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Title: Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] Dec.19,2012
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 08, 2011, 12:27:55 PM
 :) Hi everyone~ It's my first time writing a fanfic so it might not be a good one and I just wrote this out of a blue.. :err: just wanna write it... But I still pull out all my courage to post this here  :depressed: Hopefully it won't be as bad as I think it is.... :cry: And I do not know if I will write any more... depending on my mood I guess  :nervous Well, thank you for reading this  :kneelbow: And I guess this is a One Shot? And excuse me for my grammar  :P



Table of Contents:

One Shot >>> Two Girls' Secret Feelings (Below)
OS >>> [White Christmas] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg975210#msg975210) Kai x Acchan
Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg977073#msg977073) Atsumina
Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 2] Preview (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg979149#msg979149)
Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 2] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg982909#msg982909) UPDATED 11/12/24
OS >>> [Gladiator] (Part 1) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg980182#msg980182) Atsumina
OS >>> [Gladiator] (Part 2) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg980370#msg980370)
OS >>> [Gladiator] (Part 3) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg980407#msg980407)

Second Identity - Visual Prince >>> Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31117.msg968133#msg968133)
Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 2] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31117.msg971338#msg971338)

Not OS >>> Not OS [Prologue] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg966794#msg966794)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.0)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 2 Part 1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg967153#msg967153)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 2 Part 2] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg967153#msg967153)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 3 Part 1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg967947#msg967947)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 3 Part 2] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg968145#msg968145)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 3 Part 3] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg968267#msg968267)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 4 Part 1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg969052#msg969052)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 4 Part 2] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg969217#msg969217)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 4 Part 3.1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg972107#msg972107)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 4 Part 3.2] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg972286#msg972286)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 5 Part 1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg972439#msg972439)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 5 Part 2.1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg972757#msg972757)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 5 Part 2.2] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg972803#msg972803)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 5 Part 3] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg973097#msg973097)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 6 Part 1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg974158#msg974158)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 6 Part 2] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg974475#msg974475)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 6 Part 3] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg976064#msg976064)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 7 Part 1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg981864#msg981864)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 7 Part 2] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg983523#msg983523)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 7 Part 3] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg984107#msg984107)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 8 Part 1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg984316#msg984316)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 8 Part 2] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg984581#msg984581)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 8 Part 3] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg987679#msg987679)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 9 Part 1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg988378#msg988378)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 9 Part 2] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg997392#msg997392)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 10 Part 1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg1020973#msg1020973)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 10 Part 2] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg1035621#msg1035621)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 11 Part 1] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg1050983#msg1050983)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 11 Part 2] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg1051038#msg1051038)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 11 Part 3] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg1052721#msg1052721)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 11 Part 4] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg1102048#msg1102048)
Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg1132863#msg1132863)UPDATED 19/12/12




Two Girls' Secret Feelings


Tomochin's POV

It was always her alone who noticed my change in behavior, when I'm mad or sad. She's always there when I needed someone to comfort me and talk to me. She always know how to cheer me up, she was always there for me. Always...

And now I that I know that I've fallen for her, I no longer know how to face her. My heart beats so fast and rapid when I'm with her, when she's near to me. I can't stop thinking about her when I don't see her. But I will keep this feeling to myself because I'm afraid of losing her, it is better remain best friends rather than losing her, not being able to talk to her or touch her. I'll keep this feeling deep inside box in my heart and lock it so that she will never find whats inside the box.

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"Hey Tomo!" she called to me, which made my heart skipped a beat.
"What? Takamina" yes.. the small little girl who was the captain of AKB and Team A was the one who I've fallen for.
"I was gonna ask if you wanna grab a bite with us after the practice" looking at Haruna, Miichan, Acchan and Yuko.
"Sure, why not?"
"Yatta! Then let's meet in front of the building after the practice." Takamina says happily, then she returns to her friends.

I was really happy that Takamina has invited me to get something to eat after practice, so I dozed off for awhile. Then I realized that I was late for 30 minutes!!!
I hurriedly ran to the front of the building but I do not see anyone there so I thought they already went leaving me here.. feeling the pain in my heart. Well, I can't blame them since I was late for 30 minutes afterall. I guess they just went without me.. as I was losing the hope I spotted the small captain there standing rubbing her hands since it was cold today. I was shocked!
"Takamina?!" Then she turned and walk towards me.

"Mou~~~ You're so late Tomochin" as she pouted.
"You've been waiting for me for all these time???"
"What do you expect???" exclaimed Takamina.
"Why did you wait for me? Takamina.." I asked
"Well.. I want to eat with you Tomochin" she blushed as she said.. waaa she's so cute when she's blushing~~
"By the way, why were you late for 30 minutes?!! Do you know how cold it was out here????" she said while she pouted at me.
"Well... I..." I can't tell her that I was too happy about her invitation that I have dozed off for 30 minutes can't I..... "Well I've got some business to take care off" I lied.
"Anyway, let's hurry since the others are still waiting for us at the restaurant" she said while pulling me. My heart starts to beat so loud and fast that I was afraid that Takamina might notice it but I do not want this moment to end.

Just when I've said that I wanted the moment to last forever, we were now in front of a restaurant. As we went in we saw Haruna, Miichan, Acchan and Yuko there sitting down chatting and enjoying their food. Then Takamina shouted out  "Oi! Didn't I tell you guys to wait for us???" as she let go of my hand which made me feel disappointed as she went to join them.

"You guys were sooo late!" says Yuko while trying to grope Haruna.
"Yea! You guys were late for almost 40 minutes!!" says Haruna while smacking Yuko.
"Whaff are you guays doaing aloakne togeather?" smirked Miichan as her mouth is full of food.
"Swallow before you speak." says Takamina as she shake her head.
"Well, we're late because Tomo was late for 30 minutes!" says Takamina as she ordered her food.
"Tomo, why were you late for 30 minutes?" Acchan asked
"Well.. um.. I was late.. because.. I have some business to take care off" I said as I blushed.
"What business?" asked Miichan with her eyes full of curiosity looking at me.
"Nothing" I said while I averted my eyes from Miichan and place my order to the waiting waiter.
"Hmm.." says Miichan while smiling at me as if she knows what I'm thinking about.

After eating, we all went home separately Haruna with Yuko clinging on her and I'll go with Miichan since we were going on the same direction leaving Acchan and Takamina since they live near each other. Acchan put her arm around Takamina's as they were laughing and walking back home, seeing it makes my heart bleed it hurts a lot but there's nothing I could do. After reaching home I just slouch on the bed and close my eye while thinking about Takamina as I slowly fall asleep.

Acchan's POV
We were always with each other, and I really enjoy laughing and chatting with you everyday. You would always cheer on me when I don't have confidence with myself or when I'm feeling depressed. You will always share your happiness with me. Your smile always save me from all the problems I had. You are a very important person to me and I thought that we were best friends until... when I found out that I actually love you more than best friends.

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"Aaah.. I'm hungry" I said while rubbing my tummy. Hearing this Miichan suggested that we should grab a bite after we finished practicing our dance as she drools.
"That's a great idea Miichan" says Yuko who was clinging onto Haruna while Haruna trying to remove Yuko's hand from her waist.
"Yea! Why don't we also invite Tomochin?" says Takamina as others agreed with her. Hearing this I feel a bit jealous, not that I hate Tomochin its just that.. I didn't want Takamina to be the one who suggested it. Then Takamina starts walking to Tomochin and invites her, seeing it I started to pout and Miichan seems to notice it.

"Why? Are you jealous? waifu~" says Miichan playfully.
"Wha.. what? of.. course I.. I'm not jealous!!!" I stuttered...
"Oh~ Really??" says Miichan with her devilish smile. I ignore her as I watched Takamina walking back telling us that Tomochin will be joining us later.

After the practice, everyone was at front of the building now.. except Tomochin and we've been waiting for 10 minutes..
"Where's Tomochin?" asked Miichan as she rubs her tummy since she's really hungry now.
"Takamina, you sure she's coming?" asked Haruna doubtfully.
"Yes I am!" shouted Takamina as she peeks inside seeing no one.
"Well, you guys go and grab a sit first I'll wait for her then we'll meet you guys there. But wait for us before ordering." said Takamina
I wanted to say no but....
"Yea, let's go first" said Miichan who's really getting impatient since she's getting really hungry.
So Haruna, Yuko, Miichan and I decided to go first.

After reaching the restaurant, we grab a sit and Miichan starts placing order like there's no tomorrow.
"Miichan, I thought Takamina said to wait for them" I said
"Come on, I'm really starving here. You won't want me to die of starvation do you, waifu~?" says Miichan as she display her puppy dog eyes.
"Yea, let's eat first and wait for them" says Haruno as she trying to discipline Yuko on her seat.
"Nyan Nyan~~~ I wanna eat you~~" Yuko said and earning a smack from Haruna after she says that.

"Ain't Takamina and Tomochin a bit late? It's been 30 minutes already" I said worriedly.
"Well, maybe they decided to ditch us and enjoy dinner together" Miichan jokingly said which made me worried.
"Are you worried??" laughed Miichan as she smirk.
"I.. I.. I'm not!" I shouted as I pouted at her.
"Alright, alright I'm just joking" says Miichan as she eats her food.

What if.. what if.. Takamina really ditch us and enjoy her dinner with Tomochin?? I starts to think and feel my heart in pain when I think about the possibility.
Mou~~~ It's all Miichan's fault now that I'm really worried about it!


Then I saw Takamina holding hands with Tomochin as they came in the restaurant.. I feel sour and pain in my heart.
"Oi! Didn't I tell you guys to wait for us???" shouted Takamina as she join us.
"You guys were sooo late!" says Yuko while trying to grope Haruna.
"Yea! You guys were late for almost 40 minutes!!" says Haruna while smacking Yuko.
"Whaff are you guays doaing aloakne togeather?" smirked Miichan as her mouth is full of food.
"Swallow before you speak." says Takamina as she shake her head.
"Well, we're late because Tomo was late for 30 minutes!" says Takamina as she ordered her food and one of my eyebrow raised I then asked..
"Tomo, why were you late for 30 minutes?" I asked because I was really curious about it.
"Well.. um.. I was late.. because.. I have some business to take care off" Tomo said as she blushed which made me shocked and worried.
"What business?" asked Miichan which I was also curious about.
"Nothing" Tomo said while she averted my eyes from Miichan and place her order to the waiting waiter but I feel that it was not nothing.
"Hmm.." says Miichan while smiling at Tomo and I could feel that Tomo felt uncomfortable with Miichan's smile.

After eating, we all went home separately Haruna with Yuko clinging on her and Tomo with Miichan while I was able to go home with Takamina since we live near each other. I put my arm around Takamina's as we were laughing and chatting while going home and I hope that this moment will never stop which I know was impossible since now we're in front of my home.

"Well then, Bye Acchan see you tomorrow" says Takamina waving her hands as she started to walk away.
"Un, Bye Takamina see you tomorrow" I said while smiling although I felt a bit lonely.
After that I just lie on my bed thinking about Takamina and I felt lonely because I want to embrace her.
Then suddenly I received a mail and its from Takamina!

Forgot to say Goodnight~ (^_^)
Sweet dreams Acchan~

Takamina


Smiling at the mail, I slowly fall asleep while holding on my mobile.
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Flean on November 08, 2011, 12:49:52 PM
Woh!!!  :w00t:  nice2~~  :twothumbs   Tomo and Acchan secretly falling in love with Taka!!!!  :inlove:

Taka so lucky!!!!  XD  I like this!!!!  :heart:

oh, btw...  :welcome  and nice to meet you~~~  :nervous

please write more~~~  :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Prologue]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 08, 2011, 05:54:16 PM
@Flean Thank you so much for reading it :kneelbow: Hopefully I'll be able to write more  :)
@Skytsuna Thank you for spending ur time to read this  :)

I've just got this idea when I was dozing off just now so I was wondering if it will be a good idea to write more about it. So here's a small part about my new inspiration  :nya:

Prologue

Takahashi Minami, Kojima Haruna and Minegishi Minami has known each other since they were born, because their parents are close friends and they have also been trained to be an undercover agent by their parents since they were young. They learn many types of martial arts such as Taekwondo, Karate, Boxing, Judo, Akido and so on, learn about different types of guns and firearms and how to use them, learn how to hack into the security systems, learn how to speak and understand at least 10 languages, learn how to ride and drive motorcycles, cars, vans, airplanes, helicopter, ships and so on, and learn social skills. Since they are going to become an undercover agent they are required to ace and be knowledgeable in many areas/fields.

They have solved many cases already since their debut as undercover agents last year. And they are really popular because of their looks, ability, family background and they are the youngest undercover agent in Japan (they are 18 years old only)!!! Everyone in Japan knows them!! But because of their popularity it's becoming hard for them to act as spies in the illegal organizations, so they have to disguise themselves every time which is tiring for them.

Their next mission was to gather informations and evidence about something 'fishy' going on in AKB Highschool (it's a co-ed school) and to find out who is the mastermind behind all these. This time they have to cross dress as guys since their female form is really well-known now... But little did they know that they will actually be turned into boys!!!!!!
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: incun123 on November 08, 2011, 06:04:41 PM
Ur so awesomeeee!!!
Iyaaaaaaaa takachin i luv takachin!!! :x
Plz write more takachin~
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Flean on November 08, 2011, 07:17:18 PM
owh!!! Takaboy!!!  XD  undercover agents and idols... that's just so mendol...  :twothumbs

make it KaixAcchan!!!! onegai!!!  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Haruko on November 09, 2011, 04:48:24 AM
kaixacchan its good for me :D
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: ilovecandiedapples on November 09, 2011, 05:07:46 AM
i really like your 2 stories  :heart::
* two Girls Secret Feelings i never would've expected that both acchan and tomochin would fall for takamina ( and of course she's oblivious, but for how long and who will she choose) so many questions/ so little time lol :twothumbs
* and the prologue do i smell a mendol themed fanfic, badass no3b ftw :thumbsup
anywho i'm going to stop blabbering and just say that you're super and :welcome to jphip !!!! :)
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 1]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 09, 2011, 07:22:48 AM
@incun123 haha I quite like Takachin too  :)

@Flean Hehe.. It will be KaixAcchan  :lol:

@Haruko  :) KaixAcchan  :peace:

@ilovecandiedapples Thank you so much  :) for reading and liking it  XD


I've tried  :err: hopefully it's not that bad..... I'll try to update the next chapter soon :mon study:
Please excuse me for my grammar  :P And thank you for reading  :kneelbow: And I haven't decide a title yet....  :OMG:



Chapter 1

Three girls can be seen sitting on the chairs in a Cafe shop... One eating cakes hungrily, one playing psp and one just staring out......

The short girl with a big ribbon on her head let out a big sigh* as she put her chin on the table and slouched on her chair as she asked "Why do we have to disguise ourselves as guys?"

"Well it's because we're too well-known now in our female form now duh! Takamina" says a cute girl while eating her cake like there's no tomorrow.

click.. click.. click.. is the only thing that can be heard from the girl playing psp.

"I know! But.." the ribbon girl, whose name is actually Takahashi Minami a.k.a. Takamina to her friends, wasn't able to finish her sentence since her phone starts ringing~  Kuchibiru Furezu Kisu ga dekitara~ Kimi wo Kimi wo...
"Hello?" answered the ribbon girl.
"Eh? Right now?.. Okay I got it" after that she closes her mobile and keep it in her bag and then she turns to her friends.
"Well.. Dad just called me and said that he wants to meet us at the Police Headquarter right now and tell us to go there fast."

"Eh?! Why? I though we're having a day off today and I haven't finish eating yet!" pouted the cute girl that was eating cake.

"Well we have no choice Mii-chan (full name is Minegishi Minami), so let's hurry up. It could be an emergency! And Haruna stop playing!"

"Wait Takamina, I almost clear the level" says the girl playing psp, or Kojima Haruna.

sigh* Takamina pays the bill and drags her friends out of the Cafe and dump them inside her BMW Active Hybrid 7 before she starts the engine and drive to the Police Headquarter.



Police Headquarter Meeting Room

“Hehehe… I can’t wait for them to try out my newest invention!” says a middle aged man who is in his lab coat smiling devilishly to himself.

“Oi, Takumi you think it will work?” asked the short middle aged man with rough features that made him seems intimidating and he has glasses on.

“Of course it will! I’ve tried it a few times on my assistant already! Stop being such a pessimist Hiroshi! Be like Kenji! He’s not complaining at all.” shouted the man who is in his lab coat with his index finger pointing at the last middle aged man who seems to be spacing out.

“Huh? What did you say?” asked the confused man who was spacing out just now.

The man in his lab coat or rather Minegishi Takumi rolled his eyes as he says, “STOP spacing out Kojima Kenji!!!”

“Maa, maa calm down Takumi, it’s not the first time Kenji spaced out right?” says Takahashi Hiroshi trying to calm his friend down.

Then suddenly they heard a squeaky noise that seems to come from the tires of a car and some screaming, cheering and shouting from the female officers downstairs.

“Oh! I think they have finally arrived!!!” says Takumi excitedly as he jumped out of his chair.

“Seems so” answered Kenji as he got up from his chair.

“Well let’s go welcome them” says Hiroshi with a big smile on his face showing his dimple as he opens the door.

At the Lobby

Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~~~~~~ It’s them!!!!! Wow!!!! The Aces of the Undercover Agent!!!! They’re so cool!!!!!! And blah blah blah could be heard everywhere. You might thought that a Hollywood Star is here, but no. It’s actually the famous undercover agents Takahashi Minami, Kojima Haruna and Minegishi Minami.
As the three famous agents come out of the car, they could see and hear a crowd of people there screaming.

“Wow! What’s wrong? Why are there so many people? A Hollywood Star coming?” asked Takamina who was surprised from the crowd.

Minegishi Minami rolled her eyes as she answered, “Of course not! It’s US the crowds are screaming for!!!”

“Eh?! Oh!” answered Takamina I know that we’re famous.. but not this much…

Sigh* “Takamina can be clueless sometimes” says Kojima Haruna as she shake her head.

Suddenly the crowd parted into two forming a way as three figures walked towards the three best friends.

“Hi girls.” says the three figures.

“Oh, Hi Dad” answered the three girls as they saw the three middle aged man walking towards them.

“Well let’s waste no more time and go to my lab now!” says Minegishi Takumi excitedly while showing his famous devilish grin.

“Huh? Lab?” asked the girls confusedly.

“We’ll explain it later.” answered Takahashi Hiroshi.

At the Lab

“So… could anyone give us the explanations now?” asked Mii-chan irritated since she was forced to come here when she was having a good time eating her cakes.

“Okay, okay calm down Mii-chan” said her father, Takumi. “Well, you girls are here to test this new invention of mine” said Takumi excitedly as he told his assistant to bring in his new invention.

“Huh?!” says the girl in unison.

“Your next mission is to disguise yourselves as guys and gather information in the AKB High school right?” says Hiroshi.

“Yea…”

“But there is still quite a bit of risks that you might be found out that you are girls! And it is always better to reduce the risks so…” Hiroshi was cut off by Takumi.

“So… TADA!!!! I invented this Super Ultra Transformation Machine Max!!!!” exclaimed Takumi as he pointed at his new invention.

It was a huge machine with many wires and buttons and there was something like an empty space, big enough to fit 2-3 people in it, and many lights flashing. Then on top of the machine there is something big written on it… “The Super Ultra Transformation Machine Max”

The three girls looked at the machine then look back at Takumi and said, “So? What does it do?”

“Hehe… don’t be surprised!!! It turns male to female and female to male!!!!!” shouted Takumi with excitement.

“What???!!!!!” shouted the girls with faces of disbelief in it.

Then Takamina accidently slipped out the words.. “Masaka….” as her face turned pale.

Seeing this Takumi flashes his famous devilish grin again and said, “Yes.. You girls will be turned into BOYS!!!!!!!”


The three girls then just stare at Takumi with the face of you-are-joking-right? As Takumi smiled at the girls widely and wriggle his eyebrows……


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Once again.. Thank you for your time for reading this  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Flean on November 09, 2011, 07:36:23 AM
“So… TADA!!!! I invented this Super Ultra Transformation Machine Max!!!!” exclaimed Takumi as he pointed at his new invention.
LOL...  :lol: Super Ultra Transformation Machine... This is new...  :twothumbs 

I can't wait to read next chap!!!  XD  they tuning into boys~~ boys over flower~~ LOLOL...  :inlove:

Update soon...  :bow:

btw, I love their dads chara~~ like father, like son daugther.. hahaha... :rofl:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: kahem on November 09, 2011, 08:32:08 AM
Hehehe it seems that Takamina is very popular~

ROFL they will be turn into boys hahahah
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 2 Part 1]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 09, 2011, 04:45:12 PM
@Flean Hehe.. yea they'll be turn into boys but not yet.. I haven't finished that part yet  :err: And I also love their fathers' character  :wub: I totally agree with you  :on GJ:

@kahem Thanks for reading  :kneelbow: and  :twisted: they will become boys soon~  XD

Again.. haven't decide on a title yet....  :OMG: and excuse me for my grammar  :P



Chapter 2


Part 1

“Wait! Wait! Wait! This is a joke right?” asked Takamina with Haruna and Mii-chan nodding furiously.

“Nope I’m not” answered Takumi still wriggling his eyebrows and smiling at them.

Seeing the girls faces turning pale Hiroshi said, “Don’t worry girls, it’s only temporary. You could be turned back into girls again with the same machine.” giving the girls a reassuring smile.

The girls feel a bit more relief as Takamina asked, “Dad, are you sure that we will be able to turn back to girls again?”

But instead of Hiroshi, Takumi answered “Of course!!! Who do you think invented this??? And I’ll show you how it works! Come here Susan”

Susan, Minegishi Takumi’s assistant, came in and nodded as she understand what she should do. Then she walked in the empty space of the machine, then Takumi clicked on something then the door closed trapping Susan inside.

“Now girls.. watch! in 5 minutes you will see a male Susan or who I named Tarzan!!!” says Takumi as he pressed a big, circle, blue button.

Then suddenly there is some noises coming out from the machine as the machine shakes, the girls watch in discomfort because they know it will be their turn soon.


5 Minutes Pass……


Then the door suddenly open letting out steam of gases and a figure slowly walks out of the machine…

The girls try to scrutinize the figure… what they see is a man with short black hair and slim body walking out of the machine.


“Wow……..” says Takamina.



“She… or rather he…” says Haruna.



“looks really……” says Mii chan as she stares at the man.



Then they say in unison….




“plain…….” says the girls as the man now standing in front of them sad of what they’ve said.



……….. silence filled the room because of the the girls comment on the effect of the machine.



“Hahaha.. well girls this machine only bend your genes to turn you into your opposite sex, whether you will look hot and sexy or not still depends on your own genes.” explained Takumi as he understand the girls’ comment.

“Oh…”

“Well then, who’s going in first?” asked Takumi as he stares at the three girls.

The three girls look at each other….

“Hey! Why not Takamina? Since she’s like a boy from the beginning already” says Mii chan while pushing Takamina towards the machine.

“Yea, yea!” agreed Haruna as she helps Mii chan to push Takamina towards the machine.

“Wait! Wait! Why me?!” shouted Takamina as she is resisting Mii chan and Haruna’s pushes against her body.

“If not you then who?” asked Mii chan as she continues to push Takamina towards the machine together with Haruna.

“I said WAIT!!!!” shouted Takamina as she free herself from Mii chan and Haruna. Then she continues “It isn’t fair!!!” as she glare at the two girls.


……… Silence filled the room once again, but was broken when Mii chan thought of an idea.


She smirked to herself before she speaks then she raise her right hand up in the air she shouted “Alright, alright! I’LL DO IT!” which shocked everyone in the room. Then she winked at Haruna who seems to understand what she means as she nodded.

“No! I’LL DO IT!” shouted Haruna who also raised her right hand up in the air which earns everyone’s staring to her and Takamina was dumbfounded when she heard what Haruna and Mii chan said.

“NO, I’LL DO IT!”

“NO, I’LL DO IT!”

Takamina stares at the two who was fighting to be the first to be changed into a boy. I thought they didn’t want to and was pushing me to it…. And what is happening now??!!! I can’t understand it!!!

Then Takamina decided as she raised her right hand up in the air, she shouted “I’LL DO IT!!!” Then she saw a smirk on Mii chan’s face……

Then at the same time Mii chan and Haruna said “Douzo, douzo, douzo...” to Takamina which left her dumbfounded and agape.



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 :kneelbow: Once again Thank You for reading~
Hopefully I can finish the next part soon  :mon study:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Sydney W on November 09, 2011, 06:02:10 PM
great ~~~
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: kahem on November 09, 2011, 06:12:41 PM
Hahaha poor Takamina but it smelled the trap from kilometer away ^^
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Flean on November 10, 2011, 01:33:29 AM
LOL... Taka and her fail in life chara~~  :lol:  I can't wait for them to change into boys~~~  :cow:

I'll be waiting for the next part..  :thumbsup
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 2 Part 2]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 11, 2011, 06:23:53 AM
@Sydney W Thanks~  XD

@kahem  :lol: Yea~

@Flean  :) Here's the part~ Finally boys  :lol:

@skytsuna Yup, Takamina always failed but that's what I like about her XD

Thanks for the wait  :hee: Here's the part~~  :on woohoo:
Finally Boys!!!!  XD
And excuse me for my grammar  :P


Chapter 2


Part 2

Then at the same time Mii chan and Haruna said “Douzo, douzo, douzo...” to Takamina which left her dumbfounded and agape.

Takamina was truly shocked in how her two best friends team up against her, her mouth wide open as she stare at Mii-chan and Haruna who was smiling at her. Then she suddenly feel déjà vu.. as if this kind of situation has happened before…. Then she remembered…….


Flashback……

During their training, they are required to jump off a 32 floors high building and land using their parachute. But since they are still small they are afraid…

Young Takamina, Haruna and MIi-chan looks off from the roof of the building and swallow hard…

“Ne.. Takamina why don’t you go first?” asked the young Mii-chan

“Why??!!!” asked Takamina

“Well.. you're the most boyish and you're the bravest!” says Mii-chan

“No, I’m not the bravest although I’ll accept the boyish part” answered Takamina.

Suddenly, Mii-chan remembered something her father told her before… the method how he and uncle Kenji used to trick uncle Hiroshi when they were still young

Then Mii-chan raised her hand up into the air and shouted “Fine! I’ll do it” then turn to Haruna who seems to be shocked and wink at her, Mii-chan assumes that uncle Kenji also have told the method or story about their past to Haruna before.

After a few seconds Haruna seems to understand what Mii-chan was trying to do as she also raise her hand up in the air and shouted “No, I’ll do it” which leave Takamina agape…

After a few minutes of fighting Takamina finally raised her hand and shouted “I’ll do it!” and that's when Haruna and Mii-chan use this chance and said “Douzo, douzo..” to Takamina as Takamina said “Eh?”…


END OF FLASHBACK….


As the flashback ends Takamina mentally facepalm herself.. how could she fall for this trick again??!! When it has happened many times in their childhood already!! And now… she fell for it again….

Yes… she had failed again…

“Okay then. Takamina it is~ hurry up and go inside the machine” said Takumi who was smiling and laughing at Takamina that was still staring at Mii-chan and Haruna unbelievably.

The two middle aged man looked at each other and sigh* then nodded in agreement that Minegishi Minami is truly Minegishi Takumi’s daughter.

“Wait!” Takamina said when Takumi is pulling her now with the help of Mii-chan and Haruna towards the machine.

“What??” they all asked in unison.

“I mean…” Takamina was cut off by Mii-chan.

“I thought you said you will do it~” smirked Mii-chan.

“Well you and Haruna tricked me into it!!!”

“We did not~~~”

“Yes you did!!!”

“No, we did not”

“You did!!!”

Takumi was getting impatient now so he decided to just throw the three best friends inside the machine altogether and voila!!! Problem solved!!! Then he was smirking in how smart he was.

So Takumi took the chance when they are fighting against one another and grab them then pushed them inside the machine, the friends were shocked but before they can analyze the situation Takumi has already pushed the big, circle blue button and therefore, the door has now closed trapping Takamina, Haruna and Mii-chan inside.

Inside the Machine….

The three friends have finally snapped out from the confusion and they are trying to get out of the machine by punching and kicking it while shouting “Let us out!!!” but… nothing happened.

Suddenly, the machine started to shake and make noise and they friends are starting to feel dizzy and lose the power to struggle.

“Ah.. I’m feeling so dizzy…. I feel like I’m burning” says Takamina who is leaning on the wall of the machine holding her head.

“Same here…” says Haruna and Mii-chan.

Outside the Machine…

“Hey Takumi… are you sure it’s fine to push three people in???” asked Hiroshi who seems to be a bit worried.

“Why not?” answered Takumi who seems to be excited in how they will look like when they come out.

“Well… won’t their genes be mixed up?” asked Kenji

“….. I guess it will” answered Takumi who haven’t thought of that question before.

“What?! Won’t anything bad happen??” asked Hiroshi who seems to be really worried now about his precious daughter.

“Think positively okay?? Maybe… maybe.. Minami chan will get some genes that will make her taller LOL” answered Takumi.

Hiroshi facepalmed himself for trusting Takumi with this body transforming plan.. but what’s done is done, all he can do now is to think positively and hope that Minami could become taller like what Takumi have just said…


5 minutes pass……….


Ka-ching the door has now slowly opened letting out all the steams inside as three figures walked out slowly.

Hiroshi, Takumi and Kenji were quite shocked to see their daughter son as they walk towards them.

Takumi and Kenji were not that shocked actually… it was Hiroshi who has his jaw dropped when he sees a young man who quite resembles his precious daughter.

“Dad? Something wrong?” asked the young man who sees Hiroshi quite shocked.

“Huh? Un.. Nope, nothing’s wrong” answered Hiroshi as he smile to his daughter or rather son now.

Susan or rather still Tarzan brought up a big mirror, big enough to let the three young men see their whole body together at the same time.

The three young men stepped in front of the mirror and were shocked in what they see…

The first young man was the tallest among the three; he has stylishly-cut dark, brown hair with streaks of red in front, the way he stands and how he looks you could see air of elegance around him and from anyone’s point of view you could definitely say that he truly is a gentleman.

The second young man was neither the tallest nor the shortest; he has longish black hair with streaks of blue in front, he is slim and has a cute and smooth appearance, he seems to be out-going and easy to approach compared to his friends.

Lastly the shortest among the three but not so short just a little below average (which he himself was shocked at how much he has grown); he has shaggy and ruffled blonde hair with streaks of lighter blonde, he has pair of fierce eyes and together with his hair made him seems intimidating, he is well-built; his body is muscular, sturdy and vigorous. To sum him all up his seems like a delinquent or a bad boy type.

After scrutinizing themselves in front of the mirror, Takamina turned back and face Takumi and asked, “Why is it that I’m blonde? Well.. I’m sure that we don’t have any blonde genes in our family”

“You see.. it seems like a little bit genes from Haruna, Mii-chan and yours it somehow turns out like that.. You know like mixing color” answered Takumi

“So is that the reason why I and Haruna have streaks of red and blue which normally people don’t have unless they highlight it??” asked Mii-chan

“Yes” answered Takumi

“I’m actually quite surprised to see that Takamina is not as short as I think she would be but now that you say that our genes are mixed a bit so I guess Takamina should thank me for her height now right?” asked Haruna with Mii-chan nodding beside her.

Takumi burst out in laughter and answered “I guess so.. since Takamina is even taller than her dad now although her height is still considered to be below average. Hahaha”

Takamina ignored Takumi’s statement because she has a bit of complex about her height and was really pleased now to see how much she has grown. Although she was a bit shocked to see herself blonde but she was actually quite happy about her own appearance as she nodded to herself again as she see her own reflection in the mirror.

Takumi was out of breath laughing when he accidently pressed on a big, red button that says SELF-EXPLOSION as he try to hold on something to prevent himself from falling.

Then suddenly the machine says “SELF-EXPLOSION IN 60 SECONDS” as the others widen their eyes at what they heard.

“O oh….” is the only thing Takumi said after what he heard.

“Everyone, hide under a table!” shouted Hiroshi as he too quickly hide under a table.

Actually this Self-Explosion doesn’t cause large explosion, it only explode the whole system of the machine since Takumi just wanted to add this function for fun.


60 seconds passed…………………





BOOOOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




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Thank you for reading  :kneelbow:
Hopefully I can update the next chapter soon  :mon study:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: ilovecandiedapples on November 11, 2011, 06:39:51 AM
yay i'm the first comment  :D
oh uh now they're gonna be stuck as guys :drool:
i really like how the story is progressing, keep up the good work and please update
(takamina and her short wo(man) complex makes me laugh, she can thank miichan and haruna for making her a little taller :twothumbs)
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Flean on November 11, 2011, 06:41:37 AM
hahahaha... LOL the flashback...  :wahaha: being fooled again and again...

“Think positively okay?? Maybe… maybe.. Minami chan will get some genes that will make her taller LOL” answered Takumi.
This really made my day~~ I was laughing hard at this... :mon lmao:

and now the machine exploded... they can't change back into girls???  :hehehe:

This story getting interesting...  :on GJ:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 3 Part 1]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 11, 2011, 04:11:12 PM
@ilovecandiedapples Thank you so much for reading  :) I'll do my best  :mon determined:
@Flean Yup  XD They'll be stuck as guys now  :mon evillaff:

Here's Chapter 3  :) Hopefully it's interesting  XD
Excuse me for my English  :P



Chapter 3


Part 1

BOOOOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The Super Ultra Transformation Machine Max self-exploded leaving pieces of it’s parts scattered everywhere inside the lab with smokes spreading around the area causing the people to choke and cough.

“cough.. cough.. cough… what the hell happened??!!!” asked Takamina as she slowly got out from the table that she was hiding under, her face and clothes were smudged by the dust caused by the explosion.

“Takumi accidently pressed on the SELF-EXPLOSION button of the machine” answered Hiroshi as he dust off the dust from his clothes.

“Why is there even a SELF-EXPLOSION button in the first place??!!!” Mii-chan taunted as her favorite dress was damaged by the explosion.

“Well…. I think it would be cool to have one…” answered Takumi as he wipes his face with his sleeves.

Mii-chan rolled her eyes and said “I know it’s cool BUT you ruin my favorite dress!!!!”

“I’m sorry Mii-chan……. I’ll buy you more clothes on the weekend and I’ll buy you dinner tonight okay?? You can order anything even the Super Glorious Fruit Cake and you can order as much as you want, it’s on me” said Takumi as he pat his chest and smile at his daughter who seems to be forgiving him already.

“Hm.. alright I’ll forgive you this time” answered Mii-chan happily as she was already thinking about what to order for the dinner tonight.

“Wait!!!!” shouted Takamina and after earning everyone’s attention she continue “What will happen to us?? The machine is now broken right???!!!!! Does it mean we won’t be able to turn back into girls again???!!!! Huh??!!!!” Mii-chan and Haruna started to panic as they realize what Takamina was pointing out.

“Calm down Minami chan, yes.. the machine is broken so you girls guys will be stuck like that, BUT don’t worry I’ll fixed it” answered Takumi confidently.

“But.. For how long???!!!!” asked Takamina.

“Well… there’s no exact time I can promise you since some of the parts are really rare and I don’t know how long it will take me to get my hands on the parts again but it will be fine right? I mean you’re going to be on your mission anyway and I don’t think that your mission will end very soon so relax.” answered Takumi.

Sigh* “Fine… I got it…” Takamina gave up since no matter what she say the machine won’t be fixed on short period of time, so the only thing she could do now is to wait.

Then everyone leaves the lab since they need to clean themselves up.



In the Shower Room

Takamina, Haruna and Mii-chan were removing their messed-up clothes so that they could clean themselves, but… Takamina have a problem…

“Er…” said Takamina as she was unsure if she would want to see her ‘new’ body part.

“Just don’t think too much about it Takamina, we’ll have to get used to it anyway or else we would be labeled as a weirdo” says Haruna who seems to have no problem at all.

“Right Takamina, you’re too self-conscious.. it’s your own anyway..” added Mii-chan as she went into one of the shower cubicle.

Takamina sigh* as she quickly remove the last piece of cloth and run inside one of the cubicle and started taking shower.

It took Takamina around 30 minutes to finally open her eyes and confront her problem; she almost fainted during her shower but nevertheless manages to finish her shower without fainting.



In the Meeting Room

“Oh! Takamina you finally arrive, you’re so slow” said Mii-chan

Takamina simply nodded and sat on one of the chair and rest her head on the table.

Seeing this Hiroshi start to speak “Seems like you guys are already tired so the explanations and trainings will start from tomorrow, you guys can go home and rest now”

“Training?? What training???” asked Mii-chan

“Train yourselves to act like a boy.. you can’t expect a boy to be acting all girlish and scream ‘Kyaa’ or whatever right? Unless you want to act as a gay character” laughed Takumi who then earned a glare from Mii-chan.

“Okay guys just go home and have a good rest for now, dismiss!” said Hiroshi.


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2 Months Later

After all the training they have in the past two months the girls (guys) finally got a one-day-break for their hard work since they will be transferred into AKB High school the next day. They all got their new names Takahashi Kai, Kojima Riku and Minegishi Kuu.

Kai let out a deep breath as he stretched his arms up high in the air. Finally a break from the training it would be a waste to not use it efficiently.

Kai wanted to go and have fun with Kuu and Riku but they seem to be busy; Kuu wanted to visit the super popular Cake shop while Riku wanted to stay home and complete his game. So Kai decided to go and buy the newest Jump, spend time in the Game Center and eat his favorite Katsudon before going home.

Right now Kai was on his way to buy the newest Jump series but then he sees two men trying to flirt with the girl who seems to be troubled by it so he decided to help her.

Kai then jogged towards the girl and said “Sorry for coming late” then he pulls the girl and said “Let’s go to the movie theater now, it’s almost time”

But then the two men blocked their way and said “Hey young man, we were with her first. Move away!”

Kai then shrugged his shoulder and said “What are you talking about? She’s my girlfriend and we’re going on a date today” which caused a light blush on the girl’s face.

The two men then laugh and said “Come on girl, we’ll have fun together. Leave the midget, he’s boring”

Kai was enraged by the comment and he feels his blood boiling, then he said “First, I’m not a midget! Second, you guys are UGLY!!!”

The two men were now really mad and they threw punches at Kai which Kai easily defend and counter them back causing them to both fall on the ground unconscious then he said “That’s what you get for calling me a midget! Hmph!”

He was then interrupted by the girl as she said “Thank you” with a bright smile on her face.

Kai was stunned by her smile, she was truly beautiful now that Kai gets to see her clearly; she has shoulder-length, raven hair and beautiful facial features, her raven hair together with her snow-white skin makes her look utterly beautiful and sexy. She wears a white one-piece with pink Sakura petals as design and a white ribbon on her chest.

Kai snapped out of the trance when the girl asked “Are you okay?”

“Huh? Oh.. Um.. I..I’m Fine” stuttered Kai.

The girl giggled and said “Maeda Atsuko”

“Huh?”

“My name is Maeda Atsuko. What about yours?” said the girl once again.

“Oh.. My name is Takahashi Kai” he answered as he let out a shy smile.



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Thank you for reading  :kneelbow:
Hopefully I can update the next part soon  :mon study:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Flean on November 11, 2011, 04:30:21 PM
It took Takamina around 30 minutes to finally open her eyes and confront her problem; she almost fainted during her shower but nevertheless manages to finish her shower without fainting.
LOL...  :lol: she almost fainted...

and she already met acchan!!!  XD  need the next update~~~ :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: RJay on November 11, 2011, 10:09:14 PM
LOL :mon lmao:
so funny can't stop laughing(in the beginning)
so sad, Takamina got tricked again

please update soon
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 3 Part 2]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 12, 2011, 06:31:41 AM
@Flean  :) Here's the next update~ :peace:

@RJay Thank's for the wait  XD

 :nervous Hopefully it's not a boring update... And please excuse me for my English  :P



Chapter 3


Part 2

“My name is Maeda Atsuko. What about yours?” said the girl once again.
“Oh.. My name is Takahashi Kai” he answered as he let out a shy smile.



“So let’s go?” asked Atsuko

“Huh?”

“I thought you’re going to bring me to the movie theater and I thought you said that I’m your girlfriend” Atsuko teasingly said.

“That.. That.. that’s because those guys…” Kai stuttered.

“So you weren’t going to bring me to watch movie?” Atsuko asked while pouting.

“Eh…” Kai can’t say no when she is pouting cutely like that… She’s sooo cute >.< Kai then pull her hand and say “We’re going”.


The Movie Theater

“So what do you want to watch, Maeda-san” asked Kai

“Just call me Acchan my friends call me that and I’ll call you Kai, okay?” says Atsuko

“Eh?”

“Dame..?” Atsuko asked while tilting her head slightly to one side.

She’s soooo cute >.< How can I say no to her… “No, you can Maede.. I mean Acchan” answered Kai.

Then they went to buy two tickets for the movie, some popcorns and soft drinks before they went inside the theater.


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At the Same Time

“I want these, that, that…” says Kuu as he pointed at the cakes he wants.

“Ha… Hai” answered the seller as she tries to keep track of what Kuu was pointing.

20 minutes pass…… Kuu has finally finished placing his order… The poor woman can finally have some rest…

“Here sir, the cakes you have ordered has been packed” answered the sales woman.

“Ah, thank you” Kuu replied as he paid the bill.

Suddenly, a tall woman with short hair walked inside the shop elegantly as if she was a professional model.

She removed her sunglasses as she say “10 Strawberry Deluxe Short Cake please, takeaway”

The sales woman then bow and said “I’m very sorry Ma’am but this young man has just bought all of it”

The tall woman then turns and glares at the happy young man who was going to leave with all his cakes.

Before Kuu was able to leave peacefully with his cakes the woman has spoken “Excuse me, sir” which caught Kuu’s attention as he turn to face the woman.

“Yes?”

“It seems that you have bought all the strawberry deluxe short cake”

“So..?”

“So I would like to ask you to sell 10 of it to me and I would pay double for it”

“Nah” Kuu answered as he turns back towards the door and ready to leave but then the woman grabbed his arm.

“What?” asked Kuu irritably as he wants to hurry up and go home to enjoy his cakes.

“Okay.. I would pay triple the amount”

Kuu the rolled his eyes and said “No matter how much you’re paying, I WON’T SELL!!!”

“What??!! What’s wrong with you??!! I’m asking you nicely to just sell me 10 of those and I’ll pay you triple!!!”

“It’s not money I want, it’s the cake!!! And do you think money can buy everything you material girl!!!”

“You.. You.. You Gachapin look-a-like!!!”

“ You.. You.. Old woman!!!”

“What??!!!”

“I said OLD WOMAN!!!” shouted Kuu

The tall woman the reach out her hand and pull Kuu’s cheek.. “You little…”

“Ouch.. ouch… it hurts… what are you doing??!! You.. VIOLENT OLD WOMAN!!! CHILD ABUSE here!!! Ouch…” shouted Kuu

Suddenly a short woman came in and said “Mariko what take you soo long….” She was too shocked to see her friend who was usually calm and mature to be fighting with a young man and calling each other names.


*****************

Meanwhile, Riku has finally cleared all his game so he decided to go buy new games to play. While walking he heard some noises like fighting from a shop he then turn and look and was surprised to see Kuu fighting with a tall woman and one short woman trying to stop them fight. Riku hurriedly call Kai.


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After the movie Kai and Acchan were hungry so they decided to eat in a restaurant. Kai of course ordered Katsudon while Acchan ordered salad and a set. They both are enjoying each others’ company and they feel like they have known each other for a long time because they feel calm and happy when they are together. They were enjoying their lunch and chatting happily when something has disturbed them…


Kuchibiru Furezu Kisu ga dekitara~ Kimi wo Kimi wo... Then Kai picked up his phone.
“Moshi moshi..?”

“Ah! Kai, it’s me Riku. There’s a trouble here and I need your help”

“What happened?”

“You see I was just walking on the street but then I think I saw Kuu fighting with a woman inside the Meteor Cafe”

“What??!!”

“Yea.. And I’m sure I alone won’t be able to stop him so I need you to come here ASAP”

“Okay, I got it. I’m coming now..” beep…. Kai closed his phone.

“Sorry Acchan, there’s an emergency and I have to go now. I’ll pay for the lunch and see you” says Kai as he hurries and leaves some money on the table and rush out of the restaurant.

“Wait….” But before Atsuko can finish Kai was already out of sight.

Atsuko let out a sigh* as she pouted “We didn’t even exchange numbers yet how can I contact you?”


*****************


Back to the Meteor Cafe


After calling Kai, Riku dashed into the Meteor Cafe and grabbed Kuu’s arm to stop him from hitting the tall woman and said “Kuu! Calm down!”

“Stop! Don’t get in between me and that OLD WOMAN, Riku”

“You Gachapin! I’m not OLD!!!” said the woman as she pinch Kuu’s cheek

“Ouch!”

It was a chaos in the shop; tables and chairs were all scattered around the shop, the sales woman was hiding under the counter crying (poor lady) and cakes were everywhere too (seems like Kuu and the woman has been using it on it other, since they both have cream on their face and all the customers have also run out from the shop) As Riku tried to calm Kuu down he felt something on his back…. as he shivers from it… I have a baaaad feeling…… Riku thought.

“Nyan, nyan” shouted the short girl who used to be pulling the taller woman away from Kuu as she cling herself on Riku’s back now.

“What?!”

“From now on you’re my Nyan Nyan” answered the short girl on his back.

“Huh? And who are you??!!”

“Oh! I’m Oshima Yuko but you can call me Yuko or Yuu-chan” replied Yuko

“Wait! Aren’t you supposed to be stopping your friend??”

“I don’t care, I found this more important” Yuko answered with a big smile on her face showing her dimple.


Now without Yuko pulling Mariko, Mariko is now free in pinching Kuu’s cheek while Kuu was also able to gain his freedom since Riku was distracted by Yuko as he pinch the Mariko’s cheek. On the other hand, Riku was trying to stop Yuko from clinging onto him but Yuko doesn’t let go at all. The pedestrian thought that there are wild animals fighting inside the shop since they saw the customers running out screaming so they called the Police, Firefighters and Zoo keepers.




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Thank you for reading  :kneelbow:
I'll finish the last part of this chapter ASAP  :mon study:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Flean on November 12, 2011, 06:51:35 AM
LOL...   What a chaos fighting over strawberry cakes... :lol:   with Yuko start clinging to Riku...  :rofl:  while a Kai on romantic date with Acchan...  :inlove:

Ganbare!!!  :twothumbs  waiting for the next part...
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Haruko on November 12, 2011, 06:54:50 AM
jaja so cool. .i think that yuuchan going to kiss riku because he doesn`t pay attention to her ajja.. aww acchan you must find our takaboy...
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 3 Part 3]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 12, 2011, 02:40:13 PM
@Flean Thanks for the wait~  XD  :mon sweat: Hopefully it's good...
@Haruko  :) Acchan found Kai~~
@skytsuna Here's the update~  XD

I'll continue to do my best :mon determined: Please excuse me for my English  :P
Douzo~~  XD



Chapter 3


Part 3

The three best friends live together in an apartment, Grand Royal Apartment, because it is nearer to the school than their homes so it would be more convenient for them to do their mission. The apartment is quite luxurious; it has indoor swimming pool, gym, spa, garage and many more luxurious equipments/facilities. Kai, Riku and Kuu lives in the 11th Floor of the Apartment, Room 121; it consists of a kitchen, living room, 3 bedrooms with toilet, one toilet near the living room (for guests use) and a balcony.

“Sigh*… What a tiresome day today is…” the two figures nodded in agreement as they dropped themselves on the sofa as they have just returned from the Meteor Cafe.

30 minutes ago…..
As Kai arrived at the Meteor Cafe he quickly opened the door and find Kuu and an unknown woman fighting while Riku is trying to protect his virginity from a short, squirrel-like girl. Kai was agape by the scene in front of him but snapped out of the trance when Riku shouted “Kai HELP!!!” Kai then tried to help Riku but the woman doesn’t let go and screamed “Don’t separate me from my Nyan Nyan you DEVIL!!!” Kai was sooo helpless… he didn’t know what to do in the situation in front of him. Suddenly he heard sirens from the police cars which he knew isn’t good because they aren’t suppose to attract attentions but he doesn’t have any idea how to get Riku free from the girl and how to stop Kuu from fighting. He’s having a headache now… and suddenly there’s an adrenaline rush when he could see the police cars, he abruptly was able to get Riku free and Kuu away from Mariko as he grab them by their collars, rush out of the Cafe and run back to their apartment leaving the bystanders confused about what ever have happened in the Cafe.



“We’re lucky to be able to get out of the Cafe before the police could bring us back for the interrogation about what happened in the Cafe” says Kai

“Yea and luckily I was able to grab my cakes on time before Kai dragged me out of the Cafe” Kuu replied as Kai face palm himself.

“Anyway Kai… I owe you one for saving my life back there” Riku says gratefully to Kai, who just nodded in return.

“BTW, how did you guys get into such a mess???” asked Kai

“Speak of that… I was trying to stop Kuu from fighting that woman when the short girl called Yuko I guess, cling onto me and won’t let go!!!”

“So Kuu, how did you get into the fight with the woman?” Kai asked

“BECAUSE SHE WANTED MY CAKES!!!!” answered Kuu

“WHAT??!!!” exclaimed Kai and Riku

“You mean you get us in all the mess just because of the cakes???!!!!” Kai cry out

“What do you mean by just cakes!!!” yelled Kuu

“BECAUSE OF YOU AND YOUR STUPID CAKES, I ALMOST LOST MY VIRGINITY TO THAT GIRL!!!” roared Riku.

“Well…. I’m sorry for that one but… It’s all because of that T. Rex (Tyrannosaurus)!!!” Kuu yelped.

“T. Rex??” asked Kai

“The nickname I made for that evil woman since she is OLD, BIG AND VIOLENT!!!” answered Kuu which make Kai face palm at how childish Kuu is.

“Anyway that's enough for today so let’s rest now since we will start our mission starting from tomorrow”

“Haaiii~ Oyasumi~”


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Meanwhile at the Akiba48 Apartment 7th Floor, Room 212

A female was there sitting alone on the couch thinking about her date today happily but quickly snapped out of it with the return of the other tenants that lives in this room with her.

“Ah, okaeri Yuko and Mari-nee”

“No!!! I want my Nyan Nyan”

“Would you keep quiet already Yuko!!!” shouted Mariko as she drags Yuko inside the living room.

“But.. But.. I miss my Nyan Nyan”

Atsuko was surprised at the state of the clothes of Mariko and was also puzzled at the conversation between Yuko and Mariko so she asked “What happened??”

“It’s a long story… I’ll tell you later but to summarize it, it’s the worst day ever!” answered Mariko as she went inside her room to clean herself.

You see, Atsuko, Yuko and Mariko has known each other since they were young so when Atsuko’s parents have to go to overseas they left Atsuko in the care of Mariko which means the Mariko is Atsuko’s guardian for now. As for Yuko she just wants to join in for fun. Although they are childhood friend Mariko is the oldest, now she is working as the school nurse in AKB High school. While Yuko and Acchan are 2nd year students in AKB High school, they are in the Entertainment Club which the members are voted by the students.

After Mariko has come out from the bathroom she made them tea before she sat down. She then took a sip from the cup of tea first before starting her story.

“You see… I was planning on buying 10 Strawberry Deluxe Short Cake but then that Gachapin has bought all of it. I even offer him double, triple the amount he has paid but he still won’t sell it to me and call me an old woman then…” before Mariko can continue Yuko has spoken.

“Then you started to pinch him on his cheek and that’s what causes the chaos in the Cafe”

“It’s not my fault” answered Mariko with a hurt face.

“Anyway I met my Prince, my Nyan Nyan there today” says Yuko happily

“BUT THAT FRIEND OF HIS CALLED KAI OR WHATEVER JUST HAVE TO SEPARATE ME FROM MY NYAN NYAN” said Yuko angrily.

Kai…??? Atsuko thought quietly… Nah, maybe just the same name as my Kai… wait… did I just say ‘my’ Kai… After realizing what she said Atsuko let out a bright blush on her face which Mariko and Yuko noticed.

Mariko and Yuko looked at each other and let out a smirk as Mariko asked “So Acchan, how’s your day today?”

“I think she met her prince today” said Yuko teasingly.

“No, I did not.. I… I just made a new friend today” said Atusko while blushing.

“Hm.. Just a normal friend?” asked Mariko teasingly.

“Moe… Mari-nee and Yuko stop teasing me”

“Okay, but you have to tell us the whole story”

Atsuko then tell Mariko and Yuko the whole story; how Kai saved her from the two men flirting with her, how they went to watch a movie then went to have lunch together.

“Heh~ So he’s your savior huh? But isn’t going on a movie and having lunch together already considered a date?” asked Yuko teasingly.

Atsuko just blushed at Yuko’s comment.

“But according to your story, you didn’t even get his number so how are you going to meet him again?” asked Mariko.

“Well… I have no idea” replied Atsuko sadly.

“Don’t worry Acchan, I’m sure you’ll meet him again like how I’ll meet my Nyan Nyan again FOR SURE!!! WAIT FOR ME NYAN NYAN!!!” declared Yuko as she stands up and put one of her foot on the sofa while pointing her index finger towards the night sky.

At the same time at the Grand Royal Apartment, Riku who was already in bed felt something and his body shivered.

Mariko and Atsuko just laugh at Yuko’s declaration of finding her prince.

Then Mariko said, “Okay girls, I guess that’s enough for today. You still have school tomorrow so go to bed now”

“Haaiii~” Yuko and Acchan answered as they proceed back to their bedroom to sleep.


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The Next Morning – Grand Royal Apartment 11th Floor Room 121

Kai, Riku and Kuu were already awake and were eating breakfast together while they turn on the television to watch the news.

Right now I’m giving report from the Meteor Cafe, you could see tables and chairs scattered everywhere inside the Cafe it’s totally beat-up inside. There are witnesses and reports saying that wild animals were fighting in here yesterday but when the police, firefighters and zoo keepers arrived there are no wild animals. All they found was a sales woman who was crying under the counter, too shocked to say anything and she was brought to the hospital the same day she was found. The police say that they will do their best and investigate what has happened in Cafe yesterday, if it truly is caused by wild animals then they will surely catch it to prevent future casualties. Blah... blah… blah…

Kai, Riku and Kuu were dumbfounded and agape when they heard the news, they didn’t knew that they would cause this much problem. Kai then turn off the T.V. he doesn’t want to hear any more of that and resume to eat his breakfast. After the breakfast all three of them leave their apartment and were on their way to AKB High school.


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Akiba48 Apartment Room 212

Mariko and Yuko were so shocked to see the news when they switch the television on.

Atsuko just commented “Wow… wild animals it’s sooo scary ne Mari-nee and Yuko”
But when she turn to see Mariko and Yuko’s shocked expression she then remembered the story they told her yesterday. Masaka…

“Wait… Don’t tell me you guys were the wild animals mentioned in the news?” asked Atsuko as Mariko and Yuko just nodded to her as they were still too shocked to say anything.

But then Atsuko burst out laughing “Hahahaha… OMG I wish I was there to see” which earns a death glare from Mariko.

“I… I was just kidding” Atsuko said nervously. Wa… Mari-nee could be really scary sometimes…

After their breakfast the three of them then proceed to go to AKB High school.


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Kai, Riku and Kuu were walking and chatting as they are nearly there.

“I’m starting to be a little nervous”

“Relax~ Kai”

“I know…”

“Hey Riku, why are you so quiet??” asked Kuu

“Well… I think I feel something”

“Feel what???” asked Kai

“Something…” but before Riku could complete his sentence something jumped on him causing him to fall on the ground.

“Nyan Nyan!!!”

“OMG! No!!!! Help me Kai, Kuu!!!” cried Riku

Kai and Kuu then tried to remove the girl from Riku but she doesn’t let go.

“NO!!! Don’t separate me from my Nyan Nyan” shouted Yuko as she kicked and punched Kai and Kuu causing them to fall on the ground.

“Hey it hurts!!!” shouted Kuu but was smacked again at his back.

“Ouch!” as he turned back he saw his sworn eternal enemy…

Kuu glared at her and shouted “T. Rex” before charging on her causing both of them to fall on the ground.

“Ouch…” said Kai as he rubbed his chin that was kicked by Yuko.

“Kai…?”

“Huh?” Kai then turned back and see the friend he made yesterday “Acchan??!!!”



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Thank you for reading  :kneelbow:
I'll try to update the next chapter ASAP  :mon study:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Flean on November 12, 2011, 02:57:23 PM
Right now I’m giving report from the Meteor Cafe, you could see tables and chairs scattered everywhere inside the Cafe it’s totally beat-up inside. There are witnesses and reports saying that wild animals were fighting in here yesterday but when the police, firefighters and zoo keepers arrived there are no wild animals. All they found was a sales woman who was crying under the counter, too shocked to say anything and she was brought to the hospital the same day she was found. The police say that they will do their best and investigate what has happened in Cafe yesterday, if it truly is caused by wild animals then they will surely catch it to prevent future casualties. Blah... blah… blah…
LOL... I'm laughing really hard over the news...  :mon lmao:  wild animals were fighting... hahaha....  :hiakhiakhiak:

Need to read the next chap...  :on lol:  Update soon...  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: kiniki on November 12, 2011, 06:17:01 PM
Right now I’m giving report from the Meteor Cafe, you could see tables and chairs scattered everywhere inside the Cafe it’s totally beat-up inside. There are witnesses and reports saying that wild animals were fighting in here yesterday but when the police, firefighters and zoo keepers arrived there are no wild animals. All they found was a sales woman who was crying under the counter, too shocked to say anything and she was brought to the hospital the same day she was found. The police say that they will do their best and investigate what has happened in Cafe yesterday, if it truly is caused by wild animals then they will surely catch it to prevent future casualties. Blah... blah… blah…

OMG I can't stop laughing with this news(http://i1110.photobucket.com/albums/h456/kiniki902/kyuu/149.gif)
Hahahahahahaha So FUN :mon lmao: wild animals :mon lmao::mon lmao:
Sorry I can't stop laughing :mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
Hope you update soon :mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: RJay on November 13, 2011, 01:52:22 AM
LOL!!! :mon lmao: :mon lmao: WILD ANIMALS!!!  :mon lmao:
I can't wait for the next chapter
please update soon
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 4 Part 1]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 14, 2011, 05:50:05 PM
@Flean Here's the Part 1 of the next chapter  :) Thank you for reading and I'm glad that it is interesting  XD

@kiniki I'm really happy that my work is funny XD Here's the update~ :thumbsup

@RJay Hehe~ Thanks for reading :) And here's the next chapter  8)

Thanks for reading!!!!!!!! XD Here's the next chapter~~~ :)
And Please excuse me for my English :P



Chapter 4


Part 1


“Kai…?”

“Huh?” Kai then turned back and see the friend he made yesterday “Acchan??!!!”



“Acchan??!!!”

“Why are you here Kai?”

“Oh! Today I’ll be transferred into AKB High school with my friends, Riku and Kuu.” answered Kai pointing at his friends.

“Ah...” replied Atsuko while thinking how lucky she was now that she has met Kai again.

“What about you Acchan, why are you here?”

“I’m a student here, isn’t it obvious since I’m wearing my school uniform…”

“EH? Oh… I didn’t see that”

“Anyway want me to bring you to the teacher?”

“Yes, that would be a great help but before that I think I have to do something with that two first.” answered Kai while looking at his friends.

Atsuko look at what Kai was looking then nodded in agreement.


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“Nyan Nyan! Nyan Nyan!” said Yuko excitedly as she cling onto Riku’s back.

“LET ME GO!!!!” Riku cried out as he tried to shake off Yuko from his back.

“NO, I LOVE YOU NYAN NYAN!!!” shouted Yuko

“BUT I DON'T!!!”

“I WON’T LET YOU GO, NYAN NYAN” Yuko shouted while tightening her grip on Riku.

“HELP!!! SOS!!!” Riku cry out.


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Announcement: Now the pinching fight between Kuu senshuu and Mariko senshuu has begun. I will be announcing the situation to the audience, I’m Ten no Koe.

Round 1
Gachapin versus T.Rex

Ten no Koe: Now let’s the fight BEGIN!!!

Ten no Koe: Oh! Kuu senshuu has made the first move!!! Kuu senshu has reached out both of his hand and pinch Mariko senshu!!!! Ouch! It seems hurt!!! Oh! Mariko senshuu didn’t back out either!!! She has pinch Kuu senshuu harder than before causing him to cry out in pain!!!! Wow!!!! She’s a strong opponent!!!! Sasuga the legendary T.Rex!!!! She may be Old but you should not look down on her!!! She’s fierce, big and VIOLENCE!!!!!!



“Ouch, ouch, ouch!!! STOP PINCHING ME!!!” yelled Kuu

“If you stop calling me old, then I’ll stop” smirked Mariko

“NO WAY!”

Hearing this makes Mariko furious so she added more strength in pinching Kuu’s cheek.

“OUCH!!!” Kuu cried out and pinch Mariko harder.

“OUUUCCHHHH!!!” shouted Mariko while adding more force in pinching Kuu.


Ten no Koe: Oh!!!! Neither the Gacapin nor the T.Rex is backing down!!! What a showdown!!! Zannen da ga.. Maeda and Takahashi san has come to stop the fight… SO Round 1 ends with a DRAW!!! Hopefully there will be a winner next time. C ya!!!


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Kai and Acchan then went and help Riku; after struggling for a few minutes they finally have Yuko to agree only clinging onto his arms. Then they went to Mariko and Kuu who was still fighting and shouting at each other.

“T. Rex!!!! OLD WOMAN!!!”

“Gachapin!!!!!”

Kai pulled Kuu in both his arm while Acchan tried to calm Mariko down.

“Mari-nee, shouldn’t you hurry? The meeting is starting soon.”

“… Yea… you’re right, I’ll go now” then she glare at Kuu before saying “I’ll deal with you later, Gachapin!” then she left.

“What??!!!...” but before Kuu could finish his sentence Kai interrupt him.

“Let’s go now. We wouldn’t want to be late on our first day right?”

“But before that, Kai and Riku shouldn’t you guys introduce me to your new girlfriends?” asked Kuu teasingly.

“What?! She.. she’s not my girlfriend!” stuttered Kai who was blushing furiously with Atsuko who was also blushing because of Kuu’s statement.

“What??!!!” shouted Riku angrily and glare at Kuu.

“I’m Maeda Atsuko 2nd Year in AKB High school and the one that left is Shinoda Mariko, the school nurse, yoroshiku onegaishimasu and hopefully we would be in the same class” Atsuko said smiling at Kai who blushed in response.

“I’m Oshima Yuko and just call me Yuko and I’m also 2nd Year, yoroshikuu!!!” smiled Yuko showing her dimple while clinging onto Riku’s arm.

“I’m Takahashi Kai, yoroshiku and just call me Kai and I’ll be transferring into 2nd Year in AKB High school today.” Kai replied smiling.

“I’m Kojima Riku, same just call me Riku. Yoroshiku”

“And I’m Minegishi Kuu, of course just call me Kuu. Heh~ So she’s a school nurse no wonder why I think she was old cause she was OLD” replied Kuu smiling widely.

After introducing themselves, Acchan brought them to the Staff Room then grab Yuko who was protesting by her collar and drag her to their classroom.



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“So you’re the three transfer students Takahashi Kai, Kojima Riku and Minegishi Kuu right?” asked a middle-aged woman.

“Yes” the three boys answered.

“My name is Suzuki Chihiro, the homeroom teacher of Class 2-A, which will be your classes. So let’s go to the class now shall we”

“Hai.”



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Class 2-A


I hope that Kai will be in this class… I do not know why but I feel like I have known him for so long, he doesn’t feel like a stranger from the first time we met… I wonder why… I feel calm and happy when I’m with him. I wonder what is this feeling that I have whenever he is around me, can anyone tell me what this feeling is? It’s the first time I have this feeling with anyone… It’s mysterious…

“Atsuko”

“Yes?”

“Are you thinking about that blonde shorty??” Yuko asked

Acchan blushed and said “No! I’m not thinking about him and he is not that short and he has a name called Takahashi Kai!”

“Hm…. Then why do you care so much about him?”

“Well… It’s not polite to call someone a blonde shorty…” Atsuko tried to explain but just earn a smirk from Yuko.

“Whatever…” Yuko rolled her eyes.


*click The door suddenly opened revealing their homeroom teacher, Suzuki Chihiro, a middle-aged woman with raven, shoulder-length, curly-long hair, she is a short and small woman (well… shorter than Kai). She wore white T-shirt with a light brown knee-length skirt and a pair of black high heels.


“Ahem! Class please be quiet. Today we have 3 transfer students.”

Murmurs could be hear everywhere in the class, since it is quiet rare to have transfer students in this time of the year and 3 is even rarer. Girls were chatting excitedly about whether the transfer students will be cute and hot guys while boys were praying for the transfer students to be cute and hot girls.

“QUIET!!!” Suzuki sensei shouted. “Please come in boys” hearing this, the girls become excited while the boys become depress.

Kai, Riku and Kuu come in one by one earning ‘Kya’ from the girls in the classroom.

Atsuko was really happy that Kai will be in the same class as her but she didn’t like the attention they are getting from the girls, to be exact she didn’t like the attention Kai get from the girls and which is the same for Yuko.

“Guys, introduce yourselves. Let’s start from Takahashi san.”

“Hai.. Takahashi Kai desu. Yoroshiku” said Kai bowing slightly earning ‘Kya’ from the girls.

“Kojima Riku desu. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu” said Riku who also bow slightly which also earns ‘Kya’ from the girls.

“Hey! Don’t go ‘Kya’ on my Riku! He’s MINE!!!” Yuko shouted and glare at all the girls in the class.

The girls became quiet… they know that it’s not a good idea to make Yuko their enemy… They have no choice but to give up on Riku.

“Please calm down Oshima san” said Suzuki sensei

“Hai…”

“And I’m Minegishi Kuu. Yoroshiku ne~” Kuu said with a wink and of course earns ‘Kya’ from the girls.



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Thank you so much for reading this  :kneelbow:
I'll work hard and update soon  :mon study:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Flean on November 14, 2011, 06:31:09 PM
Ganbare!!!  :onioncheer:  I'll be waiting for the next update~~

Acchan already fall for kai~~  :ptam-psst: nyahaha...
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: kahem on November 14, 2011, 06:57:12 PM
Seriously your fic made my day!!!!!
Hahahaha a real zoo!!!! Wild animals!!!
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: RJay on November 14, 2011, 09:46:39 PM

Round 1
Gachapin versus T.Rex

Ten no Koe: Now let’s the fight BEGIN!!!

Ten no Koe: Oh! Kuu senshuu has made the first move!!! Kuu senshu has reached out both of his hand and pinch Mariko senshu!!!! Ouch! It seems hurt!!! Oh! Mariko senshuu didn’t back out either!!! She has pinch Kuu senshuu harder than before causing him to cry out in pain!!!! Wow!!!! She’s a strong opponent!!!! Sasuga the legendary T.Rex!!!! She may be Old but you should not look down on her!!! She’s fierce, big and VIOLENCE!!!!!!



“Ouch, ouch, ouch!!! STOP PINCHING ME!!!” yelled Kuu

“If you stop calling me old, then I’ll stop” smirked Mariko

“NO WAY!”

Hearing this makes Mariko furious so she added more strength in pinching Kuu’s cheek.

“OUCH!!!” Kuu cried out and pinch Mariko harder.

“OUUUCCHHHH!!!” shouted Mariko while adding more force in pinching Kuu.


Ten no Koe: Oh!!!! Neither the Gacapin nor the T.Rex is backing down!!! What a showdown!!! Zannen da ga.. Maeda and Takahashi san has come to stop the fight… SO Round 1 ends with a DRAW!!! Hopefully there will be a winner next time. C ya!!!



This is so random :mon lmao:
LOL T.Rex, Gachapin
Though I wonder why would a school nurse would fight with a student :dunno:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: RJay on November 14, 2011, 09:49:58 PM
Please continue writing
It's getting interesting in every chapter
please update soon
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: haruhi16 on November 15, 2011, 03:54:59 AM
it's so funny! now i want the next chapter!!! <33333
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: jehovachiabi on November 15, 2011, 04:52:28 AM
AWESOME FANFIC!! I'm looking forward to more of this chapters! pls update soon !!!  :wub:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Haruko on November 15, 2011, 05:59:41 AM
wow that was amazing!! jajaj acchan you are so jealous.. but yukois the best!! all girls are afraid of yuko.. :D
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 4 Part 2]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 15, 2011, 08:44:18 AM
@Flean Thank you for your cheering  XD Now I'm filled with energy to write :lol:

@kahem I'm really glad you like it XD

@RJay Thank you for your support, I quite like comedy so I'm trying to make it funny  XD Although it may not be funny all the time  :nervous

@haruhi16 Hehe.. here's the next part :peace:

@jehovachiabi Thank you  :) I'll be trying my best 8)

@Haruko Yea, Yuko could be scary when other girls are trying to hit on her Nyan Nyan :lol:


I really like interesting and funny stories so I'm trying my best to make one :)
Although it may not be interesting all the time :nervous but please bear with me XD
I'll be trying my best to write more :peace: Thank you for your support minna :thumbsup
Here's the next part and please excuse my English :P



Chapter 4


Part 2


“Takahashi kun, please sit there beside Maeda san and if you have any problem you can ask Maeda san okay Takahashi kun.”

“Hai” Kai answered as he walks to his sit beside Acchan.

Kai smiled to Acchan “Yoroshiku ne Acchan” and sit down.

Acchan blushed and replied “Un.. Kochirakoso yoroshiku onegaishimasu”

“Minegishi kun, please sit at the most left near the window.”

“Hai” Kuu answered as he walks toward his sit and wink at the girl sitting beside him which causes her to nosebleed and fainted.

“And for Kojima kun, hm…”

“Suzuki sensei, Kanon chan has fainted from nosebleed” said the students.

“Hah?!!” Suzuki sensei replied in shock then she asked “Minegishi kun if it’s alright with you could you bring Nakagawa san to the infirmary? It’s at the most right on the 1st Floor”

“Hai” Kuu relies Well, it’s my fault that she has nosebleed and fainted… Might as well take the responsibility and bring her to the infirmary. But before that.. Hehehe.. Kuu smirked then leaves carrying Kanon in a bridal way which makes the girls in the class jealous of Kanon.

“Then back to Kojima kun…”

“HERE!! Here sensei!!! HERE!!!” shouted Yuko

“Well… then there it is” smiled Suzuki sensei while Riku has his eyes widen but have no choice so he just went and sit beside Yuko.

“Okay, now let’s the Homeroom start”


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Bang! Mariko kicked the locker on the hallway really hard, enraged about what happened earlier during the meeting.


Flashback

20 minutes ago… Teacher Meeting

“Shinoda sensei, where is the 10 Strawberry Deluxe Short Cake that you were supposed to buy for the V.I.P. guest that is coming today to the school?” asked Yamada Kanako kyoudou sensei, the oldest sensei teaching in AKB High school who is known for her strict and wickedness especially towards new and young female teachers because she envy their youngness and beauty since she has a lot of wrinkles on her face and she is old. BTW, she is already 40+ and is not yet even married and has a nickname from the students ‘Yamada Oni Baa Baa’.

Oni = Ghost or Monster
Baa Baa = Old Woman in an insulting way


“Well… it’s sold out when I went to buy it yesterday Yamada sensei..”

“Ahem! It’s KYOUDOU sensei, Shinoda sensei”

“Ah.. Hai, Yamada kyoudou sensei”

“And no matter what the reason is, I’ve assign you to buy the cakes so you’re responsible for it. Sigh* That's why I said youngsters nowadays no responsibility at all, it’s only looks that you have right Shinoda sensei.”

Mariko is really getting enraged by her statement but she has no choice but to swallow it down since she is still a new sensei here and doesn’t want to cause too much trouble especially with the famous Yamada Oni Baa Baa.

“Hai… I’m sorry”

“Hmph! Don’t think with only a sorry then you’ll be able to run away from your responsibility. I’ll tell you your punishment later but for now let’s resume the meeting which was already delayed because of your carelessness. BTW, no matter how you do it before those V.I.P. from the Education Administration come you have to bring those 10 Strawberry Deluxe Short Cakes here! Understand?!!”

“Hai…” Mariko answered while gritting her teeth.


Flashback Ends.....


“Sigh* How and where am I suppose to get those damn strawberry deluxe short cake? The Cafe is not even opened today!!! What am I suppose to do???” Mariko asked herself while on her way back to the infirmary.

“And it’s all that Gachapin’s fault!!! If he didn’t bought all those damn cakes then I wouldn’t be in all this!!! I hope and pray that he’ll choke on those cakes!!! Arg!!!”

As she slide open the door of the infirmary WHOOSH! a bucket of water falls on her head making her wet from head to toe and a BANG! as the bucket hit her head.

What the heck… happened???!!!!

Mariko with her eyes widen and mouth agape was too shocked to react on the situation she is in now, as her mind is trying to digest what have happened to her she heard someone laughing really loud. Mariko turn and see the possible culprit for the water bucket who was laughing now and can feel her blood boiling when she realizes who it was.

“Gachapin…” whispered Mariko to no one in particular.

“Hahaha… you should look at your face in the mirror Shinoda sensei~” laughed Kuu while holding his stomach which is getting hurt because he laugh too much.

“WHY YOU..!!!!” Mariko was planning to hit him but then stop; she was not in the mood for fighting nor joking with him right now. She is really mad and having headache in how to deal with her problem with that ‘Yamada Oni Baa Baa’ and now with the prank Kuu pulled on her she is in the verge of breaking down. She just squat on the floor holding her knees and starts to sob.

Kuu was shocked to see Mariko not hitting him instead she just squat on the floor and started to sob he didn’t expect Mariko to show her weak side to him, guilty conscience hit him so he went to Mariko’s side and squat beside her and said “Hey… I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to make you cry… I’ll let you hit me 100 times ‘kay? So stop crying” as he rubbed Mariko’s back to help calm her down.

“No.. it’s not that it’s just that there are a lot of things going on and I’m kinda confuse in what to do” replied Mariko who is still sobbing but started to calm down a bit.

“What happened?” Kuu asked with concern.

“Well… remember you bought all those cakes yesterday? I was supposed to buy 10 of it for the V.I.P. who is coming later today to the school and I was scolded by that Yamada kyoudou sensei for not buying it and ITS ALL YOUR FAULT!” sobbed Mariko.

“Urg…” Kuu felt more guilty now and he decided to make up for Mariko so he said “Okay, wait here” and he removed his jacket and put it on Mariko who was still soaking wet.

“Where are you going?”

“Just wait here” and Kuu dashed out of the infirmary leaving a confused Mariko.

After Kuu left Mariko wonders why she has show him her weak side when she has never show this side of her to anyone including her parents and her best friends like Yuko and Acchan. She feels that she can be herself when she’s with Kuu although they always fight, she somehow feel relaxed when she’s with Kuu so she accidently let out her weak side which now made her feel extremely embarrassed Oh God! Now he’ll use this to tease me FOREVER!!!


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On the other hand, Kuu climbed the school gates and ran out. He run as fast as he can back to the Grand Royal Apartment, he quickly run and check the refrigerator and see if there is still 10 strawberry deluxe short cakes left. He started counting 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7.. 8.. 9… Only 9 left!! Damn! He needed 1 more so he decided to pack the remaining 9 first then run and buy the last 1 from the Meteor Cafe.

After quickly packing the 9 strawberry deluxe short cakes, Kuu ran all the way to Meteor Cafe.

Meteor Cafe Closed Today was what Kuu see when he reached the Meteor Cafe then cursed himself when he remembers Meteor Cafe always closed on Monday but he doesn’t want to give up. Kuu flip up his phone and starts to call a number tutt.. tutt.. tutt..

“Hello, how may I help you?”

Kuu cleared his throat and try to raise his voice a bit then he answered “I’m Minegishi Minami and I would like 1 strawberry deluxe short cake of the Meteor Cafe RIGHT NOW at the Meteor Cafe!!!”

“Yes! Right away Ma’am!” answered the owner of the Meteor Cafe. Mii chan has helped the owner of the Meteor Cafe before when someone has send him threatening letters and she has also saved his life so he owe Mii chan his life.

5 minutes later a car stopped in front of the Meteor Cafe and the owner of the Cafe came out with a box in his hand.


“Hey! Hand me the cake and bring me to AKB High school right now!” ordered Kuu

The owner was confused and answered “Who are you? And this cake is supposed to be handed to Minegishi sama not you!”

Kuu rolled his eyes and said “Minegishi Minami has sent me to get the cake, understood???!!” Then Kuu quickly used his phone secretly and sent a mail to the owner “I’ve sent Minegishi Kuu to wait in front of the Meteor Cafe. Give him the cake and send him to AKB High school”

After receiving the mail the owner gladly hand the cake to Kuu and drive real fast and send him back to AKB High school but on the way there was traffic jam so Kuu decided to run back instead.

“Thanks” Kuu answered and run with his full speed back to AKB High school, infirmary.


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Infirmary

Mariko who has calmed down now sat on her chair with her head down while grabbing onto the jacket Kuu has lend her. What is that Gachapin planning? And why is it that I’m not worried now… And what is this feeling…? While Mariko is lost in her thought the door of the infirmary suddenly slide open and it revealed a figure who is panting hard with a lot sweat dripping from his face.

The figure walk towards her, handed her a box and said “Here…” while still panting.

“What?” Mariko asked confusedly and wonder what is inside the box.

Kuu rolled his eyes and answered “The 10 Strawberry Deluxe Short Cakes that you need so much right now”

Mariko’s eye widen unbelievable in what he has said and seeing Kuu panting while sweating she asked “You ran all the way back to get this?”

“What do you expect? I have to run to the Cafe to get the last one” Kuu answered while wiping his sweat with his sleeves.

“I thought the Cafe was closed today”

“I called the owner of the Cafe to get me 1 more of the strawberry deluxe short cake and I’m a bit late because there’s traffic on the way so I have to run all the way here”

Mariko was moved in what Kuu has done for her, she was really grateful for what Kuu has done and she said “Thank you..” while blushing a bit as Kuu’s eyes met hers.

They stare at each other intensely… Kuu can feel his heart beat rapidly and same for Mariko and slowly Kuu is getting nearer to Mariko and the same vice versa.

Now their faces were only inches apart… so does their lips… they can feel each other’s breathing and when their lips are going to touch SUDDENLY!!!

“Shinoda sensei? Minegishi kun? What are you doing?” asked Kanon who has just woken up.

Mariko was soooo shocked that she pushed Kuu away from her which cause Kuu to fall on the ground and landed on his butt hard “Ouch!” Kuu cried out while rubbing his butt.

“Ah… I was just checking his temperature.. he.. he feels like he have a headache” Mariko stuttered nervously as she explain to Kanon.

“So that's why Minegishi kun is sweating a lot and his face is so red” answered Kanon

“Yes! That's why I was trying to see if he has a fever” Mariko relies then she pulled Kuu and use her fingers to open Kuu’s eye wide and flashes the flashlight in her pocket on his eyes.

“Hey! It’s bright” Kuu said trying to free himself.

Then Mariko pulled out his tongue from his mouth and inspects it while Kuu tries to struggle “Hwe! Ret mwe go!!!”

Mariko ignored Kuu and said “Yes… He does have a fever” as she pushed him down on the bead.

“That's not good Minegishi kun, you have to rest. I’ll take care of you” Kanon said

“No, it’s okay.. You should go back to class now eto…”

“Nakagawa Kanon desu but just call me Kanon” Kanon answered smiling.

“Ah.. Then.. Kanon chan” relied Kuu with a smile and a wink.

Mariko doesn’t like Kuu calling Nakagawa san Kanon chan… and that stupid wink of his…

She hit Kuu on the head and said “Hai, hai stop flirting now and Nakagawa san you could return to your class, I’ll take care of the rest.”

“Hai…” Kanon replied sadly and leaves.

After Kanon leaves Kuu makes himself comfortable on the bed as he use the blanket to cover his body and starts to close his eye and relax.

“Hey! What are you doing??” asked Mariko

“Well… according to the school nurse I have a fever so I’m trying to rest now. And I didn’t know that you were trying to check my temperature back then” Kuu answered teasingly.

Mariko blushed… as Kuu continued “BTW, shouldn’t you give that Yamada kyoudou sensei the cakes?”

Mariko then realizes that it is almost time the V.I.P will come so she hurriedly get the box that Kuu gave her earlier then she slide open the door and said “Thank you…” quietly as she leaves.

Kuu heard it and blushed as he pulls the blanket over his head to cover his tomato-like face. Then slowly… he drifted into the world of dreams as his body is exhausted from all the running.


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Thanks for liking  :hee:
And I'll do my best for the next update  :mon study:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Flean on November 15, 2011, 09:04:11 AM
After Kanon leaves Kuu makes himself comfortable on the bed as he use the blanket to cover his body and starts to close his eye and relax.
hahaha.. Kuu.. funny as always!!  :on lol:

Mariko then realizes that it is almost time the V.I.P will come so she hurriedly get the box that Kuu gave her earlier then she slide open the door and said “Thank you…” quietly as she leaves.

Kuu heard it and blushed as he pulls the blanket over his head to cover his tomato-like face. Then slowly… he drifted into the world of dreams as his body is exhausted from all the running.
Kuu blushing~~ so cute~~~  :ptam-shy:   and Mariko "checking his temperature" sure is nice moment~~  :shy2:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: haruhi16 on November 15, 2011, 11:18:29 AM
omg MARIKUU  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: So cute  :wub: :wub:

I'm loving this!! please update soon!  :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: kahem on November 15, 2011, 02:15:41 PM
Yay Kuu gg!!!
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Sydney W on November 15, 2011, 03:14:40 PM
thank for the update..... like it very much.. please continue on next...
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Sok on November 15, 2011, 07:56:18 PM
This is so interesting and funny.  :hiakhiakhiak: :on gay:

Will be waiting for the next update. :byebye:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: kiniki on November 15, 2011, 08:47:12 PM
OMG hahaha MariKuu so funny(http://i1110.photobucket.com/albums/h456/kiniki902/yoko/2435416A6758C894467FC423BA80ED79.gif)
I'm laugh laugh laugh and laugh~ haha~~ can't stop :mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
Interesting. I'm waiting your next update :mon innocent:
hope it is about AtsuMina :mon evillaff:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: RJay on November 15, 2011, 10:22:25 PM
OMG!!! This is so funny :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
Can't stop laughing :mon lmao:
It's so sweet what Kuu has done for Mariko :luvluv2:
And they were interrupted when they're about to kiss :err: :err:
so close

please update soon
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Haruko on November 16, 2011, 06:40:46 AM
jaja kuu is a lady`s man already..

but i wanna know how acchan going to fight with the kai`s fan

and yuko jajaj how she gonna to gain the riku`s virginity ajajajja
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 4 Part 3.1]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 23, 2011, 05:52:13 PM
Sorry for the late update and I only update a little but I'll try to update more tomorrow... :nervous
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR EVERYONE THAT COMMENTED BUT I'M IN A LITTLE HURRY SO.. CAN'T REPLY EVERYONE'S COMMENT.. SORRY... :( Please Excuse me for my English :P



Chapter 4


Part 3.1

After the class ends Riku ran out of the class to prevent Yuko from clinging onto him while Yuko of course also ran after Riku while Atsuko was explaining things about the school to Kai.

“It is required for every student to join a club because club will play a big part in our school life.”

“Why?”

“You see… Our school principal sometimes will just throw in some kind of events and the students are divided into teams by the clubs they joined in and the winner gets AKB points, how many AKB points received depends on the performance of the student.” Acchan explained

“What are AKB points? And what can it do?” asked Kai

“AKB points are very important… it’s something you need to make a deal in this school whether with students or teachers”

“What kind of deal?”

“For example… Hm…” Acchan looked around the classroom and saw a boy wearing an earring. “Ah! You see that boy?” Acchan said and pointing at the boy.

“Yea..?”

“Well… Earrings aren’t allowed but he made a deal with the teachers, if I remember correctly I think he gave the teachers 10 AKB points in exchange to wear earring in school. Not only that some students also use the points to raise their grades but these kind of exchange will require more points like a few hundreds, depending on how high you want to raise your grade.”

“Eh?”

“AKB points are like something you can use to exchange to make your wish come true and each exchange could require different amount of points, some would require large amount of points while some does not require that much”

“Not only that, every month 150 AKB points are required to be submitted to the school to maintain the club. This means if a club did not submit 150 AKB points within the dead line the club will be disbanded.”

Heh… what a unique school… it’s like Give and Take… you give the points and you can take what you want…

“But is the event the principal throw sometimes the only way to get AKB points?” Kai asked.

“No, that’s not the only way but the events give the most point among all other ways, normally. Other ways include doing missions.”

“Doing missions?”

“Yes… In the mess hall there is a big board and there are many papers stick on it which we called it ‘mission’, if we complete it we can get AKB points from the teachers. And each mission level is also different so is the reward, mission is classified into 6 levels; S, A, B, C, D, and E. S is the hardest but it also gives the most rewards, as much as the event, but really hard while E is the easiest but mostly it gives only around 5-10 AKB points.” Then Acchan pulled out a card from her pocket and show it to Kai.

“You see this card? It’s called the AKB Exchange Card a.k.a. E-Card, which is used to store AKB points. And when you want to transfer the points you just have to scan this ‘shiny part’ on the card on the other card then it will ask how many points to transfer then you just have to say the amount then it will transfer the points from your card to the other card. BTW, this card also serves like a student ID so only the owner will be able to use it and when the card is lost there is GPS system so it could be found easily too.”

“Oh… But how do I get that E-Card?”

“After you joined in a club the teacher will hand you one.”


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If there's any confusion pls tell me I'll try to explain it and THANK YOU FOR READING THIS!!!!
SO BYE!!! I'M REALLY IN A HURRY.... :panic:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: kahem on November 23, 2011, 07:03:57 PM
Oh the school is like a guild ^^
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Megumi on November 23, 2011, 10:36:32 PM
 :thumbsup I agreed with Kahem here I tough of Fairy Tail manga with guild and all LoL!

But this is cool! Thank you for your update! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 4 Part 3.2]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 24, 2011, 05:48:52 AM
@kahem/Megumi Haha.. Now that you guys say it, it does sound like a guild XD


Here's the next part.... :nervous It's just the continuous of the next part so it's kinda boring this part...
Hopefully next chapter will be better :nervous
Please Excuse me for my English :P



Chapter 4

Part 3.2

“So to summarize the whole thing, AKB points are like money you use in AKB High school because you also use it to buy things/trade with students or teachers”

“Eh? Buy things from students?”

“Yup. Some club produce/make items. For example the cooking club, they sell delicious food to students and that’s another way of earning points too.”

“Then what about the clubs that can’t produce/make items? Like the sports club”

“Ah… For those kinds of clubs they get points depending on their ranking when they enter tournaments or contests”

“Hm… So what kinds of clubs are there?”

“There are many clubs here in AKB High school but the three most popular clubs; one of them is the Entertainment Club which I’m in and there are only 7 members in the Entertainment Club because the club members are chosen by the students.”

“??? What do you mean by the members are chosen by the students?”

“Every year there will be voting contest on the 7 most popular female students, and the winners will be the members of the Entertainment Club”

“The next one is the Host Club..”

“Huh?!!! Host Club???” Kai asked shocked.

“Yes, a Host Club. The members entertain their customers and the customers pay them with the points for their services and the drinks/food they bought in the club.”

This is so unbelievable….

“And the last one is the Science Technology Club; they have quite a lot of members in the club but they are so secretive. I don’t really know what they do most of the time but sometimes they will invent some high-tech products and sell it to the students and their products are always popular.”

“What do you mean by they are secretive?” asked Kai

“Well… I or most of the students do not know who the president of the Club is and the members of the club don’t talk much about what they do in the club. They also choose who can/cannot join their club and I don’t know by what standards do they use. It is really weird because they usually allow delinquent students to join the club while reject those smart students who seems to can be more of help to the club than those delinquents.” explained Acchan.

Hm… Now this is weird… They are secretive and they prefer delinquent students??? I smell something fishy going on in there… I’ll have to tell Riku and Kuu about this and we’ll have to investigate about this club. Wonder what they do… Let’s see if either one of us will be able to get in the club… Kai was snapped out from his deep thoughts when Atsuko called him.

“Kai… are you alright?” Atsuko asked with concern.

“Ah… Yea, I’m alright” Kai answered while smiling.

“So as I have said those are the 3 most popular clubs but there are a lot more clubs such as the Basketball Club, Swimming Club, Volleyball Club, Art Club, Cooking Club, etc. And you can make your own club if you submit the form to the teacher and pay 1,000 AKB points.”

“Ah! Acchan I’ve wanted to ask, why that table over there is empty since the morning?” asked Kai while pointing at the empty table.

“Oh… It’s Tomochin’s seat sigh* she skipped class again.”

“Tomochin?”

“Ah… Itano Tomomi, one of my friends who is also in the Entertainment Club, she pay 100 points to skip class sometimes.”

“Oh… So you can even skip class if you pay the points?”

“Yea… As I’ve said the points could do almost anything here in the school. Anyway…” Acchan could not finish her sentence as a bunch of girls came and surround Kai and push her away.

“Takahashi san, what’s your favorite food?”
“Takahashi san, what’s your favorite color?”
“Takahashi san, when’s your birthday?”
“Takahashi san, what’s your blood type?”


Kai was bombarded with questions from the girls and he is getting dizzy so he decided to run out of the classroom.

“AH! He has run away!!! Let’s catch him Girls!!!” one of the girls said. Then all the girls ran after Kai.

While in the classroom, Acchan was there standing… Tightening her grip as she feel blood boiling inside her and veins popping… Those damn girls… I’ll kill them… Acchan was snapped out when Yuko who was clinging on Riku came back and called her.

“Acchan… Something happened??? You look like you’re going to kill somebody” asked Yuko who was a bit afraid of the aura Acchan was giving out.

“Where’s Kai? Maeda san” asked Riku

“Just call me Acchan and Kai… he ran out of the class with girls chasing after him” Acchan replied sadly.

“Ho ho~ Are you jealous?” Yuko asked teasingly

“What?! No.. I.. I’m not jealous…”

“If you don’t like the girls chasing after him then you just have to give those girls your death glare, Acchan.” Yuko said “Like me!” Yuko added smiling.

Hm… Maybe I should try what Yuko said…


Meanwhile

“Haa… Haa…” Kai was panting from running too much.

Kai ran almost everywhere around the school already… He is now running towards the rooftop.


Rooftop

A figure opens the door to the rooftop, planning to take a nap and skip the class again. She wanted to feel the breeze and sleep peacefully and quietly but what she sees when she opened the door was students who were also planning to skip class; they were smoking and laughing with one another.

The delinquent-like students stopped laughing when they see a figure coming through the door, a beauty; she has brown, wavy long hair with beautiful facial features and a nice body.

“Wow! Isn’t that Itano Tomomi? One of the members from the Entertainment Club, she’s so beautiful!” whispered one of them.

“Yea… She’s a total babe! Let’s get her to entertain us.” whispered another one.

They nodded and agree with the plan, then the 7 of them stands up and walk towards her. “Hey Babe, wanna spend some fun time with us?”

“…” Tomochin ignored them and just walk away.

“Hey! Wait!” shouted one of them and grabbed her arms “Who do you think you are? Ignoring us?!!”

“You…” Tomochin finally speak

“Huh?”

“Don’t touch me!” Tomochin exclaimed and gives him a knee kick right on his abdomen really hard.

“Pwf!” was the only thing he shouted as he fell on the floor with both his hands on his abdomen.

“Hey you B****!” all of them are now furious and were ready to attack her.

While Tomochin just rolled her eyes and position herself to be ready to kick the hell out of them.


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Thanks for reading this ^_^
I'll do my best to update soon when I still have the motivation in me right now XD
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: haruhi16 on November 24, 2011, 05:55:17 AM
Woah! Tomochin is on Shibuya mode! Kick their ass tomochin! they deserved i! those assholes!
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Haruko on November 24, 2011, 06:12:29 AM
wow wow wow tomochina badass good one :D

jajaj yuko doing skinship always is fun

Acchan you need to proclaime you rights with kai :D
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: kahem on November 24, 2011, 08:57:11 AM
Badass Tomochin!!!! Yay!!!
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 5 Part 1]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 24, 2011, 03:01:41 PM
@haruhi16/Haruko/kahem Hehe... I like badass Tomochin too XD and Thank you for commenting :on cny2:

Here's the next chapter!!! :on cigar: Douzo~~~ :nervous Hope I'm not being too bossy XD
Same as usual, please excuse me for my English :P

BTW... I quite like TakaTomo too~ :wub: that's why I made this part 8)



Chapter 5


Part 1

Tomochin gives the delinquents kicks on their head, neck, stomach and legs. She would kick them away before they even gets to touch her but it was not effective enough since the power is not enough to knock them out so they kept getting up and charge at her again.

Damn it! If it weren’t because of this stupid injury I got from falling off the stairs this morning these guys would’ve been dead by now.


Flashback

Tomochin was walking down the stairs of her dept. but then a little kid ran past her and slipped. Tomochin hurriedly grabbed the kid to prevent him from getting injured but miss a step of the stair and twisted her ankle.

“Hey Boy don’t run on the stairs anymore”

“Ah… I’m so sorry onee-chan… Are you okay??” the boy asked guiltily.

Tomochin smiled and answered “I’m fine so just go now you’re going to be late for school.”

“Ah! Thank you onee-chan! Bye bye!!”


End of Flashback


Damn it! These guys are like cockroaches!!! No matter how many times I kick ‘em they keep getting up!!!

Tomochin is starting to wear off now since she has been kicking and defending herself nonstop for 15 minutes now.

“Haa… Haa…” Tomochin kept panting as she gave those guys a few more kicks.


Meanwhile

Kai opened the door to the rooftop and sees a girl giving a guy a beautiful side kick.

Wow… What a nice form in kicking… Ouch… I bet that hurts… That girl… she’s strong although she’s against 7 guys but it seems that she is almost at her limit…

Maybe… I should give her a hand in the fight…


A guy was going to punch Tomochin but Kai stops it and punched the guy right on his face then give him another punch right on his abdomen real hard causing the guy to black out.

“What?! Who are you??!! Trying to be a hero huh??!!! We’ll beat the hell out of you!” shouted one of the guys as he charge towards Kai but only to get a punch instead.

“Isn’t it just fair for me to help her when you 7 guys are against 1 girl??!! Aren’t you guys ashamed of yourself???!!!” Kai yelled back.

“Why you!!!!” they shouted as they all charge towards Kai.


Tomochin’s POV

Who is this guy??? Is he helping me?? Well… I can tell that he’s strong and good in fighting from the way he fights.

Tomochin is deep in thought while a guy charged at her with a pipe he founded on the rooftop of the school.

Suddenly Tomochin snapped out of her thought when she sees Kai charging towards her and grabbed her.

What?! He’s not on my side??!! Damn! I'm stupid to think that there will be someone willing to help me...“Let me go!!!” Tomochin yelled while trying to struggle herself free from Kai’s grip.

But then Kai pulled her and turned her away from her attacker but was not able to defend himself on time as Tomochin try to struggle and gave him a kick on his leg, so Kai was hit on his head real hard and starts to bleed but Kai was able to stop himself from falling down and kick the attacker right on the side of his head causing him to faint.

Tomochin who realizes what happened feel guilty about her action towards Kai OMG! He was trying to defend me… But I… kicked him instead… He’s bleeding a lot…

Kai then hurriedly kick and punched all the remaining guys until they fainted before he sat on the ground panting hard and wiped off his blood that is dripping from his head to his eyes.

End of POV


Kai’s POV

Wow… Now that I get to see her nearer she is such a beauty! Kai thought to himself as he sends some punches to the guys attacking them.

“What?! Who are you??!! Trying to be a hero huh??!!! We’ll beat the hell out of you!” shouted one of the guys as he charge towards Kai but only to get a punch instead.

“Isn’t it just fair for me to help her when you 7 guys are against 1 girl??!! Aren’t you guys ashamed of yourself???!!!” Kai yelled back.

“Why you!!!!” they shouted as they all charge towards Kai.

Kai move swiftly and attack efficiently but then he notice that the girl was deep in thought and wasn’t aware that one of the guy was going to hit her with a pipe.

Oh no! That guy!!! Kai then hurriedly and rush towards the girl and grabbed her by her hand. Then he tried to pull her away but she was struggling “Let me go!” she shouted.

Kai was going to tell her to stop struggling but it was too late so he switched their position and was ready to defend them but the girl kick him hard on his leg causing him to lose his balance and was hit on his head; then he starts to bleed.

Ouch! sigh* Why can’t this girl stay still???!!!! Was what Kai thought after he was hit.

Damn it… it’s not good… I have to finish this fight fast… if not I might not last…

Kai then hurriedly finishes them off and sat on the floor panting hard and wipes the blood that was flows down from his head to his eyes.

End of POV


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Thanks everyone for reading this  :kneelbow:
I'll do my best and update the next part ASAP :mon study:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Haruko on November 25, 2011, 06:51:06 AM
jajaj tomochin is so badass that she can kick ass of her hero..

poor kai.. you need to be more careful helping lady`s
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: kahem on November 25, 2011, 08:35:36 AM
Kai is a hero!!!! ^^
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Flean on November 25, 2011, 08:39:53 AM
I missed chap 4~~  :pleeease:  Tomochin kicking ass!!! awesome!!!  :mon woo:

Quote
Wow… Now that I get to see her nearer she is such a beauty! Kai thought to himself as he sends some punches to the guys attacking them.
Kai!!! you better not saying that to other girl except Acchan!!!!  :on voodoo:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 5 Part 2.1]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 25, 2011, 09:27:09 AM
@skytsuna Thanks for reading :) and yea.. Tomochin is actually kind but is shy to show it (my setting :lol:) XD
@Haruko Thanks for reading  XD and Yup! Tomochin's tough!!!
@kahem Yup! Kai's a hero!!! and Thanks for reading :peace:
@Flean Haha.. :lol: Thanks for reading XD But well... this part is more about Tomochin and Kai...  :nervous Acchan and Kai have to wait a bit longer :P


Yea!!! Thank guys for reading and commenting!!! XD
I'm so motivated so here's Part 2.1!!! But it is short :nervous Please bear with it :bow:
This part is the continuation of the Rooftop scene of Kai and Tomochin 8)
I'm still working on Part 2.2 I'll be sure to post it later 8) I already somehow write it down, just have to type it and edit a little ;)

SPOILER: Next part is continuation of MariMii in the Infirmary XD



Chapter 5


Part 2.1


Rooftop

Tomochin then walked slowly towards Kai, she sees Kai wiping his blood off and felt guilty about it. She wanted to say something but her voice doesn’t come out at all, “….”

Kai sensing the girl near him now spoke “What a tough girl you are, fighting 7 guys although you sprained your ankle”

Tomochin was shocked How did he know that I sprained my ankle???!!!

“Although I know that you’re strong but shouldn’t you think first before picking a fight?? If I was not there to help you, who know what would’ve happen to you.” Kai continued.

Tomochin was feeling a bit mad now but she knows that what Kai said was true… so she remain silent.

“And why did you even kick me when I was helping you? You see, I even got injured because of that when I can defend it easily if you didn’t kick me.”

Tomochin feels guilty again… But she think she have to say something, “Um…It.. it’s not my fault that you got hurt because I didn’t even ask for your help in the first place so it’s your own responsibility” What am I saying??!! I didn’t mean to say that… I wanted to apologize for kicking him… Arg! My mouth!!! Tomochin yelled at herself inwardly and pouted.

Kai then look at Tomochin, he saw her pouting then laugh and said “Hai.. Hai… It’s my fault for being a busybody so don’t pout, you look more beautiful when you’re not pouting and I bet you’ll look even more beautiful if you smile” and smiled.

Hearing what Kai said Tomochin blushes furiously and turns her head away to hide it.

“By the way, my name is Takahashi Kai a new transfer student in Class 2-A. What about yours?” asked Kai.

Eh! He's in the same class as me??! “I’m Itano Tomomi… also in Class 2-A”

“Eh?!!” Kai exclaimed. So she’s the one who skipped class this morning and Acchan’s friend.

“What??” Tomochin asked confused.

“Ah… Nothing… It’s just that I heard about you from Acchan this morning”

“Oh…” Acchan… So they knew each other?? Why am I feeling hard to breathe when I hear him call Acchan ‘Acchan’?

“Anyway Itano san let’s go back to class, it’s going to be time for the next class”

Why is it that I don’t like it when he calls me Itano san?

“Wait..”

“Hm..??”

“Ah.. I mean… we have to go to the infirmary first to clean your wound.” Tomochin said shyly.

“It’s okay.. It’s only a small wound” Kai replied.

“It’s NOT OKAY! I mean… you can’t go to class with blood on your head right? And I wouldn’t want Acchan to be worried about it too”

“Hm… You’re right so would you mind to show me the way to the infirmary, Princess?” Kai asked smiling.

Tomochin blushed Ah!!! Why am I blushing!!! Well… his smiles are really charming… Wait… What am I thinking about??!!! Hang in there Tomomi!!!

“Itano san??” Kai asked.

Tomochin snapped out of her thoughts “Ah.. I was just thinking whether to bring you to the infirmary or not and since I’m a kind person I’ll bring you there but don’t get the wrong idea okay?! And don’t call me Itano san, I don’t like it so just call me Tomochin.”

“Hai… Hai… as you wish Tomochin, then you also just call me Kai” replied Kai smiling as he walk towards the door.

“I got it” Tomochin replied “And… Thank you…” Tomochin added softly before turning red.

“Hai?? What did you just say?? I didn’t hear it”

“No.. Nothing!” Tomochin stuttered and quickly walk towards the door and open it. Baka! She shouted inwardly.

Kai laugh to himself and said “What a Tsundere” to himself since he actually heard Tomochin thanking him.

“Oi! Hurry up! Or else I’ll leave you alone here!” shouted Tomochin who was already inside the school building.

“Hai… Hai.. I’m coming” replied Kai as he hurriedly jogs inside the building.

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Thanks minna for reading this :kneelbow:
I'll post the next one ASAP :k-wink:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Flean on November 25, 2011, 09:44:46 AM
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Kai then look at Tomochin, he saw her pouting then laugh and said “Hai.. Hai… It’s my fault for being a busybody so don’t pout, you look more beautiful when you’re not pouting and I bet you’ll look even more beautiful if you smile” and smiled.
Kai!!! You're such a player!!!!!  :on kimbo:  you deserve to be kicked!!!  :mon woo:  You gonna create trouble if Tomo fall for you!!!!

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“Hm… You’re right so would you mind to show me the way to the infirmary, Princess?” Kai asked smiling.
Acchan gonna be jealous if she hear you calling someone else  princess!!!  :mon mad:  Yargh!!! I'm sorry Kai, I have to do this to you!!!  :mon slapself:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: sorakamiya on November 25, 2011, 10:29:09 AM
Mhuahahaha daddie seems on the rage haha

easy daddie flean...  I kind a smell triangle love here...  Fufufu....

But.....


make it kai x acchaaaaaaaaaaaan..  Waaaaaaaaa.....
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: smarty0821 on November 25, 2011, 12:59:27 PM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!! OMG   :D I really like your fanfic!!! :heart: And I'm glad to hear that you also like TakaTomo like me..!!! :twothumbs

I'm also happy that someone made a fanfic about this pairing :on asmo:  !!! well I really like the triangle !!! GO TOMOTAKACCHAN !! :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: AKBlover_99 on November 25, 2011, 01:52:43 PM
Kyaa! I enjoyed reading this! :mon lovelaff: Please update soon!  :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 5 Part 2.2]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 25, 2011, 02:01:47 PM
@Flean Haha... :P Thanks for reading and commenting on this XD
@sorakamiya Don't worry ;) and Thanks for reading and commenting :)
@smarty0821 I'm really happy to see that you like my fanfic :) Glad to know that you also like TakaTomo XD
@AKBlover_99 I'm really glad to see that you enjoy reading this :) Hehe.. I was going to click 'Post' when it told me that there is a new reply.. and it's yours! XD


Here's the next part 8) Although short but please enjoy it :nervous
There could be a few grammatical mistakes so please excuse me for my English :P



Chapter 5


Part 2.2

Mariko handed Yamada kyoudou sensei the cakes Kuu gave her.

“Ara… I thought you didn’t manage to get the cakes”

“Well… I have a very nice friend who managed to get me the cakes and there should be no problem since I’ve manage to hand you the cakes on time right?”

“Yes…” Hmph! You’re just lucky this time I was planning to give you some punishments for not bringing the cake, Oh well… I’ll just save the fun for later

“So…Yamada kyoudou sensei may I leave now? Because there is a student who ‘seems’ to have a fever and is waiting for me in the infirmary”

“Oh yes, you may leave”



Mariko’s POV

Mariko then leaves the room sigh* Damn it! It seems that she still hasn’t let me off the hook yet… I’ll have to be careful to not let her catch the opportunity to punish me. I guess I really should thank that Gachapin for saving my life this time although he was the one who bought all those cakes first…

Hm… I wonder if that Gachapin is still in the infirmary sleeping.. But I bet he’s still there sleeping to skip classes..

Let aside his personality his look is really good, that hair of his and his style… Although he could be a bit annoying he is quite a good person… Since he did feel guilty about buying all the cakes and he managed to bring me those cakes I guess I’ll forgive him… Ha… I’m just so kind…

Wait… Why do I keep thinking about that Gachapin???!!! This is not normal… Maybe I got sick??


Mariko has now arrived at the infirmary and she sees Kuu still sleeping on the bed.

See.. I thought so.. still here sleeping…

Suddenly an evil smirk appears on Mariko’s face, then she stretches her hands and pull Kuu’s cheek playing and laughing.

After tired of playing Kuu’s cheek Mariko stops and look at Kuu He’s quite cute when he’s sleeping Mariko thought as she observes Kuu. Then suddenly Mariko is like she’s hypnotized as she starts to move her face closer to Kuu’s face

End of POV


Kuu’s POV

“Hmm…” Did I fall asleep??

Kuu then rub his eyes and look around the room That T-Rex still hasn’t come back yet??

Then suddenly the door opens so he hurriedly closes his eyes and pretends to be sleeping. He was nervous; scared that Mariko will notice that he is not really sleeping but then suddenly he feels a surge of pain from both cheeks.

Ouch, ouch, ouch!!! That T-Rex! Pinching my cheeks! I’ll remember it!!! Although it hurts he still manages to control his temper and remain ‘sleeping’.

Just when he was cursing Mariko he suddenly feels Mariko’s breath on his face OMG! Why is her face so near me that I can feel her breath??? What is she trying to do?? Kuu could feel his heart beating rapidly and temperature starting to rise in his body especially his face.

He then slowly open his eyes and find Mariko’s face only inches away from his and their gaze met…

End of POV


Kuu froze when their gaze met, he didn’t know how to react as there is too much information going around his brain and his brain was not able to process all of the information he just stay there frozen and same for Mariko who was also too shocked too move away; she didn’t expect Kuu to wake up and she also NEVER know why did she move so close to Kuu that they are only inches away. The both of them just stay there eyes lock on each other and frozen there and time seems to pass so slowly around them, it feels like eternity.


Hallway

“We’re nearly there” says Tomochin as she turn back to see Kai walking behind her “Can’t you walk faster?”

“Ah… sorry.. it’s just that I’m starting to feel dizzy…”

Should I offer him a hand?? It’s not that I’m worried about him it’s because he’s walking too slow so if I help him I can finish this business faster! Yes… That’s it! I just want to finish this faster…

Tomochin then walk towards Kai and put one of his arm around her shoulder.

“It’s okay Tomochin, I can walk by myself”

“Don’t get me wrong, it’s just that you walk too slow and I want to finish this fast understood???”

“Ah… Okay and Thanks” Kai smiled weakly since he is really starting to wear out because of the loss of blood.

They walk down the stairs and are finally at the 1st floor, they advance slowly to the room at the most right then Tomochin uses her leg to slide the door open loudly which causes the door to go BANG!

The door was now opened as Tomochin lead Kai inside the infirmary, they just wanted to finish things fast and go back to the class but little did they know that their sudden appearance has caused an accident… a romantic accident…


Infirmary

Kuu and Mariko were still staring at each other and not moving at all but suddenly the door was opened loudly with a huge BANG! and two figures came in, it was Itano Tomomi and Takahashi Kai who came to the infirmary to treat Kai’s wound.

But the sudden ‘BANG’ caused Kuu to be shocked and sit up straight but because of that the lips that were only inches away from each other manage to close the gap and crush together.

Kuu and Mariko were once frozen again by the accidental kiss while Kai and Tomochin were also frozen when they see Kuu and Mariko kissing. Kai and Tomochin thought that they were interrupting Kuu and Mariko but they didn’t know that they were the ones that caused that ‘kiss’.

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The infirmary is decorated with white walls and floors with the smell of medicines that make it seems like a hospital, with two beds lying near the wall, a cupboard which the medicines are stored and a table with chair for the school nurse. Usually it was quiet and the school nurse will be sitting on the chair with a cup of black coffee while doing her work leisurely but now rather than only the school nurse there are three more figures which were all frozen including her, they were all in the state of shock…


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Thank You for Reading this :kneelbow:
I'll do my best to Update ASAP  :mon study:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: AKBlover_99 on November 25, 2011, 02:21:38 PM
OMG! An update!  :w00t: :w00t: I love it! MariKuu is cute!!!! :mon trannie: Thx to Tomochin and Kai for making them kissing! And thx to you too!!!  :twothumbs
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Megumi on November 25, 2011, 02:27:45 PM
Waaaaaa! MariKuu kissing! *running in circles :panic: and *hit the wall  :banghead:

That was so epic! Thanks to Kai&Tomochin hahaha
Thank you for your update :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: kahem on November 25, 2011, 09:25:03 PM
Hehehe nice Marikuu!!! I want more accidents like that!!!
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: RJay on November 25, 2011, 09:41:21 PM
OMG OMG OMG!!! :farofflook:
This is too good to be true
Finaly MariKuu kissed, though it was really funny that they didn't stop :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

I'm looking forward to the next chapter :hee: :hee:

please update soon :kneelbow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: Flean on November 26, 2011, 12:50:17 AM
Accident kiss the best!!!!  :on GJ:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: cmze on November 26, 2011, 07:37:57 AM
 :rofl:  :w00t:

THIS IS SO HILARIOUS!  :grin:

 i like it very much!  :inlove:

Tomochin is so cool!  :twothumbs

poor Takamina!  :twisted:

"It took Takamina around 30 minutes to finally open her eyes and confront her problem; she almost fainted during her shower but nevertheless manages to finish her shower without fainting." :rofl:

hey is there going to be a Kai,Acchan,Tomochin triangle?

that would be so fun!  :grin:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: haruhi16 on November 26, 2011, 12:21:58 PM
OMG! OMG! MARIKUU KISSED!!  :cow: :cow: :cow:

I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW YAGAMI.RAI!!! PLEASE!!!  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

UPDATE SOON!!  :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 5 Part 3]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 26, 2011, 01:36:41 PM
@AKBlover_99 Hehe.. You're welcome :lol: Thanks for reading :peace:
@Megumi Thanks for reading :thumbsup
@kahem  ;) Who knows.. there could be more or could be not XD
@RJay Thanks for reading :) I hope I didn't disappoint you XD
@Flean I agree with you :thumbsup
@cmze Thank you for liking it :peace: Yup! There would be a triangle going on ;) XD
@haruhi16 Haha..Here's the next part ;) Hope you enjoy it :peace:


Once again, Thank you everyone for reading this. I'm really Thankful for that because if no one read/likes it I do not plan to write it anymore because I'm the type that easily get discouraged :err:
Glad that you guys like it because it really makes me happy and motivates me to write it :k-thrilled:
Here's the next part.. Hope you guys will like it... Not really sure if it's good... :nervous Please Excuse me for my English :P



Chapter 5


Part 3

The 4 figures were still in the state of shock but the school nurse, Mariko, was the first one to snap out of it and pushed Kuu away from her causing Kuu's head to collide with the wall...

“Ouch! That hurts!” Kuu whines as he also snapped out from the shock.

Mariko sees Kai and Tomochin then she tries to explain the situation to Kai and Tomochin “Wait! It’s not what you think it is… It was just an accident, right? Minegishi kun” Mariko explain while she nudge Kuu on the arm.

“Ah, yes! It was TOTALLY a MISUNDERSTANDING!” Kuu hurriedly explain.

Kai and Tomochin who also snapped out of the shock just look at each other then show Mariko and Kuu the do-you-think-we-will-believe-you face.

Then Tomochin added “Um… It’s okay Mari-nee I understand.. and.. um.. sorry for interrupting you.. I’ll just um.. go now? with Kai..”

“Un.. Yea.. Kuu.. sorry for interrupting you guys.. so don’t mind us.. we’ll go now and please do continue” Kai answers.

“NO!! YOU WERE NOT INTERUPTING US!!! And I’ve been telling you that it was an UNFORTUNATE ACCIDENT okay???!!!” Kuu and Mariko say in unison.

Kai and Tomo just look at each other again and rolled their eyes and said “Whatever you guys say…”

Kuu wanted to argue again but then he spot Kai’s injury and ask “Kai! What happened to your head?? It’s bleeding!!!”

“Oh this? Nah.. it’s just a small injury, don’t worry” Kai answer smiling.

Mariko quickly grabs some medical things to treat Kai’s wound “You! What’s your name? Come here, I’ll treat your wound.”

“Hai. My name is Takahashi Kai, Shinoda sensei”

Mariko raised an eyebrow and said “Just call me Mariko sensei… I don’t like to be called Shinoda sensei because it makes me feel old”

“Hai, Mariko sensei and please call me Kai too” Kai replied

“Yea, yea.. You’re trying not to feel old than you are now, right Ms. T-Rex?”

One of Mariko’s vein popped due to the anger and she accidently put force on the hand that was treating Kai’s wound and cause Kai to be in pain.

“Ouch! Kuu! Can you stop it for now? Since she’s treating my wound now and I don’t want it to become worse okay???!!” Kai complained.

“Oops.. sorry my bad” replied Kuu who doesn’t seems to be sorry at all.

“BTW, Taka.. I mean Kai why were you with Tomomi??” Mariko asks

“Yea Kai. Who is this girl?” Kuu ask

“Well Kuu, she’s Itano Tomomi who is our classmate and I coincidently met her on the rooftop when I was running away from those girls that try to catch me.” Kai answers.

Hearing this Mariko raise an eyebrow and ask “Tomomi… did you skip class again?? And worse getting into a fight?!!!” with a dangerous aura coming out from her.

Sensing the dangerous aura from Mariko Tomo quickly try to explain “Um.. No.. I mean.. Mari-nee.. I was.. just.. um.. getting some fresh air from the rooftop…”

“Then why is Kai injured??” Mariko asks suspiciously.

“Um.. wel…” Tomo tries to think of something then Kai answered “I just accidently tripped on the stairs and Tomochin just help me to get to the infirmary.”

Mariko doesn’t believe it but she has no choice but to accept their excuse “Alright… But don’t think I’ll just let it slip if you skip class and get into a fight, you understand? Tomomi”

“Yes, I understand Mari-nee. Um.. then I’ll go back to the class first see ya” Tomo answers and hurriedly leave the infirmary.

Mariko sigh* “Kai could you help me keep an eye on her? Don’t let her get into fight. I’m worried that something could happen to her in the future if this keeps going on.”

“I got it, Mariko sensei.” Kai replied

After finish treating Kai’s wound, Kai and Kuu left the infirmary to go back to the class.


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Hallway

“Hey Kai.”

“What?”

“Tell me the truth about what happen to your wound. Don’t think that I or that T-Rex really believes about you falling on the stairs.”

“Fine.” Kai sigh* in defeat.

“The parts where I was chased by the girls and coincidently met Tomochin when I escape to the rooftop were true.” Kai start to explain.

“Okay.. continue”

“When I went to the rooftop I saw Tomochin there fighting with 7 guys so I went to help her and…” Kai didn’t finish when Kuu cut in.

“Wow! So you mean you did a Prince in a Shiny Armor drama on the rooftop!!! And I miss it??!!!!!!” Kuu shouted.

Kai rolled his eyes and just ignore Kuu while he continue his story “During the fight I saw one guy trying to hit her with a pipe so I try to pull her away but she thought I was going to attack her so she kick me and I wasn’t able to defend on time so I was hit on the head. And that’s it.” Kai finishes.

“Oh come on.. don’t tell me it’s only like this! I’m sure there should be something more!”

“Like what?” Kai asks

“Like a thank you kiss!!” Kuu says while trying to make a kiss gesture towards Kai.

“Ew! Don’t come near me you creep!” Kai shouted while trying to dodge from Kuu’s kissing.

“Fine!” Kuu pouted.

Kai just shake his head thinking how childish Kuu is.

“But Kai it seems like you two are quite close isn’t it? Calling her Tomochin~” Kuu teasingly says while wriggling his eyebrows.

Kai blushes and says “No! She just say that she doesn’t like others calling her Itano san so she tell me to just call her Tomochin”

Kuu continue to tease Kai on their way back to their classroom.


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Class 2-A

Yuko is still clinging onto Riku’s arm but one thing different is that Riku has stopped struggling.

Hm… Now that I have stop struggling why is it that I don’t dislike it when Yuko is clinging on to me??!!! It’s weird…

Suddenly Yuko look at Riku and their eyes meet then Yuko smiles brightly showing her dimple to Riku.

Wow… Why is it that I think she is cute when she smiles like that..? Wait! What am I thinking about??!!!

Riku blushed and Yuko notices it and her smiles grew even wider and she says “Nyan Nyan, I Love You”

Ba-dump! Ba-dump! Riku could feel his heart rate increasing rapidly because of Yuko’s words.

Why am I feeling like this?? I know that she is not serious about those words but why is it that I feel hurt when I think that she is only playing around with me?? Why is it that she can influence my feelings easily like this??

“What a cunning squirrel you are…” Riku said softly but Yuko heard it.

“Huh?? Cunning??” Yuko ask Riku confused.

“Yes, you cunning squirrel”

“Why do you call me a squirrel?”

“Why… Can’t I call you a squirrel when you always call me Nyan Nyan??”

Yuko was really happy that Riku made a nickname for her “Yes, you can call me a squirrel and only you can call me that because I am only your cunning squirrel” Yuko answers happily but a little shy about it.

Riku blushes furiously and stutters “Ba.. Baka!” Again… She can sway my feeling so easily… what a cunning squirrel I’ve got… Riku thought and smile.

Acchan on the other hand saw the whole thing, she was happy for Yuko but was also a little bit jealous… sigh* Acchan was now facing the window staring blankly at it and sigh*again... Where are you now… I’m already missing you…


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Thanks for reading :kneelbow:
I'll do my best to Update Soon :mon determined:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not?
Post by: kiniki on November 26, 2011, 03:03:39 PM

“What a cunning squirrel you are…” Riku said softly but Yuko heard it.

“Huh?? Cunning??” Yuko ask Riku confused.

“Yes, you cunning squirrel”

“Why do you call me a squirrel?”

“Why… Can’t I call you a squirrel when you always call me Nyan Nyan??”

Yuko was really happy that Riku made a nickname for her “Yes, you can call me a squirrel and only you can call me that because I am only your cunning squirrel” Yuko answers happily but a little shy about it.

Riku blushes furiously and stutters “Ba.. Baka!” Again… She can sway my feeling so easily… what a cunning squirrel I’ve got… Riku thought and smile.

OMG Riku and Yuko so KAWAII~~~ :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:
This scenes make me smiled :mon inluv:
MariKuu kissed :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
Your fic really fun :mon fyeah:
Well, I'm waiting love triangle TomoTakaChan :mon evil:
But I still want TakaChan more :mon evillaff:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 5 Part 3]
Post by: Sydney W on November 26, 2011, 04:25:22 PM
Update next.... thanks
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 5 Part 3]
Post by: AKBlover_99 on November 26, 2011, 04:49:09 PM
Yay! An update!    :tama-apeshit:
Kai and Tomochin doesn't believe about the 'accidental kiss' by MariKuu! Haha! Good!    :on woohoo:
Kuu wants Tomochin to kiss Kai? :on slopkiss:
And Riku......You're gonna fall in love with Yuko! Muahahaha! :wahaha:

I love it! Totally love it! Update soon!!!!  :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 5 Part 3]
Post by: Megumi on November 26, 2011, 09:45:52 PM
Yes!New update!

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“Un.. Yea.. Kuu.. sorry for interrupting you guys.. so don’t mind us.. we’ll go now and please do continue” Kai answers.

Pff bwahahah! "please do continue"...

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“Ew! Don’t come near me you creep!” Kai shouted while trying to dodge from Kuu’s kissing.

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“What a cunning squirrel you are…” Riku said softly but Yuko heard it.

“Huh?? Cunning??” Yuko ask Riku confused.

Such a cute Riku and Yuko scene here.

There are so many fun moment in your story which made the story flow so easily...

Thank you for your update! (http://www.gifs.net/Animation11/Animals/Worms_and_Snails/Fast_snail.gif)
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 5 Part 3]
Post by: RJay on November 27, 2011, 12:44:47 AM
OMG!!! this is  too cute :luvluv2:
Its so funny when they're making excuses for themselves :mon lmao:
please update soon
can't wait for the next chapter
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 5 Part 3]
Post by: haruhi16 on November 27, 2011, 04:42:17 AM
OMG an update!! thank you Yagami.Rai !  :cow:

Ughh why Tomochin and Kai have to interrup MariKuu doing their thaaang~  :smhid   and after that incident they're back on bickering again  :smhid

OMG Riku is falling in love with his squirrel ~  :panic:  I want more more MORE!! KOJIYUU  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

And aww Acchan missing her prince Kai~  :wub:

Please update soon as you can Yagami.Rai!  :thumbsup I'm loving your fic  :heart:

Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 5 Part 3]
Post by: Haruko on November 27, 2011, 07:37:48 AM
yeah we want more kojiyuu.. you going fall in love riku-nyan
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 5 Part 3]
Post by: cmze on November 27, 2011, 07:47:00 AM
Kuuu Nd Mariko were funny but...YOU TOTALLY KILLED ME WITH THE KOJIYUU SCENE!  :wub

thanks Yagami!  :grin:

please update soon!  :cow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 1]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 29, 2011, 02:40:10 PM
@kiniki Thanks for enjoying it :)  :nervous Um.. I'm trying.. haha.. gulp*
@Sydney W Thanks for reading ;)
@AKBlover_99 Thanks for loving it XD
@Megumi Thanks for the compliment and thanks for reading :oops:
@RJay Hehe.. Thanks for the comment XD and of course thanks for reading it :thumbsup
@haruhi16 Haha.. I'll try :) Thanks for loving it :heart:
@Haruko  XD Haha.. Thanks for the comment and I'll try :nervous
@cmze  XD Haha.. you're welcome and.. :shocked Did I just become a murderer? LOL :lol:


Thanks everyone for reading this and I'm really happy about it :mon squee:
After reading all the comments it gave me the power and motivation to write more :farofflook:
Thanks everyone for the comment!!! and Thanks everyone for reading it!!! and Thanks for giving me thanks!!!! :lol:
Although my university has finally opened from the long holiday I'll still update ASAP :mon determined:
YEA!!! I CAN DO IT!!!! :mon yeah:

So here's Chapter 6 Part 1!!!!!



Chapter 6



Part 1

I’m already missing him… was what Acchan was thinking while staring blankly at the window.

Then Tomochin came in the class and when she looks around she saw Acchan staring blankly at the window so she approaches her.

“Acchan, what are you doing?” Tomochin asks while waving her hand up and down in front of Acchan’s face.

Acchan didn’t even bother to turn and look at Tomo and answers “Nothing…”

“Are you sure?” Tomo asks concernly while looking at Acchan suspiciously She is definitely not alright…

Acchan sensing the concern from Tomo’s voice turn and look at her and said “Yes…” while showing a forced smile which turn into a true smile when Kai and Kuu show up in the classroom.

Kai hits Kuu on the shoulder as they were still bickering with each other, then Kai notices Acchan and Tomochin at the window and says “Hi! Acchan and Tomochin”

Eh?! Tomochin?? They know each other??? When and how???!! Then Acchan notices the bandage around Kai’s head “Kai!! What happened to your head??!!” asks Acchan half-shouting who was really worried about Kai.

“Oh this? I just accidently tripped on the stairs earlier, it’s just a small injury don’t worry” Kai answers smiling.

But Acchan is still worried “Kai… Please be more careful next time…” Acchan says as she gently touches Kai’s injury with teary eyes.

Kai was a bit surprise but then hold Acchan’s hand that was touching his injury he smiles at her and said “Hai… I’m sorry for making you worry. I promise I’ll be more careful next time.”

Acchan was blushing and show Kai a gentle smile and they stay like that staring at each other as if time as stop around them.

Tomo on the other hand saw how they care about each other so much and was a little bit sad inside and can’t bear to see it anymore so she decided to leave the class but Kai notices it and remember that he promises Mariko to prevent Tomo from skipping classes so Kai hurriedly went and grab Tomo’s arm which surprises Tomo.

“What are you doing? Let me go!”

“No, I promised Mariko sensei that I’ll keep an eye on you and won’t let you skip classes so you better not unless you want me to report it to Mariko sensei” Kai says smiling since he know that Tomochin is afraid of Mariko sensei when she’s angry.

“Grr!!! Hmph!” Tomo then just went back and sit on her sit pissed that she won’t be able to skip class anymore as long as Kai was there to keep an eye on her.

Kai just slightly shake his head at Tomo’s reaction and smile thinking how childish she could be when he thought she is the cool and scary type.

Acchan was disappointed when Kai stopped their staring-time… But was happy that Kai stop Tomo from skipping class though she didn’t really like it too… She was confused… Kai is stopping Tomo from skipping class so it should be good right??? But why am I feeling uneasy when I look at them..??

Later Acchan remembers something Kai said ‘I promised Mariko sensei to keep an eye on you and won’t let you skip classes’

When did Mari-nee asks Kai to do that?? And why??? Acchan was really curious about it and decided to ask Kai about it.

“Kai…”

“Hm?”

“Why did Mari-nee ask you to keep an eye on Tomo?” Acchan asks

“Huh? Oh.. Well.. When I tripped on the stairs Tomochin was kind enough to show me where the infirmary is and Mariko sensei has somehow sense that Tomochin has skipped classes so when she leaves Mariko sensei asks me to keep an eye on her” Kai nervously answered.

Acchan raise an eyebrow Tomo?? Bothers to even show a stranger where the infirmary is??? No Way!!! Normally she would’ve kicked their ass if they even bother her… And by the way how Kai is acting I’m sure he is hiding something away from me… And… I DON’T LIKE IT!!!

Atsuko didn’t like the idea that Kai was hiding something from her and black aura starts to leak out from her and Kai somehow was feeling danger “Acchan..?? Are you okay?” ask Kai who was a bit shaky from the aura he is feeling.

Acchan snapped out from her dark aura and said “Ah… Yes, I’m fine” and smiles at Kai but… That was not the usual smile she shows him… It was like a death god’s smile which terrors Kai a bit...


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(DING DONG DANG DING~~) School Ends for the Day~~~


It was now afterschool and Kuu was ready to go home with Riku, if you’re going to ask where Kai is he has went home early since the teacher told him to when she saw his injury. Just when Kuu and Riku were going to leave a voice stopped them.

“Wait! Kuu, do you have a minute?”

“Yes, my princess. How can I help you?”

“I need some of your time”

“Alright, no problem at all” Kuu answers smiling

Then the two of them leaves, leaving Riku alone to go back home. If you want to ask where is the squirrel who is not climbing on its tree then your answer will be, the squirrel has some work to do since she is an actress so she has to leave her favorite tree for the day. Actually not only Yuko, Acchan is also an actress + singer but she is having a short break since she has worked hard in her last drama shooting.


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At a Certain Cafe…

“So.. What is it that you want to talk about, princess?” Kuu asks while placing order to the waitress.

“I know you know what I want to ask so you better spill it out now before you regret it…”

Gulp* Hey come on… Calm down… have a sip of your tea…” Kuu tried to calm the girl down nervously.

Seeep* the girl took a sip of her tea and take a deep breath before talking again “Okay… So would you spill it or not?”

“Well… it is just as it is Acchan there is nothing to spill” Kuu answers while start to eat his cakes that has just been delivered just now.

Acchan just rolled her eyes and says “Do you really expect me to believe Kai tripped on the stairs?? And I’m sure this has something to do with Tomo and I want you to spill it right HERE and NOW before you will not be able to eat those stupid cakes of yours ever again!!!”

Hearing this Kuu accidently chokes on his cakes “cough cough cough” After swallowing the cakes Kuu finally manage to speak “Acchan… you should know that I wouldn’t say anything if Kai wouldn’t want…” Even if I really want to tell I can’t! ‘cause I don’t want to be killed by Kai yet… I’M STILL YOUNG!!! But what is this situation now??!! It’s either to be killed by Kai or by Acchan!!! Damn it what a stupid couple who both endanger my life!!!! Oh God… I still haven’t eaten all the cakes in the world yet and I’m sure even the Cake God would want me to stay alive and eat cakes!!! Please God… I promise to offer 10.. no 20 of my favorite cakes if I manage to be alive… sigh*

Acchan sensing that Kuu won’t spill anything decided to use her ‘secret-weapon’ that she herself assume that will work on Kuu.

“Kuu.. If you spill everything out not only I will let you live and eat your cakes I’ll even offer you this..” Acchan pulls out a card from her wallet that says ‘ALL YOU CAN EAT IN THE TORNADO CAFE FOR A WEEK’. “This.. is an all you can eat card for a week in the Tornado Cafe, they offer 100 different kinds of gourmet cakes and many other sweets that you’ll never get tired of it..”

As Acchan is explaining Kuu was already drooling to the thoughts of ‘ALL YOU CAN EAT FOR A WEEK’ and his eyes starts to shine so bright.

Acchan sees that her prey has taken the bait and with just a little push left she would get what she want… “So…” Acchan says as she sways the card in front of Kuu’s face “If you want this card…” Acchan didn’t even finish her sentence yet when Kuu cut in.

“I’ll tell you everything and anything just please~~” Kuu says begging Acchan while looking dreamily at the all-you-can-eat card.

Acchan smirks and gave the card to Kuu who admires the card and put it carefully in his bag.

“Ahem!” Kuu cleared his throat before speaking again “Let’s start from the part where Kai was chased by the girls.”

Acchan nodded as Kuu continues “Kai escape to the rooftop when he was chased by the girls, and he coincidently saw Tomochin fighting with some delinquents on the rooftop and was losing because she twisted her leg or something so Kai decided to step in and help her. Tomochin was almost hit by a guy with a pipe but Kai defended her but she struggles thinking that Kai was going to attack her so Kai was not able to defend himself on time so he got injured but he was still able to defeat those delinquents easily. After that Tomochin brought Kai to the infirmary and you know the rest” Kuu finishes as he drink a sip of tea.

Acchan was satisfied with what Kuu has told her, she believes that Kuu has told her everything not noticing that Kuu hided a fact from her… The fact about him and Mariko kissing… But there’s no way Kuu is going to tell it to Acchan.

Acchan was a bit tense up when she heard that Tomochin got into a fight with the delinquents and was losing but she felt relief when she heard Kai has saved her but deep down she was actually a bit jealous…

After Kuu has finishes his cakes they separate and went back home


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Back to Riku who was left alone to go home as Kuu left with Acchan.

Riku was walking slowly and thinking why Acchan has asked Kuu to go with her but decided to not think about it anymore since no answer will come out of it while thinking he has reached their apartment.

At Grand Royal Apartment 11th Floor Room 121

“I’m home” Riku says as he removes his shoes

“Ah.. Welcome back” Kai shouted from the living room

Riku then walks in the living room and saw Kai sitting on the couch eating potato chips while watching an action movie, Riku then sits on the other couch and relax.

Kai then sees only Riku came back so he asks “Where’s Kuu?”

“Oh Kuu, Acchan asked him to go somewhere with her”

“Eh?!!!” Kai shouted while standing up from the couch, he was really shock to hear it… “Why?? And where did they go???!!” Kai nearly shouted.

Riku sensing Kai was panicking smirk and says “Who knows… Maybe they went on a date”

Hearing this Kai was even more panicking and jealousy starts to form in him and he was sad at the thought that Acchan and Kuu who were ‘probably’ on a ‘date’ right now… Kai just slump back to the couch and heave out a deep sigh* While Riku tries his best to not laugh out and was covering both his mouth with his hands.

After calming down Riku decided to tease Kai “Kai… Are you jealous of Kuu?”

Hearing this Kai’s eye become wide open “Wha.. what?!! Why should I be jea..jealous of Ku.. Kuu??” Kai stuttered.

When Riku was about to tease Kai again he heard the door open and a voice shouting ‘I’m back!!!’

Hearing this Kai immediately jumps out from the couch and run to the front door which made Riku laugh at how worried Kai was about the ‘date’ of Acchan and Kuu.

Kuu was shock to see Kai running to him “Wow! Kai! You came to welcome me back??” Kuu then proceed to hug Kai “Aww I love you”

But just when Kuu was about to hug Kai, Kai stop him and asks worriedly “I heard you and Acchan went off somewhere… So.. um.. Where did you guys… went and what did you talk about??”

Kuu could sense how worried Kai was so he decided to tease him “We went on a date” Kuu answers Kai while smirking at the Kai who has the ‘the-end-of-the-world face’ on him.

“Oh…” was the only thing Kai was able to say as he really feels the end of the world although he does not really sure why does he feel that way when he heard Kuu and Acchan went on a date today.

Thinking that he has teased Kai enough Kuu says “Aw.. Kai come on.. Don’t be so depressed, I was just JOKING!!!” Kuu then burst out laughing and runs away before Kai catch him.

After Kuu said that he was joking Kai was really happy and his face change from the-end-of-the-world to I-won-a-lottery face but then realizing that Kuu was teasing him his face changes again from the I-won-a-lottery to I’m-gonna-kill-you and starts to chase after Kuu around the living room.

Riku seeing how childish the two of them were just shake his head and sigh* but a little smile form on his face as he says “What a bunch of kids” which earns him something he didn’t want… two little kids charging at him on full speed which of course made him run away from them…


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After a few minutes… it has become a war between the three of them… LOL

Ten no Koe: What a bunch of kids… sigh*

Somehow the three of them heard the Ten no Koe as they shouted “WE ARE NOT KIDS!!! IF YOU GOT A PROBLEM COME DOWN HERE AND WE’LL SHOW YOU!!!”

Ten no Koe was surprised… gulp* he decided to keep quiet and let the kids finish their kiddy fights as he didn’t want to get involve…


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Thanks minna for reading it :kneelbow:
I really am happy about it and will try to update ASAP :mon study:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 1] >>> 29/11/11
Post by: Sydney W on November 29, 2011, 03:43:53 PM
I want more of this... please update next... thank you very much
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 1] >>> 29/11/11
Post by: AKBlover_99 on November 29, 2011, 04:16:44 PM
An update!!! Wiiii~    :gmon twirl: It's really interesting!
Kai and Acchan were jealous at each other!    :ptam-glow: How cute they two!
Thx for the update!!!! :gmon love2:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 1] >>> 29/11/11
Post by: Megumi on November 29, 2011, 04:33:22 PM
Bwahahaha! OMG! LoL!
Kuu&Acchan& the cake scene was totally epic!

Quote
If you want to ask where is the squirrel who is not climbing on its tree then your answer will be, the squirrel has some work to do since she is an actress so she has to leave her favorite tree for the day.

 :lol: Kojipa/Riku is a tree

thank you for your update  :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 1] >>> 29/11/11
Post by: cmze on November 29, 2011, 04:53:56 PM
 :rofl:

Kai,Riku and Kuu..they totally know how to make me smile! XD

thanks for your update! :D

please update soon!  :bow:

and yes you're a murderer...Just kidding!  :grin:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 1] >>> 29/11/11
Post by: kahem on November 29, 2011, 07:55:55 PM
You never fail at make me smile or laugh especially at the cafe part lol
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 1] >>> 29/11/11
Post by: RJay on November 30, 2011, 01:18:28 AM
LOL :mon lmao:
Kai and Atsuko getting jealous with each other
How can Kai be so clueless? :err:

please update soon
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 1] >>> 29/11/11
Post by: Sok on November 30, 2011, 05:41:21 AM
Awesome. I liked the part about The all you can eat. Poor Kuu well at least he got free food for a week. XD

Thank you for updating.
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 1] >>> 29/11/11
Post by: Haruko on November 30, 2011, 06:10:50 AM
so funny.. both are jelousy person... come on acchan fight for your takaboy like a boss
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 2] >>> 30/11/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 30, 2011, 01:24:02 PM
@Sydney W/AKBlover_99/Megumi/cmze/kahem/RJay/haru9210/Sok/Haruko Thank you all so much for the comment and I was really happy about it XD I worked hard today :peace: and decided to post the next part 8) Thanks again for the comment since I really appreciate it :)

Thanks everyone for reading this :) I hope this chapter won't be too boring :nervous Please excuse me for my English :P and Please Enjoy reading it XD



Chapter 6



Part 2

After their ‘kiddy fight’ they were all exhausted and were lying on the ground panting then suddenly they heard Ring! Ring! Ring! it was from their mission use purpose laptop that was ringing, so Kai got up and went to answer the call who happens to be Takahashi Hiroshi.

“Hello Dad”

“Hi, my boy” says Hiroshi smiling

“What is it?”

“I just want to tell you that there are two helpers in the AKB High school and they could provide you more information about your mission.”

“Eh?! Who are they?” asks Kai curiously

Hiroshi just smiles and says “You’ll know. They will approach you within these few days and I’m sure you guys will be glad to see them and that’s all that I want to say. Bye, Goodnight and Good Luck in your mission” Beep*

“Wai..Wait…” Kai didn’t get to finish his sentence yet and the connection was already cut... Sigh* What a my pace dad I’ve got… Kai thought while shaking his head.


Living Room

“Who is it?” asks Kuu who was still on the floor.

“It’s dad” Kai answers

“What did he say? Something about the mission?” asks Riku

“Yea… He says that there are 2 helpers in the AKB High school that could provide us more information about the mission and that we’ll be glad to see them” Kai replies

“Eh? Who are they??” asks Kuu and Riku

“I don’t know… He said we’ll know eventually… Anyway there are some things about the school system that I heard from Acchan today”

“What?”

Kai then explained the whole thing that he learned from Acchan today at school to Kuu and Riku; about the AKB points and that everyone has to join a club, the random events the school principle throw sometimes and the most popular clubs, Host Club, Entertainment Club and Science Technology Club and how Kai feels that the Science Technology Club is suspicious.

“Wow! It sounds fun! Kuu says while jumping up and down excitingly

“I agree that is fun and that the STC (Science Technology Club) is really suspicious” says Riku

“Then why don’t we join in the STC and be like a spy and dig out all the secrets that they are possibly hiding?” suggests Kuu

“Hm… It’s not a bad idea” replies Kai and Riku also agrees with the idea

“Wow! It’s the first time you two agree with my idea!!!” exclaim Kuu

Kai and Riku just look at each other and say “Well… it’s the first time your idea sounds reasonable.. Duh!”

“Hey!” shouts Kuu

Kai and Riku just ignore him as they were already exhausted today and went to their own rooms to sleep. While Kuu just pouted and also went back to his own room to have a good-night sleep.


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Meanwhile

“I can’t wait to work with them! I miss them so much!!!”

“Yea! I totally agree!!! Haa…. I miss the old days where we all used to play together in the park…” says a male as he starts to drift into his memory about the old days…

“Hey! Don’t go day dreaming yet!!! We should not forget how cold they were to us!!! I know they were busy but they didn’t even contact us for years!!!!” shouted the other male.

“Yea! You’re right!!! I was so lonely that time…”

“Me too!!! Let’s make them pay for making us feel lonely all these time!!!” smirked one of them.

“I totally agree!!! But… How???”

“Hehe… You’ll see… Anyway let’s sleep for now so that we’ll have the energy to execute my plan tomorrow… Hehehe… just you wait…”

Sigh* There he goes again with his evil plans… Luckily it won’t be executed on me this time… “’Kay Goodnight”

“’Night!”


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The Next Day – AKB High school

3 figures were standing at the rooftop looking blankly at the sunset as they remember what happened today one of them rub his red cheek, one of them cursing to himself and the other one dripping muddy… The three figures were the transfer students Kai, Kuu and Riku, they had a very terrible day today…


Flashback

Kai was on his way to the cafeteria when he accidently stepped on a banana peel (who knows why it was there) slipped and fell on top of a female student who was blushing hard because of their close proximity. Kai also blushed and quickly move away then apologize to the female but then he saw Acchan with black aura leaking out around here who glared at him and walks away really mad… Kai hurriedly chase after Acchan, wanting to explain the misunderstanding to her but before he was able to say even a single word slap*… Yes… he was slapped by Acchan… After that Acchan then left, leaving a dumbfounded Kai there alone on the hallway…

Kuu founded a beautifully wrapped box in his shoe locker which he assumes is from his fan girl so he hurriedly open it and founded a delicious-looking cake which he hurriedly engulf. But then… after a few minutes something went wrong with his stomach causing him to rush to the bathroom… and for the whole day he was not able to leave the toilet… and now… his butts hurt a lot because of that…

Riku was splash with water from the second floor when he was going to go in the school and the way how hot he look when wet makes all the girls go crazy and chase after him. Yuko who sees it became berserk and starts ‘killing’ those girls who were chasing after Riku and lastly she charged at Riku and crash on him… together they fell into a mud causing his uniform to get all dirty and was scolded by the teacher for causing such a ruckus in the school… of course… he got detention and was punished to clean the toilet for a whole week…

Flashback Ends…


Kai, Kuu and Riku sighs* again as they remembered what happen today and thought how unlucky they were today and what a terrible day it was… little did they know that in the shadow two little figures were hiding near them and was laughing softly at their reaction.

“Hey, your plan was totally epic!!!”

“Of course! Who do you think I am??!!! Hahahaha….”

They were too high and were laughing too loud which causes Kai, Kuu and Riku to hear them which made them really pissed off. They realize their mistakes and wanted to escape but they were too slow… Kai, Kuu and Riku were now in front of them cracking their knuckles and were ready to kill someone…

“Wait!!!”

“What??!!!” says Kai, Kuu and Riku impatiently

“Don’t you guys remember us???”

“I don’t know you” replies Riku coldly as he is really pissed off about what they did to him.

“Oh come on! Takamina, Mii-chan and Haruna!! Have you guys really forgotten us??!!! We used to play together all the time in the park… You guys are so cold…”

After a few minutes of deep thinking and recalling of their past...

“Wait…. Masaka…!!!!” shouted Kai, Kuu and Riku


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Thanks again minna for reading it and I'm really happy about it :kneelbow:
I'll update ASAP :mon study:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 2] >>> 30/11/11
Post by: Megumi on November 30, 2011, 02:20:18 PM
Cliffhanger!   


Thank you for your update as usual it's hilarious!  :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 2] >>> 30/11/11
Post by: AKBlover_99 on November 30, 2011, 02:26:24 PM
Woah....An update....That quite fast. But I like it ! :mon santa2:
Feel sorry for them for having a terrible day. Acchan was jealous ! :mon blblbl:
Thx for the update :mon inluv:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 2] >>> 30/11/11
Post by: Flean on November 30, 2011, 02:26:52 PM
Woh!!! Who are the 2 guys??  :on lol:  their plans were awesome making all 3 of them suffer... hahaha..  :wahaha:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 2] >>> 30/11/11
Post by: haruhi16 on November 30, 2011, 03:04:14 PM
Yagami.Rai please i want the next chapter  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 2] >>> 30/11/11
Post by: Sydney W on November 30, 2011, 04:56:44 PM
Does it mean Sae and Sayaka ?? Please update...
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 2] >>> 30/11/11
Post by: kahem on November 30, 2011, 06:42:59 PM
Epic prank!!! ^^
Who are those news helpers? Update please
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 2] >>> 30/11/11
Post by: Popsicle on November 30, 2011, 07:03:22 PM
This fic is AMAZING !!
It's too too funny  XD

Hmm I have a feeling one of the guys are Sae, but who's the other one..  :lol:

Update soon can't wait ~  :fap
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 2] >>> 30/11/11
Post by: RJay on November 30, 2011, 09:55:49 PM
Lol :mon lmao: epic.
Well I think it's still kinda sad, that something bad happen to them
I wonder who are the two guys?

please update soon
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 2] >>> 30/11/11
Post by: Haruko on December 01, 2011, 06:24:58 AM
guessing sae-chan and mm jurina?
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [White Christmas] Kai x Acchan >>> 2/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 02, 2011, 03:23:41 PM
Everyone Thanks for the Comment and I really do appreciate it XD I'll try to Update it ASAP but I just want to post this today since I wrote it today while I was in the library :peace: It may be long and boring.. :nervous (Hopefully Not) But please take your time reading this and Thank You XD Please Excuse me for my English :P

Although it may be too early for Christmas :lol:

BTW the pairings that you guys guessed so far.. Hm.. Only 1 was right XD To find out who are they you'll have to wait for my update :P



One Shot

White Christmas



I always see him with different girls, he is such a player. But nobody dislikes him, even the girls he broke up with are still friends with him. I wonder why… At that time I never knew that I’ll fall in love with him.

He is good-looking, good in both sports and in studying but he is very flirty… He flirts with almost every girl in the school even when he was dating one of them. I hate players like him and I believe that I’ll never fall in love with that kind of person.

Unlike him, I am always alone while he is always surrounded by friends but I don’t care much about it since I prefer to be alone. I do not know why I would always stare at him when he is around… Maybe it’s because he’s my opposite and opposite attracts… Maybe deep down I actually also wanted to be surrounded by friends… But there is no use about it now, since I’m the one who chose to be a loner; I ignored all people who tried to talk to me because I’m afraid to be hurt again…

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She is always alone… always ignoring other people when they tried to talk to her. She always read manga or books alone… But she is really cute like an angel, but I wonder why she is so cold toward others… like she doesn’t trust them. I don’t know why but I feel attracted to her; I want to know more about her, talk with her and be her friend. But, I’m afraid of her rejecting me… We are like the complete opposite of one another… I’m always with friends while she is always alone… Does she prefer to be alone? Or is it that she’s shy? If it’s just that then I’ll be more than willing to take a step, talk to her and befriend her. Normally, I could speak to the girls freely and easily as I also flirt with them but I don’t know why I turned into such a coward who can’t even start a conversation with her… After thinking over and over I have come to a conclusion… I love her…

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“Yosh! I’ll definitely talk to her today!” I shouted my determination before going to school today. My heart starts racing as I can see her there alone on her seat reading manga, she’s really cute and adorable that it made me want to hug and kiss her. I pull out all my courage and walk towards her “Ohaiyo! Acchan” I said as I give her my best smile that always managed to melt away any girls’ heart.

I saw she blushes and turn her head away as she answered “What?! What do you want?? And don’t call me Acchan!” Aww.. She’s so cute when she’s blushing and I can’t help but wanting to hug her tight in my arms.

“I just want to talk to you” I said which I think surprises her since she jumped a little from her seat.

“I prefer to be alone you don’t have to pity me so don’t waste your time on me” she said coldly.

“I am not pitying you! I just want to be friends with you!” I said in a little hurtful voice.

But before she could say anything Mayumi, my current girlfriend, came and said “Kai, why are you talking to his loner? She thinks she’s all high and mighty so she always ignores others! I know you’re nice and kind but you don’t have to waste your kindness on someone who wouldn’t appreciate it!” then she starts to pull me away from her. I could see tears starting to form in her beautiful eyes and it hurts me to see it… I know she would only be irritated if I stay…

“I’m sorry…” I said sadly as I left with Mayumi.

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Today, I’m alone again reading manga. Well, this is the cycle that repeats every day. I was too absorbed in reading manga that I didn’t realize someone walking towards me so I was startled when he greeted me. The smile he showed me made my heart beat faster than usual and I can feel the heat in my face when he called me ‘Acchan’ I don’t know why but I’m happy about it. But…

“What?! What do you want?? And don’t call me Acchan!” is the only thing that came out of my mouth…

Then he said “I just want to talk to you” I do not know what to answer but then I’m afraid of getting hurt again…

To prevent myself from getting hurt again
I’ll enclose my heart and
Never let it out again
As I do not want to feel the same pain again…



Flashback

“Go away! You B****” these girls who are shouting and beating me used to be my best friends until ‘that’ happened… Now they are always bullying me and hurting me… No matter what I said they always ignore it and when I beg for forgiveness they just push me away… “I didn’t mean it…” I manage to say while crying. “What do you mean by you didn’t mean it??!! It’s all your fault!!! You know how Maria feels about him and yet you!!!”

Flashback Ends…


“I prefer to be alone you don’t have to pity me so don’t waste your time on me” I said to him coldly.

“I am not pitying you! I just want to be friends with you!” I can hear that he’s hurt about what I’ve said but…

Scars of the past
Hunted me even now
No matter how long
It will always remain…


Then his girlfriend came and says “Kai, why are you talking to his loner? She thinks she’s all high and mighty so she always ignores others! I know you’re nice and kind but you don’t have to waste your kindness on someone who wouldn’t appreciate it!” then she starts to pull him away. I could feel tears starting to form in my eyes and I think he noticed it as I can see his face furrowed then he said “I’m sorry…” and left. I don’t know why but I feel hurt seeing him and his girlfriend leave… After they leave I rushed to the bathroom to wash my face.

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The school finally ends and I hurriedly pack my things as I want to go home as soon as possible. But on my way home I saw my nightmare that has been hunting me even now…

Nightmare becomes trauma
It always stays in your heart
No matter what you do
It will always remain
As it is a disease that will haunt you forever…


I tried to avoid them but they notice me as they came and block my way back home…

“Hi there Acchan, you’re still alive??”

I tried to ignore them and walk away but one of them grabbed me on my arms and said “Don’t you dare to avoid us!!!” then they pulled me into a dark corner of the street and starts beating me like in the past…

It hurts so much… my arms, my legs, my body and my head but… what hurts the most is my heart…

There is a saying that says “Friendship Last Forever” but it is wrong!!! Why? Look at me now… being beaten up by my BEST friends… The pain is starting to get me and I wanted to shout but I feel so powerless… Just when I was going to faint I heard someone shouting “What are you girls doing??!! I’m going to call the police!” then I could see they ran away leaving me there alone lying on the ground…

Friendship does not last
It easily breaks apart
They never gave me the chance to explain
But just throw me away…


“Acchan, Acchan! Are you okay??” I could hear a strong yet gentle voice calling out to me and a small smile creep up my face as I see who it was then I fainted…

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I saw Acchan left hurriedly so I try to catch up with her because I want to try to speak to her again. But then l lost her… she walks too fast!!!

Just when I was about to give up and go home I heard shouting in the corner of the street and I decided to see what’s going on in there.

Then I saw a group of girls beating a girl and I realize that it was Acchan!! I could feel my blood boiling but I controlled my anger since it is my policy to NEVER beat girls no matter what even if they act like a B**** So I shouted “What are you girls doing??!! I’m going to call the police!” Then I see them running away leaving Acchan lying on the ground beaten up… I quickly ran and hugged Acchan as I call out her name “Acchan, Acchan! Are you okay??” I could see she showing me a small smile and it melts my heart away but then she fainted… “Acchan! Acchan!” I decided to bring her home to treat her wounds.

Home
I put Acchan on the sofa and went to grab the First-Aid Kit and starts cleaning her wounds. It hurts me so much to see her like this… so weak and defend less… I can’t help but gave her a kiss on the forehead. After treating her wounds I decided to change her clothing since it was all dirtied and ripped up so I went to grab some of my clothes but… how am I suppose to change her clothes without looking at her??? But her clothes are a little wet so it’s better to change it… I bring up my courage and am trying to unbutton her clothes however… someone came home… It was my sister, Minami… She saw me and Acchan…

“Oops! Did I interrupt something?? I’m sorry but I just came home to get something I forgot so… Bye??” she tried to leave but I grab her arm.

“Sis! Can you change her clothes??”

“Why??”

“Well… It’s dirty, wet and ripped up… and she’s sleeping right now…”

“Wait!! Kai… don’t tell me you were trying to rape her??? Or did you already???!!!”

“NO!!!!” I shouted

Then she laugh and says “I’m just joking, come on I know my brother isn’t that kind of person”

I hated it every time when she tries to tease me or make fun of me!!! “Whatever! Just change her will you?? I’m going to be in the kitchen” I shouted then leave the living room.

Few Minutes Later…

“Kai! I finished changing her clothes.”

“Okay!”

“I’m leaving now! BTW mom and dad aren’t gonna be home tonight and I’ll be staying at my friends house so…”

“So??”

Minami smirked and says “Take your time~” then dash out of the house.

“SIS!!!!” I shouted sigh*

I went to get a blanket to cover Acchan because it’s December now and it’s still cold even with the heater on. I cover Acchan with the blanket but then she woke up and was shock to see me.

“Where am I?” she asked in panic

“My home” I answered

Then she quickly checks if her clothes are on or not… She felt relieve when she sees that there are clothes on but her eyes quickly widen when she realize that she was not in her uniform but in clothing that is too big to her which seems to be mine…

She then look at me with her eyes still widen and asked “Did you… do anything??” nervously.

I was trying to control my laughter seeing how Acchan is acting and I decided to tease her a bit “Yes, I did” Well… she didn’t state what that ‘something’ is?? I did bring her back home, ask my sis to change her clothes and cover her with a blanket, who knows what she was asking for :P

Then tears start to form in her beautiful brown eyes and she starts crying which I was taken aback by it. I hurriedly went in front of her and cupped her face with my hands and wipe her tears with my thumbs as I said “Acchan… I’m sorry… I was just joking and I didn’t expect you to cry…”

“But… but… my clothes” she says still sobbing.

“My sis changed it for you, I promise I didn’t see anything”

Then she got angry and starts punching me “Why you!!!” she shouted as she chase after me who was running for my life.

I laugh as I run which I think also affect her since she was laughing too while chasing me. I accidently trip and fall on top of her and we are staring at each other… We were so close to each other and we could feel each other’s breath and before I know it I already pressed my lips on hers and I could also feel her responding to my sudden kiss. It was a sweet and a gentle kiss at first but I can’t control myself anymore as I kiss her wildly and passionately in which she responded by putting her arm around my neck pulling me closer to deepen our kiss.

After kissing for awhile we have to break apart to breathe and as we panted we were staring at each other and I could see Acchan blushing… it was so cute and I accidently blurted out “I Love You”

She was surprised and she turns her gaze away from me looking sad…

“Acchan??” I asked nervously.. I was hoping to not hear the worst answer from her mouth…

“Kai… I’m sorry” she said as she pushes me up from her “I’ll be going home now…” then she is going to the door.

I quickly grab her arm “Wait! Why??” I asked sadly and desperately… I need to know why she rejected me when I know she also loves me.

She looks at me sad as tears starts to form again from her pretty eyes and said “I’m sorry… I’m really sorry Kai… I’m just afraid of getting hurt again…”

Scars of the past
Hunted me even now
No matter how long
It will always remain…

So to prevent myself from getting hurt again
I’ll enclose my heart and
Never let it out again
As I do not want to feel the same pain again…



Flashback

“Acchan, Acchan!” a girl call out her best friend. “Yes Maria?” Acchan ask the girl confused in why is she so excited. “I have a crush!!” says the girl excitedly. “Really?? Who??” asks Acchan as she was happy for her friend. “Yamamoto sempai and I’m planning to confess to him on the Valentine’s Day next week” she shyly said. “Congratz Maria! Go for it! I’ll support you 100% and I’m sure so does Kana, Chiyaki and Eba” Acchan happily said as she grabs her friend hands together. “Thank you so much Acchan. I love you” she said happily and hug her best friend.

Lunch
Maeda, can you come to the gym at 12 noon? I have something important to tell you… Please… was written in a letter that was left inside my table so I went to the gym at 12 noon as requested in the letter. Then I see Yamamoto sempai…

“Sempai??” I asked. “Ah! You came!!!” he shouted happily. “What is it sempai??” I asked confused. “It’s… um…” “Hm??” “I.. I Love You Maeda!! Please go out with me!” he said bowing his head. I was so shock then I quickly decline him “I’m sorry sempai…” “Why?? Do you already have someone you like??” he asked sadly. “No…” “Then why??” “Sempai… I’m sure there is someone who suits you better than me…” “No! I love you Maeda!” “Sorry…” then I ran away…

Next Week – Valentine’s Day
Maria went to confess to Yamamoto… “Yamamoto sempai… I love you! Will you go out with me?” Maria asks shyly to her most beloved sempai that she had fallen deeply for. But Yamamoto just looks at her coldly and said “Go away… I’m not in the mood to play with you… I was just rejected by your best friend, Maeda last week… Unless you’re willing to help me hook up with Maeda don’t talk to me”. Hearing this Maria broken down… she can’t believe how the sempai who was always gentle to her become so cold to her… what she can’t believe the most is that sempai has confessed to Acchan and Acchan never told her about it… She could feel tears pouring out of her eyes and can’t stop crying. ‘Why…’ was the only thing she could think about as she starts to broken down…

Afterschool… Acchan was on her way home when she saw Maria standing in front of her with tears flowing out from her already red eyes… “Maria??!! What happened???” Acchan asks with concern as she tries to wipe Maria’s tears with her handkerchief but was pushed away. “Acchan… Why… How could you??? I HATE YOU!!!” Maria screamed as she ran away leaving a dumbstruck Acchan.

The Next Morning – Classroom
I was really shock and confused about Maria’s reaction yesterday… Is it because of Yamamoto sempai?? I then reached my classroom and I said “Ohaiyo…” but nobody replies me they were all sad and look at me coldly… Then I saw Kana, Chiyaki and Eba “Ohaiyo” I said again but they just glare at me with their teary eyes then Kana came and slap me on the face. “You!!!” Kana shouted as she breaks down into tears again… I was confused I saw almost all of my classmates crying then I see Maria’s table and a vase with flowers was on it… Then a possibility hit me on my head as tears start to form in my eyes… I asked “Wha.. what happened to Maria?? Where is she??” Eba just glared at me and shouted “YOU MURDERER!!!” and she ran out of the room with Kana and Chiyaki… I can’t believe it… my knees fell on the floor as my tears flow down my cheeks… Later that day… I learned that my guess was right… Maria died… to be exact.. she suicide…

A letter was founded on Maria’s table at home that says she was really heart-broken because of sempai’s rejection plus my betrayal since I didn’t tell her that sempai confessed to me and she was really sad and confused so to get rid of her problem… she decided to end it once and for all…

Flashback Ends…


I was crying really hard as I tell Kai about my past. I’m afraid of hurting and getting hurt again that’s why I enclose my heart and prefer to be alone. Then Kai hugged me and said “Cry all you want Acchan, but I want to tell you that it is not your fault and I want you to stop blaming yourself… I’m sure your friends also knows that it isn’t your fault but they are also sad about it and if they don’t blame it on something they will broken down so Acchan I want you to have a good talk with them. I’m sure they’ll understand it in the end.”

“But…” Acchan says hesitantly.

“No But! I’ll be there with you too so don’t worry. I promise you that I’ll always be with you to give you strength, protect you and I will never let anyone hurt you because.. I Love You” Kai said gently and looking lovingly into Acchan’s eyes.

Just tell me you love me
Then I’ll do anything for you
Whether it costs my life or not
All just for your happiness
And that’s what it all matters…


Acchan then smiles and said “I Love You Too” then kiss Kai passionately and Kai also kiss Acchan back passionately and that night they let their lust take over control since nobody’s gonna be home tonight… :twisted: (Please imagine it yourselves :P)


A Few Days Later…


Christmas Eve
Today I and Kai went to confront Kana, Chiyaki and Eba. At first they didn’t want to talk or even see me but Kai forces them to listen to my feelings. I told them everything, like how guilty I felt and how much I missed our friendship and so on. After talking each others’ heart out, crying and hugging we resolve our problems and become best friends again. And Kai also officially broke up with Mayumi today too. I was really happy today and it’s all thanks to Kai.

Friendship may be broken easily
But if you chose to believe
Friendship may last longer than you think
Give you and your friends a chance
Remember the old days…
Remember the bonds you’ve had with each other…
Let’s hold hands and walk towards the future together


After saying goodbye to Kana, Chiyaki and Eba we were on our way back home. “Kai… Thank you for everything that you’ve done for me” I said and looking at him lovingly.

He then smiles and said “I’ll do anything for my princess” then we kiss each other as we snuggle near each other because it’s cold. After we break apart from our kiss Kai smirked said “Now, shall we go back and celebrate our first Christmas together… alone??”

I blushed at his last word “Baka…”

He then chuckles and pull me in for another sweet kiss…

Subsequently it starts to snow…

“It’s going to be a White Christmas this year” I said smiling as I try to reach out to the snow that is falling.

Kai smiles and said “Yea.. And I’m sure this is a present from the God congratulating us to be officially going out now” then he shouted “Thank you for the Present and We Love it!!!” towards the sky.

Scars never heal when alone
But when there’s someone there for you
Even scars will heal one day
As long as there is Love…


I can’t help but smile towards his action… He never fails to make me smile… I then went to hug him as we went back home together to celebrate Christmas.

It’s the best White Christmas I’ve had all my Life!


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Thanks minna for reading it :kneelbow: Hopefully it's not too boring for you :nervous
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [White Christmas] Kai x Acchan >>> 30/11/11
Post by: Popsicle on December 02, 2011, 04:03:11 PM
Wahh the white christmas story was so cute ~  :w00t:

Lol oh so one of the guys are either Sae - Sayaka or Jurina.

But who's the other one...  :?

Update soon~  :nervous
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [White Christmas] Kai x Acchan >>> 30/11/11
Post by: AKBlover_99 on December 02, 2011, 05:00:28 PM
Your story really makes me cry..... :cry: But I love it!!!! :mon crazyinlove:
OMG......I can feel how Acchan felt.... :mon santasad: If I'm a bad person, I'll kill her best friends.    :mon slapself:
More! More AtsuMina! I love reading your fic!    :mon lovelaff:
Update soon!  :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [White Christmas] Kai x Acchan >>> 30/11/11
Post by: Sydney W on December 02, 2011, 05:57:05 PM
love your story... post more Atsumina....
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [White Christmas] Kai x Acchan >>> 2/12/11
Post by: cmze on December 03, 2011, 04:12:23 AM
This was so hert breaking!  :cry

poor Acchan being bullied for something that she didn't do!  :(

but luckily Kai was there to save the day!  :D :twothumbs

love it!  :heart:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [White Christmas] Kai x Acchan >>> 2/12/11
Post by: moekare on December 03, 2011, 07:17:54 AM
waaaahhhh so sweet~~~  :mon inluv: good ~early~ christmas one shot  :gmon sing:
I really can feel the atmosphere, so sweeeeeett  :gmon flowers:
do u mind writing one story on christmas?  :mon santa2:
thanks for updating ~  :gmon bye:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [White Christmas] Kai x Acchan >>> 2/12/11
Post by: Haruko on December 03, 2011, 07:28:05 AM
if its atsumina never fails :D
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 3]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 04, 2011, 07:08:56 PM
@Popsicle ;) The other one is revealed in this chapter!! And thanks for reading :)
@AKBlover_99 Thanks for loving it and I'm glad about it XD I'll try to make more Atsumina (if I can) :nervous
@Sydney W Thanks for loving it :) I'll try XD
@cmze Thanks for reading and loving it XD :peace:
@skytsuna Haha.. Thanks for loving it :)
@moekare I don't mind writing one on Christmas but I wonder if any idea will pop out :nervous But I'll try XD
@Haruko Haha... Yea Atsumina XD


Thanks everyone for reading my One Shot >>> White Christmas :kneelbow: I'm really happy to read all of the comments :)
And khryz0421, Popsicle, iloveakb48, cmze, moekare, d_ruffi, Megumi, zansh, kahem, haru9210 Thanks for the Thanks you gave for White Christmas XD I really do appreciate it.
I appreciate anyone who reads it XD Thanks it makes me really glad that I wrote the story :grin:

This is an Update for Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 3] Hopefully it's not too boring or I'm dragging the story too long :nervous
Please do enjoy it hopefully :) Excuse for my English :P Thank you XD




Chapter 6


Part 3


“Wait… Masaka…!!!!” shouted Kai, Kuu and Riku


The two figures just smile at Kai, Riku and Kuu as they shouted out “Jun and Mayu!!”

“Yup! Mou!! You guys are so hidoi! How could you guys be so cold??? Especially you Takamina!! We’re your cousins!!! How could you forget us???”

“Gomen, Gomen.. It’s that you guys have grown so much… Hahaha…” Kai laugh nervously.

Watanabe Mayu and Matsui Jun is Kai’s cousin and together with Kuu and Riku they always play together when they were young. Kai, Kuu and Riku starts their training as an undercover agents and were having less time to spend with Mayu and Jun… they even forgot to keep in contact with them…

“I really miss you guys but you guys are so cold… didn’t even bother to contact us all these years…” pouted Jun.

“Gomen…” Kai, Kuu and Riku said.

“Don’t think we’ll forgive us guys that easily for making us feel lonely” says Mayu

“We’re really sorry… Mayu and Jun… please forgive us ne…” Kai, Kuu and Riku ask for forgiveness and show them their best puppy eyes.

Well… we already gave them their punishment so it’s okay to forgive them I guess… “Fine” says Jun and Mayu

“So you guys were the helpers, uncle Hiroshi mentioned?” asks Riku

“Yup!”

“Actually, we were the ones that found out that there is something fishy going on inside the school” Mayu says

“What do you mean?” asks Kai

“We were enrolled here as normal students not as underagents like you guys and we were having a peaceful school life until one day…”

“What happened???”

“We accidently saw some students selling drugs to other students at the back of the gym. We immediately reported it to uncle Hiroshi and we caught and interrogated them. But it seems that they were only the ones who work in the lower level since they do not know much and there is an organization behind all these. The organization provides the drugs for them to sell and sometimes give them missions such as beat student A or something. And that's all the information we have for now…”

“Hm… so does the organization hide in the school?” asks Kai

“There’s a high possibility of that but we’re still not sure about it yet.” answers Mayu

“BTW, Mayu and Jun from now on call us Kai, Kuu and Riku okay? We don’t want others to hear you call us Takamina, Mii-chan or Haruna”

“K~” says both Mayu and Jun

“Anyway we think that STC is the most suspicious so far” says Kai

“Yea, so we’re planning to join that club as spy” says Kuu excitedly

“Nah, Plan rejected” says Mayu

“Eh?! Why??” complains Kuu

“It’s because that club have their own way in choosing members and normally only those delinquents or those who doesn’t seem to think in right mind get to join in and we’ve tried joining it but was rejected so it’s only a waste of time if you guys try” answers Jun

“So what club are you guys in now?” ask Riku

“We are in Host Club” says Mayu

“Eh??!! Why??”

“Mayu was the one who form the club because he was influence by an anime call Ouran High school Host Club that time and he think it’s fun to make one. And me with other of our friends think it’s interesting so we also join in.” answers Jun

“Not only that, some members of the STC (female) also come to our clubs and they sometimes leak out some information about the club to us when we use our charm on them and we also earn a lot of AKB points from our servies and the food and drinks we provide” says Mayu

“Oh then that's a good source of getting new information” replies Kuu

“Yea but so far our customers are only those who work in lower and middle level of the organization” says Jun

“And that's why we need more ikemen to bait out those higher up (female) to our club and hopefully make them spill out some important information about their organization so we need you guys to join Host Club also” added Mayu

Kai, Kuu and Riku had no choice but to join since this is all for the sake of getting more information about the organization.

“Okay, we’ll join”

“And hopefully with you guys joining, the business in the HC will become better” says Jun tiredly

“Why? Not much customers??” asks Kuu

“It was really a lot at first but recently…” Jun looks at Mayu and continued “Mayu has been flirting too much with the customers and nearly goes overboard and this makes his fiance really jealous and she scares off our regulars”

“Eh??? Mayu has a fiance???” Kai, Kuu and Riku asked shocked

“Yea.. We were engaged few years ago by our parents and she is truly beautiful that I want to eat her” says Mayu while licking his bottom lip.

“You love her?” asks Kai

“I do”

“Then why you flirt so much with other girls?”

“It’s because she is being such a tsundere so I like to tease her and make her jealous” says Mayu “and she’s really cute when she’s really jealous”

sigh* You’re such a sadist” Jun says while shaking his head slightly

“Oi! What about your Rena??” Mayu said teasingly

Jun blushes and said “She.. She’s not mine…”

“Yet..” Mayu added and laugh at Jun

“Eh?? Jun like the person call Rena??” ask Kuu excitingly

“Who is she?” ask Riku

“She’s Matsui Rena from Class 2-B” answers Mayu

“Hoho… you guys have now become a man huh?? Already have someone you love” says Kuu teasingly while wriggling his eyebrows.

Kai decided to tease Kuu also “Hm… What about Mariko sensei??” Kai said teasingly too and also copy Kuu and wriggle his eyebrows.

Kuu’s face turn bright red and said “What?! Who’s with that T-Rex!!!”

“I didn’t say you’re with Mariko sensei I just said what about Mariko sensei” Kai continue to tease Kuu

“Eh!! Kuu is with Shinoda sensei???” exclaimed both Mayu and Jun

Kuu blushes and decide to have a revenge back on Kai “What about Acchan and Tomochin??” smirked Kuu and now this time it’s Kai’s turn to blush.

“Eh!! Kai is with the two popular girls in school Maeda Atsuko and Itano Tomomi????”

“No! We.. we’re just friends..!” Kai stuttered.

Riku decided to join in the fun “Are you sure??”

But then it backfired on him as Kai stated “What about Yuko??”

Riku blushes “She just clings to me herself!! There’s nothing going on between the two of us!!”

“Wow.. you guys shock us so much” Jun says

“Yea.. it’s just the second day you guys transferred here and… you already all got yourelf a girlfriend.. Except Kai who got two” Mayu added which causes the three of them to blush furiously.

“Anyway let’s go to you guys’ apartment since we’ll be moving there also” says Jun

“Eh???”

“Well.. it’s easier to discuss plan if we live together right??”



Grand Royal Apartment 11th Floor Room 121

They reach the apartment after gathering all Mayu and Jun’s things from their apartment.

After helping Mayu and Jun settle their things in the extra rooms they all went to the living room and sit down except Kuu.

“Kuu, why don’t you take a seat?” asks Kai

“…”

“Come on, sit down”

“…”

“Why aren’t you sitting down??”

“IT’S BECAUSE MY BUTT HURTS SINCE I WAS IN THE BATHROOM DOING MY BUSINESS FOR THE WHOLE DAY!!!” shouted Kuu

Kuu remembers about the cake incident that happened to him today and he glare at Mayu and Jun “You guys were the one who gave me the cake right??”

gulp* Um.. we didn’t??”

Kuu then starts chasing them around the living room.

“Kuu calm down”

“Oi, Kai. You telling me to calm down?? If I tell you that the newspaper club manage to get the photo when Acchan slapped you and is planning to post it in the school newspaper tomorrow from two guys who seems to be in the Host Club will you be able to calm down??? BTW same for Riku.”

Hearing this Kai and Riku’s eye widened cried out “WHAT??!!!” then they also starts chasing after Mayu and Jun.

“Okay, okay We’re sorry!” cried Jun as he runs away from Kuu

“Yea! We did it because you guys were so cold toward us” Mayu added

“NO EXCUSE!” yelled Kai, Kuu and Riku

As Kai and Riku were chasing Mayu bing! An idea came up. Mayu then manage to tell Jun what his plan was and Jun agreed with it, then Jun starts yelling “Oi Midget and Air-head come get me!”

“Who are you calling Midget/Air-head!!!” exclaimed Kai and Riku

“I didn’t say names you admit it yourself” smirked Jun as he run away from Kai and Riku

On the other hand Kuu was chasing Mayu.

“Kuu, calm down… I have a deal to offer you”

Kuu raise an eyebrow telling him to continue.

“In exchange for your forgiveness I’ll offer you 1 week of free luxurious cakes?”

Kuu then starts thinking about the deal and Mayu can see that Kuu is considering it so he quickly added “I’ll offer you 2 week then”

Hearing this Kuu quickly made a peace treaty with Mayu and yelled “Oi Kai and Riku. Let’s stop being childish, they are still kids so we ‘adult’ should you know.. forgive them”

Kai and Riku stops and look at Kuu with a WTH face. Just when Riku was going to say something Mayu quickly went to Riku and whispered “Free, Newest Hot PSP and DS games. If you forgive us I’ll give you all the Newest and Hot PSP and DS games of this year to you.”

Hearing this Riku also calmed down and turns to Kai “Kai, Kuu’s right… They’re just kids so we should forgive them.”

Kai look at Kuu and Riku in disbelief “TRAITOR!! I can’t believe you were just bribed!!! What happens to your pride???”

“Well… pride doesn’t give me free delicious cakes/newest hot PSP and DS games” replied Kuu and Riku

Kai face palm himself thinking how easily his companions can be bribed with simple things… Just when Kai was going to protest.. again Mayu has come…

“Newest Volume of One Piece plus Luxurious Katsudon in the most famous Katsudon restaurant in Japan, the Lion Katsudon” Mayu offered

Hearing this Kai’s eyes lit up and he fakes a cough “Ahem! I have to agree with Kuu and Riku that Mayu and Jun are still kids and can be mischevious sometimes. It was also our fault to forget to keep in contact with them and making them feels lonely. I’m not someone who holds grudges so I’ll also forgive them for their little prank…”

Kuu and Riku looks at Kai with aren’t-you-also-the-same face. Seeing this Kai “An.. Anyway let’s not waste anymore time on this issue and talk about the mission”

Then once again everyone took a seat and makes themselves comfortable but then suddenly Kuu jumped out from his seat and cried out “Ouch!! I forgot that my butt hurts!!”

Seeing this everyone burst out laughing with Jun who fell from his seat from laughing too much… Kuu just pouted standing up of course and rubbing his butt.


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Thanks minna for reading it :kneelbow:
Hope I can update ASAP :mon study:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [White Christmas] Kai x Acchan >>> 2/12/11
Post by: Sok on December 04, 2011, 07:37:12 PM
Funny Chapter.
All five in the host. YAY!  :nya:
Can't wait for your next update.  :on gay:
Thank you.  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 3] >>> 5/12/11
Post by: Popsicle on December 04, 2011, 09:10:14 PM
OMG this is soo good  :wub:
It was mayu and jurina ? I should have known  :P
Why are they so easily bribed loool XD

Update soon  :heart:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 3] >>> 5/12/11
Post by: RenaChii on December 04, 2011, 09:45:37 PM
Jun and Mayu finally here~ (http://www.indowebster.web.id/images/smilies/jeanovea/sebel.gif)

A host club huh~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/nya.gif)

Please update soon~(http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/on_cny2.gif)
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 3] >>> 5/12/11
Post by: Haruko on December 05, 2011, 01:47:03 AM
oh my ohmy, host club with hot guys... cool.. jajaj a love the pairs :D
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 3] >>> 5/12/11
Post by: haruhi16 on December 05, 2011, 03:19:01 AM
omg host club!! ikemen!! <333 haha!

Funny chapter!! The story is getting interesting!! I want the next chapter!! Please please~
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 3] >>> 5/12/11
Post by: AKBlover_99 on December 05, 2011, 04:52:44 AM
Ah! So they're Jun and Mayu!  :lol: I think Mayu's fiancee is Yuki.... :roll:
Hei,Kuu.I know that one day you'll fall in love with that T-Rex!!
Thx for the update! So funny and i like it!
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 3] >>> 5/12/11
Post by: kahem on December 05, 2011, 08:14:40 AM
Woah the christmas fic is so touching. I'm glad Kai could help Acchan.

Hahaha too easy to buy ^^ and host club seem interesting. I wanna see Yuki and Rena.
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 6 Part 3] >>> 5/12/11
Post by: cmze on December 07, 2011, 08:25:25 AM
Omg!  :shocked

This fic never fails on making me smile!  :w00t:

so funny...every line of it!  :rofl:

thanks for the update!  :thumbsup

please update soon :bow:

More Mayuki moments please.. Kidding do as u wish!  :grin:
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 1] >>> 7/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 07, 2011, 11:55:09 AM
Thanks Minna for the Comment :kneelbow: I really do appreciate it so much XD I really enjoy reading it :peace: I suddenly got an idea and I wrote it down :) It's a Christmas One Shot XD Although you won't see how it's related in Part 1 :nervous Hopefully not disappointing :oops: I'll post the Part 2 when Christmas come XD Please enjoy reading it and excuse me for my English :P And for Not OS I'll try to update it ASAP :)


Christmas One Shot – Santa's Christmas Present


Part 1

The three of us were always together since diaper days, no matter where we go, what we do we were always stick together. At that time I believe that this will last forever…

Hi, nice to meet you all. I’m Takahashi Minami a.k.a. Takamina, an ordinary 2nd year High school boy. I used to always spend time with my childhood friends, Maeda Atsuko a.k.a. Acchan and Itano Tomo a.k.a. Tomochin but… since they have start going out I don’t know why but there is this uneasiness in my heart all these time and it hurts when I see them so lovey dovey to each other… And I unconsciously started to distance and avoid myself away from them…

This heart-broken feeling has been growing and hunting me for 6 months already… from May when they told me that they’re going out until now… December… It’s going to be Christmas soon and I guess I won’t be spending it with them like we used too… I’ll celebrate myself and they’ll celebrate it as lovers… It hurts to even think about how they will spend the Christmas together… I wonder if it’s really because I’ve fallen for Acchan like what Riku and Yuko was telling me the other day…


Flashback
Sigh* I feel that someone has squashed my heart when I see Acchan feeding Tomo her home-made love bento…

“You jealous??” I was startled by the sudden question from Riku who was behind me with Yuko clinging onto his arm.

“Wha.. what??!! No.. I.. I’m not jealous!!” I stuttered.. Damn! Why did I stutter??!!

“Minami… I think you better be more honest with your own feeling… You are just torturing yourself and seeing you like this makes me remember myself when I’m denying about my feelings for Yuko…”

“What do you mean??” I asked confused

“sigh* You really don’t know why you have this feeling when you see Acchan and Tomo so close to each other??” Riku asks frustrated

I just gave him a confused look which causes Riku to shake his head slightly.

Instead of Riku, Yuko spoke up instead “Takamina, you’re in love with Acchan! And it’s obvious!!”

“What?? I’m in love with Acchan?? No.. I can’t be.. and even if I am it’s already too late.. since she already have someone she love who is also my best friend and I should be happy for them…”

“If that is what you want then I won’t interfere anymore but… Minami… Try to be honest to yourself or else you will regret it for the rest of your life.” Then they leave me alone thinking about it.

Flashback Ends…


I then went to lie on my bed since it’s already late at night and I’ve got school tomorrow.

Yea.. I think I’m in love with Acchan but.. It’s already too late… If her boyfriend is someone else then I think I can still put up a fight but its Tomo… and I do not want to hurt either of them. But my love for her is killing me and I don’t know what I should do… I think I’m slowly breaking down…

Sigh* When we were still kids, everything was happier… Santa san… if you really exist please tell me what should I do…

Then I slowly fall asleep…


The Next Morning
As usual I went to school, then… I saw Acchan and Tomo holding hands and looking so in love with each other. I could feel knives stabbing in my heart and I can’t stand it anymore so I quickly ran away from them.

I skipped class… I’m not in the mood to be in the class and see the two of them right now. I was on the verge of crying when I suddenly feel a hand on my shoulder. When I look up I saw one of my best friends, Minegishi Kuu, showing me his worried face.

“Takamina.. What happened?? Are you alright??” asks him concernly

“Nothing much happened.. I’m fine” I smiled weakly at him

“You know… you can tell me anything and I’ll listen to it. Spill it out Takamina, it’ll make you feel better”

Hearing this I decide to tell Kuu everything since the burden of my feelings are killing me inside slowly like a poison…


Love is like a knife with two blades
It could be sweet, it could be bitter
Once tasted the sweet side, you could feel heaven
But what I taste was the bitter side…
The bitter side of love is like a poison
It slowly devours you inside and
No matter what you do you are still trapped
Trapped in the thing people called ‘Love’



“Kuu… I’ve realized that I love Acchan and it hurts to see Acchan and Tomo together although they are both important person to me… I know I should be happy for them but I.. I.. just can’t..” I said as I am trying to hold in my tears as I do not want Kuu to use this to tease me later in the future.

Surprisingly Kuu just sit there and listen to me talk, he just quietly listen to my talking which made me feel comfortable as I told him more about my feelings these past few months and days.

After I have finished talking, he finally talks “Takamina.. Friends or not should not hinder your feelings. There is never right or wrong when it comes to love. Love is a selfish thing and Takamina I think you should listen to your feelings, to your heart. But if you really can’t or don’t want to then I suggest you as a best friend to forget about your feeling and face the future and find new love or else you’ll break down one day and as a BEST friend I wouldn’t want to see that…”

After telling me those he left, giving me some private time alone to think about his words, think about my feelings, my heart and my decision…


We were always together
By the time I notice, my feelings has changed to Love
But all is too late…
You already belong to someone else…



School has already ended and I’m now at home lying on my bed thinking about my feelings and my decision.


I miss your voice, your beautiful face and your touch…
If only if I could kiss you without touching your lips,
I wouldn’t feel so miserable now.
If only if I could hug you without touching you,
It would’ve been my salvation.
Even if it’s only a dream
It’s a dream come true to me…
But it’s only if…



I love her… I really do… I’ll give anything and everything to her if that is what she wants. I’ll do anything and everything for her to fall in love with me but… it’s already too late… She now belong to someone other than me and I can’t separate them because both are precious to me, our friendship is the most important to me and I don’t want to risk to break it because of my own selfishness. I know love is selfish but my conscience keep telling me that I should already give up on you… I know I never made a right decision but my resolve is made… From tomorrow I’ll be back to my old-self, as their best friend I’ll congratulate them and smile with them… This is my resolve…


I’ll throw away my love for you
Although I know that love is selfish,
But my resolve is already made.
I don’t want to break your happiness with him,
I’ll love you selflessly.
He’s the one you have chosen,
And if that’s your wish
I shall grant it to you my princess,
Even if it is killing me
Bye to my first and only Love…



The Following Day
I greeted them like how I used to, I showed them my fake smile since I still can’t smile from the bottom of my heart yet but I’m sure one day I’ll be able to show them my true smile and congratulate them truthfully.

Right now its lunch time and I’m at the back of the Gym. Why? It’s because there’s a letter in my shoebox this morning:


Takahashi senpai, please come to the back of the Gym at Lunch Time today.
I have something really important to tell you…
Please… Please come…

There’s no name of the sender but I can somehow feel how desperate this person wants to see me so here I am now waiting for whoever it is.

After a few minutes I saw a girl running towards me and I realize that it is Milky, my kouhai in Akiba Junior High and we are also both in the art club. But I didn’t know that she was also going to AKB High school since I thought she said she wanted to go to NMB High school when she graduated from Akiba Junior High.

“Milky??!!” I ask surprised
She was trying to catch her breath as she says “Hai… sorry I’m late because of the teacher…”
“It’s okay. I was just a little bit surprise to see you here, I didn’t know you also come to AKB High cause I though you say you want to go to NMB High but why didn’t you come to talk to me at all, all these times??”

“I’m really sorry…”

“Nah, it’s okay. So what is it that you want to tell me??” I ask curious

I see her getting nervous when she heard me asking her and she grab her skirt tightly breathe in and out and bite her lower lip as she said “Senpai, I’ve loved you since Junior High and I can’t forget about you so I change my mind and come to AKB High but I can’t pull out the courage to talk to you… Every time I want to talk I’ll always back down because I’m afraid… But I decided to confess my feelings to you. Senpai please go out with me, I really love you” she said blushing and bowing her head slightly.

Hearing her confession I blushed and my eyes widen because I didn’t expect this at all… I never realized that Milky is in love with me since Junior High… I guess I really am as dense as my friends told me that I am… But… how should I answer her??

I really don’t know what to say since I’m still confused then she said…

“I know you’re in love with Maeda san and that Maeda san and Itano san are dating right now. I don’t mind if you can’t give me your answer now but please give me a change and go out with me!” she said desperately

Seeing how deeply in love this poor girl is with me I don’t want to hurt her, I was really shock with her desperation and determination and without realizing a smile has formed on my mouth as the words came out of my mouth “Alright.. Let’s give it a try. I guess it wouldn’t hurt to see if things will work out between us or not”

I could see her smiling widely like a sun so cute~~ I could really tell that she’s so happy as she dash and hug me really tight and I hug her back with a gentle smile on my face.

Then the bell rang, lunch time is over so we both went back to our classroom and afterschool we went back home together holding hands like a couple would do.



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Thanks minna for reading it :kneelbow: I hope it's not that bad :nervous I'll post Part 2 on Christmas!! XD
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 1] >>> 7/12/11
Post by: AKBlover_99 on December 07, 2011, 12:12:14 PM
Takamina and Milky? :gmon blonde: Wow....I didn't expect that.
But it's alright! I like it! :tama-bigheart: Thx for the update!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 1] >>> 7/12/11
Post by: smarty0821 on December 07, 2011, 12:57:44 PM
 :hehehe: Takamina and Milky... that's new I Like It :twothumbs

want to know how the story goes... Thanks for the Upadate  :on GJ:
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 1] >>> 7/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 07, 2011, 01:50:22 PM
Thanks for Reading XD
There's still Part 2 :peace:
Who knows what might happened next smirk* 8)
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 1] >>> 7/12/11
Post by: kahem on December 07, 2011, 06:39:23 PM
I already saw Milky in several fics I have to see who she is lol
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 1] >>> 7/12/11
Post by: Haruko on December 08, 2011, 07:22:57 AM
yeah! I also see this "milky" in several fics, can you tell us who she is?.. I think that is the person who in a special program MUJACK if my memories works fine.. that in this program it was a special and takamina go to NMB`s theater, in a part of this the captain say "someone want that takamina sempai say something to you" and a  girl says "I want the takamina sempai tell me that she love me" well is more a "like me" phrase, she es milky? or not?
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 1] >>> 7/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 08, 2011, 02:19:58 PM
@haru9210 Thanks for the comment XD I almost finished it but I'll post it on Christmas :P
@kahem She's a member in NMB48 8)
@Haruko Yea, she's the one :)
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 2] Preview >>> 7/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 13, 2011, 11:21:10 AM
Thanks everyone for reading :kneelbow: I was just a bit bored so I decided to post this :nervous
Thanks so much for all the comments XD I really love reading them :thumbsup Arigatou :twothumbs



Santa’s Christmas Present (Part 2) – Preview

“I think I’m going to tell him…”
“Let’s stop this…”
“Gambatte…”
“Why are they hugging??!!!”
“I and Milky are going out”
“Do you love him??”
“Yes.. I do..”
My heart hurts… it’s breaking…
“Are you sure you love her??”
“Yes.. I do… I’ll try… and I know that I’ll do it so… please don’t waver my resolve anymore”
“Minami.. I LOVE YOU!!”
“I’m sorry…”
It’s too late…
“Follow your heart, young man. If not you will regret it in the future..”
“I can’t betray her…”
“………… You’re only hurting her!!!”
“I know I can never replace her in your heart….”
“Milky….”
This is for the best… I shouldn’t cry…
“Thank you…”
“Let’s go Tanken!!!” (explore)
“It’s our secret place!”
“I’m sorry…”
“I LOVE YOU”

End of Preview
Santa’s Christmas Present (Part 2)
To be posted on December 24/25, 2011
Thank You
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 2] Preview >>> 13/12/11
Post by: AKBlover_99 on December 13, 2011, 11:41:15 AM
AH! It looks REALLY interesting!
Can't wait to read that! :mon crazyinlove:
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 2] Preview >>> 13/12/11
Post by: cmze on December 13, 2011, 07:12:32 PM
Wow this looks great!  :w00t:

and you have to make me wait!  :catglare:

it's okay i know life gets in the way!  :grin:

sorry for not commenting and just leaving "thanks" as you know life got in my way! :rofl:

please update soon! :cow:
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 2] Preview >>> 13/12/11
Post by: kahem on December 13, 2011, 07:24:17 PM
Oh what a preview. It really makes me impatient ^^
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present [Part 2] Preview >>> 13/12/11
Post by: Haruko on December 14, 2011, 06:13:23 AM
yeah!! preview -___ - you are a teaser too
Title: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina >>> 16/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 16, 2011, 05:16:49 PM
Yea!! Thanks for the comments!!! XD and Thanks for the Thanks too!!! :thumbsup
Haha.. I've got free time today so I wrote an OS :) Sorry but the Santa's Christmas Present will be posted on December 24/25 :P
Maybe I'll post the Not OS tomorrow XD Thanks again everyone for reading!!! Yea!! Yea!!
BTW.. This OS is too long.. so I had to break it into parts... :nervous


One Shot – Gladiator


Part 1

“Waa… wa…” sound of baby crying could be heard
“Hm?? Did I hear baby’s crying??”
George, the trainer/teacher of all new Gladiators was checking around the seats in the Coliseum and found a baby crying on a seat of the Coliseum.
“Why is there a baby here?? Did his parents got too high during the match and forgot him??!!! Eh??!!!” sigh* Hold the baby in his arms “What forgetful parents you got..” Then he notices a name tag around the baby’s neck ‘Takahashi Minami’ “Oh! So you’re name is Takahashi Minami, what a good name you’ve got!”
George decided to keep the baby until he found the baby’s parents.


Few months have passed but George wasn’t able to find any news about the baby’s parents at all…
Sigh* George looked at the sleeping Minami and smile, in these few months George has grown attached to the baby.
“I can’t find your parents little one.. but I guess I could keep you.”


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8 Years Later…
From then on when Minami has grown old enough to fight, George, trained him to become a Gladiator since that is the condition of keeping Minami with him from his boss.

As usual Minami is training alone since George has to attend other new Gladiators.
“Ha! Ha!” Minami shouted while swinging his sword powerfully.
“Kya!” a girl screamed, surprised and fall on the ground landing on her butt.
Seeing this Minami dropped the sword and hurried to the girl’s side.
“I’m sorry.. Are you okay??” He helps the girl stand.
“Un, I’m fine. I was just surprised..” the girl answered shyly.
“Yokatta..” Minami sigh in relief
“Ne, ne.” the girl pokes Minami “Can you play with me?? I’m bored and I’ve got no one to play with”
“I’m sorry but I still got training to do..”
“Onegai..” the girl asks again and this time also showing her best puppy eyes to Minami.
Seeing this Minami can’t say no… “sigh* Fine…”
“Yatta!!” The girl cheered and smiles widely
“I’m Maeda Atsuko but call me Acchan, what about you?”
“I’m Takahashi Minami and you can call me Minami”

Then the two kids play happily together until its sunset and now they were resting on a bench.

“Thank you Minami. I have a really fun day today” Acchan says thankfully
“Nah, I also had fun so I should be thanking you instead”

Suddenly Acchan heard a voice calling her name “Acchan! Acchan! Where are you?? Time to go home!!”

Hearing this Acchan immediately stood up from the bench.

“Sorry.. I’ve got to go home now” Acchan said sadly
“It’s okay, I hope we can play together again” Minami says and smiled handsomely at Acchan causing her to blush
Then Acchan kiss Minami on the cheek “Un! Let’s play again next time! Bye!” then ran to the person calling her name.
Minami was too stunned to say bye to Acchan.. he just sat there hours and hours before he finally go home.

Castle
“Acchan…”
“Hm??”
“Who is he?? Your boyfriend??”
Acchan blushed and replied “No.. he’s just a friend..”
“Then why did I see you kissing him??”
Acchan face turn as red as tomato “It.. it’s just a thank you gift since he played with me all day today”
“Hoho.. Are you sure only that??” asks the squirrel like girl while wriggling her eyebrows.
“Mou! Yuko, stop teasing me!!!” Acchan then ran into her bedroom.

“Yuko, what happened to the princess??” asks one of the royal maids.
“Hm?? Nothing~~ It’s just it seems like the little princess is in love~~” answers Yuko as she skips to the kitchen to grab Acchan’s dinner.

The next day the Queen has been assassinated when she went to the local market to see the locals. The whole kingdom mourns for losing a good Queen, the King fall in to depression and the princess was very sad and cries every day. From then on the King bands the princess from going out of the castle for even a step because he is afraid of losing his beloved daughter too…

The King kept himself busy with work and spend less and less time with the princess because seeing the princess reminds him of his beloved wife… The king will do anything that will keep him busy and that includes war… it was a suggestion by Snape Rindervous, the King’s sister’s son which is his nephew. Snape was known to be a man with greed and there are a lot of bad rumors about him but now the King has somehow start to take his advices like starting war with other countries, drink alcohol and have fun every day.

The King has started to take a liking to killing so he made a new rule for the matches between the Gladiators… which is fight to death… only winners will stay alive while losers shall be dead…


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10 Years Later…
Takahashi Minami is now an 18 year old handsome young man. He has become a super rookie in the world of the Gladiator. But you could see coldness in his dark, brown eyes…

In the Gladiator’s world, there are no friends… Friends today could end up as an enemy the next day… what awaits in friendship is only betrayal…

Minami is really skilled but he doesn’t trust anyone easily, he only trusts his teacher, George, and his only 2 best friends Kojima Riku, a doctor, and Minegishi Kuu, a mysterious traveler.

Minami used to have friends… Gladiator friends… but they end up killing each other… From then on Minami stopped making friends because he didn’t want to experience the pain of betrayal from friends anymore… it hurts more than any kind of physical wounds… it stays in his heart…

As usual Minami is training alone then suddenly someone calls his name.

“Oi! Takahashi, your turn in the next 2 hours prepare yourselves and you better win because I’m going to recommend you to the King”

“Samuel, you didn’t have to tell me, I’ll win the match.” Minami said coldly and continue his training.

“kk, I won’t bother you now bye”

Samuel is the dealer in bet of the matches, he collect bets and tells the Gladiators when their turn will be.

When Minami is going to go to the Coliseum someone called him.
“Takamina, are you gonna hold back on your opponent??”
“Of course not… since it's a death match, Kuu…” Minami replied coldly
“Just asking, anyway Good Luck don’t die yet~~” Kuu replied cheerily and left.

Coliseum
The dealer is calling out to the crowd to make it exciting. “Welcome Everyone!!! To the Coliseum!!! Today our fighters will be the super rookie versus the ripper!!!” “Woo!!!” crowds cheering.
“Everyone has you placed your bet?? Are you ready?? Then let’s welcome the fighters today!!!”

Coliseum’s Waiting Room
Minami was going to go but then was stopped by a hand, Minami then turn to see the owner of the hand… George.

“Be careful” George said with concern
Minami smiled weakly and replied “I know..” and left.

George felt sad seeing Minami like this but there is nothing he can do about it… Sorry kid… If I wasn’t the one who picked you up maybe you wouldn’t be suffering now…

Minami is really tired of killing but there is nothing he can do. The moment you’ve become a Gladiator then for the rest of your life you’ll remain a Gladiator it’s an absolute rule here in the kingdom. Minami took a deep breath and stepped into the Coliseum.

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Castle
I wonder how is he now… I really miss him… I want to see him again… A girl was looking out through the window with sad eyes.

“Acchan, Acchan!” a squirrel like girl called out to her.
“Yes, Yuko? Why are you so excited?? You’ve got a date with your boyfriend again today??” Acchan teased
Yuko blushed and replies happily “Yea.. I’m having a date with my Nyan Nyan today”
Acchan suddenly have lonely eyes “Good for you… enjoy your date”
“Oh! I remember now!! I came here because your majesty, the King, as called for you!!!”
“Eh?! Really???”
“Yes, so hurry and go now”
“Okay, I got it!”

It was really rare for her father to call her so Acchan was really happy as she hurriedly rushes into the throne room.

Throne Room
“Your majesty, princess Atsuko has arrived”
“Call her in”
“As you wish your majesty”

Acchan then ran in and hug her dad tightly “Dad!”
“Hoho… so full of energy aren’t we??”
“Hehe.. BTW, dad why did you call for me??”
“I’ll bring you to the Coliseum today with me and have some fun”
“Really??!! What will we do there??”
“It’s a secret~ you’ll know when we arrive there”

“Your majesty, the carriage is now ready” a pale, skinny middle-aged man called out to the King.
“Oh, Snape. Good Job, now accompany me and the princess to the Coliseum”
“As you wish my lord” Snape said and bow to the King.

Hearing that Snape is coming too Acchan frowned… she didn’t like Snape because he is the one who keep telling his father to have war with other countries and she didn’t like it at all… Some Generals told the King that Snape is bad and the King shouldn’t listen to him but they were all executed…

Outside of Coliseum
The King and the princess have reached the Coliseum.
“Welcome, your majesty and princess. We have prepared special seats for your majesty and please allow me to show your majesty the way” Samuel said politely and bowing to the King and the princess.
“Okay, lead us to our seats and who are the fighters today?” asks the King
“It would be our super rookie versus the ripper, your majesty”
“A rookie?? That would be no match isn’t it??” asks the King frowning.
Huh?? Fighters? Match?? What are they talking about?? Acchan is thinking to herself.
“No, no, no. Your majesty, he may be young but he is fierce and very skillful”
“Hm… Are you sure??” asks the King doubtfully
“Yes your majesty.”
“Fine, I’ll believe you but better not disappoint me. I’ll place 100,000 Gold on that rookie.”
“Hai! Kashikomarimashita, your majesty” Samuel answers and bows slightly.
What is going on?? Bet?? Gambling??? Why did dad bring me here??

Coliseum
After leading the King and the princess to their seats Samuel leaves to collect the bets from the crowds.

“Welcome Everyone!!! To the Coliseum!!! Today our fighters will be the super rookie versus the ripper!!!” “Woo!!!” crowds cheering.
“Everyone has you placed your bet?? Are you ready?? Then let’s welcome the fighters today!!!”
“First the ripper, Jack!!!!” the announcer screamed as the crowds cheery loudly “Yea!!!!!”
Then a man came out from one of the door, the man has a long neck and he is limping while holding two knives swaying back and forth while his tongue licking one of the knife and laugh creepily…

Ew… That man is so creepy…. He’s so scary…
“Dad… What is this about??”
“Ah.. Forgot to explain.. This Coliseum is where Gladiators fight each other to death and the crowds will bet and enjoy the match. It’s one of the best sports ever.” The King said excitedly to his daughter.
What??!!! Fight to death??? It’s not fun at all!! It’s cruel!! Why did dad bring me here?? And… when did he come to like killings when he used to hate it so much… Acchan thought to herself sadly and was about to leave but was stopped when the announcer announced the next fighter.

“Now the opponent of Jack is our super rookie, Takahashi Minami!!!”
“Yea!!!” “Go Jack!! Kill that young man!!!” “Minami don’t lose, we’ve bet on you!!!” crowds cheering.
Acchan was shocked when she heard the name then she hurriedly try to see the face of the young fighter.

Although 10 years have passed Acchan would never forget that face… the face she missed so much…

Is that really Minami?? I finally get to see him again!! But… his eyes are so cold.. so different from the ones I’ve known…

Then the fight begun!! Minami was able to fight head to head with Jack and this irritates Jack. Damn this rookie is good… I’ll let you know why I’m called Jack the Ripper!!

Jack then swing both his knives heavily and manages to swing away Minami’s sword from his hand, this gives Jack the opportunity attack Minami. Jack then starts slashing his knives towards Minami but Minami was able to dodge all the attacks.

“Go Jack!!!” “What are you doing rookie!!!”
I’ve got to get my sword back… Minami then dash and dive to get his sword but Jack manage to slash him on his back.
“Arg!” Minami cried out in pain.

Seeing this Acchan screamed out “Minami!!!” while the crowds are saying BOOS!!!
Minami was hurt quite badly and he knows that he got to finish this fast. Then he heard a voice… a voice he seems to know.. a voice of long ago… He then turn toward the source of the voice and he immediately recognize the owner of the voice..

Acchan…

As Minami is looking at Acchan Jack then charge towards Minami aiming for his throat.

“Minami, Be Careful!!!” Acchan shouted
Hearing this Minami hurriedly turn back to Jack and manages to dodge the fatal attack.
Minami then becomes serious and starts to counter back… his eyes turned ice cold as he starts to slash Jack’s arms, chests, legs and finally stabs his heart…
“Arg!! No!!!” Jack shouted in pain as he drops on the floor… dead…

The crowd freezes awhile then cheers again for the winner has been decided.

Acchan was shocked to see how Minami can kill someone so easily and coldly like that… Is that really my Minami??? Acchan didn’t want to admit how much Minami have changes but it’s the truth….

“Yes!! Wow! That was a great match wasn’t it Atsuko??” asked the King excitedly
“…”
“It’s fun right?? I could see how desperate you were cheering that rookie, hahaha” the King laughs
“…”
“Atsuko?”
“Please excuse me…” Acchan then left and tears starts to drop from her eyes as she realizes that the Minami she knows and loves is no longer the same Minami anymore… Minami… What made you change so much???

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Clinic
After the match Minami went to the clinic to have his wounds cleaned.
“This is quite a nasty injury… It would hurt a little.. Here bite on this as I stitch your wound” Kojima Riku, Minami’s best friend and the clinic’s doctor says to Minami.
“K..”

A Few Minutes Later…
“There done but be careful not to move too much and don’t let water in it”
“Hai, Hai..” Minami answers lazily
Sigh* “Anyway that’s it… I’ve got to go now since I have an important appointment today, well then c ya”
Minami smirked and says “Have fun with your girlfriend~~”
Riku blushes and replies “Whatever!!”

Now Minami is alone… He then remembers about the match today… remembers about the girl that call out his name.. Acchan…

Minami then walk to the place where he and Acchan first met and stopped when he sees a girl sitting on the bench crying.

He slowly approaches the girl “Miss, are you okay??”
The girl slowly raises her head and sees Minami.
Minami realize it was Acchan and decide to leave but was stopped by a hand…
“Wait!” Acchan cried out.
“You… you’re Minami right??”
“…” Minami just nodded slightly
Acchan can’t hold her feelings anymore as she hugged Minami tightly..
“I missed you so much.. sob* sob*”
Minami was a little bit surprised by then hug Acchan back “Un.. Me too..”

Then the two faces each other and look at the face that they both miss so much and slowly, slowly the distance between them is getting smaller… From 5 cm, to 4, then 3, 2, 1 and…. 0.. Their lips are on each others’… They were kissing slowly but passionately, pouring out all their feelings that they’ve had for the past 10 years…

After they break apart from the kiss they both blushes furiously when they realized what happened a few seconds ago…


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Thanks everyone for reading :kneelbow: I'll post Part 2 soon :)
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina >>> 16/12/11
Post by: Flean on December 16, 2011, 05:41:20 PM
Woah!!! Gladiator!!! seriously!!! Man, you're awesome!!!  :twothumbs

need part 2!!!  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina >>> 16/12/11
Post by: AKBlover_99 on December 16, 2011, 05:45:31 PM
WOW ! Minami was so cool.... :mon lovelaff: Thx for updating! :mon innocent:
Can't wait to read part 2 !    :tama-apeshit:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina >>> 16/12/11
Post by: Sok on December 16, 2011, 05:52:44 PM
WOW! this is great.  :mon angel:
Minami's so cool.  :luvluv1:
Thanks for the update. Wonder what will happen next.  :mon huh2:  :mon dunno:
Can't wait for part 2.
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina >>> 16/12/11
Post by: kahem on December 16, 2011, 07:47:55 PM
Yay so cool gladiator Minami!!!
Acchan's cousin, just reading his name makes me hate him lol
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina >>> 16/12/11
Post by: Sydney W on December 16, 2011, 07:48:18 PM
Minami as gladiator (ice cold) but when he met Acchan everything become melting. Please post the 2nd part sooner. Thanks
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina >>> 16/12/11
Post by: RJay on December 16, 2011, 11:09:38 PM
I can't wait for the next update
especially the other fics :tama-laff: :mon inluv:
continue the hard work

please update soon
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina >>> 16/12/11
Post by: Popsicle on December 16, 2011, 11:36:09 PM
Omdz your fics are all so gd xD :thumbup
All mighty Minami the gladiator loool :w00t:
Hmm i wonder why he changed ... :lol:

Oh well ~ update soon  :deco:

Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina >>> 16/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 17, 2011, 07:09:16 AM
@Flean Hehe.. Thanks :) I've just finished typing Part 2 :peace:
@AKBlover_99 You're welcome and I'll post part 2 after posting this XD
@Sok Thanks for reading :) Part 2 will be posted really soon ;)
@kahem Haha.. It seems everyone loves the Gladiator Minami XD
@Sydney W Yup! Acchan is Minami's sun :oops:
@RJay Thanks for the comment and I'm working on other fics right now :) Hopefully I got great ideas soon XD
@Popsicle Thank a lot for your compliment :oops: You'll know :)

P.S. Ahem.. although it' Gladiator and much action scenes are expected but.. I'm not that good in writing action scenes.. :nervous So.. um.. sigh* Please read Part 2 instead... I don't know what to say...
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 2) >>> 16/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 17, 2011, 07:12:05 AM
Thanks everyone for the comment :) and the Thanks ;) It ends up too long again... so I had to break it again... :nervous Part 3 will be shorter, please don't expect too much :P I'll post it soon and I'm also working on Not OS right now, hopefully I can update soon XD Please excuse me for my English :P



One Shot – Gladiator


Part 2

“I missed you…” Acchan said softly and shyly
“Me too…” Minami replies gently
“Why were you crying?” Minami asks with concern
“Because… I see your eyes so cold when you killed your opponent and I think you’re no longer the Minami I know… Minami.. Why did you your eyes become so cold when it used to be so gentle and warm??” Acchan asks desperately
“…”
“Minami..”
“Acchan… That’s how I am…”
“No! I know you are a very warm and kind person, you are not cold!”
“Acchan… sigh* It’s just that I’m tired of betrayal and killings. Every friend I made end up betraying me and it’s easier this way if I remain cold…”


Flashback… 3 Years Ago…
“Hey Minami!” a young man call to the young 15 year old boy who was training alone like usual
“Oh, Ryuu. Finish with your trainings already??” Minami asked
“Yup! So I’m free now. Wanna go and grab some food??”
“No problem, wait let me get change first”
Then the two of them went to the Ohaiyo Bar and grab some food. They were chatting and laughing as they ate their food, from any one’s point of view you could tell that they are very close to each other, they are best friends.

Few Days Later…
“Oi! Takahashi”
“What??”
“You’ve got your a match tomorrow in the morning” Samuel says
“Okay, I got it.”

The Next Day… Coliseum..
“Everyone are you ready??” “Yea!!!”
“Let’s welcome the young warrior Ryuu versus our new rookie Takahashi Minami!!!”
(Gladiators should at least fight in the Coliseum for 5 years to earn a title and graduate from being a Rookie)

“Eh??” Minami was shocked to hear who his opponent was… his best friend, Ryuu.
Minami then walk into the Coliseum hesitantly and saw Ryuu there swinging his sword for warm up.

“Ryuu…”
“What’s wrong Minami?”
“I… I can’t fight you…”
Ryuu the smile devilishly “Then die for my sake”
Then Ryuu charged towards Minami but Minami dodge in reflect.

“Wait! Ryuu!”
But Ryuu doesn’t stop his assault to Minami; he kept slashing, stabbing and chopping as Minami dodge and block every assault.

“Ryuu! Why are you doing this??” Minami asks helplessly
“For money, for fame and for my life!!!” Ryuu laughed loudly
“What??”
“Mr. George always compliments you and says how strong you will be as a Gladiator in the future so I will proof that I’m the better fighter and I will destroy you!!!”
“I thought we were best friends…”
“Hah! That’s one of my plans. So that you will be like this, not able to kill me hahahaha…” he laughed as he continue to attack Minami
“Ryuu.. you mean our friendship was a lie from the start??” Minami asked sadly
“Takahashi.. Let me tell you one thing. Friendship will NEVER exist in this world. Friendships are tactics to get your opponent down and win your matches. There is never any friendship between us, there is only tactics!”
“Ryuu…” Minami is really sad… he thought he finally got a real friend after so many friends who end up betraying him… he thought Ryuu is different… but he is just the same as them…
“Die Minami!!” Ryuu shouted as he charged towards Minami
Minami’s eyes turned cold… he wanted to end the fight quickly… he didn’t want to see his face anymore…
In just a few seconds Minami blocked Ryuu’s attack and stab him right at the heart.
“Arg!!” Ryuu cried out in pain and as Minami is ready for the final attack “No! Please Minami… we’re best friends right??” Ryuu pleaded to Minami hoping Minami will let him have the opportunity to turn the tables around but Minami just looked at him coldly as he stabs deeper into Ryuu’s heart…
“Woah! Great!!! Way to go Rookie!!!” crowds cheering could be heard everywhere as Ryuu died confirming Minami’s victory…

Flashback Ends…


Acchan then suddenly hug Minami tightly
“Acchan??”
“Not everyone is like that and you can trust me Minami. I will never betray you and I will always stay by your side so please don’t bear all the burdens by yourself.”
Hearing this Minami hug Acchan back tightly and murmurs “Thank you..”

From then on Minami and Acchan would often spend time together. How?? When Minami is free he would sneak into the castle and visit Acchan. How?? Minami’s best friend + mysterious traveler, Kuu, knows a lot of secret passage in the kingdom and one of the passages allow Minami to sneak in the castle without being notice. And when Minami got matches Acchan would always follow her father to the Coliseum to cheer for Minami. Their love starts to grow every day, little by little and they are totally in love with each other.

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Castle
Today the two lovebirds are spending their quality time in Acchan’s secret garden together. They were enjoying the beautiful scenery in front of them; many kinds of beautiful flowers such as roses, lily, and sunflowers were blooming everywhere with small animals such as squirrels and birds playing around, it is a paradise. They were sitting on the grass with Acchan resting her head on Minami’s shoulder while Minami rest his head slightly on top of Acchan’s head as their fingers interlocked. They were enjoying each others’ presence and would love to stay like this forever but time doesn’t stop…

“Minami…”
“Hm?”
“Nothing.. I just want to call your name”
Minami chuckles and give Acchan a small peck on her lips “??”
“I just want to kiss my loving princess”
Acchan blushes and kiss Minami “I also just want to kiss my prince”
Then they were playing and give each other small peck on the lips like a relay.

Their small kissing relay was forced to stop when a voice interrupted them “Acchan!”

Acchan pouted and Minami laughs and gives Acchan one last peck “I win!”
Then Minami got up and bid his farewell to his beloved princess “Don’t pout my princess, I’ll come again tomorrow” and wink at Acchan causing Acchan to blush furiously.

“Mou~ Minami!”

“Acchan there you are!”
“Yes Yuko?”
“sigh* Having your quality time with your beloved prince again??” Yuko asks teasingly
Acchan just ignore Yuko’s tease as she asks “Why were you looking for me?? It better be something important… or else…” Acchan shows Yuko her dark smile as dark aura leaks from her body.
Gulp* It… Your majesty has called for you” Yuko answers nervously Waa… Black Acchan.. It’s really scary… Better not interrupt her quality time with her prince next time… I’m still too young to die…
“I got it” Acchan replies then leaves to the throne room.

Throne Room
“Dad, you call for me??”
“Yes, my daughter. I have an important thing to tell you”
“What is it??”
“I will announce the royal marriage between you and Prince Keita of the Hiroshima Kingdom tomorrow to the people of our kingdom so I’m telling you in advance. Your wedding will be 2 weeks from now.. cough* cough*”
Eh?? Did I hear dad correctly??
Acchan’s world starts to turn black and white and whatever he father told her later didn’t went in her brain, she was in total shock as her brain freezes and keeps replaying the words her father told her earlier…
“No..” Acchan murmurs out softly
“What did you say my daughter, I didn’t hear it”
“No..” Acchan murmurs again but louder this time
“You have no choice in this matter” the King said firmly
“NO!!! I won’t marry who ever the prince is!!” Acchan shouted as tears starts flowing out of her beautiful brown eyes.
“MAEDA ATSUKO, you do not have the rights to refuse this! Cough* cough* you shall follow what I say!” shouted the King
“No.. Dad please.. I don’t want to” Acchan was now begging her dad but the King just look at her coldly and says “Guards! Bring the princess back to her room and lock her up until her wedding day cough* cough*”
“Yes, your majesty”
“NO!!!” Acchan cried out.
The guards obeyed and brought the princess to her chamber and lock her up inside.

Acchan’s Bedroom/Chamber
“sob*.. sob*.. No.. Minami.. save me… Minami…”

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The Next Day
The royal marriage between Princess Atsuko and Prince Keita was announced to the people of the whole kingdom and that the King is ill and is resting while the authority is temporarily handed to Snape. On the other hand, Minami was very shocked about the news and decided to go see Acchan and figure out the situation.

Castle
Minami sneaks into the castle and is looking around for Atsuko but he can’t find her anywhere. Suddenly he heard some noise and was ready to escape but then the voice stopped him…

“Wait! Acchan needs you!”
“Where is Acchan??!!” Minami asks desperately
“Follow me quietly” Yuko ordered
Minami nods in response.

Yuko then leads Minami to Acchan’s bedroom and unlocked it to let Minami in.
“I’ll leave Acchan in your hands”
“Un! Thank you”

Then Minami went in Acchan’s bedroom and there he saw his princess lying on the ground sleeping, exhausted from crying too much. Minami then slowly approaches Acchan and carry her in bridal style and put her on her bed. He could see how red and puffy his’ angel’s eyes have become from crying all night long and it breaks his heart. Minami then placed small kisses on both Acchan’s eyes gently and Acchan woke up. Acchan slowly opens her eyes then she sees Minami, she then hugged Minami tightly as she starts to cry again…

“sob* Minami, I missed you sob*”
Minami hugged Acchan back and rubs her back slowly and gently “Ssh.. It’s okay.. Please don’t cry Acchan.. It hurts me to see you like this” Minami then cupped Acchan’s face and gently rub the tears off from her angelic face.

After Acchan has calmed down Minami open his mouth slowly and asks “Acchan, are you willing to marry the prince?”
Acchan shakes her head and pouted while thinking why did Minami even asks her that question.
Seeing Acchan pouting Minami lets out a small smile as he continues “Do you love me??”
Acchan nodded “I do..”
Satisfy with Acchan’s answer Minami asks his last question “Then are you willing to run away with me?? I know it may sound ridiculous but…” Minami wasn’t able to finish his sentence as Acchan silence him with a short, deep kiss.
“I do, Minami. And it’s not ridiculous at all.” Acchan replies and smiles.
Then they look at each other lovingly~~ But it didn’t last long as they were interrupted again.. The only difference this time is that it’s not Yuko who interrupted them it was Snape with 20+ royal guards.

“GET THE INTRUDER!!” shouted Snape
“YES SIR!!” the guards shouted in response.

The guards then start and charge towards Minami. Minami was able to dodge while giving the guards a few hits on the back of the neck causing a few of them to faint but there are too many guards, it’s just the time’s problem before Minami will be caught.

“Stop! I order you to stop as the princess!” Acchan shouted
The guards stop but then Snape interrupted “I as the temporary authoritarian order you to capture the intruder! And ignore the Princess order, I will temporary band the princess’ rights”

The guards then continue to charge towards Minami but Minami was caught since there were too many guards.

“Stop! Let him go!” Acchan shouted and tries to go to Minami but the guards stopped her.
“I’m afraid not princess… I’ll have him imprisoned with the royal maid, Oshima Yuko, who let him in your chamber” Then Snape and the guards leaves and locked up the door again.

Acchan was slamming and hitting the door hard hoping to break open but the door didn’t even nudge… “No.. Minami… Yuko.. sob*” Why did this have to happen??

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The Day of the Royal Wedding
The king has become really ill and can’t move from his bed at all so Snape is still having the authority to do as he like. Snape uses Minami and Yuko’s life to blackmail Acchan to marry the prince which Acchan agrees.

At the Same Time – Prison
“Damn it! It’s the wedding day today and I can’t do anything about it.. I can’t even protect the woman I love.. What kind of man am I??!! Why am I so useless…” Minami shouts to himself as he keeps punching the floor until his fists is bleeding but he ignores the pain and continues to punch the floor to let out his anger.

“Woah! Calm down Minami”
Minami stops and look at the source of the voice “Kuu…??”
“Yup! You’re mysterious traveler plus best friend plus your prince charming is here at your service to save you” Kuu replied jokingly
Then someone from the back smack Kuu’s head “Ouch!”
“Riku??”
“Yup! You’re doctor plus best friend plus um.. knight? Is here at your service” then it’s Kuu’s turn to smack Riku now “Ouch! Why did you do that?? You could’ve cause brain damage!!!”
“Hey! That’s payback for what you did to me!! I also could’ve got brain damage!”
“Even if you got brain damage it wouldn’t change since your brain is already damaged in the first place but mine is different!! Mine is delicate!! Gachapin!”
“Hey! My brain is not damaged and don’t call me Gachapin I’m not green!”
“Would you guys stop this stupid fight and explain the situation to me??!!”
“It’s not stupid!” both shout in the same time
“Whatever..” Minami rolled his eyes in response
“Hmph! You don’t even show your gratitude towards your friend who works so hard to get this key for you??” Kuu says as he unlock Minami’s prison
“Ow.. Thanks” Minami replies
“Anyway let’s go to Yuko’s cell next.” Riku says impatiently
“Hai, Hai.. I bet your girl friend is already missing you so here you might want this before we unlock her cell” Kuu says as he handed an armor to Riku
“Huh?? Why would I need this??” Riku asks confusedly
“Because you might want to keep yourself safe from the squirrel assault when she’s free…” Kuu replies sarcastically
“Oh… You’re right I do need this.. Thanks..” Then Riku starts to put on the armor

Then the three friends start to walk towards Yuko’s cell, Minami and Kuu was way ahead while Riku was way behind.
“Wait Guys!!” Riku says as he walks slowly
“Can’t you walk faster?? After saving your princess I’ve got mine to save too!!” Kai yelled to Riku
“Can’t you see that this armor is so heavy and it’s hard to move in??!!!” Riku shout back as he continues to advance slowly.
(If you want to know how he looks like moving you should check out Ariyoshi AKB Kyowakoku but I forgot which episodes got it :P)

Finally the three friends have arrived at Yuko’s cell and they freed her, as soon as she’s free just like Kuu’s prediction she charged towards Riku knocking him to the ground.

“Nyan Nyan! I missed you~~ And you look so cool in the armor~ I think I’ve fallen all over for you again” Yuko replies as she starts groping Riku “But… I don’t like it because I can’t feel your skin!! Skinship, skinship Nyan Nyan!! Remove the armor!!!”
“Wait, wait!! Yuko calm down!!” Riku shouted
Kuu and Minami grab Yuko from behind as Yuko struggles “Let me go!!”
“Yuko.. Calm down first.. We have to save the princess first” Riku says trying to calm Yuko down from her skinship fever…
“Fine… But you’ve got to let me have my skinship once these is over”
“sigh* Fine…”
“Yea!!! So let’s go to save the princess now!!!”

“Anyway I know a secret path to the Wedding Hall so that we can save the princess but before that….”

Wedding Hall
Prince Keita is very happy to be able to wed the beautiful princess; she is rumored to be beautiful, kind, sweet, caring and gentle. While the princess is very unhappy to have to wed to this Prince who she thinks is the ugliest creature in the world. (He’s not that ugly but you know.. in Acchan’s heart only Minami is considered handsome~~)

Now the priest has start to say his usual words when there is wedding Blah, blah and blah… as the prince says I do and now it’s the princess’ turn.

“Maeda Atsuko, are you willing to stay by Hiroshima Keita’s side no matter how long, how poor, how hard…” the priest wasn’t able to finish his sentence..
“NO, I DON’T!” replied Atsuko

“Eh??!!” Everyone was shocked…
The priest thought he didn’t hear right so he asked again in which Acchan replies with.. “sigh* I THOUGHT YOU WERE ONLY BALD BUT YOU WERE DEAF TOO??? DIDN’T I JUST SAY THAT I DON’T WANT TO MARRY THIS SATA LOOK-A-LIKE??!!!”
(Sata here is Sata from the Bad Boys… XD)

Ahem! In this world Sata is a mythology creature that is known as the ugliest creature in the world…

Everyone was shocked again… with mouth agape this time..
Acchan just rolled her eyes and says “What’s with this double-shock reaction?? Can’t you people think of any better reaction than just freeze there looking shock?? You could’ve cheer on me instead.. sigh*”

Everyone was shocked because the princess they know is how the rumors are; sweet, caring, kind, gentle and loving… but the princess in front of them…

“sigh* as I said are you guys playing Darumasan ga Koronda??”

Silence filled in the room as everyone was too shock to say anything while the princess was too tired to say anything…

Then suddenly!! “Bwahahaha… OMG this is so hilarious” could be heard from under the altar.

The altar suddenly moved to the right hitting the prince in the process knocking him out as 4 figures came out from the hole under the altar.

“A… Acchan…” Minami was totally speechless… actually the 4 of them were there since they heard the ‘I do’ from the prince and just when they were ready to charged out they heard Acchan’s statement and Kuu decided to see what’ll happen next first so they didn’t charge out.

“OMG! Acchan I never knew you could be this… brave… fierce and.. black?? Nah.. I knew you’re black from the start but.. It’s just amazing..” Yuko says excitingly
While Kuu is still laughing hard and rolling on the ground “Bwahahahah!!”
“…” Riku was also speechless

Acchan ignored Yuko’s statement and charge towards Minami “Minami!! I missed you so much!” and hugs Minami tightly.
Minami snapped out from the shock and hug Acchan back “Un.. I miss you too”
Then they separate from their hug and kiss each other passionately.

The people were shock again! Isn’t it suppose to be the princess’ wedding with the prince?? Why is the princess kissing that man??? Again.. The crowd was too shock to even show any kind of reaction aside from freezing.

“Acchan.. didn’t you miss me??” Yuko asks pouting fakely of course..
“I also miss you Yuko” Acchan replies smiling
“Yea, yea but not as much as your Minami right??” Yuko says teasingly

Suddenly Snape has finally snapped out from the shock.. he never see the princess like that.. he thought the princess was timid and weak but… anyway he shouted out “Guards!!! There are intruders!! Get them!!”


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Thanks everyone for reading once again :kneelbow: I'll update Part 3 ASAP :) But Part 3 is really short I think..
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina >>> 16/12/11
Post by: Haruko on December 17, 2011, 07:17:10 AM
good fic :D
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 2) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: Sok on December 17, 2011, 07:46:19 AM
YAY! This is getting very interesting.  :mon fyeah: :mon nyah: Can't wait for part 3.  :mon cute: Thank you.
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 2) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: cmze on December 17, 2011, 07:49:23 AM
WHAT?!??  :shocked  :inlove:

this was.... :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Kuu,Yuko and Acchan!  :w00t:

 “What’s with this double-shock reaction?? Can’t you people think of any better reaction than just freeze there looking shock?? You could’ve cheer on me instead.. sigh*” :rofl:

Acchan is so cool!  :twisted:

Omg pleaseeeeeee update soon!  :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 2) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: haruhi16 on December 17, 2011, 09:17:04 AM
thanks for the update!~
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 2) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: Sydney W on December 17, 2011, 09:20:24 AM
Not enough.. i want part 3... please post soon....... thanks
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 2) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 17, 2011, 09:32:07 AM
@Haruko Thanks :thumbsup
@Sok Hehe.. :) I'll be posting Part 3 XD
@cmze Haha.. Thanks for the Comment :thumbup :thumbup Just finished Part 3 ;)
@haruhi16 :) Your welcome and Thanks for the comment!!! :twothumbs
@Sydney W Haha.. Part 3 will be posted a few minutes later :peace:

No action scenes... But please bear with it :err: Not good in writing it...
Thanks for reading and the comments :farofflook: Really appreciate it XD
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 3) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 17, 2011, 09:44:04 AM
Thanks everyone for the comments and Thanks :thumbup :thumbup Here's Part 3 XD Although might be a bit boring for some people and short... :nervous This is the Last Part.. Please excuse me for my English :P Having a rest right now :on drink:



One Shot – Gladiator


Part 3

“…” No guards were coming in..
“Guards!! I said Guards!!!” Snape shouted but still no answer..
“Gua…” Snape shouted again but stopped when he sees a familiar figure walking in the Wedding Hall with a lot of guards.
“Stop shouting Snape! Here, I’ve brought a lot of guards that you wanted but they won’t be arresting our friends there but they will be arresting you!!!”
“You.. your majesty?!! How come???” Snape says shocked
“Hmph! You and your little poison! I should say thanks to the doctor there who gave me the antidote! Snape you’re charge for poisoning the King! And all of your authorities shall be returned, Guards arrest him!!” shouted the King.
“Yes! Your majesty”

Confused at what happened?? Let’s go back to when Yuko was just freed from her cell…


Flashback…
“Yea!!! So let’s go to save the princess now!!!”

“Anyway I know a secret path to the Wedding Hall so that we can save the princess but before that….”

“What??” Minami asks impatiently
“I’ve got some information that Snape has been using poison on the King to make him feel ill and I think the poison also allows Snape to influence the King’s mind so I think we better heal the King first.. if not if the King died then all authorities goes to Snape and the situation will be harder to handle” explained Kuu
“So what should we do??” asks Minami
“We’ll go to the King’s chamber and let Riku see the King’s condition first” Kuu answer

Then they follow Kuu’s secret path and sneaked into the King’s chamber..


King’s Chamber
The King is lying on the bed coughing… Minami and Kuu sneaked around and knock out all the guards around then Riku went to the King’s side.

Riku grabbed the King’s hand to inspect the King’s condition…
“Hm… I think he got poisoned by um.. what is it again… Gachapin poison?”
Kuu rolled his eyes “Can you stop fooling around?? We’ve got not much time!!”
“Hey! I’m serious!! Look, the King’s finger nails becomes total green so is his body starting to be and look at the King’s tooth isn’t it the same as Gachapin?? All of these are the symptoms of getting poisoned by Gachapin poison!” Riku explained seriously
“Besides I wasn’t the one who name this poison okay?? It’s written in the medical books! I’ll show it to you guys once we get back..” Riku added.

“Riku you should have the antidote for this Gachapin poison right?” Minami asks
“Yea I do..”
“Is it enough for 2 people?” Yuko asks
“I’ve brought enough for 10 people” Riku answers confusedly
Minami and Yuko then quickly carry Kuu to Riku and said “Here! Give some to Kuu too!”
“Hey! I’m not poisoned!!!” Kuu protested
“OMG… I’m such a failure as a doctor… how come I never realized that my best friend is also poisoned by Gachapin poison???” Riku says as he acts as if he is in depression
“HEY!!!” Kuu whined as the three of his friends are trying to shove some antidote into his mouth..

“cough, cough Who is there??” the King said weakly

Oh-oh.. the King has woken up the four thought..

“Your Majesty, I’m a doctor and I could tell that you’re poisoned by Gachapin poison and I’m willing to heal you back” says Riku politely
“Are you making fun of me?? How come I’m poisoned by Gachapin poison.. is there even a poison with that funny name??” then the King noticed Kuu
“Fine.. there might be that kind of poison but shouldn’t you be healing that person first before me??” the King asks as he points at Kuu weakly
“Hey! I’m not poisoned you old man!!” Kuu shouted but was smacked by Minami
“Sorry for the rudeness, your majesty” Minami apologizes
“Anyway I won’t be taking any antidotes from strangers” the King says
“But…” Riku protested
Kuu is irritated and grabbed the antidote from Riku’ hand and shove it inside the King’s mouth.
“Mphff…”
“Just eat it you old man! And stop blabbering!!”
Riku, Minami and Yuko were in shock… ‘OMG I can’t believe it! Does Kuu have death wish???!!!’ was what they were thinking…

Few Minutes Later…
The King’s nails and body is starting to turn back to its normal color, not so green anymore.. He stopped coughing and feels a lot better…

“I can’t believe that I was really poisoned…” the King said sadly..
“Your majesty, I’ve got some things to report to you” said Kuu
“Go on”
“I’m a mysterious traveler but actually I was collecting information and evidence of Snape’s bad doings around the kingdom.”
“What?? Snape??”
“Yes… you might not know but he’s been using that poison to control your mind, your majesty” Riku added
“And we need your help to stop the wedding, your majesty” Minami pleaded
“Huh? What wedding??” the King asks confusedly
“YOUR DAUGHTER’S WEDDING!!!” Yuko shouted
“What??!!! Atsuko is getting married?? With who???” the King exclaimed

Then they explained all they know to the King who then got really furious of all the things Snape has influence him to do.

“You guys go stop the wedding first, I’ll bring the guards with me” ordered the King
“Yes, your majesty” they replied and follow Kuu to the secret passage that leads to the Wedding Hall’s altar.

Flashback Ends…


Snape was imprisoned in the prison and was sentence to stay in the prison for the rest of his life. The royal wedding was cancelled and the King, the old King, is back again~~ HOORAY!!!

“Atsuko… I’m sorry for everything” the King said sadly…
“It’s okay dad” Acchan replies and hug her dad “It’s good to have you back”
After separating from the hug “Thank you Dr. Kojima, Yuko and Minami” the King said
“Hey! What about me??!!” Kuu protested
But the King just ignored him and starts to sob as he remember how fierce Acchan was earlier to the prince and the priest.

“sob* sob*”
“Eh?? Dad, why are you crying??”
“It.. sob* nothing.. It’s just that you were so like your mom and seeing you like this totally reminds me of your mom sob*”
Eh??!!! <<< The people >>> our kind and gentle queen releases black aura???!!!! The crowds also start to cry as they lost their kind and gentle princess…
“Why are you guys crying too??” asks Acchan
One of the crowd answers “It’s because we lost our kind and gentle princess forever sob* sob*”
Hearing this Acchan releases her black aura again and gave him a dark smile.. “What do you mean?? Your kind and gentle princess is here! Right here!! I’m not yet dead!!”
Then the King, Kuu, Riku, Yuko and Minami starts laughing as Acchan pouted… “Mou! Don’t laugh!! Even you Minami!!!”

The King try to stop laughing as he asks “BTW… When is the wedding??”
“Huh?? What wedding” they all asks in confusion
“The wedding of my beloved daughter, Atsuko, and her prince” says the King as he wink at Atsuko and Minami
They blushed and Minami stutters “Um.. I.. a..”
Then everyone burst out laughing as Minami pouts…
Acchan then approach Minami and gave him a loving kiss on the lips.

“Ahem! Get a room you two” says the King, Kuu, Riku, Yuko, the guards, the maids and even the crowds.

The couple just blush in response.

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Few Months Later…
Minami and Acchan were now married and they are enjoying their time together walking around the garden holding hands and interlocking their fingers.

“I’m really glad that I met you” says Acchan
Minami just smiles gently at her as he replies “I’m really glad that I met you too”
“I’m really glad that I’m in love with you”
“I’m really glad that I’m in love with my princess too”

Suddenly they were interrupted as a few figures fall out from the bush revealing the King, Kuu, Riku and Yuko who just laugh nervously…

“And I’ll be really glad if you guy will just give me some grandchildren” says the King
“We’ll also be really glad if we can be your children’s godfather and godmother” says Kuu, Riku and Yuko.
Then the King, Kuu, Riku and Yuko ran away “Sorry for interrupting!!!” but Kuu tripped causing Yuko to fall on Riku and Riku to fall on the King like dominoes…

Acchan and Minami just laugh at their behavior as they continue their lovey dovey time together~

The End


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That's it, hopefully not too boring... I'm sorry if Part 3 is a bit too short... :nervous
Thanks everyone for reading :kneelbow: I'll have a rest first before continue to work again XD
I'm really fired up today :mon mad: Haha XD
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 3) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: AKBlover_99 on December 17, 2011, 09:50:41 AM
So cool! I like it! Thanks for the update! I laughed at Yuko. :hiakhiakhiak:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 3) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: Sydney W on December 17, 2011, 11:19:03 AM
love the ending...... thanks for posting the part 3
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 3) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: Flean on December 17, 2011, 01:15:23 PM
LOL.. the ending...  :lol:  I love this...  :twothumbs

make more interesting stories...  :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 3) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: kahem on December 17, 2011, 01:32:43 PM
HAHAHA!!! The gachapin think is so funny!!!!
LOL Acchan's black aura
And the crowd is really useless xD
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 3) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: ichikawa on December 17, 2011, 07:13:59 PM
Cool! great stories ☆(´∀`人)
Thanks for the post ♥ ⊂(´∀`*⊂
Waiting for your another fic~ ☆(´∀`人)
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 3) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: Megumi on December 17, 2011, 09:11:19 PM
 :ptam-glow: The end was cute!
Gachapin poison Pfft! LoL.

Thank you for [Gladiator] fic

Arígatou! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 3) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: Haruko on December 18, 2011, 09:16:53 AM
gachapin poision.. hontou dayo? sugoi ne.. good fic :D
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 3) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: Popsicle on December 18, 2011, 11:03:30 AM
Gachapin poison lOoooooool :w00t:
you and your imAgination gone wild  :roll: ~

Great ending  XD
Thanks for updating so quick  !
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 3) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: cmze on December 20, 2011, 04:02:54 AM
Always Yuko is the best!  :rofl:  :rofl:

so funny!  :grin:

This was so great...NICE STORY!!  :D

Thanks for updating!  XD

please update soon!  :)
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 3) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 21, 2011, 01:38:35 PM
@AKBlover_99 Thanks for the comment XD
@Sydney W Your welcome XD and thanks for the comment :)
@Flean Haha.. Thanks :) I'll try XD
@kahem Thanks for the comment :) Happy to know that it's funny XD
@ichikawa Thanks for reading and the comment ;) I'll be posting Not OS later :)
@Megumi Thank you for the comment :thumbup I'll try to make more nice ones XD
@Haruko Thanks~ :grin: for the comment XD
@Popsicle Yup! Wild imagination LOL :lol: Thanks for the reading and comment :thumbup
@cmze Happy to know you like it XD I'll be updating soon~ :peace:
@skytsuna You're welcome :) and thanks for reading XD
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 1]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 21, 2011, 01:59:05 PM
I'm really glad that you guys like the Gladiator :on lol:
All Comments and Thanks are truly appreciated it makes me want to work harder  :mon study:
This part might be a little..  :sweatdrop: not so exciting but.. :mon determined: I promise to do better in Part 2


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Chapter 7


Part 1

“Back to the topic, what plans do you guys have??” asked Kai

“We got information that there will be a deal going on somewhere around the school very soon” Jun says

“But we do not know the exact time and location so we were not able to make any plans” answers Mayu

“Then what should we do??” asks Riku

“…” silence filled in the room

“Ah!” Jun shouted earning everyone’s attention on him

“Mayu, remember that.. urm.. that customer of yours??” asks Jun

“I’ve got lots of customers so which one are you asking??” replied Mayu

“Urm.. the one that leaked the information to us about the deal, the one with curly brown hair and have pierces on both her nose and lips…”

“Oh! You meant Sala?”

“Yes!! Her!! I think she knows more but she has become more cautious but I think we could try and get more infos from her”

“But how?? Like you said she has become cautious.. really cautious recently..”

“Seduce her!!!” Kuu suggested

Mayu rolled his eyes “I’ve already tried that for I don’t know how many time already and if I try to pressure on the matter she will start to think that I’m suspicious!”

“What about Jun?” asks Kuu

“Well… I’ve also tried but she told me that I’m not her type… she prefer cute ikemen like Mayu but her best would be delinquent-like, with rough features but handsome ikemen…” Jun answers

Silence filled in the room again as everyone is thinking who will fit the descriptions… Then suddenly everyone turned their head to Kai..

“…” Oh-oh.. I have a really baaadd feeling is what Kai is thinking about..

Kuu has opened his mouth as if he wants to say something but was stopped by Kai “No! I don’t know what you guys have in mind but I don’t think I’ll even like it”

“Kai… do you even have a choice from the start??” asks Kuu sarcastically

Kai facepalm himself as he realizes Yes… with these guys I never had my human rights.. NEVER!!!

“Kai.. Just think of this as a practice since you’ll have to be used to flirt with girls once you start the Host Club’s activity” Riku says

“Yea! And it’s for the mission” Jun added

“Besides you’re the only one who fit the description of looking like a delinquent” Mayu added which earned a protest from Kai “Hey! I’m not a delinquent!!”

“I said ‘look’”

“Fine!” Kai pouted

“So… we’ve still got 2 days to train Kai into a perfect host before Sala’s visit on Friday since she always comes on Friday” Jun concluded

“Eh?? I need trainings??” asks Kai

“Duh! You’re the only one I’m worried the most” replies Mayu

“Why??” Kai asks

Mayu ignored Kai and continue talking “We’ll be teaching you how to act cool, sexy and how to seduce women”

“Do I really have to..??”

“Yes and its final!”

“Anyway let’s go sleep now; we’ve still got school tomorrow”

Then everyone bid their goodnight to each other and went to bed.

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The Next Morning
Kai, Kuu and Riku signed up for the HC (Host Club) and send their application forms to their teachers and they received their AKB cards.

Class 2-A
“Ohaiyo” Kai, Kuu and Riku greeted Acchan, Yuko and Tomochin who were chatting together.

“Ohaiyo” they greeted back except Acchan who just turn her face towards the window as if the sky amuses her.

“sigh* Acchan… are you still mad?? It’s just an accident” no reply from Acchan

“Acchan…” no reply

“sigh*” Kai gave up and went to his seat

“Nyan Nyan! What club did you join??” asks Yuko as she clings onto Riku

“Urm… the HC”

“Ah, souka the Ho…” Yuko’s eyes widen when she realizes what club Riku joined “What??!! YOU JOINED THE HC??!!! No!!! I don’t want other girls flirting with you and vice versa!!” Yuko now on the floor trampling like a little kid who doesn’t get what she wants…

Hearing this Acchan raised an eyebrow If Riku joined the HC then… and look at Kai

Sensing someone looking at him Kai turns his head to the source and sees Acchan narrowing her eyes at him “Gulp*… Acchan??”

Acchan still glaring at Kai “Um… I…” Kai wasn’t able to finish whatever he wanted to say as Kuu cut in.

“Me, Kai and Riku all joined the Host Clun” making Kai facepalm himself

Acchan hearing this got up from her seat and walked out of the room angrily and slamming the door loudly BAAM!!!

“Wow… I’ve haven’t seen Acchan this angry for a looong, long time already…” Yuko says shock when Acchan slams the door.

“Yea… She looks like she is ready to kill someone…” Tomochin added

“Anyway, why did you guys even join the HC??” asks Tomochin a bit irritated since she also didn’t like the idea that they or ‘Kai’ will be flirting with girls.

“Well… my cousins are in the HC and they asked us to join so we joined” Kai answers

“Cousins??” asks Yuko and Tomochin

“Yes, Watanabe Mayu and Matsui Jun” replies Kai

“Eh?!! You, Mayu and Jun are cousin??!!! That's surprising..” Tomochin response

“You seem to know them quite well” added Kuu

“Well, Mayu’s fiancé is a member of the Entertainment Club and they sometimes will come to our club room” replied Tomochin

“Eh?! Mayu’s fiancé is in EC???” Kai exclaimed

“Yea. Anyway did you guys really have to join HC??”

“Why? You sounded like you really don’t like HC” asks Kuu

“Not really… it’s just that one of the members of the HC is really annoying” Tomochin answers as she rolled her eyes “Anyway just keep an eye on Mayu. Don’t let him flirt too much with the girls.. I do not want to witness World War III yet”

“Got it…” says Kai

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Lunch Time
Kai, Kuu and Riku went to the HC’s club room to meet the members.

Host Club
“Hey you guys finally here!” says Jun

Inside the room Mayu and Jun both are sitting on a single couch while there are two ikemens sitting on the longer couch and one lying on another couch.

“I’ll introduce the club members first” says Mayu

“Firstly the one that is lying down on the couch lazily is Miyazawa Sae. Secondly the one that has light brown hair or maybe slightly blonde is Sasshihara Ren. Lastly the cute looking ikemen there is Kasai Chiyuu.” Mayu introduces the members

The three members then look at Kai, Kuu and Riku.

Sae then says “Not bad, quite handsome”
“Hopefully with this we’ll get our customers back” says Ren

“Do I see a Gachapin?” asked Chiyuu
“Hey, I’m not a Gachapin” shouted Kuu
“Calm down Kuu” says Jun

“Sae, Ren and Chiyuu they are our childhood friends and this blonde delinquent look-a-like is our cousin, Takahashi Kai. While the Gachapin look-a-like that Chiyuu has mentioned is Minegishi Kuu and lastly this gentle-man like but is actually an airhead is Kojima Riku” Mayu continues to introduce

Hearing the introduction of them given by Mayu they shouted in protest “Hey! I’m not a delinquent/Gachapin/airhead!!!”

“Wait! You do look like a delinquent Kai..” says Kuu
“I’m not and you do look like a Gachapin!” Kai retort back
Then Kai and Kuu starts pinching each other’s cheek.
“Stop fighting you guys are like a kid!” says Riku

Kai and Kuu stop and look at Riku before shouting “Don’t interfere you airhead!”
“Hey! I’m not an airhe..”
“Shut up Airhead!” Kai and Kuu shouted again before pinching each other again.

Dang! A string in Riku’s head has been cut.
Riku face the floor and stays there, doesn’t move at all…
Seeing Riku like this Mayu slowly sneaks out of the room… I somehow have a baaad feeling if I stay.. Somehow I feel déjà vu...
On the other hand Jun slowly approaches Riku “Are you okay??”

Riku just kept silence…
“Riku..??”
Then suddenly Riku breaks out laughing…
Oh-oh.. I know that laugh… is what Jun thought to himself

Kai and Kuu were still fighting while Sae, Ren and Chiyuu were looking at Riku surprised by his sudden burst of laughter.

“Hey… you think he’s alright?” Sae asks Ren whispering
“Does he look alright to you?” Ren asks back
“No…”
“There you got your answer”

Riku then starts grabbing little things around the room and throw it at Kai and Kuu.
“Ouch, ouch! Riku stop!” Kai and Kuu cried out
But then Riku didn’t stop and slowly the things he throw upgraded.. from things like pencils and erasers to books and now he is holding a chair in his hand…
“Gulp* Riku.. calm down… don’t tell me your gonna throw that to us right?” Kai asks nervously and Kuu nodding furiously while thinking Oh God! Crazy Riku has come out!!!


Flashback
4 Figures were chasing each other playing around while 1 of them was sitting on the swing playing PSP.

Takamina “Yea! Hahaha”
Jun “Come and catch me Miichan!!”
Miichan “Arg!! Wait!!!”
Mayu “Who’s going to wait??”

They were playing tag in the playground and they made a deal that if Miichan manage to catch everybody then they’ll give her their dessert tonight so Miichan was running like crazy after them but she was the slowest among them aside from Haruna but she was playing PSP alone on the swing.

“So slow~~ You’re not gonna get my cake if you don’t catch me, pigu~~ oink oink” teased Jun as he runs towards the swing.

“Who are you calling a pig??!! Stop right there Jun!!” shouted Miichan as she chase after Jun towards the swing.

Jun was laughing as he runs and didn’t see a rock under his feet “Waah!” he tripped and falls on Haruna as Miichan jumps on him to prevent him from escaping.

“Ha! I caught you! Now who’s the pig??!! BTW you’re cake is mine tonight!!!” smirks Miichan

“Aww… Because of that stupid rock!” whined Jun

Suddenly they feel some dangerous aura around them and their animal instinct is telling them to RUN for their lives immediately… They turn around and see Haruna on the ground holding her broken PSP and her eyes are cold.. no emotions in them..

Then Haruna starts laughing as if she is crazy “Hahahaha”

“Gulp* Are we suppose to run away??” asks Jun
“I think so if you still want to live..” answers Miichan

Then the two of them quickly get off Haruna and dash towards Takamina and Mayu who were resting on the bench.

“RUN AWAY!!!” shouted Miichan to Takamina and Mayu

“?? Mayu did I hear Miichan shouting run away to us??” asks Takamina
Mayu shrug her shoulders “I’m not sure but they do look like they’ve just seen a ghost and that ghost is chasing after them now”

“OMG! I thought Haruna runs as slow as a turtle but why is she running in this superhuman speed now??!!” asks Jun as he runs
“How am I suppose to know??” replies Miichan

In less than a second Haruna caught the two of them and starts beating them off while mumbling “My PSP… I was going to finish the last boss but you just have to ruin it”

Takamina and Mayu watched the scenery in front of them in shock as they hear Jun and Miichan screaming while Haruna beats them.

“Hey, Takamina… please remind me to never get Haruna mad” says Mayu scared
Takamina nodded in agreement “I’ll make a note for that…”

And that’s the Birth of Crazy Haruna…

After a good 1 hour of beating Haruna let Miichan and Jun off as she returns home with the agreement of getting their cakes for herself as dessert tonight.

“Ouch… Not only I did get an hour of beating I just have to lose my cakes too!” pouted Miichan as she rubs her butt that has started to swollen from Haruna’s beating.

“I thought I was going to die…” replies Jun

Then the 4 of them went home and find Haruna sitting on the couch in the living room playing her other PSP.

Flashback Ends…


Back to the present Riku was still holding a chair on his hand while raising it up high in the air ready to throw it… But then something caught his attention… a rare fighting game that he always wanted to try was not able to get his hands on them…

Riku slowly puts down the chair and walk to the shelf “Is this the super rare fighting game, Keng! ??” asks Riku delighted as he grab the game out from the shelf.

“Hm.. oh yea.. I got my hands on it last year when it was sold” answers Ren

Riku then looks at Ren with his puppy eyes “I could lend it to you if you want to borrow” says Ren

“Really??!!!” asks Riku full of happiness
“Yea, just don’t break it”
“Thanks!!” then Riku went to sit on one of the couch, take out his PSP and starts playing the game…

“…” silence filled in the room except the ‘clicking’ sound coming from the PSP

“Are we safe??” asks Kuu
“I guess so…” answers Kai

“I can’t really understand what happened just now…” says Chiyuu
“Me too” Sae says in agreement
“Yea.. I agree” agreed Ren

Jun felt relief that Riku has calmed down “Thank god…”
Then Mayu came in the club room “Is everything alright now??”
“Hey! Where did you go just now!! I thought there will be a massacre here just now” exclaimed Jun
“Urm.. Went into a hiding??” replies Mayu

Then Sae asks “Hey, do any of you guys also have a fiancé like Mayu??”
“Nope” Kai, Kuu and Riku answers
“But they’ve got girlfriends and you’ll be shock if you know who their girlfriends were” Mayu teasingly says
“Really?? Who are they?” asks Ren in curiousity
“Chiyuu also wants to know” says Chiyuu

“Riku is with Oshima Yuko” says Mayu
Riku stops playing his PSP and shouted “What?!!”
“Don’t be shy, Riku.” Says Jun
“EH?!!!” Sae, Ren and Chiyuu shouted out in amazement.

“Kuu is with Shinoda sensei” continues Mayu
“EEHHH!!!!!” Sae, Ren and Chiyuu shouted more
“What?!! I’m not with a T-Rex!! It is abnormal!!” yelled Kuu
“Huh?? Abnormal?? If you mean teacher and student cannot be together then..” Jun was cut off by Kuu
“Well… it is not normal to marry a dinosaur right? Like you won’t marry a dog or a cat because it’s abnormal and it’s the same for me!” answers Kuu
Kai then smack Kuu’s head “Kuu, that is rude”
“Ouch! Fine!” Kuu whines as he rubs his head

“Lastly, Kai is with Maeda Atsuko and Itano Tomomi” says Mayu
“EEH??!!! Two?? Both of them??” exclaimed Sae, Ren and Chiyuu
“Yea, he’s such a player” Jun says jokingly
“Hey! I’m not in that kind of relationship with them.. We’re just friends!” Kai tries to explain as he starts to blush furiously.

Chiyuu was frowning when he heard that ‘she’ and Kai are in ‘that’ kind of relationship… Then he suddenly shouted out “KAI!” which shocked everyone in the room.

“From now on I’ll recognize you as my RIVAL and I WON’T LOSE TO YOU!!!” Chiyuu declared to Kai making everyone dumbfounded as he ran out of the room…

Few Minutes Passed…
“What happened??” asked Kai totally clueless


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Thanks everyone for reading :kneelbow: I know it could be boring one this time but please bear with it.... :nervous
I'll try to update ASAP but I've got to finish the Santa's Present first because it has to be posted on Dec. 24/25 as I have posted on the preview XD

Thanks for the comments :) It is really appreciated and gives a lot of motivation esp. to people who are lazy :grin:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 1] >>> 21/12/11
Post by: AKBlover_99 on December 21, 2011, 03:21:22 PM
An UPDATE!!! :mon crazyinlove:
I really,really like it!  :thumbsup Especially the flashback.
And....Riku was like Gekikara..... :mon curtain:
Anyway,thx for the update! :mon innocent:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 1] >>> 21/12/11
Post by: Sydney W on December 21, 2011, 05:05:09 PM
Thank for the update..... like it very much.... awww such a pathetic to see Acchan mad at Kai....
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 1] >>> 21/12/11
Post by: Popsicle on December 21, 2011, 05:40:55 PM
NOOO this isnt chapter boring ! :nervous
all chapters are epic... INCLUDING THIS  :wub:
LOL @ gamer riku/haruna  :fap

Can't wait Update soon!! :twothumbs
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 1] >>> 21/12/11
Post by: Sok on December 21, 2011, 06:07:36 PM
Yay! Update.  :on woohoo:
Wow this chapter was funny.
Mayu going into hiding before crazy Riku came out. Kai, Jun, and Kuu scared. Riku calming down instantly when he saw the game. Sae, Ren and Chiyuu~ confused.
Ohho. Chiyuu~ has named Kai his rival  :nya: Is it for Tomochin or Acchan?
Thank you.  :kneelbow: Can't wait for the next update.  :mon cute:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 1] >>> 21/12/11
Post by: kahem on December 21, 2011, 07:07:14 PM
Hahahaha!!! Crazy Riku FTW!!!!
And jealous Chiyuu hehehe nice
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 1] >>> 21/12/11
Post by: RJay on December 21, 2011, 11:03:14 PM
O MY GOD!!! :shock:
You finally updated this um... whatever
Wow love triangle between TomomiXKaiXAtsuko :hehehe:
LoL love the reaction of Sae, Chiyuu and Ren at the end :wahaha:

please update soon
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 1] >>> 21/12/11
Post by: Megumi on December 22, 2011, 01:32:55 AM
Chap 7 is up!  :nya:

Mayu got a fiancé WoooW!  :luvluv2:

Riku can be so scary! :scared:
I LoLed when Mayu went and hide.

Kai&Chiyuu~ at the end...very interesting!


Thank you for your update!
Arígatou!  :kneelbow:


Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 1] >>> 21/12/11
Post by: Haruko on December 22, 2011, 04:38:11 AM
thanx for the chapter..

wow wow wow so many things happen...

jaja acchan jelousy so fun..

jaja i think that yuko going to that club very often to watch out haruna`s fan..

jaja kai you are a player two girlfriend and a rival wow...

but saeboy.. are alone?
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 1] >>> 21/12/11
Post by: cmze on December 22, 2011, 07:54:29 AM
Omg so funny!  :rofl:

it's abnormal!  :rofl:

this part made me laugh like crazy! "“Kai… do you even have a choice from the start??” asks Kuu sarcastically

Kai facepalm himself as he realizes Yes… with these guys I never had my human rights.. NEVER!!!"  :twisted:

Kuu is the best in this fic!  :grin:

Thanks for upadating

Kai vs Chiyuu so excited about it!  :D
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 1] >>> 21/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 23, 2011, 06:24:17 AM
@AKBlover_99 Thanks for liking it and the comment XD I really appreciate it!
@Sydney W Thanks for liking it ;)
@Popsicle Haha :) Thank you for your compliment and it's nice to know that you enjoyed reading it since it also makes me happy XD
@Sok You'll know ;) Thanks for reading it and your comment :grin:
@kahem Thanks for the comment :) Yea.. Chiyuu is totally jealous at Kai :lol:
@RJay  :nervous Sorry for the late update, Will try to update soon :) Thanks for reading it and the comment :thumbup
@Megumi Glad to know it's interesting for you XD
@Haruko Don't worry, I just haven't introduce Sae's partner yet.. She'll come out soon :hand:
@cmze Thanks for the comment XD Glad to know you like it :) Will try to update soon :grin:

Thanks everyone for the comment XD I enjoyed reading it :thumbsup I'm really hyped up now :rofl:
Shiro, snowmi9x, AKBlover_99, haru9210, kahem, blughise, Megumi, cmze Thank you for the thanks :kneelbow:
Really apreciate it! :twothumbs

Right now I'm typing the Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present (Last Part/Part 2) right now XD
Hopefully it'll be okay :nervous I'll post it on the 24th :)
Please look forward to it
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 1] >>> 21/12/11
Post by: Flean on December 23, 2011, 06:42:24 AM
I miss your update!!!  :dunno:  How's that happened??

Btw, I'm liking this chapter... so many things happened..  :on GJ:  and I wonder why Chiyuu was mad at Kai??  :mon evillaff:
Title: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present >>> 24/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 23, 2011, 08:12:24 PM
@Flean Thanks for reading and commenting XD Happy to know that you're liking it :grin:

Hi everyone :) As promised here is the last part of Santa's Christmas Present!!! XD and my Christmas Present :lol:
Hopefully it's not disappointing :grin: I've been typing like crazy today for this.. and I'm so sleepy right now.. ZZZZ

If you haven't read Part 1 then please read Part 1 first before you proceeds to Part 2 :)
Santa's Christmas Present - Part 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31051.msg977073#msg977073)


Santa’s Christmas Present


Part 2

Acchan’s POV
We three were always together… But one day I found out that I’m in love with him. I tried to give him hints that I’ve fallen for him but he was so dense… he didn’t realize how much I’m in love with him at all!!! Sigh* I decided to take an extreme decision, I want to make him feel jealous and I wanted to see his reaction towards my decision. So I asked my other childhood friend, Tomo, to pretend to be my boy friend and that we’re going out. I was really happy to see him getting jealous when I pretend to be so lovey dovey with Tomo but I could still see that he is still confused with his feelings. Then slowly he starts to avoid and distance from us and I feel really sad about it… I wonder if I should tell him about the truth and that I love him but I’m afraid that he will reject me so I decided to continue the lie until I’m more confident and he’s surer with his feelings.


Flashback
“Tomo… I’m so sorry to burden you like this…”
“It’s okay Acchan and we have to teach him a lesson for being so dense!!!”
“But what about your ‘real’ girlfriend??”
“Tomomi?? It’s okay she knows about it and is very understanding”
I smiled and am really grateful to him and Tomomi “Thank you Tomo”
“You don’t need to be thanking me, it’s what friends do. If you really want to thank me then you should tell me the first when you and that midget has finally become official” Tomo said teasingly and causes me to blush.

Flashback Ends…

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This morning Minami greeted us like how he used to always do before me and Tomo starts our fake going-out thing and he smiles… but I know it’s a fake one and it hurts me to see him like this… So I decided to end the lie once and for all and tell him my feelings.

Lunch Time
“Tomo… Let’s stop this fake-going out thing. I think I’ll tell him the truth and my feelings today”
“Are you sure??”
“Yes… because it hurts a lot to see him like that…” I said sadly
“Okay I got it. Gambatte Acchan! I’ll be waiting for the good news” Tomo said smiling
“Thank you” I answered back smiling

Somewhere around the School
“Hm.. Where would Minami be??” Acchan asks herself as she almost searched everywhere but still haven’t found her Minami.

Acchan was now walking towards the back of the Gym, the only place left that she haven’t search and BINGO! There she saw Minami and was going to call him.

“Mina…” she stopped when she see Minami and a girl hugging each other.
Eh??!!! Who is that girl?!! Wait… I think I know her… If I remember correctly I think she is Minami’s kouhai when he was in the art club during Middle School… But… Why are they hugging each other?? Are they just happy to see each other again?? Acchan was confused and decided to leave…

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The Next Day
“Ohaiyo~~ I’ve got a big news for you guys” says Minami cheerfully to his friends
“Ohaiyo, what news??” asks Riku with Yuko on his side
“I’ve finally got myself a girlfriend” answers Minami which causes Riku, Yuko, Kuu, Tomo and Acchan to be shock…
“What?! Are you for real??” asks Kuu shouting
“Yes, yes.. Please don’t shout, you’re hurting my ear” replies Minami
“Who is she??” asks Riku
“My kouhai during Middle School, Milky” answers Minami

The moment Acchan heard this her head went blank and she wants to cry but she put on a fake smile “Congratulation, Minami.. A.. I.. I need to go to the bathroom” with that Acchan left the classroom.

I was being stupid..
I hurt you so much,
I wanted to say sorry…
But it seems too late now..
I’ve lost you and
I’ve also hurt myself
From my own stupidity.


“I’ll also go to the bathroom before class starts” says Yuko as she leaves the class.

Bathroom
Acchan was crying in one of the toilet… she was really sad… She regret why she didn’t be honest and tell Minami her feelings from the start… “sob*.. sob*.. Minami...” My heart hurts… it’s breaking…

Yuko walks into the bathroom slowly and to Acchan and hugs her tightly.
“Acchan… You actually love Takamina right??”
“sob* sob* un..” Acchan was crying but manage to give a small ‘Un’ and a nod to Yuko.
“Then why did you date Tomo??”
“I.. I know that Minami wasn’t sure of his feelings yet so.. sob* I want to see if he will be jealous and tell me his feelings.. sob* But… sob*”
“sigh* Acchan… You know how much Takamina was suffering when he sees you and Tomo together?? He loves you but his pride and conscience doesn’t allow him to separate you and Tomo..”
“I know… and I regret it… I was planning to tell him everything but.. sob* it’s all too late now… sob*”

If time could be reversed,
I will tell you ‘I love you’
I won’t hurt you
I’ll be honest to you..
Then maybe..
You’ll belong to me..
But it’s only ‘if’… it’s too late now..


Yuko just stay there beside Acchan patting her back to calm Acchan down as Acchan continues to cry…

At the Same Time – Classroom
After Acchan and Yuko left Riku, Kuu and Tomo continues to analyze the situation and they kept asking if Minami truly loves Milky because they all know Minami loves Atsuko a lot..

“sigh* Stop asking… I said I do love Milky and I want to try if things will work between us”
“Are you sure you love her??” asks Kuu
“Yes.. I do.. I’ll try… and I know that I’ll do it so… please don’t waver my resolve anymore” answers Kai tiredly

Then everyone stops asking as the class starts… all was the same as usual except there are some changes in the relationship they have between themselves…

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One Week Later…
Minami is spending a lot of time with Milky and they look so lovey dovey which makes Acchan feel so sad.. her heart feels like it’s been stab by thousands of knives every time she sees how close Milky was to Minami.

It hurts to know you belong to someone else…
To know that your heart, your kiss, your hug
Belongs to ‘her’…
I love you…


Minami also notices how sad Acchan was although she tried to hide it and it hurts him too to see her like this…

Away from the past,
I took a step forward.
But why does it
Hurts so much to see you like this..
Why are you hurt?
This should be the happy ending right??
So why.. please anyone tell me..
Why.. is she suffering??


Seeing how intimate Milky was to Minami, Acchan was not able to hold back anymore.. She decided to confess to Minami today and tell him the truth although it might all be too late already but it wouldn’t hurt to try right?

Lunch Time
“Minami.. You have a second? I want to tell you something”
“Sure, Acchan”

If only if I could kiss you without touching your lips,
I wouldn’t feel so miserable now.
If only if I could hug you without touching you,
It would’ve been my salvation.
Even if it’s only a dream
It’s a dream come true to me…
But it’s only if…


Then Acchan brought Minami to the old school building.

“Minami.. I.. I want to tell you that…” Acchan then took a deep breath as Minami just look at Acchan waiting for what she is going to say.
“That… actually I and Tomo were never dating, we were only pretending because I want to see if you’re going to be jealous or not and I know that was stupid of me and I really regret it.. Minami.. I’ve loved you all this time.. Please forgive me”
Minami was shock at what Acchan told him just now…

“Acchan… Why did you tell me this now??” asks Minami hurt..
“Because I love you and I can’t stand to see how close you and Milky are”
“Do you know how much did I suffer when I know that you and Tomo are going out?? How much I suffered to make my resolution??” asks Minami with hurtful voice.
Tears starts to come out from Acchan’s eyes “I know.. and I’m really sorry about it.. I really regret doing stupid things like that but Minami I really love you”
“Acchan… I.. I’m really sorry but Milky isn’t something I keep when I need her then throw away.. I can’t hurt her.. I’m sorry…” Minami says trying to stop his tears.. Everything’s too late… There is no return…

God… Why are you so cruel?
Why do you torture me so?
Why did this have to happen…
When I’ve made my resolve..
Seeing tears in her beautiful eyes,
Makes my heart scream in pain…


After finishing his last word Minami leaves.. he can’t bear to see Acchan’s face right now.. While Acchan fell on her knees crying, she has now really lost her Minami…

At the same time, there was a girl who happened to be there, who happened to see the whole thing, and who happened to be Milky…

Classroom
“sigh*”
“Tomo, why are you sighing?” asks Kuu
“sigh* Because of Acchan and Minami..” replies Tomo
“Why??” asks Kuu curiously
“Acchan loves Minami but now Minami is dating Milky..”
“Eh?!! Acchan loves Takamina?? But I thought she and you were dating!!”
“It’s only pretending”
“Why??” asks Riku
“Because…” then Yuko cuts in
“Because Acchan wants to make Takamina jealous”
“How did you know?” asks Riku
“Acchan told me one week ago when Takamina just announced that he and Milky is dating”
“Takamina also loves Acchan but.. he thought you and Acchan were dating so he backed out…”
“sigh*” everyone lets out a sigh
“Well… there’s nothing we can do now.. we can only just look over them and silently support as best friends does..” says Kuu as everyone nodded in agreement.

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A Day before Christmas – Night
Minami is on his bed sleeping since it’s already 2 p.m. and he had a dream.. a dream what will lead him to the right path…

“Mina.. Minami..” Minami hears someone calling his name
“Who??”
“I’m Santa Claus”
“Eh?! Santa-san??”
“Yes, I’ve watch you since you were young.. No.. not only you but every children. And I feel sad seeing how you and Acchan are suffering now..”
“…” Minami wasn’t able to say anything..
“I know you still love Acchan and Acchan also loves you so why can’t you be more honest with yourself?? Follow your heart, young man. If not you will regret in the future” says Santa
Minami frown at Santa’s advice.. “Mi.. Milky.. I can’t leave her.. I can’t betray her…”
“sigh* Minami, do you truly loves her with all your heart?” asks Santa serious.
Seeing Minami look down on his foot Santa continues “If you don’t love her and you’re with her then you’re only hurting her!!!”
“Then what should I do??!!!” shouted Minami desperately.
“Like I said, follow your heart. Here take this necklace.. it will lead you the way that your heart desires, your true love” says Santa as he handed Minami a heart-shaped necklace.
Minami just look at the necklace “Follow your heart, Minami. Follow…” Santa says lastly and his voice becoming softer and softer “Follow your heart…”

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The Next Morning – Christmas
Minami can’t stop thinking about Santa’s words as the hold onto the necklace.. He thought it was just a dream but the thought vanished when he saw his handing holding a heart-shape necklace tightly in his hand.

Today there is no school since it’s Christmas and Minami got a date with Milky since they are a couple and couple do go on romantic dates on Christmas.

After changing Minami went to pick Milky at her home as they went to the amusement park for the date.

“Wow! I want to play that, Takamina senpai” says Milky excitingly as she pointed at the Jet-Coaster.
“Hai, hai” Minami can’t help but smile seeing Milky so excited like a little kid.

They went to ride the Jet-Coaster then Blue Mountain, Super Splash, Haunted House and Maze. Now they are resting in a family restaurant to have their lunch.

“Tanoshikatta” says Milky
“What a Genki little kid” Minami says teasingly
“I’m not a little kid!” Milky says pouting
“Hahaha.. I’m sorry it’s just that you’re so cute”
“I..” Milky was blushing hard when she heard Minami call her cute

Then their food arrives and they start digging in, Milky ordered cream cheese while Minami of course ordered his favorite Katsudon. As they eat they were having fun chatting too.

“And then you know…” Milky was telling Minami her story of how her dog, Ruki, make a mess and got her in trouble.
“Hai, hai” Minami just patiently listen to her story but.. his heart is actually not here.. it is somewhere else… which makes Minami feel guilty about it…

Why is it that my heart keeps going to you??
When it’s suppose to be here…
Be here for this little girl…


They went back early because Milky says that she is exhausted so Minami take her home.

Milky’s Home – Front (Outside)
“Thanks for today, Takamina senpai” says Milky smiling
“You don’t have to thank me since I also had a great time today” answers Minami smiling too.

Then suddenly tears starts to come out from Milky’s eyes which surprise Minami.

“Milky?? What’s wrong?? Did I do something wrong?” asks Minami worriedly
Milky shake her head “You didn’t do anything wrong senpai…”
“Then why are you crying??”
“It.. it’s because… sob* I know that you still love Maeda san and.. I thought as time pass you will forget about your love for her but sob* I know that it would never happen sob* sob*”
“Milky… I..”
“Please let me finish first..” Milky says as she wipes her tears but her tears keep coming out nonstop.
“…” Minami just kept silent and listen to what Milky want to say.
“I know that both senpai and Maeda san are suffering and it also hurts me to see you suffer because I love you sob* and I know I can never replace her in your heart… I know you only see me as a younger sister from the way you treat me.. sob* so I was planning to break up with you senpai.. please be happy sob* with Maeda san sob*”

Seeing Milky like this also hurts Minami…
“Milky…”
“I love you senpai but I want you to be happy so.. this will be the last..” says Milky as she step forward towards Minami and plant a kiss on Minami’s lips.

She kisses Minami passionately, pouring out all her love, her feelings that she have for her beloved senpai all these years…

Then she breaks the kiss and took a deep breath…
“Go get her senpai, I’ll be cheering for you. Christmas is not yet over so please have a great Christmas with her and I’ll be waiting for the good news.” says Milky smiling.
Then Minami made a resolve… a resolve to bring Acchan back…
“Thank you Milky, I won’t disappoint you” says Minami as he dash towards Acchan’s house leaving Milky who now was holding her knees with her head facing down crying alone… This is for the best… I shouldn’t cry…

Then it starts snowing…

Maeda Residence
Ding Dong! Ding Dong! Minami has now reached Acchan’s home and is pressing the doorbell waiting for someone to open the door for him.

Then the door opened and reveals a middle-aged woman “Ah, Minami kun. What brings you here?” asks Maeda mama
“Um.. I’ve come for Acchan” replies Minami
“Ah.. Acchan isn’t home at the moment and I don’t know where did that child went..”
“I see.. it’s okay.. Thanks Maeda mama”
“If you find her tell her to don’t come home late”
“Hai, I got it” answers Minami as he leaves.

“Ha* Ha* Ha*” Minami was running around the area looking for Acchan but he could not find her anywhere so he decided to call his friends to see if they know anything.

“Hello?”
“Tomo have you seen Atsuko?” asks Minami
“Nope.. Why? What’s wrong?” asks Tomo worried
“No.. it’s nothing”
Then Minami called Riku, Kuu and Yuko also but none of them knows where Acchan is…

Acchan… where are you?? Minami thought to himself as he reach into his pocket and look at the heart-shape necklace the Santa gave him…

If you can really show me the right path then please show me the way to where Acchan is now… Minami pleaded to the necklace..

I’m feeling so lonely when I don’t see you,
I miss your warmth, your touch, your everything…
Oh, Santa please guide me to her..
To my one and only love..
Please wait for me, I’ll be there in no time.


Then suddenly there is light shining from the necklace and it’s pointing to a direction which Minami immediately follow the light.

Minami kept running and running until he’s starting to go away from the city… then he notice how nostalgic and familiar the place starts to feel… as past memories come back to his mind…


Flashback
Tomo got sick so he is at home resting today.. So today only me and Acchan.

“What do we play today??” asks chibi Acchan
“Let’s go tanken!” I says excitedly since I was influenced by an anime I watched yesterday in the T.V.
“Okay” Acchan replies

Then we start walking farther and farther away from the city, at first it was exciting to be in the place we’ve never been before but somehow we can’t find our way back since we’ve been too far away already…

“sob* sob*”
“Acchan… Don’t cry..” I say as I hug Acchan to calm her down
“But.. I’m scared.. sob*”
“Acchan, don’t be scared I’ll protect you no matter what, I promise.” I say as I kiss Acchan on the forehead which my mom and dad always do when I cry.

Acchan blushes and stopped crying as she say “Un.. Thank you Minami” smiling.
Minami also smiles back as he hold Acchan’s hand and continue to walk hopefully to find their way home.

As they walk Minami notices a small mountain and an idea pop out in his head, “Ah! Acchan let’s go climb that mountain. From there we could see the whole place and we can find our way home!”
“Un!” Acchan replies happily as they starts climbing the small mountain.

They did not follow the mountain road.. They just climb through bushes and plants.. Maybe because they think it’s more fun that way and somehow they found a tunnel and decided to go through it.

After getting out of a tunnel, beautiful sunset scenery was waiting for them as the city lights starts to light up, it was truly magnificent…

“Wow… Minami, it’s so beautiful” says Acchan dazed by the beauty of the scenery.
“Yea..” Minami answers as he was also hypnotized by it.
“Ne, Acchan”
“Hm??”
“Let’s make this our secret place!” suggested Minami
“Only the two of us??”
“Hai.. Dame??” Minami asks sadly then he continues “It’s okay we can share it with others if that is what you want..” Then suddenly Acchan shouted out…
“No! I didn’t say no… I.. I mean I want this to be only ‘ours’ secret place” Acchan replies shyly to Minami who shows a big smile.

“Ah!” Minami suddenly shouted out.
“What happened??” asks Acchan surprised.
“I found our way home! Look! Over there!” Minami replies pointing at his right side.
“Un! I recognize that park that we usually play in” says Acchan
Then Minami grab Acchan’s hand and say “Let’s go Acchan. I’m sure mom, dad, uncle and auntie are worried about us”
“Un!”

Then the two little kids starts running down the mountain holding hands and manage to get back home safely but… it’s already late.. it’s totally dark already and their parents were really worried about them..

“Minami! Where did you go?! Why is your clothes so dirty?!!” shouted Taka papa
“Uh.. I’m sorry” Minami apologizes to his dad.
“sigh* You’re so naughty and you have to bring Acchan with you! What if she get injured??!!”
“I’m sorry…” Minami apologizes looking down at his feet.
“It’s okay Takahashi” says Maeda papa
“But…”
“He’s just a little kid and boys tend to be naughty isn’t it??”
“sigh* You’re just too generous, Maeda”
“Yea! Uncle Maeda you’re the best!” says Minami grinning
“Oi! Seems like you’re not reflecting on your actions at all… I’ll give you a private lesson when we get home so be prepared for it” says Taka papa
“Eh?!!! No!! I don’t want to!!” whined Minami
“No excuse!”
“Aw…” Minami said as he pouted with everyone laughing at him including Acchan.

Seeing Acchan laughing Minami feels happy so he smiles really brightly at Acchan which causes Acchan’s heart beat to increase as she blushes..

(This was the moment when Maeda Atsuko has fallen for Takahashi Minami…)

Flashback Ends…


After remembering the secret place he shared with Acchan, Minami hurriedly run to their secret place and BINGO! He found Acchan there sitting on the ground holding her knees with her face down and seems to be crying…

Seeing this Minami felt heart broken.. it’s all his fault…

Minami then approaches Acchan slowly and hug her tightly in his arms which surprise Acchan and causes her to struggle but stopped when she heard Minami’s voice.. “I’m sorry…”

“I’m really sorry Acchan… I’ve made you suffer so much… It hurts me to see you like this and I’m stupid for hurting you.” Minami says gently to Acchan.

Then they separate a bit and Minami look deeply into Acchan’s eyes as he continues, “Acchan, I’ve loved you and my feelings has never changed from the start and I’m sure forever it will stay in my heart, I love you Maeda Atsuko.”

Hearing this Acchan was so happy as she starts to cry but not because she is sad but because she is so happy. Acchan then hugs Minami tightly as her tears of happiness start to flow down her cheeks. Then Minami release Acchan and wipes her tears with his hands and kiss her forehead like in the past which causes a light blush on Acchan’s face.

“Minami… I was so sad when you rejected me..” Acchan said sadly.
“I know.. and I’m really sorry about it.. But it’s your fault for fake-going out with Tomo first” says Minami pouting which also cause Acchan to pout.
“It’s because I don’t know about your feelings and I want to see if you will get jealous or not and.. I know I was wrong.. I regret doing something stupid like that.. I..” Acchan was cut out as Minami press his lips against hers.

After separating from their kiss, Acchan’s face was as red as a tomato, Minami smiles thinking how cute Acchan is.

“Acchan, close your eyes”
“Eh? Why??”
“Just do it”
“.. Un..”
Then Acchan closes her eyes as Minami take out the heart-shape necklace, that Santa has gave him, from his pocket and put it on Acchan’s neck.

“You can open your eyes now”
Acchan then slowly open her eyes and look at the object she felt that was on her neck, “Wow, it’s so beautiful Minami..”
Minami smiles and say “It’s a Christmas Present from Santa. It shows me the way to you, to my true love, Maeda Atsuko.”
Acchan can’t help but feel happy about Minami’s words as she leans in to kiss her Minami passionately.

They have to separate for air and then they look deeply into each other’s eyes and were ready for another kiss…

“ACHOO!” Acchan sneezed cutely which cause Minami to burst out laughing holding his stomach and rolling on the ground.
“What’s so funny?!” asks Acchan mad as she pouts.
“Haha.. it’s nothing.. It’s just that you’re so cute” says Minami as he slightly pinches Acchan’s cheek.
“Mou~ Minami!”
“Haha.. Let’s go back shall we?? I don’t want my princess to catch a cold” says Minami as he removes his jacket and put it on Acchan.
“Un” Acchan replies as she grab onto Minami’s arm.

Just when they were going to leave they suddenly see something shinning in the sky…

Congratulations!!!
Good to see that you like my present XD
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!

Acchan and Minami smiles at the message, they were truly grateful towards the Santa. 'That was the best Christmas Present ever' was what the newly formed couple was thinking as they walk back home slowly together snuggling onto one another lovingly. Then they were able to spend their first Christmas as a couple together alone~

On the other hand, Santa was busy looking for people having love problem like the ones he just have helped solved.
“Hohoho.. Let’s see who needs this Santa’s help..” says the Santa
Then suddenly he feels something.. feels someone needing his help..
“Oh! I sense someone needing my help! But don’t worry, because… Santa Claus is coming to town~ :note: ”


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Thanks everyone for reading :kneelbow: I'm so sleepy now so Good Night XD
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present >>> 24/12/11
Post by: cmze on December 23, 2011, 09:16:54 PM
First!  :shakeit:

My heart.. it was so sad..poor Acchan!  :cry:

but thanks to Santa's intervertion everything ended good!  :grin:

Milky such a good girl!  :D

Atsumina!  :heart:

Thanks for the update!  :cow:

please update soon!  :bow:

Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present >>> 24/12/11
Post by: Popsicle on December 23, 2011, 09:38:32 PM
Amazing storyy... :cry:
I feel sorry for that milky girl ! :yawn:
We need more santas Who help couples in this world too ~ :P
Another great fic ^.^
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present >>> 24/12/11
Post by: Sydney W on December 24, 2011, 03:23:25 AM
Milky being so generous to let her Minami go to be with Acchan. A happy ending and a good Xmas present for Acchan and Minami.
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present >>> 24/12/11
Post by: Haruko on December 24, 2011, 06:36:28 AM
yeah poor milky but she knows that atsuminaz is for real...

Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present >>> 24/12/11
Post by: AKBlover_99 on December 24, 2011, 09:50:52 AM
An update! :mon trannie: Actually,I don't have time to read it since I'm having a vacation with my family.
But thank god that my family and I don't have any activity this evening! Yay! I really like it! :mon lovelaff:
But poor Milky. Anyway, thx for the update and update soon! :gmon heartu:
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present >>> 24/12/11
Post by: kahem on December 24, 2011, 12:02:40 PM
Poor Milky T_T she is so kind
I don't why but when there was a part about santa I was imagining Aki-p in santa clothes lol
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present >>> 24/12/11
Post by: Kiiz on December 24, 2011, 05:02:30 PM
I want gift from santa-san too :( :(


 XD XD XD
Title: Re: Christmas One Shot - Santa's Christmas Present >>> 24/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 25, 2011, 10:48:12 AM
@cmze Well.. It should be Atsumina so sorry Milky.. Thanks for the comment XD
@Popsicle Yea, I totally agree. We need Santas!!! :grin:
@Sydney W  ;) Yea, Milky a good girl :D
@Haruko Yup! It's Atsumina!! Thanks for reading XD
@AKBlover_99 Thank you for spending your time to read this :) I'm glad you like it :grin:
@kahem Haha.. Now that you mention I can somehow imagine it too :lol:
@Kiiz Me too!! :D

Thanks everyone for reading :kneelbow: I really appreciate the comments and thanks XD
Thanks for the Thanks :D kahem, cmze, haru9210, AKBlover_99, ichikawa, Kiiz, crazywota

P.S. I will be posting Not OS later :) cmze has ask me when I'll update and suddenly I feel like writing and I somehow finished it :lol: It's quite long though... :nervous Hope you guys will like it XD
Title: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 2]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 25, 2011, 10:53:41 AM
Here's Chapter 7 Part 2!!! XD Please enjoy reading it :D and MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! :)


Chapter 7


Part 2

“What happened??” asked Kai totally clueless


Mayu, Jun, Sae and Ren just look at each other and shrug their shoulders..

“I don’t know… Never seen Chiyuu like that” says Mayuyu as the rest nod their head in agreement
“Yea.. That was totally surprising and new!” says Sae
Ren then whispers to Sae “Do you think Riku spread the craziness to Chiyuu??”
“You have a point.. That’s a possibility” Sae replied
“Ahem! I heard it… I’m not crazy!” says Riku a bit pissed
“WE’RE SORRY!” Sae and Ren apologizes immediately, not wanting to taste the treatment Riku gave Kuu and Kai a moment ago
Riku was a bit taken back with their sudden apology, he didn’t expect it “Ur.. It’s fine I’m not really that mad..” Am I really that… scary?? Riku asks himself
Thank God… was what Sae and Ren was thinking feeling relief

“What does he mean that I’m his rival??” asks Kai still confused with Chiyuu’s sudden rivalry declaration on him a moment ago..
“Who knows” answers Kuu

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After that they all went back to their respective classroom, Acchan still ignores Kai, Yuko staring at Riku all the time during class while Kuu daydreaming about cakes and now it’s finally time to go home~

Kai, Kuu and Riku went to the HC’s club room as Acchan, Yuko and Tomochin went to their club too.

Host Club
“Yo” says Kai, Kuu and Riku as they got in the room
“Osu~” says Sae, Ren, Mayu and Jun
“Is there one person missing??” asks Riku
“Seems like after that sudden declaration Chiyuu has went home” answers Ren

“Anyway you guys got trainings to do so these two days we’ll not open our club so when our club re-opens you guys should work hard and earn the points back for closing the club for your trainings” says Mayu
“Hai~~” answers Kai, Kuu and Riku lazily
“Oi! Show me your spirit!” says Mayu
But they just ignore Mayu and went to sit on available couches.

“So what will our training be?” asks Kai
“We’ll divide into groups and train you guys separately so there it will be more efficient” says Jun
“Me and Mayu will be training Kai” says Sae
“While me, Ren and Chiyuu will be training Riku and Kuu” says Jun

“Why does me only have to be separated while Riku and Kuu get trainings together??” asks Kai
“That’s because you need more help than Riku and Kuu” says Mayu
“Eh??”
Mayu smirks and says “I’ll train you to become a perfect host within 2 days”
“Gulp* …” Kai has a bad feeling with Mayu’s smirk..

That… nezumi-like smirk… it’s as if he’s got a new toy to chew on… is what everyone is thinking about and pitied Kai

Then Jun and Ren starts their lesson with Riku and Kuu while Mayu and Sae leaves with Kai to a place Mayu says will be Kai’s training place.

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Miyazawa Night Club
“Erm… why are we here?? I mean are we even allowed to be here??” asked Kai
Mayu rolled his eyes and answers “Of course, we’re here for your training and don’t worry this is Sae’s family’s night club so we’re free to use anything here”
“I mean we’re still underage and all” replies Kai
“Don’t worry my parents don’t mind and we used to come here to play often” says Sae while pointing at Mayu
“Fine.. so what are we going to do here??” asks Kai
Mayu smirks and clap his hands as he says “Girls!! It’s time for action~”

Suddenly more than ten girls come out from the staff room wearing only lingerie on them and scream when they see Kai.

“Kyaa~~ He’s cute and cool~” says one of the girl
“He’s totally my type” says another girl while licking her bottom lips

Kai tensed up feeling like a meat to the lions… he wanted to escape but was grab on both his arms by the girls and all of them push their bodies on him causing him to blush furiously when their assets made contact with his body.

“Kyaa~ He’s so cute when he blush like that”
“I wanna eat him~~”

“HELP!!!” yelled Kai but Sae and Mayu were also enjoying their time with the girls and ignoring Kai’s request for help.

The girls were giving Kai kisses on his cheeks, neck, collar bones, etc. and they were removing his clothes and messing his hair..

Kai’s inner thoughts ‘OMG!! I’m going to be raped!!! HELP!!!’
Kai was struggling but it was futile…

As the girls continue their assaults on Kai… SUDDENLY!!! The door of the Night Club was slammed open and all the figures inside the club stop whatever they were doing and look at the guests coming in one by one…

Several girls went in the Night Club spreading with two spreading their Black aura… One of them happens to be Acchan while the other one is Mayu’s fiancé, Kashiwagi Yuki a.k.a. Yukirin a beautiful raven-haired girl with white skin, with 2 girls at the back of them who happens to be Akimoto Sayaka a strong muscular but elegant and beautiful girl, and Ota Aika a.k.a. Lovetan a cute angel-like girl with a cute dimple, out of 7 of the EC 4 members came…

“Ac… Acchan??” says Kai shocked
“Why.. I mean how did you guys know that we’re here??” asks Mayu confused but when he sees Lovetan he knows that Ren has spilled it.. Damn you Ren… I’ll get you back later…
“Sa.. Sayaka... it’s not what it seems” Sae says trying to explain

“Well, well your dear friend Ren was kind enough to tell us where were you guys” says Yukirin coldly.

Mayu’s thought ‘I thought so…’

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Back at the HC
“Achooo!”Ren sneezes
“Oi, are you alright?” asks Jun
“I think so.. it’s just that somehow I think someone is talking about me” says Ren
“Yea, like how bad you are LOL” added Kuu
“Hey!” protest Ren

“BTW, you think they’ll be alright??” asks Riku
“Who?” asks Jun
“Those guys that went to the club” Riku answer
“I mean those girls that just come over just now.. They look like they were ready to kill someone when they heard that those guys went to the pub” continued Riku

Flashback…
“So you should hold your cup this way to make you look sexier” explains Ren to Kuu and Riku.
“Ah.. I got it” answers Riku and Kuu

Right now Riku and Kuu were receiving lessons from Ren and Jun.
“Then you should…”

Bang!

“Is Mayu in here?” asks a girl with raven-hair.
“Ah, Yuki. Mayu’s not here at the moment” answers Jun
“Where is he??” asks Yuki
“Erm… He..”

“Who’s that girl??” Kuu asks Ren
“That’s Mayu’s fiancé” answers Ren
“How about the one behind her??” asks Riku
“Ah, that’s Ota Aika a.k.a. Lovetan. They are both members of EC”

“He..” OMG! What is Yuki here at such a bad timing when Mayu went to the pub with Sae and Kai to train Kai?? Oh god what should I answer her??!!! Jun thought.

“He what?” asks Yuki a bit impatient.
“He.. a… went home..” Arg! What a lame reason… Jun facepalm himself

Yuki raises an eyebrow showing Jun you-think-I’m-a-fool face. Then she turns to Lovetan and gives her a signal which Lovetan understands immediately.

“Ow.. I got it..” Lovetan replies

As Yuki was busy dealing with Jun Lovetan walk towards Ren, Riku and Kuu.
“Hi” says Lovetan
“Hi Lovetan” says Ren
“Where is Mayu??”
“Erm.. I don’t know..”
“You better tell me the truth, Sasshi” Lovetan says as she show Sasshi her devil smile.
“Gulp* Mayu went to the Miyazawa Night Club with Sae and Kai” Sasshi confess to Lovetan.
“Good..” then Lovetan went to Yuki and told her then Yuki took out her phone and dial a number…

“Hello? This is Yuki. Is this Sayaka?”
“Yes this is Sayaka”
“Gather the girls we’re going to the Miyazawa Night Club”
“Eh?”
“Mayu, Sae and a guy name Kai have went there and I don’t care but I just need to bring Mayu back!” says Yuki
“Okay.. So Sae, Mayu and Kai have gone to the Miyazawa Night Club right?”
“Yes..”
“BTW, who’s Kai??”
“I don’t know and I don’t care. I’ll meet you guys 2 minutes in front of the Club” says Yuki then she hang on the phone without waiting for any reply and leaves the HC with Lovetan.

“Sasshi! You told them??” asks Jun
“I have no choice! You didn’t see that smile of Lovetan!” defend Sasshi

Flashback Ends…

“Now that I think about it… We shouldn’t be here wasting our time! We should be there at the pub too to watch the show!” exclaimed Kuu as he realizes how stupid he was to almost let the show pass…
“Hmm.. You’re right let’s go check them out.. I’m starting to get bored here already” says Riku
“I guess it isn’t a bad idea.. And we could help them when they’re in serious trouble since we’re the ones who spilled their locations to the girls” says Jun
“No objection here” says Ren
“Then it’s decided let’s go!” says Kuu

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Entertainment Club
Inside the room were Acchan and Akimoto Sayaka… The rest have gone home or have business to attend. Acchan and Sayaka were relaxing in their clubroom then suddenly Sayaka’s phone rang.

Ring! Ring! Ring! Sayaka then picked up the phone and answers “Hello?”
“Yes this is Sayaka”
“Eh?”
“Okay.. So Sae, Mayu and Kai have gone to the Miyazawa Night Club right?”
Hearing this Acchan stopped whatever she were doing and concentrate on Sayaka’s conversation with Yukirin.
“BTW, who’s Kai?”
“A… She hung up…”

Just when Sayaka was going to tell Acchan she already found her ready to go out.
“Wait, Yukirin has asked for us to gather in front of the Miyazawa Night Club. You can’t go home yet”
“Did I say I’m going home?”
“Let’s not waste any time now, let’s go” says Acchan
“Huh? A.. Oh..” Why is she so hyped-up today?? She usually has no motivation in doing things at all… Usually she will just say ‘no’ and I’ll have to drag her to do things…

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Back to the Miyazawa Night Club
“You don’t have to explain, Sae. I can see it with my own eyes and you don’t have the obligation to explain anything to me since we’re nothing but friends” says Sayaka coldy to Sae.

“No.. Sayaka.. I..” Sae continues to explain
“I’ll be leaving now.. Seems like everything is okay.. and you’re having fun..”
“No! I’m not having fun”
Sayaka ignores Sae and was going to go out but Sae grab Sayaka’s arm to prevent her from leaving.
“Wait!” But Sayaka just gave Sae a nice side-way kick right on his stomach causing him to land on his knees with both his arms on his abdomen.
“Ouch!”
After freeing herself from Sae, Sayaka once again attempt to leave but was once again stopped by Sae as he is now grabbing onto Sayaka’s leg..
“Sayaka~~ Please~~ I’m sorry~~” Sae beg as he grabs Sayaka’s leg with his body still on the floor…
“Oi! Let me go!”
“NO!”

At the same time Mayu was confronting Yuki “Yuki.. Please calm down.. it.. it’s not my fault.. really.. It’s Sae, he drag me here.. I didn’t want to but…” Mayu says innocently and pretend to cry.

“WTF??” shouted Sae “Ain’t this your idea to train Kai as a perfect host???”

Mayu ignore Sae and continue to pretend to be innocent. But Yuki seems not too satisfied with the answer as she raises an eyebrow and glares at Sae but Sae didn’t notice since he was too busy clinging onto Sayaka’s leg.

But Mayu knows how to handle Yuki really well… he always use this to calm Yuki down when she was angry or jealous..
“Yuki, are you perhaps jealous??” asks Mayu teasingly
Yuki then blush furiously as Mayu asks the question.
“Wha?? Of.. of course I.. I’m not” Yuki stuttered
“Oh~ Really?? Then why were you stuttereing??” smirks Mayu
Just as Yuki was going to open her mouth and protest Mayu plant a kiss on Yuki’s lips keeping it shut.

On the other hand Acchan was looking at Kai who has tattered shirt on, messy hair and lipstick marks almost everywhere and this really pisses Acchan off…

“Ac.. Acchan…” says Kai scared
Acchan was glaring at every girl who was near Kai sending them her killing-aura to them…

But the girls weren’t aware of the situation they are in… they were foolish…
“Hey! Who are you girls to destroy our fun time!” says one of the girls
“Yea! I was having fun with this cute guy too” says another girl as she hugs Kai tightly which causes a twitch in Acchan’s eyebrow..

“YOU B****! YOU BETTER BACK OFF! HE’S MINE!! MINE!! YOU HEARD ME?!!” Acchan shouted warningly to the girls with extreme killing-aura which makes the girls shiver and back off from Kai.. Kai was also shivering from Acchan’s killing-aura..

“Gulp* Acchan??” Kai says nervously
Acchan then realizes what she just said and blush..
“I mean.. I didn’t mean it that way.. I was just.. Anyway just don’t get misunderstanding okay?? I didn’t mean it, it was just adrenaline rush”
“What misunderstanding??”
“Um.. that I like you.. because.. I said ‘you’re mine’ just now…”
“Ah.. don’t worry I know you don’t like me that way and I know that you’re trying to help me” Kai answers smiling Yea.. Of course there’s no way Acchan will like me that way.. I know but.. why do I feel disappointed??
“Un…” Thank god he is so dense.. but why do I also feel disappointed??

Few Minutes ago 4 figures came into the club..
“Yahoo!! How are things going on??” asks Kuu
“Did we miss the show??” asks Riku
“Maybe we did..” says Jun
“or not..” says Ren as he observe the situation around the room.

They see Sae clinging onto Sayaka’s leg begging, Yuki and Mayu kissing while Acchan giving death-glare to the girls then shouted ‘BACK OFF! HE’S MINE!! MINE!! YOU HEARD ME?!!”

“Wow.. What a scenery…” says Kuu with others agree with him.
“What happened??” asks Jun
“Although I don’t know what’s going on but it’s really amusing to see this” says Riku
“Oi! Get a room you two” shouted Ren to Mayu and Yuki who didn’t seems to care about what he say since both their mind are preoccupied with the kiss they are sharing now at the moment.

“Sasshi~~” a girl from the pub were running towards Sasshi crying..
“They were so scary.. What is going on??” asks the girl who was clinging onto Sasshi’s arm.
“Ssh.. Don’t worry it’s just something normal between them” Sasshi/Ren comforted the girl but then he suddenly felt cold running up and down his spine… Then he turn around and found Lovetan glaring at him and the girl who was clinging on him..

“Gulp* Urm.. Natalia.. if you don’t mind could you get off me?”
“Eh~ Why?? I don’t want to..”
“Urm.. I think you better let go if you still want to be alive because….” Sasshi say as he point towards Lovetan who is emitting dangerous aura.
“… I guess you’re right.. Then see you next time Sasshi” the girl says and hurriedly run back to the staff room.
Then Sasshi turn and look at Lovetan who was now looking the other way and was going to leave the pub.

“Wait for me, Lovetan” Sasshi say as he follows Lovetan out of the pub.

While Sayaka also leaves the pub dragging Sae on one of her leg since Sae was still clinging onto her leg and won’t let go…

On the other hand, it seems that Yuki and Mayu has made up and went back together holding hands a few minutes ago already…

This leaves Kai, Acchan, Kuu, Riku and Jun the only ones left in the pub…
“So… shall we also leave now?” asks Kai
“Un” replies Atsuko
“I’m hungry” says Kuu and Jun
“…”
“Riku??”
“OMG! I CAN’T BELIEVE I FORGOT TO BRING MY PSP!!!” Riku shouted.

“Well… let’s go home.” says Kai ignoring Riku while others nodded in agreement.

Just when they are going to leave a figure stopped them.. it was Shinoda Mariko..
“Wait, you guys” says Shinoda Mariko

“Eh? Shinoda sensei/Mariko sensei/Mari nee/T-Rex??!!” they shouted
“Yes.. yes.. I’m Shinoda Mariko.. Don’t have to be that surprise, okay??”
“What do you want T-Rex?” asks Kuu
Mariko hit Kuu on the head “Ouch!”
“You guys will have to receive punishment except Atsuko because I know she’s here to bring you guys or rather a particular someone out of the pub and not to have fun like you guys” says Mariko
“EH?? Why??” they asks
“Isn’t it obvious?? First of all, look at where you guys are in right now.”
Then they look around at where they are and realize.. “Ah…”
“Good, seems like you guys know the reason why you’ll be punished. Jun, Riku and Kai you guys will be cleaning the whole boy’s bathroom for a month”

“Eh?!!!!”
Jun’s thoughts: Aw… I don’t want to clean that stinky bathroom for a month… Lucky for Mayu, Sae and Ren… they went back first!!!
Riku’s thoughts: sigh* Now because of this punishment I’ll have less time to complete the games…
Kai’s thoughts: Oh well… Blame Mayu and Sae later for bringing me here and going back early!!!

“Hahaha Good Luck guys” says Kuu laughing
“Don’t laugh Gachapin. You also have punishment” says Mariko
“EH?!! But I just got here!”
“No excuse”
“Fine.. So what’s my punishment??”
Mariko smirks and says “My assistant for a month”
“What??!!! You want me to be your assistant for a month?? I’d rather be cleaning toilets!!” shouted Kuu
“Well then, I’ll be expecting you at the infirmary at 7 a.m. tomorrow. Acchan, let’s go home” says Mariko
“Un, bye guys” says Acchan
“Hey! Wait!” Kuu protests but Mariko and Acchan already left.

“sigh* Let’s go home now.. I’m tired” says Kai
“Yea..” says Jun and Riku as they drag a struggling Gachapin, who was about to run after Mariko, with them.


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Thanks everyone for reading it :kneelbow: I'll try to update soon XD
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 2] >>> 25/12/11
Post by: Popsicle on December 25, 2011, 01:02:40 PM
Merry christmas~
Lmfao mayu is so sly .. :lol:
someone knows how to handle yuki  XD
I feel sorry for sae .. :catglare:

This is amazinggg update soon !! :twothumbs
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 2] >>> 25/12/11
Post by: AKBlover_99 on December 25, 2011, 01:09:00 PM
LOL! I can't stop laughing reading this! :mon lmao:
The girls try to rape Kai? Thank God Acchan saved him! :mon thumb:
Poor Sae ! LOL !
I think that T-Rex just wanna spend time with her Gachapin! :mon squee:
Thx for the update! I really really like it! :gmon bye:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 2] >>> 25/12/11
Post by: Sydney W on December 25, 2011, 04:18:43 PM
Acchan and Yuki killing (black aura) really scared off Mayu and Kai.... Acchan being jealous seeing Kai surrounded with girls....... next update please... thanks
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 2] >>> 25/12/11
Post by: cmze on December 25, 2011, 05:50:08 PM
I love it!  :w00t:

Mayuki was perfect!  :rofl:

nice chapter!  :grin:

Acchan so cute jealousy!  :wub:

stupid Kai do something!  :thumbsup

please update soon!  :heart:

Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 2] >>> 25/12/11
Post by: Haruko on December 26, 2011, 06:53:16 AM
jajaj kai kiss your wifey and show her who is the boss :D
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 3]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 26, 2011, 06:41:30 PM
Everyone thank you so much for the comment and thanks XD I really enjoyed reading it so much that I was all work up and wrote another part although it is quite short.. :nervous Hope you guys enjoy it :D Please excuse me my English :P Love You Guys~~ :grin: Good Night~ Gotta go and sleep now :panic: Got school tomorrow...


Chapter 7


Part 3

Grand Royal Apartment 11th Floor Room 121
Kai, Riku and Jun with Kuu who was dragged along all the way have finally reached home. When they reach the living room they saw Mayu drinking Pirukuru (a health drink), sitting comfortably on the couch watching anime.

“What the hell…” says everyone as they see Mayu relaxing in the living room.
Mayu heard something so he turns back and look “Oh, hi guys. Welcome back~”
“Don’t welcome back me. Do you know what happened to us after you left with your Yuki??” asks Jun
“What?” Mayu asks in a not concerned voice
“Shinoda sensei has caught us in the pub and we’re all PUNISHED! For the whole week…” says Riku
“Oh.. that’s bad.. Good Luck guys. I’ll be praying for ya” says Mayu as he took a sip of the Pirukuru in his hand.
“Wait! Whose fault do you think it is??” Kai exclaim
“Who??” Mayu asks innocently
“YOU!!! And because of that I’ve got to be the T-Rex’s assistant for a WHOLE WEEK!!! You heard me?? A WHOLE WEEK!!! Let me emphasize again ‘A WHOLE WEEK’!!” shouted Kuu loudly as if the whole world can hear him.
“Okay, okay.. I got it ‘A Whole Week’ Keep quiet, I can’t hear Mio talking” says Mayu also emphasizing the word ‘a whole week’.
“Don’t you feel sorry for us at all??” they all asks
“Nope, not really.” Replies Mayu coldly as he has turned his attention back to his anime.

Kai, Kuu, Riku and Jun form a circle with one another having a meeting…
“Do you think what I’m thinking about?” asks Kuu
“Yes” they all answered
“Well, let Operation TMTD begin!” says Kuu
“Oh!” everyone replies with their right hand forming a fist up into the air.


Ten no Koe: Hi everyone~ It’s been a long time since I’ve last come out.
Sigh* I know you guys all missed me, I’m sorry.. I was having a vacation.

Ten no Koe’s Wife: Darling?? Where are you??

Ten no Koe: Honey, sorry I’m a little busy right now. Could you wait a moment?

Ten no Koe’s Wife: Alright, come back soon~

Ten no Koe: Ahem.. That was my wife just now.. Anyway it looks like they are activating Operation TMTD, Tickle Mayu To Death. This is activated every time when Mayu pisses his cousins (Takamina and Jun) and childhood friends (Haruna and Miichan), they would use this to punish Mayu…


“Mayuyu~~” says Kai, Kuu, Riku and Jun sweetly as they call Mayu’s nickname.
Hearing this Mayu feel cold shivers through his spine and that he should escape..

Mayu has a sharp six sense that allows him to escape the bad things as shown before, like when Crazy Riku is coming out…

Mayu quickly get up from his seat and attempt to run away but was stopped when 4 pair of arms are grabbing and pinning him down on the couch…

“Not so fast, where do you think you’re going? Mayuyu~” says Kuu smirking
“Um… Nowhere, just want to go to the bathroom” says Mayu nervously
“It can wait” says Kai coldly
“No, it’s going to come out”
“Then let it out” says Riku smirking
“I’ll take pictures too” says Jun
“… Actually it can wait.. So what do you guys want??” asks Mayu nervously
They all smirk at Mayu… Oh-oh… Damn it… I know this smirk… Oh God, I’m going to die of laughing… sigh* This is not the way I want to die… I want to die protecting my loved ones like in those action movies or animes.. To die of laughter is just… lame..

“Then shall we start??” asks Kuu mischievously as he is not exercising his fingers.
“NO, wait! Could we all just calm down and have a talk first?” asks Mayu with puppy eyes.
“NO” they all deadpanned
“sigh* FINE! I’ll be like a man and accept my destiny!!” says Mayu as he stretch his body and close his eyes ready for his punishment.

Then for the next one hour Kai, Kuu, Riku and Jun all take turns to tickle Mayu. Well, they are all having fun XD As for Mayu he’s been laughing and laughing for one hour, tears form and flow down his eyes and his voice starts to become husky..

“Phew. So tired” says Kai as he lay down on the floor.
“Yea.. same here..” says Riku lying on the couch
“Mayu moves too much…” says Jun tired too.
“Ha.. Ha.. It’s because it’s ticklish” says Mayu panting
“What? You guys tired already??” asks Kuu full of energy
“I thought there’ll be round 2” Kuu added
“Don’t kill me off yet” says Mayu tiredly
“Nah, let him go this time.. I’m already exhausted” says Kai
“Agreed” says Riku and Jun
“Fine.. You guys are no fun at all” says Kuu a little depressed
“Let’s go to sleep now… I’m so exhausted today…” says Kai
“Agreed” all reply except Kuu
“sigh* I’ll eat some cakes first before I sleep” says Kuu
“Up to you but be careful, you might become a pig LOL oink, oink” says Jun
“I won’t!” says Kuu as he smack Jun’s head
“Ouch!” cried Jun as he rubs his head.

Then they all went back to their rooms to rest for the night except Kuu who was fidgeting inside the kitchen for some cakes.

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Friday – Host Club
Kai, Kuu and Riku have completed their trainings to become a perfect host and are now ready to accept customers… And for Kai today is the day of destiny… the day of the mission.. The day Sala is going to come to the club…

Kai is taking deep breath to calm himself down.. he’s really nervous since it’s his first time to flirt with girls, well… he’s a girl or used to be a girl and he’s the shy-type so he never flirted with anyone.

“Calm down, you can do it” says Kuu as he pat Kai’s shoulder
“Yup, you should have confidence in yourself and believe in your male talent” says Jun.
“I agree with what Jun has said and who do you think has trained you for these past two days?? You should be honored and be proud of it.” says Mayu proudly
“We know you can do it” says Riku Well, although he doesn’t know it he’s somewhat a natural born flirt since he always says some pick-up lines without knowing it…
“Thank guys..” Kai says gratefully as he take one last deep breath “Yosh! I can do it!”

Host Club – Now Opened
Within a few minutes the Host Club’s activity room is now full of female customers and the members are busy flirting with their customers…

(Host Club has two rooms; one activity room for doing their business and one leisure room for relaxing)

“Are you guys new here?” asks a customer
“Yes, we are. Yoroshiku ne~” Kuu answers with a wink causing the female customer to faint.
“Kya~ So kakoi~”

“Hi, Mayu” says a female as she came in the HC
“Hi, Sala. We’ve got new members and one of them suite your taste I think” says Mayu
“Oh, really?? Who’s he?”
“Kai!” Mayu called
Kai then came towards them and bow.
“Osu, I’m Takahashi Kai. Nice ta meet ya” Kai says delinquent like.
“Oh~ He’s totally my type~ So kakkoi~ I’ll appoint him” Sala says
“Understood. Kai lead Sala to table no. 11” orders Mayu
“Got it~” Kai says as he lead Sala to table no. 11.

Table No. 11
“What drink do you want?” asks Kai
“Hm.. Why don’t you decide for me??” says Sala
Then Kai leans in near Sala’s ear and whisper seductively “Well then allow me to get you a drink I recommend this week~”
“Yes, I would love to” says Sala totally fangirling over Kai now.

Kai then leave his seat to get a drink from the bar. (The bartender changes every day in rotation like Monday is Mayu Tuesday Chiyuu Wednesday Ren Thursday Riku and Friday Sae. Kai and Kuu were not allowed in there because they seem to make a mess every time during their training, so they will only help as assistant when the bartender of the day is too busy. BTW, of course they don’t sell alcoholic drinks in here XD)

“Sae, I want Blue Teppen 2 cups” says Kai
“Sure. But wow.. you already got your customer to order something so expensive..” says Sae
“Well, she wants me to decide for her” says Kai smirking

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The AKB point the Club earns is distributed like this, 30% to the Club while each member’s points will be distributed this way:

No. 1 of the week (who earn the most points from the customers) will get 18%
No. 2 will get 15%
No. 3 will get 12%
No. 4 will get 10%
No. 5 will get 8%
No. 6 will get 5%
No. 7 will get 2% of the total earned amount.


Menu of Host Club:

Bar (Drinks)
Original Mixtures
Blue Teppen 500 AKB points/cup or 1,000 AKB points/bottle (= 3 cups)
Red Ribbon 300 AKB points/cup or 800 AKB points/bottle (= 3 cups)
Green Gachapin 250 AKB points/cup or 600 AKB points/bottle (= 3 cups)
Black Marimokkori 250 AKB points/cup or 600 AKB points/bottle (= 3 cups)
Sasshi Quality 150 AKB points/cup or 400 AKB points/bottle (= 3 cups)
Gekkikara 150 AKB points/cup or 400 AKB points/bottle (= 3 cups)

Other Drinks
Soft Drinks (Coke, Sprite, Fanta and Mirinda) 80 AKB points/can
Tea (Hot/Cold) 80 AKB points/cup
Water 50 AKB points/cup

Bar (Dessert)
Cakes
Luxurious Set (contains Strawberry, Blueberry, Chocolate and Mint short-cake) 1,000 AKB points/set
Strawberry short-cake 300 AKB points/piece
Blueberry short-cake 300 AKB points/piece
Chocolate short-cake 300 AKB points/piece
Mint short-cake 300 AKB points/piece

Ice-Cream & Sundaes
Ice-cream (Strawberry, Vanilla, Chocolate, Blueberry, Lemon, Kiwi and Maccha flavors available) 50 AKB points/scoop + 10 AKB points if want cone
Choco-Banana Sundae 180 AKB points/cup
Strawberry Delux Sundae 180 AKB points/cup
Blueberry World Sundae 185 AKB points/cup

Bar (Food)
Pizza (Seafood, Hawaiian, Pepperoni and Cocktail) 500/750/1,000 AKB points/pizza
Katsudon Set 500 AKB points/set
Hamburger Set 500 AKB points/set
Curry 450 AKB points/plate
Tempura 200 AKB points/plate
Soba 450 AKB points/bowl
Udon 450 AKB points/bowl
Friend Rice 400 AKB points/plate
Sushi Luxurious Set 1,000 AKB points/set
Sushi Normal Set 600 AKB points/set

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After Kai get the Blue Teppens he went back to the table and handed it to Sala.
“Here you go, my lady. This is my recommendation of the week, ‘Blue Teppen’.” Kai says the ‘Blue Teppen’ sexily causing Sala to almost overheat from her brain circuit.

“Thank you” says Sala and takes the cup from Kai
“You don’t mind I also ordered one for myself right?” says Kai
“No, no I don’t mind it. It’s on me” says Sala
“Well, thank you” Kai whisper to Sala and blow a little wind in her ear causing her to flush.

Then they were talking and Kai was flirting and seducing Sala the whole time and when he’s sure that Sala was 100% fangirling over him, he now will start his mission.

Kai’s thoughts ‘Mission Time’
“Hey, Sala.” says Kai
“Yes? Kai”
“I was wondering what club do you belong”
“Oh, I belong to the Science Technology Club” says Sala
“Eh?! That famous STC??” Kai asks excitingly
“Yes” says Sala happily
“That’s so cool~ What do you guys do there?” asks Kai
“Well, like the name suggest we invent things”
“That’s all??”
“Don’t tell anyone but we also do some ‘other’ things” whisper Sala
“What things?” Kai whispers back
“Just some trading”
“What kind of trading??”
“Just our products with the AKB points”
“What product??”
Sala is starting to feel suspicious now..
“Why do you ask so much??” asks Sala
“Well… I’m a really curious boy” says Kai innocently but then..
“But the real reason is because I want to know more about Sala, about the club Sala is in” says Kai seductively
Sala blush furiously and answers “Well… There will be a trade going on next month at the old school building.”
“What trade??” Kai continue to ask seductively
“Dru..g.. No.. I mean Drum” says Sala nervously
“Drum??”
“Yes.. we.. a.. have connections with some music shops outside and the music club wants to buy a drum for discounts and that’s what the trade is about” replied Sala
“Ah~ You want more drinks?” asks Kai
“Yes”
“I’ll be right back” Kai says and leave to the bar.


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Thanks everyone for reading :kneelbow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 3] >>> 27/12/11
Post by: Sydney W on December 26, 2011, 07:00:55 PM
Yayyyy..... You update the story... thank you very much and I like the story flows....
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 3] >>> 27/12/11
Post by: Popsicle on December 26, 2011, 07:14:04 PM
Yayy More this made my day  :love:
Drums my ass , drugs more like! :cathappy:

This is so goood  :thumbup  :thumbup  :thumbup
UpdAte soon  :peace:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 7 Part 3] >>> 27/12/11
Post by: Sok on December 26, 2011, 09:26:32 PM
Oh ho.  Poor guys got punished well Mayu's chilling. TMTD was good.
Thank you for the Update.
Kai getting the information from Sala so easily. Can't wait for the next ch.
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 27, 2011, 04:16:58 AM
Thanks everyone for the comment XD I was in the university and got free time so I made a small part :D But WARNING it is really SHORT but hope you guys won't mind :nervous When I got time I'll post it soon for sure I promise. Well then please enjoy reading and excuse my English :P


Chapter 8


Part 1

“I’ll be right back” Kai says and leave to the bar.

“Hey, Sae 2 more Blue Teppens” says Kai
“Wow… you’re doing really good” says Sae
“Haha.. Thanks BRB” says Kai as he leaves to Kuu and Riku
“Kuu, Riku got a minute?”
“Yea..”

Then they went to the club leisure room.
“What you want to talk about?” asks Riku
“I got new information from Sala” says Kai
“Really??!!” asks Kuu
“Yes.. but we’ll discuss when we get back”
“Okay, got it” says Riku and Kuu as the three of them went back to work.

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Host Club – Leisure Room
“Ha… So tired…” says Kai
“Same here” says Ren, Riku and Sae
“Not really” says Mayu and Kuu
“I don’t understand how come you two don’t get tired when you two flirts the most…” says Kai
Mayu and Kuu just shurg their shoulders and answer “I don’t know”
“Let’s go home now” says Kai

After cleaning the club rooms they all went back home…

Grand Royal Apartment 11th Floor Room 121
“Home~” says Riku as he lie down on the couch
“Kai you get any new info. From Sala?” asks Mayu
“Yes. I was planning to tell you guys now” answers Kai

“I got the news that the trading will be 1 month from now at the old-school building and there will be drugs involved” says Kai seriously
“I thought so… something is really going on in the STC” says Jun
“Anymore information about how many people and who are they going to trade with??” asks Riku
“No… That’s the limit already.. If I ask more she’ll definitely be suspicious” Kai replies
“But I can’t believe how easily you get the information from Sala when we’re dying to get it a few days ago” says Mayu pouting
“You guys didn’t see it but Kai was such a flirt” says Kuu
“From what I see he’s really a pro.. and it looks like he can seduce anyone” Kuu continues.
“Eh?? What did I do? I just use what I think is good” says Kai
“Yea right.. you did but you should see how flustered you made her” says Kuu
“Anyway we should report this to dad first and see what to do next” says Kai
“Got it. I’ll go get the laptop” says Jun

After Jun brought the laptop they contact with Takahashi Hiroshi through secret line so that nobody will be able to get access to their channel and can’t eavedrop on them.

Bzz… Bz.. It’s connecting…
“Hello??” says Hiroshi
“Hi, dad/uncle”
“Oh, any new report?”
“Yes, we learn that there will be a deal going on next month at the old-school building and it involves drugs..” says Kai
“Got it.. but do you know the exact date? That would be better” asks Hiroshi
“Nope.. because if I continue to press on the issue we’ll be suspicious” Kai answers
“Hm… but try to limit the possibity of when the trade will occur since we can’t really send our men on stand-by for a whole month in the building” says Hiroshi
“We’ll try” says Mayu
“Oh, and one more thing. Be careful, don’t get hurt and don’t get caught” says Hiroshi concerned.
“Roger!” they all replied
“K, then have a nice sleep. Good Night~ Beep*” with that the connection is cut.

“Well then… we need new sources of info and plan” says Kai
“But for now let’s call it a day” says Kuu yawning
“Agree” says Mayu, Jun and Riku

Then they left and went to their respective bedroom to have a rest.

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The Next Day – AKB High School Class 2-A
You can hear birds chirping and the sound of chalk being written on the black board… it’s class time right now and students are studying… Everythings’ normal and peaceful until that moment…

“So to solve for x you have to put this equation into this then that and do all the adding and subtracting and you’ll get x’s value” explains the math teacher.

The teacher was writing on the black board and was explaining how to solve for the value x while students are either taking notes, daydreaming, sleeping or playing..

Then SUDDENLY!!! ‘Ahem! Ahem!’ could be heard everywhere in the school throught the school’s speaker.


Principle Announcement
Emergency Event
Winner: 20, 000 AKB points and the club will get 40, 000 AKB points.
Time limit: From now until school ends which is 3.00 p.m.
Winning Slot Available: 1
Rule: No violence
Event Type: Chasing and Running
To Win: You’ve got to handcuff the ‘mouse’ of the day with your wrist and bring him to the principal room to claim your rewards.
Target No. : 1
Target: Takahashi Kai

Note: Handcuff will be handed to each students by their teachers in 30 minutes. Each students should be on stand-by inside their classroom while Mr. Takahashi could use this time to hide himself or anything.

Well then, Good Luck everyone. I’ll be waiting in the principal room.


Students are shouting in excitement since they were bored of the classes and now their principle, Aki-p, has throw an exciting event for them with nice rewards. So who wouldn’t get excited?? Except one person…

“What?!! Why me??” Kai complains
“Kai, if you don’t want to be catch or swallowed by the students I suggest you to go into hiding now.. if not you’re time limit will soon be up” says Kuu while looking at his watch smiling.
“Yea.. I better go now..” says Kai as he ran out of the class.


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Thanks everyone for reading :kneelbow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
Post by: Sok on December 27, 2011, 04:47:01 AM
Thank you for the update.  :kneelbow:
It's very interesting.  :ding: :mon star:
Quote
Rule: No violence
Event Type: Chasing and Running
To Win: You’ve got to handcuff the ‘mouse’ of the day with your wrist and bring him to the principal room to claim your rewards.
Target No. : 1
Target: Takahashi Kai
I feel sorry for Kai. He must feel :mon ref: :mon wtf:
 The event is very interesting, will there be more targets after Kai's caught? I wonder who'll be the one to catch him.  :mon chilly:
I honestly hope it's Acchan.  :mon lovelaff:
Can't wait for your next update.  :on comhere:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
Post by: cmze on December 27, 2011, 04:50:43 AM
What STC?  :shocked

this is so intersting!  :w00t:

wonder what kai will do and who is going to catch him Acchan or Tomochin?  :wub:

nice chapter!  :inlove:

please update soon!  :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
Post by: Haruko on December 27, 2011, 04:58:44 AM
jajaja poor kai :D, but acchan where is... :D so good fic
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
Post by: Sydney W on December 27, 2011, 06:56:19 AM
Mouse (Kai) and cat games... Wonder who manage to caught Kai, could it be Acchan, Tomochin or Sala ? Wondering how Acchan and Tomochin react to the sudden games announcement by principal.
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
Post by: kahem on December 27, 2011, 12:11:27 PM
Hahahahaha!!!!!! So funny!!!
The night club scene was just epic!!!
And now the catch-the-mouse-of-the-day game lol!
This school is crazy hahahahh!!!
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
Post by: AKBlover_99 on December 27, 2011, 01:05:39 PM
Ah! Sorry for not commenting Chapter7 Part 3. Huhu~
Chapter 7 Part 3
LOL! Poor Mayu. And Kai use his flirt skills to get the information~ :mon roll:

Chapter 8 Part 1
I like it! Interesting. And I feel really sorry for Kai! Acchan,go find Kai now!
Really can't wait for the next chapter. :mon inluv:
Update soon!  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 27, 2011, 05:24:12 PM
@Sok There could be more target later on XD or other kind of events :grin:
@cmze STC is the Science Technology Club :) Thanks for the comment :D
@Haruko Thanks for reading and the comment ;)
@Sydney W You'll know soon :D
@kahem Haha.. Yea thanks for the comment XD
@AKBlover_99 Thanks for liking it :D Of course that's what Acchan will do :grin:

Thanks everyone for the comment :kneelbow: and the thanks: Sok, cmze, blughise, Sydney W, kahem

I got home today and continues to work on it XD I manage to type something down but the result of the event won't be out yet :P I'll post the next Part really soon~~
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 1] >>> 27/12/11
Post by: Sok on December 27, 2011, 05:42:10 PM
Wow!  :mon beam: Can't wait for your update!
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 27, 2011, 05:48:35 PM
As I have promised HERE IT IS~ the next Part XD And as I've said the result still hasn't come out yet, that'll have to wait until the next part :P I'll try to update soon again but maybe this weekend if I've got enough time and ideas :D

@Sok Here it is XD Although not the exciting part yet :D BTW, I'm also waiting for your update :thumbsup Thanks for the comment :grin:

Please enjoy reading it and comment on it and Please excuse my English :P


Chapter 8


Part 2

After Kai leaves the room…
“Who do you think will catch Kai?” asks Riku
“Of course it’s me~ I’ll get the points and spend it on cakes!” says Kuu determined
“No-no. I’ll be the one that catch him” says Acchan smirking
“Since this is an event and I hate losing, I’ll go full power after him” says Tomochin
“Eh?? But you never were on full power even when it is an event” says Yuko
“Well.. it’s starting this year..” says Tomochin
“Yuko are you going to participate?” asks Riku
“Nah, I rather spend the free time with you” says Yuko smiling showing her dimple
“Eh??!!” says Riku shock
“That’s two opponents out, Lucky~” says Kuu
“What? Why two? I didn’t say that I’ll be out” says Riku pouting
“sigh* If Yuko is after you do you think you’ll have time to chase Kai??” says Kuu
“…” Riku was speechless
“Haha it’s okay Riku. I’ll win the race but I won’t share you the cakes” says Kuu
“Kuu, you sure you should be laughing at Riku??” asks Acchan
“What??”
“You didn’t go to the infirmary this morning right? And Mari-nee was really pissed off” explains Tomochin
“So??” asks Kuu raising an eyebrow
“She told me that…” Acchan wasn’t able to finish her sentence as there is announcement again…

‘Ahem! Aaa, aa, Microphone testing.. Minegishi Kuu is not allowed to participate in the race this time, due to slacking off this morning.. I don’t have to say, you know what I mean. So, you’ll have to report to the infirmary and work as my assistant the WHOLE day. Well, then I’ll be expecting you in the infirmary within 5 minutes.’

Hearing this Kuu was mad “What?! Hey! That isn’t fair! T-Rex is playing dirty!!”
“It’s because you slack off this morning” says Riku
“Hmph! I don’t care, I won’t go!!” says Kuu while showing his tongue.

‘Ah! Forgot to say… If Minegishi Kuu did not report to the infirmary within 5 minutes or did not show up at all then he will be banned from the cake corner at the cafeteria for A WHOLE MONTH. Thank you…’

Hearing this Kuu says “Well… The event isn’t that important after all… besides there is always more events later on.. I’ll catch up with you guys later since there is only 4 minutes and 5 seconds left before I got banned from the cake corner” and dash out of the class leaving a speechless Riku, Yuko, Acchan and Tomochin.

“I guess that is one more opponent less…” says Acchan
“Yea..” says Tomochin
“Even though me, Riku and Kuu is not joining but you still have to go against Yuki, Sayaka, Lovetan, Rena, Mayu, Sae, Sasshi, Chiyuu and Jun if they are in the race” says Yuko
“Hm… You’re right.. I’m not much of a sport person from the start… So I think the strongest opponent will be Yuko since you run so fast but since you don’t join then I think it should be Sayaka who run as fast as you but then Jun also run really fast…” says Acchan
“I agree with what you say but we don’t have to worry about Lovetan, Rena, Mayu and Sasshi don’t we?? They are as slow as snail LOL” says Tomochin
“Sae is quite fast too but I don’t know about Chiyuu” says Acchan
“I don’t think Chiyuu is interested in handcuffing himself with Kai so I don’t think he’ll join the race” says Riku
“Why??” asks Acchan and Tomochin
“IDK, for some reason he just declared Kai his rival few days ago” explains Riku
“Oh…” they replied
“Anyway, this morning this person gave me this paper and say that it could be useful for the next event so why don’t we take a look at it” suggests Yuko
“Eh? Really? What is it??” they asks
“Well then let’s unfold it” says Yuko showing them a piece of folded paper.

As the paper is unfolded the contents are revealed as below:


Professional Analysis of Popular Players

By: S.M.

Horse Entry:
Horse No. 1: Akimoto Sayaka also known as Gorilla
Speed: ***** (5 Stars)
Stamina: *****
Power: *****
Agility: *****
Power up Item: Banana
Note: Has marvelous ability in sportsmanship, if you’re betting I suggest this horse to you, definitely will make you rich LOL. But easily distracted and forget the objectives.

“… What kind of information is this??” asks Riku
“The player’s ability I think” answers Tomo
Then they continue to read it.

Horse No. 2: Kashiwagi Yuki also known as Marimokkori/Yukirin
Speed: **** (4 Stars)
Stamina: ****
Power: ***
Agility: **
Power up Item: Mayuyu’s kiss/hug
Note: May look weak in sport but is actually above average, when something pisses her off her ‘Black’ side may come out..

Horse No. 3: Matsui Rena a.k.a. Gekikara (for her crazy personality that come out sometimes)
Speed: *
Stamina: *
Power: *
Agility: **
Power up Item: Spicy Food
Note: Not much to say.. Just don’t bet on her when it’s about anything sport-related.. But if she's in Gekikara mode all her ability could double or even triple so make sure don't get her mad :P

Horse No. 4: Ota Aika a.k.a. Lovetan
Speed: **
Stamina: **
Power: **
Agility: **
Power up Item: Sweets
Note: Not much of a sport person too. A little below average but since she’s cute it’s fine LOL.

Horse No. 5: Miyazawa Sae a.k.a. Genking
Speed: ****
Stamina: ****
Power: ****
Agility: ****
Power up Item: Girls
Note: Quite good in all aspects in sports, above average but not the best. Only best point is that he’s always full of energy which sometimes also annoys me..

Horse No. 6: Watanabe Mayu a.k.a. Mayuyu/Nezumi
Speed: ***
Stamina: **
Power: **
Agility: **
Power up Item: Otaku related product
Note: Cute but not sporty.. average speed but below average stamina, power and agility.

Horse No. 7: Matsui Jun a.k.a. Center
Speed: *****
Stamina: ****
Power: ****
Agility: ****
Power up Item: Energetic and genuine smile from little kids or Rena
Note: Really energetic boy too but just below the annoying line so it’s fine. Run really fast and stamina, power, and agility are also above average.

Horse No. 8: Sasshihara Ren a.k.a. Sasshi/Hetare
Speed: **
Stamina: **
Power: **
Agility: *
Power up Item: Cute girls especially Lovetan
Note: Looks above average, very flirty but sport ability below average. Really Hetare..

Horse No. 9: Kasai Chiyuu
Speed: ***
Stamina: ***
Power: **
Agility: *
Power up Item: Cute things
Note: Sport ability average not below nor above, can be scary when pushed to his limit…

Horse No. 10: Maeda Atsuko a.k.a. Acchan
Speed: ***
Stamina: ***
Power: **
Agility: **
Power up Item: Food especially Cucumber
Note: Not too sporty person too, lack of motivation in almost everything. Loves to sleep and eats a lot. Worried about her future…

“Hey! What is with this??!!” asks Atsuko mad
“Let us finish reading first Acchan and the information provided by this person is 100% accurate” says Yuko
Then they continue to read the information..

Horse No. 11: Itano Tomomi a.k.a. Tomochin
Speed: ****
Stamina: ***
Power: ***
Agility: ***
Power up Item: Fashion-related things
Note: Fashionable and delinquent-like girl, also lacks motivation like her best friend.. Really worried about their future.. sigh* But sports ability is definitely above average.

“WTH?? I’m in the same level as Acchan???” asks Tomochin
“What do you mean by that??” asks Acchan coldly as she glares at Tomo
“Haha.. I didn’t say anything.. let’s continue to read” says Tomochin nervously

Horse No. 12: Oshima Yuko a.k.a. Squirrel
Speed: *****
Stamina: *****
Power: ***
Agility: ****
Power up Item: Perverted-things but recently Kojima Riku
Note: Although small and have short legs, she can run really fast and is really agile though really perverted…

Horse No. 13: Kojima Riku a.k.a. Nyan Nyan
Speed: ****
Stamina: ****
Power: *****
Agility: ****
Power up Item: Games
Note: Although he look or maybe is an airhead, his ability truly shocked me… Well.. maybe God made a mistake in there LOL Anyway he got good sport-ability.

“What?!!!” shouted Riku mad
“Nyan Nyan, calm down” says Yuko clinging onto Riku

Horse No. 14: Takahashi Kai
Speed: *****
Stamina: *****
Power: *****
Agility: ****
Power up Item: Katsudon
Note: Really a small midget but like Yuko can run really fast and all abilities are above average.. No comment aside from being a midget and suberu every time he try to joke about something.. Maybe he's actually a Mafia.. who knows from his look hahaha...

Horse No. 15: Minegishi Kuu a.k.a. Gachapin
Speed: *****
Stamina: ****
Power: ****
Agility: *****
Power up Item: Cakes
Note: His ‘charm’ point is his buck tooth that makes him look like a Gachapin. He is really annoying and childish, loves to flirt and think he looks cool which is not true at all… Only cause trouble and didn’t come to the infirmary this morning so I decided to take his qualification from joining the race and torture him LOL

Now who are you going to bet on?? Will Kai get escape and win the game or will one of the popular players catch him??

P.S. Underage people cannot bet which means ALL of you here cannot bet except me LOL


To Be Continued…


“…” everyone was now speechless
“So… the person who made this data is Mariko sensei??” asks Riku
“Yea…” answers Yuko
“In the first place are we even a horse??” asks Tomochin
“You got a point…” agrees Acchan
“Is this even accurate??” asks Riku
“It is really accurate although the comment is a bit biased…” answers Yuko
“Not really a bit… it’s really biased” says Mayu, Jun, Sae, Ren, Yuki and Sayaka.

“Woah! When did you guys get in here??” asks Riku
“Just a moment ago and who the hell is a Gorilla??!!” yelled Sayaka pointing at the paper on the table.
“Put that aside, why are you guys here? Aren’t you suppose to be on stand-by in your classes??” asks Acchan
“Well… the event has started a few minutes ago when you guys are busy debating here.. And we’re here to see if Kai is still here but I guess luck is not on our side” says Mayu
“What it’s already start??” exclaim Acchan, Tomochin, Riku and Yuko
Then they look around the classroom and find nobody aside from their groups..
“Seems like Kai is not here so bye guys” says Sayaka as she dash out of the class.

“Ah… Here are your handcuffs Maeda, Itano, Oshima and Kojima” says the teacher as he handed them their handcuff.
“Let’s start too” says Tomo as she also leaves the class

Then one by one they all leave the class except Riku with Yuko clinging on him. He has already given up in escaping so he decides to stay at the classroom and finish his game.


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Thanks everyone for reading :kneelbow: Really happy about it XD
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
Post by: Sok on December 27, 2011, 06:24:45 PM
Yay! Very interesting!
haha. kuu couldn't participate.
The information on the 'horses' was funny!  :mon lmao:
Thanks for the update.
 
Hope there's a twist as to who catches Kai. Maybe Chiyuu?
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
Post by: kahem on December 27, 2011, 07:12:35 PM
Pwahahahahah!!!! Seriously this fic is so funny!!!
The data thing lol!!!! Good job Mariko-sama!
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
Post by: Sydney W on December 28, 2011, 03:45:45 AM
The games started. Everyone is eyeing on Kai. Wonder where on earth Kai will hide. :D
The "horse" notes is hilarious. Waiting for your next update. Thanks
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
Post by: Haruko on December 28, 2011, 06:33:40 AM
jajaja poor kai, im waiting for the bet :D jajaj
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
Post by: AKBlover_99 on December 28, 2011, 07:58:06 AM
AN UPDATE !! :mon trannie: I really like that 'data' ! LOL ! :mon lmao:
Gachapin, is there just cakes in your mind?!
I like this chapter ! Can't wait for the next update ! Update soon ! :onioncheer:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
Post by: haruhi16 on December 28, 2011, 08:20:43 AM
Mariko-sama will always trolling everyone..
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
Post by: Popsicle on December 28, 2011, 07:09:29 PM
Woow So quick ~ :shock:

I hope Acchan catches Kaii :sweat:
Kuu LOOOL you and your cake  :rofl:

This is getting so good, you should have more free time so you can write more~  :P
Update soon i'll be waiting! :w00t:

P.S you should update more often like this  XD
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 2] >>> 28/12/11 UPDATED
Post by: Megumi on December 30, 2011, 06:47:27 PM
Waaaa! I've missed a lot of Cap! :OMG:

But for the whole time your fic made me  :on spit:  :wahaha:
I laughed so hard I almost died especially in the last update with Mariko sama trolling on
everyone with her stamina report....

Can't wait for your next update!

Arígatou!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 3]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 04, 2012, 11:06:40 AM
Sorry for the late update :on cloudeye: I just can't really think of what to write next... :err:
Thanks for reminding me Sydney W :hee: Hopefully it's not boring or bad :oops:
Here's the next Part of this Chapter XD I'm really sorry for the late update :panic:
Although it's short please still enjoy it :D I'll try to update again if possible on Friday :peace:
Thanks everyone for the comments. I love reading them :twothumbs


Chapter 8


Part 3

‘Ha.. Ha.. Where could I hide??’
‘I don’t think there’s any safe place at all in the school..’


Kai was now running around the school looking for a place to hide while all the students are stand-by in their classrooms.

As Kai is running he saw a storage room that is locked up.
‘Hm.. This could be a good temporary hiding place. But it’s locked up..’
Kai then smile to himself and grab a small pick from his pocket.
‘This is the advantages of learning how to pick a lock from the training to become a undercover spy’ Kai smirks as the unlock the lock and went inside the room quietly and locking it.

Kai looks around the storage, there are many things around.. Well.. What do you expect? It is a storage use for storing things. Kai then hide himself between the big lockers and use the cloth he found to cover himself as he lie on the floor.

‘I think I’ll be safe for now’

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Acchan
‘Ha… Ha… Where is Kai?? He’s not in the bathroom nor roof so where can he be??’ Acchan asks herself as she just came out from the boys’ bathroom making the boys who were there taking a leak dirtied their pants and made them scream.

‘Why are they so noisy in the bathroom?? Can’t boys do their business quietly??’ Acchan thought to herself, not knowing that she’s the cause for it.

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Tomochin
‘Where could he be?? Hm.. Let’s check the library’ Tomo thought as she run towards the library.

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Mayu
‘Where can Kai be?? Let’s check the girls’ locker/changing room and while there maybe I can check the things out too’ thought Mayu smirking as he went in the girls’ changing room. There he found a girl also looking around which he assume is looking for Kai also.

“Hi, there. Any sight of Takahashi Kai in here?” Mayu asks

Hearing Mayu the girl turns her head facing Mayu and it was, Kashiwagi Yuki.

“Eh? Yuki?? Why are you here??” Mayu says surprised

Yuki then narrow her eyes and said “I thought that if I look for all the ‘girls’ locker room then I’ll find Mayu”

“What?? I’m not a pervert” complains Mayu
“Then can you explain why do I find you in here now??” asks Yuki raising an eyebrow.
“Well… I.. I thought that maybe I’ll find Kai here” says Mayu nervous

Yuki raises an eyebrow and look at Mayu suspiciously.
“Only that??”
“…”
Yuki keep looking at Mayu, waiting for his answer.

“Fine.. You caught me so what do you want me to do?” says Mayu pouting
Yuki giggle at Mayu’s action and said “What about you treat me something to eat since I’m kinda hungry right now”
Mayu then answers “Hm.. I’m fine with..” then stop when he suddenly thought of something and smirks as he approaches Yuki.

“What about having me for your lunch?” Mayu asks with a wink.
Mayu thought Yuki will be blushing like mad but the Yuki he is seeing is not like that at all… He could see lust in her eyes as she smirks.

“I guess having you for lunch isn’t bad at all” replies Yuki as she kisses Mayu.
“As you wish” Mayu replies as he also kisses Yuki back.

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Gym
“Come on, Sayaka. Are you still mad??” asks Sae
“I’m not” replied Sayaka as she continues to walk and look around for Kai.
“Wait!” Sae says as he grabs Sayaka’s arm causing her to stop walking and look at him.
“What??” asks Sayaka irritated.
“Let’s bet. And if I win you’ll have to go on a drive with me.” Says Sae
“What bet?”
Sae then looks around and asks “What about one-on-one in basketball?? Since we’re also at the Gym”
“Alright, but if I win you’ll stop annoying me”
“Fine”

Sayaka got the ball first and she run really fast and move to the right going pass through Sae’s defense and make a shot and…. In! 2 Points for Sayaka.

Sae got the ball and he runs fast but Sayaka runs faster and confronts him. Sae tries to go pass but Sayaka is really good. So Sae gives Sayaka a quick peck on her lips causing her to lose her concentration and Sae uses this chance and shoot a 3 pointer… In! 3 Points for Sae.

“Hey! That was cheating!!” complains Sayaka
“Well, we didn’t set any rules from the start right??” says Sae grinning widely.
“Fine!”

Then game continues… Sayaka kept getting shots but Sae doesn’t lose to using his ‘surprise’ attacks on Sayaka so now the points are… Sayaka 25 Points while Sae 26 Points.

“Sayaka, you’re losing~”
“The game is not yet over. Who’s the winner we won’t know yet!”

Game continues… Sae still continues his ‘surprise’ attack as the game progress but what’s different now is that Sayaka has planned her revenge against Sae’s attack.

Sae got the ball now and is dashing towards the ring but Sayaka as usual was able to run in front of Sae and block him. Sae gives Sayaka a peck again and hope that he will be able to pass through Sayaka but Sayaka didn’t… she kisses him back instead causing him to drop the ball.. and Sayaka uses this chance and get the ball and shoot! In!

Sayaka then smirks at Sae “If you can do it, I also can do it”
Sae was dumbstruck and he touches his lips.. Although he let Sayaka get the ball just now he doesn’t feel sad at all instead he felt happy because Sayaka kissed him which she rarely does.

Sae then smiles and says “As you’ve said, the game is not yet over. I’ll turn the table around”
“You’re on” Sayaka says as they continue their ‘little’ game and totally forgot about looking for Kai…

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Infirmary
“Make sure all these bottles are clean and sparkling” orders Mariko
“Eh?? But that’s a whole lot! I can’t finish it!” complains Kuu
“If you can’t finish it then no cakes” replies Mariko
“Eh?? But you promised!!”
“What?? Promise are made to be break LOL” says Mariko
“Remember you T-Rex.. If it weren’t for the cakes.. I would..” Kuu grumbles softly to himself.
“What did you say??”
“Nope. Nothing.” Kuu quickly replies as he continues to wipe the medical bottles.
“Good…” replies Mariko as she continues to work.

Silence filled in the room as Mariko is busy doing her work and Kuu is cleaning the bottles.

‘Ha.. I really wanted to join in the events… No, no. I should concentrate.. I don’t want that T-Rex complaining this and that like how I didn’t clean the bottles properly and this will give her a chance to punish me!’ Kuu thought to himself.

Since Kuu didn’t want Mariko to complain about his works later so he is doing his best rubbing it to make the bottles clean and sparkling like he was told. He was too concentrated that he didn’t notice a figure looking at him and smiling gently at him.

‘Hm.. It seems like he is really doing his best.. Maybe I should treat him some cakes later..’ thought Mariko as she observes Kuu

“Kuu” says Mariko
“Hm??” asks Kuu as he still continues to rub the bottles not looking at Mariko.
“If you finishes your work before the event ends then I’ll treat you the cakes as I’ve promised”
Kuu then stop rubbing the bottle and look at Mariko happily “Really?? Any cakes??” asks Kuu cutely and excited like a little kid.

Mariko giggles to herself and answers “Yes. But that is if you finish it before the event ends”
“Hmph! Don't look down on me, I’ll finish it before you even notice!” declares Kuu as he is now really fired up and continue to rub the bottles.

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Outdoor
“Hey, wait Tomomi” says a figure running after Tomochin.
“Stop following me, Chiyuu. Can’t you see that I’m busy here??” says Tomo as she rolled her eyes.
“But.. But..”
“No, Buts!” says Tomo as she walks away quickly but Chiyuu kept following her.

“sigh* Didn’t I say stop following me??” asks Tomochin pissed as she stop and looks at Chiyuu.
“But I have something to ask you”
“What??”
“Um.. Um..”
“If you’re not going to say anything then I’ll be leaving”
“Wait! Um.. I wanted to ask if you.. like Kai..” asks Chiyuu sadly.

Hearing this Tomo blushes furiously and denies it but stuttered “Wha.. what are you talking about?? Me lik.. liking Kai?? There’s no way”
“Really?? But.. I can tell that you like him..” says Chiyuu sad.
“I already said I don’t like him!”
“You’re lying..”
“I’m not!”
“Yes, you are”
“Can you stop being annoying??”
“Fine.. But let’s make a bet”
“What bet??” asks Tomochin
“If I caught Kai first then you’ll go on a date with me this Sunday but if I lose I’ll stop annoying you.”
“What?? Why should I bet something that boring with you??”
“What? You scared??” asks Chiyuu challengingly

Tomo who hates losing of course fall for Chiyuu’s trick…
“What?! Who’s scared?? I’ll accept your challenge or bet and if I win you better not annoy me anymore”
“Okay” replies Chiyuu as he leaves to find Kai.

‘Kai.. You wait. I’ll catch you and go on a date with Tomo. I’ll not lose to you for sure!’ Chiyuu declares.

Somewhere in the School
“Achoo!” Kai sneezes then he panics and look around, luckily nobody was there.
‘Phew.. Luckily nobody heard it. I wonder if there is anyone talking about me??’ Kai thought to himself as he continues to hide.


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Thanks everyone for reading :kneelbow: Hope it's not boring or bad.. :)
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 3] >>> 12/01/04 UPDATED
Post by: haruhi16 on January 04, 2012, 12:18:10 PM
LOL this MariKuu couple, please make them do something really sweet! Make them have their own date! Aww <3 I really love this funny couple, they always make my day complete <3

Chiyuu, better catch Kai now so you will have a date with your Tomochin! and please Tomochin leave Kai alone, he has Acchan already and Chiyuu is a good looking guy and sweet! If you don't want him, i'll have him!!!

Update soon~
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 3] >>> 12/01/04 UPDATED
Post by: Sydney W on January 04, 2012, 01:17:44 PM
I hope Acchan heard the sneezing. So that she locate the whereabouts sound from and caught Kai. Thanks for update.
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 3] >>> 12/01/04 UPDATED
Post by: Sok on January 04, 2012, 04:13:36 PM
Wow. Yuki's sudden change.  :on GJ:
Sae's and Sayaka's bet.  :on gay:
Tomo and Chiyuu, I hope Chiyuu catches Kai so he can go on a date with Tomochin.  :mon thumb:
Thanks you for the update.
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 3] >>> 12/01/04 UPDATED
Post by: Popsicle on January 04, 2012, 04:29:20 PM
The way sayaka nd sae play basketball is HECK original ~  :thumbsup
Chiyuu is so desperate!!!  :shocked

This is as good as usaul update soon! :yep:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 3] >>> 12/01/04 UPDATED
Post by: Haruko on January 05, 2012, 05:15:21 AM
jaajaj funny.. everybody have a bet...

but acchan.. you must find kai..
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 3] >>> 12/01/04 UPDATED
Post by: ichikawa on January 05, 2012, 04:54:55 PM
LoL Poor Kuu being seized by T-rex  :lol:
Please let Acchan found Kai  :tama-laff: please~ please~
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 3] >>> 12/01/04 UPDATED
Post by: cmze on January 05, 2012, 10:19:43 PM
 :rofl:

this was so funny!  :cathappy:

you gave me another Mayuki moment..Thanks!  :wub:

Kuu is so funny and cute with the cake things!

Saeyaka  :deco:

i wnat to win Chiyuu..and see how would be that date but i also want to Acchan so complicated!  :banghead:

funny the last part that kai sneezes and the part of the stadistics!

this is fic is amazing! XD

please update soon!  :D

Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 8 Part 3] >>> 12/01/04 UPDATED
Post by: kahem on January 05, 2012, 10:52:42 PM
Wow the Mayuki couple!!! So hot!!!
The Saeyaka little game is great too ^^
Chiyuu I'm with you!!! Go catch Kai!! Even if I want Chiyuu to lose and see how Tomochin will feel without Chiyuu lol
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 1]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 06, 2012, 12:48:47 PM
Thanks everyone for the Comments :D and the Thanks~~ I really appreciate it XD
Here's the update!!! Please enjoy it!!! Although the winner is not yet announced but will surely be in next part I promise :peace:


Comments:
@haruhi16 Haha.. Thanks for the comment :) I'll try ;)
@Sydney W Thanks for the comment XD Acchan heard it but not able to find Kai :grin:
@Sok We'll see more about that in the next part :D
@Popsicle I'm glad that you like it~ I feel so flattered :) I'll try to update soon~
@Haruko Hm... Thanks for the update~ But about who'll catch Kai have to wait for the next part :D
@ichikawa Thanks for the comment :) Hehe.. About who'll catch Kai ;) Still a secret~~
@cmze Really happy to hear that :D Here's the update~~ I'll try to update soon for the next part! I'll also be waiting for yours :P
@kahem Thanks for the comment :grin: Hope you would like this update :)

Thanks: Divine Vengeance, RenaChii, haru9210, blughise, Megumi, ichikawa, Shiro, cmze, kahem



Chapter 9


Part 1
 
'Hm.. Did I hear someone sneeze just now??' Acchan asks herself as she decided to check out the old storage room.
Clack, clack.. 'Hm... it's locked.. but I swear I heard something just now... Was it just my imagination??' Acchan asks herself as she leaves.
 
'Phew.. I thought I was found out but I guess I'm lucky since the person has left' thought Kai as he continue to hide.
'Hm... I'm starting to feel tired hiding around in here... Maybe I should check the others out'
'Wait.. now that I think about it.. why do I have to run around like this?? It's not like I'll die if I get caught! How can I not thought of this! Just get caught and get this over!!'
Kai then with determination to be caught has decided to leave the storage room. BUT!! When he's about to open the door another announcement was made by the principal, Aki-P.
 
Ahem! To spice up the event,
I decided to add a new rule.
Just in case Mr. Takahashi thinks of giving up and get caught…
I decided to let him listen to one of the order of the winner!!!
Takahashi, you have to right to refuse.
So if you don’t want to then you’ll have to not get caught until the game is over…
Hohoho…
That’s it! Please enjoy the event!!!

'......'
'On a second thought.. I'll stay here a little longer'
thought Kai as he retreat back to his original position.
'sigh* Why does it feel like the principal can hear my inner thoughts??'

Ten no Koe: Isn't it just because you're easy to read??

"Hey! I'm not that easy to read! I'm not simple-minded!!" shouted Kai
Ten no Koe: ... I didn't say the last part, you said it yourself..
"... Just don't say that I'm easy to read!" Kai said pouting

"Hey, I think I heard him" says a voice outside
"Yea, I heard it too just now around here saying that he's a simple-minded person!" says another voice
plop* "I'm not a simple-minded person!!" Kai shouted but then the next moment he immediately regrets his stupid action..
'Failed… I shouldn't have shouted!! It's suicidal!!!'

"You think he's in the old storage room??" asks a voice
"But it's locked in there. Without the keys nobody can go inside" says another voice
"You're right but why not give it a try??"
"Hm.. I guess trying wouldn't hurt"

'Thank God I didn't went out yet...' Kai thought but he forget one important thing.. which is he unlock the door while trying to go out and forgot to lock it back!!
So of course now the door isn't lock anymore which means.... Everyone will be able to get access to the storage...

“Eh! It’s actually not locked”
“You’re right!”
“Let’s check”

‘Eh?? OMG! Another failure of me… I can’t believe I just shouted and forgot to lock the door!!’ Kai though facepalming himself.

Kai was hiding behind the boxes in the storage room and he also covers himself with a big, dirty cloth he found. He breathes slowly and softly so that he wouldn’t be noticed. He saw the two people outside looking around the storage…

“That’s strange.. I thought we heard Takahashi shouting just now”
“Yea… But it looks like he’s not around..”
“Let’s try to look at those piles of boxes”
Then they slowly move to where Kai is.

‘OMG, OMG! Please don’t let them find me…’ Kai thought praying to the God.

Kick* “I think I kick on something..” says a voice in the storage.
“Is it Takahashi?? Oi! Takahashi is that you??” asks a voice.

‘Damn it! What should I do?? Think! Think! Takahashi! …. Ah!’ Kai thought of something he learned before from Jun and Mayu… Animals’ monomane (mimic animals’ sounds)

‘Okay.. You can do this Takahashi Kai..’ Kai reassure himself and takes a deep but soft breathe before he lets out… “Gao!”

“Eh?? What’s that sound??” asks a voice in panic
“A tiger?? A lion?? OMG!! Those wild animals from the news!!!” shouted another one totally in panic.
“Let’s get out of here before it eats us!!!”
“Better tell the teacher about this!”
Then with that they left the storage screaming for help…

Kai then sat up from his hiding place and look at the door that has swung open…
‘Do… do I really sound like a wild animal?? I was just trying to pretend to be a friendly cat… Oh.. wait.. Cats are supposed to Meow not Gao…. Sigh* I failed again.. But oh well at least I’m safe for now.. Better leave before they come back with the teachers or maybe some animal catchers too.. Don’t want to be locked up in a zoo’ Kai thought as he dash out of the storage room.

But luck wasn’t on his side… The moment he went out a student spotted him and shouted “Ah! I found Takahashi!! Senpai! He’s here!!!”

Then a lot of people start coming after him…
‘Why am I so unlucky????’ Kai asks himself as he runs from the crowd chasing him.
“Wait! Stop there! Takahashi!!” crowds were screaming after him…

Kai then speed up and decided to lose them in the next turn but when he turns what awaits him is…
“Acchan!!” Kai shouted shocked..
“Ah! Found you!” Acchan says and tries to grab Kai but Kai was faster..
Kai was able to dodge Acchan and run away but Acchan is really persistent...
No matter where Kai run Acchan will always be a few seconds behind.. it’s only a matter of time before Kai is caught by Acchan.

“OMG! Acchan I thought you said you were never a sporty person!” Kai shouts while running.
“I never was but there are times when I have to be” says Acchan smirking while running after Kai.

While running Kai remembers how banana can make a people slip like how he slips last time…

‘Okay so to make this plan work I need a banana peel… But where can I get one??... Ah! That place might have one!’ with a plan Kai dash as fast as he can towards a particular Classroom and found what he was looking for!

There is a banana on a table and there is a board near the banana which says…

Akimoto Sayaka’s Banana of the Day
Don’t dare to take it or eat it if…
You still want to live!!!

‘BINGO! I thought so! Sayaka would have the banana I need right now!’
Kai then quickly grab the banana and eat it while running away from Acchan. ‘Sorry Sayaka.. I’ll buy you a bunch later on when I escaped’ thought Kai

After Kai finished eating it, he looks at a timing and he throws the banana peel on Acchan’s way which cause her to slip and fall on her butt.. hard…

“Ouch! That hurts!! Kai!! I'll make you regret it!!” shouted Acchan while rubbing her butt, but Kai was no longer to be seen anywhere…

‘Sorry Acchan… But that’s the only way to run away from you…’

After that Kai was chased by many students which include Tomochin and Chiyuu but Kai was able to escape…

2 Hours Later…

‘Ah!!! 1 more hour before school ends!!! I’m so hungry now! I haven’t even eaten lunch yet!’ Kai complains while running aimlessly.

Suddenly! A smell captures Kai… It smells delicious… it.. it’s.. KATSUDON!!! Kai didn’t notice but he’s running towards the direction where the smell of Katsudon is coming from.

TADA! He ends up in the cafeteria where he saw a delicious looking Katsudon on a table.

Kai swallow his saliva hard and is planning to eat it since he doesn’t see the owner anywhere…

Kai then sat down and clap his hands together and said “Itadakimasu~~”

‘Ah! I found him! Hehe.. I’ll catch him..’

‘Hey! Who’s eating my Katsudon when I went to wash my hands!!! Eh.. Wait.. Isn’t that Kai??!!!!’


Kai was enjoying the Katsudon happily.. BUT THEN!!! Clack!! Kai’s hand was captured with a handcuff!!!

Kai was panicking as he turns and looks at who caught him…

“You…”

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Thanks everyone for reading this :kneelbow: I hope I didn't disappoint you guys :oops:
I'll try to update soon! XD Thanks for the Comments and Thanks again!!!
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 1] >>> 12/01/06 UPDATED
Post by: Sok on January 06, 2012, 01:19:49 PM
haha. Kai pretending to be a cat and failing. :hiakhiakhiak:
I wonder what Sayaka will do to him when she finds out he ate her banana.  :dunno:
Who caught him? I wanna know. Please update as soon as you can. Thank you.
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 1] >>> 12/01/06 UPDATED
Post by: Sydney W on January 06, 2012, 01:59:28 PM
Could it be Mariko or Kuu who handcuff Kai ?? Please update next..
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 1] >>> 12/01/06 UPDATED
Post by: kazuski on January 06, 2012, 02:28:07 PM
Ahhhhhhhhh~

i really want it to be Acchan, but the future seem dark

or Tomochin or Chiyuu, since their bet still there

and if i'm not wrong then in the end there was two person find out Kai

anyway, update soon  :cow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 1] >>> 12/01/06 UPDATED
Post by: cmze on January 06, 2012, 02:50:13 PM
This was so funny with the banana thing and animal noises! :rofl:

who cought him?  :smhid

you're so bad Yagami!  :cry: :grin:

better be Accchan!  :thumbsup

please update soon!  :bow:

i really want to knkw who cought him! :catglare:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 1] >>> 12/01/06 UPDATED
Post by: Popsicle on January 06, 2012, 06:24:34 PM
Yes I also understand food attracts people! :lol:

ACCHAN just nearlyy...  :w00t:
Stuipid banana peel !! :banghead:
Someone knows Kai well to attract him with katsudon. Hmm who isit ~  XD

Update asap !  XD
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 1] >>> 12/01/06 UPDATED
Post by: kahem on January 06, 2012, 11:41:23 PM
Eh??? Who is 'you'????
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 1] >>> 12/01/06 UPDATED
Post by: Haruko on January 07, 2012, 05:55:10 AM
mmmmvits not sound like acchan.. im curious now
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 1] >>> 12/01/06 UPDATED
Post by: Megumi on January 07, 2012, 08:07:50 PM
LoL what's this?! This update was so much fun that I grinned the whole time...
my parents were watching me with WHAT THE?! look I've must look weird to them  XD

Sayakas banana pfft!
And about Kai trying to imitate the sound of a cat was pure win "Gao!"  ROLF!  :rofl:

Thank you for update wondering who "You" is

Arígatou!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 1] >>> 12/01/06 UPDATED
Post by: okiedokie on January 26, 2012, 02:25:39 PM
OMG!!! Au...u're totally blow up my mind ! "gao" & "meow"? Gukhahaa ,poor lion Kai try to become "friendly cat"?! Kahkakak,cant w8 for new update! Geekhahahaah! Sr my ! Im going to crazy a bit ! Fufuff..!
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 31, 2012, 05:52:37 PM
Hi everyone~ :) Sorry for not updating for so long... :nervous I was just becoming a bit... arm.. you know.. L*zy :sweatdrop:
Sorry for the wait... :D Hope this part doesn't disappoint you guys..
Thanks for the comments! Actually that made me type the whole thing today XD
Well.. Hope you enjoy this! :grin:


Chapter 9


Part 2

“You…”

“Yatta! I caught Kai!” shouted Chiyuu full of happiness.
“No! He’s mine! Leave it or you’re dead” says a voice.
“Acchan?!!” says Kai shocked
“What?! I caught him!” complains Chiyuu
“I spot him first” argues Acchan
“But I caught him first and didn’t you see that it’s my handcuff that’s on him??”
“sigh* Here! There! Done! And now he’s mine!” says Acchan as she took Chiyuu’s handcuff that cuffs Kai and gave Chiyuu her handcuff.
“What?! You just gave me yours and took mine!!” complains Chiyuu
“Hm? I don’t know what you’re talking about” replies Acchan while playing innocent
“That’s not fair!”

So the argument continues for a few more minutes~~~~

“Please Acchan~” Chiyuu asks Acchan with his best puppy eyes as he have gave up on arguing with her.
“No” replies Acchan
“Please~”
“No!”
“Erm.. Excuse me.. I don’t mind you guys taking your time but… Grr* (sound of Kai’s stomach) I’m hungry.. Can I eat the Katsudon??” asks Kai
Chiyuu and Acchan just rolled their eyes and continue which Kai took it as a okay sign to eat.
“Please Acchan~ If I caught Kai I can go on a date with Tomochin. You know how much I like her right?? So pretty please~” begs Chiyuu showing his puppy eyes.
“???” Acchan looks at him confused
“Well… blah blah” Chiyuu explains about the bet he has with Tomochin
“Why should I…” Acchan didn’t get to finish her sentence as Chiyuu cuts in.
“Besides if I get to be together with Tomochin then she won’t be trying to get Kai’s attention and Kai will be all yours!” whispers Chiyuu to prevent Kai from hearing it.
“Hm… You got a point! But I got one condition” whispers Acchan
“What?”
“You got to give me the right the winner get which is to be able to give Kai an order”
“Oh, that? No problem” smiles Chiyuu as he and Acchan gives each other a DEAL! Handshake and smiles evilly at Kai who chokes on his Katsudon.

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Ding Dong Dang Ding~~
Announcement~!
Mr. Takahashi was caught and brought to the principal’s office a few minutes ago.
With this the events has come to an end, Thank you for participating and I hope you guys did have fun.
Well… Let’s announce the winner now!
The winner… is…..!!!


Everyone feels disappointed that Kai was caught and that the event has now ended but was still in high tension and curious to know who caught Kai.

The winner is..!!!!

Is???!!! <<< Crowd’s thoughts

Me!!! Says Principal Akimoto causing everyone to fall to the floor…
Bwahahaha! I’m just joking~
Well again… ahem ahem!
The winner is!!!!

Is??!!! <<< Crowd’s tension up high again

Ms. Yamada, the head chef of the cafeteria!!

Once again, Principal Akimoto has never failed to make everyone fall on the floor with their face facing the ground… with three black lines on their head..

“Would you stop this stupid joke of yours already??!!” shouted the students in frustration.

Hahaha~ You got a problem?
I’m the principal and I do what I want~ ;P
Okay, okay. Enough jokes.
The winner is Mr. Kasai Chiyuu of the Host Club!!
Congratulations!
40, 000 AKB Points for the Host Club
20, 000 AKB Points for Mr. Kasai!
And the special award!!!
Mr. Takahashi as your slave for a day!!!
Ahem! I mean you get to order Mr. Takahashi for a day,
but be reasonable~~ ^_^
Well then, everyone time to go home~!
Bye! Bye!
And that’s the announcement from the Principal everyone loves~

“……….” everyone was speechless for a few seconds then they start to gather back to their own respective classroom to get their bags and go home.

Class 2-A
Arg! That Chiyuu caught Kai! <<< Tomochin’s thought

Suddenly the door slams open revealing a very happy Chiyuu.
“Tomo~ Remember our deal~ 10:00 a.m. at AKB Amusement Park this Saturday at the west gate” says Chiyuu happily as he skipped back to his classroom.
“sigh*”
“What does he mean by deal??” asks a curious Yuko
“Well… blah blah” Tomo explaining to Yuko
“Ah~ Well have fun on Saturday” says Yuko smiling which Tomochin replies rolling her eyes.
Meanwhile, hum~ hum~ hum~ Acchan is humming while keeping her textbooks into her bag.
Tomo and Yuko stop talking and look at Acchan who seems to be in a VERY GOOD mood which they have NEVER seen before and it seems like they can even see sparkling flowers all over her as a background…
“Acchan??” asks Yuko
“Hrm~~??” asks Acchan smiling
“Anything good happened??” asks Tomo
“Nope~ Nothing~ Why~~??” replies Acchan
Yuko and Tomo look at each other with she’s-not-telling-the-truth-face.

If you wonder why Acchan is in such a good mood… we have to go a few minutes back to the time when Chiyuu and Acchan has made a deal with each other..

A Few Minutes Ago…
After making a pact with one another, now they are having a meeting while Kai is still eating his 2nd bowl of Katsudon.

“So ask Tomo out to the AKB Amusement Park at 10:00 a.m. on Saturday and be sure to meet at the west entrance.” says Acchan
“Un! Un!” replies Chiyuu as he is taking down notes.
“Tomo loves the rides there and….” Acchan kept explaining as Chiyuu is taking notes.
“Ah! Be sure to ride the Ferris Wheel there before you go home because it seems like the scenery you see from there is really beautiful during the evening. And there is a legend that says that if you confess your love there and is accepted then the couple will be together forever” says Acchan
“Wow! Really?!! Okay I will do my best!!” says Chiyuu excitedly
“I’ll also go there with Kai”
“Eh?! Why?!”
“What do you mean why?? I haven’t been there for so long and I also want to go on a date with Kai there”
“Oh.. But what if Tomo saw you guys??”
“We can just say that it’s a coincidence besides I’ll meet with Kai from the east entrance and I’ll also disguise myself and Kai, so the chances that we will bump into each other will be very low”
“Oh, okay”
“Besides you can always call me when you got into problem” says Acchan
“Really?! Thanks! You’re such a great friend” says Chiyuu gratefully
Then suddenly Acchan reaches out her right hand to Chiyuu who look at her confused.
“???”
Acchan rolled her eyes and say “Information Fee, Information Fee! You think I’ll just tell you information about Tomochin for free??” (Tomo: Acchan.. I can’t believe you just sold me out!!!)
“Oh! How much??” asks Chiyuu
“Hm… The ticket is 480 for a person so times 2 it’s 800? No.. urm..”
“960…” replies Chiyuu
“Ah, yea! 960! And for lunch.. I eat a lot so.. let’s see I want to eat the seafood spaghetti, pizza, fried rice, cheese cake, chocolate cake, ……”
“……” OMG! Acchan sure does eat a lot! Whoever will be her boyfriend/husband will have a hard time….
Suddenly Kai sneezes then continues to eat his 3rd bowl of Katsudon.
“Acchan… are you planning to make me pay for your date with Kai??!”
“Yea, why not??” asks Acchan innocently
Chiyuu facepalm himself I should’ve know it! Sigh* My wallet will be empty for this month… sob*
“Arg! Just give me 10,000 yen” Acchan says in frustration as she tries to calculate the amount of money but was confused halfway and gave up…
“Eh?!! That much??!!”
“What?! 960 ticket fees and the rest FOOD MONEY! You’re not even willing to buy me a lunch?!” asks Acchan with black aura
“No, no! I’m more than willing to! Here!” says Chiyuu afraid and handed Acchan 10,000 yen.
Who in the world will spend 9,040 yen for food?!! For god sake!! <<< Chiyuu’s thought
Acchan then look at Chiyuu and raise an eyebrow.
“Hahaha… nothing..” Why does she look like she knows what I’m thinking about… gulp* Better be careful around Acchan…

Then Chiyuu bring Kai to the principal office to claim his rewards~ While Acchan waits for them outside the room.

“Kai, I’ll give you an order now” says Chiyuu
“Eh?! That fast?!” asks Kai surprised
Chiyuu ignored Kai and continues “My order for you is to follow Acchan’s order for one day”
“Eh?!!!” Kai shouted
“Don’t ask why and no objections. Case closed” says Chiyuu
Acchan then smiles and says “Kai, go on a date with me at AKB Amusement Park this Saturday at 10:00 a.m. and don’t you dare be late” there is dark aura coming out from Acchan as she says the last few words.
“Gulp* Okay…”

Now that you know the reason why Acchan is in such a good let’s go back to the present now.

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After saying farewell to their friends and teachers, every student all went back to their respective home.

Acchan has just finished taking a bath and is really sleepy from running around looking for Kai the whole day. She’s not really a typical sporty person so she’s really, really tired now as she fall on her bed and close her eyes ready to go to the dream world~~~

But then!!! A sudden ring on Acchan’s phone can be heard but Acchan decided to ignore it.

1 hour later…
Ring! Ring!
The phone is still ringing…
Acchan is really pissed now and went to see 48+ missed call and all from the same person… Kasai Chiyuu…
Acchan glares at the name one last time before answering the phone.

“Moshi, moshi” answers Acchan annoyed.
“Moshi, moshi!! Acchan! You finally picked up your phone!! I was calling you for god know how many times!!”
“Just make it short and to the point! I’m really sleepy right now!”
“Owh… I was just really nervous about my date with Tomochin.. I can’t decide on what to wear so I want to ask for your advice.. hehe..” answers Chiyuu shyly

Chiyuu’s answer has made several nerves plopping on Acchan’s head…
“KASAI CHIYUUUUU!!!! YOU CALLED ME IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT FOR THIS RUBBISH?!!!” shouted Acchan
“What?!! It is not rubbish!! You see Tomochin is very fashionable so I want to be able to stand with confidence next to her and…” Chiyuu defends himself but was cut by Acchan.
“MR. IN LOVE!! YOUR DATE IS NOT TOMORROW!! LET ME REPEAT! IT IS NOT TOMORROW!! IT IS STILL 3-4 DAYS FROM NOW!!!”
“I know but.. It is better to prepare a few days earlier isn’t it?? And…” Chiyuu wasn’t able to finish his sentence since Acchan has already hanged up and turned off her phone…
Fine! I thought you say you’ll help me! Hmph! I’ll do it myself! complains Chiyuu as he continues to pick his clothes for his date with Tomochin….

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Thanks again for reading this :kneelbow: I'm sorry again for the late update.. :oops:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
Post by: Sydney W on January 31, 2012, 06:10:12 PM
It must be hilarious and interesting to see Kai and Acchan on a date. Same goes to TomoTomo.
Please update the next very soon. Tq
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
Post by: okiedokie on January 31, 2012, 07:31:35 PM
 XD XD XD it's funny !  Poor Chiyuu and Kai kakaka Acchan's slave ?! ... i love this kind :))
 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
Post by: Popsicle on January 31, 2012, 08:03:23 PM
Great !
You updated !~
I was waiting for this..  :lol:

Omg!! Chiyuu you don't call someone tht many times in the morning to ask what to wear for a date thats few days away..  :lol:
I want itano and chiyuu together ! :angry:

Update soon i really wanna read their dates . XD
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
Post by: Haruko on February 01, 2012, 04:57:52 AM
mmok let me see if im understand. now kai is atsuko`s slave right? but their dates is in for days... so the next day acchan can ask about everything she wants to kai because the rules says that is 24 hours.. right? when this deal finish?
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
Post by: kahem on February 01, 2012, 06:18:51 PM
Hahahah poor Chiyuu!!!!
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
Post by: msst28 on February 02, 2012, 01:16:31 AM
poor chiyu need to spent his money for aachan/kai date

but chiyu so cute...
prepare early for his date

 
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
Post by: Sok on February 03, 2012, 04:42:31 AM
YAY~ Thanks for the update.
Haha, the principal and his 'winners.'
Well at least Chiyuu got his date with Tomochin. In return Acchan gets a date with Kai.
Poor Chiyuu had to give Acchan money for her date.
Can't wait for your next update.
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
Post by: Megumi on February 04, 2012, 11:16:16 AM
Even as a guy Chiyuu~  personality is so girly hahahah but I like it!
Acchan and math  :rofl:

Thank you for your update!
Arígatou!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
Post by: cmze on March 30, 2012, 08:05:37 AM
I just finished with Anzai's fic...which is great! :D

i have the little feeling that "which" is bad written too..man my english is going down!  :catglare:

now i'm going to read your Fic ... :twisted:

I love it so much..is so funny!

i'll put another message when i'm doneeeeee! Yep

Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
Post by: cmze on March 30, 2012, 08:21:29 AM
You LAZY!

you haven't update not even 2 chapters..HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?  :banghead:

this is my only free day and you got nothing!  :shocked

you have to update someday you know?  :P

~~~~~Now i'm feeling sadder!~~~~~~~~~~~

Thanks to u Yagami....

i'm such a dramatic person Am i?  XD

i'm kidding.. you should updateeeeee :lol:

And yes i want to know abouts TomoTomo's Date. and AtsuMina's too..

and a little Mayuki won't be bad...

so you better start working!  :grin:

and please your readers!  :peace:

Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
Post by: Yagami.Rai on March 30, 2012, 09:24:45 AM
Haha.. :lol:
Sorry for being so lazy.. :P
I'll try to Update Soon~ (don't know when yet though XD)
Thanks for reading~!!! >.<
BTW, you got the link for Synchro Tokimeki yet?? :?
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on March 30, 2012, 12:41:48 PM
i just read it tday and i coudnt stop laughin poor kuu/miichan being Marikos helper and Acchan so cunnung who would have thought
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 10 Part 1] >>> 12/04/03 UPDATED
Post by: Yagami.Rai on April 03, 2012, 01:14:46 PM
Sorry for not updating so long... Because I didn't have any inspiration.. sigh*
Sorry again for this short update... I'll try to make longer one next time but if I can't then it might be a short update again..
Really gomen nasai!! :kneelbow: And Thanks for the Comments!!! :)


Chapter 10


Part 1

Since Chiyuu is so excited about the date I, the author, will fast forward the days for him.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Fast Forward>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

The Day of Date!

AKB Amusement Park, one of the best dating sites in Japan. No matter if it’s spring, summer, autumn or winter, it is always one of the best choices for couples and family to spend time together. From slow rides such as Ferris wheel to crazy rides such as Giant Drop, Super Rollercoaster and other kinds such as Haunted House and Animal Farms, there is a lot of genre in AKB Amusement Park. There is also wide range of restaurants available, no matter Italian, French, Japan, Chinese, American, etc. it’s all available here at AKB Amusement Park. It is opened at 8:00 a.m. and closes at 20:00 p.m. At night there’s also parade going on and also fireworks during weekends!

You can see families and couples going in and out the amusement park happily but there seem to be a person who seems rather nervous and uncomfortable and kept walking back and forth in front of the entrance. This action has caused many couples to stop and observe the person but it seems like that person has not realize the line of sight that was on him.

“Is my clothes okay?? Will Tomo like it?? What will we do??”

Yes, the person walking back and forth is Kasai Chiyuu. He is too excited about today’s date that’s why he cannot sleep at all for the past few days and came 3 hours early which is 7:00 a.m. … The amusement park is not yet even opened yet!!!

Right now… it’s…

9:15 a.m.

“45 more minutes before Tomo come.. Ah!! I’m so nervous!!!!!” Chiyuu shouts
“What is that kid doing??” << Man A
“Is he alright??” << Man B
“I’ve see him standing there for a long time even before we came to work” << Staff
“Should we call a police??” << Woman A
“Let’s tell the staff” << Woman B

Few Minutes Later…

“Excuse me sir, but you’re causing discomfort to other customers. If you’re not going to go in would you please leave??” a guard came and asks
“Ah! Sorry, but I’m waiting for a friend. She’ll be here in around 30 more minutes. I’m sorry for causing discomfort, but please don’t tell me to go home!! I’ve waited for this day for so long! PLEASE!!!” Chiyuu starts crying and begging the guard while kneeling down making the guard like the villain here.

“What’s with that guard??” << Woman A
“He made that poor boy cry!!” << Woman B
“What kind of attitude is that??” << Woman C

“Er… Sir please stands up!! You don’t have to go home! Please just stand up!” The guard begs Chiyuu while having some complex feelings inside him.
I didn’t even do anything yet!!! << Guard’s inner feeling

“Really?? Chiyuu doesn’t have to go home??”
“Yes! Yes!” says the guard while nodding
“So, Chiyuu can wait for Chiyuu’s friend here??”
“Yes! Just please don’t cause trouble for other customers.”
“Okay~”

And that was the Chiyuu’s AKB Amusement Park incident~~

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50 minutes later…

“Hm… Tomochin is late for 20 minutes already… Well, she might take a lot of time because she has to makeup… But what if she got involved in an accident??!!”

The more the time passes, the more Chiyuu’s imaginations go wild…

Luckily just before Chiyuu’s imaginations have gone completely out of control you can see the person he’s waiting for slowly advancing towards him.

“To.. Tomochin!!!” Chiyuu runs excitedly towards Tomochin.
“Che.. You’re so noisy”
“Ah.. sorry..”
“sigh* Why do you apologize??”
“Eh.. sorry..”
“Dakara! Why do you have to apologize?! Stop saying sorry, it’s annoying”
“Sor.. Okay..”
“sigh* Let’s go in”
“Ah! Wait for me Tomochin!”

……….On the Other Hand…….
9:45 a.m. In Front of AKB Amusement Park
“Hm… Guess I came a bit early” says Kai as Acchan hasn’t arrived yet.

Today, Kai wear a gray sleeveless t-shirt while black vest, showing his muscular arms. With dark blue jeans and nike shoes, making the girls that walk past stop and turn back and look at him again but Kai didn’t notice at all. Some girls even tried to ask him to go in the amusement park together but of course Kai rejected saying that he’s waiting for a friend leaving the girls in disappointment.

10:15 a.m.
“Acchan so slow…” Kai says as he looks at his watch

“Kai!!!” a girl says while running clumsily towards Kai
“Acchan?! Woah! Slow down!” Kai says as he caught Acchan who was going to fall.
“Ah!.. Sorry.. and Thank you..” Acchan says blushing
“Un.. it’s okay..” Kai says while scratching his head.
“Sorry for being late…” Acchan says while looking on the floor
“It’s okay besides being late is the privilege of a woman” Kai says while winking causing Acchan to blush even more.
“Mou~ That’s how you always say to girls you dated before right?” Acchan complains while punching Kai softly on the arm.
Kai caught Acchan’s hand and says “I only say it to you”
“…” Acchan’s face is as red as an apple, she was embarrassed so she quickly turn around and says “Le.. Let’s go in now..”
“Hai~” Kai replies smiling, thinking how cute Acchan is blushing~
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 10 Part 1] >>> 12/04/03 UPDATED
Post by: Nakamii on April 03, 2012, 03:11:49 PM
Chiyuu was really Hillarious here... :>
As For KaiAcchan, They're Really Romantic! Acchan's Blushing is CUTE! <3
And, Indeed.. This is Kinda Short For me... But, It's okay anyway.. (As long as there are some KaiAcchan Scenes, I don't mind).
But, It doesn't mean that I don't care about other Pairing.. I still read the full story... Maybe, It will make me familiar with other pairing.. (So that, I don't really have to focus on AtsuMina so much).. And, Maybe The Story (of other pairing) will make my day(?) Who knows? I might love them more than AtsuMina...
Btw,I'll wait for your Upcoming Update.. Just Take your Time! :DDD
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 10 Part 1] >>> 12/04/03 UPDATED
Post by: iloveakb48 on April 03, 2012, 03:43:47 PM
Ahhh!!! my imagination is going wild!!!!  :panic:
please update soon!! :bow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 10 Part 1] >>> 12/04/03 UPDATED
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on April 03, 2012, 04:06:29 PM
tht stupid guard made Chiyuu cry i will kill tht guard lolz
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 10 Part 1] >>> 12/04/03 UPDATED
Post by: Sydney W on April 03, 2012, 05:48:24 PM
Thanks for the update. I want more than this.
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Post by: Haruko on April 03, 2012, 08:19:52 PM
aww yes it short but better short that nothing -__-, awww kai your are a player.. :D cute words... and everybody want to date you :D

acchan show that girls that kai belongs you
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 10 Part 1] >>> 12/04/03 UPDATED
Post by: okiedokie on April 04, 2012, 04:38:27 PM
Hee, thank au -san for new up . Well it's a bit short but still better than nothing ..and i'd love Kai's sweet talk   > v <
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Post by: kahem on April 04, 2012, 05:04:00 PM
I hope everything will be alright for Chiyuu ^^
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Post by: saeyukilover on April 04, 2012, 05:56:53 PM
Tomochin how could you let chiyuu w8t for too long :thumbdown:

 :smhid

At least are mens knows to w8t for there lady!!!! :) fighting!!  :fap
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> たかみなお誕生日おめでとう!!!
Post by: Yagami.Rai on April 07, 2012, 08:22:07 PM
高橋みなみ (たかみな) 
お誕生日おめでとう!!!

Takamina Happy 21st Birthday~~

Our Chibi Captain has welcome her first birthday after 20~ ^_^
It is also the first birthday I've congratulate you since I only become AKB fan last year around October
But this year, next year, the next next year, ... I'll always be excited about April 8 because it's your birthday~!!!
Takamina, my no. 1 Oshi, I wish you a good year!


Thinking back...
I remember how I became your fan.
I love how cute you react when other members tease you.
I love your smile, it always save my day.
I love your seriousness and your gentleness, it makes me work harder each day.
It's you who makes my life not as boring as before, make me got something I'm interested in! >.<
I was never really interested in idols or stars until I know you.

Once again, Happy Birthday Takamina~ :)

たかみなに追て行きます~
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 10 Part 2] >>> 12/05/03 UPDATED!
Post by: Yagami.Rai on May 03, 2012, 02:18:04 PM
Chapter 10

Part 2

Acchan decides that they will have a ride on Space Mountain but when they reach the attraction the number of people lining up is really long… Seeing how disappointed Acchan is Kai told her to take a seat at the “Relax Cafe” that was just few feet away and that when it’s nearly their turn he will call her. Acchan accepted the offer happily and give a peck on Kai’s cheek as she skip her way to the Relax Cafe, leaving poor Kai petrified on the spot…

30 minutes passed…

The clock now strikes 11 and the sun starts to heat up the temperature. More than half of the people choose to give up because of the heat and they didn’t want to get a heat stroke. But for Kai, this kind of temperature is still handable since he is trained since he was young to be able to adapt to any kind of environment.

Lucky~ Many people left~ Instead of waiting for 2 more hours I think 30 more minutes and it will be my turn~ ^^ is what Kai was thinking as he sees people leaving the line one by one with a big smile on his face causing many girls to faint but not because of the weather but because of his killer smile!!!

30 minutes have passed again…
Few minutes ago Kai has called Acchan telling her that it’s almost their turn, so now Acchan is smiling while waiting for their turn. But since Kai has been under the sun for 1 hour he is sweating quite a lot, Acchan notices it and took out her handkerchief and wipe Kai’s sweat gently causing Kai to blush and other people looking at them jealously…

“Th.. Thank you Acchan..”
“It’s me who should say thank you. See how sweaty you are because of that…”
“No, it’s okay! I can’t let a girl stand under this heat for an hour can’t I?” Kai says as he looks into Acchan’s eyes gently
“Kai..” Acchan replies as they continue to look at each other lovingly.
And slowly the gap between them is decreasing… They can now even feel each other’s breathe… Just a few centimeters more…

“Ahem! Excuse me sir but.. erm.. it’s your turn on the ride. If you’re not gonna ride.. there are still a lot of people behind…” says the staff without any expression on his face

After hearing the staff Acchan and Kai hurriedly widens the gap between them and blush furiously.

Few minutes later…
“Erm… Excuse me again but are you still going to ride?? If you’re just going to stand there like a stone there are people waiting behind…”

(Crowd)
Look at that couple!! Ah!! So jealous!!
I want a cute girlfriend like that~
I want a handsome boyfriend like that~
When are they going to snap out of it??


Kai snapped out of it first and replies “Huh? Oh! We’re riding”
Then Acchan also snaps out “Yes, we are riding!”
“Then please take your seats and tighten the seat belts…”

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After screaming out all their hearts from the rides they’ve tried out they decided to have lunch before continue to play.

Kimi Shika Restaurant
“Haa~~ I’m so hungry~” says Acchan as she sat down
“Yea~ But the rides were fun!” replies Kai smiling
“All the restaurants were so noisy and crowded but this is the only restaurant that was quiet. It seems like we are the only customer!”
“You’re right! I wonder why… The interior design is really good, it gives really good atmosphere… I wonder why we are the only customers around..”
“But at least we get to have our lunch peacefully isn’t it?”
“Yea, you’re totally right about it!”

5 minutes passed…
“Why didn’t any waiter hand us the menu??”
“I don’t know.. let’s call the waiter. Erm.. WAITER???”
“…………….” No response so Kai calls the waiter again.
“WAITER?!”

“Coming….”

A young woman came out from the staff room with two menus in her hand.
“Welcome. I am the only waitress and also the owner of the shop. My name is Yokoyama Yui and here’s your menus.” she says emotionlessly and handed the two menus to Acchan and Kai
“Ah.. Thank you.. And nice to meet you..” Accan and Kai both replies…

As Kai and Acchan opens the menu three black lines formed on their head…
“Why…. Is there only EGG on the menu??!! And it’s not a whole egg but only the yolk??!!! For dishes it’s boiled yolk and for drink/soup it’s raw yolk…” shouts Acchan and Kai with disbelief on their faces.
“sigh* I don’t understand why people keep asking the same questions again and again…” says Yui in a machine like way and without emotions.
“Before I answer you your question let me ask you if you know AKB48?”
“You mean the famous idol group produced by Akimoto Yasushi??” Acchan asks
“Yes and among them there is a unit called No3b which I really like and among all their singles I especially like ‘Kimi Shika’ and that’s the origin of the name of my restaurant.”
“What does it have to do with the menu??” asks Kai
“Let me finish. One time at the AX concert No3b made a joke about ‘Kimi Shika’ meaning Yolk Only although it actually meant Only You, I really love the joke and decides to open a restaurant that sells Yolk Only. And I guess this should answer your question” replies Yui still emotionless and robot like.
“Okay.. I see..” I see the reason why it is so quiet and not crowded in here… thought Kai…

“So.. Are you still going to eat or leave?”
“I think we will leave because I don’t think we’ll be full with just… yolks..” says Kai as he and Acchan leaves the restaurant.
“Please do come back again” says Yui as she went back in the staff room.

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Sorry for not posting after a long time because I kinda got a bit lazy....  :nervous
Thanks for all the comments! ^^
Next Chapter will be about............. didn't think about it yet~ :P
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> 12/05/03 NOT OS UPDATED!!!
Post by: Sydney W on May 03, 2012, 04:47:41 PM
A nice update from you. Thanks
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> 12/05/03 NOT OS UPDATED!!!
Post by: Popsicle on May 03, 2012, 08:41:23 PM
Yay after so long ! :panic:
You don't know how good this fic achually is~ XD
Aww kai x Aachaan so cutee.. :D

Please update soon i'll be waiting. 8)
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> 12/05/03 NOT OS UPDATED!!!
Post by: Haruko on May 04, 2012, 05:15:31 AM
awww takaboy so gentle.. atsuka take care of your man because many girls gonna try to steal him ...

jajaj yui. you are so funny .. maybe you need mention your famous phrase "honmanya?" jaj
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> 12/05/03 NOT OS UPDATED!!!
Post by: kahem on May 05, 2012, 08:12:10 PM
Hahahah! Yui's antic is so funny!
The staff guy is such a mood killer lol
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> 12/05/03 NOT OS UPDATED!!!
Post by: chichay12 on May 30, 2012, 07:36:35 PM
pls update this :cry: :cry:
I cant wait to ur nxt update!!pls update soon!! :banghead:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> 12/06/08 Not OS "le Très Haut"
Post by: Yagami.Rai on June 08, 2012, 12:42:44 PM
Thanks for liking this fic~ ^^
And sorry for not updating for so long..
There are 2 most important reason for it: 1. Lots of classes! Got home late everyday!! 2. Maid have to go home so I had to take care of the household chores too.... these 2 add up = a lot of stress = no energy and became lazy...
So it might not be as long as before... And I kinda starts to forget the story a bit... So the quality might drop too..
If this chapter wasn't good, then I'm sorry for disappointing you guys... :(
I'll try to make it good once I find inspirations!
Today the class finish early so I decided to update it! :)

Chapter 11

Part 1
After leaving Kimi Shika restaurant, they went in Starlex Family Restaurant. Kai ordered a Katsudon set while Acchan orders Hamburger set, 2 Hawaiian pizzas, 2 big bowl of salad and a steak.

Police Headquarter, 21th Floor, Takahashi Hiroshi’s Office
“Hello dear~ What brings you guys here today?” asks Hiroshi
“We’re bored since Kai went on a date today” replied Kuu
“Hoho~ Who is that lucky girl??” asks Takumi teasingly
“Maeda Atsuko” replies Riku while playing his PSP
“I’m sure she’s got to be a beauty! So did you guys has her picture so that I could see how beautiful she is?” asks Takumi
“Erm.. no we don’t..” replies Kuu
“sigh* Then I’ve got to hack in your school’s system to see her profile then…” says Takumi as he turn on his laptop.
“Hey, hey, hey! Now, what you’re doing is a crime!” says Hiroshi
“Don’t be such a bother! It’s not like I’m doing it for a bad purpose, I’m just curious who Kai’s girlfriend is!! Don’t tell me you’re not curious about it too~”
“Well… Fine…” says Hiroshi as he gives up stopping Takumi in hacking to the system.

Ring, Ring, Ring

“Hello, this is Chief Takahashi speaking”
“Chief! There is a man with strange voice saying that he wants to talk with you, if not he will set the bomb he hid explode!”
“Connect the line” says Hiroshi in a serious tone

After hearing Hiroshi’s serious tone, Kuu, Riku and Takumi all went silence as Hiroshi turn on the speaker so that they could hear it too.

“Hehehe~ Hello~ Mr. Takahashi~” says a man with a weird voice.
It seems that he has changed his voice with a voice changer…
“Who are you? Why do you want to talk with me? What is your objective?!” asks Hiroshi
“Hahaha~ Don’t ask stupid questions. Listen here, you don’t have the rights to ask me any question since I’m the one who has the upper hand! Simply I want to have a talk with you is to challenge the police who seems to be increasingly popular these past few years because of their 3 stars, Takahashi Minami, Kojima Haruna and Minegishi Kuu. This is my challenge to all police force! Don’t think that I’m alone.. I have formed my own organization which I call it ‘le Très Haut’ which you guys should know means the Almighty or God in French~ My or rather our objective is to crush this stupid police force and rule!!! Hahahaha!!!”

This guy is mad…

“So what is the challenge? Bring it on! I’m sure, we, the police force, will be able to arrest ALL OF YOU!”
“Hmph! You’ll be able to say that only now!”

“I’ve set a few time bombs inside AKB Amusement Park, it is connected. Once the main bomb exploded the other bombs will also explode, but if you are able to stop the main bomb then all bombs will not explode. I’m sure once exploded the power is able to at least blow the whole Amusement park to ashes, hahaha~”
“Since this is the first challenge I’ll give you guys a big service~ I’ll give you the location of the main bomb.”

Hiroshi’s eyebrow twitched a bit because he didn’t like how the criminal is looking down on the police.
“In the game area of the amusement park, there is a gun shooting boot. And one of the prizes is a Tiger Doll, inside the doll is the main bomb. That’s all I can tell~ C ya~ I’m expecting you to show me a great show~ Oh, btw the bomb will explode in 15 minutes~ I don’t think you’ll reach there from the Police Headquarter within that time~ Beep…

“Damn! He’s looking down on us!!” shouts Kuu pissed.
“But he’s right, we will at least need 30 minutes to reach the Amusement park!!”
“Arg! Damn it! We have to stop it at all cost!!”
“But how??!!”
“……..”

Riku broke the silence, “Kai is on a date at the AKB Amusement Park”
“……..”

“REALLY?!” “OH YEA! I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT IT!”
“Let’s call him now!!”

So they dial Kai’s number…

Starlex Family Restaurant
The food was just served and now Atsuko and Kai are digging on their food.

Suddenly Kai’s phone rings so he excuses himself and pick up the call.

“Hello?”
“Kai, it’s an emergency mission! Listen…..”

………………………………………………

“Okay, I understand now! I’ll go to look for the doll immediately!”
“We’re leaving it in your hands, Kai.”
“No problem, I’ll dial back later!”

Kai then told Acchan that he has to go to the bathroom and leaves the restaurant. He immediately rushes to the gaming area and found the gun shooting boot and was looking for the Tiger Doll. But no matter how many times he looks he doesn’t see it! So he asks the owner.

“Owh! The doll?? The couple awhile ago wins it, sorry young man you’re a bit late.”
“Eh?! Do you know how the couple look like and where did they went?!”
“Er… I’m getting a bit old nowadays.. but from what I’ve remember the girl was a real beauty! Ah~~ How I wish to have a girlfriend like that~~ Her wavy brown hair and that cute lips~~ Especially when she is concentrating in shooting the target as she lick her lips~ That canine too is cute~”
“STOP! Just tell me where they went!” says Kai a bit dizzy from the old man’s fan boying.
“Oh, I heard that they are hungry and decide to look for a restaurant to eat and they went that way” replies the old man while pointing to a direction.
“Thanks” says Kai as he rush towards that direction.

As he runs he saw a couple(?) walking and the girl have the wavy brown hair that the old man says and in her hand was… THE TIGER DOLL!!!
The moment he sees the doll he dashes towards the girl and stop her by holding her shoulder.

“Excuse me but could you give me the doll??” asks Kai but he was agape when the girl turns over because….

==================================
Hopefully I can finish typing Part 2 within today so I can post it!
If not then tomorrow or ..... someday... :nervous
Thanks for reading!!
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> 12/06/08 NOT OS "le Très Haut"
Post by: Nakamii on June 08, 2012, 01:03:05 PM
This is just look alike as Mendol. But, I like it. Hm, Is that Tomo~mi? The girl with wavy brown hair? Woah~ A mystery. Btw, Thanks for the Update. :thumbsup
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> 12/06/08 NOT OS "le Très Haut"
Post by: kahem on June 08, 2012, 01:03:47 PM
Lol the parents are so epic ^^
Why did you choose a french name?
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> 12/06/08 NOT OS "le Très Haut"
Post by: Yagami.Rai on June 08, 2012, 01:16:51 PM
@Nakamii Thanks for reading~ ^^ Well.. whether its Tomo~mi or not you'll have to read the next part~ XD
@kahem Thanks for reading~~ :) I chose a French name is because.. it sounds cool(?) :cathappy: Don't know why just when thinking wat language to choose French just came in mind~
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> 12/06/08 NOT OS "le Très Haut"
Post by: chichay12 on June 08, 2012, 02:58:10 PM
youre back!!!yehey!!! :ptam-glow:
thank for amazing update!!! :luvluv2: :luvluv2:
im so xcted what will kai gonna do!!!
pls update soon!!!tnx  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> 12/06/08 le Très Haut's Challenge Card
Post by: Yagami.Rai on June 08, 2012, 03:27:54 PM
Today's second Update!!! XD
I'll try to update the last part of this chapter soon~
I am still trying to put the pieces together! ^^

Part 2

“To.. Tomochin?! And Chiyuu?!!!” says Kai shocked
“Kai?!!”

“What’s wrong??”
“It’s a long story…” says Kai as he hurriedly grab the doll from Tomochin although it’s rude but since there is limited time so he can’t care for politeness anymore.

He quickly looks around the doll but he found no zip so he had to tear the doll into two which shocked Chiyuu and Tomo. Inside, yappari he found the time bomb as he quickly took it out from the doll.

Ignoring the shocking and curious gaze from Tomochin and Chiyuu, Kai quickly analyze what kind of bomb is it.

It’s black, square like bomb. There is a red number showing the time left before explosion. At the bottom, you can pull out a number pad like thing which seems to be where you insert the password to stop the bomb.

Time Left: 00:07:50

Damn! What is the password??!!


“Chiyuu??” says Chiyuu as he found a letter like thing inside the doll.
“What’s wrong??”
“I found this inside the doll” says Chiyuu as he hand the letter to Kai

Kai quickly open the letter and found a card…


(http://i1053.photobucket.com/albums/s469/Yagamirai/NotOSleTrsHautCC1_with_border.jpg)


Damn! They are definitely looking down on us!! But what exactly does 00000011 01004011 00000011 and 10008011 means??!!! Arg! The time!!
I thought of this code after today at my I.T. class~ Is this gonna be a BIG hint?? 0.0
“Kai… what does this means?? Explosion?! This is a bomb??!!” asks Tomochin in panic
“Chiyuu?!!!! BOMB?!”
“Shh!! You want the whole world to know??! It would cause chaos! Keep quiet! I am thinking how to stop it!!”

After telling Tomochin and Chiyuu to be quiet, Kai dial the phone to Kuu.
“Hey Kuu, this is Kai and……”

Police Headquarter
“Hmm… I see… So we have to solve the code to get the password.. How many minutes is left??”

“Less than 5 minutes…”

========================
AND THANKS FOR READING!!! :kneelbow:
SO I WONDER IF ANYONE WILL BREAK THIS CODE~~ 0.0
COULD YOU FIND THE HIDDEN HINT(s)? ^^
I WON'T GIVE ANY PRIZES... THIS IS JUST FOR FUN! :cathappy:
I HOPE EVERYONE LIKE IT! XD

Hint: The password is 4 digits, only numbers no alphabets!
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Can you solve "le Très Haut's" Code??
Post by: ichikawa on June 08, 2012, 05:37:35 PM
0048
Is it? is it?  :mon huh:
Hehehehe (just guessing~  XD )
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Can you solve "le Très Haut's" Code??
Post by: kahem on June 08, 2012, 07:34:31 PM
Yeah french is a beautiful language but it's really complicated sometime lol
For the code, binary code? ASCII code?
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Can you solve "le Très Haut's" Code??
Post by: cmze on June 08, 2012, 10:57:15 PM
So u updated a lot too is this a complot from u and anzai?  :smhid

now i got a lot to read... :huhuh

it was a joke!  :shakeit:

i'll read it later when i got back from work!  :D
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Can you solve "le Très Haut's" Code??
Post by: msst28 on June 09, 2012, 03:31:40 AM
Thanks for the update..
Lol.. what the code..
somehow I always fail to solve the code
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Can you solve "le Très Haut's" Code??
Post by: smarty0821 on June 09, 2012, 05:44:53 AM
YEAH!! you've updated!  :twothumbs :twothumbs

And about the code is it .... 3438 .... :?

Well hope you update soon!  :panic:
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Can you solve "le Très Haut's" Code??
Post by: Haruko on June 09, 2012, 06:49:49 AM
mm 6468?

interesting..
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Can you solve "le Très Haut's" Code??
Post by: Sydney W on June 09, 2012, 06:53:16 AM
Finally you update. I want the coming update from you very soon. ^^
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Can you solve "le Très Haut's" Code??
Post by: creamcracker on June 09, 2012, 11:42:24 PM
This got my attention lol and it was fun doing it but i dont know if my answer will be correct though >.<. My answer would be 1428 hahaha but i bet it's wrong ^_^.
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Can you solve "le Très Haut's" Code??
Post by: pen-pen-chii on June 10, 2012, 04:02:56 PM
0408?~  :mon huh: Its Takamina's birthday~
Just my guess though~  :mon sweat:
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Can you solve "le Très Haut's" Code??
Post by: Sok on June 11, 2012, 04:14:06 AM
Yeah update!!
Haha, this guy really is looking down on them.
I wonder what Acchan would do to Kai when he comes back, since it taking him a lot of time in the "bathroom"

And about the code.. I'm never really been good at them since there are lots of ways of decoding them and solving them.

So I'm going to randomly put on a number...
2012

eiather way it's wrong hahaha!! :twisted:
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Apologies to all Readers!!! m(_ _)m
Post by: Yagami.Rai on June 12, 2012, 03:35:24 PM
First of all。。。 I would like to apologize to every readers。。 :kneelbow:
I actually made a mistake in typing when I made the code.... = =
So I changed the story a little as you see below... to follow my mistake...

And Thanks for the comments! Really motivate me to update this fic! :)
From the comments, there is 1 person who is on the right tract and 1 person who guessed (?) right!!
I'll definitely finish this bomb incident within this week!! Or maybe earlier, hopefully..
@cmze This wasn't a complot.. Why did you think it was a complot?? :?

Once again, please accept my apology in making critical mistake in the code... :bow:
I know it's pretty damn short but this part was actually not part in my original plan..
This part was to correct my stupid mistake and bring the story back to its tract.... :nervous
Here's Part 3...

Part 3
“Arg!! What is the password?! There isn’t much time left!!!”
Just when everyone is frustrated in not being able to solve the password and is all heated up, something just managed to cool them down…

Was it rain?
No, it isn’t..
It is the water coming from the bucket Yui is holding, it seems that the weather is too hot and she is splashing some water on the ground to help cool the heat and Kai, Tomochin and Chiyuu were just outside her shop ‘Kimi Shika’ and was unlucky enough to get splash..

“…..”
“Ah… Sorry, didn’t mean to…” says Yui as she continues to splash the water but in the other direction.

Kai who just knocks out from the shock started to panic about wasting the precious time. Just when he was going to shout out of frustration, Tomochin spoke.

“Hey! Look at the card!! After it got wet from the water the contents of the card seems to be changing….

After hearing what Tomochin says, Kai hurriedly grab the card and sees the numbers that they were suppose to solve slowly changing…

From “00000011 01004011 00000011 10008011”
it starts to change into “00110000 00110100 00110000 00111000”
“What the hell!! So the first series of numbers were just a joke?!”
“Kai, what’s going on??” Kuu asks (Kuu is still on the phone with Kai with the speaker on so that Riku, Hiroshi and Takumi could also hear what’s going on)

“le Tres Haut was fooling around with us!! 00000011 01004011 00000011 and 10008011 was just a joke! The real numbers seems to be 00110000 00110100 00110000 00111000!!!”
“What?! So we have to try to solve it all the way again?!” complains Kuu

Riku who was hearing the whole conversation twitch his eyebrows, although he was quiet he was actually thinking about the possible solutions all these time!! Sacrificing his precious game time, just to find out that it was all just a joke!!! Even Riku will get angry!!

“Arg!! If I find out who they are I’m gonna beat the hell out of them” says Kai who is totally pissed off.

Actually this code will be really simple for them if they can just cool their head off but because of all the insults they felt they wasn’t able to perform like how they usually does…


So will they be able to cool their head and solve for the solutions in time?? Or will this be the end of this story??

*The water splashing thing that Yui was doing, actually it was something Japanese they used to do in the old times to cool down heat. Even now they still do it I think. It is called "Uchimizu" ^^
The picture is too  big... And I'm too lazy to resize it.. :nervous
(http://www.geocities.jp/koedomonogatari/gazou/uchimizu.jpg)
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Apologies to all Readers!! m(_ _)m
Post by: Sok on June 15, 2012, 04:55:04 AM
Haha!!! Funny!!  :lol:
I wonder if they'll figure it out.
Thanks for the update  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Apologies to all Readers!! m(_ _)m
Post by: kojima Naomi on July 01, 2012, 04:19:14 AM
i have to say
u write english better than chinese
way to go
so,sometimes i will be here
and i sigh up for a new account
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Apologies to all Readers!! m(_ _)m
Post by: kiruchi on July 26, 2012, 06:45:37 PM
Just marathon-ed this story. :on study: (took me almost half day to finish... *phew*)
I wonder what's the password???  :dunno: 1148(?) --> *know nothing about IT codes*  :on blackhole: <- me while thinking.. hahah
well... 'nyway, I'm tired of thinking (more on trying to crack that code)... Instead I'll just wait for an update!!  :cool1:
Please Please Please Update soooooooon.  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Not OS >>> Author's Message: Apologies to all Readers!! m(_ _)m
Post by: cmze on July 28, 2012, 10:03:31 AM
i was iidding the comolot thing! :grin:

Atsumina's date!  :wub:

they are so romantic and Kai is so charming!  :inlove:

Funny the last chapter :rofl:

 please update soon!  :cow:
Title: Re: Not OS [Chapter 11 Part 4]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on October 02, 2012, 05:36:56 PM
Haha.. It seems like it's been a long time since I last updated this.. :nervous
Some people have gotten the password right no prize but only the word 'Congratulations!' :)
Hope you guys still haven't forgot about this story :sweatdrop:
Like what I always say, I'll try to update ASAP but I don't know when yet...


Part 4

“Arg!!! WHAT THE HELL IS THE PASSWORD??!!!” shouted Riku, Kuu and Kai
“I think we should calm down and think again” suggests Hiroshi
“How can we calm down when there is less than 3 minutes left?!” exclaims Takumi
“But if we don’t cool down, we won’t be able to think properly!” argues Hiroshi
“………”

Just when everyone was in silent, deep into their thoughts…

On the other hand, Yui who has just finished splashing the water has taken a look on the card.

Time Bomb: Less than 2 minutes
“Isn’t this ASCII code?? I’ve seen it a few times before” says Yui without any expressions.
“Un?!”
“Right!! The ASCII code!!! That’s why I think the numbers looked familiar! So if it is ASCII code then the password should be…”

“0408!!!!” says Kuu, Riku and Kai in unison happily!

Without wasting any time since there is only 30 seconds left, Kai hurriedly but accurately pressed ‘0408’ on the number pad…

20… 19…
“0”
18… 17…
“4”
16… 15…
“0”
14… 13…
“8”
12……………..

“It.. stopped!!!” Kai, Tomochin and Chiyuu shouted in excitement.
Kuu, Riku, Hiroshi and Takumi also cheers when they hear that the bomb stopped.

Just when they all relaxed… the bomb suddenly started to move again!!

11… 10… 9…

But they are all still cheering happily without noticing it…

“Isn’t the time still moving backwards?” asks Yui once again expressionlessly

“Huh? Of course it is not moving anymore~ We solved it, we did it!!” says Kai happily
“But… it says 6 over there and now 5…”
“Eh?” Kai then look at the bomb and realize that what Yui said was true…

“OH SHIT!! The bomb didn’t stop!!!” shouted Kai
“WHAT?!!!”
“OMG OMG! We won’t be able to stop it!! Kai, me and Riku will revenge for you!!” is what Kuu says as he has given up hopes on Kai now…

“What?! Don’t give up yet!!! You Traitor!! Oh shit 1 second left!! No!! I don’t want to die yet… ”
Just when Kai also starts to give up already, flashback of memories with Acchan starts to show in his brain like a movie… That’s when he realized…
“Ah…. If I knew that I would’ve die now I should have confessed to Acchan…” says Kai softly…
“Chiyuu!!! [Translation: No!! I still don’t want to die yet!! I still haven’t confessed to Tomo yet!! TT^TT]”
“What?!” “I still don’t want to die yet… I’m still so young and beautiful… Eh?! Why do I suddenly think of Chiyuu?? Something must have gone wrong since I’m dying soon…”
“…..”
As they all starts to close their eyes, waiting for the explosion to come…

3 minutes passed….

-----------------Silence---------------

“Are we still alive??”
“I guess so…”
“Thank God!” all of them say happily.

Feeling relieved, Kai sat down and look at the sky blankly. He feels like he has forgotten something really important and is doing his best to try and recall what it is.

1 minute passed… 2 minutes passed… and 3 minutes passed…

“Hey Kai, are you alright?? You’re just staring blankly at the sky for 3 minutes already” Tomochin asks as Chiyuu nods in agreement.
“Yea, besides why are you here at the amusement park today?? You came alone? Chiyuu?” asks Chiyuu which helped Kai remembers that he has left Acchan at the restaurant for more than half an hour already!

“Oh Shoot!!! Tomo and Chiyuu, I’ll have to go now!” Kai shouts and runs away not giving Tomochin and Chiyuu the chance of asking whatever is he in a hurry about.

“What’s wrong with him?”
“Chiyuu…”

Back to Acchan…
“That STUPID KAI!!! How dare he left me here alone for half an hour?! Hmph! I’ll have to think of a way to pay this back!” Acchan thought to herself.

“Acchan! I’m sorry!!” Kai apologize while bowing his head really low, showing his sincerity.

Acchan crossed her arms and look at Kai but not saying anything while Kai is having cold sweat as he can feel the temperature dropping around them which seems to be coming from Acchan’s black aura.

Since Acchan didn’t say anything, Kai didn’t dare to raise his head up too so they remain in the same position for 10 minutes now.

The waiter is not sure whether he should ask if they need help or not, but his instinct told him that if he gets involved in their matter he would not be able to get off the hook easily so he decide to ignore Kai and Acchan.

“Where did you go that makes you leave for half an hour?” Acchan finally spoken but in a cold tone which made Kai sweat a lot more and his back is really soaked now.

“Er… I went to the bathroom but on the way I was lost and I had a bit stomach ache…” Kai lied since he can’t really tell Acchan that he went to find and stopped at bomb can’t he? So although he didn’t like lying he had no choice but to make up some reason.

“Fine, I’ll forgive you this time but if there’s next time… hehehe~ You understand?”
Gulp* No next time!” Kai swallowed his saliva as he swears that there’ll be no more next time to Acchan.
“Good Boy~ So let’s continue to go around the rides, shall we?”
“Hai”

Of course Acchan didn’t let Kai off the hook easily. During the evening, Acchan would be saying she wants to ride that, she’s hungry, she’s thirsty, etc. and Kai has to run here and there to fulfill Acchan’s order(?).

Time passes really fast and now it is the time for the amusement park to close, meaning it is also the time for Kai and Acchan to go home.

Acchan really did have lots of fun today especially picking on Kai the whole time after lunch. While Kai also did have fun but to him it is Exhaustion>Fun since there is also the bomb incident.

After getting out from AKB Amusement Park, Kai as a gentlemen offer to bring Acchan home which Acchan accepts. Then Kai went home and straight into his bedroom after he has taken a quick shower as he is really exhausted.

When Kuu and Riku saw Kai came back they wanted to discuss the bomb incident with Kai but see how tired Kai is they decide to postpone it until tomorrow.

On the other hand, after Kai left Tomochin also lost the interest in staying in the amusement park. But after the begging from Chiyuu, Tomo didn’t go straight home but to continue to hang out with him. During that time there’s a small incident which will be told maybe in the side story~ Of course that is also when I still haven’t forget about it LOL! XDD
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 11 Part 4] Oct.2 UPDATED!
Post by: Haruko on October 03, 2012, 05:08:56 AM
jejejej acchan is so bossy
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 11 Part 4] Oct.2 UPDATED!
Post by: cmze on October 05, 2012, 11:00:33 AM
so happy!  :drool:

Chiyuu and Kai thinking about confessing before dying while Tomocbin thinking bout how beautiful she's :lol:

Gotta love this girl...Acchan! :rofl:

Kai do everthing she says and don't get her mad xD

thnks for updating!  :)
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 11 Part 4] Oct.2 UPDATED!
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 05, 2012, 12:40:34 PM
hello.

I already read your chapter..

It's very nice  :)2

I hope you update more often..

and more kaiAcchan Moments..  :P

Thank You
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 11 Part 4] Oct.2 UPDATED!
Post by: Megumi on October 07, 2012, 01:59:18 PM
YEi! Update! Long time no see Yagami-san

:kneelbow:
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] Dec.19.2012
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 19, 2012, 05:29:53 PM
A long awaited update... :bow:  :bow:
a little short,
a little sweet,
a little KaiAcchan moment...


Chapter 12

1 month has already passed since the bomb incident at the AKB Amusement Park. Due to the action of the Les Tres Haut, the superiors in the police headquarter has give order to Kai, Kuu and Riku to take things more seriously and to prevent any possible dangers from happening.

Kai, Kuu and Riku have been patrolling and gathering information in and around AKB High school and they’ve managed to find out some information regarding to the organization.

It seems that Les Tres Haut was also the mastermind of the selling of drugs to the high schoolers around the area. Not only that, from the thugs around they also find out that Les Tres Haut is also involved in illegal trading of firearms with the mafia groups around Japan. This is a big discovery and is put under Level 4 danger case!

They didn’t expect to dig out such a big case from just investigating for the selling of drugs. Now, compare to the drugs they have to give first priority to the sale of firearms.

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Rooftop
“sigh, so many works recently!!!” Kuu shouts towards the sky.
“Can’t be help isn’t it? Since we don’t know when those guys are going to take action again” says Riku while playing PSP.
“Yea, so what we can now is to try to prevent their terrorist-like actions” added Kai while lying on the floor.
“But all these days we’ve been only patrolling, patrolling and patrolling! And what do we get?? Nothing!!! Those guys are cunning!!! No evident left behind at all… If this continues then by the time they took action we’re already exhausted from the daily patrols.” complained Kuu.
“Hm… You got a point there, any suggestion?” Kai asks.
“Nope” “Nope”
“No suggestion, no plan, we can’t do anything!”

As the three guys are discussing about Le Tres Haut, Acchan came in.
“Hey guys! What are you guys talking about? What plan?” asks Acchan curiously while looking at Kai.
“No. Nothing!” the three of them replies nervously.
“Are you sure? Something seems fishy around here~”
“Gulp* Kai, we’ll be leaving now.” shouts Kuu and Riku as they ran down.
“Hey! TRAITORS!!!” Kai shouted but earned a glare from Acchan.
“What?! Are you that unwilling to stay with me?” Acchan asks while having a cold glare at Kai.
“No, I don’t mean that” Kai explains.
“Then what do you mean?”
“Er….” Kai panics because he doesn’t know what to tell Acchan.

Normally as a good spy you should be able to tell a story easily and fluently but don’t know why when Kai faces Acchan, he is not able to tell a lie.

“Pfft! Fine, I’ll let you go off the hook this time but in exchange you’ll have to go shopping with me today after the class ends.” Laughs Acchan.
“Eh?”
“Next week is my dad’s birthday and I don’t know what to give him so I want some advices from you.”
“Ah, no problem.”
“Then see you in front of the school gate~”
“Yea”

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After school…
Kai and Acchan met up with one another and went to the biggest shopping mall around.

In this shopping mall, 1st floor Food area, 2nd floor Clothes, 3rd floor Furniture & Etc., 4th floor entertainment area. Although this shopping mall has only 4 floors, each floor is really wide! It takes like 10 minutes+ to walk around the whole floor.

The moment they reached the shopping mall, Acchan drags Kai to a shop called “Sweet Time” at 1st floor. Sweet Time is a shop or rather a Cafe that provides delicious sweets and drinks and is especially famous among females.

“Ah~~ I feel so blessed to be able to taste something this delicious~” Acchan comments after eating 2 big honey pancakes, 2 strawberry shortcakes, 1 chocolate cake, 1 parfait, and 2 glasses of hot red tea.
“Yea, the taste is really good.” Kai replies but actually he is once again surprised at Acchan’s appetite.
“Now that we’re satisfied let’s go to see what is available at the 2nd fl.”

2nd Fl. Male Clothing Area
“Hm… Which necktie do you think is good?” asks Acchan.
“Which color your dad likes?”
“Dark colors like navy blue”
“Then what about this one?” Kai pointed out at a navy blue necktie with marine design which looks really nice.
“It looks really great! Why don’t you try it on?” suggests Acchan
“EHH!?”
“I want to see how will it look like when someone ties it on, won’t you grant me my wish?” Acchan uses her puppy eye tactics again on Kai who of course agreed.

Few minutes have passed and Kai is still struggling in putting on the necktie… Lastly, manages to tie it but it seems a bit.. er.. strange.
“Kai, you don’t know how to tie a necktie?” asks Acchan wordlessly.
“Haha…” Kai laughs nervously.
“Here, let me tie it for you”
Acchan then leans nearer to Kai and starts to untie the knot Kai made but, slowly Acchan starts to lean in nearer and nearer and now they can feel each other’s breath.
The atmosphere is becoming a bit ambiguous.

Kai is really nervous when he can even see Acchan’s beautiful eyelash flashing in front of him. What seems so attractive to him was Acchan’s lip which seems so seductive because Acchan has put on lip stick. Gulp* Kai swallowed hard, trying to prevent himself from doing something bad.

“Here, done!” Acchan says and raises her head which causes their lips to accidently touch one another and leave them in surprise.

Slowly, Acchan closes her eyes and leans in to allow their lips to attach more to one another. At the same time, Kai also closes his eyes and pressed his lips against Acchan’s. The time seems to have frozen and the only thing they can see is each other.

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So after reading... do you guys want to speed up their relationship? or slow progress? 8)
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] Dec.19,2012
Post by: miayaka on December 19, 2012, 09:43:57 PM
Quote
“I want to see how will it look like when someone ties it on, won’t you grant me my wish?” Acchan uses her puppy eye tactics again on Kai who of course agreed.

acchan's techniques always work!

SPEED UP PLEASE!  :luvluv1:
thank you for the update!
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] Dec.19,2012
Post by: Sydney W on December 20, 2012, 12:44:54 AM
Author-san, please speed up their relationship. Can't wait to see them lovely dovey
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] Dec.19,2012
Post by: Haruko on December 20, 2012, 04:57:36 AM
omg..i dont know maybe a little jelous acchan.. i think that some girls want to filrt with kai because he is hot...

jaja the old trick about the necktie thing.. good move acchan good move..
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] Dec.19,2012
Post by: cisda83 on January 01, 2013, 09:12:55 AM
EH... accidentally kissing each other just because Atsuko was helping Kai tied up a necktie...

It's very classic move... but it's a good move. sweet innocent plot....

Yeah... what's going to happen next??? Curious... making me very curious.

Well... thank you for the update... can't wait for the next one.

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] Dec.19,2012
Post by: theblueknight on February 11, 2013, 12:57:11 AM
man you left me hanging!!!  :panic: :panic: :panic: please update!!! i want more of kuu and mariko they dont seem to get enough love around here such a shame  :smhid :smhid :smhid i wonder if the girls will ever find out that 1) kai ,kuu and riku are really girls, 2) they arent really students but undercover agents, 3) that their school is HQ for a group of drug dealers/weapon smugglers i guess you would call them cant wait to find out  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] Dec.19,2012
Post by: den_takacchan on March 17, 2013, 07:16:27 AM
:mon inluv: waah atsumina couple! omg i feel i lil bit gigly as i read this fic. atsumina

 pairing so  :twothumbs!!
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] Dec.19,2012
Post by: den_takacchan on March 17, 2013, 11:47:24 AM
 :wigglypanda: :wigglypanda: :wigglypanda:

 :luvluv1: :luvluv1: they've kissed!!  :on bleed:emergosh hurray for atsumina !! 

i feel all gidly inside waah. please update soon i wanna know the net scene!! :luvluv2: :luvluv2:
:luvluv1:

:moncute: :mon cute:
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] Dec.19,2012
Post by: blakwhite on May 08, 2013, 05:30:47 AM
aaaaaa, update pls  :catglare:
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] Dec.19,2012
Post by: cisda83 on May 08, 2013, 09:08:06 AM
Update please

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] Dec.19,2012
Post by: noah minami on September 09, 2013, 11:08:29 AM
i want an update please..... :panic: :( :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> OS [Gladiator] Atsumina (Part 2) >>> 17/12/11
Post by: noah minami on September 11, 2013, 06:52:34 PM
i love your fanfic ! please keep write more about atsumina ! :cow: :yossi: XD :thumbsup
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] Dec.19,2012
Post by: Mina on October 17, 2013, 08:47:51 AM
Please continue, I want to know of the rest of the history. :bow:
Title: Re: Not OS >>> [Chapter 12] Dec.19,2012
Post by: rightsaver143 on June 27, 2016, 03:52:49 AM
Please continue it

I want to know the rest of the story

PLEASE UPDATE IT