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Re: More Than One Story... [Guardian Angel: Chapter 5 - Before Sunrise]
« Reply #260 on: November 26, 2008, 09:04:21 PM »
OMG
GakiKame will remain stong and together, right? :O
Risa better not fall for Ai-chan! >_<

...That's so depressing that Sayu is still in a coma... :badluck:

 :wub: Magic is magic.  XD
No but really, it was so awesome! GakiKame~ :luvluv1:



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Re: More Than One Story... [Guardian Angel: Chapter 5 - Before Sunrise]
« Reply #261 on: November 28, 2008, 07:55:55 AM »
I’m breaking 'Enchanted' into 2 parts as it got quite long. Yup yup, and so I present you with the next chapter of Glass Slipper.


Glass Slipper
Chapter 4 – Enchanted (Part 1)

"Somebody's in love~~"

Startled by the sudden singsong voice that entered her ears, Eri peeked to the left at her supposedly knocked out friend. Or so she had thought.

"Aren't you drunk?"

"It’s just to see how the guys will react silly."

A voice answered breezily her question and that reply wasn’t coming from Reina.

"Sayu….? You too?!"

Pointing a shaking finger at her friend sitting in the front passenger seat, Eri gasped disbelievingly.

"You didn't really think that measly amount of wine would do us in did you?"

Crossing her legs one over the other, Reina asked, her eyes sparkling with mischief. Positioning her head in the space sandwiched between two leather headrests, Sayumi glanced at Eri before explaining further.

"If Reina and I hadn't pretended to be wasted, how could we have gotten the boys to carry us down?"

Adding the next sentence as an after thought, she continued.

"I’m sure Kuu would have kissed me if not for the nosey person who kept staring!"

Glaring at the driver beside her, Sayumi growled menacingly. Aware that the malicious comment was directed at him, the cab driver pretended to be ignorant and made a big show out of concentrating on his driving.

"At least you weren’t heaved around like a sack of potatoes. The way Taka carried me made it look as if I was a dead body!"

Taking gulps of well needed air in between laughing at Reina’s prior predicament, Sayumi managed to showcase some of her infamous wit. Spelling out the word and dragging the pronunciation deliberately, Sayumi relished every second of watching Reina squirm.

"I believe the correct term is carcass. C-A-R-C-A-S-S."

"Oh shut up!"

Smacking the seat of the taxi with her hands agitatedly, Reina pouted exasperated at the taller girl and twisted her head away to face the side window. Tired of making fun of the infuriated kitty cat, Sayumi turned her attention to the silent Eri.

"I can’t believe little shy and innocent Eririn would let herself go and engage in some long overdue kissing. That was some hawt action going on."

“I’m surprised too.”

Forgetting quickly about her own troubles, Reina scooted nearer to join in the conversation.

“You…you…saw?”

“Of course we did. If you didn’t want others to notice get a room sister!”

Her statement induced another round of energized laughter in the moving automobile and at this instant, even the driver snorted a couple of times. He only stopped when Sayumi shot him another deadly glare.

“Since we’re all satisfied with the service, how about we visit Glass Slipper again tomorrow?”

NO!”

Reacting violently to Reina’s casual suggestion, Eri realized her highly disturbed emotional state and softened her voice to speak normally again.

“I mean we should be spending our time studying.”

Reminding them of their impending year-end examinations, Eri tried weakly to convince her friends otherwise. She didn’t wish to return to the place where she met Gaki. Seeing him again would certainly waiver her resolve of not falling in love with him. After she had turned 21 years old, she would have to be engaged to the man her family has chosen. And after graduation from university, she would then marry him and take over the responsibility of the Kamei household. None of this information was told to Sayumi and Reina and Eri intended to keep it that way until the day she handed them their invitation cards to the wedding ceremony. Thinking sadly to herself of her sealed fate, Eri didn’t detect the other two making eyes at each other. Unbeknownst to her, they were hatching a plot. If Eri wasn’t willing to enter the club, they were going to have to make it come to her.

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*Yawn*

Stretching her arms skywards, Reina yawned loudly in the quiet study area of the university library. Not caring about the annoyed stares the other students were directing at her, she continued slamming her books shut and rustling her stack of papers loudly.

“So, what’s for dinner?”

“Let’s go binge on junk food at the fair!”

Putting down the cover of her own books, Sayumi, also oblivious to another round of irritated glares, proceeded to gather her bunch of multi-colored highlighters and replaced them into her pencil case.

“Oooh good idea. We can go on every one of those rides and puke out all the crap we’ve eaten!”

“Eating then puking. Wouldn’t that feel awful?”

Completely missing Reina’s habit of bizarre sarcasm, Eri enquired worriedly, her brows knitted tightly together.

“Just pack up quickly. We don’t wanna be late.”

Helping Eri keep her notebooks and self-written explanatory notes, Sayumi hissed to Reina in a low voice.

“Did you ask them out?”

“You can put your total trust in Reina.”

Patting her chest and winking secretly to the one standing next to her, Reina confirmed the settlement of their advance arrangement. On the pretext of visiting the washroom, she had dialed the phone number on the name card she had whisked from the crystal bowl positioned on the podium at the entrance of Glass Slipper. She had made a booking to go on dates with all three of the princes and they were going to get Eri to spend some quality time alone with Prince Gaki regardless of whether she was willing to or not.

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“What’s the rush?”

Winded and wheezing for air as her lungs burned with the spur-of-the-moment running from the beginning of the street, Eri was pulled along by her two very excited friends as they dashed towards the large clearing where the travelling funfair had set up spot. 

“Time waits for no man sister!”

Yelling from the front to answer her, Reina didn’t turn back and only continued dragging her as they weaved through the masses of people chocking up the street.

“It’s time AND tide waits for no man Reina. And we’re not men!’

Correcting her mistake in using the phrase, Sayumi shook her head and tsk-tsk vociferously at the clueless younger.

“Whatever, who cares!”

By the time the three young women arrived at the entrance of the crowded theme park, hordes of visitors had already gathered around the area. There were long queues forming at the ticket booths and colorful balloons floated about unrestrictedly.

“Damn these stupid kids. Why did they have to hold blasted balloons?”

Standing on tip-toe to try and locate the boys, Reina had to crane her neck to see above the layers of rubber bubbles.

“Blame yourself for being stuck at the same height since Grade 6. Do you wanna borrow my hair pin to pop at the balloons?”

Narrowing her eyes then rolling them at the giggling Sayumi, Reina retorted.

“Laugh all you want. Just know that you’ll be paying your own expenses.”

“Ahhhhhh….I was kidding. Reina isn’t so petty.”

At hearing Reina’s threat, Sayumi immediately compromised. Her mother was a housewife and her sister was still studying. Hence her father was supporting the family of four with his meager salary as a chemical engineer at one of the larger petrochemical companies. While it would have been sufficient for the expenditure of normal families, it wasn’t that adequate for living in pricey Tokyo. Unlike Eri and Reina who were both their family’s lone child, Sayumi had to watch her spending lifestyle very carefully. Knowing full well her situation, Reina took the opportunity to obtain her revenge. Jerking her head away from Sayumi in mock resentment, Reina said in a serious tone.

“Oh yeah, Reina’s extremely small-minded.”

“I’m sorry Reina.”

Part of Sayumi was worried about having to foot her own bills, but the greater portion of that anxiety was that Reina was truly mad. Sayumi didn’t want to lose her as a friend. In reality, Sayumi could only act her true self when around Eri and Reina. Before meeting them, she was timid and didn’t dare voice her thoughts to anyone except pill bugs. In a way, having Reina beside her changed her life. Seeing her downcast look, Reina felt remorseful for orchestrating the cruel joke.

“Hey I was just playing around. You know I wouldn’t get mad over such a trivial thing.”

“Really? Thank you Reina!!”

Throwing her arms around Reina’s neck, Sayumi hugged the shorter girl tightly and shook her from side to side. Anyone watching them would have found the booty shaking that had resulted highly amusing. The pair was still caught up in their own world when Eri tugged hesitantly at their sleeves.

“Erm Sayu, Reina? Why are the Princes from Glass Slipper here?”

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Glass Slipper: Chapter 3 – Magic

@SxY: I’m glad you liked this. And yep, Eri’s the only child purely for the purpose of this fic :hee:

@ringo-hime: For RenAi it’s gonna be slightly more complicated. That’s all I’m going to say for now :glasses:

@JFC: You’re right about that. The hosts aren’t supposed to have true feelings for the girls :on thumbb:

@Sukoshi: SxY’s gift was so much better than mine but it’s the thought that counts right (Makes excuses for my crappy writing) :sweat:

@SBK: In Part 2 of 'Enchanted' you’re gonna get ya wish. Prince Gaki and Eri finally get some time alone :mon misch:


Guardian Angel: Chapter 5 - Before Sunrise

@Sukoshi: Ahhhh I forgot to specify which fic it was at first. Luckily you reminded me :mon lol:

@SxY: It was my fault, like I said I forgot to put GA in the title of the chapter :mon sweat:

@Yuuyami: Kyaaaaaaaaaaaa~~~ *ureshii* :mon lovelaff: I love your drawings! And THANK YOU so much for spending the time and effort to draw this for GS. It’s awesome and I love it to bits!

@SBK: I’m feeling bad for leaving Sayumi in the coma. I’ll probably bring her out of it in the next GA chapter so look out for it! :mon fu:

@JFC: GakiKame were relying on each other in different ways. As to how they were taking care of each other, more will be explained in later chapters :vv:

@lalazang: Yippee new reader!! And you commented to. Awww shucks, thanks for doing that :gmon shy: You made my entire week. I’m curious though, which member or pairing do you like?

@KonaKaga: You’re back! I missed seeing you around. How is school holding up? Ganbatte kudasi, I’ll be rooting for you :onioncheer:
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Re: More Than One Story... [Glass Slipper: Chapter 4 - Enchanted ~ Part 1]
« Reply #262 on: November 28, 2008, 08:29:49 AM »
Zomg!!!! I love how you incorporated real facts into this chapter. And we got to understand Sayu better, too.

...Oh crud. Eri has spotted their princes. o-o I can't wait to see what happens next! (Btw, sorry if there are some errors inths comment. I'm typing by iTouch and it's not the easiest thing to type with...)

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Re: More Than One Story... [Guardian Angel: Chapter 5 - Before Sunrise]
« Reply #263 on: November 28, 2008, 11:52:31 AM »
@Sukoshi: SxY’s gift was so much better than mine but it’s the thought that counts right (Makes excuses for my crappy writing)

@SBK: I’m feeling bad for leaving Sayumi in the coma. I’ll probably bring her out of it in the next GA chapter so look out for it!

Ack!  I will have none of that!  (look away SxY while i shower hammy with love!)  You have no idea how much I LOVE LOVE GA (well actually I think you do XD)  so an update on that was absolutely the best!   BEST *____*!  No need to make excuses for *wonderful* *dramatic* *heart wrenching* *heartwarming* *addictive* writing hammy :D  plus the thought was unbelievable kind.  Not only did you know exactly what I wanted...you actually took the time out of your busy schedule to write it with me in mind.  No ones ever done that for me before.  :wub:  and now I have two very talented people to thank =D

(okay you can look back now SxY)  I'm more than touched by the gestures.   and if you think about it was the prefect mix.  GA was suspenseful and emotional while Beneficial disaster was delightfully funny =D  I really couldn't ask for anything more =D

oh and what's this?  Do you mean it?  The bunny is coming back from the dead?...erm I mean out of the coma?!   Wah!  if that's the case I'm looking way forward to that! 

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GS4

lol!  I was surprised to read that Sayu and Reina were passed out during the last chapter and now I know why!  lol they are just too funny!  the carcass part had me laughing out loud  :lol:

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“Oooh good idea. We can go on every one of those rides and puke out all the crap we’ve eaten!”

“Eating then puking. Wouldn’t that feel awful?”

I love Reina's sense of humor!  Eri's lack of understanding was also funny but in a horrible way XD  I went from  :wahaha: to  :mon barf:

I'm so extremely fond of the sharp crayon and shiny crayon being together.  So mischievous~ So sweet~

Can't wait to see what's in store for Eri~




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Re: More Than One Story... [Glass Slipper: Chapter 4 - Enchanted ~ Part 1]
« Reply #264 on: November 28, 2008, 01:37:04 PM »
wow, that was osam!
LOL @ Reina and Sayu for pretending to be drunk.. XD hahaha.

so the GakiKame hawtness was in public?!! XD

haha, and Sayu correcting Reina like that!!!!

now i cnt wait for more, since Reina invited the Glass Slippers Princes!! XDDDD

kyaaaa~ <3

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Re: More Than One Story... [Glass Slipper: Chapter 4 - Enchanted ~ Part 1]
« Reply #265 on: November 28, 2008, 06:34:38 PM »
Reina and Sayu got skillz!! XD It's really cute how Sayu and Reina are constantly teasing each other (and Eri~). Poor poor Eri, sucks that her fate is already decided. But I know you're gonna find a way around it, aren't you? :heart: Awwww, Sayu~ :P She's so sentimental-ish. But I'm glad she found them b/c being friends with pill bugs is like so sad. :lol:

Hehehe, Eri and Gaki sitting in a tree... XD

This chapter really must be long!

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Re: More Than One Story... [Glass Slipper: Chapter 4 - Enchanted ~ Part 1]
« Reply #266 on: November 28, 2008, 08:42:53 PM »
XD The smart-ass remarks between Sayu and Reina are hilarious!

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@KonaKaga: You’re back! I missed seeing you around. How is school holding up? Ganbatte kudasi, I’ll be rooting for you  :onioncheer:

 :sweatdrop: Ehehe, thanks. School's kinda the reason why I've disappeared and not updated my new story! :O
But it's going well... I suppose. I'm pretty happy though since my volleyball team won pre-districts and Districts! :w00t: I was meant to be on the A team (since I've been on it for all the other games in the season) but I got transferred to B for some reason. A team lost all of their games in pre-districts. But my team won. So we were laughing cause B did SOOOO much better than A.
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I kinda rambled....sorry :sweatdrop:

Thanks for rooting for me! I've got ANOTHER science test coming up!  :cry:


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Re: More Than One Story... [Glass Slipper: Chapter 4 - Enchanted ~ Part 1]
« Reply #267 on: November 28, 2008, 08:54:24 PM »
Ack!  I will have none of that!  (look away SxY while i shower hammy with love!)
Forget that! XD *joins you in showering hammy with love* Hammy's writing is more creative than mine... All I ever really seem to do is base my fics off of actual events. xD I need to start using my head a little more.

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Re: More Than One Story... [Glass Slipper: Chapter 4 - Enchanted ~ Part 1]
« Reply #268 on: November 29, 2008, 08:38:56 AM »
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"Somebody's in love~~"

Startled by the sudden singsong voice that entered her ears, Eri peeked to the left at her supposedly knocked out friend. Or so she had thought.

"Aren't you drunk?"

"It’s just to see how the guys will react silly."

A voice answered breezily her question and that reply wasn’t coming from Reina.

"Sayu….? You too?!"

Pointing a shaking finger at her friend sitting in the front passenger seat, Eri gasped disbelievingly.

"You didn't really think that measly amount of wine would do us in did you?"
Okay, mental note: do NOT do a drinking contest against Sayu and Reina. :P



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"If Reina and I hadn't pretended to be wasted, how could we have gotten the boys to carry us down?"

Adding the next sentence as an after thought, she continued.

"I’m sure Kuu would have kissed me if not for the nosey person who kept staring!"
Damn, these girls could be bigger players than the escort guys. XD



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"I can’t believe little shy and innocent Eririn would let herself go and engage in some long overdue kissing. That was some hawt action going on."

“I’m surprised too.”

Forgetting quickly about her own troubles, Reina scooted nearer to join in the conversation.

“You…you…saw?”

“Of course we did. If you didn’t want others to notice get a room sister!”
Sayu/Reina = :mon misch:
Eri = :OMG:



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Eri tried weakly to convince her friends otherwise. She didn’t wish to return to the place where she met Gaki. Seeing him again would certainly waiver her resolve of not falling in love with him. After she had turned 21 years old, she would have to be engaged to the man her family has chosen. And after graduation from university, she would then marry him and take over the responsibility of the Kamei household. None of this information was told to Sayumi and Reina and Eri intended to keep it that way until the day she handed them their invitation cards to the wedding ceremony.
ERI'S IN AN ARRANGED MARRIAGE?!?!?
:mon wtf:



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Eri didn’t detect the other two making eyes at each other. Unbeknownst to her, they were hatching a plot. If Eri wasn’t willing to enter the club, they were going to have to make it come to her.
Sayu/Reina = :twisted:



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Reina confirmed the settlement of their advance arrangement. On the pretext of visiting the washroom, she had dialed the phone number on the name card she had whisked from the crystal bowl positioned on the podium at the entrance of Glass Slipper. She had made a booking to go on dates with all three of the princes and they were going to get Eri to spend some quality time alone with Prince Gaki regardless of whether she was willing to or not.
Oh they're sneaky!  :D



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*SAYU'S MINI-BIO*
Again with the dango-mushi. :cow:



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Throwing her arms around Reina’s neck, Sayumi hugged the shorter girl tightly and shook her from side to side. Anyone watching them would have found the booty shaking that had resulted highly amusing.
Not to mention really cute as well.
:nya:



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The pair was still caught up in their own world when Eri tugged hesitantly at their sleeves.

“Erm Sayu, Reina? Why are the Princes from Glass Slipper here?”
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand...the cat's out of the bag.




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Re: More Than One Story... [Glass Slipper: Chapter 4 - Enchanted ~ Part 1]
« Reply #269 on: December 07, 2008, 08:22:12 AM »
Glass Slipper
Chapter 5 - Enchanted (Part 2)


The lengthened shadows of six people were cast onto the pavement by the setting sun as the group stood in a circle amid the hustle and bustle. No one said anything as both sides concentrated on taking in how each person looked in the fading sunlight. The resulting outcome was vastly different from that concluded when they first met in the dimly lit club.

Wow, Taka dresses very biker style. He totally complements my lolita look!

Eh... Kuu looks really young in his "poofy" vest and cargo pants.

Plait shirt over white tee, jeans and Red Wing boots. Exactly how I like a guy to dress.

Diverse thoughts ran through the girls' heads as they made their way over to the boys waiting patiently at the entrance of the fair. Reaching her date first, Reina practically attached herself on to Taka's arm and leaned her head contentedly on his shoulder. Purring sexily for good effect, she greeted him.

"How's it going tiger?"

On Sayumi's part, she had no idea why she got shy all of a sudden. Seeing Kuu's goofy grin as she walked closer, she felt her own cheeks heat up and knew she must be blushing. Looking down embarrassedly, she didn't dare look Kuu in the eye. When he linked his fingers with hers and tugged her gently towards the main entry, she obliged and followed him obediently. With Kuu taking the lead, Reina dragged Taka along and the four proceeded to enter the fair which was already in full swing. Forgetting about Eri momentarily, the two girls only remembered their timid friend when she voiced her objections.

"Reina! Sayu! Where are you going?!"

Almost frantic at seeing Sayumi leave her behind, Eri was on the verge of hysterical when Reina seemed to be abandoning her too. It was impossible for her to be left alone with anyone of the opposite sex if people she was comfortable with weren't around to accompany her. She wouldn't know what to say, what to do, or where to go. Kamei Eri was that much reliant on her two blossom friends.

"We'll meet back here at the end of the night. Have fun Eri!"

Winking at her and chuckling joyously, Reina wasn't sure if the excitement she was feeling was purely for Eri's sake or was it also partly for herself. Walking side by side with Taka who was dressed in a black leather jacket and black pants, she was positive they were attracting numerous envious stares from the other females in the area. Taka was an incredibly handsome guy even with his limited height. The aloof expression on his face only added to that appeal.

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"Let's go."

Making a move to hold her hand, Gaki failed to grasp it successfully when Eri shrank back on reflex. A crestfallen grimace flashed across on his face but he forced himself to smile at seeing her guilty look. Strolling in under the huge blinking signage positioned above the archway, the group was immediately transformed into an alternate universe. Jolly music filled the atmosphere, the fragrant aroma of popcorn and cotton candy penetrated the air and flashing lights of various primary colors captured one's vision. The name of the fair - Enchanted, was a suitably fitting one.

"Wow…"

Breathing out in wonder, Eri twirled around a little with all the exhilaration she was feeling from soaking up the infectious ambience. Smiling as he watched her childish actions, Gaki realized once more how attracted he was to Eri. It was just their second meeting and already he couldn't bear to be kept apart from her.

How could someone be so beautiful? How could someone be this perfect?

Seizing the chance to discretely take her hand, Gaki pulled Eri towards the nearest popular attraction. The 'House of Terror.'

"Yada, yada!"

Trying to run away from the dilapidated looking structure built a distance away, Eri was easily caught by Gaki and her attempt rendered futile.

"How can you say you've visited the fair if you skip the haunted house?"

Visibly tickled by Eri's terrified expression, Gaki chuckled. His laughter had a melodious ring and Eri confirmed to herself that she liked the sound of it. Pausing a little as if to think about something, he continued.

"You said you wanted to conquer your fear of haunted houses."

At hearing his reason for coercing her, Eri ceased her struggling to face him. What Gaki said was true and she was surprised and touched that he memorized a passing comment. Looking up at him, Eri soon realized their rather intimate position. Her hands were pushing against his chest while his hands were holding firmly onto her upper arms. The intense way by which Gaki was staring down at her brought a blush to her cheeks and the effect was so thorough that the tip of her ears too turned pinkish.

Inside the dark and eerily decorated building, the air was still and spine-chilling music played through the hidden speakers. Even though Eri knew the scare tactics were man-made and there weren't really ghosts and goblins in the world, that knowledge it did little to dispel her fears. The thumping of her heart rang in her ears as she followed Gaki further into the maze of corridors. An abrupt bloodcurdling scream sent her running forwards into Gaki and the momentum of her actions threw him off balance briefly. Recovering soon after to pat her hands which were tightly attached around his waist, he reassured her confidently.

"The ghosts won't touch you. They made a promise."

Behind him, Eri gradually grew less frightened and she believed wholeheartedly what Gaki said. Unbeknownst to her, there would come a day where she would unconditionally trust him with something as vital and precious as life itself. Eri didn't shiver as much as before and her heart stopped beating so rapidly. The falling spiders and randomly placed skeletons barely distracted her from the only thought in her mind. Increasing the pressure of her arms around Gaki's body and sliding one hand up to grip at the front of his shirt, Eri pressed her cheek against his back to enjoy the comforting heat emitting from his body.

His back is so warm.

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The rows of gifts and assortment of knickknacks made Sayumi awestruck. Coming from a modest background, she could never afford more than one item in a shop like this. Picking out a stuffed animal from the enormous shelf laden with toys, Sayumi was so engrossed with the item that she didn't detect Kuu creeping up silently behind her.

"BOO!"

"Kyaa~~!"

Laughing merrily like a big kid, Kuu had a radiant smile on his face as he gleefully teased Sayumi for her exaggerated reaction. Indignant at having been made fun of, she chased him around the area and slapped at his arms repeatedly for the immature trick.

"Ow, ow. I'm sorry. Stop hitting me!"

"Hmphf!"

Pretending to be annoyed, Sayumi put her hands on her hips and turned away from Kuu, all the while still clinging onto the plushie she adored so much.

"To prove how apologetic I am, I'll get you a present."

Before Sayumi could ask more or reject the good intention, Kuu had vanished from the aisle as quickly as he had appeared. Sighing at his flippant character, Sayumi replaced the stuff toy back on the shelf. Subsequently, the distracting mutterings from some girls in the next row entered her ears.

"What do you think is their relationship?"

"Sister? Aunt? Girlfriend?"

"Girlfriend? Doesn't she look much older?"

Peering over the display of the topmost shelf, Sayumi stood on tiptoe and noticed a group of three girls in school uniforms crouched low whispering to each other.

"Maybe Kusumi senpai likes older women. That would explain why he never gave me, the school belle, the time of day."

"Oh, oh I know! What if the old hag is paying him to spend time with her?"

"You mean he works as a pimp?"

"Not pimp! What do they call that...host? Escort?"

"No wonder he is so generous with his cash. I be he earns a lot from being an escort."

If the girls didn't mistake Kuu for someone else and he was in actuality this Kusumi senpai they were talking about, then that would mean he was still a young student. Judging from the design of their uniforms, the teenagers were in high school. If Kuu was a high school student, he would be considerably younger than herself. The difference in age would no doubt cause some problems as her father was a fiercely traditional man. He would never consent to her relationship with a brash and unlearned youth. Deciding to find out which institution the girls attended, Sayumi approached them.

Kuu literally bounced back to where Sayumi was waiting as he sprung a few inches into the air with every step he took. Carrying a large stuffed toy identical to the one Sayumi was cradling previously under his arm, he ignored the amused stares from the other people browsing the shelves. When he finally came up to Sayumi, she had her back facing him, apparently deep in thought.

"SURPRISE!"

At hearing his voice, Sayumi whirled around with an unreadable expression on her face. Kuu had bunny ears on his head and dangling from his outstretched hands was a pink and white rabbit stuffed toy. Thrusting the object into her arms, Kuu squatted down slightly so he was at eye level with Sayumi.

"That was the first part of the present.... This is the next."

Leaning in to kiss her lightly, his lips left her glossed ones as swiftly as it touched. For a few seconds Sayumi was left stunned by his bold act until the clapping and cheering of the gathered crowd watching them snapped her out of her reverie. Sayumi had always prided herself for her ability of reading people effortlessly. This time she was certain of Kuu's affections for her. Deciding that they would face all opposition towards their relationship together, Sayumi encircled her arms around Kuu's neck and pulled him in for a well-deserved embrace.

Nothing else matters. Not even the fact that you're three years younger.

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"You wanna ride the ferris wheel?"

"What? Is that so unbelievable?"

Shrugging his shoulders to demonstrate he was fine with the arrangement, Taka allowed Reina to lead him to the bottom of the massive metal structure where the ticket seller stood. Anticipation welled up within Reina as they waited in line for their turn. With her tough as nails and yankii image known to so many, going on a ride as tame as the Ferris Wheel was hardly something she would be associated with. Nevertheless, deep inside, Reina was just as girly and insecure as Eri and Sayumi.

Reina had been the only one keeping the conversation going up to the point where they were ushered into one of the many glass cabins. Completely fed up of being so obviously neglected, Reina voiced her dissatisfaction at the disregard.

"Why are you so distant? Is it such a torture being with me?"

Shifting his line of sight from the night scenery outside the compartment to focus on Reina's face, Taka replied.

"I've always been like this."

"But....but you weren't that night."

Reina adamantly countered as she recalled how attentive he was by entertaining her with magic tricks and encouraging her to try the assortment of alcoholic beverages he had selected.

"I was in a particularly good mood then. Otherwise I wouldn't bother playing with customers. My attitude has never been a problem with my other patrons. If you don't like how I do things you could always request for another host."

Angry red marks appeared on Reina's palm as she clenched her hands and dug her immaculately manicured nails into her flesh. Nobody has ever treated her so disrespectfully. As the extensively doted daughter of a retired Yakuza chief, everyone she had come into contact with since the day she was born didn't dare treat her with anything less than the courtesy worthy of a queen. Even her father's henchmen were at her beck and call and had to act according to her changing whims and fancies. From four years of age, she has had full-grown men clad in smart black suits kneel down before her imitating horses or large dogs so she could ride on their backs or perform clownish acts for her amusement. At this moment, Reina was very tempted to lash out at Taka for his disdainful behavior while screaming "Do you know who I am?!" to intimidate him into treating her better. Except that she was too badly hurt by his comparisons of her to other patrons.

"Am I just another client to you?"

"What else could you be."

*Pia!*

The resounding sound of a slap reverberated within the small enclosed space. The five minutes whilst the carriage hung in the sky as the machine remained stationary for riders seated inside to admire the majestic landscape seemed like an eternity with Taka and Reina glaring hard at each other.


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@SxY: Ahhh I totally understand how hard it is to comment like that. Thanks for still doing it :) Basing fics off actual events is even harder than thinking up new stuff IMO. So don't ever say you aren't creative *hugs*
 
@Sukoshi: Awwww you made me blush. Why are you so nice? :oops:

@ringo-hime: Well they were smooching right there on the sofa. It was kinda hard to miss that :D

@SBK: Eri and Gaki sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G~~! :lol: Great song huh. Or is that a rhyme?

@KonaKaga: Oooh I see you've updated. I gotta go read that soon. How was the Science test? Wow so you're a volleyball hot-shot. Awesome! :)

@JFC: It's the appearance of your long comments!! THANK YOU!! I love reading em :heart:

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Re: More Than One Story... [Glass Slipper: Chapter 5 - Enchanted ~ Part 2]
« Reply #270 on: December 07, 2008, 08:36:30 AM »
Now you know how much I stalk this thread/forum. xD I started reading this 2 minutes after your update. o-o Moving on...

Kya! :wub:  Part two was amazingly cute.  (Plait shirt over white tee + jeans = how I like my guys, too. How interesting... O_o) I love how Risa and Eri went into the haunted house... Such good memories. *sighs contentedly* And of course there's the ever amazing Sayu and Kuu. I love their relationship - so bouncy and cute and... Aww... :heart:  Oh, and I love the way your portray Reina and Ai. XD Their relationship is as active as ever.  I wonder if that slap hurt...

Imagines Eri hugging Gaki-san from the back. :wub: *drifts off into fantasy land*

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Re: More Than One Story... [Glass Slipper: Chapter 5 - Enchanted ~ Part 2]
« Reply #271 on: December 07, 2008, 11:10:39 AM »
AH! you are a pro stalker!  no wonder I can't beat you at commenting! 

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Eh... Kuu looks really young in his "poofy" vest and cargo pants.
lol....poor Sayu.  She'll just have to get him to dress older from now on XD   imagining Koha as a pseudo tuxedo mask has me all giddy XD  Normally I'd cringe at anything SayuxKoha but they are just so SO cute in this alternative universe!

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"The ghosts won't touch you. They made a promise."

Hehehe Gaki says the best things that people never forget =D

ah I've been thinking all along that Sayu and Eri have it made with the princes...but poor Reina XD  but then again I don't think Reina would be interested if he wasn't at least a little hard to get! 

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Re: More Than One Story... [Glass Slipper: Chapter 5 - Enchanted ~ Part 2]
« Reply #272 on: December 07, 2008, 02:10:57 PM »
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Breathing out in wonder, Eri twirled around a little with all the exhilaration she was feeling from soaking up the infectious ambience. Smiling as he watched her childish actions, Gaki realized once more how attracted he was to Eri. It was just their second meeting and already he couldn't bear to be kept apart from her.

"How could someone be so beautiful? How could someone be this perfect?"

It's Eri. It's not something you question, it's someone that just is. :wub:

Aww, the ghost house scene was so sweet. There was only one line I had to re-read a few times though...
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Unbeknownst to her, there would come a day where she would unconditionally trust him with something as vital and precious as life itself.

Foreshadowing, or just a sweet little line? :?

The SayuKoha is really cute. There's no way Koharu will go for those silly high school girls.
I'm very anxious about the AiReina though  :cry: What is Taka doing?!?!?!


The science test went fine. I think I'm getting like 95%. Cause I got 87% and then our teacher said that if we corrected all of our mistakes we could get extra points. So why not? :P
LOL I'm not a volleyball hot-shot! XD That would be nice though.... :w00t:


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Re: More Than One Story... [Glass Slipper: Chapter 5 - Enchanted ~ Part 2]
« Reply #273 on: December 07, 2008, 05:38:43 PM »
Damn, Taka...WHOO~ Sounds hot!!! I is a sucker for Ai-chan so what can I say? :lol: Love how Sayu gets around Kuu, it's so cute. :inlove: Poor Gaki, he's trying so hard and Kame's resisting b/c she doesn't want to fall in love. (Though it seems too late) OMG, I LOL'd at the ghost thing!!!! XD But I can't say I'd be thrilled to go in a haunted house either. Holy....Kuu is in high school and working at a host bar?! :shocked: (I suppose it's a tad like enjo kosai but let's not get into that) But go Sayu, age doesn't really matter. Little girls are just jealous! :P Gah, Taka....idiot. :doh: Don't tell her that!!!!!

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Re: More Than One Story... [Glass Slipper: Chapter 5 - Enchanted ~ Part 2]
« Reply #274 on: December 07, 2008, 06:44:26 PM »
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"The ghosts won't touch you. They made a promise."

Haha >< I nearly burst out laughing when I read this!
Geez, how can you write so much fluff XD
I'm practically dieing from overdose of cuteness
but I want more tho >__>

Aside from the cute GakiKame
the SayuKoha was really really sweet, but yea, only 3 years diff :: rolls eyes :: as they get older that won't be such a problem anymore LOL

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Re: More Than One Story... [Glass Slipper: Chapter 5 - Enchanted ~ Part 2]
« Reply #275 on: December 08, 2008, 04:04:48 AM »
gaaaah. GakiKame is so cute~ hahha. Gaki-san reassuring Kamei that ghosts wont touch them  :wub:

awww, Kuu is so sweet~  :wub:

omfg, my most awaited pairing.. gahh...ok.. bad beggining eh? , aw come on~ this is torture  :banghead: , oh well.  cant wait~ XD
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« Reply #276 on: December 08, 2008, 07:51:57 AM »
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Wow, Taka dresses very biker style. He totally complements my lolita look!
Oy vey...
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Eh... Kuu looks really young in his "poofy" vest and cargo pants.
Not sure if this is supposed to be a good thing or not, but the "poofy" vest = :rofl:



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Plait shirt over white tee, jeans and Red Wing boots. Exactly how I like a guy to dress.
Simple, stylish.  8)



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Taka was an incredibly handsome guy even with his limited height.
Fortunately, Reina's similarly "limited". :lol:



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The aloof expression on his face only added to that appeal.
Aloof? Might it be better to call it "spaced out"? XD



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"You said you wanted to conquer your fear of haunted houses."

At hearing his reason for coercing her, Eri ceased her struggling to face him. What Gaki said was true and she was surprised and touched that he memorized a passing comment.
Oh yeah, he's got it BAAAAAAAAAAAAD for her. :yep:



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"The ghosts won't touch you. They made a promise."
:on lol:



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His back is so warm.
And to think, she's only feeling the back of his clothes right now (as opposed to his bareskinned back).
:wahaha:



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*SAYU HEARS RANDOM GIRLS TALK*
Uh-oh. People that know/recognize Kuu?



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If the girls didn't mistake Kuu for someone else and he was in actuality this Kusumi senpai they were talking about, then that would mean he was still a young student. Judging from the design of their uniforms, the teenagers were in high school. If Kuu was a high school student, he would be considerably younger than herself. The difference in age would no doubt cause some problems as her father was a fiercely traditional man. He would never consent to her relationship with a brash and unlearned youth.
Double uh-oh. :O



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"SURPRISE!"

At hearing his voice, Sayumi whirled around with an unreadable expression on her face. Kuu had bunny ears on his head and dangling from his outstretched hands was a pink and white rabbit stuffed toy. Thrusting the object into her arms, Kuu squated down slightly so he was at eye level with Sayumi.

"That was the first part of the present.... This is the next."

Leaning in to kiss her lightly, his lips left her glossed ones as swiftly as it touched. For a few seconds Sayumi was left stunned by his bold act until the clapping and cheering of the gathered crowd watching them snapped her out of her reverie.
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! :rockon:



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Reina had been the only one keeping the conversation going up to the point where they were ushered into one of the many glass cabins. Completely fed up of being so obviously neglected, Reina voiced her disatisfaction at the disregard.

"Why are you so distant? Is it such a torture being with me?"
Taka had better be careful. Don't want to risk pissing off/upsetting Reina. :-x



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Reina adamently countered as she recalled how attentive he was by entertaining her with magic tricks and encouraging her to try the assortment of acoholic beverages he had selected.

"I was in a good mood that night. Otherwise I wouldn't bother playing with customers. My attitude has never been a problem with my other patrons. If you don't like how I do things you could always request for another host."

Angry red marks appeared on Reina's palm as she clenched her hands and dug her immaculately manicured nails into her flesh. Nobody has ever treated her so disrespectfully. As the extensively doted daughter of a retired Yazuka chief, everyone she had come into contact with since the day she was born didn't dare treat her with anything less than the courtesy worthy of a queen.
Ah, so basically, Reina's spoiled. Well, she was bound to encounter this sooner or later (meeting someone who held no punches and who didn't treat her like she was royalty). Hopefully for Taka, she's able to handle it, 'cuz if she can't.....
:mon scare:



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"Am I just another client to you?"

"What else could you be."

*Pia!*

The resounding sound of a slap reverberated within the small enclosed space. The five minutes whilst the carriage hung in the sky as the machine remained staionary for riders seated inside to admire the majestic landscape seemed like an eternity with Taka and Reina glaring hard at each other.
Oshit.
:mon wtf:

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Re: More Than One Story... [Glass Slipper: Chapter 5 - Enchanted ~ Part 2]
« Reply #277 on: December 14, 2008, 07:43:28 AM »
I feel so bad for not being able to reply to comments again but I'll do it soon! I promise. This chapter is somewhat of a mixed bag. Sayumi fans should be happy... or maybe not? :P



Guardian Angel
Chapter 6: Polar Blackout

 
"The coming week's itinerary..."
 
Reina wasn't paying absolute attention to what her manager was telling her. Her eyes kept flicking over to the sofa in the far corner of the dressing room where her cell phone lay after she had tossed it aside absented mindedly. It was fortunate she had set the device to vibration alert or the ringtone of some popular Japanese song would have filled the air throughout the entire twenty minutes of its insistent ringing.
 
"...I will inform you of any changes."
 
"Hai!"
 
Bowing slightly, Reina thanked the man for giving her an update of the upcoming activities. As soon as he left the empty room, she practically dived onto the leather couch to retrieve her mobile.
 
"Hello?"
 
In a somewhat breathless voice, she said into the mouthpiece and waited impatiently for the caller to respond.
 
"Miss Tanaka? This is the hospital..."
 
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Her footsteps sounded exceedingly loud in the quiet corridors of the nearby hospital. It was late at night, at a time where no more visitors were permitted into the private establishment. However Reina had received permission to be there. As someone in the entertainment industry, she had sought special arrangements to visit at any time. Furthermore, her present visit was requested by the nurse who had called. "The doctor needs to see you regarding an urgent matter." She had said. Those words sent a shiver down Reina's spine. What was so important that it couldn't be discussed over the phone? Sayumi's condition couldn't have deteriorated could it? Too frightened to think about the worst, Reina hurried along. As she entered the foyer where the first class superior wards were situated, she saw the senior doctor in charge of Sayumi already waiting for her arrival. In her haste to get to him, Reina tripped over her own feet and almost went sprawling face first into the polished floors if not for the doctor who caught her in time.
 
"Be careful Miss Tanaka."
 
Forgetting to greet him or thank him for his assistance with a polite bow, Reina dived straight into the issue which has been weighing on her mind ever since she received the hospital's phone call.
 
"Did something happen to Sayu?"
 
A smile lit up on his wrinkled face but it quickly transformed into a resigned one. Reina wasn't sure if the change in expression was a good thing or not.
 
"Miss Michishige has regained consciousness."
 
Reina didn't respond to the heartening news immediately. Standing there with her mouth slightly parted, her tired mind took some time to register the information. Morning Musume did just run though more than 12 hours of filming for a certain variety programme.
 
"Sayu is awake? She's awake!??!"
 
Turning her head to look beyond the doctor, Reina squinted to see through the glass panels separating the waiting area from the inside of the ward. She couldn't wait to finish up the conversation with the doctor and see Sayumi. A mixture of emotions welled up within Reina's small frame as she remembered the many occasions throughout the two years that she had nearly broken down at seeing the lifeless form lying on the white sheets of the cold hospital bed. She had missed out on confessing her feelings towards her fellow Rokkies once, she wasn't going to let that chance slip by again. Even though she knew fully well that Sayumi had always been in love with Eri and there was a big possibility that the raven haired one might reject her, it was still Reina's wish to let her know how she had felt for the past seven years. Seven years of secrets, seven years of pretending nothing was out of the ordinary. She would reveal everything at a suitable time.
 
"It is indeed a cause for celebration. This is nothing less than a miracle considering the slim chance of a patient coming out from an extended vegetative state. Unfortunately..."
 
"What is it?!"
 
Reina almost grabbed the doctor by the collar to demand further clarification about what he meant. If there were complications of some sort she wanted to be kept informed. Speaking in a wishy-washy manner allowed precious seconds to tick by which could have been utilized to decide on the appropriate course of action and Reina didn't take well to such unnecessary delays.
 
"We are optimistic it will be temporary but we are still running tests..."
 
Again the doctor wasn't straightforward in his reply. Reina was getting increasingly hot under the collar. If the elderly man wasn't going to get to the point soon, she was going to punch him regardless of his age.
 
"Just tell me! What is wrong?!"
 
"Miss Michishige's pupils did not respond to light stimuli."
 
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The temperature inside the single ward was low, freezing even but Reina made no move to adjust the thermostat. That was the last thing on her mind as she stood near the entrance gazing at the lone figure sitting upright in the cradle. She was dressed in a fresh change of hospital attire. Her outer appearance wasn't any different from the previous time Reina stopped over to visit apart from the added cloth bandage covering her eyes. For some reason, as Reina watched her unmoving figure, the memory of speaking to her on the night the accident occurred resurfaced in her mind.
 
"I'll call you later tonight Reina..."
 
She still remembered vividly the tone Sayumi had used in the dressing room that night while bidding goodbye. It was melodious, good-natured, very adorable and her eyes sparkled with every word. The recollection was so detailed and brilliant that Reina soon felt her eyes become watery. Approaching the bedside with pausing and rigid steps, she sat down gently on the mattress. Studying Sayumi up-close,  she noted that her hair had grown substantially and now fell below her waist. It can be said that Sayumi was like a human version of the most exquisite porcelain doll with the sharp contrast between the darkness of her tresses and the paleness of her fair skin. Reina's line of sight lingered on her delicate features and the younger wanted so much to touch her, to hug her tightly after their cruel separation of two years. Yet the ex-yankii was afraid, she was fearful of aggravating the frail condition of Sayumi's body. Maybe she should settle for just caressing her face. Lifting her right hand to almost cup Sayumi's left cheek, Reina halted just a mere millimeter away. Conflict tore though her as she decided on whether she should go ahead with the action. Perhaps she should call Eri instead as she was certain Sayumi would have wanted Kamei by her side at this juncture.
 
Up till now, Sayumi had remained motionless, her head directed straight ahead while her arms rested stationary by her side. Abruptly, she tilted her head to rest in the palm that was situated beneath her cheek. She knew the faint heat emitted from the limp so near her face belonged to the person who had faithfully visited and taken care of her for the entire duration whilst was confined in bed. She was the main reason she had willed herself to awaken from the deep slumber. On Reina's part, she could only gape stunned at Sayumi's loving behavior. Stroking the flawless skin with her thumb, Reina gave up the thought of notifying Eri.
 
Dear god, forgive me for being selfish. Pardon me for wanting Sayu for myself.
 
"Wakkkkke,...youuuu...seeee..."
 
Shocked at hearing Sayumi speak, Reina stared wide eyed at the young woman, the person she had been pining for from the day she first laid eyes on her at the 6th member auditions back in 2003.
 
"Wakkkkke up,...youuuu...seeee..."
 
Sayumi's sentence was incoherent and Reina had to mull over her disjointed words to guess her intended message. She had expected this as the doctor had warned her beforehand that time was required for patients to recover their full bodily functions after rousing from a prolonged coma. For Sayumi, this could take years and she would most likely need help to perform even the simplest daily tasks like tying her shoelaces, brushing her teeth and walking. The influx of dismal news did not scare off Reina. In fact it made her all the more determined to take care of Sayumi and ensure she was well provided for.
 
It was extremely difficult for Sayumi to convey her thoughts and she stumbled over the few words she painstaking uttered. She couldn't remember the various intonations, sentence formation and the sequence of speech sounds. In short, she could no longer speak properly. Yet Sayumi persisted as she wanted to tell her, she wanted her to know how much she had yearned to see her. The main reason for her triumphant in the battle against her illness was to fulfill the desire of meeting the one person who had dropped by every single day rain or shine. Throughout the two years, in spite of not being able to move or speak, let alone flutter her eyelids, she was vaguely aware of the happenings of her surroundings.
 
A never-ending flow of water drops dripped from Reina's eyes. Sayumi's face was becoming blurry from the sheer amount of tears that kept emerging from her brownish orbs.
 
I love you. I've always loved you.
 
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It was a Friday evening, a night where most places down town would be filled with crowds seeking a place to let their hair down or have fun in preparation for the weekend. Strolling leisurely by herself towards the supermarket she always went to for stocking up on groceries, Risa randomly watched the people who passed her by. She was trying to take her mind off how distant Eri was treating her by distracting herself. Ever since the night she had gone to pick her up at the bus stop, Eri had avoided her. Each time Risa asked Eri out for a meal or movie date, she would make numerous excuses for refusing or missing them totally at the last minute. Moreover, she rejected addition advance arrangements claiming a hectic schedule due to the surge in business during the festive season at the end of the year. Not wanting to suspect anything was amiss, Risa decided to visit Eri at her flower shop since she was too busy to venture out. Deciding to purchase some foodstuffs and whip up a batch of sandwiches and a cream cake so they could have a picnic right inside the store, Risa hummed a tune as she looked forward to seeing Eri's surprised expression.
 
A burly woman juggling a laptop bag, her purse and some files bumped into her and the sudden jolt snapped Risa out of her thoughts. Refocusing on the masses of people around her, Risa caught sight of the fleeting view of a familiar figure out of the corner of her eye.
 
That..is...
 
Something inside her told her she knew that young woman but no matter how hard she tried, she couldn't recall her name at this moment. A throbbing ache that appeared without warning affected her vision and Risa brought her hands up to hold her hurting head. Trying to block out the searing pain that was escalating by the second, she glanced around wildly to locate the petite lady dressed in a long black coat. Her outfit was similar in both design and material to her own except for the drastically opposing colors. Risa herself was clad in a white leather coat.
 
Struggling to push through the endless stream of people to reach the last spot where she saw the mystery woman, Risa attracted some miffed stares for her uncivil conduct. Why did she feel the need to catch up with that person? Why was there a sense of familiarity at seeing her? Why did she feel a burning pain as soon as she laid eyes on her? Why? WHY?!?! The numerous questions invading her mind was too much to take and the pain had intensified to an excruciating level. A sea of white engulfed the image of the busy street scene she was seeing and soon Risa felt herself falling. The final sound she heard was a concerned voice calling her name. The world and everything else along with it became pitch-black and silent after that.
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Re: More Than One Story... [Guardian Angel: Chapter 6 - Polar Blackout]
« Reply #278 on: December 14, 2008, 09:53:09 AM »
OHya!
this is cool. :D
Sayu's  conscoius  :cow:, but shes blind? eh?

aww Reina's so sweet. :wub:

OHh Gaki-san?

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Re: More Than One Story... [Guardian Angel: Chapter 6 - Polar Blackout]
« Reply #279 on: December 14, 2008, 11:02:01 AM »
UWAAAAH!!! I couldn't wait until morning to read, so I went ahead and read it now. :p You're depriving me of sleep, Hammy. XD jphip doesn't seem to like my iTouch very much.

Thiswas so sad but happy at the same time... :cry: Sayu woke up, but she's blind...and just how is Sayu going to feel now? I mean, she loved (loves?) Eri, but Reina was always there. And Sayu seems to know that very well. (I think.) And now Eri's being distant with Gaki-san, and that just breaks up the GakiKame... And that last person... Ai-chan?! Here we go...Im starting to feel a TakaGakiKame... So much conflict. :( I mean, poor Eri is even stuck in the SayuReina deal, too. But you know what? It's the conflicts in your stories that keep me completely hooked, hammy. <3

Good luck with the other writings. ^^ I've actually stumbled into a semi writer's block...

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