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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
« Reply #40 on: February 08, 2013, 04:19:53 PM »
Mayu should stay with Yuki since Jun is so unreliable (and unfaithful too!)!  :grin:
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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
« Reply #41 on: February 08, 2013, 05:20:06 PM »
They start to like each other!!!!

Jun what are you doing? You know Matsui sensei??

And Rena why did you look at Yuki! Stop it!!

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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
« Reply #42 on: February 08, 2013, 08:50:56 PM »
Jun became a jerk xD and mayuki's relationship seems to improve a lot :)
And what is jun's relationship with rena?
im a new reader by the way ;D

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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
« Reply #43 on: February 10, 2013, 07:02:12 AM »
awww is mayu falling for yuki-boy :wub: ???
I hope so. cause I love Mayuki
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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
« Reply #44 on: February 10, 2013, 08:00:44 AM »
 what happen between jun and rena? Looks like they are in relationship in the past,
Will rena get jealous when she know jun is mayu's boyfriends?

Yuki please dont leave,you have mayuyu~ she need you LOL

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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
« Reply #45 on: February 28, 2013, 11:08:16 AM »
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!! OVER AWESOME!

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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
« Reply #46 on: April 03, 2013, 08:33:05 AM »
                                          My boyfriend and my fiancé
                                                                CH.5

~The next day~

On his bed Kashiwagi Yuki stretched his body before get up "Somehow everything seems different the air seems fresher.." he shook his head "for the stupid statement his mind was able to make" he walked to the bathroom.

Once inside of it he looked at himself on the mirror "Nothing has changed still the ikemen look" he says as he watches his face in look for some more manly features like beard suddenly the memory of Mayu kissing his cheek hit him, he smiled for a second "What am doing? *slaps himself* what now do you wanna wear a dress or some make up? when do you became a teenage girl?" he asked to himself

~Meanwhile~

The Watanabe family preparing breakfast, Mayu woke up earlier so she was helping her mother with the breakfast while her dad waits sitting and reading the newspaper

Mayu was setting the table and was she was about to put the fourth glass of juice in it's place something came to her mind "A memory of the first moment she saw Yuki and when she thought he was really handsome.." Mayu smiled as she thinks about it

~Flashback~  a few weeks ago

On the same train..

Many girls were commenting in the train about something but Mayu was careless so she wasn't paying attention

"He is so handsome!" A girl says and takes a picture of him without him to noticed
Mayu looked at the guy that was causing this (He was sleeping with his head aginst the glass) "Now i see, he's really handsome" she thought staring at him

The handsome boy opened his eyes then looked at the girls that were looking at him and gave them a cold stare

Mayu looked other way embarrassed while the other were excited because he was cold

"So cool!" Another girl says

"I'm going to ask him his phone number!" Another girl says confident

He fast got up and even thought the train was full, he was able to push everyone and even Mayu out his way

"Ouch You idiot!" Mayu says in a Nezumi way then turns her head and looked at the guy's back

The guy also turned his head and for a second they shared eye contact till the train's door closed then he walked away

~End of the flash back~

Yuki walked downstairs and the first thing he saw was Mayu wearing an apron and looking amazing with the sun light as she sets the last thing on the table

"Good Morning Yuki kun!" Mayu's mom says smiling as she sits ready to eat

Yuki was still on a daze till Mayu tucked her hair behind her ear and sat also

"Something had change.. she's gotten pretty!" Yuki thought still in trance

"Why you don't sit?" Mayu's dad asked offering the empty seat next to him

Yuki blinked a few times then sat

Everyone started eating, it was awkward he didn't want to look at Mayu and Mayu felt the same way so both ate quietly

"So Yuki i guess you been able to become closer to Mayu chan!" Mayu's dad says with a smile as he pats lightly Yuki's back and winks at Mayu

Mayu looked other way while Yuki almost chokes and took a glass of juice fast

Mayu's mom smiled "I'm happy!" she says making both teens to get red

~Meanwhile~

At the train station..

Maeda Atsuko a not popular girl or how her classmates call her "Who?" was waiting for her train

"Another day.." Atsuko says lazily as she waits

"Oh what a causality, Hello Maeda san!" A handsome blond guy a few inches taller than her says

"Eh.." Atsuko let out as she watches the boy next to her "Are you talking to me?" she asked as she looks around

The blond guy smiled "Maybe you don't know me, i'm Kai we go to the same school and classroom!" he says still with a smile

Atsuko was shocked "How.. could..could i not know you,?you're the star of the football team loved by everyone!" she says looking down

Kai scratches the back of his head "No, i'm not.. i'm just an average player!" he says smiling

The train stopped in front of them Kai moved fast and when she noticed he wasn't next to her anymore, Atsuko looked at the million people inside the train

"Well i guess i wouldn't last forever.." She says as she adjust in the middle with all those people inside the train

"Maeda san were are you?" A voice asked

Atsuko looked around then moved from her spot and found Kai sitting

"There you are.. here!" Kai says smiling as a gentleman then gets up and offers his seat to Atsuko

"Why? why you're being so nice to me?" Atsuko thought before sitting

Kai stood beside her "Sorry for leaving alone for a moment Maeda san!" he says

"It's.. it's okay by the way you can call me Acchan!" She says with a smile then her smiled faded away "Why you're being so nice to me?" she asked serious

Kai looked other way then something came to his mind "Well i heard you were good at maths, so i wanted you to teach me maths.. could you do that Acchan please?" he asked

Acchan looked down first not trusting but something inside wants to be accepted by him and even become friends "I think i can do that.." she answered

"Yay! high five!" Kai says with a smile

~Meanwhile~ already at school, even though is early

Matsui sensei was already at the teacher's room reading some papers..

Somebody else entered to the room, Matsui sensei turned her head then sighed "What are you doing here Jun?" she asked as she gets up

"Why you don't treat me like before?" Jun asked feeling down

"Jun, you're a kid and i'm really sorry if i made you think that i was interest in you romantically so please if you still have those kind of feelings stay away from me i don't want more troubles!" Matsui sensei says as she was about to walk out but Jun grabbed her by her arm and made her turn around

Jun looked at her "I have a girlfriend, i..just miss you as a friend Rena" he says then let go her arm and leaves first

Rena sitted again then smiled

~Meanwhile~

As always walking to school they never walk next to each other, Mayu is always a few steps ahead while Yuki follows her 

"Why i never walk next to her? am i her dog?" He wondered as he looks at Mayu's back after a second "Now i see why i walk behind her.." he thought then smirked and kept admiring Mayu's best feature [her butt]

Mayu for some reason feels even more awkward she tried to look back with the corner of her eye but it was impossible Yuki was too far to see what he was doing and Mayu is so proud to turn and look at him so she kept walking ignoring him

[Yuki was grinning like a pervert]

They got to school and as always all the eye were on them people can't believe they're engage..

Jun also entered to the classroom with his friends then sat next to Mayu and kissed her on her cheek

Yuki was sitting behind so he had a "good view of it"

"You know i'm so sorry about yesterday, i know you're a rough time i'm here to support you!" Jun says as he grabs Mayu's hand

All the girls were looking at the scene and said "AWWWW"

Yuki sighed and felt so disgusted by that scene that he switched his spot, he went to the back

Kai and Atsuko entered to the classroom together, Kai winked at Tomochin who just smirked

Kuu and Riku looked at their friend and fast Kuu sent a message to Kai via mail

[Dude i know you're desperate for love but.. who the hell is she'?]

Soon the teacher entered to the classroom and everyone stood quiet, the morning passed fast

~Lunch time~

In the hall..

"Kashiwagi san wait!" Matsui sensei says

Yuki turned around "what's wrong?" he asked coldly

"So you might be now 23..what are you doing in highschool?" Rena says with a smirk

Yuki gave a step back "Do you remember?" he asked shocked

"Well you don't have a face easy to forget even though your hair is longer and you're taller, what was your name?" Rena says with her finger on her chin

"Shun" Both answer at the same time then laugh like crazy

Jun came out of the bathroom and looked at them laughing together like closer friends "WTF?" he thought

What Jun would do? TO BE CONTINUED!!

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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
« Reply #47 on: April 03, 2013, 12:17:26 PM »
So, Yuki and Rena knew each other? More drama ahead! What would Mayu and Jun do if they know about it...hehe...
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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
« Reply #48 on: April 03, 2013, 03:09:21 PM »
Ehhhhhhhhhh??~ yuki and rena knew each other? and wat the hell ... Shun????!!!
Lol im overreacting here anyways i know kai just started but somehow i want the opposite thing to happen.
instead of acchan falling for him, why not make him fall for her for real instead hahahah xD
Thanks for the update :D

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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
« Reply #49 on: April 04, 2013, 03:20:02 AM »
Hahaha... Mayu's parents like to tease them

Kai is making a move to Atsuko and using Math as a reason to get closed

Ah... Atsuko be careful you are going to be played.

But I hope over time Kai would like Atsuko for real not as a deal with Tomochin

Can't wait to see how they develop

Eh... Yuki is Shun and 23 years old.... wah... so old... it would be like pedophile if Yuki and Mayu get together
 
And Yuki and Rena knew each other?

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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
« Reply #50 on: April 04, 2013, 07:36:05 AM »
Hi! :D

You finally update!

I really like it!  :w00t:

I am a bit curious about Yuki, Jurina and Rena :D

Please Update Soon!

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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
« Reply #51 on: April 04, 2013, 03:07:29 PM »
Yuki is 23 :stoned: That kinda shocked!
So Rena and Yuki knew each other :kekeke:
And who the hell is Shun? :temper:
I guess next chapter will very interesting :hehehe:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
« Reply #52 on: April 05, 2013, 05:04:35 PM »
Waah! He is 23!! Rena know him :shocked

Yuki start to like Mayu :wub: Yeah!!

He is a little tab pervert... XD
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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
« Reply #53 on: April 06, 2013, 08:21:31 AM »
LOOKS LIKE RENA HAVE AN INTEREST ON YUKI
YABAIIII YUKI IS MAYU'S
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN IF RENA KNOW YUKI IS ALREADY ENGAGED WITH MAYU,AND SHE KNOW THAT MAYU ALSO JUN GIRLFRIEND!

I BELIEVE EVEN YUKI HAVE AN INTEREST IN RENA,HE LOVE MAYU MORE
AND JUN,WELL HE LOVE MAYU OF COURSE,BUT IT JUST BECAUSE HE COULD NOT HAVE RENA FOR HIM,POOR JUN

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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
« Reply #54 on: May 31, 2013, 04:21:37 AM »
STILL ME KAAKAKKAKAKAKKAKA AGATA LAUGH STYLE (IF YOU READ SKET DANCE ANIME OR MANGA ITS FUNNY)
LIKE I SAID,ITS GOOD ONE TOO

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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
« Reply #55 on: May 31, 2013, 11:18:58 AM »
cmze-san

Update please

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
« Reply #56 on: May 31, 2013, 01:19:13 PM »
author-san! Please Update soon I can't wait ^~^

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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.6
« Reply #57 on: June 03, 2013, 04:32:32 AM »
                                          My boyfriend and my fiancé
                                                                CH.6

~The same day~

"I can't believe you still remember that!" Yuki says smiling.

Rena smiled also "Fake name, fake age.. What were you hiding?" She asked still with a smile.

Yuki put his hand on the back of his head "Well I was sad and needed a drink, fake name and age." He says looking other way sad.

"Jun.." Rena says looking at Jun coming out of the bathroom.

Jun ignore the too and walked away but not before pushing Yuki out of his way with his shoulder.

"He's crazy!" Yuki says while looks at him walking away.

"I have plenty to do, see you around!" Rena says with a smile then also walked to the teacher's room.

~Meanwhile~

Acchan was eating alone in the terrace but she couldn't to think about certain blond guy "Do you really wanna be friend!?" She whispers.

"Of course I do!" Someone replies.

Acchan turned her head and there he was, showing her his best smile "Can I sit next to you?" He asked still with a smile.

Acchan blushed and didn't hesitate to offer him a space next to her "sure!" She says a little nervous.

Kai sits next to her "You know, you don't seem like anybody else...Why you don't hang out with somebody else?? I mean I never have seen you talking with somebody else, do you like loneliness?" He asked curious.

Acchan looked down "It's not like I chose to be lonely but I'm too shy!" She says still with her head down.

Kai smiles "Well I guess in return for helping me with maths I can teach you how not to be shy!" He says still with a smile plastered on his face then put his finger on Acchan's chin and made her look at him.

(Acchan blushed)

"Since we're friends is the right thing to do!" Kai says with a charming smile.

Both had eye contact for a few seconds but they were interrupted by Kai' s cellphone.

[A text message from Tomochin]

"I'm sorry I have to go!" He says as he gets up "We'll eat next time!" He says with a
smile then runs away.

Acchan was totally on a daze but then smiled.

~Meanwhile~

Mayu was watching everyone from the window..

"If you're the type of person who likes to look into someone else life then we should end our engagement!" Yuki says with a smile as he gets closer.

Mayu looked at him and gave a cold stare.

"I'm sorry, I was kidding!" Yuki says with a smile while Mayu redirect her look on the window.

"You know your boyfriend is such a.. in the.. " Yuki says standing next to her "what are you looking at?" He asks then sees Matsui sensei talking with Jun.

Mayu kept looking not showing any expression.

"They're just talking..she's nice!" Yuki says still looking at the two.

[The bell rang indicating that should get back to their classroom]

"I'm going to the bathroom!" Yuki says.

Once in the bathroom two friends of Jun entered and grabbed Yuki while he was washing his face.

"What the hell? Let me go!" Yuki says mad while one was holding him from the back and the other was in front of him smiling.

"Jun want you to meet him!" The one smiling says then punches Yuki on his stomach and put a paper on his pocket.

The two guys walked away and Yuki was catching his breath "damn it!" He says mad then gets up and walks to his classroom.

[The rest of the day in the school passed fast but Mayu couldn't help to steal a glance at Yuki, he was acting weird and he was holding a paper on his hand]

~The bell rang again~

"Friday!" A guy shouts happy.

Everyone was happy too cause it was Friday..

Yuki stands next to Mayu "I'm going somewhere else!" He says then walks away.

"Mayu I'll pass near your house at 6:00 pm" Jun says then kisses Mayu's cheek and went out with his friends.

Mayu only looked at him then decided to follow but some girls got on her way.

"You're so lucky Mayu chan, Jun is strong and manly while Yuki is totally gorgeous!" The fist one says happy.

"So romantic two man fighting for you!" The other one says also happy and in love.

Mayu pouted.

~At the back of the school~

"Wow you man up and decided to come!" Jun says with a smile.

Yuki looked other way "What do you want?" He asked in a light mood.

Jun smirks "Kashiwagi you're really annoying, actually I don't really stand you or like you so you better leave my school!" He says changing his mood to a serious one.

Yuki laughs "You're school? Somebody has a big ego here!" He says mocking.

Jun' s friends looked at him "I'm tired of you Kashiwagi!" He shouted then run to him and jumped on him.

The two were rolling and punching each other while Jun' s friends looked at them.
Yuki kicked Jun off him then got up fast "You're just a spoiled kid!" He says serious.

Jun got up and two guys started punching each other for Yuki's bad luck he didn't' know Jun was really good at fighting.

So he end up on the floor.

"Now say it.. You're leaving this school for good!" Jun says stepping on Yuki's stomach

"AHHHH" he shouted.

"SAY IT!" Jun shouts.

"You're insane!" Yuki says with a smile.

Jun got madder then kicked him on his stomach while he was trying to get up. "First Mayu now Rena.. I WON'T FORGIVE YOU!" He shouts ready to punch Yuki on his face.

"NOOOOOOO!" Mayu shouts and gets in the way so Jun end up hitting Mayu on her face instead.

"Mayu!" Yuki says shocked and grabbed Mayu before she fall on the ground.

"Mayu!" Jun says worried.

Mayu fainted and now was on Yuki's arm who was totally shocked because she spoke and took that punch for him.

"What the hell?" Jun' s friends wondered while Jun stood there without saying a word just looking at the unconscious Mayu.

"Why did she do that?" Jun thought confused.

~At Mayu's home~ In Mayu's room~

That scene was replaying on Yuki's head "Nobody ever had done such thing for me.. could it be.." he thought as he gets closer and puts ice on Mayu's swollen cheek.

Mayu moved and opened her eyes. The first thing she saw was Yuki's worried' s face.

Both looked into each other's eyes for a moment till eventually Yuki broke the silence "What did you do that? That was stupid, I could take that punch!" He says irritated.

Mayu blushed "I guess I don't want you to get hurt anymore!" She says looking other way.

Yuki sighed "You can't be this good.."he thought "Thanks" he says a little red.

Mayu smiled a little cause she notice the redness on Yuki's face.

[Somehow the vibe changed into romantic one]

"Look at your face, you look awful!" He says then gets up "You deal with your face!" He says coldly breaking the vibe.

"You're an idiot!" Mayu says pouting.

Yuki was about to get out of the room but stopped at the door "Mayuyu it's nice to hear your voice again!" He says not turning his head then walked to his room.

Mayu smiled.

TO BE CONTINUED!! Thanks, I hate allergies too but my fight with the dust always wins the dust no matter how much vitamin c I take :/

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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.6
« Reply #58 on: June 03, 2013, 04:40:04 AM »
yes its me!!! i will edit after read it LOL


Jun...ah im pity him.....mayu is his girlfriend,but mayu protect yuki from him....love is hurt :knee: :knee: :knee: :knee: :knee: :kickass: :kickass: :kickass: :kickass: :kickass:



wonder what is the relationship between rena and jun in the past....is jun got reject by rena...poor him ...love is hurt :knee: :knee: :knee: :knee: :knee: :knee: :knee:




thank for the update cmze-san..... :germany: :germany: :germany: :germany: :germany: :germany:


P.S: cmze-san i need lovey dovey mayuki...its hurtful these day read a painful mayuki....ahhhhh LOL
« Last Edit: June 03, 2013, 06:31:32 AM by kurogumi »
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.6
« Reply #59 on: June 03, 2013, 11:54:10 AM »
YEAAYYY MAYUKI!!  :farofflook:

Still surprised seeing Mayu took Jun's punch...... cant believe she cant turns that bold.

Kinda curious about wmatsui's past

BUT STILL ITS GREAT TO SEE MAYUKI MOMENT HERE!!!  :hiakhiakhiak:

Please please I WANT ANOTHER MAYUKI SCENE ON NEXT CHAPTER    :shy2:

Oh please no more long wait for the next update  :pleeease:

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