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I Finally get first comment!
Well, that was a nice long read
What you can't handle tough love doofus?
Fine, I'll be 'nice' in today's post since you did an uberly good job
I thought I'd be unable to quote this chapter because as soon as I finished reading it, I got all speechless and all sorta' drooly amazed
But, I managed and I managed to quote like a crazy person =O
Quotation time!! YAY!!
For a few minutes it felt like I was in heaven. I hadn’t expected my first kiss to be so warm and soft… and gentle. Then again, I hadn’t expected that I would get my first kiss that day, either. Or from a girl that I barely knew. Her lips left mine, and she leaned forward so that our foreheads touched, letting out a quiet sigh.
~Meet the mushiness that is me~
That was so mushy and cute and *Squeelin'* that you made me as mushy as a sponge cake o_o ew..
“I probably shouldn’t have done that…”
I smiled, closing my eyes. How somebody could feel so guilty over something like a little kiss was beyond me. It wasn’t as though I couldn’t have pulled away, and to be honest, I hadn’t wanted to. So I was just as ‘guilty’ as she was. I didn’t know what I was doing… and I didn’t know where this was going, but… if this was how it started out then I was curious to see where it might lead.
MomoxMaasa is so cute of a couple >w<
Why must you be so good at squishy mushy sweet oh so sweet scenes?!
“You regret it already…? I didn’t think that I would be that bad at kissing…”
XDXDXD Momochi rules
I was glad she couldn’t see my face just then, because I’m pretty sure it was getting pretty pink right there. However, I waited for the ‘but…’ that was sure to come. Those ‘buts’, always shoving themselves in where they weren’t wanted.
“But… I’m not sure that I want anything to happen here… So… I’m sorry, I didn’t want to send out mixed signals like this. I really shouldn’t have done that.”
Aww ;+;...Come on, it'll work out!! *huggles momochi and maasa* ;+; poor young couples in love!
“Ah- Risako-chan…”
Even though some part of Saki was happy to see her old friends again… another part of her was telling her to run as fast as she could in order to get away from them. Unfortunately, there was a problem. Miyabi had already spotted her, and was giving her the most venomous look that she could muster.
Confrontation, confrontation, outch outch outch >_o;;
“You don’t have the right to speak to her any more… or any of the rest of us, for that matter. What are you doing here?”
Miyabi’s voice was cold, and her words definitely cut into Saki’s heart, but she preferred them to the silent treatment.
That was harsh >x<;; outchies...
“Where have you been for the past two years, then?”
It was the question. The one that Saki had been waiting for. The one that she knew she couldn’t answer without expecting this girl to be angry at her. She deserved all of this hatred, though, she supposed… after all, she had been the one to walk away.
“I’ve been here.”
“I haven’t seen you once since before yesterday, so I’m not sure that I believe you.”
“Well, for one thing, I didn’t want to be found, so that was kind of the point, and for another, why does it matter to you, Miyabi?”
“Because I want to know if I’m going to have to avoid seeing your face again.”
Stinging, burning, outchies! >xO But must continue,...Gotta..KNOW...What..Happens..NEXT!! O+O
Another sharp dart, laced with poison. But no matter how badly it hurt, Saki wouldn’t lash back out at the other girl. It simply wasn’t her way. She would take the hits everytime and then try to move on. But… how much more would she… or could she take? Not anymore today, that was for sure. She had other things to worry about.
“Don’t worry about that… I’ll make sure to stay out of your way, if that’s what you want.” She mumbled quietly, walking past Miyabi and making sure not to make eye contact. As she was leaving, however, she felt a gentle hand grab onto her wrist, and every ounce of her being hoped that it might have been Miyabi.
Turning around to see Risako’s kind face wasn’t bad, either. The younger girl said nothing, but Saki could see something like forgiveness in those eyes, and as she glanced at Yurina and Erika, she saw that they were mirroring the same expression.
The better person of it all
*Sigh* I love your portrayal of Captain >w<
“What the HELL did you do THAT for? You’re going to make her think that everything’s okay now, and it’s NOT, Risako.”
“You’re the only one who had a problem with her leaving, Miya…”
“Because she dropped everything that was important to her and abandoned us! We were at the top of our game and we lost our best performer, and for what? Oh, that’s right, we don’t know, because she didn’t have an explanation, so that must mean there’s no freakin’ reason at all.”
“You don’t know that.”
“And YOU do?”
Risako was doing an impressive job of standing up to the intimidating Miyabi, and even though she was frightened of the other girl, she wouldn’t dare back down now.
“I trust Saki-chan. I don’t need to know the reasons why she does what she does. She’s my friend, and I’ll love her anyway. And honestly, I think you’re mad because something happened to you personally, and so you’re trying to take it out on the rest of us because you didn’t get what you wanted-”
Oh boy, Major tension building up between Miyabi and Risako
I knew it wasn't going to end well with them >x<;;
The force of the slap was enough to knock Risako to the ground, and the sound of it echoed off of the buildings nearby. Risako didn’t know that something could sting so badly, and she felt her eyes begin to water. Miyabi was standing over her now, and after receiving such a blow, the younger girl had started to tremble.
“Don’t ever talk to me like that again. You don’t know what happened, and so you have no business talking about it like that. I’m still the leader of this group, and so I’m going to treat the lot of you however I want to. Oh, and guess what? You have your beloved Saki to thank for that, too, because if she hadn’t left, you wouldn’t be in this mess. How does that make you feel, Rii-chan? Hm? It kind of sucks to think about it that way, doesn’t it? Suddenly, Saki’s not so great anymore, huh.”
Risako was crying now, but she still had a little bit of fight left in her, and she managed to glare up at the older girl through her tears.
“You’ll never be even a fraction of the person she is…”
The younger girl flinched as she saw Miyabi’s hand swing back again, but something stopped her from slapping Risako a second time.
<---My range of emotion felt when reading this part in that order, I think that's enough said =+=''
I had my hand closed tight around Natsuyaki’s wrist, and even though I wanted really badly to pull backwards and send the girl sprawling to the ground, I am a better person than that. Or maybe it was because I wasn’t entirely there thanks to what had happened with Maasa. Either way, I was willing to negotiate before I sent my new rival into a world of pain.
“Touch her again and you’ll regret it, Natsuyaki.”
“Let go of me, Tsugunaga.” She replied, through gritted teeth. I wasn’t exactly feeling threatened, though. More like, amused, because try as she might she couldn’t get her arm free of my grasp. Oh, and she had stopped using my nickname as an insult, I guess.
Which was good, because I didn’t like to hear it coming out of her mouth.
“I’ll let go of you when I’m good and ready.”
Just to emphasize my point, I twisted the girl’s arm so that it was pinned up against her back, and she let out a yelp of surprise and pain.
Holy mighty cheesecakes! Momochi kicks major booty! OxO!!!
What a rough day…
No kidding! >_<;;
“I’m really sorry about it you know…”
“Go to sleep, Risako-chan…”
Aww Risako is so cute >w< She still felt bad about before! >w<
“…So what made you change your mind?”
*cough*Maasa*cough* <_<;;
“Oh, nothing… just a random change of heart, I suppose.”
liar, liar pants on fire!! Sort of ;;>_>
“With you? There has to be something more.”
“Okay then, how about you tell me where you got that rose that’s sitting on the table over there?”
“Goodnight, Momo-chan!”
Haha, good night, Risako.
XDXDXD PWND!!!!
Phew!
THAT was long!
I practically quoted the entire chapter!
But that's good, it means I enjoyed the chapter a lot!
Now, I expect you to update soon, please with a cherry on top!
If you do I just might treat you to some ice cream~ =]
(See I can be nice and I guess sweet but, if you prefer evil me...)
Evil me-mode!!*Grabs your cheeks and pulls really, really hard*
I SAID UPDATE FASTER YOU BAFOON!!
YOU TOOK THE WHOLE FRIGGIN' DAY YOU DOOFUS!!
WHAT KINDA' QUICK UPDATE IS THAT!?
NOW GET BACK TO WORK! YAH YAH!!
*kicks your butt and cracks my whip*
MUSH!
*throws a typical obese New York child at you*
TAKE THAT!
*gives you the Mighty EVIL STARE!*
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*Throws some radioactive kitties at your head*
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