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Re: More Than One Story... [19/08 Midnight: Chapter 3]
« Reply #540 on: August 22, 2009, 06:10:06 PM »
I decided to add some wild speculation in addition to my review on the other board since I love your stories so much. XP

We should have Prince Koharu fall for this mysterious, beautiful and kind foreign woman and break off his marriage with Ai. :P Of course, who knows. If that happens Kamei might change sides. >_> Just make a deal with the ruler of Mikakuto that he gets to marry Sayu if they win the war...  :-X

Ai's father totally threatened to ruin Gaki's military career if she didn't agree to marry the prince. He probably has enough influence to do so and I can't imagine that she didn't protest at all when it first came up so she must have been given some incentive.

Lol, somehow I also get the feeling that Reina will be the one to find out Sayu's secret before anyone else. After all, she needs to investigate this woman who is trying to steal her Eric away. Unfortunately for her, others might find it hard to believe her "accusations" that Sayu is a spy when considering she has a good reason to defame her... ^^;

The way Ai couldn't be seen in Niigaki's chambers feels like most people have some idea that there is/was something between her and Gaki so she can't do anything that will seem to support that notion. Although, with Niigaki so obviously injured, I wonder if she had been seen there if they would have accepted her explanation. Her actions makes it seem like the wouldn't have. :/

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In spite of that, his grip on her wrist did not loosen and he drew her nearer, linking his fingers with hers.

Rising her finely plucked brows at the turn of events, Sayumi bit onto her lower lip lightly as a bizarre sensation welled up in her chest. An explosion of butterflies seemed to have erupted in her tummy and her heart felt as if it was about to burst.
You're falling for hiiiiiiiiiiim. :wub: Ah! but now I'm so confused with where I'd like this story to go. ;o;

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Re: More Than One Story... [19/08 Midnight: Chapter 3]
« Reply #541 on: September 11, 2009, 02:06:44 PM »
Sorry for disappearing on you readers for so long. I was sick for 6 days. Please forgive me :bow:
I hope you enjoy this chapter. This is the 2nd last chapter of GA :(

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Guardian Angel
Chapter  11 - Because I Love You

The sound of rapid typing filled the bedroom as a lone woman’s fingers flew over her keyboard as she worked on the file she was due to submit the very next day. Intermittently looking from the brightly lit monitor to the sheets of paper sitting on the desk in front of her, she appeared to be in deep concentration. Everything was moving along with great success and she was up to her last line of translating the manuscript from Korean into Japanese when she felt a strange sensation in her nose. This was immediately followed by the noise of something hitting the paper. Letting her line of sight fall on the piece of white printed document before her, she stared in shock at the bright red splotch that had colored the previously untainted piece.

Grabbing a few pieces of tissue out of a nearby box, she pressed them against her nose and tried to staunch the flow of blood. The last time she suffered a nose bleed somewhat regularly was way back in middle school, when she was still a preteen. However, in the recent few weeks, she had begun getting them again quite frequently. At first, she didn’t bother herself with them, conveniently attributing their occurrence to her increased workload and hence lack of sleep. Nevertheless, the bleeding had become increasingly severe and it took longer for them to stop with each episode.  

Maybe I should see a doctor later to check it out.

Deciding to make an appointment with the clinic as soon as possible, she went back to her papers and continued typing. Her flat mate would be home for dinner tonight and she wanted to get home early to prepare the meal.

She wasn’t sure if she was over thinking things but it did seem as though her same aged companion had become rather cold in her attitude towards her. Whenever she tried to strike a conversation, the younger girl by two months would make up an excuse to leave. The flower shop can’t be that busy can it?

Shaking her head slightly to chase away the thoughts that had been weighing on her mind, she told herself to focus on the task at hand. The faster she completed her work, the earlier she could visit the doctor and return home to begin whipping up a good meal for her friend and confidante.    

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Do it! Now
Itsumo itsumademo nannen tatte mo
Kesshin shita kono ai ga tsuzuku you ni
Do it!
Anata ga motteru  mirai yuki no kippu
Yume wa kanau yo zettai kanau kara
Yukou~


Ai sang aloud in her trademark soothing voice as she folded her clothes and packed her bags. It was clear that the star of her performance troop was in a jovial mood. Do it! Now had always been her all time favorite Morning Musume single and the lyrics to the song currently held more meaning than ever. Pausing in her actions to glance at two plane tickets lying on the dresser, she smiled to herself, internally delighted that she had managed to secure the last two seats on the Monday morning flight to New York City.

Picking up the pair of longish labels, she checked them thoroughly through again to ensure that the details printed in small neat fonts were accurate.

Takahashi Ai

Niigaki Risa

Boarding time: 9:00      
Departure gate: C54      
Airline: JAL      
Destination: New York, USA


Scooping her cellphone up with one hand, she excitedly crafted a short text message and sent it out, all the while not letting go of the travel documents she was tightly clutching.

Meet me in my hotel room at 5pm.

Setting the device back down on the bed beside her as she zipped up the final piece of luggage she had been packing, Ai patted the trolley bag twice before dragging it to a corner of the room leaving it to stand. Then resting her hands on her hips, she scanned the room, double checking once more that she hadn’t left anything behind.

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“What do you mean she can never see again? Didn’t you say the surgery was a success?!”

Her voice was so loud and her tone so agitated that everyone who was in the process of passing through that particular corridor stopped in their tracks to look at what the commotion was about.

“Please calm down Tanaka-san. Let’s speak in my office.”

Ignoring the doctor’s attempt to compose her, Reina brushed off the elderly man’s hand which was clamping onto her shoulder and proceeded to glare at him with obvious rage.

“YOU said Sayu would recover if she went through the operation.”

“Yes, that was the initial notion. But Michishige-san’s corneas are inflamed and the infection hasn’t subsided.”

As he revealed the problem hampering Sayumi’s road to recovery, the doctor persisted in clicking continuously on the pen that he held in his hand. The noise irritated Reina a great deal and she was tempted to scream. Nonetheless, she knew at the back of her mind that her frustration stemmed from her helplessness in aiding Sayumi and no amount of yelling would alter that. Willing herself to take deep breaths, Reina demanded.

“Stop telling Reina the problem. Reina wants to know the solution. Can you do anything about it?!”

Pursing his lips into a thin line, the eye specialist paused and contemplated Sayumi’s options. Unfortunately, there was only one way out of this dire situation. She had to undergo a corneal transplant.  

“Then do it. Schedule Sayu for a corneal transplant.”

“There is a waiting list… ”

“And?”

Reina didn’t like the way the conversation was headed. The doctor’s grim expression terrified her and what he said next confirmed her fears.

“It would take years before it’s Michishige’s turn. Unless someone specifically donates to her.”

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“Gaki-san!”

“Ai-chan.”

Greeting each other as soon as the door was opened, Ai missed detecting the depressed tone in Risa’s voice. Latching onto the younger’s wrist, Ai pulled her into the room and sat her down on the bed before thrusting something into her hands.

“What’s this?”

“Plane tickets. You’ll be going with me to New York right?”

She stared at them for a few moments before looking up at Ai. Then speaking in the calmest voice that she could muster, Risa replied.

“I’m sorry. I can’t. I can’t leave Kame.”

Her words were like a sledgehammer that pounded against Ai’s heart and she took a step back on wobbly legs in shock, unable to believe what she had just heard.

“Wha-whatt are you talking about Gaki-san?”

“I choose Kame. I love her, not you Ai-chan. I don’t love you.”

Ai kept her eyes transfixed on Risa’s lips, reading them over and over again. What she had just heard couldn’t be real. The one Risa loved was her! It couldn’t be Eri! She had kissed her. Not Eri! NOT ERI!

“But we made love! At the park!”  

Rushing up to Risa, Ai clung onto her and refused to let go. She had to clarify things, she had to get an answer out of Risa.

“I’m sorry. That was a mistake. We shouldn’t have done it.”

Unable to look Ai in the eyes and tell her a lie, Risa kept her line of vision lowered, stubbornly staring at the plane tickets which had fallen to the carpet floor when Ai shook her. No matter how Ai took the news, no matter how broken she was going to be, she had to keep the pretense up. It was better to upset Ai now than to let her find out the truth. There would be no future for them together. Not anymore.

“You’re lying! Why are you lying Gaki-san? Why must you hurt me?”

“I’m sorry…I’m sorry…”

By this time, both girls were crying with Ai’s face buried in Risa’s chest. The scent of Risa’s shampoo filled her nose and the familiarity of it all made Ai even more miserable than she already was.  Exceedingly engrossed with each other, the pair did not notice the door open and close behind them until the unexpected visitor spoke.

“I’ll never forgive you for snatching her away…”


 
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Re: More Than One Story... [11/09 Guardian Angel: Chapter 11 - Because I Love You]
« Reply #542 on: September 11, 2009, 02:54:30 PM »
OHMY!  :shocked:

Is Reina gonna give her eyessss? D8
Oh sh*t. Ai is maaadddd!!!  8)2

Cool chapter. :) Thanks for the update. HEHEHE.

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Re: More Than One Story... [11/09 Guardian Angel: Chapter 11 - Because I Love You]
« Reply #543 on: September 11, 2009, 03:19:44 PM »
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The last time she suffered a nose bleed somewhat regularly was way back in middle school, when she was still a preteen. However, in the recent few weeks, she had begun getting them again quite frequently

OMG! Don't tell me she's...  :cry:


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“Stop telling Reina the problem. Reina wants to know the solution. Can you do anything about it?!”

 :rockon:


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“It would take years before it’s Michishige’s turn. Unless someone specifically donates to her.”

 :shocked  now I see a connection  :mon scare:


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“I’m sorry. I can’t. I can’t leave Kame.”

“I choose Kame. I love her, not you Ai-chan. I don’t love you.”

Lies



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There would be no future for them together. Not anymore.

Now I’m certain. OMG! NO  :mon scare:  :mon scare:  :mon scare:


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“I’ll never forgive you for snatching her away…”

Oh My Gosh  :mon pray2:


:imdead:  yes I'm so dead




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Re: More Than One Story... [11/09 Guardian Angel: Chapter 11 - Because I Love You]
« Reply #544 on: September 11, 2009, 04:20:49 PM »
Reina's going to give her eyes to Sayu and Risa has an inoperable brain tumor. Oh the drama!

And now Eri's going shoot someone!

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Re: More Than One Story... [11/09 Guardian Angel: Chapter 11 - Because I Love You]
« Reply #545 on: September 11, 2009, 05:03:36 PM »
Two words for you Hammy.

Korea drama.

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Re: More Than One Story... [11/09 Guardian Angel: Chapter 11 - Because I Love You]
« Reply #546 on: September 11, 2009, 09:40:38 PM »
 :OMG: OMG Hammy, your stories really are, like Estrea says, just like Korean dramas. Ah, the plot for Guardian Angel is like an emotional roller coaster, just when it seems everything will be fine... something bad happens and there's conflict again.

The SayuRei (which is a pairing I think I'm starting to like) predicament reminds of this MV that sort of has the same thing going on:

J Entercom - Kiss [Because I'm A Girl]

And I think the overall sentiment of the story reminds me of another MV that's sort of a minidrama in itself:

Eru-White Snow

Oh, the drama  :frustrated: It's kind of hard to think that this is going to end in the next chapter. I guess Risa is going to die had better not die.

 

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Re: More Than One Story... [11/09 Guardian Angel: Chapter 11 - Because I Love You]
« Reply #547 on: September 12, 2009, 07:05:22 AM »
Kame's got a gun~

*gasp!

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Re: More Than One Story... [11/09 Guardian Angel: Chapter 11 - Because I Love You]
« Reply #548 on: September 13, 2009, 12:21:50 PM »
Awww poor Hammy san.  I'm sorry...I must have given you my cold again XD  I was sick last week and sort of this week...but you know what they say...the only way to get over a cold is to give it to someone else...

but anywho~  :on study:

Estrea's 2 words were right on!  *GASP*  :stoned:

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“It would take years before it’s Michishige’s turn. Unless someone specifically donates to her.”

Crud. Crud. Crud.

I foresee a couple of things happening:

scenario 1: Reina donates her own eyes like in that korean music vid!  (lol looks like GoodEngrish was thinking of exactly the same one)
scenario 2: "someone" dies and Sayu gets the eyes but they are haunted and bad things happen...like in all those horror films *shudders*
scenario 3: Gaki dies AGAIN, like in those Hammy stories, and Sayu gets the eyes.

all creepy  :sweat:
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*continues reading*


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“But we made love! At the park!”

AT the pARK!? :shock:  I don't know what's worse...park or bathroom.  Sanitation, folks!  Sanitation!
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and then Eri shows up with the gun?!

O M G...this isn't like a kdrama anymore...this is like the novel title And Then There were None (title only because this isn't a murder mystery)

Sukoshi's imagined ending:

Reina goes to off herself for the eyes!
Gaki dies either because of kame or because of kame.
Ai chan will probably get depressed and will never be seen from again...aka walked into the ocean and
Eri will probably follow suit if she really does fire the gun!

and the only one left will be Sayu.   :badluck:

well actually, maybe it can be like a murder mystery after all....  :smoke:
if there's ever a police investigation after wards...they'd probably suspect Sayu of wrong doing..since she's the only one alive out of all of them and she's got someone's eyes!

this story better not end up with Sayu in prison   :temper:

I'd prefer it if this is all apart of Sayu's dream because in reality she's still in the coma and the final chapter ends with her waking up!  But when she wakes up things aren't as messed up because she was only in a coma for a couple of days and now having "seen" the future...she'd be able to fix things before they go all out of wack!

Yeah...that's it. *nods at her own delusional thinking*  :mon determined:

Hammy san has me thinking crazy~  :sweat:
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omg...I just thought of another ending!

what if Eri tries to kill Ai chan but couldn't pull the trigger after seeing Gaki so sad and instead turns the gun on herself and then Gaki says some mushy stuff to Kame before she goes *que tissues*

and then Gaki magically realizes that life is literally too short to spend it running away so she tells Ai chan the truth and they spend the rest of her days peacefully on a tropical island.

and as for Sayu...she gets Eri's eyes and lives happily ever after with Reina.

lol..I don't know if this is any better than my previous thoughts.  There's gotta be some kind of loop hole to make this from becoming a grand tragedy XD  oh well I'm gonna stop thinking now...else I'm gonna be coming up with new scenarios every 5 minutes.

It's all up to you Hammy san!  I'll be waiting in the bush!  



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Re: More Than One Story... [11/09 Guardian Angel: Chapter 11 - Because I Love You]
« Reply #549 on: September 13, 2009, 05:42:04 PM »
whoa!  :shock: its been sooooooo loooooong since i last read a chapter of this fic....baka me!  :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:

hmm.....good thing i check this again!  :tantrum:

too much drama!  :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook:

hmm.....i dont want Gaki to die..thats a no! No! NO!  :stoned: :stoned: :stoned:

whoa!  :shock: eri's gone insane! she's gonna shoot Ai  :on cigar:

sayu blind.... :err: Reina's not thinking of giving her eyes, right?  :ding:

well, if u will kill Gaki  :on freeza: she would be Sayu's donor  :on chew:.....nope! dont do it, author-san!  :on redcard:

i think im going to have cough and colds  :on hobo: :on hobo: :on hobo:

update ne, author-san!  :kneelbow:




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Re: More Than One Story... [11/09 Guardian Angel: Chapter 11 - Because I Love You]
« Reply #550 on: September 14, 2009, 01:26:50 AM »
Poor ill Hammy. Just you watch, if Sukoshi gave it to you, you're gonna give it to me just like you did earlier this year. ¬¬ But hey, if that means a recovered Hammy, I'll gladly take it. =P

...Okay, Risa's nosebleeding must be really major. -looks it up- ...Oh fuck. You're kidding me. O___O WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY. And Sayu! Her eyes! And Reina...oh god Reina. She's gonna donate her eyes, isn't she!? ;__; And and and...OH GOD RISA. AICHAN. THE LYING. AND ERI, SHE'S ARRIVED ON THE SCENE. -freaks out-

God, my tummy's all twisted in a mess of emotions. :cry: Anyway, here are my thoughts...centered on TakaGakiKame...sorry Sayu and Reina. D:

Okay, so in my head, I can definitely see Eri pointing the gun at Ai, saying stuff like "I warned you", etc. She fires a false shot near Ai, but misses, just to scare the crap out of them. When Risa interrupts, Eri shifts the gun towards Risa and starts crying. Risa talks to Eri, and well...it gets to her. Aichan adds on, stuff like "what you're doing isn't real love". She lowers her gun and tells the both of them to get out, before she changes her mind. Risa and Ai run out, but when they're far away enough, they hear a gunshot... And Eri took herself, still crying. THE REST IS TOO DAMN DEPRESSING TO THINK ABOUT.

-runs away crying at the thought-

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Re: More Than One Story... [11/09 Guardian Angel: Chapter 11 - Because I Love You]
« Reply #551 on: September 14, 2009, 03:08:03 AM »
nanii?   :mon wtf:

why Risa Why??? :farofflook:


dont hurt to ai-chan  :mon whimper:

she love you!! and you love her!!!  :mon runcry:


why!!! kami-sama  :fainted:


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Re: More Than One Story... [11/09 Guardian Angel: Chapter 11 - Because I Love You]
« Reply #552 on: September 16, 2009, 12:49:58 AM »
Just like everyone else said above, things don't look so well for the girls.
Chances of Gaki living till the end of this story: Highly doubtful. :err: *sigh* She's gonna die no matter what happens.

Sayu losing her sight and Reina in a desperate search for an eye donor: First thought that came to my mind was that Because I'm a Girl Korean MV. My guesses for who eyes Sayu might get: At the top of the list it's either Reina or Gaki. At the bottom of the list it's Kame and Ai.
It looks like nobody's gonna have a happy ending. :(

Estrea is totally right. The irony of all this is that I'm currently watching You Are My Destiny. (47 down, 131 more to go. :bleed eyes:)

random thought: Don't tell me this ends with just being a dream. A dream Sayu is having. While she's STILL in a coma. And nobody will know that she's having this dream. Ever.
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Re: More Than One Story... [11/09 Guardian Angel: Chapter 11 - Because I Love You]
« Reply #553 on: September 17, 2009, 04:57:05 AM »
Wow, it's been so long since an update (it seems) I went back to chapter 10 thinking I missed it, but then realizing i didn't, cause parts of chapter 11 seemed jumped ahead for some reason XD ...until the end, that is. Anyway, wow I'm late to respond. XD

I agree with Hart in saying this better not end in a dream! :angry: Although, considering you're just mean to your characters and not really to readers, I doubt that'll happen. XD Now things are proceeding as they are... I have a pretty strong guess about how things will turn out... Won't say what, but I will say Sukoshi covered it at some point in her ramblings. XD Then again, it doesn't involve Gaki getting killed... so I'm a bit unsure. XD Maybe you'll make this the one where it doesn't happen? :lol: Right...

Anyway. I guess in the end it doesn't really matter I'm late on the comment, since I'm sure we've got awhile for the finale, eh? Well, looking forward to it. :)

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Re: More Than One Story... [11/09 Guardian Angel: Chapter 11 - Because I Love You]
« Reply #554 on: September 22, 2009, 01:54:41 PM »
Midnight 2

@SBK:  There’s always the content page to go to if you need to refresh your memory of the fic. Golly, the image of Ai as queen IS sexy. :drool:

@Shiichan: Isn’t possessive Kamei kinda hot? In a weird way :P

@JFC: Sayu wasn’t originally mute. She got injured a little more seriously than intended during the fake attack that she planned to infiltrate the enemy kingdom. :theking

@ringo-hime: Doesn’t everyone want a piece of Kamei?  :wub:

@Sukoshi-chan: If she ain’t a narcissist, she ain’t Sayumi XD

@Kuji: The price does like Ai unfortunately so he won’t be giving up his queen so easily. Ai’s father isn’t really the power hungry type. He just believes that Ai marrying the future king would benefit the land.  :(


GA10

@badsaints: I never expected the TanaShige pair to be popular in this story but apparently it does seem quite a favourite among readers  :)

@Estrea: Since when do my fics end in a simple happily ever after? :D

@Shiichan: Hmmm interesting thought there. What makes you think more than 1 girl will die? :huhuh

@rokun: TakaGaki aren’t together, together. They just made out XD LOL! Naked pictures didn’t come to my mind at all but damn, that’s a fascinating thought.

@Sukoshi-chan: I’m still planning out the whole confrontation bit so I can’t say yet if you’ve hit the nail on the head at any point. :?

@kRisZ: You guess gun too? I’m that predictable huh? :lol:

@JFC: I have to say, you got the part about things getter more complicated right. :roll:

@rndmnwierd: LOL! Child? I wished I was one. They get away with so much more things.  I surprised myself with the Lin Lin being JJ’s mother part too. I still don’t know how I came up with that. And please don’t kill me if you read about more of the girls dying in my future fics/chapters. :oops:

@SBK: YAY!! You think KohaLin is cute.  :twothumbs


Midnight 3

@SBK: Aren’t all TakaGaki interaction cute?  :heart:

@rndmnwierd: But the weight of her country rests on her shoulders. In this case Sayu doesn’t really have a choice. :(

@Sukoshi-chan: Gomene, I realized Eri is sorely lacking in Midnight. I’ll try to include more of her. And as always, your funny and cute comment made me smile. This is really amazing since I’m incredible upset by Koharu’s graduation *bursts into tears* :cry:

@JFC: 1 point to up-ing the complication factor. How is Kamei gonna make his advances on Sayumi and how is she gonna curb her increasing fondness for Gaki? *insert dramatic music* Dun dun DUM!!! :P

@Shiichan: Kamei following Sayumi eh. You’re closer to home than you think. I always said you and I had the same mentality :nervous

@kRisZ: Well actually the trouble Sayu is in now is nothing compared to what she will face later on. :twisted:

@Kuji: You love my stories? Awwww that’s the ultimate praise. Wah, if the Prince falls for Sayu too, she’s gonna be in a lot of relationships. Then 95% of each chapter will be about her. You gave me a lot of good ideas here. Maybe next time I should just ask you for advice.  :D


GA11

@ringo-hime: My pleasure. In fact I should be the one thanking you for reading and commenting :oops:

@kRisZ: Yes *nods* Sayu is permanently blind *sobs* :(

@rndmnwierd: I don’t think I’ve told you how much I like your sig? TakaGaki FTW! Lol, oh the drama? It’s not that bad is it? :P

@Estrea: I’m telling you, I don’t watch that many Korean dramas. Honest! XD

@GoodEngrish: Woah, I’m a fan of your stories! :wub: I can’t believe you read mine. Oh I remember both of these MVs. I saw the first one a long time ago and really liked it. Though I didn’t think of it when I wrote GA. The 2nd MV I only saw once and I’m still not getting it?

@Fenrir: Ahhh welcome to the thread and thanks so much for commenting :bow:

@Sukoshi-chan: You were sick too? Golly, maybe you did pass it to me. Looks like that MV is pretty well-known eh? LOL!! Scenario 2 is too funny :lol: OMG!! *reads your comment* It’s hilarious *wipes tears from eyes* Thank you for making me laugh so much. I really needed it. :lol:

As for the Sayu waking up from a dream scenario, I doubt that will happen as I’m not a fan of such endings. Why wait in the bush? Won’t it be pricky? Come here and wait in the corner with me while I write XD

@ayase909: Are you feeling unwell too? Hmm, maybe Sukoshi-chan passed you the bug too :P I’ll update as soon as I get over Koharu’s impending departure. Which might be never!!! *cries* :cry:

@Shichan: Did you fall ill in the end? I hope not, I want a healthy Shiichan you hear? Poor TanaShige, they totally got shafted in your thought process. XD

@gab98: Nanii?? Lol. I gotta use that sometime. It’s cute. YATA!!! You’re a TakaGaki fan. High-5!! :twothumbs

@HartAKL85: You watch that show? I never even started cuz it’s much too long. I know I won’t have the patience to keep watching. Don’t be so pessimistic. There will be people with a happy ending. I’m not that mean :P

@rokun: I think you’re the only person who doesn’t think I will kill off Gaki-san. I’m curious to hear your thoughts.  :thumbsup
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Re: More Than One Story... [11/09 Guardian Angel: Chapter 11 - Because I Love You]
« Reply #555 on: September 22, 2009, 02:07:28 PM »
Just because. I feeling so sad about...her.

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Now and Forever
 
The cheery chatter of the girls walking pass us were filled with happiness. It was obvious the mood within the group was light. Unlike ours.
 
She was sending me home after filming at the company. We were taking the usual route to my house. Everything was the same except I would no longer walk this way in less than three months.
 
You were quiet, not speaking despite my attempts at cracking various cold jokes.
 
I think I understand, why you are behaving like this. We were pretending that it didn’t make a difference. Or at least I was.

As we strolled, I prayed for you to speak. Hoping that you would reassure me that our relationship wouldn’t change. That things would stay the same.
 
“Don’t tell we will meet somebody better. And don’t say we will still be friends. You know that it could never be like before.”

Your response cut through me like a steel knife, your tone cruel. But yet I didn’t cry. In fact, I could look you in the face and reply.
 
“When the time comes to separate, we have to.”

I was surprised at my own words. It was as if I had grown up, become stronger. Even if it hurts.

I would no longer be afraid of the unknown, for I believed that happiness would one day come to me.

Although I will sometimes think of them, the right ending may be in another direction and I have to take that first step towards it.
 
Because a person has a lot of dreams, and we have to leave what we have now to realize them.  

“Who said you’re a spaz?”
 
Despite the tears that had slid from your eyes, you forced a smile.
 
“They told me to try and make you stay. But after seeing you now, I know you’ve thought about this carefully.”

Grasping my hand and squeezing it tight, you whispered something to me.
 
“Don’t forget us Koharu-chan. We will always welcome you with open arms. Cuz we are Morning Musume, now and forever.”  

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The other character could be anyone of the MM girls. I would think they would all be sad to see her go. I know I am.
:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
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Re: More Than One Story... [22/09 Now & Forever]
« Reply #556 on: September 22, 2009, 04:23:54 PM »
 :cry: :cry: Waaaa!

I know, I can't believe the 9nin is finally breaking up! I've been so out of it since the announcement, but Tsunku did say it was his decision btw...

On a happier note, I'm glad you like my sig! I thought the pic was so cute so I just had to do it. You like my avvie too? I had my friend make it for me.

And no, drama is not bad, even if you kill off someone. We just tease you cuz you do it the most out of any author here, but we love you still!

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Re: More Than One Story... [22/09 Now & Forever]
« Reply #557 on: September 22, 2009, 06:05:50 PM »
 :shocked
So shocked when I read that news....  and this fic made me somewhat... :mon cry:

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Re: More Than One Story... [22/09 Now & Forever]
« Reply #558 on: September 23, 2009, 05:02:34 AM »
*gives Hammy san a hug*

I've been a little sad over the whole thing...but what makes me more sad is knowing how much you love the gal  :k-sad:

the story makes me :gmon tears: 
I'm going to miss her even more now :gmon tears:

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Re: More Than One Story... [22/09 Now & Forever]
« Reply #559 on: September 23, 2009, 02:38:11 PM »
 :cry:

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