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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 8 Updated
« Reply #40 on: November 21, 2009, 04:07:12 PM »
Why, Eri? Why did you leave your Reina?

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 8 Updated
« Reply #41 on: November 21, 2009, 06:37:00 PM »
Kamei not ever coming back :(

But Reina getting her lines :scratched head:

well since it is a fic I go with it  :thumbup
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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 8 Updated
« Reply #42 on: November 21, 2009, 08:16:09 PM »
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“Hi girls…” There he is, with his stupid face.
Great!!! XD :lol: :lol:

I like this fic a lot but i wish Tanakamei can get back together! :heart:

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 8 Updated
« Reply #43 on: November 21, 2009, 09:34:44 PM »
I LOVE THIS FANFIC
SO SADD

Thankkk Yoooooouu!~~

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 8 Updated
« Reply #44 on: November 21, 2009, 09:56:14 PM »
^welcome xmacookiex you should introduce yourself in the intro thread
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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 8 Updated
« Reply #45 on: November 22, 2009, 02:13:36 PM »
Thanks everyone for the comments. By the way, amEthystx, nope, you didn't got lost, she left on free-will  :(
Well, let's continue...

CHAPTER 9

She’s not going to come back…

I guess that I have to assume it. However, I have something to do right now. This isn’t going to change anything, but still, it might help me to understand this…

“Yes?”

“Gaki, it’s Reina.”

“Oh, hi Reina. I thought that you were angry at me…”

“Well, in fact I am.” I have to be sincere… “Can you come to my place?”

“Sure, when?”

“As soon as you can…”

“Ok, I’ll be there in ten minutes. See you.”

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When nine minutes pass, someone knocks the door… As punctual as always, huh?

“Hi.”

“Hi, Reina. What was so important?”

“Let’s go to my room. My brother could hear us.”

When we enter in my room, I sit in my bed while Gaki stands up right in front of me.

“You look a little sad…”

“How I should feel?” I state.

“Well, yeah. More and more sad news to hear.” She replies.

“So, Ai-chan has already told you, right?” I know that she hasn’t… but you wouldn’t dare to lie now.

“Well, in fact…”

“In fact you knew this before anyone.” I cut her off.

“…” She doesn’t say a single thing, but she nods.

“But, why?”

“Why what?” She whispers doubtful.

“Why… Why did she told this to you, and not to me…”

“Reina…”

“Why didn’t she told me that she was leaving, why didn’t she told me that she wasn’t going to come back… why didn’t she told me anything, Risa?” I say softly.

“I don’t know, Reina…” She lies.

“Yes! You do know, Risa! Don’t lie.” I exclaim. “You know everything, you’ve got all the answers that I need to know… but you won’t say anything to me since Kamei told you that you shouldn’t say anything of this!” I yell.

“…” She looks at the floor with a guilty look on her face, but that won’t stop me.

“Am I wrong?” I ask.

“…” No replies, huh?

“Risa, am I wrong?” I say as my tone grows bigger.

“…” Still no answer.

“Risa! Answer!” I yell, shaking her by the shoulders.

“No! Reina, no! You aren’t wrong, and you know that!”

“That’s all what I needed to hear…” I murmur.

“Reina, we love you. You need to understand that this isn’t sane.” She says, clearly worried about me.

“What do you mean?”

“I mean that you should give up on Eri. We don’t know when she’s going to come back, we don’t know what she’s doing right now… we don’t know anything of her since she went to Korea…” She replies sadly. “But I know this is hurting you, and a lot. You don’t deserve this…”

“Gaki-san…” I whisper as I start to cry again. But this time I’m not alone, when she notices my tears she holds me, and starts to cry too.

“Shhh, it’s ok. I’m here for you.”

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 9 is already up
« Reply #46 on: November 22, 2009, 07:20:28 PM »
At least Risa has some optimism  :)
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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 9 is already up
« Reply #47 on: November 23, 2009, 03:51:04 AM »
How long has it been since Eri left? Not long enough for Reina to have 'gotten over it' yet? Well, at least Risa is with her now.

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 9 is already up
« Reply #48 on: November 23, 2009, 12:00:37 PM »
Why did Eri leave for Korea? Why was Risa so eager that Reina should give up on Eri?  :huhuh

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« Reply #49 on: November 23, 2009, 03:29:27 PM »
Hmmmmm..........why won't Risa say anything? Is she hiding something? She did have a guilty look when "interrogated" by Reina...

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« Reply #50 on: November 23, 2009, 07:53:10 PM »
Cuantas preguntas...  XD
Oh, rndmnwierd, it has been just a few days.
I can't resolve more questions, since I can't reveal anything so...  :twisted:

CHAPTER 10

I woke up late, but it isn’t important since I don’t have to work today. And however, I haven't gone to the rehearsals for the last three days…

I remember clearly what happened the other day, Gaki-san held me until I fell asleep, and she admitted that she knows why Kamei has left me. But I won’t ask anymore questions to her, she’s fed up with this as much as I am.

And besides, I don’t really want to know why she has gone. The more that I know about this, I get more and more hurt. So maybe it isn’t a good idea to continue investigating about Kamei’s sudden decision.

All of this is helping me to make my own decision.

I’ll try to forget Kamei. After all, if Risa, who is her best friend, is saying it’s the best for me, I guess that it’s true. I’ll trust Gaki, she doesn’t have motives to lie to me…

I walk towards the kitchen lost in thought, when someone takes me by the wrist.

“Reina.” Oh, it’s her.

“What, mom?”

“I want to talk with you…” Well, I’m not surprised. Lately I’ve been noticing that everybody wants to talk with me…

“Ok. What is it?”

“Well, I realised that lately you’ve been acting really strange.” It wasn’t really hard to guess.

“Erm…”

“I thought that this was something related to Eri-chan…”

“Well… yes…” She’s my mother… she knows me too well…

“I understand that you’re upset, you were close friends. Remember that you can tell me anything.” And she worries a lot about me.

“Yes, mom. Thanks.” I say as my smile comes back to my face for the first time in some days, and I kiss her cheek.

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My mobile phone starts to ring, saving me of the boredom which is be in my room alone….

“Hey, Reina-chan, what were you doing these days, huh? I called you about a million of times and you didn’t answer.”

“Oh, I've been at home all the time… I was ill.”

“Really? I don't believe that...”

“Yes, why I would lie to you?” Why she’s talking at me like that? This excuse isn’t that bad…

“I don’t know why you would lie… but you’re doing it?” How does she know that I’m lying? Ok, this is weird…

“Jun, I’m not lying at you. I’ve spent these days at bed, trying to rest.”

“Oh, I believe that. But I don’t believe that you were ill.”

“Excuse me?” I exclaim confused.

“Come on, Reina-chan. I’ve asked you to see how you’re feeling since Tsunku said that Kamei wasn’t going to come back in a really long time.” Does she know that we were together or something?

“Well, I feel like the rest of us. But why I should feel other way?”

“Oh, please, do you think that I’m that stupid?” She’s angry…

“What?!”

“Reina, I know that you and Kamei-san were dating. So I thought that you were all broken inside.” But how?...

“How did you know that we were dating?!” I’m really surprised. Were we so obvious?

“It wasn’t so hard to guess… Besides, you rejected me once and you didn’t tell why.” True… she didn’t talk to me for two weeks after that. I felt sorry for her, but I belonged to Eri…

“I see…”

“Well, we’re changing the subject. So how are you feeling?”

“I’m fine…” But she interrupts me.

“You don’t have to lie to me. We’re close friends, or at least I thought so…” She says sadly.

“You thought so?”

“Yes, friends should tell everything to each other…” Oh she’s sad because we didn’t tell her.

“But Jun, you have to understand that we couldn’t tell it. You know this kind of things can destroy our careers…”

“I can keep a secret you know?” And again she’s angry…

“I’m sorry, we should have told you.”

“Ok, you’re forgiven. But I still wonder how you’re really feeling.” I can understand that she’s curious…

“Well, I could feel better. But I guess I’m adapting to this…”

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 10 Updated
« Reply #51 on: November 23, 2009, 08:03:31 PM »
The Jun/Reina conversation was very interesting, I guess the members might be concerned
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« Reply #52 on: November 23, 2009, 10:27:22 PM »
Reina should just take it slow for now and realize how many people are worried about her.

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« Reply #53 on: November 23, 2009, 11:22:38 PM »
yeeep... the theory is true,  Tanakame never can be together xD .w. But that fact is sad  :(,
I don't want that Reina give up on Eri ( well, it's a little selfish that petition ).
And I'm on Reina's side too, I can understand how Reina feels :smhid.

But there are moments on I don't know if I wanna slap to Eri or Reina xDD.
I want Tanakame *Cry*. I hope Eri comes back to Japan.
Your Fic have much drama ... and I love it  *^*.

ps: Puedo entender el problema del Inglés, soy de Chile y también tengo dificultades algunas veces xD

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« Reply #54 on: November 24, 2009, 01:28:52 AM »
Jun is now in the picture and Jun likes Reina :O :O :O Will Jun help Reina to forget Eri? *The Tanakame in me protesting lol*

But then again, someone has to be there for Reina :cry:

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 10 Updated
« Reply #55 on: November 24, 2009, 06:03:57 AM »
Jun/Reina is fresh... ~ Jun have always referred Reina to be someone that is like a girlfriend to her.. XD

Don't tell me Eri have a planned marriage in Japan that she is trying to avoid -> already making wild guesses.. XD

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« Reply #56 on: November 24, 2009, 06:05:56 AM »
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KEEP EM COMMING!! I love this fic!

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« Reply #57 on: November 24, 2009, 03:56:47 PM »
wait a sec *confused* ... how did junjun suddenly become so close with Reina? Didn't she JUST join the group?

OMG... this isn't gonna lead to ...

JunReina ... is it?  :shocked

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Re: Broken Promises (TanaKame Fanfic) Chapter 10 Updated
« Reply #58 on: November 24, 2009, 08:42:16 PM »
how did junjun suddenly become so close with Reina? Didn't she JUST join the group?
Nope, this fic is set after Koha's graduation  XD

Don't tell me Eri have a planned marriage in Japan that she is trying to avoid -> already making wild guesses.. XD
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@Michi.Pinku:Si no es que sea difícil... pero el inglés nos pierde a los hispanoablantes xD

Thanks everyone for the comments! Let's see what happens now...  :twisted:

CHAPTER 11

“Well, I could feel better. But I guess I’m adapting to this…” Is that really true? Well, the time heals everything… Though I’ve got the feeling that I’m going to take a lot of time…

“You know… We shouldn’t be talking about this in the phone… Do you want to go for a walk?”

“Sure.” I wonder why she’s so curious…

“Ok, I’ll be in the park. See you.”

“Ok.” I guess that a walk with her will be fun.

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“So… You’re starting to accept that she’s gone?” I feel relieved now, at least I know that I can talk with JunJun and with Risa.

“Yeah, I have to…”

“What do you mean?”

“I mean that if I don’t accept it, it will be worst. I have to go on without her, don’t you think?” I ask at her, while she opens her apartment’s door.

“Yes, I think so. But I thought that you wouldn’t accept it.” Well, I haven’t accepted it fully…

“Why?” I question as I sit on her sofa.

“Cause you were too attached to Eri.” She replies and sits next to me.

“Well, maybe you’re right…”

“Maybe?” She asks giving me a suggestive look.

“Ok, you’re right.” I admit.

“It’s normal that you were so attached to each other. You entered in the same generation, have been friends for a lot of time…”

“Yes, but even with all the reasons from whose we were so attached, she has gone.” I cut her off, with a deep tone.

“Don’t be so hard on her, Reina.”

“You think that I’m being hard?” I ask surprised.

“Yes, you are.” Wasn’t she on my side?

“Well, let’s see. She tells me that she’s going to Korea, and she didn’t tell me that she knew it from two months ago, but of course she told Gaki. And the main thing is that she didn’t tell me how long was she going to be outside the country, and then I get told that she’s going to be outside for a really long time. In fact I don’t know even if she’s going to come back. And she hasn’t even dare to call me…”

“Wait a second.” She cuts me off. “She knew this for two months? And Gaki-san knew this before you?”

“Yes…” I say sadly.

“My god, Reina… This is worst than I thought…”

“Yes, well. But at least now I’ve got people to talk.” I whisper smiling weakly to her.

“What do you mean with “now”?” She asks sceptically.

“I thought that I was all alone… But Gaki has prove me that I can count on her, even knowing that she knows things about Eri that I should know too. And I also can count on you, now that I know that you knew everything of this…” I say as a single tear runs down my cheek.

“Reina, I thought that you knew that you can always count on me. Always, you hear that?” She says sternly as she puts an arm over my shoulders, and with her other hand cups my cheek. “Reina, you mean a lot to me… and I… I…”

“You what, Jun?” I ask.

“I love you, Reina.”

Is she serious? I thought that she stopped loving me when I rejected her. That day she told me that she hated me, that she didn’t want to talk to me anymore…

Wait, she told me the same things that I said to Eri… And I haven’t stopped loving her. So this means that probably she has been in love with me all this time. She must be as hurt because of me as I am because of Eri…

And suddenly she kisses me, softly. I’m about to push her away, but I can’t, so I start to return the kiss. It’s strange… she’s being so gentle…

When we break apart to breath she looks at me deeply… And kisses me again, but this time she drags me with her towards the bedroom, without breaking the kiss. But once we’re next to her bed, I start to doubt…

“Jun…” I don’t know if I really want to do this. It feels like I’m cheating on Eri, even if she isn’t with me anymore.

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« Reply #59 on: November 24, 2009, 08:47:10 PM »
Jun makes a move and she ....... hits the crossbar?

Jun/Reina  :thumbup
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