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Offline risa_ai

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Tears [ONE-SHOT]
« on: January 26, 2012, 09:59:57 AM »
Minna!~ My 1st fic is ready! I just had an inspiration... Hehe. So go ahead, read and comment! I'm looking forward to those wonderful comments!


Tears

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I let another tear slide down my cheek as I sat hugging my legs in the corner of the hotel room. I had never felt so afraid, so alone before. I was in the hotel room all alone, as my room mate was out. Crying more tears of fear, I hiccupped a few times as I swollowed the unbearable feeling down my throat.

"BAM!!"

The loud roar of thunder could be heard. I whimpered and held my legs closer to my chest.
'Where was she when I needed her the most?'
I wondered.


Flashes of lighting could be seen as heavy rain thudded on close windows. Just then, I heard the door creak open and through my blurry eyes, saw a familiar figure taking off her shoes, before running towards me.
"Risa!!"
Her gentle voice called out, making me blink away my tears as she held me in those gentle but strong arms.
"Shhh... It's okay. I'm here..."
Her soothing voice seemed to have an effect on me, making my sobbing subside while rocking me in that familiar warm embrace.


All too soon, soft lips were pressed on my forehead and her warmth was rapidly transferred to me. I felt myself dozing off but before my heavy eyelids could close, I uttered a lone sentence,
"I love you... Ai..."
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How was it??... 
« Last Edit: February 14, 2012, 02:25:13 PM by risa_ai »

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Re: Tears [ONE-SHOT]
« Reply #1 on: January 26, 2012, 10:07:34 AM »
short but sweet, good job
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Re: Tears [ONE-SHOT]
« Reply #2 on: January 27, 2012, 12:08:58 AM »
really good! short but sweet is just right^^ hope to see some more! :deco:
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Re: Tears [ONE-SHOT]
« Reply #3 on: January 31, 2012, 11:32:36 AM »
 :heart: :heart: :heart: Thanks for the comments....

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