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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 4 finally
« Reply #40 on: September 08, 2013, 10:20:30 PM »
Zannen shoujo chapter 5. Sorry everyone, I forgot about this because of… let’s just say not very good things :sweatdrop: but thank you so much for reading this and for all your lovely comments!!  :deco:

“Moving in… complete!” Mayu cheered, “well, there’s still a lot of of unpacking to do, but… I’m really back…” she continued, as she gazed at her spacious new room.

“To the place where Yuki-san and everyone else is.” Another nostalgic look, formed on the cyborg’s face as she picked up a photo of her, Yuki and everyone else.

“I want to stay with you, Mayu!!” Mayu remembered how Yuki suddenly confessed, but as soon as she remembered, she gave a goofy smile while not noticing her cheeks were turning red.

Mayu held the photo close to her chest and started moaning in embarrassment, even though she started rolling on the floor like a kid,

*Bang!*

Boxes fell burying her in the process.
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Shutting her eyes, Mayu drew in a deep breath before exhaling all of the oxygen she had at this moment taken in out of her mouth.

Yuki, who was beside her, gave Mayu a reassuring squeeze on her shoulder, “don’t worry, I won’t let anything happen to you anymore”, Yuki flashed a calming, gentle glance.

“un…” Mayu nodded,

Entering the classroom, Mayu greeted everyone and bowed.

“heh?” Whispers of confusion could be heard,

“Mayu…” Yuki looked at her with a worried expression,

“I’m f-fine Yuki.” Mayu turned to Yuki trying to cheer the taller girl up.

“Morning, Mayu-san.” Sae welcomed,

“Miyazawa-san… ohayou.”

“what’s your problem?!”  Sae turned round, as silence fell into the room,

“well, until just the other day, you two were… right?” Girl no.1 spoke up,

“Yeah. It’s kinda of grossing me out.” Girl no.2 agreed, giving a creeped out look to Sae.

“G-grossing you out?” Sae said taken aback, anger started building inside Sae, making steam come out through her ears.

“Shut up! Sae isn’t like that, or do you want me to shut your mouths for you!” Yuki yelled, surprising her classmates.

Sae’s pov.

“sigh, why do you have be so cool and senseless at the same time, baka” Sae formed a small smile.

Sae leaned over to Mayu, “ne Mayu-san, you’re in the ESP Society, are you?”, Sae asked.

At the clubroom...

“why are you here?!”

*sign* “ESP Research Society.”

“that’s some greeting. Your club just got a new member.” Sae furrowed her eyebrows, “you should be welcoming me.”

“yoroshiku ne.” Mayu responded,

“Glad to be here.” Sae turned and smiled at Mayu,

“tsk…” Yuki frowned, facing the opposite way,

“ahaha, so many new recruits this year!” Jurina beamed, cupping her face with her hands.

“we’re welcoming Jurina’s new toy… I mean, the new member.” Rena said, while chewing on melon pan.

“grrrrrrrrrrrrrr……” Yuki kept growling and grunting to herself, “Mayu has to sit next to me!” Yuki grabbed and pulled Mayu’s chair towards her side. “so go away. shoo, shoo.” Yuki gestured her hand in upward and down movement.

“This has nothing to do with you, I just want to be with Mayu, plus I don’t see your name tattooed on her.” Sae argued back, pulling Mayu’s chair next to her now, Mayu sat there with a puzzling look. 

“grrrr……” Yuki started growling again,

“kekekeke” Sae started chuckling.

Mayu looked at Sae, “but really, you also want to be with Yuki-”, “no! Don’t!” Sae covered Mayu’s mouth instantly, but pushed Mayu down in the process, causing herself and Mayu to fall their chairs, with Sae on top of Mayu.

“itai…” Mayu winced in pain,

“grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr………” Yuki made jaw clenching noises as her rage started to fill up Yuki’s entire body.

“don’t touch my Mayuyu!!” Yuki grabbed Mayu, holding her so tight, she might break.

“Y-yuki-san! I can’t breathe!” Mayu started squirming, but Yuki kept a firm grasp on the poor helpless cyborg.

“quite an odd power relationship we’ve got here.” Rena pictured a love triangle in her mind.

“more importantly!” Jurina interrupted, “so, newbie, what kind of ability do you have?”, turning to Sae.

“eh? I don’t really have any psychic abilities like Mayu-san…”,

“You don’t have any?” Jurina gave scary look, while Sae started to sweatdrop, “n-no… I have one that’s even more surprising!” Sae stuttered.

“well, that’s wonderful!” Jurina turned back into beaming person, “then, let’s see straight away!”,

“HUH?!” Sae started becoming even more nervous.

“ne, ne. What’s your surprising ability? I wanna see!” Mayu said excitedly,

Yuki’s pov.

“Sae’s in a pinch. Kekekekekeke, who’s laughing now?” Yuki smirked.

“Mayu-san as well?!” Sae said feeling betrayed,

“w-well, I can move things from a distance without touching them.” Sae awkwardly explained,

“heh?!” Jurina, Yuki and Mayu stared at Sae with dumbfounded looks.

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*several lit candles are standing on a table, with Sae a few meters distanced from it*

“huwa! huh!” Sae punched swiftly, trying to blow out the candles with her punch. Sae failed and started getting flustered, feeling the strong glaring stares behind her.

Taking a deep breath, Sae formed a fighting stance again, “genking punch!!!!!!!!!”

*air currents instantly blew cut through, blowing out all the candles*

“oh!!!!!!” Wmatsui clapped, while Mayuki stood there gobsmacked.

“not bad! I never imagined you had the power of psychokinesis! (meaning mind movement).” Jurina complemented.

“this is what I can do when I put my mind to it.” Sae said shyly and embarrassed.

“looks like another psychic is born!” Jurina cheered, “I’m expecting great things from you, Sae-san!”

“hahahaha!!!!!!” Sae chuckled nervously, “b-bring it on!”,

“don’t pick on the newbie, Jurina.” Rena said,

“Miyazawa-san sugoi!” Mayu congratulated Sae,

“I didn’t know you could do anything that amazing, Sae.” Yuki said, with a surprised tone.

“of course I ca-.. WAIT! What do you mean by that?! And what’s with the surprised tone, huh?!” Sae said really irritated at Yuki,

“nothing really…” Yuki avoided Sae’s penetrating gaze.

“a psychic, a pervert, and a martial artist. Looks like the ESP Society is in good hands.” Jurina smiled happily,

“pervert? You don’t mean me, do you?” Yuki asked with a ‘wait? what? you mean me look’.

“who else would it be?” Sae, Mayu and Rena replied,

“ehhhhhhhhhh?!!!!!!!!!! No way!!!!!!!!!!” Yuki pulled out her famous reaction and wanted to cry,

“and what awesome ability do you have, president Jurina?” Sae glared at Jurina, “I still haven’t heard.” Sae stated annoyed.

“my ability?” Jurina just smiled, “hehe, you don’t get it. You don’t get it, ne?” Jurina glared back intensely.

Sae sweatdropped again, “the club president is like a general. Does a general fight directly or use abilities? No! A general’s job is to give competent orders!” Jurina responded,

“so, in other words you don’t have one.” Sae said still sweat dropping,

“it’s not I don’t. I just don’t need one.” Jurina just smiled again.

“on that note we’re going to have a belated party for our new member. At Mayu-chan’s place.”

“hai! W-wait! Why my place?” Mayu protested,

“because you live on your own. We can have a group without worrying about bothering anyone, right?” Jurina specified,

“that is true, but… I haven’t had time to clean up…” Mayu explained her situation.

“that’s fine! You’ve been so busy trying to clean you haven’t done the laundry, so there’s underwear strewn all over the room, right?” Jurina smirked,

“I-I’ve at least done my laundry! How can you ask say that with such a relaxed expression?” Mayu said cross, while next to her, someone’s fantasising about Mayu only in her underwear or maybe none, “heh? Stop thinking like that?!” Mayu kept hitting Yuki,

“sigh, okay, then, We’ll visit Mayu’s chan place some other time.” Jurina gave up.

“ehhh?!!! Yada yo!! I want to go to Mayuyu’s house!” Yuki started throwing a tantrum,

“can you get anymore childish?” Rena shook her head,

“we’ll give you time to prepare, don’t worry Mayu-chan.” Jurina said with sparkles in her eyes.

“really?” Mayu asked with disbelief,

 “do these looks like the eyes of a liars?”. Jurina pulled out her puppy face.

“I guess we could let Mayu prepare.” Yuki also had sparkles in her eyes, “she’s right Mayu. Friendship starts with trust.”

Mayu got up from her seat, making her way towards the exit leaving the others behind, “damn! She read my mind!” Yuki cursed,

“Yuki-kun, capture Mayu-chan before she holes up her room again!” Jurina ordered,

“Hai!” Yuki ran after Mayu.

“Sae-san and I will go shopping.” Jurina and Sae nodded in agreement, “Rena-chan, you go rent some movies about psychics. Tomorrow is Saturday, so we’re gonna party all night!”,

“Leave the selection to me.” Rena grinned evilly,

“N-now that’s giving competent orders…” Sae stuttered.

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“ooohhhhh!” Everyone said in union,

“this is a pretty nice apartment!” Jurina said as she gaped at the room,

“please try not to mess with my stuff…” Mayu continued.

“I know, I know. Okay everyone disperse!” Jurina, Rena and Sae went explore Mayu’s room,

“I just told them not to…” Mayu winged,

“ne, isn’t this room smaller than your last one?” Yuki asked.

“un, my grandfather took care of the last one, and it was too big, so I got a reasonably sized one this time.”

“is that so, so you chose this place by yourself?” Yuki said impressed,

“also… this one is closer to your house.” Mayu mumbled in a soft voice, but clear enough for Yuki hear, “I-I wanted to try being a little closer…”, Mayu who was looking down, just notice Yuki transported to the far side of the room.

“w-what’s wrong? Why you all the way over there?” Mayu questioned worriedly,

“you shouldn’t say things that will stimulate my fantasies like that…” Yuki blushed,

“I can’t find the porn mags.” Sae interrupted.

“I don’t have any those!” Mayu yelled infuriated,

“Mayu-chan…” Jurina’s eyes were tearing, “I guess all the nutrients meant for your chest went to your psychic ability instead…”,

“what the hell did you look at?!” Mayu started getting red.

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Mayu, Jurina, Rena and Sae were cooking in kitchen, meanwhile Yuki was bored out of her mind.

“anything I can do to help?” Yuki offered,

“we’re doing fine. So, just hang tight, ok?” Mayu said while frying tempura,

“o-okay” Yuki stepped back,

*Yuki’s fantasy of Mayu in an apron*

Mayu: “welcome home, Yuki-chan.”
         
          “shall I wear my apron with my school swimsuit today?”

          “or maybe the apron and bloomers?”

          “or perhaps… only the apron?”

“you’re in the way, pervert.” Mayu stood there giving Yuki evils,

“I can’t help it! There’s nothing to do and you won’t let me help!” Yuki screamed.

“sheesh… okay, then, would you taste this?” Mayu help out a tempura,

“really?!” Yuki said excited,

‘no pretending to be newlyweds.” Jurina cringed,

“ahhh…” Yuki opened her mouth,

*munch*

“heh?!” Yuki cried,

“not bad, but I think the oil might need to be a little hotter” Rena suggested,

“hauuu” Mayuki sulked,

“Yuki-san.”

“Taste mine too!” Sae proposed, “say ahhh…” Sae held out something black and had a guey, purpley colour mixed with green, sauce on it.

“w-what is that?” Yuki asked with a horrified expression.

“it’s food, baka. What else would it be?” Sae felt offended,

“it looks like poison to me.” Jurina commented.

“ehhh?!!!” Sae said shocked.

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“okay, let’s toast to Mayu-chan’s return and our new member!” Jurina raised her glass,

“gampai!” everyone joined,

“now, let’s party!” Jurina fist pumped,

“ittadakimasu!” Yuki picked up her chopsticks, “whoa! President, you’re an awesome cook!” Yuki chewed happily.

“cooking is one of Jurina’s few good points.” Rena stated,

“hey! What does that mean?!” Jurina scowled,

“blech! What is ‘specimen X’ here?” Yuki looked at the black stuff, with disgust.

“you saw it earlier! It’s hamburger steak!” Sae protested.

“Yuki-san, please try this.” Mayu offered a bowl of veg and meat stir fry,

“did you make this, Mayu?”

“y-yeah.” Mayu blushed.

“then, you bet I will.” Yuki plopped the food in her mouth, “It’s so tasty! Right up there with the president’s!”,

“thank goodness” Mayu said with relief.

“hmph! Let me try!” Sae also ate some, “hmmm…… oishii!” Sae said with a ‘hauuu this is so good’ but depressed look.

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*watching psychic films*

TV: “let’s start by having you bend a spoon.”

*a man is is rubbing a spoon while looking constipated, while the guy next to him is having like a meltdown, and also looking constipated, the guy having a meltdown screams in agony, in front of him a tomato explodes, so you can guess what happened to his head, people scream*

Mayu had a terrified look on her face and closes her eyes out of fear, when she opens them she finds Yuki next to her, trying to kiss and hug her, “president I’m scared!” Mayu goes and hugs Jurina instead.

“no way!...” Yuki says upset,

“Yuki-san I’m scared!” Sae tries to cuddle Yuki,

“save the jokes for your cooking.” Yuki pushes Sae away.

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After the films…

Sae notices an old picture of Jurina, Rena, Yuki and Mayu.

“why don’t we take a new one?” Jurina said holding a camera,

“okay, say cheese!” *everyone poses* “cheese!”,

*everyone slept round Mayu’s, Mayu on the edge of the bed, Jurina in the middle and Sae on the side next to the wall, meanwhile the raven haired girls are on the floor, Yuki next to the bed and Rena on the opposite side*

“umm…” Jurina woke up, getting a drink out the fridge,

*Mayu rolls of the bed*

“hmm?” Jurina stared at Mayu sleeping next to Yuki now,

“well, well…”

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Morning comes…

(Yuki rolled off in her sleep, so she drifted from Mayu)

“umm.. ah…*yawn*” Mayu rubs her tiresome eyes,

“ohayou, Mayu-chan.” Jurina walks in,

“president?… ohayou..” Mayu says still tired.

“looks like you’re still sleepy. But seeing this will wake you up in no time.” Jurina pulls out her phone,

*picture of Mayuki sleeping together, and Mayu is snuggled, hugging Yuki*

Mayu blinks, still trying grasp the situation, “hmm…”. “wh-what is that?!”, Mayu burst into shock,

“please,  delete it!” Mayu shakes Jurina, who looks pretty satisfied with her achievement.

“ohoho, what should I do…” Jurina laughs,

“let me sleep a little longer mum…” Yuki mumbles, Jurina puts her phone in Yuki’s face, Yuki opens her eyes.

“please, send that to me so I can make a poster!!” Yuki suddenly gets up,

“a poster?!” Mayu shouts,

“naa, on second thought, I think I will delete it.” Jurina presses a button,

“noooooooooo!!!!!!!!” Yuki screams with sadness and cries,

“don’t worry, I sent it to you before I deleted it.” Jurina whispers in Mayu’s ear, Mayu blushes.

“hora, Sae-san. Wake up! It’s morning!” Jurina claps her hands,

Mayu looks at the picture on her phone, smiling.

“bye bye, Mayu-chan!” Jurina waves,

“thanks for having us over.” Rena said appreciatively.

“see you at school tomorrow.” Sae says,

“un, see you tomorrow.” Mayu waves and closes the door.

Suddenly the doorbell rings…

“hai! coming!” Mayu opens the door,

“huh? Yuki-san?”

“sorry, I forgot something.” Yuki told Mayu,

“forgot something?” Mayu asked,

“here. A housewarming gift.” Yuki holds out a present.

“Yuki-san… you didn’t have to-” Mayu opened the gift,

“what is this?”

“it’s an alpaca themed toilet paper, you like alpacas don’t you? I asked Jurina what to get and she said get something practical, so I found this and had to get it.” Yuki said proudly,

“um… ok.. thanks, I guess” Mayu stared at her weird gift,

“you don’t like it?” Yuki pulled a sad face,

“n-no, I do like it. T-thank you very much Yuki-san.” Mayu said guilty,

“well that’s a relief, phew! Well I better be going now Mayuyu, *plants a kiss on Mayu’s cheek*.”

“hehe I stole a kiss of Mayuyu!” Yuki yelled in joy, skipping away with glee.

“sigh… Bakarin.” Mayu smiled.

Fin  :peace:
« Last Edit: September 08, 2013, 11:04:58 PM by mayuki_daisuki »
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Offline Shinoki

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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 5 08-09-2013
« Reply #41 on: September 08, 2013, 10:28:36 PM »
Yay!!!! Updato!
Lol... Yukirin Pervert...

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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 5 08-09-2013
« Reply #42 on: September 09, 2013, 12:09:28 AM »
It's not only you... I also forgot about this story...

Well great long update you had there...

So good and interesting

Yuki was so cute and sneaky...

Like it... Thank you for the update

Can't wait to see the next

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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 5 08-09-2013
« Reply #43 on: September 09, 2013, 05:06:57 AM »
An update... :bow:

Yuko is so possesive to Mayu..  :lol:

But i like it..

Can't wait for the next chapter...

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