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Title: unstoppable feelings (Chapter 10)
Post by: blastingcool on August 28, 2009, 09:45:21 AM
“Yossie, how do you like this school. It is one of the most prestigious and richest school in Japan. Not only that, it’s also an all girls’ school.” Goto was excited and jumped up and down.

Yossie just kept her look on the finely-well-built building. Its appearance gives off a richly smell. Metal gate surrounding the architecture, a long pebble sidewalk extending from the gate to the main big door. Fountains were on both side. There were more to the school and its surrounding which yossie’s view was blocked from her standing but she knows that the scene is that of a park where rick people would spend their free time to sit and drink tea.

“Spoil brat girls who just spent their time for scenery than for education.” Yossie spat out disgustingly.

“You are so pessimistic. Why don’t you just enjoy the scene?  And why aren’t you wearing a skirt?”

“Because its more comfortable in pants plus this is an all girls school, there’s no point in dressing yourself up since there are no boys here.” Some of other students passing by them looking at yossie as if they have never seen a handsome girl before.

The two entered the school when the bell rang.

“Miki-sama, wait up!” Miki kept her pace faster trying to avoid whoever is calling her, yet oblivious to what’s infront of her.

“Ittai!!! Which low life dared to bump into me. Do you know who I am?” Miki looked up which to see an angry tall short brownish-black hair glaring back at her.

“It is I, the great yossie who does not give a damn of who you are.” With that, yossie shoved miki away and walked pass her. Obviously Miki wouldn’t leave this matter alone. Aya who was calling out for miki had finally caught up to her.

“Miki-sama, you forgot your cellphone” Miki was angry at Aya, the intruder, interrupted her exploding on yossie, so she grabbed her cellphone and smashed it on the floor.

“I demand an apology”

“Excuse me if I heard you wrong. You want an apology when you were the one who didnt watch where you were going. You should be glad that I didn’t return any nasty comments back to you. An apology? dream on!”

Goto quickly held yossie’s arm back and nodded her head and apologized to miki in turn for yossie.

“Look at who’s talking so dignified can’t even say the word sorry and had to make her girl say it for her”

“She’s not my girl, she’s my friend. Get that through your thick skull.”

Ding Dong. The bell rang the second time for the final reminding that class had started.

“Miki-sama, I think we should go or else Nakayawa sensei will be mad. You know how her wrath is.”

“Pssh, if you’re that chicken then go first. Annoying girl. With my background, what can she do?

While aya was persuading miki, goto quickly grabbed yossie and made a dash heading for the classroom.

“Yossie, why… did you make trouble… on our first day at school. Not only that we’re freshmen also.” Goto was panting like a mad dog.

“That girl..what’s her name? err…something miki pissed me off. This is why I don’t like rich girls. They think they are mighty and high. If not because of you kept pestering me to apply for this school, I wouldn’t be bumping into that crazy girl man.”

“Arent you yourself kinda rich too, but not as rich as some of these girls here lol. However you shouldn’t be so discriminating on every girls here.”

“Whatever. Let’s get to our class hurry. We’re late”

While all the commotions that yossie and miki had caused in the hallway, someone was also watching them from afar.

“Rika-sama, it’s time for our class.”
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 28, 2009, 07:20:50 PM
Hmm, interesting. Am I really the first to comment on a story which seems to star the 85ers? Hellz yeah!

Oh and  :welcome
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: blastingcool on August 28, 2009, 09:53:11 PM
thanks rndmnwierd. I was hoping to read comments so then i could know if i should continue this story but people are selfish where they dont leave any comment at all but still reading someone's story
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 28, 2009, 10:01:49 PM
That's a very harsh, but true, outlook. Anyway, I want you to continue and I'm awesome so please.
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on August 28, 2009, 10:44:33 PM
Should I say "ouch!" XD 
well I sometimes do that, but is not for selfishness but because I still have problems with my english and sometimes I can't express what I want to say so I get annoyed and end up no posting anything :nervous anyways I usually try to comment the most in the stories I a like, and I think I'll be posting here :thumbsup

now on the story... wow Mikitty as a spoiled girl, agressive Yossy, Aya as the submissive one and Maki a good kid?!!!  :dizzy: what on earth is happening? hahaha but it's interesting :thumbsup

waiting for the next chapter
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: len.chan on August 29, 2009, 12:16:12 AM
whatever it has the 85ers in it I'll read it  :heart:
Miki being a bitch is always interesting to read  XD XD
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: candy_boy on August 29, 2009, 12:53:03 AM
whatever it has the 85ers in it I'll read it  :heart:
Miki being a bitch is always interesting to read  XD XD

My sentiments exactly!  :w00t:  Do continue! Do!   :cry:
Somehow, I get the f4 vibes here..  Must be all the rich, mean people.  :P



Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: blastingcool on August 29, 2009, 09:22:30 AM
lol thanks for the reply. Do u guys think that rika is also mean.
Since im a yomiki fan and ishiyoshi fan, this fic is going to be miki-yossie-rika. I dont know whom yossie should end with
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: blastingcool on August 29, 2009, 10:43:37 AM
Here is chapter two

Yossie slided the door open to find the grls all chattering about stuffs which she wasn’t interested in.

“Hey do you think that Ishikawa girl will be in the same class as us?”

“Don’t know but I hope she’s not.  She doesn’t even give a damn of anyone around her. She thinks the world revolves around her only.”

“Yeah, aren’t we also the top 10% richest families in Japan? Just because her father is richer than us doesn’t mean that she can treat us like trash.”

“Hey yossie, do u hear what they’re saying. Seems like this Ishikawa girl is so rich.” goto was prying on the girls’ conversation

“Not that I care.” yossie grabbed a seat at the end couple rows away from the window

“Oh no! you should care! Getting close to her will give you an advantage in business.”

“Who are you.” Yossie raised her eyebrow

“My name is sayu. My family specializes in tea business. I’m quite as well rich as those girls.”

Yossie just ignored her and stared outside the window. Goto who was curious about the information so she jumped in.

“Who is that Ishikawa girl that they were talking about.”

“Her family owns half of Japan’s business. Most of us are just under her family’s wings. Half of this school budget is funded by her father.”

“Then whose the other half?”

“The other half is funded by Fujimoto family. They are also Ishikawa’s rival since other half of Japan’s business is controlled by them.”

“Who are their daughters?

“Ishikawa’s daughter is Rika-sama and Fujimoto’s daughter is Miki-sama.” Goto quickly looked up to yossie who also looked at her surprisingly. “Their personalities are the same which that they don’t see people as equal as them because of their social status. It would be great if you don’t get on any of their nerves.”

Sayu beamed them with her wink and excused herself.

“Yossie what are you going to do?”

“About what?”

“Miki, the girl who you pissed off.”

“You mean the girl who pissed me off. Im not going to do anything since im here for my business education and hit off my career.”

“Yossie! You got on her nerve.”

Yossie covered her ears to blocked her best friend’s complain and stuck out her tongue to mock her friend.

“Look, its Miki-sama.” Sayu whispered to her friend, Erin.

“So its not gonna be Rika-sama?” Erin questioned

“Actually its going to be both.” Ai chan and Rika both dropped their jaws. “This year is going to be hell for us.”

When Miki looked around and saw the familiar face who bumped into her earlier, she smirked to herself. Yossie felt the goosebump all over her body.

“Rika-sama, where would you like to sit” Erika politely bowed her head to her master.

“Next to that brownish-black hair girl.”

Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: badsaints on August 29, 2009, 11:16:21 AM
Yossi with the attitide :O Damn I'm in!

Potential drama alert! Can't wait for the next chap XD
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 29, 2009, 01:41:40 PM
Oooo, are they gonna fight over Yossui? Or is Yossui gonna fight over them?

Wait, does that even make sense?
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: kRisZ on August 29, 2009, 03:31:10 PM
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Sayu beamed them with her wink and excused herself.

Yay! The ichiban kawai


Miki and Rika both with great 'powers' yay, very interesting


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“This year is going to be hell for us.”

wanna see err read  :w00t:


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“Next to that brownish-black hair girl.”

So Miki will sit n the other side.?.   Get ready to rumble   :taco:
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: len.chan on August 29, 2009, 04:08:04 PM
Ishikawa VS Fujimoto
This is going to be fun  XD XD
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on August 29, 2009, 09:50:43 PM
hahahaha I'm already laughing thinking about what could happen next :lol:
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: leyami on August 30, 2009, 06:18:16 AM
This is a great story
I think I'm going to enjoy
this , Keep it up
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: blastingcool on August 30, 2009, 10:45:08 AM
chapter 3 is up, thank you for those who commented


“What an unlucky day. Cant believe this bitchy girl is sitting next to me and on my left side also. Now I cant stare out at the window.” Yossie thought to herself.

Goto giggled to herself, “What a twisted fate.”

Thud! “Alright class, quiet down!” Nakazawa-sensei slammed her books on the desk.

“How scary. It’s the old lady again.” Risa whispered to ai-chan

“Not only that, she’s still single haha.”

“Eh? What did you just say?” Nakazawa-sensei bulged out her eyes to stare at the girls.

“Nothing sensei!” both saluted their teacher.

15 minutes since class had started………

“Newton's first law of motion is that an object at rest tends to stay at rest and an object in motion tends to stay in motion with the same speed and in the same direction unless acted upon by an unbalanced force.” Nakazawa-sensei started writing out the second and third law of Newton.

Everyone seemed to be bored of this topic since physics is not that easy for them to comprehend except yossie who was scribbling down the notes into her notebook.

Miki was playing with her nails while Rika twirled her hair with her fingers.

Yossie dropped her eraser and it rolled to her right which happened to hit Rika’s foot. Yossie bent down to pick up her eraser but she stepped on it purposely. She looked at yossie and smiled playfully at her.

“Excuse me” Yossie asked Rika nicely but Rika kicked the eraser and it rolled near the teacher’s desk.

“What was that for?” Yossie was irritated.
“To kill my boredom. You seem like a nerd. No one in the class pays attention to the lesson except you. It’s also because they are rich so they don’t care about what lies ahead of them. But you I guess it’s a different story.”

“My background is none of your business.” Yossies straightened her back and tried to keep her face cool. This is really my double hell unlucky day. A bitchy miki earlier and now a crazy Rika. They both really have the same personalities; always like to bring up their status.

Miki on the other hand kept throwing small pieces of paper ball at Yossie. She made a hand signal for yossie to unfold the paper.

What a nerd. Yossie crumbled up the paper into its previous form and looked at Miki whom returned her with an innocent face.

“So that’s the end of today lesson. Have fun with your lunch guys. If you don’t understand just look over again in your textbooks. Just remember DON’T DISTURB MY LUNCH! Bye class.” Nakazawa made a quick dash outside the classroom.

Is she really working for her salary? Yossie packed up her notebook and left also. Goto quickly followed her.

“Neh yossie, what are you going to eat?” Her best friend grabbed her stomach.

“Anything that’s edible.”

“Here are the rooms for students to hang out and eat their food.  Wait here, I’ll go get something for us to eat."
Goto left yossie standing there cluelessly.

“Matte! which room though? “ However goto was already out of sight. “Since she said it’s a place to hang out so it doesn’t matter which room right. I’ll just text her where I am.”

Since a room with a pink tag on it was near yossie, she twisted the doorknob open which to find the room was empty.

“Hm…this is weird. How come no one hangs out in here?” She entered the room and scanned around its surrounding. There were small table and chairs in the middle and couple couches near the walls. The windows are decorated with fine fabric long creamy curtains.

“This room is huge.” Yossie yawned outloud. “I might as well take a quick nap also to restore my energy incase I bump into any crazy girls. Never know what might happen at this strange school.” She threw herself onto the couch on the right side and dozed off.

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“Rika-sama, what would you like to eat today?”

“Just something light, I don’t want any meat today.”

“Understood. Please excuse me.” Rika nodded her head and Erika disappeared away.

Rika stopped in front of her resting room. The door is always noticeable because of the pink tag. However she heard something strange coming from inside. It was a snoring sound

She twisted the doorknob and walked inside slowly to find who the intruder was.

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Hope you guys will enjoy this chapter

Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: badsaints on August 30, 2009, 01:08:47 PM
1st day of school and Yossie already made herself popular? :mon cigar:

I can just imagine Miki & Rika competing to win over Yossie  :knee:


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Everyone seemed to be bored of this topic since physics is not that easy for them to comprehend except yossie who was scribbling down the notes into her notebook.
:on study: Oh Yossie is a nerd with attitude? Cool!
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 30, 2009, 05:32:09 PM
Lols, I can't wait to see Rika's reaction.
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: ayase909 on August 30, 2009, 06:15:35 PM
Mou!  :tantrum: why is it have to be Yossie....i mean the main character! hehe kidding! :hee:

i was hoping there would be a charmikitty  :shifty: here but reading the chapters.....made me  :shock:

i want to read some CharMikitty story..... :on roll:

anyway....nice one author-san!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on August 30, 2009, 09:24:36 PM
^ naaah   It's been a while since I read a fic about tis awesome triangle 8) 

Rika and Miki are so spoiled XD I guess Yossy will have to give them a lesson :pimp:  after she gets out of trouble :nervous
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings(chapter 4)
Post by: blastingcool on August 31, 2009, 10:34:21 AM
haha ill think about charmikitty but i would like one of them to end with yossie more.


Chapter 4

Eating room( green tag)…..

Haha that girl is such a nerd. Miki smiled to herself. But she looks cool when she concentrates hard.

“Mika-sama… Mika-sama.” Aya repeatedly calling out to Miki to snap her out of her own thoughts.

“What!”

“I have the food displayed on the table ready for you to eat.”

“Hey aya, what was that girl name again?” Miki began picking up her fork and the knife to cut the beef steak dish.

“I remember she called herself yossie.” Aya took a seat across from miki and also began her food. “Are you going to order the girls to harass her.”

“Hm..she’s the first girl to ever oppose me. Others would just praise me and flatter my looks. It’s getting pretty annoying but this girl, not only she yelled at me, she didn’t even apologize. Im starting to get interested in her more.” Miki swallowed down the small pieces of meat.

Aya was surprised to hear miki‘ leniency “Does that mean you are letting her go?

“I’ll play with her myself.” Miki added it with a laugh.

“You seem to treat her differently. If it was someone else, you would have them suffer the humiliation to the point that they have to resign from the school and hide their face whenever they see you.”

“That’s the joy of being the richest daughter in Japan. You can do that too since your father is in top 5% of wealth.” Aya just continued eating her food.

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“Hm…where did yossie go. I thought I told her to wait for me in the eating room. I don’t see her anywhere.” Goto placed the tray food on the table and went to ask someone.

“erm excuse me, have you seen any girl sit here wearing pants uniform.”

“No, why would a girl have pants for uniform.” the girl snickered at Goto.

Yossie is right about these girls here. They are really rude. Now i dont blame her for being negative at these girls. Goto took out her cell phone to text yossie.

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Rika walked inside slowly. She stared at yossie in disbelief because no one dared to come into this room without her permission.

She looked around her room and saw a bottle of water sitting in the corner.

Rika chuckled to herself. “This will do.” She untwisted the cap and held out the bottle toward yossie’s face but was interrupted by a cellphone’s vibrating.

Eventually it also woke up yossie. Yossie opened up her eyes slowly and found Rika holding out the bottle.

“What are you doing here?” Yossie quickly got up

“That should be my line. Why are you in my reserved room.”

“What do you mean by reserved room. This room is for everyone to hang out and eat.”

“If you don’t know much about this school then let me tell you.” Rika circled around yossie as if she was being cornered by a wolf. “This school has many rooms for reservation such as eating room, swimming place, tennis court, gym and etc. but the rooms are also limited. You have to very rich in order to reserve one for yourself. Don’t you see this room has a pink tag.”

No wonder this room was empty to begin with. But its not like im going to back down now.

“You are pretty selfish and wasteful. Not only that you don’t want to share an eating place with everyone, you also spent amount of money just to sit in here for like what, 50 mins everyday except Sunday. Don’t you think its pretty dumb.”

Rika felt insulted by yossie calling her dumb. She took a step toward yossie to accept her challenge in this verbal fight. “Better than you who cant even afford a room. No matter how you look at it, it’s amazing to have this privilege.”

Yossie didn’t also back down too and took a step forward also. “Of course you’re better than me at what…money status? At least I excelled in other categories dumb girl.”

“You mean excelled in snoring or should I say snoring competition. Let me tell you no girls nore like that.”

They both kept on taking a steps forward until their noses almost touching. At that moment they stared into each other eyes and backed away immediately. Both turned away and their faces turned red.

Suddenly yossie broke the silence. “Sorry for intruding in your room and about what I said.”

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Miki was taking a walk outside after she finished her food but happened to passed by Rika’s room. She continued to walk but stopped when she heard Yossie’s voice.

Damn that Ishikawa girl. How dare her started to get yossie’s attention. She also had yossie apologize to her too. She didn’t even apologize to me yet. Miki was bittered at their encountering.







Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 31, 2009, 03:50:58 PM
Mwahaha seems like Yossui is kicking ass and taking names, in the purely metaphorical sense. :yossi:
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: kRisZ on September 01, 2009, 05:49:04 PM
Battle between the green and pink tags   :cow:
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings
Post by: blastingcool on September 03, 2009, 09:22:31 AM
sorry for the late update, in the next chapter i will introduce a new character. Takigawa Hanako from Mendol drama. I think she's really cute in there. Btw how many chapters do you guys want this story to be. Like around 30? please tell me your opinion guys

Chapter 5

Yossie let her body fall on her bed and stretched out her arms. “What a really hectic day.. But why did my heart beat so fast when our faces were close together?”

A knock on yossie’s room got her out of her thoughts.

“Yoshizawa-sama, sorry for the interruption but master wants to see you in his study room.” Aika(a maid) was standing outside yossie’s room.

Yossie quickly got up and went to her father’s study room.

She first knocked lightly on the door.

“Come in.” She acknowledged the answer and intruded the space inside.

“Otosan,” Yossie bowed to her father as a respect to the elder.

“Take a seat, there’s no need for formality between us. We are father and daughter.” Mr. Yoshizawa was chuckling at yossie’s old habit. “I asked you to come here today is because there is a ball hosted by the Takigawa family for their daughter who is turning 16th. In other words, I want you to attend the party with me.”

Yossie smiled to herself. “Do I get to decline this request?”

“I don’t think you can say no to this right. I also want you to be in your best behavior because this family is important in our business. Takigawa family is also very powerful. They manage to cooperate both with Fujimoto and Ishikawa families. No other business can do that. This is very honored to be invited by them considering we’re only managed to get in the top 40% of wealth. It would be great if we can have business with them.”

Yossie saluted to her father. “Yes sir!”

Mr. Yoshizawa laughed at her silliness.

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Fujimoto”s residence

“Miki, don’t do anything stupid. Come out. Tell your father what’s wrong. Did anyone bully you?” Mr. Fujimoto was dead worrying about his daughter ever since Miki got home from school, she locked herself up in her room and threw anything that’s in her sight( cups, vase, and etc).

“Get away! I don’t want to see anyone!” Miki continued throwing stuffs towards the door.

“Can anyone tell me what happened to my Miki. Did anyone bully her in school?” All of the servants avoided looking at their master since they did not know why Miki was acting that way.

“Aya, since you go to the same school with her and also her best friend. Tell me why is Miki acting so strangely?”

“um…” Aya was hesitate whether she should tell him about Miki’s encountering with yossie since she thought that was the source of Miki’s anger.

“Aya!” Mr. Fujimoto raised his voice a bit higher. “If you know anything, do tell me.”

“Today Miki-sama bumped into this girl named yossie at school and they argued but the girl didn’t apologize to Miki-sama so maybe that’s why Miki is angry now.”

“How dare her bullied my girl.” He ordered his assistant to check out who the girl is and order the principal to kick the girl out of school.
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Ayumi's Residence

“Neh Ayumi, how do you know if you like someone.”

“I don’t really know. I have never been in love. So who is the lucky person whom Ishikawa likes.” Ayumi was poking fun at her best friend.

“Stop it. I was just asking you know. How could I fall in love yet. No one seems interesting to me.” Rika threw a pillow at ayumi;s face.

“Well I remember reading this love story. It says that when you and the person whom you love are standing near each other, your heart will beat so fast.”

My heart did beat fast back then. Don’t tell me.. Rika shook her head.

“Hey Rika, who was that girl that walked out of your eating room.”

“Some girl who doesn’t know anything about the school’s rule.” Ayumi started to notice Rika’s face turning red.

“Your face is turning red. Is she that lucky person?” Rika smacked Ayumi on the shoulder.

“There’s no way! How can I like someone who snores so loud and doesn’t have any elitist manners.”

Ayumi giggled to herself. Then why is your face turning red when you are talking about her.
 
“Rika, are you going to attend Takigawa’s birthday invitation? You know there will be a lot of rich handsome guys. But I guess the word “rich” doesn’t matter to you since you are so rich yourself but the word “handsome” does.”

“I guess since my father has asked me to attend.” Will I also meet her there too.

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Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 5)
Post by: rndmnwierd on September 03, 2009, 07:10:20 PM
Takigawa? Never heard of her, but I'm still interested. Hmm, as for length, 30 chapters sounds about right. It's good to have a goal but creativeness rarely let's one stop there. Can't wait for the party, I see a huge clash in the future.
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 5)
Post by: blastingcool on September 04, 2009, 02:25:38 AM
In mendol, her role is ray and she falls in love with kai

Btw i wont update a new chapter when there are at least 5 comments. If people dont even bother to comment but just leeching off then i might as well stop writing this story. Sorry for being harsh
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 5)
Post by: badsaints on September 04, 2009, 05:40:35 PM
I think you have a nice fic here :yep: Just keep it going if you enjoy writing. The readers are a big bonus. Don't worry, the comments will come in.


I have a feeling that both Rika & Miki will be competing for Yossie's affection just so that she can have something the other didn't...but slowly they will have genuine feeling for the hawt girl. But I wanna see the things they do to gain that attention. Can expect great hilarity to ensue :D Oh and please don't forget our dearest Gocchin XD
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 5)
Post by: Elle_Driver on September 04, 2009, 07:09:37 PM
Awww it's been such a long time since the last fanfic about our beloved 85ers (& Ayaya)!
And now we have something new to read thanks to you  :twothumbs
Please keep updating! I love it so far.  :otomerika:
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 5)
Post by: kRisZ on September 05, 2009, 04:08:16 PM
Yossie's in love with Rika?!  :wub:

Rika's in love with Yossie?!  :wub:

Miki's tantrums... she's in love with Yossie?!  double :wub:   
 


*Gets a placard and chants YOMIKI! YOMIKI! YOMIKI!*
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 5)
Post by: blastingcool on September 05, 2009, 09:33:19 PM
one more comment then it'll be at least five and i will update the  next chapter.
I wonder how many ishiyoshi and yomiki fans are out there
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 5)
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on September 05, 2009, 11:07:03 PM
*Gets a placard and chants along with kRisZ
YOMIKI! YOMIKI! YOMIKI! :cow:

It seems that Rika is nicer with Shiba that Miki with Aya, and with the whole doki doki scene in Rika's room we can say that now this are like this
Rika 1-Miki 0

Hope Miki change this soon. :thumbsup

and yeah, I wonder how many Yomiki's fans are still around, bacause Ishiyoshi's I know there are still many XD
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 5)
Post by: blastingcool on September 06, 2009, 09:30:04 AM
here is the next chapter. I'll continues the rest of the party event in the next chapter. Your comments willl make the update faster. :D

Chapter 6

Goto”s residence

“Neh, yossie, which mask are you wearing.” Maki was displaying different kinds of mask on the bed.

“Why do we have to wear one?”

“Because it says so on the invitation card. Those who are under 25 years old have to wear a mask.”

“Does that birthday girl planned to have a semi-masquerade ball?”

“I bet she’s looking for a charming prince behind a mask. Haha what an idiotic girl.” maki laughed behind an orange glittered mask.

“You seem to be into it too. What a bothersome man.” Yossie chose a golden horsed mask.

“If she’s looking for a prince, then lets dress up in tuxedos. We’ll be Mr. Moonlights. Muahhhhh.” Maki seemed to be in her own little world.

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Takigawa’s masqerade ball event

“How do I look Junjun.” Hanako twirled in a circle in front of the mirror.

“You look great Hanako -sama” Junjun held up the blue crystal mask to her master.
 
Downstair…..
“ladies and gentlemen, we are presenting the elegant birthday girl today.” the host announced to the guests.

Hanako strolled down the stair case slowly in her white strap dress with low cut on the front enough to show some cleavage. Following behind her is her maid, Junjun.

“Hanako-sama, there are a lot of people wearing masks. You will have a lot of choices to choose and potential ones too.” Junjun whispered to Hanako from behind. Hanako lips formed a smile.

The fortune teller told me that I will find my lover today when I accidentally bumped into him. Which one is going to be him? Hanako’s eyes were looking around the ball room.

“Aya, why did we even bother to come here.” Miki’s face was bored from the slow process.

“It’s to help lighten up your mood since they are a lot of rich guys here. One might suit your taste.”

“Let’s go get a drink. I’m thirsty from standing here for a long time.”

******************************

“This seems fun. Don’t we look cool in tux.”

“I guess so.” Yossie shrugged her shoulders.

“What do you think of the birthday girl?

“She is indeed pretty.”

“But too much of an acting. She’s not moving naturally.” Maki eyes were on Hanako.

“I’m going to get something to eat. Continue on whatever you’re doing.”

“Hai.” Both walked in different directions. Yossie walked to the long table to dig in food and drinks.

The music changed to a slow dancing song. Other couples started walking towards the dancing floor. Someone accidentally pushed yossie into the dancing floor.

“Darn, now I look like an idiot who doesn’t have a partner yet still standing on the dance floor.” yossie cursed to herself

***********************************
“Miki-sama, look at that guy who’s standing there like a loner. Why is he even on the dance floor when he doesn’t have a partner?” aya laughed mockingly.

“Who knows?” At the same time another couple accidentally pushed Miki onto the dance floor and she fell into the golden-horsed mask person. They eyes were locked into each other.

It’s heaven that let us meet
Holding your hands, I feel your warmth
How many times can we dance again?
I’m reluctant to let go


Yossie took advantage of the person in front of her. “May I?” Yossie held out her right hand to invite Miki.

Miki did not know how to react and since she couldn’t walk out so she accepted the invitation.
They started dancing like other couples. Yossie stared into her partner’s eyes. She noticed that Miki was turning pink so she turned her face away. Miki also stole a glance at Yossie while Yossie wasn’t looking at her.

Why do I get the feelings that I have met him before? Miki questioned herself.

Claps claps claps….

The music had come to an end and the couples took leave of the dancing floor. Yossie let go of Miki.

“Thank you.” Yossie untie her mask’s knot and Miki also did the same

“Yossie?” Miki was surprised that it was yossie who she was dancing the whole time

“Miki?”

“Are you going to yell at me again for bumping into you?” Miki crossed her arms

Yossie chuckled to herself. “I should say thank your to you or else I would look like a fool on this stage by myself. I really appreciate you for being my partner.” yossie put back her mask on her face and miki did the same.










Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 5)
Post by: candy_boy on September 06, 2009, 12:56:02 PM
Yossie's in love with Rika?!  :wub:

Rika's in love with Yossie?!  :wub:

Miki's tantrums... she's in love with Yossie?!  double :wub:   
 


*Gets a placard and chants YOMIKI! YOMIKI! YOMIKI!*



Eh?!





*Gets a placard and chants along with kRisZ
YOMIKI! YOMIKI! YOMIKI! :cow:





NAa~NI?!

*whips out hugeass Ishiyoshi uchiwa and waves it around*
ISHIYOSHI! ISHIYOSHI!   :yossi: :otomerika: :heart: :heart:





“Thank you.” Yossie untie her mask’s knot and Miki also did the same

“Yossie?” Miki was surprised that it was yossie who she was dancing the whole time

“Miki?”

“Are you going to yell at me again for bumping into you?” Miki crossed her arms

Yossie chuckled to herself. “I should say thank your to you or else I would look like a fool on this stage by myself. I really appreciate you for being my partner.” yossie put back her mask on her face and miki did the same.









Hmmm. My yomiki radar is going haywire.  :O This spells bad for my ishiyoshi... Specially since Miki is darn cool, too.  :sweatdrop: Aya, where are joooooo?!  :(


Btw, I'm still at episode 8 of Mendol. I'm interested to see how Hanako will play out in your fic. Isn't she a bit too tall for Yossy or Maki? Or was Kai just too short?  :P Hmmm, Junjun might be tall enough for her though *nudge*nudge*




*prays for next update*
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 6 9-6-09)
Post by: kRisZ on September 06, 2009, 03:38:20 PM
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Hanako

will she fall in love with the 'man' in tux too?  :huhuh



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“Are you going to yell at me again for bumping into you?” Miki crossed her arms

Yossie chuckled to herself. “I should say thank your to you or else I would look like a fool on this stage by myself. I really appreciate you for being my partner.” yossie put back her mask on her face and miki did the same.

Progress. Yay!  :shakeit:


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Eh?!

NAa~NI?!

*whips out hugeass Ishiyoshi uchiwa and waves it around*
ISHIYOSHI! ISHIYOSHI!   :yossi: :otomerika: :heart: :heart: 

 :shakeit:  :P
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 6 9-6-09)
Post by: mads on September 06, 2009, 06:00:51 PM
and so yomiki begins.... :banghead
Rika, you better make a good come back.
 :otomerika:  :yossi:
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 6 9-6-09)
Post by: Elle_Driver on September 06, 2009, 07:15:12 PM
Yay, Yomiki time!!!

*also chanting*

YOMIKI! YOMIKI! YOMIKI!
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 6 9-6-09)
Post by: rndmnwierd on September 06, 2009, 09:54:09 PM
Lol, you're going to start a riot between Ishoyoshi and Yomiki fans! BTW I'm rooting for Ishiyoshi.
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 6 9-6-09)
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on September 06, 2009, 10:00:59 PM
YAY!!!! YOMIKI!  :luvluv1:  :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
So I guess they will keep dancing until the party is over, right? right?! :luvluv2:
Author-san repeat after me  :on hypto: "I will keep Aya busy with Maki and something will happen to Rika so she wont be in the party" :on hypto:
 :on lol:

oh... and I don't know this Hanako girl? any link of her in youtube? :dunno: I'm a bit curious

OMG!!! I knew Ishiyoshi fans will beat us in numbers  :err: but it doesn't matter :cool1: YOMIKI FAN FOREVER :onioncheer:
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 6 9-6-09)
Post by: Miki IV on September 06, 2009, 10:26:21 PM
Author-san repeat after me  :on hypto: "I will keep Aya busy with Maki and something will happen to Rika so she wont be in the party" :on hypto:

 :shock: 


 :otomerika: :yossi: ISHIYOSHI!!!!  :otomerika: :yossi: ISHIYOSHI!!!!  :otomerika: :yossi: ISHIYOSHI!!!! 
 :otomerika: :yossi:

Next chapter, Onegai shimasu!!!  :ding:

Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 6 9-6-09)
Post by: Yankii Heart on September 07, 2009, 03:26:16 AM
 :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Thanks for the fic...

Those three  :love: :love: :love: :love:

It's interesting how everyone is now Yomiki - Ishiyoshi  XD

Anyways as the others i'll say: ISHIYOSHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :inlove:
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 6 9-6-09)
Post by: blastingcool on September 07, 2009, 04:43:16 AM
@ candy_boy, hmm Hanako is indeed tall, lets just pretend she is shorter than maki and yossie in here hehehe

@kriz, so far i think she will fall in love with the tux 'man'

@rndmnwierd, lol i didnt know that i have caused a war between ishiyoshi and yomiki fans

@Kreuz_Asakura, wow i think im being hypnotized, now my head is spinning. Here is the link to the Hanako girl, she's in white clothes and pretty tall  www.vimeo.com/2965970



alright imma go play my ds, thanks for reading my fic


Chapter 7

“Rika, stop fixing your pink-feathered mask. It does look good on you.”

“But the feather is itchy on this side.” Rika twitched the feather around.

“Cant help it. You were the one who chose it. Now stop fixing it or else people will look at you like a fool.” Ayumi tried to cover her laugh

Rika gave up on the feather. “Neh ayumi, are you going to find a partner to dance.”

“I will if I can find a handsome guy. But its hard to find one since they are wearing masks”

A guy approached up to Rika. “Excuse me are you Rika Ishikawa?”

“Yes and you are?” Rika eyed him suspiciously.

“My name is Ichiro Nakamura. I was wondering if I can have a dance with you.” Rika was going to decline but Ayumi quickly answered it for her

“Of course you can. My friend is looking for a partner too.” Ayumi pushed Rika near him and winked at her.

werent you the one who wanted a partner


Rika’s face became annoyed at the guy’s sincerity. They both started walking towards the dance floor.

***************
“Junjun, I’m going to wander around the ball room. Don’t follow me.”

“Yes Hanako-sama.”

Hanako was greeting guests and stopped to talk to some. She continued her walk and accidentally slipped on the slippery marble floor on her high heels. Luckily Maki was there to catch her or else it would be an embarrassing scene.

“Are you ok.” Maki’s arms were around Hanako’s waste. Cant believe this girl slipped into my arms.

Hanako regained her composure. “Thanks for saving me.” She stared into her savior’s eyes. The fortune teller is right, I will bump into my future lover today and I did. Not only that, he also saved me.


“If everything is alright then I’ll excuse myself.”

“Wait, what is your name?”

“Maki Goto.” why does this girl want to know my name. Its not like I need her to return me a favor. Gotta get moving then.

Maki Goto? Isnt that a girl name? “Where did he go?”  Hanako blinked in confusion.

***********************************

“Do you want to take some fresh air outside?” Yossie felt polluted by the alcoholic smell. Miki didn’t mind with that idea since she got to spend time alone with yossie.

When they walked outside, they passed a couple where the lady was wearing a pink-feathered mask.

“Rika, are you ok.” Ichiro noticed Rika’s attention was elsewhere. Sje was looking at the person’s back whom just passed by her.

“Nothing.” Why does that stranger familiar.

“Shall we dance now?” He extended his right hand out and Rika accepted it unwillingly.

Outside...

“The fresh air is so great.” Yossie took a deep inhale and Miki copied her.

“Do you like to do that all the time.”

“I do this every night in my garden and I look up at the sky.”

“Yossie!” Maki was running behind crazily.

“Maki? Where have you been?”

“Anyway, ill tell you later but lets get out of here first. Some crazy girl kept following me.” Maki grabbed yossie’s arm and forced her to run.

“Yossie…” Miki watched them running away.





Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 7 )
Post by: rndmnwierd on September 07, 2009, 05:14:40 AM
Maki and Hanako? And it looks like Yossui is warming up to Miki.
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 6 9-6-09)
Post by: candy_boy on September 07, 2009, 10:13:07 AM

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Eh?!

NAa~NI?!

*whips out hugeass Ishiyoshi uchiwa and waves it around*
ISHIYOSHI! ISHIYOSHI!   :yossi: :otomerika: :heart: :heart: 

 :shakeit:  :P

How dare you, sir?  :tama-mad: I suppose you know that.. THIS. MEANS. WAR!   :twisted: :twisted:


[/quote]
Yay, Yomiki time!!!

*also chanting*

YOMIKI! YOMIKI! YOMIKI!

and so yomiki begins.... :banghead
Rika, you better make a good come back.
 :otomerika:  :yossi:

[/quote]
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Thanks for the fic...

Those three  :love: :love: :love: :love:

It's interesting how everyone is now Yomiki - Ishiyoshi  XD

Anyways as the others i'll say: ISHIYOSHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :inlove:

Lol, you're going to start a riot between Ishoyoshi and Yomiki fans! BTW I'm rooting for Ishiyoshi.

Oh, wait. I guess its already started...  :P Yey! :cow:

AH~ so much festivities.  :yep: never has another love triangle elicited as much excitement as yocharmikitty  :heart: :heart:  :yossi:


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@ candy_boy, hmm Hanako is indeed tall, lets just pretend she is shorter than maki and yossie in here hehehe

Well, Yossy and Maki do look taller than they are.. so i guess it can be done. :)

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Chapter 7

Mou~ Rika! Don't just stand there... Ayumi, you're supposed to be in the Ishiyoshi side!  :cry:  And Maki, what took you so long?  :? Oh, right.. Hanako  :drool:

Mmm.. Maki & Hanako? Not too bad. Both are goodlooking. And Maki really has this gentlemanly aura, doesn't she? While Hanako's the Ojousama type... I'm open to it.  :thumbsup
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 7 )
Post by: kRisZ on September 07, 2009, 01:47:27 PM
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“Anyway, ill tell you later but lets get out of here first. Some crazy girl kept following me.” Maki grabbed yossie’s arm and forced her to run.

And so it's Maki. She's freaking out because she's being chased by a woman  XD  Cute  :on lol:

And YAY! YOMIKI MOMENT  :luvluv1:  well short but still YAY!  :pepper:  YAY!  :strawberry:  YAY!  :shakeit:



Author-san repeat after me  :on hypto: "I will keep Aya busy with Maki and something will happen to Rika so she wont be in the party" :on hypto:

 :on lol:

NICE ONE DUDE  :on lol:



How dare you, sir?  :tama-mad: I suppose you know that.. THIS. MEANS. WAR!   :twisted: :twisted:

You want war then war you shall receive  :twisted:  :twisted: it's not a sir btw  :P
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 7 )
Post by: Elle_Driver on September 07, 2009, 02:58:46 PM
Nice Yomiki moment  :luvluv2:
Please let there be more Yomiki lurv  :onioncheer:
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 7 )
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on September 08, 2009, 03:05:03 AM
Oh no Maki! :banghead: you should have found Aya instead of Yossy XD
Nice done Shiba-chan :thumbsup

@author-san thanks for the vid, wow she IS tall :nervous and the other girl looked really cute at her side XD but like candy_boy said Maki and Yossy looks taller than their actual heights so no problem there ;)

@kRisZ YAY! :thumbsup  but I'm a girl :nervous
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 8 )
Post by: blastingcool on September 08, 2009, 10:35:56 AM
im glad that you guys are energetic over these pairings.


Chapter 8

“What happened to your eyes Maki?” Yossie was choking up on her laughing as they were walking in the hallway.

“Don’t talk about it. I had a nightmare yesterday so I couldn’t sleep.” Maki was yawning constantly. Why did that girl even haunt my sleep. Is this what they call unlucky fate?

When Maki opened the door, she was so sleepy so her eyes were half-opened. She ended up bumping into the person in front of her.

“It’s you again!” Maki was pointing to the girl

“Maki!” Hanako hugged Maki tightly. “Aren’t you happy to see me again.”

“No! Why are you here.”

“I just transferred here so I can go to school with you everyday.” Maki rolled her eyes and walked past her. Yossie quickly followed

“Was she the girl in your dream?” Yossie whispered to Maki.

“Someone help me please.” Maki scratched her heads and messed up her hair. They both grabbed their own seat. Maki was sitting behind yossie.

“Alright class quiet up. I have an announcement to make. Today we have a transferred student.” Nakazawa signaled Hanako to introduce herself.

“My name is Hanako Takigawa. Nice to meet everyone.” Hanako made a bow to the class.

“Ok go choose your own seat.”

Please not next to me. Please not next to me. Maki’s eyes were closed and she was praying.

She heard a table on her left was pulling closed next to her table.

“Hi Maki.” Hanako beamed her with her great smile.

Why are you saying hi. Its not the first time we met. Maki rolled her eyes.

“By the way Yoshizawa. The principal, Ms. Kei, wants to see you in her office right now.” All eyes were on yossie.

“What did you do?” Maki was worried because kei-sama only requested to see students when they were in trouble.

“I don’t realy know.” Yossie got up and left the room.

I hope she’ll be ok. Maki watched yossie left while Hanako was waving hand in front of her face to get her attention. Maki shoved her hand away.

“Sensei, can I go to the bathroom?” Rika made an excuse to leave the room.

“Don’t take too long.” Rika quickly got up pretending that she needed to release her bladder really bad.

***********************************

Knock knock…..

“Come in.” Yossie twisted the doorknob open and bowed her head to Kei-san.

“What is that you want to see me.” Yossie asked politely.

Kei-san took a long sigh. “I’m sorry to say this but you are to be expelled from this school.”

Yossie’s face was in shock. “Can I know the reason why.”

“It’s because you have offended the most influential girl in this school.”

“Who is that?”

“Fujimoto. Her father wants you to be expelled immediately, which means you have to leave now.”

She was still bitter about our first argument. Yossie clenched her hands tightly. Cant believe she’s that kind of person.

“I got it.”

“Hold on!” Rika ran into the room without permission. “Principal, you cant expel her.”

“I’m sorry Ishikawa. I don’t have the power to change this.”

“Then I do. If she leaves, then you are leaving too.”

Kei was shifting in her seat nervously because she was afraid to lose this job. Offending either Ishikawa or Fujimoto would cause her job. It’s like a double edged sword.

“We can talk things through Ishikawa. Please don’t make things hard for me.”

“If it’s about Fujimoto that you are afraid of, then I’ll have my dad deal with this issue. You don’t have to worry about it anymore.” Rika grabbed Yossie’s hand and led her out of the office

“Why did you that?” Yossie was confused with Rika’s action. “You didn’t really have to stand up for me.”

Rika was hurt by yossie’s exclaim. “What makes you think I would ignore that.”

“Well, anyway thanks even though I don’t know why you would help me.” Yossie didnt want to know the reason why because she had other stuffs in mind. She bowed her head to Rika and left her standing there.

************************

What took yossie so long? Maki thought.

“Maki, what are you thinking?”

“Stop bothering me.” Hanako pouted her lips at Maki.

Ding dong………….

As soon as the bell rang, Maki quickly dashed outside the classroom but Hanako wouldn’t leave her alone.

“Why are you following me?” Maki was getting irritated

“Because wherever you go I go because you’re my lover.”

“When did that happen?”

“When you saved me the other day.”

Hanako clung onto Maki’s arm.

************************************

Miki was looking for yossie because she didn’t return to the classroom. “There you are?” Her eyes were lit with happiness again.

“What took you so long?” Miki was confused with yossie’s cold face.

“It’s none of your business?” Yossie answered rudely

“What happened?”

“You really want to know? Then I’ll tell you. I was sent to the principal’s office and when I got there. I just found out that I have offended you, Fujimoto, and I was to be expelled from this school since it was your father’s order. I guess I cant really blame him for having a nasty daughter like you.”

“What do you mean? You thought I told my dad on you and asked him to expel you.”

“Whatever you’re thinking I don’t care anymore and I do not want to associate with you, Fujimoto.”

“Yossie. Wait!” but yossie ignored Miki’s call and kept walking.


Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 8 )
Post by: rndmnwierd on September 08, 2009, 11:09:17 AM
With all the things going on in this story, the only thing I can think to comment on now is the fact that Kei's the principal. I think that might be a first in this forum.  XD
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 8 )
Post by: Miki IV on September 08, 2009, 05:53:29 PM
Now .....
<_< Aya will have problems?

>-<!!

Noooooo!

Miki-sama, don't throw anger at Aya!

And Rika defended Yossi!!!  :otomerika:

Next chapter, Onegaishimasu!!!  :D
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 8 )
Post by: kRisZ on September 11, 2009, 01:50:43 PM
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“Hold on!” Rika ran into the room without permission. “Principal, you cant expel her.”

Here comes the savior  :otomerika:


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“Because wherever you go I go because you’re my lover.”

An instant girlfriend  :lol:


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“There you are?” Her eyes were lit with happiness again.

Miki in love  :wub:


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“Yossie. Wait!” but yossie ignored Miki’s call and kept walking.

Holy Crap Yossie! LISTEN FIRST!  :angry:


@kRisZ YAY! :thumbsup  but I'm a girl :nervous

Noted  :D
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 8 )
Post by: ~happyxcharmy~ on September 11, 2009, 02:21:22 PM
ishiyoshi and ayamiki are the best~~
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 8 )
Post by: JFC on September 12, 2009, 06:19:22 AM
Dang, IshiYoMiki.  :O

Normally I'd say "poor Maki", but c'mon, there's a cute/hot rich girl who's got googly eyes for you! :lol:
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 9 )
Post by: blastingcool on March 20, 2010, 07:42:29 AM
woot im back, having a break from school now, this is an update after for a long time, i dont know if you guys are still interested in this story

Chapter 9
When miki got home, she was throwing a tantrum at everyone. “Where is Father!” Her face was really pissed off that no servants were daring to approach her.
“Ano, Master is in his reading room.” A butler timidly answered without looking at her.
Miki quickly walked upstairs and intruded her father’s room without knocking. “Father, why did you have to expel Yoshizawa.”
Miki’s father looked worried. He was wondering did he do another mistake again. “um..Because I was worried about you.  I heard that she bullied you.”
“It didn’t even happen! Where did you hear it from, is it Aya?”
“I forced her to say it out, so don’t blame her.”
Miki walked away but stopped at the door, “just please don’t stick your nose into my business again.”
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Why is she acting like that? Can’t she tell I care a lot for her? Rika was crying in her room and hugging her pillow.
Knock knock…
Rika quickly wiped her tears. “Come in”
“were you crying Rika.” She was surprised to see her dad at this time.
“No,” Rika tried to look away.
“Don’t lie to me daughter, you know I’m not happy if my daughter is not happy. So tell me what happened.” Rika’s father patted her head and pulled her in to comfort her. But Rika didn’t say anything but just cried on his shoulders.
“Father, why does love hurt so much?”
He was shocked. My daughter is in love? “Now who is the guy that you’re talking about.”
“It’s not a guy, it’s a girl” Rika recomposed herself. Now her father was in more shock. “Are you going to yell at me?” Rika asked nervously.
“I..”  He trailed away..
“Father?” Rika shook him lightly..
“No, I won’t yell at you. Like I say, your happiness is my happiness. I won’t make you to take a path where you don’t want to. It’s late already. Don’t think too much. Get some rest Rika.” He bid her good night kiss and left.
But I cant sleep. I want to see her right now.
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“Yoshizawa-san, you have a guest downstair.” Aika made a bow and exited outside the room.
Yossie glanced at her watch. “10:05, who could be visiting me now?”
Yossie came downstairs and saw Miki standing in the living room.
“Why are you here?” yossie asked coldly without inviting her to sit down.
“Yossie, can you just let me explain.”
“There’s nothing to explain. I don’t want to be expelled again by your father to be framed of bullying you. Aika, take her out and close the door.”
“Just give me 5 minutes, then ill leave even if u want me to stay.” Miki said in a firm tone that made yossie stop walking and looked at her.
“Let’s talk outside.” Yossie walked outside first…
Both were walking slowly on the pavement with Miki walking behind.
Miki stared at the dark sky that was lit by many twinkling stars. “The sky tonight is really pretty.”
“So what do you want to talk about.” Yossie was getting impatient.
“I wanted to clarify about today’s event. I admitted that I was angry at first when you bumped into me but I already let it go. My father thought I was still angry of you but I didn’t even tell him anything. He just heard it from rumor and therefore wanted to expel you as you see I’m his only daughter so he wanted to protect me”
Yossie was about to speak but she was cut off by Miki. “I know you won’t believe me and whether you believe or not, I still have to say it. I don’t hate you and I won’t use any influential wealth power to crush you.”
Yossie was speechless but she didn’t know what so say. She just stared into Miki’s eyes to search the answer whether she was telling the truth but she could only find warmth in her eyes.
“Why did you go through all the trouble just to tell me this.” Yossie wanted to confirm her feelings. Could it be that she likes me…
Should I confess her now. She’s so thickheaded. Miki made a move. She kissed yossie on the lips and whispered “it’s because I like you.”
Yossie pulled her into an embrace. She wanted this moment to last forever.
“Tonight, indeed is beautiful.” She kissed miki’s head.
from afar…..
Rika clenched her fist. “Let’s go home.” She ordered Erika menacingly. I definitely won’t forgive her.
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lol who is her that Rika wont forgive?
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 9, 3-18-10)
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on March 20, 2010, 08:55:32 AM
yay!!!! you updated it!!! :cow:
OMG!!! YOMIKI! :wub: :wub: :wub:

sopas!!!! Rika is angry :O wonder what she's gonna do?

btw... with this update and Miki's pic of her and Yocchan :inlove: (and Aya) in her blog wooo... Today was a YOMIKI day!!! :twothumbs
Today I'M HAAAAAPPYYYY!
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 9, 3-18-10)
Post by: ~happyxcharmy~ on March 20, 2010, 09:11:57 AM
welcome back~~
oh my god!! rika is angry!!
what will rika do next??!!
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 9, 3-18-10)
Post by: blastingcool on March 20, 2010, 09:32:19 AM
@Kreuz_Asakura, can you give me the link of miki's pic that of her, yossie and aya, really want to see it
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 9, 3-18-10)
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on March 21, 2010, 01:06:44 AM
^ of course! here --> http://ameblo.jp/miki-fujimoto/image-10486119331-10458339450.html (http://ameblo.jp/miki-fujimoto/image-10486119331-10458339450.html)
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 9, 3-18-10)
Post by: blastingcool on March 21, 2010, 10:03:41 AM
thanks for the link!

hm...are people still interested in this story, seems like not many replying. What happened to ishiyoshi and yomiki fans
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 9, 3-18-10)
Post by: Haruka on March 22, 2010, 12:09:31 AM
YAMIKI!!! YOMIKI!!!! YOKIMI!!!!! XD

wow it's almost 6 months ._. I'm so glad that u update =D

I look fordwar it x)
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 9, 3-18-10)
Post by: Elle_Driver on March 22, 2010, 05:48:46 PM
me too, me too! YOMIKI, GAM, YOMIKI

I love this story so pleeeaaaase continue  :twothumbs

that Yomiki moment was so cute, please let there be more of this
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (chapter 9, 3-18-10)
Post by: blastingcool on June 18, 2010, 08:22:01 AM
Finally I'm having a break from school. I'm still working on this story as long as i have free time from school. It's been couple months since last update and hopefully you guys still enjoy this story

Chapter 10


Yossie's room

After that tiresome argument and sudden confession from Miki, they both stick together like lovely birds, hugging in the night. Since it was late already, Yossie
offered Miki to sleep in her room rather then seeing her going home. Although they just recently became lovers, Yossie couldnt bring herself to sleep on the same
bed as Miki because she wanted to protect Miki's purity and she believes that intercourse should be after marriage.

"What are you staring at, yossie?" Miki turned around and stared at yossie sleeping in the futon on the ground. Even though Miki questioned her, she already knew the answer to herself.

"Of course at the beauty infront of me and on my bed." Yossie beamed a smile at Miki.

"You're such a sweet talker, is that why you have many girls after you?" Miki said with a hint of jealousy.

"What girls? I dont know any except one infront of me right now." Miki was lightened up with a smile but one girl came to her mind, which made her frown.

"What about that Ishikawa girl?" Miki narrowed her eyes and focused her entire attention on yossie, wanting to know the answer.

Yossie was stunned by her question. In fact, she didnt know the answer to herself at all. Did she really have any feelings toward Rika before Miki's confession or it was just a mistake. She didnt want to make a haste answer now that would make her regret later. However, one thing she knew for sure was that her feelings toward Miki were true.

Yossie turned to look at Miki and found anxiety in her eyes of her leaving Miki's side one day for someone.

"Miki...I.." Yossie trailed off and looked away from her eyes. She was waiting for Miki to throw a fist at her.

"Yossie..." Miki finally spoke again but in a soft voice. "You dont have to answer me now. I know it's too early for you to give me an answer to me, but i know that one day my feelings for you will sway you to only love me and only me in your eyes and heart. I wont give up and wont lose you to her even if i have to use underhanded methods just for the one I love. You can say that I'm evil but I'm just reacting naturally fighting for my happiness like every other girls would respond when they lovers are being snatched away."

Yossie got up from her futon and sat on the bed next to Miki. She stroke Miki's hair and smiled at her. "Miki, although I'm still confused for now, but i know one thing is that I do love you and I know that I do not want to leave you ever."

Miki leaned into the strong hand that made her feel warm and being loved. "Can you promise me one thing?" Miki pleaded while looking deeply into Yossie's eyes.

"What is it?"

"If one day i resort to using the nasty methods to prevent from losing you, will you forgive me for turning to the darkness."

"I will because i know that i cannot bring myself to hate my you." Yossie layed down next to Miki and hugged her.

"Thanks yossie."
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The next day....

Goto yawned while stretching her back. She walked to the dining room. "Ayako, where is my breakfast?" There was a strange smell coming from the kitchen that caught Goto's nose. "Neh Ayako what is that smell. Normally there isnt a smell like that since you're a great cook." Goto still talked with her eyes half closed

"Hai Goto, here is your breakfast."

Wait a minute, This isnt Ayako's voice but this voice is so familiar. Goto looked up but to her surprise, she saw a person that she was dread to avoid.

"HANAKO!!!!! WHY ARE YOU HERE IN MY HOUSE? HOW DID YOU GET IN HERE?"

"Calm down Goto, one question at a time."

Goto tried to recompose herself. "Alright, how did you get in here?"

"I asked your maid, Ayako, to let me in."

"but she cant just listen to a stranger"

"Easy, i said that i'm your girlfriend and she understood."

"I cant believe this nonsense, Does she really work for me?" Goto mumbled to herself. "Why are you here. Didnt i tell you that i dont want to see you."

"How mean Goto, I wanted to cook breakfast for you everyday"

"This is the first and also the last. Now get out of my house."

"But you havent tasted my food yet."

Goto stared at the messy eggs on the dish infront of her. So these gave a strange smell earlier. How could i even eat these but if i dont she wont leave me alone. Aaarggg...

Goto picked up her fork and took a big bite wanting to finish as soon as possible to drive away the annoying pest.

"Alright done, now you can leave and dont come back"

"Goto, why are you so mean to me? What have i done that makes you hate me so much?" Hanako eyes started to fill with tears as she looked on the floor. "Fine, I'll leave and i wont appear infront of you again. I dont want be someone whom you feel annoying." Hanako ran outside while crying, not turning back to look at Goto.

"Hanako..." Goto was shocked that she made her cry. She didnt really want this to happen. All she wanted just a moment of peace ever since that day that she saved Hanako. Hanako had been following and clinging onto her most of the time at school and home is the only place that she didnt have to deal with Hanako. But to go this far was not what she planned. Goto felt guilty and wanted to go after her to apologize but she was afraid that once it was over, Hanako will cling onto her like before.

"Aaarggg..my stomach!!" Goto grabbed her tummy as it hurt so much. She fell unconscious on the floor.
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Ayumi felt uncomfortable by the silence in the eating room between her and Rika. Ever since Rika arrived at school, she seemed quiet and down. Ayumi wanted to help lighten up her best friend but she didnt know what was the source of the problem.

"I really cant stand this atmosphere anymore. Rika, what has happened to you? You havent talked more than couple words ever since yesterday. What happened to the cheerful you?"

Rika kept on eating and let Ayumi screaming to herself. Ayumi didnt really know what to do. She excused herself outside to take in some fresh air. As she walked outside, she bumped into Aya.

"Ittai, I'm sorry" Ayumi helped Aya get up

"I'm sorry for being clumsy. Are you okay."

"I'm alright but you dont look okay to me. You seem angry."

"It's nothing." Ayumi walked away

Meanwhile in the green tag dinning room

"Yossie say ahh." Miki was holding up the spoon and brought it to Yossie's mouth

"Stop with the "ahh". It makes me feel like a child." Miki giggled as Yossie chewed her food.

"but it's so fun to feed you like this."

"Arent you hungry? There's no need to feed me"

"I dont feel hungry at all as long as i get to feed you everyday. Now open your mouth again."

Yossie was suffering in embarassment from now on every lunch time.

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Sorry for those out there who want to read a lemon part between yossie and miki but I dont know how to write that kind. Anyone is welcome to do it for me hehehe :welcome
Btw, what are ayumi and aya full names

I promise there will be ishiyoshi stuffs next update :otomerika: :yossi:
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (Chapter 10)
Post by: ~happyxcharmy~ on June 20, 2010, 08:52:30 AM
woo~
i am waiting for ishiyoshi~
full names:
aya matsuura
ayumi shibata
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (Chapter 10)
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on June 21, 2010, 12:12:11 AM
Update!!! Cool!!!! :w00t:

YOMIKI :inlove:  althought, I'm kind of afraid of Miki turning to the dark side  :(
wonder what are Rika plans :?
Hanako and Maki are just plain hilarious :lol:
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (Chapter 10)
Post by: oddball on June 21, 2010, 02:34:58 PM
Caught up onreading this Fanfic and really enjoying it so far, Liking Yossie's chatracter in this, it's a bit different from other fics I have read.

please keep updating!
Title: Re: unstoppable feelings (Chapter 10)
Post by: lina_sama on July 14, 2010, 11:05:19 PM
I like your fics, is very interesnte, continues posted,good luck :thumbsup