Awwwww *sniff*, this was sad. stefy didn't cry but I did, a little. I'd rather it be GAKIKAME (I'm incredibly bias, I can't help it ) but I still think this was beautifully written. Pity Eri had to die in the end
Actually, I'm considering writing a Niigaki POV to this...
What's with the new generation of writers killing off members for their first stories O_O; There should be some kind of ban on that
AAAAAH. THE HELLO KITTY. IT BUUUUUUURRNSSSS.
My excuse...I dunno, I'm better at writing sad stories I suppose. I'll try to make some happy for you...If the thoughts of happy stories manage to pop in my head.
Just out of curiosity, what was Eri terminally ill with?
Btw, is it weird that I sort of get deja vu when I read your story? When I read it, it makes me think of a mix of two of my stories: Her Final Wish and The Final Countdown. The beginning being The Final Countdown and the ending part Her Final Wish.
I have decided to not kill you .__. Since you write so well, all is forgiven
...Actually, I never thought that part out. *hides in a box* I just figured, "Let's not make Eri's death painful. Okay, terminal illness it is."
...Now that you mention it, the stories really ARE similar. .____.;; Oh my. ('Cept Gaki-san and Reina didn't actually fall off the cliff.
) That's kinda creepy. I dunno, when I imagine a character ready to die, it's at a cliff. ^^; Then it became, "How the hell would Eri leave a last message to Reina? ...Letter. No too simple. Letter...locked in drawer? GIVE GAKI-SAN THE KEY. HA. IDEA!!
Which then led to, "Let's put a photo there just to make it a little more sad. Or dramatic. Both. Then we leave the ending completely open so everyone can imagine. YAY! *done*
I kinda wrote this fic because I really wanted TanaKame, but I wanted GakiKame at the same time. xD (I'm quite honestly a GakiKame fan now. It has surpassed my love for TanaKamei. V_V) And sadly, what I ended up with was Kamei's death. *shakes head* Thank you everyone for reading. Like I said earlier...for those who want some GakiKame (albiet sad) like myself...I plan on writing Risa's POV of this story. (Yes, there's a flashback...and maybe I'll figure out just what Kamei is sick with. I never thought that far. ._.;; ) I've also got another fic underway already at the moment. Only thing preventing me from writing is school work that I procrastinated on. When I get it all done, I'll be sure to start writing again. Thanks again. *bows*