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Re: The random days of hello project (comedy)
« Reply #20 on: March 14, 2011, 08:24:55 PM »
Announcement:
If nobody votes by friday I'll post chapter 8, then the short story. So, that way everyone wins. If you still want to ask question concerning the update or etc, just message me or something.

Rant: It's spring in st.louis and it's snowing -.-. I swear global warming is take over :/

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Re: The random days of hello project (comedy)
« Reply #21 on: March 16, 2011, 07:50:34 AM »
Chapter 8- Morning Adventure
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Ai: Guess who got arrested?
Risa: What did Sayumi do?!
Ai: Use of a illegal firearm
Aika: WTF? Since when Sayumi got all gansta and shit?
Reina: It wasnt involvement with a gang dumbass
Aika: Bitch, shut the fuck up -.-
Risa: Ummm where's 9th gen?
Aika: Dude, They left a week ago. They said something about going to St.louis  :)
Reina: There aint shit in St.louis XD
Risa: What about six flags, the mills, and the bread company?
Aika: She's got a point.
Reina: Shut up -.-
Ai: Umm how are we gonna get Sayumi out of prison?
Reina: prostitution?
Risa: Hell, no.
Reina: Well, do you have a better idea?
Risa: I don't, but Aika does :D
Aika: My plan involves shotguns and dynamite
Ai: I like it :)
Reina: My idea was better  :twothumbs
Aika: No one cares  :thumbdown:
Reina: -.-
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At prison
Sayumi: I should've shot him through the brain :/
* An explosion is heard*
Ai: heyy
Sayumi: umm where's everyone else?
*Screams, gun shots, and broken technology are heard*
Ai: Does that answer your question?
Sayumi: Yea 0_0
Risa: So Sayumi, what happened?
Reina: Yeah, Im curious
Sayumi: Okay this is what happened......
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Flashback
Sayumi: *drinking like theres no tomorrow*
Perv: Hey babe
Sayumi: What do you want? -.-
Perv: Wanna go somewhere private?
Sayumi: Go to hell bitch :/
Perv: Come on *throws himself on her*
Sayumi: uh-uh bitch *shoots him in the leg*
*Screaming is heard and the police arrived*
Police: Sayumi your under arrest
Sayumi: Aww crap -.-
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Risa:0_0
Ai: eh lets go get something to eat
The rest: mmk
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End of chapter 8 :)

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Re: The random days of hello project (comedy)
« Reply #22 on: March 19, 2011, 09:58:32 PM »
Update news and what not-
I will get started on chapter 9 asap, cause im getting my hair done atm.

Random Question- did u like chapter 8 or the short story better? ( posting an answer is recommended)

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Re: The random days of hello project (comedy)
« Reply #23 on: March 27, 2011, 08:46:11 AM »
You guys have commenting to do :)
Should I continue my comedy or write a new story
It's for you to decide and yes, you are required to comment

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Re: The random days of hello project (comedy)
« Reply #24 on: March 28, 2011, 07:02:52 PM »
hmmm it seems like no one is really interested  in my story. Ill just take alittle break from this story

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Re: The random days of hello project (comedy)
« Reply #25 on: May 09, 2011, 12:47:45 AM »
Chapter 10- 9th generation's adventures in St.Louis
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Mizuki: Where should we go first?
Riho: Lets go to the cheesecake factory! I want some full racked ribs and a new york cheesecake :)
Erina: Dude, you are officially a certified fatass -.-
Riho: Shat up :(
Kanon: Lets go to the Galleria
Mizuki: And what? Get ripped off?! Lets just go to the Mills
*Everyone else agrees*
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*At the Mills"
Kanon: Im going go-carting :p
Mizuki: I'll be at Hot Topic
Riho: Im going to gamestop
Erina: I'll be with Kanon
Mizuki: Everyone meet here in 3 hours
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*3 hours*
Mizuki: Where's Chayla?
Riho: Hell If I know -.-
Erina: Whats wrong with you?
Riho: Im tired and these bags are heavy :(
Kanon: Well, at least you didn't have some heterosexual in a pink polo shirt bumping your go-cart >:(
Chayla: Hey dudes, I ish here :D
Erina: Well then, lets get the hell outta here :)
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*Hour and half later*
Mizuki: The hilton......really?
Chayla: Dude! We're leaving tomorrow anyways, so suck it up and shut the hell up :/
Erina : Good night everyone
Kanon: Good night
Riho:Night
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*Back at Japan*
Riho: So Chayla, Are you staying at japan?
Chayla: Nah, I think im going back to Misouri
Erina,Mizuki,Kanon&Riho: Bye Chayla :D
Chayla: Byeee ^_^
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Im back and My birthday is in 9 days :D


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Re: The random days of hello project (comedy)
« Reply #26 on: May 11, 2011, 05:38:24 AM »
Chapter 11- News Update
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Yurina: Hello, this is the news update with Kumai Yurina
Risako: And Sugaya Risako -.-
Yurina: What's your deal? :/
Risako: I'll tell you later.
Yurina: ok. So, we've noticed that Chayla has a mild case of writer's block
Risako: And she's trying to not go to summer school nor repeat the eighth grade.
Yurina: Yeah, I wish her luck :)
Risako: Me too. Due to those circumstances, updates will come every weekend or so.
Yurina: Yep and that's the news update with Kumai Yurina and Sugaya Risako. By the way, Risako what's wrong???
Risako: Our last 2 singles. That's whats wrong with me ;(
Yurina: Aww, its okay. We all can't be the lead forever.
Risako: But it's not fair ;(
Yurina: Wanna watch Hot Fuzz? It'll make you feel better :)
Risako: Sure :D
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Re: Chayla's Story Collection
« Reply #27 on: June 17, 2011, 09:36:44 AM »
A lot of POV's in this story, interesting plot around all the characters :thumbsup
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Re: Chayla's Story Collection
« Reply #28 on: June 17, 2011, 09:50:21 AM »
Yep, I'm trying to get the characters as involved as possible   :)

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Re: Chayla's Story Collection
« Reply #29 on: June 24, 2011, 06:19:09 PM »
you updated :lol:

well as a small suggestion, can u please spread the story out a little, reading the whole thing as a paragraph is a little to restraining :nervous
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Re: Chayla's Story Collection
« Reply #30 on: June 24, 2011, 06:24:12 PM »
you updated :lol:

well as a small suggestion, can u please spread the story out a little, reading the whole thing as a paragraph is a little to restraining :nervous
Sure, no problem. :D

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Re: Chayla's Story Collection
« Reply #31 on: June 24, 2011, 06:25:47 PM »
By the way, sorry for not updating any sooner. I done ALOT of thinking in my chapter and I wanted to make sure everything was A+ material (If you know what I mean).

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Re: Chayla's Story Collection
« Reply #32 on: June 28, 2011, 07:21:58 AM »
^ sorry to hear about that

my best advice for your fic is to also proof read before posting :thumbsup
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Re: Chayla's Story Collection
« Reply #33 on: July 01, 2011, 08:32:21 AM »
so much cliffhanging :lol:
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Re: Chayla's Story Collection
« Reply #34 on: August 02, 2013, 02:27:04 PM »
well well well, i guess its time for me to stop lurking and come out into the light..................

OH. MY. GAWD.....this story.....its.....its....AWESOME XD !!!!! OMG and im so glad ur bakk  :cry:

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Re: Chayla's Story Collection
« Reply #35 on: August 02, 2013, 02:48:30 PM »
@darkacex99
Thanks, I'm glad I decided to finish the story :thumbsup. Chapter 8 will be up around 8:30am CST.

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Re: Chayla's Story Collection
« Reply #36 on: August 03, 2013, 05:49:15 AM »
darn it...voting is closed huh...well i think sayumi is the killer...but then again airi could be the one too....  :huhuh ugh idk!!!  :doh:

maasa in chapter 7: DANNNNNG sadistic much?

thanks for another update  :thumbsup i cant wait to see what happens next XD

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Re: Chayla's Story Collection
« Reply #37 on: August 03, 2013, 06:06:24 AM »
I just posted chapter 8. I hope you can see it  :lol:

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Re: Chayla's Story Collection
« Reply #38 on: August 03, 2013, 02:40:19 PM »
opp...mustve missed it somehow XD

wonder wat's gunna happen to reina  :(

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