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Blank-Faced Woman Day 62 FIN
« on: February 29, 2012, 11:02:36 AM »
The stars rose
From the ground
Crying tears
Flowers grow

Addiction made me miss this
The rainbow turned black
I comforted myself with wants
The tainted water made me blind
The pills crushed my dreams
The final blow landed me here

The white room in the sky
But no angels
Only devils dragging me down
Just one more step
Resisting to budge
I land in bed

Sick as I am
I want my remedy
I will go far to get it
But my body doesn't want it
Yet I reach

The juice to restart my life
One sip
It feels better
And I sleep
Not knowing what tomorrow shall bring

I hope for it
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Pre-story poem
« Reply #1 on: March 01, 2012, 01:11:30 AM »
This is already showing the slight deepness.. And maybe even... depression? 
Well, im waiting for the next upload..  :twothumbs
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Pre-story poem
« Reply #2 on: March 02, 2012, 07:14:02 AM »
This is already showing the slight deepness.. And maybe even... depression? 
Well, im waiting for the next upload..  :twothumbs

Thanks for the support, I am slightly concerned with the first chapter reason for not posting any sooner.  Depression is one part of the whole story but I already clued in on the main pairing but I want to add many characters.  It may be quite disturbing but hang with it until the end, it will present a positive ending, I hope :nervous
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Chapter 1 3/2/12
« Reply #3 on: March 03, 2012, 06:29:18 AM »
I might as well go for it :nervous

Day 1

The first day is usually the toughest for a rehab patient.  For Takahashi Ai, it was facing the devil for the last time before escaping from his cage.  She was awakened by the sliver of light and a loud voice that scared her that she almost pee’d in her underwear.  The night was a carnival of images from her past and the men who she slept with for her drugs.

The voice came from her coach to set her straight while in rehab, she was unattractive, fat, and had arms that could choke Ai to death in an instant.  But, her voice made the woman lose ten years off her life.  Ai looked at her with sleep in her eyes and opened up her closet filled with clothes of her past.  She pulled a t-shirt over her tank top and slid a pair of shorts over her underwear.  Her butt cheeks hanged out which irritated the woman but knowing she was late, it was a free pass for the day.

Ai sleepwalked into the plain room where there were two chairs and a window ten feet from the ground.  She stared at the open window waiting for the therapist to enter the room.  Ai lifted her arm up and smelt like garbage that hadn’t been dumped in two weeks.  Minutes later, a young woman entered into the room with the least self-confidence and she observed her initial reaction which impressed the therapist.

“Hello, Ms. Takahashi.”  She greeted as Ai’s head slowly went up and glared at her.

“My name is Konno Asami and I will be your friend for the next eight weeks.”  Ai grinned and turned her attention to the open window.

As Asami was continuing her speech, Ai was in her own world thinking about what she would do at this moment.  Sleeping was the most obvious answer with an unknown person who probably was a bad lover.  The secreted liquids would be spread on a filthy bed casing, smelling like day old fish.  The man was probably a low life or a cheater who wanted a quick bang before coming back to reality.

She treated her body like a dumpster but it didn’t start off that way.  Ten years ago, she was accepted into a prestigious school with honors.  Ai was working her way up to the top until she met an American transfer by the name of Stacy Jackson.  Stacy was much bigger in physique than Ai but she hated how she acted in front of the teachers.  It was annoying that someone would thank their teacher for teaching them.

One day, Ai went to the library to pick up books for her research and had a corner table to start on it but instantly her mind turned groggy and her head hit the table.  A can of sleeping gas hit under her chair and she woke up in a basement with her uniform off and only thing left was her underwear.

Her hands were tied with rope and was hanging inches from the ground with Stacy standing in front of her with two other girls.  She had a pair of scissors with her cutting off the last pieces of clothing.  Their laughs haunted the feeble mind and she saw them tease her body with pencils and rulers.  The eraser was the worst culprit rubbing her sensitive spots until the first whack got her attention.

“Okay, Takahashi-san.  We have an offer for you.”  Ai’s head nodded without getting to the main point.

“You have to join our group because we need diversity but to gain our trust, you have to test some toys out.”  She laid out her selection in front of her and Ai whimpered at the thought.

“However, you cannot blackout during anytime and if you refuse to do this, we have a boy who would want you to have you as his first time.”  Ai saw him across the room with his hands tied to his back.

Ai agreed to their demands and started the torture of having everything tried on like an evil doctor doing experiments.  Stacy loved her toys and Ai had every one used in her.  The laugh lingered in her head as the pain was growing below and her cohorts were joining in alternating turns over the girl’s body.  She couldn’t tell how long it took but it seemed like an eternity to end.  Her last memory was the boy nervously staring at her as they toy with him until the pain finally took over her mind.

By the time she could regain her consciousness, the boy tied up helped her out of the building.  Her voice was rough, her body sore, and the boy couldn’t looked at her.  A classmate had taken her to the infirmary on campus and saw the clock ticking past 6:00.  Couple days later, she had learned the truth of what happened after she blacked out and cried about it leaving her away from the school for a short period.

She came back with the images still etched in her head.  The boy had been bullied by Stacy and her gang until he had gone insane.  He had one of her group members locked in a room continually raping her.  Stacy laughed at him for going insane but Ai knew she wouldn’t survive if it had continued.  The boy disappeared after the incident until he was allowed back to school.  She saw the boy grinning after the revelation and committed suicide that night after hearing about the pregnancy.

Ai was committed to take down Stacy and she had to design everything perfectly to drag her into the mud.  She used her savings to hire a private investigator to find out what she does and the secrets were juicy enough to eat with her teeth.  She needed to plan like setting an image with dominoes; time was on her side as she watched her from afar.  A week after the boy’s suicide, the events of the collapse had started.

First, there was blackmail to her father about his sexual encounters overseas, she had seen a few of videos with teenage Filipino girls brutally raped or sodomized in front of the camera.  Her stomach turned after half a minutes and she turned it off.  Ai was across the street watching her father running away from the police.  It entertained her that the police were stumbling fools to catch a big man.  Then, out of the corner a shot was fired and he fell down like a tree.

Second, her affair with a teacher was exposed to the headmaster, that video made her smile as she was faking every sound from her body.  Stacy sneaked into the classroom and started to get frisky and she broke in with a camera in her hand.  She chased her out of the room and into a hallway where the police were hiding out.  She turned back and saw him arrested in front of her.  Out of the corner of her eye, Ai winked at her as she escaped from the school grounds.

The final act was gaining control of her body.  She sprung a trap with sleeping gas in her locker and dragged her body to the basement.  She sat in the dark waiting for her to wake up with her breathing becoming harder every second in anticipation.

Ai wanted revenge on the foreigner, a Japan-sized revenge for what she has done to her but she saw her face and she knew that she had won over her.  She was on her knees with her hands tied up begging for forgiveness.  Ai spoke Japanese to her and her eyes widened as big as baseballs.

“Dirty woman shall die in hell.” 

Ai delivered the first punch to the gut which got her folded over.  She lifted up her head and threw in elbow into the eye socket causing it to break instantly.  Her foot contacted with the jaw which was dislocated.  She cried with every attack until she left her with a man.  Ai watched as she became emotionless after everything but it was an ending to her experience.  Stacy was broken down into a million pieces and that all it mattered to her.

She returned home to find police sitting next to her parents.  Her heart sank that she wasn’t going home free.  Ai was arrested and sent to a juvenile facility for her crimes, it was a setback for her but once she heard that she confessed to her crimes, it was even between them.  She was happy that she admitted to her faults but it wasn’t going to change the verdict on her as six months’ probation.

Ai returned home with her parents becoming more aggressive towards each other.  It was constant annoyance with the bickering that she headed out on the town. They blamed the incidents on each other until divorce papers came in the last month of her probation.  She didn’t want them to live separately so she decided to drop out and make her own life to live.

Konno had gotten to the tail end of her speech when Ai decided to revert back to the present and smiled before she left to get some fresh air in the garden.  The itch to do drugs hit her as she looked at the flowers and she was going berserk about her stash was stolen and got violent toward one who was an innocent bystander.  She threw him into the pool of koi.  Ai stared at him as she smiled at him and then helped him out of the pool. They realized that she was in more out of control than expected so they left her in the special rooms for a bit as they accustomed her room to fit her condition.

Ai came out and calmly slept without eating dinner, the first day was a step forward but she knew that being an animal wouldn’t help her at all.  It body felt stiff but it was a reaction in terms of detoxing and she looked at the moon wondering if she could every change or the demons could control her again.  The end of the first day came with troubles but she survived the day.
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Chapter 2 3/3/12
« Reply #4 on: March 04, 2012, 07:18:09 AM »
Day 2


Ai woke to the same voice as the day before and stood up to her.  They were face to face for a few seconds before Ai turned to her closet to get a change of clothes so she could take a shower.  She arrived at the room noticing it was a community shower and seeing another person naked scared her.  She walked into the steam to find a wall in front of her and turned left into another patient.

“Oi!  Are you perverted?”  The woman asked as Ai stared straight at her.

“No, you are just too big to move around.”  Ai imitated the woman and she saw her face turn red.  Ai showed no fear towards her but was expecting a fist to come through the mist but heard whimpering instead.

She walked toward her and saw her face in her hands.  The woman was crying instead of retaliating at Ai, her face looked at Ai seeing the red in her eyes.  Ai saw her turn away and she continued with her shower.  Ai went into the stall farthest away from the entrance and stripped off her clothes to feel the warm water hitting her body.  She looked at what was given to her for washing and she wasn’t impressed with the selection but she needed to wash up.

There was no smell to the shampoo or the soap and no conditioner for her hair.  She took her time washing every inch of her body.  The voice entered into her head again of the woman and immediately rinsed off whatever she could before coming out with her bra and panties.  She went back into the room and put on a T-shirt and a matching knee skirt.

Ai walked into the room where Konno had a pitcher of water next to her.  She happily poured a glass for her and placed it in front of her.  Ai took a quick sip and looked up at the window again.  Her mind wandered away to think about her life again.

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After she moved out of her family’s homes, she managed to get an apartment in Tokyo’s red light district.  Ai lived next to a woman who had introduced her to the world of call girls.  She explained the income would be better if she worked there rather than getting a legal job but Ai decided to take on a legit job working as a secretary part-time in a game room.  It brought in enough to pay the rent but she had to steal for food and she finally got caught and was fired on the spot.

She had come home exhausted after explaining herself about the situation to no budging of her employment.  Ai was asked if she would take the offer despite her initial declination.  Ai had to agree thinking that it was just one night and walked around outside with her coat and purse placing up ads.  After a few minutes, she got hit up three times and took the first call on her list.  He was a heavy set man, about thirty to forty years old, and was patting himself with a small handkerchief.

“Hello.  I am your partner tonight.”  She greeted the man as they headed into the love hotel.

The man laid down a wad of money on the front desk asking for the platinum room on the top floor.  She gave a sly smile to him and escorted her up to the room.  Her eyes were concentrated on the wallet but it was so close to his overflowing bulge that she followed him into the room without any move.  Ai sat on the bed as he was fidgety in taking off his clothes.  She could sense that her parents were in the room closing their eyes but soon cleared it out when he was down to his underwear.

He was hesitant in his next move as Ai could see and she seductively moved towards him toying with his breast with her finger.  Coyly, moving her hand down below his huge gut and then he ran off to the bathroom without faltering, leaving Ai in the room next to his pants.  She slid her hand into the pocket to take out a 10,000 yen note and placed it in her purse.

After his visit, he came out nude but the smell of sweat filled the room.  Ai covered her nose and indicated she couldn’t handle the stench and ran back in to take a shower.  She took advantage of the situation and took the rest of the money.  She ran out into the hallway and slipped into emergency exit.  After five sets of stairs, she started breathing hard and looked at the money in her hand: 75,000 yen.  She boomed out with a loud laugh and ran all the way down out the back exit.

Ai stuck the wallet and noticed she dropped her cell somewhere but ran as fast as she could back home.  Her neighbor was in the middle of her room with a man and walked past her without noticing them.  She threw the wallet onto the bed and let out a sigh hearing the moaning from outside.  Her brain cancelled out the sound and giggled to the money in her hand.  Ai walked out and smiled at them as they were on the floor in between intercourse.  She opened her eyes and tossed her phone to her as she called the next number.  Her next appointment was a love hotel near the apartment and decided to wash up before visiting him.

She strolled two blocks down to the run down hotel seeing an attractive man with a lady by his side.  He handed her 25,000 yen without saying a word and followed him into the building.  Ai saw the woman and gave her a smile.  She leaned onto her as the man pushed both into the room.  The woman looked at her and she started to touch her every place without any resistance.

However, she felt comfortable letting her explore her nubile body, her sounds came out naturally, and when she finished, the woman lied by her snuggling up to Ai.  She let Ai take on an experienced woman’s body and learned how to push another female’s buttons.  Ai felt achieved after getting the first orgasm but the woman opened her mind to controlling another female’s body.  It was hands-on in learning about her body.  After her second one, the man popped his head into the room to check on them.

“Honey, you should be able to satisfy anyone now with what I have thought you, I have 100,000 yen for you as a gift for your future.”  She gently brushed her hair back and gave her a kiss on the lips before waving goodbye.

Ai returned back home tired from the experience and wanting to sleep but her neighbor was laid out on the couch looking up toward the ceiling.  Her face was stoned as she hinted a smile before looking at her.  She took a puff of her joint and offered it to her.  Ai stared at her smelling the smoke and lulling back into a dream.  Her lips quiver as she took the joint from her hand and smelt it on closer inspection.  Ai placed it on her lips and took a puff, her lungs burned but it soothed minutes later with a few cough inserted to show her inexperience.
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“Ms. Takahashi…. Takahashi-san…. Ai-chan….”  The little voice inserted into her mind and broke her trance.

“Gomen, are you feeling the effects of the withdrawal?”  Ai nodded.

“I want to know a little bit of your past…” Ai stood up towards her and grabbed the glass of water.  No one could understand her pain and even if she explained it, she felt everyone would build the wall around her.  Without notice, she broke the glass in her hand.

Ai didn’t flinch as the shards were sticking out of her hand.  The pain was deep in her heart and she pulled one of the shards and threw it against the wall.  Konno cautioned her to not do that but she pulled one more and threw it against the wall where it spread on the floor.  The blood crawled down her wrist and stood still as the doctors came in to treat her deep wound.

“Are you alright?”  Ai nodded as the last piece was removed and she let out a loud cry as they wrapped her hand with heavy bandaging.

“Well, if you don’t feel well, we can pick it up later.”  Ai shook her head.

“Let’s continue.”  She mumbled as Konno sat down to look at her book.

Konno noticed that her addiction was with ecstasy but on occasion she tried other recreational drugs which caught her eye.  The doctor looked towards one of the assistance and asked for a glass and a straw for the patient to drink through.  Ai tried to pick up the pitcher but the pain was running through her arm and waited for the assistant to put it together for her.

“Your past… is a weird path.  I have written down here that everything fell apart at age fifteen but there is no reason to what happened but after the incident, you broke away from your family.”  Ai lifted her bandaged hand.

“Have you been bullied?”  Konno nodded slowly.

“Did your bully ever felt your pain?”  Konno shook her head.

“She stopped after I took karate and defended myself.  She embarrassed me a few times as many bullies would but I never went as far as doing the same to her.”  Ai had a lopsided smile.

“Well, if I told you what happened to me, you wouldn’t believe me.”  Konno flipped to an empty page in her book.

“I am all ears, Ai-chan.”  Ai began to talk about her experience and her heart sank as she vividly remembered everything from the event.  Her pencil stopped a few times as the story startled her and placed it down before she could mention what she did to her.

“I feel bad for you.”  Ai stood up and walked over to the wall.

“Don’t you pity me.”  She said under her voice before yelling it out to Konno which Ai apologized for yelling at her.

“I’m sorry for doing that.  I get emotional.”  Ai nodded as she extended her other hand.

Ai walked outside the room and saw the woman from the shower.  She had short black hair, a little roundish, but looked like she was in shape.  She walked towards her and bowed deeply to her.  Ai returned the bow and she looked at her hand.

“What happened?”  Ai smiled.

“Anger.  It’s my price for being angry.”  She nodded and placed her hand on top of her shoulder.

“Anger brings out the worst in people, I should have known better before killing her out of anger…”  Before Ai could hear the details, she walked into the room, and the door was closed behind her.

The clock turned noon and walked over to the lunch room for her meal.  It was simple but it looked hearty to her as it reminded of a home-cooked meal from ten years ago when her parents would look at her with confidence.  Now, it was empty spaces next to her as she took her first spoonful into her mouth.  She cried as it tasted incredible and wanted to shout out her excitement but it reminded her of what torn them apart.  She put the spoon down and broke into the fish with her chopsticks.  After a few bites, she returned it back to the disposal with her appetite filled.

The afternoon was quiet in her room.  The itch for drugs was milder than the day before but she needed to suppress the feeling and looked over at her drawer to only find a pen.  She started to chew on it to soothe her body from wanting the drugs.  After a few minutes, she threw the pen to the ground and started to yell out of frustration at the pillow.  Ai closed her hand and started to punch the pillow as hard as she could until she expired on her bed.

Ai took a few deep breaths and closed her eyes to end her second day of rehab.  The urges were still strong but it seemed that she needed to fight off to win over addiction but with Konno she had an outlet to explain what went on for the past ten years.  That’s all she wanted.
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Chapter 3 3/4/12
« Reply #5 on: March 05, 2012, 10:49:52 AM »
I guess the price for writing a fic like this :sweatdrop:

Day 3

She woke up in a cold sweat and noticed she had only slept four hours.  Ai gazed outside to the night sky, noticing the half-moon out in the clear sky.  She closed her eyes to force herself back to sleep but the dream appeared at the worst time and decided to look outside for an assistant to ask for a glass of water.  Then, she remembered there is a phone to call in any request for immediate needs and picked up the phone to hear no tone.  Angrily, she slammed the phone on the holder and walked outside to seek a person.

Konno saw her outside the room and Ai signaled her for a glass of water.  One of the assistants ran up her glass and she quickly drank it.  Ai gave back the glass and entered to her room feeling a chill in the air.  She wrapped a blanket around her body and closed her eyes.

“I need to go to sleep.”  She said to herself but the sounds of crickets were now on her mind.

She wasn’t sure of the time but the night was soon turning to morning.  Her body was getting warm, so she took off the blanket and sat back on her bed.  Ai had brought a picture book and opened it to see her parents together with her in the middle.  She let out a sigh as she remembered the time before the event and they were talking like nothing ever bothering them.  If anyone had a concern, they were there to comfort each other but after it was a living hell.

Ai blocked out the last month of her life before the parents finalized their divorce.  She thought the easy way was to work until she finally get herself back to normal life but it brought her here.  She felt her fingers touch her lips and remembered the last puff of the joint.  It felt soothing and gave her an ultimate high until waking up at the entrance of the clinic.  She closed the book and saw the sun rising over the horizon and heard a knock at the door.

“WAKE…”  She paused as she saw Ai standing in the middle of the room.

“Arigatou!”  Ai bowed to her and she hid her smile as she walked out.

Ai looked at the schedule and took her spare clothes to the shower for a quick rinse off.  She walked down the hallway to the woman she met yesterday and saw her bow to Ai and she stopped her.  Ai bowed to her and took a deep breath.

“Sorry about yesterday, they really should give us space to walk around.”  She smiled towards her.

“I agree, anyways what is your name?”  She asked as Ai smiled back.

Ai learned that her name was Sakaguchi Akiko and she had been in rehab for about two months for alcohol dependency.  Her parents sent her because they feared addiction but in reality they were the cause of her party girl attitude.  She resisted speaking for a week but her therapist opened her petals up slowly despite her nasty attitude towards people.  Aki-chan was bad at first impressions but as soon as you got to see through the thick façade, they could see she was a kind person.

Ai felt grateful that one other person spoke to her and continued on to the shower where she got her hair washed and walked back to her room to ready for another session.  She yawned as she entered into the room and suddenly went into another daydream.

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She remembered the taste of her first marijuana joint, tar tasting but refreshing from the air around her.  Her neighbor lent her a few of her joints to smoke while she got some more for both of them.  Ai lit one for her and let out a puff into the air.  She hinted a smile and turned to look for her phone which she had lost the night before.  Ai stood up and felt the floor crumble below.  She let out a laugh that could waken a sleeping giant but she managed to pull through to the door.  She felt the wad of cash in the pocket and walked over to the cell phone place to buy a new phone.  The man was quiet and handed her a cheap phone with a plan that she could at least manage for the time being.  She strolled back without any more incidents and went back to her room for another puff.  Her mind cleared of her concerns; she finally had herself at peace again until someone charged into her room.

“Where is she?”  The man from last night was feet from her as her neighbor came in right after and socked him in the face.

She watched everything unfold in front of her with less concern of her health and saw them rumbled through her living room.  The screaming never bothered her until Ai saw him slip and felt out through the open window.  The neighbor ran out while Ai was trying to comprehend what had happened in front of her.  Her mind clicked only when she remembered the drugs and threw it into her closet.  She walked over to the elevator and sat on the chair to get back to the sense of reality.

Ten minutes later, she seemed in good shape to piece together the puzzle and saw the policeman approached her.  Ai remembered seeing him fall out but she wasn’t the one to push him out of the window.  Even, if she declared her innocence, she was taken into the station for more questioning, and let her off after catching the neighbor.  She took a taxi back to her apartment and a woman was standing outside of the door.

“Remember me?”  She asked as Ai shook her head slowly.

The woman pressed her finger onto her right hipbone and she felt that pleasure point from last night and looked up at her suddenly putting the person into her memory.  She was slightly taller than her with brownish hair and her eyes reminded her of the devil.  Seductively, she grabbed her butt surprising Ai and smiled at her as she handed her a stack of 10,000-yen notes.

“I know that you live here but I think it would be better if you live with me.”  Ai felt her butt squeezed again and agreed to the arrangement.

She led them up to her room to pack up her stuff.  The woman watched as the movers moved everything out of the apartment and suddenly remembered the joints in her bedroom.  Ai ran into the closet to slip it into her pocket as the woman gave her a smile.  She slipped her hand into Ai’s pocket slowly revealing the joints.

“Well, well what we have here?”  She held up the bag avoiding the hands of the girl.

“I need them.”  She yelped as she handed it over to her.

“The deal is you will work for me as a call girl but half the money has to go to me.  You do not know the price or what they will do to you but you have to agree to it anyway.  Since, I am nice I will give you the easiest of my customers, lonely housewives.  They will treat you nicely until you can go to harder stuff and I will decide on when you can have them.  However, I don’t like drugs in my household so you need to discard them as soon as possible and if you don’t, I will show you my wrath.”  Ai shook her head and followed her to the limousine.

Ai stepped into the limousine with the woman and suddenly felt her head being smashed against the cushion.  She desperately struggled to get out as the woman’s hand rubbed her behind slowly before lashing out.  Ai screamed in pain as she felt the hand bruise it but she continued a couple more time and letting her go.  Ai had tears in her eyes as the woman let out a laugh to her.

“You think that is sore?  Imagine the clientele that wants nubile women.”  The fear struck her and soother her butt as the woman laughed at her.

Ai finally felt comfortable sitting down and a question popped into her mind as she faced her.  The woman looked back and grabbed onto her arm as she was pulled towards her.  Her hand was calmly placed on her legs as Ai’s mouth quivered trying to get the question out from her mouth.

“What’s your name?”  She smiled.

“Fujimoto Miki, you shall call me whatever you please to call me.”  Ai nodded.

“Is that all questions you have for me, girl?”  Ai nodded again.

Fujimoto suddenly got close enough to touch her privately while getting a kiss.  That comfortable feeling came into mind again as they stripped down in the back seat and continued off where they stopped the previous night.  She never thought about Fujimoto as her boss but as a partner that could help her break away from her pain.  The sounds of ecstasy nullified the outside noise of traffic.  Ai felt something broke off and halted Fujimoto’s progress to her box.  She looked at the ornament and smiled as it was worthless to her and threw it onto the ground.  Ai’s screams were giving Fujimoto a headache and pondered about if it was going to be a concern.  Fujimoto pulled back and wiped the sweat off her brow to put her work clothes back on.

They arrived at a gate where there was a mansion.  Ai gleamed at the idea of living somewhere expensive and was chased out of the car after entering the driveway.  She was taken to a small house where she heard murmurs and was pushed inside without explanation.  Someone grabbed the cord to turn on the light and one face appeared in front of her.

“Hello. I am Michishige and you are in your home for the next few months.”  She turned to find the door but it was locked.

“Sorry you cannot exit once Miki-sama brings you into here.”  She said in a monotone voice.

“Why?  Why would she do this?”  Ai panicked and Michishige placed her hands on her shoulders.

“She is our master.  She brings in girls who are out in the world alone and bring them here to work them into slaves.”  Ai’s heart dropped as she desperately tried breaking out to no avail.

“I was trapped by the police and she told me that I could work for her but not at this type of job for another person.”  She smiled and noticed the stains on her legs.

Without notice she was grabbed away from her and dragged to the pool where Miki had been lounging on a chair.  Ai was furious that she had tricked her but kept her cool as she lowered her sunglasses.

“I guess you found Sayu.  She is at the highest level of the program and she is a year younger than you.  Doesn’t that make you jealous?”  Ai shook her head.

“It should because you will become her soon enough and you will take everything coming your way with a smile.”  A woman about fifteen years older than her came up and analyzed her carefully.

She placed her hand everyplace on her body without a whimper from Ai and agreed to take her from Fujimoto’s hands.  She was escorted to the car and suddenly saw a light come flashing towards her.
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“Hello, are you okay Ai?”  Konno asked.

“I am a little tired at the moment; can we just pass on today?”  Konno nodded.

“You had a hard time sleeping last night, didn’t you?  I can’t blame you for it so we can pass for today but if you are ready to sit down; I am open to having an open meeting.”  Konno smiled at her and walked toward the door but Ai stopped her.

“Can you have someone fix my phone?  I wanted to call but it was broken.”  Ai requested and looked at the assistant as he followed her back to the room.

The afternoon was wasted just watching them figure out what was wrong with the phone and remembered the last patient in the room cut the cord with its teeth and never bothered to replace it.  The assistant grabbed a new phone and set it up for Ai to use and she called for a snack for her.  It filled her but the image of facing Sayu in the shed had scared her and she needed it to be rid of and walked to Aki-chan’s room where she was reading a book.

“Ah, Ai-chan.  You look like you seen a ghost.”  She responded.

“My past is coming back as haunting memories; can you show me to the library?”  Aki-chan nodded and Ai walked into the small room filled with books and grabbed one to read to herself.

After a while, her eyes were heavy of sleep and dropped the book as a pillow for her head.  Without checking the time, she woke up and placed the book in the used bin.  She didn’t feel hungry so she walked back into her room to sleep, hopefully longer than the previous night .
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Chapter 4 3/6/12
« Reply #6 on: March 07, 2012, 10:13:46 AM »
Day 4

A storm awoke her from her slumber and she witnessed the rain drops hitting her window as hard as rocks.  Through her half-opened eyes, the drops created pictures of her youth.  She had many friends that used to hang around her but when she won the battle, she had been placed into a bad light at school.  The friends she did have turned their backs on her and she was left to fight the battles on her own.  Despite the mounting negative remarks, she stuck it out for the first month but that all changed with the divorce.

Custody was the headache for every divorce case and she was the center of attention as they both fought over her like a piece of meat until it was agreed that the share would benefit her mother.  Ai took it upon herself to run away as fast as she could from any decision thus they were left with no daughter to share.

Ai stared at the window as she heard a knock at the door and it was Asami with a glass of water for her patient.  The therapist looked at her hand and gave a sorrowful expression before looking up at her.  Her thoughts were jumbled at best for the reason to visit her but the morning visits were becoming woeful for the past three days.  Konno discussed that Ai’s day dreaming was the reason for the lack of progress and decided to change them to afternoon.  Ai agreed to the change and placed her head on the pillow.

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She had learned the person who brought her in was a record producer’s wife.  She was divaish and loved to twirl her feeble-minded husband around her finger.  Mrs. Kawaguchi was a pop singer before her world came crashing down after her affair with another man.  Her record producer had threatened legal action if it didn’t stop so in an agreement, she had married him with a prenuptial agreement that unfairly went against her.  However, she was control the daily chores so getting maids was her priority but they had to be of a certain breed: Young, unmolded girl.

Ai had fit it perfectly and was soon rushed off to prepare the tables for the couple.  It seemed mildly amusing that the house was so huge for both of them and as she was the only maid, she had assumed she was living in a guestroom but she had learned the living space was a basement away from the main rooms.  The room was meant for guests but was never fully completed and the small space barely fit what was needed for the job.

During the table setup, the woman secretly hid a toy under the tablecloth and as Ai was preparing, she was immediately raped.  Kawaguchi had no remorse for Ai and took upon to humiliate her in private.  She had to wash the clothes for the couple and was forced to smell the rotten materials from her batch.  Her head was dunked into the soapy water while she pleasured her.  Then, she had been given clothes that had holes in them specifically for easy entry.

Her husband had no clue it was happening until she had been alone with him.  A simple request for a back rub led to intercourse on the couch where the wife had videotaped them.  Her cunning plan using Ai was the advantage to taking every penny from him.  The only problem was she needed to keep her quiet and her perverted ways made Ai a mute.

A few months later, she had obtained everything in his possession and started to invite people for sex parties.  Ai had been used so many times that her womanhood bled profusely which pissed off the woman.  Every hospital visit cost her money and she couldn’t let Ai keep taking the abuse over a short time but she had a way to punish her.  The day that she had brought home a foreigner as her lover, Ai had been shyly hiding from her sight, and she seductively dragged him into the room.

The foreigner thought he could get her to join them but she refused as Ai was a dirty slut.  He persisted in his pleas that she only allowed Ai to take him first before joining her upstairs.  Ai was obedient in her duties to please a man and made him release prematurely.  As usual, she cleaned up without any objections but he was concerned how the lady treated her and took it upon him to teach her a lesson.

The walk upstairs haunted her.  The screaming, yelling, and moaning filled her ears.  Hours of continuous intercourse until she heard one last scream.  The man flew down and took her out of the house.  She had listened to him about his boot camp stories and how he came to Japan as an Army private.  He was called himself Jon and he treated Ai nicely as a man should and housed her in abandon warehouse.

Ai thought that only bad would come out from living in a warehouse but he never forced her into anything that she disliked.  She had a diet of American food and made her back to a healthy weight but she heard that he wanted to show her off at a party and refused.

“I saved you from that witch and this is how you repay me.” 

“I… want to know… what you mean.”  Ai explained.

“You be my girlfriend for the night.”  He used signals that he hoped could explain the situation to her.

“Oh okay.”  Ai nodded.

He brought her a few sets of clothing for the party and she tried them on but they were slightly used and too big on her but she went it.  Night fell and the warehouse was filled with people that were foreign to her.  She felt uncomfortable as she was thorn in the group and the only person who was similar to her was in the corner.

“You want something to calm you down?”  She asked Ai.

“What do you have?  I tried marijuana.”  She laughed at her.

“I have something better, take this pill, and you’ll feel loose.”  Ai swallowed the bluish pill and the effects kicked in immediately.

Ai flew back to the man with a happy expression and greeted everyone she had met happily.  He couldn’t describe the change in personality but thought it would be fine for the time being.  Ai ran back to the woman and gave whatever she had in her pocket for a container filled with the blue and white stripe pills.  She felt relaxed for the first time in her life and the party flashed by her.

The foreigner was surprised that Ai could be friendlier than she was at the start and decided to throw more parties.  It was great to have the pills as she could face the others as a calm individual but inside she growing into an insomniac. Since, he was into raves, the place was packed with dealers, and she could rely on the one source.

The dealer knew the number one rule, don’t use what you sell, and she was on a roll in selling.  She used observations to test out her goods before selling them and was easily the richest out of the dealers.  She went by the name R.T. which was her initials.  She offered them up like candy to the dancers and they were dancing all night to her favorite songs and her knowledge spanned across the globe as she could fit people to the drug of their choice.  Ai began to fall for her and had sex just for the drugs. 

R.T. had developed the same feelings and began to be careless about her handling which prompted more people to observe her.  Ai was paying the money but it was the late payments that made her mad.  R.T. had covered all the pills Ai took for the first year but it grew difficult with every payment that she had permanently left the arena without any clues to her whereabouts.

However, she felt the need to put on a mask but the pills were a great substitute.  However, the dependency became the demon she had to face for the next ten years.
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Ai woke up refreshed but that urge to get the drug was growing in her.  She ran to the shower to get her body cleansed would help but it didn’t.  She ran into the cafeteria to get breakfast but the pills were on her mind and ran outside to seek the storm.  The enemy to her sleep seemed to be the enemy to her urges and she ran out to the garden and started to scream obscenities to the clouds.  The mixture of rain and wind knocked her down to one knee but she kept fighting until she felt her arms being grabbed and soon turned against them.

Konno was with the onlookers seeing that her patient had gone psychotic for that brief moment.  The guards took her to the isolation room as she continued her tirade against the walls.  Konno’s voice couldn’t seem to soothe the woman and Aki-chan tried helping but to no avail.

The depression took upon Konno as she felt confident that Ai was more obedient than the usual patient but she was wrong.  However, she felt relieved that it has happened now instead at the end where the steps had to be done again from square one.  She stood by the door and heard the noises coming from the room as it was a process to calm down the patient from lashing out onto others. 
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Chapter 5 3/8/12
« Reply #7 on: March 09, 2012, 09:16:27 AM »
Day 5-7

The dark room swirled into her dream, she didn’t know the time, or what had happened but she seemed calm from her outburst.  She spoke with the echoes hitting back softly but another voice had entered into her mind.  It reminded her of the only person to fully believe her when she was lost.  It ringed loud enough that she closed her ears and yelled for no reason.

“Ai-chan, are you okay?”  Konno asked only to her yelling again.

She closed her ears until she fell to the ground and everything around her became black.

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The last trip left in an alleyway where the sun had rose over the horizon.  It was four years since she started taking the pills for anxiety and the many locations she woke up in, it was one of the most rancid.  She rolled out of the pile of trash and saw a girl staring at her.  Ai waved at her before she came over to help her onto her feet.

“Thanks.”  Ai brushed herself off and walked toward the streets.

“Why were you sleeping here?”  She asked her and Ai smiled.

“I can’t seem to answer that question but if you don’t mind me asking for money.”  She handed her over 2,000 yen to Ai and in return Ai gave her phone number.

She took couple of steps away from her and her phone rung in her pocket.  It was an unknown number but she answered it anyway.

“Hello, can you tell me your name?”  Ai answered her question and asked the same question to her.

“Niigaki Risa.”  She said hesitantly but it gave Ai a smile.

“Can you meet me for lunch?  If not, I can treat you for dinner.”  Risa agreed to dinner and looked at clock in the restaurant and noted she was going to meet her in nine hours.

She ventured through the town with her mind still high as a plane and instantly felt the crash into the ground.  Her body was in pain and she searched through her clothing for another pill but remembered she had put them down at the party last night.  She hit her head constantly until she gave up looking for them and walked into a store for water to hydrate her body.

One bottle seemed enough until she took one step out the door and felt dizzy that she bought another bottle for the road.  The time seemed to go slowly until the smell of marijuana lured her into a backroom of a massage parlor.  The girls were on break and taking a puff of a joint in their circle.  Ai took a puff to soothe the pain she was feeling at the moment and thank them with 1,000 yen.  The effects were much stronger than she had before that she sat down on the bus bench and laughed uncontrollably to the people passing.

Before she could look at the clock, she began to feel that she was late and called the girl again.

“Risa-chan, are you there?”  Ai asked as she looked to her right to find the girl signaling to her.

Their meeting place was a small café that Risa usually hang out after school but the atmosphere was different in the evening where the adults were controlling the flow.  Cigarette smoke filled the air and Risa took out a cigarette and lit it for Ai but she refused.  Risa threw it into an ashtray and took a seat in the corner away from the window as they look at the menu for their dinner choices.

“Ai… doesn’t this make you nervous?”  Risa asked as Ai shook her head.

“I have been in places worse than this.  At least you can experience this with innocent eyes.”  Risa nervously shook her head.

“I have been here before with my parents but to see people in their natural environment make me feel nervous.”  Risa admitted to her.

Ai looked at the menu and picked out roast chicken with potato and rice medley.  Risa chose the fish over a vegetable mixture.  They looked around the room with the amazement of the couples talking over alcohol and how they were laughing over nonsense.  However, the anticipation within the room forced a move by the younger girl and Ai rubbed her hand.

“Have you ever had a boyfriend before?”  Ai shook her head and Risa shook her head too.

“I guess we can agree that it is making us uncomfortable.” Both laughed nervously and then looked into each other’s eyes.

As they moved in closer for a kiss, their meal came in between them and interrupted the progress.  The anxious feeling was building slowly like boiling water until RIsa knocked her fork off the table and both simultaneously went for a kiss.  The awkward kiss made both of them laugh and each took a deep breath to relax and their bodies tangled in the cramped space.

They knew the café would get crowded if they didn’t start eating but they wanted to run out before paying.  The duo walked into the bathroom and escaped through the window anyone noticing.  They ran away as fast they could until they ran out of breath at the park where the sprinklers just turned on.  The water refreshed their bodies and they fell onto the grass to have another embrace.

When they finished their kiss, both decided to take a seat on the bench while they were soaked from the water hitting them constantly.  The laughs continued until they both were settled and Ai finally came with the realization.  Risa took off all the anxiety she had been suffering from and she was slowly becoming closer to someone of the same sex.  It surprised her that she could be the one to answer all her questions.

“Ai-chan, this feels so great being away from my boyfriend.”  Ai’s expression turned serious as Risa looked at her strangely.

“You have a boyfriend?”  Risa nodded.

“He is controlling and never lets me go out with my friends.  I want to strangle him because he can hang out with his friends but I cannot.  Don’t you think that is ironic?”  Ai nodded.

“You want to break up with him?”  Risa paused and she grabbed Ai’s hand.

“I do.  If I can do so, I need a good reason.”  Risa explained and then a shadow came from the other side of the park.

Risa ran over to the other bench and stopped a few feet from the couple.  Ai could hear her voice shrill from where she was standing and ran over to figure what was happening.  Risa had gone berserk seeing her boyfriend with another girl and Ai had to control her from behind as she started to scream obscenities to him.  She broke from Ai’s control attacked the girl by the hair and tossed her into the pond.  Ai felt she had to do something and closed her hand into a fist and swung towards his face.

“Ai-chan, you didn’t have to do that.”  He was on the ground with his eyes rolled up and tongue sticking out.

“No one screws around with you.”  Ai yelled and Risa wrapped her arms around her.

“Thank you.”  She said softly as tears ran down her cheeks.

After the quick embrace, they fled the scene and took the long way to the warehouse where she had been staying in away from the people on her tail.  It wasn’t as nice as she wanted it to be but it was suitable for the night.  Risa changed out of her uniform and slipped under the sheet with only her underwear on.  Despite not liking to be in her underwear when she sleeps, Ai decided to follow Risa in just sleeping.
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Ai woke up to the light screaming into her face with Konno blocking enough from her complaint.  She sat up and saw a tray of food in front of her.  She ate it hastily without saying a word.  She looked up and saw the concern on Konno’s face as Ai pushed the tray forward.

“I’m sorry for my behavior.”  Ai apologized.

“I accept it.  You have been out for a while, almost two days here with noises of withdrawal in your voice.  Are you okay?”  Ai nodded.

Asami looked back and the two men picked her up to escort her to her room.  Konno analyzed the room for any discarded items and was impressed that she didn’t soil the room.  However, she had concerns of her current state of her well-being.  Konno walked up to the room and Ai sat down on her bed exhausted from her experience in the dark room.

“Takahashi-san, call me if need anything.  Tomorrow, I need to help a new patient before meeting up to the room so I hope you can get some rest.”  Konno closed the door and Ai put her head on the pillow and went instantly to sleep.

The next morning, Aki-chan knocked on her door until Ai woke up and she caught a glimpse of the new patient.  Konno was showing the complex to her and Ai saw her face.  She closed the door and started to cry as everything came back to her.  She cursed herself that she came here.

Risa, why did you ruin yourself?
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Chapter 5 3/8/12
« Reply #8 on: May 14, 2012, 01:32:18 AM »
OMG kurosawa i love your story XD i hope there is more :on comhere:
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^why the epic cliff hanger?!?  :farofflook:
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Chapter 5 3/8/12
« Reply #9 on: May 14, 2012, 02:00:41 AM »
thnx for the comment,

I kinda lost feeling in writing this fic when I began to think of the interaction between Ai and Risa, since had little attention, I left it hanging but I consider getting back to it when a comment would pop up or the feeling of the angst made me want to continue, I guess I'll be planning the next chapter soon :nervous
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Day 7-12 5/13/12
« Reply #10 on: May 14, 2012, 11:26:33 AM »
@darkace I like the cliffhangers in general for the next chapter but it was unusual to have it for so long

Day 7-12

Ai felt something lodged in her throat, she watched Risa walk to the other side of the building where they check them into the facility.  She opened her door to find a nurse and asked for a cup of water.  She sat down outside of her door as she waited for her request.  Aki-chan took a seat next to her as she held her legs up to her chest.

“You look pale.  The detention room took a lot out of you.”  Ai shook her head.

“A friend just got admitted here…”  Aki-chan’s eyes opened up in surprise.

“A friend?  No way!  Many people I know have avoided here despite their addiction with drugs.  I hope she isn’t in a bad situation.”  The nurse offered her glass of water to Ai as she tilted her head back to the wall.

Ai began to think on what she should say to her friend and if she would accept her after the last meeting.

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Ai exited from the club with the sunlight peeking through the building in downtown Tokyo.  She wobbled toward the street as the group started to dissipate in every direction.  Ai traveled through the streets with a smile and was in bliss over the night’s progressions.  She got to the apartment and opened the door with the room quiet as she peeked into Risa’s room.

“Partying again?”  The look of irritation hit into Ai’s eyes and she sat down next to her.

“I have been trying to stay away but they want me to come because the crowds want me to perform.”  Ai explained to Risa as she crossed her arms in disgust.

Ai jumped onto her couch and dozed off with the last image of Risa with a mad expression.  A few hours later, she woke up hungry for lunch and looked in the refrigerator for food but all the food was cleared out.  Every place was cleaned out and once she looked into Risa’s room, it hit her that she finally had her limit of her partying.

She opened her phone and started to text an apology every second but had no reply within the first few minutes.  An hour passed by and the same result.  The night came with no reply back and she sent another barrage before heading out to the bar.  Ai knew that she would eventually forgive her and kept that thought until she walked into the bar and her friends offered drinks to her.

Ai avoided the conversations with a drink in her hand and scanned the area with her mind still on Risa.  She finally got to the end of the area and saw a crowd around someone dancing.  She turned back to the bar to ask for another drink and someone from her right stole her drink from her possession and as she grabbed the woman, her fist was ready to get in contact, and threw the punch to her face.

The woman fell to the floor and the people boxed her out of the area.  She escaped out of the bar and headed back home with her fist hurting from the punch.  Ai held her hand until she returned home and held an ice pack stuck to the side of the freezer and dozed off to the morning.

Her thoughts came into her dreams and it pierced her mind easily as the guilt built in her and woke up to the sound of door knocks.  She peeked outside her window and knew she was in trouble with the lights flashing and put on suitable clothes for the visit.  She opened it up to the detectives and gazed into their eyes trying to figure out the reason they came to visit.

They did their best to divert the conversation but she knew it was about that punch as they glanced at her hand.  Ai felt the pain increased and admitted that she did strike someone last night.  It was an admission they weren’t expecting as they looked at each other before latching on handcuffs to take her into the station.

Ai asked for an icepack for her hand and they gladly gave her one as she moved her fingers to keep it from tightening.  The detective calmly took the seat across of her and slid a picture to her.  Ai looked down and closed her eyes as she shook her head in disbelief.

“Is that the person I punched?”  He nodded as she slid another picture but Ai had seen enough.

“I will take full responsibility and I accept my sentence.”  Ai was released with the other party declining to press charges but that day she could never forget how Risa was decked by Ai’s drunken foolishness.
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Ai spent the next three days avoiding counseling in the room causing Konno to have a private conference in her office discussing about the consequences of skipping the meetings.  She understood that the penalties would be harsh and tried to suggest an alternative for the time being.  Ai didn’t want to explain about Risa but Konno wasn’t aware that it was an uncomfortable situation and Ai finally pounded the table in frustration.

“I cannot face her.”  She yelled as Konno tilted her in confusion.

“Who is the person you cannot see?”

“Niigaki.”

“Niigaki Risa?”  Ai nodded as she understood the message.

“Well two patients can’t be in at the same time so it would be prohibited and discussing her situation is prohibited.  The problem is you need to attend the meetings.”  Ai nodded and felt the pain from her past come rushing back.

“However, we can change the times to suit the problems.  Afternoon in room B would assist you for now until you rid of the feeling within.”  Ai motioned as she slipped out of the room and headed to the cafeteria for her meal.

The cafeteria was half-filled with patients as the break between breakfast and lunch usually attract less customers.  She ordered a piece of toast and orange juice for her and waited for it to come her way.  Aki-chan noticed Ai waiting and ran up to her with news about her friend.

“I have been talking to her and she was admitted for alcohol addiction and behavioral problems.  She mentioned that her girlfriend was cheating on her and she left without telling her.  That night she wanted to relinquish the pain from her body and was punched in the face.  The culprit was never charged because she knew who did it to her but she never explained the reason.”  Ai interrupted the conversation by grabbing her meal and walked to the table away from everybody.

Ai bit into the toast and chewed slowly as Risa consumed her thoughts again.  She was the person to hold her in check despite her ways.  Risa had the heart to take away anything to deter her way but failed to keep her within the four walls.  Finally, Risa was her mate in life and she ruined it with her consistent partying.  Aki-chan began to purge the expressions but couldn’t get the signals and Ai left with half her toast on the plate and drank all the orange juice.

The woman attended her meeting on time and began to explain the relationship between Risa and her.  She had gone through every detail from the start to the unfortunate finish with every intimate detail in between.  Ai rushed through her story before time ran out but she couldn’t get anything from Konno about Risa’s status.  Despite the lack of information, she felt a heavy weight pulled off her back, and walked into the showers to rinse off before dinner.

Ai skipped dinner for a glass of water and stayed in her room thinking about Risa and replaying the moments that made her leave that day and ended up here for rehab.  Every scene was pieces of a movie and the genres came out with every expression between them and would end with regret and sorrow.  Ai sipped the water with the memories recovering in her archives and cried over the pain she had caused her.  Ai yelled at her pillow in frustration before snoring off another night of pain.

Two days later, Ai finally had a clear conscious since seeing Risa walking in with her hands behind her back.  It was a myriad of problems but it couldn't let her become consumed with it.  She headed to the grassy area and looked outside with the sun approaching mid-morning.  The woman was cleansed with the strong wind and ran outside smelling the fresh air and sat down in the chair breathing hard.  She finally felt happy overcoming the Risa guilt building in her that she closed her eyes and was awoken in a voice.

“Long time no see, Ai-chan.”  She knew the voice but gave her a moment to acknowledge her and it was finally the truth or the first step to her own personal hell.
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Day 7-12 5/13/12
« Reply #11 on: May 15, 2012, 04:52:01 AM »
YAY i come home from skool today to find a new chapter :mon fyeah:

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alright ima try my analytical skills here :mon taichi: could it be that risa was the woman ai punched at the time? cuz risa couldve went in the club to try and take ai's drink away from her...maybe idk :depressed:

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^ couldve been...idk ima stop guessing now anyways this was a good chapter  :on GJ:  im eager to see wat happens :on woohoo:

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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Day 12-14 5/16/12
« Reply #12 on: May 17, 2012, 08:01:45 AM »
@darkace: thnx for the comment, I wish I could update more often but I need to work on the story again but TakaGaki based story


Day 12-14

Ai knew the voice even if she was yelling but to face her like this was beyond reason and to realize that Risa could be hiding a surprise her wasn’t out of the realm of possibility.  She had wished Aki-chan was by her side at the moment but she would have given away the identity before anything else and that would have ruined the surprise factor.

“Long time no see.  How’s everything?”  Ai asked without turning around and trying to keep her head away from the other woman.

“I don’t know really.  It is why I am here.”  She took the seat next to her and let a sigh.

“You were never a drug user.”

“I know.  But… since that day I got floored, it changed everything about my life.  I decided to live your life for once and forget the past.  It finally caved in after I got arrested with methamphetamines in my pocket.”

“Why?”  Ai yelled out as she avoided looking at her again and finally Risa faced her enemy.

 “Because I thought I could find you again, if I followed what you had been doing, but you left for good from the area.  So, I went out to find a new partner and she came out to be a good friend to send me here.”  Ai turned her head closing her eyes avoiding what was the truth in front of her.

“You were such a great person, just letting me do my drugs, and I felt horrible when you left the apartment.  I decided to move elsewhere because I lacked the money for rent.”  Risa held Ai’s face in her hands as before, the feeling was still in her hands as a mother would hold the child to gains its attention.

“You were the only person who I truly loved and that never changed.  Every ounce was my hope to see you one day and it kept me going until I finally saw the light.”  Risa wrapped her arms around the woman’s body with her tears rolling down her cheek.

Ai never imagined Risa following her down the dark path and even now she refused to acknowledge she was a patient here but a visitor.  She held her closely and looked at the nape of her neck, the bruises were deep and the cuts were hardened over with skin causing nasty scars.  Ai had remembered the events leading up to meeting Risa but the day she left, her life was a blur of partying, drinking, doing drugs, etc.  The cycle was continuous until she came here and knew she was at peace away from the reality.

Risa lounged on the floor looking up at the white ceiling.  It was a change in scenery from the day before with people in jail.  She never talked to anyone as she was left in a daze and was bailed out by her new friend, who finally drove her to the place so she could be at peace despite Risa pleading she would change.  It was different from her home, it felt wide open, and the people would not harass her for anything.

However, she had that feeling of deep hatred against Ai.  She could mask it well behind her smile but she felt ready to crack at any moment.  It was the living hell she went through for a long time after she left the police station.  She wanted to injure her beyond all recognition and she wanted to do it to rid of the demons around her.

Ai glanced over at Risa with her grin somewhat looked awkward than before, she began to feel a chill in the air like she was going to strike her.  She turned again and now Risa was next to her with the hands hidden behind her.

“Are you okay?”  She asked as Ai distanced herself.

“Why are you hiding your hands?”  Her question was soft and she felt endangered by Risa’s behavior.

“I cannot help this anymore.”  Risa lunged forward with a plastic butter knife and scratched Ai on the forearm.

Ai kicked her away from her as Risa lunged again but into the footwear of Ai breaking the ridged end.  Risa switched the knife around ready to stab her and Ai swung her weight over forcing Risa to the stairs.  One strong kick to the midsection, Risa flew backwards, and tumbled to the bottom of the stairs.  Security saw the blood on Risa’s head and nose and took her to the infirmary.

“Ai-chan, are you alright?”  Aki-chan saw the slice she took on the forearm and grabbed a towel to hold the wound.

Ai was in shock as the pain slowly took effect as she relaxed from her surprise.  The nurse bandaged her up as Konno sat down next to Ai explaining the situation.  Konno had been aware of Risa’s mental state when she was admitted and blamed herself for not realizing it sooner.  Ai closed her eyes as Konno almost let Risa kill her without noticing the signs.  She stormed back to her room and locked it for the rest of the day.

The next morning, Ai was still in disbelief over her friend’s rampage against her.  On one hand, she deserved what was coming to her as she made Risa worry about her.  However, it wasn’t just her she had to fight but it was the drugs that had taken over her.  She held the wound and began to murmur an apology to herself for being this person that almost ruined a life and promised that it won’t happen again.  She opened her eyes up and looked toward the door, her heart raced as she feared that Risa could come in and finished the job but her confidence won over and opened the door to find no one out there.

Ai got dressed up to see Konno for a private meeting and a quick counseling of her attack.  She walked quickly to her office and was joined by another doctor inside.  The doctor closed the door behind her and sat down at the round table by the bookshelf as Konno was prepared to introduce the new doctor.  She was close to her age and gave off confidence in being in the room as she extended her hand.

“I am Ogawa Makoto, I will be your new counselor as Konno feared for problems in the future.  I hope to present the same type of nurturing and optimism as Konno-san so please bear with me.”  Ai shook her hand and discussed the situation with both of them.

In the back of her mind, she wondered where Risa was in the complex.  She remembered the dark room after her attack on a visitor but it seemed a while ago that it had happened and she felt weird that anyone would lash out at her within the confines of the facility.  Ogawa had a folder under her arm as Ai relaxed on the chair waiting for the conversation to continue.

“Is there any history between you and Risa?”  Ai shook her head slowly.

“You seem uncomfortable to explain the situation.”  Ogawa analyzed the patient as she opened the folder.

“She… and I were lovers.”  Ai murmured as Ogawa moved her pencil.

Ai-chan began to build the history between them and it seemed to become a novel where one would forgive her but Ai slowly believed that it could end without a reunion.  After half an hour, she broke down wondering why Risa would attack her.  Konno rubbed the patient’s back as Ai let out her screams and Ogawa put the pencil down to review her notes.

“I have found that Risa may have been in withdrawals and saw you as a threat.  It wasn’t your fault that she snapped.”

“It was my fault that she left for her own and only wanted me to see myself.”  Ai yelled back as Konno held her back from Ogawa.

Ogawa sat there stiff watching Ai as she began to see Ai break from herself.  Ai dug her fingers into the chair, waiting for her to speak, but Konno stepped in front of the other doctor.

“We can move on from here.  I know you want to apologize but policies say she will stay in the room for three days and we can wait until then.”  She excused Ai from the office and followed her to the room.

Ai forced herself to sleep wanting the three days to go by quickly but the clock was against her.  She stared at the clock wanting to change time back to the day where Risa was in her arms and she would swear off her drugs.
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Day 12-14 5/16/12
« Reply #13 on: May 17, 2012, 10:56:17 PM »
 :panic: RISA IS CRAY CRAY!!! OMG  :panic:

kurosawa this was an awesome chapter!! :thumbup and take ur time to update stuff im not in a rush to go anywhere :P ill juss read em when i see em XD

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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Day 15-18 5/20/12
« Reply #14 on: May 21, 2012, 11:41:25 AM »
@darkace thnx for the support, I'd plan for more violence but eliminating the lustful actions


Day 15-18

Ai went through her usual routine despite having Risa weighing heavy on her mind.  Ogawa and Konno ran her through tests after the assault and found very little change in her demeanor.  As she followed through the days, she began to get accustomed to the food that was being served.  She was having a lot of small snacks instead of the meals which comforted her stomach but her heart was aching from the events of the attack.

“Ai-chan, you’ve been here a lot.”  Aki-chan called out as she joined the woman at the table.

“Been enjoying the small snacks, I never noticed that they did this.”  She gave out a loud laugh as she took a handful of popcorn for her.

“I can’t say I knew either but it has been quite new to get patients to talk to each other unfortunately some…”  Ai stuck up her hand.

“I can’t wait until she gets released, there is no saying that she can change but she had every right to attack me.”  Ai popped another piece into her mouth as the PA system released its message.

Every patient please return to your room immediately.

Ai and Akiko walked back together and split to their individual rooms as the people checked the rooms following procedure until they called off the drill.  Ai laid in bed with her body frozen and her mind dozing off to another flashback.

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Ai landed a job in a vegetable stand and became a helping hand for people who had become outcast.  It was also a way to hide from the world after her arrest.  Many of the women were petty criminals with horrible family lives but she was the luckiest one as she had no children.

The group was monitored by the family who ran the stand and they were strict about everything based on the women but she found it to be false as she realized they were inviting and warm.  She enjoyed every meal with them and began to mentor their eldest child through her second year in high school.  Ai listened many of her issues and tried to encourage her to do extracurricular activities which she got on the soccer team.

Ai’s mentorship also extended to a weird area that she could only associate with and she was quiet about the relationship, however the others were more vocal about the awkward relationship with a female yankii.  Ai understood it as a close friendship but she had to confront the situation.  She walked to the park to observe the two sitting next to each other as friends would but they were closer than usual.

She saw them cuddle and they kissed in front of her.  Ai stood there feeling her heart drop a little as she felt guilty of the relationship.  She returned back to face her father who saw the relationship blossom and kept her head down as he let out his frustrations but she stepped up.

“Don’t blame Ai.  It wasn’t her fault for finding someone who liked me.”  She yelled at him.

Her father wanted to fight back but zipped his mouth after watching her leave his sight.  Ai bowed towards him as an apology to him and quickly packed up before anyone could notice her.  Despite the early morning, she murmured a prayer for her and walked out to the nearest bus stop out of the town.  The first bus was warming up its engine as Ai walked in and paid the fee as she headed for the back.

“Hello again.”  She looked to her right seeing someone covered up and sleeping on the seat.

“How do you know me?”  The woman sat up throwing the blanket to the side and opening up a seat next to her.

“We were classmates in high school.  You were the one who protected me from the bullies and then I heard you dropped out because of your parents.”  Ai lowered her head as she tried to find a name through her face but was left with nothing.

“Sorry, I don’t know your name but nice meeting you again.”  Ai tilted her head as she put her bag on her lap and slowly dozed off in her seat.

She wasn’t aware of her surroundings but it was far away from the town.  She arrived near the outskirts of Tokyo and got off the bus to travel to the next destination but noticed a stray dog walking by her sniffing her bag.  She kneels down to pet the dog but it started to bark loudly at her, startling the woman, and out from the bushes was a police officer greeting the dog.

“Sorry ma’am, please hand over the bag.”  Ai gave the officer the bag and he took it to the side to search through it.

He thoroughly rummaged the bag emptying out the contents and then saw the small bag of green specks pop out and the dog sniffed it out.  Its nose touched the bag and Ai squinted at the dog as she never knew a bag of marijuana was in her bag but the officer thought it was weird that Ai had it and had his suspicions.

“Follow me to the station.”  He said in a low voice as Ai followed him and took a seat in the waiting room.

He looked middle-aged and seemed to believe that someone had planted the bag in her possession, as they were trying to rid of the evidence.  He argued to his commanding officer that something didn’t seem right but was forced to book her on a drug offense.  He guided her through most of the program, hoping she would be released soon enough but the person matching the woman.

The officer was pushing that she wasn’t the person who planted the bag and when they couldn’t keep her anymore longer, she was released without a charge, and walked into the last place that caused her downfall.
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She woke up realizing that she was in need to talk to Risa as she wanted to clear the air between them, but it had to wait two more days.  Ai waited patiently until she was called to the conference room where Ai and the two doctors were sitting at a white table each taking one side and Ai stared at Risa as her pale skin indicated she had not seen the sun for a long while.

“Hello Risa.”  Ai greeted the fellow patient as she nodded her head to acknowledge the other person.

The two doctors facilitated the conversation; however Ai was the only one talking.  She anticipated Risa to speak but she kept her lips shut tight.  The frustration grew until Konno poured a cup of water and Risa slid it to the edge.

“Why do you still want to greet me after what I did to you?”  She said with a low voice.

“Because… I still want you to know that I still want you as a friend.”  Ai explained.

“We can never be friends; I have no trust in you to believe in me anymore.”  Ogawa turned towards Risa as she put her head back down again.

Ai’s hand turned into a fist and stood up in front of her.  Risa looked up at Ai and smirked at her as Konno prepared herself to interfere.  For a few seconds, Ai was ready to knock some sense into Risa but something was holding her back, a voice instructing her that Risa wanted that punch against her as punishment, Ai went back to her seat seeing Risa had won the battle.

Ai walked out of the room as Konno followed her out and marched back to her room.  She was mixed with every emotion possible but it seemed that the battle was lost.  Ai was not ready to give up, however maybe a retreat was suitable for the situation.
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Day 15-18 5/20/12
« Reply #15 on: May 21, 2012, 11:41:17 PM »
YAY and update!!! :on gay:

dont worry more action and less lustful scenes are better for ur story :on GJ:  either way i shall read til my hearts content

nice chapter!! cant wait to see how risa and ai try to smooth things out  :glasses:

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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Day 19-25 5/24/12
« Reply #16 on: May 25, 2012, 10:57:02 AM »
@darkace: I'll take that advice but some stuff needs to be implied for continuance


Day 19-25

 Risa felt the sweat run down her neck and wiped it with her blanket as she ran through the dreams while she was away from the world.  The isolation area gave her time to think about her actions although most of that time was to blame Ai for all her problems.

 Her first dream was the day before she had met Ai.  She was studying for her exams and a boy had approached her.  He was five centimeters taller than her with straight, black hair, and an untucked uniform.  She remembered the name "Sho" but knew it wasn't his real name

 She had a crush with his friend who already was with a girl at the time.  "Sho" knew about Risa's crush and decided to learn about her mannerisms to see if he had an opportunity.

 Risa had become cautious of her abnormal outbursts especially when she was surprised and anticipated his movements.  He had thoughts of embracing her but couldn't get over the fact that she might not like him at all and just laid his books out to seem like he was studying.

 "Risa-chan, how are you?"  "Sho" shouted out not noticing the quiet environment.

 "I'm fine, how about you?"  She snickered as she wrote down another half page of notes waiting for his reply.

 "I want to pass up on studying."  He held his hand over the back of his head as he smiled towards her but Risa was in her study mode.

 Sho had always been known for shy demeanor and his polite style always brought girls over to manipulate him.  He enjoyed the attractive girls being around him but knew he would have no shot with them if he wasn't aggressive.

 "Risa, I have been meaning to ask if you... and I could do something after exams?"  Risa turned her head and smiled.

 "Sure.  You should study because I like smart males."  Risa replied with her mind on studying and Sho motioned to do the same.

 A week later, they departed from their last exam and headed out to the city filled with youth.  Risa acknowledged him as a friendly outing but Sho had other things on his mind.  He treated her for dinner as he wanted to but his next step would require a little more courage.

 "Are we going anyplace else?"  Risa asked as Sho felt the rubber in his pocket.

 "I guess we can see a movie if you are interested."  She smiled and followed him until he stopped at the love hotel feeling the rubber again in his hand.

 "I thought we were going to see a movie..."  Risa's face had concerned all over her face as he began to struggle between his conscience and his heart.

 "Risa... my friend doesn't like you at all.  I want you to hear me out and please forget about him as a boyfriend."  He motioned to the bench where they both sat a foot apart from each other.

 Risa began to see he was being honest and the pain within was going to earn him a broken friendship but he knew the cost would be worth her.  He reached deep into his pocket and threw the condom into the trash can.

 "He only dates loose women, they have to be broken in to be his girlfriend.  Many classmates fell into his trap and once he hears about it, he will order a group to attack her."  Sho moved his eyes left and right trying to be aware of his surroundings.

 "Thanks for telling me."  He reached out to grab her wrist and pulled her close to him.

 "You were the only one I haven't told him about..."  Risa removed his hand and slammed her palm into his cheek.  She felt the bones in her hand adjust but her anger was reliving the pain in her heart.

 She gave a stern look at him before walking off but he followed her until she was block from her home.  He bowed towards her with an apologetic look.  She wanted to chase him away but had to nod knowing that he was the one to protect her from his friend.

 Couple days after the night out, Risa had heard about an incident at the bay.  A body was found floating by fishermen and taken ashore to see bruising and his hands and feet were chopped off.  The description matched Sho and evidently they had the memorial the following school year before she transferred.

 The second dream was the realization of Ai's growing drug problem.  Risa had invited her cousin over to watch Aladdin.  Ai had left earlier in the afternoon to do a grocery run but hadn't returned when her aunt came with little Atsuko.  She was a big fan of Disney as her older cousin was and she popped in the DVD with the waning sun leaving the horizon.

Atsuko played Jasmine as she entertained Risa while they were watching the movie but Risa’s mind was weighing heavy on Ai and when she would return home.  Risa kept her eyes on the clock as every minute she would have to wait up would mean less time to spend with Atsuko, since she like Ai a lot.

Her cousin liked to rave about Ai, she wanted to be as cool as Ai but Risa knew how she was beyond the reality of her image.  Risa kept quiet as her eyes turned to the clock trying to avoid her concern for Ai.

At 11:00, Atsuko shut her eyes and dozed off without any resistance.  Risa heated up tea to keep her awake but with her eyes heavy; she gave in, and dozed off in the bedroom.  Ai stumbled into the apartment a quarter after one and jumped onto the couch where Risa’s cousin was sleeping.

A yell echoed throughout the room waking up Risa and ran into the living room with a broom.  Atsuko was holding her shirt as Ai rolled off from the couch pulling her shirt down.  Red with embarrassment, Atsuko ran over to Risa, and clamped onto her leg.

“What happened?”  She asked as Atsuko couldn’t stop sobbing and Ai on the floor bowing to her mate.

“I didn’t know Atsuko was sleeping, so I jumped onto the couch.  Atsuko rolled on top of me and I didn’t know my shirt was up.”  Ai bowed her head to the ground.

“Ai-chan smells.”  Atsuko held her hand up to her nose.

Risa could smell the alcohol in the room but that wasn’t the reason why she was bothered.  Atsuko saw the look on Risa’s face and headed into the bathroom.  Despite her age, she knew that sometimes she would go into the bathroom when papa and mama would fight.

Ai usually came prepared in battle but this time she wanted to surrender before the fight but Risa’s rage came like semi-automatic bullets.  Ai had no chance to fight back with the piercing coming deeper than previous and she felt laid out after her tirade.  Risa took the night to cool off with Atsuko by her side but she felt better after letting her frustrations out on her.

Ai left before Atsuko was picked up by her mother as Risa sat at the table with her head pressed down on the table waiting for Ai.  She was mixed with disappointment and sorrow while the day went by and in the afternoon, she returned home with a bagful of groceries.  Risa wasn’t warm as she usually was but she knew that Risa was eventually going to apologize.  Unfortunately, it took a few days to make Ai realize her mistake.

The next three days were normal around the facility with everyone attending the mandatory meetings.  Ai kept her distance from many of the other patients except Aki-chan who had been assigned as Ai’s buddy.  Despite the change in safety, the tension had been growing between Ai and Risa with talk of a fight a week after the meeting.

Konno had called for more security during visiting hours for the week and they were a crew that could easily break up a fight.  The doctor believed the rumor despite having reservations that there would be a fight but safety would trump all other concerns.

Then, the day before the expected fight, there was a change in the atmosphere with another new patient.  Everyone got a glimpse of her and returned back to their dorms waiting for the chance of another fight.  However, Risa had been sent to the infirmary complaining of stomach pains.  With many of the others complaining, Ai sneaked her way into the office, and sat down next to her.

“Gaki-san, hello.”  Ai greeted her despite the warnings from Konno days before.

“Why are you here?  Do you want to take me out that badly?”  She shook her head.

“The thing is I regret everything I did to you.  You need to understand that drugs were my enemy and in spite of your patience, I became understanding of how you feel.”

“Your explanation never will get you anywhere.  You were never there for me.”  Ai tilted her head downward.

“I know.”  She admitted.

“Then, why are you here?”  Her voice raised an octave as she winced holding her stomach.

“Because we need to bury this hatchet between us, even if you feel that we can never do that, you need to understand that you were also at fault.”  Risa sat up in offense to her statement and glared at her.

“It wasn’t the drugs.  It was your indecisive moment when you couldn’t stand being in the same bed when I was sober.”  Risa shook her head trying to block Ai’s words.

“I was never letting you close to me.  You made everything a living hell.”  She replied back as Ai waived the white flag.

“Atsuko knew the truth about us.  She never told anyone that we were together.  It was the reason why I avoided you while you were babysitting her.  She wanted us to be together but you left in frustration because of my partying, she visited me once, and she cried that you were an addict.  I refused to believe it until now.”  Risa slid back down into her bed as Ai exited the room and headed back to her dorm.

Three hours later, Ai heard a knock at the door.

“Atsuko grew up to be a beautiful woman.  She never gave up hope that I could win over but she never got her freedom to be a woman.”  Ai closed her eyes and knew something had happened.

“What happened?”  Ai asked.

“She was raped in front of the boys’ bathroom and had gotten pregnant.  She wanted to kill herself but I told her to have the baby because I never wanted to face my nemesis again.”  Ai nodded and let Risa into her room without intervention.
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Day 19-25 5/24/12
« Reply #17 on: May 26, 2012, 05:06:03 AM »
Hehehe, Kuro-sama! Now this is my first time replying on this fic lol and it's because its quite a touchy one but yeah I do like it. And the memories that cover the span of those ten years are evidence of the pain both brought on by drugs and the pain that drugs free you from. The causes are very real and the fic need that realism in the withdrawl scenes to put it on a whole 'nother lelvel. But yes I like it and I expect to see what happens as the first month comes to a close!

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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Day 26-32 5/29/12
« Reply #18 on: May 30, 2012, 11:07:08 AM »
@Koei I think it will be fast moving already because of the time I stalled on this fic :nervous

Day 26-32

Aki-chan was becoming accustomed to Risa after the incident and thoroughly been explained the past relationship.  Although Ai blamed herself for letting the drugs run her life.  Risa echoed the same sentiment to Ai as the days went by.

 Three days after that talk, they were able to have joint meetings together as they bounced off each other as partners would talk out their problems.  Then, as they returned to their dorms, there was a mysterious odor coming from the bathroom.  Ai swung the door open and held her hand up to her mouth as the guards came in and pulled someone out of the room.

 "Aki-chan, what happened?"  Ai cried as she saw burn marks on her thighs.

 "I don't know I went to the bathroom and then something flared up in one of the stalls."  She explained as Konno arrived to notice the injury.

 One of the guards called an ambulance as Konno walked inside still filled with thick, white smoke.  Couple steps inward, she felt light headed and walked out trying to analyze the smell but the smoke was filling up the facility and Konno ordered an evacuation.

 The guards surrounded the exit and managed the situation with the guests and patients as the smoke cleared within an hour.  Ai wasn't sure what that thing was that burned Akiko but it seemed dangerous enough to cause the damage.

 Police arrived after the ambulance and investigated the bathroom while the people were escorted to the garden for lunch.  It was highly unusual for the patients to have lunch outside of the facility for safety and security concerns but it was permitted if the facility did have any hazards that would prevent them from eating inside.

 Since the cafeteria couldn't make a proper lunch, food was brought from outside to distribute to the patients.  Everyone had a bento filled with grilled fish and vegetables although few rejected them because it was unusual for their diets.  However, Ai felt tight in her stomach after seeing the injury on her friend's leg.

 With many concerns in her head, Konno had been encouraging the patients to eat as the police were beginning to piece the evidence together.  However, Ai hid her meal to deter Konno from her as she barely ate but Risa tried to tug it away from her.

 "What are you doing?"  Ai asked as Risa was pulling at the box.

 "I'm hungry."  The bean successfully took it out of Ai's hands and quickly ate the rest.

 Ai exhausted from the battle, lay down on the grass thinking about how Aki-chan was doing and if she would manage to survive the burns.  She kept confident that she could pull through but was accepting that it could scar her for life.

 "Takahashi-san, may I have a word with you?"  Konno asked as she was taken to the back where they could speak privately.

 "I know you were close to Akiko and we would never suspect you of anything as a supervising party.  However, we need you to talk to them because you found her, be truthful about it, and I have faith that someone will be arrested."  Konno hinted with a smile as the police took her into the meeting room for questioning.

 Ai answered their questions to the best of her abilities and talked about her friend's kindness as a way to indicate no one had ill feeling against her.  The police quickly ruled her out understanding that she was in a meeting before the incident, which also eliminated Risa from the investigation too.

The police thanked her for the time and walked back to the lawn where RIsa was lounging with the rest of the patients.  She sat down next to her with the others slowly being interrogated.  Few were held for other petty crimes that happened before their admittance but it was for information purposes outside of the clinic.

Once everyone was interviewed, the police found their culprit and took her off as the rest returned to their dorms with the smell slowly disappearing.  Since dinner wasn’t made for the night, they were given snacks from the fridge to hold over until the next morning.

Meals were slowly coming out because of further issues with the kitchen and a few days later, they were forced to bring in catering while the kitchen was being fixed.  Then, they found the problem under the stove with a bag of pills plugging the gas pumps and eventually sent it off to the trash.

Risa and Ai enjoyed the food but it was not comparable to the cafeteria food and was suffering for the two days they were forced to eat the bland food.  Although the group did protest about the food which led to more calls for the cafeteria and their prayers were answered when it reopened the day after the patients complained.

Ai never expected the whirlwind week to end but a few days later as she returned back from her session, there was a note on her door.  She scanned over it and looked over to her left where Aki-chan’s room was and quickly entered her room.  Ogawa saw the note and tore it off in anger.  She looked around the clinic for the person who put the note on the door but no one took responsibility.

Risa sneaked into the room and saw Ai sobbing as she periodically punched the pillow.  The younger woman kept her distance as she tried to figure out the problem and it hit her quickly.  Aki-chan had passed away.

The burn marks didn’t seem severe but the effects could have gone much deeper than they thought.  Risa rubbed the elder woman’s back as she couldn’t help but tear up about the situation.  She was a gentle friend almost to the end of her time but that was cut short because of the explosion.  The room suddenly went silent as Ai looked at Risa and quickly embraced her.

“Ai, this is horrible.”  Risa whispered.

“Aki-chan was kind to everyone, why does she have to go?”  Ai whimpered as she was halfway through her treatment.

“It was meant to be, it is unfortunate but Aki-chan left.”  Both started to cry out their frustrations with each other.

They were in no mood to calm them so they stayed in the room for the whole night as they pieced together a memory bank for her.  They wrote down statements about her and placed it on the floor until it created a small pile and they each read off every piece of paper to remember their fallen friend.

Hundred pieces were read off before placed into a bag and offered to Konno as a present for her family.  She announced that the funeral was in two days as her family would visit the clinic and discuss legal options against the person who set up the attack.

They were glad that it wasn’t going unpunished and explained that the person would probably be kicked out for life and sent to jail no questions asked.  Konno let everyone know that there would be a vigil for their fellow patient and each were mumbling a remembrance to ease their pain although many cared for her.

That night every person stood up and said a prayer for her safe journey to the next world as pain and suffering would be none.
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Re: Blank-Faced Woman Day 26-32 5/29/12
« Reply #19 on: May 31, 2012, 06:18:41 AM »
OH JUNK!!! Aki-chan dead out!!! :shock:
wow that was a nice turn of events for the story, i didnt see that one comin :stoned:

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Risa rubbed the elder woman’s back as she couldn’t help but tear up about the situation.  She was a gentle friend almost to the end of her time but that was cut short because of the explosion.  The room suddenly went silent as Ai looked at Risa and quickly embraced her
really liked this chapter for this takagaki cute moment :nya:

ok enough of my fangurlness  :sweat: nice chaps and keep up the gud work :on GJ:


i c awesome chapters in ur future  :on hypto: :on hypto: :on hypto: :on hypto: :on hypto: tee hee

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