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Offline Sydney W

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
« Reply #220 on: January 31, 2012, 06:10:12 PM »
It must be hilarious and interesting to see Kai and Acchan on a date. Same goes to TomoTomo.
Please update the next very soon. Tq

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
« Reply #221 on: January 31, 2012, 07:31:35 PM »
 XD XD XD it's funny !  Poor Chiyuu and Kai kakaka Acchan's slave ?! ... i love this kind :))
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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
« Reply #222 on: January 31, 2012, 08:03:23 PM »
Great !
You updated !~
I was waiting for this..  :lol:

Omg!! Chiyuu you don't call someone tht many times in the morning to ask what to wear for a date thats few days away..  :lol:
I want itano and chiyuu together ! :angry:

Update soon i really wanna read their dates . XD

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
« Reply #223 on: February 01, 2012, 04:57:52 AM »
mmok let me see if im understand. now kai is atsuko`s slave right? but their dates is in for days... so the next day acchan can ask about everything she wants to kai because the rules says that is 24 hours.. right? when this deal finish?

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
« Reply #224 on: February 01, 2012, 06:18:51 PM »
Hahahah poor Chiyuu!!!!

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
« Reply #225 on: February 02, 2012, 01:16:31 AM »
poor chiyu need to spent his money for aachan/kai date

but chiyu so cute...
prepare early for his date

 

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
« Reply #226 on: February 03, 2012, 04:42:31 AM »
YAY~ Thanks for the update.
Haha, the principal and his 'winners.'
Well at least Chiyuu got his date with Tomochin. In return Acchan gets a date with Kai.
Poor Chiyuu had to give Acchan money for her date.
Can't wait for your next update.

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Re: One Shot? or maybe Not? >>> Not OS [Chapter 9 Part 2] >>> 12/01/31 UPDATED
« Reply #227 on: February 04, 2012, 11:16:16 AM »
Even as a guy Chiyuu~  personality is so girly hahahah but I like it!
Acchan and math  :rofl:

Thank you for your update!
Arígatou!  :kneelbow:
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I just finished with Anzai's fic...which is great! :D

i have the little feeling that "which" is bad written too..man my english is going down!  :catglare:

now i'm going to read your Fic ... :twisted:

I love it so much..is so funny!

i'll put another message when i'm doneeeeee! Yep


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You LAZY!

you haven't update not even 2 chapters..HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?  :banghead:

this is my only free day and you got nothing!  :shocked

you have to update someday you know?  :P

~~~~~Now i'm feeling sadder!~~~~~~~~~~~

Thanks to u Yagami....

i'm such a dramatic person Am i?  XD

i'm kidding.. you should updateeeeee :lol:

And yes i want to know abouts TomoTomo's Date. and AtsuMina's too..

and a little Mayuki won't be bad...

so you better start working!  :grin:

and please your readers!  :peace:


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Haha.. :lol:
Sorry for being so lazy.. :P
I'll try to Update Soon~ (don't know when yet though XD)
Thanks for reading~!!! >.<
BTW, you got the link for Synchro Tokimeki yet?? :?

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i just read it tday and i coudnt stop laughin poor kuu/miichan being Marikos helper and Acchan so cunnung who would have thought

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Sorry for not updating so long... Because I didn't have any inspiration.. sigh*
Sorry again for this short update... I'll try to make longer one next time but if I can't then it might be a short update again..
Really gomen nasai!! :kneelbow: And Thanks for the Comments!!! :)


Chapter 10


Part 1

Since Chiyuu is so excited about the date I, the author, will fast forward the days for him.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Fast Forward>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

The Day of Date!

AKB Amusement Park, one of the best dating sites in Japan. No matter if it’s spring, summer, autumn or winter, it is always one of the best choices for couples and family to spend time together. From slow rides such as Ferris wheel to crazy rides such as Giant Drop, Super Rollercoaster and other kinds such as Haunted House and Animal Farms, there is a lot of genre in AKB Amusement Park. There is also wide range of restaurants available, no matter Italian, French, Japan, Chinese, American, etc. it’s all available here at AKB Amusement Park. It is opened at 8:00 a.m. and closes at 20:00 p.m. At night there’s also parade going on and also fireworks during weekends!

You can see families and couples going in and out the amusement park happily but there seem to be a person who seems rather nervous and uncomfortable and kept walking back and forth in front of the entrance. This action has caused many couples to stop and observe the person but it seems like that person has not realize the line of sight that was on him.

“Is my clothes okay?? Will Tomo like it?? What will we do??”

Yes, the person walking back and forth is Kasai Chiyuu. He is too excited about today’s date that’s why he cannot sleep at all for the past few days and came 3 hours early which is 7:00 a.m. … The amusement park is not yet even opened yet!!!

Right now… it’s…

9:15 a.m.

“45 more minutes before Tomo come.. Ah!! I’m so nervous!!!!!” Chiyuu shouts
“What is that kid doing??” << Man A
“Is he alright??” << Man B
“I’ve see him standing there for a long time even before we came to work” << Staff
“Should we call a police??” << Woman A
“Let’s tell the staff” << Woman B

Few Minutes Later…

“Excuse me sir, but you’re causing discomfort to other customers. If you’re not going to go in would you please leave??” a guard came and asks
“Ah! Sorry, but I’m waiting for a friend. She’ll be here in around 30 more minutes. I’m sorry for causing discomfort, but please don’t tell me to go home!! I’ve waited for this day for so long! PLEASE!!!” Chiyuu starts crying and begging the guard while kneeling down making the guard like the villain here.

“What’s with that guard??” << Woman A
“He made that poor boy cry!!” << Woman B
“What kind of attitude is that??” << Woman C

“Er… Sir please stands up!! You don’t have to go home! Please just stand up!” The guard begs Chiyuu while having some complex feelings inside him.
I didn’t even do anything yet!!! << Guard’s inner feeling

“Really?? Chiyuu doesn’t have to go home??”
“Yes! Yes!” says the guard while nodding
“So, Chiyuu can wait for Chiyuu’s friend here??”
“Yes! Just please don’t cause trouble for other customers.”
“Okay~”

And that was the Chiyuu’s AKB Amusement Park incident~~

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50 minutes later…

“Hm… Tomochin is late for 20 minutes already… Well, she might take a lot of time because she has to makeup… But what if she got involved in an accident??!!”

The more the time passes, the more Chiyuu’s imaginations go wild…

Luckily just before Chiyuu’s imaginations have gone completely out of control you can see the person he’s waiting for slowly advancing towards him.

“To.. Tomochin!!!” Chiyuu runs excitedly towards Tomochin.
“Che.. You’re so noisy”
“Ah.. sorry..”
“sigh* Why do you apologize??”
“Eh.. sorry..”
“Dakara! Why do you have to apologize?! Stop saying sorry, it’s annoying”
“Sor.. Okay..”
“sigh* Let’s go in”
“Ah! Wait for me Tomochin!”

……….On the Other Hand…….
9:45 a.m. In Front of AKB Amusement Park
“Hm… Guess I came a bit early” says Kai as Acchan hasn’t arrived yet.

Today, Kai wear a gray sleeveless t-shirt while black vest, showing his muscular arms. With dark blue jeans and nike shoes, making the girls that walk past stop and turn back and look at him again but Kai didn’t notice at all. Some girls even tried to ask him to go in the amusement park together but of course Kai rejected saying that he’s waiting for a friend leaving the girls in disappointment.

10:15 a.m.
“Acchan so slow…” Kai says as he looks at his watch

“Kai!!!” a girl says while running clumsily towards Kai
“Acchan?! Woah! Slow down!” Kai says as he caught Acchan who was going to fall.
“Ah!.. Sorry.. and Thank you..” Acchan says blushing
“Un.. it’s okay..” Kai says while scratching his head.
“Sorry for being late…” Acchan says while looking on the floor
“It’s okay besides being late is the privilege of a woman” Kai says while winking causing Acchan to blush even more.
“Mou~ That’s how you always say to girls you dated before right?” Acchan complains while punching Kai softly on the arm.
Kai caught Acchan’s hand and says “I only say it to you”
“…” Acchan’s face is as red as an apple, she was embarrassed so she quickly turn around and says “Le.. Let’s go in now..”
“Hai~” Kai replies smiling, thinking how cute Acchan is blushing~

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Chiyuu was really Hillarious here... :>
As For KaiAcchan, They're Really Romantic! Acchan's Blushing is CUTE! <3
And, Indeed.. This is Kinda Short For me... But, It's okay anyway.. (As long as there are some KaiAcchan Scenes, I don't mind).
But, It doesn't mean that I don't care about other Pairing.. I still read the full story... Maybe, It will make me familiar with other pairing.. (So that, I don't really have to focus on AtsuMina so much).. And, Maybe The Story (of other pairing) will make my day(?) Who knows? I might love them more than AtsuMina...
Btw,I'll wait for your Upcoming Update.. Just Take your Time! :DDD
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Ahhh!!! my imagination is going wild!!!!  :panic:
please update soon!! :bow:
i love akb48!!!!

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tht stupid guard made Chiyuu cry i will kill tht guard lolz

Offline Sydney W

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Thanks for the update. I want more than this.

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aww yes it short but better short that nothing -__-, awww kai your are a player.. :D cute words... and everybody want to date you :D

acchan show that girls that kai belongs you

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Hee, thank au -san for new up . Well it's a bit short but still better than nothing ..and i'd love Kai's sweet talk   > v <

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I hope everything will be alright for Chiyuu ^^

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