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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Running 10/11)
« Reply #40 on: October 14, 2009, 02:40:03 PM »
Birthday Gift

Definitely Ai-chan here.

Growing Up Together

I still feel depressed whenever I read about Koharu and graduation :cry: I wonder about the identity of the girl that they both liked too.


You and Ai

Really smart play of words here in the title.


Running

This one really matches the weather outside now. Sigh *feeling emo*

EDIT: 1st comment GETS :)

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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Running 10/11)
« Reply #41 on: October 14, 2009, 02:44:10 PM »
lol look at what you've done 22! You've made everyone emo with your poems :lol:

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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Running 10/11)
« Reply #42 on: October 14, 2009, 07:59:45 PM »
I like the dark tones, it makes certain scenes come together, the light makes it cute but the darkness makes the true feelings come out

Longing for You

Sitting by the window

I get a text

I text you back

My own body

Nervous to the core

Waiting for letters

To become words

To become sentences

Fear comes

Snatches me

Maybe I should ask her

Next text I will

"Cute pic"

Oh shoots I'll wait

How hard is it to say it?

She is inviting me

To the park?

At night?

Okay I will go

Put on clothes

Wrap a coat

Walk to the park

She's there

I look into her eyes

One glance

Launched the fireworks

We see it in the sky

She grabs my hand

Takes me to the tree

She whispers

"Carve our love"

I grab a rock

Slowly etching into the bark

It looks awkward

We both laugh

She turns me around

Our lips met

I feel relieved

R :heart: A
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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Longing for You 10/14)
« Reply #43 on: October 16, 2009, 11:48:06 PM »
Depressed, Denied, Forgiven

Take a look at me

I feel pain

I feel sorrow

You can take me

But it all withers away

Like a leaf on a tree

It will fall

Time stands still

The leaf sways in the breeze

Slowly comes down

Before the crash is heard

For it is

How much I love you

I would yell

I would cry

But I will not give up

I love you so much

Please

Let me have another chance

I cannot make it better

But I cannot make it worst

Just let me show you

I will be here
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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Depressed, Denied, Forgiven 10/16)
« Reply #44 on: October 19, 2009, 03:01:40 PM »
Longing for you

The R :heart: A, can we assume its Risa and Ai? :P

Depressed, Denied, Forgiven

This one is really sad. I'm sure everyone would have experienced this at some point in their lives :cry:

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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Depressed, Denied, Forgiven 10/16)
« Reply #45 on: October 24, 2009, 01:10:00 PM »
The falling rain

The cold wind

Feeling you body

Hugging you close

Cry my fears

You leaving

Makes things harder

You wave goodbye

But I don't want to

I have to go

I hear the words

Piercing through my heart

Cold hands fall

Onto the hard ground

I can't leave you yet

Please stay

I am horrible

I am a monster

Why me?

I contemplate my actions

I see you with her

Jealousy runs like the river

I want you back

Please don't hurt me anymore

I will love you for a chance back with me

Is it time yet?

Please let be so
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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Untitled 10/24)
« Reply #46 on: November 02, 2009, 11:52:16 AM »
Lovesickness

The darkest night

The brightest day

I see you

Across the hall

White

Red

Blue

Green

Colors of the scene

Walking towards me

I extend my hand

You grab it

It is near your heart

I feel it racing

My heart races too

Your lips close in

I meet up with it

The silky texture

The taste of strawberry

I open my eyes

I pull back

Breathing hard

I can't resist

One more time

Lip locked

Tongue twisted

Body bounded

I realized

I love you
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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Lovesickness 11/2)
« Reply #47 on: November 04, 2009, 11:52:50 AM »
Why me? That is something I ask myself a lot too.

Lovesickness.

I'm really amazed by how you do it? It's like you never run out of ideas and words. I'm really impressed :bow:

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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Lovesickness 11/2)
« Reply #48 on: November 04, 2009, 07:47:12 PM »
^Honestly people love or hate poetry and I think it is a great medium to express yourself in limited time

and don't worry I rather have one than none  :D
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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Lovesickness 11/2)
« Reply #49 on: November 05, 2009, 09:55:37 AM »
Uptown Girl

As I walk down the street

I see this high class chick pass by

She smells of perfume

She grabs my heart

I follow her into the boutique

She smiles

Her nails are wonderful

In her pearly white dress

It matches the atmosphere

I am quite dirty

But she appreciates me

In my boyish clothes

She sees the boys outside

She drags me into the dressing room

She gives me money

"My name is Niigaki Risa and I want you"

I melt right there

I walk out and I ran into my apartment

I put on my suit and tie

It doesn't look right

I take it off to find t-shirt and jeans

I put that on and I figured she didn't mind

I see her limousine outside

I come running out

The song pops into my head

I just go spinning for the casual dressed girl

She asks me my name

My mouth goes dry

She closes my mouth and press my lips with hers

"My name is TakahashiAi"

She laughs and I slowed down my breathing

"My name is ... uh Ai"

She smiles

I see her reactions comes out

I turn on the radio

The song pops up

She moves towards it

I hold up my invisible mic

she dances to it

She hits her head on the ceiling

I laugh at it

Imagine her beautiful face

I look at the money she gave me

I gave it back to her

"Did I do something wrong?"

"No, I just don't need money for happiness."

Her grin grew wider and we ended up singing that classic song

Billy Joel: Uptown Girl.
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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Uptown Girl 11/4)
« Reply #50 on: November 05, 2009, 10:05:40 AM »
Aww, that's cute. I can totally imagine that.

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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Uptown Girl 11/4)
« Reply #51 on: November 05, 2009, 11:20:18 AM »
Love it!
Gaki fits high class & TakaGaki is fate, no money is needed for their love :wub:

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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Uptown Girl 11/4)
« Reply #52 on: November 05, 2009, 11:18:08 PM »
Inside Smile

Seeing the girl with smile

Kills my intentions

I cannot breathe

Her fingers through her

Beautiful

Silky hair

I wave

Her smile reflects the sun

I cannot be mad

I cannot be sad

She makes my day

Hmm I hear the whispers

Please don't tell me

She is not with anyone else

I grab her shoulders

I turn her around

My lips pressed hers

I let go and run

She tackles me from behind

"Don't worry I like you"

I block out those words

My tears run

It creates the puddle

They flow into the river

I feel her finger on my cheek

"Don't worry Miya I'm here"

I get up

My face red from that admission

I closed my eyes

Dropping into her arms

I feel loved somehow

Maybe one day

I will understand

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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Inside Smile 11/5)
« Reply #53 on: November 06, 2009, 04:01:48 AM »
I'm totallly taking that as MiyaRi (which I bet you aren't surprised about :P) which makes it omg, so beautiful :wub:

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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Inside Smile 11/5)
« Reply #54 on: November 06, 2009, 08:48:09 AM »
^Although the biggest clue is "SMILE" idk Risako would be better with Maasa or Captain, someone on the poles  :lol:
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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Inside Smile 11/5)
« Reply #55 on: November 06, 2009, 11:13:44 AM »
Risako's Prince

I tend to wonder

When someone could

Pick me off of my feet

No peers could ever

Make me feel special

It was hurtful

For people to

Not know me

They would walk by

Never approach me

I felt like a plague

Until one day

She came into my life

I was walking home

And I saw a shop oening up

She invited me in

It was a nice shade of red

The paintings all around

Made me feel warm

I saw her smiling at me

"You are my first customer."

I nodded

"Order what you want and if you come back I'll make you some treats."

I felt ecstatic inside

She watched me eat all the cakes

She ran her fingers through my hair

She saw herself in me

"You are beautiful"

I turned my head away

"You have a wonderful smile."

No I don't

"Smile for me"

I hinted the movements but

It hurt more than a knife

Through my beating heart

She lifted my chin up

The tears rolled down my eyes

"Nacchi will take care of you"

She took me under her wings

I got to learn about her deserts

And i get to work for her

My classmates would come in and laugh

But I would turn to her

She encouraged me to become myself

Then on a rainy night

She walked me home

I felt something bad was going to happen

I told her that I should go to her house instead

Then I saw the car coming my way

I pushed her to the side

The car came and

I crashed in to the window

Stood there motionless

I felt something crack

But she told me

"Stay still, they are coming."

I hear the ambulance come

They suit me up

I realized that Nacchi

Was someone I could trust

She stayed by my bedside

Day and night

She never opened up the shop

Until I was well enough

I only suffered a fracture

But for her

Only death could have prevented me

From being away from her

I felt sorry for her

And then I told her to come closer

She came towards me then

My lips met hers

She went into shock

I watch her just blush

"Rii-chan... you kissed me."

I nodded

She saw the look in my eyes

"I can't, you are still too young yet."

I stood in front of her

Am I too young to love?

Am I not capable of decisions?

Am I the reason you didn't  get injured?

She nods

Now can I become your princess?

The pause came

And with her hand extended

She kissed it

I was really loved for the first time

I could lay back

And just dream Risako

DREAM!
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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Risako's Prince 11/6)
« Reply #56 on: November 06, 2009, 11:18:15 AM »
Risako and Nacchi? Wow, that's not something I've ever though of.

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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Risako's Prince 11/6)
« Reply #57 on: November 06, 2009, 11:23:03 AM »
Risako and Nacchi? Wow, that's not something I've ever though of.

TBH I never thought of it either but I wanted to create Rii-chan as sort of outcast and she finds somebody who sees her as just normal, and she takes everything in her power to prevent any type of damage caused to Nacchi, and it was a rather interesting concept when you think about it, nothing perverted but just admiration for somebody that cared for her
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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Risako's Prince 11/6)
« Reply #58 on: November 06, 2009, 02:52:40 PM »
I don't usually read anything besides IshiYoshi, but 'poems' had me curious.

Great work, Kurosawa. I can understand the value in poetry - it really is SUCH a flexible way of expression.

I especially like the latest one you've just posted - the first one I read.

Risa and Nacci? Yeah, not a couple that would ever have come to mind, but you made it work in your poem.

It was really sweet... you can sense the dedication just oozing from Risa. Nacci sounds like such a dreamy woman..  :heart:

Looking forward to another poem!

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Re: Kurosawa's Poems (Risako's Prince 11/6)
« Reply #59 on: November 06, 2009, 06:39:29 PM »
^ risako eh?

Thank you for reading it, there is a IshiYoshi poem http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=20914.msg619279#msg619279

To be honest I rarely do write about Risa and Konkon b/c I can never do it justice so its a struggle  :lol:
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