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Mysterious Woman [SaeYuki] (Chapter 1) (new fic 28/06)
« on: June 27, 2013, 10:48:09 PM »
Mysterious Woman (Chapter 1)

              “Greetings. My name is Miyazawa Sae. I’m not an ordinary person as I am the prime minister’s son. Today is the first time I’m going to school as I’ve always been homeschooled since young to prevent media coverage. To be honest, I had to get into a big fight with my father for telling him that I want to quit being homeschooled and go to a normal high school where I can be treated as an equal- a plain normal human. But that plan failed considering that I’m riding a limousine to go to school and I didn’t want anyone to know that I’m a rich guy who owns a limousine to avoid fakeries but my father forced me to- well, again, to avoid media coverage.

Curious and envious stares came from students wearing the same uniform as I am as the limousine passed by my new school’s drop-off place for cars. The principal, vice principal and some teachers were there to greet me. In just a few seconds, there were a crowd of students and a commotion started of who am I, where I came from or am I a man or a woman.

“Can I go out now..?” Sae asked his butler.

“Be careful of who you befriend with or what you say. Especially, your behaviour. The last thing your father wants is you failing his demands.” His butler told him.

“Fine.. So can I go out now?” Sae asked again. The butler didn’t give him a reply then went out of the car to open the door beside Sae which was what Sae really dislikes right now as he could’ve get out of the car his own.

As Sae got out of the car, the commotion got louder and screams from women were heard. The guys were just looking at him naturally, some with disbelieve or disappointments. The principals and teachers greeted him like as if he was some kind of a person from the royal family.

Ohh no.. My plan of getting an ordinary life FAILED!’ Sae thought as he facepalmed himself mentally.


As he gets to his own class, curious people and ‘fangirls’ as how he refers them, crowded outside his class to see his introduction. Even his new classmates were looking at him like as if he was a celebrity except for one woman who is totally uninterested by her surroundings as she does her paperwork. He’s already the new school celebrity.

His classroom is something he would imagine it would be. A long study table that allows two students to work in it and a whiteboard attached to the wall. Except, there is no mini-library or a mini fridge inside the classroom.

“Would you please introduce yourself, Miyazawa-san?” his teacher ordered him.

“Umm.. Hi! My name is Miyazawa Sae and I can’t wait to be friends with all of you so… Yoroshiku onegaishimasu..” Sae bowed to his classmates.

 “I can’t wait to be friends with you too, Sae-kun!!” his fangirls from the outside and inside the classroom squealed at him. They called him informally too fast which felt weird to Sae and even the sentence ‘I love you’ can be heard from the commotion.

“Thank you for your introduction Miyazawa-san.. Please sit beside Kashiwagi-san, right over there.” His teacher pointed at the woman who is doing her paperwork. Miyazawa-san quickly went over and took a seat right beside her to avoid more attention.

“Hey.. Nice to meet you.. My name’s Miyazawa Sae.” Sae introduced himself with the brightest smile he could make.

“yea.. I know.” Kashiwagi said without looking at Sae as she do her paperwork.

“Kashiwagi Yuki. Call me Yukirin.” Yukirin looked at Sae then smiled gently and raised her right hand to shakes hands with him. Which Sae gladly shook her hand. After that, Yukirin’s face became her previous serious expression instantly then went back to her paperwork.

“So.. Umm.. What are you doing?” Sae asked.

“Writing.” Yukirin replied.

“Umm right.. I can see that but what are you writing?” Sae asked again.

“….” Yukirin chose to ignore Sae.

“Right.. Ok..” Sae said awkwardly. Sae started to feel that he is annoying her so he decided to go on with class instead.

“Kashiwagi-san, Miyazawa-san. Can you see me after class?” The teacher suddenly asked them.

-After class-

Sae and Yukirin went to see the teacher together without a communication between them.

“Ahh.. Thank you for seeing me.” The teacher thanked them.

“You’re welcome..” Sae said.

“Ahh.. Kashiwagi-san..” the teacher called Yukirin.


“Could you please tour Miyazawa-san around the school?.” The teacher said.

“Why? We’re already in high school. He should be old enough of how to take care of himself.” Yukirin complained with the same expression.

“Well, his new to the school and he might get lost..” the teacher said.

“Fine.” Yukirin accepted.

“You can start now if you want to.” The teacher said then left.

“Let’s make this fast. I’m busy and consider yourself lucky as I’m giving up my time to study for you.” Yukirin said then started walking. Sae followed Yukirin.

“No.. You should be lucky that I’m with you~” Sae teased.

“Silence.” Yukirin silenced Sae.

“I was joking..” Sae said.


What a cold woman I’m stuck with..

-End of Mysterious Woman (Chapter 1)-


Miyazawa Sae: Son of prime minister. Wants an ordinary life.
Kashiwagi Yuki: -unknown-

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Re: Mysterious Woman [SaeYuki] (Chapter 1) (new fic 28/06)
« Reply #1 on: June 27, 2013, 10:57:23 PM »
Sae should have fun with Yukirin by his side.  I would be assuming the fangirls shall be chasing him around soon enough :nervous
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Re: Mysterious Woman [SaeYuki] (Chapter 1) (new fic 28/06)
« Reply #2 on: June 27, 2013, 11:21:11 PM »
Even though I am an anti-shipper of SaeYuki I oredi like the story, which means a lot... So, yeah, continue and ganbatte~!!!

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Re: Mysterious Woman [SaeYuki] (Chapter 1) (new fic 28/06)
« Reply #3 on: June 28, 2013, 01:54:51 AM »
This is Brilliant  :twothumbs
You've already left me waiting for more    :cathappy:
I love the angle your going from, the prime ministers son I mean...
I can Imagine myself as one of those fangirls  :lol:  :wub:
I can't wait for the Next installment
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Re: Mysterious Woman [SaeYuki] (Chapter 1) (new fic 28/06)
« Reply #4 on: June 28, 2013, 10:10:33 AM »
Ohhh!! I love this kind of fic!~!~!~
 :w00t: :D XD

~Sae is the president's son!~!~ Oh...Damn teacher, ruining Sae's plan...
 :lol: XD :w00t:

~Well, yeah...Of course, Sae-kun want a freedom too...To be a normal high schooler..
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~Hmm...Yukirin is so cold in here and somehow i like it!~!~!~ LOL
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~Hmm...Pls update the next one!! I'll be looking forward for the next update!~!~
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Re: Mysterious Woman [SaeYuki] (Chapter 1) (new fic 28/06)
« Reply #5 on: June 28, 2013, 05:23:12 PM »
XD oh God I'm happy seeing a good saeyuki fic! XD

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Re: Mysterious Woman [SaeYuki] (Chapter 1) (new fic 28/06)
« Reply #6 on: June 28, 2013, 05:30:37 PM »
Oh cool! A new SaeYuki fanfic! I'm so happy!

I think it's gonna be a great fic!

Mou.. Yukirin is cold but thats cute! xD and Sae is so rich. Wow!

Cant wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! ^^
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Re: Mysterious Woman [SaeYuki] (Chapter 1) (new fic 28/06)
« Reply #7 on: July 01, 2013, 10:36:41 AM »
Gonna be silent reader again after long time  XD
Interesting story @CheesyBits :twothumbs and I also glad that you put Yukirin into my favorite character, Tsundere Girl  :w00t:
Waiting for more  :cow:

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Re: Mysterious Woman [SaeYuki] (Chapter 1) (new fic 28/06)
« Reply #8 on: August 19, 2013, 12:21:31 PM »
Cheesy! I hope you will continue this fanfic :bow: :cry: pweaaase~ onegai~~

Yukirin being tsun tsun XD I love it !

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Re: Mysterious Woman [SaeYuki] (Chapter 1) (new fic 28/06)
« Reply #9 on: August 20, 2013, 05:15:48 AM »
Yey! saeyuki!

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Re: Mysterious Woman [SaeYuki] (Chapter 1) (new fic 28/06)
« Reply #10 on: August 20, 2013, 10:47:11 AM »
Can't wait for Chapter 2! Yukirin's such a cold girl, isn't she? I can't wait till she's head over heals towards Sae. Update soon!

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Re: Mysterious Woman [SaeYuki] (Chapter 1) (new fic 28/06)
« Reply #11 on: August 20, 2013, 12:34:47 PM »
woo good story u know . please update for chap 2

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Re: Mysterious Woman [SaeYuki] (Chapter 1) (new fic 28/06)
« Reply #12 on: October 20, 2013, 02:49:11 PM »
Bumping it!

Can't wait for chapter 2! >:D

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Re: Mysterious Woman [SaeYuki] (Chapter 1) (new fic 28/06)
« Reply #13 on: October 20, 2013, 03:30:59 PM »
cheesy.. update pleasee.. >w<

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