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Offline Blubber-Nugget

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Re: Fic of the Month// One Week [Day Seven] (Bad Ver.)
« Reply #120 on: September 12, 2008, 01:55:09 AM »
 :fainted:
That was so deperessing. Actually, I think bittersweet is the perfect word to describe this ending. Bitter because they don't end up together but sweet because they're still going to be friends... :cry:
I was tearing up when I was reading it :(

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Re: Fic of the Month// One Week [Day Seven] (Bad Ver.)
« Reply #121 on: September 12, 2008, 02:17:09 AM »
:on gay: Eri~

oddly enough I like the bad ending more XD  I guess it always felt like they were trying too hard in the other chapters so this ending makes things more realistic...but in any event, the endings were enjoyable so good job   :on GJ:

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Re: Fic of the Month// One Week [Day Seven] (Bad Ver.)
« Reply #122 on: September 16, 2008, 08:45:03 AM »
^^ Wait, there's a perv version? Where?!!

Firstly, I'm so sorry for commenting so late. I actually read it already but didn't have the chance to comment yet. While I liked it for more awesome writing from you of KAMEMAME, I'm so sad now. I'm wondering if I should have not asked for the bad version. It's too depressing!! *bawls*  :mon cry:

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Re: Fic of the Month// One Week [Day Seven] (Bad Ver.)
« Reply #123 on: September 17, 2008, 03:01:09 PM »
I had to reread the original ending to bring myself out of the depression caused by the bad ending. Love the story, both endings were well written.

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Re: Fic of the Month// One Week [Day Seven] (Bad Ver.)
« Reply #124 on: September 28, 2008, 01:42:51 PM »
ahh sorry for commenting this late.  :sweatdrop:

Watching the new DVD mag. reminded me of this fic. The part was when Sayu, Junjun,Kame and Gaki were looking at the penguins. It made me remember of the Risa's thought in that chapter where they both went to the zoo...

So anyway, As much as i like happy endings for the sheer catharsis , I liked the bad ending better, as for some reason it sounded more realistic and of course due to great writing .

Can't wait for your next fic ^_^

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Re: One Week [Day Seven] (Bad Ver.)
« Reply #125 on: April 27, 2009, 04:22:10 AM »
OK, first of all, a HUGE thank-you to everyone who read this story. I shall do more specific replies tomorrow (I'm so tired. I did 4 projects today that are all due tomorrow  :bleed eyes:)

Here is the epilogue - One Night
It's a perv so that's why I posted it on LJ. Hopefully it's good....
http://community.livejournal.com/renairev/76959.html


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Re: One Week [Day Seven] (Bad Ver.)
« Reply #126 on: April 27, 2009, 11:20:59 PM »
that wasnt good...... THAT WAS AWESOME~!! X333
that was a prety hot epilouge XDD and i like~! X33
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Re: One Week [Epilogue - One Night]
« Reply #127 on: April 28, 2009, 01:41:48 AM »
 :imdead: :mon blood: damn! I think those icons sum up what i'm feeling. haha You did a great job with this. Eri's so cute and funny being so innocent! lol Just how i picture her. You did great.  :twothumbs I hope to see more fics from you.

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Re: One Week [Epilogue - One Night]
« Reply #128 on: April 28, 2009, 05:08:29 AM »
Epilogue works better with the "good ending". :P ;D :twisted:

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Re: One Week [Epilogue - One Night]
« Reply #129 on: April 29, 2009, 04:48:11 AM »
Even though I usually lean more towards TakaGaki than KameMame, this fic was teh shiz. I once read a fic like this (7 day relationship to decide if it works) from another fandom and all I got was this lousy t-shirt the bad ending so this fic totally made up for it and pwns that story. The epilogue was like 'whoa'... and totally worth going visiting LJ again for. XD

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Re: One Week [Epilogue - One Night]
« Reply #130 on: July 14, 2010, 06:06:17 PM »
Wow! I have read this fic before but I now noticed that I didn't comment at all! Hoho XD Well, the fact that I reread this maybe tells something about if I like this or not? ^^ This is one of my favorite fanfics!!! It's cute! And I like the "one week" story, I think this one is well limited to one week and Gakikame relationship. :P Oh and it's happy, that's great too XD :heart:
This time I'm not gonna read the sad ending XD I think I read it earlier but it's been such a long time I don't remember that ending :) So now where's the perv chapter again..~ :P :twothumbs

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