TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10

[okotteru]

i love your fics

i was reading them while i was in class this morning lol 

[TakaminaBG]

Hi guys.... Uhmmmm, this actually are lyrics to a song I wrote... just now. I'm not sure if I'll make a fic out of this. BUT........ The main protagonist will be a secret.
 
The question is: Who do you think broke her heart???

Somebody help me, I'm loosing my mind.

I've gone completely crazy..... Because of her.....

I loved you, even after all the things you did to me, I still love you blindly...

I can't erase all the memories we made together, I can't stop loving you.

You broke my heart in a million pieces.

Wherever I go, whatever I do, I always end up thinking about you.

I gave you my all.

Heart, mind and body. And you threw it away.

I can't bring myself to hate you.

I still remember your kisses, your touch. It made my body to shut down completely.

And now, because of you, my heart has a big door in front of it.

That door is locked. No one can reach my heart ....... No one can hurt me anymore......

But there is someone out there who has the key.

I just have to find that person....

But maybe I'll die alone....

I feel dead inside. You made me who I am today. Cold - hearted person.

Am I still able to love someone like I love you.

Can that person make me forget about you?

?????FIC????????

[miayaka]

ho me gad!

I feel dead inside. You made me who I am today. Cold - hearted person.

made me 

[kahem]

Even if don't know if the both Takamina are the same, I'm glad Acchan found her ^^

[TakaminaBG]

I'm looking FORWARD to your votes. This is going to be hilarious!!!!!
MAYBE a NEW couple will be born???

[TakaminaBG]

The voting is over!!!
The winner is...................... RAY?!?!?!!
AND.................... I'm NOT writing this fic!!! Because the main protagonist was Maeda Atsuko!!!!!!
If you want I can write it with Takahashi Minami but not with RAY, unless you want to see... MAEDAxRAY?!?!

[Sydney W]

Write it with Minami x Atsuko !!! ^^

[Haruko]

If opoue takaboy cure the heart broken maeda.. then yes.. you can make rayxatsuko couple ..or minamixray but atsuko gonna rescue minami´s heart

[TakaminaBG]

Hey guys. This is part 1 for the song lyrics in the upper comments. Hope you like it. Enjoy!!!

                                                                        I Can Make You Forget
                                                                                     Part 1

You can see a girl walking alone in the dark. It’s raining and it’s cold. She is dressed in a pink dress. She has brown hair and brown eyes. She has a pink ribbon in her hair to match her dress. Her body is small, just like a kid. She can’t walk straight forward. You can see tears floating from her eyes. People pass her and talk about her. They think she is either drunk or she is just a weirdo. But no one knows….. no one cares, that just now she had her heart broken. Broken into million pieces.

You can see blood traces on the ground. They are from her legs. Something bad happened to her. Five minutes ago she was the happiest person in the world. Now…. Her heart is dying slowly. Her legs had become numb, but she continues to walk. It’s like she is somewhere else and that’s only her body with no one inside.

There are couples walking hand in hand happily. She just looks at them with no emotion. She could’ve been one of them right now. The worst thing is that today is Valentine’s day.

She felt her mind dozing off, her body became weak. Finally her legs gave up and she fell hardly on the ground. Before she passed out there was a certain name with sadness.

“Ray”……

In the last moment a figure run out of nowhere and cached her body before it felt down on the ground.

“Are you okay?” asked the figure. She saw that there was no response and she decided to take her to her place. She was a complete stranger to her, but she couldn’t just leave her there.

She lived near the place she picked up the girl from. And luckily the girl was small so there was no problem in carrying her.

She pulled out her keys and opened the door with her free hand while the other was holding the  girl’s body.  She passed out the living room and took the girl to her bedroom. She saw her legs were bleeding, so she went to the bathroom and then came back with a wet rag. She washed her wounds and bandaged her legs carefully.

She saw that the girl was wet from the rain. She decided to change her clothes. So she went to her wardrobe and took out her pajamas. She went to the girl and slowly pulled her up, took her clothes trying not to look.

After she was finished changing her clothes she slowly laid down the girls body. She looked at her face for the first time. Her heart immediately skipped a beat as she saw how stunning she looked.

‘What a beautiful girl’ she thought. She reached out and removed the bangs covering her face. She stared at the girls face for some seconds, then she saw a tear rolling down the girls face. She wiped the tear and heard the girl whispering something. She slowly leaned down and heard the name: “Ray” .
She felt pain in her heart. Somehow she knew that this was her lover’s name. She  couldn’t help but think what had happened to this girl. For the look of her dress she was probably going out for a romantic dinner, but now she is like that…..

In the morning the girl walk up. She shocked as she saw she was in a place she didn’t knew. She turned around and saw girl lying next to her. She looked up under the bed and saw that her clothes were changed.

“Where am I?” Suddenly she remembered last night. The night she was supposed to be the happiest night of her life. Tear started gathering but she stopped them. She decided not to cry anymore.

She looked at the girl lying next to her. ‘She is so beautiful’ she thought. She started at her. Her eyes her nose…… then her lips. They looked so soft. She couldn’t help but blush. The figure she was staring started moving and she looked away.

The figure rubbed her eyes and slowly opened them.

TBC????
 
 

[Trickster]

so the main protagonist is Takamina and the one who broke her heart is Ray?
I hope the other girl is Acchan
waiting for the next part

[arrow27]

Please continue!

[Wmatsui22]

I LIKE YOUR ONE-SHOTS FAN FICTION OF ATSUMINA

PLEASE MAKE MORE MORE ATSUMINA FAN FICTION

THANK YOU

I WILL WAIT

I AM YOUR FAN NOW

[TakaminaBG]

                                                                                      I Can Make You Forget                                                                                  
                                                                                                Part 2

The figure opened her eyes lazily. She looked up and smiled at the girl in front of her.

“Hi” she said getting up. She sat next to the girl who looked at her shyly.

“How are you?” she asked waiting for an answer but she already knew that the girl was not okay.

“Fine, thanks to you…..” she answered with sadness in her eyes.

“Ah, I’m sorry. My name is Maeda Atsuko.”

“I’m sorry I caused you troubles, Maeda – san.” She said looking down. I can see exactly how hurt she is. It pains me to see her like this. I don’t know her and I shouldn’t feel this way, but I don’t want to see a person be this sad.

“Call me, Acchan.” I said as I smile to her. “What is your name?”

“Takahashi Minami desu.” She answered shyly. “But you can call me, Takamina.”

There was an awkward silence filling the room. She kept looking down, keeping her tears from falling.

“I don’t know what happened, but don’t hide it. I’ll be here for you.” I said as I held her hand. She looked at me and nodded.

She started crying really hard. She put her hands on her face and covered her eyes with them. She probably didn’t want to show them to me.
I slowly got closer to her and embrace her. She was shocked at first but didn’t push me away.

She put her hands down form her face and wrapped them around my waist, pulling me closer. I smiled and gently run my hands up and down her back, comforting her.

She was hugging me really tightly while sobbing around for hours. I can’t help but to hate the person who did this to her. “Ray” she managed to say between sobs. This name was like a knife stabbing directly through my heart numerous times.

“Shh..” I whisper in her ear which made her whole body shiver. Then she nuzzled closer to my neck. I can feel her breath which is giving me a strange sensation. “Thank you.” She said between sobs. I tightened my grip around her and held her close.

When I felt she stopped crying I released my hug and looked at her eyes. She was looking so sad.

“Do you want to tell me what happened?” I asked her as she nodded and began her heart - breaking story.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You can see a girl lying on a bench in the park. She was smiling as she was looking at the sky. This girl really loved it.

Then there was a girl who approached her and interrupted her “Ano?” she started hesitantly. The girl turned her head to the other girl’s direction and was stunned by that girl’s beauty. “Can I help you?”

“Can I sit on this bench? This is the only free one.” She asked as she smiled awkwardly.

As she keeps staring at the girl in front of her she gets up and sits on the bench.

The girl smiled at her as she smiled back. “Thank you.” said the girl as she sat down. “No problem and I’m sorry I was occupying the whole bench.”
The girl chuckled. “I thought you were some homeless guy.” “Guy?” laughed the small girl. “Well from afar you do look like a boy, because of the whole yankee style.” She said as I looked down embarrassed.

“But looking you up close, you are a very cute girl.” She smiled as the other girl blushed and continued to look down at the ground.

“I can’t compare to your beauty.” She said as she smiled now the other girl blushed.

For some minutes they chatted. They laughed together they look at the sky together. Slowly the small girl started to fall for this complete strange. This girl caught her heart.

“I’m sorry I didn’t catch your name.” the girl chuckled as the other girl smiled “Takahashi Minami desu.” Said the small girl. “I’m Ray.” Said the other girl.

Minami’s POV

“Eh? Just, Ray?“ she asked curiously as the other girl nodded.

“Well, Ray – san, you can call me Minami.” I said smiling. “Just call me, Ray.”

“Okay, Ray.” I said as I blushed so did she.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~END OF FLASHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

ATSUKO’S POV

“That’s how I met her.” She said sadly. I can see it’s painful for her. I honestly want her to stop but I know it’s better if she tells someone rather than keeping it inside. Hearing her story is breaking my heart.

“Days past, months past and then after a year I confessed to her.” She said as I held her hand tightly.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I’m sitting on the same bench we met each other waiting for her. This is the day. I’m going to confess to her. It’s now or never. I hope she accepts me. I know she might probably be shocked or discussed but I have to tell her how much I love her.

Then here she is. I look her from afar and wait her to come. She is looking gorgeous with her long black hair and her white dress. “An angel” is what I thought.

“Hi.” She smiled as I smiled back. “Hi, Ray.”

“Thank you for coming today.” I start nervously. “Of course. If it’s Minami, I would go anywhere!” she said as she held my hand. I looked at our hands and blushed.

“What’s wrong?” she asked.

“I want to tell you something that I’ve been hiding from you..” I started and she kept listening to me without interrupting me.

“A year past since we first met. And there is a feeling inside me that grew each day we were together. I don’t know if you could ever accept me, but I…. I… I love you, Ray.” I said while looking straightly in the eyes. She looks surprised.

Then she suddenly smiled and hugged me. I’m a bit shocked at first but then I hugged her back.

“Finally!” she said happily. “Eh?” I looked at her confused as she broke the hug.

“I was waiting for you to say it and finally you did!! I’m so happy!” I am just staring at her emotionless. I don’t know what to say. I didn’t really expect her to be….. happy.

“Eh? I don’t understand…”

“I knew that you loved me and I was waiting for you to say it first. You know the man should say it first.” She said teasingly.

“Ray!!!” I said embarrassed while looking down with a fail expression on my face.

Suddenly she moved closer and whispered “I love you too, Minami.” Finally our lips touched and time stopped. Right know I’m the happiest person in the world.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~END OF FLASHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
“I really believed that I was the happiest person in the world. I.. I really believed that we were going to be together forever….” She said as she started to cry again. My heart broke over and over again.

“Were you going to meet her last night?” I asked hesitantly. I received a nod from her then she answered. “Last night was our second anniversary. I wanted to with her for the rest of my life, so I…. I…I was going  to…… propose to her and then I.. I  saw her with… him.” She started sobbing really hard and I hugged her again. “Shhh..” I whisper softly. “They… They.. In front of me…”

“It’s okay. Everything is going to be okay.” I assured her running my hand up and down her tiny back.

I want to help her.


TBC

Here you go, part 2. Hope you like it. I feel like I have two different styles of writing....  ope you like it!!! 

[nao707]

I WANT PART 3 ~ 

ME TOO! TakaminaBG-san please update soon!

[Haruko]

ohh I want to help her too

[Wmatsui22]

wOw !!!!

Nice Chapter 

I hope you update often if your not busy

Thank You...

[thebotole]

i like the story..
i want part 3 also..

update please.. 

[ichikawa]

I WANT PART 3 ~ 

I tripple that!! 

[fausto]

I want to know more!!!!Update please!!!

[TakaminaBG]

                                                                                        Part 1

I open my eyes lazily but closed them immediately caused by the warm rays from the sun, drilling through the window glass, illuminating my whole face. I sign irritated as I slowly get up from the bed and close the curtains quietly trying not to wake up the beauty that was sleeping next to me.

I walk towards the bed and sit next to her. I watch her silently as I bring by hand and slowly remove the bangs covering her face. “Minami” she whispered in her sleep. Hearing that, I smiled.  She is so beautiful. I can just sit here and watch her sleep the whole day.

As I watch her whole face my vision stops at her lips. They look so soft and I bet they are sweet too. I really want to kiss her.

I smile and without realizing it I start to move closer to her. I know I’m a coward but I really want to kiss her. Is it wrong wanting to kiss your best friend? Am I wrong for…. loving her?

I move closer and closer. And finally I closed the distance that was remaining between us. I lost my self completely. Like I thought her lips really are sweet.

I quickly broke the kiss not wanting to wake her up. It’s a good thing she didn’t because if she had woken up it would’ve been really awkward.
What would she say If she knew I kissed her just now?

I get up from the bed and go downstairs to prepare a breakfast. Knowing Atsuko she would be hungry when she wakes up. That girl, despite her sexy, thin body can eat. Give her a truck of food and she will eat it, all of it!

Atsuko’s POV
My alarm starts ringing and I quickly get up from the bed startled. I turn it off and look around  and see that Minami is not here. “She is probably in the kitchen.” As I get from the bed and head towards the kitchen my phone interrupts me.

I extend my hand and took the phone. I open it and as I read the name I smiled brightly.

 From Aoi
Atsuko, how are things going?
I haven’t been doing much…..
Actually, I just got up now.
What are you up to today?

His name is Nakamura Aoi. I’ve had a crush on him since junior school. Wait? Is he asking me on a date? Finally!! I have to go and tell Minami!

End of Atsuko’s POV

Minami’s POV

As I’m almost done with preparing the breakfast I felt hands wrapping around my body, hugging me from behind. I smile softly, but that didn’t last long. “He asked me on a date!!” she said happily.

I slowly turn around and make a fake smile not bothering to ask who it was, because I already know..

Nakamura Aoi….

“Finally.” I said as I put the dishes on the table. I want to get out of here.

I quickly gather my things and head to the door.

“Minami, where are you going?” she asked as she grabbed my hand. “Home“ I said coldly trying to stop my tears not wanting to worry her.

“Aren’t you going to congratulate me?” she asked sadly. She is breaking my heart and now she wants me to congratulate her.. I’m her best friend, so I have to, right?

“Congratulations!” I said trying to make a happy expression for her. I take her hand of off me and run away.

“Minami?” she called me but I didn’t even bother to turn around.

At The Train Station

After the date with him when she starts telling me how good it went, I won’t be able to stand it!

I began to cry and put my hand to cover my eyes. “I’m being stupid” I thought.

I have to stop being like this…

I should let Atsuko be with whoever she likes…

But, how? I ask myself.

Suddenly I heard a familiar voice calling me. “Takahashi – san? Are you waiting for someone?” he asked.

I turn around and see a familiar boy. “We talked the other day.” He said smiling.

“The other day?” I asked.

“Ah, I saw you when I was looking out the train window.” He said. “So I got off at Nakao – Kachimachi and rode back over here.” Then he asked again.

”Are you waiting for someone?”

I looked down at the ground and answered. “No – Nobody.”

We just stand there for some minutes waiting for the train to come.

“So…” he starts hesitantly.

Then he starts messing his hair and I look at him confused a little. “What is he doing?” I asked myself.

“So… Um.. What are you doing? He asks.

“Th – There something else as well…. The reason I took the train back… When I saw you standing there…. I really wanted to talk to you!!!” he suddenly blurted out leaving me totally shocked and speechless.

 “Ta – Takahashi – san, is there anyone you are going out with?”

“If there isn’t…. I…. Won’t you please go out with me?” he asked blushing.

“We never talked in middle school, but…. In elementary school you… Ah, a mail!” he continued talking while sweating.

I closed my fist and said. “Okay”. He was a bit shocked. “Eh?”

“Okay, I will go out with you.”

 I know, I know why I’m doing this. But I want to stop this feeling. I want to stop loving her. I want to…. Forget her.

The Next Day

At The School

Atsuko’s POV

“Ah! Atsuko, you finally showed up!!” said Yuko.

“Ah, Yuko. I’m late because my hair was a mess when I got up this morning. You understand, right?” I said nervously.

“I know what you mean. You were so shocked, you couldn’t sleep, right?” she said awkwardly.

“Huh?” I asked not really knowing what she is talking about.

“Me too. Never in a million years would I have thought that, Takamina, would beat me…”

“Huh, Takamina?” I asked still not knowing what she is talking about.

What about Takamina. Has something happened to her? I can’t help but worry, she is my best friend. Yesterday she was strange. Is she sick?

“You’ve met him, right? What kind of person is he? She asked me curiously.

“Eh? Met who?” I haven’t met anyone I told myself.

“Isn’t obvious? I’m talking about, Takamina’s boyfriend. What, boyfriend? Since when?

I can’t believe she has a boyfriend. We are best friends, but she never told me she had someone she liked.

I should be happy, right?


TBC

This fic is dedicated to Ichikawa - san!! a little bit late, but Happy birthday from me too!! A little bit crappy but hope you like it!!