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Saeyaka Fanfic-Fire and Ice
« on: December 31, 2012, 10:49:02 PM »
Alright! My first post ever! :twothumbs
Now then, this story was meant to start in the summer, but I guess it doesn't matter right now. :nervous

But, I'm gonna try my all and hope for the best :peace: :otomerika:

Enjoy!


AKB Fanfic-Fire and Ice

The heart is made like an egg...
The body is made like a flower...
The mind is made like the starry sky...
Fragile, beautiful, and ever-growing...
This time, I will protect you.

Prologue

Sayaka's POV
Ugh...

Hm? What... happened to me?

How did I get here? Where is here?


It's really cold and dark. I can't see anything in front of me. I try to feel around for a wall or something...

...But, nothing.

"Is this a joke?! Where the hell am I?!"

I scream for someone, hoping the kidnapper or whoever was there would come out.

I try to remember what I was doing last.

That's right. I was practicing with Yuko.

In my room.


*WOOSH*

Suddenly, a cold breeze blew around me.

I could hear the sound of running footsteps, but they were so fast, I could only faintly hear it.

What was that?

"Who's there?"


I feel the wind and hear the footsteps again.

"Hello?! Answer me! Say something!"

Whoever this person is, he seems faster than anyone. Even me.

*FWOOSH*

"Ahh! What the..?"

Suddenly, balls of grey fire, almost from torches, burst and lit up around me.

The lights from every one of those flames left me in a daze. Just that simple circle of fire around me warmed up the room.

And, maybe stronger...

"Fire is that of which warmth is passed on." A mysterious voice echoed throughout the room.

"Eh?"

"That which burns inside a passionate soul. And a loving heart."


His voice sounded like a girl's. But, no doubt in my mind, it was definitly a boy.

Just then, I turned and saw his figure facing the back of me.

When he turned, his eyes instantly met mine.

His tantilizing, electric blue eyes pierced deep into mine. I felt I was paralyed, unable to speak or do anything.

He took only one step.

Then, in the blink of an eye, he was only about a foot away from me.

I could feel the warmth of his hands as he held my shoulders. Even though he looked cold and pale, his touch was calming and warm.

I've never felt like this with someone. His hands are so...

So...


As he came a bit closer to me, I suddenly snapped out of trance and came back to reality.

"Wait. What the hell am I thinking?!"

I pushed him away and stepped back as far as I could.

"Where am I? And who the hell are you?"

That's strange. His face... Earlier, it was so serious, but so calming.

But, as I pushed him away, he began to look worried.


I took a deep breath, to ensure I wouldn't upset him more.

"Please... I demand... an answer. Where am I? Can you... please, tell me," I'll take things slowly, to make sure I don't upset him again.

Strangly, all he did was smile.

...And snicker a little.

Is he laughing at me?

"That same cold feeling," he responded.

Huh?! Cold?!

He walked toward me, slowly, and hugged me tight.

"Let the grey flame burn for all eternity. I will let this warmth keep you safe."

*BA-PUMP*

I could just feel it. My heart was pounding like it would burst out of my chest.

What is going on here?! I'm not normally like this, but...

But... Just the feel of him...

He's so warm.


"I'm so sleepy all the sudden."

"..up... Wake up..!"

I could hear another voice call out to me. I recognized this one.

"Eh? Yuko?"

A bright white light suddenly blinded me.

I squeeze my eyes tight.


"C'mon! Wake up, Sayaka!"

The next thing I know, I was back in my room. Once I opened my eyes, I was sitting on my desk.

Yuko must have noticed me asleep, maybe cause I was snoring a little, and decided to wake me up herself.

"I got worried when you wouldn't respond to me after a while. When I looked, you were fast asleep."

I blushed a little...

Admittedly, I find it a bit awkward whenever I fall asleep in front of someone.

"Plus, I heard you snoring softly."

"'Softly.' Oh, thank god I didn't snort like a pig or something," was my first thought.

"C'mon. You promised to help me, even if we stay up 'til midnight!"

Even though I was still tired and rubbing my eyes, I couldn't ignore that.

"Wha-? No, I didn't!" I couldn't help but let my loud voice slip out, even though it was already so late.

"Hahaha! Just kidding! I'll go to my room and let you sleep."

Me and Yuko have been living together since our first year of middle school, so I've grown kind of close to her.

She took her guitar and turned back one more time before she left.

"'Night, Sayaka."

"Good night, Yuko."

As she shut my door, I quickly changed into my pajamas and crawled into bed.

But, I couldn't stop thinking about the dream I just had.

"Who was that? He didn't look or sound familiar..."

As I slept that night, I kept imagining what kind of person he could possibly be.

And his words repeated all throughout my head.

"I will let this warmth keep you safe..."


To be continued...

Comments by the author
"First off, I lo~ve AKB48 and everyone in it. :heart: Second, I've always had a knack for putting some kind of fantastical trait into my stories. Third, remember on "AKBINGO!" when Amina said she had a "military uniform fetish" after Yuihan's danso? Well, after I saw the Kagekidan, and got into reading vampire mangas, I started to have a vampire fetish. :inlove: :wub: :wub:

So, I decided to take two AKB members (being my two oshimen!!) and put this fantastical little twist into their relationship. I'll be looking foward to your comments!" :cathappy:
« Last Edit: September 15, 2013, 10:17:43 PM by TTLuver497 »
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:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Prolouge
« Reply #1 on: January 01, 2013, 03:21:11 PM »
OMG!!!! It's a SaeYaka! *.*  :heart:

This pairing is quite unusual around here, but I love them heheuheu

It's quite interesting beginning o/ I'm looking forward to the story o/

I hope Sae is a girl hauhauhauah

Please continue *.* 

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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Prolouge
« Reply #2 on: January 01, 2013, 04:17:50 PM »
the person that I care about is gonna love this~~

Thank you for writing about this unpopular couple~ (I like SaeYaka a lot, so *highfive* )  ;)
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Prolouge
« Reply #3 on: January 01, 2013, 04:37:35 PM »
Nice... Sae-chan! Do your best!

Sayaka is just having too much armor to hide her fragile heart from harm!

Go break it and rescue her heart =0

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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Prolouge
« Reply #4 on: January 01, 2013, 05:27:54 PM »
A Saeyaka fanfic :w00t:

Sae is the vampire... :twothumbs

Go Sae! capture Sayaka's heart!

Update please~~  :bow:
« Last Edit: January 01, 2013, 05:34:42 PM by Archie28 »
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Prolouge
« Reply #5 on: January 01, 2013, 05:48:27 PM »
Prataz, Archie28, you get me! :twothumbs

People need to pay attention to Sayaka's gentle side more than her... Well y'know.
(I'm not gonna say it, because I HATE when they call her it, but you know what I mean) :catglare:

Thank you so much for my first comments! :D
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Prolouge
« Reply #6 on: January 01, 2013, 11:16:31 PM »
Ahhh a fellow Saeyaka fan! It's good to see other Saeyaka fans!  :farofflook:

I look forward to reading more of the story.  :hee:

Please update as soon as possible!  :nya:

I love Sayaka!  :luvluv1:

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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Prolouge
« Reply #7 on: January 01, 2013, 11:21:34 PM »
A Saeyaka Story!!!!  :nya:

I'll be looking forward to the next update!

(I hope Sae is a girl too  XD )
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Prolouge
« Reply #8 on: January 02, 2013, 01:42:42 AM »
Kagekidan... vampires fetish... did you happen to write this with images of Sae as Ruka and Sayaka as Maria in your mind?

Because those images were my first impression of this read (and I love imagining Sayaka as the girl! :wub:)

SaeYaka daisuki! :love:
« Last Edit: January 02, 2013, 02:16:12 AM by aruka »
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Prolouge
« Reply #9 on: January 02, 2013, 01:48:43 AM »
Actually, yes! :wub:

Although, not really Sayaka as Maria, just as a girl IN GENERAL,
but I get what you mean.

I've always seen Sayaka as a girl more than a guy. :roll:
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:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Prolouge
« Reply #10 on: January 02, 2013, 02:07:48 AM »
Saeyaka is rare ^^ but I like tbis pairing

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AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 1
« Reply #11 on: January 02, 2013, 03:50:44 PM »
Minna-san~! Omakase!
Before we begin, I want to get a few things straight...

1. In this story, Sae IS A BOY! :yossi:
2. I'm going to keep working hard on trying to post new updates, because, since school is coming up, my scheduele MIGHT get a little crazy :nervous

But, I was really glad I have all my readers(That's you :twothumbs) to support me!

  :deco: So, without further ado, DOUZO! :fap


AKB Fanfic-Fire and Ice

Chapter 1

Sayaka's POV
Mm... Eh?

I'm still here...


I'm on the cold, hard ground, looking around and noticing I'm back where I was before.

Did I faint or something?

Once I was about to get up, I notice I'm wrapped in a black cloak and my head's resting on someone's lap.

Wait...

This cloak is...


I look up and see those familiar blue eyes again. Staring straight at me, the boy was smiling.

I instantly got up, still staring into his eyes.

"You fell asleep on me."

"And, you were waiting for me to wake up?"


He nodded.

Stalker.

"Ah, this is yours, isn't it?"

"I wanted to make sure you didn't get cold."

Creep.


He slid a bit closer to me, making me feel all the more hot.

"The light of these flames, they make your skin shine. And your eyes are so dark, I could just get lost in them forever."

"..."

Is this person seriously HITTING on me?


Since I didn't say anything back, which he clearly wanted, he parted a bit from me and turned to have his back face mine.

He looked about my age, but clearly he was still a bit childish and stubborn.

"You can at least say something..."

I could barely hear him say it, but I guess he didn't notice I heard.

"..."

"The lighting in this room... makes your hair color pop out."

Literally. It's completely silver for god's sake.

"Is it dyed that color, or...?"


His head turned to me.

"Hmm. I see."

Before I knew it, he wrapped his arms around and hugged me.

"Let me stay by your side forever."

Pervert!!!


I started to feel his warmth again, making me blush so much, you could hear it.

As he parted from me, the light of his eyes captured mine again. Just looking into them made me feel so weak.

He looked down and bit his lower lip.

Wait, does he wanna..?!

No. No way! He can't be serious!!!


He looked back up, and there was a brief pause. No sound could be heard, except maybe my heart pounding so much.

...Or, maybe that was just me.

"If I have to melt the ice over your heart all over again, I shall do it in any way that doesn't hurt you."

He squeezed my hand tight, never breaking eye contact.

"I'll always protect you... For the sake of our love."

Can someone... really be this... cool?

I didn't even care about those comments anymore. I was completely lost in his gaze.

His face was coming in closer.

He was... going to kiss me.

And, no longer caring about the world, I wanted it to happen. Badly.

My eyes had flickered closed, going in for the kiss...
End of Sayaka's POV


"..yaka... Sayaka..!"

Sayaka slowly opened her eyes, waking up from another crazy dream.

"Hm? Ah... Yuko, Kana, Nacchi."

The three girls all gathered around her.

"Sayaka-chan, I knew you were tired when we left the station, but THIS MUCH?"

"Hm? What do you mean?"

Yuko giggled a little. "Didn't you notice? You're blushing like crazy!"

Kana handed Sayaka her compact. Once she saw how red her cheeks were, she had this embaressed look on her face that made her blush more.

The others were just laughing at her already bright red expression.

"Sayaka~, just WHAT were you dreamin' about?"

Yuko's jokes never really got the better of Sayaka. Mostly because they were all dirty.

Nacchi just pushed her shoulder, telling her to stop.

"But, really, you had me a bit worried when you stumbled a little when we were walking in. Are you sure you're not sick?"

Kana, being the student council president, was always responsible and caring toward her friends.

"Yeah, Kana. I'm fine."

"Oh, also, did you hear? We're supposed to have a new transfer student coming in."

The atmosphere in the classroom completely changed after that comment by Natsuki.

Everyone in the classroom started to try and guess who he or she was going to be like.

Girls were fantasizing over an ikemen like image, while the boys just blabbed on about her being a "hot babe" like out of their dirty magazines.

"Some of the boys in this school are the worst. If it is a boy, PLEASE let him be normal," was one of Sayaka's first thoughts.

"I wonder if it's a guy, just so we can find a boyfriend for Sayaka-chan."

Sayaka couldn't hide her surprise after that comment. "Eh?!"

"Yeah, and he can have messy hot hair, crazy hot eyes, and overall hot muscles."

"And abs! Don't forget abs!"

"Yeah!!! To match Sayaka's!!! Hahahaha!!!"

As Yuko and Natsuki chatted and giggled amongst themselves, Kana left to her classroom down the hallway.

Sayaka just put her headphones in to ignore the conversation.


Sure, it's true. Sayaka had a "manly" personality that got the best of her. But, deep down, she wanted to be treated like a girl.

Because she couldn't be honest and express her feelings openly, she was cold toward other students.

But, her friends knew better.

She was really athletic, a sweet and caring, "older sister" type of girl. Plus, she was the leader of the school's Light Music club. Everyone, male and female, admired her.

But, under all circumstances, she was still treated as one of the boys.

"When can I be the girl?"

As the bell started to ring, Natsuki left to her seat and Yuko tapped Sayaka's shoulder. She quickly took her headphones out and put them back in her desk.
Mariko-sensei, one of the best teachers in the school, walked in the room.

"Alright, people! Settle down! Homeroom is starting."

Whenever Mariko walked in the room, everyone would show great respect, as a teacher and a friend.

"Now then. As all of you may already know, we will be having a new student join our class."

Now everyone was really excited. Some of the girls started checking themselves one last time, while some of the boys practiced flexing their muscles.

Yuko turned back to Sayaka, who was sitting right behind her and still staring out the window.

"What do 'ya think he'll be like?"

"I don't care who or what, just as long as it's finally a normal student."

Yuko snickered a little at her cold remark. "Ice princess."

That was one of her nicknames, besides "Gorilla-chan," which some of the boys called her.

"Okay, you can come in now!"

The door slid open, and THAT'S when things got crazy.

The girls stood up from their chairs and started going wild.

"Aww man..." Some of the boys started to have a little tantrum, but kept their cool.

Sayaka just stared out the window, not even bothering to look at the new student.

But she could tell after he walked in.

"It's a boy," she sighed.

"Calm down! Calm down!"

The girls sat back down, now more excited than ever.

"This young man will be a part of our class from now on. So, if you please, show your kindness and deep respect toward him."

"Yes, Mariko-sensei!"

"How old are we, 7?" Sayaka was surprised everyone was talking in unison. "Whoever he is, he has to be EXTREMELY hot for someone to make the class do that..."

As he finished writing his name on the board, he turned back and started his introduction.

"I'll be happy to be a part of this class from now on. Miyazawa Sae desu."

*BA-PUMP*

Sayaka's heart skipped a beat.

"That voice... It couldn't be..." As Sae was bowing down, Sayaka's head turned and just barely missed his face. "I-It's impossible!"

"Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!"

As he raised up, Sayaka could finally register his whole face, leaving her in shock.

The expression on his face. The color of his hair. The paralyzing glow in his eyes.

"It's... really him."

The school's newest student, Miyazawa Sae, who had instantly grabbed all the girl's hearts, was the mysterious ikemen boy in her dream.


To be continued...

Comments by the author
"Okay, for all of you Saeyaka fans, and regular AKB fans, too, I MUST tell you why I did this pairing. While Sayaka is my original oshimen, I've loved the connection between her and Sae more than anyone elses.

What I think their strongest point is, because they're so different, "like the moon and a turtle," they show off each others good points. Sayaka: Even though fans consider her manly(which I hate!!!) , she's actually really gentle and not good with words. Sae: Past her genki personality and ikemen image, since she's the youngest of her family, she's often childish and stubborn.
But, they both know each other better. Sayaka sees every bit of good in Sae, and Sae loves Sayaka as much as any other member(maybe even more :heart:)! And, because of that, it makes their relationship all the more stronger.

So, I'm gonna do my best to make this one of my greatest works. Please enjoy it :deco:"

That'll be all for today!  :thumbsup  See ya soon!
« Last Edit: January 02, 2013, 04:03:45 PM by TTLuver497 »
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
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Offline Archie28

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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Prolouge
« Reply #12 on: January 02, 2013, 04:04:19 PM »
UPDATE~ :w00t:

I really laughed reading the part about the abs... hahaha nice one :thumbup

Sayaka is the "ice princess" interesting  :D

I knew it! Sae's the transfer student  :heart: :heart:

Now, its time for Sae to make a move on Sayaka  :deco:
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice
« Reply #13 on: January 02, 2013, 04:06:09 PM »
You guys have to admit...

I know Sayaka and Sae pretty well :twothumbs
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice
« Reply #14 on: January 02, 2013, 04:29:42 PM »
You guys have to admit...

I know Sayaka and Sae pretty well :twothumbs

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I want to write a Saeyaka fanfic too but I'm not good at writing stories... So your fanfic is really, really, really appreciated   :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy:

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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice
« Reply #15 on: January 03, 2013, 02:38:29 AM »
I prefer to sketch than to write stories
Work together then.. put some illustrations in this fic, Archie-san. Just like few other fics do.

Just a piece of advice from a person who also wants to see more drawings of SaeYaka. :D
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice
« Reply #16 on: January 03, 2013, 02:41:17 AM »
Hmm... 8)

You two gave me an idea. :yep:

Maybe, on my next fanfic, I'll put up an anime version of what they would look like. :cathappy:
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice
« Reply #17 on: January 03, 2013, 07:32:08 AM »
But I'm not that good yet  :nervous

plus I don't know how to draw using a tablet... :sweatdrop:

I just draw them by hand and then I scanned them  :sweatdrop:
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice
« Reply #18 on: January 03, 2013, 02:40:37 PM »
Don't mind, don't mind! :roll:

I'm not the "best" at drawing, either. I can mostly do facial and head features :nervous
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 2
« Reply #19 on: January 04, 2013, 02:06:04 AM »
:twothumbs EARLY UPDATE!  :twothumbs
I went bowling yesterday, so I had a LOT of free time today. :panic:

So, luckily, I was able to make the next chapter, and decided to post it today.

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AKB Fanfic-Fire and Ice


Chapter 2


"Miyazawa Sae. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!"

The ikemen student captured the hearts of all the girls.

But the one he surprised the most was Sayaka.

"But, how? What the hell is he doing here?"

Yuko turned back to her already shocked friend.

"Sayaka. This guy's smoking hot," she whispered. "Can you believe it?"

"Ah... N-no, I can't"

Yuko just giggled with excitement, but that wasn't at all what she meant.

Sayaka just stared at Sae with a blank expression on her face, still trying to process what was happening.

Sae looked straight at her and smiled.

His eyes pierced into Sayaka deeper than before. She just couldn't understand.

Why was the boy she almost kissed in her dreams standing right in front of her?

"Anyways," Mariko's voice suddenly broke the silence, "Sae-kun, you can sit at that desk right next to Sayaka-san."

"Eh?"

Sayaka turned her head and saw the empty desk right beside her. Even though it was always there, she just never noticed it.

"Sayaka, is that alright?"

She brought herself back to reality after a bit.

"Sure..."


As he walked over to her, the other students started bringing up their own little conversations.

"This guy is damn lucky."

"Why did the only other ikemen in school get THAT seat?"

"I'm super jealous! Gorilla-chan is so lucky."

Throughout the room, you could hear each of their own personal thoughts.

Sayaka just sat there, never breaking eye contact, until Yuko stood up from her seat and blocked Sae's way.

"What the hell are you thinking?!"

"Ano, if you need any help, you can always come to me. I'm class monitor after all," she said while giggling. "Oshima Yuko. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!"
She bowed down as far as she could, reaching a hand out to Sae.

The room just went silent, probably because it had the sense of a confession in there.

After a while, Sae just high-fived her hand and slid past her to get to Sayaka. This made Yuko's mouth drop to the ground.

He knelt down closer to Sayaka. This made her heart race so much.

"So, you're Sayaka?"

Now, people started getting anxious again.

"Y-yeah..."

Sae slowly took her hand and stared deep into her eyes.

"A pleasure to finally meet you, Sayaka-chan." And, ever so slowly, kissed the back of her hand.

As you could guess, this made all the girls in the room scream to the top of their lungs. In the background, the boys repeated, "Maji kka?! Maji kka yo?!"

As everyone in the room screamed over that little event, Sayaka couldn't help but blush. Sae just snickered a bit at her shy expression.

"She's always been so gentle on the inside..."


"Uhh..."

Now, Sae's attention was all on her. Sayaka hesitated a bit, but finally gained back the courage to speak to him.

"Could it be possible th-that... Mm... Have we me-"

"EVERYONE SHUT UP!!!!"

Mariko's sadist side awakened and her loud voice echoed throughout the room, making everyone go quiet.

After a deep breath, Mariko calmed down and went back to her normal self.

"Homeroom will be a free-study class period today. Please finish up anything that you've left uncompleted."

As Mariko left the room, Sae got up from his kneeling position, sat in his desk, and unpacked the stuff from his bag.

Sayaka sat and watched. Among the school textbooks he received, she saw a Shakespeare novel, an old pocketwatch, and what looked like a bible.
She also took to account the black cross necklace he was wearing.

"Maybe he's a foreigner."

Some of the girls, including Yuko and Nacchi, gathered around his desk.

"Nee, nee, Sae-kun, what school did you go to before this one?"

"A catholic school near Tokyo." This got the girls really excited, thinking he was rich or something.

"Were you in any clubs? Or participate in any special classes?"

"Hmm... Actually, I was a part of the school's drama club." Now, the girls fantasized what kind of characters he could have been.

... Mostly the lead, prince role.

Sayaka, after a while, put her headphones in after Sae started talking about his pocketwatch and favorite Shakespeare plays and classical songs.

"Your eye color... Are you a half," Yuko screamed.

"Actually, yes. My father is originally from England."

Now the girls were squealing and giggling more than ever.

"When I went up to Sayaka to greet her, my English blood got the better of me. I must apoligize for my arrupt actions."

He suddenly got up and bowed down very prince-like, again, making the girls scream.

Sayaka could hear through her headphones, and just wanted them to talk somewhere else.

She just wanted to leave school then and there.


Later that night, Sayaka kept thinking about what had happened after school ended.

Flashback

"Hey, Sayaka-chan."

"Hm? Miyazawa..-kun. What is it?"


"I was wondering if we could walk home together. Just the two of us."

He grasped Sayaka's hand. But, she made him let go.

"I don't need anyone. I'm perfectly fine by myself."

Sae got a worried expression on his face. It was just the same as the one he made in her dream.

But, this time, it was real.

"I'll see you tomorrow, Miyazawa-kun."

She turned and walked away from him.

Sae tried reaching his hand out, but Nacchi touch his shoulder, stopping him.

Yuko walked up beside him.

"Don't worry about it, Sae-kun. She's normally like this."

They said it clearly like Sayaka couldn't hear them.

But, it was the exact opposite. She heard every single word, and actually wanted Sae to stop her.

Being honest just wasn't her strongest point.

The overwhelmed feelings brought a tear to her eye. She softly cried, to ensure no one around would hear.

End of flashback


Sayaka's POV
Why the hell did I say that? It slipped out, just like that.

Sae must never wanna talk to me again.


"Well, good evening, ojou-chan."

I suddenly heard a voice from the direction I was walking. There were three yankee boys watching me.

The middle, who had spiky black hair, ear piercings, and a scar over his eye, walked over to me.

"Wanna come hang with us tonight? We'll drink 'til night's end."

His cigarette came toward my face.

Gross!

"I'm in a hurry. Leave me alone!"

"C'mon! I promise it's my treat..." He tried to wrap himself around me.

I screamed and punched him straight in the face.

His two friends grew angry expressions on their faces.

As he got up, he became scarier than I could imagine. Then, from his pants pocket, he drew out a rusty knife.

"Ya wanna go, bitch?"

His two friends held my hands behind my back and covered my mouth. I wanted to scream, but I could barely breathe.

"Now, be a good girl, and let me take care of business."

Tears just freely streamed down my face.

"If you try anything, you're dead meat."

I shut my eyes tight, just preparing myself for what was coming.

Sayaka no baka!

*TAT TAT TAT TAT*

"What the-?"

*TAT TAT TAT*

"Who the hell are you?!"

The hands suddenly left, and I fell to the ground.

I had trouble catching my breath and I was already so tired.

The sounds of pounding from the walls echoed through the streets. The yankees screamed, and eventually, their voices faded.

I slowly open my eyes, but I was so scared and tired, I could barely see.

On top of that, it was really late, and already dark in the streets.

Then, I quickly felt someone hold me up and a slight breeze blew on my back. This person's warmth made me feel so relaxed.

His hand slowly stroked the back of my head, caressing my long hair and relaxing me more.

"Go on. You can sleep now. Everything's alright."

"Eh? Sae...?"

My eyes closed and I slowly drifted into sleep.


To be continued...

Comments by the author
"I was recently reading a fanfic someone wrote involving AKB48 called "The INFINITY SAGA," and it inspired me to make some scenes based on them.
But, I assure you, not everything will be stolen and/or copyed.

I have my own original ideas. I'm not a jerk. Sorry :heart: "



See you next update! :otomerika: Bye bye!
« Last Edit: April 03, 2013, 05:06:10 PM by TTLuver497 »
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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