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Mayuki fanfic, hope you like it inspired by the anime Kotoura-san (basically copying the storyline,oh well) sorry can’t think of anything, hope you guys like it, enjoy!! :)

Plot.

Mayu Watanabe is a 16 years old girl who is born with the ability to read people's minds. She has been suffering from troubles caused by her mind-reading ability and enrolls into a new high school, but tries to keep away from her classmates. Yuki kashiwagi one of her calssmates (and popular) accepts and appreciates her ability and she begins to interact with her friends with his help.

Prolouge.

As I walk, treading slowly through the cold, blank snow.
There is a dark shadow of uneasiness following me...
I know what people think of me, what they see me as.
A creepy girl, who says strange things,
I was a child who didn’t suspect anything.
But I am a zannen shoujo.

My name is Mayu Watanabe,
not that I matter...

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16 years ago...

There in a small, but noisy room, a child was born.
Smiling down upon her crying newborn, a mother gently presses her cheek against the baby’s soft skin, smiling contently with happiness, and the father sitting on the edge of the bed watching the small, fragile being, who’s crying drowns out the silence.

A couple of years later...

Peeking through a white door, there the mum sees her little beloved and walks in soundly.
“Mayu-chan..wake up..it’s time for breakfast” the mum says while trying to wake up her daughter, by nudging her shoulder.

There a sleepy Mayu wakes up, blinking a few times, rubbing her tiresome little eyes.
“mama...”
“ohayou Mayu-chan” her mum smiles.
“let’s go downstairs and find out what we’re having for breakfast shall we?”
“ahh..we’re having sweet omelette yatta!!” Mayu says happily and excited.
“heh?...well yes I guess we are” Mayu’s mum confused at first but decides to ignore it and pick up her daughter to bring her downstairs for breakfast.

At kindergarden class...

“jan-ken-pon!!” Mayu and her opponent shouts.
“yay!! I won!! Which means your it Renko-chan” Mayu celebrates.
“no fair!! Me and the others are always it...” Renko pouts.
“it’s fair Renko-chan, cuz it’s jan-ken-pon” Mayu exclaims.
“hoh...your quite good at this game aren’t you Mayu-chan, how about playing against me” Sensei challenges Mayu.
“jan-ken-pon!!” both shout.
“ehhh!! I lost” Sensei sighs,
“that was lame Sensei” one of Mayu’s classmates interupts.
“it’s easy, cuz all of you say what your going to do” Mayu tells them.
The teacher and the students suddenly are puzzled.

In elementary school...

“hey do you have anybody you like?” a girl asks.
“no of course not” another girl answers.
“boys are so immature, right Mayu-chan?” the third girl asks.
“why are you all lying?, Yuna-chan likes Izumi-kun, Naoki-chan likes Takano-kun...and...Susumu-chan also likes Izumi-kun” Mayu replies.
“wait you like Izumi-kun too?!” Yuna acuses Susumu.
“no I don’t” Susumu says panicking.
“yes you do...you liked Izumi-kun ever since he helped you when you fell down” Mayu continues.
Everybody in the room crowds round.
“yokata ne Naoki-chan, Takano-kun likes you too”
“ehh!..no I don’t...I don’t like her!!” the boy shouts.
Making Naoki cry,
“...Naoki-chan” Takano says feeling guilty.
“your so mean Mayu, you made Naoki-chan cry. From now on were not friends anymore!!” one of the girl says, heading back to her seat.
Everyone goes back to their seats.
“but...miina...” Mayu mumbles.

After school, at the Watanabe household...

“complaints from parents, children and teachers...Mayu keeps lying and hurting those around her” Mayu’s mum reads a letter.
Mayu is standing in front of her mother, quietly sobbing until finally bursting into tears.
“wahh!!...everyone hates me, they say I’m a creepy girl, who says strange things..wahh!!”
Mayu’s mum standing there started by the sudden noise coming from the little girl, until...
“ring...ring...hello? dear!! it’s me, we need to talk about Mayu!” Mayu’s mum picks up her phone.
“I told you I’ll leave her for you to handle, as that’s what the wife is expected to do..oh and I won’t be coming home for dinner, I’m gonna be late at work” Mayu’s dad hungs up.
“dear!!..dear!!” Mayu’s mum shouts at her phone.

A few days later Mayu’s mum takes Mayu to several clinics and hospitals, but they either say Mayu is perfectly normal or they have been kicked out.

Next Mayu’s mum goes to a shrine, dragging Mayu along with her.
“please help me! my child is being possessed by something!!” Mayu’s mum begs.
“I’m sorry, I’m nothing more than a simple Priest...” the old man appoligises.

Back at home...

Mayu’s mum is out in the balcony drinking some kind of alcohol beverage,
“why is only my child like this...*sip* *sip*”
Then turns her head, finding her daughter staring at her.
“don’t worry mama, papa will come home tomarrow...”
“shut up!! who’s fault do you think it is!!” Mayu’s mum shouting and threwing her glass aiming at Mayu.
She missed but Mayu stands frozen, crying.

The next day...

“Papa! you will stay home today won’t you?” Mayu runs to her father.
“gomen Mayu...I actually have to go somewhere”
“me too Mayu...I’m actually going out”
Both of the parents tell Mayu.
“Papa your going with Akiko-san to a hotel”
“And mama your going to dinner with Hayate-san...no fair!” Mayu says pouting.
“what?! who is this women?!” Mayu’s mum accusingly asks shouting at her partner.
“what I don’t know what she’s talking about? And what’s this going out for dinner with my boss?!” Mayu’s dad also accuses.
“nothing! it’s her she’s lying again..” Mayu’s mum says pointing at Mayu.
“I see..you brat!! how many lies do you need to tell before your satisfied” Mayu’s dad shouts facing towards his daughter.
Mayu looks at them confused.

At night time...
(Mayu’s dad left her and her mum)
“Not you too Miyoko, Keitaro already left your not seroius about  leaving too!”
Mayu’s grandfather questions his daughter.
“I’ve hand enough!! she’s ruined everything!!” Mayu’s mum says before turning around walking towards the door with her suitcase in hand.
“mama!! I’m sorry!..Please don’t leave me, please don’t go!! I’ll do anything, I’ll do the cleaning and the cooking” Mayu clings to her mum begging her not to go.

Suddenly Mayu’s mum pushes Mayu...*crash* Mayu lands on the floor.

“mama...” Staring shock Mayu’s eyes widen.

“I should have never gave birth to you” Mayu’s mum looks at her daughter with digust and hate.

Finally leaving, slamming the door behind her.

-fin-(for now)

Don’t know if I should continue?
« Last Edit: September 08, 2013, 10:21:09 PM by mayuki_daisuki »
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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
« Reply #1 on: January 13, 2013, 01:21:56 AM »
OH~ My Gah~ :ptam-wub:

This is So SAAA~D! Poor Mayuyu :ptam-hbk:

I hope Yukirin will be able to win her friendship :ptam-cry:
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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2013, 02:34:30 AM »
Continue please but poor Mayuyu T_T

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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
« Reply #3 on: January 13, 2013, 03:16:50 AM »
Yes please continue,the mayuki part i want read mayuki interaction

Is yuki are guy in this fic? I wondering what in yuki mind toward mayu...LOLj
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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
« Reply #4 on: January 13, 2013, 03:21:05 AM »
Yay another Mayuki!!!  :mon santa2: 
Mayu's an unfortunate girl?  :mon spit:  Poor Mayu :mon cry:
Anyways, the story sounds really good  :mon determined:
Please continue! :mon pray2:

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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
« Reply #5 on: January 13, 2013, 10:13:26 AM »
Wah Another Mayuki!!!

I love the plot!! But Poor Mayu :cry:
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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
« Reply #6 on: January 13, 2013, 04:14:25 PM »
OMG im going to kill Mayu's parents how can they be so heartless update soon

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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
« Reply #7 on: January 13, 2013, 04:33:25 PM »
The adults who are liars and the kids who are self-denying are all blaming on poor mayu! Not fair!  :angry:

Mayu, be brave and fight on! Hope you will meet your angel (Yuki?) soon!!!  :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
« Reply #8 on: January 14, 2013, 03:38:36 AM »
Oh.. I feel sorry for Mayu...

How can they do that to her... Parents, Friends... they are all very bad...

It's not that Mayu wants to have the power... she was just born with it.

But Mayu is too honest, she should have just kept it a secret instead of telling people that she knew what people are thinking.

Anyhow, it's a great fic... Thank you

I hope you continue the fic... coz' there is lots of potential in making this fic in to a long series.

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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
« Reply #9 on: January 14, 2013, 12:18:57 PM »
thank you everyone :yep: :heart: :love:
it might take a bit for me to update cuz since im following the storyline of the anime kotoura-san  :( it might take a bit of time but if i get inspiration i'll make my own ideas, sorry everyone i dont really have imagination :banghead:
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« Reply #10 on: January 14, 2013, 07:40:32 PM »
Ahhh this is nice. I wonder if you'll include other members as support characters or cameo?  XD
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« Reply #11 on: January 14, 2013, 10:17:50 PM »
poor Mayu she had been suffering since her childhood T.T
yeah please update I wanna see the next (T^T)

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« Reply #12 on: January 14, 2013, 10:52:13 PM »
Im definitely adding wmatsui :heart: :yep: as supporting characters but I will have to figure out how to bring in the other pairings :sweatdrop: :nervous (sorry)
thanx for reading the fic though :P
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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 2
« Reply #13 on: January 18, 2013, 04:12:56 PM »
Heyo minna here’s the update and sorry about the wait, I forgot to include the rest of what happened in the first episode of the anime, enjoy! :P

Zannen shoujo chapter 1

Flashback...(continuing with previous events from first part)

*hic* *sob* “gomenasai...gomenasai...gomenasai...” Mayu repeats.

Next day in elementary school...

“you shouldn’t be coming here anymore, monster!” one boy says.

Mayu can see in the classroom, looks of disgust and hate in the eyes of her fellow classmates...

“you’re wrong..I’m not really...” Mayu turns round,

“she looked over here!”

“she’s gonna read your mind!” a boy with his hands on his face with a taunting expression.

(turning round again)

A fat kid says,

“that’s why your parents abandoned you!”

*staring in shock*

“uh..uh...eh” Mayu stuttering.

“monster! monster!” everyone in the room shouts,

“stop...I’m not! I’m not!”

In Junior high school, on top of the school’s roof...

“liar!” a girl shouts accusing.

“I always thought something was weird.”

“you pretend to be a friend, then you read our minds without permission and laugh at us!”

“n-no..I don’t” Mayu quietly protesting trying to reassure the girls in front of her.

“you’re horrible!”

“Never come near us again!”

“let’s go”

The other girl follows her friend,

“wait! We’re best friends aren’t we?” Mayu stops them with tears swelling in the corner of her eyes.

“sorry...I can’t” says the other girl.

(Moving on)

As Mayu walks home by herself she remembers her other times in attempts in making friends, sitting alone at break, doing p.e. without a partner and transferring to different schools after time...

Suddenly Mayu hears *a meow*

Walking towards a cardboard box, she finds a black and white kitten...

“are you alone, too?’ Mayu asks the kitten that she picked up.

“*meow*” the cat replies.

“I can’t hear anything you are saying or what’s in your mind” Mayu says smiling.

On a rainy day...

Finding the kitten gone, Mayu drops her bag of cat treats and tin food...

“are you the one who’s been feeding the cat?”

“what a nuisance”

“I took it to a shelter so don’t ever come back in again” an old woman complained and walked away.
Mayu drops her umbrella to the ground,

Mayu screams to the sky and drops down to her knees, with a tidefall of tears falling from her eyes.

(Mayu 16 now but transfers school)

“I see...so you’re transferring schools, good luck”

Teachers pov.

“finally...we’ll be rid of this troublemaker”

Flashback ends...

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Walking in the cold blank snow, Mayu’s making her way to school...

The kids on the other side talk about her,

but Mayu with no emotion keeps walking.

(introduces herself to the class)

“I’m Watanabe Mayu, nice to meet you”

Mayu walks to her seat,

New teacher’s pov.

“this one’s going to be a pain”

“sorry for being a pain” Mayu blurts out.

Other classmates pov.

“what was that? what a freak”,

“poor Kashiwagi, having to sit next to her”

Mayu’s pov.

“it’s the same no matter where”

“if only everyone would ignore me, like she is (Yuki-chan’s staring out the window) I’d be satisfied”

(Mayu reads Yuki’s mind, Mayu can see nothing but a middle of no where accept for food popping into the taller girl’s mind)

 Mayu quickly stops and looks at her, but then Yuki snaps out of her day dream...

“huh? who are you?”

“huh?” Mayu looks at startled.

(tension broke)

At class...

Yuki stares at Mayu, who’s reading a manga book.

Yuki’s staring is interrupted by a short hair girl.

“Yuki-chan!”

Yuki hears an energetic squeal of her name, knowing to who it belongs to.

“what’s up Sae-chan?”

“you know. The invitation I gave you” Sae says hoping Yuki remembers.

“oh, the invitation to go to your house?”

“Yeah, Yeah!” Sae bob’s her head up and down excited like a dog wagging it’s tail when it’s happy.

“gomen ne...I have to refuse”

“ehh?!” Sae stares in shock.

“I have to do shopping for my mum today” Yuki claps her hands together and bows her head.

“oh...it’s ok don’t worry, it’s nice you’re helping your mum out anyway” Sae replied.

Sae walks away looking gobsmacked and sighs,

Sae’s pov.

“shot down again...”

Yuki’s pov.

“she looks so disappointed. She must really want me to come, maybe I should ask her to come with me next time”

“she just wants to spend time with you”

“huh?” Yuki turns to Mayu confused.

“I heard you, so I just blurted that out”

“gomenasai” Mayu says coldly.

“you heard me?”

“wait, did I say it that loud?”

“oh god! I’m so embarrassed!” Yuki shouts giving one her big reactions.

One week later...

Mayu’s sitting at her desk some people crowd around her.

Two weeks later...
Less people crowd around her.

Three weeks later...

Eventually everyone cleared off.

Yuki has been watching her these couple of weeks,

Mayu’s found eating by herself at break, but notices a figure standing in front of her desk.

“let’s eat together, Watanabe-san” Yuki suggests while she’s holding her onigiri and melon pan.

Everybody looks at them in the class...

Yuki just takes a seat and sits down eating her lunch, til she notices and looks at Mayu’s bento.

Yuki’s pov.

“that looks so good”

“I wonder if she’d give me a bite?”

Seeing Yuki drooling and reading her mind and all, Mayu offers a Yuki one of her octopus sausages to Yuki.

“do what you want”

“maji desu ka?” Yuki looks at with bewilderment.

“wow, thanks!”

Yuki reaches for the octopus sausage.

Yuki’s pov.

“whoa, oishii”

“did Watanabe make this?” Yuki’s drooling again.

“I did” Mayu stares coldly at Yuki.

“thats awesome!, you really know what I’m thinking?”

“but keep the magic tricks to a minimum, okay?”

“if you go overboard, you’ll scare people off, and it’ll be hard to make new friends” Yuki whispers to Mayu.

“thats not of your business, and it’s not magic...” Mayu mumbles.

“ah I get the croquette!” Yuki steals a piece of Mayu’s bento.

Noticing this sudden action, Mayu complains,

“Hey! don’t just take without asking!”

Yuki just winks back.

Mayu turns her head away.

Next morning...

“ohayou, Watanabe-san” Yuki greets Mayu.

Mayu just ignores her, reading her manga.

“morning! mornin’” Yuki keeps repeating saying at different angles around Mayu.

Mayu gets annoyed, but still ignores her.

Outside, p.e. class...

Everyone has a partner but Mayu, Yuki who notices ditches her other partner and asks Mayu to be hers.

“Watanabe be my partner!” Yuki says waving her arms up and down.

“hey, Kashiwagi” Yuki’s ditched partner whines.

Mayu tries running away.

“you’re not getting away” And Yuki blocks Mayu.
Again eating lunch together,

now walking home...

“yaho! Watanabe let’s walk home together” Yuki says running to Mayu.

“I’m going this way” Mayu turns right walking away.

Yuki is walking beside her, Mayu glares at Yuki.

“I-I’m going this way, too!” Yuki explains.

“so it seems” Mayu say’s facing forward again.

“are you used to the school, yet?” Yuki asks.

“are you making friends, yet?”

“mou! come on, talk to me!” Yuki shouts.

“why are you hanging around me?” Mayu stops walking.

“what do you mean? Of course I...”

“wait, why do I?...” Yuki wonders.

“your such a baka” Mayu softly continues, smiling weakly but sighing.

“huh?”

“oh yeah, tell me what’s your secret to mind reading?”

“That’s so cool!”

“If I could read people’s minds, I do anything!” Yuki has an expression of envy on her face.

“baka” Mayu said.

“huh?” Yukis replied.

“There’s nothing cool about it”

“you idiot” Mayu says.

“hey! what do you mean by ‘idiot’?” Yuki asks irritated.

“I called you an idiot because your an idiot!”

“you don’t know anything!” Mayu shouts then runs away.

 “Watanabe!” Yuki chases Mayu.

Mayu hid behind a building...

*pant* *pant*

Mayu’s breathing heavily,

“I’ve been looking for you!”

Mayu turns around behind her surprised.

“but how d-did you?” Mayu stutters.

“I’m pretty fast at running you, know” Yuki assured her.

“leave me alone!” Mayu tried walking away, but Yuki grabbed her arm.

“why do you runaway? you have no confidence in your own heart”

“it’s getting late...I’ll walk you home” Yuki offers.

(Mayu and Yuki are waiting for the traffic lights to cross the road).

“I live alone” Mayu says with a sad tone.

“W-Watanabe-san...” Yuki takes Mayu’s hand and holds in her own, Mayu looks up and notices this. But Yuki just gives her a gentle smile.

“it’s green” Mayu says.

“oh yeah” Yuki and Mayu start crossing the road, when a lorry speeds up.
Mayu reads the driver’s mind and pushes Yuki out the way.

*beep* *beep*

“are you alright?” Mayu looks up to Yuki.

“t-that was too close” Yuki says scared and shocked.

“I read the driver’s mind, he didn’t care that the light was read” Mayu looks back to the road for a moment.

“Watanabe”

“so you see, I’m just a creepy monster who can read minds without-” Mayu’s suddenly interrupted by Yuki,

“arigatou” Yuki smiles.

Yuki looks down and finds a cut on Mayu’s knee,

“hey, you’re hurt!”

Mayu looks at the bruise,

“heh? I-it’s nothing”

“yes it is!, Is your house near by?” Yuki asks.

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At Mayu’s apartment...

“there, that’ll do it” Yuki says applying a bandage on Mayu’s knee”

“th-thanks” Mayu replies.

“so you really do live alone”

“where do your parents live?” Yuki asks.

“I can’t control my power. So ever since I was little, I was reading people’s minds without understanding, and hurting them” Mayu answers.

“Watanabe...”

“I ruined everything, the only thing I can do is make sure no one gets close to me” Mayu looks down avoiding Yuki’s gaze.

“so that’s why, even at school, you...”

“why do you try to get close to me?!” Mayu stands up asking Yuki.

“stop it! leave me alone!”

‘You’re the one who’s going to get hurt!” Mayu shouts.

“demo...is that okay with you?”

“you don’t want to hurt anyone? Don’t give me that! You’re the ones who’s hurting!” Yuki points at Mayu.

“still, there’s nothing else I can do!”

“I don’t like to be alone, either!”

“I don’t want to hurt people, or get hurt!, but what I hate the most is...is when...the people I care about leave me”

“That’s why I’m better off being alone” Mayu says covering her face with her tiny hands.

“ne, Watanabe”

Mayu looks up,

“whether you can read people’s minds or not, people who want to leave are going to leave” Yuki gives a serious stare to Mayu, then smiles.

“but not everyone is like that” Yuki says.

“so let’s try this, okay? (Yuki puts her hands on Mayu’s shouders) I will stay with you, no matter what happens, I’ll never leave. How about it?” Yuki wipes Mayu’s tears.

Mayu bursts into more tears, Yuki pats her head.

“yosh, yoshi” Yuki tries to comfort Mayu.

“ne...Watanabe, can I call you Mayu from now on, and you call me Yuki?” Yuki asks.

“un!, Yuki-san”

Both of the girls smile.

To be continued.
« Last Edit: January 18, 2013, 04:33:55 PM by mayuki_daisuki »
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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 1
« Reply #14 on: January 18, 2013, 05:45:21 PM »
Ohoh! It became more interesting!!!!
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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 1
« Reply #15 on: January 18, 2013, 06:17:00 PM »
This is good  XD I love the story here.
Thanks for updating, I'm waiting for the 2nd chapter.  :lol:

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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 1
« Reply #16 on: January 18, 2013, 07:12:37 PM »
Not bad, please continue to update ASAP...haha  :thumbsup  :grin:
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(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 1
« Reply #17 on: January 19, 2013, 01:44:28 AM »
Yuki is so gentle~

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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 1
« Reply #18 on: January 21, 2013, 06:43:40 AM »
It's kind of cliche (outcast gets friend) but i'm interested to see where this will head. Can't wait.   :D
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Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 1
« Reply #19 on: January 21, 2013, 12:39:03 PM »
thank you everyone for reading :deco:, episode 2 of kotoura-san has come out so i just need to type it up for mayuki fic after i done essays :nervous
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