picked moving.

Miki hunched over and stepped into the low cave entrance
she'd chosen to start at, an isolated area but definitely
connected to the rest of the compound—there was
a radio antenna on the ledge outside, and when she
straightened up a few steps later, she was inside a large,
open room, the walls and ceiling organic but the floor
carefully leveled.

There was light somewhere ahead, and Miki started
for it, keeping her fingers crossed that she wasn't about to
walk into a Nazi camp. She doubted it.

From what she'd seen of the island, someone- or something left the island charred- almost
like it'd been excessively beat up.
She was less than a dozen steps into the shadowy
chamber when a small tremor shook the cave, spilling
rock dust and pebbles over her head—and closing the
cave entrance she'd just walked through, collapsing rock
having a fairly distinctive sound. It seemed whatever had attacked the island
had made things a bit unstable.
"Oh, wonderful," she muttered, but was suddenly a bit
happier about the grenades.

Not that they would help
much here. Even if she could blow the mouth without
bringing all of it down, it was still too high to jump, and
the rope had been in the bag; unless everyone else'd been taking
lessons, Morning Musume weren't good enough rock climbers to go
down unassisted—
"What?" someone rasped, and Miki dropped into a
defensive crouch, searching the shadows—
—and saw a man on the cave floor, slumped against
the wall. He wore a tattered white T-shirt with blood on
it, his pants and boots military—he was one of Japan's,
and not in very good shape. Nevertheless, Miki
stepped quickly to his side, ready to kick the shit out of
him if he so much as sneezed.

"I didn't know anyone was still around," the man said
weakly, and coughed a little. "Thought I was the last
one ... after the self-destruct."

He coughed again, obviously not far away from
death. His words sank in, creating a lead ball in Miki's
stomach. Self-destruct?

She crouched down, trying to keep her voice level.
"I'm here looking for a group, a group of girls- my age.
Do you know where they are?"

At the sound of "girls", the man smiled, though
not at Miki. "An angel. She's gone, escaped. I helped
her... let her go. She tried to save me, but it was too late."

Hope bloomed anew. "Are you sure she got away?"
The dying man nodded. "Heard the planes leave. Saw
a jet come out of the basement, under the ..." a cough,
"the tank. You should go, too. Nothing left here."

Miki could feel some of his stress and fear ebbing
away, tensions in his neck and back releasing. If 'she' was
gone, most likely the rest of the group are safe too.
"Thank you for helping her," she said sincerely.
"What's your name?"
"Sekai. Hiroshi Sekai."
"I'm her friend, Miki," she said. "Let me help
you, Sekai-san, it's the least I can do and—"

Eeaaaaaaa!
A deafening animal cry filled the cave, and at the same
instant, another tremor struck, a bad one, the ground
shaking so hard that Miki was thrown off her feet—
—and earth erupted, what Miki thought was an explosion
at first, a fountain of dirt and rock spraying upward—
but it kept rising, and Miki could see thick, filth-coated
slime beneath it, could smell sulfur and decay, saw a huge
cylinder made of rubber still climbing—
—and then it shrieked again, the top of the cylinder
twisting around, wormy tentacles peeling back from a
yawning, howling throat, and Miki scrambled to her
feet, grabbing a grenade from her belt—
—and the giant, shrieking snake-worm came crashing
down, mouth open—
—and swallowed Sekai whole before slamming
into the sandy soil where he'd been sitting. It dove into
the ground like a swimmer into water, its impossibly
long body arching over, following through.

Shit!

Miki stumbled away as the ground continued to
quake, the burrowing creature kicking up rock and dirt
and sand all around her, and she realized that she had to
kill it or get away fast, that it could easily come up beneath
hier for another quick snack.

She ran to the outer wall of the cave, making a split
second plan as the snake-worm burst up through the
ground behind her, its insane mouth peeling open as it
hesitated at the top of its arch, ready to plunge down
over her, rocks falling all around—
—and Miki pulled the safety ring off the grenade,
stripping the tape and pin away, and ran, straight for the
creature's lower body where it emerged from the ground.

Crazy, this is crazy—

She ducked just before hitting the filthy, muscular
body and set the grenade on the ground in front of it, on
the run, as careful as she could be not to set it off—and
then dived for coverbehind the snake-worm's twisting

body, tucking into a shoulder roll, covering her head as
the animal started downward, shrieking—
—andBOOM, the explosion shook the ground even
harder than the animal had, the shriek cut off, the
grenade blast muffled by a half ton of worm guts that
shot out in all directions, stinking and warm, painting
the walls of the cave in viscous bucket loads.

Miki rolled on her back, drenched, watched the front
half of the animal convulse and writhe, already dead—and
as its muscles and reflexes clenched and released for the
last time, the snake-worm expelled a gush of stomach acid
and rock from its gaping maw, vomiting out its last meal.
Sekai!

Before the massive corpse had completely settled to
the ground, Miki was at Sekai's side, horrified and
helpless, the man seizing in shock and pain. He was
coated in yellow bile, and Miki could see places where
it had already burned through his skin.

Sekai let out a soft cry, too weak to scream in what
had to be incredible pain, and Miki tore part of her own shirt
off, wiping his face clean of the sticky, acidic fluid.
"You're going to be okay, just relax, don't try to talk,"
Miki said, fully aware that Sekai would be dead in
minutes, perhaps seconds. He kept talking, kept his tone
soothing in spite of his own dismay.

Sekai opened his eyes, and though they were full
of suffering, they also had the wet, glassy, faraway look
of someone leaving it all behind, someone about to be
free of pain and fear.
"Right.. . pocket..." Sekai whispered. "The angel...
gave... for luck."

Sekai took a slow, deep breath, and let it out just as
slowly, an exhalation that seemed to go on forever, and
then he was gone.
Miki automatically closed her half-open eyes, simultaneously
sad and relieved at Sekai's passing, the end
of a life but also an end to dying.
Rest, friend.

Sighing, Miki reached into Sekai's pocket, felt
skin-warmed metal—and pulled out a scuffed, heavy
old lighter.
Miki held it to her chest, suddenly overwhelmed by a
rush of love for her fellow Musume's. Whoever had this, had given it up to ease the
mind of a dying man, possibly one of the men responsible
for the situation.

She slipped it into her pocket and stood, glad that she'd
be able to give it back to whomever it was—and to tell her that she'd
made a difference in Sekai's last hours, that he'd
smiled upon remembering. Even though the others
didn't need to be rescued, Miki's surivial to the island had
already turned out to be worthwhile- and apparently has just begun.

The stink of the splattered cave was getting to her,
and now that she knew the others were safe, all that was
left was to get herself home. Her entrance had been
caved in, and she didn't have a decent weapon, but if
someone had triggered this place's self-destruct system—
it seemed that all their illegal facilities were built
with such failsafes in place, a fine way to destroy evidence
if anything went wrong—then she shouldn't run
into too much trouble looking for the tank that Sekai
had mentioned, see if there was another jet to be had.

"No going back," she said softly, and with a final silent
prayer for Sekai to find peace, she went to see what she
could find.
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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #526 on: September 20, 2008, 11:33:17 PM »
MIKI'S ALIVE?! O_O *for some reason doesn't remember this* I could have sworn she...oh dang. Poor guy... T_T

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #527 on: September 21, 2008, 12:03:52 AM »
I had a feeling that Miki was still alive  :w00t:
Aww, Sekai! :cry: You will be the most greatly missed side character there ever was!


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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #528 on: September 21, 2008, 12:06:13 AM »
:O :O :O
Update!

Miki-sama is alive!
I wonder how she's going to get off the island.... ;)
She will definietely be able to return the lighter, I just hope it's not in her own final hours :(

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #529 on: September 21, 2008, 12:43:30 AM »
Oh wow, I didn't expect Miki to be alive. Her chances of surviving back then seemed next to nil.

I feel pretty bad for Sekai. He's been like a very abused, mini, free advice dispenser, dropping clues and pointing the girls out in the right direction. At least he's been put to rest, poor guy. XD

Now I wonder if anyone's going to be running into Aya anytime soon, well, maybe not too soon lol.

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #530 on: September 21, 2008, 01:01:26 AM »
Haha, I knew it!  :P I convinced myself that Miki was alive and she is! :lol: :w00t:

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #531 on: September 21, 2008, 04:57:11 AM »
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!??!??!?!


She's alive?!?!?!?! MIKI-SAMA?!?!?!! :o





ALIVE?!?!?!
:OMG:



MIKI-SAMAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #532 on: September 21, 2008, 10:18:15 PM »
Aya Matsuura
Training Facility (Below), Rockfort Island
October 11, 12:07 AM



There was a fight about to happen on one of the monitors
in what was left of the control room, and Aya Matsuura,
frustrated by hours of fruitless searching and
not looking forward to a long flight, pulled up
a crate and sat down to watch. She was still a little wet
from the swim to the island after she ditched
those two Musume's.

Aya had used them as an advantage- which worked,
Niita solely put her attention onto Eri, letting Aya slip through the shadows,
continuing her mission, as planned by Dr. Chin.
And now that she thought about it- Aya regretted not
killing Eri and her friend off, but what's done is done- and quite
frankly, she'd grown accustomed to liking Eri.

All that didn't matter though- since she got back to Rockfort,
reaching the cove to meet up with Dr. Chin, flabbergasted why the cove was
caved in, the lighthouse diminished, Aya had no choice but to
presume Dr. Chin is dead.

With no response she was alone—except it appeared
that she'd missed somebody, and said somebody
was still wandering around the island ...
...but not for much longer, she thought happily, wishing
the reception was better; thanks to that lonesome
loser, Niita Tomoko, the self-destruct system had
screwed everything up ... and finally, something interesting
was actually going to happen.
Heh, she's unarmed!

Crazy or stupid or totally ignorant of what the island
was, no question. Aya grinned. The unarmed woman
was walking through the training facility just one floor
below, and she was about to meet up with one of Japan's
newer bio-organics, one that had been trapped
down in the sewers until Aya had shown up and set it
free. They were one hallway apart; when the dumbass
turned the next corner, she was dead.

Aya adjusted her sunglasses, pleasantly diverted
from her own troubles. Sweepers, Japan was calling
the new monsters, but they were basically Hunters with
poison claws—huge, primarily amphibious, violent as
hell. In Aya's opinion, the Hunters, the 121 series,
were perfectly badass without the extra poison touch.
But isn't that just like Japan, always wasting resources,
playing games when they could be winning wars.

Yes, it was, but there was about to be bloodshed.
Aya set aside her distaste for the country and leaned
in to watch.

The weaponless idiot—a female with dark brown
hair, that was about all the static would allow—was two
steps from disaster, the Sweeper waiting just around the
corner ... when she stopped and backed up a step, pressing
herself against the damaged wall.

Aya frowned. The female started to back up, slowly
and carefully, still hugging the wall. Okay, maybe not a
complete idiot.


She'd made it halfway back down the corridor she'd
come through when the Sweeper finally got impatient,
deciding to take action. There was no sound system left,
but the creature had thrown back its head and was screaming,
that weird, trilling screech floating up to Aya
through the ruined building just a split second later.

"Get her," Aya breathed eagerly, looking back at
the poor, doomed dumbass ... just in time to see her
throwing something, something small and dark, the
Sweeper leaping out from behind the corner, still
screaming, the object landing at its feet—
—and the building was shaking, the screens going
white and then black, the deep thunder of explosives
rumbling through the floor.

Aya was astounded. And then furious. That creature
had been a miracle of science, a warrior created for
battle—who was this bitch who'd just rambled in and
blown it to shit?
A dead bitch, Aya thought darkly, pushing the crate
away and heading for the stairs. She took them two at a
time, carefully bypassing a few still burning fires, aware
that she was channeling all her frustrations and upsets toward
the unknown woman and not particularly caring.

Kasumi wasn't at Rockfort, which meant Aya had to get
her ass to the Antarctic of all places, to the only other facility
she might be at; why else would Niita have gone
there?
And if Aya didn't get to Kasumi before she woke
up, Aya might have to go home empty handed ... all of
which added up to failure, and if there was one thing
Aya hated, it was losing.

She marched through the crumbling leftovers of the
training facility, reaching the hall she wanted, silencing
her steps as she edged farther along. There was still
smoke in the air when she reached the corner where the
conflict had taken place, but little left of the Sweeper.

Most of it was stuck to the walls and ceiling.

There, ahead and to the left; she could smell the intruder,
could smell sweat and anxiety emanating from
the small working lab to which she'd retreated.

This is going to hurt you more than it hurts me,she
thought, her mood lifting somewhat at the thought of a
little personal interaction.

Not wanting to get blown up, Aya didn't hesitate,
didn't give the female a chance to get paranoid. She strode
into the room, saw the soon-to-be corpse standing with
her back turned, and moved. Moved the way only she
could move—one second, she was walking through the
door, the next, she was spinning the intruder around, lifting
her by her throat—
—and then looking into the startled face of Miki Fujimoto.
Oh, my.

Miki, who'd Aya had known as a childhood friend, who'd
looked after each other during their younger years,
up until the day Aya had been taken to Rockfort.

Miki Fujimoto had let her down, had almost
cost Aya her life—but worst of all, Miki had been primarily
responsible for the biggest failure in Aya's life: Aya relied
on Miki. But no more.

Aya recovered herself quickly, a dark, wonderful
joy spreading through her entire body. "Miki Fujimoto,
as I live and breathe—what brings you to Rockfort, if
you don't mind me ..."
Aya trailed off, still gazing up into Fujimoto's increasingly
red face as she uselessly pried at Aya's fingers.

Eri, of course! She hadn't even known that Miki
was part of Morning Musume, but the deranged letter that Niita Tomoko
had so thoughtfully left behind explained everything...
including her plans for the young Eri Kamei.

"She's not here," Aya said, grinning. With her free
hand, she straightened her sunglasses.
"You... you're dead," Miki gasped, and Aya
grinned wider, not bothering to respond to such a stupid
statement.

"Don't change the subject, Miki. Don't you want to
know where Eri is, hmmm? Did you know that her
plane took a little unplanned detour to the Antarctic?"
Miki was slowly choking to death, but Aya could
see that the news of her friend was hitting her harder
than her own imminent demise. Wonderful!

"There are experiments being performed there,"
Aya mock-whispered, as if telling her a secret. "I
plan on going myself, see if I can get an experiment or
two of my own going ... tell me, does she have a boyfriend?
Do you think she might be interested in getting
some action, because I've got a few friends with hard-ons' like you
wouldn't believe—"
Miki flailed at Aya, the helpless fury in her eyes
absolutely gorgeous. She hit Aya in the face, knocking
her sunglasses to the ground... and Aya
laughed, blinking up at her slowly, letting her see. She
still wasn't used to it herself, the gold-red cat's eyes occasionally
surprising her when she looked in a mirror—
and they had exactly the effect she'd hoped for.

"What...are you?" Miki rasped out.
"I'm better, that's what," Aya said. "Kinda like steroids,
you know. After my dad's little fiasco, I needed a little
help getting back on my feet, which Dr. Chin was perfectly
willing to provide. You think Eri will like it?"

"Monster," Miki spat.
I'll show you monster, you shit.
Aya started to close her hand, slowly, watching
Miki's eyes bulging, a vein on her forehead popping
out—
—and was stopped by the sound of laughter. Cool, female
laughter, filling the room, surrounding them.

"Don't you want to play with me?" a voice said, the
same woman, low and sexy and dangerous, and then she
began to laugh again, an unmerciful, beautiful sound
that finally trailed away to nothing.
Kasumi!

God, she was awake ... and the kind of power it
would take for her to look in on him here, to project herself
so far...

Aya threw Miki to one side, barely hearing the
plaster wall crack beneath her useless skull, Aya's thoughts
full of Kasumi. She had to go to her immediately. She had
to have her, and not just for the sample ... though she'd
take what she could get.

"I'm coming," she said, scooping up her sunglasses
and then moving, speeding through the broken facility to
where her private plane waited. Miki Fujimoto was her
past; Kasumi Tomoko meant her future.
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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #533 on: September 21, 2008, 10:35:26 PM »
Miki Fujimoto
Training Facility, Rockfort Island
October 11, 12:17 AM



Miki crawled to her feet soon after Aya left,
aching in about a dozen places, her throat horribly sore.
She didn't know what had happened, exactly, didn't
know who the woman was or why Aya had seemed
so eager to get to her—but she understood now who had
attacked this place, and suspected the reason. Aya Matsuura
disappeared years ago, but it seemed she'd sold her soul to someone
 at the price of her life, someone obviously as nasty
and amoral—someone who was perfectly
willing to kill for whatever it was they wanted, for
something that this place had.

Miki didn't care. At the moment, all she cared about
was Eri, and getting herself to this Antarctica facility.
She knew that Japan had a legitimate base
there... it had to be the same one, and if it wasn't,
somebody there would know where the experiments
were taking place.

She had one grenade left. If she could find the underground
airport, she'd have no trouble getting inside, and
she could try to fly anything with wings. Or at the very least,
she'd radio for help, and if she couldn't find
a weapon to get her out, she'd use her bare hands.
All that mattered was Eri. And Miki was on her way.

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #534 on: September 21, 2008, 10:53:22 PM »
Is MikiEri gonna be thrown into the mix too?! :OMG: I'm getting all anxious now... T_T

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #535 on: September 22, 2008, 12:01:17 AM »
 :bleed eyes: I thought Aya was a good guy! I guess not.... :(
...Do I sense one-sided MikiEri? Or am I looking too much into it? :sweatdrop:
Afterall, Eri and Risa have each other :wub:

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #536 on: September 22, 2008, 12:13:45 AM »

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #537 on: September 22, 2008, 05:40:19 AM »
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There was a fight about to happen on one of the monitors in what was left of the control room, and Aya Matsuura, frustrated by hours of fruitless searching and not looking forward to a long flight, pulled up a crate and sat down to watch.
Aya's waiting for another flight? Someone's supposed to come and get her?



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Aya had used them as an advantage- which worked, Niita solely put her attention onto Eri, letting Aya slip through the shadows, continuing her mission, as planned by Dr. Chin. And now that she thought about it- Aya regretted not killing Eri and her friend off, but what's done is done- and quite frankly, she'd grown accustomed to liking Eri.
EH????? Aya was secretly on a side-mission of some sort?  :o



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All that didn't matter though- since she got back to Rockfort, reaching the cove to meet up with Dr. Chin, flabbergasted why the cove was caved in, the lighthouse diminished, Aya had no choice but to presume Dr. Chin is dead.
She swam all the way back to the island? Logic would say that if this was intentional, that her goal was to mislead someone (possibly Niita) into thinking that she had left the island. This means that whatever her goal/target was, it actually is still on the island and she wants/needs to look for it without being found out.



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With no response she was alone—except it appeared that she'd missed somebody, and said somebody was still wandering around the island ...

...

Heh, she's unarmed!
Oh boy, she's found Miki-sama, hasn't she?  :-X



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The unarmed woman was walking through the training facility just one floor below, and she was about to meet up with one of Japan's newer bio-organics, one that had been trapped down in the sewers until Aya had shown up and set it free.
What the...she set it free?!?!? Why the hell would she do that?!?!?



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In Aya's opinion, the Hunters, the 121 series, were perfectly badass without the extra poison touch. But isn't that just like Japan, always wasting resources, playing games when they could be winning wars.
Geez, now Aya's starting to sound fanatical like Niita. :O



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Aya was astounded. And then furious. That creature had been a miracle of science, a warrior created for battle—who was this bitch who'd just rambled in and blown it to shit?

A dead bitch, Aya thought darkly, pushing the crate away and heading for the stairs. She took them two at a time, carefully bypassing a few still burning fires, aware that she was channeling all her frustrations and upsets toward the unknown woman and not particularly caring.
GAM FIGHT!?!?!?
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Kasumi wasn't at Rockfort, which meant Aya had to get her ass to the Antarctic of all places, to the only other facility she might be at; why else would Niita have gone there? And if Aya didn't get to Kasumi before she woke up, Aya might have to go home empty handed ... all of which added up to failure, and if there was one thing Aya hated, it was losing.
Yet another new piece of the puzzle/sub-story/mini-arc that we never knew existed. :?



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she was walking through the door, the next, she was spinning the intruder around, lifting her by her throat—
—and then looking into the startled face of Miki Fujimoto.
Oh, my.

Miki, who'd Aya had known as a childhood friend, who'd looked after each other during their younger years, up until the day Aya had been taken to Rockfort.

Miki Fujimoto had let her down, had almost cost Aya her life—but worst of all, Miki had been primarily responsible for the biggest failure in Aya's life: Aya relied on Miki. But no more.
And OF COURSE, just to through yet ANOTHER monkeywrench into it all...Aya and Miki know each other.



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"You... you're dead," Miki gasped, and Aya grinned wider, not bothering to respond to such a stupid statement.

"Don't change the subject, Miki.
Now is that Miki saying that she was under the impression that Aya was already dead, or is she saying that she's gonna kick Aya's arse?

Come to think of it, does Miki even recognize Aya?



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"There are experiments being performed there," Aya mock-whispered, as if telling her a secret. "I plan on going myself, see if I can get an experiment or two of my own going
Sunnova...



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Aya laughed, blinking up at her slowly, letting her see. She still wasn't used to it herself, the gold-red cat's eyes occasionally surprising her when she looked in a mirror—
and they had exactly the effect she'd hoped for.
HOLY CRAP! AYA'S ONE OF THE MUTANTS!?!?!
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"Don't you want to play with me?" a voice said, the same woman, low and sexy and dangerous, and then she began to laugh again, an unmerciful, beautiful sound that finally trailed away to nothing.
Kasumi!
Wait, wasn't she in the Antarctic?
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She had to go to her immediately. She had to have her, and not just for the sample ... though she'd take what she could get.

"I'm coming," she said, scooping up her sunglasses and then moving, speeding through the broken facility to where her private plane waited. Miki Fujimoto was her past; Kasumi Tomoko meant her future.
Gaddamit there's so many side-stories going on. Doesn't help either that we're brought into them apparently while they're in the middle of their progression.
:banghead:









* JFC hears the song "NeverEnding Story" on the radio.



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* JFC smashes the radio.

Know why that sucked? IT WENT ON TOO DAMN FRAKKIN' LONG! THE STORY WENT DOWN THE SHAT-HOLE BECAUSE TPTB BEHIND IT COULDN'T STOP BEATING THE DEAD HORSE!    :thumbdown:

JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #538 on: September 22, 2008, 07:06:22 AM »
First of all, I'd like to say how awesome you are for having this in a phone browser-friendly format. It saves me from scrolling in two more directions. :D

Ahaha, I had a feeling Aya had it in her. It's in her blood!...well, yeah.
Kasumi beckons and Aya comes running like a puppy. She must be really hot and/or rich. By rich I mean powerful >_>
Miki! Don't take shit from Aya, go get her back! Fight!

Lol, everyone wants some Eri. Except Niita, she's dead...

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #539 on: September 22, 2008, 09:20:29 PM »
Kasumi Tomoko
Facility, Antarctica
October 11, 12:25 AM

THEY WERE MERE HOURS AWAY.
Two women connected by history, one her enemy, the
other...

Kasumi didn't know about the other, not yet, but
knew that she meant to reclaim the girls she'd taken from
the snow machine.

None of
them would be leaving, of course... but Kasumi was looking
forward to the petty intrigues and overblown, self-important
dramas that their humanity would bring to her home.

She would enjoy the chance to observe their natural tendencies
and instincts before forever altering their lives.

She stood in the great hall considering things: possible
futures, her next transformation, the structural and
psychological changes her new synthesis would create
in humans, how she should welcome her new guests ...
and it occurred to her that her home, deep beneath the
ice and snow, might be difficult for them to achieve. She
immediately wished for the doors to be opened, for obstacles
to be removed... and she heard and saw and felt
the result in the same instant, existing in a hundred
places at once as locks were broken and walls were
taken down, as debris was pushed aside and apertures
were widened.

She was prepared. Things would move quickly
now ... and what happened in the next hours would, to
a degree, define her choices for some time to come. It
was all still so new, the templates of her new life written
only in sand ...
Smiling at her own poetic notions, Kasumi went to see
about the first series of injections for the girl.

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