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Re: More Than One Story...[20/07 Hawaiian Surprise]
« Reply #700 on: July 22, 2010, 09:22:04 AM »
ahaha!! Eri is so funny!  :rofl:
Daaaaaaang~!! That was all  :drool: :drool: :bleed eyes: :drool:

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Re: More Than One Story...[20/07 Hawaiian Surprise]
« Reply #701 on: July 23, 2010, 07:11:53 AM »
Hammy san  :wub:

hehe I'm with rndmnwierd, I didn't think it was Takagaki either for the longest time.  I thought it was TakaShige...how weird is that eh?  XD  Her kissing fetish must have corrupted my brain. 

*pats Sayu on the back for taming the kitty*  that's just the cutest~ I love that kind of TanaShige  :wub:
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Re: More Than One Story...[01/08 Invisible]
« Reply #702 on: August 01, 2010, 01:04:04 PM »
KameShige OPV

@rnd: Don't you think there needs to be more KameShige anything? :lol:

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@Kuro-san: I’m glad you found the fic sad. I was trying for that feeling :)

@FaqU: I use Imovie which comes with my lappy. It doesn’t have fancy functions though so I can only make really basic stuff :smhid

@BS: Oops, I forgot about LL’s blog being in Chinese. Only AA is scary I’m way too nice and mild :P

Hawaiian Surprise

@rnd: Which pairing did you expect it was gonna be? :?

@Ada: I never get rusty because I was never that good to begin with? :oops:

@Kuro-san: I just have that image of Eri in my mind. The blur one XD

@pretend-san: Reina seems like she would be cute if she was the grudgingly tamed one? ;)

@BS: I try to have the best of both worlds? :D

@Swtme03: Tee hee, you found it hot? Great! I was worried it wasn’t hot enough :oops:

@Sukoshi: EHHHH!?!?? TakaShige? Why did you go huh? HUH!??!?! I missed seeing you around :(

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Just a short fic to Taylor Swift's 'Invisible.' I left out some parts where the lyrics are repeated because there isn't much point to include them. Okay, fine, I admit it. That was actually an excuse for not having enough ideas XD

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Invisible

“Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you.”
“Happy birthday dear sub(u)-chan, happy birthday to you.”

“Arigatou!”

Blowing out the candles in one try and as you gazed mesmerized at their vibrate colors decorating the strawberry cake, I secretly admired your gorgeous brown eyes and the flickering flames reflected in them. Even though we weren’t alone as the staff was outside the recording booth watching us through the glass panels and today wasn’t officially your birthday, I was still happy that I was able to celebrate it with you. At least in this moment, it was just the two of us. And that alone, was enough to make me feel blissful.

When we turned the mics off to play a song, you looked into my eyes and said sincerely.

“Thank you for everything Kame-han. Really.”

You referred to me by our very own special nicknames and I puffed up with pride when I recognized the smile you beamed at me. It wasn’t a “work” smile. it was a genuine smile that you only gave when you were deeply touched. And I’m glad that tonight, you gave it to me.   

Everything was perfect, everything, except that one little detail. You were in love with somebody else.

Why couldn’t it have been me who met you first? Why wasn’t it me who entered the audition seeking 5th Generation members? Why did the person you love have to be so perfect yet so oblivious? Why can’t I ever take her place in your heart? Why?

She can’t see the way your eyes light up when you smile
She’ll never notice how you stop and stare whenever she walks by
And you can’t see me wanting you the way you want her
But you are everything to me


“Gaki-han.”

“Hmmm?”

You respond immediately, though you did not look up from the sheet of paper on the table in front of you.

I really like you!

The lone sentence was screaming out in my mind but I couldn’t tell it to you. I’m too much of a coward to confess my feelings. I want to tell you to stop pining for somebody who might never love you like the way I want to. I want you to know that you don’t have to pretend to be strong when you feel venerable or continue to smile when you’re sad. Because I’m here now. And no matter what happens, I’ll be by your side.

And I just wanna show you
She don’t even know you
She’s never gonna love you like I want to
You just see right through me but if you only knew me
We could be a beautiful, miracle, unbelievable instead of just invisible


During concert rehearsals, when everyone else is watching her and gushing about what a great performer she is, I’m watching you. Nobody else except me can see the fire and brilliance that shine through when you’re up on that stage. As I watch you dance, sing and breath, all I can think of is how I can make you mine. And how wonderful we would be together.

There’s a fire inside of you that can’t help but I’m through
She’s never gonna see the light
No matter what you do
And all I think about is how to make you think of me
And everything that we could be


The lights in the studio dim as the producer outside gestures that the show is about to commence after the break. And all of a sudden, I realize how similar I am to the shadows that have disappeared along with the lowered illumination. I’m invisible. My affections for you are invisible as well as my position in your heart. Yet we are so alike, because in a way, you are also invisible to her. Unable to look at you directly lest the tears swirling behind my eyes fall, I lowered my line of sight to stare at my single sheet of crumpled script.

Like shadows in a faded light
Oh we’re Invisible
I just wanna look in your eyes
And make you realize


“Gaki-san…”

I breathed out in a low voice, struggling to keep my voice soft. Once I was certain that you didn’t pick up on my words, I continued.

“Please don’t forget, I’ll always be right here, with you.”

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In 2009, Eri sang the bday song to Risa on their radio show ^_^
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Re: More Than One Story...[100801 Invisible]
« Reply #703 on: August 01, 2010, 07:23:44 PM »
Ah, poor Eri, she just can't win. Really nice story to go along with the song.

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Re: More Than One Story...[100801 Invisible]
« Reply #704 on: August 02, 2010, 04:37:01 AM »
poor Eri  :(

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Re: More Than One Story...[100801 Invisible]
« Reply #705 on: August 02, 2010, 04:24:53 PM »
Hawaiian Surprise: TakaGaki! :bow: It feels like not that many people write this pairing anymore (I know I'm a little guilty of that too) so thank you for writing this Hamzies! The exchange between the Rokkies was funny too, I couldn't help but think "WHIPPED!" when Reina was told by Sayu to shut up and just watch. XD

Invisible: Poor turtle! Even though I was just rejoicing over TakaGaki too... >.< Ai! Why don't you notice the bean! Ergh! Risa, why don't you see Eri's feelings! ...maybe the unwritten part is that Sayu is invisible to Eri and Reina is invisible to Sayu... orz.

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Re: More Than One Story...[100811 Doki Dorky ~ Chapter 1]
« Reply #706 on: August 11, 2010, 05:48:35 PM »
Doki Dorky
Chapter 1
 
It's another school day at XXX High, a well-known and rather prestigious all girl school situated in central Tokyo. In a particular class filled with hormonal teenage girls, classes were usually rowdy and conducted amid flying paper planes and the passing of notes. Nonetheless, there was a distinct difference in the sequence this Monday morning. The excited chatter of twenty seventeen year olds were much more animated as they were expecting a new transfer student.
 
"I wonder what's she's like."
 
"Isn't it weird that she's transferring just one year before university?"
 
As the cohort was made up of females, these girls weren't as curious about the new arrival's physical appearance as compared to her background and the reason that brought her to their school. The melody of the school bell signaling the start of class resonated in the corridors and most of the girls settled down in their seats in anticipation of the mysterious stranger.
 
The amiable Abe sensei entered the room with a girl trailing closely behind. At first glance, she had black hair tied up in a high ponytail and wore a pair of plastic rimmed glasses. The lens looked pretty thick as they made her huge eyes appear even larger than they were.
 
"Attention!"
 
Banging the wooden ruler in her hand against the podium in the front, the teacher shushed the class silent. After conveying some brief instructions, she told the girl to introduce herself. Although she appeared somewhat apprehensive, she overcame her fear to take a step front.
 
"Erm...hello. My... name... is Taka...Taka...ha--hashi Ai. I just moved... to Tokyo... from Fukui.

Every now and then, she used her forefinger to push her glasses back up her nose as it tended to slip a distance down. As the class watched her, they began to get restless from her stumbling speech and long pauses.

My dad... was transferred... to... the main... company...here. I hope to... get... along... with everyone. You will be in my...no..I mean...I! I...will be...in your care."
 
She ended her speech with a low bow and clammed up once more. Looking frantically to the teacher for further instructions. Scanning around the room, Abe sensei pointed to an empty seat near the window and motioned for her to proceed.
 
"Niigaki, as class monitor I expect you to ensure the new girl fits in. Is that clear?"
 
Shooting up from her chair to stand as straight as an arrow, a girl with a short crop dyed in reddish brown color saluted the teacher and affirmed the order.
 
"Aye Abe sensei. I'll do anything you ask."
 
The class erupted into a round of guffaws and clapping as they watched their ever-slick monitor bring a blush onto their form teacher's face with just a simple line. As the commotion died down, the lesson resumed and the students either began copying notes or fell asleep depending on whether they fell into the conscientious or slacker category.
 
"What do you think Takahashi is like?"
 
The voice belonging to the classmate sitting in a desk next to her jolted the raven haired one out of whatever she was doing and she looked up to meet the eyes of her best friend.
 
"You aren't asleep?? That's a first!"
 
Hastily slamming her open notebook shut, she kept her fingers crossed that the other didn't notice what she had been doodling in various colors on one of the pages.
 
"I don't know why either. I just can't seem to fall asleep today? Say Sayu, since when have you become so diligent in copying notes?"
 
Apparently her ditzy friend hadn't caught a glimpse of the single word she had repeatedly sketched and had assumed that she was busy noting down every word that the teacher was saying. Heaving a silent sigh of relief, Michishige Sayumi changed the topic quickly, preventing any further questions about her sudden hardworking trait.
 
"She looks okay but I don't know what's gonna happen after Gaki-san is done with her."
 
Pointing a slim finger at the back of the class leader sitting two tables in front, the pair observed that Niigaki was staring at Takahashi intently, a mischievous glint shining in her hazel brown eyes.
 
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"So, you're Takahashi?"
 
"H-hai!"
 
Nodding rapidly at the person who had stayed behind to talk to her without looking up, Ai let her line of vision slowly travel from the floor, taking in every detail of her companion's outfit. The only other person in the classroom wore her skirt short, ending above her knees way higher than what the school rules allowed. Her white shirt wasn't tucked neatly into her skirt and her cardigan was at least one size larger. The sleeves were pulled up to her elbows and her tie hung loosely around her neck.
 
Is this how a class monitor should dress?
 
So caught up in her own thoughts, Ai didn't realize that she had been staring with mouth slightly agape. Under normal circumstances, her behaviour would come across as rather rude. Nevertheless, Niigaki didn't mind it one bit. She was used to being stared at on a daily basis. As one-third of the most popular group of girls in school, she had her fair share of adoring juniors and similarly aged fans.
 
"I'm Niigaki Risa and since Abe sensei asked, I'll make sure you get really comfortable at XXX High."
 
"Ari..gatou..."
 
Not certain of what she should say next, Ai looked down at her hands, fidgeting uncomfortably as she squirmed in her seat. So far she had only spent one day in her new school and already she wasn't used to any of it. The environment here was vastly different from her hometown in Fukui where everything had a more laid back and country feel.

All the other students here were extremely fashionable and outgoing. Everyone had trendy accessories and the latest hairstyles. It was hard to find someone who looked approachable and no one has come to talk to her yet except for this...Niigaki. And for some reason, the monitor who carried herself with confidence made her feel hot under the collar. Did she really have to lean so near when talking? Although she did smell really nice. Was that the scent of strawberry shampoo wafting from her hair? Ai liked strawberries and anything with the smell or taste of them made her smile unconsciously.
 
However, her grin disappeared instantly and she almost jumped out of her skin when the student allocated to show her around the school had suddenly placed one hand on her neck while her thumb lightly grazed passed her earlobe. 
 
"What are... you...are you...do--ing?"
 
Stuttering the relatively incoherent sentence out in fright, Ai grabbed at the collar of her shirt so tightly that nothing could seep through it. With her other hand, she kept pushing up her glasses that had glided down from her abrupt action of moving backwards.
 
"Didn't anyone inform you that one of the rules here is you can't say no to seniors touching you?"
 
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"Damn she's good."
 
The one with middle length hair complained as she spied on the couple inside the empty classroom. As the most athletic member of the three, she too had a massive fan base that came to support her at every track event. Despite that, she had difficulty getting her point across to the girls she had taken a fancy too. That would explain why she was still alone to this day.

"Yeah she's smooth. Too smooth for my liking though."

Stealing glances every few moments at the person she was huddling close to, Sayumi stated, an underlying meaning hidden in her words.

It's someone like you whom I like Eririn. Someone who's sweet and nice.

Her message hinted at her affections for her clueless friend yet the one who was still watching the happenings in the room did not detect any of it.

"Say Sayu, aren't we all in the same class? How is Gaki-san Takahashi's senior?"

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I have to give most of the credit to AA. She gave me loads of ideas and even suggested the title. It's really cute imo and makes me smile whenever I think of AiGaki. A funny, happy fic of Mr & Mrs Niigaki would be nice for a change ne~ Hope this chapter was enjoyable :oops:  Oh right, does anyone have a good name for their high school? I have no clue what to name it  :P

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Re: More Than One Story...[100811 Doki Dorky ~ Chapter 1]
« Reply #707 on: August 11, 2010, 08:28:59 PM »
I'm already hooked on this story :D  TakaGaki, Kameshige, what more could I ask for.
I really thought you intentionally named the highschool XXX, as if it some sort of AV/Porno highschool or something XD. Unfortunately I have no suggestions... Seishun Academy?  :lol:
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Re: More Than One Story...[100811 Doki Dorky ~ Chapter 1]
« Reply #708 on: August 11, 2010, 11:53:45 PM »
Awesome saucem! A new story from you! And no angst, be still my heart. :roll:

Lol, I love flirty Gaki and dorkish Ai and oblivious Eri and mooning-over-oblivious-turtles Sayu. Can't wait for more.

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« Reply #709 on: August 12, 2010, 07:24:52 AM »
it was really good and TakaGaki goodness  :thumbup
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« Reply #710 on: August 12, 2010, 01:27:16 PM »
@Hammy san:  awww gomen ne Hammy~  I'm here but just with my invisibility cap on  :mon sweat: (and yes there should be more of Kameshige everything!)

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awww everyone feels so bad for Eri but I feel bad for Risa too.
in the end no TakaGaki, no GakiKame...only a melancholy Sukoshi XD....hmmm...that seems so wrong and yet it was a lovely story~  :gmon hot:

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ah Nacchi cameo! nice!  lol I was thinking she'd be like nerd Nacchi from the h!m skits but then again Abe sensei seems rather strict so scratch that idea XD

lol nerd Ai on the other hand...wow she already has Gaki interested :O  That's some magical stuttering XD

I wonder if there's a cute little yankii junior lurking somewhere in their school or if Ai have a little sister that also transferred  :gmon nya:

as for the school name, how about Aidoru High?  XD

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« Reply #711 on: August 12, 2010, 03:25:58 PM »

I wonder if there's a cute little yankii junior lurking somewhere in their school

Rofflecopter, when I read that part, I saw yankii janitor! :lol: :lol: :lol:

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« Reply #712 on: August 12, 2010, 04:15:42 PM »
First chapter and I'm liking the story already, though I'm a little sceptical if this will really just be a happy fic since the idea comes from both you and AA :lol: But I'll definitely read it since it's TakaGaki ne

Ai has got speech problem or is she stuttering because she's nervous? Or better yet, because she saw Risa! I'd like to think it's the third reason XD

Ooooh yankii Risa?! Cool! And she's the class monitress? Wow she sure know how to get into Abe sensei's good books :P



I wonder if there's a cute little yankii junior lurking somewhere in their school
Rofflecopter, when I read that part, I saw yankii janitor! :lol: :lol: :lol:
:lol: :lol: :lol: That may work :lol: :lol: :lol:

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« Reply #713 on: August 13, 2010, 05:22:46 AM »
The first chp. is very cute ...  :hee:

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"Damn she's good."

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« Reply #714 on: August 13, 2010, 12:44:04 PM »
lol I like that thought rndmnwierd XD

Hammy san~  I think we all want a janitor XD

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« Reply #715 on: September 01, 2010, 12:53:34 PM »
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@rnd: Eri is almost always the "poor thing" huh. Why do I like to emotionally abuse her and physically abuse Risa? XD

@Kuro-san: *bawls* ERI!!! *sobs* Nowadays I can't look at her name and not cry :cry:

@Kuji: Where did you go girl!??!? Come back from wherever you are hiding. Lol! You really wanna make this go full circle don't you :lol:

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@mode107: Seishun Academy sounds good! I'll keep that in mine when I have to write about the school name again. And thanks for supporting this fic :)

@Hashire-san: I'll be looking forward to my updates too XD Only problem is I have not completed the next chapter of it

@rnd: I can't wait for more B&B as well! Though I'm guilty of falling into lurker mode recently. But I still luvz your writing! Please abuse AiGaki more :P

@Kuro-san: Thank you! I loves me AiGaki :wub:

@Sukoshi-chan: How can anyone who looks like Ai not have everyone entranced? :heart: Oooh Aidoru High is good too. Can I have 2 names for this school? As for now, I still don't know how to fit Reina in. I'll see if it's feasible to have 07 as the janitor.

@BS: Hey! I can do happy fics ya know...although it might be a little hard. You should tell AA to stop giving me incredibly sadistic ideas. That girl is good at those. Ai is just nervous, no speech problems. Did I ever tell you I had an Eng teacher who thought I had speech problems? :?

@Thor87: Gaki is a smart bully :D

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"Where are you now? Are there any buildings you see?"

"I don't know...I don't recognize anything."

I snapped my cell phone shut but my smile lingered on as I recollected how you sounded in the call. Your voice was a little lost but it was still incredibly cute. I wondered if I was the only one who thought this way, that everything about you was cute. Unfortunately I knew that was far from the truth. Because although you refused to admit it, there were quite a number of people after you. Who could blame them? For you were the most perfect person I know.

As I retook my place on my bed, I thought about what you were doing right now. Were the directions I provided enough for you to find your way to the venue of your appointment with your high school classmates? They had come to Tokyo for a visit and regardless of your busy schedule, you were obliged to meet them tonight.

In actuality, you didn't tell me in detail what you were doing after work today. It was only when I texted you did I realize you were headed to a restaurant. It was a good thing I had messaged you or you would never have sought help despite being lost. It was almost always like this, I had to message you first before we could have any contact. Sometimes I wished you would take the initiative to reach out to me. Am I childish to think like this?

*beep*

I jumped at the melody emitting from my phone and flipped it open excitedly, expecting to see your reply. Maybe you were going to talk about the restaurant, the food or fill me in on the recent happenings related to your friends. However, it was none of the above.

Heyo Gaki-han! Wanna have dinner with me and Sayu tomorrow?

With significantly less enthusiasm than before, I typed swiftly on the keypad of the gadget.

Sure. Just tell me the place and time after you guys have decided.

Though the KameShige pair and I have agreed to have meals together at least once a month, deep in my heart, it was really you whom I wished to spend more time with.

Giving up on you texting me anytime soon, I fell backwards onto the mattress and closed my eyes, thinking that I could rest for a while before going to take a bath. It had been a tiring day for me as I had completed a ten hour long radio recording just an hour before. Unfortunately, sleep didn’t come immediately as my mind wouldn't stop functioning. Images of you kept appearing and I could do nothing to stop them. Your face, your smile, and all the little things you did.

~Flashback #1~

"Do you know what day is today?"

"Thursday 26th August 2010?"

Staring into your wide and genuinely clueless eyes, I wondered if you were teasing or did you really forget. Forcing a smile though I felt somewhat dejected that I didn’t get the answer I was hoping for, I pushed on.

"Nope. Guess again."

"Erm...the second day of your.... menstrual cycle?"

You whispered the ending of your sentence softly, as if afraid that someone would overhear our discussion of this sensitive topic. 
Observing your beautiful face filled with graceful features, all of which I had memorized in detail for the last nine years, I realized I 
couldn't roll my eyes nor blame you in spite of how hurt I felt at the moment. In fact I almost laughed out at your adorable response.

"It's our ninth anniversary silly."

Jerking your head up in astonishment when you heard these words, your doe-like eyes searched mine.

"Already? Nine years?"

Nodding slowly at your obvious bewilderment, a bright smile spread across my face.

Nothing has changed, I still love you as much as I did the first time I saw you.

~End of Flashback~

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The continuous vibration of my phone lying next to my head woke me up. I must have drifted off to sleep while waiting for your message. Sitting up groggily, I rubbed at my weary eyes for a moment before turning around to pick up my phone. Flicking open the device, I grinned when I read your message.

I'm so bored! And it's so cold in here!

In my mind's eye, I could see you sitting quietly at the table, not knowing what to say or do. I predicted you were possibly fidgeting 
with your hands.

Mou...Ai-chan, why didn't you bring a jacket? Order a warm drink. NOW!

I chuckled to myself, imagining your expression when you received my reply. Would you smile? I hoped you would, because when you were happy, it made me glad too.

Are you bullying me? Risa-chan is mean :D

I froze when I read your reply, unable to believe that you had indeed referred to me as Risa-chan. It was the second time today. The first was when you called in and spoke to me live on the radio show I was hosting. It had been a long time since you last used this name. It had always been Gaki-san in the recent years.

~Flashback #2~

Gaki: And it seems we have a call waiting so… Hello~!

Ai: That you Risa-chan?

Gaki: EH?! Really?!

Ai: Was yesterday’s Korean food yummy?

Gaki: Wait, wait, wait, wait. Hold up... What? Aichan?

Ai: Hello, I’m Takahashi Ai.

Gaki: What? Why? No way! Why?! Eh, Aichan?!

Ai: Yes it’s me!

Gaki: Why?!

Ai: EH? …I just wanted to try calling.

Gaki: Eh~ Why is it Aichan~?! Ehhh~

Ai: Are you doing your best~?

Gaki: Hahaha and your accent came out, even the Fukui-ben too huh.

Ai: Uh huh. Do your best!

Gaki: Haaa~ A giant smile just spread across my face. I was very 
nervous, but you cleared it all for me!

~End of Flashback~

As soon as I snapped out of my daydream, I happened to catch a glimpse of my reflection in the dresser mirror. It was clear I was a picture of bliss and it only made me more certain that I was truly in love with my best friend. Someone whom I had secretly loved for so long.

“Ai-chan… Ai-chan…”

I sighed. Why do you have such a strong hold over me? Everything about you affects me immensely. I cry when you are down, I laugh when you are happy. But most of all, I worry about you. Are you eating well, are you resting enough and are you stressed out?

“When did it all start?”

Standing up and walking over to the dresser, I picked up a framed photo of the two of us. It was taken way back when we were still 
children of 15 and 13.

~Flashback #3~

“Mama doesn’t want us to meet up so often.”

I watched the tears slip from your eyes as you sniffed a couple of times. Raising one hand to brush away the falling droplets, I used my other hand to cup your cheek.

“Papa told me the same thing. He said it was the company’s orders.”

Although I was still young, I knew that the adults were plotting to keep us apart. I didn’t understand why I couldn’t stay with Ai-chan. 
I liked being with her, and I think she felt the same with me. We made each other happy and that’s all that matters, isn’t it?

“Risa-chan…”

You started to say but I cut you off, my own voice so unwavering that I was shocked at the level of my determination.

“Let’s run away together. To a place where nobody can find us.”

~End of Flashback~

Looking back on our past actions, it was undoubtedly a stupid idea to escape to the mountains during wintertime. We weren’t suitably dressed and the freezing temperatures did little to aid our plan. My memory has become a little fuzzy after all these years. But I do 
distinctively remember that throughout the duration when we were hiding under a jutting rock, I never left your side.

*Buzzzzz*

The doorbell rang, breaking me out of my reverie. Placing the photo back down, I exited my bedroom to enter the living room followed by the foyer. Peeking through the peephole, my eyebrows arched when I recognized the figure standing beyond the door. Unclasping the lock and swinging the front entrance open, I stared at you astounded.

“What are you doing here? Aren’t you supposed to be at the dinner?”

“I got bored?”

You returned my dazed look with a smirk and pushed past me into the apartment.

“What was Risa-chan doing all this time?”

You flopped down on the sofa and kicked your shoes off, sinking comfortably into the seat. Going to sit down beside you, I asked.

“Are you sure it’s fine to leave your friends there? It’s barely 9…”

I wasn’t able to finish my sentence as a pair of hands had grabbed onto both sides of my cheeks to turn my face around from glancing at the wall clock.

“Don’t you want me here? With you?”

That was all you said as you leaned in nearer and eliminated the distance between us. I felt your warm lips crash upon mine and your 
slightly cold hands slide down from my face to my shoulders. Wrapping my arms around your waist, I pulled you close, allowing myself better access to run my hands over your thigh.

I wasn’t sure how long we spent making out but I knew it wasn’t enough. I couldn’t keep my hands off you. I wanted every part of you 
to myself. I wanted you to belong to me only.

“Ai-chan…”

I murmured in a low tone. Our foreheads were resting against each other’s as I gazed into your eyes.

“Are you sure?”

Smiling sweetly at me, you replied as a light blush colored your cheeks.

“I was convinced from that day nine years ago when you didn’t leave me behind in the mountains.”

“You remembered?! I thought you had forgotten everything after that fever you came down with when we were found.”

Gasping aloud at the sudden revelation, I was taken aback at the turn of events. If Ai didn’t forget our past, why didn’t she tell me that 
she knew?

“I’m sorry I hid it from you all this time. But I wasn’t ready to take this step…until now. You’re not mad are you?”

Studying my expression with uneasy eyes, you held your breathe, unsure of what I might say next.

"I'm not mad. How could I ever be angry with you?"

Throwing your arms around me, you hugged me tight and laid your head on my shoulder, making me a promise that I could forsake anything and everything for.

“It's nine years late, but for the next nine years, and every nine years after this, we will always be together."

Lifting your chin with my finger, I pecked you on the lips again. Taking longer than necessary to end our kiss, I beamed.

"Happy anniversary Ai-chan, my love of a lifetime.”

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The radio show didn't take place on the 26th but for the purpose of this fic, let's pretend it was :P

Special thanks to Asianqueen for the translation of AiGaki’s phone conversation. I didn’t include the full transcript in the fic but you 
should check out her blog. Cuz she has some amazing stuff there.

Thanks also goes to AA for the ideas that she suggested. It's rare she requested for a happy fic this time :lol:
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Re: More Than One Story...[100811 Doki Dorky ~ Chapter 1]
« Reply #716 on: September 01, 2010, 12:54:29 PM »
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"I don't know...I don't recognize anything."
lol, it sound like something i always say.LOL

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"Erm...the second day of your.... menstrual cycle?"
WAHAHAHA!!!!
familiar familiar..=P

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I almost laughed out at your adorable response.
adorable meh..LOL..(u know why i reply like this huh)

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“It's nine years late, but for the next nine years, and every nine years after this, we will always be together."
sweet sweet sweet..

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Thanks also goes to AA for the ideas that she suggested. It's rare she requested for a happy fic this time :lol:
HEY THAT's NOT TRUE!!!..DONT ANYHOW SPOIL MY REPUTATION..LOL..it's not that rare BA.lol..


Risa-chan Risa-chan..:wub: love it when aichan call gakisan by "risa-chan"
it just sound so sweet..<3
Ham should write more happy fic..lol..dont so sadist..LOL

FIRST GETTO! XD

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Re: More Than One Story...[100811 Doki Dorky ~ Chapter 1]
« Reply #717 on: September 01, 2010, 01:04:00 PM »
Happy Takagaki is happy! This is so endearingly cute and I love all the little details. The part about Ai not asking for help until Risa made contact first and her forgetting their anniversary, but knowing about Risa's period. :lol: I love your happy things almost as much as your angsty things.

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Re: More Than One Story...[100901 3285]
« Reply #718 on: September 01, 2010, 01:23:00 PM »
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"Where are you now? Are there any buildings you see?"

LOL that's such a typical Gaki question to ask.  Risa and her buildings XD

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“What are you doing here? Aren’t you supposed to be at the dinner?”

LOL Ai chan ditching her old friends...so anti-social la XD


So let's see, Gaki san and Ai chan are accounted for + KameShige cameo....you are so neglecting the janitor these days... XD

anywhoo, second THIRD getto!  could have possibly been the first second to getto but brain needed recovery time from the warm and fuzzy Takagaki feelings XD

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Re: More Than One Story...[100901 3285]
« Reply #719 on: September 02, 2010, 07:20:20 AM »
I like the fact it was rather funny that Gaki didn't see the anniversary date (I am so sorry if I was wrong  :nervous)
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