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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 8)
« Reply #60 on: April 14, 2013, 09:24:04 AM »
So actually both mayu and yuki like sae????
am i right?
but if it's the truth, i guess there would be some kind of love triangle drama between them

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 8)
« Reply #61 on: April 14, 2013, 02:16:08 PM »
Mayu is pulling another bit of magic out of her pocket and the sequence before they woke up was hilarious :lol:
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 8)
« Reply #62 on: April 15, 2013, 03:46:13 AM »
Yuki and Mayu interaction was so cute...

Yuki seems to like Mayu...

Would Yuki develop any crush on Mayu or Yuki is going to go steady with Sae?

Eh... Mayu was saying Sae name in her sleep... does she also like Sae?

Can't wait to find out

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 8)
« Reply #63 on: April 15, 2013, 12:47:58 PM »
So actually both mayu and yuki like sae????
am i right?
but if it's the truth, i guess there would be some kind of love triangle drama between them
Yuki seems to like Mayu...

Would Yuki develop any crush on Mayu or Yuki is going to go steady with Sae?

Eh... Mayu was saying Sae name in her sleep... does she also like Sae?
Yes! Yuki and Mayu both have a crush on Sae.

Although, I'd say Mayu's feelings for him are a bit bigger than Yuki's. :p

Yuki is still adjusting to her no longer "black" personality, so she doesn't have a full-time crush yet.
But, maybe she has feelings for Sae... :grin:
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
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Black Chocolate (Chapter 9)
« Reply #64 on: April 21, 2013, 04:47:07 PM »
Chapter 9-My Black Jealousy


Yuki's dad has the weekend off from work, so their whole family is having a barbeque.

Her dad said it was alright for her to invite friends(even though he's still coping with her newfound bright personal)and now she's telling her closest friends, Aki, Mocchi, Rie, and Mayu, of course!

"So, please? Can you come?"

"Of course, Yuki! I'll bring some snacks while I'm at it, too."

"Hmm... We do need some chips and dip..."

Aki snapped her fingers. "Done!"

"And, I'll make some of my famous family sandwiches! Without 'em, I wouldn't be working here!"

Yuki nodded and smiled at the bright and open suggestions from her friends.

She saw Mocchi slightly raise her hand.

"Eto... Perhaps, I could, erm...provide the..entertainment?"

"Sure, Mocchi. Know anyone good?"

Mocchi looked out a bit toward the door. Yuki didn't realize this, but she was looking at a certain ikemen passing by the classroom and down the hall, stretching his arms.

"...Yeah."

"Good!"

"And, me too! I have a great chocolate truffle recipe that'll knock your dad's socks off!"

Yuki gave her a "black" glare that said, "No magic allowed!" Mayu gave an okie-dokie sign to her and Yuki smiled back and did the same.

"Okay, we start today at 5:00 PM."


Hours and hours of boring school later...


Yuki was rolling up her sleeves, preparing the tables and umbrellas for the barbeque, cuz today was so HOT!

She wiped off the sweat on her forehead and batted down her legs to help the umbrellas stay secure.

Aki climbed up on the table and helped it fit into the hole.

"There!"

"Thanks, Akicha."

Rie and Mocchi were already setting up the tables, and Mayu was helping Yuki's dad decorate the porch.

Just after all the decorations were up, everyone swarmed in like flies.

Everyone was already so hungry, and all the food was so good.

But, it was so HOT out people couldn't stand it.

"Yuki, we need to do something... Looks like everyone's a bit bored."

"I know, Papa..."

Then, Mocchi came over to Yuki and dragged her onto the stage on the porch. She pulled her behind the curtains and smiled.

"What's wrong, Mocchi?"

"I found our entertainment."

Mocchi put her fingers in her mouth and whistled.

Before Yuki's eyes, Sae walked out carrying a guitar.

"S-Sae-kun?"

Mocchi giggled a bit, and left them alone.

"I'll leave it to you, Pokkun," she whispered to Sae before she walked out.

Sae was stratching his head and blushing a bit; Yuki was blushing, too.

"So... Yukirin... Is it alright if I, uh..."

"Ufufu. I had NO idea you play guitar."

"There's a lot you don't know about me," he said as he handsomely strummed a Latin chord.

Yuki giggled a bit.

"So, what song?"

"What songs do you know you can sing?"

"Hmm... Ah!"

Yuki whispered something into his ear that made him grin.

"Can you do that without music?"

"Of course, I know the WHOLE thing by heart."

"Awesome! Let's go."

Yuki signaled Mayu to come up on the stage and start.

"Hi~, minna! It's time for our special entertainment!"

*Cheers*

"Hai! Ehh...." From behind the curtains, Yuki handed her a small card. "Uh.. Ah! Singing AKB48's "Sakura no Ki ni narou," Kashiwagi Yuki-san, featuring Miyazawa Sae-kun on guitar!"

*More cheers*

The curtain opened and Sae started strumming the notes to the song on his guitar.

Yuki no longer had any fear and was ready to sing perfectly. She was full and confident, ready to take one more step toward her future.

She took a deep breath, stepped up to the mic, and began.



Haru-iro no sora no shita wo
Kimi wa hitori de aruki hajimeru'n da
Itsuka mita yume no you ni
Egaite kita nagai michi

Seifuku to sugita hibi wo
Kyou no omoide ni shimaikonde
Atarashiku umarekawaru
Sono senaka wo mimamotteru

Fuan sou ni furimuku
Kimi ga muri ni hohoenda toki
Hoho ni ochita namida wa
Otona ni naru tame no
Piriodo

Eien no sakura no ki ni narou
Sou boku wa koko kara ugokanai yo
Moshi kimi ga kokoro no michi ni mayotte mo
Ai no basho ga wakaru you ni tatte iru

Kyoushitsu no hinata no naka
Kurasumeito to katatta mirai wa
Ima kimi ga aruki dashita
Sono ippo me no saki ni aru

Mankai no kisetsu dake wo
Kimi wa natsukashinde ite wa ikenai
Kogarashi ni furuete ita
Fuyu wo koete hana ga saku

Dare mo inai koutei
Toki ni hitori kaette oide
Sotsugyou shita ano hi no
Kagayaite iru kimi ni
Aeru yo

Eien no sakura no ki ni narou
Sutaato no mejirushi ni naru you ni
Hanabira no subete ga chitte ite mo
Eda ga ryoute hiroge nagara matte iru

Dare mo mina mune ni oshibana no you na
Kesshin wo dokoka ni wasurete iru
Omoidashite
Sakura ga saku kisetsu ni
Boku no koto wo...
Ippon no ki wo...

Eien no sakura no ki ni narou
Sou boku wa koko kara ugokanai yo
Moshi kimi ga kokoro no michi ni mayotte mo
Ai no basho ga wakaru you ni tatte iru


*Loud applause*

Sae smiled big and hugged Yuki.

Yuki was a bit a surprised, but hugged him back.

As the curtain closed, they were still locked in that position, until Yuki suddenly felt her heart pounding more and more.

"Yukirin... you're so amazing!"

"..T-thank you, Sae-kun..."

"Hehe, drop the 'kun'! Just call me 'Sae'!"

His hug became tighter and Yuki was already blushing.

"Sae..."

Then, she felt it again.

The same, strange feeling she felt when she first hugged Sae.

"No... It can't be..."

They didn't notice, but Mayu was watching them from afar.

Mayu couldn't explain why, but her chest was tight and she felt like she was gonna cry.

[In Mayu's mind:
Evil Mayu:
Huh?! How dare she do this to us?!
Sweet Mayu: Why? Why is she hugging Sae?
Normal Mayu: ....I....
Evil Mayu: She'll pay! SHE'LL PAY FOR DOING THIS TO US!!!
Sweet Mayu: Why, Yukirin? Why? Just why?
Normal Mayu: ...I...!
Evil Mayu: We'll steal him. We'll take Sae from Yukirin and make him ours!
Sweet Mayu: Sae-kun... Sae-kun!
Normal Mayu: ..I..!!]

"..I like Sae!!!" She wanted to scream, but it only came out in a whisper.


The next day at school, Mayu was hiding behind a wall, watching Sae talk to some of his friends.

"Haha! Of course! It'll be WILD and WET!!!"

"Whoo~!"

"Hey, hey, hey! No one's gettin' ME wet!"

"Oh~! Yeah, right! Are you calling me out, Miyazawa!"

Mayu clenched her hand, holding a small candy.

It was a caramel she specially made for one purpose: to gain Sae's affection.

As soon as the others left, Sae was alone, staring out the window.

Mayu slowly walked up and tapped his shoulder.

He turned and smiled at her cute little face; she didn't realize she was blushing a bit.

"Mayu, what are you doing?"

"Ah.. I wanted to thank you for the performance. You really helped us out."

"Ehehe, no prob! I'd be happy to do it again!"

Mayu opened her hand a bit and saw the candy, carefully and properly wrapped.

"I, uhh, made this for you..."

Sae saw it and took it in his hand.

"Ah! Now, you didn't have to do that!"

He unwrapped it and smiled at the cutely shaped caramel square.

"Do you like caramel?"

"Yeah," he said as he popped it in his mouth. "Mm~! But, not as much as... as...."

His chest got all warm and it felt like his heart was skipping and jumping inside of him.

At the same time, it was melting in pure happiness.

He looked back up and saw Mayu.

In one second, his head rushed with excitement and it felt like the air was light and lovely.

Sae had eaten a magic candy, and has fallen for Mayu.

"Not as much as I love you, Mayuyu!"

He hugged her tight and swung her around in his arms.

Mayu felt so happy seeing her spell had worked and she made a lovey-dovey Sae.

"Sae?"

They turned and saw Yuki just walking up the hall towards them.

"..W-wh-what's going on here?"

"Yukirin? Why are you..?"

"Sae! What are you doing with Mayu?"

Sae smiled stupidly again and blushed a bit.

"She's just so~ CUTE! I love, love, LOVE Mayuyu!"

"Mayuyu..?"

Mayu broke the hug and went over to Yuki.

"Yuki... I.. I really like Sae... Are you okay with that?"

Mayu couldn't tell Yuki about the caramel. She would probably hate her.

Yuki shook her head and smiled a bit.

"Yeah... I'll be fine. Besides, you two look really cute together..."

"Thanks... Thanks for understanding..."

"Mayuyu~!"

Sae called to her and ran down the hall.

"Coming! Bye, Yukirin."

"...Bye, Mayu..." Yuki clenched her fists a bit and felt her chest hurt. She was heartbroken. "Sae...!"

She ran to the bathroom and went to the nearest sink.

She splashed her face with cold water and started crying.

"Sae...! Sae...!!!"


---TBC---
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 9)
« Reply #65 on: April 21, 2013, 05:00:40 PM »
NOW IM ABIT CONFUSED,BUT NOT REALLY THAT CONFUSED
SO BASICALLY ITS SAEYUKI OR MAYUSAE? I THOUGHT IT WAS MAYUKI,BUT THEN LOOKING MORE AND MORE CHAPTER PROGRESS,EH ITS STILL MAYUKI BUT NOT IN THAT KIND OF RELATIONSHIP,MAYBE JUST BEST FRIEND  :cry:

BUUUUUT, I WANT MAYUKI IN LOVING MANNER AWW  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :deco: :deco: :deco: :deco: :deco:

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 9)
« Reply #66 on: April 21, 2013, 05:10:51 PM »
I always get the feeling that when Mayu gets jealous
she always cheats somehow.......
Personally, I prefer Mayuki and Saeyaka
instead of MayuSae or Saeyuki

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 9)
« Reply #67 on: April 21, 2013, 05:11:04 PM »
I am confused too

i want my MAYUKI

i WANT MY MAYUKI

ANYWAY UPDATEEEEEE
mayuki
Love AKB
             ~TakaYuu~
                           ~AtsuMina~
                                          ~KojiYuu~
                                                      ~TomoTomo~
                                           ~MariMii~
                           ~Wmatsui~
             ~MaYuki~

Love this Pairing
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 9)
« Reply #68 on: April 21, 2013, 05:16:35 PM »
uhhhh! It seems I'm not the only one that feels sad reading this chapter... :(

MaYuki would have been a better choisse for this fanfic from our point of view, but we have to respect the writer's want. So its ok if its SaeYuki and SaeMayu, and hopefuly the readers will keep reading if they respect the writer and not just read it cuz its Mayuki.


(In secret Im sulking ,missing MaYuki too....)
Ahh~ it feels so good to live life at max!

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 9)
« Reply #69 on: April 21, 2013, 05:18:51 PM »
Eh... it's become love triangle with Sae the one that they are trying to possess...

OMG... NO NO NO.... I wanna MayuxYuki pairing  :cry:

Ah... so Sae likes Yuki... but Mayu used her magic to change Sae affection to her...

Ah poor Yuki... and poor Mayu...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 9)
« Reply #70 on: April 21, 2013, 06:46:13 PM »
Mayu is trying to make Yukirin jealous by forcing her into a hug with her.  Even if she is pissed, Mayu would only make matters worst with the situation in having two liking her

Imagine that popping out
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Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P1)
« Reply #71 on: April 27, 2013, 05:05:50 PM »
Chapter 10-Black's first love (Part 1)


Mayu's POV
"Mayuyu~!"

"Hai~!"

Uwaa~ This is a dream come true!

Sae-kun... No, Sae-chan as my boyfriend!

"C'mon! Ya can't catch me!"

"Ufufu, we'll see about that!"

We play together, fool around, goof off in class, we're perfect.

But...

One day, while we were playing, I thought I saw Yukirin watching us from afar.

She looked so sad.

There were tears at the rim of her eyes, I think.

When I saw her, I think she saw me and ran off.

Today, I didn't see her. I was just chasing Sae down the empty halls.

I finally caught up to him and tackled him.

"Ha! I told you!"

"Ehe, okay, 'ya got me."

We both got up, rubbing off the dust from our clothes.

"Now, remember the bet. If I beat you and get you..."

"I have to give you our first kiss."

He closed his eyes and waited for me.

I was ready to kiss him, but, for some reason, I had this strange feeling wash over me.

I made me think of Yuki.

I like Sae, but I knew that Yukirin was sad, because she likes him, too.

I was so close to kissing.

But...

But, I just can't!

I pushed Sae away and ran off.

I ran somewhere where Sae couldn't find me and softly cried.

I then felt the star badge in my pocket. I took it out and saw stunned at what I saw.

It was starting to rust and turn black again, because I used my magic to take Sae and break Yukirin's heart.

"..This is all my fault..."
End of Mayu's POV


Yuki's POV

Mayu...

Why? Why did you do that to me?

WHAT did you do?

How did you do that to Sae?

What happened that made him like you?

No, Yuki, you're thinking to much.

Mayu probably just confessed.

Plus, Sae is always flirting with the girls anyways.

Guess I don't really matter anymore.


...Was what I thought.

Then, I saw something amazing.

Mayu was kissing Sae.

They were really kissing.

I can't take it!!!

I ran far, far, away from then, somewhere only I knew and could cry.

I felt my heart tighten. It hurt so much.

I can't do it...

I can never face Sae or Mayu again...

The only thing...for me to do...is to be alone.


---TBC---
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P1)
« Reply #72 on: April 27, 2013, 05:15:54 PM »
Yeah... Mayu could not kiss Sae... and she is thinking about Yuki....

Soon Mayu is going to relies that the feeling she has for Yuki is love....

Ah... because of what Mayu did... the spell that she used to turn Yuki to be a bright person is reversed...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P1)
« Reply #73 on: April 27, 2013, 05:53:11 PM »
See! Mayuyu! That was a bad choice!
Both people are sad now......
Somehow, I get the idea that Yuki will have to be paired with someone
And Mayu actually loves Yuki
it's just that feeling
and I just remembered...
it's supposed to be mayu's job to make Yukirin happy to begin with.....

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P1)
« Reply #74 on: April 27, 2013, 06:29:33 PM »
AND MAYBE YUKI TOO
SHE LOVE MAYU ACTUALLY,SHE KNOW THAT SAE LOVE TO FLIRT WITH OTHER GIRL,

WHY YUKI HURT AFTER THINK THAT SAE AND MAYU KISSING?PROBABLY SHE NOT HURT CAUSE SAE KISSED MAYU,BUT SHE HURT CAUSE SHE THINK MAYU KISSED SAE. AHA!!

sO SHE DOESNT LIKE MAYU BEING KISSED BY SOMEONE ELSE

UHG MY ENGLISH REALLY SUCK








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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P1)
« Reply #75 on: April 27, 2013, 06:30:44 PM »
MAYUYU!!  :angry: You need some sense knocked into you :banghead: you can't make people fall in love with you!! :shocked
bad idea mayuyu  :thumbdown: 
yukirin don't be alone :cry: :cry:, mayu just acting a bit stupid she'll realise soon she's wrong, hopefully otherwise i want yuki to give her a wake up call :twisted:
actually both of them need to realise that their the ones who should be together :bow: :bow:
where's sayaka when you need her?  :?
thanx for the updates :cow: :yep:
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P1)
« Reply #76 on: April 28, 2013, 12:27:14 AM »
Mayu has definitely stepped over the line and she has to figure to not  force Yuki back to her old ways :nervous
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P1)
« Reply #77 on: April 28, 2013, 07:36:24 AM »
Mayu couldn't kiss Sae :farofflook:
Maybe she has feeling toward Yuki :hehehe:
Yuki also hurt when she saw Mayu was kissing Sae :on drink:
Not Sae kissing Mayu? :ding:
She was slowly fall in love with Mayu, I thought :kekeke:
Want to know what'll happen next :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
« Reply #78 on: April 28, 2013, 08:05:10 PM »
Chapter 10-Black's first love (Part 2)
*Yeah, I decided to early update*



Yuki was sitting outside all alone, cradling her knees.

She had been crying alone for several minutes, and had now transformed back into her "black" self.

She was heartbroken because she saw *or at least THOUGHT she saw* Mayu and Sae kissing each other in the hallway.

Now, she knows that she can't face either of them again.

She once again believes the only thing she can do is be alone the rest of her life.


Sae and the other students in the basketball and other sports clubs were all taking part in an annual summer carwash, and Mayu is helping him hand out flyers to the other students in her classes.

Mayu saw Yuki sitting alone at her desk.

The unfamiliar dark expression in her eyes made her feel guilty, and she knew she had to make it up.

"Nee, Yukirin, me and some of the other students are gonna participate in the school summer carwash, so--"

"Not interested."

"Eh?"

She had a renewed dark tone that seemed to have no emotion in her voice.

Aki then smirked a bit and leaned over to Yuki's ears.

"Sae-kun's gonna be there."

Yuki's eyes widened a bit, but she saw Mayu again and walked away.

"Don't worry. I'll talk to her."


Aki found her sitting alone outside, eating lunch.

Well, she wasn't touching it at all.

"Yuki!"

".........."

"Yuki, will you PLEASE~ stop acting like this?"

"................." More silence fills the already awkward atmosphere.

"Look, I'm sorry about you and Sae, but who knows? Maybe, he'll change his mind."

"..You don't know that."

Aki smirked again, in a very tsundere-ish way.

"You don't either. And you never will unless you try!"

Yuki slowly looked up at her and saw the flyer.

"Maybe... if I try to talk to Sae, we can..."

She felt her chest become warm again and a small smile painted her face.

"...Okay. I'll go.."

"Hehe, good! Meet everyone outside on the track tomorrow, 'kay?"

"..Un! Thanks, Aki."

Aki smiled and left so Yuki could eat.

Yuki was feeling herself become slightly happy again, and she felt it would be good to at least try and forgive Sae and Mayu.


The next day, the carwash had already started when Yuki got there.

She was wearing a tank top and a comfortable jean skirt, fit for summer.

She then saw Sae and the other basketball club members already washing a car.

He saw her and waved at her.

..Or so she thought, until Mayu came running to him and hugged him.

Then, she saw Yuki and frowned. She broke the hug and went over to her station.

She thought that Yuki was still upset and didn't want to hurt her.

She had to find a way to make Yuki feel better.

She thought for a bit, then came up with an idea.

"I just need to get Sae to love Yuki again!"

Luckily, she knew a loophole in her caramel's magic spell: "When the person who ate the caramel receives a huge shock, they return back to normal."

All Mayu had to do was give Sae a good enough scare to shock him and cancel out the spell.

And, she knew the perfect way.

"Splashing Sae with ice water should shock him back!"

She took a large bucket and filled it up with water from the hose.

She felt of the water...

"Not good enough..."

She took some of her mints from her pocket and dropped them in. They dissolved into the water and made it ice cold.

"That should make it cold enough."

She picked up the heavy bucket, then saw Yuki.

She was washing her car, but she had a sad smile on her face as she saw Sae giggling and playing with the other boys.

Mayu took all her strength, closed her eyes, and threw the water onto...

Not Sae, but another, skinnier member of the basketball club.

He started freaking out and took off his shirt. He looked like a dying chicken on roller skates.

The other boys started laughing and were taking off their shirts and swinging them around in the air.

They were spraying everyone with the hoses and getting them wet.

Even Mayu and Yuki eventually got soaked.

"Hey, hey, Sae! Take off your shirt, too!"

At that, Sae's eyes went wide.

"W-wh-whoa..! What?!"

"C'mon, strip off, Miyazawa!"

Sae was, for some reason, nervous about taking off his shirt and refused to.

He kept running away, but two of the boys finally grabbed his arms.

They were acting like pervert drunks and kept grabbing Sae's shirt.

But, he smacked them off and kept screaming.

Eventually, he gave up and the boys successfully grabbed his shirt.

"Se~no!"

They pulled it off and were shocked at what they saw.

Sae, too, was so shocked, he scared himself out of Mayu's spell. He covered his chest and screamed.

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

But, then everyone looked over and saw him covering his chest...


No...


HER chest!

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHH?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

"Miyazawa, are you wearing a BRA?!?!?!"

"Oh, dear god!"

"Sae's..."

"A GIRL!!!!!!"

Miyazawa Sae, the most handsome, energetic, and sweetest boy in school...was actually a girl!

When she first came, she was wearing a male school uniform, so everyone had the impression that she was a guy.

Now, because of this embarrassing accident, everyone found out her true gender.

Sae, tears in her eyes and face tomato red, ran off crying and covering her chest.

Yuki saw all this and went after her.

Mayu followed her from behind.


Yuki found Sae in the dressing room, crying into her knees.

She was wearing a new, light blue shirt and a towel around her neck to dry her hair.

"Sae...-chan."

She looked up with teary eyes.

"Yukirin?"

"...So, I was right..."

Yuki knew something was different about Sae. She thought she might have felt...something, but she wasn't sure.

Now, she absolutely knew. Sae was a female.

"Sae, you okay?"

"...Hii...yeah... *Sniff* It just really shocked me was all."

The two didn't notice Mayu was behind the lockers and could hear them.

"Eh? 'Shock'?"

The shock of embarrassment must have broke the spell on Sae.

But, there was only ONE way to find out.

She continued to listen to their conversation.

Yuki took the towel and started to dry Sae's tears.

"Hey, don't cry. I really don't like it when you cry... You're better when you're happy."

"...Hee... Thanks, Yukirin."

Yuki sadly smiled and looked down a bit.

"Hey, Sae-chan... do you like Mayu?"

"Eh? Well... yeah, as a friend... I don't really know who I would want as a... Oh, what am I saying?!"

"Eh? Sae-chan... Do you..like girls?"

Sae bit her lip and shyly smiled.

"...Just one."

As if out of an anime, Mayu's hear got bigger and she went in closer to hear.

Yuki's eyes widened and she blushed a bit.

"...You."

"Eh?!"

Sae slowly leaned towards Yuki and kissed her lips gently.

Yuki was overcome with surprise and was blushing like crazy.

But, she felt so happy, she couldn't resist.

She closed her eyes and returned the kiss.

Mayu peeked out and saw the two sharing a perfect, blissful kiss together.

"Yukirin..."

She checked her star badge and saw it was renewed and was glowing brightly again.

"Thank goodness..."

The two finally broke the kiss for air.

They stared into each other's eyes, glistening in the light of the sunset.

"Yukirin...do you still love me? ..Even though I'm a girl, do you..?"

"...Ufufu... Yeah... I do."

She pulled her in for another sweet kiss and ended up making out on the ground.

Mayu secretly continued to watch them, happy she could bring Yuki back her happiness.

And her first love.


---TBC---
« Last Edit: September 09, 2014, 11:54:12 PM by Ruka Kikuchi »
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
« Reply #79 on: April 28, 2013, 08:17:38 PM »
yay!!! happy!!
Lol, so Sae was really a girl~~~
good thing!! hardly ever see situations where they think she's a guy and turns out that she's a girl
well, at least I don't usualyl read them~~

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