*Beecubed feels a little out of place...*
Damn, why couldn't I have gotten into this fandom earlier?! >.< (I've probably said this some few thousand times already xD).
Noooooo don't read that! I'll never update it! You'll regret it!
No I won't... I mean, I'm in the middle of reading it already...
And if you never update it, I'll just have to nudge the rest of the story from you in skeleton form and write it all up in my head for closure
And as for Ai's personality, I feel like I could write a whole thesis about her because I spend so much time just staring at her, thinking. She intrigues me like no one else, which is why all my stories have something to do with her.
A thesis on Ai would be so lovely to read... imo, she's the most interesting person to analyse out of any of the Musumes, which is exactly why I can't come to terms with people calling her boring. Um.
I wrote Biyuuden pervs, too. Actually, mostly just them.
Honto ni?! I haven't read a Biyuuden perv yet... but but but...
Are these some more fics you want to hide from the world, rndm?
If not, sharing is caring...
You know, I've noticed what Essy-sama said about criticism is true. I usually never write (intentional, I'm a brat sometimes, sorry) criticism. If I don't have something nice to say, I just don't say it. Also my comments tend to be pretty simple if there's really nothing that needs to be questioned, at least in my mind, or I'm feeling lazy that day. I do like to comment just to show that I read, even if I have nothing to say.
Because giving criticism can hurt too.
I did it a little earlier on in my stay...
I know when I'm reading bad writing, but sometimes I can't help but to continue to read simply because it's about my favourite people. Sometimes I fangirl too much for my own good, when I should probably tone it down and give more useful feedback
And then when I think I should give more criticism, I end up being the last commentator for the thread... >.< (*bows in apology to StephanyLee*).
So what to do?
can someone give me a tips on how to write a good fic???
i have finished writing my first fic "Promise" but i think i'm still lacking.....
can someone please help me???
Anybody can sit there reading all the tips in the world, but that's certainly not going to guarantee them a good story...
I haven't read anything from you yet, abok, so I can't judge at this point. But for me, as a reader, a story really works (and may consequently become something epic) because:
- It's able to maintain reader curiosity, which is no.1 priority for any writer. I think this can definitely be achieved when you raise questions early on in your story for the readers to ponder, create (interesting!) conflicts for your characters to confront, or just establish characters so awesome the readers just HAVE to read on because they want more. ^___^
- It's well written, containing just enough attention to detail, to characters, to plot and setting.
- It's somehow different (from the countless of other stories we've all waded through during our literary journeys
)
If you manage to fulfil each of these criterion to a decent extent, I think you've got a good story in the works.
And you don't have to have formidable grammar or vocabulary to write a good story. I mean, just check out some of the fics here on JPH!P. The writers aren't really comparable to professionals out there making the big bucks, but why have their stories been able to capture as much interest as they have? Well, I guess a lot of it has to with the fact that we love reading about our idols and all that, but I do think we can't discredit our authors - if they care about their stories, their characters and their readers enough, it'll show.
I hope that helps...
I tend to ramble a lot, but hopefully it helps because I'm saying all this as a
very, very keen reader.